Let’s get hypothetical.
You’re a writer who’s been going at it for a bit now. You really enjoy what you do and put your blood, sweat, and tears into each story. One day, you decide to post it in a random thread to get some feedback.
Just one problem: no takers.
You wonder if you should even bother writing; you decide to quit and move on to something else.
If that story applies to you, then hold your horses. If all you wanted was feedback, to improve your writing skills a bit, or maybe just see how others do it, then you’ve come to the right place. There are a few rules, however:
>Posting the story directly in the thread is preferred over a link to Pastebin, FiMFiction, etc.
>One story at a time.
>Don’t be a dick or asshole when reading or critiquing.
>All stories posted within the thread must be pre-written.
This thread’s purpose is to encourage writefags all over /mlp/ to write. We’re laid back here. Post what you want as long as it’s pone related. We’re not all “STOREEEYS ONLY!” We discuss topics such as writing techniques, interesting tropes, and bring forth story ideas. Let’s have fun.
>>25782183
Tips and links:
Things you should know about before writing clop:
Vhatug’s tips for anatomically correct clop and squash soup:
http://pastebin.com/g4VpEg4f
http://www.literotica.com/s/erotic-synonyms (Because using dick, balls, and pussy just isn’t enough to get the reader off. Remember, the reader cums first.)
Had to. Puns are awesome.
Things you should know about writing:
Clever’s Tips on How to Write Short Stories: http://pastebin.com/GGBkxi7e
How to into writing: http://pastebin.com/V1ujiyJt
Writing rules from Navarone: http://pastebin.com/bnMmZ2T3
Ezn’s Guite to writing Fanfiction: http://eznguide.neocities.org/
Writing Book for beginners: https://mega.co.nz/#F!pwo21SKA!dljqCUmOhkwLX3x9_ApEgQ
Help for creating OC characters: http://www.dawnsomewhere.com/ocguide/
A few authors from different threads should you seek inspiration from their stories:
Flutterrape general’s writers: http://pastebin.com/eG8iY7Wy
Active AiE general writers: http://pastebin.com/mVG33ERX
PiE general’s writers: http://pastebin.com/Mgd0QuNy
>“How do I cure my writer’s block?”
Magic.
>“FUCK YOU ANSWER THE QUESTION!”
There’s no one way to cure it, but, if you can’t write, you may as well read stories. There’s more to writing than writing; there’s reading too, and that helps. Check some of the links above.
Try the following (keep in mind this won’t work for everyone):
-Figure out when it’s the best time for you to write.
-Fap then write*.
-Write anyway, and allow yourself to write shitty stories. More often than not, the block is the fear of it being bad. That’s what editing is for.
-Seriously, drink coffee. It’s a writer’s best friend.
-Listen to music while writing.
*Unless you’re writing clop, then listen to your boner.
>>25782183
>filename
Damn...
Am I allowed to post anything that isn't pony related to be judged? I just need to have my writing style in general critiqued.I can fuck off if need be
>"Come spar with me bro."
/mulp/ sure is homolust today.
YOU ARE FIGHTING SHINING ARMOR (LV. 14 UNICORN), LEADER OF THE ROYAL GUARD.
Before you stands a tall unicorn with blue hair and white fur. Even though you two are fighting, you can tell he's not serious. He beckons you to make the first move.
>Attack
>Spells
>Actions
>Items
>Status
>Run
>>25904080
>Status
followed by
>Actions
It's that draw prompt time of the year!
>Draw ponies, or any other creature, simply having a wonderful christmas time.
http://mlpgenrichmentcenter.tumblr.com/post/135676439843/
Ponies have winter games, but do they have Winter Games? With official judging and the most talented ponies trying for the gold? It might be somewhat of a hassle to train in the off seasons, but if there's something Equestrians love, it's the big spectacle of a competition! If they do, though, they probably wait for the new year - after the big chain of celebratory days at the end of the old year.Snowpony construction is a sport, right?
>>25899197
Previous thread.
Season 5 episode links
http://pastebin.com/4teHjCbz
DO THE PROMPT
I miss the old Sunset Shimmer.
She was fun, and ambitious, she didn't let anything stand in her way.
She wanted that crown and by god did she fucking take it. She was edgy, and dominant and cool.
She was everything that was great in a villain, until they hackneyed her up at the end.
Then she got her "redemption" and then pretty much became Fluttershy 2.0 and since then acts almost NOTHING LIKE HER OLD SELF.
I miss the ol Shimmy, the one who bullies kids and takes their fucking lunch money, the one who won the crown by bullying the fuck out of an entire school. Kids hid in their fucking locker when she walked by.
What a badass, now thats a Sunset Shimmer I would fuck.
In honor of the Old Sunset, lets have a Old Sunset Shimmer thread.
None of that new design Rainbow Cocks Or Scilight Gaymes bullshit.
Just good ol Edgy evil Sunset.I would give my left nut to see some new green of the old Sunset.
>>25837587
>There she comes walking down the halls, the kids scattering, most just staring in awe with Snip and Snails at her side.
>Others drop their books and jump into their lockers like a bomb just went off in the hall and they're jumping into a nearby trench for safety.
>She walks up to you.
>"Wheres my money dweeb?"
"Uh, excuse me?"
>"You heard me, you got lunch money, and I want it.
>Shes rubbing her thumb across her nails.
"You're not getting-"
>She slams her hands against your locker caging you between her and the locker.
>"Don't make this difficult."
>"That's right, you'd better do what she says or else!"
>"Quiet! Let ME do the talking! Now give me the money and there won't be problems."
>You steel yourself.
"Heh, you can't scare me, you got nothing on me, and besides, you're a girl, what can you do to intimidate someone like me, who's taller than you?"
>She folds her arms smiling.
>"Oh, you're going to regret that, Snips, Snails, get ready to send it."
"Heh, wait what? Send what?"
>"I guess it's no use trying to intimidate someone as 'big' as you."
>She pulls out her phone thumbing through.
>Something about it doesn't seem right.
"W-what are you-"
>>25838122
>You walk over looking at their phones.
>Its you jacking off to a picture of Fluttershy in the bathroom stall.
>"Such a candid shot of that time Fluttershy wasn't wearing panties, I wonder what your parents, and what the school would think of such a pervert."
"B-but how-"
>"Snips and snails followed you around afterward, we've even got it in video format."
>"Eugh, it's totally gross."
>"Yeah disgusting!"
>"But like you said, I won't be able to intimidate you. You're beyond negotiation at this point."
>She sighs.
>"I guess the only thing to do would be to send this off to everyone we know."
"N-no wait-"
>"Are you willing to be a little more compliant?"
>You look down.
"I.."
>"Oh whats that? I didn't hear you."
"Y-yes.."
>"Could you speak up a little louder?"
"Yes."
>"I want to hear you say, 'yes Miss Shimmer'."
"Yes, Miss Shimmer."
>"Good boy, now give me your money nerd!"
>You pull out your wallet.
>You go to try and hand her a 5 from your wallet but she goes all Jane Jetson on your ass and takes the whole thing stealing the 50 dollars you'd been saving.
>She thumbs through the money.
"H-hey thats-"
>"Proper collateral, you wouldn't want this sort of sensitive information getting out, would you?"
"No.."
>She takes the other five from your hand and hands you back your empty wallet.
>"Be seeing you, loser."
>She says as she strolls away.
>You look down at your empty wallet.
>God dammit..
>>25838134
>You go to class.
>You sit down in the back.
>Stupid Sunset Shimmer.
>Stealing all your money like that..
>Now you won't have any money for lunch!
>And you'd been saving that money for a few weeks too!
>What a bitch..
>Forcing you into compliance like that..
>You know what, you know exactly what you'll do, you'll go to the Principal and..
>And, totally get found out that you were jerking off to Fluttershy.
>You could try getting their phones, but, they probably have it on backup disks and USB drives..
>You're boned..
>You're so totally boned and it's only the first day of school..
>You're sitting alone in the lunchroom.
>Sunset Shimmer surrounded by Snips, Snails, Cherry Berry, Flash Sentry..
>You have nothing to eat of course because Sunset stole all of your money.
>All you can do is watch as Sunset enjoys the spoils of your defeat..
>What a bitch..
>Look at her all smug over there..
>Enjoying herself like that..
>Shes probably laughing AT you right now..
>You didn't know it was possible to feel this pathetic..
>You get up..
>You walk by them toward the exit.
>Suddenly you feel yourself trip and fall to the ground.
>"Hey, you should watch where you're going loser!"
>"He's all tripped up!"
>The entire table is laughing at you.
>You get up shambling away..
>This is the worst..
>be me
>bored in car with normie aunt
>tells aunt I watch MLP and I am a fan
>"it speaks about friendship and adventure like powerpuff girls"
>she doesn't give a fuck
>tell her the ans fantasize about having sex with a horse
>suddenly listens to me
>widens her eyes
>autism intensifies
>realize I irl shitposted
>realize I told her I am a horsefucker
>"never tell that to anyone else, anon. omg. im disgusted."
>becomes silent
>longestrideofmylife.jpeg
What do I do now, /mlp/? She told my mother I'm a horsefucker and now everybody looks at me weird. Grandpa avoids me even though he is a farmer and I'm sure he's had a goat or two before.
I merely adopted your title. You were born in it. Molded by it.
I did not call myself until I was very old. And by then it was only shitposting.
I don't even watch this show.
>implying the majority of the people here actually do it
>>25904789
>That so meta shitpost thats so meta that its actually shitposting even though it was in the first place
good work op! Its like you're actually a real live autist!
>>25904789
>I don't even watch this show.
Please leave. You don't have to and nobody here can force you, but it's for the best if you leave and never come back here.
>>25904805
>implying I did not accidentaly told my aunt I'm a horsefucker
Fag it totally happened. I'm desperate.
Welcome to Equestrian Dungeon, the long-awaited sequel to /mlp/ Tower. As in the last rendition of the game, the goal will be to get to the end of the segment or floor. Along the way, you will be able to keep items you find (and mischeviously bring along) in the Inventory, as well as work with a set number of players, dubbed "AnonPones," in the thread. AnonPones are created when a player joins the game. There are multiple interactive objects, such as switches, levers, giant metal springs, and the occasional undead or mechanical monstrosity that's out to kill your party. There are also many traps scattered throughout the floor, such as flamethrowers and bottomless pits, that also harm or kill your AnonPones. You have no floor diagram, alas "Flying Blind", and you will rely on
>Greentext parts of the story
to move along.
Previously in Equestrian Dungeon, a group of six or seven AnonPones drifted through two different floors, but made little progress on either. At this rate, they'll be trapped in this dungeon for a long time.
You know the rules, and so do I.
>>25901194
Hi, OP here.
I aware to celestia, it's going to happen in this thread.
>>25901221
>off by one
Also *Swear
>So what is this thread about?
Pretty much this thread is about anon owning a pony as a slave. He can do whatever he wishes, be it nice and not abusing or the complete opposite.
If you're going to be writing some green, please name yourself. It will be easier to keep track of your story.
Pastebin: http://pastebin.com/u/SlavePonyAuction
Complete stories: http://pastebin.com/82rCVh4j
WIP stories: http://pastebin.com/mfmaWQDc
HIATUS stories (inactive for 2+ weeks): http://pastebin.com/QgTRi8d0
Full story list: http://pastebin.com/cqLCYveb
Popular/Recent Stories:
Changing lifestyle (Changeling) by Fireking -- WIP
http://pastebin.com/CndZXCih
Broken Princess (Luna) by Jingle Jangle -- WIP
http://pastebin.com/NLP6dcMr
Gangster Anon (Lyra) by Unknown -- WIP
http://pastebin.com/t0b0q4LS
Fire and Sky (Spitfire) by Lurkernon -- WIP
http://pastebin.com/KDF26gwp
A deal is a deal (Applebloom) by twiligh/tg/ame_night -- WIP
http://pastebin.com/DK21fjWz
Blind Anon (Fluttershy) by JohnColt -- WIP
http://pastebin.com/0rmywwyB
No title (Minuette) by Dyslexia -- WIP
http://pastebin.com/PYNcYvC8
Previous thread: >>25860806
Merry Christmas!
>>25881533
Merry Christmas
>>25881533
The IRC is #Slavepone at irc.rizon.net:^|
>>25881557
>LEL OFFICAL STEAM GROUP MAYMAY
Fuck off
I bet there's some fucking women on here....
>>25881274
That's just an old pony's tale
>>25881274
That's not true at all.R-Right?
>>25881274
That's stupid. Women on a internet image board? Let alone an internet image board devoted to a mans show? You funny nigger.
Pastebins:
http://pastebin.com/u/EarfulofNapalm
http://pastebin.com/u/Fizzles_Anon
http://pastebin.com/u/HeliAnon
http://pastebin.com/u/Maintenance-Bro
http://pastebin.com/u/AirArk
http://pastebin.com/u/Unfortunate_Rookie
http://pastebin.com/u/Plonefag
http://pastebin.com/u/DerpyDubs
http://pastebin.com/u/BobRay
http://pastebin.com/u/Nagibator_99
http://pastebin.com/u/Typhoon2142
http://pastebin.com/u/AspirantWritesThings
http://pastebin.com/u/MintCondition453
http://pastebin.com/u/PantsMan
http://pastebin.com/u/PlanePonyStories
Plane ponies wiki
http://planeponies.wikia.com
Dropbox with most stuff in it: https://www.dropbox.com/sh/y3naei9ek8mzt6g/AAC0zm3ujYN8R7CXu1m-cvTEa
Ask Morgan
http://02morganite.tumblr.com/
Steam group:
http://steamcommunity.com/groups/ShadowofAvalon
Last Thread: https://desustorage.org/mlp/thread/25593492
>>25593492
Threads archive: http://pastebin.com/iwyBswEf
Drone a qt Edition
>>25729543
huh, beat me to it.first for Blitz then.
nice trips
third for prototype plones
Any picture from your Pony folder. Look how original I am.
So /mlp/ do you want to start a mlp song thread? One of you start and the rest of us will continue
>EqG not allowed Of obvious reasons
>>25905357
You mean posting youtube links to mlp songs?
>>25905373
No as in starting a song by one of its lyrics
Like these animals don't listen then continue it
>>25905357
Hey, hey, everybody....
Pinkie pie appears beside you. What do?
>>25905259
Scream
>>25905259
Die.
>>25905259
Hug her after freaking out.
......
>>25905065
Dreamworks presents
Shimmer
>>25905065
...?
...<3!
Trypophobia pony thread is a go!
>>25903863
>a go
Yeah, right into the fucking trash, faggot.
>>25903863
what the fuck is that thing in her eye
What are some of the most viewed MLP videos on youtube /mlp/?
Highest I could find is "sad my little pony" with 34,931,283 views. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rvcogfvx94Q
>>25903176
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cgRkOlLSfgc
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_xE5QHq4yrY
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rjmsThcOGTQ
top link: least viewed
bottom link: most viewed
>>25903176
This.
https://youtube.com/watch?v=rjmsThcOGTQ
>>25903176
That's the highest you could find?
Bitch please
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rjmsThcOGTQ
