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ITT:
>We discuss Current, Finished and Upcoming CYOAs.
>Give advice on CYOAs
>Pitch ideas
>Get critique
>Trade art
>Shitpost
List of stories: https://www.anonpone.com/
Read this advice first:
https://www.anonpone.com/advice
http://www.tgchan.org/wiki/Advice
>What day is best?
http://strawpoll.me/5151810
>What time is best?
http://strawpoll.me/5151833
>What genre are you interested in?
http://strawpoll.me/5151994
>What if I cannot into art?
http://strawpoll.me/5207921
>What race would you play?
http://strawpoll.me/5498136
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Last thread: >>26906299
Yeeeah baby, work that grill.
Tell me about Sharpie. Why does she spill the spaghetti?
>>26922922
Because she has the social skills of a two year old. It's adorable to watch her drop spagoots.
Let’s get hypothetical.
You’re a writer who’s been going at it for a bit now. You really enjoy what you do and put your blood, sweat, and tears into each story. One day, you decide to post it in a random thread to get some feedback.
Just one problem: no takers.
You wonder if you should even bother writing; you decide to quit and move on to something else.
If that story applies to you, then hold your horses. If all you wanted was feedback, to improve your writing skills a bit, or maybe just see how others do it, then you’ve come to the right place. There are a few rules, however:
>Posting the story directly in the thread is preferred over a link to Pastebin, FiMFiction, etc.
>One story at a time.
>Don’t be a dick or asshole when reading or critiquing.
>All stories posted within the thread must be pre-written.
This thread’s purpose is to encourage writefags all over /mlp/ to write. We’re laid back here. Post what you want as long as it’s pone related. We’re not all “STOREEEYS ONLY!” We discuss topics such as writing techniques, interesting tropes, and bring forth story ideas. Let’s have fun.
>>26922773
Tips and links:
Things you should know about before writing clop:
Vhatug’s tips for anatomically correct clop and squash soup:
http://pastebin.com/g4VpEg4f
http://www.literotica.com/s/erotic-synonyms (Because using dick, balls, and pussy just isn’t enough to get the reader off. Remember, the reader cums first.)Had to. Puns are awesome.
Things you should know about writing:
Clever’s Tips on How to Write Short Stories: http://pastebin.com/GGBkxi7e
How to into writing: http://pastebin.com/V1ujiyJt
Writing rules from Navarone: http://pastebin.com/bnMmZ2T3
Ezn’s Guite to writing Fanfiction: http://eznguide.neocities.org/
Writing Book for beginners: https://mega.co.nz/#F!pwo21SKA!dljqCUmOhkwLX3x9_ApEgQ
Help for creating OC characters: http://www.dawnsomewhere.com/ocguide/
A few authors from different threads should you seek inspiration from their stories:
Flutterrape general’s writers: http://pastebin.com/eG8iY7Wy
Active AiE general writers: http://pastebin.com/mVG33ERX
PiE general’s writers: http://pastebin.com/Mgd0QuNy
>“How do I cure my writer’s block?”
Magic.
>“FUCK YOU ANSWER THE QUESTION!”
There’s no one way to cure it, but, if you can’t write, you may as well read stories. There’s more to writing than writing; there’s reading too, and that helps. Check some of the links above.
Try the following (keep in mind this won’t work for everyone):
-Figure out when it’s the best time for you to write.
-Fap then write*.
-Write anyway, and allow yourself to write shitty stories. More often than not, the block is the fear of it being bad. That’s what editing is for.
-Seriously, drink coffee. It’s a writer’s best friend.
-Listen to music while writing.
*Unless you’re writing clop, then listen to your boner.
I was gonna put this up yesterday, but figured I'd wait for the shitstorm to blow over somewhat first.
Erotic violence writer, I know you showed up just in time for the last one to go under. If you're still hanging on, drop that link, and I'll be happy to give you a second critique.
>>26922800
Hey, LG. When you're done with the erotic violence writer, mind looking at an incredibly short story? I've been playing around with voice, and wanted to see if what I wrote was too pretentious
Hello fellow anons. This is a Fluttershy thread. This thread is designed to contain content such as images, gifs, webms, or discussion of the character Fluttershy from My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic. Please post pictures, gifs, webms, and discussion of or relating to Fluttershy.
Say something nice about Diamond Tiara
>>26921429
She has a nice tiara.
>>26921429
I want to have sex with her.
>>26921429
she is very good for sexual
I'll do it!
You know I will...
>>26920895
Would doing this make her a Glimbo?
Rarity, go home, you're drunk.
>>26920895
Pfft... You aren't man enough to pretty her up, wimp!
Why does the concept of Guardians of Harmony piss so many people off now, exactly? Isn't a more action focused series exactly what Lauren wanted?
>>26919919
action will never stimulate our vaginas the way 'le slice of life' does.
Weird I was asking myself that less than an bour ago.
>>26919919
because I don't think this was planned in the show at any time
The ride's over guys!
ABANDON SHIP
>>26919793
>Opening is considered the weakest by horsefuckers, Making Sombra look exciting.
The ship was doomed as soon as it hit the iceburg anon, it's now listing.
>>26919793
>easter weekend
>barely any announcement or promotion
Just DFC being shit.
>>26919793
====Side-by-Side-by-Side Comparison (Seasons 4, 5, and 6)===
S6E01 & S6E02 - 383,000 & 373,000 Viewers {-10,000}
S5E01 & S5E02 - 510,000 & 574,000 Viewers {64,000}
S401 & S4E02 - 733,000 & 709,000 Viewers {-24,000}
===Rank Standings (as of March 26, 2016)===
1) The Crystalling (Episodes #118 and 119)
with 756,000 viewers; Part 1 with 383,000
viewers and Part 2 with 373,000 viewers
Looking at the entirety of FiM, and a lot of the lines and lore around cutie marks, how they tie to the tree, the map, destiny, controlled/compelled actions of ponies by the tree, etc. I can't help but feel like there's something very off and disturbing about the Tree of Harmony.
Through cutie marks, which stem from its magic, since we've seen can be activated by the map, which is a part of the tree, along with having Sunbutt, Luna, and Twilight's marks on its trunk long before they actually got their marks, or were even born suggests that the tree is not just tied to the mane 6's and princesses destinies and magic, but everypony in Equestria. Contoling their fates, their magic, using everyone as puppets to carry out its will of bringing harmony to society, without their consent or even knowledge of the true nature of things. While simultaneously altering the nature of what creature dares to defy its will.
One word that Tirek threw around a lot was freedom. I find it disturbing that the tree's will can alter even Discord's inherent nature as a spirit of chaos. How he was meant to be. How he always has been. Could that be why he sought to strangle the tree, under the belief that a peron's inherent nature shouldn't be altered in such a way? I mean, he was turned to stone twice, for just being himself, but that went against the Tree's will, so it used the element bearers to stone him.
Was Tirek trying to do the same? Stealing magic granted by the tree, a mechanism that the tree used to control everypony, in order to free them from controlled and manipulated destinies by the puppeteer tree. That would explain why Tirek was lazerbeaming the Everfree forest in blind rage- looking to destroy the tree with its own power that he collected from the ponies. (cont.)
It would explain why the mane 5 beleived that their switched cutie marks were what they had always been doing. "It's what my cutie mark is telling me". And the marks are bestowed by and connected to the magic of the tree. Again, seeing as how the tree controlls the cutie map, and the 6's marks, and compel them to go places to impose its will on others.
The ponies have no choice, because they're puppets of the tree, and I'm completely freaked out by this. Tirek was only freeing the ponies of the Tree's influence and magic. He opposed the Tree's will, and was unjustly punished or it.
Is it season 10 yet?
>>26919631
>>26919636
This is too deep anon
You're giving the toy commercial too much credit
So when are you going to buy one of these and meet your waifu in VR, /mlp/?
I'm currently getting an expensive PC built so that I am VR ready, then I'll be getting the Vive. It's coming out one month later in the UK so I have plenty of time to get my computer built.
Did you order the Oculus Rift instead? Pony VR thread!
People would then have to develop a good, functioning pony VR game that has functioning and believable AI. And knowing this fandom and how Hasbro deals with it, they game will probably be in development hell for a couple of years then be forgotten in the dust by the devs, or get a C&D by Hasbro within the first week.
I don't exactly have that much hope in VR, and I'm sure most pony vr stuff is just going to be Unity/Unreal 4 stuff made by people who don't know that much about game design, or just "Playing Gmod with pony models in VR mode"
That and you just know Hasbro is going to crack down on any really good VR pony project
>>26919530
>Did you order the Oculus Rift instead?
>€700+
Nope
Post non-white MLP characters. Because why the fuck not.
You mean every character but rarity, sweete belle, fancy pants, celestia and blue blood?
>>26919413
>Because why the fuck not.
It's not canon for one
>>26919413
>Non-white
She's so sweet and caring toward her younger sister.. I think a lot of people really flipped their lids for no reason when they saw how protective she was of her.
It makes you think, if she got to know someone, maybe she'd be protective of them too. And be attentive to their needs..
I can't imagine ever being depressed working on her farm. I often fantasize about being her helping hand, and working all day long on her farm, becoming that special male partner that she never knew she wanted.
That guy who would be just as honest and loyal with her, as she was with me.. This simple earth pony has had my heart ever since season one. And I can't wait to see more of her in the coming season 6 episodes that spotlight her.
She's a great gal
>>26919650
For you.
Who would win, /mlp/ ?
>>26918502
the big T in the middle
>>26918502
John Cena.
The thread for all true believers of the Amazing Spider-Shim.
Need a Pastebin list
>>26918324
Roommate Anon
http://pastebin.com/crUhxGkS
Beans
http://pastebin.com/yNaJFuz0
Red
http://pastebin.com/hTFVft7x
Femanon
http://pastebin.com/xkSzdr5V
>>26918344
Thank you
We need more drawfags
Quality shipping thread. Post only non-shit ones(No FlashLight, OC/Canon or Dislestia)
>>26918306
OP and every cock on the planet.
Does /mlp/ like spider ponies?
Can we get a spider pony thread going?
