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UPDATE - Two more girls.
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(4/19) - >>47710904 Fei La & Mishe
(5/19) - >>47710938 Twile & Harmony
(6/19) - >>47710983 Omne & Pan
(7/19) - >>47711012 Alice & Andrea
(8/19) - >>47711031 Kaila & Jeanne
Last thread >>>>47743293
Strife's Newest (see attached)
Older ones:
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(2/19)
(9/19) - >>47711047 Kataline & Floof
(10/19) - >>47711064 Saki & Oki
(11/19) - >>47711085 Chere & Yin
(12/19) - >>47713393 Lillan & Bloom
(13/19) - >>47713427 #056 "Bunny" & Medi
>>47754682
>God
I'm the benevolent God of a monstergirl world with a 9:1 female:male ratio.
>>47754818
(3/19) - Two ex-rulers.
(14/19) - >>47740655 Flo & Beyn
>>47754835
(15/19) - Melody & Falchion
Had an error fix, I think.
>>47754818
What's so inhumane about a sex slave that's happy with being a sex slave?
Would you prefer she'd be self actualized and hate her owner? That'd be rape!
>>47754835
I'm intrigued but I don't think Melody and Falchion can be beaten. I love gorgons though so we'll see.
>>47754845
(16/19) - Caldera & Lyze
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>>47754855
(17/19) - Library 1
>>47754846
actualizing her doesn't make her hate you. It just makes her open to develop more interests. Maybe basket-weaving or backgammon.
>>47754855
I love all these new waifus and all, but are you stopping any time soon? It's a pain having to rename all the files. But for real, thanks for all the dank OC friend.
>>47754867
(18/19) - Library 2
>>47754870
Thanks, glad you like them. Why are you renaming them so much? Do you have "page X out of Y" in your filenames? No idea when I'll be finished.
>>47754880
(19/19) - Miya
I think she also had a typo that I fixed.
>>47754850
Well, what do you think?
>>47754666
You're supposed to put it in the subject, goddamnit.
>>47754880
So Caldera's bonus + Library literally makes me the ruler of an entire peaceful nation. That's kind of awesome, senpai.
>>47754884
>what do you think?
I think they can't beat Melody or Falchion, but Caldera is an incredible choice for the powerhungry anons who still want a sweet waifu. Lyze is a no-no, seems too obsessed with her past glory even though she denies it and might just be a yandere.
>>47754890
you found it, didn't you?
>>47754880
I always name them in a branching heart ptX. I like having them in numerical order. So I have to rename them the more pages are added before library and before the girls's pages.
hero academy when
>>47754925
Just last thread >>47743293
>>47754855
Caldera is really cute and I liked Lyze up until her offer when she revealed she's actually still evil and wants you to murder people for her. That's just too far. There's no sweet redemption angle here anymore with that part, she's just a horrible monster that needs to die.
>>47754925
Do you honestly want to see more literally autistic Bookworm x2 builds?inb4 "The fact that I spend most of my nights alone, doesn't mean I'm unsociable."
>>47754855
Campaign of fire and death you say?!?!
Yes please all will bow before the lava king (and sexy queeen)!!!
>>47754915
Now I'm going to have to obsessively watch the catalog all day in case someone didn't and made another.
>>47754900
The Lavalands aren't a rich or powerful country. It's just a fiery wasteland. The locals can only manage to live there because they're so low maintenance. Other than getting a fancy crown and maybe leading parades or giving speeches, there's not a whole lot to do with 'em.
>>47754910
Lyze isn't that yandere. She's just into wrapping you up.
>>47754918
That's why I named the library X1 and X2 to ensure it would be alphabetized into the right position automatically. I did something similar for Miya's page.
>>47754939
Lyze doesn't want to murder people. She just wants new statues. All you really need to do is fine some people with terminal diseases and offer to "cryofreeze" them until the indefinite future. With the Library, she'd feel even worse about it & most likely just look for such people herself. She honestly does want to be more good. She just has trouble letting go of her collection. You can always just deny the bonus & she'll eventually get over it.
>>47754951
Don't get too carried away, now. You don't every other nation to hate you.
>>47754933
He's probably waiting for the new one. Apparently there's like 2 more sequels coming up.
>>47754682
Am I right in saying that God is literally the objective best there?
>>47754855
Snek Lady is Fail.
Don't really like any of the items she offers, not much practical use to them unless you want to be a murderhobo or something. In order to get a second gift you have to help her be a murderhobo. PASS.
What does a SuperHero CYOA need to be good?
No, not SuperHero school, I'm talking a "you have superpowers, maybe a lot of people do, go be a hero"-CYOA
>>47754940I'm not though. I have no trouble getting along with coworkers and working in a team. So I don't see what the problem is.
>>47754855
I'm sure you can explain "blowing her top" better than that.
>>47754666
Aldred already enables you to get chicks and money, making Blomqvist and Isenbard redundant.
>>47754986
>Lyze doesn't want to murder people.
Pedantry. Turning them into statues is the same.
>Bonus
It reads as way too weak, frankly.
>Deny
I can. That doesn't stop her from being an evil monster. That's a definite no matter what I decide personally.
>>47754939
It's possible to get willing statues in theory, if they don't age while stone you can sell it as a working alternative to cryogenics. All you'd have to do is protect them from erosion and you can unstone them a few decades in the future with no harm done. In the meantime, they're fancy lawn gnomes.
You can even offer it to the terminally ill to give them a chance to live long enough for cures for their problems to be invented.
>>47754992
Personally, I'd probably pull a Great Hunter, with more powers = more responsibility.
So you can be Daredevil/the Punisher and have no nemesi, or be a Superman-tier Hero, but when aliens invade / meteors, you have to do that shit.
Basically the difference between being a hero for fun, having it be a 9 to 5 job, or having it consume your entire life.
WAIFUS ARE SHIT
YOUR FETISHES ARE INFERIOR TO MINE
PLEASE POST KILLDOZER CYOA
MY DICK NEEDS IT
>>47754986
Shit, I didn't think of naming them like that...
Welp live and learn. Keep up the good fight mang
>>47754992
Good setting
Multiple origin stories/options
Superpowers
A threat
>>47754997
They ain't gonna be on a lawn if you want to protect them from vandalism and erosion.
She wants pretty statues not sickly skeletal dying statues.
>>47754988
I guess that depends on how big a god complex you have right now.
>>47754992
Fuc..er, romancable companions or sidekicks and non romanceable ones too. Interesting powers. Interesting villains/nemesis. Interesting weaknesses/drawbacks for more points/powers/companions.
>>47754797
Fiona is counteracted so easily.
Hell, Mind Control into forgetting her hatred of you and you never even have to care about her ever again.
>>47755027
Don't forget about the rare collectible famous statues! Even if they aren't the prettiest, famous people are like bonus valuable. Imagine having Elvis frozen as a decoration in your house.
>>47754986
Step one: Every other nation signs peace treaty with me,
Step two: Bait them into breaking the terms. Step three: World leaders die in agony for their treachery instantly,
Step four: Convince world I can cause divine retribution to any who stands in my way, but I will be merciful to any who pledge themselves to me.
Muhahah
>>47754682
Parallel Universe. Go nuts, baby.
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>>47754835
I'm not sure if you just wanted to do a medusa/gorgon or if you felt it would fit into the more classical mythical style than a "normal" lamia. I just wanted to give you some interesting information on the subject.
Echidna, the "Mother of Monsters" and Medusa's canonical grandmother, was exactly what you would call a lamia. The upper half of a "beautiful maiden" and the lower of a "terrible snake". She's not typically associated with snake-like hair either.
Just thought you might find that interesting.
>>47754880
I like Caldera and Lyre. I might even say that Caldera's better than Melody. It's a tough call, but the people deserve a strong leader, and I'd be glad to help. Lyre isn't a top pick for me, but I'm glad for the bonus option; it definitely makes me like her more.
>>47755084
Echidna is probably too 'used goods' for most people here. She took various kinds of monster dicks for thousands of years.
>>47755096
>it definitely makes me like her more.
You like the murdering?
>>47755100
Oh definitely.
My only point is that the classical "Lamia" design dates to the same time period as the "Medusa" design. That's really it.
>>47755084
It was more that snake hair is more "monster-y" than just the tail after a few human-y ones, I felt I should take the extra steps to get a more monster-y one.
>>47755096
Glad you like them!
>>47755107
I think Anon meant the Monster Lord's tail ribbon.
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>>47755100
Oh, and she didn't take any monster dicks. She took a single Titan's dick. Shapeshifting may have been involved, but it's not explicit like it is when Zeus does it..
>>47755107
It makes her more honest. If she had completely turned over a new leaf, I'd be forced to believe that everything she's saying is a lie to protect herself while she's under severe scrutiny. Or she's just incredibly shallow and one-dimensional.
>>47755113
No, I meant the garden. Maybe you can sell them? Work-free profit is an important benefit when considering super-power adjacency.
>>47755109
I mean, I think she'd be interesting as a pregnancy/milf fetish thing or a child rearing deal, but Floof and Medli have bits of that already so meh.
>>47755113
In fact, for a time, I was tempted to put in one of those weird feathery lamia creatures. Q... somethings. But I remembered a lot of anons wanting something scaley, so I made sure to go with regular scales.
>>47755120
Oh, huh. After as much as I saw that option hated, I didn't think anyone liked it. I'm glad you do! You could probably sell the extras, but Lyze will want to of course keep her collection going.
>>47755120
You actually like the idea that she's an unrepentant murder who is trying to recruit you to help her murder and would, by what Beri said earlier, go out and murder people on her own if you deny her?
>>47755140
>I didn't think anyone liked it.
He might be a sociopath.
>>47755100
Don't pretend you wouldn't take a Titan dick if you had the opportunity. That's a once in a lifetime chance!
>>47755152
Woah woah woah woah woah.
>by what Beri said earlier, go out and murder people on her own if you deny her?
That's not it at all. I said that if you deny that option, she'll just get a bit pouty and eventually get over it. Maybe just end up hiring a sculptor instead.
>>47755177
You said >>47754986
>With the Library, she'd feel even worse about it & most likely just look for such people herself.
Which means that even with the empathy upgrade, she'd go out and murder people on her own.
>>47755140
That's true, but you could always auction it. You mentioned getting sick people and offering them a way into the future, but I bet they'd be willing to shuck a small sum for that miracle chance.
>>47755152
I don't believe she was put in a position to seriously change that part of herself, or that she's had enough time to reflect and strive for improvement, given that she basically hopped out of a two thousand year time skip just in time for breakfast. Like I said, if she didn't mention anything like that, I'd just think she's a liar. As it is, she has her vices, but has given legitimate thought and declined to continue some of the more troublesome ones.
>>47754915
>smug anime
>choose your own a/d/venture
>anti-waifu brigade
>tumblrites
>>47755187
>Vices
Fucking murder can't be dismissed as easily as alcoholism here. It's not just a 'vice'.
>>47754993
>what the problem is
Anon picking a drawback but claiming it has no negative effects
>>47755140
Quetzalcoatl is probably what you are thinking of, although he is a god and his image isn't exactly concrete. The name literally means "feathered serpent".
>>47755185
By "such people," I meant the willing ones. There's no way she'd kidnap people with the ribbon.
>>47755187
That's true. Some people would pay for that.
>>47755196
In all fairness, even before she made a kingdom, there were lots of angry people with spears after her just because she's a snake. Ye olden times weren't nearly as progressive.
>>47755202
Yeah, that's the word. I knew it was a god in some culture... mesoamerica? But that it was also the going term for the rare feather snake.
>>47755152
She's trying to turn over a new leaf at least, she'll probably need a firm hand to get there though but it's OK to have niche options in a CYOA with this many distinct choices.
>>47755140
Large numbers of very distinct options makes this CYOA, it's more a waifu presenting template then anything else. Cutting down on that range of options because anon cried about it will hurt more then it helps IMO. Also, watching the firestorm is fun in and of itself.
>>47755025
that's super vague. What's a "good setting"?
How large should the threat be - super villains, apocalyptic plan set in motion by a villain?
>>47755040
>waifus
of course that's the first thing you say
>Interesting
that means nothing
>>47754682
Watcher, Dream World, God, and Immortality all sound equally awesome.
>>47750355
I hate reposting my build but since I posted it so late into the last thread I'll do it anyway.
Sigurd (changed from alex)
St.Flares
Blue magic 3x, druidism 3x, monster hunting 3x, knowledge (monster biology), magic refinement 2x.
Kit, Chandara, Evergreen
1st year: great hunt
2nd year: great hunt
3rd year: great hunt
4th year: great hunt
5th year: great hunt, escort, security, bodyguard
Disciplinary Squad, Educational club (Monster research club)
Exchange program 2x
Sigurd family got killed in a monster attack when he was still a child, this originally left him with an intense hatred towards all monster. This hatred eventually died down as a wandering druid taught him that monsters are just another part of nature and to let his hatred go. Now he’s on a quest to learn as much as he can about monster for UNDERSTANDING.
His fighting style revolves around combining multiple different monster abilities to create unique effects. This requires a large amount of magical control and concentration which is why the magic refinement course is pretty important.
As he learns more about monsters and nature he’s slowly shifting his body into a monster human hybrid form, he gains things like retractable claws, a tail, a third monster eye with heath vision or something fancy like that, maybe wings eventually. This is actually something that’s happening unconscious, because of all his study into monster biology, but even after he notices he doesn’t really mind.
His hobby is reading amateur fiction novel. If they would exist he would enjoy watching B rate movies.
All suggestions for monster magic combination or useful monster parts are welcome.
>>47755196
It's not murder if it's Justice
>>47755234
>Willing
You don't think some might take issue with her going off on her own to murder people, whether they want it or not?
>>47755235
>She's trying to turn over a new leaf at least,
Which can't happen because she's still murdering, and according to Beri will absolutely murder no matter what you do or what you say.
>Firestorm is fun
That just makes it seem like you want to make people angry for its own sake.
>>47755248
It's not murder. It's sculpting. The people are perfectly healthy, relative to their starting condition, and you can set up terms.
>>47750355
>Lunestier
Seems like a nice place. Also, true elites definitely sounds good.
>Unarmed Combat x 2
I'm an Orc, it'd be pointless not to use some of my strengths
>Arcane Magic x 3
Unstable power maybe, but it's quick. Speed is the essence of battle, no matter how powerful someone is if they get knocked out or incapacitated first all of their power matters for not.
>Magic Refinement x 3
If I'm going to be an offensive caster, I'll need some of this to continue my attacks
>Divine Arts x 2
For when I'm hurt.
>Drawbacks
Exchange Program x 2
3 Companions
>Druidism x 2
Go full beast mode and use enhanced animal strength with unarmed to claw and smash my enemies.
>Companions
Eydal Northbreed
Suzette Highking
Sera
Eydal will be my go to sword in a pinch as well as a trainer in duelling and martial combat, Suzette and I will practice magic together, and Sera can help me in healing.
While all the students were casting arcane bolts, Uzgur still could not create a wisp of arcane. I though, perhaps mother was right, an orc can't cast magic! But I couldn't go home, and my professors recommended hitting the books and asking for help. And I did. With a couple lessons I finally could cast, and got back those snarky and stuck up nobles with my fast spells. I'm still an orc at heart though, and we're not too friendly with others- I made a few, good friends. The exchange program was really neat, St. Flares are awful nice, and I like the Druidic magic too.
>Events
YEAR 1:
Battle Royal (Orc blood necessitates I fight!)
Fundraising (Research proposal funds)
Research Proposal (Can we refine spells to have no cost whatsoever?)
Party Planner (need to develop social skills)
YEAR 2:
Sports (Come on, no boxing? I guess maybe baseball or something)
Fundraising (More money)
Research Proposal (Combining Druidic and Arcane- extremely fast nature spells?)
Blind Date (Rolled a: 1: St. Flares, and 2: Darnia. Neat, we're both Druids)
CONT
>>47755152
ah, the old
>anyone who disagrees with me is a psychopath/autistic
>my way is the only way, and I must let everyone know
>>47755235
Yeah, large and diverse were traits I had most in mind when making this.
>>47755248
It's fine if some have a problem; they don't have to pick her. Plenty of people were fine with Kevorkian. Plus, Lyze is doing better than killing them in that she could release them after a few hundred years to rotate in some new statues. This could actually go so far as to save lives. As long as some like her, that's fine. She doesn't have to be everyone's cup of tea.
>>47755277
YEAR 3:
Sports: (Gotta keep the body strong and healthy)
Escort (No research this year)
Security (Good place to test my research)
Nothing for gathering of life, social anxiety is too much
YEAR 4:
Great Hunt: Orcs are wild at heart. Plus Druidic magic helps for hunting.
Fundraising (Money)
Research Proposal (Getting kind of limited here since I didn't study much in other areas, but maybe combining Healing and Arcane for extremely fast healing)
Party Planner (Not much else to do)
YEAR 5:
Battle Royal: Hopefully my research has helped me
Basilisk Den: Leftover funds for gambling, beat the shit out of people in pit fights
Battle of the Arts: Last year, time for some fun.
Bodyguard: I can handle what comes with (hopefully) 0 cost spells, super fast nature and healing and my buddies to back me up (hopefully).
>>47755245
I would definitely want to learn a bit more on monster biology from you
>>47755274
>It's not murder to kill people because they get made into statues too.
>>47755280
It's more "He actually thinks murdering is a good trait."
>>47755294
>they don't have to pick her.
That's just a really pathetic way to ignore the entire issue that this is a girl who goes out murdering people no matter what you do. How does the organization tolerate this? How are you meant to tolerate this if you're not a sociopath?
>>47755236
>Good setting
Superheros don't exist in a vacuum. There has to be some way for them to meaningfully interact in the world, most often as champions of justice.
>Threat
Enough of a threat to give us something to do, not enough of a threat to doom mankind.
I personally second that anon's idea: the stronger we get to be the more responsibility we take. You could be a weaker superhero and go fight petty crime/ live an easier life, or you could be a superman-tier superhero and know that your assistance is required during each great threat.
Look into Boku no Hero Academia and One Punch Man for inspiration.
>>47755294
>as long as one person sucks my dick for it even the shittiest idea is good
>>47755199
The claim was that the negative effect is minor, because companions are not important.
>>47754915
>/pol/ was right
>Smug Anime
>targets
Closet Furries, Tumblrites, Redditors
I won't need a dick anyway, so might as well do something useful. /pol/-autists smiling upon me, can you say the same cyoag lurker?
>>47754682
god. Hell yeah, FANTASY WORLD I'M COMING BABY
>>47755304
>goes out murdering poeple no matter what you do.
>no matter what you do
I thought I already explained that she's not going to statue anyone if you don't pick the option. And that picking the Library furthers her de-eviling.
The organization's plan was to have her live with someone that wouldn't enable "evil," and then problem would be solved as she'd finish reforming.
>>47755304
it's more "He needs everyone to know that they are wrong for disagreeing with me"
>>47755277
Orc in my Lunestier? REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
>>47754816
Do you go to HP-verse then Capes-n-Cowls or is it just one of the two?
Also who is the unnamed friend at the hospital in the Capes-verse?
>>47755378
No you didn't. You've repeatedly stressed that she'd go out to find people to kill even if you had the ribbon. She'd raid hospitals. You said so >>47754986
>>47755234
twice
If a cyoa made you the half-orc kid of a raped elven woman, would that be good or bad?
>>47755414
Bad, I don't want to be a retard.
>>47755414
It would need to be extremely humerus, like the skeleton gangrape CYOA
>>47755414
Sounds pretty terrible desu baka senpai.
>>47755378
>I thought I already explained that she's not going to statue anyone if you don't pick the option.
>>47755411
>No you didn't.
>>47754986
>You can always just deny the bonus & she'll eventually get over it.
>>47755305
>I personally second that anon's idea: the stronger we get to be the more responsibility we take.
that was myself, actually.
Problem is you just know more than half is going to pick the "get a small superpower to live an easier life / a life as a NEET"
I was thinking the setting would be Boku no Hero, or close to it, but then we run into the second issue of anon playing a character, not himself.
>>47755414
it would be bad. I don't want to be any kid of orc, and I definitely don't want to be born from rape and be hated by my mother.
I get it's probably your fetish, but that's utter trash.
>>47755437
He said that, then he went on to say that she'd raid hospitals for victims. Do you know what self contradiction is?
>>47754816
Nihilia
White mage
RavenClaw
Dark Arts
Defence against the dark arts
Luna Lovegood (imma fuck her right in da pussy)
Sword of Gryffindor
After a shit ton of fucking with luna and killed the god damn voldemort...i go on to the Next World....
-Tank
-Healing Factor
-Energy absorption
-Nightwing (Yeaah imma go see batman)
After doing some superheroes justice with nightwing i decided to go to the next world...
-Akisame Koetsuji
-Noderabo Yokai
K...this world sucks...anyway next world...
oh wait.... shit....Death and War?
allright i'm game.
-Undying
-Super Soldier
Time to go find that bitch ass-guy i guess...Next World...HOLY SHIT RAILGUN? NICE oh wait...NO IMAGINE BREAKER? WHAT? I NEED THAT SHIT.
-Academy City
-Telekinesis (I'll be ripping hearts out of people's chest i guess you should call me "HeartRipper" kek)
Next would be....hmm wtf? DnD ? riight...LET'S GO....
-Wizard
ok there's some many domains...but how many can i choose?
Guess i have to choose 3
-Air (so i can suck oxygen from people)
-Magic (to fight other wizards)
-Luck
Schools huh...
-Evocation
-Abjuration
-Transmutation
Quests
-Orcus Rising
-Tarrasque
BOB WTF MAN? HE'S SO FUCKING STRONG, I THOUGHT HE WAS FUCKING WEAK WTF MAN, I NEED TO GO BACK TO RAILGUN WORLD, I REALLY REALLY NEED THAT GODDAMN IMAGINE BREAKER
>>47755411
I apologize that I wasn't clear enough in any of those statements. It is a shame that they were interpreted in a way other than I intended.
Let me reiterate 47755177 again to make it absolutely clear.
IF YOU DO NOT PICK THE OPTION ON THE BOTTOM, NO ONE WILL BE TURNED INTO A STATUE.
IF YOU DO PICK THE OPTION ON THE BOTTOM AND HAVE ALSO CHOSEN THE LIBRARY, THEN SHE WILL WORK WITH YOU TO GET STATUES IN THE MOST HUMANE WAYS POSSIBLE.
>>47755440
>"get a small superpower to live an easier life / a life as a NEET"
I don't think so. I'm pretty sure a lot of us would go for the higher responsibility superpowers.
>anon playing a character, not himself
Is that bad? You could always make it a reincarnation thing or something, but anons generally like playing as someone else... the whole wish fullfilment thing.
>>47755458
Reincarnation is memory and personality death.
>>47755445
This is a waste of time since you can't possibly be wrong even when every other person, including the author, repeatedly says so.
These are quotes from the post you quoted
>I thought I already explained that she's not going to statue anyone if you don't pick the option
>furthers her de-eviling
>Lyze doesn't want to murder people.
>With the Library, she'd feel even worse about it & most likely just look for such people herself.
with "such people" referring to people certain to die
>She honestly does want to be more good.
>You can always just deny the bonus & she'll eventually get over it.
>By "such people," I meant the willing ones.
>There's no way she'd kidnap people with the ribbon.
>>47754992
OVERPOWERED POWERS...PLEASE...AND ALSO WE GOT TRANSPORTED TO THAT WORLD. THAT'S IT MAN, THANKS GOD BLESS YOU
>>47755411
You're misunderstanding the line you are quoting. What he's saying is that, with the library bonus, she'd start feeling bad for terminally ill people and offer the "petri-freeze" to them herself because she felt sorry for them.
That's assisted suicide at worst, lifesaving medical treatment at best.
>>47755458
>but anons generally like playing as someone else
I think what that guy wants is to live in a different world and shapeshift himself into someone hot + get amazing powers so everyone wants to suck his dick.
not play a character that's the exact same as above.
I'd personally go somewhat low power, mostly so that I can be a Hero, without getting mindrapists or nemesi after me.
>>47755470
>>47755476
He has already posted >>47755454 after my post but before yours. The matter is clarified.
>>47755458
>but anons generally like playing as someone else
I think most actually play as themeselves, not as "characters"
>>47755463
>>47755489
Reincarnation doesn't have to come with memory death.You could be prematurely pulled from this life by an apologetic goddess who informs you that the timeline on Superhero world has become skewed, and now they need your existence there sooner than planned. You'll have to say goodbye to this life, but you can keep all your memories if you want. She'll even let you have some input over your new life to make up for having to end this one so soon.
>>47755476
>>47755470
Also I'm glad both of you are wrong, because you both are sitting here and defending her murdering people because they are ill. It's disgusting.
It does just go to show why Beri clarifying as he finally did was necessary, though.
>>47755505
>I think most actually play as themeselves
that's how I do it, but look above. Reincarnation = death (somehow).
Next thing he's going to say teleportation to another planet/realm = death, because Thesius' ship or whatever the thing is. It's been a while since he started a shitstorm over it.
>>47755458 #
>anons generally like playing as someone else
I don't actually think that's true when it comes to CYOA. Probably is for ttrpgs.
>>47755505
>I think most actually play as themeselves
That's too bad, most people here are shitty people. I included.
>>47754682
God
You could freeze yourself for eternity rendering you unable to ever think another thought, so it's the only one beside nothing were you aren't forced to experience eternity.
>>47754666
Blue one seems to be the most useful. But what I really need is generic motivator, I can do almost everything myself in the right mood.
>>47754992
-Lost world-
-Alien (like clark kent the superman)
-oh wait i don't have any coins yet, so far so good. i like it. But can you put a world where there's only a few people who have superpowers? like 1/10000 ? so we're VERY very rare? thanks good job. And also Godbless you anon
>>47755526
Wish she has to come with you.
>>47755236
interesting means everything. Oh you have eye beams...boring....oh super strength that doesn't crush what you lift...typical...boring... Oh you have the ability to create circular planes of gravity?...interesting.
>>47755532
>still screaming
please, anon, just admit you can't read.
I haven't said putting dying people into stasis is murder, I used quotes from the post you claimed supported your argument to argue against you.
Just admit you misunderstood the whole thing so we can get on with our lives.
>>47754992
Wait... this abandoned cyoa is from the same guy who made the Short Succubus cyoa. Does that mean the Succubus one will be abandoned too?
>>47755526
I think a busted reincarnation thing can be interesting, but it's always played kind of flat. It should be something unnatural and twisted, that involves lots of complications, and kind of makes you better than normal people, on account of being a horrible demon thing. It's also just an excuse to self-insert into a fantasy setting.
>>47755563
>Oh you have the ability to create circular planes of gravity?
Not by /cyoag/ standards.
>>47755305
>I personally second that anon's idea: the stronger we get to be the more responsibility we take. You could be a weaker superhero and go fight petty crime/ live an easier life, or you could be a superman-tier superhero and know that your assistance is required during each great threat.
That unfinished one kinda was going in that direction
>>47755378
Then you shouldn't have cockblocked the extra abilities behind letting her be a murderhobo.
>>47755563
>interesting means everything
that's not what I said. I'm saying you asking for
>interesting setting/power/etc.
doesn't mean anything. Interesting is a filler word that means nothing. What's interesting to you?
What's an interesting villain? Interesting drawback? What defines "interesting"?
Do you mean "never before seen"? Do you mean "new interpretation of an old thing"?
>>47755566
>I haven't said putting dying people into stasis is murder
But you are supporting it as not murder. Which is where we fundamentally disagree, isn't it?
>>47755572
>also
Always, I mean.
>>47754855
I already asked, but could you elaborate on "blow my top"? It's nor really very clear what that means exactly.
Ok so she gets clingy, apparently permanently? As a result of contact? So I suppose this is the inevitable result of, possibly even a prerequisite for, pursuing a sexual relationship? How much does it actually change her anyway?
>>47754855
Caldera is pretty hot.
>>47755586
They're objectively still alive. You can send them home to talk with their families at any point, but they don't want you to do that, because they'll be dying and there isn't a cure yet.
>>47755603
>still screaming
>>47755586
>a doctor murders his patient every time he puts them into a medical coma
>an anaesthesiologist murders his patient every single surgery
>>47755535
Yeah acutally, i was just making a build for >>47754992 and realised i couldn't be a proper hero without a Millionaire background because i would have to use my powers to steal money otherwise.
>>47755582
>Cosmic Protector
I'll be Voluptia, Cosmic Protector of Lewdness. My responsibility is to protect the poor degenerates of the universe from intergalactic conservatists and snooty priestesses.I want to make this "build" a reality in a finished superhero cyoa.
>>47755452
>>47755563
I remember typing like this when I was 10.
>>47755590
It sounds like it's letting her drop her inhibitions somewhat and start cuddling all over you, leading to lewd stuff.
>>47755586
>you are supporting it
I'm not. I'm telling you what Beri actually said rather than what you want to think he said so you can scream
>not murder
he said it's stasis. Stasis isn't murder.
you saying it's murder doesn't make it murder.
>disagree
I have no investment in this beyond you admitting you can't read and you can't admit being wrong, even when the author explicitly tells you.
>>47755501
I got ninja'd.
>>47755566
At this point, my only advice is pic related.
>>47755622
i am the one who posted noctis, yeah sorry bout that, i'm a little bit drunk right now
>>47755610
They're statues. She described being put in a statue herself. There's no flow of time; it's like a door that leads into the future more than a personal state of being. Stop being intentionally retarded and difficult.
>>47755454
So you're forced to take the library if you want an extra power in order to stop her from statuing anyone at any time. yeah that's great. Face it this one was a big FAIL. Other chick is great though.
>>47755590
Oh, sorry. Basically, if she gets too aroused by you, she'll heat up even more and lose all traces of nervousness, discarding her inhibitions. Physically, she'll only look different in that she's glowing brighter. Mentally, she becomes very open about her feelings and clingy. Yes, it is a pre-req for a sexual relationship (unless she gives you her heart), but it's possible to turn her back to normal (with the Lava Gel). So it's possible to keep her being shy and reclusive by preventing her from blowing her top, or you can undo it with the gel in case you want her to be like that some of the time. Of course, with neither of them, it is very likely to be unavoidable that she'll get hot and bothered enough that she'll constantly try to make you hot and bothered.
>>47755597
Ba-dum tsssssssssss *sizzle*
>>47755623
Yeah, pretty much.
>>47755585
>"never before seen"? Do you mean "new interpretation of an old thing"?
Both. Interesting as in not the stuff you always see in these types of tropes/cyoas
>>47755575
Yeah they want "oh you can transform your dick into a cunt" yeppers thats super neato.
Wow, look at this wholesome waifu. Isn't she just the definition of compassion of christianity?/cyoag/ actually believes this.
>>47755694
Canon.
>>47755640
Never explicitly stated that they don't still think or aware of their surroundings so like all cyoas various anons are interpreting it how they want to.
>>47754666
Isenbard the Frugal.
I have no desire for fame, just shit loads of money.
Where is SDA? Did he make the Dark Souls CYOA yet?
>>47755709
Oh, if you want a ruling on that, the consciousness goes to sleep when they're stone.
>>47755664
If you become a lava person, do you need specialized equipment for interacting with modern electronics and such (or just special versions of them that don't melt/break so easily), or does the heat resistance shield thing work both ways?
>>47755718
SDA was last seen coping with the rough reality of becoming a horse.
>>47755622
Once you get past 12 your typing may improve.
>>47754682
I pick god, if only for the power I could wield.
>>47755729
Ass cancer, becoming a social concept, and now a horse.
I don't know what to think about this, honestly.
>>47755721
Put it in the cyoa.
>>47755694
And not only that, but she probably really into justice as well.
>>47755621
I sure hope my goddess's duties involve more than just protection!
>>47755664
I'm just skimming so sorry if I didn't see it, is there anything that lets you proof things from getting melted?
>>47754816
Incidentally, Wizard is a terrible option for this, because you're already a Wizard. HP does have Teleport Through Time, in addition to its stable loops, which is the best Wiz spell. Psion isn't bad and gets you synergy with Esper options if you took one, and Cleric gets you some nice options for self-buffing and the like. Monk is actually the best choice, probably, because it builds on your previous abilities. Sort of like in the actual game, how Monk is a decent Gestalt class, it helps you with Esper powers (if you took them) and you can do Magia Erebea type shenanigans.
>>47755694
>>47755761
>Tails instead of snake heads
Lame.
>>47755758
>fraternal twin
Fucking dropped, what the fuck is this horseshit?
>>47755716
>he picked a sockpuppet from Satan's OP
Congratulations, you just sold your soul to Greed!
>>47755770
HP wizards and DnD wizards have different spell sets.
>>47755727
You'll melt like everything you touch. There's no way around it. You can get some very heat-resistant materials to do some tasks, like how Caldera cooks using really long poles, but for something like a computer, you'll be making all the circuits you touch overheat. However, if you have Frost Boost, you should be able to wear clothing, at least. Maybe even use a smartphone.
>>47755754
Can do.
>>47755765
Frost Boost, but it only applies to things on your person.
>>47755621
I want you to make this "build" into a cyoa.
>>47755758
Still waiting for the update for that one, with the new column(s) of choices.
>>47755796
>On your person
I can understand that you can keep Caldera out of the game room and everything but, how is she supposed to walk on the floors in that case?
>>47755770
I'm going to argue that Wizard is pretty fucking good because you can specialize in Necromancy and one of Death's gifts is that whole thing exponential Necromancy thing. Wizards in general are pretty strong in D&D too.
>>47755791
Yes, but I'm saying there's overlap. You don't want to be able to do the same thing twice unless that makes you twice as good at it. Having the ability to cast an HP spell and an Arcane spell that does the same thing isn't very useful.
>>47755818
HP wizards can't cast Wish, Contingency, or Genesis that I know of anon.
>>47755797
You can already become Slaanesh in Warp Princess though.
>>47755404
Heh, you mad, snooty noble?
>>47755100
She was involved with a single guy.
I know hardline Christians who are sluttier then that.
>>47755796
>However, if you have Frost Boost, you should be able to wear clothing, at least. Maybe even use a smartphone.
Would clothing affected by Frost Boost be a perfect (or sufficient enough to prevent molten keyboards etc.) insulator?Please?
>>47755827
Contingency is a good point, but Psions give the other two. Index magic also gives all three, if you were going heavy magic. But you're right that I overstated it a bit. Still, I don't think it's a mandatory choice here.
>>47755831
>Warp Princess
Which CYOA is this?
>>47755872
I think they're talking about Dream Princess, as I recall one build being described as basically Slaanesh, with that exact image in the post.
>>47755831
but I want you to make your build into a cyoa, not use some random cyoa to make a cheap replica.
What the fuck is up with her bellybutton? Or is this another fetish, a fuckable belly button?
>>47755779
Well, they are just folks struggling with the big city life just like everyone else, not some mythological sneks of mystery.
>>47755808
Dream Home is very useful for her.
>>47755860
It would depend on the clothing, I suppose. Some gloves are far more insulating than others. Plus, getting an electric-less mechanical keyboard will make things easier, too.
>>47754988
if you're utilitarian, heaven is best. the "No it's boring" doesn't apply since you're happy by definition and boredom goes against happyness.
So, what are the big name CYOAs on the way?
>>47755854
I've already wrote a complaint to headmaster about banning orks from our school, even peasants are more or less okay. Green monsters? For sure no
>>47755790
Yay! Reminds me of this cyoa which I think about way too much.As in, I thought of about two or three overpowered builds for it and at least three ways to help Gluttony keep his sanity. I really need to get a life.
>>47755890
>Dream Home is very useful for her.
That just gives you repairs doesn't it? Not sure how it'd stop her from falling through the burnt floor.
>>47754918
I chose the secret option of not playing this cyoa thus rejecting that timeline and saving the girl.
>>47755888
What are those images from, since you're implying they are?
>>47755928
Oh lord why do you people still remember that. That was a legit mistake.
>>47755790
Where is that image from? It looks nice.
>>47755926
Orcs*
Orks are the dumb ones. Orcs are intelligent ones.
>>47755942
There's one guy that is basically obsessed with it for some reason. He even made a spinoff.
>>47755942
How was it a mistake? I really want to know.
Wait, are you the author of this?
>>47755404
Probably son of a war chief.
>>47755954
Sentient*
Orcs are technically capable of free thought.
>>47755929
You can make some liberal decisions in the home. Namely, for Caldera, you could have all the floors made of a thick and durable tungsten alloy.
>>47755940
They are from MTG cards, first is Xathrid Gorgon creature card and second is Vraska the Unseen planeswalker character. They are from different planes though, Vraska is the one form the big city plane.
>>47755964
>Wait, are you the author of this?Yes.I made it when I was still watching photoshop tutorials online.
>>47755984
And we're able to learn magic. There you go.
>>47755983
Well, everyone was the son of the warchief in the tribe....there were no other men, only us boys and father.
I'm saddened by this blatant display of discrimination in Lunestier. I don't see any problem with letting Orcs into this prestigious academy, as long as they are Orc nobility. Status is what matters, not appearance.
>>47756003
Huh. Neat. You seem to express some regrets over this cyoa; why is that? I'm genuinely curious.
>>47756003
on that subject, please, don't pull a Quiet with the Urban Fantasy CYOA.
Please don't make it more than, at most, 1800 pixels wide.
>>47756027
The art. And the fact that I never finished it. And the fact that there are spelling errors all over the place. And that the idea, while great, was terrible executed, which is all my fault.
>>47756017
>Orc
>nobility
A contradicton in terms.
>>47754992
There's my symbiote CYOA which is sorta like that.
>>47754855
Ooooh, I like both the new girls.
Caldera has a really great personality, but I'll agree with others that blow her top seems pretty vague. So it's like, forever? Normally someone wanting to hold me forever would be kind of a draw, but not if that person melts anything that comes near her.
I would have to take mud chocolate since that gives me shapeshifting. And how does lava gel work? So I grab a piece of her tit, and then what? Stick my dick in it to cool her down? Is it like a little version of a slime? Since her tit grows back, could I put it back in her to make them bigger?
And everything about Lyze makes choosing her seem like a terrible idea, but I can't help myself but choose her. Like, she seems terrible at all 3 of her tasks. Don't even care about the powers that much, but hydrodynamic is cool.
Everything about the name "La-jamias" is amazing. I laughed.
WHAT'S IN THE BOOOOK?
And I guess I can understand her wanting to keep her collection, what with me having a big action figure collection, but it does seem a bit cruel still, but luckily the library would fix that.
>>47756017
they should learn to write first, then they can go to St. Flares, even those guys are smarter than orcs
>>47756046
technically Lunestier accepts anyone, doesn't mention nobility.
heck, the description says nobles, diplomats, and merchants of all races.
>>47755890
>It would depend on the clothing, I suppose. Some gloves are far more insulating than others. Plus, getting an electric-less mechanical keyboard will make things easier, too.
Sounds like it'd be generally more trouble than it's worth, then... Unless of course you could get some sort of further enhancement on the Frost Boost so it'd affect stuff near you instead of just on you. But if _you_ could get that, why can't she?
Overall, a difficult roommate option, to be sure.
>>47756036
Don't worry, I learnt from that mistake.
>>47756075
Reality doesn't stop people from coming up with something to bitch about.
>>47756017
If I can duplicate every iota of your being, every penny of your wealth, every person under your lordship and every friend, family and enemy. Do I also reproduce the sentimentality of this social status?
>>47756075
>nobles, diplomats, and merchants of all races.
>orcs
>nobles, diplomats, and merchants
>orcs
>nobles, diplomats, and merchants
They are mutually exclusive with all of those professions
>>47756091
>that layer management
Fuck you, Quite
>>47754808
Usually I don't play these waifu cyoas, but I'll try this one out.
Orb of life
Welfare
Caldera
Baking
Fire magic
Molten Core
I accept her offer.
Go to the lavalands, use magic to fend off great monsters, become leader of a strong warrior race, lead them into battle. This will net me quite a bit of power.Why do I feel like I am forgetting something?
>>47756113
Wait till you hear from my lawyer about this!
>>47756120
I fix the layers at the end!
>>47756017
Definitely not an attitude exclusive to Lunestier. Duxix' description mentions discrimination and he's a general companion.
It seems the 'monster' races have a long way to go before they're seen as equals in this world.
>>47756091
good. I was scared when you uploaded page 1, and it was like 3300 pixels wide>tfw can't post my cyoa because you'll cuck me four minutes after I post
This is author hell.
that other guy is right, jesus christ, use some fucking groups.Is Archer of Red in it?
![latest[1].png](https://i.imgur.com/n9Pon1m.png "latest[1].png")
>>47756113
This guy begs to differ.
Also, it says aspiring nobles, merchants, and diplomats.
Nobles can just be a knight. If an orc wants to earn a knighthood, Lunestier.
>>47756091
oh boy, I can't wait to analyze every single fucking tiny piece of thing you put in this, like why that one box has a gradient as a stroke, when all the others are white.
>>47756040
>And the fact that I never finished it.
Wait, there was going to be more? Sorry for asking so many questions, but I am really curious now. What else was going to be added?
>>47756150
there is not enough place in Lunestier for every aspiring hobo who wants to be a knight
>>47756148
>Anon knows he's not done yet
>Still won't pots his CYOA
>>47756065
Glad you like them. I'll see about making "blow her top" more clear. Basically, just knead, pinch, and tease the lava gel she calms back down. No, doing such things to her main body wouldn't work as that's directly connected to her Molten Core.
>could I put it back in her to make them bigger
Well, it's the same material, but really, she could just allocate more mass there if she wanted to.
Well, Lyze is terrible at all three of her tasks. But she clearly has something else in mind for all three of them. Plus, she will improve over time.
>>47756078
I do feel that Frost Boost is still a bit underpowered. I might extend the range a bit when I make "blow my top" more clear.
>>47756129
But what will you do with all those lava people?
>>47756166
Oh boy, I know you meant that as a sarcastic comment but there is something there.
>>47756169
Oh man, I had a whole bunch of stuff planned. The angelic virtues, continents as battlefronts, story expansion, etc.
I don't think I'll ever finish it. If I ever do something about it, I'll completely remake it. Why don't you try fixing it up mate? It's public domain at this point.
>>47756075
It also says that nobody accepts elves except St. Flares though, so there are exceptions.
>Male
>The Reach
>Higher Blade 2
>The Smile 1
>Tools of the Trade (dragonglass)
>Targaryen Blood 0
>Touched by Magic -1
>Grace and Beauty -2
>Muwari Vaballatha
>Wanted -1
>Touched by Death 0
"Way I see it, I'm not cursed to die in single combat - I'm guaranteed to survive everything else!"
Skilled sellsword by day, but by night the dashing (and ironically named) hero Red Rapier - saver of innocents, righter of wrongs, and wooer of women. Think if the love child of Zorro and James Bond became a wandering superhero.
If at all possible, I'd keep my premonition secret to prevent its exploitation, have my targaryen blood only connected to my hero identity so I can travel peacefully, and save my powers for when I need them or can pull off a sweet bluff.
To survive, I'll just avoid single combat as long as I can - whether through escaping in a way 'nobody could survive', surrendering and escaping execution, or just getting more of my enemies to fight me at once.
From there, all I have to do is let the stories go wild, and people will be saying I've come back from the dead, summoned demons, seduced every famous woman (and most men) in the country, and just about anything else you can imagine.
The finishing touch is, while I'm bleeding out from my inevitable encounter, a "prophecy" that one of my children will rise to greater glory than anyone before.
Of course, this means that whoever does get the throne will be assumed to be my son/daughter, even if their parents didn't know it.
tl;dr: Dashing swordsman uses death prophecy as plot armor, builds larger-than-life alternate identity while restoring Targaryen line one woman (usually) at a time.
>>47756091
STOP SHOWING US THOSE CITIES
>>47756170
Yeah well, too bad.
The very first sentence mentions you are accepted.
>>47756217No.That's not even half of them and each city has it's own page.
Huh? Oh, don't mind me. I'm just here to curse your WIPs with bad shitstorms and minmaxing. There's nothing you can do against it. Well, you could lift the curse by telling me about your WIPs but you're not clever enough to figure that out by yourself. Wait, I shouldn't have said that... Could you stop looking at my breasts now?
>>47756212
Where's it say that?
Says that they are discriminated against in Sorte's description. That doesn't mean they aren't allowed in, just that if they are they're probably not well liked.
>>47756231
Nobody posted it this thread so I can't look at it, but I remember the text mentioning St. Flares was one of the few places to accept elves.
>>47756214
You could have saved the world by making yourself Robert's biological child.
>>47756230
You're wasting your time, I have no WIPs. So I'll just stare at your tits 'til you leave.
>>47756207
While it is true that I have made cyoas, they were all in pdf format. I haven't even touched paint.net yet. Also, I am currently working on the remake of my energy cyoa, changing the fonts, adding some new perks and drawbacks, finally putting in some lore, and adding companions (which I might need ideas for.)
As for the virtues cyoa, someone else already did it, and it is good. I think.
![1465790555253[1].png](https://i.imgur.com/dtG2TXm.jpg "1465790555253[1].png")
>>47756248
Sorte's description only mentions discrimination, not outright refusal.
Discrimination could mean that the students don't like elves, or that the teachers look down on them, but they are still technically allowed in, they'd just get bullied.
And since being bullied sucks, that's probably why she chose St. Flares.
>>47756248
I have it in front of me right now.
The lack of discrimination is what motivated her to join, not what allowed her to join.
>>47756248
That's because St Flares can use every paying student they can get. They're not in the position to be picky.
In Lunestier we can select only the best!
>>47756207
of course there fucking is...
>>47756230
jokes on you I don't have wips
But hey, I can make something up if it makes you feel better?
>>47756261
Also, I already have my own sins/virtues cyoa, though it is incomplete (no lore yet) and very different from your sins cyoa.
Also, I think I might have broken your seven sins cyoa and made Gluttony a somewhat viable option. Just saying.
>>47756200
>I do feel that Frost Boost is still a bit underpowered. I might extend the range a bit when I make "blow my top" more clear.
Any chance of being able to share it (e.g. while nearor in contact withyou), to let Caldera enjoy more "normal" things?
what are some areas of technomagic?
So far I've got Golemancy, Magic Armour forging, laser beams, and basically the TF2 Medigun.
>>47756230
It's gonna seem real unoriginal because one option is based around the seven deadly sins... and this thread just started talking about the subject.
>>47756328
While it is not specified in any media I have seen, how about a mixture of technomagic and necromancy; Nanite infused skeletons, cyborg zombies, techno liches. Would that work?
>>47756320
*maybe*
