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Here is some OC for you guys.
>>47777499
>>47777499
Does it have waifus?
>>47777596
No. It does not.
>>47777596
I just looked over it.
You may be able to romance some of the characters, but trust me, you don't want to.
>>47777606
Then what's the point?
>>47777612
Although I understand why, I find it funny that the power "Seductress" is in a category different than the category "Seductress."
>>47777499
Good first attempt OP! But, try to make your next attempt at CYOA closer to >>47777612
>>47777621
Power, dear anon. The raw destructive power of the apocalypse being at your disposal is the point. to be able to decide the fate of entire nations and races is the point. Becoming a force of incredible power is the point.
Plus, there wasn't a four horseman cyoa yet and I wanted to make one.
>>47777499
This is like a more destructive, maybe edgier version of the Sins cyoa. Oh, and I pick Pestilence. We're going full Papa Nurgle.
>>47777621
Like I said, you CAN have waifus in this...
if you're into guro or something?
>>47777654
>Good first attempt.
I've made about three other pdf cyoas before this (one of which is being reworked, and the other needs a little lore but is mechanically finished.)
>>47777499
I choose to become the horsewoman of death! The vile plague of humanity has persisted to long! It's time to clean this place up!If I'm deathless, then who will be my friend when humanity's gone?
>>47777612
This cyoa will never be finished just like the Short Superhero cyoa. So please stop posting it.
>>47777679
I'll be honest, that cyoa inspired me a little.
Also, I thought Famine would be better suited for the god of decay.
>>47777702
"Tortured Chaos."
That doesn't sound succubus-like at all! That sounds like some sort of edgelord!
>>47777721
Make a metal band.
>>47777702
>Deadly Curse
Wow, how fucking edgy is my name.
>>47777499
I'll be honest, Death sounds the least horrifying.
>>47777721
As such you are now named Egdenon go for and spread your edge
>>47777700
Nobody. Animals, maybe, but no humans. Though that should take quite a while given there are seven billion humans on the planet right now.
>>47777702
>wicked virgin
I can't even get any as a succubus...
>>47777721
Wait, I read it wrong. It's actually "Tortured Silk."
Which is better, but doesn't make much sense.
>>47777499
Not really a lot of choice here, OP.
>Pick a horseman
>The end
I feel like you could easily flesh this out over time. Add optional powers you can with points, add drawbacks like being hunted by another horseman, add options for escaping the cycle, etc.
Your writing is pretty good, but this seems kinda unfinished.
>>47777700
I'm picking Death too, we'll be Deathless buddies in a cold, dead world.
>>47777702
Blazed Heat, thanks mom.
>>47777702
>Eternal Goddess
Would be nice except I'm a guy.
>>47777732
Better than Wicked Chaos. I wanted something more sensual... like Sensual.
>>47777721
I feel your pain.
>>47777764
Not anymore.
>>47777756
But how can you two be Deathless if you're both Death?
Luscious Escort
Well then
>>47777702
>Tortured Escort
Well, it sort of fits. Not because I'm a masochist, but because I have really weird issues with sex, so being a sex demon would seriously fuck with me.
>>47777776
GODDAMMIT
I wasn't even paying attention to the numbers until now, but this was so close.
>>47777562
Anyone a sauce on tihs?
>>47777756
To be honest, I kind of wanted a simple cyoa to try out an Idea I've had for the longest time and to better my writing skills for lore. Will not try and flesh it out too much more (maybe some challenges) but will work on another cyoa.
Also, thanks for the compliment.
>>47777804
I posted it last thread for you.
>>47777804
Tower of God manhua.
>>47777776
>Off by one
Alternate universes, my man.
>>47777702
>Eternal Bliss
10 cyoas of your choice become animated movies/shows. What are they?
>>47777702
>Hardened Virgin
I'm not actually a succubus, I just take care of finances.
Sometimes you need to shank a bitch.
>>47777702
>erotic passion
Meh. at least the last part fits
>>47777737
It doesn't matter how many there are! It must be done! The old Gods command it! They chose me!
>>47777756
>we'll be Deathless buddies in a cold, dead world.
Ok!
>>47777702
>Delectable Virgin
Ooh sexy!
>>47777812
Oh well, not for me but thanks
>>47777847
>Hardened Virgin
God, that's too perfect.
>>47777721
I got that one too.
>>47777612
>loli
>Aphrodisiacs
>Relaxing area
>Charm
>seductress
>Ambrosia
>Lust eyes
>Flight
>Weirdness factor
>Metabolism
>Own production
>Lili
>Alli
>>47777499
it needs more depth.
or if i where to shitpost it at you "IT NEEDS MOAR MOAR!!!11ONE"
>>47777845
Traveler 10 times.
>>47777875
What do you mean by depth? I'm curious now, what can I do to improve it?
>>47777702
>Fierce Virgin
th-thanks
>>47777888
Like- what kind of story, it could work but you'd need to do it as a set of Stories about individual Travellers infinite-chan.
>>47777897
perhaps there is more to this world ending then simply four horsemen?
perhaps there are perks?
perhaps multiple horsemen that specialize in subschools of said horseman?
maybe more than four...'classes' many other religions have MANY different world ending entities or world STARTING entities that you could draw inspiration from?
perhaps you have a choice of settings (fantasy lands, grimdark future, modern day erf, etc.)
which direction do you want to go? there are many types of depth. hell look at traveler or star dust or any of the big wig cyoas.
maybe you've got a new big wig idea churning...
>>47777845
Monster Hunter Anime
Kingdom Crusher/Diplomacy tv or animated show.
Dungeon-meister anime
Battlemage anime
Overlord show
Solar Inheritance show
But why keep asking, anon?
>>47777702
Thanks to one of you jackasses sending me this, I'm now Eternal Virgin, the neckbeard succubus.
>>47778000
Good luck finding the spirit energy you need to live.
Saw this posted last thread but hadn't had a chance to make a build. I'll post then read.
>>47777702
Warm Chaos
I feel like this name generator has a whole lot of dud options.
>>47777499
Thumbs up from me mate. Nicely done so far, will post proper feedback in a mo.
>>47777963
While this sounds good, when I was creating this I wanted a simple one choice cyoa, much like pic related (has been a decent influence, thanks again Quiet.). Though If complexity and depth is what you want, I have good news for you.
I am currently working on the remake of the energy cyoa to add more lore, perks, and companions (maybe now I will add a faction or two.) However, I have run into a few problems. Firstly, I am not sure whether to make the cyoa a form of mid fantasy (only a few know magic and creatures like werewolves don't exist) or soft sci-fi. Secondly, I still need to work on companion backstories and names, which might take a while (though I am taking suggestions if anyone wants to leave one.)
>>47778023
>>47777702
>Blazed pleasure
Hope you're all ready to get high.
>>47777612
>Big
>Aphrodisiacs
>Love potion
>Relaxing area
>Charm
>Induce arousal
>Targeted arousal
>Flight
>Metabolism
>Own production
>Alli
>Remme
>>47777702
"Blazed Agony"
Oh god, I've become That Guy
Alas, I lost my stardust folder and I wish to restore it. Post the recent stardust along with the dlc/romance/modules if you have it. Here's some art in the meantime.
>>47777702
>Tortured Compassion
Fitting.
>>47778293
kiss the cyoa author
>>47778477
apparently 4chan hates my pngs now
>>47777702
>Alluring Bliss
That's fine.
>>47778501
>>47778050
Pride is the best by far in terms of abilities, followed by Sloth.
>>47778526
>>47778533
True, but Gluttony has the potential for the most raw power.
>>47778546
>>47778568
>>47778593
>>47778614
and i think that's it
also updated one portrait in this one because it was outdated
>>47777702
>Luscious Chaos
I can live with this.
>>47778023
>Class
Vanguard. Adaptability and survivability are good traits, and a good starting point when I hope to have a very long lifetime of experience.
>Weapon
Dearg.
Speaking of adaptability, spears are very flexible weapons and having anti-magic capabilities are very important to me.
>Armor
Revier.
Speed and Maneuverability. Soar was another close choice but I think I'll take the lightning over it. It's close enough that I'd probably pick whichever one looked coolest, to be honest.
>General Skills
Stamina
Camouflage
Tame
Packmule
Acrobatics
Hot Blooded*
Cold Blooded*
Really stressing the theme of survival here. I can go just about anywhere and be unnoticed while I'm there. Tame is a great combination with Camouflage and while Breath would be another important skill I just don't have room for it. Packmule is maybe not as important and Quick Study just sounds like something everyone in this position would have.
>Special Skills
"My love for you...
Indomitable
"My love for you... combos well with Stamina to help ensure I'm at the top of my game most of the time. Indomitable is almost a must-pick for me in a setting that even hints at mind-altering enemies.
>Basic Spells
Blink
Purify
Analyze Item
Grappling Hook
Hyper Jump
Earth Wall
Utility spells, mostly. Planning to mostly rely on my strength and my spear when directly in combat.
>Advanced Spells
Nullify
Air Burst
Arc Lightning
Cure
Heal Major
Second verse, same as the first. Decided to take one direct-damage spell in Arc Lightning instead of Shockwave, figuring that Air Burst could handle the knockback role.
>Companions
Emilia
Hell yeah. Girl's gonna get buff working with me and we can tell her parents to frick off.
Ann
I swear I'm not just picking battle waifus! Ann's skill in tactics and strategy is definitely something I'll need starting out.
Aron
Seems very bro-status and I admire his drive and work ethic. Kind of a poor move with that childhood friend, though.
>>47777702
>Branded Goddess
i sound like a tavern
>>47777612
Succubus Time!
Body Type
>Big
Perks
>Passive-Aphrodisiacs,Relaxing Area,=2
>Active-Lewd Area=1
>Seductress-,Ambrosia,Round Two=2
>Misc-Flight,Tail Control,Weirdness Factor,Metabolism,Increased Production=5
Roommates
>Alli and Keki
>>47778628
Thank you senpai I bestow upon you the blessings of a thousand stars
>>47777702
>Luscious Ecstasy
Hmm, not too bad I guess, I'd probably go by Lu to keep it simple
>>47778796
Where we at so far.
>>47777612
Loli
Own Production(9)
Increased Production(8)
Ambrosia(7)
Aphrodisiac(6)
Relaxing Area(5)
Charm(4)
Emotion Link(2)
Seductress(1)
Tail Control(0)
Remme, Alli.
>>47778837
Quiet stop posting and get back to work. That way we can get further.
>>47778796
thanks, i will tell the cosmic neighborhood of your doings
but i'm not muslim
>>47778888O-Ok...I am going to make it hurt anon. And, you're going to like it.
>>47778942
>m-muh symbologyLooking forward to it.
>>47777702
>Got deleted despite not being a roll CYOA
>>47778942
Please make it hurt, Quiet. I like it that way.
>>47778023
>Pure Blood
I was bit by a wereloli
can anyone post the newest version of this?
thx
Hey, just had a question for everyone, what do you think about Portland, Oregon as a city-state for Urban Fantasy?
I went there about five years ago and liked it, so I did write it up a while back but now I'm not sure if I should put it in.
>>47779098
Sounds good.
>>47779098
I'd fucking love it
>>47779094
Yeah, totally. Just finished. My fever got worse, so I didn't proofread it. I don't think proofreading would do much in the state I'm in.
UPDATE - 2 new girls.
(1/20)
(4/20) - >>47770161 → Fei La & Mishe
(5/20) - >>47710938 → Twile & Harmony
(6/20) - >>47710983 → Omne & Pan
(7/20) - >>47711012 → Alice & Andrea
(8/20) - >>47711031 → Kaila & Jeanne
>>47779094
It's in the last thread, at the top.
>>47779159
20 images? Nigga make a pdf
>>47779159
(2/21)
(9/21) - >>47711047 → Kataline & Floof
(10/21) - >>47771855 → Saki & Oki
(11/21) - >>47711085 → Chere & Yin
(12/21) - >>47713393 → Lillan & Bloom
(13/21) - >>47713427 → #056 "Bunny" & Medi
>>47779184
>PDfs are magic
>>47779141
>>47779141
If any of you have questions about what it'd be like, imagine Life is Strange but the city is less shitty, the urban magic is a lot cooler, and the people a lot nicer. That's the most I can say without giving too much away, but sadly, I came to a bit of an issue.
Either Portland or Paris has to go.
Portland
>Described above.
Paris
>Major big name schools.
>Super, super 'free' culture.
>Slightly racist people.
>Great art schools.
>Moderate combat culture.
>Current political upheaval.
So, you guys pick one.
>>47779187
(3/21) - Steam(punk) and water
(14/21) - >>47740655 → Flo & Beyn
(15/21) - >>47754845 → Melody & Falchion
(21/21) - >>47754884 → Miya
>>47777499
I have a question. I have a CYOA idea I want to make, but I'm wondering what program people use to make theirs? I've used paint for simple ones, but should I use photoshop or something if I wanted long pages?
>>47779220
Whoops, forgot this link in the previous post.
(16/21) - >>47770008 → Caldera & Lyze
This is:
(17/21) - Reworked Avarice & Hex a tad, in some wording. Also a typo was fixed, I think.
>>47779251
(18/21) - Gia & Buoy
NEW PAGE
Hasn't been proofread, so please point out mistakes.
>>47779243
Can't really answer that question for you; all of my cyoas are in pdf. I did try Paint.net a while ago, though it's text editor confused me a little. Might need to watch a tutorial. I'm sure someone else on this thread can help.
>>47779243
Stick to programs that you're most comfortable working with anon.
Most of the well known authors here use photoshop or Gimp and while a vast majority of the shorter cyoas are made in paint.
>>47779220
"gia and her people don't age past a certain people"
>>47779263
(19/21) - Library 1
I feel awful.
>>47779263
>Can get robotic clockwork bird wings
I like this a lot more than I should. It's one of my favorite wing aesthetics.
>>47779243
People largely use Photoshop or GIMP for engaging design or backgrounds, not just long CYOAs. You can get away with Paint if you're fine with it looking a little bland.
Personally I don't really care much about the design in that sense, so it doesn't matter what you use to me.
Posting again because I posted late last thread.
>>47779220
>>47779251
beri plsnow i can't decide between saki and gia
>>47779294
(20/21) - Library 2
>>47779290
Technically, if that "certain people" is young adults, it still works. Thanks for pointing it out, I'l fix it.
>>47779306
Glad you do!
>>47779251
Could I earn good boy points by "servicing" Avarice
>>47779216
LiS is a lot more Northern California than it is Oregon. Either way, I'd go for it over Paris any day.
>>47779243
I built a small web app to do it so I have to figure out how to not sameface everything I do.
>>47779320
Stick with Saki; everyone else hates her! She can be yours and yours alone.
>>47779334
Yes, & she'll get you all the chicken nuggies you can eat.
>>47779263
Hmm, so Buoy can also alter the density or force down water? Is that why she weighs more than she looks? I imagine it's psychosomatic.
>>47779363
very well
>>47779365
You are completely correct. It says it more explicitly in the library page for the anons that aren't good at picking up those kinds of things.
>>47779392
You need your rest, Beri. You're sick.
>>47779400
But I couldn't take a break on a bad note. I had to get something else out there. 'sides, I know the secret to health. I just need more water.
>>47779286
>>47779310
Thanks for the advice, I'll try GIMP.
>>47779263
I'll try to proofread before starting up my build, so. Only proofreading the new pages. I might miss some, but I usually get most things on the first sweep.
>Gia and her people don't age past a certain people.
Mistake should be obvious hear.
>hot coffee aorund her again.
Around.
>localized floding
Flooding.
Now on to Gia's page. Gia... gear. I just got that.
>Alright, whats your game?
What's your game?
>... Rommate?
Should be roommate.
>poured it out to hide
I'm not sure what this means.
>sacreligious stoves.
Sacrilegious.
>to such as status.
To such a status.
>to do anything to myself.
To do something to myself. As you have it now, it means something... quite different and kind of horrifying if you think of it.
I don't see as much in Buoy's, but here's what I have.
>when meeting too people.
When meeting new people.
>Or well,
Or, well,
>and be immune to the pressure of it.
Not technically wrong, but awkwardly worded... "and be immune to its pressure" perhaps?
>on your size.
In your size.
>limited lime offer
Limited time offer. Unless she only manipulates citrus juices.
>T-to for the link,
F-for the link, (or maybe you meant something else, idk)
Library (new entries only)
I see no errors at first glance.
I have noticed some assorted mistakes in earlier passages, but I didn't want to seem like a grammar nazi... Maybe later, I can proofread the whole thing. When it's not the night.
>>47779294
Hope you get better soon cyoa general needs you!
>>47779451
Those would be cool and refreshing on a hot day.
>>47779314
I like Lugers, but I think the jew hate will get me in trouble, and I don't know about becoming aryan.
I'll go with M2, it's not easy to get one, free trip to USA and nobody invades my shit.
>>47779481
>Mistake should be obvious hear.
>>47779459
>Thanks for the advice, I'll try GIMP.
Good luck.
>>47779187
>30 Girls
This is impressive mate, you just keep pumping them out.Ya wanna know what'd be really impressive?80 Girls. :D
>>47779481
Thanks, Anon. You're a huge help!
> >poured it out to hide
>I'm not sure what this means.
All the best assassins know that even if the lights are off, somebody is home is the tea is hot.
>To do something to myself. As you have it now, it means something... quite different and kind of horrifying if you think of it.
Really? I don't get it. I'll change it anyway, though.
>Unless she only manipulates citrus juices
No... but that's in her domain.
Thanks again. I fixed them all.
>>47779483
Thanks!
>>47779488lewdThat's for romantic interests only.
>>47779567
If I get more than 40, Miya would have to start being NSFW in the intro pages.
>>47779220
>when beri releases so many girls so fast you actually missed some
good fucking god man, how many pages, when will you stop? Never?
You, you can't possibly make over 100 equal waifu's. c-can you?
>>47778023
>>47778051
>1 weapon, 1 armor and 1 object
Where are the objects tho
>>47779263
Orb of Life
Library of the Supernatural - Electric surfin' go go!
Surveillance - For when the goons break in, this is useful.
GIA:
The missing link between her world and ours... a "metal Gia," if you will.
Lover - She's gotta get with my friends first, though.
New Components - So I'm not completely defenseless, I choose weaponry.
5-Second Glass - Never know, could be useful...
Bonus - ...Like clockwork. (Augments.)
Ranks: #26, between Chere and Lillan. I was never into the whole steampunk thing… I do think the technology she introduces could be wonderful though.
BUOY:
Say, she doesn't look fat at all. Where does the "600 pounds" come from?
Orb of Life
Library of the Supernatural - I need control, we all need control...
Surveillance - Waterproof my house please.
Cleaning - Dry seems like a bit much work for her, if she needs to constantly concentrate like that.
Float - I ain't Jesus, but I'm walking on water.
Smart Solutions - Yeah. I'm just gonna take this now.
Bonus - Splash. Mental Link sounds more useful than anything, especially when she's being unstable.
>>47779505
That was... a joke! I swear! ...Yeah, I fucked up. In my defense, why would I proofread a proofreading post?
>>47779658
Oops, forgot to rank Buoy. #19, between Alice and Bunny--she's a cute little destructive cinnamon roll.
>>47779658
>Where does the "600 pounds" come from
Float works both ways, based on her mental-state. And... she gets nervous when it comes to scales. Or was your statement sarcastic? I can't tell.
>>47779654
Author said last thread about dropping those while it was being made and forgetting to remove the reference to them. There's a few other mistakes (skills/skill descriptions being duplicated) that are probably going to get fixed at some point.
>>47778023
>Vindicator
>Dearg
>The Flag
>Quick Study
>Acrobatics
>Strength
>Meditation
>Indomitable
>...is ticking clock
>Aura
>Beast Master
>Hyper Jump
>Heal Minor Wounds
>Blink
>Light Beam
>Wave
>Misha
>Azek
>Himme
Honestly just picked stuff that sounded fun and would fit the Heroic theme. Misha and Azek cover stealth and magic, and Himme would be fun to train as a hero. Also Misha's Dandere personality and Azek's blatant flirting are both fetishes of mine.
>>47778023
>Dragonlord
Not wasting energy is paramount in any endeavor. Doubly so on the battlefield.
Soothing and controlling beasts is nice.
Strengthening your armor and generating magic shields is goat.
Potentially riding a dragon into battle is bucket list.
>Equipment
Weapon
>Pouret
This staff is seriously OP. It beats all others hands down.
Armor
>Blaze
This armor coupled with Dragonlord damage reflection makes it damn hard to fight you without beating yourself up in the process
>Skills
>General
Anicipation
Acrobatics
Strength
Stamina
Going for basic coverage on this one. Stamina works well with being a Dragonlord.
>Special
"My love for you
Indomitable
Pocket Dimension
The first to a self explanatory. Pocket Dimension because fuck carrying anything but the basics.
>Spells
>Basic
Blink
Grappling Hook
Heal minor wounds
Blind
Purify
Hyper Jump
>Advanced
Heal Major
Shockwave
Rend
Arc Lightning
Elementalize
>Companions
Emilia
Riley
Ann
>>47779641
This is an amazing CYOA, so many waifus! I love the avarice perks, but waaaay 2loli4me. So close yet so far. I just wanna be rich without doing anything, is that so much to ask?
I know you covered all the deadly sins with her, but I would love another evil type waifu, especially one that lets you make deals or pacts or such with her.
>>47779314
>M1 Garand
we /ENGINEERING/ now
>>47774822
Fuck yeah man I'd be down for that.
>>47780052
Evil really wouldn't fit, why not a rich girl who isn't evil?
>>47780061
That would be awesome! Only started reading it a little while ago, but I would love that.
>>47780052
Glad you like the CYOA & her. You *can* convince her to use Sex Money when necessary, but she'd never keep the form up. I feel that if I added another "evil" type, that I'd get shot. It isn't received well by most.
Does anyone have any neat ghost-themed powers they'd like to see in a CYOA?
Alternatively, what are some monstrous body modifications (think horns and claws) with special properties you'd like to see?
>>47780061
>>47780117
Rachel a shit
>>47779220
gibe centaur
>>47780235
Hero Academy has horse pussy if you need it.
>>47779314
>that nagant
even if i chose the Garand the thought of fighting an army with the nagant, and a slav army coming out of nowhere to fight and annoy the shit out of my enemies seems like a 10/10 weapon.
>>47780151
invisible penis
>>47780285
Invisibility is definitely in.
>>47780151
>ghost
soul sight, astral projecting, sapping the life/emotion from people, controlling objects, cold temperature control, anything/everything to do with 40k eldar soul-powered technology
>monster body mods
wings, undead parts (think strangelove), brain enhancements Ala mindflayers, ooze organs, photosynthetic skin, Dr. jackle/Mr. hyde type super juice implant thing, dragon breath organ, beholder eyes, super reflexes ala giant jelly flying jellyfish.
>>47780344
Lots of neat ideas, thank you. I'll put in as many as I can, I'd be most happy with at least 30 of each, maybe more, but this is a good start. Can't promise all will get in though. Anyway, I'm passing out but I'll check out all further suggestions in the morning.
>>47780235
You know, that's the only MonMusu that I don't have a webm that's Suu + them for.
>>47780240
Should I add more non human companions? I intentionally didn't include many because I was scared of generating a shit storm.
If I did what should I add more of? Should I include new races? If I do what kind?
>>47780151
>Ghost
Levitation/Flight
Possession (Both people and items)
Invisibility
Immaterial/Astral Form
>Body modifications
Venomous/Toxic/Poisonous Blood
Scales (For blocking attacks and hitting harder)
Hardened Bones
Increased Muscle Production (In other words, gaining absurd amounts of muscle for a short time)
Regeneration
>>47780417
I'd like it, I enjoyed the ones you had but I'm a complete xenophile (took the dwarf, snek, and centaur).
Anyway, why not start from other traditional fantasy monstergirls? A nice wolfgirl or drider, you know. Maybe a slime.
>>47780417
Not him, but it's fine as is.
If it ain't broke, don't fix it. If you do, you might end up making a monster girl universe instead of a fantasy universe (not that the two are mutually exclusive, but you know what I mean)
>>47780448
Well he's working on some DLC general companions along with the new schools iirc, no harm in sprinkling some in there.
>>47779263
>Buoy's personality.
Hrk, my heart.
>>47780573
Just help keep her spirit afloat, anon.
>>47780573
Glad you like her.
I'm gonna go collapse for the rest of the night, now. Goodnight, thread.
>>47780417
I think "more" is generally a good choice. There's nothing I'm particularly looking for in nonhuman companions but there's nothing I'm particularly looking for in human companions either. Just having more variety in options is fun.
>>47780614
Goodnight Beri, I'm very fond of Gia; flights of steampunk angels fly thee to thy rest!
>>47779159
I hope you feel better Beri
>>47779322
i wish buoy's outfit was a sukumizu
Confirm or Deny
Every good CYOA must have waifus andhusbandos
>>47780903
Confirm. Well there are exceptions where it is basically import your own waifu into a setting at a point cost.
>>47780903
An outlook like this is basically everything that's wrong with /cyoa/, choking the life out of it.
Go get a fucking girlfriend. You don't need a magical fantasy land for something that's available all over the place in real life.
>>47780903
Deny
Don't get me wrong, I quite enjoy waifu-builders (or be-the-waifu-builders) but there are plenty of good CYOAs that don't have Waifus, and if I'm being honest, I ignore the waifu expansions for stardust and conduit because they take away from the experience.
Did people end up liking this CYOA?
I'll make a full version, and sequels, if people do.
>>47780903
Rejected. I have long since placed such opinions in the trash where they belong. Your CYOA is no better than anyone else's just because it caters to a subgroup of users. Improve the content if you want it to be good.
![00418acc65a2c72bf3aad34b1ef5a8f8[1].jpg](https://i.imgur.com/vuxEfTX.jpg "00418acc65a2c72bf3aad34b1ef5a8f8[1].jpg")
>>47780843
Beri should fix that.
>>47780903
Deny, waifus can be fine, but too much of them fucking everywhere makes things monotonous and boring. Same with fetish stuff. Sure its fine, but when you just hose everything down with it, it kind of makes things boring. Sure they might consume one or two threads, but I swear they're the quickest cyoa to fade away. Larger more complex cyoa take work, but pass the test of time.
>>47781022
You don't need the escapism of the CYOAs if you go live an interesting life.
>>47780903
Deny. Too overdone.Becoming a waifu is good though
>>47780903
I would rather become one.
>>47779314
Probably the Colt, but the M1 Garland seems cool too.
>>47780151
Underused ghost powers:
>Sensing other spirits - able to detect other ghosts currently invisible/possessing someone/hiding in walls/etc. May detect sensitive humans as well.
>Pulling 'spirits' of items out, effectively making a copy usable only by ghosts and spirit-sensitive people. Side effects include increased rate of decay until the spirit's put back in. Do NOT mix and match types.
>Pulling people's spirits out, as above or that episode of Pokemon. Can be used for impromptu bodyswaps, but not healthy in the long term.
>>47780903
Sure, if you want to appeal to the bottom of the barrel.
>>47781121
On the contrary, there is nothing fantastic or even exceptionally interesting about getting into a romantic relationship. Shit like that doesn't need to be shoved into CYOAs in the vast amounts as vast as it is. All it does is make something that's supposed to be about fantasy stale and boring.
>>47781135
People who like to have power fantasies are so much better.
>>47781154
I'm glad you agree.
>>47781152
Call me when you've found an succubus who gives me my ideal body.
>>47779251
Hex's still abduct innocent people and arouse them?~ Well NTR anon would be very happy about it~
Yeahh there's some typo in the new things, but well not bad update in general
>>47781206
You don't need a waifu for that. Hell, you didn't even include a waifu in your example. If the CYOA is about you being given an ideal body then there is no need for it to go into detail about the succubus' personality.
>>47779263
>you should no better
>>47779294
>>47779322
So is the Librarian going to be a waifu choice in the future?
I mean the intro girl was.
>>47781130
>>47781127
>>47781052
>be the waifu
You people disgust me
>>47778593
Can I get the Clothing pic in it's fullest?
>>47781072
tons of people enjoyed this CYOA.
you new?
Sneak Peak of A QuietCYOA Cosmic Horror DLC, coming out with Urban Fantasy next week.
>>47780903
Deny. What makes a good cyoa is almost entirely subjective. The only things that are almost universally needed for a cyoa to be good are things like balance and aesthetics. For instance, while you would like waifus, I prefer power.
>>47781417
When're you going to post your notes hoss?
>>47779314
1911
9
1
1
>>47781440
As I've explainedmultiple times, I lost my old computer and, along with it, the notes.
Checked a whole 400 posts
Didn't see the traveler mega link or whatever
please post
>>47781440
Never, ever.
>>47781468
If I may ask what were those notes about?
>>47781492
Symbology and mystery.
>>47781468
Could at least drop something you can remember
if not its fine but something is better then nothing
>>47781417
Whats the main CYOA
>>47778023
>Death Knight of Hope
I see no issue with this whatsoever.
>Dearg
A weapon made of determination, it would feel wrong not to use it.
Also anti-magic can always come in handy.
>Blaze
For more conventional threats.
>Quick Study, Meditation, Weapon Mastery, Strength
I'm like an edgier witcher...
>*is ticking clock, *Magnetism, *Indomitable
except not because ROW ROW FIGHT THE POWAH
>Detect Evil, Hyper Jump, Earth Wall, Purify, Zap, *Analyze Item, *Fireball
Spells for investigation, support, combat, and travel. Class spells further round this out.
>Elementalize, Heal Major, *Spirit Claw, *Cure, *Wave
Buffs, anti-armor, utility, and nuking to round things out.
>Mike, Misha, Himme
AND ON MY SOUL I SWEAR I WILL PROTECT THESE SMILES, EVEN IF MISHA PROBABLY DOESN'T SMILE MUCH
>>47781539
Just gonna post the first page enjoy
>>47781366
>not wanting to make yourself useful as a cute girl and be happy knowing you are able to brighten up the day of the man you love by doing things such as cooking meals for him, tending to his health and making sure everything is nice and clean for him to enjoyIncluding your own body at night
Why wouldn't you want to be a waifu? I'd give up just about anything to be a fertile, cute loli waifu.
>>47781563
Is it not complete?
>>47781472
https://www.mediafire.com/folder/1qgcvbwf6qm7z/Traveler_CYOA_by_Highlander_v1.11
Found it in my history
Guy who created the four horseman cyoa. Just wanted to let you guys know of my other projects.
Firstly, I have finally decided to man up and work on the color cyoa (yes, I know one other anon made one, but that seemed more like a joke cyoa.)
Secondly, I have decided to try my hand at image cyoas. I will start by making short and kind of stupid ones first, before moving on too turning my pdfs into images.
Lastly, i'm still thinking about companions for the new and improved energy cyoa, but if anybody wants to see a type of companion in the cyoa, just mention it and I will consider it.
>>47781611
No its done just that there are 11 pages
I can post the rest if people want
>>47781611
Not Quiet, but it's complete. Would post it if I had the images.
>>47781613
https://www.mediafire.com/folder/43r0qdm4sm895/The_End_Approaches
woops, Got the wrong one. Thats the right one
>>47778023
>warlord
>living inferno
>blaze(burn baby burn)
general
>hot blooded(i think i have a theme plus my armor keeps me nice and toasty so i don't need cold)
>stamina
>breath
>weapon mastery
>strength
specials
>pocket dimension
>is ticking clock
>indomitable
spells
>blink
>grappling hook
>heal minor(for the middle of a fight)
>analyze item(because im paranoid)
advanced
>flamethrower
>lava circle(duh)
companions
>penny(ambition is always dangerous)
>M(to mess with the heads of whoever I'm fighting)
>Ann(because my strategy is going to be hit them until they die)
>>47781642
1.15 soon Brother.
>>47781563
Fuck it 2/11
>>47781586
You people blur the lines. I can never tell if you're serious or if you really want to be a little girl
>>47781666
3/11
>>47781631
Please do
>>47781687
4/11
>>47781659
Im just glad he didnt put my characters in without altering them to fit. Makes it a lot easier to work up the courage to submit them
>>47781703
Remember Alex best waifu
>>47781703
6/11
>>47781724
Well in fairness all companions are a little autistic, its finding balance in that autism, and remembering these weirdos go home and sleep at the end of the day.
7/11
>>47781672
I am. I'm pretty much useless right now outside of housework and would at least be useful and all that as a girl. It'd be much better for me to be useful by helping out a man with his everyday life than being a useless part of society too so that'd also be a bonus.
8/11
Remember in Quiet cuteness is a weapon
What are some interesting fantasy cyoas you guys can recommend me to read up on/look at?
>>47781788
9/11
Almost but hold your but its about to get dark
>>47781808
10/11
>>47781413
No, i just made it.
I didn't really remember much more than a lukewarm reception though, which is why i was asking.
>>47781815
11/11
Mystery Box remember the answer was inside you all along
>>47781781
Brah, you're a grown man. You can do all those wonderful things and still be a dude. Just find one of those career chicks that wants a stay at home bf or become a nanny or some shit idk
>>47781417
You wrote primer instead of "premier". I look for to seeing the rest
>>47781563
Whoa I really like the dark tone of the CYOA it makes it more exciting!
>>47781872I can't tell if you're being sarcastic, butThank you.
>>47781833
OHHH! You guys will finally get the significance of Released: Phantasm when urban Fantasy comes out.
Thanks for the Quitedump
>>47781897
Your welcome buddy
>>47781885
Hmm, so this cyoa is your namesake? Looks nice, has good potential for power, might create a build for it if I get the time. Will definitely have absolute will in there some where.
On another note, a while ago you expressed dissatisfaction with one of your cyoas (the seven sins one) and suggested too me to "fix" it if I wanted. I might just take you up on that offer, though it may take a decent sum of time.
>>47781833
http://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/42371102/#42378916
I have had this for a bit but it does have some answers to some of the stuff in quiet.
I have waited for a long time for the rest now I am sad.
>>47781943
>too me to "fix" it if I wanted.
Please do. I'd love to see that concept done properly.
>>47781946
Aww, don't worry anon, another week before Urban Fantasy comes out and, hopefully, the discussion starts all over again.
>>47781845
While it'd be hard to do and I'd still rather be a loli, I guess I could try finding a woman like that and attempt to do something to make myself useful. Thanks anon.
>>47781975
for the advice*
>>47781885
Fuck.
If it means what I think it means, thenGrimdark!JoJo Phantasm CYOA when?
>>47781958
Alright, I'll try my best. First thing on the agenda is slightly reworking the powers of some of the Sins. I'll let you know what I come up with soon enough.
>>47781958
All I ask of you quiet is when it starts to die down post the notes for it man
>>47781885
I'm not sarcastic, after so many "you become a super badass" or "choose your waifu" Is refreshing.and the censured faces in the extended home option makes it kind of more creppy than the broken home (Nothing is so perfect)
>>47779251
Caldera is best grill(pun intended)
>>47779322
I like this CYOA, but saving all the new images, especially the Library ones, gets really tiring.
>>47781833
Damn this shit is cool I'll probably post a build for it later.
>>47781999
>>47781468
>As I've explained multiple times, I lost my old computer and, along with it, the notes
The best he could do is sit down for a few hours and type up as many notes as he rememberswhich he should totally do after Urban Fantasy is finished.
>>47781563
Tough choice between animu and mystery box.
This is probably a terrible idea, but fuck it.
>Within: Grandeur (87)
Let's have fun.
>Bookworm, Tactician (57)
Let's be smart, why not?
>Brook, Blake
They'll handle whatever fighting we'll need, I'll provide battle plans. (27)
>Extended Home (7)
I want to have a cute little sister.
>Unknown family
I don't want to deal with any noble power struggles.
>Minne, Twin (7)
Leave my sis to deal with the paranormal stuff in our group, and having a twin seems interesting.
>Intricate Bond, Disliked (0)
I wonder is people dislike me because of how fucking creepy me and my twin are?
>Threat Level +1, Threat Level +2, Marked (60)
There's no possible way this could possibly come back to bite me severely in the ass!Legit though, I always make it point to be "unlucky" in games if I can. It's more fun that way.
... Ah, this isn't so bad! I can live with this!
>Scream;Call
That's ominous as fuck and I love it. Once again, though, this is clearly a terrible idea.
>Gabriel, 'Gantz, Cainard, Alisha (15)
Buncha fighters and a smart kid to help us out.
>Deuetude: Glamour
Might as well go all the way with my creepy twinwait no that's no what I meant
Use the last 15 on Library, Hypermind, and big bro Garret.
Alright, looking forward to seeing how this fucks me up!
>>47781666
>666
How fucking appropriate
>>47781975
No problem, just keep the loli thing to yourself around normies. I'm sure you'll make a great hunsbando some day.
>>47781999
I definitely will this time man. I have them backed up in an email, along with my .psd files and everything else. I'm not losing everything again m8.
>>47781995
Excellent! I look forward to it.
>>47781986
Slightly off but you're in the right place.
>>47782011
Thank you!
For all the attention, have a preview of Urban Fantasy.
>>47781617
Sounds interesting. btw what program are you making your pdfs in?
>>47782081
All you need is 3. Intro page introducing the girl (number 3). Page with the 2 girls info (number is variable). and Library page 2, until it hits library page 3. The other pages beri was posting for completeness of the start and end of the cyoa i'd guess.
