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>>47659227
>lucky perk were removed and replaced with new perk
>>47659249
>you can go full melee build
time to make a companion page
>>47659227
thank hibiki
>>47659227
>>47659279
tfw someone listened to your suggestion and implemented a change.
Also just to clarify something on the melee build. Taking the Neutralizer prevents me from having a primary weapon. does that mean i cannot pick a melee weapon?
>>47658969
Sounds good.
>>47658994
you probably want to use google docs. then its in the cloud but it takes as much ram as any chrome tab. although i do think it has an inferior way to check grammar at least when compared to word. libre office is also pretty light when it comes to ram usage.
>>47659010
My top two.
1. Harmony (Literally Perfect)
2. Jeanne (Figuratively Perfect)
Also I wanted to like Twile so bad but i just couldn't. Especially with the way she was made. I want to share my body with her and i would choose Autopilot but that also burdens her too much. I don't just want to dump my problems on her and only enjoy the good. I want us to both enjoy this experience. Body swap kinda solves this problem though. Also the sharing memories is really off putting. everything else seems pretty good though.
>>47659308
>Taking the Neutralizer prevents me from having a primary weapon. does that mean i cannot pick a melee weapon?
not really, if don't want any gun you can replace your primary and secondary with melee weapon.
>>47659337
also thanks for suggestion friendo
Would you aKill La Kill-esque CYOA?
Minus the edgy shit and just have it be cute girlsand boys, I guess, wearing what is essentially a symbiote suit?
Focus on friendship and fun.
>>47659279
Are grenades only one use or ship can resupply them? What aboutslave collar
>>47659369
grenade can be resupply
slave collar are single use
>>47659279
>Primary and Secondary
aw, hell, not just one or the other
aight
>>47659385
can you remove slave collar and then put it on someone else?
Very important if you try to defend your ship and yourself from enemies
>>47659354
Maybe. It really depends on where you're going with it since the original is a pretty closed world. Somewhat similar to doing a Eureka Seven CYOA.
>>47659308
Twile doesn't share memories, only thoughts. I consider that to be surface thoughts, like whatever is running through your mind at any given hours of the day. It will be virtually impossible to keep secrets and she'll learn about any memories you inevitably think of, but she won't share your memories themselves.
If she did there wouldn't really be much of a line between her and you after a while.
I agree about the autopilot, but if I chose that (I'm stuck between that and ghost writing) I'd mostly be relying on her to exercise and maybe cook if we don't eat out, NOT to do every little shitty task in my life. What it ends up coming down to is one of us has to earn money and the other has to work on staying fit and healthy. We can share equally, but one of us is bound to prefer doing some activities or dislike some things we have to do anyway less, so I think it evens out.
>>47659405
>>47659308
The thing I DON'T like about Twile is her general personality. Good thing is that she's moral enough to rarely take over without permission, that's bound to carry over into other things. Otherwise she's described as a prankster, childish, and a showoff.
I feel like childish will improve over time, prankster we can probably work on not pissing people off with, and show off I can live with.
>>47659398
yes
>>47659249
>Reading through the cyoa since it's my first time seeing it.
>The grammar is perhaps the worst I've ever seen.
>Get to the perks and read the No Obsticale perk.
>The only thing you can't get over is your depression.
10/10 what the fuck
>>47659354
>edgy shit
KLK had edgy shit?
>>47659510
No.
>>47659405
whoops yeah i meant thoughts. There are certain things that i think which are downright nasty and mean but i would never say them out loud. I would hate myselfeven moreif someone i liked or even a stranger knew what went on in my head. I would feel like complete shit and though she might understand where my feelings come from and that i don't mean it. It still won't change the fact that these are my thoughts. Id feel like a huge asshole. I am mainly hoping that she and I can be good friends and i think her reading my thoughts will sabotage the entire thing.
>>47659429
Also i agree that her general personality is a bit lacking. But i do also think that she has the most potential. Like what this anon said >>47659349 .
and as a tangent i'm really surprised how high Fei La has been ranking .
>>47659548
FYI all the posts you quoted were me.
I'm quite keenly aware of how my thoughts can sound. Generally I'd have more to worry about lewd or downright disgusting, and occasionally overwhelmingly embarrassing, than anything particularly mean though. It's probably best to save the "deeper bond" until we get to know each other better and are at least prepared for what we are going to be hearing.
Definitely going to want to do it anyway though, even if only so that while I let her use my body I get to use the true form benefit myself as well as see what she's seeing with body swap. Especially important since that will be a pretty significant chunk of time, up to an equal share which could be divided over longer intervals if necessary.
The main appeal with her, although I actually like the general closeness with the way she's set up, is that I feel like I would really be giving her something special that few other people would. More importantly that something is actually a mutual gain, because while she has control I will get to experience things I otherwise wouldn't, I might actually learn to enjoy some new things that way. That's what makes it a relationship rather than just a waifu who loves me absolutely for no explicable reason.
>>47659548
>surprised how high Fei La has been ranking
Semen. Demon.
I like the idea of making deals and magical contracts with people. Is there a cyoa where that plays a significant role?
>>47659633
There was that Demon CYOA where one type of demons was the classic contract making demon.
>>47659633
I remember someone posting a WIP of a CYOA where you make a contract with some manner of mythical creature, with each creature having their positives and negatives, plus the type of contract further affecting how the creature would affect you(r life), from being able to shapeshift into the creature to having something of a guardian deity, or something along those lines.
>>47659707
Holy shit, I finished the first page and forgot all about it. I didn't even post it. I should probably continue.
... I remember why I dropped it. 4chan thinks it has an embedded file and I can't post it. Fuck that.
http://imgur.com/eaJMd4K
>>47659774
Did you try saving it as PNG instead of JPG? Or fiddling with the quality/compression settings?
>>47659774
Let's test if the problem persists...
>>47659774
>>47659830
Apparently imgur's additional compression "fixed" that particular problem for you. If fiddling with the quality settings and directly saving as PNG/JPG don't work, try something inane like saving as PNG, opening the file, and resaving as JPG.
>>47659830
>>47659849
Thank you. I should probably finish it now. I
>>47659616
I agree with you but that only makes the option of picking Twile much more scarier. I have to expose myself to her. She's not like the other girls where they can love me no matter what. I have to actually make an effort to try and be with her to make her happy. Her bio said that she was sealed in a hand mirror after being with the last host. That must hurt a lot. Being with her is a huge commitment. With both Harmony and Jeanne I have good reasons to stay with them. They can take care of me and we can have a decent relationship. It probably won't be something meaningful or life changing.
I don't think I'm strong enough to take that risk.With the other girl's the worst case is that I get bored, with Twile the worst case is that someone ends up with a broken heart.
>>47659227
>RS-Stalwart
>Body
Fit male
>Perks
Light feet, Melee mastery, Stealth, Durable, Berserk
>armor
R-45
>weapons
Electric sword, high frequency machete,
>Utilities
Night vision, Force field projector, Slave collar
Too bad we can't trade weapon for more utility, but anyway. Maybe melee combat is outdated, but on this world everyone fights with swords and arrows, it's but mine time to shine. Very sneaky and extremely dangerous as what can be more deadly than ninja? invisible berserk ninja
>>47659986
I think it's a bit worse than that. More along the lines of someone ends up stuck in a handmirror with a broken heart, but even that might be getting off lightly.
I definitely agree with you, including the part where if you don't think you can handle it you shouldn't pick her. After all, if it were something anyone could and would do, like say feeding fei la, it wouldn't be special and it wouldn't have the appeal it does. I think I can though
Stat me in Hero school
>>47660027
Unholy Arts x3
Summoning Magic x2
Unarmed Combat x2
Ranged Combat x2
Physical Training x1
>>47660012
Looking at the bright side though, she understands how this works. She knows you won't be able to control your thoughts and that they won't always be something she should hear. Not that she won't hear them, but she'll be far more understanding than a normal person would if you were to actually speak your mind to them.
Once you can come to terms you'll have someone who you'll NEVER need to be afraid of being completely and totally honest with. The way I see it that's better then the sex, the body and all the potentially fun things you might do with her put together. But that could just be me, as someone who always thinks things over a thousand times but is afraid to actually speak even if only just for the fear of saying it wrong.
>>47660012
>>47660144
Don't you guys realise Twile is just an inferior Andrea?
>>47660190
I like Andrea, but the two are nothing alike. Andrea doesn't even give you a body changing option.
Giving Andrea her soul is nice, but it's also easy. It's just a magical fix which strips most of the meaning to it. That's about the only similarity between the two though, that you can build a relationship out of something you do for her.
When it comes to being open, I have to open my mouth with Andrea. Even if she has so little self worth as to not judge anything I say (that's the only way to describe it "I am a robot so I have no right to hate you for the shit you say"), it still doesn't help me get over my own personal problem.
>>47659227
Don't sweat your English, making OC is hard work.
>>47660233
Both are potential workdrones that can greatly enhance your quality of life. The only difference is that Twile has a personality while Andrea's bonus makes her completely subservient. Twile doesn't require resources though but neither does Andrea with her special reactor core.
Soul Andrea + bonus is the best choice imo.
>>47659548
>and as a tangent i'm really surprised how high Fei La has been ranking
She's a submissive virgin who falls in love with your dick, and lives to please and love you.
She's the virgin Waifu that fucks like a Croatian prostitute that anon loves so much.
UPDATE
This page had some very minor wording changes at the top but that's it.
(1/10)
>>47660275
When worlds collide
(2/10)
>>47660263
She's also a demon so you'd be denying yourself paradise for a sinful perverted relationship with a hellspawn. No, I'd prefer a wholesome supernatural christian waifu.
>>47660283
>submissive giantess waifu
Please let it be so cause DIAMONDS.
>>47660283
And back to the grind
(3/10)
>>47660295
Well, you'll have to wait like 10 minutes for me to get through the pages.
>>47660261
Yeah I'm not picking EITHER of them to be workdrones. You know how Twile can best enhance my life? By having fun in ways that I wouldn't have thought of or gone through with, while I ride along in the back of her mind.
>>47659986
This is really pathetic. Particularly
> With both Harmony and Jeanne I have good reasons to stay with them. They can take care of me and we can have a decent relationship.
>With the other girl's the worst case is that I get bored
Is this what you think a relationship is? A !mother taking care of you? Sure Twile is problematic if you value anything that could be mistaken for privacy but get a grip, Bitch.
>>47660304
(4/10)
>>47660285
>paradise
No proof of Heaven existing.
No proof that Demons come from Hell.
>>47660319
(5/10)
>>47660283
Really glad you decided to add more. Future girl might be interesting, though I doubt I'll be a great fit.
Raises the question though, since all the girls are immortal I guess that means everyone in the future is immortal too? At least in her future, which may not be THE future anymore but it's still plausible. That's a really scary thought.
>>47660336
(6/10)
>>47660323
>LITERALLY having sex with a live demon
>m-maybe god isn't real, right? m-maybe demons don't come from hell, right?
Kek. Enjoy eternal damnation.
>>47660336
(7/10)
>>47658999
>KATALINE
They have other things they do there without Wi-Fi... Like yarn-ball. The hit sport.
>FLOOF
She'd certainly appreciate not being the only moth, but she wouldn't ask you to lose your voice over it.
>>47660367
SAD stfu and go work on a cyoa. stop shitposting and trying to incite arguments.
>>47660368
How would Kataline react if you introduced her to the wonderful world of catgirl porn?
>>47660275
I don't know, anon. more waifu options are always appreciated, but are you sure you don't want to add a few more cozy life ideas? Slime girl daycare's got a few details i've always liked just for that feeling.
>>47660368
Almost there...
(8/10)
>>47659010
>>47659349
Poor Omne... she wants legitimate thanks for what she does.
>>47660367
>no proof
Well would you look at that.
>>47660394
New page
(9/10)
>>47659308
Those two are rather popular. And again, Twile is very hit-or-miss.
>>47660323
In a objetively 100% good Heaven, fucking the only good demon probably wouldn't be a problem.
We're all going to hell anywaysfor fapping to waifu cyoas
>>47660285
It's the sort of setting where stupid nice demons get put on buses to Earth and demon hunters just give up once the demon gets a housemate.
I doubt Hell is particularly serious business either and having a demon who by the time you accidentally die is probably going to be reasonably high up in the hierarchy due to your "encouragement" having your back would probably let you land on your feet.
>>47660416
And the library.
(10/10)
>>47660261
>workdrones
That's kinda... dehumanizing...
>>47660377
Flattered and embarrassed.
>>47660383
Maybe if/when I quit adding new ones. Maybe.
>>47660426
Yeah, it's not like she's evil, so her heritage is less important. The objective good would tell you to breed the evil gene out of all the demons so that there'd be no bad ones left. But that kind of large-scale eugenics won't happen for hundreds more years & even then, it's only going to hit humans.
>>47660416
>giantess is a powerbottom
She's not submissive at all.
>>47660144
>She knows you won't be able to control your thoughts and that they won't always be something she should hear.
Good point she will be a bit understanding. I think I was thinking of all the downsides and was barely considering the upsides.
"No matter what life throws your way as long as you have one good friend to help you through it then you just might make it". Thanks for talking to me about this cyoa it was fun and I learned a lot.
I think I will make a build for Twile.
Orb of Life
Library
Employment (Get a nice desk job)
Ghost Writer (Because I like reading but rarely get around to doing so.)
Body Swap
Real Form (Free with Encyclopedia)
Chains that Bind (I can lucid dream already and Ruin Rock seems useless)
>>47660313
Eh, I'm a pathetic guy in general. I'm a coward even though I don't want to be.
>Is this what you think a relationship is? A !mother taking care of you?
Wouldn't know. I barely interact with other people. I don't understand why people do certain things. Most of what I know about relationships is from 90's sitcoms and other shows. I also did make a distinction between choosing Geanne and Harmony and the type of relationship that would occur. I said it probably wouldn't be meaningful. My intention was to imply that a relationship with Twile would be more meaningful but i guess i wasn't clear enough.
>get a grip, Bitch.
I don't think there is a need to get so aggressive but w/e.
>>47660466
>dehumanizing to use a workdrone as a workdrone
You were the one who made Andrea a completely submissive robot so don't judge me when I actually use it as one. That's bullying.
>>47660434
>I doubt Hell is particularly serious business either
And now I want to make a CYOA with FunHell, with waterparks and barbecues and cute demon girls, because Lucifer can't handle the bullying anymore and just wants some friends.
>>47660514
>Hell is actually an incredibly advanced utopian society because all/most scientists go to hell
Do this.
>>47660275
Fei La still best.
I like giant women as much as (much more than) the next guy but an increasingly curvy demon in love is still better than the other options.
>>47660514
Demon roommate was basically that.
>>47660512
I want to make a spin-off where you're an elven male raping cute bara orcs in revenge.
>>47660497
>I don't think there is a need to get so aggressive but w/e
I just have no patience any more for this nonsense since browsing /r9k/. One too many
>tfw no mommy gf
threads.
For the record this is not me apologizing. Being this whiny is really pathetic. It doesn't matter if you admit that you're a bitch if you do nothing to change.
>>47660545
>mommy gf
Isn't this like a girl wanting to call you daddy while you spank her?
There's nothing wrong with that.
>>47660497
> I can lucid dream already
I think you misunderstand the dream gateway, she says she CAN'T make them more lucid, it lets her enter your dreams "physically". I actually combos really well with being a lucid dreamer as it lers you reshape the dream world for the 2 of you.
>>47660487
She can be. You just need things like Housewife & to take her deal. It's even in her culture for the husband to decide the wife's work. You could also get the Chieftess Bikini modified to fit you & be able to seem imposing to her. Is that not good enough?
>>47660497
That's a very optimistic view of Twile. Most people tend to focus on "never privacy" instead of "eternal support."
>>47660501
Well, yeah, she's a robot, so I guess dehumanizing is more acceptable, but Twile's just a ghost thingy.
>>47660533
Even Oki's target audience prefers a succubus...
>>47660567
The dreamworld is also the only place you can physically have sex with eachother.
>>47660527
>>47660533
Exactly. So the question is how to make it different.
We know from experience Anon will scream at the prospect of getting s job, even if it's flipping burgers on the grill while drinking beer, so that won't work.
>>47660557
That, the weepy misogyny, low level of general maturity, unashamed leeching off of other people's goodwill, and once prevalent /gfd/ threads make it clear: the idiots are expecting their partners to be surrogate mothers. If it was just calling your wife 'mommy' during sex, it would just be one cringeworthy thing.
>>47660574
She's still a bit too assertive and the whole "cute" thing is a major turn-off. Giantesses like Chieftess Subnburst are more my style.
>>47660588
>>47660584
Just make anon an (arch)demon or something and give him enough prestige. Anons might not want a desk job but I guarantee most anons would like being a CEO (in hell).
>>47660595
That's a shame. I was hoping that she would be liked more. At least she's been commented on. Saki isn't that popular.
>>47660527
It is hell, though. If you want it run by scientists, do look up Shiro Ishii for inspiration on how they might conduct themselves.
>>47660614
Saki is smug incarnate with a dash of tsundere. That's a very specific niche. Fucking tiny titted bitch even calls me ugly to my face.;-;
>>47660376
That was not me.
Unless, by SAD, you are referring to not-me. Then he is likely the person you are referring to.
>>47660581
You can do that with Real Form. She's "real and 3d" and YOU "can see and touch" her.
>>47660612
Except you become an arch demon in arch demon roommate and can potentially rule over hellwhile being Lucie's personal sex slave, of course.
>>47660612
my idea was actually to add a hierarchy, so you can take various positions/jobs and get more shit for the higherresponsibility(think like that Hunter CYOA - big powers = boss battles, low power = fight rats, but you won't die).
Anon will still scream that he can't be a NEET with a waifu and a perfect life, so any ideas for that?
>>47660627
Call her a smug bitch all you like, but don't insult the perfect tits.
>>47660535
Not sure if there's enough of that sub-genre to make a proper background collage...
>>47660626
I prefer my logic hells run perpetually by robespierre thank you, hes had enough time to cement his shit
>>47660665
Tiny tits fetishists are just trapfags in denial.
>>47660545
>>47660557
>mommy
>daddy
disgusting tbqhwyf
/r9k/ is actually my second most browsed board after /g/. There are some pretty entertaining threads on there. It is an echo chamber for some negative emotions though. Also for the past couple of months the board as a whole has gotten pretty gay.
>>47660567
Yeah I did misunderstand that. I guess I'll swap Chains with Dream Gateway.
>>47660574
>Most people tend to focus on "never privacy" instead of "eternal support."
Privacy is for people who have something to hide.Irony btw
>>47660655
True, but you had to go through a nonpowered year first.
>>47660658
I like this, just don't make the Legend-hunter equivalents a bunch of moralfags like in the Hunter cyoa.
Anon won't scream a thing though. We either like to go full NEET with perfect life, or full CHAD with tons of power. It's the inbetween that we hate.
>>47660574
>Even Oki's target audience prefers a succubus...
It's pretty much all down to the love potion, makes her a loving waifu option in a CYOA of probably sexually interested roommates.
It's like a minor version of the immortality problem with CYOAs in that either all the options should have it or none of them should as otherwise you've thrown off balance by providing something that a proportion of people will always choose.
You either have to give some justification for all the waifus loving you (e.g. they're from the waifu dimension, Vampire Queens are just like that, etc.) or none of them.
Or just accept that Fei La is best.
>>47660715
>>47660497
>privacy is for people who have something to hide.
>"Anon is such a nerd. I had more fun in that stupid mirror. Why couldn't they give me to a cute guy. Uh? What... you heard that? Just a prank, anon! Hehe..."
It's all fun and games till you overhear Twile's actual thoughts.
>>47660744
"11x11 = 121, 12x12 = 144, 13x13 = 169, 14x14 = 196, 15x15 = 225, 16x16 = 256, 17x17 = uh... it equals.... I forgot. Quick, I need more math problems before Anon finds out I love him. Um, um, 1x1 = 1, 2x2 = 2, 3x3 = what? You heard me say something? D-don't be silly. I'm just practicing my math. I wasn't thinking anything in particular.
>>47660744
If you say so. I'm pretty sure video games and the taste of food are way better than being a mirror in an office.
>>47660744
I'm actually not sure what i would do if i heard those words. If she hates me from the getgo then i guess I can't do much about it. I just have to put myself out their and hope for the best.Now if only i could find real life situations that i would want to put myself out their for.
>>47660665
that which doesn't exist can't be perfect.
>>47660783
>Anon finds out I love him
who is this Anon and why he's not anyone of us
>>47660818
No, it's worse. She started out liking you but with every boring day of your pathetic life she starts regretting being with you more and more. You had a chance and you tried, you just weren't good enough.
>>47660783
>"11x11 = 121, 12x12 = 144, 13x13 = 169, 14x14 = 196, 15x15 = 225, 16x16 = 256, 17x17 = uh... it equals.... I forgot. Quick, I need more math problems before Anon finds out I love CHAD. Um, um, 1x1 = 1, 2x2 = 2, 3x3 = what? You heard me say something? D-don't be silly. I'm just practicing my math. I wasn't thinking anything in particular."
Let's keep things realistic.
>>47660304
>We need fed to live
>>47660871
>>47660871
>>47660672
But Anon, Robespierre was a godly man. And the real violence during the so-called "Terror" came from the Thermidorians. Look it up. No reason for ol' Robbie to be in Hell.
Cyoas that let me be a fantasy Prince?I already know of Royal Revival and Dream Prince but am looking for more.
>>47661024
>Dream Prince
What's the latest version? I only saw the first one a couple weeks ago.
>>47661024
Why prince?
Plenty that make you king.
>>47661036
He didn't update it with DLC yet, so I think the first version is still the latest version.
>>47661036
1.1 is the latest version. When I'm done with a few minor changes and the DLC I'll re-release dream prince as v1.2. It will be listed on each page in the cyoa as 1.1 is now.
>>47661050
Correct. The whole eye issue has gotten worse and i've not been in a very creative mood due to that. Sorry.
>>47660275
Twile
Welfare, Library and Employment.
Welfare is too op, it needs to be nerfed. I say you scrap the extra 400 - pay only the rent, bills and healthcare stuff. Welfare means sustenance living, not excess.
I would rather scrap one of my free options and just chose Library and Employment because 800 a week without cost of living is way too much money for me. But I can always donate the extra 400 to some good cause. Maybe use that extra money in helping resolve the cases I get at the agency. I'd rather live a modest lifestyle.
Autopilot, Body Swap and Ruin Rock.
Twile can experience having a normal body by autopilot (having her mentally control a physical body) and Body Swap (having her phyiscally control her own body). As good as its going get until I get her own own body.
Chain that Bind and Dream Catcher are a hit and a miss for me. Shes not the kind to screw another person over and I'm not looking for that kinda 'good time'. Ruin Rock would result in some pretty cool talks with her.
Library - Twile
Get her her own body.
I'm Twile's minder, and shes doesn't owe me anything. We live together, work together and when she gets her body back I'd like to keep my roommate. Also would encourage her to have a life throughout this whole process, via me lending her a body and when she gets one. Twile yields the absolute most development from anyone, Ms Robot is a 2nd, but she simply lacks a lot of character and her options were really shallow imo - too dream wife.
It would be pretty sick having that close a friend and it sounds like she really needs something like it.
>>47661049
Because some people want to have all royal privileges without kings responsibility
>>47661049
Because you have a lot more freedom and a lot less responsibility as a Prince, especially in fantasy settings where Kings seem to be glued to their thrones and Princes are at serious risk of losing their dicks from overuse.
>>47661065
What is wrong with your eye, bro?
>>47661065
Did you getcumin your eye?
>>47661050
>>47661065
Thanks. So it's this one?
I hope your health issue gets sorted Imaginos.
>>47661135
Is there anything better than a Nordic + Roman empire?
>>47661127
>tfw guessed right
This place has ruined me.
Does anyone have the latest necromancer remake version?
>~120 posts
>No traveler
>>47661127
Yeah that's funny, shame that it isn't so simple or friendly. Bet you're a riot at parties.
>>47661108
I have a scar inside my right eye and there is a blurry spot that has formed just off center of the lens. It warps anything i look at with that eye around the blurry spot but the left eye does compensate for it a bit. I have to get the eye imaged to see if I need surgery assuming i can afford the imaging and surgery if needed.
>>47661135
Yes that's the correct one and thanks.
>>47661144
You mean besides the obviously superior Arabian+Asian Realm?
>>47661198
Damm, that sounds scary af. Almost makes you wish it had just been cum. Hope you get better.
>>47661256
Yeah, cause an Arabian realm obviously needs more mysticism and religion...
>>47661096
Twile doesn't actually get "her own body". She is always in your head. "Real Form" is only able to interact with the world in a very limited way. No one but you can see or hear her and she can can only exert a very light force on objects other than you.
It's definitely good for her. She can climb out and look around, maybe play a video game or watch TV independently of you, work on her writing, that sort of thing. She can't really live like that though, she still needs to use your body if she wants to interact with the world and with other humans.
>>47660736
> You either have to give some justification for all the waifus loving you
If anon can't get with a girl they live with, is at least somewhat interested in you and has eternity to notice them/get close to, in their own imaginations, then anon needs help with self-confidence.
Even then, other then the succubus and her literal love potion (which seems pretty useless when she's going to be very close to you and will jump on your dick anyway...) there's Mishe's locket slime option, Twile's deal, Andrea's reproduction, Jeanne's "me", Floof's queen and love nectar, Saki's deal and Oki's deal all imply some level of love or attraction, in addition to more subtle hints on some of the others, so Fei la isn't even the only choice to offer a guaranteed shot at love by any stretch (though she is the easiest I guess).
>>47661256
>>47661144
Asian+Medieval, fight me
>>47661350
Asian+Pirate=Ching Shih waifu=BEST FLAVOR COMBO
>>47661395
Medieval+Asian+Arabian+Nordic+Pirate+Roman (or you can say it's Eurasian Realm) > everything else
>>47661345
Only if you consider the love potion to be real love anyway, which I don't. That other anon obviously does, but I'm looking for something real and mutual, not something forced that gives me a nice dick sleeve.
I think the ones who I would have the best shot of having a real loving relationship with, something that's not just sex and convenience, are Twile and Andrea. Maybe Alice could work too but that one is pretty weak.
Anyway I just don't accept that "they like me because CYOA rules". I look at their personalities and their wants and needs and decide if there's some way for me to actually earn their love, something that's good for both of us because I'm not changing who I am just to get laid either.
>>47661415
I agree but for some reason
>No more than 3 realms can be bought
>>47661435
>something real and mutual
GENUINE
>>47661256
Very much this, though squeezing in Pirate as well would rock.
>>47661280
We're talking about fantasy Arabia. Plus, have you never heard about sexy fun times in Beirut? It was better before the civil war, but omg nightclubbing in Beirut....
>>47661350
>>47661256
>>47661144
Nordic+Asian is best, just imagine a Nordic realm elevated to an Asian style empire. The spirituality, the culture, etc. It's a manly, bearded weeaboo fantasy.
>>47661459
Are you really complaining about my word choice?
>>47661135
Second page coming in. Who best prince?
>>47661488
This actually sounds pretty cool.
>>47661518
no, just rising importance of this part through "genuine" meme
>>47661443
This may have been a leftover from when the realms didn't cost the same amount as the skills they give, so more of a balance issue. I'll re-read it and see if removing it would cause an issue.
>>47661534
let me know if you have problems posting page 3. some people have and if so I'll re-compress it into jpg format and upload that for everyone.
>>47661135
>>47661534
I don't get how the Realm perks interact with the Prince perks.
Good-looking and comfy cyoa so far though.
>>47661512
Yeah, I fucking love nordic culture but it's admittedly a bit too rough and barbaric for my taste sometime. So mixing it with asian culture should net you something that's more dignified and make the spiritual aspect even stronger.
>>47661578
>>47661558
It seemed to work okay?
>>47661560
The realms themselves would shape the way various prince perks look and a little bit act.
For instance. The Armor in a sci fi setting would probably look like power armor or some sort of force field belt. In an asian setting it would be more samurai like and in a steampunk setting more of a copper iron man type of look. It's up to your imagination how those themes would affect your equipment's look.
On functioning a flying carpet would run on magic in magical realms and it could be a jetpack that ran on ether in a steampunk type setting or some sort of peddle whirlygig that boosted your pedal power hundreds of times to let you fly etc..
>>47661534
>best prince
Stallion prince is a must, but Sorcerer prince scales with the magic in your realm so if you pick Ancient Ruins enhancement and Magical Land enhancement, you'd probably end up a demigod at worst.Cause the entombed eldritch gods in your realm count to "the most magical of creatures".
>>47661588
Ok cool. Some have mentioned in the past that page 3 was too big to upload for some reason.
>>47661607
Last page! We did it!
>>47660304
Does Fei La's sex drive contract allow you to increase your food production?
>>47659227
Gunbuster
Buff Body
Power Armor
Berserk
Educated
Bulldozer Armor
Autocannon
Power Fist
Ballistic Shield
Grappling Hook
Incendiary Grenade
You're up against the wall, and I am the fucking wall.
>>47659893
Please do!
>>47661638
Yes, it increases how often you can feed her.
>>47661435
Real loving relationships don't generally stay loving forever.
A magically infatuated succubus who likes watching TV with you is better.
>>47660275
Welfare
Lockout
Andrea
Artist
Repro
Nanobots
SoulI wish her deal didn't involve removing her free will
What does cyoa general think of cyoas with a lot of words and no pretty anime pictures?
Because page 1 of 2 so far is5,5k words
Don't worry, page 2 has lots of pretty pictures.
>>47661670
>not giving your obedient robotslave a soul so it can create better art you can take credit for
Why did you even pick it if that's not what you're using it for?
>>47661701
depends anon, if those words are interesting I would read 5k of them
>>47661701
POST IT and I'll tell you, cutie.
>>47661653
Okay, but what I was trying to ask is can you increase the amount of semen in one ejaculation?
>>47661739
I just want to commission stuff without paying for it. I guess maybe I could write a comic she draws but I'd be sure to credit her for it.
>>47661767
It's gay furry shit, isn't it?
>>47661767
Why would you credit a robot for the art it made, you don't credit a toaster for the toast you made either, now do you?
It's just a tool, anon. You can use it however you want and it's still your accomplishment.
>>47661796
furries mostly pay, so I doubt it
>>47661796
It's mostlycard alters, and maybe a nice pic of our group's characters to give the DM.
>>47661761
yes, that goes up, too...
>>47661665
This is mostly a case of normalfags jumping whatever they can to get their dick wet and the people on both sides compromising too much of themselves to force it to work.
You end up with relationships built on sex and infatuation between people who have nothing else in common. Of course they fall out of love, especially when they go back to acting like their real selves rather than the forced persona they used to get attached to begin with.
No, it's not easy, but if they are both genuine and they both like each other for less superficial reasons and like what they do together you'll find they really can last.
Besides, unless we are both using the love potion in order to magically fuck our heads up it only works one way. She'll love me forever, but meanwhile I'll end up seeing her as nothing but a devoted cum dump
>>47661844
>normalfags
Why would you say such embarrassing things, anon?
>>47661747
you want to see half a cyoa?
>>47661740
Well, I hope so. There's lore and shit in it. I did get kinda carried away, and the intro is a full page in Word long
>>47661924I'm secretly a normalfag, don't tell anyone anon.
>>47661956
I'm sorry, but after using that word you can't ever be one again.
>>47661899
I think you included Marvel too soon: it's a really high power setting which will ruin plenty of future settings for us and is by itself far more dangerous than our pursuer.
>>47661899
Its that time of day huh?
>>47661979Does that make me an honorary NEET anon?
>>47661899
Is this going to be a new jumpchain?
>>47661944
>you want to see half a cyoa?
If it's a really big one, even half of it can be really pleasurable.
>>47661899
I'm still angry at you for making me a vampire in the intro, then fucking me over in 3 different worlds.
>>47661924
>>47662014
I'm only missing companions. I'll do as many as I feel like I can handle before wanting to burn my computer to permanently remove the CYOA.
>>47662022
Um... sorry?
>>47662042
LOSER: 5
DEVIANT: 0
NERD: 5
WEEB: 5
NECKBEARD: 5
EDGELORD: 0
INSANITY: 0
Never been so dissapointed of my normality before. Why the fuck am I even in prison?
>>47662012
Eh, sorta, if I can keep up with it.
>>47662003
Yes but the powers you gain from there aren't nearly on par with the iconic heroes of Marvel or DC. Supersonic speed for instance is only about 700 miles per hour. A bullet moves at about 1700 miles per hour as a comparison.
The packages may be a bit more powerful but have their own drawbacks...not the OP btw.
>>47661899
>low powered as fuck
>powerhouse is not even spiderman tier
What the fuck are you doing
>>47662042
>Loser (15)
No gf
Virgin
>Deviant (15)
'entry-level' fetish, probably
I still don't think my biggest fetish would make people "very uncomfortable"
ERP
>Nerd (5)
Bullied
>Weeb (5)
Watch anime
>Neckbeard (5)
I played Magic the Gathering a few times a decade ago
>Edgelord (0)
>Insanity (0)
So, either go insane in the Garden of Feels, or hide from furries in the Love Shack. Uh, tough choice. I think I'll go
>Love Shack
and beat up the furries that don't have a submissive/BDSM fetishalso muh fetish
god dammit, I get no alignments. I want to bullshit and say my biggest fetish is awful enough to disgust people completely.
I only have 45 points, so I can get the sword. Or the booze.
>Private bathroom (30)
I don't want to share a bathroom with furries and... other things.
I can't even be the little girl.
and I can't get anything else. This won't be a fun time.
Why is this cyoa so good?
>>47662153
Too powerful too fast and it would be pointless.
>>47662408
Then just have us go to lower powered settings first instead of throwing us to the wolves?
Hey Hibiki, a text editor that doesn't take too much RAM:
>Notepad
>>47660323
>>47661135
Going for a Corsair Prince. Like an Elric figure, who can go from languorous sissy to puissant warrior-sorcerer in a blink. He's incredibly privileged, rather sophisticated, has lived quite a long life already and has acquired powers and perks aplenty. The world he lives in presents no real danger to him. His main foes are anguish, aimlessness and boredom. Oh and he's a slut.
Realm Flavors:
>Pirate+Asian+Arabian
Which gives me Martial+Mystical arts+Poet+Navigator+Sailor
+Merchant+Rider+Lover. Pretty crazy uh?
Enhancements:
>Lascivious
No uglies allowed. Except the sexy kind of ugly.
>Humanoid Enhancement
Typical fantasy races, elves orcs and such. Asian and Arabian
flavored variations of thereof. Mermaids. Alsoan.
assortment of slightly animalistic sentient races such as catfolk
Skills, Abilities and Perks:
>Martial for unarmed and for my faithful cutlass
>Prince Charming
I assume I already have
>Prince Stallion
from taking the Arabian perk lover. Just reiterating it for good
measure.
>Racial Change
Let's say I'm an elf. I wonder how effeminate I can get in this
cyoa.
>Sorcerer Prince (weather magic)
>Scholarly Prince
>Bardic Prince (lyre, singing)
>Wright Prince (shipwright)
Princely Paraphernalia:
>Copacetic Conveyance
Magical ship/love nest. <3 Voyeuristic fairies as grew.
>Displaced Domicile
>Immaculate Sponge
>Opulent Outfit
Comfort, beauty and style are non-negotiable.
>Fetter Flask
Sounds like fun times.
>Water Warper
A must for long voyages on the sea.
Darker Dream (drawbacks):
>Vile Substance
>Capture Prone
>Easily Distracted
>Bedeviled
>>47662519
Cont.
Quests and Adventure:
Assuming those only trigger when I'm willing and ready.
>Cryptic Currency Circulator
The goal being to get my hands on three useful/fun coins for me,
some others for my friends and allies and making sure the rest are
secure.
>Disgruntled Desert Djann
>Lofty Lantern Lament
>Pixie Poachers
>Sea Strife
>Sphinx Snafu
>Strip Club Struggle
>Misappropriated Mask
>Paradise Perverted
>Valkyrie Venture
Can that last one be taken without Nordic Realm?
Damsels in Distress:
>>47661395
Ching Shish Queen of Pirates would be my main partner. I see her as
kind of dom. Certainly a formidable woman who sees me as frivolous
but potentially useful and fun.
Secondary lovers:
>Anastasia Davenport
>Gwendolyn Bennet
>Miriam Barnes
>Ashanti Willowsong
>Felicia Sackhoff
This probably puts me at negative points but I don't really care. I
had fun imagining all of this, so good job Imaginos!
Some peasant post Hero school. I want to plan how to best mess with St Flares graduates. How abouthiring discreet mercenaries to rape and murder their rabble family back home?
>>47662042
Loser: no gf, neet, no friends, virgin +40 points
Deviant: entry level I bet, ERP +15
Nerd: all of it is true +40 points
Weeb: watching anime +5
Neckbeard: 0
Edgelord: nothing
Insanity: I despise normality as fox despises grapes +15 (because got 40 in nerd and loser)
total: 115 points
Ward: Garden of feels, silence is good
items: my PC 40/115
powers: Ray of feels, lesser mischief 105/115
Causing some minor mischiefs to people while living in lonely garden? Only feels and no furries or purging edgelords here, maybe it's better to live there
Just a simple waifu cyoa. This is oc.
>>47662113
Why the fuck are you here, especially if you don't currently have any /tg/ related hobbies?
>>47662668
I'll pray for you, anon.
>>47662674
(2/4)
>>47662674
Hestia.
>>47662695
(3/4)
>>47662674
Nothing, almost nothing, annoys me more than goddess waifu cyoas which include virgin goddesses like Artemis.
>>47662639
Why mess with St. Flares students? They're so low profile you probably won't notice their existence.
Mess with haj before they turn into villains.
>>47662527
>>Valkyrie Venture
>Can that last one be taken without Nordic Realm?
Yes I don't have her marked as nordic only.
>>47660588
>Muh soggy kneeeeeees
>>47662712
(4/4) Some bonus stuff to go with the cyoa.
>>47662527
Thanks. Glad you liked it. First build I've seen for it in awhile. Like what you did with it.
You'll probably like some of the stuff in the DLC whenever I get it finished.
>>47662014
Is this too edgy? I want to put more info about her as a person, but I also need to include that there lore
>>47662639
Your attempts at RP sucks.
>>47662727
(5/4) The mystery box. Just have fun mates.
The cyoas you'll most likely see from me next is either: 0rder, a final fantasy-like companion cyoa, or Spire a cyoa set in the same world as Dusk City.or a redid from scratch Pokemon Personified
Whichever one I finish first.
>>47662753
Nope. She seems like a great bestfriendu.
>>47662639
is this >bitchy highborn heroine hates hero from St Flares until they hatefuck episode?
>>47659227
>RS-Stalwart Hawk
>Female
>Thin
>Light Feet (Free)
>Sharpshooter
>Double Perception (Free)
>Medic
>Melee Mastery
>General Trench Coat
>Super Shotgun
>Laser Pistol
>Flashlight
>Comlink Watch
>First Aid Kit
>Resource Bot (Free)
>Chainsaw Katana
Time to be space bounty hunter/assassin/whatever pays with my ninja like skills, awesome trencoat and chainsaw katana.
>>47659991
>invisible berserk ninja
:0
Would you be a assassin? What would you be fighting for? Like money, or a cause, or just to survive?
>>47661645
Autocannon is good to have your back while your powerfisting stuff. You seem like some kind of extra powerful antiriot guy.
>>47662775
cool. I did add a line mentioning trust issues to drive home how much she wants a friend.
>>47662781
I hope not. I don't want to fuck her.
>>47662768
It's kinda hilarious thatYHWHis the best choice for a gay guy. I like it and I'm glad I took the box.
>>47662639
>implying you can find a mercenary willing to rape my family
I'm going to become a great Hero and there's nothing you can do to stop me, STACY!
>>47660527
But what about those who were both scientists and priests Luke Aquinas or Mendel. Heck, Darwin himself was a theologian as well, and many great scientists and researchers were religious such as George Washington Carver, and many more were at least deistic
>>47661345
Fei La's love potion is for making her submissive, to me. I wouldn't want to use it otherwise, but she becomes pushy and dominant if you don't and I hate that.
>>47662849
Can you please not disrupt our atheist narrative. Thank you.
>>47662042
>Aligments
Loser: 5
Deviant: 15
Nerd: 30
Weeb: 40
Neckbeard: 15
Edgelord: 5
Insanity: 0
Total: 110
>Ward
The Prison School
>Items
Vidya
Animu
>Powers
Cute Boy
Reality Marble
Shekels $60/week
Sounds like a good life as long as the edgelords keep their distance, if they don't want to get fucked by my reality marble full of battle maids.
>>47662639
>not worshiping the Omnissiah
>not transcending flesh to superior metal
>not being the hero the world needs by kickstarting the magitechnological singularity
>mfw meatbags flap their meats
>>47662797
>I hope not. I don't want to fuck her.
>not wanting to turn her into proper lady
it's like you hate challenge """""hero"""""
>>47662893
How'd you manage so many points in Weeb? I was kinda pissed I couldn't pick Cute Boy.
>>47662910
>hero
Did you mean to write villain?
>>47662741
>DLC
What will it be about?
>>47662966
No, hero fits more.
>>47662783
>Would you be a assassin? What would you be fighting for? Like money, or a cause, or just to survive?
First for survival, then when this part is secured, fight for own sense of justice. Who knows, maybe you will be target with you bounty hunting and assassinations or other reasons
>>47662990
More options to add things that aren't in the current dream prince to spice up the flavors / dreams that can be crafted.
Few more realm flavors, items, perhaps powers/abilities, drawbacks, quests, damsels in distress. Varied backgrounds like arabian gal, alien gal, orc gal, a dude, cyborg gal, viking gal/quest, etc.. 2 pages so far.
>>47662952
Have been weeb for over 12+ years.
$15000+ physical collection (mostly mango).
At least 2/3 of the shit I consume is nipponese.
Have been able to understand RAWs for 8 years.
>>47659830
Sagely Panda is the obvious best choice, right? I mean, just having him float around, dispensing random advice would probably be fun.
>>47663053
How'd you learn japanese?
>>47662940
>liking an unattractive himedere
ew, no thanks. I'll take my Ladyknight any day of the forever.
>>47662966
I? The villain? You are mistaken my dear anon, I only have the best intentions for the people of this world.
I see a glorious future forged in steel, shiny and chrome. Where there is no suffering or scarcity. Where every man, woman and child is free to do whatever their hearts desire in whatever fashion that suits their fancy.
Why do you reject such a inevitable revolution anon? I dream of world ships that sail the celestial oceans, I dream of settling on a million worlds and planes, I dream of forging stars from nothingness, and even the heartless entropic void yielding to the overwhelm might of our collective ascended minds.
And I weep for every solar cycle that passes, that beautiful future is delayed by politics of squabbling nobles and petty superstitions of insular old world.
>>47663041
Sounds really cool.Hang in there!
>>47662753
Reads as too edgy to me.
>>47660368
I have some questions, how feminine is Jeanne preference? Androgenous, or actually feminine, with breasts and wide hips?
Does she only think younger-looking people "cuter", or she does have pedophile tendencies?
If I choose her, and, well, choose her in the sub-choice, what does the "tease" mean in practice?
Also, related to Omne, can I use her planet people for research? That is, can I ask them to serach or some math topic or another? Not making experiments with them, but using the thinking-power of these billions os small people.
>>47662042
Loser: 15pts
Deviant: 0
Nerd: 15pts
Weeb: 5pts
Neckbeard: 5pts
Edgelord: 5pts
Insanity: 0pts
(45pts)
Ward: Nerd
Stuff: None
Powers: Leftover Points (45pts = 135$ a week)
>>47663144
Wouldn't every man, woman and child NOT be free to do whatever their hearts desire if you're forcing them all into being a singular gestalt being?
>>47663100
Learned to understand animu at a decent level by just watching ludicrous amounts of it with subs. Also have been taking once a week evening courses for 7 years for grammar and conversation skills, and Kanas at the very start. Kanji are mostly self-taught or learnt by reading manga with furigana.
>>47662674
>He turned Bastet into a cuck goddess
What the fuck were you thinking?
>>47663197
Dang I didn't think you could really learn it like that.
>>47663245
Not everyone can.
![2a1dee736c77931b48946131762e332e[1].gif](https://i.imgur.com/8PUdGlf.gif "2a1dee736c77931b48946131762e332e[1].gif")
>>47663144
>their hearts
How can you follow your heart when it's cold metal. A true heart is filled with hot blood and even hotter passions.
>>47662639
Man that's a shit ton of stuff to post so instead I'll just post a different Box Wine Cyoa
>>47663266
And here's the mystery box
>>47663222
>People like cat girls, right?
>Fuck them, let's have her cheat on them!
Some kind of retarded spite I imagine.
>>47663222
>Cuck goddess
She's just flirting and leading losers on. She isn't fucking them and cheating on you.
It also says she will stop messing with dudes heads if you ask/get jealous.
>>47663182
Mind partitioning and virtualization anon, the gestalt only requires a minuscule fraction of everyone's total mental processing capability. Every person in my ideal future can experience countless lives through countless realities in such simulations, without needlessly wasting an ounce of precious nonrenewable resources.
>>47663260
I assure you anon, a miniature nuclear fusion reactor will provide an adequate amount of heat.
>>47663303
Flirting with other men is emotional betrayal.
And it doesn't matter, she's still doing it. You have to FORCE the issue after she's already behaved that way. He's made her a cuck goddess by default.
>>47662768
Never write waifus again. You've lost the talent you used to have for it.
>>47663312
>>47663303
I don't care who's right or wrong, let's just stop this discussion before this thread succumbs to the cancer, yes?
>>47663321
is that italics anon? that text is so damn hard to read small and blends in quite a bit.
>>47663312
Flirt - Behave as though attracted to or trying to attract someone, but for amusement rather than with serious intentions.
She's just having fun man.The fact she comes back to you after she's done having fun with them, and showing you off as a real man and the only one who could win her makes her a bitch for messing with those poor guys like that.
