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>>47847621
By the other thread I meant the TG one.
http://poal.me/eceaw2 <-- for those who did not vote for their favorite branching heart girl. miya presently holds the lead, yin places last.
i'll post gifted on behalf of gifted-anon.
Can someone post the new familiar CYOA?
>>47847673
NOOOOO ANON this is not the updated version
>>47847670
since when did plaid become a dyke fashion statement? i missed that one.
>>47847688
oh. it was already updated, huh? i'll go recollect that then. my bad.
>>47847670
AA, are you a redhead?
If you are, I don't think we'll be able to stop SDA.
>>47847670
>That uneven breast sizes
So you're a trap that stuffs?
![Gifted [v1.1] (1).jpg](https://i.imgur.com/oeozWM8.jpg "Gifted [v1.1] (1).jpg")
take 2, commence.
>>47847717
don't worry I just do my partcuz I have shit internet
>>47847754
Sadly, in real life most tiddies are uneven,
![Gifted [v1.1] (2).jpg](https://i.imgur.com/2Eg814j.jpg "Gifted [v1.1] (2).jpg")
apologies to gifted-anon for misle
>>47847673
>favorite branching heart girlBeri
Relinking Familiars.
>>47829807
>>47835220
>>47836324
Aside from that. I found something ancient, /cyoag/.
Making the Familiar CYOA reminded me of 4-5 years ago, when I was a hopelessly addicted toPonies.I'm not in that phase anymore, thank god, I moved on a long ass time ago, but I remembered thatI actually designed a CYOA that puts you in Equestria. Found it on the old forum I used to browse.Dare I post it?
![Gifted [v1.1] (3).jpg](https://i.imgur.com/DpPrKOa.jpg "Gifted [v1.1] (3).jpg")
ading your people. my comments get cut off all the time and i don't know why.
>>47847792
wasn't a poll option. it would have been a landslide otherwise.
>>47847806
Global Rule 15 means it's a ban worthy offense.
![Gifted [v1.1] (4).jpg](https://i.imgur.com/OBw3L2j.jpg "Gifted [v1.1] (4).jpg")
>>47847806
don't see why not. cyoa is cyoa. people can ignore it if they want.
>>47847806
Sure dude for the lols
>finally get around to reading the setting doc for the familiar CYOA
>pic related
Seriously, Ren, what's the place with our wizard academy and our magical girl orphanage like? Big bustling city, or small hamlet? What's the tech level like - do we see clockwork towers and airships, cobblestone castles and full plate, or Renaissance dandies and painted women? Is a wizard going to cause a panic in the world at large, or is it "Oh, it's one of THEM?" GIVE ME MORE INFORMATION!
Also, continuing to beg that you add some degree of conflict. Conflict is the source of all drama, after all, and drama pushes the plot forward. Make it as mediocre or as overly dramatic as you like - just make it something, so we don't hate each other over our conflicting fanwanks.
>>47847806
>that spoiler
VOMITING INTENSIFIESSeriously, though, don't. Global rule 15 expressly forbids miniature horses anywhere but /mlp/.
![Gifted [v1.1] (5).jpg](https://i.imgur.com/ktM6rE2.jpg "Gifted [v1.1] (5).jpg")
>>47847806
>>47847850
on second thought, maybe not.
>>47847768
Even so, that level of asymmetry seems exceptional.
>>47847678
That statement seems kinda... oxymoronic.
>>47847792
... heart you, too, Anon.
>>47847889
>That statement seems kinda... oxymoronic.
Familiar, but different.
But nah I meant >>47847806You're the best, Beri.
>>47847889
Only if familar's an adjective. He was using it as a noun. Seriously though, Ren, post the actual images again instead of just linking them all. It's a pain in the ass to go back to the old thread.
also, fresh content is always worth re-posting in a new thread.
>>47847670
>No face
Cool story bro.
didn't mention it before, but this was good ren. thanks for making this.
>>47847806
Do yourself a favor anddon't, here. Imgur would be fine, though. Rule 15 or whatever
>>47847880
Look at the arms, right arm is pushing the shirt forwards, leading to the shirt being looser in that area.
>>47847905
>>47847910
I knew what he was asking for. I was just trying to be... humorous? That's not quite the word, though. Snarky? That seems too malevolent. Maybe something like the straight man in Japanese duo comedy? Hmm.... I won't dwell on it. I need sleep, anyhow.
>>47848038
Go back to being the bed, anon.
>>47847914
Sooo how to become Slime familiar here?~
>>47848038
Now that's a water bed.
>>47847956
>No "implausibly stretchy" option.
5/7
>>47847850
>>47847871
Well fuck that noise then, I'd rather not get banned.maybe if we asked the mods or janitors politely, but I'd rather play it safe than sorry. And I ain't steppin foot in /mlp/.
ANYWAY.
Finished GMing my session so I got time for Familiars again. Yeah, sorry for pulling you around in a worthless circle with that site, I didn't realise how fucking empty it was. So have a bit of fun, quick lore.
And yes I will make an (optional) page 4 of Familiars that will have fluff and places of conflict.
Xeria is the primary country of the Familiar quest, a once great empire that fell into decline after Xer vanished from the face of the planet. Over the past 200 years, though, the country's been having a rise in prominence.
Befitting being the country where a great Wizard King once ruled the fucking world from, Xeria is THE leading country in magic, magical studies, magical goods, and magical influence. Ambition City stems from Xer's ideals, an ever expanding, great, magical metropolis with impossibly soaring towers and equally deep alleyways. And appropriately is the largest city in all of Catheridge. The city is nestled against the great Silent Lake, from which a wide, calm river flows south until reaching the ocean. Steep foothills and steppes line the northern border of the city, and deciduous, temperate forests are everywhere around it. With farmland dotting the woods out for many miles.
>>47848059
You're no fun. You need arms to cuddle. But fine, I'll get right to i-
>>47848061
Now I want to wait for an answer to this.
>>47848070
of the most comfortable kind. You *jelly*?
>>47847914
Wizard
Aspiring Student
Avian (Raven)
Transmutation (Wallop)
Speedy, Ignite (Stone), Sturdy
I am the heatseeking missile he always wanted!
>>47847914
Goin' in blind, page by page.
>Witch
>Waifish Orphan
>Insect, centipede
>The Body, Cleanse
>Freedom
>Guide
>Sturdy
Good enough for me, since I live a new life.
>>47848098
Is there anywhere nice and chilly?
>>47847755
I'm probably only one, but I liked it better when there were less points and I had to take curses.
>16yo Woman
>Experimental
Emotional
>Strengthened 37
Physical
>Perfect 33
Mental
>Dulled 40
Life
>Leech 40
Memory
>Dissonance 40
Spiritual
>Magnet 45
>Pyrokinesis
>Control
>Catalyst
>Source
32
>Healing
>Self Service
25
>Telekinesis
>Precision
>Power
16
>Barrier
>Permanent
10
>Weather Control
>Precision
4
>Interference
>Destructive
>Uncontrollable
1
>Nobody
>Gaia
Still thinking about friends and allies...
>traumatized by the experiments done to her, she wonders the world always one step ahead of the shady organizations wishing to study her
>but she can only stay in one place for so long as her powers are ruled by her emotions and she can easily become a walking natural disaster, intentionally or not
>maybe this "Earth Goddess" can help her find her way.....
>>47847701
Idk exactly. Been a thing for awhile though.
>>47847725
No. I dyed it. I wish though:(
>>47847754
See >>47847768 and >>47848003
>>47847947
>posting my face on 4chan
No thanks.
>>47848151
Canada. Antartica. Siberia. And house that has good AC.
>>47847673
>Posting the poll but not the CYOA
At least post the first few pages with the girls, Anon.
>>47847914
>>47847939
>>47847956
Witch
Wandering Mistress
Avian
The Winds
Tease the Wind
Talkative
Freedom
Wand User
Nigga I'm a falcon that talks. It's the best.
>>47848232
ok anon. just the blurbs with each girls' description. my heart just isn't in it for all 22.
>>47847874
If I'm taking a lot of curses, then I have a ton of points anyway. I don't really need more.
>>47848326
What do you mean?
>>47848294
>>47848134
>not going living missile mode
you have disgraced the avian brotherhood
>>47848294
i'm unoriginal, to say the least, but i was going to go the traditional route of black cat.
>>47848343
The overcome perk is unneeded, perhaps?
>>47848372
Nah, curses are way too harsh by default so it's meant to mitigate that. It also replaces an old perk that gave you even more extra points.
>>47847956
Aw thanks. Anyway. More lore.
The King's Academy and Madame's Orphanage both exist in the city, albeit in totally different environs for it. The King's Academy lies attached to the great Castle Catheridge, upon the soaring buttresses and walkways of the High District (pic sorta related).
Down in the shadowed, cramped alleyways of Ambition City, the Madame's Orphanage lies, well away from, but still uncomfortably close to the King's Academy. The Madame has many housemaids and servants to keep the establishment running, but Circe (with her Mystic Cat familiar) herself handpicks any girls she senses to have potential skill in Spirit Magic.
The technology level in Catheridge is a little schizophrenic. Catheridge has had no less than three world scarring catastrophes abuse the realm, each one stymying and pushing back the technology level by a fair amount. Airships once flew across the realm at the height of Xer's reign, but the Dragon Reckoning pushed the world back into a dark, chaotic age for several hundred years. When the Shadow Witch cursed Ironfar City, it heralded the event known as Light's End, when the Divine Family returned to Catheridge, and Rex began killing the Old Gods. It's now roughly 200 years after Light's End (233 After Light [AL] to be precise). The Divine Family are the prominently worshipped figures across the land, and the Heroes of Old ascended by their hand to fill the necessary gaps and help restore the world.
As a result of these catastrophes, You're as like to see a knight in full armor traipsing down the Ambition streets as you are a musketeer with a frilly hat and pistols at his side.
As for Spellcasters, Xeria has always held wizards in high regard and treated witches with caution at best. Ironic considering Eva, their patron deity, is the most worshiped of the Divine Family. The great northern lands of Fulheim has always distrusted magic and forbade its practices, a custom that's spurred a lot of tension with Xeria.
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>>47847783
>>47847825
>>47847851
>>47847874
Male, 16
Power Source: Genetic (No downsides, no outside interference)
30 Points
Emotional: No Change
Physical: Perfect -4
Mental: Shapened -6
Life: No Change +10
Memory: Dissonance
Spiritual: Magnet +5
(Brains AND beauty for effectively no cost?)
30+5=35
Gifts:
Dowsing -1
+Specific -1
Vitality -3
Athleticism -3
+Raw Power -6
Interference -2
+Targeted -2
+Destructive -2
Tongues -1
+Non-Verbal -1
Blessing -4
Empathy -2
Mechanics -3
+Inner Focus -4
35-35=0
Curses:
None needed
Guardian: Ally (Better than being a orphan)
Home: Westwood Heights (I would rather not live in the middle of nowhere or in a ghetto)
Allies:
-Students
Danny Glass
Leah Dawson
Peter Blake
-Adults
Eric Strickland
Louise Webb
Henry Morris
Perks:
Inheritance (Money is the best power)
First Impressions
It matters little if supernatural stuff is draw to me, it's not like I was going to hide and pretend like it all does not exist.
Besides, I'm less of a spooky psychic child and more of a action movie hero with some hopefully strechable powers (I sense the water in people bodies! I bless my cellphone to be a more effective hand grenade and throw it!)
Not only that, but my adoptive dad is a repected police officer, my teacher is cool, I know a guy who sell magic stuff, and behind me are my two bros and a witch.
>>47848401
No help for the slime familiar question >>47848061
>>47847939
>>47847956
If Ren sees this, I would totally take a perk that lets me take the second focis power.
Maybe another more circumstantial one where you can trade (one of) your focus power(s) for one from a different focus.
>>47848401
So I should seek to burn down the orphanage and make Io more popular.
>>47848401
To the east of Xeria lies the High Pass mountains, the greatest mountain range in Catheridge and border of Eurreach, the Hearthland further east, and the Cold Wastes to the Northeast.
The Cold Wastes is regarded with fear and respect to the world at large, as it's home to relentless Ice Giants, Evil Fey, and is considered to be the birthplace of Witchcraft (a theory that's never been proven true, or false, but the existence of The North mystery provides many implications). The mountains and northern warriors known as the Garoh are all that keep the evils of the Cold Wastes from spreading south. And the Garoh are very good at their job.
Further East, past Eurreach, lies the great Elimine Forest, homeland of the Fey and where Titania and Oberon rule. Very few travellers enter Elimine, and very few emerge.
>>47847914
Wizard (aspiring student)
Type: snek
Focus:cheer
Perks: charming, talkative, venemous
I'm a pimp ass snake on a quest to help my awkward teenage master get the ladies. Girls think I'm adorable and also want to cuddle me and give me headpats, which will really help him get a cute gf. Don't mess with the hat though.
Also I got some dank ass venom incase any of these trifling ass bullies try to step out of line and pick on my boy.
As soon as I'm summoned I give my master a lecture on confidence which immediately breaks out into a Disney style rendition of mambo no.5
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=EK_LN3XEcnw
Aww yeah. Now check these dubs
>>47848390
alright, but it costs perks to get the extra curse points. If you don't pick up a lot of curses, then it's a waste of perk points. If you do pick up a lot of curses, then you have points coming out of your ears anyway. So in both cases, why would you spend perks on it?
>>47848527
For extra ear points.
>>47848364
can you post the gia and buoy pages? i havent seen them before
>>47848350
I cast Arrest Momentum.
Whew. Sorry, I didn't mean to splurge and writefage all over /cyoag/, Addressing questions now.
>>47848061
Slime Familiars aren't presently an option, since slimes in the animu sense aren't in the setting. Oozes exist, but I'm pretty sure no one wants to be a small puddle of burning acid as a familiar, and no wizards or witches certainly want one.
>>47848465
I was considering letting you burn 2 perks for a second focus, but thematically that clashes with Elder Wizards/Wizened Hags and their familiars. If a younger mage can get two school focuses, then why the fuck wouldn't an elder one have them or even three?
So my alternative was messing around with the Perk/School distribution depending on your master, with young students having a lot of perks, but no focus, adults having less perks and 1 focus, and elders having 2 perks or so, and 2 focuses. And making it so elders don't start with improved familiars by default.
>>47848587
If the familiar got you to spend a standard action stopping its attack instead of defending or attacking its master then it did its job to be fair
>>47847914
>The Loli
>Mammal
>Body: Cleanse
>Warp, Talkative, Pickpocket
I'll take this CYOA up on that monkey offer and be an urban primate, warping and scurrying about the city. Life as a small animal is bound to be not as fun, but at least I'll have hands. The focus isn't really worth much(other than the fact that I can just be a nice guy and heal some of the likely poor bastards in the slums), but body seems to be the only witch school that'll be able to use some sort of polymorph in the future(and also shotamode isn't that appealing either).
>>47848521
>Aww yeah. Now check these dubs
>>47848521
>>47848627
Dang I almost had it
>>47847825
Not a single one of these is worth it. They're all suicide.
>>47848592
Nobody said anything about extra focuses, just blowing a perk to take your other focus power, so you get more power in one way. Humanize AND Cleanse, Cheer AND Heckle. None of the perks are mutually exclusive.
Also, fuck it, build:
>Waifish Orphan
Incoming magical girl alert.
>Mammal: Raccoon
Yep, it's me. I can climb, run, AND I've got hands? Sign me the fuck up.
>Focus: The Alleys, Urban Whispers
Home and Hearth is actually more or less useless. A respected witch can easily find food and shelter just for being a well-to-do old woman, a travelling witch won't stay in a city long enough to gain the perks, and a waif lives with Madam Circe. Maybe you should change that up a little to make it more useful.
>Perks: Talkative, Vanish, Speedy
Talkative lets me be the snarky reluctant helper I was born to be, Vanish is a useful as fuck tool, and...well, raccoons may be sneaky little shits, but they aren't the fastest out there. Uber powers are for wusses.
Anyway, like I said, Home and Hearth is fairly useless unless either the world is one big city, or you're too old to stay with Madame Circe but you're still homeless. Since option A is not true and option B won't be true for a while, then why do you have it?Sorry, it seemed like a good idea at the time.Ideas for a replacement:
>Home on the Stones
>- You've lived in this city forever - or if you haven't, you may as well. You blend in to the city as if you've been there forever. No matter how strange you are, so long as you don't call attention to yourself, people's eyes will just slide over you. This can extend to your master. It won't let you into someplace you clearly aren't supposed to be, but it'll let you blend in as just another face in the crowd. As an addition, the streets are just as familiar to you as you are to them, and you can practically find your way around by the feel of the cobblestones under your feet and the bricks in the walls.
>>47848825
>the same autist from the last thread that won't stop bitching
>>47847914
>Avian
>The Body - Humanize
(This is assuming the transformation is instant or takes seconds at most.)
>Speedy
>Sturdy
>Warper
>>47847755
>Identity
Male, 12
>Power Source
Psychic Energy
>Changes
Emotional: No Change. Physical: Deformity. Mental: No Change
Life: Prime. Memory: No Change. Spiritual: Magnet.
>>47847783
>Gifts
Telekinesis (Precision, Power), Pyrokinesis (Control, Catalyst, Source)
Healing (Self Service, Miracle), Vitality (Immunity), Athleticism (Raw Power)
>>47847825
>Curses
Asexual (Neutered) +10, Unsettling +8
>>47847851
>Guardian
Nobody
>Home
Withermouth
>Allies
Students: Leah Dawson, Adam Wiley, Mia Cross
>>47847874
Adults:Isaac Bowman, Julie Slater
>Perks
Overcome (x2)
And now, the news at 11.
Earlier this week it was discovered that a young homeless boy had metamorphosed into a psionic space creature overnight. The cause of this is unknown, but what is known is the damages. Several millions have been tabulated in property damages as this anomaly of nature attempts to maintain his weekly gradeschool routine. Suspected parents of the child refused to comment on the matter, save for the supposed father stating "I ain't payin that shit, bill my ex wife's cosmic side man". The local fishman tribes were interviewed on the matter, but their chanting "Ia! Ia!" gave little insight. Currently researchers of all fields, both truly scientific and paranormal, have come from across the globe to study the miracle monster child, with one woman, a one Julie Slater stating "Eat it monkeys I fucking told you they were real!" Back to you, Tom.
>>47848913
No I just saw the thing and i've never seen a cyoa with drawbacks this worthless.
>>47848913
Or maybe people generally don't like them anon.
>>47848959
Nobody likes everything. They're not supposed to. I think the only way you could like everything would be if you had severe brain damage.
So where does this expectation come from? If you don't like something you have to bitch about it? Grow up.
>>47849000
Pretty logical for someone to point out that every single drawback is awful and isn't worth taking.
>>47848942
>>47848959
Then don't take any drawbacks.
>b..b..b.but then I won't be able to take all the powers
>it's not like drawbacks should have a downside to them!
>>47849000
>If you don't like something you have to bitch about it?
It's called critique. The guy wasn't even overly insulting to you. You're getting offended that someone has an opinion and a criticism and they simply expressed it. You're the one that needs to grow up here, because you sound like a teenage deviantard.
>>47849017
>logical
I don't think you know what that word means.
>>47849018
Drawbacks should have downsides, but the downside for basically all of these drawbacks is that they kill you.
>>47849029
>you
No anon, we've been over this. Not everyone on 4chan is the same person :^)
That was my first post in this entire thread, and I haven't been here for like two or three previous threads.
>>47847755
Boy, 14. I'll view this as a second chance to take school a bit more seriously.
So, 30 points from the get-go.
Power Source: genetic. Seems like a safe move.
Changes (+8)
________
Emotional (dulled; +5), Physical (perfect; -4), Mental (sharpened; -3), Life (no change; +10), Memory (knowledge; -5), Spiritual (magnet; +5)
Gifts (38; 62 with curses)
________
Teleportation (quick step, indirect sight; -10), Telekinesis (precision, power; -9), Barrier (permanent, wide; -8), Dowsing (specific; -2), Psychometry (muscle memory; -4), Tongues (siren; -3), Mechanics (inner focus; -7), Apportation (-2), Vitality (-3)
Familiar [black cat] (-14)
-Interference (-2)
-Friend of Nature (animal friends; -6)
-Barrier (permanent; -6)
-Teleportation (-4)
-Empathy (-2)
Curses (+24)
______
Unsettling (+6), Asexual (neutered; +8), Insomnia (+10)
Guardian: nobody (I just can't see anyone replacing my folks.)
Home: Gloverisle (looks like a nice place to live.)
Allies: Danny Glass, Kate Fox, Carl Knight
Adults: Eric Strickland, Holly Osborne
Perks: Overcome (+3 P), Boarding School.
I think I'll have fun with this group. When adventures get tough I'll have to leave them at home though, since nearly all of the powers I took are for me. The cat, Shadow (original, right?), will be able to join and aid me from time to time.
>>47849031
I certainly know you don't.
>>47849053
To him then, it hardly matters. The point is getting excessively offended at someone not liking something.
>>47849057
That's funny from someone who misuses it that badly. Open a dictionary, dumbass.
>>47848942
>They're all suicide
I mean, honestly? Most of those are nowhere near suicidal level bad. They are bad, but not insanely bad.
>Unsettling just marks you as an outcast, that's it
>Migraine is annoying
>Empathy just makes you a dick
>Ego is just you being a dick
>Inhuman is just "I am better than you" but doesn't mean you gotta show it
>Night person is annoying and changes your scheduling
>Eyesight is annoying, but disabilities don't kill you.
>Mute same boat
>deaf same boat
>Weakness I admit is fucking bad, nobody in their right mind would take that
>Cowardly isn't that bad, world is full of cowards
>Asexual is more than fine and the Neutered section is a plus for some
>Cycles is all about timing
>Lust gets you into trouble, but nothing extreme as death
>Insomnia is just annoying
>Anxiety
I mean, come on.
Did you even read any of them before dismissing them?
>>47849086
You first. I'll wait.
>>47848546
right here >>47848364, anon.
>>47849036
>Social Anxiety or not being able to have sex kill you
Explain how you are still alive then
>>47849073
No, the point is someone getting excessively offended and vocal over not liking something.
>>47849095
Yes I did. They're all insanely terrible and not even slightly worth it.
Ego is going to get you killed. Read it again, empathy makes you a sociopath which will get you killed.
>>47849099
Nah. I said it first. I also already know what it means, and your use didn't fall under any of the common definitions, even the nebulous ones.
You're not just an idiot, you're a willful idiot, aren't you.
>>47849036
>they all kill you
That's not even hyberoble, it's a straight up lie
>>47849126
I really don't care turbo autist, I'm still waiting.
>>47849095
>>Migraine is annoying
You've never had chronic migraines.
>>47849111
>Ego will get you killed
EXISTING will get you killed too. Fact of life. Ego just means you don't give a shit about your weak points, which you are making up for with the extra points from Ego anyway in most cases.
>Empathy turns you into a sociopath
And?
>will get you killed.
There are plenty of sociopaths in modern societies who live relatively normal lives. They don't really give a fuck about others, but they can be normal, productive members of society. Do you know nothing of the world outside?
Wow, there is a lot of yelling going on. I honestly have no idea what's going on, and I'd like it to stay that way. How about you all shut up and fuck already?
>>47849106
One single post when you started insulting him. That's the card before the horse.
>>47849142
That's funny.
>>47849166
Ego literally states that you think you're unbeatable and will ignore your weakness. That's suicide.
>>47849166
>they can be normal, productive members of society.
Serial killers aren't productive.
>>47849111
checked, but i'm not feeling what you're feeling. i think this is the part where we just agree to disagree.
wouldn't kill you to say you don't like or agree with something in a nicer way either, man. someone did take the time to make that content, ya know.
>>47849175
Oh fuck you. This post is the first one I used an insult in, because you're being an annoying cunt.
Where exactly did I insult anyone there? The part where I said someone would have to have severe brain damage to like everything ever? How does that hypothetical even apply? Do YOU have severe brain damage or something?
>>47849202
The rest of the content is good, the drawbacks are among the worst I've ever seen. They're just godawful and not even slightly worth it.
Yo gifted anon
if you're still here
don't change the drawbacks
they're fine as they are, and people have enough points without them. You have no obligation to sprinkle the crybabies with more points without mild-to-extreme suffering.
If they don't want the listed drawbacks, they can live with 30 points + whatever they get from the Changes section.
>>47849188
>ignoring weakness = they are more exploitable
Yes.
But that doesn't mean someone will straight up kill you EVERY TIME you take it. It's a CYOA, you consider your actions afterward, not a "what if" as fact.
>>47849201
>Sociopaths are psychopaths
Have a wonderful night, Anons. I'm done for the night.
>>47849238
You're going to die if you ignore your weakness, getting lucky while fighting someone stupid means. Nothing, ego means you will never do anything about your weaknesses. You're completely fucked, you might as well just make the points 10000 because it doesn't matter. Because you're just going to get killed because drawback makes you too stupid to live.
>>47849226
I never got people who only held opinions out of spite. It's like "How dare people think things. Let me try and sabotage it because I'm 14 and still think trolling is cool."
>>47849225
Then don't take any, you whiny autist
>>47849202
Is that Numbah Five and that asshole treasure hunter rival?
>>47849297
Only autistic thing going on right now is you being offended about this.
>>47849309
The one who was actually a cute girl who was transmogrified into a chubby asshole boy by a cursed treasure, yeah.
>>47849297
Just stop replying Anon. It's devolved into pure bait now.
>>47849321
Wait, really? I don't remember that.
>>47847956
I'll take Wizard, and my master will be the Aspiring Student. I also want to be a Carbuncle Familiar.
>>47849349
Yep. It only comes up in like his/her... third episode or so? It was a weird twist but it's true, Heiny was originally a cute friendly adventurer girl who got cursed by her greed into a perma-asshole fatboy.
>>47849349
Not him, yeah.
http://knd.wikia.com/wiki/Henrietta_Von_Marzipan
Cursed Caramels turned her into a boy, she went ape shit trying to fix it until she was finally saved after FIVE years.
Henrietta into Heinrich.
>>47849225
Not the guy you're arguing with, but I think you're exaggerating a little. Let's go through them all in order:
>Emotion Link
Dangerous, but not lethal depending on how hard your powers respond.
>Rage
You're right about this one, it'll fuck you over.
>Unsettling
Bad, creepy, but not actually crippling, especially because you have allies.
>The Voices
Yeah, you're definitely fucked.
>Phobia
Fairly fucked. Probably not as bad as some, but pretty fucked anyway.
>Migraine
Nasty stuff, and just might be crippling. Non-lethal, but still nasty.
>Sleepwalker
Unless you're living in a tent in the middle of nowhere, you're fucked as soon as you accidentally kill someone.
>Drained
Tolerable. Not good, but tolerable.
>Empathy
You are definitely, entirely fucked. Humans are, by definition, social creatures, and dumping that is a one-way ticket to go fuck yourself.
>Ego
Dangerous, but not deadly.
>Inhuman
Same as Empathy.
>Night Person
Not bad, not bad at all. There's still danger, but there's no real harm to long clothes and sunglasses if you just claim you have a skin condition. It's not a lie, either.
>Eyesight
Problem, sure, but not overmuch. Unless you pick Blind. Don't pick Blind.
>Muted
Yet another one-way ticket to Fucksville.
>Deafness
You underestimate how much we rely on our sense of hearing. This is a bad one.
>Weakness
You're fighting supernatural monsters. Do not.
>Cowardly
Ew. Not crippling, but ew.
>Asexual
The most harmless curse out there.
>Cycles
That's definitely going to sting, especially because Murphy dictates everything comes at you at your weakest. Could be bad.
>Bound
This is the equivalent of being a tactical suicide boss in vidya. Don't do it. Your friend doesn't have supernatural powers to defend themselves with.
>Animal Foes
As it says, inconvenient in an urban area, but dangerous in the wild. Inadvisable.
>Sickly
Again, you're fighting a load of monsters. Don't do this.
You get the point. Bad, yes; instant death, no.
>>47849281
Sabotage what? People are complaining that there are no easymode drawbacks for free points, when there are, so long as you're actually creative, as exemplified by the fact that 3/4 of the builds posted do use the drawbacks. The drawbacks are in need of no change, and these guys who cant figure out how to thematically work in how the drawbacks presented could correspond to their powers don't really have good justification for demanding change.
I mean, unless you were implying they were sabotaging the CYOA. Then I could almost see where you're coming from, but to say that the complainers have that much influence is a bit of a stretch IMO.
>>47849415
Looking at your list, you skipped Lustful.
>>47849415
>>Ego
>Dangerous, but not deadly.
see
>>47849263
>>47849437
It's an issue with how you present your opinion, rather as a standalone view you're framing it as a counter with the motivation of spite.
>>47849437
>people
It's one guy
>>47849111
Both of those are correct, but you're neglecting to consider the others he mentioned - Night Person is mostly harmless, Asexual is harmless, Unsettling is basically you at the lunch table. What's wrong with those?
>>47849471
What's with this recent trend in CYOA threads where everyone is just one guy? I'm starting to think we're all fusing together if this is really the case as some anons very desperately declare.
major change
i would like to thank Mac And keine for the correction
>>47849387
>trivia
>the second villain to be melted under a heat source while being made of chocolate
That's really specific.
>>47848903
Ah, I see how you mean. And Home and Hearth is good for Witches that aren't the little girl. Wandering Mistress is certainly going to visit many cities... but also has her own wagon to sleep in, and Wizened Hag... Has a coven... and...
...
Yeah, it's shit. I'll change it in the next version I make.
Anway, general question for the /cyoag/ thread concerning Familiars. Do you guys like bars? Like a changing scale that represents some general fact. I was thinking about reformatting the master choices and adding some bars to represent what living with them would be like. Namely
>DANGER
The overall threat and risk of injury of the life your master lives. Lower is safer while higher is, well, not.
>POWER
The magical capabilities of your master. The higher this is, the more power and influence they command at your time of becoming their familiar.
>COMPASSION
How much your master initially and will overall care for you. The higher this is, the more likely you two will get along. Being friendly and dutiful helps, of course.
>SOLITUDE
How lonely your life is going to be, initially. The higher this is, the less of other mages and familiars you'll see.
Comments?
>>47848592
Well, I didn't get to the end. Ran out of post space.
>>47848592
You still here?
>>47849500
>>47849525
>>47849500
>>47849525
Did you start out thinking you were going to use one art style and then change your mind halfway through?
>>47849415
>Not bad, not bad at all.
If even artificial light bothers you, your life is pretty much over.
>>47849463
ah, well, I mean
okay yeah a bit of spite, I can admit to that
the way I see it it's a little unjust to alter an entire system to satisfy an individual's inability to adapt, and I guess it gets on my nerves seeing content creators having to try and argue against these individuals rather than simply ignoring them as they should. So, I guess, fair, you got me there.
>>47849471
nah, I'm sure there's more than one of them who think the same way, but I will say it does very certainly seem to be a minority opinion
>>47849517
Yes, KND had a myriad of odd moments like that.
Not nearly as many as Jimmy Neutron, good GOD that show had a ton of weird episodes, but still a lot.
>>47849545
>>47849486
>Night Person is mostly harmless,
Hope you don't ever want to use a computer again. Or watch tv, or be near tv, or really exist in the digital age.
>>47849523
I'm always here.
Watching. Waiting.
>>47849521
Ah, there you are. I kinda like the concept, but you might want to include some measure for Influence - what people think of your master, whether good, ill, or they don't give a shit.
Also, here's another idea for a perk replacement, because I should have been in bed half an hour ago but I'm busy shitposting:
>Friendly Face
>- Some people are wallflowers, keeping their heads down and going about their business while talking to as few people as possible. You and your mistress are not like them. People naturally like you because you like them. You're a common face around the city, and people will expect to see you and your mistress wandering around. They'll be more likely to offer help, share gossip, or give headpats.
>>47849567
>>47849553
>>47849521
I think there's not too much point, the options are fairly freeform so we should be allowed to imagine those factors ourselves.
>>47847755
Gender: Male
Age: 11
>Genetic
Seems pretty good. No ups, no downs.
>Emotional
No Change
>Physical
No Change
>Mental
No Change
>Life
No Change
>Memory
Fresh Start: +10
>Spiritual
Magnet: +5
>Gifts: 45 total
Pyrokinesis, Control, Catalyst, Source: 13
Healing, Self Service, Miracle: 23
Athleticism, Raw power, Peak Human: 36
Vitality, Immunity: 42
Mechanics: 45
>Guardian
Ally
>Home
Westwood Heights
>Allies
Students: Derek Wright, Carl Knight, Scarlet Manning
Adults: Jane Farley (Guardian), Charlie
>Perks
First Impressions: Peter Blake
Boarding School
I've got great firepower with Peter, Derek, Carl, and Jane. They can teach me to fight and shoot, and Carl can help me grow even stronger. Scarlet is go to waifu. If she cucks me with someone else I'll start an illicit relationship with Jane. When things turn to shit we'll retreat to Charlie's hideouts.
Is Italics kill?
>>47849553
>>47849601
fug didn't typed my message, it was a suggestion from Mac on the perk and armor he said change as i see fit and i think it kinda fit
>>47847755
>>47847783
>>47847825
>>47847851
>>47847874
Wewww, this was fun.
Age: 16
Power-Source: Genetic
Changes:
Emotional: Fixed + 10 (Ok, I might effectively be Bonesaw 2.0, but, everything will be fine!)
Physical: Perfect -4
Mental: Enhanced -6
Life: Leech/Provisional. Spend time in a hospital with terminal patients holding their hands.
Memory: No change
Spiritual: Magnet +5 (Just means more friends!)
Gifts:
Telekinesis + Precision + Power -9 (This is by itself incredible)
Mechanics + Inner Focus -7 (Combine this with telepathy...)
Barrier + Permanent -6
Healing + Self Service + Miracle -10
Future Sight + Relevant + Clarity -6
Empathy + Influence -3
Psychometry -1
Pyrokinesis + Catalyst -5
Levitation -2 (In case of falls)
Mediumship + Command -3 (Spy on my enemies!)
Curses:
Ego + 7
Animal Foes + 8 (Barrier will keep me safe!)
Guardian: Nobody
Yarrow Falls (Come on Twin Peaks!)
Companions:
Leah Dawson (Someone in the Lodge might want to help her!)
Adam Wiley (Can help solving mysteries)
Scarlet Manning (Every group needs a straightman)
Julie Slater (Can help when needing lab analysis)
Jane Farley (Assistance against bears)
Overcome (Just needed a few more points for what I wanteed)
Boarding School
Meet new and interesting friends in the Black Lodge. Get attacked by and kill owls. Hunt down, chase and get pursued by other worldly killers. FUN! Hoping the FBI gets involved too.
Basically I just track down and solve mysteries, unnervingly cheerful at all the horror and death, killing birds as I go.
ah fuck I was in a rush and messed up the page
>>47849617
Italics isn't really a public face, he pops in mysteriously to post his OC when he's done.
>>47849500
>>47849525
>>47849545
>>47849567
>>47849601
>>47849647
>>47849627
Sorted page of my OC, kthxbyeMac or Keine if you're reading this, please leave out another correct
>>47849633
But what gender are you?
>>47849602
>not wanting more ideas to base your build off of
>wanting to build practically in a vacuum
>>47849655
Weird. So this is why he never uses a name in his posts even though he's a named author?
>DRAINED
HOLY FUCKING SHIT YOU'LL FEEL TIRED AFTER USING YOUR ABILITIES, AND THEN YOU'LL PROBABLY HAVE TO TAKE A NAP
GOD FUCKING DAMNIT THIS DRAWBACK IS USELESS!!!!
WHO WANTS TO FEEL TIRED AFTER SUING THE SUPERWPOERS AMIRITE?
JUST GIVE ME 100000 POINTS
REEEEEEEEEEEE
>>47849500
This is a fun one. I didn't catch the major change though...
>RS-Stalwart Hawk
>Female
>Thin
>Light Feet (Free)
>Sharpshooter
>Double Perception (Free)
>Medic
>Melee Mastery
>General Trench Coat
>Super Shotgun
>Laser Pistol
>Flashlight
>Comlink Watch
>First Aid Kit
>Chainsaw Katana
>Wind Goddess Hopea
>Demon Hunter Kaori
>Alzena Coldhart
>Light Desert Jeep
>Resource Bot (Free)
>Work Bot
Time to be space bounty hunter/assassin/whatever pays with my ninja like skills, awesome trenchcoat and chainsaw katana. Start out alone stranded in this strange new world, but find some friends along the way. Become less of a bounty hunter and more of a demon hunter as we discover the scale of the demonic threat to the world. Become partners with Hopea and we adopt Kaori. Get bullied some by Alzena, but it's ok. Will help all companions with their quests. Bots take care of ship while we pile into buggy and go adventuring! Don't worry to much about local politics, work for whoever needs us and will pay.
>>47849596
Go to bed Anon. I'll work out a replacement for Hearth. Both of your suggestions are pretty good.
>>47849602
>>47849701
Woah, easy there, Anon. The first guy has a point, sometimes building freeform with whatever you wanna shape from your imagination is plenty rewarding. But at the same time, it's not like I'm replacing the text provided with the charts. I don't think a handy visual reference would detract too much, eh?
>>47849701
>Ideas
More like 'enforced rules'. Bars are absolutes, they limit ideas, not increase them.
>>47849743
Whoa, hey, Drained will fuck you. Once you get tried and go take a nap, BAM, someone put your hand in a glass of water and you peed yourself. This of course kills you.
>>47849793
See >>47849816 , it's more information, but it's information that boxes you in and forces you into roles.
>>47849733
No, it's more like he would rather work himself to death making OC than discuss them. He does look at the thread and sometimes posts if someone has a question, but he's mostly too busy to talk.
Surprisingly he tends to respond to the annoying "What CYOA are you making Anons" question, probably just to give people insight on what his next 4 or so projects are.
>>47847914
>Waifish Orphan
Always start young, they can grow up to be something later.
I assume a familiar's lifespan is tied to its master's, provided that it isn't killed first.
>Avian: Crow
Or raven as the CYOA mentions, there's no actual distinction between the categories. It's appropriate, and common enough to blend in completely.
Interestingly, Crows are naturally capable of speech like parrots (probably better, they are much smarter). I'm going to assume for the purposes of this CYOA that I CAN use this without purchasing "talkative", but that learning to do so is extremely difficult and will never be perfect, compared to automatically being able to speak fluently.
>Focus: The Spirit
The other reason why Crow is so thematically appropriate. Ghostwalk effectively supersedes the "freedom" perk (except on cooldown rather than permanent). I'm going to assume that it is just as effective letting me pass through living matter (eg hands, claws etc) as it is through inanimate objects, but ineffective against purely magical attacks.
Spirit's call is what essentially gives us our purpose in magic, as well as providing an essential ace in the hole.
>Speedy
No need to pick a fast bird of prey, since I'll be faster with this no matter my species
>Sturdy
"Living bullet" sounds useful when subtlety and magic both fail.
>Guide
Won't be useful NOW, but witches being what they are a settled life isn't very likely, so this is sure to come in handy eventually.
I was tempted to take Pickpocket, but I don't want to cause MORE trouble.
>>47849696
I'm glad you asked! I'm a nonbinary neutrois two-spirit androgyne. I hope that's clarified things for you!
>>47849793
SLEEP IS MERELY AN INADEQUATE SUBSTITUTE FOR CAFFEINE.
>>47849838
I would heartily disagree. You can't make a decision without knowing what the world looks like.
>>47847874
>Identity
Male, 16
>Power Source
Alien
>Changes
Emotional: No change
Physical: Perfect (-4)
Mental: Sharpened (-3)
Life: No change (+10)
Memory: No change
Spiritual: Magnet (+5)
>Gifts
Telekinesis, Percision, Power (-9)
Healing, Self-service, Miracle (-10)
Teleportation, Quick-step (-8)
Barrier, Permanent (-6)
Mechanics, Inner focus (-7)
Vitality (-3)
Apportation (-2)
Dousing (-1)
>Curses
Unsettling (+8)
>Guardian
Ally (Scarlet Manning)
>Home
Yarrow Falls
>Allies
Danny Glass
Peter Blake
Scarlet Manning
Henry Morris
Louise Webb
>Perks
Overcome x2
>>47847755
>power source: dark magic
>changes: sickly appearance (+7), sharpened mental (-3), Leech life, no change in the rest
Gifts: (49)
>mind control, flawless (20)
>remote viewing, presence (9)
>barrier, permanent (6)
>familiar (14)
-possession, amnesia (5)
-blessing (2)
-barrier, permanent (3)
curses: (15)
>inhuman (5)
>night person (5)
>unsettling (5)
>guardian: ally (Julie Slater)
>home: riverfront east
allies:
>anna, victoria, mia
>julie, louise
perks:
family and inheritance, I guess. Honestly, none of these are very attractive.
I don't need friends allies or money because I can just enslave people. My familiar can take control of someone rapidly if need be, since my power takes hours. My familiar can also Bless me.
Lots of people no one care about to steal youth from in the inner city. I'm inhuman, so I won't feel bad about it.
>>47847670
Why do you come to CYOA Gen of all places to seek attention? It's an incredibly odd choice. There's literally thousands of other venues where you could flash your tits and get all the attention you want. Why a forum dedicated to ttrpgs and cyoas?If you insist on sticking around, at least post more lizardmen.
>>47849930
Nice build. You're effectively right with your assumptions. Don't worry too much about needing or not needing Talkative, because I'm still thinking about removing it entirely and making it so Familiars can speak freely by default.
Ghostwalk does indeed let you pass through living things. Magic will still pose a problem, but it poses a problem to the familiars with Freedom as well.
...Is it weird that I haven't made a build for my own CYOA?
>>47850042
some people never do.
>>47850042
For more complicated CYOA, it's 100% understandable.
For less complicated 1-3 pagers, it's more taste than anything. You like to play the role of the game maker, not the player in some cases.
>>47850042
Please, please do add Talkative as a free perk. Maybe switch it up for something else? Hell with it, last suggestion before I turn in for the night:
>Therapy Pet: You're calming to be around. Something about stroking your fur, feathers, or scales just takes the edge off any stress your master might be feeling. Not combat-strength, but just nice.
>>47850193
That sounds like it could be lumped into Charming, desu.
>>47850257
Uh...I mean, maybe? I was thinking Charming basically gave people diabetes by looking at me, and this basically just made me into a security blanket - a source of courage, calm, serenity, and hope, no matter what I'm really like.
>>47850042
I don't really NEED to talk to mundanes anyway, except maybe to shout at them for some stupid thing. I didn't pick a crow for that, I just thought it was an interesting bonus.
>>47847755
>>47847783
>>47847825
>>47847851
>>47847874
>Identity
Male, 12
>Power Source
Genetic
>Changes
>Emotional
No Change: Happy 40
>Physical
Perfect 36
>Mental
Enhanced 30
>Life
Prime 15
>Memory
No Change 15
>Spiritual
No Change 15
>Gifts
>Telekinesis 11
Precision 9
Power 6
>Future Sight 4
Relevant 3
Clarity 0
>Healing -2
Self-Service -7
>Levitation -9
Flight -14
Efficient -18
>Vitality -21
Immunity -24
Painless -21
>Athleticism -25
>Barrier -28
Permanent -31
>Interference -33
Uncontrollable -28
>Charm -31
>Mechanics -34
Inner Focus -38
>Curses
>Empathy -28
>Ego -18
>Inhuman -10
>Asexual -2
Neutered 0
>Guardian
Nobody
>Home
Westwood Heights
>Students
Adam Wiley
Peter Blake
Scarlet Manning
>Adults
Julie Foster
Holly Osborne
>Perks
Overcome x2
Humanity is overrated.
>>47849685
I was out and about yesterday. I'll finish grammatical corrections for page 2 and start 3. As always, change what you see fit.
THE NEW ORDER DEFLECTOR
>Compact defense, the red...
"Compact armor that provides a stellar defense and a high rate of mobility due to the lightweight materials used to make it. Comes with a free red paint job after several violent interactions."
>armor had built in...
"Capable of emitting a deflector shield that will redirect most any projectile. The shield is not nearly as strong as the nano shield, but is able to last for a longer duration. Requires resources to use and maintain."
>If the deflector...
This part's perfect, minus the space between 'penetrated' and the comma.
HEAVY MOBILITY SUIT
>superior defense
"Grants superior defense. The armor is incredibly durable, able to withstand standard infantry firepower without sustaining damage; however, the armor is tremendously heavy."
>jetpack can't make...
"The built-in jetpack allows for quick bursts of speed in the direction your body is facing. You will not be able to sustain flight, but you can blitz enemies head-on."
>this armor rely...
"This armor relies heavily on the jetpack for a high mobility rate. Without it, the armor is very cumbersome. Naturally, you will have an easier time moving if you are Buff or took Strong."
ULTIMATE BULLDOZER ARMOR
>Extreme Defense...
Extreme Defense -> Extremely defensible; "combat-assistant".
>capable of...
"Highly effective for close-quarter encounters. Capable of rending flesh and piercing think armor with vibranium [we are making things up now] claws."
>require battery...
"Requires battery to function. When prolonged exposure to conflict is foreseeable, be sure to bring an extra battery to charge the suit."
1/?
>>47847755
+30 baseline
Psychic Energy, No Guardian, Riverfront East
Kids: Kate Fox, Adam Wiley, Scarlet Manning
Adults: Julie Slater, Lorie Copeland
Perks: Overcome x2
Emotional (No change)
Physical (+7 Sickly)
Mental (-3 Sharpened)
Life (-15 Prime)
Memory (No change)
Spiritual (+5 Magnet)
+5 Asexual
+5 Night Person
+5 Muted
+5 Unsettling
+12 Overcome
...for a total of 56 points.
-9 (-2 Remote Viewing, -7 Presence)
-9 (-4 Telekinesis, -2 Precision, -3 Power)
-4 Blessing
-4 Curse
-10 (-6 Possession, -4 Amnesia)
-4 (-2 Interference, -2 Targeted)
-5 Invisibility (+3Ghost/-3Invisibility Field)
-4 Mind Reading
-3 Mechanics
-4 Teleportation
Jonah's setup is simple in effect: he never is physically present if he can help it. Though the name is a riff on the sailors' superstition, Jonah is a boon to his allies. He projects himself astrally to interfere in events with mechanically precise telekinesis and blessings/curses. If the lights go out at just the right moment to give you cover, thank Jonah. If one of your enemies suddenly clutches his head right before turning his gun on his comrades, thank Jonah. If a monster that was about to eat you suddenly explodes after being hit with tons of invisible force, definitely thank Jonah.
His nigh-permanent invisibility renders concealment effortless; Jonah's allies have no idea that the mysterious force aiding them is actually an unkempt youth sleeping in an alcove beneath a bridge, possessing passersby to bring him food and money. Communicating with telekinesis or through the occasional possessed pawn renders the mute Curse irrelevant, and though people definitely find his actions and the way he always seems to know what you're thinking unsettling, he's never around to suffer the physical consequences of his meddling. Should anyone stumble upon his physical body, he flees with teleportation.
>>47850429
>Immortal, invisible hobo recluse.
>Remote viewing OP, please nerf.
>>47850257
Hey Ren, if you're still here, how hideable can Aberrant Anatomy be?would it be possible to just have a smile like pic related?
>>47850554
I made it a point to throw a lot of examples in there, but only list what the power actually grants. Being "hard to kill, hard to mentally control, and hard to restrain." All of which can be had while you still look relatively "normal."
So yeah, go ahead, be a fox with a creepy smile bro.
>>47849545
The super weapons for basic and advanced arseal seem like they should be switched around.
I need special permit for a flamethrower or mini gun but anybody can have a nuke launcher or rapid fire rpg? Those seem like the advanced weapons to me
>>47850024
Hi! You seem fun. Mind control and possession huh? That's nice. It's not as great as commanding the dead, but you know, still impressive. Anywho, I'm about to go light some owls on fire. Maybe some bears. You ever been to the Lodge? Great people, I love the lodgers. You'll fit right in.
>>47850629
Perfect. The creepy ass sage fox dream lives.
>>47849525
STALINGRAD TITAN
>Unpenetrable defense...
"Built for war, the armor has proven to be nearly impervious to damage. Only the most powerful assaults can leave a dent or scratch on this suit. Comes with a free, very stylish ushanka."
>able to move...
"The armor is capable of traversing any and all kinds of terrain without difficulty. If you plan on walking across the ocean floor, it is advised that you trade in the ushanka for a pressurized diving helmet."
>can only use...
"May only use the machine gun that was designed for the power armor. Additionally, the suit may try to brainwash you and any others in the vicinity by playing communist speeches on a built-in speaker, replete with surround sound."
"Comes with a built-in speaker and HD surround sound."
HERCULES
>shit man...
"Designed for planetary conquests, the model HERCULES is completely indestructible and impenetrable, as well as being tireless due to what the developers called a 'perfect core'."
>capable of flight...
"The armor additionally has superb aviation capabilities and a built-in weapons system that is capable wiping a modest town off of the map in moments."
>you'll rot in...
"Your body will atrophy in the armor; HERCULES will fuse to the first pilot who enters the suit. You may still receive nourishment through the suit, but you will not be able to take off the armor."
"Muscle wizards have nothing on you."
>CHOOSE MOBILE SUIT only...
I'll take a stab in the dark and say you were indicating this: "You may take both a Mobile Suit and a Power Armor if you took the Factory Cruiser as your ship, as well as the appropriate perks."
"FINALLY! A ...
>I knew you ... knew me?
"you, but you didn't know me?"
>To made me feel better...
made -> make
>topic, Where are we now?
topic; where
>when we decide to go
decide -> decided
>ended up to a place
to a -> in a
>possible but you manage to...
possible, but you managed to...
what are some occultist powers people like?
Alright /cyoag/. It's time for Ren to sleep. Be excited for tomorrow, as I plan on making a lot of tweaks and changes to Mage's Familiar. Toodles!
>>47849525
Still on the halfling companion.
>maybe i'll give you
i'll -> I'll (English is funny--it's one of [or the only, I forget] the only languages that capitalizes the i's.)
>my mobile suit and I will teach you
mobile suits and teach you... (You don't need the 'I will' here.)
>pilot it properly,
properly. (End sentence.)
>well not really mine but...
Well, isn't really mine, but...
>"oh and if...
Now that's a bold woman; "Oh, and if you're wondering, I'm perfectly legal."
BLADE VALKYRIE
>Flight based ... suit, very fast
Flight-based; suit, it's very...
>excel at cqc...
"Excels at close-quarter-combat, has a secondary laser funnel."
>cost less resources...
"The mobile suit requires less resources to maintain."
>light armor that...
"The suit is designed for superior agility and evasive maneuvers. It will not sustain much damage before becoming inoperable."
ANNIHILATOR
>humongous as...
"Completely impervious to damage, this suit is second to protection only to the HERCULES model."
>see that big...
"ANNIHILATOR comes with a factory-new anti-matter [we make more things up] cannon that is capable of wiping a small country off of the planet. Effectively eliminates the need for a primary weapon."
>everything is an...
>slow as fuck...
"The suit is colossal; by virtue of size, this is one of the fastest suits in existence. It is capable of crushing nearly everything that is underfoot--including allies. Move with caution."
>Require huge amount...
"ANNIHILATOR consumes and incredible amount of energy, requiring a great deal of resources to sustain it. Furthermore, after firing the cannon, the suit will temporarily shut down due to overheating."
>>47851084
TOMORROW HAS ARRIVED! EXCITEMENT LEVELS CANNOT BE CONTAINED!
>>47849930
Shit I'm only supposed to pick ONE of the two focus abilities. >>47850042 You are supposed to call me out on that shit.
I suppose I just take Ghostwalk. Makes things rather boring, without "spirit's call" there's not really anything explicit for us to DO and all of my perks are basically focused around simply exisiting, but ghostwalk is by far the more functional.
>>47848592
Really IMO they should just grant both anyway (by default, not a choice). This sets your theme and purpose, everything else is just survival.
>>47851133
ANNIHILATOR needs a secondary weapon. at least a heavy MG, otherwise it's only weapon leaves it very vulnerable if you fuck up a shot. What do I do if I need to kill something that isn't a small country?
>>47851266
Stomp.
>>47851266
I considered that when revising, which is why I worded the change the way I did; "eliminates the need for a primary weapon." As far as interpretations go, a secondary weapon is still available.
Is there a yandere waifu cyoa based around the 9 types of yanderes?
>>47849102
i meant the individual pages
>>47851293
What if it's too far away to stomp? What if it's bigger than my foot? Just gimmie the damn MG Anon.
>>47851349
Fuck yeah, friend.
>>47851349
There's more than 1 type of yandere? What do the moon runes say?
>>47851367
>What if it's too far away to stomp?
Walk closer.
>What if it's bigger than my foot?
Stomp on one part at a time.
>>47851379
There's a translation somewhere, but it's basically >>47851370
>>47851363
Don't think he knew what you meant. Here you go.
>>47850938
What do you mean by occultist?
>>47851379
I don't have a translated version, but here is a link to a page that has a translation.
https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/2166000
>>47851349
>>47851370
There was another one that listed the actual names for them. I think that was a waifu one, unlike the one I posted. Don't believe I have it saved.
>>47851379
1. Dependent - Yandere who can't live without, and needs you to be her support.
2. Monopolizing - Yandere who will go to the extreme to hog you to herself, and lock you away if she has to.
3. Eliminating - Yandere who kills those who get in the way of her, and her love.
4. Attack - Yandere who will get you physically to fall in line. It can be rape or he physically beating you.
5. Stalker - Yandere who stalks their love and knows everything about them.
6. Harmless - Yandere who does everything to see their beloved happy, but quietly hurts themselves.
7. Worshipping - Yandere who worships their beloved and will do anything for them.
8. Delusional - Yandere who makes up stories and heavy ass revisionism to make the world perfect for her, and her beloved.
9. Isolating - Yandere who makes you rely on her as she ruins your life secretly or openly.
>>47851370
I was talking about a real yandere waifu cyoa, not become a waifu.
>>47851393
thank you
>>47851464
Yeah, figured. I know one exists, may have even been made recently (last few months), but I never saved it. May or may not have been based off of cyoa authors too. I forget.
>>47849685
how soon can we get this PDF'ed? it looks good, but .jpg formats are awkward.
>>47847914
>>47847939
>>47847956
>Aspiring Student (Prodigy)
>Carbuncle
>Abjuration; Forcefield
Gonna protect that little boy to the best my ability.
>>47847670
No fucking way.
>>47847670
Wait, I thought you said you had a "boyish build", but you have breasts?
How does that work out?
>>47851884
A girl having a boyish build doesn't mean without tits, it means a general lack of figure. Such as not having notable hips or lacking a narrowing of the waist. As for just about any girl saying they have a boyish build, it almost always means their body isn't as clearly feminine as they would like.
>>47851953
Ah, okay. I get that. So like T Swift?
I'll pretend Angelanon looks llike T Swift but with somewhat larger boobs, and there is nothing you can do to stop me.Not like it matters since she's lesbian.
>>47852020
>So like T Swift?
Sure, though I doubt Angelanon is as tall as her.
>>47852020
>Not like it matters since she's lesbian.
>like it matters
>since she's lesbian.
>matters
She's an attention whore in a Cambodian painting newsgroup. Her and her beta orbiters existence shouldn't even be tolerated unless she's doing something relevant.
>>47852075
that's not a bad thing. T Swift is lanky as fuck.
Witch: Wandering Mistress
Insect: Giant Centipede
Focus: Forest Stride - can't see me coming
Speedy - can't outrun me
Sturdy - can't crush me
Resistance: Fire - can't kill it with fire
kekekekeke
>>47852075
Short chicks are best chicks.
>>47852246
leave my domain, peasant
>>47847670
And so much for having no fashion taste at all.
Bet this one looks beautiful on you if the wind plays with it.
>>47852246
>>47852334
They only need to be short enough for you to be able to throw them into any position you want.
Another reason to get your lazy asses into the gym.
>>47852383
But I want them to throw ME, anon!
>>47852396
See >>47852334
manlets...
>>47852402
don't use my own post against me motherfuckeri wish i was a manlet
>>47852087
Then why do you tolerate yourself?
>>47852411
>don't use my own post against me motherfucker
>Achievement unlocked: Butthurt by his own petard
Oh nice, thanks.
>>47852383
>>47852334
The best height difference is that of Hafthor Bjornsson and his girlfriend.
Tall girls are nice, but short girls are where it's at.
>>47852435
>Butthurt by his own petard
top pep
>>47852087
I agree, don't understand why those idiots lash out on everyone speaking out against her attention whoring
>>47845189
>22 pages
>11 of which are irrelevant to you
>can't go to the Netherlands
It's shit, Quiet. Shit.
I love it when AQCanon spurts random arabic in a sophisticated english sentence.
Keep analyzing his previews guys, I want more
>>47852454
>Quiet
>Shit
That's redundant.
>>47852516
anon pls, stop being so damn salty. Why are you so salty?
He said he isn't including muh memorydeath this time around, so it can't be that. Is it the mysteries?
>>47852536
Quiet likes to write half the story and then laugh at you for not reading his mind about the other half. So I guess that's the mysteries
>>47852536
...Trusting quiet? Really anon, i thought better of you.
Then again most people believe Quiet's "Lost Notes"...
>>47852516
I was going to say something like this, but ended up not bothering. Thanks for doing it for me.
>>47852546
fair point. I like not being given all the information, being able to guess as to how the setting is.
>>47852555
>>47852587
so you can't answer why you're salty?
You know, you could always just not whine. I don't see the point, really. You're just giving off bad vibes.
>>47852605
>so you can't answer why you're salty?
Well, no.
Can you answer why you're a giraffe?
>>47852605
Whining could be stating facts, but stating fact is not always whining dear anon.
Also i am different person, not salty anon.
I enjoyed quiet CYOA really. Still can't think why people believes at "Lost my notes" though.
>>47852634
>Can you answer why you're a giraffe?
Chuck Norris uppercutted me.
>>47852605
>fair point. I like not being given all the information, being able to guess as to how the setting is.
That's fine NORMALLY, but quiet wants to make that impossible. Everything is a curveball, everything is worse than it appears, and the only one who knows how fucked you really are is him.
In a normal CYOA you are given some details and expected to fill in the blanks, but those blanks are supposed to logically follow from what you are given, not be massive unknowable twists.
>>47852689
That's not how CYOAs work. If the author doesn't put something in, then it doesn't exist. If the author goes and adds or changes something, then you can just change your build too.
It's doomed to failure.
>>47851133
>>47850848
>>47850422
Thanks Mac <3
>>47851567
maybe after I finished all of this, I wish i could finish this already so I can move on to my next cyoa but rushing cyoa isn't really goodnext cyoa is immortal post apocalyotic, with a mix of supernatural and scifi and all picture are hand drawn by me
>>47852435
>butthurt
what
Cheers for the massive shitstorm earlier in this thread, enjoyed reading through it this morning.
Might make taking a couple of curses mandatory, it'd be a laugh.
>>47852843
You, you I like
>>47847914
>CHOOSE
Witch, Wandering Mistress - Wassup, witchy baby?
>Species
Mammal - Cat-nyan.
>Witch Mysteries
The Body, Humanize - I can disguise myself as the witch's daughter! They'll never see me coming! Also, I don't like being a furry. :(
>Perks
Charming - What, we can't even get this one while in human form? But it's the only one that at least makes sense...
Guide - Have to be useful to my mistress somehow.
Wand User - Need self-defense somehow, too.
>>47853072
>>47853072
>>47853082
>ultimate troll waifu CYOA
>>47847701
>since when did plaid become a dyke fashion statement?
I wear plaid and I'm not a dykeI'm a boy.
>>47848098
>maybe if we asked the mods or janitors politely,
RETARD ALERT
>>47847956
>Witch
Waifish Orphan
>Species
Pseudo-Dragon
>Perks
The Prodigy
Breath Weapon (Light)
Sturdy
Telepathic
>Future Focus
Witch of The Mind
Through Your Eyes
Well the main job is protection really like the ultimate bodyguard from lusty teenage boys all the way to annoying teachers are gonna get their eyeballs burnt.
Aint gonna trust nobody with this girls innocence unless its them who feeds me gives me shelter and a few headpats now and then....
>>47849960
>be qt androgynous fuccboi
>charm the socks off boys and girls
>boarding school still insists on female uniforms
>>47849627
the fuck is it?
>>47851370
The image compression on this one is shit. Have a better-quality image:
>>47847871
>wizard academy and our magical girl orphanage
And do they have corporal punishment?
I'm assuming Gifted does because it implies a realistic setting.
