And we're back on air. Why does cyan work so well with her?
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Ayy
>>27578854
post qt moon pone
Let’s get hypothetical.
You’re a writer who’s been going at it for a bit now. You really enjoy what you do and put your blood, sweat, and tears into each story. One day, you decide to post it in a random thread to get some feedback.
Just one problem: no takers.
You wonder if you should even bother writing; you decide to quit and move on to something else.
If that story applies to you, then hold your horses. If all you wanted was feedback, to improve your writing skills a bit, or maybe just see how others do it, then you’ve come to the right place....
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>>27522546
Tips and links:
Things you should know about before writing clop:
Vhatug’s tips for anatomically correct clop and squash soup:
http://pastebin.com/g4VpEg4f
http://www.literotica.com/s/erotic-synonyms (Because using dick, balls, and pussy just isn’t enough to get the reader off. Remember, the reader cums first.)Had to. Puns are awesome.
Things you should know about writing:
Clever’s Tips on How to Write Short Stories: http://pastebin.com/GGBkxi7e
How to into writing:...
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>>27522558
Here’s some new stuff that didn’t fit in the second post.
A couple writing podcasts:
http://www.writingexcuses.com/
http://typehammer.com/podcast/
An archive of how to write pretty much anything:
https://curiosityquills.com/limyaael/
An idea generator:
http://writers-den.pantomimepony.co.uk/writers-first-lines.php
A worldbuilding forum:
http://worldbuilding.stackexchange.com/
It's about fucking time. I've had a question for a while. Is it possible to make a suicide feel "appropriate" in a story? As in that it doesn't feel edgy, or come across as a cheap way to raise the stakes or grab at the reader's heart? I've had an idea for a character piece (I don't know what you'd call it), and as I let the characters play out their roles in my head, one of them ends up committing suicide.
Previous thread >>27641246
>What is this thread about?
Half human and half pony/other Equestrian species offspring.
>What are the rules?
There are no thread specific rules, do what you want. But it wont always be met positively.
>What is the continuity (world/characters/attributes)?
Whatever you want it to be. Sometimes Everything is a variable, there are no absolutes. Sometimes. Characters, names,...
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>>27681743
>Fathers Day edition
>No Anon in OP
Ya blew it
>>27681743
Come on, you could at least have used a pic that wasn't used recently for the OP.
Well, I'm not gonna start a rant or anything: I'm just glad that there's a new thread.
>>27678760
>He was always brought up with Shotel; that Eddy girl
>people actually remember my literally who halflings
>mfwHis name is Crusher
Would you a R63 version of your waifu?
>>27676878
>inb4 Bubble Berry
I would have sex with any pony.
>>27676878
>Ponyville seems to be a hotbed of excitement these days. Between the dragons roosting in the mountains, horrid monsters wandering out from the Everfree Forest, ancient ruins discovered deep in the earth, and the ever-presenting of all-out war between the Equestrians and the Gryphons, it seems like everypony looking for fame or fortune is flocking to this town.
>It is an age of knights, adventurers, dark magics, and destined heroes.
>You are none of these things.
>Your...
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>>27675931
>She first gestures for Azura to step forward.
>"Azura Ice, I see great potential in you for the arcane arts. You need only to stop looking to yourself so much and instead look to your friends. However, I do believe one of Starswirl's old arcane tomes would help you along in your studies."
>Azura's eyes brighten at the mentioning of a tome, and it takes her considerable willpower to keep from squealing...
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>>27675945
>Next up was Sweet Heart.
>"Private Heart, I know as a Royal Guard you acted out your sense of duty and loyalty to the crown, and that you would never ask for a reward for doing your sworn duties. Nonetheless, you shall be put forth for a commendation and promotion in recognition for your valour and initiative."
>"Thank you, Your Majesty," Sweet Heart replies with a long bow.
>Next...
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>>27675957
>Stepping forward next is White Wine, who seems to be the most at ease in such a formal setting.
>"Ms. Wine, I know you'd want me to do something about your father, but I can't solve all your family problems for you," Celestia states, "but what I can do is expand our pre-existing contracts with your winery. Having your product served at future galas and public events will do wonders for your business... and I'm sure you'll...
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Take 2 edition
Previous thread
>>27589042 → #
current stories
~Reverse Trap Dash
http://pastebin.com/iPx8q268
~Reverse Trap Fluttershy
http://pastebin.com/GGCZjdDX
~My Little Drop Trooper, Reverse-Trap Edition
http://pastebin.com/2EZnrind
Finally got far enough where I felt like I could start posting.
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>The year is 2552
>Humanity is at war with an alien alliance known as "The Covenant"
>We are losing
>The Covenant have burned our worlds, killing billions in their genocidal campaign
>Now they have breached the inner colonies, their leaders hunting for our homeworld with their own fleets
>One such group...
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>>27661230
>Everyone but you, still sleeping and oblivious, grabs their helmets and heads for the rack of assorted weapons
>Rarity moves to Pie's side and tells her, "Is she wearing /any/ armor?"
>Pinkie causally responds, "Hey, spooks get their privileges."
>The Lance Corporal notices AJ grabbing a suppressed smg
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>>27661245
>The pods then are spun around, the bottom of the Naval ship opening up to the dazzling red of a sunset
>The two screens on either side of the hatch light up, showing Blitz and Twilight
>Twilight calls over your squad comms
>"Latest intel reports Covenant troops are pushing towards the ONI Alpha Site."
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Welcome to the Massive Pony Thread!
Previous thread: >>27442363
Check out our slowly growing pastebin: http://pastebin.com/9HrRJZqs
Writers, artists, and critique are always welcome so long as it pertains to the main idea of the thread which is size difference.
Was wondering what happened to the thread.
>>27628081
Busy Saturday night can't bump the thread.
http://ilikekhorme.tumblr.com/image/128468825480
Theres a severe lack of Sugar BelleCutiemarklesscontent
612 - Spice Up Your Life
Written by Michael Vogel
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X-ENueQc7fc
http://www.dailymotion.com/video/x4fuotj_my-little-pony-friendship-is-magic-season-6-episode-12-spice-up-your-life_animals
Friendship is Magic #43 is still storytimed here!
>>27652426 (Cross-thread)
I still can't believe OP fucked up the subject edition: >>27717578
>filly
>filly
>country filly
612 - Spice Up Your Life
Written by Michael Vogel
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X-ENueQc7fc
http://www.dailymotion.com/video/x4fuotj_my-little-pony-friendship-is-magic-season-6-episode-12-spice-up-your-life_animals
Friendship is Magic #43 is still storytimed here!
>>27652426 (Cross-thread)
Lazy Fucking Anons Edition
It's Scootaloo time, bitches. Post pics of Scootaloo.
Old broken horse full of fags: >>27712380
About fucking time
Now I can go to bed
RIGHT OFF THE BUTT
>>27712383
612 - Spice Up Your Life
Written by Michael Vogel
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X-ENueQc7fc
http://www.dailymotion.com/video/x4fua6g
Friendship is Magic #43 is still storytimed here!
>>27652426
Equestria's preparations for the season of sun run into the beginning, for a bit; better to stagger things a bit so that some ponies are still responsible. Still, it can seem a little off when a special day kicks off an otherwise normal week, but that's just more time to figure...
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604- On Your Marks
https://www.dailymotion.com/video/x43ayph
605- Gauntlet of Fire
https://www.dailymotion.com/video/x44yokz
606- No Second Prances
http://www.dailymotion.com/video/x47z0qb
607- Newbie Dash
https://www.dailymotion.com/video/x495ktq
608 - A Hearth's Warming Tail
http://www.dailymotion.com/video/x4ahjf3
609 - The Saddle Row Review
http://www.dailymotion.com/video/x4bx9x4
610 - Applejack's "Day" Off
http://www.dailymotion.com/video/x4d8pbm
611 - Flutter Brutter
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n_dIF7tROwM
http://www.dailymotion.com/video/x4eipni
Season...
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>filly
>>27712353
thats a real thing
612 - Spice Up Your Life
Written by Michael Vogel
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X-ENueQc7fc
http://www.dailymotion.com/video/x4fua6g
Friendship is Magic #43 is still storytimed here!
>>27652426
Once the big ceremony's done, it's time for just plain summer fun in Equestria. Amidst all the usual work, of course; Canterlot doesn't shut down just because the princesses hosted a holiday. The vacation mood is strong, though, even at the beginning of the week. Ponies...
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Nyx!
>filly
604- On Your Marks
https://www.dailymotion.com/video/x43ayph
605- Gauntlet of Fire
https://www.dailymotion.com/video/x44yokz
606- No Second Prances
http://www.dailymotion.com/video/x47z0qb
607- Newbie Dash
https://www.dailymotion.com/video/x495ktq
608 - A Hearth's Warming Tail
http://www.dailymotion.com/video/x4ahjf3
609 - The Saddle Row Review
http://www.dailymotion.com/video/x4bx9x4
610 - Applejack's "Day" Off
http://www.dailymotion.com/video/x4d8pbm
611 - Flutter Brutter
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n_dIF7tROwM
http://www.dailymotion.com/video/x4eipni
Season...
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Popularity Contest Edition
ITT:
>We discuss Current, Finished and Upcoming CYOAs.
>Give advice on CYOAs
>Pitch ideas
>Get critique
>Trade art
>Shitpost
List of stories: https://www.anonpone.com/
Read this advice first:
https://www.anonpone.com/advice
http://www.tgchan.org/wiki/Advice
>What day is best?
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We shitpost discussion now
>>27696765
Yeah Sir, work that grill.
Previous thread: >>27645035
GoogleDoc Pastebin Archive:
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Old CrazyRain's Stories' Archives:
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TOUCH
THE
COW
Lurkfag for firstfag
Also no dong ring whooo!
>>27684744
Sexist bitch Vinyl is my fetish.
ITT: reading, writing, recommending, I jaywalked and got six months in Tartarus, touching yourself to high quality prose, retreading the same old discussion with hightened autism, canon discussion, multiple genitalia, pretty pony names, beating superior officers, my interpretation differs from yours and therefore you're wrong, Rarity is the mightiest unicorn of them all, credits sequences in the middle of your story, Equestria's size, unironically being ironic, the weapons debate eventually veered off into armour, powerlevels, semantics, and Shinkazura finds a way...
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>>27678042
I practice writing by creating short greentexts to reply to shitposts.
>>27678086
We're off to a great start.
F-futaloo get?
Gently fighting criminals edition
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>>27657873
Still ignoring the skype part huh?
>>27657873
bump
>>27657923
Who really cares about some chat