Long Dead Edition
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Remember: You really fucked up if people would rather have someone else run your quest
Last thread: >>26954020
>>26973470
>you really fucked up if people would rather have someone else run your quest
Ow.
>>26973470
>Long Dead
>>26973470
Choosie a shit
To continue it into the new thread, if you're reading a new quest please give a quick blurb about it. A lot of them have slipped right under the radar.
>>26973364
>>26973502
Yeeeah baby, work that grill.
Emery a cutie who seems to hate showers.
>>26973470
>nobody would run your quest if you'd abandon it
>>26973203
I'm sorry, but I can't help but see her hind paw as a giant triple crotchboob.
You guys are the weirdest, most retarded people I have ever seen.And I wouldn't have it any other way.You guys have been the most fun in a long time, thanks
>>26973723
Thanks, anon. Glad to hear you care.
>>26973731
Just for the record, I am not Doxel/Ponkfag
When was the last time a hijacked quest ended up worse than before?
Active threads
Super: >>26950768
NE: >>26955110
Big Mares: >>26928838
Hijack: >>26884935
Dirty Work: >>26960279
Paper Pony: >>26950143
DITA: >>26961882
Don't Fuck: >>26928599
Lamentations: >>26965419
FOE 2: >>26962027
Urban Survival: >>26930116
FOE: >>26906470
Crystal Symphony: >>26946337
Across the Ocean: >>26965039
Bard Quest: >>26959355
Coltquest: >>26952063
Long Name: >>26946212
Vampony: >>26965066
SIM: >>26906614
Pocket Watch: >>26965833
Alchemy: >>26927822
Curwhibbles: >>26924211
Lost Doll: >>26966011
>>26973737
Actually, it is almost always an improvement. Curse quest, for example.
>>26973740
Holy shit
>>26973740
Look at that. CYOA is dead. Shut it all down, it's over. We have no new content anymore.
>>26973740
>longname
Well, it's official.
Time to mcfucking kill myself.
>>26973723
No one cares, nice blogpost faggot
>>26973780
I care.
>>26973777
>>26973787
I don't
>>26973578
The triple-breasted gryphon Eccentrica Gallumbits from Eroticon 6.
>>26973723
lol faggot.
>>26973777
Jackpot trips confirm that Wolvan is the official QM of Longname now.
Here it is.
Something simple.
>>26973842
N-no, I wouldn't do this to etherbreeze! ;_;
>>26973842
Why is Etherbreeze trying to eavesdrop on Pinkie and Gar?
>>26973842
Fucking brutal.
>>26973842
Ponk and Gar abandoning Etherbreeze in a wasteland?
>>26973842
Explain.
>>26973870
>>26973877
Guys, I'm sure Gar is a unicorn.
>>26973870
>>26973877
>Gar
That's Wolvan's fucboi OC.
>>26973877
No, that's wolvan's hot fuccboi OC
>>26973883
Wolvan resurrected longname.
Then he regretted it because it started a war.
Then ponkanon said if you aren't enjoying it, then stop running and end the war.
This picture represents that.
>>26973886
>>26973899
Where's the orange and red?
>>26973870
>>26973877
>>26973885
>Gar
>>26973842
That's right. Look down upon them and say no.
>>26973910
Fuck off inept.
>>26973933
I just have all her tf2 reaction images, is all
>>26973940
change the filenames
>>26973540
Crystal Symphony
A virgin who died is revived two years later with dark magic later as a living statue. A part of her has literally died on the inside and with nothing to live for and death as a preferable end.
It's ok so far.
>>26973933
>>26973909
It's hard to notice but the mane has orange as well.
>>26973940
>I-I just have the same pictures with the exact same filenames
Inept pls
>>26973740
>fucking everyone is running except for Sloth
Sloth
P L E A S E
L
E
A
S
E.
>>26973962
And Cyborg
Curse you CyborgEven if you're never coming back
>>26973962
>Sloth
>Finishing lewd
>>26973962
Bath
>>26973951
Who is this pony
>>26974077
Shit
>>26974077
Nobody important
>>26974077
Respone.
>>26974077
Respone
>>26974077
Res's OC. His name is Tube Sand.
>>26974077
Not Important
>>26974077
These answers are wrong
>>26974091
>>26974093
This one is correct >>26974101
>>26974077
Tube Sand
>>26974077
Tube sand
>>26974077
His name is Tube Sand
>>26973949
I recall his writing being annoying before. Has it improved in the intervening time?
>>26974133
>>26974115
>>26974101
Stupid name
>>26974087
The Hatred protagonist?
>>26974152
Take it up with Res, it's his OC.
>>26974077
Tube Sand.
>>26974077
The OC is called Tube Sand
>>26974175
b-but I am trying! I wouldn't abandon etherbreeze!everI care too much
>>26974184
Caring must be contagious.
>>26974175
>burry
>>26974210
Then why do i still not care?
>>26974244
Because you have built up a tolerance to caring through exposure.
>>26974244
Shitfire was always the worst pony.
>>26974257
By fucking Pinkie. Don't try to deny it.
>>26973470
Daily reminder that I can't think of something to remind you of.
>>26974277
I find the inherent contradiction of this statement fascinating.
>>26974269
https://derpiboo.ru/31471
Daily reminder to>taunt
>>26974244
Fucking Spitcunt
>>26974277
>>26974277
Reminder
Your waifu is for dying a lonely virgin
>>26974331
Is she?
Daily reminder that Pinkie cares about everyone but isn't above mercy killing them by smothering them with a pillow.
>>26930116
It isn't tubesand you fucks
>>26974349
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NLWzSGQAnSg
>>26974355
tube sand
>>26974355
Tube Sand
>>26974355
Res, they found out what your OC was named. No point in denying it now.
>>26974355
Tube sand
>>26974355
Tube Sand
What exactly is "tube sand" actually? Is it like pocket sand?
>>26974355
Admit your pony's name, Res.
>>26974550
It's sand that comes in a tube.
>>26974550
It is a tube.
Of sand.
>>26974550
Condom sand.
>>26974355
>Autistic batcrap memes
>"kekekek, bats eat moths xD"
You are a fucking cancer on /mlp/.
>>26974591
Hey look, it's shiny!
>>26974591
butthurt mothfag detected
>>26974685
Super's running
>>26974696
>>26974715
Lies. I not only care but have already posted.
whoops
>>26974763
It should really be the other way around. Wolvan and Ponkfag are still here, and Longname is the one who is dead.
>>26974763
If only she had wings :^)
>>26974804
You magnificent son of a bitch.
>>26974804
>>26974791
Etherbreeze represents the quest, not the QM, anon.
>>26974804
Salt in the wound.
>>26974804
Savage.
>>26974804
>>26974763
I refuse to accept this. Imma not gonna abandon that quest, fucking watch me
Give requests
>>26974926
Etherbreeze.
>>26974918
Are you Wolvan?
>>26974926
Jet.
>>26974936
The dead can't trot
>>26974926
Emberspark.
>>26974944
yeah
>>26974926
Etherwing.
>>26974926
Emery.
>>26948628
>>26974991
B A S E D
A
S
E
D
>>26974936
Tattoos?
>>26974956
Reference?
>>26975002
Yes please.
>>26975002
Emberspark.
>>26975002
>Reference?
No idea, I was making a joke.
>>26975036
I would want to steal that CM too.
Normie Quest when?
>>26975116
What is Urban?
>>26974965
Lies.
>>26975116
I'd run it if I know how to be a normie.
>>26975177
>tfw no fulfilling 9-5 job
>no loving wife and kids
>no place you can truly call home
>>26975116
Get up and walk outside.
![latest[1].png](https://i.imgur.com/Lc9jGpb.jpg "latest[1].png")
>>26975244
Home is where your friends are.
And making friends is easy!
>>26975352
>>26973999
I'm sorry, I would run today, but I've got other shit I need to do.
>>26975487
How to make a friend - By Twilight Sparkle
Step 1: Make a friend.
>>26975569
Did Arch help her write this?
>>26975560
Why is there a review of Sonic Boom Rise of Lyric over there?
>>26975586
Take a guess.
>>26975560
BLUE ARMS
>>26975560
I remember that lass.
Shame she got caught up in all the faggotry.
>>26975606
Bath's new job is a video game journalist?
>>26975586
It's a fanfic
>>26975560
Do what you gotta do Bath, cute picture by the way.
>>26975560
Why is there a review/fanfic being written of sonic?
>>26975560
why does everything you draw look so sad?
>>26975560
Who the fuck is that and why doesn't she have hooves?
>>26975845
She's a /v/ anti-feminist average female gamer.
>>26975845
>Vivian pony
Make /v/ rage.
>>26975878
Insert Kebab
>>26975890
This needs to happen.
>>26975918
I don't care and I'm fairly sure I'm not the only one, regardless of scarce individuals who claim they care.
>>26975166
would I ever lie to you
>>26976109
Stuck is unkill
He's a threadly challenge for you all:
Draw a map of the current setting you QM for or play in.Or don't. I'm just a post.
>>26976167
Done
>>26976140
I don't care, but it's not personal.
Alchemy is going to let us deal with uncle lucky tomorrow!
>>26976227
kek, really?
https://picarto.tv/Wolvan
After accidentally falling asleep for an hour and all other streams dying in the meantime, it's time for more spriting
Also, movie again. Dead Snow or something
>>26976192
First thought was 11-54.
>>26976167
What if I already did?
>>26976388
change of plans, we watching guardians of the galaxy.
Also, What CYOA Pone should I make
>>26976587
Is there an Etherbreeze yet?
>>26976587
The virgin statueAurora
>>26976587
Peppermint or Spearmint.
>>26976616
Res pls.
>>26976616
who care you. Craft? Alchemy?
>>26976587
Do we have Mango?
>>26976167
Do you want the current map, or the old sorta-useless-at-the-moment map?
I have a few for my quest so far.
>>26976603
Thanks a lot for most of the work, Gimp
>>26977137
Cute as fuck yo.
>>26977137
There are no rails at the end of this CYOA ride.
>>26977137
You have grossly misrepresented Etherbreeze. She is a pegasus mare.
Check your fucking privilege.
>>26977137
Adorable as fuck. Thanks.
So vampony is up...kinda.
I'm just drawing smut today.
Enjoy.
>>26974979
http://imgur.com/16uVYYT
>>26977408
http://imgur.com/vcIZOqw
>>26977678
It feels as though the tone of Vampony has shifted.
>>26977678
You filthy degenerate.Thanks.
>>26977703
I think Vamp is just goofing off for the moment.
>>26977678
Unless there is a story post, it's not up. There's no problem with calling it a wash and just doing art.
Sorry for taking so piss long, Alch
>>26977803
Damn Speed is fast
>>26977803
Cute, but is he supposed to be going that fast?
>>26977830
he's called speed weed for a reason
>>26977803
3fast
>>26977703
>>26977742
...well Mangoanon is much better at making serious stuff then I am, I guess. I think I'm a bit more light-hearted and silly writer or something.and like smut.
>>26977768
I guess so.
I'm just going to get tired soon and bad stuff happens when I post tired. So I figured doing art would be better....until I get too tired to do that.
So how's Pocket Watch?
>>26978035
It's okay.
Dunno if he's coming back. He said he would be back tonight.
>sloth is dead
Haha...ha...
>>26978370
deader than usual?
>>26978035
As gay as he for some reason is.
Let's bet /cyoa/
Who is gonna come back first?
>Longname
>GC
>puzzleanon
>panzer
>your freedom
>>26978488
Longname first, then Panzer.
I don't bet any of the others will return.
>1 reply in an hour
Is Longname finally dead?
>>26978551
The prompt wasn't particularly compelling. There's not a whole lot you can do.
>>26978551
Somebody forgot to say they were running
>>26978056
>>26978551
just like etherbreeze's dreams
>>26978577
He updates at intermittent times throughout the day. He's not running.
>>26978488
Innkeeper
Then before that, Half Life 3
>>26978575
I said it before and I'll say it again. That's what you get for having Wolvan writing
>>26978488
Rocketeer
>>26978488
What are you talking about? Longname already came back, and it's better than it ever was before.
>>26978488
Innkeeper before anyone else.
Puzzleanon last of any of those.
>>26978765
There's nothing wrong with Wolvan's writing. I think what happened was that people just got the impression that it was dead.
>>26952063
Colt Quest is starting late tonight.
Death in the Afternoon might be the first quest I drop because of its players.
The lelel fuk everythin XD in response to every post. That's not fun
>>26979243
You the QM? If so, you made the character's flirty, you kind of created the situation what do you want?
>>26979260
No, I'm a player.
>>26979260
why would you think he's the qm?
>>26979280
I figured he was frustrated with his players.
>>26978575
Wolvan is obviously trying to bore people so they stop asking him to be the new QM.
>>26979379
who?
>>26979389
Hijackhammer.
>>26979467
so, nobody?
>>26979475
Not nobody, it's Hijuxtaposition.
>>26979481
Did you mean Hijumbojet?
>>26979490
No, I meant Hijijiji.
>>26979379
I wonder what he's talking about.
>>26979516
It looks like he's trying to decide what to eat. He talks about food a lot.
>>26979544
NE is up
Inept. You lurking?
>>26979644
I haven't seen her in Picarto in quite a while, she never comes into Discord, and is difficult to reach through the general.
Good luck, anon.
>>26979379
oh wow, look hijacker wants the players to decide something, how generous of him! this totally makes his long history of railroading forgettable.
>>26979644
She didn't run today and it's pretty late where she is. She's probably asleep.
>>26979726
Theyre just deciding on dinner. And it was a tie.
If you rounded all the MCs up and forced them in a singing competition, what would be their songs?
>>26979717
>>26979735
Inept's a girl? Who knew? I surely didn't.
But uh, if you see this, I just wanted to let you know you're doing good so far.
And I skimmed through the last discussion thread too.
Don't worry about any changes you've made. I've jotted them down in the canon story.
Feel free to make up some new areas and stuff in Papoville cause I've got the feeling you might feel a bit restricted due to much not getting done during the run + no clue where things may head in the future.
The only major things you might want to keep in mind areThe mane 6 are in a status similar to the captured star spirits in paper Mario. Meaning we won't see them for a long while. Everyone else is fine though (minus the princesses, I've got future plans involving them.in the case the train does get fixed, be wary not to venture too far. Otherwise you could get lost and never find your way back.
You might be wondering why I haven't tried continuing things yet. To put things simply I'm in hell (not enough memory to take pics,schedule has me tied down harder than a slave, and so on)
Trust me, I've been meaning to return for a while now. I just can't.
tl;dr continue if you wish to.
>>26979924
Juicy signing off for the night.
>>26979860
Jolly Joist.
Don't stop me now - Queen.
![latest[1].png](https://i.imgur.com/D1AeGx7.png "latest[1].png")
I just wanted a comfy bar CYOA.
>>26980156
Tell me about it man. Shit was comfy as fuck and I was really enjoying it, and then just like that it explodes into drama and sex. I guess I shouldn't expect any less from 4chan. Hopefully we can put on the damage control.
![108034994.rNe36rNf.RestaurantMirage8[1].jpg](https://i.imgur.com/HW5BsmI.jpg "108034994.rNe36rNf.RestaurantMirage8[1].jpg")
>>26980179
Perhaps someday somebody will make a proper one. QM had it coming with making MC a trap.
>>26980249
If only he posted the genders rather than tricking us.
>>26980249
>>26980259
I don't know if I would blame that, I think he still gave plenty of opportunities for things to go either way. It just seems like there's a very strong pro-sex contingent of players who don't really care about anything else but lewd. Some of the lewd inputs were so crude I actually wasn't sure if the quest was being raided but it's the middle of the night so it seems unlikely. Lewd or comfy preferences aside, sex seems like a really bad decision for our character right now.
>>26980303
yeah there are some pretty cancerous folks in cyoa who get thirsty as all hell. Stuck had a similair problem, i'm kind of hoping that sloths long break+the pastebin will end that so we can get back to making a good story instead of a cheesy porno.
>>26980303
>>26980328
I think it's a problem of having the character's orientation laid out on the table from the getgo; since it's (usually) one of the few actual characteristics they have since there hasn't been a story to flesh them out yet, it gets a lot more focus than it might if it were revealed later on down the line after more interesting traits have been established.
Granted when you don't mention it you run the risk of eternal waffling and harem building because even without it someone is going to waifu everyone with more dimensions than a piece of cardboard, because the average anon is a very sexually driven individual.
So basically we're all fucked, no matter how much the CYOA MC is or isn't.
>>26980372
gotta give respect to alchemy, when his players wanted a harem his response was 'alright, talk them into it'. The players promptly tanked the one stable relationship Speed had and every mare shot him down.
>>26980372
Actually, I don't think his orientation has been set yet. To me it seems more like we were just responding to all of the flirting. If we remember how he reacted to the "test" he might be into mares as well.
>>26977931
I'm not so good at humor of light hearted stuff. My sense of humor is very much reactionary, so when I just goof off it's not funny because I have nothing to bounce off of. This is a flaw I'd like to remedy.
It's something I was hoping that TES quest would help with.
I love the smut, hell, I wrote two fairly long lewd scenes in Vamp. I just can't into art.
I kinda dropped the ball this weekend. I just got my first real job in like two years last week, and I didn't plan my time off very well.
Sorry. 'll try to run either Vamp or TES some time this week.
If Vamp's thread is still up when I have enough free time I'll go there. If not I'll start up TES again.
>>26980402
...Are we reading the same Alchemy?
>>26980447
don't know, i haven't been keeping up.
Last i checked Sako walked out on Speed in the middle of the night.
Did alchemy give up?
>>26980328
Sloth hinted at lewd constantly, so now his players are randy and will stay that way until something happens to settle them down. If you don't hint at it those feelings/players will drop off. The QM controls the environment of the quest.
>>26980503
Tail play? like how they seem to have somewhat prehinsile tails in the show?
>>26980515
Yeah, something like that, but this one sticks with more generic horse biology.
>>26980515
Tail teasing. Arch doesn't know what a kink is anymore.
>>26980503
Sounds neat, will have to read it later today.
http://pastebin.com/buvFa2Pq
Tweaked and re-uploaded. Thanks to Amm for edits.
>>26980412
There HASN'T been an orientation set yet. The qm was giving us the benefit of being able to go whatever direction we wanted, even if we fucked it up. The Jaz reacted to forms of flirtation from both a male and a female, so I'm thinking the character's orientation would be pretty open.
Plus we could always just ask the qm if they set one or not.
>>26980762
So far it looks like we're attention-sexual.
>>26980784
So we basically get excited by (you)s
>>26980784
So far it looks like we'll jump on any dick.
