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UPDATE, new page.
(1/13)
Reclaiming an Empire CYOA is completed.
I feel the 1st page is a bit short.
(1/7)
>>47693580
(2/13)
"I didn't mean to kill all those people" edition.
>>47693580
what pages are different/updated?
>>47693599
(3/13)
And so the grind begins.
>>47693600
There's two new options, Chere & Yin.
>>47693598
(2/7)
I felt the classes were a bit generic at times.
>>47693619
so i can ignore everything but page 2, 12 & 13?
>>47693619
(4/13)
>>47693600
But if you meant which existing pages were changed, none since the last posting. It's just a bit too far back to want to link.
>>47693598
>gorgons are all-female
Why tho? Groping cute girls with my tail could be so much fun.
>>47693626
(3/7)
Class skills and stuff.
>>47693619
>And so the grind begins.
Indeed. I feel sorry for you, Mr. 13 pages of waiting...
>>47693599
Both of them sound like they have only downsides, so there better be good benefits for picking human Chernobyl or My-Serial-Killer-Can't-Be-This-Cute.
For those for whom reposts of builds make them want to sexually abuse that character.
>>47693646
(5/13)
>>47693643
Well, more-or-less. I'm still going to post Miya last, so technically, you want 2, 10, and 11.
>>47693653
(4/7)
>>47693665
I hit "cancel" instead of "open" by mistake. Let's try that again.
>>47693646
(actually 5/13)
>>47693662
I want to sexually violate all of Angelanon's builds for this reason.
>>47693675
Pic is missing.
>>47693662
And a template for if anyone wants to add to this.
>>47693666
(5/7)
>>47693665
I'm not seeing an image, think you forgot to post it?
>>47693653
Great skills. That used to be the weak point of your cyoas so it's nice to see you improving.
>>47693598
Looking good so far, will deffo post a build when you're done. If you want to fluff up to 1st page how about 'innate' but weak buffs based on either months or moon phase you were born in?
>>47693679
(6/13)
And so it goes.
>>47693685
I want to watch Angelanon sexually violate you with a strapon.
>>47693691
(6/7)
I feel I kind of tried too hard to make the companions all potential love interests.
Also I'm never making 40 companions again, I didn't learn from Crown Quest how much of a nightmare that can be.
>>47693599
whoa Dude Right in thefetish
>>47693689
What's the required size for the images?
>>47693696
(7/13)
>>47693691
Yeah, I hit the wrong button by mistake & didn't notice the file didn't attach.
>>47693720
(8/13)
>>47693711
Glad you like what you see so far.
>>47693710
Finally.
>>47693694
Yeah I thought that'd make it too similar to Crown Quest and Mists, so I decided not to add it in.
I will for the next high fantasy I make though.
>>47693712
I'unno
I use paint.net, I just plop that shit in there and resize it when needed.
>>47693736
(9/13)
Almost there.
>>47693744
You did it! These multi-page things are a hassle to post.
>>47693151
Questions for Worm anon if he's around.
Does the changed biology from Endbringer Durability make you unaging? What about Human Infection?
Also, what's the cap on people Human infenction can infect?
>>47693760
(10/13)
New page.
>>47693662
>can break other characters while not having your character here
What time to be alive
That's a good list not to be on
>>47693779
(11/13)
Library Page
>>47693807
(12/13)
Miya page 1. I'm gonna stop posting this stand-alone page after this. If / when I'm done adding new people, I'll just append it to the end of whatever page that is. It isn't essential for the next one, anyway. You can piece together that happened.
>>47693793
The list isn't magic, you can still be broken it's just that less people are given primers to fantasize about it.
>>47693829
(13/13)
And I'm finally done.
You know, it took so long waiting for the last thread to die that I almost have half of the next page done.
>>47693535
How do you pronounce CYOA? I'm fond of a really japanese "kyo-ah"
>>47693654
I finally posted it. How's their benefits?
>>47693604
>tfw nothing about being a turboslut
I don't want to be a freak so this is a big disappointment.
>Vagina 5
>Extra squeeze 10
>Dragongirl 25
>Erogenous mouth 30
>Invulnerability 90
Isn't that already kinda covered with immortality?
>Fantasy World 100
>Afterlife 110
>Friendly gods 120
>Industrial revolution 130
>Perfect submission 55
The spells are all pitiful, but I have leftover points
>Move through walls 85
>Lightning bolt 95
>>47693848
I call them "c your o a." I don't know why, but "your" is the only word I both to fully say.
>>47693779
I love you, Beri, but these are not up my speed. Chernobyl is a traumatized mess, guilts me into making her a useless heater and her injections/items are not worth it. YinYan is insane, completely useless, gives you edgy powers and edgy items, and her bonus is terrifying.
>>47693848
"ceei-oh-a" is the only non-autistic option.
>>47693647
Cause I felt like it, that is why.
>>47693693
Thank you, I intend to make them a bit more unique for the next.
>>47693760
You too! It is a hassle. I got off easy though, I think. It is real nice to receive a response from Beri though.
>>47693848
I pronounce it see why oh ay.
>>47693848
see-why-oh-ayy
Literally just read it out letter by letter, like a normal acronym.
>>47693878
Do you want options for the number of sexual partners you have or something?
>>47693848
See-why-oh-a(like ey but with an 'a' sound.)
>>47693861
Having your own Godzilla could be nice, but she has way too much emotional package to deal with.
Cross Cloak isn't enough to make up for living with a killer, who is constantly guilt tripping herself when she isn't killing.
>>47693936
Well, it says it's about being a turboslut, but there's no powers of releasing pheromones, making love potions/spells or a "drawback" of having your brain overcome with desire.
Could've included that fucking or drinking fluids made you stronger or something.
But no, there's nothing about being a slut, only about having several dicks, cunts or assholes.
>>47693896
>not up [to] my speed
That's a shame. Not that it makes it much better, but Chere can happily warm you with her body heat if you pick one of the perks that make you completely immune. There's not much I can say for Yin. Yan is what would be considered insane, even if there's dere behind it.
>>47693917
Is a response from me something special or something?
>>47693972
So it is less the danger & more their emotional states you don't like?
>>47693848
chyoa
>>47693848
SEE-AY-O-EY
>>47693779
Honestly the only reason I can think of to pick these, unless you just want to be destructive, is because you feel sorry for them. It can be a compelling reason, but it's never really a good one.
Same kind of applies to Miya, but she does have some good benefits.
Not to shit on you or anything. I like reading the new options even if they aren't my preference, I'm just kind of wondering who you thought they would appeal to.
>>47694106
>>47694110
>I'm just kind of wondering who you thought they would appeal to.
>>47693711
>>47694023
>So it is less the danger & more their emotional states you don't like?
Yes, but there also isn't any perks I really want.
I can't make money from the energy, because I would feel quilty, and I have no I idea what I would do with a giant woman who shoot radioactive beam from her mouth.
Most of Yin's perks seem rather useless unless you're actively doing something dangerous (like helping Yan). Nothing that makes me really want her when I could choose anyone else.
>>47693587
Does Thrall work on other Witches?
>>47694129
>>47694161
>>47694153
Pretty sure it doesn't as Salem said witches are immune to manipulation and hypnosis.
>>47694153
Salem mentions witches being immune to manipulation magic, so I wouldn't count on it.
>>47694179
Mystery Box
>>47694179
I dislike the fact that with monogamy you can't take Fantasy + Endurance or both + shota. Why am I being punished for choosing monogamy?
>>47694106
>Polytheistic
>Isis
>Demeter
>Fantasy Living
>Increased Endurance
>Increased Strength
>Cute Little Boy
Nice combination of white and brown, oppai and loli, horny MILF and horny MILF.
>>47693662
>only one Odesium build
>also the hardest to mindbreak
Odesium builds confirmed to be the purest of them all.
>>47694205
Because you choose Easy Mode.
>>47694106
Does 5 goddesses give 8 or 10 tokens?
>>47694205
Take as many as goddesses as you need tokens,then dump them after you get the tokens.Nothing could go wrong with this plan.
>>47693779
Sweet shit you added a 'yan'dere!
>>47694023
I always thought your CYOAs were well made, and even the ones I didn't have interest in the idea of (like some of the more fetish-y ones) I felt were still good. Genie was also really amazing. I started making CYOAs partially because I wanted to be as well renowned as you were.
Also I think it was you who made the Dungeon Meister CYOA and that was my all time favourite. My memory on that is a bit fuzzy though, so don't quote me on that.
>>47694205
Because you're less likely to be vaporised by jelly goddesses is the idea I think. Evidently it's a man's duty to philander? I guess the goddesses would be used to that, but I was also under the impression that they were getting with mortals to avoid that sort of behavior.
>>47694199
Fuck.Godamnit.Shit.
Instantly regret looking at the mystery box, now the CYOA isn't nearly as fun to think about.
>>47694326
Glad you like her.
>>47694327
Thanks, that means a lot! It's good to know, even if only partly, that I helped convince others to make CYOAs. Yeah, I made Dungeon Meister.
>>47694348
At least you don't transform into a golden rain when cheating on her.
>>47694199
This: >>47694360
>>47694360
this CYOA won't be even half as fun without that mystery box, you could call it salt box
>>47694360
That's what you get for looking at the mystery box instead of taking one of the goddesses.
>>47694376
Yeah, at least you aren't a shapeshifting rapist. There is that.
>tfw you realize the average tg goer would be a better husband than the gods
>but only because the gods are such horrible husbands
>>47694360
Are you sure you weren't the guy from a few threads ago, trying to start a new shitstorm?
Yes, every thread needs something to ree about, but can't it be something new for a change?
>>47694360
>He took one of Italics mystery boxs.
You fucked up.
>>47694205
I know your feels annon, just settle for the endurance and shota would be my plan. Or just lie to yourself and pretend you can deal with managing 2 or goddesses at the same time.
Creator of the energy cyoa here. Currently working on the revised and improved version of the energy cyoa. With it, there will be new perks and drawbacks, as well as some lore and something I didn't want to put in the original version but decided to in this one: Companions. If you guys have any suggestions you would like to add, let me know.
Loli Quest Best Quest.
>>47693662
>Hime as a wife and Anastasia as concubine.
>>47694512
>>47693662
>Alexandra as a Waifu and Hime locked away in a dungeon as orc breeding stock.
Is six male companions enough? It was hard enough finding okay-ish art, and still four of them ended up being from anime/games
>>47694549
Even one is enough if you really put in effort.
>>47694544
Hime is literally always smarter, stronger and richer than you.
>>47693779
Chere is fine. Don't like yin at all.
My problem with Chere is that I feel like I'm being guilted into taking heater even though power supply is obviously better. Reverb is nice because it helps her problem and gives me a giantess, but I feel like Oki already gives me that benefit without being an unstable reactor.
I guess lattice shell is the only gift I care about, especially if I have reverb.
And while her being put in a state of arousal sounds interesting, I have no idea how to train her and I don't know what else I would want from her other than starting a relationship (and I also wouldn't be able to introduce her to any family or friends)
Can Box Wine post Hero Academy so I can show off my experimental probably impractical build
>>47694607
Still can't beat orc cock.
>>47694549
How many of them can you romancesimultaneously.
>>47694615
Not him
>>47694659
>>47694106
>Pantheon
This is going to be tons of fun!
>Hastur
She seems so nice and kind, yet adventurous!
>Nctos and Nctolhu
These cuties can't be ignored.
>Nyarlahotep
I can honestly say I'm attracted to such a generous, caring spirit.
>Shub-Niggurath
I'm a sucker for the shy and nerdy type.
>Yidrah
She's a bit intense but she is really beautiful so why not.
So uhm do I get 8 or 10 tokens now? Both 3-5 and 5-10 seem to include the 5... I'll just count the twins as two goddesses and go for the 10 since it's not clear either way.
>Fantasy Living (2)
We fit right in!
>Increased endurance (4)
I'll need to keep up with my wives.
>Increased strength (5)
I can't be a weakling here. I could use some muscles too.
>Love Shift (6)
Dare I mindbreak the Old Ones... I probably shouldn't.
>Divine Blessing (7)
I don't care about gender, just make sure they have all their tentacles.
>Godhood (10)
Oh, did I always have so many tentaclejqsdjqljsdpjzeapdjqojdpoqsjxaefaaerI regret nothing.
>>47694676
>>47694567
great. Because at this point I'm just searching for guys from Fate/Stay Night.
Apparently there's a lot.
>>47694696
>>47694707
>>47694695
With that mind break you could save the universe!
>>47694629
You can try to sicc orcs on her but that's pretty ambitious for a guy whose best advice for hurting her is letting her publically disembowel you.
>>47694730
I now have to wonder what the results of mind-breaking elder gods would be.
>>47694659
Ej Har
>Classes
Knowledge(Magic Theory) * 2
Arcane Magic * 3
Summoning * 1
Potion Mixing * 3
Blood magic * 1
>Friends:
Cassiopeia
Bathsheba
Nashwa
>Events:
Year 1:
Escort, Fundraising
Year 2:
Research proposal (How to bring the 'essence' of a being from the Pure plane, to this one in such a form that it can be manipulated.
(read: how to remove souls from both the magic planes and the bodies, fuse them together as a liquid, then re-insert that into the body through the blood + other liquids to prepare it for the next part.))
Year 3:
Fundraising, Research proposal(How to use the spirit summoning portal to move to the Pure plane, how to fuse a single spirit to a single human for myriad)
Year 4:
Fundraising, Basilisk Den
Year 5:
Research proposal (How to fuse human bodies and multiple spirits together to achieve immortal life)
Name:
Khalid "Crystal Aurora" Eral. In his nation the middle name is a signifier of rank and occupation. Barely equivalent to Baronet.
1/2
>>47694925
Why did you copy-paste my build?
>>47694659
>Ej Har
>Elemental magic(3)
Simple and powerful
>Ki attunement(3)
arguably has the most potential of any magic
>Physical training(3)
Ki attunement seems to be based off your body so this is to suplement that
>Maneuvers(1)
Dodge and shit mane
>Blood magic
Actually sounds pretty good for defense and utility like hardening my blood before I get hit or creating blood constructs to distract enemies
>Scal
Can teach me how better use my ki and blood magic in tandem. Plus seems like a bro
>Cassicopia
I just want people from my same school desu
>Sanyo
Can do much more subdued manipulation type arts when fighting isn''t practical. Plus I think picking people from your same school would give the team good synergy
>Chandra
Autist waifu to stay by side and defend me from shit I don't see coming. Pretty much my guard dog
>Sera
Designated heal slut since I don't like Eloise
The point of this build is that since elemental, ki and blood magic all use different sources I'll be able to cast an insane amount of spells and become a death hurricane. I figure if I keep rotating around which type of magic I use I'll never run out(like I won't run out of mana because I'm not overusing and I switch between blood and ki)
Can Box Wine clarify if this is the case or I'll just become tired even faster from having to use so many sources of magic at once? What does everyone think of my build it's my first time ever making one!
>>47693599
They need to send Yin into the fucking sun. How could you possibly tolerate someone like this if your goal is to integrate these creatures and humanity? She's purely detrimental to everyone.
>>47694659
>Name: Alex Sharpe
Born a mere peasant, Alex showed a remarkable magical talent along with a ruthlessness and drive for success which drew him to Lunestier.
>School: Lunestier
The student body here is sometimes atrocious, but no one can argue with the school itself. For up and coming mages and diplomats, there is no superior choice. The idea of a place so removed from the daily struggles of poverty such as Lunestier is mind blowing to Alex. Having seen the classism and air of superiority surrounding most students, Alex takes care to keep knowledge of his origins under wraps away from the school harpies.
>Classes:
Arcane Magic (3) Can never go wrong with the classics. This is the field which made Alex fall in love with magic.
Elemental Magic (2) with specialization in fire and water/ice magic. This will be the back up magic, used only when Arcane isn't enough to get the job done.
Diplomacy (2) Words are powerful, best to keep them in your arsenal.
Magic Refinement (2) Running out of mana during a battle is humiliating, as well as dangerous.
Dueling (1) Even a mage needs to know how to handle themselves in a physical confrontation.
In combat Alex uses his magic mix to keep his opponents guessing. He greatly prefers one on one confrontations, because it's much easier to keep track of a single foe. Outside of fighting Alex tries to use his words as his best weapon, ending fights before they have a chance to begin.
>Companions:
Mecherath. Having information and connections on your side is invaluable for keeping ahead of the Lunestier sharks. Making friends with the school informant is going to be a great boon.
Bathsheba. The tank of the group, brings resilience and strength. Also creates a long term ally by helping to protect her from the AI nerds.
cont.
>>47694937
Maybe he's trying to get you on the rape list.
Who is best Virtue?
>>47695076
Chandara. Every party needs a good rogue, and Chandara fits the bill perfectly.
Farhat. Without a good support, even the strongest of teams will crumble. Besides, its always a good thing to have friends with friends.
Yung Tashi. A good swordsman who also keeps tabs on school gambling, very useful.
>Events:
>Year 1: Party Planner, Fund Raising
This will be a year for Alex to establish an understanding of the various schools through Party Planner, along with building some capital reserves with Fund Raising. This money will support Alex and his adventures in the coming years.
>Year 2: Research Proposal (Condensed Crystallized Arcane bombs)
Portable magic grenades, usable by anyone and everyone. Who doesn't want to see crystal fragmentation grenades? Or the equivalent of a magical flashbang?
>Year 3: The Great Hunt, Bodyguard
Building connections is half the reason people go to Lunestier. Developing a relationship with Cynthia Highking could create a very valuable ally later on. The Great Hunt is an opportunity not just to enjoy some good old fashioned adventuring but also to test the skills and relationships Alex has been developing for the past few years.
>Year 4: Party Planner, Battle Royal (4v4)
Building relationships along with some good old fashioned team fighting.
>Year 5: Battle Royal (1v1),
The final hurrah. Alex doesn't expect to win (though that would be fantastic). This event is entirely about personal satisfaction.
Alex has sought only one thing in his life: escape. Growing up poor has imbued him with a inferiority complex, one which Lunestier only worsens. But throughout it all, he is determined to rise above his origins and make something of himself. He hopes that Lunestier can be the launching pad for a successful future. But distinguishing himself among the elite of society is no easy task, and Alex still has a long way to go before his aspirations can be realized.
>>47693779
I can see going with Chere, but Yin is a problem.
>>47694875
(2/2)
Eral originally saw no reason to not continue his research at the magio-commune; had it not been for his sibling-servants' warning he would have died to the assassin's blades. The days soon after were a whirlwind--who knew two of the six elders dissaproved? And so strongly as well. It was only by the grace of the commune's Ouroboros mage that Eral was even allowed to leave unharmed. Even more of a shock was that his parents disapproved too! That look of faint horror in his father's eyes...what an idiot. None of his siblings minded the new...parts...or the increased senses! Even stranger was that the Odesians shared in this neuroses. Ah well, at least Cassio and Nashwa had sensible heads on their shoulders. That robot as well, she seemed none too displeased when told of my plans.
>>47695082
>>47694255
Can't be raped. I'm so far past the point of humanity that I can't even derive sexual pleasure from physical stimulation anymore.
>>47695092
>>47694423
The power of friendship.
>>47695166
I think I already have something like that with the social energy source.
Hi. I finished a CYOA.
Consider liking it, but it's okay if you don't.
>>47693662
Woah this is kinda neat
>>47694659
Lunestier
Martial Combat x3
Physical Training x3
Dueling x3
Tactics x1
Kengen
Trap Catcher
Tarkun Ironstout
Eydal Northbreed
Mecherath
Battle Royal x4
Bodyguard x3
Security x1
Born and raised in the scummiest fighting pits of Quadicle, Lorne was destined for violence. Discovered by a poor Lunestier recruiter who got lost looking for the up scale neighbourhood, he impressed her immediately with his fighting prowess. While his arrival at the prodigious school was scoffed at by many, he quickly became a rising star in the dueling department. Preferring to fight in heavy armor despite longstanding traditions, he treats every duel as a fight to the death and when he was first brought in he frequently had to be pulled off his submitting opponents. His style is outwardly crude and wild, but close observation reveals every move is calculated and every blow expertly placed. Multiple high placements in the Battle Royal, and the personal attention of the first princess have kept him from expulsion, despite numerous complaints by noble families of disfigured heirs and wildly uncouth behavior.
>>47695342
Is there a DLC for me to choose you anon?
>>47694659
Name: Lindaswen Thereliel (goes by Lindas)
>Lunestier
>Arcane Magic x3
>Summoning Magic x3
>Tactics x3
>Magic Refinement
>Valerie Bluewood
>Allyce Westhold
>Crale Edwards
>Tennie Northbreed
>Suzette Highking
>The Great Hunt (every year)
>Security
>Bodyguard
I was a orphan adopted by Lunestier groundskeeper. A teacher saw that I have strong innate magical skills. So I got accepted in the prestigious magical school.
Hopefully with my summoning magic and tactics I can basically become a general of my own magic army and I can use arcane magic to protect myself and support my army. After graduation my friends and I can go on quests to find treasures and lost knowledge and help protect peasants and kingdoms. After I become stronger, I can take over a old castle as base and start small Queendom of magical creatures summoned from the different planes. Then become a famous mercenary company and have my magic army help settle conflicts in exchange for extravagant gifts and titles.
Eventually have more titles than all those pompous spoiled students at school who wouldn't except me because I'm "poor" and "low class".
>>47694875
Till think we might be friends, but you go to another school:(
>>47695003
Pretty neat! I imagine elemental magic mixed with ki and physical training would be like a Airbender or something. What would you use those abilities for?
>>47695076
Looks pretty powerful, especially for dueling! Nice that there's another Lunestier student that isn't to snobby.
>>47695003
So you'll tire faster then most but not because you're running low on reacources. Rather because it just takes stamina to do stuff. I really like this build though
>>47693662
So as Alexandra's author I'm actually pleased with what you did with her. There's only two things I would change.
Change "Tough Love" to instead making her feel pathetic, worthless, and unwanted while acting very dominate. Her mother hated her existence and let Alex know it. Alex routinely failed to meet her mother's extremely high standards when it came to magic. Once Alex is broken she'll be a loyal servant desperate for any scrap of affection.
Change "How to Help" into making her feel loved and wanted by those close to her. She doesn't give a shit about her family's honor.
The "Kind Love" section was perfect. It felt like you were inside my head.
The "How to Harm" section was almost perfect. The only thing I would do is add the word monster to the end.
>>47695344
Every popular CYOA should have one.
>>47695342
Well it looks cute.
>>47695417
Question about Hero Academy: Do school specific classes have three tiers like the rest, or are they one class and that's it? Reading the builds, I see both methods used.
>>47695344
I disagree. That guy has basically convinced me to never post a build for your CYOA.
>>47695361
cont.
Despite is blunt and prickly exterior, Lorne is actually deeply against violence. At least, in the sense of how many others at the academies see it. Violence is not a game, it's not heroic, and it's not noble. He often feels frightened or disappointed by how casually his fellow students treat the whole "being trained to murder for the rest of their life" thing. When he fights, it is only because he has to and he resents it every time. He would rather be doing almost anything else. Despite this, he acknowledges his own skill and natural aptitude and hopes that by perfecting his natural aptitude he might be able to keep other people from being forced to fight. He holds out hope that one day he might be able to settle down and get away from all of it, perhaps after the next great threat comes and goes he might be able to find a peaceful life for himself.
>>47694875
>>47695003
>>47695076
>>47695361
>>47695406
Another perfectly good thread ruined by autism.
At this rate Hero Academy is going to need its own thread.
>>47694659
>Name: Alexandra Lannis
A noble whose mother hates her for the actions of her dead disgraced father who was revealed to be a demon worshiper and killed shortly after Alex was born. His secret brought great shame to Alex's mother's family so they were the ones to kill him. Her mother even tried to kill Alex when she was 13 though her mother doesn't know Alex knows that. Her mother teaches magic at Lunestier
>School: Ej Har Institute
She ran away to this school out of a combination of escaping her mother's influence and giving a big fuck you to her.
>Classes:
>Ki Attunment (x2)
>Blood Magic (x2)
>Unholy Arts (x2)
>Arcane Maigc (x3)
>Unarmed Combat (x1)
Discovered to have talent for Blood Magic. Chose Unholy Arts out of spite.
>Companions:
>Chandara
>Scal
>Cassiopeia
>Inas
>Sanyo
Making real friends for the first time has really changed Alex's outlook on life. She is deeply loyal to them.
>Events:
>Basilik Den (x4)
>Battle Royal (x2)
>The Great Hunt (x2)
All Alex cares about during the festivals is having fun.
As much as she hates her mother she really doesn't care about any idea of revenge. Showcasing her abilities is enough of an "Fuck You" for her. All Alex cares about is an uncertain future filled with opportunity and adventure. She hopes to travel with her friends as a group of mercenaries fighting monsters and corrupting innocent maidens in her downtime.
Personality wise she has a bead habit of acting slightly smug and arrogant because of her skill and ability. She is also a bit bloodthirsty which might be a side effect of her being good at blood magic.Or it could be do to an dark experiment her father subjected her to when she was less then a week old.
>>47695499
Three
>>47695512
Man it's my first fan made graphic tho
>>47695554
You weren't here when SDA updated Stardust in the December of last year?
Probably my favourite worm CYOA
>>47695554
I don't understand. What's wrong?
>>47694659
>>47694676
>>47694696
>>47694707
>>47694717
>Name: Mai Ling
>Gender: Female
>Race: Swamp Giantess
This kind and friendly girl from the Macro Swamps left her home to become a Hero.
>Uzuza
For some reason the administration of Uzuza was really keen on having a Swamp Giant student. It took about an hour for them to abandon their fantasies of an enormous sword wielding giant. She has no interest in such things.
>First Aid x3
Mai is a natural born healer and wants nothing more than to cure all the booboos of the cute little people.
>Divine Arts x3
She follows the teachings of Zumanda, the Seven Miles Healer, a giant goddess who crossed seven miles a step yet healed everyone on her way.
>Teamwork x2
It took some training for Mai to learn how not to trample her allies.
>Beast Taming x2
She loves the idea of healer pidgeons, bringing medicine to the wounded, and insists she will apply to principle to dragons.
>Farhat
This cute little thing keeps talking about caverns and exploring Mai. He's like an excited little gerbil.
>Evergreen
Like a talking mosquite. Surprisingly fun.
>Hana
Too cute for words. Mai would like to pet her all day.
>Kengen
Keep challenging Mai to duels. Never wins.
>Damian
His dire wolf is like a cute little puppy and they have many serious discussions about her "healer dragons" idea which he insists is insane.
>Y1: Fund raising
>Y2: Fund raising
>Y3: Fund raising, Sports
>Y4: Fund raising, Sports
>Y5: Fund raising, Bodyguard
Mai loves the festival most, but playing on the basketball team of Uzuza was fun too, until they banned her for being "a freaking giant". The Bodyguard thing is a mystery but she is honoured to do so.
Mai might not be what Uzuza expected when they received their very first Swamp Giant student but in time she'll prove to be quite the asset, as a healer and morale boost.
>>47695563
Fuck I forgot the picture
>>47695574
>>47695554
God I hope I don't get my own thread I like you guys to much I actually feel bad cause of how many cool OCs have been posted and ignored because of hero academy.
>>47695586
>>47695003
It's not my business, but doesn't it use more course point than the maximum?
That is, isn't it with 11 points, instead of 10?
Or did I understood wrong how the point system works...?
>>47695554
Oh no, people like a CYOA and are posting builds instead of arguing or bitching.
What are we going to do.
>>47695598
It's not your fault, it's all the spergs who think people care about their special snowflake builds, and then pretend to be shocked when people are annoyed at having to scroll through twelve gigantic posts of verbal diarrhea.
>>47695613
Like we always do pinkie.
Argue about it for the next 200+ posts of course.
>>47695613
He appears to be confusing the old style of points and the new style.
Old one was nine+one with that one being for one of your school techniques.
New style is just ten.
>>47695598
Don't. Truly cool OC will find its way to shine through the Hero Academy haze. Frankly all of this is just evidence of what a kickass cyoa you created.
>>47695613
Seems like you're arguing and bitching to me, famalam. Maybe try reading through your posts so you don't come off sounding like a twelve year old boy?
>>47695631
Misclicked. Meant to reply to >>47695605
>>47695406
idk they all can serve their own purpose on their own like ki to fly and throw super punches at close range, blood for defense and the like. I don't know how to mix them like maybe I could use blood and air elemental magic to make blood mist or fog or shoot shoot pebbles with my blood inside so when they pierce someone I can move my blood around inside them. I'm not really that creative and didn't think this through that well
>>47695598
You made a cool CYOA. Don't feel bad that assholes are abusing it to spam huge builds.
>>47695342
I like when unusual monster girl types are included, but this is too hard to pick I want to love pretty much all the girls, I'm at a fucking 6-way tie here, at least hook us up with two girls if we take a downside.
>>47695342
Carrie.
I should be able to scrounge up enough money to surprise her with military-grade steel cable one morning.
Then I keep teasing her until she realizes who wears the pants in this relationshipand they don't make pants in her size.
>Open thread looking for new CYOAs
>Hero Academy, that looks pretty cool
>Suddenly notice all the replies
>mfw
>>47695672
Just hide them, that's what most people here do.
Again don't hate on Box Wine, blame the scourge of autists. Frankly this is the reason the rest of the board despises CYOA threads.
>>47695631
I'm probably retarded I guess I just assumed the school specific course would be free. And does it work in the tier system the other courses do?
>>47695691
Yes.
>>47695678
You think that's bad, you haven't checked out the Mtg lore threads and all of their custom made super snowflake planewalkers as well as Chandere (their version of Angelanon) sperging out about Sorin.
>>47695699
Then I guess I'll drop physical training in favor of blood magic. What's the difference in potential between choosing physical training and just vigorously exercising on my own?
>>47695569
Yeah but it's a fan made graphic that's basically a "Fuck you" to everyone building for the CYOA.
>>47695678
I shouldn't need to hide them. People should realize that nobody wants to read their post character-limit builds.
At best they get 1 reply each, so what's the point? To show off? They clearly aren't interested in discussing their build.
>>47695647
Sounds pretty creative to me! It's a unique build at least.
>>47695648
>>47695672
>>47695678
There's literally nothing wrong with posting cyoa builds in a cyoa thread. Plus mine is only one post long!
>>47695711
>their version of Angelanon
What do you mean?
>>47695417
ty I'm the guy from yesterday who had to go to bed I'm glad I could get a canon answer on the viability of the build
>>47695580
So how many mages will she kill for them?
>>47695725
You're acting as though people talking about mindbreaking and raping a build is equivalent to them actually mindbreaking and raping the real life player behind those builds.
>>47695725
Good. You retards deserve it.
>>47695569
Yes, but it's not really a good one. It's like- you can channel autism positively, but the forcey-funtime isn't exactly a positive.
>>47695755
Calm yourself.
>>47694659
Bork
Male Orc
>Uzaza
Much battle, little cheating magic! Strong!
>Physical Training 3
Bork strong! Lift much!
>Berserking 3
Bork sometimes angry. When angry, Bork strong!
>Martial Combat 1
Bork hit things! Like to hit things.
>Mage Hunters 1
Mage cheat. Not fair.
>Beast Taming 1
Animal nice. No call stupid.
>Teamwork 1
Friends, important. No orc can fill all holes. Need teamwork.
>Helena
Helena like hit. Bork tough. No mind hit.
>Trap-Catcher
Catch understand anger. Anger make strong!
>Silene
Horse spacious. Good fit.
>Tarkun Ironstout
Dwarf small. Tough! Tight fit. Say she old.
>Crale Edwards
Strong woman. Proud woman. Birth strong babies.
>Battle Royal x2
Meet strong people. Hit them!
>Sports x2
Bork like it when people run. Fun to chase.
>Great Hunt
Big beast! Reminds of home.
>Basilisk Den x5
Pay for hitting people? Fun!
>Battle of the arts
Play the song of my people! Why everyone leave?!
>Research Proposal
Let me talk Anger Management. Anger important! Weak without anger.
>Security
Need Bork to hit things?
>Bodyguard
Princess! Need me a mud bath! Need look good!
>Blind Date x4
Find strong mate!
Znanje speak difficult. Likes weird metal man.
Like Sorte ears. Something inside calls me. Elf, Wat do?!
Sanyo good with whip. But Bork not like chains. Chains cold. Remind of past.
Jiel man. But no look man. No Muscle. Doesn't speak much.
>>47695711
I mean, back when those threads were actually about MTG lore chandere was basically just someone to laugh at and provoke. I don't go around there since snowflakes started happening, but I don't assume that that's changed much.
>>47695740
People are playing let's pretend. Is that not the intention of this entire board? What else should they be doing? If they got more responses maybe they would get more discussion going. It's not like any good CYOA actually has mechanics, so there's no technical aspects to discuss other than rules and balance.
>>47695762
Just speaking the truth. Nobody cares about you or your builds. The best you'll get is being included in a fetish CYOA, so relish it :)
>>47695342
>Branding
>Gentle
>>47695725
Fair enough I don't want to discourage fan content though even if I don't agree with.
>>47695773
Man I don't even make builds, I'm just working on an update for my stuff and watching the shitshow.
>>47695763
Oh look, another post to hide !
>>47695770
If you want to post a build, keep it short and sweet and try to interact with people. From what I've seen, nobody in this thread has done any of that.
Roleplay if you want, but show some fucking courtesy.
>>47695725
If you have an incredible thin skin. In which case this is the wrong site for you.
I'm getting tired of these outages.
>>47694608
You can get Chere to adapt to Power Supply. She doesn't want to be exploited like before, but if you show a lot of gratitude and don't dehumanize her at all, she can overcome her fears of the helmet. "Train" basically means to help her become more submissive to you, so that she's less likely to do any harm in that mode.
>>47695065
She didn't choose her fate. But then again, she'd probably willingly climb into that rocket.
>>47695112
Yeah, Yin is rather niche.
>>47695725
>Post enormous speshul snowflake build
>suddenly included in fetish CYOA
It's poetic justice at its finest.
MFW all you autists get BTFO
>>47695743
She spams Sorin art all day and erry day, post false flagging questions like "Who's the best mtg husbando?" only to redicule every answer that isn't Sorin. As well as literally sperging out everytime Nissa is mentioned in positive light.
Oh and she sperg'd out against one of their namefags who's in charge of their personal IRC channel about how he is always incessantly flaunting around how his life is so much better and financially secure to afford mtg as a hobby then her' life is.
Literally an absolute emotionally wrecked bitch.
>>47695755
Come dude don't blame them they're just having fun if anything blame me for making the cyoa.
>>47695725
Here's an idea, don't post your build? It's not like people want to see it anyway.
If >>47693662 has genuinely ruined Hero Academy for you, then you must be autistic.
>>47695725
jesus christ eating pizza, are you this fucking triggered someone mentions rape?
>>47695678
>People hate CYOA threads because of things that happen in the CYOA threads.
>Not because they just hate CYOA threads in general.
You're projecting your butthurt onto everyone else.
>>47695785
Ironically, Angelanon (I think) is the only one trying to start any kind of discussion about builds.
>>47695805
It used to be pretty funny to watch. I like board personalities like that. Especially pathetic and ridiculous ones. It's what keeps the wheels turning and the memes churning.
>>47695825
Don't hate me for speaking the truth.
>>47695804
Nope. I'm not posting my build because of it, I'm not on the thing.
Though this does make me suspicious that this thing was made out of spite for builds or something, which is full retard in a CYOA thread.
>>47695833
Don't mask your butthurt behind memes.
>>47695825
>"You're projecting your butthurt onto everyone else."
>Proceeds to project even harder
Ok?
>>47695805
But I don't do any of those things.
>>47695827
I try, but it only works sometimes.
>>47694659
Updating my build, enjoy my autism
Name: Grodek Neurial
The eldest son of an humble knight family. Grodek was born in a small kingdom, located on a grand rocky plain situed at the very edge of civilisation.
In the recent decennies, the land slowly started to decay, destroying the already scarce vegetation. Eerie creatures never seen before or though to be extinct since many years started to be sighted more and more frequently. Recently, small villages are getting lost to monsters and famine and even the wealthier cities are starting to show sign of suffering.
After growing up admiring the rare adventurer daring enough to hunt down the land's monsters, Grodek enrolled in an academy with the hope of, one day, saving his country.
School: Ej Har
Grodek need the power to save his country. As an unknown knight from a backwater kingdom, he doesn't care about the taboos he is about to breach.
Course:
>Martialx3
In order to kill the diverse beasts hauting the plain, one must know how to use the best tool
>Unarmedx1
Having to fight without a weaopn or time to cast a spell is a rare situation but the plains tend to be full of surprises.
>Physical Trainingx3
A strong body is required to survive in the rocky wastelands
>Necromancyx1
Where most people see an unspeakable abomination or a way to field vast army of loyal soldier, Grodek sees cheap and tireless laborer,
>Blood Magicx2
A very reliable way to weaken ennemies and to strengthen oneself
>>47695843
Maybe anon thought it would be good for a laugh or a wank. This is fucking 4chan, and a CYOA thread to be more specific. People made shit like Intersex Turboslut, Sissy Life, and that one where you design a mindless fuck android with pictures of real women.
>>47695843
>I'm not posting my build
It was a success, then! We finally have a weapon to combat the autists. The last thing they want to see is their special snowflake character turned into a slut.
>>47695843
I thought it was obvious that Hime made it.
>>47695725
>mfw I made the Aziotha Uhra build
>mfw I only did to RP as a female cross between HK-47 from Star Wars, Kat from Gunnerkrigg Court and a tiny bit of Kimiko Ross from Dresden Codak
>mfw someone turned that build into a mindbreak/tenderly love cyoa option
>I actually like the description
>>47695862
>mfw saving these posts to add to
>>47695790
>She didn't choose her fate.
Maybe not, but as far as the organization goes, they'd only be benefited by getting rid of her. There's nothing good or positive about her continued existence, she only hurts their goals.
>>47695721
That it's the class where it's the easiest to get an A.
Seriously, if you're a proper Hero it won't even feel like class since you already know everything and can do anything you'll need to in the class.
>>47695862
Compagnon:
>Malyvin
A loyal friend, who came to Ej Har simply because Grodek chooses it.
>Valerie Bluewood
As the daughter of a lord, she was initially supposed to go to Lunestier but the hard time her citie have to face forced to pick a closer and a cheaper option. She was delighted to learn that two of her childhoods friends attented the same academy as her.
>Dax
He picked Ej Har when he learned that his brother was sighted here. After becoming friend with Grodek, he promised to help bring better irrigation to the rocky plain with hs magic power.
>Crale Edwards
After becoming friend with Grodek through sparing contest and harsh training, Crale decided a country as screwed up as Grodek's was the perfect place to start her career as a paladin of Justice.
>Cassiopeia
After catching wind of Cassiopeia's project, Grodek offered her to come with him in his kingdom to continue her research and to support her financially.
Event:
>The Great Huntx5
A perfect training to learn how to deal with monsters of all kind.
>Security
A good way to test their strenght and tactic
>Blind Date
A golden occasion to create precious connections.
>>47695889
Thank you, I look forward to including your build in my fetish CYOA
>>47695869
Why do you want to go back to the days of people spamming old CYOAs with zero replies?
>>47695881
What?
>>47695882
You can't achieve peaceful co-existence just by killing those that get in your way (intentional or not). That's not aligned with the goal at all.
>>47695849
Calm yourself anon, it's only a CYOA thread. I'm sure your build will appear on a new romance expansion.
>>47695790
As far as training goes, can we get her to have enough self control to keep her sexuality targeted at you?
>>47695827
yes, and I love her for it. I'd only wish she didn't post generic responses like
>wow, that sounds fun! What will you do with X?
I know I couldn't do it.
>>47695906
He's talking about the updated version of this >>47693662
>>47695908
Luka was a fucking retard and most of the monsters in that setting are murderers who really needed to die if peace was to be realistically possible.
And I'm an American, if someone is going around killing people then I strongly believe in the death penalty as a punishment.
>>47693662
You're doing God's work, anon.
>>47695477
I always take the build's author in consideration if they have comments but I do think that making her feel loved would just be doing what you're doing in kind love again.
Family is important.
>>47695913
I hope so. I built it with that in mind.
I hope you get over your badwrongfun autism as well.
>>47695833
But it's not. The 'rest of /tg/' doesn't read these threads.
>>47695477
Alexandra isn't your character. You lost authority as soon as you posted her in this thread. Sorry.
>>47693662
Three of the builds there are mine and I'm loving it. Can't wait to see which more you'll add.
>>47695950
Ok anon, hope you recover from your projection fetish :)
>>47695947
>Amputee
>turn her unease with flying into a full-blown phobia with just one accident
Why would anyone do that to an amputee?
So how should I go about convincing the Uzuza mage killers that the St Flares rabble is harbouring dangerous druids and blue mages?
>>47695923
Definitely. In fact, that's probably one of her priorities as far as training goes. If she has to be lewd to use that powerful mode, she'd much rather it be directed at a one (ideally willing) person. When the mode isn't active, she still has to live with herself, after all.
>>47695940
Technically, Yin is the death penalty. She targets only those that would not otherwise get justice for their own death-worthy acts... it's just a bit on the extreme side, namely with the preemptive killing.
>>47695998
Uzuza are all meat-headed retards. You just tell them they are and they'll do it, no need for convincing.
>>47695947
> This is fan-fiction.
> We've entered the fan-fiction stage.
> Panic.
>>47695998
I already convinced them that's Lunestier though.
>>47695998
>convincing Uzuza mage killers to not kill the students of a school who specializes in spell refinement.
>>47696007
Preemptive killing is not justice, nor is she an authority to decide punishment. It's why she needs to go live in the sun.
>>47695386
She (the narrator) is Ane, so yes, she's includedUnless you mean me: No, I'm sorry. I wouldn't qualify for gentle femdom if I were a waifu.
>>47695496
thank you. I liked Skye and Ane since she wasn't sure what species they were.
>>47695649
I'm glad to hear that. I was afraid Tika wasn't appreciated by anyone, and Carrie is a little... strange in the head
>>47695669
well, I'm happy to have a build!
>>47695780
Why would you hurt her so and force her to punish you?
>>47695947
Yeah the "How to Help" part is much and you're right. Though there is a difference between family and a family's honor.
Anyway great job on Alexandra. It makes feel all warm and fuzzy knowing that someone did something with my build.
>>47695998
>convincing anyone to not rape your snooty face
>>47696007
But how can we tell when she's trained enough? That right there is pretty much something you're not going to accept as a risk in a 'live test' of any sort.
>>47695785
people only discuss builds when it's a PvP CYOA
but then they complain about PvP
>>47696043
Unless you factor it into the cyoa in another way. Like offering points for builds and writefaggotry, or alternatively doing a Highlander thing and incorporating builds into the cyoa.
>>47696035
>he didn't read the fanfiction
Hime can't be raped. She is always smarter, stronger and richer than her opponent. It's aristocratic gypsy magic.
>>47696043
Name: Anastasia DeFlare
Fire Wizard:
>Heat Specialist
>Enchanting
>Elemental Form
She's mysterious, calm, brave and perhaps a little too foolish. But there's far more than meets the eye, not surprising for somebody with her powers.
She was born in a fairly rich family in a normal village. She lived happily until she was about 17 years old, but at that point things began to change when she discovered her powers over heat magic, and eventually enchantment.
She started working for the family as an enchantress and was strengthening the relationships with friends. With plenty of money and connections, she made a fortune in a fast world. But with her wits and brilliance, there's nothing to stop her from reaching great success. She could quickly become an unstoppable force.
Despite all this success, she is currently learning how to reach full potential. She feels like there's more to enjoy in this world. Luckily she has great companions to support her.
>>47695569
>>47695512
Gotta agree with that anon there.
>>47696043
There's no incentive for killing other players, and the shared world is optional. UEra is absolute trash and doesn't deserve to be posted because of Slayer.
>>47696024
But isn't an eternity of burning alive still a bit severe? Wouldn't just launching her into the void of space to be frozen and unfeeling be more humane?
>>47696036
You could just sit in a room with her and slap her wrist any time she tries something without permission. That's a decent place to start. After that, you could get by just by having her promise to never use the mode when you're not near.
>>47695998
You know Hime sounds like the perfect rival for Alexandra to have when they meet during the inter-school events and after they've graduated. She's the embodiment of stuck of nobility that Alexandra hates.
>>47696098
Forgot image, reposting build:
Name: Anastasia DeFlare
Fire Wizard:
>Heat Specialist
>Enchanting
>Elemental Form
She's mysterious, calm, brave and perhaps a little too foolish. But there's far more than meets the eye, not surprising for somebody with her powers.
She was born in a fairly rich family in a normal village. She lived happily until she was about 17 years old, but at that point things began to change when she discovered her powers over heat magic, and eventually enchantment.
She started working for the family as an enchantress and was strengthening the relationships with friends. With plenty of money and connections, she made a fortune in a fast world. But with her wits and brilliance, there's nothing to stop her from reaching great success. She could quickly become an unstoppable force.
Despite all this success, she is currently learning how to reach full potential. She feels like there's more to enjoy in this world. Luckily she has great companions to support her.
>>47693779
>perfect chance to make a fem jiro waifu
>get some traumatized girl instead
she's cute so I'll forgive you.
>>47695342
>That /ss/ option
Fantastic anon
>>47695406
>>47696133
We're long lost twins!!!
>>47693580
This is going to sound super entitled, but have you considered using Strawpoll to let us vote on branching hearts waifus?
>>47696120
>After that, you could get by just by having her promise to never use the mode when you're not near.
That's not 'trained', dude. The whole idea with training her would be to make sure she behaves properly if she's ever forced into the form, out of necessity or what have you. If you're relying on her not doing it or just not being exposed to stimuli then you're setting yourself up for failure.
>>47696120
>Beri suggesting I pull a Kars on Yin
>Eventually, she stopped thinking.
>>47696124
>Hime and Alexandra compete against each other in every field of heroics, business and aristocracatic conduct
>their personal monster hunters compete against each other to hunt the most dangerous monsters of the land
>their assassins and spies keep tabs on each other and attempt to slit each other's throats
>their sponsored sport teams literally try turn each match into a slaughter
>and their business and armies of lawyers are constantly trying to buy and lobby to restrict the economical freedom of each other
>And crazy transhumanist cyborg lady sits on the sidelines and profits from their rivalry
>>47695574
>>47695586
>>47695602
What game universe would be the best to take with Fictional Engineering power, Best i can think of is something from 40k or Halo
>>47696181
Strawpoll is hilariously easy to cheat.
>>47696212
To be fair to Yin, she gets a list of people she's supposed to kill, and you can use the Library to cut her off from it, leaving her to do her Reaper thing of her own will.
>>47696227
Anything that blatantly functions by magic. Super Robot Wars or one of the Eva or Nanoha or maybe Naruto games would work well.
>>47696181
To see what people want next or to see what is most popular? I have considered the latter.
>>47696201
I was just saying that as a sort of "step 1."
>>47696212
Personally, I think I'd find that preferable to the sun. But really, you can just use the Library. That's the most humane.
>>47696243
The way I see it, if someone wants to cheat, then that effort put into cheating means they care more & are entitled to additional voting. Since everyone could cheat, it isn't particularly unfair.
>>47696227
You should have said Supreme commander and Manifold: Time.
>>47696279
I dunno Beri, people fuck with strawpolls out of shear autism and spite. Do you really want to reward that kinda behavior?
>>47696243
But cheaters never prosper, right?
>>47696297
I don't think there's much room for danger. There's no write-in option, so if nothing ridiculous is included, there's not much anyone could do to cause problems.
>>47695342
>Skye
>Hope you'll share your clams with me, otherwise you'd be mighty shellfish.
>>47696333
It's still rewarding someone for his extreme autism and penalizing us average joes.
>>47696323
Cheaters don't prosper, they lay the foundation of society so their children can easy mode life without cheating.
>>47696279
I mostly meant it as a way to seek input for your next waifus. I feel really bad that you put so much work into these and that they're getting ignored even though Chere is pretty good, in a sweet, shy way. The yandere scares me.
