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Last Thread: >>27859897
Yeeeah baby, work that grill.
Second for Laccolith.
Frostbitten is the new Heat
Great writing, enormous worldbuilding, characters that feel real, adventure, mysterious artefacts, a goal without a set path which means that we're free to do whatever we want, and so much more.There are no Egyptian gods (yet) though.
Why haven't you picked it up yet, Anon?
https://soundcloud.com/guywithamp/sets/aether
Jesus fuck Beard is spoiling his D&D players. When are we going to get music like this for quests, Beard?When are we going to get quests at all, Beard?
>>27877661
I have though, anon.
>>27877676
The Aether soundtrack is amazing, I absolutely love Mountainpeak.
It makes me feel strangely at ease. Makes for pretty damn good writing background music.The campaign is super fun as well, we got a ship and we got memes
>>27877661
Because I didn't like the writing.
![large[6].png](https://i.imgur.com/f768a3V.png "large[6].png")
Friendly reminder that caring is weakness.
>>27877740
Then i am the strongest
>>27877676
I really like that Uncharted Lands track he did.
Active threads
Heart of Iron: >>27835987
Super: >>27844204
Dirty Work: >>27844135
Crystal Symphony: >>27787434
FOE: >>27843595
SIM: >>27658879
La Marionnette D'ombre: >>27876931
Frostbitten: >>27875520
Planeswalker: >>27869259
Miracle: >>27780298
Circle Magic: >>27875604
Coltquest: >>27842167
Month Marathon: >>27569338
Cursequest: >>27871764
>>27877771
>month marathon
>Thread's been up for more than a month
>281 posts
How the fuck is that possible?
>>27877771
You forgot one
>>27877676
Reminder that Fins makes kickass tracks for his quests.
https://soundcloud.com/finstheaudio
>>27877789
>doesn't say which one he forgot
>>27877702
>spoiler
If that's true, I feel like dropping Beard's quests and joining DnD instead. At least I'll content more often than once a month.
>>27877676
>>27877803
I'm finally starting to get back into the art groove again. Drawing for quests eventually just became a chore, and I didn't want to turn it into a text quest, but I may end up doing that. With sheer amount of shit that I have to do, I just physically do not have enough time to draw five-six pictures within three hours.I would list stuff off, but something tells me the majority of people here don't give a shit.
I guess something I should ask is, should I just do text, or try and push some of my equally important stuff out of the way to do art?
If the former, I will try and do some art for the more meaningful stuff, but walking through air vents isn't something I want to draw five times in a day.
>>27877771
>Month Marathon
Geeze. That's one undying thread you have there.
Get out you filthy necromancers. This place is for wizards only.
>>27877762
I would argue that I'm stronger because I care less, but arguing would mean I care, which I don't, so I'm not going to prove that I'm stronger, which proves that I'm stronger.
I want to ponk
Hi.
>>27877878
Ponk in hell, Doxel.
>>27877803
you are welcome to, anon. We're 5 people playing right now, we're also in a town so you should still have a chance to jump on until we leave
>>27877895
Hello.
>>27877858
You just proved you care
>>27877858
You put more effort and typed more for your post than he did, so clearly you care more than he does.
All you have proved by replying at all is that you are not stronger.
>>27877858
You're the weak one.
Curwhibbles when?
>>27877975
When you make it.
What do those guys use to write music?
>Tfw some QMs can draw, write and draw music and you are just shit.
>>27877990
I use FL Studio, as well as a shit ton of Plug-ins.
>>27877851
>Wizards
>Mere Necromancers
You have no idea where you are, do ya boy!?
My waifu is better then your waifu
>>27877842
>should I just do text, or try and push some of my equally important stuff out of the way to do art?
It's actually kind of hard to answer that.
I think your art can be very important in some situations, mostly in character interactions, but other than I don't think we'd lose a lot if you were to not draw one pic out of two.
It also depends on the quest. I can hardly imagine Horse Quest without images. But I'd be ok if you decided to only draw for important stuff in Big Mares.
I'm aware that what I'm about to say is not really helpful, but ultimately, it's up to you.
>>27878081
You take that back. I bet my waifu could beat up your waifu!
Unless we have the same waifu.
>>27878081
Nuh uh.
>>27877990
Sometimes there are the rare jack of all trade QM's.
I miss Treads...
Who do you miss /cyoa/?
>>27878131
>>27878131
I missfun
>>27878150
There is no such thing as fun
>>27878148
>head explosion makes the same sound as being hit by a pillow
pomf quest when
>>27878172
Tinepone is up, but Inept was a typical grill and posted it in the dead thread so here it is again.
would an op pic with a QMpon be too much?
WORDS
>>27878166
>>27878245
As long as it's not just Wolvan.
>>27878245
Depends on the QM poner. Which and who and why? Is it like nature quest? Are we controlling the Hiji poner in search of memes to steal?
>>27878246
blueberry head.
>>27878254
>>27878264
nah, it's something more typical than that
>>27878245
Yes. No QM OC's.
>>27878245
I'd be fine with it.
>>27878245
Do what you want.
Hi, guys. It's the guy running the shadow puppet quest. I'm hear to ask a question.
I've been thinking about starting a new CYOA along side my other CYOA and was wondering what people would like to see.
Would you like to see:
A CYOA where you create your own villain and try to take over Equestria.
Or:
A space CYOA with ponies, humans, and aliens.
Please, send your opinion.
>>27878996
Honestly, neither. You should at least end your first CYOA before you start another one. That's just a bad idea in general.
>>27878996
>A CYOA where you create your own villain and try to take over Equestria.
A villain cyoa would be interesting to see. I don't recall one being done before.
>>27879016
Some can juggle a couple without problems.
>>27878996
From someone who ran multiple quests at once before: Don't. It's taxing as fucking hell, don't do this to yourself.
A sounds fun though
>>27879044
Do you mean those that we haven't seen in a while or the others that are dead?
>>27878996
Villain cyoa sounds nice if we can develope the right villain.
>>27879033
It's probably never been done before because the players would develop the villain with too much edge.
>>27879033
I feel like Virginquest tried to be a villain quest. The MC was just too much of a pansy.
>>27879176
No, Aurora was a selfish coward.
>>27879033
RGS :^)
Apparently Aurora has no mouth, can't emote, and I got the colors wrong. Fixed.
>>27879514
I want to give her a happy ending.
>>27879578
Lewd.
>>27879514
Still cute.
When did you stop reading that CYOA, Anon?
>>27880010
When I finished reading it.
>>27880010
When I started running my own.
I'm still planning on finding a day to catch up, I just haven't yet.
>>27880010
When I realized the whole thing was going to be like that.
>>27880118
Like what?
To the one guy who wanted effort, here you go.
To the rest of you, I humbly apologize for how circlejerky and off-topic this is. I just felt like drawing a hot dog pone all day and couldn't kick the urge.
>>27880247
This is a much better OC. Good work, Inept.
>>27880247
Is that a tail or a mop that has been shoved up in there?
>>27880259
It's ascythe.
>>27880247
Cute/10, would let verbally abuse me.
>>27880247
I like it. I'd personally prefer a different cutimark but hey. Maybe a peice of burning charcoal or some veggie kebabs.
Also, DAMN look at that tailwrap! She must be a superslut!
>>27880247
Teenie wings
>>27880590
Don't make fun of crippled pegasi, anon.
>>27880247
I like your OC, Inept. The colors are much more visually appealing than the brown one, and making the tail a scythe was clever and funny.
The pony is pretty cute, too.
>>27880247
So Inept is Doxel?
>>27880818
Why does she have a beard of cum?
>>27880818
Why did you glue a ghost to her face?
>>27880828
Does your cum have a light green tint?
>>27880835
Is that bad?
>>27880818
Apparently. At least when she isn't making pixel art.
>>27880818
All grills are changelings, they feed off of attention. Doxel's a grill too.
>>27877661
>Great writing
>Checks thread
>Still has that horrible format where great is arbitrary distributed
I dropped it after we made some time travel
Because allog with god, and OP magic powers, time travel is one thing, if a very careful approach isn't taken to it's mechanics, which can quickly becaome a harmfull source of whatthefuckery for the story. And it was basically what happened. We litterally when to the furture for the heck of it and came back like nothing. I didn't stay for the explaination which followed
Also, I think the characters only feel real to you. They're all smiles and cuddles and allow themselves to get sentimental at the first boop but then are ready to kill other pony without a second thought. Our host admitted she had to kill loonies several times but trusted us whithout a doubt (a random guy she found fainted on her doorstep) from the very beginning
Someone who's become accustomed to daily violence or and madness would never do that
Also that enormous worldbuding... eh
>The world was destroyed because of a sudden catastrophe
>Crazy punk thugs groups control the cities
>Someone built a wall around the ruined city
That's entry level post-apoc lore, famalam. Unless things have changed, I'd even say that wall is awfully convinient, because it allow not to have to develop the lore about what's outside of it
Also let's talk about that artifact book we read
It just talked about three artifact, and oh! One of them is actually just lying behind a wall of ice just outside of house! crazy luck, huh?
Also if the goal you're talking about is "survive" or "escape the city", I think you can find an equally broad goal in litterally every quest
>>27880866
aint no one reading that.
>>27880866
So, you think it feels generic, that time travel was handled poorly, and that finding the first artifact wasn't handled believably. Is that the general gist of it?
>>27880918
I did, here's a tl;dr
Time travel and OP magic is okay if done carefully, but it's not here.
The characters are treating the MC special because he's the MC.
The worldbuilding is minimal and overly convenient things are overly convenient.
The goal is nothing special.
Still tl;dr?
You must have very low standards, cause everything you said is basically wrong.
By the time I got the title card and first post done for Semantic Error it was already 11:30 and I figured that was too late to run a full session. Also I'm feeling a bit sick at the moment.
So I made this Apology Brandy to hopefully make up for not delivering. Sorry.
>>27880818
got yo back senpaihttp://i.imgur.com/SklAEb1.png
>>27880936
Sleep well Bath! Dream happy dreams!
>>27880930
Yep, but you forgot about the writing format being awfull
He should switch to prose or look up how green text is usually written
But it could just be my autism speaking
>>27880937
>>27880931
Anon who wrote the first post here
You're right, I have awfully low standards. In fact I had never even noticed all those things you said, but now that you point them out it feels obvious and I should have seen it and what the hell is wrong with me
Every single time, I get invested into something because I think it's the greatest thing ever, and I never see those things. I read and like all those cyoas, but even in my job I can't find anything wrong, even though my co-workers complain all the time about things i don't notice
How do I stop having shit taste? I'm an adult for fucks sake, I should be able to see those things
>>27881027
>Anon who wrote the first post here
I'm sure no one could figure that out from the rest of the post.
>>27881027
It's not shit taste if you enjoy it. What makes a cyoa "good" is subjective.
Recently, I've been seeing a couple of people praising the lore of quests and even qms saying they were gonna do some lore because they thought it could add to their quest
But I've come to think that lore desn't make a story better, and that horrible lore can be easily overlooked if the story is good
- Pokemon's lore and ecosystem is a laughable mess where a 14 y-o can catch the being that created the universe in a little ball. Nobody cares, they're to busy playing the game, only nerds care about the lore
- Overwatch made a lot of promo about the lore and backstory of the characters. Who cares? Blizzard Nerds. That's it
- The Dark Souls series is supposed to have great lore, but everybody know the appeal of the game is the bragging rights you get for finishing it. Nerds who care about Dark Souls lore are even occasionally laughed at in their own community for being nerds
Moral of the story: LORE as opposed to the STORYLINE, isn't important in any medium whatsoever. It's just bonus value for people who already enjoy the thing. I think this lore craze in cyoa started when people talked about Nips lore being retarded. That made a lot of QMs think that they coud do better than nips and started randomly adding explaination about things nobody would have cared about otherwise, instead of doing actual progression.
The demand for lore should come naturally if there things which need explainig regarding the organizations/history/geography which rule the world. The nine land is a fairly good pupil in that regard. One can say that fins lore is good or bad, but the introduction of the lore was never made at the expense of story as the charaters had to deal first hoof with the highest powers of the world
tl:dr lore is for nerds. Don't do lore for the purpose of lore but only if the story or the players demands it
>>27881065
>People like this thing
>WELL THEY SHOULD STOP THAT
>>27881065
I disagree. Good lore is fascinating, even if it is just lore for lore's sake.
>>27881065
>Nips started lore therefore nobody else can do it
Fuck off.
>>27881065
>lore desn't make a story better
Yeah, well, you know, that's just like your opinion, man.
>and horrible lore can be easily overlooked if the story is good
For some people maybe. Not for others. Certainly not for me. If lore is horrible OR if plot is horrible, either way that would ruin it for me.
>>27881065
>But I've come to think that lore desn't make a story better, and that horrible lore can be easily overlooked if the story is good
I agree with this. A good story can be made within bad lore (It'll be harder, I admit, but it can be done) and a bad story is bad regardless of the lore in it. It does not remove, however, that lore and storyline can be enjoyed separately.
> LORE as opposed to the STORYLINE, isn't important in any medium whatsoever
Entirely wrong. A story with strong worldbuilding will always be better than a story with weak worldbuilding.
>The demand for lore should come naturally if there things which need explainig regarding the organizations/history/geography which rule the world
As much as I support that a story shouldn't dump lore out of nowhere, reducing it to something strictly required by the story is retarded-- lore can be something aimed at by itself. By creating a rich world in which to tell stories, you find yourself narrating it in a more defined and lively world, which will help the writer and add enjoyment for the reader.
>>27881127
But that makes you a nerd according to anti-lore anon. You don't want that terrible label placed on you do you? How could you live with yourself if he called you a nerd?
Alright, how about a confession time where everyone leaves their trips on for once. Because anonymously complaining about your quest pisses people off.I never thought my CYOA was hot shit. In fact, I think quite the opposite. I think my quest is bottom of the barrel garbage. I've always disagreed with most praise I've gotten as well. I've always thought that people who "enjoy" my stuff just have low standards, and according to >>27881027, it looks like I was right.Whenever I think of how it could be better, or someone critiques me, unless it's something blatantly obvious like "use less ellipses", I just feel retarded if I don't understand what they're saying. I just feel retarded anyway.Looks like I wrote 61 pages of shit.
This post was probably a mistake.
>>27881145
Good. You are aware of what you did wrong. That's the first step and it puts you ahead of a shit ton of people.
Now work on fixing it.
>>27881153
Work on fixing what? My writing format? I know it has problems, and I'm not just gonna write it off as "I-It's just my writing style", because that's bullshit 90-100% of the time.
So any help would be appreciated.
Your waifu lets people boop her for money.
>>27881179
Wish I could help you with this, but I don't read Frostbitten.
Only thing I can think about is the worldbuilding thing. Try to develop it larger than you think the quest will need, make it work at a basic level-- not necesarily trade routes and economic systems, but do ask yourself how is that they feed themselves, what are their beliefs and heroes, anything you can think of that you feel is important to a culture.
>>27881145
Confessions? WITH names? Wew lad that's a tough order to fill.It may be kinda obvious what with the wait time and the last few weeks of the last thread where i got all spotty for a while but i've got a real bad case of creative block or burnout or whatever it's called. Either way i just feel like my motivation and creativity have been destroyed, it has a little to do with really dumb life stuff. I'm not saying that it excuses my ridiculous and frankly disrespectful "break" but there ya are. I should've been trying harder to power through it but i just feel like my energy's been sapped. sorry for bein' a jerk to anyone who plays spicy. I will be back by this friday at the absolute latest.
>>27880936
I accept
>>27877990
Such is life.
>>27879514
I preferred the first tbqh
>>27880010
After first lewd part.
>>27881027
>how do I stop enjoying things and be an autist about every little detail
As someone with high standards I say you shouldn't.
>>27881145
>>27881243
Named confession time? Sure, why not?Not that I expect anyone to recognise my name...
I tried my hand at QMing earlier this year, diving head first into a half-arsed idea cobbled together using parts of ideas from past anons. Like most first-timer quests, it pretty much fell on its face. I find I have at least improved slightly in writing, but other than that...not much else really. I stopped a few months back because of RL stuff, but that wasn't the whole reason.I had hit an idea block. I couldn't think of a reasonable idea of what to do next.QMing ain't as easy as you would think.
I tried building up a secondary idea for a CYOA, involving medicine. But that idea stalled too because I couldn't even come up with ideas for the lore.Some ideas guy I turned out to be, huh?I would like to personally thank: those two anons who single handedly kept my quest alive despite my weird timezone, the artist who drew in pencil, and that other player who came in at the end.I hope my practice lewds were worth something, at least.
>>27881594
>>27880010
I have never dropped a cyoa, Ponka.
>>27881145
I feel like Hijack is an unsalvageable wreck and if I dont get it right this next time, I should seriously consider dropping it for good.I've been procrastinating because the pressure of failing myself and others just one more time and for the last time fills me with an inexorable dread
>>27881594
>Like most first-timer quests, it pretty much fell on its face.
That's an assumption. Most of the currently running CYOAs are first timer quests. 10 out of 14 in fact going by >>27877771 unless I miss my mark. Out of those remaining 4, 2 of their 2 first time quests ran to their proper end, 1 still runs, and the last 1 died a virgin.
Which isn't to say you can't leave a failure and go on to make a successful quest ala JAD and Urban Survival, nor that no quests fall flat, just that your assumption that 'most' first-timer quests fall flat is wrong. I'd guess it's around 50-50 since the ones that fall flat usually die quickly, not 'most' by any means.
>>27881701
Calm down and learn to have fun nerd.
>>27877975
Anon. It's time to move on.
>tfw CYOAs are full of abusefags who get their jimmies off seeing things suffer
>>27881870
Yes, QMs are like that.
>>27878002
What tutorials did you use to start with?
>>27881243
>>27881145
>>27881594
>>27881701
Insomnium is a bitch. Let's say stuff at 8 AM.
I feel Sacrifice should've been... anything but a quest. It just lasted too damn long and cut into Miracle abruptly. I honestly expected to last a week at most but it dragged on and on and on.
I need to learn how to write better prose in CYOA format, but having to open and close the faucet constantly just doesn't let me get in the mood, AND my usual prose doesn't really work for CYOAs.
I wish I was a better drawer. That one's kind of a given for the """"quality"""" of even my pixel art, which is the less shit.
I still haven't gotten into the habit of doublechecking before pressing post, which generally doesn't really enter my usual writing (I am more of a constant edition kind of writer) and hence leaves me with errors in my post that I feel lower the quality of the quest as a whole.
Iam bothered be people being seemingly uncapable of distinguishing lore and narration. What's complicated and weird about Miracle is the LORE. The moment-to-moment stuff, while definitely odd, is easy enough to understand.
>>27881179
Learn how to greentext
Quick overview
>You are an NPC are doing something, that's written in green
>"I am an NPC and I am saying something", that's also green
"I am the MC and my talking is not green", says an NPC without the > in front
>>27881701
There was literally nothing wrong with your last session, nerds just mad they didn't get to play their woofuu. I was really enjoying it. Your way to hard on yourself.
>>27881908
>Greentext
Should always be taken with a grain of salt, it's VERY poor as prose.
Or to be more specific, greentext is merely a means to an end, while proper prose is an end by itself. A good story with good prose will always be better than the same story as greentext.
>>27881913
Frostbitten is greentext-like so I suggested greentext to him
>>27881913
>A good story with good prose will always be better than the same story as greentext.
Hot opinion detected. That's like saying prose is always better than poetry. It's my opinion too, but still.
Boy, I haven't used this tripcode in ages
I feel both my quests are absolute garbage at best. Even though people keep telling me that they play/read it, I have a hard time believing that.
Since I moved my update rate has been sporadic at best and I feel absolutely terrible about that. So terrible in fact, that it makes it hard for me to even get writing for a new session in the first placeI wish I wasn't stuck with the (probably just in my head I guess) image of being the absolute worst and nothing more but human garbageSometimes I wish my quests would get more art but when I do get art I feel absolutely terrible because someone wasted their precious time to make something for meExtra layer of spoiler due to sekrit club related confession:I have the feeling that Sekrit Club is just being nice to me since we all have names and that nobody can really stand me there.Probably just low self-conciousness speaking again though. Still burdens me.
>>27881943
Your sporadic update rate is a big issue.
Everything else is fine, chill out.
>>27881943
Why are all the cheeriest people always so depressed? It genuinely makes no sense to meespecially seeing as I'm the exact same way
And calm down on the rest, if people actually hated you they'd have told you to fuck off already.
>>27881963
Do I come off as cheery to you?
>>27881982
I mean based off of what I've seen of you, yeah, you honestly do
Are you not cheery?
>>27881993
I guess I try to come off that way and it looks like I am doing a good job at it too. I do have my ups too, but you know how it is
>>27881145
I hate circles
>>27881714
Very well, I'll correct that.
>Unlike the current first-timer quests, it pretty much fell on its face.
I just feel like because of missing that first period of hype at seeing a new quest, because of taking too long and giving lackluster encounters early on (because that was all I could think of at that time) I lost out on quite a few players that, if they had stuck around, would have made writing a little more enjoyable. Maybe easier, even.I won't lie, I took players' ideas for my own. Some of them were pretty good.
There's just something...rewarding about writing a story bit by bit and having everyone else pitch in on what the MC should do next. But because of my own personal flaws including the fact that I can't think of shit, I won't be putting my tripcode back on anytime soon. Unless I somehow get that lucky stroke of inspiration.Is it too late to say JAD was part of the reason I wanted to try QMing in the first place?
Oh well. Either way, I think it'd be useful to look back and see just how much I've changed in my short time running a quest.Feedback would be appreciated. http://pastebin.com/u/CGen
>>27881943
You are absolutely right on that last part.You're better liked than you think you are
>>27881145
Numb, I love Frostbitten. I always look forward to playing it. I personally have no issue with the writing.
>>27880866
I will admit that Misty taking us in and the artifact are a tad too convenient. I have to wholeheartedly disagree that they are not good characters. Chance is a great MC and while Misty is less so I think just there mere character interactions are fun to play.
As for the lore, this post apoc city has been barred from the outside world by some magical forcefield. Some ponies are turning into nightmarish creatures and nobody is sure why. On top of that we know some mysterious force is actively trying to hunt us.
That's my defense of Frostbitten.
>>27882099
Yeah man I get thatJust stop being so hard on yourself and understand there're people out there who enjoy your company and value your friendship, cause there are. Hating yourself helps no one, especially not you as a person. Try focusing on the things you like about yourself instead of the things you don't like instead, even if it's something small, what you think you're good at or what you think you can do well. Maybe try immersing yourself in QMing again, that can help boost your confidence and help you feel better about yourself.
>>27880936
Don't make Brandy apologize for you, Bath, she did nothing wrong.
tfw no seapon and chips
>>27881913
I strongly disagree with you.
>>27882484
>tfw no Fish&Ships
reminder that seapones are not food
"seapones are friends, not food!"
Ooh, named confessions. I confess that I am exactly the overenthusiastic irritating dumbass that I am memed to be, and it takes all my self restraint not to respond to every post ever made. I haven't posted an "I care" in a month and it eats me up inside. To hell with it. A confession for all of you.
>>27881906
Cam, I have had to save 3/4 of all pictures in Miracle and boost the brightness in a paint program just to see what was happening. I liked Sacrifice just as much as Miracle and think it was a shame you got tired of it.
>>27881243
Zen, burnout is real and it's okay to take a break. Players are more understanding then you think.
>>27881943
Wolv, I play both your quests, and other people do too. Just accept that some people might like you and your quests. Secret club part:you are friend, it is not out of pity, and if you honestly think that 30 people from 4chan all decided to be nice to you just to spare your feelings then you are delusional. No offense.
>>27881145
Numb, same thing I said for Wolvan about people liking your quests.
>>27881701
Hij, I kinda skip over all the combat in Hijack. It just takes me out of the world a bit to see a video game battle.
>>27881339
Anon, me too. It was a request though, and I wanted it to be exactly what he wanted.
>>27881594
CG, I can't remember what your name stands for.
>>27880247
Inept, I didn't play FiT. I read it for a while but the character's mindset was difficult for me to come up with suggestions for so I eventually stopped trying. Sorry.
>>27880936
Bath, Experimental creeped me right the fuck out so I didn't play it, but I joined back in for the interesting meta stuff at the end.
Everyone else I didn't mention specifically, you're great and your waifu is too. I know I'm annoying and feel free to call me a fgt for it.
Named confession day is fun.
please don't eat the waifus
I feel I should also lay a few things out for you guys while we're still doing named confession thingies:
First off, I wanna thank everyone who's played my quests and kept with my slowish update speeds. You guys rock. Like seriously.
But yeah... I feel like my biggest issues with running is keeping consistent quality prompts. I know that just takes time and practice, tho.
Well, that and I feel like I lore dump a lot, and my oc characters have sorta bland personalities atm. Still working on that.
My biggest struggle with being a qm? Not always knowing how to improve myself, in art, writing and eventually music. I wanna be the best I can be for you guys, but I can't always see where I'm lacking, ya know?
Anyway, update time. Real life's a bit of a challenge right now, so until I can earn enough income to stay in my new place and eventually get internet so I don't have to use my phone for everything, I won't be able to run anything. I'm really sorry, dudes. It's a lot of fun doing this.
I finished the expression thing too, so here's that to keep you company for now.
Till next time!
>>27882735
>I am exactly the overenthusiastic irritating dumbass
Agreed
>I liked Sacrifice just as much as Miracle and think it was a shame you got tired of it
Agreed
>you are friend, it is not out of pity
Agreed
>CG, I can't remember what your name stands for
Agreed
>Bath, Experimental creeped me right the fuck out so I didn't play it
Agreed
>Everyone else I didn't mention specifically, you're great and your waifu is too
Objectively false, kill yourself.
>>27882735
But Doxel, you ARE my waifu.
>>27882837
Fuck off, he's my waifu.
>>27882655
Seaponies are a proud and noble race.
They are not food!
>>27882735
Other than when you autistically obsess over a character or quest and shove it into everybody's face (not to mention how un-anonymous you are) you're a pretty cool guy when you tone down your sheer Doxelness and are creating art.
So, Vince. If you are here tell me what's the quest you want to run meanwhile symphony is about?
So, why are numb, planeswalker, vince and le conducteur still not part of sekrit club? Best QM hangout around
>>27882655
>>27882665
>>27882848
680p, Flo and Seadance pls goback to the plate
>>27882971
But what about neuro's 4-legged seapony?
>>27882989
I couldn't remember its name.
>>27882268
>Chance is a great MC
Chance is litterally a blank state MC, he even have the plot induced amnesia
Except from being "great", try to think about how you'd describe him
Protip: if it's something along the lines of
>He's overall average, but he's adventurous, and he would do anything to protect his friends
That means he's a blank state MC
That was the state he was when I dropped the quest, I don't know if it has changed since then
I rate him aveage at best
Also
>Lore
>some magical forcefield
>nobody is sure why
>some mysterious force
That's the opposite of lore famalam
>>27882906
Speaking of which, what happened after the freakout? Did you guys actually commit suicide again?
Seapone is good eating
>>27883149
I won't say it's lore but it's more than just a generic post apoc violent gangs setting.
Chance sarcastic and wisecracking, sometimes using humor to cope with bad situations. Misty is the only other pony that means something to him so he would do anything for her and I think he would be very lost without her. They're both very co-dependent on each other to surive and just stay sane through it all.
I've seen some surprisingly brilliant dialogue between Chance and Misty.
seapony is high in heavy metals, please limit consumption
>>27883348
Jet fuel can't melt seaponies
>>27883501
>>27883552
>>27883591
Still less of a disaster than your CYOA.
>>27883591
and that's how your engine overheats, stranding you in the middle of a wildfire.
>>27881145
I over-schedule way too much. I always put too much on my plate to handle and end up not being able to do half of it because I don't have the time.
I want to get back into QMing, but as mentioned earlier, I put way too much onto my plate. I'm trying to get better about it, but QMing will only make the problem worse.Not that I'm saying that I'm not going to QM. Just that I'm going to be an idiot when I do so.I don't actually have a beard.
>>27883674
I assumed your name meant that you were the wife of a homosexual.
>>27882940
Because I've already got enough shit to distract me when I should be questing.
qm pone orgy pic when?
>>27883777
Like life.
>>27883803
when there are more qm pones
>>27883845
Honestly don't care. I got grillpone pron so I'm happy.
>>27882378
No I was apologising. I just tossed in a bonus Brandy because I felt bad.
>>27882735
Experimental was supposed to be a bit distributing... so, mission accomplished? I guess.
Also for some reason things seem to get edgiest and brutal when I'm testing shit out. I mean Entrapment was done to test out combat and Experimental was testing more combat and a bunch of other shit.
>>27883897
I actually like that your cyoa's have a harsher edge to them than most. Make it more intense and interesting. Speaking of Entrapment the dropbox link on your tumblr for the Sunny Days thing is broken.
Resuming Miracle: Cracked boogaloo.
>>27883980
Choosie has a stupid horse face
>>27884034
>>27875520
Here we go again, I guess.
>>27875520
>>27881145
I'm gonna spare you the usual bit about the insecurities most QMs have, I think the last post of my last thread covered that already anyway
Instead, I'm gonna confess I wasthat one guy who tried to make a civ-esque cyoa not so long ago. It didn't really take off, and since I realised I didn't have the dedication to run two quests at once, I just droped it entirely
>>27881145
Literally never ever.
>>27884192
>spoiler
Oh shit really? Huh. I knew it felt familiar somehow.
>>27884192
the civ one? You mean the one where you were an adopted orphan?
>>27884366
yeah, didn't actually reach the civ part
>>27883313
Nah. Vincent promised them that even if they bad end they'll get a free retry. So they started twerking in the middle of negotiations.
Your waifu is a monster with a long face that walks on four toes.
>>27884627
And yet, that you are a human, no one likes you
>>27884618
That is not at all what happened.
>>27883931
Yeah, I know. I deleted the Entrapment and
11-54 folders on dropbox because it was talking up space and I didn't think anybody was using it. I originally had those up so people could look through the original .xcf files I used while running the quest and so people could download the pictures in a sort of gallery. At this point Anonpone gives you the ability to download all pictures in a .zip and has a gallery mode but if you really want me to put my Entrapment folder back up I can.
>>27879514
>>27885035
Resuming dream simulator
![fmsqAnAppleADayKeepsTheDonkeyAway[1].jpg](https://i.imgur.com/pO6mAD0.jpg "fmsqAnAppleADayKeepsTheDonkeyAway[1].jpg")
>>27882906
Zawaquest 2: Marthables StoryNah, joking. I was thinking something along the lines of: your name is Concorde, a stallion from Itaily who recieved a letter from his old grandfather in Ponyville (Or maybe another village?) with request of helping him tend to his dying Pear Farm. Since you are some troubles in Itaily, you gladly accept the proposal of your grandfather. Style: Slice of Life; Stardew Valley-eish.
Tell me what you think?
Some one give a tldr or review of La Marionnette D'ombre. I haven't heard anything about that CYOA.
>>27885235
>Zawaquest 2: Marthables Story
>no Zawa ever again
This hurts me, Vince.Why haven't you joined the cool kid's club yet, senpai?
>>27885312
I am already a part of several internet communities, just can't be bothered. I barely have enough time aside from work to run a CYOA and do some other fun activities.
>>27885251
Haven't read the most recent thread yet but it's fairly interesting so far.
QM seems to have dialed back on the edge. I hope it stays that way.
>>27885312
>Why haven't you joined the cool kid's club yet, senpai?
Pestering people is annoying, stop it. If people want to go there they'll go there. It's not like anyone who glances at the thread will be unaware that it exists.If you're not the same guy that keeps asking people then my apologies.
>>27844204
Super's up.
>>27885405
SUPER
>>27885419
HOT
>>27885235
It would be awesome if it was somewhere other than Ponyville. Equestria is wide and there's plenty other places. Like Rainbow Falls, Smokey Mountains, and more.
>>27885437
PONUTS
>>27885497
GUZZLING
>>27885524
EXPENSIVE
KEROSENE
>>27885552
UNTIL
>>27885559
THEY
Shut up.
>>27885594
>>27885559
>>27885552
>>27885531
>>27885524
>>27885497
>>27885437
>>27885419
Fuck off and foozle back to bee, kiddo.
>>27885594
EJACULATE
>>27885419
>>27885437
>>27885497
>>27885524
>>27885531
>>27885559
>>27885594
These posts are fucking stupid and a waste of thread life. do something better with your time like actually discussing cyoas.
>>27885606
BITS
>>27885491
Those do not really have villages per say, and I do not really want to use Dodge City or Appleloosa. So it's either a custom village or Ponyville.
>>27885612
No u
>>27885619
>>27885606
>>27885594
>>27885559
>>27885552
>>27885531
>>27885524
>>27885497
>>27885437
>>27885419
Why don't you top lel back to bee, huh sport?
>>27885625
Do a custom one, then.
>>27885653
THE
Which CYOA is the Chacarron of CYOAs?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4ZjmliqhZ-c
>>27885646
But then you won't get pear hating Apples.
>>27885633
go suck a dick then if you weren't already.
>>27885662
AIR CONDITIONER
>>27885677
Okay. So the decision depends on how big role the Apple family will have in your quest. If it's significant or even main plot part, you could do Ponyville. Or there's an alternative solution. The Apple family is big. I don't think we know where some of them live.
>>27885625
>Those do not really have villages per say
Bullshit. Who says they don't? It would be exciting to see these towns that are not expanded upon.
>>27881963
I have a confession to make regarding this kind of thing.
I worry about all these qms. Like damn, i didnt really think it was a problem until Nips talked about things.
All of you fucks gotta get happier dammit. It sucks when you know that someone who makes something you enjoy is sad
>>27884961
Well, you can if you like. I have been trying to track down all the Entrapment and 11-54 related art. However I don't want to trouble you too much about it.
Bully the Chooser
>>27885625
>per say
Go back and finish high school, dumbass.
>>27885842
I got some bad news about [literally every creative person I've ever know] for you anon.
>>27885985
...may have gotten carried away
>>27885992
Parce meis peccatis.
>>27886167
I can confirm this. True of every creative person I've ever known too.Except Doxel, but I'm not sure he's even human.
>>27886259
More human than human.
>>27886259
It's not a bad thing (per say). Just part of who we are why we do what we do. Meds help.
>>27881145
I've probably already confessed everything in the past, but sure.
A lot of the times when I run a CYOA, I get tired of it by like the halfway point and only continue out of obligation. I keep telling both you guys and myself that I'll try to pick up the pace so things don't drag unnecessarily, but I soon find myself unhappy with the amount of choices that that inhibits, and I quickly go back to the old pace.
Furthermore, I'm finding it harder to run CYOA's in general just because I'm so sick of the meticulous yet lazy effort required to make sprites and the glacially slow pace of making pretty drawings. If money weren't so tight, I'd bite the bullet and just get a tablet, promptly ostracizing the few people that enjoy the poorly-written and minimalistically-drawn shit that I produce.
Basically, I feel like I'm my own worst enemy as a QM, and I don't know how to kick my own ass, so it seems to me like I just never improve at anything.
...So, now that all the depressing shit is on the table, let's try and finish up Tinepone, shall we?
>>27886338
>>27886195
I want to cum inside ded Choosie
QM tumblr list please
>>27885842
I'm sorry, I'll try to stop talking about how I feel about things. I usually don't really enjoy talking about myself anyway and I can see that it's just bringing everybody down. I don't know how other QMs feel about trying to keep a better hold on their feelings making it to 4chan but I know that I'm going to try keeping my bullshit from worrying and depressing people who really don't deserve it.
>>27885845
If you want I could just upload all of the rare shit like fanart and random non-cannon doodles and other non-quest post shit that is still related to my quests to a drop-box folder. Might make things a little easier to dig up.
>>27886559
Yeah that would be great.
I'm not sure what to confess and it's probably too late to really get any notice. I'm well aware that my quests have never been of the highest quality, but I really want to improve them. But no one ever gives me much useful feedback. Last thread I got some stuff about pacing the current situation, which was great, but it's like the only time that's ever happened.
I'm not entirely sure what I should or could do. I think pacing is my biggest issue. Caracole and Vamp have both had issues with stalling while interest wanes.
I know I don't make very memorable characters. Nearly all of the Characters in Vamp that people got attached to were not made by me.
I have no idea how exactly to fix any of these issues. I'm sure there are other issues I just don't see, and there's no way I could fix those.
From a more confessional point:I can tell that my own interest in Vamp is fading. I refuse to leave it unfinished, and I will see it through. But I know at some point I will not want to. I haven't reached that point yet, but I hope I can finish the quest before I reach it.
>>27886623
If you feel characterization is a weak point, let's see if we can help out with finding where the flaw comes in. When you think of a character, what is your initial process, and how do you plan for them?
>>27886708
I usually start with an Archetype and then later try to flesh them out.
>>27886445
we already had this anon
