Subjugation Thursday #5
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>What is this thread about?
This thread is centered on stories about ponies being enslaved. Every kind of theme is welcome.
>I want to write my own story but I'm new to writing.
Check out these guides:
pastebin.com/V1ujiyJt
pastebin.com/bnMmZ2T3
pastebin.com/g4VpEg4f (clop specific)
>Where do the writers hang out?
Head over to www.rizon.net/chat with the channel name #slavepone. If you're ever having a writer's block or need advice, that is the place to go!
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>>27539843
bump
>>27540202
In your heart and mind, anon. Let the desire form words and the let the words form a story.
Then type that shit up and post it.
>>27540202
Could just go read Your human and you on Fimfic.
>>27539901
No. Fuck you. Fuck you with a red-hot cactus, I did not need those feels right now.
>>27540250
Thanks for the advice! I'll do it next time I want to embarrass myself.
Which is probably never, but who knows!
>>27540266
>Fimfic
Ehh...
I wanted a greentext...
>>27540355
At least give a prompt beyond "herpderp I want this" if you want someone to write something for you.
>>27540355
Over 500,000 words long, and weird premise, still gets updates, most recent chapters have taken a weird plot twist that changed the tone of the story in a way I personally find upsetting, but the ride until that point is most enjoyable.
Typically, I wouldn't do this, but since I posted the update at bump limit, I'll just post the updated pastebin
http://pastebin.com/zmfZ0QKQ
>>27539831
>hitting a guy in the nuts
>hitting a DOWNED guy in the nuts
congrats on hitting on quite possibly the only thing that absolutely pisses me off to the extreme
>>27540057
This mare is in a good position for whipping.
>>27540587
You really wanna waste those hips on whipping?
>>27540594
I never said whipping and fucking were mutually exclusive.
>>27540626
Do not dickwhip the ponies.
>>27540644
Can we pussywhip the ponies?
>>27540594
>>27540626
>>27540644
>>27540652
Whip her while fucking her in the ass. Feel those tight little pony asscheeks clench in pain around you with every lash.
>>27540652
Does this mean like, actually whipping a mares pussy?
>>27540722
If you want. It's not like she has a choice, she's your slave.
>>27540734
Only if she enjoys it.
>>27540683
>Slide yourself into pone
>Just as you've built up a good rhythm of thrusting, snap the whip across her back
>Explain that the whipping stops when you climax
>Watch fear of not being able to properly pleasure you while being whipped sink into her.
Continued from pastebinhttp://pastebin.com/5Kpt6ywn
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"Why does this shit only happen to me"you say while You stuff your belongings back into your pockets
>But then you see her starting to wake up and raise her head towards you
>What the hell am I going to do with a slave
>You could probably keep her at the hideout
>"mmmhhh...hello?"
>Doesn't matter now you'll figure it out back at the clubhouse
>"Hello?"
>Better talk to her to calm her down
"Hey there"you say placing your hands in you pockets
>".....what are you going to do to me?"
"I don't really really"
>"But...then why did you buy me"
"Buying you was more of an accident"
>You hear her say in a saddened tone "Oh"
>You slowly get on your bike as you rub you head in pain
"Hey you get on"You said gruffly pointing at her hoping that she would follow you
>"Why...where are we going?"
"Doesn't matter now just common"you say hoping to cut this short because your head was still killing you
>She then places her front hooves on your shoulders as she lays her bottom on the seat
>You rev the engine and speed off towards the road
>But one thought stays on your mind as you feel the wind on your face and the hooves on your back
"Why does this shit only happen to me"
>>27540750
unf
>>27540722
>>27540734
>>27540743
>>27540750
>you will never hang mare by her teats and tape a vibrator to her exposed and trapped clit
>>27540057
>Still using Subjugation as a tittle.
Why not back to Slave Pony? It clear we've won this.
>>27540773
>Why not back to Slave Pony? It clear we've won this.
Why risk it?
>>27540722
>>27540734
>>27540743
>Anon snaps the whip at his mare's crotch.
>The tip of the whip hits her square in the clit,
>She screams as her clit is spattered across her crotch fur.
>She convulses as gallons of mare cum pour out of her sopping cunt.
>You gold her tied down form gently, rubbing her belly and back.
>You wipe small chunks of clit flesh off of her thighs.
>With a glazed look in her eyes, she thanks you and falls asleep.
>>27540759
>"I don't really really"
"I don't really know"
>>27540795
Haha, oh wow.
Those grow back, right? She'll be fine.
>>27540795
I was uh, I was thinking like, a leather cat o nine tails but okay.
>>27540808
Yes, just like your penis grows back bigger and thicker if you were to cut it off.
>>27540820
As a penis doctor I can confirm this.
>>27540795
I didn't want this exploding mare clit fetish you just gave me, goddammit anon...
>>27540839
I know that feel anon
>>27540839
i want to steal her ovaries
Has anyone done a story where slavery was straight up illegal? Like, if you're discovered keeping a pony as a slave you get the same punishment as if you'd been keeping a human as a slave, but there's a whole black market/under ground pony slave market like there is for human trafficking. Then you could have a pony in a miserable situation, but with the hope that if she can just manage to escape she'll be free forever and will have justice. It could be pretty suspenseful if done right.
>There was never a moment before in your life when you felt this nervous.
>How was it that facing a pony half your size and simply telling her that you were her new master terrified the ever living piss out of you.
>Was it because of how she acted? Maybe, but Starlight was always odd. Often playing games with you in an effort to simply confuse or frustrate you.
>Thank whatever god was up there she was out at the moment giving you this opportunity to think.
“Hey Starlight guess what? My brother isn’t coming back and now I’m your master. Great huh?”
>More than likely that wouldn’t bode over well at all.
>So what the hell were you supposed to say? No scenario ended well when you played it out in your head.
>Deep down you knew the biggest problem was your own feelings on the matter.
>That little pony caused you enough frustration with her actions and constant flirting.
>Hearing the front door open you knew it was time to face the music, the longer you put this off the worse it would be.
“Starlight can you come here for a minute.”
>Play it cool Anon, how horribly can this possibly go. Famous last words eh?
>Starlight Trotted into the room with a pleasant smile on her face.
>”What? Uh oh, you look like crap.” Ever the observant mare.
>You damn sure felt like it.
“Sit, we need to talk.”
>”If it’s about that panty thing again you need to relax a bit.”
>Watching her sit across from you, you tried forming the words in your head on how to best even start this trainwreck.
“It’s about my brother.”
>The casual expression left her face at the simple utterance.
>”Is everything okay, he’s not hurt is he?”
“No nothing like that.” You replied running your hand through your hair, it was always a nervous habit for you to do that.
>>27541015
>A fact that did not escape her notice.
“Okay I’m not going to beat around the bush with this.”
>A part of you wanted to, it really did. A small part of your brain tried to tell you to push this off.
“He’s not coming back.”
>There you said it.
>”What do you mean ‘he’s not coming back’, is this some weird joke.”
>Yeah a joke, that’s it, your brother is going to come walking through the door and say that it was all just a bad joke.
>Starlights demeanor changed just like that, she was angry, and you were the target of her anger.
“He said he’s staying in Australia and he’s not coming back.”
>”Anon I swear if this some way” you cut her off right there.
“It’s not a joke, not a prank. He told me that he decided to stay there and that now…”
>Why the hell was this the hardest part.
“You are mine.”
>In that instant a flurry of emotions passed over her face.
>Resentment, hate, sorrow, and then settling back on anger.
>”Liar. You’re lying, he’d never just abandon me like that.”
>You could only sit as she took off towards her room tears in her eyes.
>You weren’t going to chase her, she needed to process all this. You following her and trying to do anything wasn’t going to help.
--
>Lying in bed, you stared at the ceiling.
>Fuck this day.
>On the bright side it was at least over, especially if you consider how things turned out.
>Starlight skipped dinner, opting for staying in her room.
>You left a tray with some food by her door in hopes that maybe she got hungry, but you doubted she would touch it.
>She was stubborn like that.
>Whatever connected you two was gone, it was at rock bottom.
>Closing your eyes you held on to whatever little hope you had left that maybe, just maybe, you could repair it.
>>27541024
>The suns rays woke you.
>Heading for the bathroom after slipping out of bed your mind couldn’t help but run through the events of the past day.
>Starlight hated your guts, all because of your damn brother.
>Somehow in all of this you were the bad guy.
>Looking at the untouched tray still sitting beside her bedroom door you kept walking towards the bathroom.
>Of course she didn’t eat, that mares ego was larger than a Hollywood’s movie star.
>While brushing your teeth you thought of the possible ways that you could fix it.
>Was there even a way to fix it at this point? Nothing really came to mind.
>A good breakfast might help you think this over.
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That's all I got for now.
>>27541015
>>27541024
>>27541076
>>27541076
Thanks anon!
>>27541076
I can almost imagine why Starligth was so attached Anon brother, but in any way I would like that in the future you added small pieces of the past between them, will surely be interesting to read.
>>27540773
>The thread's subject is Subjugation Thursday #5
>'It clear we've won this.'
k.
>>27540978
Would anyone be interested in a story with this setup?
Daily reminder that mare is for whipping.
>>27540759
>Two hours later
>You have just ran out of gas for your motorcycle
>Looking ahead you see a gas station the lights are turned off but it has a electric sigh saying open
"Hey follow me"you say holding the leash in your hand
>"Okay master"she says defeatedly
>Someone calling you master was weird but it was even weirder when you heard it in this context
"Hey could you stop calling me master it's strange"you say as you approach the door
>"But that's what they told us to call you"you hear her say in a questioning tone
"Well they are not here right now so you can call me anything you want"you say in a smart ass tone
>As you walk in silence you began to think
>You think of how weird this situation had gotten and what fucked up shit happened before last night
>As your mind wonders you soon realize that you didn't ask for her name yet.
"Hey what's your name"you ask curiously
>"Before you took over equestria everypony just called me Derpy"she said in a shy sad tone
>Nearing the entrance to the gas station you see two fuel pumps one was diesel and the other was gasoline
>And when you looked inside you see a kid probably in his mid-teens working at the counter
"Hey stay here for a second I gotta get some gas"You say looking at her
>She didn't even acknowledge you instead she just flopped down on her side while putting her tail on her head
>Walking inside you ask the kid for the amount needed for a some gas
>A hundred and fifty dollars including a gas canister
>You took a side note to rob and burn this place down later
>Walking outside with a gas canister you go to one of the pumps and fill it up
>>27542129
>When you are satisfied with the amount of gas you got from the pump you walk back to derpy and tell her to follow you again
>Making your way back to your ride wasn't that hard or interesting to say the least
>You both get back into the sitting position
>You star the engine and it roars as you race down the street and towards your clubhouse once again
>>27542023
I'd definitely read it, yes. There's a few interesting ways it could go, depending on whose perspective it is written from and what the situation is like.
>>27542227
>>27542129
>Be Elvis
>And you are the best
>You are currently engaged in a high priority pool match with James
>As you see him line up another shot you hear the roar of a motorcycle outside
"Hey James check to see if that is anon he's been gone a while"you say as you rub a tip on your pool stick
>You see him abandon his shot and walk up to a porthole shaped window to look out
>"Yeah it's him alright...and I think he brought himself a friend"As you hear this you form a sly smirk
"So anon finally got himself a woman"you say snarkily
>You slap your knee and yell "YE-HAW" And in doing this you cause some of your brothers to chuckle along side you
>"I wouldn't call it that"you hear him
"Then what would you call it"You ask slightly let down about Anon not getting any tail
>"I would say that it looks like Anon got a new pet"
"Wait..what?"you say surprised as you move next to James to look out the window
"Well I'll be damned"
>"Yup"
>You both walk over to the front door and open it for Anon
"Uhhh hey there anon....what's with the pony"you ask uncertain if your friend has finally lost it
>"I fucking see the way your looking at me"he said while pointing at both of you
"What...i'm just curious where you went last night"you say with a friendly smile hoping to convince him
>"I don't even remember what happened last night or I would tell you"he says with annoyance
>You were going to ask him another question but before you could he asked you his own question.
>"Hey guys could you stall the captain for me I'm going to sleep this hangover off"He says this as he drops the leash in you hand
>"Good luck" is all he said as he rounded a corner
>Looking to your left it seems that James has abandoned you too
>So the only people in the doorway were you and the pony
>"What happens now"
>Looking down you see that the pony just asked you a question
>You get a big smirk as you say
"Welcome to the clubhouse....And are you ready to have some fun"
>>27543080
That's mostly all for tonight also I am currently asking for some feedback on the story and my writing to see what I am doing wrong
Whoever does the pastebins, you're missing a few posts from my story.
>>27543133
most people do their own pastebin. if slowness bothers you, try making one.
>>27543133
Yes I am aware of that. I'll be updating it later today.
>>27543080
Please no gangbanging the poor Derpy, although teaching her to be awesome at pool is acceptable and funny.
>>27540057
dis
>>27536348
>The man carefully takes the glasses in his hands and looks them over.
>"I may not know much about ponies, but I do know glasses. And these glasses have been through a lot."
>"I can't imagine half the things these glasses have seen. And you don't strike me as a very old pony, do you?"
"I- um... no sir."
>"I'll see what I can do. No promises though, these glasses have been through hell and back."
>"Almost hard to believe it was my fellow man who would be heartless enough to put anyone through this."
>"But for now, I'm going to need time to fix these glasses, so I'll have to give you a loaner pair, okay?"
>You nod, not sure what else to do.
>You can't tell what he's doing, but he has picked up some kind of tool and is holding it on your old glasses.
>After some "hmms" and "uh huh"s he walks into the back room.
>You look up at Jan confused.
>You can only make out that she shrugged.
>The man comes back and holds something out in front of you.
>"Try these on."
>You carefully grab the offered glasses and put them on.
>You haven't seen this clearly in months.
"Wow! How did you-?"
>You notice he's holding your glasses in one hand, and a mirror in the other.
>The blush is much more damning when you can see it as much as feel it.
>He's given you some kind of granny glasses.
>Like the ones you've seen Rarity wear.
>The rims are gaudy, a bright green base with a floral print of flowers spiraled all over.
>"Well, how are they?"
>You blink at that.
>Looking up at him, much clearer now, you see he's an old tall man with wild looking eyes and white hair sticking up like he was struck by lightning.
"I've gotten so used to everything being blurry..."
>Looking at your old glasses explains it, both lenses are badly scratched.
>The lenses only kinda pointing the same direction.
>"Don't worry about these, you couldn't have found better hands to work on them."
>He eyes them more closely.
>"But I must say, these were very finely crafted."
>tfw no qt mare slave to ride until she collapses and force to sniff your farts
>>27544483
I want to ride the slave maregently
>>27531539
nice update
>>27540057
I'd spread her legs and lick her pussy like there's no tomorrow
>>27545053
We all would, Anon, we all would.
>>27540057
Mare doesn't have enough whip marks on her body.
bump
when?
WHEN?
Bump
>>27548057
Mare is not suitable for riding, that's stallion's job. Mare is for whipping.
Hello, continuing the new story from pastebin:
http://pastebin.com/fM7D9wgK
„Well, you're welcome I guess. I just did what I though is right.“
>“But you're bleeding pretty bad.“
„Nah, that's alright. At least i did my everyday good deed.“ you laugh painfully as it hurts like shit
>then you place your hanky on the wound to stop it from bleeding
„But i guess i should go now, I have a bus to catch.“
>“W-wait hum-I mean Anon.“
„Yes?“
>“I...I uhm wanted ask.“ it's visible she's forcing herself to say it: „If i could stay a night or two...and do the housework in return.“
>that's pretty much the last thing you would expect her to ask, after what she was saying before
>it's basically what would a normal slave do in the typical rich family: do the housework for living
„Really? Though it's demeaning for you to work for humans.“
>“I'm not lazy to work. There's just a difference between work and slavery.“
„Sometimes.“ you chuckle. „You should see how it goes in some manufactures. Anyway, I can do housework by myself. I don't have a big house.“
>“But there must be something I can do...Except „that“ one thing. I won't do that with humans.“
„I can't think of anything right now.“ you raise your shoulders. „I'm just used to living alone.“
>...
„Look, but if you promise to behave, i'll let you stay a few nights. And you'll help me with stuff sometimes.“
>“What stuff?“ she's asking suspiciously
„Not the stuff you mean. I just can't think of anything I need help with right now, so by „stuff“ I mean situational things. Like washing dishes and shit like that.“
>“Great! I can help you with all sorts of things...But don't expect me to call you „master“. I won't do that.“
>>27549420
„Sure.“ you laugh „But first, there are two things I probably should do. Lemme get these things off you.“
>you reach for the rope over her wings, which is pretty easy to untie
>then the collar
„Hey, this thing is tricky. I can't get it off right now. I'll need some tools for that.“
>“Well, thanks for least taking those ropes away.“
„No problem. Now, for that ring of his.“
>“Ring?“
„Yes. You don't know? It's also part of the contract, just like the documents. All the slave owners have one. That's how you recognize them. You'd seriously leave and wouldn't even take it?“
>“I didn't know that.“
„Well, now you do. Also, i'm gonna take it, because the fucker torn my eyebrow with that thing.“
>“But if you'll keep it even after i'm gone, what's gonna happen?“
„Don't know. You can keep it when you'll go, but it probably won't help. They'll think you stole it.“
>you come closer to her ex owner and take the bloodied ring
>it's silver-like, a bit robust, but not too much to hinder on your finger
>you clean it with a hanky
>there's a number imprinted on it, saying: „No. 483“
„Is this like your serial number?“
>“I'm not a machine to have a serial number...“
„Sadly, you do have one. Look.“ you show it to her
>when she sees it, it's kinda like something broke inside of her
>“Come to think,..if there really is so many others of my kind around...How..? How could they do this to us?! Enslave so many. Like a damn animals. Do you humans not have any mercy? No compassion?!“
>she's almost crying, but as before, she's holding it good. She would never cry in front of a human
>you've never seen anything so pitiful before, still almost patheticaly trying to remain tall and proud
>almost makes you feel bad for being a human for a while
>>27549447
„Look, um Rainbow, I know you must feel horrible right now. But...“
>“What?!“
„I have no part in this, remember? I just freed you.“
>“But I-i,..Y-...you're right. I'm sorry. I just feel so angry and miserable right now.“
>her eyes are watery, but she still isn't crying
„I know. But we should go, before someone finds us. And we have to catch that bus.“
>“R-right. You lead the way.“
>you nod and stand up
>she follows you trough the empty streets to the lonely bus station nearby
>you still feel pretty tense, your hands are not shaking anymore, but you still aren't completely alright
>along the way, you walk past the general store
>gives you an idea
„Wait here in the shadow, I'll be right back.“
>“Wait, where are you going?“
„To that building over there. Just a few seconds.“
>you don't really give her choice, because you just run inside
>after not even a minute you're back with a two glass bottles
>you open both of them with your new ring
„Here. It'll help you relax.“ you offer it to her
>“You bought it for me? And what is it?“
„Nothing special, just beer, but it's something.“
>“And you say it helps to relax?“
>you nod and take a sip from your bottle
>she takes one from hers to taste it
>“It's bitter...“
>but after few seconds of thinking, she gulps it down whole and makes a disgusted face at the end, followed by a burp
>you don't question her motives, just accept it. You partly understand anyway
„Cheers.“
>“Hmpf. Thanks.“
>>27548609
I will harm mare as I damn well please.
>>27550072
Please don't be mean to Spoonie. She's already taken enough abuse in this general.Hurt Sweetie Belle instead.
>>27550100
Whats the status on those jimmies?
>>27550150
>that spoiler
>One of the eqg girls buying the pony versions of themselves, or even weirder buying the pony version of their friend.
How to work in anon? Boyfriend, dad, bystander?
This is just and idea. Anyone can have it.
>>27551095
Anon is a hallucination for the severely beaten pone, to the point where they don't realize he's not actually real.
People just think its some form of schizo or something, and maybe it is; but to the pone it's their only way of actually staying sane in this cruel world, making a human that is actually nice.
>>27551095
>"Hey, Dinky, I found you this pony for your birthday!"
"Uh... thanks?"
>"What's wrong?"
"Nothing, but is it just me or does this pony look kinda familiar?"
>"Huh?"
"I mean, the blond hair, the grey color of her body, her eyes being... yellow..."
>"Oh, I see what you mean, Dinky...>"She looks just like my third-grade English teacher, Mister Huan!"
>>27551095
non buys pony version of his gf after dumped.
...
...
That probably would not end well. I don't want to read that.
lyra buys bon bon. tries to keep her secret from other bon bon3waythen4way
>>27544226
>The man pulls out a pad and paper.
>"Now then, what's your name?"
"Silver Spoon."
>He scribbles something on the paper.
>"There. This is just so I know who these glasses belong to."
>Putting away the paper, he holds out his hand.
>"My name's Emmett."
>After you shake limbs with him, Jan follows him over to the register to pay.
>Trying not to over hear, but hard not to, you hear them have a hushed discussion.
>"Are you sure?" Jan sounded genuinely surprised.
>"Indeed, I insist. And I won't accept your refusal."
>"Well, alright. Thank you."
>"No, thank you."
>Once Jan had ushered you out to the car, you can't help your curiosity.
"So... what was that about?"
>"What was what?"
"What did Mr, Emmett say?"
>"Hmm? Oh, nothing. Just that your glasses should be fixed in a week or two."
"Oh, that's not so bad."
"And these glasses are nice. I'm surprised how well I can see now."
>"Is there anything you would like to see before we head home?"
>>27550150
>Hurt Sweetie Belle instead.
Nah, she's way too into it.
>>27552048
This would be so hot
>>27552048
Sweetie Belle charging a gunline when?
I never knew I needed this until now.
>>27551661
Good little fillies get milk shakes.
RM when?
>>27540415
>>27540266
Thanks for that, pham.
That's now what I wanted, really, but i'm enjoying the ride nonetheless.
Not enough misery to my taste - everything is way too smooth for protagonist.
>>27540398
I refuse to believe nothing was written on this topic before I showed up.
>>27540057
Image looks like an angry version of carameldansen
>>27553278
>I refuse to believe nothing was written on this topic before I showed up.
you know this thread focuses on subjugation of pony, and possible griffins.
it specifically started as pony auction thread.
>>27553208
Soon™
>>27551615
>4way
I'D READ THAT
>>27541076cuddles?
>>27540057
Awful
Anthro
Anatomy
why is there a Subjugation and a Submission is Mandatory thread? As in, how are they different and why are they seperate?
also is it just me or is the IRC empty?
>>27559735
11 people in irc
well submission is about domination and maybe bdsm
we on the other hand use slavery as a setup for storys
people buying broken ponys white knighting them
or pones finding themself in this unfavorable situation and trying to live with deal with it
most of our stories are more comfy or maybe even light hearted
but we got darker stuff too
atleast thats how I feel about it
>>27559852
seems to me like they could be merged with maybe a small light/dark disclaimer for the stories or something? I Donno. it seems to me both threads get pretty slow traffic so merging them would help that. If that's desirable to begin with.
>>27559874
Its been discussed before.
It isn't likely to ever happen.
>>27559874
it is hard to describe
you would need to read 1-2 stories in each thread to get a feel for it
They are seperated for a reason
Also I don't think we are anything close to dead, we have a BUNCH or writers who post amazing stuff
But we don't have many drawfriends
>>27559944
Its not that hard.
We are generally a bunch of bleeding heart whiteknight faggots, and they are generally a bunch of edgelord faggots.There's also a few people in both threads who would endlessly shitpost about how merging is a terrible idea, and "fuck those other guys".
>>27559735
The big difference is our pones are for slavery and theirs are for raping.
You will never see a SiM pony used for farmwork without her being raped at least once.
>>27560432
>not forcing your farmpone to tow a fucking machine powered by her own motions.
>>27549492
Good to see you still going, Klaiiferon!
WHIP THE MARES
RIDE THE STALLIONS
Is there more of the Silver Spoon story coming up?
>>27563490
But what if I have a whip and no mare?
>>27564035
Then acquire a mare for whipping at your local pony-mart.
>>27563490
I have a saddle I like to sit on naked and fap on while pretending a little pone slave is wearing it beneath me and struggling to hold me up.
2 am bump
>>27543080Sorry for no green yesterday.
>Your still Elvis
>And right now you are doing something unbelievable
>Currently you are sitting on a bar stool on one end of a fold up table that you have set up
>And on the other end of the table is the pony Anon brought here
>There are also several shot glasses filled with Jack Daniels sitting in front of both of you
>Most of the guys saw what you were doing and decided to watch what was about to unfold
>Hell even the captain decided to come and be a referee
>You told the pony that who ever drank the most shots won
>You also told her it was safe of course
>She was confused with what kind of contest this was at first but went along with it stating that she thought it would be fun
>"Okay...get ready...set...GO!"
>You grab the first shot you see and drink it all
>Looking forward you see her down her first shot as well
>She scrunches her face at first but continues to her second shot almost instantly.
"Cleaver girl"
>>27564899
>"Cleaver girl"
>>27564899
ever heard of proofreading?
>>27559874
been talked about and neither side wants it.
>>27565150
Sorry anonWhere did I fuck up?
>>27564338
>tfw no little slave pone to overburden
>>27565350When you started watching a cartoon about colorful talking horses
omfg page 9 bump
When?
>>27551661
"No thank you, I'm just glad that we could get my glasses fixed."
>"Well, if you're sure, I guess we can head back to the house."
>Watching in silence as the world moves by outside the car in silence gives you an oddly calm feeling.
>Here, in the world of the people who invaded your world, sitting in one of their inventions, with one of them, who is pretty good proof that they aren't all the horrible monsters that foalnapped you.
>You just wish there was a way to know if your friends and family have been as lucky as you have.
>As unlikely as it is, it at least gives you hope to see them again.
>The car pulls up to a small building with lights and signs.
>This isn't the house.
"Um... why did we stop here?"
>"Well, I figured you'd like a treat. You do like ice cream, right?"
"Y-yes, I do."
>"Alright, you just wait here, and I'll be right back."
>After cracking each of the windows a few inches, Jan hops out of the car and walks into the food stand.
>You can't help but scratch at the collar hanging around your neck.
>Its a negligible irritant, but more so a constant reminder of where your freedom lies.
>Looking around, you take in the people and things around you.
>Quite a few more cars are parked near by.
>Several people walking by glance at you, but pay no more attention to you existence than they would any other person.
>You do however spot something that at first, seems like nothing, but the more you think about it, the more it makes the hairs of your coat on your back stand on end.
>Sitting at a bench outside the stand, you notice two men, staring at you.
>They make quick quiet quips back and forth to each other.
>You try not to panic as they stand up and step towards you, the car seems to interest them little.
>Lowering yourself til only your eyes are above the car's window, you try to stay calm.
>Maybe they're friendly?
>>27566662
YELL FILLY YELL!
>>27566662
STRANGER DANGER! STRANGER DANGER!
>>27566662
She isn't gonna get kidnapped is she? Right? Can we kill these two then?
>>27566662
Is it summer? Are they worried about her being left in a car? They're just good samaritans, right? RIGHT?
>>27566662
plsnoplsnoplsno
pmuB
>>27566983
theyre probably just creepy mlp fans maybe? I mean thats kind of a running gag in some of these, that the show exists, even if it would make more sense if no one knew anything about eachothers world.
>>27565648Mother of god!
>>27567878
Can't even suck s shotgun the right way. All she is gonna do is blow the top of her nose off.
>>27566662INB4 activists that kidnaps ponies from abusive owners to set them free in a secret isolated location
>>27568416Doesn't matter who they are or what their motives are. If they're trying to take Silver Spoon away from her new family by force, they're bad men.
>>27567990
I truly am a failure.
>>27569324
Take a deep breath
read some HQ green
Improve
>>27570180
I missed you guys.
>>27567878
Is this SUPPOSED to be a deer? Because it's a fucking deer.
>>27570298
Maybe you don't see us
Maybe we will never meet
But we will be here
As long as it takes
>>27571174
Requesting green of Twilight wanting to be bought, but is passed up at every auction.
>>27571366
I call dibs on sunbutt. She is always cute enough.
>>27571366
I'd take FS and Twiglet.
Because everyone else is strong enough to handle abusive masters.
>>27571366
RD and Lyra cuz they're the most cuminsideable
>>27566662
>The men are standing next to the car, leering at you with disgust.
>"So, what's your name, pony?"
>You lower yourself even more.
"S-silver Spoon...?"
>"What a retarded fucking name."
>One of them grabs the door handle.
>You eep audibly.
>The handle only jiggles, its locked tight.
>You let out a breath.
>"Open the door, you little shit."
>You clam up.
>The second man pushes the first one aside.
>"You think she's retarded? You're worse."
>Maybe this one's nice-
>He reaches his arm through the window and pull the latch, unlocking the door.
>Panicked breaths rush through your rapidly drying mouth.
>The door is yanked open.
>"Come here you little bitch."
>He grabs the collar around you neck and lifts you up face to face with himself.
>"What do you think you're doing here?"
>"Just sitting around on your fat ares while you tricked that hot babe into doin' your work..."
>"Retarded little grass eater."
>Your hooves are straining and clawing at your collar.
>No fingers, can't get your hooves under the collar.
>Can't pull it away from your throat..
>Air.
>Can't breathe.
>You become aware of the light dimming around your vision.
"P-plss... hrr.."
>You try to beg, you can't get any air to yell with.
>Pain.
>Pain across your belly.
>They're still talking at you, but it all sounds far away and muffled.
>The thumping of your heart is really loud, thudding fast and hard in your ears.
>You can actually feel the blood pressure building around where the collar is choking.
>>27571951
O-oh u-umm... help?
>>27571951
pls
I need moar
pls
Spoon
>>27571951
>Silver Spoon is being fillynapped.
THIS IS NOT OKAY
>>27572699
thats a cute pic
>>27571366
Guess that leaves me rarity. guess I'll take maud as well, for geology and gem hunting synergy.
>>27571366
Claiming Luna.
>>27571366
Apple is mine then. Funny because I've kicking around an idea with her being a slave pony.
>>27571366Let's make a payday gentlemen.
>>27571366
Luna and applejack
fu_k Rainbow Dash and his shit personality
>>27571951
Aw crap...
>>27571951
>>27571174
question is
will she put out peacefully?
I don't wanna spend money on one that requires
>rape
to get the D in, too much work
>>27571951
>You come to as you feel something hard impact your body.
>The choking on your neck has ceased.
>Wheezing shaky breaths, your blurry vision slowly returns.
>After feeling around, you find your borrowed glasses, and slip them on.
>You immediately let out a terrified scream when you're face to face with one of the men.
>You hop to your hooves immediately.
>It took you a moment, but you soon notice something off about him.
>His face if bleeding, his eyes are shut, and his only movement is breathing.
>You look around to find the other guy.
>He's on the ground, laying on his back, with his hands poorly trying to cover his face.
>Standing above him is Jan.
>Her shirt is slightly torn.
>She has a blue bruise on her cheek.
>And her face is a visage of pure rage.
>You've seen that face before.
>On your mother's face.
>The day the bad humans kidnapped you.
>"I'm only going to ask you one more time."
>"What were you doing, touching MY Silver Spoon?"
>"Look, lady, this ain't none o-your business."
>"That pony done called me a disrespectful name and I was just putting it in its place."
>"Really? And you didn't think to talk to me?"
>"I'm her owner, so shouldn't you come to me about disciplining her?"
>"W-well, I guess, I mean - it's just a horse, why do you care so damn much about it? They need to be told what to do and what their place-"
>Jan's fist meet's the side of the guy's head with a meaty thump.
>"Shut up."
>He's out cold. Mouth agape, letting the flies in.
>Jan steps over to you and kneels, slowly picking you up, holding you against her chest.
>"Are you okay? Did the bullies hurt you?"
"B-belly..."
>Even to you, your whimper sounded shallow and weak.
>Jan stands, lifting you up, you head resting on her shoulder, looking over her back.
>She sets you on the hood of her car and leans you back.
>"...ho crap..."
>>27573829
What did those fuckers do to her.
>>27573829
>a lone woman beating back three men
Suspension of disbelief lost.
>>27573829
Man, that lady is really strong
Silver is safe and the two fu_kers is down
perfect!
>>27573880
If you didn't notice it, her husband was dressed like a soldier when he left, I don't think its safe to assume she's a girly girl.
>>27573933
>implying wifes can't be girly while marrying borderline soldiers
>>27573880
>>27573904
Jan has a black belt in Taekwon-FUCK YOU, obviously.
>>27573829
>The whisper was quiet, worried.
"W-what?"
>"Don't look, and... try not to move to much."
>What's the matter?
>Why can't she-
>Why did you look down?
>There. Right there.
>You slowly move you hoof down to your belly, but you're stopped by Jan's hand.
>"Don't, don't touch it."
>Sticking out of your belly, just to the side of your belly button.
>The handle of a knife.
>Your hooves start shaking.
>Panicked tears drip from your cheeks to your chest.
"Wh-what do... t-take it out!"
>Jan is forced to hold you hooves down at your sides.
>"No, don't, we don't know how bad it is."
>"For all we know, it's the only thing keeping you from bleeding out."
"B-bleeding out? Wh-hat do you mean?"
>"I mean... its... complicated. Just, don't touch it, a doctor should be here soon."
>You can only stare.
>Dark red is very slowly oozing out around the knife.
>You're startled out of your thoughts as rubber gloved on his hands gently brush your belly.
>You look up to see a man kneeling in front of you.
>You don't know how long you've been here, but the sun has moved a considerable amount.
>"Try not to move to much, okay?"
>"Now be strong for me, this is going to feel weird, and hurt."
>One hand moves to rest on your belly near the knife.
>The other moves to carefully grab the knife handle.
"N-no, don't!"
>With a swift pull, the knife came free without tearing anymore skin.
>"Shh, stay strong."
>The man pulls a bottle of some kind out of his bags and pours something on the wound.
>You wince as you feel the cold tingling liquid dripping inside your body.
>It stings like a bee for a few seconds before a warm numbness covers the area.
>You try not to think about the weird feeling.
>You spot Jan talking to two men in dark blue uniforms.
>Three other men have put something on the bad men's hands before stuffing them into the back of a car with red and blue lights on the roof.
>You look back at your belly as you feel a tightness.
>>27573971
>Implying girly means weak and helpless.
>>27573880
>>27574002
...motherfucker. Panic time yet?
>>27574002
>The man with rubber gloves has placed a large spongy cloth pad on your belly.
>He follows the cloth up with wrapping gauze bandaged around your belly to hold everything together.
>"There. Now, this is only a field dressing, but it should do the trick until you get to a hospital, okay?"
>You nod.
>He suddenly puts on a stern face.
>"But, you were very brave, and I think that deserve an award."
>You're confused by his words.
>You don't do anything...
>What could he possibly think-?
>He holds a lollipop up to you.
>You don't even see your hooves move when the sucker suddenly appeared clasped in your hooves.
>Focused on trying to open the wrapper on your candy you don't notice Jan kneeling next to you.
>Or the rattly wheels.
>You do feel the warm hands lifting you off of the car and onto a bed with wheels.
>Startled, you slowly look up, nearly dropping your candy.
>Jan has a cardboard tray with two ice cream cones.
>"Save that for later."
>"Your ice cream is going to melt, and you can't eat ice cram warm."
>"That goes against like fifty laws."
>As the man straps you to the bed, Jan holds one of the ice creams out to you.
>You can't hold back the tears.
>You lean forward and wrap your hooves around Jan, hugging her tight as the sobs take over.
>"Shh... you're okay now. I've got you."
>Jan's return hug is made awkward by trying not to smear ice cream on your back.
>Eventually you're calm enough to sit back.
>You take the ice cream and gently lick at it.
>Vanilla swirled with sprinkles.
>>27574151
>Vanilla swirled with sprinkles.
Good taste
>>27573716
> "You know what you have to do if you all want to stay here, Twilight."
"Y-Yes, Master."
> "You know there's nothing shameful about earning your family a good home, right Twilight?"
"Of course, M-Master."
> Nevermind that your ears were tugged down into a permanently submissive gesture by the chains hung from them.
> Nevermind that you look like some concubine out of a two-bit novel, the kind you'd hidden in the back of the library out of shame they were even stocked.
> Nevermind that you felt like a worthless whore despite his words.
> Maybe there wasn't anything shameful in what you were doing.
> But how you were doing it?
"I-I know what I am, Master. I'm a good pony."
> "Very good, Twiley..."
> You resist the urge to flinch at the pet name he'd stolen from you.
> Deep welts, still sending lances of pain through your back from the last time you'd shown displeasure at what he'd called you, were quite capable of keeping you silent this time.
> "Go ahead and show me what a good pony does for her Master, then."
>>27564899
>After twenty or more shots your both still tied and barley sober
>"This is the final act and who ever finishes these bottles first wins"you hear the captain yell in his deep voice
>In the background you hear your fellow bikers and brothers placing bets on who they think who will win
>You raise you glass getting ready to chug for all your worth
>"On your mark...Get set....GO!"
>When you hear him say go you begin drinking as fast as you can
*Chug*
*Chug*
*Chug*
*Chug*
>And before you know it you are already half way done
'Easy'you think smugly
>"And we have a winner!"
>You place the Jack Daniels back on the table in shock
>You look forward to see the captain holding the pony's hoof in the air
>'How did a fucking pony beat me in a drinking competition'you think in shock
>Looking over you also see your fellow bikers laughing and joking about the whole affair as they exchange money for the placed bets
>You take a moment or two you compose yourself
>You get on your feet and slowly approach the pony
"Good game"you say as you raise your hand and shake her hoof like a drunken idiot
>"thanks "you hear her say in a drunken sheepish tone
>Looking around you see that you have caused a general good mood
>Everyone was ether drinking or having fun
>There was even a band playing on the stage
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iyWUTGEdLuE
>Sure the song was corny but it helped set the mood
>You grab two bar glasses and give one to her
"Have you ever played pool before"
>>27573933
>>27573984
>>27574041
>implying soldiers are unstoppable death machines that can handle three opponents at once
>>27574411
>>27573880
There were only two, and street thugs at best.
>>27574411
Dude, Mama bear Vs bad guys?
Are you triggered because you were once beat up by a girl?
>>27574440
>Mama bear Vs bad guys
I've just going to call you a naive faggot and attribute her success to a work of fiction.
Because it is.
>>27574447
They picked a fight with a little filly..
Please state your case to how Jan couldn't possibly win a fight against two men.
>>27574472
>they attacked a filly
>therefore they will always lose
Your logic is flawed, friend.
I'm done.
>>27574486
You're done because you don't have an actual argument.
Your defense is highlighting the previous post and adding words not written.
You just don't like that a woman beat up two men.
>>27574151
Doesn't sound like it was too bad. No freaking out or shock at least.
Oh shit, thank you so much for using my image for the OP picture. It's pretty rad that you think it's good enough for that.
>>27575421
go to bread viet cong warlord
>>27574425
why are people really losing suspension of disbelief over this. Janny is already too nice to silver already, this wouldn't be the first unlikely thing, but really these fuckers picked on a pony, theyre small time bitches not thugs. they pick pocket not because they're skilled thugs but because theyre too dumb and afraid to go after bigger targets. these are the kind of people who kidnap someones dog to beat it, not someone who tells you you walked into the wrong alleyway.
Theyre used to creatures that wont fight back.
![funny-mad-crazy-horse-biting-man-hand-arm-running-animated-gif[1].gif](https://i.imgur.com/dBNQXj5.gif "funny-mad-crazy-horse-biting-man-hand-arm-running-animated-gif[1]")
>>27574180
>tugged down in a submissive gesture
you're triggering my horse autism anon.
does this guy look submissive to you?
>>27575559
DYEWTS?
Sorry to tell you this, but horses and little ponies have body language. That short appears to be about a little pony and not a horse.
>>27575568
thats a whole lot of no source you have there.
>>27575782
Here's a source, faggot. With MLP, ears back can mean anger, but are more likely to mean fright, submission, or depression.
>>27575782
>>27576284
>biting when there isn't any bait on this blankflank's hook
>>27575559
>implying the artist has enough horse knowledge to know thatI'd know, I'm him.
>>27575559
Pony body language is closer to a cat or a dog than an actual horse, Anon.
>>27576618
Exactly they are very cat like.
And I do think it's part of what made this design a huge success.
Cats always had this weird cuteness inducing effect on humans.
Remember, mare is not for riding.
Bump for moar Silver Spon.
>>27571366
This Sunbutt breaks my heart. She got all dressed up in her little pink bowtie thinking it would make people love her and no one even gives her a second glance
>>27575559
Yeah, I know it's not accurate to actual horses. Ponies seem to use it for more like a general upset than just an angry gesture, though.
>>27576284
>post source that backs up one claim (fear)
>claims it works for all of them
yeah no. you where talking about submissiveness retard.
>>27576618
you obviously don't know anything about cats or dogs either
the show uses rule of cute and is fairly inconsistent. Horses don't behave like fucking cats or dogs in the show at all.
>>27576510
>implying i dont already know you don't know
hence autism.
>>27577926
This is normal fucking horse behavior. cats also don't do this. the way they paw things is completely different.
>>27577939
>>27577939
kill yourself
>>27578122
Sauce?
>>27578285
It's mayo.
>>27578285
>>27578307
tasty
>>27578307
Yes! Just mayo! Nothing else at all! Just perfectly ordinary mayo!
>>27578285
>>27578307
Original pic source?
>>27574151
I have no problem with her getting the best of them. We don't really know much about her. and she probably got the drop on them with too.
But them stabbing her out of nowhere for no reason was a little extreme.
But it don't really bother me too much. We seem to not know the entire story.
Would still like more.
>>27579719
as much as I like this picture, bellybuttons on pones look wrong to me.
>>27574151
Pretty adorable Spoons, this filly has suffered much, is just a little of love and some ice cream to alleviate it.
>>27578224
The reason that Twiligth fails so often is because it is unable to see more of his books found to solve their problems and refuse to accept other opinions other than their own.
That clearly is an error in your education, a good teacher would have corrected but Celestia as a mentor leaves much to be desired.
>9
Hey!!
>page 9
>>27581386
>>27581389
>>27581390
Hivemind
>>27581408
We have not overcome so many obstacles in the past to end here
>>27581458
You could not be more right.
Here have a slave!
>>27581574
You're free little pony
Go! Go away and careful with the cars and the the trigger happy guys!!
>>27578229
no u
>>27578207
>>27578224
still no submission, but you've proved your case further. I'm starting to wonder if you know what submission is.
So... with these stories, is Anon the one enslaving the Ponies, or are there stories where a third party has enslaved the Ponies and Anon's attempting to free them?
>>27581718
Bit of column A and a bit of column B.
>>27581686
Submission is the act of subordination to an individual, organization or thing, for those with sexual fetishes is the act of submission to the power of another person for.............. pleasure?
>>27581718
Essentially the premise is that you or someone else owns a cuttie and cuddle little pony or Griphon-Changeling almost always acquired through auctions, slavery or just rescued from the street, and whatever you decide to do with.
In particular I prefer stories where human (?) Is good with the pony and decides to help him or her recover physically and mentally for the new world will live, but there are also stories that explore the other end of possibilities
>page 9 again
Now, late night on my country, and I finished the final touches for Project Celly's last update.
From the pastebin...
>...
>Yeah, you'll live with it.
------
>Three nonths after.
>Life has been more sustentable since then.
>Celestia has more than one personality.
>Nympholestia.
>"Should I stick this in by butt? If it's a yes, then here, have it, and do it caaaaarefully~"
>Hobbylestia.
>"Master, I made an exclusive from Equestria dish for you."
>"Master, I made a lullaby for you."
>Pranklestia.
>"HAAAHAHAHAHAHA, AND THEN YOU WERE LIKE 'WAAAAAAAH' HAHAHAHAHA..."
>And most important: Slavelestia.
>"Uhh, Master... uhh... LUNA DID IT!"
>"Master, it's 6:00 AM. Can I raose the sun pleeeease?"
>"Master, Please, I need help."
>It's exhausting...
>And Luna... She's still a tsundere bitch.
>She still doesn't trust you.
>But she always falls into anything if there's chocolate involved... somehow.
>"No. We shall NOT do thaaa...Yes, Master."
>She's hilarious.
>And well, you three lived a normal life since then.
>Now, to the present.
>"SHE STOLE OUR SLICE OF CAKE!"
>"It wasn't even chocolate-flavored!"
>You've been to your company's twentieth anniversary...
>...and it allowed pets to come also...
>...and your boss thought 'Why not bring your harem?'...
>...You tried to play it cool while at work...
>...Your boss figured it was a 'shamefully stupid attempt to hide something'...
>...One thing led to the other and you're here, now...
>...The only one who brought pets.
>S'all awkward as of now.
>Celestia arguing with Luna is severely common in your life.
>But we're here. Now. Two thousand and fucking sixteen.
>Fucking June 7.
>And you'll enjoy the only times that you can socialize with your work partners.
>"TELL LUNA TO SHUT Uuuuuuuu..."
>You place a finger in front of her muzzle, stopping her argumentary chattery faggotry.
"I don't care... Now shush..."
>>27582891
>Luna still has her defiant look...by what you can see over your shoulder...
>And you pretend to look at her over your shoulder...
>...And the defiance is gone...
>She lowers her head, ears flopped down and eyes shut...
>"We're sorry for making thee so much trouble..."
>They're like children...
>But that not the problem now.
>The problem now is that you're awkwardly dominating a blindfolded by Stockholm big mare and a tsundere.
>a.k.a Every weeaboo's dream.
>And speaking of weeaboos, there is one from work.
>And he's blushing now.
>You just accomodate yourself and pretend it didn't happen.
>Now it's just awkward silence.
>Now your boss...
>That smug grin planted on his face is just WOW.
>...He baited you into this.
>And you knew it.
>Stupid arrogant bastard of you.
>Now... How to get outta here?
>The point is, it's fucking saturday, and you don't even think about work on saturdays.
>It means that you need to get out of here.
>...you lazy cunt.
>FUCKING BRAIN NOT THIS SHIT AGAIN.
>Now...
"Ehh... It's getting late by now so s-"
>"It' half past fucking two, Anon, why don't you stay?"
>Eeeeeeeeyep. Fuck the afternoon.
"I have two reasons."
>You take a quick glance at Celestia and Luna to make sure you want to fuck off.
>"Yeah yeah yeah yeah, Here, some cake for Lun-"
>Luna suddenly hopped off to your boss -called Isaac- all of a sudden.
>...That's the last fucking bit of chocolate she'll ever have tasted in her FUCKING LIFE.
>"Now seeya~"
"See you."
Now, feedback, criticism, hate, anger because I bypassed your filters, etc. is accepted. Even the smallest rage hammer counts.
Now what should I do next? Any requests? I have two greens i never managed to take out to light, You want them?
>>27582965
Updated pastebin and forgot reply
>>27582935
http://pastebin.com/mwZ3hvYz
>>27582965
Not enough filly fondling and ears back in submissive gestures.
Could also use some anthro. Maybe a satyr or something. And lactation.Malelactation.
>>27583062
>anthro
>>27583062
This is an example of one of those posts where things start out fine and then the poster descends into soul crushing stupidity at an alarming rate.
>>27540057
Need sauce for image
>>27583596
One of our drawfags made it.
>>27583717
OK...
Then I need a story for this image. Or something.
>>27583920
Princess Candydance is way too into erotic roleplaying for her own good.
>>27583920
>>27502363
Cadance and Shining were into weird stuff beforeby Equestrian standards
>>27577910
>>27577939
>>27577926
>>27577946
Why you faggots aint fighting over muh dick instead?
>>27581574
America should go back to Vietnam and kill off the stragglers
>>27584616
Where the hell did america fighting Vietnam come into this!?
>>27574401
>Be Anon
>And you have just woke up from a hangover coma
>Your not sure what time it was as you stumble out of your tool shed
>Looking around you see the sun quickly rising
"Shit.jp"
>Good thing your shed was located behind the clubhouse so it was just a short walk away
>Walking to the club's backdoor you see that someone has locked it
"Damn it"
>Not Giving up you decide to see if the front door was open
>Walking around the building you are surprised to see so many vehicles still in there parking spots from last night
>Sure there were some people who stayed late to drink but this many people staying here was just too strange
>As you approach the front door you bring up your magnum in case something bad happened
>You slowly open the door expecting the worst
>But instead of seeing a massacre
>You are presented with lots people laying in various places around the bar
>As you slowly walk in you check one person's pulse...he's fine
>Calming yourself down you place your gun back into it's holster
>As you continue to explore the bar you eventually fine derpy sleeping on the pool table with various alcohol bottles scattered around her
>As you take a closer look at her you see someone took the effort to place a makeshift crown on her head.
>The crown looked like it was made of alcohol bottles taped together
>Next to the pool table you see Elvis clutching a pool cue and a whiskey bottle in his hands
>You eventually decide this isn't worth your time as you turn towards the front door
>But as you start to leave you see someone clutching a video camera
>Curiosity quickly overtakes you as you approach him
>You quickly pull the camera out of the man's hands
>You walk outside ready to inspect the footage because it was to damn dark in there
Did I improve?
>>27584838
You forgot to namefag. Twice.
>>27584820
>>27584838
Damn it.
>>27584851
Get your shit together, Anon.
>anthro
>filly fondling
>male lactation
This is not yo place m8
>>27549492
>you continue on your road with your beer in right hand
>you prefer to enjoy the bitterness sip by sip, especialy in situations like this
>helps to calm down
>you purposely arrive shortly before the bus actualy stops there, so you don't have to wait too long
>while entering, you have your scarf over most of your face and are avoiding to look in driver's eyes
>it would be better if nobody remebered you from this night, if you could be just another nameless person, walking trough shadows
>but not all things can always be avoided
>he would be blind if he wouldn't notice a skyblue pony with colorful mane and shock collar around her pretty neck
>at least he couldn't connect your face with her if somebody ever asked him. He saw only the scarf
>walking past him, there are three people sitting in the bus
>an old lady with an old man, most likely her husband. Probably coming from a cinema or something because they still have some popcorn
>they look happy together, reminding you of something you never really had
>there's also some drunk guy who barely noticed you, or the pony
>there were nights you ended up the same, you couldn't possibly judge him
>you make your way to the back of the bus, so their company will be as far away from you as possible
>although they all seem pretty harmless, you wouldn't want anyone around anyway
>there, you sit on one of the chairs and silently wait
>Dash is sitting next to you and stares in front of her with uncertain look
>at first, you wanted to help her out because of your regular solidarity. Something you'd normaly do – even for an angry and maybe a bit ungrateful pony
>but after the moment you showed her the number, you could understand her good enough to emphatize
>something about her makes you feel so sad, it's the hopelessness in her eyes, followed by her proud posture, even while holding back tears
>you kinda respect that
>>27585772
„Are you alright? How you holding up?“ you whisper
>“The beer thing you gave me, did it help you relax?“
„Sort of.“
>“I just keep getting stuck on thougts.“
„Then find a good one and stick on it.“
>“What's a good though in these times?“
„You're a pegasus. Think about flying.“
>“I can't remember the joy of flying anymore...“
„Yes you can. Close your eyes.“
>she does that, even though she looks a bit worried what is gonna happen next
>you're not sure what exactly are you doing right now, but hope for the best
>it worked when you tried it in your mind
>you start narrating a scenery, very queitly and slowly whispering, to give her the time to imagine
„One day, when your feathers grow back, you'll be strong and healthy again. Like the very earth itself. Imagine the land, so small under the few flaps of your wings. The blinding sun, so beautiful, like an eye of the God, caressing you with warm and loving embrace. Neverending seas of green trees with leaves, rustilng in the soft wind. Do you see it? Can you remember?“
>you're basically cooking from water, but for the first time, a very faint smile appears on her face
>“I do.“
>for the rest of bus ride, you continue on narrating the scenery to the smallest details
>you wish all of that could be true, but if she's actualy gonna leave, it's obvious she's gonna end up in hands of another human
>and you'll be just a memory, just like she will once be yours
>is that how it's gonna end?
>it's a shame, seeing such a strong spirit being crushed, over and over again
>will she evetualy subdue, or ends up taking her own life?
>from the few minutes you know her, you're already sure that she'd rather choose the second option
>you stop narrating when you realize you're in the place where you're supposed to leave the bus
„Hey, we're here. Let's go.“
>she opens her eyes and the smile vanishes as she sees the reality once again
>“Alright...“
>>27585778
only 2 posts?but I've only just started fapping
>>27540057
Wheres that one story, where Nightmare moon takes over, and basically lets anon have the mane6 as pets. And he forces rainbow to eat out fluttershy (if I remember right) and he like chains up applejack and keeps her on the edge for multiple days, keeps getting her close to getting off, but never lets her have release..
Does anyone recognize this story? Anyone have the link?
>>27587079
I don't remember a story of the likes you've described. It isn't in the archives either although I may have simply missed the story entirely.
>>27587079
That is a Submission is Mandatory story, try asking over there
>>27587210
Nope. It IS literally Submission Is mandatory, There's even a thread for it.
>>27540057
bemp
Moar Silver Spoon?
>>27587079
That is the main story in Submission is Mandatory. Hit up their thread and/or pastebin.
>>27587079
As everyone else has said, it's literally the founding story of SiM (and shares the name). I believe the link is still in their OP despite it being effectively dead for at least a year.
did nameless ever come back?
>>27574151
>They rolled you on the bed into the back of a big red and white car as you finished your ice cream.
>As they were packing you into the box car, Jan said she needed to go pick up Jenny.
>You're just hoping they won't do the live autopsy thing like the aliens did to ponies in those sci-fi comic books you totally didn't read when Diamond wasn't looking.
>That totally wasn't your favorite part.
>Pony guts were gross, and you did not find them neat.
>And you didn't ace your biology tests in Cheerilee's class.
>The nice medic man is sitting in the back with you, making sure you're comfy while he locks the bed into place.
>"Okay, now for the ride, we have to keep you calm so you don't disturb your injury, okay?"
>Makes seance, you nod.
>"Okay, I'm going to put this mask on you, just breath easy."
>You nod again as he places a plastic cup thing with a hose that leads to a large metal bottle over your muzzle.
>You breath like he said.
>Air is coming from the hose thing.
>Smells kinda... funny...
>You yawn.
>Today was rather exciting.
>Maybe a nap...
>Another yawn followed by a big deep breath of funny smelling air.
>Nap sounds good...
>>27590251
For Celestia!
Silver Spoon is a Fangirl in secret!
>>27589713
No. He's been absent for close to two years now.
>>27590251
Thank god. I was worried you were going to let it end with the last post.
Please don't let this be the last one either.
>>27591982
Slow writer, slow posts.
>All but one of our writefags dead. Despite the thread having 2X the number of unique posters than before the dark times.
>>27594237
>reverse image search
>Alpesh Patel on LinkedIn
THANKS GOOGLE
(Can somebody post the captionless image please?)
>>27594308
>>27594308
Google is good.
>>27585778
>out of the bus, you notice she's shivering
>for few seconds you wonder, but then you decide to borrow her your jacket
„Take this. You're cold. And it'll fit.“
>“No I'm not cold. I just need to move and I'll get warm again.“
„Take the jacket. This isn't a question. It's almost -11 celsius.“ you basically order her
>she looks kinda surprised, but takes the jacket without any further protest
>from here, it's not even a kilometer to your home, but still long enough for you to feel a difference
>but you aren't nearly that cold she must be if she didn't have at least the jacket
>you walk silently, avoiding as much light as possible. Don't want to draw any kind of attention
„This is it.“ you point at your house as you're closing by
>the key in a lock turns and the door open, revealing the dark rooms of your home
>first thing you do is switch on the lights, so you can see while untying your boots
„You should wash your hooves first. It's messy out there.“ you give her a floorcloth
>“Sure.“
>when she's done, you continue to your living/dining room
>there, you close all the curtains so no one can see inside
„You can sleep on the couch, sheets and pillows are stored inside. But come to think of it, you should take a shower as well. How long is it since your last bath?“
>“Two weeks.“
„Well, you should definitely take a shower. It's those doors over there. I'll go second. Towels are in the cabinet, right next to the entrance.“
>she doesn't say a word, just tiredly goes the way you sent her
>>27595277
>in the meanwhile, you check on your fridge
>few joghurts you've been saving for later, some cheese, butter, 4 bottles of beer, blueberry marmelade, mustard, ketchup, eggs, few slices of ham and some fruit and vegetables
>come to think of it, you're not even really hungry
>but you bet she is
>you slice some bread, put it in toaster, then put some butter and marmelade on it
>leaving it on the table, along with two appless and glass of water, you grab another bottle of beer from the fridge and sit in your favourite chair
>with your eyes closed and beer opened, you patienly wait till she's finished showering
>when you're at half of the bottle, you hear the bathroom door finally open
>eyes still closed, you murmur
„Check the table. Eat up.“
>“Is this for?..Thanks Anon.„
>you can hear her biting a mouthful of apple
>“ You know...You really aren't that bad.“
>you open only your right eye, leaving the left one still closed and make something between smile and grin
„I guess.“
>“But you could stop ordering around. Why is it so typical for humans to give orders all the time?“
„I'm just too tired to be questioned. Wait for tommorow...“
>>27595294
>after finishing the bottle, you stand up so you can take a shower as well
„When you're done, just put it in the sink. I'll clean it later.“ you announce, heading to bathroom
>you turn the water heat to the almost maximum
>some really hot shower after the cold day
>after you're done, you brush your teeth and go to sleep
>she's already sleeping around the time you walk trough the living room
>when you finally get to bed, you still have to think
>what's gonna happen next? You stupid just literally stole a pony
>not like you'd think that you did something bad, the guy didn't look like a nice person to own a pony
>but it could make you problems
>on the other hand, not taking her with you would lay on your mind even heavier
>what were you supposed to do? You couldn't just turn around and leave her there
>though, what does it help if they just catch her week or two later anyway?
>that's a stupid question, that week of freedom would probably mean to her more than you could imagine
>If only it was at least pure freedom, without having to worry about being caught
>that would make her happy
>anyway, since you can't just throw her out now, because it would be against your perception of what is right, then what next?
>you could basically officialy claim that she's your slave, in case someone catches her
>documents don't exist and the ring is in your property now
>but she wouldn't agree. For her, it would just mean she's slave a again
>but one never knows, we'll see how it ends
>it's too early for assumptions
>now it's time to sleep, you can think later…
beep
>>27526972
"Wait, so that's your takeaway here?"
>Piss fetish? Where the fuck did that even come from?
>"Well, yeah," Berry sighs, staring into her nearly-empty glass. "That and you're way to nice to mares you barely even know."
"Luckily for everyone."
>"Huh?"
>She look up in confusion.
>"What does... oh..."
>Her head drops.
>"Yeah, I guess so."
>The mare swirls the dregs of her drink around in her tumbler.
>"I need another drink."
"Want me to mix you something?"
>"Nah, I got it."
>She sets her glass down next to yours and starts pouring, first into your glass, then into hers.
>"I... um... guess I've never actually thanked you or anything."
"For?"
>Her answer is to shove a glass into your hands.
>"Here. Drink."
"Thank me for what?"
>"You're a good friend."
>Yeah, you can drink to that.
"You too, Berry."
>>27595334
inverse skittles bump
work bump just in case
>>27595822
>Glasses clink gently - or not so gently, fine motor control is quickly becoming a lost technique of the ancients - yours held loosely in one hand, Berry's gripped between both forehooves.
>She downs the drink in one go. You... hesitate.
>Smells familiar. Sweet. Hard to pinpoint.
"What did you put in this?"
>"This n' that."
"... aaaand why are we almost out of mango rum?"
>Berry shrugs.
"That bottle was nearly full."
>She shrugs HARDER.
"Whatever."
>You knock back the drink.
"Make me another."
>"Yessuh, massah."
>She *could* just be slurring - that's an awful lot of rum for a little pony to drink in such a short time.
>On the other hand... oh, your other hand is holding a full glass.
>Cool.
"Tastes good."
>Sweet, but mellow.
>"Thanks, Anon."
>You're on your third before you notice Fluttershy is back.
>Halfway done before you notice her head is on your lap.
>Finishing up the glass when she nudges your thigh.
>"Play."
>You set your glass down on her head and reach for the remote.
If ponies started disappearing, ending up at the auctions, how would the other races of equestria react?
Specifically, dragons.
Would dragons begin protecting the ponies from humans? Especially if after Ember episode.
>>27597054
Why would they?
>>27597054
Why would dragons care?
>>27597222
>>27597228
Because griffons make shit pillows.
>>27597293
>im-fucking-plying
>>27597318
Comfy.
catbird best bird
u have to care for your poner
Oh shit nigga who dat
http://pastebin.com/BHjCS9zu
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>Almost in sync the two Anons get out and stretch
>The other Anon speaks up “Right, time to figure out how we ride up the river to where we put in. You're allowed to ride in the bed of the truck here in Utah. So, who wants where?”
>Incog speaks first. "Shotgun!"
>Other Anon replies swiftly “Alright then, you're up front.”
>Of course Cadence follows up quickly "I think I'd rather be in the cab."
>Then, yourself "Oooh, bed of the truck! That sounds different. Me and Anon want to ride in the back, right Anon?"
>Anon feels like he’s going to say something cheeky, of course you are not surprised “Whatever you want, bugbutt."
>Naturally
>Rainbow Dash follows. "Yeah, I think the back sounds pretty awesome."
>The other Anon turns to his pony “Aright then, Maud, you gonna ride in the cab then, I take it?”
>"I guess so. It's what I'm used to." She replies
>Everyone piles into the other truck, and once everyone is in place, he starts up, heading across some river you didn’t catch the name of
>Er, you thought he planned to cross it, driving parelell to the river, which also runs fown a high sided canyon, leads you to be slightly uncomfortable, yes the area reminds you much of the badlands and you like that
>>27599850
>The other Anon speaks up before anything can get boring however “Alright, everyone, spoiler alert. To the left of us is the stretch of river we are gonna be going down.”
>Cadence peers over the edge, you and Anon also take a peek out of the bed of the truck
>Anon looks like he’s going to be sick
>Its not even THAT high up!
>Maybe he gets carsick?
>“Like I said before, it's gonna mostly be a pretty easy ride down the river. None of the rapids are terribly harsh.” Other Anon continues to drive up the river “Oh yeah... Generally, the only places you are gonna find the rapids is where another stream enters into the main river. All those extra boulders and shit getting dumped in is what makes the water rough.”
>You didn’t catch ANY of that
>Incog speaks. "Neat."
>Everyone else continues to look out the window at the barren red canyon.
>Mostly because, well, Rainbow Dash talks a lot. Weird considering she is rumored to be very VERY hateful towards changelings.
>“So, uhh, having fun traveling around, Cadence?”
"It's WAY better than what I had been doing before, and I feel like I'm doing good in the world now with Anon."
>You pause thinking over your past.. adventure, and you havn’t helped a lot, but the ponies and Sisters you have helped makes you feel good. And the occasional outbursts from Anon are fun
"Even if he is a bit strange."forgot my trip
>>27599856
> Maud and Cadence begin a little more small talk.
>You can’t help but not care too much, you’re too busy focusing on Rainbow Dash’s emotions to make sure you don’t fuck up too much
>Of course the hive generally seems to agree you’re just over reacting and she isn’t a thread
>Half an hour later
>wow you made it alive!
>Before you is a gravel road and a large but mostly empty parking lot
>The other Anon seems to be thinking about something
>You hop out with a flutter of your wings, follow by RD and Anon
>Before you even make it out however there is one other note said by the Anon
>“Alright, ya'll. Let's get out, and get ready for a day of fun in the sun, on the river.”
>Kay
>Let the fun begin
>>27599866
Oh look its Fireking, awesome
>still a crossover
nevermind
>>27600182
LikingPanderking
>not liking crossovers
Sucks to be you then.
>>27600437
>>27600182
>>27600508
That's adorable. Not as adorable as Silver Spoon, but still pretty adorable.
Well, life has kicked my hard lately so writing time's been scarce. Nonetheless, I'm not going to give up on F&S quite yet.
> The next morning once again finds you curled warm and snug beneath the covers.
> Which is quite strange, since the last thing you remember is being wrapped in a blanket and back near one of the bubble canopies.
> Though it might explain the also-warm and gently-moving thing that you're stretched over.
> Cracking one eye open, you try to inspect just how bad your current position was and whether the amount of blood that was about to end up in your cheeks would be risky to your health.
> The answer, you decided after a moment, was full-on-in-danger-of-a-stroke territory.
> At least when he'd brought you in from nearly dying, he'd kept you off to one side.
> Now you'd somehow to wedge yourself in between the cabin wall and his body, sprawled mostly over his chest with your head firmly seated somewhere around his shoulder.
> Which in and of itself wouldn't have been too bad, except one wing and a leg were extended out across his chest and a hindhoof had somehow fallen in between his two legs.
> In the interest of self-preservation and avoiding death by blood-rush, you conclude that there wasn't anything to be emberassed about here.
> Nope.
> Nothing at all.
> Not one bit.
> ...
> Though it couldn't hurt to see if you can get out of this.
> The deep aches and humiliating weakness of the prior day had withdrawn, leaving you just feeling stiff and sore all over.
> Maybe if you try and twist as you get up-
> Nope.
> His arm is around you as well.
> That probably explains whatever is sitting in the middle of your back, just between your wings.
> Okay, so you're going to have to scoot out forwards, and-
> Nope, his arm just tightens around you.
> Wait a minute...
"Anonymous?"
> "Mmmm?"
"You've been awake the whole time, haven't you?"
> "Mmm-hmm."
> The wing you'd had stretched across his chest reaches up to bat him across the face.
>>27601120
VERY GOOD.
>>27601120
> Laughing at the gesture, Anonymous uses his free hand to push it away.
> "Well, you didn't quite seem ready to get up yet!"
"You still could've said something."
> "Nah. Too much fun."
> Dropping your head back to rest on his shoulder, you roll your eyes sharply.
"So, I guess you brought me back here last night?"
> "Yeah, well after you kind of conked out against me I figured you needed a bit more rest. But, you kind of latched on to my arm when I tried to move you..."
> ...oh.
> Well...
> Truth be told, you're not sure you mind too much.
> And not just because you're forcing yourself to say that.
> "Hey, Spitfire?"
"Huh?"
> "You alright? Went all kind of quiet on me."
"Yeah, I'm fine."
> You don't believe it, your voice doesn't believe it, and if Anonymous has two brain cells to rub together he won't believe it either.
> "Sure about that?"
> Figured.
"Yeah, I..."
> Shifting down a little bit, you pick your head up and frown.
> Your mane must be an utter mess, from the way it's drooping into your eyes.
> Consequences of getting it soaked and then not remotely trying to fix it.
"Hey... stupid question, but you believe in fate and all that, right? Like what you've been saying, about getting to a certain point and that's it...?"
> "Uh, I guess so?"
"D'you believe in destiny too?"
> Eyebrows rising, Anonymous tilts his head.
> "Not what I expected you to ask."
> A second later, he adds:
> "I'd have thought you would have believed in destiny, if anything. With your butt-marks and all that."
"Talent and destiny aren't the same thing. I'm talented at flying. Maybe even talented at leading... but since I got my cutie mark, I thought I was destined to be captain of the Wonderbolts as well. Destined to be a leader."
> Finally sliding up on one elbow, Anonymous cocks his head as he listens to you talk:
"When I made Captain, everything felt right. I think - that's how I handled it. Even when I screwed up, I believed I belonged there.
>>27601137
"Even after I was captured, even after I was sold, beaten, sold again - I knew I had to lead. I had to break out and put the 'bolts back together, get back home, because that was my destiny. I had to take care of them, because that was my path. Now..."
> The words feel bitter on your tongue, like speaking them is swallowing a poison.
"I'm... tired of leading. Celestia help me. I'm tired of being responsible. Waking up like this - being taken care of for once - it felt good. But it doesn't feel right either. Like I'm cutting off part of myself."
> "This why you decided you suddenly wanted to come back with me?"
"Some of it."
> Lowering your head back to his side, you heave a heavy sigh.
"Y'know how you were talking about how you should've known how out of it I was when you sent me out to scout the landing spot and shouldn't have sent me out?"
> "Yeah?"
"You couldn't have known. When - when Giselle admitted that she was thinking about leaving, I as much as told her to. She wanted to go home so badly..."
> Sucking another hard breath in, you go on.
"I told her, since we hadn't seen any other griffons she should stay with us until we hit the mainland. But then the next morning..."
> "...they showed up, and she wanted to go so badly she didn't even think of what might happen."
> Anonymous' hand moves up, settling on your shoulder and giving a squeeze.
> The action tickles your collar slightly, and you laugh bitterly as you feel its weight on your neck shift.
"Maybe it was my destiny to end up wearing this. Maybe it was a sign that it was time for me to give up, and I should've listened."
> After a long few moments, he replies:
> "To answer your original question, I don't believe in destiny. I think that we all have to face the one day when our time comes, but that's different. Destiny says you don't have a choice. I say, what you do still changes what that day is going to be like."
>>27601167
> You'd reply, but his fingers are currently doing something magical to the bands of muscle across your back that support your wings.
> "The hard thing is, that means we have to be responsible for our choices too. But it doesn't mean we have to let them eat us up. That make sense?"
"Mmm."
> "Good."
> It hadn't been a flat affirmative, but that was okay.
> "The way I see it, you'd been leaning on your teammates to be a measure of how you were doing. After they were gone, though, you started being your own judge."
"Always judged m'self..."
> "Yes, but you had their comments to compare against. After all that, there wasn't anyone you respected or cared enough about to take their word on."
"So I tore m'self a new one instead. S'pose so."
> "Seems like. Now, I'm not saying you just needed a good hug - though I'm not complaining about this either -"
> Your tail flicks and cheeks feel a touch of heat at the reminder of your situation.
> "-but, it seems to me you just needed someone to snap you back into the proper frame of reference somehow. Again."
"S'probably true. The first few months apart..."
> You hesitate, flinching at the thought of bringing up those memories, but forge ahead:
"...don't take this the wrong way, but you can't imagine what it's like in there. Whipping or beating, the shock collar, getting hosed down with icewater - all of that I could take."
> Mouth opening to reply, Anonymous is instead cut off as you go on:
"Don't pity me or anything. It's nothing nopony else didn't endure too, and I could deal with all of that better than a lot of them. But just, the incessant imprisonment?"
> Head twisting over, you bring it down to rest on its side across his chest.
> The deep, slow thump-thump of his heart reaches your ear, and you nod.
"So yeah. I turned pretty hard on myself, just to stay sane."
> "I know about being hard on myself. I'd say to trust me, but you already know that story."
>>27601178
"Says the guy who tried to badmouth himself when I offered to stay along last night."
> Anonymous laughs - with your ear against his chest, it's a deeper and more resonant sound.
> "That's different. That's me making sure you don't walk into something under false assumptions about who I am."
"You put up with a lot of stuff from me."
> "I put a lot of money into you as well."
> Snorting softly, you flick your tail against his leg again and roll your eyes.
> He can't see the eyes, of course, but it feels right.
> Following that, you lay quietly in that position - cheek to his chest, the fabric of his shirt doing little to muffle the regular pace of his heart.
> After the last few frenetic days bouncing from place to place, barely escaping with your life more than once, the moment of peace seems...
> ...justified.
> As though reality had finally recognized the massive debt it'd been running up against you lately.
> "I don't think, though, that just going back is going to... absolve you of that responsibility."
"I know."
> Your gaze roams across the narrow cabin, taking in the aging aircraft that you'd come to call home.
> The flaking paint, raced through by lines of cracks.
> The scuffed floors, rubbed down where innumerable cargos had been dragged over them.
> The empty bed on the far side that you'd been given.
> Once a welcome gift, now it looked... empty.
> Lonely.
"Yeah, I know. I'm not expecting it will. But it'll mean I'll have someone to - how'd you put it? Lean on to be a measure of how I'm doing."
> Anonymous makes a small affirmative noise, his hand settling back on your head - free ear flicking at the touch, but not unhappily.
"Y'know, we should get up at some point and that isn't helping convince me."
> "You can. I'm not moving just yet."
"Well, then I think I'll be staying a bit longer as well."
> Especially if he keeps scratching the edge of your ear like that!
>>27601194
> "...you know, if I knew all it'd take to get you this attached to being in my bed was to screw up that badly, I'd have done that a lot sooner and-"
> This earns him a wing again lightly batted across the face, and a smug smirk from your lips.
"Your only screw up is not knowing when to keep your mouth shut."
> "And you'd know?"
"Yes, I would. I'd say I'm an expert in it, in fact."
> "Alright then, miss expert, I guess I'm not moving either."
"What, the slave controlling the master with just a touch? I'm shocked. If I'd known this was your weakness, I'd have done this a lot sooner as well."
> "Hey, it feels nice. I won't deny that. Plus..."
> Head leaning up until his lips are almost at your ear, he adds in a conspiratorial whisper:
> '...one of your legs is on my balls, and I'm not going anywhere until you let that up."
> If your cheeks had gotten any hotter, they'd probably have set the sheets on fire.
that's a lot of green
>>27601218
Says a lot about their relationship that he feels comfortable enough to be lewd with her.
>>27601218
Spoilers for possible endings...I really hope you don't just kill him off now. Plane could go down she tries and fails(or succeeds)to break his fall.
Anyways. This twist your story has taken is much appreciated.
>>27595334
Nothing in your last story game me any inclination that English was not your first language.
Where you from?
>>27590251
>...silver...
>...spoon...
>"...silver spoon..."
>The whole world is rocking side to side.
>With the rocking something is calling out to you.
>"Silver spoon."
"...mom...?"
>Suddenly there is a tightness in your chest.
>On your chest.
>Warm fuzzy tightness wrapped around your chest.
>Light.
>You see a bright light ahead of you.
>You remember stories about a bright light.
>When Celestia helps a pony go home.
>But not home, like your house...
>The green fields of paradise.
>And the light was very bright.
>She should tone it town.
>Celestia's light hurts your eyes.
>That's kind of a jerk move.
>Blinding ponies after they...
>Die.
>Oh no...
>The bad men.
>The knife.
>Now a bright light...
>>27602414
Either Celestia is a bitch or Spoon is still alive. I approve of both.
>>27601218
>>27601930
yes. best story.
Green! Fuck yeah!
>>27540057
bump
>>27602414
Don´t go into the light!
Unbreakable filly when?
when?
Bamp
>tfw no pair of cute little pony slaves to hitch to a cart and take for a nice relaxing drive through the park to give them their exercise
>>27607578
>you gently snap the reins on your pony-team's rumps
"Giddyup, girls"
>they silently comply with smiles on their faces, happy to get out of the house after being cooped up all day
>the rhythmic sounds of clopping hooves and creaking harness leather nearly lull you to sleep as your faithful ponies maintain a lazy trot while you guide them toward the local park with the reins in your hand
>others look on in jealousy at your beautiful, well-groomed mares as the three of you pass by
>you stop at a small pond near the middle of the park to let your cute little ponies catch their breath and get a drink of water
>unhitch them from their harness and lay back in the grass, watching them frolic and play with each other for several minutes, allowing yourself to catch a brief nap
>you don't fear for a single second that they might run away while you nod off
>you trust them, after all your little ponies love their master more than anything in the world
>this is the life
>>27607655
comfy/10 more like this please
>>27607655
>you wake up to find that one of them has snuggled up to you under each arm and they're fast asleep as well
>>27607655
daww
>>27607655
I want more stories about pony slaves that have accepted their place in human society and love their benevolent masters with all their heart.
>>27607655
>letting them drink filthy park pond water that hobos shit and wash their asses in
Truly you are an evil owner.
>>27608194
>letting them go thirsty after forcing them to pull your lard ass in a cart for several miles
>>27608226
>forcing them
I dunno, I didn't see any force being used. Even a little snap on the rump with the reins is more just a signal to them to get going, it probably doesn't even hurt. Seems to me like they wanted to do it, to get out and stretch their legs. What better way to thank their loving, doting master for working tirelessly all day to provide for them than by taking him for a nice little ride to/through the park?
>tfw the only way anything would ever love you is because they're your slave and they have to
>>27608226
>not bringing fresh, clean water with you so your ponies don't have to drink shit water
>>27608326
Fine, fine. Let's just say they got a drink from the park's drinking fountain or something.
>>27607816
Maybe a generation or two down the line?
But then fridge horror thought pops up...
Are ponies forced to breed, or forced to give up their foals?
>>27608342
>Are ponies forced to breed, or forced to give up their foals?
real horses are so ponies probably are too
it's an unfortunate reality of slavery that's probably unavoidable for it to be sustained in the long-term
>>27608342
>>27608370
Someone wrote a prompt here that I really wish someone would have picked up. Something about a loving, kind Anon picking up a slave mare that he didn't know was pregnant, and she either dies while foaling or shortly thereafter, and records a message for her filly telling her to be a good girl for her master, and that he'll take care of her and watch over her.
>>27608393
>slave mare was raised from a filly by her master
>has never known the sting of the lash or any other similar harsh treatment
>is completely clueless just how bad some ponies have it
>she's always been fairly sheltered from the world
>always treated like family by her master
>she loves him dearly
>nothing pleases her more than master telling her what a good girl she is for doing her chores
>or snuggling up to him in bed at night after both having a long hard day of work
>she wakes up one morning and Master is nowhere to be found
>she's chained to the ground
>she looks up and sees a strange man holding a whip
>she tilts her head and looks at him curiously as he unfurls it and walks toward her
>"W..where's master?" she asks innocently, no idea what's about to happen
>>27339607
>the filly belonged to Anon's former slave
>they were lovers
>Anon had no idea she was pregnant when he bought/rescued her
>neither did she
>filly's mommy gets really sick when filly is around 2 years old or so
>knows she's not going to be around much longer
>records a video for her daughter to see when she's old enough to understand
>"Mommy doesn't have long left, but she wanted to make sure she left something behind for you, so that you never forget her voice. I love you so much my sweet baby girl. Be a good girl for our Master. If you turned out anything like me I know you might not like some of his rules but they're for your own good. I promise, baby, he's just trying to do what's best for you, even if you don't always understand why or like it. He loves you, little one, just as he loved me. We'll meet again some day. Goodbye."
>>27608342
Ponies are sold by a large corporation (such as Hasbro) as created things, the company keeps the portals secret and all ponies from the time of the invasion will never see Earth. Instead ponies with the desired genetic traits (subservience, cuteness, etc) are "encouraged" into breeding programs, with their offspring taken, indoctrinated to think they are created artificially (allthough this may be true after they perfect in-vitro fertilization and the ability to use defects as surrogate wombs) and never know of their homeland despite the facilities being held in what was once Equestria. Of course, all the ponies sold are sterile as to increase profits.
All ponies with non desired traits are killed and sold as a delicacy on the grey market
>>27608489
2dark4me
>>27608410
I want this now. Break my heart, anon.
Its obvious Donald Trump would have a large number of slaves, but which horse would he invest in first?
>>27608679
Fleur, esp if he showered her with expensive gifts.
>>27595334
Excelent work here Klaiffernon, at first as others thought you were reliving the classic "Skittles" but now I see that you are creating your own story.
Continues! you have my support!
>>27608713
>buying your slave gifts
>>27608901
>not buying your cute little mare a brand new shiny leather collar when she's a good girl
>not buying her a nice new warm fuzzy blanket and brand new sturdy wooden pony bed with a giant floofy pillow in it to cuddle up in when you're not around so she doesn't have to shiver and whine on the cold, hard, lonely floor
>not buying her a teddy bear or other plushie to snuggle with while she naps and dreams about you coming home to love her
>>27599866
Need more ling here Fireking!
>buy slave mare because of crushing loneliness and desperation for a friend
>too beta to ever hurt or dominate her
>explain to her why you bought her, that all you want is her companionship
>she will never like or love you
>she will never willingly be your friend/companion
>she will resent the fact that she's a slave and resent you for being her owner until the day she dies
>tfw you can't even force something that's technically your property to be your friend
I'm working writing some greentext story, but I haven't done this before. It would be about a changeling being slave to a pony. Would that be welcome in this thread?
>>27609187
It sounds like you both are in a stalemate.
>Nothing prevents the mare tried to flee, but he also knows that if they catch their punishment will be taught by others to consider one a fugitive or a wild animal, so no choice but to stay with an apathetic, weak character, indecisive and coward human who she detests with all the soul
>>27602414
>Your eyes begin to focus.
>Blurry shapes begin to form faces looking at you.
>That lamp above you has no right to be that bright.
>You look down at the tight feeling.
>Jenny is leaning over the side of the bed hugging you.
>You slowly move a hoof to rest on her head buried in your chest fluff.
>She looks up at you with a teary smile.
>Jan pries her off of you.
>"Silver Spoon, you're okay now. The doctor fixed you."
>You notice the face of the doctor.
>An old woman with kind sad eyes.
>You look down at the cut on your belly.
>The fur around it has been shaved off.
>You can see the thread of the stitches running along the wound in your smooth pink skin.
>Running your hoof over the stitches, you can fee the sting of the tender skin.
>Stinging is good.
>Stinging is pain, pain means alive.
>Coming to that thought, you've never been so happy to hurt.
>Jenny looks up at the doctor.
>"Can we take her home now?"
>"Yes, but you will have to make sure her belly is healing, so you will have to check up on her each night."
writer's block yo
got any ideas?
I have some for later, but for now, I'm at an impasse.
Also sleep deprivation.
I can leave the sotry here for now, or some one else can pick it up.
>>27609382
What if Spoon was able to identify one of the people who originally kidnapped her?
>>27609382
Well, you could explore the motivation of those guys who attacked Silver Spoon first, or the work of the husband, perhaps to include aspects of the past of the wife and because of his training to fight, even very soon but might consider in the future include other ponies in the tale
G`nigth
>>27609382
Oh, and I love your work Spoons, you are the best. I hadn't said that yet. Thank you!
>>27609301
if it has slavery and ponies it's ok.
It will depend what you focus the story about, most of the stories are about white knights and rehabilitated slaves
>>27609382
Find Diamond Tiara chained up in someone's front yard with a sign for sale signand many cum stains
>>27596062
>>27608750
This was at first supposed to be a Skittles backstory, where Anon fails in resquing her and she returns to her prev owner but I don't have a stomach for stuff like that.
>>27602151
I'm from Czech. But I'm not really proud of it.
>>27595334
>the sun shines trough the window, causing you to wake up
>but it lasts only for a few seconds, before the clouds hide it again
„Fucking hell.“
>with a loud yawn, you stand up and continue to your bathroom, almost forgetting Dash is on the couch in the living room
>you're standing there, staring at her for a while before remembering about yesterday, and why your brow is torn
>maybe you should get some clothes on you at least. You're just in your underwear and tshirt
>but maybe you don't give a damn
>it's your own house after all, you could walk around naked if you wanted to
>at least you still have more clothing than she has
>you do some morning hygiene, and now it's time for breakfast
>what's it gonna be?
>in the sink, there's the plate from yesterday and two apple cores in the trash
>still half full glass of water is standing on the table next to the couch Dash is sleeping on
>she lets out a little snore sound just when you look at her
>makes you chuckle a bit, she looks like a big puppy right now
>your stomach gurgles, interrupting you from your thoughts
>need to eat something, something warm
>you crack open few eggs and slice the rest of the bread
>bread in egg it is for today
>the sound of oil crackling wakes your sleepy companion up
>first it's just a flinch of her ear, then she smells the food being prepared
>at the first opening of her eyes, she yanks from confusion
>almost immediately, in the „ready to run/kick something“ stance
„What the hell?“ you mutter to yourself, not giving her that much attention
>then she notices you, making the breakfast
>„Oh.“ she exhales out
„'Mornin. Slept well?“
>“I guess...Good morning.“
>>27610600
>gulping the rest of the water she readied by the couch, she comes closer to see what you're preparing
>her mouth waters from the sight of the food and you can hear her gulping down the saliva
>but she doesn't say anything
>you put three fried slices of bread in egg on a plate, which you slide closer to her
„Here. Mustard and ketchup and the rest is on the table already.“
>she gives you bit confused look
>“I though you wanted me to do housework for letting me sleep here. Like making breakfast and stuff.“
„I already said I can manage by myself. I never needed any help, but you do.“
>“So you're saying that you're doing all of this just like that? What do you really want? Are you planning something?“
„Pfft, Jesus.“ you don't bother to answer, because you'd just have to repeat yourself
>but she's still looking at you, awaiting you to say something
>you put down the wooden spoon and turn your vision at the pony
„Look, you needed help. Was I supposed to just leave you there?“
>“Well, you're not the first human to pretend he's all good and caring about others. Humans are cruel mindplayers. That's how I ended up being a slave in the first place.“ she says in arrogant-suspicious tone
>normally, if someone talked to you this way, you'd probably get angry, but this is a bit different
>although, she still rustles your jimmies a bit. But not enough for you to actualy flip, so you answer calmly:
„You should have seen yourself yesterday night. Alone and weak. I took you with me, because otherwise I'd feel guilty, leaving you there to get caught again. Or freeze to death overnight. I could see behind that brave pose of yours. Strong, fearless...sarcastic. But not even that deep inside, you were so desperate.“
>>27610613
>what you said leaves her kinda shocked
>first you see the anger in her expression, then sadness
>maybe you overdid it, but all you did was say the truth
>“You haven't been trough things I was. You have no idea...“
>a moment of silence, just the sounds of oil on the hot frying pan
„True I haven't...I also never said that I'm judging you. I'm just telling you why I'm helping.“
>saying that, makes her expression change, while reasurring herself again
>“So...you're really doing this just because you'd care about random pony's messed up life? No side intentions?“
„Basically. Not all humans are bad to the bone you know.“
>with a grin you add: „Some just on the outside layer.“
„Anyway, you weren't so suspicious about me yesterday.“
>“That was because I was weak. You were right, I wasn't really strong, I was just desperate. Clinging on any kind of hope I could get...Though, it didn't get me in even worse trouble this time. Hopefuly.“
„As always? Did anything like that happened before?“
>“I don't wanna talk about it...Sorry Anon. I ain't gonna just spill my feelings to someone I barely know...“
„Okay then. You already said enough for a conlusion anyway. It's because someone promised you better life, but you ended up like this, right?“
>she looks at you seriously. As she talks, you can see the anger building up inside of her. But as if combined with sorrow. None of it pointed at you though
>“It's not that simple...I would never think someone could possibly be so rotten inside to do such a thing just like that. He even smiled like nothing is happening, as they dragged me away!“
>as she calms again in upcoming few seconds, she continues with a bitter grin
>“You really know how to get anwers out of someone. Always strumming on the right strings...You humans are good at these things, are you?“
>>27610620
„No...You're just bad at not telling.“ you laugh
„But seriously. I've been trough some shit as well. Not as hard as you, but I know all these scenarios. You give your trust, your secrets to someone, one day realizing you made a terrible mistake. That happens once, twice, maybe even thrice. So next time you want to keep it all to yourself, because it makes you feel too fragile when you don't.“
>“Well, but your mistakes didn't get you into literal slavery.“ she grins
>“You know, part of me wants to beleive you right in an instant. It would be nice to see a decent human being, but it's hard to really beleive in such things after what I've met.“
„Well, if you want to, you're free to go. I already said I'm not holding you. No side intentions. But you should eat some breakfast at least.“ you bring the plate even closer
>she looks trough the window, seeing it's snowing pretty bad outside
>“I kinda think I'll stay a bit longer...“ she takes the plate and continues with it to the table
>you hear a loud sigh
>“Well, considering you're still letting me...I guess I'm not being very nice, am I?“
„Sort of.“
>few moments of silence, just you, frying the rest of the bread and her, sitting on the chair and staring at the table with a scrunch on her muzzle
>“I-...Y'know, I still remember what you said in that bus. And I um, just want you to know I...I appreciate it. It really did help.“
„Glad to know.“ you smirk
>“You really did quite a lot for me, but so far I weren't really giving you any reasons to keep helping. To be honest, I'm kinda surprised you're not even a little bit angry at me.“
„Heh, maybe I was few times.. But anger is not the solution to anything.“
>“I guess…I'll at least do the houserwork as I promised. Just tell me things you need done and I'll do it. I'm no freeloader.“
„I can't think of anything right now, maybe later. Now you should finally eat something.“
>>27610600
>bread in egg
Thats french toast here in 'Murrica.
Probably something entirely different in France.
>>27610687
I figured he just meant a fired egg on toast. or pic.
>>27610600
>I'm from Czech
Yoo reporting in, bruh.
>>27610736
That's egg-in-a-hole.
Fried right, with plenty of butter and a pinch of salt, drizzle a little bit of maple syrup on the toast. Use fork to cut a chunk of toast free, dip in the runny egg yoke.
>>27609382
I'd like you to continue it. Anyone else would probably make it grimdark or somethingI know I would without even tryingand that would ruin the feel.
Aside from the knifingand even then, because of how you wrote it, it's been a very comfortable story. Stabbed Silver Spoon holding a lollipop is, I hesitate to say adorable, but it it was.
It would be a shame to lose that by letting someone else take over.
How about a nice little scene with Jimmy holding Silver protectively as she sleeps?And possibly swearing revenge.
>>27610600
Good beging of the Chapter 2(?)
>>27610613
This anon must be psychologist, he has experience with victims of trauma or experiment similar situations in the past.
Would not be bad that anon is nurse, a clinic volunteer or just a person too empathetic with the others
>Despite everything, you still bump this thread
>>27608679
>Trump owning slaves
>not setting ponies free
>not sending them back to equestria
>not building a wall around the portals
>>27609187
She doesn't have to legitimately like me, she just has to fake it enough that I don't easily notice.
If I wanted real friends I'd go out and make some.
>>27613544
>slave mare is unruly and disobedient
>tells you you're a terrible person every time she opens her muzzle
>refuses to even pretend to like you
what do?
>>27613725
Well I guess that mare is for whipping until she changes her attitude.
>>27613748
>doesn't like you
>won't even pretend to like you
>flogging her will somehow change her mind
nigga...
>>27613764
Fear of punishment has a way of bringing slaves into line, Anon.
>>27613796
Sure, if you want a pone Reek
>>27613725
Rent her out.
Use the money to buy a better mare.
>>27613815
I don't know what that means.
>>27613818
>rent mare slave out
>she injures your first customer
>you are now liable for his medical bills
>mare is too dangerous to rent out
>but while ponies are slaves, killing her is still against the law
now what?
>>27613886
>tfw you will never break an unruly mare's spirit with cruelty and build her back up into the perfect loyal little cuddleslut
>>27613896
>breaking her with cruelty
>not "breaking" her with love and kindness
you don't deserve mare slave
>>27613929
Spare the whip, spoil the mare.
>>27613947
>>27613929
Not killing all slave owners in a fit of Discord induced rage infection.
>>27613929
>implying you can't punish slave mare and still love her
What, I guess parents that spank their kids must not really love them either, according to you.
>>27613971
Physical punishment has proven time and again by every study ever done on the subject to be ineffective, counterproductive, and psychologically damaging in the long term.
>>27613989
but oh so satisfying.
>>27613989
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-8cqzAUsArM
>>27613886
Rent out mare to underground pony fighting ring.
We've had green of this.
>>27614026
>mare comes to you all shakey and teary eyed
>she doesn't want to fight
>she's scared
>she'll pretend to be your friend
>she'll even let you give her a rough muzzle-fucking whenever you want, and even swallow
>just don't make her fight
>>27614047
>rough muzzle-fucking
unf... there needs to be more green on this subject
>>27614026
>TFW people remember your green
>>27614058
I don't know why but I really want a scene where mare slave is being forced to suck her master off for the first time, complete with loud sobbing, runny, snotty nose, coughing, choking, sputtering and retching, maybe even throwing up after she's forced to swallow
>>27613815
>>27613870
"Reek" is a GoT reference.
>>27607655
Yes, this is what mares are for, driving, not whipping.
>>27614110
>implying you can't whip mare while driving her
>>27614110
>pony chauffeur
>>27614119
why whip mare? you can just tell her to go faster
she's a good girl and loves her master, whipping her will hurt her feelings and make her scared of you
you don't really want that do you anon?
>>27614047
>muzzle fuck
Nah, no matter how much she pretends, I know she hates me.
Wouldn't put my penis anywhere near her teeth.
>>27613886
>giving her free range of motion
>not tying/chaining her up so she can't move at all and telling patrons the mouth is off limits for their own safety
<---
>go to pony auction
>all pones seem scared and depressed
>except for one
>big red stallion with green apple on his butt
>nobody is interested in him for some reason
>perks up when he notices you looking him over
>smiles and swishes his bobbed tail
>cute
>you get him for a bargain
>before you can grab his leash he runs toward you, ducking his head between your legs and scooping you up onto his back
>"Which way is home, master?"
"Uh, thanks, but we'll just take my car."
>he deflates when you dismount him
>when you arrive home he does it again and carries you to the front door
>you could swear you feel him wriggle his back up into your butt and crotch and give a barely perceptible sigh feeling your weight shift around on top of him
>you try to make him stop, but it's no use
>he does this shit every chance he gets
>turns out this stallion really, REALLY likes when his masters ride him
>he won't take no for an answer
>he's even injured a few of his previous masters on accident with his over-enthusiasm
>sheepishly asks you if you'll buy him a saddle and bridle if he's a good boy
>begs you to let him take you to the store, to friends' houses, to work
>he's never happy unless you're on his back
>whimpers and cries whenever you dismount him
>even if you've been on him for hours
>tries to sneak into your bed at night and wriggle himself up in between your legs so your butt is touching his back
What do? Keep stallion or get refund?
>>27614339
Ah butt stallion, I wondered were Jack got him from.
>>27610643
Very good, if trust is a two-way street I think better taketh the fastest route to a gorge
I like more than Dash keep his personality, something damaged and full of resentment, that's better suited to the world of humans.
Let's see where it leads this
>>27610600
>I'm from Czech. But I'm not really proud of it.
No matter where you are, on 4chan do not ask your passport
And relax, the only thing you should be proud of your stories
>>27614339
Keep stallion, can't let such a strong, eager pony go to waste.
>>27613886
Search the net for clandestine support groups for ponies slaves and try to arrange a meeting for them to get treatment, then organize a sufficiently credible theft to the rental agency believe that truly you were attacked and stole his valuable property
>>27614339
Keep stallion. Ride stallion every day until he gets tired. Ride him some more. Sit on stallion all day while I do my work. He doesn't get a saddle though. Bareback feels much nicer. I wanna feel his strong, supple body between my leg and under my ass. I wanna feel his spine bend ever so slightly under my weight as he bears it all, his muscles tensing as his body adapts to the strain of supporting mine.
But I also have a pony riding fetish, so having a pony with a fetish for being ridden would be a match made in heaven.
>>27614445
This, a million times.
>>27614339
>What do? Keep stallion or get refund?
Keep the stallion and buy one new pony, one mare, one timid, obedient and cute mare that the first thing to take her to my house is shaking like a leaf and mourn begging to go home
>>27614473
for whipping?
>>27614422
This fella will need much ointment to relieve the friction on her thighs and saddle
>>27614493
Pony backs are soft and comfy, no need to worry about friction
>>27614422
>thicc poni with thicc rider
unf
>>27614481
No, to have someone to comfort you every time you ride the stallion and end up with legs bent like horseshoes
>>27614507
really?
>>27614533
>implying infinite pony rides aren't worth the risk of becoming a little bow-legged
>>27614544
>wake up one morning to find yourself superglued to pone's back
>literal infinite pony rides
>>27614617
but then how will I shit or piss?
>>27614639
Pony did not think that far ahead.
>>27614639
>>27614654
You go on the pony. Then you have to clean up every time.
Pony regrets his life choices.
>>27614682
>implying pony didn't know this would happen
>implying he didn't WANT you to shit and piss all over his back
>>27614639
>but then how will I shit or piss?
>>27614736
EEUUGHGH
>>27614654
Whelp, time to push pony to his limits, because you have to get to the ER before you end up soiling his back.
>>27614422
>pony gets an erection, clearly aroused by you riding him
>wrap your legs tight around him, bringing your feet together around his shaft
>give him a foot job while he trots along with you on his back
>cums so hard he passes out
>>27614887
Your ride home's incapacitated. And you have to clean him up later.
You regret your life choices.
>>27614887
>>27614910
this was not well thought out.
>>27614887
>>27614910
>tfw stallion slave will never cum on your feet
>>27615235
What a waste of good pony cum. I'd rather he cum in my mouth.
>>27615315
I'd buy a stallion slave for the sole purpose of sucking his dick and eating his cum every day.
>>27614003
Where there's a whip... mare's a slave.
>30+ posts in the last 2 hours
Hmm. To green now, or wait until the thread rolls over?
>>27615594
go ahead and dump it now m8
you can always pastebin it and drop the link in the next thread before you continue
If you could have any number of viciously loyal, absolutely adoring, hard-working, beautiful and happy little pony slaves how many would you want?
>>27615620
Are we assuming I can afford to buy, house, and feed them all, or am I still working within my budget?
>>27615650
You will be provided adequate resources to care for them all. However if you have too many some of them might start to become sad that they don't get enough personal attention from Master.
>>27615663
I think the maximum number of pone slaves I could realistically split my attention between would be 8-10.
>>27615701
>have 10 pone slaves
>5 laying side by side underneath you
>5 laying side by side on top of you
>ultimate comfy snuggle sandwich
Okay, dump it is. This is what happens when you sick people like >>27608342 put things in my head, by the way.
> The scuffling of hooves drags you up from the thin sack of straw you'd been sleeping on.
> It's not just the noise of hoofsteps but unsteady, irregular ones.
> A new arrival?
> Before you can come to the door of your cell, it flies open instead.
> Through comes the stallion you hate the most in the world.
> "Sunny!"
"...hello, Written Script."
> "Oh, Sunny! I am so dearly sorry to have interrupted your nap-"
> No, he isn't.
> He's always had a tendency towards the flamboyant, and his tone is littered with clues.
> "-but you won't believe what arrived today!"
> Best to play his game.
> You move to peer around him, but the tall stallion quickly blocks the doorway.
> "Nonononono. Guess, Sunny! Guess!"
"...a new slave."
> Instantly the grey stallion's face darkens, his game ruined.
> "...aww, how'd you know?"
> Because it's the only thing he ever gets excited about.
> Some new poor foal to keep pinned under his iron hoof.
"Guess I was just lucky?"
> "Too damn lucky. Anyway-"
> A tug on the leash held in his magic grip - a leash you hadn't noticed until now - and a mare stumbles through the door after him.
> Not a foal, though - in fact, a reasonably older mare.
> Pretty, with a cloud-grey coat only a few shades lighter that Written Sript himself and a white and purple mane.
> Her eyes dart about, pupils shrunken, and you get the feeling she'd be questioning a great deal if not for the bridle holding her jaws firmly shut.
"She's... nice."
> "She's yours, Sunny!"
> Breath catches in your throat as your heart freezes.
"I..."
> "No arguing! Masters' orders!"
> Written Script throws a hoof over your shoulders; you grunt at the sudden weight.
> "Congratulations, Sunny! You got yourself a nice little mare now - I told you Master wouldn't wait too long with his little project!"
"...yes. I'm... thrilled."
>>27615770
> "Come on, kiddo! Don't you have anything to say? Getting one put under you - this is big!"
> Swallowing the lump in your throat - but failing to swallow away the awful taste suddenly in your mouth - you put on an uneasy smile.
"Yeah, I... Thanks, Script. I - I really, really appreciate her. I'm... if, uh... if you could leave us be, I'd like to meet her."
> When he makes no move, you add:
"Privately."
> Written Script's eyes widen, and he nods furiously - a wide grin suddenly sprouting on his face.
> "Ooooh. Getting to work on the Master's project already? Always were dutiful, Sunny!"
> Trotting back out the door, he offers one last wink before it slams shut:
> "Enjoy her! The master'll be coming around tomorrow, want an update on his project!"
> Then he is gone, the door's bolt closing with a thunk from the far side.
> It.
> He couldn't even bring himself to refer to the poor mare as 'her'.
> Leaning over, you lay your forehead against the cool concrete of your quarters' wall and consider banging it until your horn came off or brain turned to mush, whichever came first.
"Fuck you, Script..."
> The words are barely audible, sputtered under your breath.
> "Mrrrr?"
> Gently, something soft touches your neck.
> Right, the mare.
> You'd almost forgotten about her.
> Lifting your head, you find her regarding you with uncertain but pitying eyes.
"...hey, sorry."
> A hoof rises to rub at your nose and tug at your scraggly beard.
"I, uh... he gets on my nerves."
> "Mmmm."
"Oh, right! Bridle - let me get that off of you."
> A flick of your horn and the straps around her jaw are released.
> "You have your magic?!"
> The mare's voice is soft, etched with pain but somehow still managing to convey an underlying warmth.
"Yes. Master... doesn't like our talents wasted. He has other ways of stopping problems."
> "So then I'll-"
> She goes slightly crosseyed as she tries to look up at her own horn.
>>27615777
"It'll come back in time, yes. As the drugs get out of your system. I'd advise against pushing it."
> "Oh."
"So... um... I guess I should say welcome."
> You look around the barren quarters:
> Cinderblock barely hidden by a few shelves of books and a single faded painting, light being provided by a pair of bulbs overhead (no shield - that had been missing when you'd gotten it).
"I don't know if Written Script explained it to you, but you're going to be working for me most of the time here. Staying here, too."
> "In... here?"
"Yes."
> You crack a small grin, shaking your head as you turn to retreat back from the first room.
> Following behind you, the mare's leash drags along the floor.
"They call this an 'apartment cell'. Three rooms - four, really; I put up a curtain around the toilet area - to ourselves. Windows in three of them, can be opened but they're barred. Light switches, but our power goes off at 10 PM same as everypony else's cells. Running water, some personal possessions..."
> The bitter smile returns to your face.
"Another 'reward for superior dedication to my tasks'."
> "Bedrooms?"
"Just the one. Seperate beds, though - bunks. I'll take top."
> The utter relief reflected on her face makes your stomach flip.
> Nauseated, you stagger slightly.
> "Are you alright?"
"Yes, I - I'm sorry."
> Settling on your haunches, you raise one hoof to rub at your forehead.
"Sometimes this... all still gets to me."
> "You've been a - here a long time then?"
"I've been a slave a while, yes. Four years now."
> "Two months, I think. We were in a crate on a ship for a long time, it was kind of hard to tell."
> Two months.
> They'd sent a freshly-caught mare into this?
> Mentally cursing Written Script and Master alike, you force yourself back up onto all fours.
"Well - Master doesn't hurt us for now reason, but don't go angering him. It - it's bad."
> "I know. Written Script, was that his name? He showed me the - the other cells."
>>27615790
> The urge to vomit returns, and suddenly the mare is at your side again.
> "I'm sorry! I didn't mean to-"
"No, it's okay. Script... I fucking hate him."
> Coloring, you add a moment later:
"Pardon my language. He was an 'unappreciated' playwright in Equestria, so now he makes sure everypony knows just how fucking important he is and how we should all kiss the ground he walks on."
> Lowering your head, you growl out:
"And of course he has all of us in a vice, since he's the one who's got Master's ear. Keeps us in line, and Master doesn't care what he does to us."
> "No, I... I understand. What, um - what do you do here?"
> The change of topic is awkward, but you feel like hugging her for managing it nonetheless.
> Turning aside into one of the open doorways, you point within to a furious mess of scrolls, gems, and assorted arcanic instruments mixed haphazardly with plastic-capped vials and a sleeping computer workstation.
"Magic research."
> The surprise is plain to see on her face.
> "Research? I'm - I'm sorry, I didn't know they had-"
> She cuts off again, and you shake your head.
"It's okay. You can say it - didn't know they had slaves doing research. Most don't, but Master's a little... obsessed with unicorn magic. Wants to ensure he always has the best unicorns ever."
> "Oh, well - that does explain some things."
"Some of what I do is just basic bookkeeping, basic health measures for the others here. But he also - he - what?"
> Smiling softly, Velvet sticks her neck in to look around the room.
> "I had heard Written Script say that he'd paid very richly for me, so he hoped the doctors hadn't lied... I don't know what he meant by that, though."
> You're quite glad that she's not facing you, and so isn't able to see the near-retch that runs through you.
"I... yeah."
> Interested in her.
> There's no way you can tell the truth.
> Celestia above, if she understood why she'd been given to you...
>>27615811
> "I mean, he must want to see if something runs in my blood."
"Huh?"
> "I'm..."
> She turns around to face you, looking almost ashamed.
> "I'm sorry - my name is Twilight Velvet. My children - they're Twilight Sparkle and Shining Armor."
> Your eyes widen and Twilight Velvet flushes, ducking her head and mumbling:
> "I don't like to brag about them, but with my children... yes, I suppose I can see how he would be interested in me."
"Sunburst."
> Breathlessly, almost panted, the name comes out.
> It's all you can manage to change the topic.
"My name's Sunburst. I was - Junior Wizard in the Crystal Empire. Your son-"
> "Oh, you knew him!"
"No, no - saw. Sometimes. At a distance."
> Unable to keep her gaze, you add more softly:
"He was a good pony. Is a good pony."
> Gently, Velvet reaches out to touch your cheek.
> "Thank you, dear. You're a good pony too, trying so hard like this."
> No.
> Anything but that.
> Please, please don't let her call you that.
> Your stomach twists again as her hoof brushes your cheek.
> "I can't imagine it's been easy holding up all this time, but you're clearly a good heart nonetheless and-"
"Miss Sparkle, please. Did - did Written Script tell you anything about what your job is going to be?"
> "To 'work with you', that was all. I supposed it would be simple things, but this - I suppose you'll want to be studying me?"
> Studying her.
> Celestia, no.
"I..."
> "Is, something wrong?"
"Miss Sparkle-"
> The words taste like bile and acid.
"I - I'm not supposed to study your blood. Not... not like with a microscope."
> "Well, I admit I'm no researcher, but I was a writer and I suppose I could be of help as best I can anyhow, and-"
"I'm supposed to breed you."
>>27615820
>"I'm supposed to breed you."
>>27615820
You chose good horses anon. Continue.
>>27615820
>I'm supposed to breed you
I totally forgot that they are still both slaves and the master has still ordered him to fuck her and neither of them have a choice
Its still on
>little slave mare wants to drink your pee, Master
Do you let her?
>>27615820
Damn anon...more
>>27615820
> The uncomprehending look on Twilight Velvet's face slowly dissolving into a mask of horror is more than you can bear.
> You're the first to collapse.
> Falling to your belly and retching out onto the floor what your stomach could no longer take.
> "No, you - you can't. I won't. I-"
"Not... not a choice. Script - showed you what happens to ponies before they go into the punishment cells."
> Spitting out the last dregs of the vomit, you lay on the cool floor and stare dully into the concrete wall rising in front of you.
"You refuse, you'll go to be punished and then into the cells. Not me - I'll be fine. It'll all fall on you, since he paid so much for you."
> When she doesn't respond, you add:
"Master... he's been breeding unicorns here for a while."
> "But - but Written Script -"
"Script?"
> You bark a laugh, harsh and angry.
"He's got some fancy Prench model in his cell, due in about two months. It'll be her... third, I think."
> Now it is Velvet's turn to stumble, falling to her haunches and leaning into the doorframe as the full depth of her situation hits her.
> "No... no. I - I can't. I won't!"
"You're right; I won't. I will not force you. But if you don't, I'm not going to lie about what will happen to you either. One way or another, the master wants what he gets."
> That gets her attention, and you shrug lightly.
"He'll take you down to be punished, throw you in a solitary cell for a week, then strap you to a rack and bring me in to do it that way."
> "I'm married..."
> The words are whispered as a final, desperate defense against the weight of truth.
> "He can't make me do that, I'm married. He-"
> She's cut off as you pull her head back, your magic seizing on the bridle still locked around her head.
> Using it to pull her head back and expose the thick collar locked around her neck, you give that a good tug until you know she can feel it.
>>27616611
"You feel this? You know what this means? You're nothing. Nothing but what you can do for Master. You give him what he wants, or you're punished. That's it. That's how we live now."
> "But, you-"
"Yes."
> Tilting your own head back to expose the same collar on your throat, you nod.
"I'm fucking nothing too. Just some colt who's managed to sign a deal with Disharmony incarnate."
> "How? How can you even work for-"
"For someone like him? You know, I really don't know. I guess I'm just too scared to stand up for myself and play along like a good little..."
> The words trail off as your vision cleared and senses came back:
> You'd never let go of her head or collar, and had been steadily dragging Twilight Velvet closer despite her hooves being firmly planted in the floor.
> Dropping your magic, you let your head fall to the ground and being to quietly sob, heavy tears rolling down your cheeks.
> Velvet soon joins you, sniffling softly as her own tears come.
> Nothing is said, nor could anything more be said.
> Not until both your tears are spent, the emotions run out entirely.
> Forcing yourself to your hooves again, you stagger to the sink and pour out two cups of water.
> She'll probably need it, after all those tears.
> You do.
> Setting the cup at her side and backing away, you fall to your haunches and stare at your forehooves.
"I don't..."
> Voice cracking, you suck another aching breath and try again.
"Don't want to see you taken. Punished. Hurts more than you can imagine, trust me. Tried - tried to make a spell that would get Master later. Found out. He did."
> "I can't."
> Slumping against a wall, Twilight Velvet stares dully out one of the barred windows.
> "By Celestia, Luna - by everypony, I can't!"
"You will. One way or another, you will. If you try to... stop the foal coming, he'll have you shackled in place until it comes. I've seen it happen."
>>27616626
Sunburst better get to dickin'. That old brood mare ain't got many more fertile years left in her.
>>27616626
Fu king continue Lukernon!!!!
>>27616970
Stay in your own fucking thread faggots
>>27617114
Sorry but we can't do anything about it.
>>27609609
Ok!
This is the first time I've written green, I hope people like it, criticism and critique very welcome.
I really hope this isn't a dumb question... I can't seem to copy and paste into the text field and have it post. A red bar pops up that says "Connection Error." Am I doing something wrong?
>>27617162
You again???
Where`s my Skittles???
>>27617247
Nope, have the same problem with my replies
>>27617249
>you again
Me again? What did I do?
>skittles
He's dead mate. Stop beating a dead horse.
>>27617281
>>skittles
>He's dead mate. Stop beating a dead horse.
Could you at least tell us what was your final idea for the story?
What kind of outcome you had in mind?
>>27617333
I don't know. It's been a while since it has discontinued so I wouldn't really remember where the story was going.
I don't really have a final idea in mind since the story was only starting off still and I didn't see an end in sight.
So I cannot post the last 3 posts tonight. Major connection issues.
>>27617405
So, as best as I can tell the board currently has issues with large blocks of text being posted in.
I'll probably repost the entire thing, ending included, next thread.
>>27617366
If I remember correctly, you stayed in the part where Anon was the most civilized manner possible trying of stop "Skittles" of unzipping his pants and help in the release of their urinary wastes and other natural secretions were expelled by their genital member and every time he said "No!" Skittles was paralyzed with fear and unconsciously preparing for a corresponding corrective punishment, which filled the man of deep frustration for the terrible traumatic conditioning that had suffered the mare and a deep hatred by its former owners, he genuinely trying to help her regain her self-esteem and confidence, but the time of abuse and accumulated traumas had left a deep mark on his psyche, so great damage as his injured wings
>>27617476
>>27617414
I think 4chan had connectivity problems or that the NSA was collecting information on our hard drives for analysis
>>27617483
>you stayed
What? I didn't write the story.
>>27617502
You did not? I terribly confused, forgive the mistake, could you remind me in which you were working, if you did one for this thread?
>>27617522
Check the author list, I can't be half-assed to link it directly to you right now.
Testing for connection.
>>27617594
>Jingles - pastebin.com/u/Jingles-J
- Broken Princess (Luna): pastebin.com/1wKaVmci
- Drákōn Insight:
OK
>SkittlesAnon - (NO PERSONAL BIN)
- Skittles (Rainbow Dash): pastebin.com/admfdm5t
>>27617847
Skittles was written by SkittlesAnon
>>27617862
And he is dead (in this thread)
>>27617847
>Drákōn Insight
...say what?
>>27617965
>>27617965
Another story that I'm slowly working on.featuring ember
>>27618041
>featuring ember
Now have my attention
G`nights fellas, see ya in the new thread
>>27615820
dang, i am interested.
someone finish off this thread with some juicy green
lets kill it boys
>>27618197
boop
>>27618197
beep
>>27618197
bop
trobanka branka brenko!!!!
5
Bump hun!
New thread: >>27618234
500
>>27616626
oh shit nigger
this is nuts
>>27610600
>I'm from Czech
More like Czech em
