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>>47684348
Nero is great. I will love her like a waifu.
>>47684348
Mox is best waifu; anyone saying otherwise is lying.
>>47684348
Mox, I can't say no to the fluffy tail.
TIME FOR ROBUTS
POST ROBUTS AND ROBUT ACCESSORIES
Technically this cyoa is finished, but I was going to add a little lore and fluff to some parts later. Right now I just want your thoughts on the powers.
>>47684481
It's still shit.
>>47684348
Sadly, there aren't nearly enough smugdere girls put into CYOAs. Or, if there are, I'm bad at saving/searching for them.
Anyway, Mox is god-tier.
GAS THE WIZARDS MAGIC WAR NOW
>>47684531
Okay. Sorry about that. Care to explain why it is shit?
>>47684348
>Mox
Some pretty big pluses, though maybe a bit much for some people.
"Mature and motherly" seems a little at odds with "loves to play pranks and is a heavy sleeper," though it's not like it's not impossible.
Physical description besides the picture.
Kink tier: yes
>Nero
Pretty good pluses.
No personality. At least she's interested in who you are.
Kink tier: niche
>Chalice
Situation is more up in the air, depends on the person.
Some personality.
Kink tier:adorable
>Persis
Eehh?
>pure
>pure
>pure
Kink tier: ZZzzzz
Mox is the most fleshed out, Nero feels like a good idea that fell a little flat, Chalice is a bit better, Penis, Queen of the Orcs is a cardboard cutout.
I'm starting to think Beri isn't actually a slimegirl, but an advanced AI created solely for the purpose of pumping out high quality CYOAs for random people on the internet.
>>47684481
Lust/Patience is G.O.A.T
>>47684540
He's just being an ass, ignore him.
>>47684614
Stop sucking dick in public, it's fucking embarrassing.
>>47684614
Don't be silly. Robots can't into art. They need souls for that.
>>47684696
>implying some robots don't have souls
>>47684746
Why would a robot need a soul?
>>47684614
Why not both? nanomachine slimegirl.
>>47683276
Left a reply for you in other thread.
>>47684677
>That CYOA author he's praising isn't me!
>>47684614
>high quality
>>47685064
>>47684348
Persis a cute.
Can someone post Traveler?
>>47685076
>>47685067
People like you are the reason I never namefag, yes. I wish I could be anonymous everywhere.
Now kill yourself.
>>47685109
>>47685064
Updated build a bit.
>Lunestier
>Arcane Magic x3
>Summoning Magic x3
>Tactics x3
>Magic Refinement
>Valerie Bluewood
>Allyce Westhold
>Crale Edwards
>Tennie Northbreed
>Suzette Highking
>The Great Hunt (every year)
>Security
>Bodyguard
I was a orphan adopted by Lunestier groundskeeper. A teacher saw that I have strong innate magical skills. So I got accepted in the prestigious magical school.
Hopefully with my summoning magic and tactics I can basically become a general of my own magic army and I can use arcane magic to protect myself and support my army. After graduation my friends and I can go on quests to find treasures and lost knowledge and help protect peasants and kingdoms. After I become stronger, I can take over a old castle as base and start small Queendom of magical creatures summoned from the different planes. Then become a famous mercenary company and have my magic army help settle conflicts in exchange for extravagant gifts and titles.
Eventually have more titles than all those pompous spoiled students at school who wouldn't except me because I'm "poor" and "low class".
>>47685149
>>47685064
What's the interaction between Ki Magic and Blood Magic?
>>47684764
Why would humans need one?
>>47685164
There is no direct interaction between ki and any type of magic however they can be used in tandem.
>>47685157
One of my favorite builds desu
>>47684534
Sally is great. I will love her like a waifu.
>>47685099
Sure, but I don't have the link to the image version, and I'm sure as hell not gonna post that myself.
>>47685166
Because it's your ticket.
>>47685193
Can magical golems and people that have gone full machine use magic?
>>47685242
I'll remember that next time when i need to travel by train.
>>47685193
I don't suppose you still remember/have saved the sources used for pictures?
I'm specifically wondering where you got the picture you used for Sorte, I really liked the artstyle in that pic but google image search reveals nothing.
>>47685254
>>47685193
>One of my favorite builds
Thanks Boxy! Glad you like it! It's a fun cyoa.
>>47678098
Was late to the party so a build.
Power of the Body, Storms, Health, and Paths. Stone and Demon.
The possibilities are endless, for modifying both yourself and others. Achieve actual immortality, get rid of or alter that which you find unpleasant, change to keep things fresh, and mold the world to your will. When you master the body the mastery over the mind will soon follow. Evolve beyond what nature entailed. It's a do it all button that requires thought and experimentation, but there's plenty of time. Never succumb to any ailment, or harm while channeling the power of nature and determining the best course of action for any action...which will help with the biological experiments.
>>47685068
name one of his recent cyoas that haven't been.
>>47685250
Magic is linked to the ability to process mana (which requires either a soul or mana base) and the ability to chant. These can be achieved in golems and metal men by something that's a kin to programming sub routines or "chants" into them.
>>47685272
I do actually but I'm on mobile right now give me like 10min and I'll get it for you
>>47685386
Do patron deities do anything or are they just vague inspirations?
>>47685272
I just threw a cropped version of that into google and got this. http://barabababa.deviantart.com/art/6-1000-573770076
>>47685400
Vague interpretations atm because I was too lazy to make a pantheon (though I'm like 92% sure I will later after a do the billion other things I said I would)
>>47685272
Found it artist name is baraba baba
>>47685064
St. Flares
Martial CombatX2
Ranged Combat
First Aid
Physical Training
Maneuvers
Survival
Monster HuntingX3
Valerie Bluewood
Eloise Avery
Sorte
Kaerulaus
Kit
The Great Hunt
Fund Raising
Research Proposal
Blind Date
I rolled a 1 and a 3 for Bind Date, so I guess that gives me Mecherath
The basic idea is to make my friends a team of monster hunting badasses.
Myself, Kae, and Valerie would be the frontliners, with Sorte providing ranged backup, Kit providing magic backup and Eloise there to keep us all from dying afterwards.
I imagine the research proposal would be supporting some brilliant idea of Eloise's. Probably we will have to protect her from her obsessive former playmate
The blind date would ideally be a chance to network Mecherath seems very well connected, so I'd do my best to befriend her. Ideally she'd help us set up monster hunting jobs after graduation.
God help us with the fundraiser though, I have no good ideas for that.
>>47685076
>>47685386
>>47685386
>Odesium
> Summoning x 3
> Mage Armor x 3
> Enchancement x 3
> Tactics x 1
>Bathsheba
>Znanje
>Jiel
>Nashwa
>??????
>Research Proposal x 5
>Battle Royal x 1
>Bodyguard x 1
Through Science and Magic combined, I shall craft mage armor for my summoned creatures to inhabit creating
MECHA SUMMONS.
Unless Box Wine tells me otherwise.
>>47685064
>>47685076
>>47685109
>>47685149
>>47685161
Here's my Gundam pilot build
>Odesium
>Mage Armor 2
Giant Robots are the tits. But I'm also building an ironman-like suit.
>Arcane Magic 2
Has pretty good synergy with Mage Armor and let's me shoot lasers among other things.
>Ki Attunement 2
Can't call myself a mecha pilot without hot-blood. Plus more lasers and helps against the feedback.
>Martial Combat 1
Gotta be able to wield my robot's fuck-huge sword.
>Tactics 1
>Enhancement 2
Gotta protect myself from all that feedback. Even moreso cause I'll be inside the mech.
>Tarkun Ironstout
Nearly indestructible mech sounds good to me. Her combat experience is also invaluable
>Jiel
Transportation for me, my friends and my giant robot. Seems wasteful to fly around in it all the time.
>Chandara
She promises adventure
>Liene
>Luvyna
>Battle Royal x2
>The Great Hunt x3
>Research Proposal
>>47685543
I mean this is the exact reason I left shit vague so you could come up with this kinda cool shit
>>47685570
You two should team up
>>47685483
>>47685607
box
boxbox
it's probably thusday somewhere
update when?
>>47685620
>it's probably thusday somewhere
But it's wedesday here senpai
>>47684481
Greed/Patience all the way. I figure Greed can get you most of the other powers given enough time, just makes sense.
>>47685570
>>47685607
>>47685543
>That feel when Box Wine likes your build
Airship that turns into giant mecha-summon is a go then.Smug Lunestiers not allowed. Non smug is cool though
>>47685620
It's Thursday for a large part of the world now.
>>47685684Why do fags like Lunestiers?
>>47685064
>Name: Alex Sharpe
Born a mere peasant, Alex showed a remarkable magical talent along with a ruthlessness and drive for success which drew him to Lunestier. The scars of growing up poor run deep and continue to stick with Alex through his schooling.
>School: Lunestier
The student body here is sometimes atrocious, but no one can argue with the school itself. For up and coming mages and diplomats, there is no superior choice. The idea of a place so removed from the daily struggles of poverty such as Lunestier is mind blowing to Alex. Having seen the classism and air of superiority surrounding most students, Alex takes care to keep knowledge of his origins under wraps away from the school harpies.
>Classes:
Arcane Magic (3) Can never go wrong with the classics. This is the field which made Alex fall in love with magic.
Elemental Magic (5) with specialization in fire and water/ice magic. This will be the back up magic, used only when Arcane isn't enough to get the job done.
Diplomacy (7) Words are powerful, best to keep them in your arsenal.
Magic Refinement (9) Running out of mana during a battle is humiliating, as well as dangerous.
Dueling (10) Even a mage needs to know how to handle themselves in a physical confrontation.
In combat Alex uses his magic mix to keep his opponents guessing. He greatly prefers one on one confrontations, because it's much easier to keep track of a single foe. Outside of fighting Alex tries to use his words as his best weapon, ending fights before they have a chance to begin.
>Companions:
Mecherath. Having information and connections on your side is invaluable for keeping ahead of the Lunestier sharks. Making friends with the school informant is going to be a great boon.
Bathsheba. The tank of the group, brings resilience and strength. Also creates a long term ally by helping to protect her from the AI nerds.
cont.
>>47685458
>>47685483
thanks guys
>>47685737
Chandara. Every party needs a good rogue, and Chandara fits the bill perfectly. Aside from thatAlex thinks she is cute.
Farhat. Without a good support, even the strongest of teams will crumble. Besides, its always a good thing to have friends with friends.
Yung Tashi. A good swordsman who also keeps tabs on school gambling, very useful.
>Events:
>Year 1: Party Planner, Fund Raising
This will be a year for Alex to establish an understanding of the various schools through Party Planner, along with building some capital reserves with Fund Raising. This money will support Alex and his adventures in the coming years.
>Year 2: Research Proposal (Condensed Crystallized Arcane bombs)
Portable magic grenades, usable by anyone and everyone. Who doesn't want to see crystal fragmentation grenades? Or the equivalent of a magical flashbang?
>Year 3: The Great Hunt, Bodyguard
Building connections is half the reason people go to Lunestier. Developing a relationship with Cynthia Highking could create a very valuable ally later on. The Great Hunt is an opportunity not just to enjoy some good old fashioned adventuring but also to test the skills and relationships Alex has been developing for the past few years.
>Year 4: Party Planner, Battle Royal (4v4)
Building relationships along with some good old fashioned team fighting.
>Year 5: Battle Royal (1v1),
The final hurrah. Alex doesn't expect to win (though that would be fantastic). This event is entirely about personal satisfaction.
Alex has sought only one thing in his life: escape. Growing up poor has imbued him with a inferiority complex, one which Lunestier only worsens. But throughout it all, he is determined to rise above his origins and make something of himself. He hopes that Lunestier can be the launching pad for a successful future. But distinguishing himself for the elite of society is no easy task, and Alex still has a long way to go before his aspirations can be realized.
>>47685648
Hey Box, nondivine healanon here, still really curious and confused about how the ki/arcane/blood works and which is doing what.
I want to know if I can sacrifice the arcane out of the three for other things and still come out a better healer than a divine, but because I don't actually know what arcane does to boost healing, or why all three of them combined as so astronomically better than divine, I don't want to risk it. Could you give insight?
I apologize for the pestering.
>>47685703
Not for the cool parts though
>>47685282
Wait, where do I start on the line?
Will people on Earth know how to use dragon's blood? Can the quartz crystal be broken and blow up? Are the trapped spirits in the magical items unhappy about it?
>>47684481
Greed + Kindness
I can heal people in exchange for cash, as well as ask for something like a single day of people's lifespan to facilitate trades. Let women trade breast size. Buy some libido and penis size off a Catholic priest. Let trans people swap sex. I can grab myself some IQ, happiness, charisma, and so much more. People will be more than willing to trade with me since I have things that can't be bought anywhere else.
>>47685809
1d4chan.org/wiki/conduit
Educate thineself.
>>47685064
So much to choose from. Here's what I went with.
Odesium
Martial Combat
Ranged Combat
Physical Training
Maneuvers
Stealth 3
Explosives 3
Duxix
Farhat
Crale Edwards
Tash
Liene
Ideally sneaking into places and blowing them up with a well rounded background to fall back on. Duxix is a pal and a good tactician, Farhat because support is a force multiplier and music's fun, Edwards for DEUS VULT, Tash because I'd need to bond with someone over a love of explosives, and Liene because spellblades are neat. Maybe a bit combat heavy?
Battle Royal every year, spam explosives til victory is achieved. Maybe Duxix would have a better plan.
Fund Raising because bombs are expensive. Host historical reenactments using explosives instead of actors. Think of the untapped market!
Research Proposal because you can always build a better bomb.
Party Planner becauseexplosivefireworks are always a hit. Will there be a repeat performance?
It should work out unless demons are bombproof. Pic related.
>>47685648
can you make friends with students that are from a different school than you?
>>47685064
Ej Har
Maneuvers x3
Stealth x3
Assassin x2
Physical Training x1
Bardic Arts (Dancing) x1
Malyvin
Farhat
Hana
Evergreen
Nashwa
Sports x3
Battle of the Arts x2
Fund Raising x3
Maya is a warm, bubbly, and frequently tomboyish girl with a habit of adopting baby animals and sneaking out of her dorm at night to dance with the local gypsies. Naturally, at Ej Har, she's not popular with her classmates or her teachers. Chided by peers and mentors alike that she's "Missing the point of the Institute" because of her selfless behavior and cheery personality, she never the less takes all her lessens to heart. A practiced thief and assassin, Maya could slip into any vault or palace unnoticed. Very rarely though would the spoils of such an escaped got to herself though, as she prefers to give what little spending money she steals to charity.
>>47685792
So arcane is just kinda a replacement for non blood magic users. And it's better because game design logic. Since you have to invest in 2-3 classes instead of one it just kinda makes sense. However this is kinda based off an honor system between the cyoa and the player that assumes you go slightly less combat foucesed in your blood magic pursuits.
I hope this help I'm sorry if I've been less then helpful or overall present real life has been kinda bleh these last few days and this ain't a blog so I won't bore you with the details of my life.
Anyways I'll try to be more present and helpful and yeah and stuff
>>47685947
Could someone max out Ki and Blood Magic, and just end up with a close to infinite amount of replenishing blood to cast spells with?
>>47685193
Hey Box WIne quick question in the grand tournament. Would there be any penalties if you killed another student while you were fighting? Like let's say an Uzuza or st flares student killed a bitchy lunester student. Would they get arrested or expelled? Or would it be seen as ok because they were in a fight?
>>47685914
In the next update you will be able to
Even though there already is one, if I made a RWBY CYOA would anyone care?
>>47686042
If it was better than the other one, good job.
If it was worse, you shouldn't have bothered.
It's your time, make what you will of it.
>>47686042
Yes, especially if you create some companions.
>>47685965
Kinda it's not completely unlimited because I'm a very strong believer of player vulnerability but I'm an equally strong believer of reflecting player effort against the world. In others words the more you put it the more you get out of it.
It's really hard to balence the two so I hope this answer suffices because game design principles are hard to describe and I've also started drinking
>>47685947
>>47686092
Sorry for contributing to the bleh, best-Box. You've been doing a real good job at providing feedback, which is more than I can say for many, so good on you. >>47685965 isn't me btw, but I think we've attracted some interest with this conversation.
Here's what I'm intending so you know what I'm looking for.
The planned build I have going so far is guaranteed to have Ki Attunement 3 and Physical Training 3, and I would like to know what combination of Arcane and Blood Magic with this setup still yields a greater healing output than divine. I'm all about brute regenerators, combat oriented or not, but hate having to go through the whole holy servitude thing for heal power. Is it possible to equal or outpace Divine Arts in healing potential with Ki Attunement 3, and then 3-4 points in some specific combination Blood and Arcane? Or will I have to sacrifice some points Physical Training to do so?
>>47685064
>Choosing anything but Ej Har
Seriously it's almost like you want a bunch of moral fags telling you how to live your wizard escape fantasy
Requesting be the waifu cyoas
>>47686092
Hey Box Wine sorry, and I'm sorry if you already answered this question I don't want to bug you, but could you answer my question. If a student gets killed in the Grand Tournament how big of a deal would it be? Like would the rest of the tournament get cancelled, would they proceed with it anyway. If it was an accident would the student be punished. If the two students in the ring were going to try and kill each other would the match be stopped? Like is it considered more like a duel where people can die, or more of a friendly competition where you aren't suppose to go all out?
>>47685064
For summoning magic is it like a stand or are you actually calling on a sentient other wordly being to fight with you?
>>47685064
St Flares is still my favorite school.
Adventure, HOOOOOOO
>>47686151
some stands are sentient and independant, which is a terrible thing to comprehend, considering the stand is just supposed to be a physical representation of your spirit.
>>47685512
Looks like pretty heroic monster hunting build, all swords and bows and no magic. Smart to include some first aid and survival in their to.
>>47685888
Stealthy bomber?! Probably good for assassinations and for blowing holes in forts and things. You guys could probably make bunch of money as mercenaries.
>>47685920
Nice! Friendly dancer with a Robin Hood streak who graduates form the dark arts school is unique and awesome. Would you only assassinate bad guys?
>>47686184
So is that the case here? Like is it based on mental fortitude and the stronger your will the less sentience your stand has?
>>47686151
You're summoning beings from other planes of reality.
>>47686184
Some sentient stands are amazing though, so I don't mind.mission fucking accomplished
>>47686219
oh fuck I dunno
art and flavor seem to suggest calling upon outside help rather than creating it from yourself, if that means anything.
>>47686230
hell naw, that shit is terrifying
>>47686230
So if they're technically their own beings can they resist me? Do I have to keep up friendly relations and make sure not to piss them off so they continue to fight with me?
>>47686230
>mission fucking accomplished
What have you done?
>>47685064
Out of curiosity, what combination of classes would let me do something like using telekinesis on my weapons? Pic related.
>>47686253
Have you tried reading the summoning magic description, I can't help but feel it should answer your questions.
>>47686293
It's a reference to one of the sentient stands.
>>47685064
>>47686303
Fuck me I forgot the pic. Here it is.
>>47686253
It explicitly states that the power of the summon depends on the trust between it and you, so it must have some intelligence. You have to form a contract, so I don't see why it couldn't tell you to bugger off if you don't treat it well. Even if you can keep forcing it to fight for you, it won't be as effective if you were friends with it.
>>47685968
There would definitely be an investigation but it's understandable that accidents can happen.
There's only ever been 4 deaths in the history of the event 1 happened during the great hunt the another due to an allergic reaction
>>47686114
So the difference between divine arts and magic blood key (or mbk) method of healing lies in a few key points.
1. Mbk has a higher overall healing potential in a pure numbers sense. This is due to the pure utility of blood magic combined with the regen of ki. Arcane magic can work as an energy source to jumpstart the healing process in others to a staggering in unreal rate, however this is one of the the top 5 hardest things to do with arcane magic and was first accomplished only 30 years ago so it's very hard to find a competent teacher
2. Mbk is much more of a hard science then divine arts is. You need to have an understanding of how the body actually works to a certain degree to make this work at its peak capacity. This is not an issue for divine.
3. Divine arts is the only way to perform true resurrection (as opposed to necromancy or something of the like) on someone, this technique is very difficult though.
>>47686148
So it depends heavily on the circumstances surrounding the incident. While student death will always be a big deal it's an expected risk. Matches will be stopped if things are deemed to dangerous and yet again depending on the circumstances a remake may take place.
>>47686151
Stand is a jojo thing right? I've never seen the series so I can't really comment on the similarities between the two. Many summons do have sentience and make their own decisions in a fight but the terms of their contract is absolute
>>47686180
Adventuring with your waifu is priceless.
>>47685853
>I have things that can't be bought anywhere else.
While this is a good build, there was one element I wanted to put in with the rest of the lore that might slightly weaken it. But now I am not so sure. Did you want to hear it?
>>47686322
Are there submissive spirits that fall in love with me when if I'm strict and order them around. And can my spirit waifu work 24/7 to keep me from harm like how Star Platinum would catch bullets without being ordered?
>>47686191
I would assassinate your snatch with my dick.
>>47686357
>>47686338
I really need an answer to this one
>>47686338
I want to make an experimental build I thought of but I'm tired and want to go to bed. Will you be in the threads tomorrow to tell me if my build would actually be a able to work?
>>47686338
Is it true that Uzuza needs to be burned to the ground?
>>47686338
aight, so I think with that if I'd be going 1 arcane 3 blood. That said, Blood runs on the same reserves as arcane, right? what happens what that new class you've got coming that combines ki and arcane or whatever gets thrown into the mix?
>>47686367
No thanks.
>>47686490
All right! It wouldn't be rape if you wanted it.
>>47686314
Arcane magic would be the closest thingat the moment
>>47686357
>>47686373
Sure man if you wanna purse it go for it
>>47686401
Yea bro I'll be here with new content as well
>>47686462
Idk some science shit or something
>>47686543
>some science shit or something
I like the sound of that!
ok, so I'll keep that one point in arcane there for until the next update, then switch it out for the new class
>>47686526
Fuck you.
>>47686310
I don't remember Echoes saying that. When did it happen?
>>47686696
>>47686564
Your all wonderful so direct your hate at me not each other! Love is law! Friendship everlasting! Recycling is cool!i drink away the negative feelings so you don't have tojust like jesus
>>47686781
fighting kira's sheer heart attack
>>47686799
Box Wine confirmed for CYOA Lord and Savior
>>47686799
It ok BestBox, even if a bad the thing happens where you are, you'll always have friends heremy legal first name is jesus but I don't drink
>>47686820
BestHibiki! How goes the final page? What even is going to be on it that hasn't already been covered?
So, any good new CYOAs lately?
>>47686799
I don't remember Jesus ever drenking. I mean, we drink Jesus, yes, but he was more on a sober side IIRC.
>>47686854
Mine, of course.
>>47686854
these two >>47686820 >>47686799 are working on some good new shit, but not much other activity here.
>>47686857
I think he was trying to to make a reference to sin
>>47686852
it's not even final, just like 3 or 4 more page.
maybe after i'm done with this cyoa i'm going to make other cyoa with picture illustrated by me
>>47685064
Name: Izumi
School
>St. Flares
Only school for a real hero (there's a reason that the last hero came from there, you know), even if the soft heroes of the present day can't appreciate it.
Courses
>Monster Hunting 3
>Survival 1
>Traps 1
>Teamwork 1
>Maneuvers 1
>Physical Training 1
>Martial Combat 2
Ended up spreading skills thinner than I planned to, but hopefully the synergy they give will boost them (like martial combat 2 is much more potent against monsters because of monster hunting 3 and traps are also much more specialized and effective against monsters and also better camouflaged in the wilderness because of survival) .
Would've wanted to fit smithing in there, but can't drop that sweet MH3, so I will have to have someone else do the smithing. Shame that beast taming isn't St. Flares (not that I have courses left to take it).
Companions
>Sorte
>Damia
>Kaerulaus
>Kit
>Duxix
Sorte, because ear massag-... having a ranger is obvious when going in the wilderness.
Damias' balance obsession is weird, but having both druidic and divine magic makes her indispensable.
Kaerulaus, great to have another frontliner in team.
Kit for headpats and fluffy ta-... illusion and arcane magic to round up the team. Also headpats.
Duxix sounds like a true hero. I'm totally not picking him because I need a small animalperson sidekick to be a monster hunter.
Events
>The Great Hunt
Every fucking year, because duh.
>Escort
Yandere ghost? Why not.
>Blind Date
Rolled double ones, Tennie Northbreed. But it's forbidden love.
Push the frontiers of the civilization and kill the monster threatening people, and eat them and harvest them for resources and use them for better gear. With full stomach and new gear take on greater monsters.
>>47686879
I know.
>>47686857
Jesus turned water into wine. The guy drank.
>>47686799
Look, all I'm saying is that we need to destroy Uzuza before they can destroy us.
>>47686881
>>47686881
yes
embrace your inner and outer drawfag
do the doodle
>>47686996
Destroy the boundaries of hate and paranoia with the powers of Love! Friendship! And wind farms!
>>47685064
HAHA! Time to roleplay!
Da name is Grant and mum is sentin' me to Lunestier. Tellin' me that "I'm going to be a proper gentlemen" and "bag yourself a rich girl while you at it"
She's da medicine woman of our coastal town and she made lots'em coins in treatin' da sick and dyin' traders who comin' off them boats. So yeah she had coins but she didn't have the recommendation to get me in till we saved this one trader fella, the trader's wife was so gleeful that she handed mum a "Do whatever you want to do cuz theses folks are cool" letter. That got me into da school so fast that my head was spinnin'.
So I'm in rich people school and I'm going to learn things like medicine and traps, why traps? Cuz that shit is fun
>First Aid and Potion Maxin
>Traps and Knowledge,
>PT, and Maneuvers
>Stealth and some goddamn Diplomacy
In da first year Lunestier I met some of the strangest kids that became my friends, da first was Mecherath. I was runnin' away from that Highking princess when she found me some cover, we started a conver about da Highking's history. Next was that Farhat kid, we both tried to flirt with our cute homeroom instructor lady but got into detention then we tried to flirt with the cute detention lady and got into deeper trouble. We became close after that. Eloise is da strangest but she ain't nothing I can't handle, felt the need to fix her up for some odd reason. I met Kengen when he set off one of my traps. I never knew I could run as fast as I did to get away from him. Last there's Yung, the trap that caught Kengen was ment for him. Got jealous of and wanted to lower his bar. It didn't work but we became best friends.
I'm not too interested in fightin' but I do like it when I tangle some fools up during Battle Royals. When da Harvest Fest comes we 5 gonna provide da best information center/med station, makin' coins on treatments and really useful info. Farhat rope us into the Battle of the Arts, but it was more like Battle of the Bands.
>>47686355
Sure
>>47687149
This makes me feel extra warm and fuzzy
>>47687308
Oh Box Wine I could drink you right up!
>>47687391
this is getting really creepy for me, I'm out
>>47687415
Lurker anon pls, you were just lurking before, why leave because of that weirdo?
>>47687415
I was just joking about how da name is a drink but Ok
>>47686799
We love you Box, nobody here hugs you enough.
>>47687308
So you say that St. Flares is a 'middle of the road' academy, or has the reputation of one. Does that mean that there are a bunch of shitty knockoff academies scattered about?
>>47687472
I think the intent is that it's the least specialized / most generalist of all the named academies
Rolled 2, 4 = 6 (2d4)
>>47685064
School: Ej Har
Courses: Ranged Combat 2, Illusion Magic 2, Maneuvers 3, Assassination 3
Companions/Classmates: Chandara, Hana, Silene, Evergreen, Inas
Events: The Great Hunt, Fund Raising, Security, Bodyguard, Battle Royal, Blind Date, Basilisk Den, Sports
So, a hero for hire, that will be glad to fell anything you want dead, as long as the reward is worth the risk. H-hey, I only kill bad guys and monsters, though! Why they're bad? Well... ask my employer, I'm sure there's a reason.
Illusion magic is used in place of mundane stealth so that it's never fair deal to try to spot me or catch me. Maybe I'm just not who I seem to be, or not doing what you thought I was doing. Seems like I'm gently throwing a flower, but it's a knife. My arrow will hit the target in one second - oh, it already hit, it was actually two meters ahead of where it seemed to be. And such.
Even if I'm spotted by the monster or bad guy I'm trying to kill, good luck chasing me and my mirror images! Also, maxed maneuver, so I hope they can teleport or something, or they'll be kited until they die of boredom.
Companions-wise, like attracts like, and you can always learn something more from others! And Silene... Silene is a c-cute, ok.
All these events will surely be plenty of opportunity for learning how to be better at all I'm trying to do, to get acquainted with interesting people (especially Basilisk's), and most importantly - have fun.
>>47687513
And my blind date is Suzette. This actually turned out rather well, and I'm sure it'll be great. She looks fun, as in, fun to tease. Such an important person going out with a commoner like me, the scandal!
>>47685064
Am I correct in my assumption that Lunestier, St. Flare's, and Ej Har have a rough Harvard/Yale/Princeton thing going on?
How long until its revealed that its actually pretty common for people to get offers like in these CYOAs, so they tend to just make the CYOA and check people's answers as no-risk advice?
>>47687432
Fine, but I'm changing my lurker status by reposting my build
Anders Korjac, Amateur Knight
>School
Uzuza
>Courses
Martial Combat
Ranged Combat
First Aid
Tactics
Unarmed Combat
Smithing
Knowlege
Teamwork
Physical Training
>Exclusive
Mage Hunter
>Friends
Duxix
Farhat
Crale Edwards
Evergreen
Damion
>Events
The Great Tournament: Battle Royale
The Great Tournament: The Great Hunt
The Grand Summit: Security
The Gathering of Life: Bodyguard
Born to struggling innkeepers on the fringes, Anders has seen the struggles and injustices that the less-fortunate face. Wanting to help end this, and needing to increase his already astounding strength, he joined Uzuza. Hearing the stories of Az, Anders was inspired, but he will never really buy into the whole "anti-magic" way of thinking. The only reason he's studying Mage Hunting is because it is seen as one of the tougher paths to take, and it may well come in handy later. At the end of the day, Anders just wants to help people be happy. Mage or not.
>>47687562
Forgot pic
>>47687512
That's what I'm wondering, if it's a case of "These are the only four real places you can learn at." or if there are lesser institutions without the prestige.
>>47687562
Surprised you didn't take Kara'Tee, since she's the only Uzuza who isn't full of magic hatred.
>>47687595
Was going to, but... Damion is just plain better.
>>47685109
>>47685149
New companions when
>>47687283
Basically, while you are the first to get these powers, you are not the only one. Others will crop up with these powers in tow. It won't be instant; these super powered individuals will crop up over the course of an indefinite amount of time, with no predictable pattern of when they will show up. Also, there is nothing telling you how many others will gain these powers; could be two or two billion, a small handful or the entire world.
Thoughts?
>>47686854
Well, I did make this >>47684481 .
>>47684481
see? SEE. I told you last thread, you need spacing and titles and look what happened, people played your CYOA.
>>47684481
Sloth is way too weak. Sleep 100 years to gain one year of life?
I'd do Lust/Kindness. Multiple ways to extend life, plus limited mind control, boosted healing, and super charisma
>>47687811
I know, thanks for the tip. I'll be sure to use it when I remake the energy cyoa. With that said, I figured I'll explain what I am adding as a sort of taste of what is to come.
>Lore will be added.
>Several companions
>New perks and drawbacks
>Proper spacing
Do you have any suggestions for what I could add? Also, thanks again.
>>47686661
Can someone post the rest of these?
>>47687693
Magic symbol.
>>47686345
until you get beaten by an orc or something and he cucks you by mindbreaking your waifu with his thick cock.
>>47687831
The intent was that while you could get extra life through sloth, you could extend how long that life is through your chosen virtue. I tried explaining it through the equation (What you currently have+What you gained)/Rate of aging (base 1, goes down from there) listed at the very beginning. I guess I didn't make it clear enough. My bad.
>>47685221
Just go back two threads next time.
Image Version: https://www.mediafire.com/folder/43r0qdm4sm895/The_End_Approaches
>>47687890
No, I mean, I think I get it. If you're 20, you can sleep for 100 years, and when you wake up you'll still be 20, but with +1 year to your lifespan. I guess it's good for people who want to easily get wayyyyy into the future.
>>47687861
well your biggest problem may be that you don't take what others say with a grain of a salt. Being a PDF maker, less people play your CYOA's and thus you hang on every word. This can be bad if people are just uppity for some reason.
If i had to make a suggestion, I know that the scientist made some PDF's and they might be a good source of information on how to do it.
The grant hunt
The paladin
are both PDF's with pictures that might be good to look into.
Addition wise? Character, powers and done are nice but an overarching story with a main character (see branching hearts, first page) is better. guess that might just be lore if done right though.
>>47686042
Do it faggot. The one that already exists isn't that great.
>>47687923
I guess I could explain it a little better.
Let's say person a and person b both have sloth. Person A has a virtue he doesn't exercise regularly (1), and person b has a virtue that he exercises regularly enough to halve his aging (0.5).
Both person a and person b sleep for the same amount of time (100 minutes) and gain the one minute of life span. The difference is that while person a gets the one minute as is, because of person b's virtuous acts, person b gets both extended time in addition to the added time (1 minute/0.5 rate of aging).
Am I making any sense?
>>47687926
Thanks for the advice. I was going to eventually convert my cyoas to image, but I might have a few too many ideas for them. I wanted to write these ideas down before getting into image cyoas. Don't expect images of my cyoas soon, but it will happen eventually.
>>47686042
I would.
Is SDA still making Dark Souls or have they given up on it?
>>47685064
Going to repost my build with more backstory.
>Name: Alexandra Lannis
A noble whose mother hates her for the actions of her dead disgraced father who was revealed to be a demon worshiper and killed shortly after Alex was born. His secret brought great shame to Alex's mother's family so they were the ones to kill him. Her mother even tried to kill Alex when she was 13 though her mother doesn't know Alex knows that. Her mother teaches magic at Lunestier
>School: Ej Har Institute
She ran away to this school out of a combination of escaping her mother's influence and giving a big fuck you to her.
>Classes:
>Ki Attunment (x2)
>Blood Magic (x2)
>Unholy Arts (x2)
>Arcane Maigc (x3)
>Unarmed Combat (x1)
Discovered to have talent for Blood Magic. Chose Unholy Arts out of spite.
>Companions:
>Chandara
>Scal
>Cassiopeia
>Inas
>Sanyo
Making real friends for the first time has really changed Alex's outlook on life. She is deeply loyal to them.
>Events:
>Basilik Den (x4)
>Battle Royal (x2)
>The Great Hunt (x2)
All Alex cares about during the festivals is having fun.
As much as she hates her mother she really doesn't care about any idea of revenge. Showcasing her abilities is enough of an "Fuck You" for her. All Alex cares about is an uncertain future filled with opportunity and adventure. She hopes to travel with her friends as a group of mercenaries fighting and corrupting innocent maidens.
Personality wise she has a bead habit of acting slightly smug and arrogant because of her skill and ability.
>>47688137
He said last thread he was working on it and part of the problem is his old computer died and he didn't transfer over his photoshop settings.
>>47687866
>>47687391
Your liver would hate you
>>47687472
This >>47687512
>>47687513
sounds like someone I'd love to drink with while watching sports or a made for TV movie
>>47687556
All the schools do if you go by the banter in these threads
>>47687715
Uhh maybe tomorrow? I have emergency dlc in case it takes me an extra day to do the clubs page
>>47688232
>>47688253
>>47685064
>>47685076
>>47685109
>>47685149
>>47685161
School: Odesium
Classes
Ki Attunement 3
Mage Armor 6
Enhancement 8
Illusion Magic 9
Stealth 10
Companions:
Znanje
Bathsheba
Kengen
Sera
Zanje
Events:
Escort
Research Proposal
Security
The Great Hunt
Battle Royale
My character brings synergy between Ki and Technology - spirit and robotics. Born to a simple family, he quickly made a name for himself by exhibiting what appeared to be strange powers and abilities. A long time innovator and inventor, he was picked up by Odesium when all the other academies rejected him for either being too unorthodox or lacking the connections for a successful application.
In combat, my character prefers to approach cautiously, employing stealth and illusion magic, in order to maneuver into a position to best apply overwhelming firepower. In his opinion, the best possible battle is one that you end in one shot and he isn't afraid of using cheap shots if necessary. However, that isn't the preferred modus-operandi.
I picked friends to best compliment my natural tendency towards Ki and technology. Hopefully a combination of friends and events will lead to the development of true (friendly hopefully) A.I. and all the benefits that would bring. This would further augment my fighting style by providing unparalleled processing and combat analysis abilities.
>>47687556
Does that make Uzuza Brown?
>>47688248
>emergency dlcIs it the mentor page?
>>47687595
>she's the only
Seriously dude, you shat up last thread with this retardation, and you're going to continue?
We get it that you're an illiterate piece of shit that likes to push his headcanon, but if you're just gonna go and make shit up you might as well go make your own cyoa.
Stop.
>>47688324
If you Uzuza want to be less hated maybe you should do something about your image.
>>47687149
yo this motherfucker looks exactly like me I'm suing
>>47688300
New school
>>47688359
Niiiiice. Any new general courses?
>>47688349
I don't know if you're trying to engage in RP banter or if you're the moron from last thread that kept trying to spout meta bullshit about how the description implies that Uzuza is a bunch of genocidal misanthropes
Point is, stop being a cunt if the latter.
>>47688359
Upset. More classes I can't take.
>>47688232
shit, do I actually have to choose a deity?
>>47685064
Luther Tergov
St.Flares
Classes
1st martial weapons/blue magic
2nd martial weapons/monster hunting
3rd martial weapons/blue magic
4th blue magic/team work
5th physical training/maneuvers
Companions
Malyvin - Party strategist and general support possibly through potions, first aid, etc. etc.
Luvyna - Backline fighter and party defender using wind magic to defend party support, knocking larger monsters off balance and getting front line fighters out of tough spots.
Valerie Bluewood - Front line fighter and party tank probably one of the best for dealing with monsters head on. Valerie and Jacob keep monsters off the rest of the party.
Kaerulaus - Front line fighter and man grenade, fights with Jacob and Valerie. When an opening is made either through wind or blue magic; Kaerulaus is the man grenade who leaps stabbing at whatever vital area is made open.
Kit - Support mage and party morale booster, bardic magic to stack the odds in the party's favour outside of combat keeps morale high with some harmless pranks and music.
Events
The Great Hunt x 3
Battle Royal 2
Security
Basilisk Den
Body Guard
Monster hunting bros, 3 mainline fighters hunting monsters doing most of the upfront killing while Malyvin keeps us coordinated and probably deals with contracts and merchants, Kit helps ensure the fight goes our way through bardic dickery and Luvyna is always on stand by to make sure no one is eaten. Luther takes what he can from said monsters and turns it on other monsters which snowballs into becoming the main offensive caster swapping back and forth between front lines and ranged support as mana/injuries allow. Roll in dough, get into the great hunt for the opportunity of hunting definitely dangerous monsters, become a master blue mage, kick ass in battle royal, use said dough for drunken shenanigans at the basilisk den, gaurd duty to have at least one honest job on resume and flirt with princess.
Any good horror/spooky themed cyoa out there? I'm in the mood for something a bit scary tonight
>>47688271
>>47688253
>>47688232
I like this more than jumpchain
>>47685064
Ej Har Institute
Blood Magic x 3
Potion Mixing x 3
Elemental Magic x 1
Physical Training x 1
Assassination x 1
First Aid x 1
Companions: Kengen, Farhat, Scal, Inas, Cassiopeia
Events:
1st Year: Battle Royal, Escort
2nd Year: Basilisk Den, Blind Date (Kara'Tee)
3rd Year: Fundraising, Security
4th Year: Party Planning, Research Proposal
Most of my friends considered my choice to go to Ej Har strange. They said it was a place for power hungry sociopaths to go to and that a kindhearted person such as me should go to St. Flare's. I was determined to prove them wrong. Using extensive knowledge of poisons, potions, and blood magic I've become a doctor second to none. While priests may be capable of healing wounds, I can stitch up organs and carefully eliminate cancers. I can also do cool tricks like manipulating my own blood stream and whatever liquids are inside it. Hopefully after all my hard work I'll change the public perception of blood magic.
Last thread had the most recent version of the battlemage cyoa, but I remember a version at some point with half the skill trees but they were twice as long with 6 t-1's 2's and 3's and 2 t-4's for each magic "school." Is that version outdated?
>>47688608
I like it. An actual good use for blood magic.
>>47685064
I realize this is kind of micro-managey, but do you have any influence over your friend's classes? If not, what classes do they choose to take?
>>47688174
That's very tragic story anon! At least hero academy will give you the chance to excel and be something beyond what your mom and dad did.
>>47688519
You want something spooky?
>>47688232
>>47688248
>>47688253
>>47688271
This is p. neat. Hopefully they'll be more of it soon.
>>47688352
Well then I guess I have to sue you then!
Anybody else know about the ridiculously long necromancer CYOA? Can I get a link?
>>47688455
no, but then you're still mortal.
>>47688535
thanks!
>>47688756
page 4 is up there
>47686661
>>47688810
It's pretty gud.
>>47685064
Ej Har Institute
First Aid (2)
Potion Mixing (2)
Knowledge [Medicine] (3)
Blood Magic (3)
>Comrades
Eloise Avery-gotta have a fellow med student with me
Bathsheba-an interesting subject without blood
Inas-probably would let me test spells on her. also chuuni's are adorkable
Valarie Bluewood-nice to have a friend around with me
Duxix-a man out of his element, quite admirable
>Events
Blind Date(Suzette Highking)-might be fun freshman experience
Great Hunt- one of my more battle prone friends may "convince" me to go with them as a support. May be a great time to find some unique specimens.
Basilisk Den- Gotta find a way to pay for my research
Research Proposal-the main purpose of why I even decided to go to Ej Har, deal with it my last year and hope to bring blood magic to mainstream medicine
The only reason I decided to go to Ej Har Institute is because they teach blood magic. Blood magic perhaps can open up new avenues that we have never expected in the field of medicine which only fools would refuse to seek.
>>47688736
>demon with demonic magic
>respawn
>media
>magical defense
>remarkable looks
>temptation
>human form
>illusion
>unseen force
>paralysis
>nocturnal
>religion
Basically be a succubus who feeds on lonely people who visit my website. Pretty much lure them with sexy succubus bait and then terrorize them to feed on their fear. Temptation will make sure people keep finding my site.
>>47688862
Hi I'm that guy >>47687149
And you sound like a big nerd!
>>47688615
Wait, I think I know the one you're talking about. I Haven't seen this "most recent version" yet, does anyone have it posted yet?
>>47688931
... I literally said it was in the last thread. You can go to it through the link at the top of the page.
>>47688913
and you look and smell like a bumpkini have no idea why our characters would ever meet. My guy lives the life of your average med student with long hours staring at books and very little free time
>>47688796
will there be means around mortality via powers gained in future jumps? Healing Factor from the superheroes one plus something similar from another could help in that regard I figure, given how long Logan lives.
>>47685947
What sort of safeguards exist to prevent subtle mind control potions from unethical Elj Har students? Assume level three alchemy.
>>47689321
I would imagine it would be less safeguards and more extremely harsh punishments should you be found out
>>47689321
4 Hero academies filled with students and teachers who fully expect those from Ej Har to try pull that kind of shit. Also this>>47689421
>>47688736
Spirit
Interference
Regenerating
Nature
Temptation
Trapped
Insanity
Voices
Presence
Illusion
Infectious (Homicidal cannibalism)
Nocturnal
True Name
The woods drive people crazy. You hear things, see things, and it seems like they go on forever. They say you'd kill your best friend even. Don't camp out the night. Trust me.
>>47685140
I've definitely learnt my lesson not to use a name. This reaction is annoying.
Nanomachines, son.
>>47689038
Well with the right choices you could probably manage immortality or extreme longevity.
>>47689613
>>47684677
>>47685140
Criminy, buddy, calm down a bit.
If people want to have names for their content, then good for them: it'll help when looking for them, and if they want praise, they can have it. If not, then that's fine too: some people don't want attention, or they dislike people getting autistic all over them.
If you don't like that people decide to praise others for their accomplishments, even if it descends to brown-nosing, then okay, but stop being an autist about people enjoying namefags. The matter doesn't even affect you, and it makes you look ridiculous.
>>47689647
>>47689665
>>47689572
Personally I'd use a name just to spite him.
>>47685064
School: St. Flares
Classes:
Arcane Magic 3
Summoning magic 3
Potion 1
Blue Magic 3
Tarkun Ironstout
Eloise Avery
Bethseba
Evergreen
Nashwa
My build is quite simple, a Simple man let say son of a small merchant family, with an unhealthy obsession for magic enlisted himself in St. Flares with hopes to train himself in the arcane arts but instead of simply follow the traditional style of magic decide to try to understand the core of everything magic, for that purpose he will not only learn all the basic arcane magic but will also try to learn blue magic and get access to the rarest powers that only monsters have, even learning how to summon creatures that double as mentors an allies.
Under this objective he will make friends of five girls: evergreen and Nashwa as research subjects (nothing bad will happen to those girls don't worry), Bethseba and Tarkun as muscle, with Eloise as a fellow researcher.
he will participate every year in the great hunt, he will help with a fund raising only to test some potions and recipes, he will help with the research proposal of Eloise and he will guard the princess (being quite graphic with anyone that present a threat (blue magic can be quite messy) with hope that the princess wont want to repeat the experience)
>>47689613
>Magical
>Beyond Human
>Military
>Focus 2 (free because Magical)
0
>Endurance 3
3
>Durability 3
6
>Immunity 3
9
>Directed Energy Attack 3
12
>Self Healing 3
15
>Strength 1
16
>Passion 1
17
>Self Improvement 2
19
>Flight 1
20
>Agility 3
23
>Enhanced Senses 1
24
>Stealth 1
25
>Reflexes 3 (3 because Valuable)
>Training (free because Military)
>Unique Weapon (magical melee weapon like lightsaber, powered by my passion)
>Armour (stylish armour)
>Reputation (known for being kind but very emotional and passionate by coworkers)
>Prime Subject (free because Fiona)
>Samuel Mason
>Yuito Kataoka
>Fiona Dawley
>find book of magic in old library
>start learning simple magic only to discover it's owned by ancient magical being
>mysterious being offers to help make me super powerful sorceress in exchange for favors
>military notices me because magic has changed my appearance
>military decide I'm valuable and capture me
>they destroy book and owner (prime subject)
>forced to work for military instead of magical benefactor
>kick butt of evil terrorist groups with help from Samuel and Yuito
>do lots of good, but have trouble with public image because 9 feet tall with wings and have bitchy reporter trying to make me look bad
>will have to find a way to deal with annoying reporter, but unfortunately can't just kill her
>>47689733
>>military notices me because magic has changed my appearance
>>military decide I'm valuable and capture me
>>they destroy book and owner (prime subject)
>>forced to work for military instead of magical benefactor
I'm pretty sure that's not how it works.
>>47684073
How many times must I tell you to stop responding you unbearable piece of filth?
>>47689764
They probably would've wanted to study the book and the mysterious being bound to it, but they destroyed it while capturing me:(
>>47689809
I CAN RESPOND TO ANY POST I WANT!
>>47689834
No dumbass. You changed your origin to something else because you didn't feel like owing something to the magical being.
It more likely you were killed being forced to protect it.
>>47689865
I took the Prime Subject Perk which removes the drawbacks from your origin. Magical origin drawback was I had to obey the magical being. So I worked the perk choice into my story with the book being destroyed. It's part of the build choices.
I was definitely hurt badly trying to escape with the book, but I lived and the military kept me alive to study and use. But unfortunately the book and mysterious being were destroyed;_;
>>47686042
Yes. I'd love more of those not-magic abilities each person has.
>>47687978
It got me to watch the show, so I'd say it was highly successful.
>>47686119
There's only two. There's not much to do beyond
>make your new body
>pick a waifu/man
>>47688736
>beast - dog
>location - person (owner)
>curse
>illusion
>paralysis
>presence
>pursuit
>strength
>vanishing
>weakness - nocturnal
>weakness - true name
MAN'S BEST FRIEND
>>47685064
School:
St. Flares
Classes:
>Blue Magic x3
>Teamwork x3
>Potion Mixing x2
>Survival
>Monster Hunting
A blue mage is never strong in the beginning, so a strong and functional team is of absolute importance. Making potions is another way to contribute as a blue before I've built up a good repertoire of spells.
And, of course, knowing monsters and how to survive where they do is important in order to learn their secrets.
Friends:
>LuvynaChildhood friend and older sister type = Best girl
>Sera
>Kengen
>Evergreen
>Kaerulaus
Trying to balance out a party here, seems good enough. More importantly I don't think there would be any big fractures in this group.
Do fairies count as monsters? If so could one potentially copy the emotion magic?
Events:
>Great Hunt, every year except last
It makes sense to expose myself to monsters since I specialize in Blue Magic after all.
>Battle Royal, last year
This is where I and my friends will show the results of our studies, traning and teamwork to win glory (and adventuring funds) for ourselves.
>Blind Date - 2, 4 - Liene
Mostly because rolling dice seemed fun.
I can live with this date, I just have to not act racist and this'll go well. It's certainly less stressful than having to escort a royal or planning the whole event.
>>47689971
>There's only two.
Five, actually. There's the quick one that Kit made recently, Waifu Blues by Beri, two different CYOAs that're both named Waifu Laifu, and that older CYOA where one of the perks you could pick was a button that reset the scenario (to be used in case you fail to waifu it up with your designated partner for some reason).
>>47689834
please stop.
>>47689643
Immortality due to indefinite longevity is something I prefer going for, so when you have enough worlds made I'll probably try and finagle that out of the options available.
Way I see it, Immortality earned though careful consideration as a free man is worth far more than immortality given in exchange for servitude.
page 5 coming soon
>>47690229
>>47690241
>>47690256
still have the worst grammar and spelling btw
>>47690263
there we go,
>>47685064
Now that everything's clear as to how this CYOA works, I'm gonna update my build and then post a new one.
>School
Odesium, for science!
>Classes
Year 1: Knowledge / Bardic Arts
Year 2: Knowledge / First Aid
Year 3: Knowledge / First Aid
Year 4: Enhancement / Potion Mixing
Year 5: Potion Mixing / Elemental Magic
>Companions
Farhat
Eloise Avery
Bathsheba
Hana
Znanje
>Events
Year 1: Fund Raising (HF), Party Planning (GoL), Battle of the Arts (GS)
Year 2: Research Proposal (GS)
Year 3: Battle of the Arts (GS), Escort (HF)
Year 4: Research Proposal (GS)
Year 5: Research Proposal (GS)
Name: Vivian Chang
Although she's going to an adventuring school, Vivian's true passion is in fact science. The one thing that fascinates her the most is learning what makes the world of magic and adventuring tick, and everything about it. Her number-one dream is to create a theory, or perhaps discover a concept, or do something like that that will launch the magical world into the next great age, and tries to make friends with anyone she feels like could help be a collaborator, or perhaps somebody she'd just like to study (Znanje, Eloise, Bathsheba). As a result, she tends to get her head lost in books and her lack of social experience can make things awkward. However, just because she's a scientist doesn't mean she can't use elemental magic to hold her own in a fight, although she acknowledges that she is vastly outgunned compared to the average student.
On the side, she moonlights as a keyboardist in a band, of which her companion Farhat is also a member.
>>47689613
>Origin
Mutagen
>Appearance
Inhuman
>Faction
Renegades
>>47689647
>Abilities
Strength 3, Agility 3, Endurance 3, Durability 3, Natural Weapon 3 (2 free +1)
Immunity 3, Self Healing 3, Focus 3, Adaptability 3
>>47689665
>Perks
Expert, Authority, Prime Subject, Defector (free)
>>47689674
>Allies
Max, Immortal (Defector)
Team Deathless on the scene, big, green and seriously mean!
This is one of the very few CYOAs where I don't feel I need to take drawbacks, which is kinda rad. I gotta wonder what this monster squad does in its free time, besides exist.
>>47685064
Am I the only one who finds this cyoa kind of hard to read? It's got a lot of grammar and coherency problems that make some concepts really difficult to grasp.
I really appreciate the thought that was put into the world and will definitely be posting a build in the morning
>>47690269
How hot would a fire have to be to burn Miko to cinders?
>>47684478
This old thing? Sure, I'll re-hash my old build I guess.
WEAVER
>Suit Class: Mesh
>Body Type: Drider (20)
>Stats
Dex: 7
Dur: 1
Pow: 1
Rex: 5
Spd: 4
Str: 1 (1 1/2 I guess if you count Infusion nanites? I feel like that should count for something.)
>Features
Adhesion (free)
Tremor-sense(free)
Spinners (free)
>A.I/Interface
Agent (10)
Nerve Suit (5)
>HUD
Suit Status (Standard)
Night Vision (10)
>COMMS
Radio (Standard)
Terminal (10)
Worm Platform (10)
Spider (5)
Defense Maze (10)
Spyware (5)
>WEAPONS
Plasma Bow (20)
Natural Weapon “Spider Bite” [Power Fists as fangs] (20)
>DEFENSES
EMP Shield (10)
Portable Electronic Jammer (15)
>UPGRADES
Environmental Control I (Standard)
Camouflage (Standard w/ Mesh)
Collapsible II (10)
Kinetic Stabilizers (10)
Sub-Amour Pistons (10)
>NANITES
Hydra I (10)
Infused (10)
Alright, math should be up to par.
Itsy-bitsy spider hacker is go.
I'd post a picture to go with it, but fuck if I can find a spindly drider mesh suit online somewhere.
>>47685064
New build, this time with a punk rock theme.
Name:
Dee Dee Simon (real name)
Vera City (stage name)
Bio:
Always seemingly angry at the world around her, one day Dee Dee Simon had a dream. Or more accurately, a vision. A vision of a parallel universe called "Earth" where musicians who could barely play their instruments gained world renown for their music's sharp criticism of the social order rather than their skill; a vision of a place where three kids on a stage could rally a crowd with just three chords and the truth.
Although in hindsight, there was probably alcohol involved in that vision, little Dee Dee was taken by the idea of pointing out exactly what was wrong with her world, and getting people to actually listen. Thus she started innovating in "punk rock," a type of bardic arts still new in this world.
>School
Although she had always dreamed of going to Ej Har since she was little, when she finally got a chance to tour its campus, she found herself disgusted by the sheer lack of ethics. However, she found herself equally put off by the martial attitude and corruption of many of the other schools, and finally decided to join Ej Har to, and I quote, "stick it to those Lunestier pricks."
(1/2)
>>47685064
the hero Academy really lacks archers
>Name:
Aidan Redkeep
From small noble house that holds a castle on main road through mountains to realm. Through generations his family hold the line against those who tried to storm through mountains and pillage small towns and villages
>School
Lunestier
Without doubt, Aidan's father would not send him to any other school
>Classes
Ranged combat x2
Tactics
Arcane Magic x2
Physical training
Maneuvers
Magic refinement x3
>Friends
Valerie Bluewood, Mecherath, Farhat, Luvyna
>events
Battle Royal x5
Can't miss the chance to test the skills each year and find weakness and fighting style
>Escort
Not helping the spirit of this lost girl would be just an awful thing to do
>Fund Raising
Raise money? Raise tons of money? I guess we could do something with Luvyna's cooking and Farhat bard skills to draw customers
Not many fight with bow in our time, either preferring cold steel, magic or both. Gifted in magic Aidian would not only learn the ways of a bow, but arcane magic and it's refinement. Soon combining it by training to shoot pure arcane "arrows" with his bow. With precision of marksman sending hails of deadly blue arrows at his enemies it's hard to say what he is more, an archer or a mage.
Though, his older brother would acquire both title and a castle leaving Aidan to claim his own place in this world after graduation. Of course unless something terrible would happen to brother
>>47690628
>Classes
Year 1: Knowledge [political science] / Bardic Arts - because punk is heavy on politics.
Year 2: Bardic Arts / Teamwork - so she can work better with her band.
Year 3: Unarmed Combat / Maneuvers - for both self-defense and stage theatrics.
Year 4: Illusion Magic / Tactics - It's not punk, but she just likes strategy games.
Year 5: Bardic Arts / Blood Magic - 666satan666
>Companions
Farhat
Chandara
Nashwa
Scal
Inas
>Events
Year 1: Fund Raising, Battle of the Arts - First known performance to a large audience. Gig cut off early after song "Quadicle Uber Alles" causes fights between those who get the song is satire, those who don't, and those who get the satire but hate it anyway.
Year 2: Battle of the Arts - Tries to experiment with adding synthesizer to band lineup. Does not go well with fans.
Year 3: Battle of the Arts - A now legendarily infamous performance, as Vera and her band debuted a new and very blasphemous song, "Anarchy at Lunestier." While Lunestier was hosting.
Year 4: Battle of the Arts, Blind Date - Paired with Eydal Northbreed. Goes even worse than you'd expect.
Year 5: Battle of the Arts - Performance of "Spells Like Teen Magic" nearly destroyed the stage.
How about some mechanics that detail how to rape your fellow heroes.
Is that something you'd be interested in?
>>47690760
YES!
>>47690760
Not really no.
Makes me glad I didn't post my build tho, and I won't be in the future.
>>47690760
I'd sell my third testicle and an inch of my dick for something like that.
>Homosexual
Now, she admitted herself there's no such thing as girls who don't like it both way. I think her difficulty should be bumped down to "trivial", but maybe that's just me.Will you add that snobby cuntgirl from Lunestier?
She needs 5 stars, and a high probability of raping you and making you fall in love with you.Please
>>47690805
>making you fall in love with you
What a noble skill
>>47689613
>>47689647
>>47689665
>>47689674
Innate
Peak Human (Based on bearded Frank Zane)
Rogue Nation (Neo Nazi State)
>34 (Traitor + Valuable + Hated)
Strength 3
>31
Durability 3
>28
Self Healing 3
>25
Mind Control 3
>22
Inheritable 3
>19
Mental 3
>16
Immunity 3
>13
Shape Shifting 3
>10
Reflex 2
>8
Agility 2
>6
Mind Reading 2
>4
Endurance
>2
Focus
>1
Directed Energy attacks
>0
Celebrity (Free)
Safe House (Secret lair in Edinburgh Scotland)
Armor (Pic related)
Unique Weapon (Custom revolver)
Defector (Foe perk)
Squad (Foe Perk)
Traitor
Valuable
Lindsay Reyes
Max
Clone
Samuel Mason (Traitor)
Derek Hall
Bubbles
I'll use a combination of my mind control and inheritance powers to create a harem of super powered waifus all while saving the white race in my proud NatSoc state. Ill be a harsh but fair leader, secretly controlling everything from the shadows. Ill also keep my clone secret so I can take a vacation every now and then while he picks up my duties when im gone.
All in all that sounds like a great life lads.
Rolled 1 + 1 (1d4 + 1)
>>47685064
Let's be an edgy fuck
>Ej Har
Course:
-Martialx3
-Unarmedx1
-Physical Trainingx3
-Necromancyx1
-Blood Magicx2
Compagnon:
-Malyvin
-Valerie Bluewood
-Dax
-Crale Edwards
-Cassiopeia
Event:
-The Great Hunt
-Security
-Blind Date
I hail from a small kingdom on the outskirt of civilisation. As the eldest son of a knight family, I was sent to an hero academy. My goal will be to learn how to deal with various monsters, bandits and to find a way to boost the declining agriculture of my rocky kingdom. Dax and Cassiopeia are here to find a way to boostthe agriculture, while the other are here to form and organize a more efficient gard, able to deal with monsters and human troublemaker.
>>47687884
>cucks
Stop misusing that word, retard.
>>47685064
>Name: Glyn Spark, born Glynessa Sparkletits
>Gender: Female
>Race: Half-succubus
Born to a human father and a succubus mother, who soon abandoned her daughter and husband, Glyn wants nothing to do with her succubus heritage.
>Odesium
Free of discrimination and with a strong scientific focus, Odesium is Glyn's dream school.
>Potion Mixing x3
It is said that each succubus knows how to make 127 types of Love potions at birth, Glyn has decided to put her skills to good use.
>Illusion Magic x3
Erotic illusions and feelings of true love can be conjured with the snap of a finger, but Glyn is determined to wield this power for good.
>Knowledge: Anatomy x2
"Not the perverse parts!"
>Mage Armor x1
She has no real talent for any of this but she felt bad going to Odesium and not taking one of their specialized classes.
>Elemental Magic: (Hell)fire x1
She wants to learn how to suppress this power, not how to wield it.
>Sera
Kindred spirits and soon to be friends.
>Farhat
Will not leave Glyn alone, but she secretly does not mind even though she was a better seductress at age 3.
>Hana
Fellow "monster"girl, although her personality leaves a lot to be desired. She should be more studious!
>Jiel
The day Glyn admits she wants nothing more than to corrupt this cute boy, is the day her mother returns from hell... literally.
>Y1: Research Proposal, Sports (Wet Volleybal)
>Y2: Research Proposal
>Y3: Research Proposal
>Y4: Research Proposal, Fund Raising
>Y5: Research Proposal, Party Planner
She was naive enough in her first year to be coerced into joining the wet volleyball year and stuck to research proposals for the years to come. She did help fund raising and party planning.
Glyn is cool and analytical, and claims her biggest wish is to become a Hero and help mankind. Few people know how much self-control she needs to exert every single day to keep herself from becoming the biggest slut Odesium has ever seen. Her biggest fear is to become like her mother.
>>47690922
I'm not sure how much I like this sexualization of builds but I made Lord Sky, Lady Anastasia, Nathan and now Glyn. I just want to point out that I intended Nathan to be gay, which would be one more thing his father and brothers would dislike him for.
Sky and Anastasia would be straight. Glyn would be asexual, or a nymphomaniac if she ever accepts her succubus nature.
>>47690832
She doesn't even have to do anything but deny me to have me throw my heart at her!SecretGoodEnd of being her servant, enduring all her insults for that "Good job" she says to you, at the end of the day, after you've performed all your duties for/on her.it took me three reads before I understood what you were referring to, but by god, I'm not going to delete this post.
Guess this "connection error" whatever wasn't entirely bad.
>>47690922
Picking Hime, failing Tough Love because she's far too smart, then seeking guindance from her, if possible, or any nerd really, to make me smart enough to get her with Kind Love.
>>47690802
I feel the same way.
>>47687861
>>47687926
My first iteration of Strange coins was done as a pdf, which was mostly ignored due to pdf hate at the time (it goes in waves), I also did a 1 page or so mockup of slut life as an image+text pdf that I've never posted. The strange coins pdf was images+text also.
I was using that as a learning tool for doing gaming industry standard pdfs among other pdfs I made at the same time but you can't use some cheap pdf program for that kind of thing. I used InDesign, which is way more then really needed for making a cyoa.
>>47690922
Text is too hard to read. Too small
