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Post post-cyoa
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>>46976329
Via Rail
Chemical Tank
Seriously What The Fuck CN Stay On The God Damned Tracks I Swear To Christ
>>46976329
>>46976329
>No multi track drifting option
>>46976090
>>46976190
Can someone please explain the difference between kill order and determination? They seem the same to me.
>>46976693
Determination is you being in control, and you can still be persuaded to not do certain things.
Kill order turns you into a slavering beast with a one-track mind towards completing your task. No mercy, no persuasion, no stopping.
>>46976855
Thank you for answering. Mind if I ask which one you think is better? I personally am leaning towards determination.
Since /cyoag/ is about nothing but fetishes, which one hasn't yet had a cyoa dedicated to it?
>>46977628
tiles
>>46977628
Not a fetish, but classic literature waifus?
>>46977628
quicksand
>>46977628
you could troll that foot-hating anon. There hasn't been a foot cyoa.
>>46977628
There's a ton of awful fetishes that don't have CYOAs.
>>46977628
Serious question, are you Harem Creator?
Because if you are, please, for the love of god, stop. I know you're all about trying again and again and again, but this isn't working for you. Just fucking stop.
hey guys making a cyoa
there's going to be items that help you diplomatically solve problems, I need some ideas for them.
>>46976059
Past Life: Behr
Abilities: Intelligence, Fast Adaptations, Improved Vision, Danger Sense, Communication, Culture, Independent Action
Vessel: Pencil
Master: Kuris--I mean, Anna Beck
World: Invasion
Her and I team up to make that greatest weapon I was supposed to make, banish the invading scum.
Reposting from last thread since I never got the chance to post a build for the updated version.
>>46978068
>>46978031
Something that gives you additional minor helpful details when discussing something, making a speech, etc. when you wouldn't have known them before.
Something that helps you understand who will wind up being the leader and the followers when negotiating with or among a group.
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>>46978081
I'm wondering if I can take Skala and Body Swap and then not use the body swap until after she finishes her business. More to the point, I wonder if she would be OK with that. Her sister is probably much more important to her than her magic or her body. Still kind of a dick move, but not nearly as much of a dick move as just doing it without really giving anything back.
Otherwise, I want Poppy and I want Pinwheel, but I'm not so sure I should take them together. Poppy's "advanced" magic isn't something I should be encouraging right of the bat. I do wonder however if she can put more power into her miniatures, make them progressively bigger and get them to do useful tasks. It's some pretty versatile magic if you are creative with it.
>>46976135
>Shiba
>>46978068
>>46978081
Sharon+Blending Pinwheel is still absolute bliss
>>46978472
She's nice, but honestly kind of boring. I would gladly fall back on her if there weren't much more interesting options, but there are plenty.
You know a CYOA is well written when you could easily choose half of the options. Sharon Skala Poppy, Karla, Anna and Chele all have their appeal.
>>46978068
>>46978081
Gaaah, I can't pick between Sharon and Nadine. Help convince me?
>>46978619
But imagine. You could travel the world with her helping her hand out sweets on halloween as her twin sister. Eventually the two of you will be synonymous with names like Cupid and Santa Claus. In your downtime you just hang out, eat sweets that will never make you fat or rot your teeth and generally just have a good time. And your immortal. Sounds like a blast imho
>>46978068
Karla and the Malevolent Staff.
I also considered the Bonding Band or the Magic Broom, but this way I've got an excuse to ride on Karla's broom with her.
>>46978799
That's not even a question. Nadine's magic sucks, healing 20x faster still takes hours or days, or is still "never" in case of things that don't heal.
If you just want the tits, you go for karla, if you want the catgirl aspect maybe you can find that same senior witch to help with that. About the only reason you go with Nadine is because you have a lactation fetish.
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>>46978081
It's great but it'd use less single-trait-oriented and gimmicky witches.
...and maybe tiny bit more lewdness.
>>46978068
>>46978081
>Karla + Pinwheel
>Become Karla - Cute Loli Version
Seems win/ win to me.
>>46978619
>>46978833
>>46978851
Honestly, most of the magic on this thing suck. They are way too specific and kinda out there and not even in a if you use them creatively you can break the system-way. They are too gimmicky.
Living a comfy life alongside your Witch seems more of the focus here too me.
>>46978906
My point was that Nadine has no appeal at all (outside of the aforementioned fetish). Most of the magic isn't great, and most of what is good is only good for the person using it, but it's still more interesting than slow healing. Better on the day-to-day "comfy life".
Oh, and I don't think Karla would appreciate the pinwheel very much.
>>46978943
>I love it when little girls try to emulate me
Seems to be up her valley.
>>46978943
I was interested in Nadine. I love almond milk, but it's expensive and I end up drinking it all that I never have any for my cereal. Plus I've always wondered what it was like to take a milk bath.
>>46978959
She loves when girls emulate her and boys lust after her. Not when boys emulate her becoming girls who lust after her. She's a straight shota fetish.
I'm sure you could still work things out of course, I just don't think she would be too happy about it.
>>46978898
>please write more fetishes, and write them explicitly! I need it so I can jerk off!!!
Are the threads filled with nothing but sexually repressed and confused teenagers? Is that why girls with penises are so popular?
>>46978068
>>46978081
>no shapeshifting penisgirl
Why do you torment me?
>>46979090
>>46979089
They are actually pretty UNpopular in these threads. There are always a few futafags around, but the vast majority get pissed if you give their girl a dick.
Traps on the other hand...
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>>46979093
i don't remember seeing that.
>>46979174
He did mention he might add one with minor shapeshifting magic, but that he's done with it for today. That guy probably expected my repost to be the authors update.
>>46979317
Making CYOAs has never been like this.
You put your ideas legibly on a page, add any pictures you deem necessary and that's it.
>>46970136
>Answering to 'Karla best waifu'
I wonder why we couldn't marry her.
From a lore perspective nothing really speaks against it and from an ingame perspective she has far more noble blood then lucky Anri could ever have.
>>46979317
My first, and only, CYOA was a pick one power with a mystery box. The powers were all extremely powerful, the point in making it was to attempt to balance them all along the highest possible tiers without ultimately making them all the same thing.
Where does this fit in on yours? Somewhere between serious and shitpost I would guess. Keep in mind this was many years ago and not on /tg/
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>>46978081
>Skala
>Magic Broom
Magic broom will provide me an additional activity to partake with skala.
Skala's the only one to have a set goal and it might be interesting to follow it to fulfilment, it might become an adventure.
>>46979117
Aether needs Orichalcum
Though nigh an workable it does provide a number of uses, especially in extremely heat-intense or stressfull places of machinery
Also, maybe, mana shards, able to power Orichalcum-based machinery for years
Lyonesse has similar hard alloys and does have power cores, which are much more compatible with other things when compared to mana shards and also very valuable flight engines, that have a high output and can make even things that aren't remotely aerodynamic and heavy fly.
Qlippoth might be a place from where you could transport some pet horrors.
Jötun also has many little trinkets that might be interesting to other conduits...
Also the Glass deserts glass is beautiful and durable
>>46979446
Just the usual can't pick anything but the immortality option (e-tank). Avatar would be next.
I feel like this thing needs to be organized into tiers. I just can't muster the autism to do it right now.
Have some n00b OC
anyone got that girlfriend CYOA?
I remember some of the choices, the bottom right one was named Katya and was a hardcore Christian, I think one of the girls was a LoLpeasant that streamed it, one had experience in sex and wanted to guide virgins through the motions.
there was also this hardcore right wing gun nut girl near the bottom.
>>46979645
Restart: So if you take this power in a few weeks you'll be powerless due to running out of choices to take?
>>46979645
Also...where is part twooooooo!
>>46979720
>any power apart from the one you just lost.
So you can switch between two powers indefinitely, you just cant use the same one twice in a row.
>>46979645
>power named metal man
>not using the metal man sprite
>>46979645
Blood Brother
Efficiency
Limit Break
Blood brother for shapeshifting-based immortality. Limit break+efficiency makes anything you do infinitely better.
>>46978009
my, you're awfully cranky.
>>46979645
>powers combine and interact in whatever way you want to interpret
Healthy Living + Efficient
I can heal 20 people per strawberry, plus the act of healing is 20 times as efficient.
Eat shit, transhumanists. I just cured death for everyone through CYOA powers.
And I guess Basic Upgrade so I'm less likely to die of a sudden accident, even if I don't have any strawberries handy.
>>46979798
Since it's open to interpretation, Limit Break + Efficiency creates a feedback loop. Limit Break raises the power of efficiency, which raises the power/duration of limit break. Ultimately this allows you to limit break forever.
>>46979645
Basic Upgrade
Blood Brother
Multiply
i shall spend my life having orgies with myself
>>46979645
I'm liking this so here's a critique:
The probability power is poorly-worded, a common error with a trivial solution. Include a caveat that the action must be something you could naturally accomplish. Otherwise you could "attempt to punch the world in half" and it would succeed, or "give yourself godhood".
The Limit Break power needs some serious spiel to define what counts as a "limit". For instance, the strawberry power. Is the limit the need to eat a strawberry? Could you eat anything and gain a heal? Or would one strawberry grant infinite heals? Or could you just infinite heal without eating anything? Basic upgrade doesn't seem to have any limits so would it be unaffected? The fact that some abilities may be unaffected should be acknowledge in the wording: "any other powers with limitations have them ignored".
Efficiency is an unusual name for a power than amplifies the end product rather than the process. A 10x more efficient punch just sounds less exhausting or taxing in terms of coordination and motor control, which would naturally allow for more strength - but not 10x strength. The wages example is just strange and feels more like luck manipulation - it just so happens that giving yourself super wages plays out to have no negative consequences. If so, this ability is considerably stronger than its peers.
Enjoy refining this, it's a good cyoa. I'd choose The Noble Path, Multiply and Tech Head. (btw, there's an easier way to word Multiply - "you may have up to five physical prescences, sharing a consciousness")
>>46979847
I can do even better than that.
>>46979645
Take "Reset". Select Limit Break as your first power and use it at the end of the day. This removes the limits on Reset, allowing you to select all the powers at once forever.
>>46979812
Also, my mega-intelligence through Basic Upgrade means I can formulate a way to frame "not eating shit" as a disease, and I can heal anyone I want of it.
So I can craft the perfect global society by ensuring that anyone in power who steps out of line is suddenly gobbling down a huge barrel of diarrhea.
>>46979645
Also I'd include expand the nation definition given in The Noble Path as a "morally universalistic and rational" body of laws. It's possible for a very selfish/elitist/particularist nation to have very rational rules that serve this morality, but we clearly don't have that in mind.
>>46979812
If you're just afraid of a violent/disease death the Noble Path seems more of a fit as it directly prevents this, unless you're planning on being a criminill.
>>46979391
>been here for years
I find it beautiful that new authors come and go, but those who never make anything stay forever.
>>46979090
>>46979108
>>46979117
>>46979128
So, I'm interested but... Man this is pretty niche cyoa. So I take a conduit build and then figure out a business and then... Work out how many points I could get from that business and then multiply those points to see the amount of money I would have and then spend that money on things? I'm a little unclear on the actual point adding part. This could possibly do with an extra little box that clarifies this for dinguses like myself?
So my main build is spread pretty thinly between Crucible, Bevin and Gesmene... Not a whole lot of business power there... But screw it, lets see what I can think of.
Uh... I guess. Crucible Fight Club? Utilize the unique nature of Crucible to carve out a little area where people can kill each other with almost no consequence? I'm kind of stuck though as I really don't know how to figure out how many points I have. Am I just a total derp?
This is absolutely a niche market idea and considering the not super ideal spread of points I have it's probably low cost but I really don't know what perks could be called what or even which... Am I meant to look at that table and only workout points from perks related to the business I make or what? And I really have no idea what perks would actually be turned into points, It could be argued that almost every perk I have is worth a point but that feels extra cheap... I just don't know where the line is or what to do here.
Could the creator or another anon give me a hand here and let me know what they think?
>>46979645
Tech Head
Efficiency
Limit Break
So, once per year I have an hour where I can turn single scraps of metal into literally anything. Aside from that, I can still make anything humanity can make out of 1/10th the materials and sell them for 10x the price. Sounds fucking amazing.
>>46979888
>If you're just afraid of a violent/disease death
I'm not preventing just my own death, or just one kind of death.
I'm curing humanity of death, period. The ultimate problem, solved. All I have to do is eat some strawberries.
Scientists can breed strawberries that provide optimal nutrition, or zero calories, or variable flavors, or whatever helps me do this most efficiently.
I could also "heal" pregnant women to ensure that we don't overpopulate the planet too fast.
It's like if Harry Potter met science, or something.
>>46979873
There's stretching a definition, and then there's grabbing it, tying half of it to a stone column, and tying the other half to a rocket about to take off into space.
>>46979977
There's criticizing someone, and then there's invoking the wrath of someone who can cure you of your lack of gobbling turds 24/7.
>>46979869
>Take "Reset". Select Limit Break as your first power and use it at the end of the day. This removes the limits on Reset, allowing you to select all the powers at once forever.
You wouldn't need to wait until the end of the day either (since that's basically a limit, and is thus broken with Limit Break). Also, you could choose Limit Break twice and use them both to break each other, resulting in you having all the powers without limits at all times.
>>46979645
>Magical Realm
>The Noble Path
>Basic Upgrade
>>46979090
Fresh conduit:
Extra world (18)
Earth:
Tongues (17)
Easy passage (13)
Aether:
Tower (12)
Outpost (11)
Engel Arch (10)
Cathedral (9)
Infusion (8)
Orichalcum (6)
Phaeron (extra world):
Unwaken (5)
Indoctrinate (4)
Mesmerize (2)
Unwelcome guest (0)
Orichalcum would be of interest to other companies that want to make useful stuff out of it. So it should be low cost product for a niche market.
Tongues allows me to sell it to more people. +1
Outpost helps in the production of mana +1
Cathedral helps in the production of mana +1
Indoctrinate helps me advertise +1
Revenue = 4 x 20 = 80.
One portal station in my outpost. (70)
-Cargo Station (79)
Armored train, just to be sure (74)
Kingdom (44) in Gesmene
Trains (42)
Life-force x2 (32) for myself and any companion
Reshape x2 (30)
Power (20)
Palace x4 (4)
Garden x4 (0), a second home in Rorch
>>46979919
It's a CYOA dependent on your own interpretation so where the line is literally just about how cheap you're willing to be.
>>46979645
>Basic Upgrade
>no one can steal, manipulate or copy your powers
Thank you.
>>46979720
>>46979732
In essence every 24 hours you have to pick a new power, can be any apart from the one you just had so you could do: Bird Man, Metal Man, Bird Man.
>>46979728
In progress, it's on word just got to put it onto paint. Wanted to test the waters first.
>>46979812
10 people per Strawberry, but otherwise yes.
>>46979867
Cool, thanks.
I'm thinking of nerfing Limit Break but not too much as everyone seems to have fun with it. Probably going to rename Efficiency
>>46979888
You have a point. I tried to make it so that it was 'You're safe as long as you're not a cunt'
>>46980081
Err... you're welcome?
>>46980316
>You have a point. I tried to make it so that it was 'You're safe as long as you're not a cunt'
>Take Limit Breaker
>'You're safe'.
Welp nice one but I'm immortal now sorry.
>>46980351
For one hour per year. Have fun with your mini-purge.
>>46979387
Frankly, not marrying her is a good thing.
>>46976909
Depends on what you want to do. When you get to the point where Kill Order is available, the mission is to resist and lift the people as they despise you.
For that purpose, you can't question whether or not what you do is right or wrong. Therefore, making it so that you can't might be a better plan.
>>46979089
Honestly, I'd rather just have a good character first, then worry about their crotch later. Doesn't matter how many dicks you put on a busty lady: a shit character is shit.
>>46979645
Efficiency, Multiply, Blood Brother.
I have one me that works and makes a bunch of money. One that stays home to take care of the family. One that takes classes and learns really fast. And a two man team that seduces/mugs people to get some of their blood.
Technical question about blood brother. If one clone drink the blood, do they all gain that transformation? Also, are you protected from blood born diseases?
Nearly done with a CYOA, having a difficult time figuring out how many allies you should get.
There are two categories/types of allies, 16 in category one and 8 in the other, so I figured 2-3 of category 1 and 2 of category 2.
Yes no maybe so?
>>46980753
That is not the most common opinion, at least not from the replies I've seen to CYOAs.
Fetishes > waifus > companions >> everything else.
>>46980810
sure
>>46978009
>bashing my favorite author
>>46980810
>fetishes>waifus>companions
There should be no difference between waifus and companions. What might be a waifu for someone, might be a companion for others, and vice versa.
There's nothing worse than seeing best girl is a companion. Don't make a cyoa friendzone me.not again :^(
>>46980966
cant tell if troll
>>46980810
In addition to what >>46980991 said, excluding fetishes from a person's description should make it so that they could be thought of as having whatever fetish the reader does, thus enabling them to choose companions they otherwise might've excluded based on said companion's listed fetish(es).
>>46981027
>they could be thought of as having whatever fetish the reader does,
that's boring as shit, though
Might as well say "she is a 10/10 to you" or "she has all your hobbies".
She is no longer a person, just almost a person which you have to blow life into.
>>46981011
Why would I troll? Aoi is best girl forever and always.
>>46979952
Oh god, not the Big Yud. He's been turning up everywhere recently!
But yeah, I see your point.
>>46981129
Well, maybe not straight up "has all your fetishes", but more "is open to experimentation".
>>46980316
No problem man. Changing the name of efficiency is definitely for the best if the 10x end result is what you have in mind - my first suggestion would be "Magnifier" - although I still feel it's a very strong ability. Could you jump ten times higher, or think ten times quicker? Remember ten times more clearly? It largely invalidates the Basic upgrade, besides the resistance to mind-reading and power mimicry/theft (which I can't remember any option for...). Like maybe just 5-8 times better? But this is just opinion now.
As for Limit Break, there are plenty of fair uses for it now, but with the rules so loose it makes some stuff broken. Tightening it up is the best nerf.
>>46981129
That's the talk you talk when your fetish is so normal you can talk about it when you're talking with your parents.Yes, it is vore.Not the kind you expect either.I want to absorb girls with my dick, turn them into nutbutter and then blast them inside my one true waifu.
>>46981129
You act like a person's fetish is the only aspect of their personality and life.
>>46981298
Most people here carry on as though fetishes are the core aspect of their personality and life.
>>46981304
That's unfortunate.
>>46981228
>>46981228
How many times did your parents drop you on the head as a child?
>>46981210
Why would "she has X fetish" mean she isn't "open to experimentation"?
Unless you're that >>46981228 fucker in which case, yes, you will never be happy in a relationship
>>46981319
She'd make hot nutbutter
>>46981328
>my fetish is better than your fetish
Time for bed, Dan.
>>46981298
No I do not.
Read my post; I specifically mentioned "she has your fetishes" is on the same level as "she has your hobbies" - it makes her a not-person.
Why do a waifu cyoa if you're going to change everything about her into exactly what you want? That's not how people work.
>>46981365
>fucker
Why are you so upset
I mean if the existence of that very feitsh upsets you so much you can just leave 4chan for tumblr or something since they won't play with your feelings by mentioning things you don't like
>>46981400 has a point.
>Why do a waifu cyoa if you're going to change everything about her into exactly what you want? That's not how people work.
Yeah, that's closer to how waifu's work
>>46980048
well i will now post my official words only build for Conduit because the last time I tried to talk about the fan worlds people were not as received
Fresh conduit:
Sands of Time 1pt
Extra World (Void of Colors) 2pts
Lesser Conduit Waifu 1pt (Uthuli)
Earth Peark
Tongues 1pt
Crucible Pearks
Azoth Ember 1pt
Forge 1pt
Athanor 2pt
Unquenchable Embers 2pts
Always a path 1pt
Door to the City 1pt
Void of Colors Pearks
Golem 1pt
Words without Voice 1pt
Outpost 1pt
Gateway 1pt
Infusion 1pt
Bought off Native Danger 1pt
Bought off Unwelcome Guest 1pt
I plan on using Outpost to create a sort of 'hunter dream'-like area for those needing a time to rest wile exploring the Crucible and plan to use for combat Azoth infused Golems.
as always feed back is welcome
>>46979645
>Blood Brother
>drink some bro's blood
>incapacitate him
>shapeshift into him
>fuck his girlfriend
Why does this turn me on so much?
>>46981391
No, your fetish is just so ridiculously stupid it can't be the product of a healthy brain.
>>46981435
Because you're a powerless bastard who fantasizes about obtaining the least scrap of agency and are too sociopathic to value your friends.
>>46981421
People who whine about fan worlds are simply to be ignored.
>>46981314
Double edged sword, on one hand, they prefer mechanically simple single paged cyoas that are easy to make, have images that are convenient to search for and their demographic is very easy to entertain as long as the cyoa created includes their preferred fetish and ideal waifu traits as options. And demand for lewd and waifu based cyoas is extremely high.
This benefits potentially new cyoa authors who are inexperienced with graphic design and photo editing software and don't want to waste time and effort creating something that will just get forgotten and discarded after one thread. New waifu and lewd cyoas are frequently reposted and discussed in multiple threads after their initial conception which motivates and encourages cyoa authors to continue making them and hopefully improve and refine their cyoa making skills.
The negative is demand for classic adventure based cyoas are on a decline, no one wants to spend a couple of evenings and afternoons and countless hours searching for the right image piecing together another stardust, domain master or space refuge cyoa, when they're going to get a dozen replies and couple of builds at most and attract the attention of max/miners and autists out for blood. It's not worth the effort.
>>46981436
You're not in good company to say such things, anon. That's about average strangeness for fetishes in these parts. And most people around here have far more than just one.
>>46981436
I'd rather be into penisvore than be a furry, Dan. You sound like a disgruntled furry whose tail buttplug is getting to small for his loose ass, just saying.
>>46981496
>Average
Hell no. Most people here just want to fuck weird things, not transform women into semen. He's an outlier.
Though judging by his posts he's just baiting anyway.
>>46981474
The problem is that most people ignore fan worlds, not whine about them.
>>46981492
I think you misunderstand me. I don't mind waifu CYOAs myself. I like them. I just think it's unfortunate that they think a sum total of a person's personality is their sexual fetish. That's a judgement of their character, not of waifu CYOAs. You're so desperate to find a kindred spirit you seek it with anyone who even tangentially might share your opinion with you.
Also you're just plain wrong, it's just that none of you whiners have bothered making anything on the level of Stardust. The last time someone tried, he got a decent amount of replies. Why not throw your hat in then? Because as I see it, you just like to complain about a perceived lack and a lack of interest (which is demonstratively untrue using the archive), and that's more than likely a problem of you disliking something and magnifying its existence into a bogeyman, rather than any reasoned observation.
>>46978068
>>46978081
>>46978906
Yup, Karla+Pinwheel sounds fun. Lewd oneesan adventures aplenty! Though her magic doesn't seem to be much for general use witchy stuff other than the fetish stuff. I suppose she can always knock some years off of older people to extend thier lifespans (Possibly as a service for money) or turn any hostile enemies weak and elderly.
But I can fully admit is all about the lewd oneesan adventures.
>>46981421
Your plan got me thinking about the population density of Conduits.
How many people would be going through Crucible at any given time? Would you need to have crowd control measures or just one or three rooms for the odd chance more than one conduit might visit at a time?
Someone wrote a short story about a Crucible meister, you can look it up on the wiki, were he constantly had to deal with naive and apathetic people trying to 3-point dip into Crucible for the powers. It sort of seemed to imply there was Barcelona tourism levels of traffic going on, or maybe that was because he was doing it for so long the narrative compressed the time for us.
Anyway, post your fanworld build.
>>46981517
Most people here go to /d/ ya know
>>46981365
Saying "she likes X, Y, and Z" naturally implies she doesn't like the rest of the letters of the alphabet. That doesn't necessarily mean she dislikes them, but it narrows things down a lot more than if you just left her letter preferences blank. It also means if you dislike those letters she's now a non-option, or at least a much worse option.
Personally, I prefer a general level of description if you're going to include it. She loves trying new things, she's pretty vanilla, she's a total freak in bed... Things like that.
>>46981605
Yeah, but that doesn't mean we like the hardest levels of /d/. 75% of what I'm into is physically possible in the real world, and the other 25% are pretty much mainstream for impossible kinks.
>>46981544
>Also you're just plain wrong, it's just that none of you whiners have bothered making anything on the level of Stardust.
Because making another Stardust cyoa takes weeks or months of time to plan and make, we only see the finished product and maybe a WIP a week or two before its release. I'm not whining about the lack of that specific genre of content only that its rare because there relatively big projects that many of us lack the motivation, focus and attention span to see it from start to finish, I'm merely stating my observations.
I mean come on, authors routinely give up on cyoa projects due to bottlenecks and just permanently shelf them as they work on simpler and smaller cyoas for the sake of personal convenience.
>>46981226
Posting the full lot. Have an example of 'Efficiency' in the notes.
>>46980808
Yes and no, though diseases are physical and only affect the body that drunk the blood, this will only be a real issue if it merges with the rest. If you drink, kill and replace you should be fine.
>>46981605
Yeah, no they don't. This is just /d/'s own self delusion ot make themselves feel normal and accepted here. Spoiler: You're not.
>>46981663
>>46981661
If your only goal is to fish for replies, you shouldn't be making complex CYOA in the first place. They're only for people who care and have passion for what they're making. You don't have that. Everything else is your own self-justification after the fact for why you don't make CYOA.
>>46981693
>>46981661
>Because making another Stardust cyoa takes weeks or months of time to plan and make,
Yes. And? You don't make a Traveller without work, nor a Spess Refugee nor a Star Dust.
>>46981517
>>46981668
>>46981663
Okay so let me check this.
>Successful Probability
>You can do anything you naturally could, twice.
>With limit break you could do that for an hour
>This needs a nerf
>Limit Break + Tech Head and you can create anything without material, for 1 hour
>Limit break + Temporal Sight means you can see the future of anywhere one hour
>Limit Break + Fist of Fury and you could split the planet in half
>THIS doesn't need a nerf
Okay no bye
>>46981660
Being possible in the real world isn't really an endorsement here. Some of the creepiest shit like pedos, snuff, and gore and so on, are creepy just because of that. And I know for a fact there's people into that shit in this thread from admissions over the years.
Something silly like transformation is very innocuous compared to that.
>>46981808
But his fetish is snuff since it involves the person dying.
>>46981663
Limit Break needs some clarifications. E.g., how does it interact with Tech Head? Can I make any item that could conceivably be created? Or can I make even impossible things? Do I still need the necessary materials?
>>46981694
Complex cyoas or not, getting replies is a goal on every author's priority list. Because good authors want feedback on what elements of their cyoa works and what doesn't work so they know what they're doing right and what they're doing wrong.
And because this is 4chan we're going to get the shitposters and autists who will bitch and moan about undesirable options and want them removed outright that is par for the course.
>They're only for people who care and have passion for what they're making.
Or you know real life get in a huge way.
Because clearly cyoa authors are these infallible ubermensch and philosopher kings that can't get sick, don't need food or sleep and have all the money and time in the world to pursue their one true passion forever more.Sarcasm.
And who says I'm not making cyoa right this minute anon?
>>46981821
That's like saying anyone into anal is into scat because there's poop in the butt.
>>46981835
>>46981694
>Everything else is your own self-justification after the fact for why you don't make CYOA.
>Who says I'm not making CYOA
You're wasting time complaining at me, so I doubt it.
>>46981715
>Basic Upgrade
>Efficiency
>Blood Brother
>glasses
>shirt
>cyoa makes me 6'4", ripped, and gives me a 9" dick (!!!)
>home
Great job. Excellent work. Amazing cyoa. Can someone point me to the nearest club? Have you noticed my huge dick yet?
>>46981851
Nope, it's like saying who gets off on a person dying is getting off on a person dying.
>>46981736
It's only once every year though.
>>46981663
>>46981693
>>46981715
I'll take Basic Upgrade, Relative Speedster and Times Ten.
Times Ten will make Relative Speedster only take 0,5 minutes to slow down time (and so I can stop time completely by running for 1,5 minutes) and with a peak human body I could keep that up for hours.
Then I'll take Footwear for super parkour powers and the Hat.
I'd also take my home. With all this I could become the greatest thief of all time, stopping time by running and breaking into people's houses (or even government buildings). The footwear will also let me never stop running.
Also make me really attractive or whatever.
>>46981876
He obviously isn't, or that would have been what he said. My analogy stands, keep acting dumb if you like.
>>46981907
>Anon thinks turning into a waste fluid doesn't kill you.
>>46981835
What's your CYOA about?
>>46981887
>I can break the planet once every year
>I can make anything I ever wanted, but only once every year
>versus being able to do anything I'm already able to do for one hour once every year
I still don't understand why
>>46981918
>anon thinks there isn't poop in the butt
>>46981876
That depends on what you believe in. Some people consider vore to not be guro because you're "becoming one" with your waifu. It's an extremely intense and deep form of union between two souls, two loved ones, now together for all eternity.
>>46981943
Your fetish is gross, Kit.
>>46981956
Aight, Hannibal Lector.
>>46981943
Yeah actually, you're right. And if you take Relative Speedster with it, you can run for 15 minutes to extend that hour indefinitely, since time won't continue if you stop running.
>>46981957
>So angry he can't even link to the correct post
Did you ever lose it because someone on the internet has a fetish that isn't even applicable in real life?
>>46979645
efficiency, blood brother, multiply
>>46981956
The more important part is if they get off to the death of the devoured person, or if it's more about envelopment or whatever. The guy into transformation was obviously getting off to transformation, so unless he comes in with a correction you can't say he's into snuff.
>>46981985
Nah, it's just that image made me realize your identity.
>>46981977
Don't be a looseholed furry, Dan. It's unbecoming.
>>46981997
>You can't say someone who gets off on murder gets off on murder just because it's the knife stabs that really get him going.
>tfw I get mistaken for someone else who was mistaken for Kit
Fuck you. Your CYOAs are all shit.
>>46982012
Scat is gross, anon. You should get a real fetish like sunflower seeds.
>>46981421
>Uthuli girl
>pictured without face cover
what a slut
>>46981858Its more of a update to a old cyoa I made 7 months ago, I have two jobs, volunteering, Grave's disease to stabilize for at least 6 months to get ready for eye orbital decompression and retina realignment surgery. The only reason I have free time right now is due to the requiring a month to recover from the surgery I had last month and my eyes are unfucked enough to star at a monitor for more then one hour without swelling up.Before I could finish creating the format for the 3-4 pages I have planned I got a throat infection, planning to visit a walk-in clinic in about 30 minutes.
I guess I just lack passion anon.
>>46981942Muscle Wizard cyoa revision 2.00
>>46981578
I'll check the story that's for telling me
I didn't have a fanworld build ready but here is something I just putted together
Sands of Time 1pt
Extra World (Void of Colors) 2pts
Earth Peark
Tongues 1pt
Lyonesse Pearks
Ignition 1pt
Proven 1pt
Furioso 2pts
Higher Calling 1pt
Initiate of the Tower 1pt
Adamant Pact 1pt
Secret of Vectors 1pt
Chosen of Light 2pts
Grail Quest 2pts
Void of Colors Pearks
Golem 1pt
Words without Voice 1pt
Infusion 1pt
Bought off Native Danger 1pt
The objective here is to be the best Mech Knight possible with out buying the Lyonesse Meister
Infusion allow me to have an extra perception of my opponent’s emotions and Golem+ Words without Voice allow me to improve my control over my Errantry by also making it a golem
>come back half an hour later
>50 new responses
Good Morning, America!
>>46982038
Well consider, dear, that the post was directed at people who only want replies and don't make more complex things because of time/effort costs. Clearly you don't care only for replies and don't dislike making complex things because of the effort involved.
>>46982030
>>46982030
Only for you, anon. Only for you.
>>46981943
>>46981736
Because someone will decide to limit break it to include the things that they wouldn't be able to do normally. Then the limit's really broken, get new powers? Done Become God? Done.
>>46981943
This ugly kid keeps being posted. What's it from?
Hey anons,
I'm working on a cyoa and need some guidance on a small part of the mechanics. There will be magic and strong/weak traits relating to elements. Problem is, I'm having trouble fleshing out the definitive list of elements. So I started out with the classical: water, fire, air, dirt (fucking magnets how do they work?). Void for the extended versions. Expounded upon it with the five chinese elements, adding wood and metal. And borrowed other qualities from some games I know.
-aether
-air
-cold/entropy
-death/venom
-earth/metal
-fire
-gravity/magnetism
-life/growth
-light
-shadow/void
-time
-water
12 of em, which is a nice and round even number. Subcategories like electric and sonic can stay with air, plasma with fire, acid with water.
I wasn't entirely sure where aether stands in relation to the other elements, perhaps the counterpart to time, but it can be the nebulous option with themes like abjuration, multiplicity, phasing, polarity(mirroring). Only dilemmas are: what does that leave light and water in terms of powers? And can I separate metal from earth without rendering it useless? What other potential categories am I missing, and are there balance issues that should be corrected?
>>46981605
>Most
speak for yourself.
I went, and left in a minute. That place is disgusting
>>46982162
Wasn't aether originally conceived as the air of the divine?
>>46982038
We need companions. Like a hot, older senpai who is cocky at first and treats you like the weak kouhai you are but if/when you start getting better than him, he goes all subby tsundere. Then one day you beat him in a fight and as you're holding him down you notice he's pressing his juicy senpai ass against your thick cock. You take him right then and there, and afterwards you both know who the senpai in your relationship is. He spends the rest of your training years being a whimpering cumdump stress relief, desperate to get you to notice him. Notice him and love him while you're plowing out his slutty senpai pussy.
I need a moment. I'm sorry.
>>46982179
It is disgusting, you have to sift through to find the stuff you like among all the dicks, farts, dicks, vore, and dicks.
>>46981663
ten times, blood brother, multiply
glasses, belt
age, issues corrected, muscle definition
self insert
Become a transmuter lich in a D&D world or something.
>>46982150
>ugly kid
oi
Its form a anime on the last season, Osomatsu-san.
>>46981634
>Saying "she likes X, Y, and Z" naturally implies she doesn't like the rest of the letters of the alphabet.
no. That's fucking stupid.
That means "I like X, Y and Z more than the other letters".
I can like muffins, but like muffins with chocolate pieces in them more. Doesn't mean I don't like muffins.
>>46982211
Well what's it about then?
>>46982179
Don't worry anon, tumblr is going through /d/ right now. All the "futa" threads are going to be renamed to transexual shortly, so you can come in safely.
>>46982088
That sounds like it would actually lessen control.
I for one am happy my car doesn't have moods.
>>46982229
Comedy show.
Go torrent/streamit if you want to know more.
>>46982180
yeah, the heavens. It was also associated with quintessence. so instead of air, it could have more to do with dimensions.
>>46982242
Is that a legit cultural shift that's going on or are you trying to be funny? Because not even that shithole deserves it.
>>46982270
I'm just laughing at you.
>>46982209
sprinkle some more dicks on and you have my experience with /d/
>>46982281
>You
Wasn't even me, anon.
>>46982270
I definitely think that was an attempt at humor.
I'm not even sure what he tried to say - that I'm a tranny because /d/ is gross? That I'm from Tumblr, a place with shitloads of porn, because /d/ is gross?
>>46982162
Could go with spacial manipulation for aether.
>>46982298
I used to think the same, but by now the dicks have become invisible. It's a useful skill, being able to censor your own sight like that.
>>46981492
Sums up for feeling of the threads perfectly.
No point in making anything but waifushit
>>46981544
>The last time someone tried, he got a decent amount of replies.
Who? Only non-waifu cyoa I can remember in recent time that got builds posted the second time it was posted, was Royal Guardian.
That's months old now.
>>46982212
Yeah, but if you say "I like muffins with chocolate," it implies you don't like muffins without chocolate. Or, at least, not enough to comment on them.
Do you not see a difference between "I like muffins, especially those with chocolate pieces" and "I like muffins with chocolate pieces"?
>>46982328
That's a good idea. I'll include that, thanks. Will probably have to balance it out by giving polarity or abjuration to gravity/magnetism.
Hey guys. I've considered making a CYOA for some time and I have some ideas, but sadly I'm pretty pleb-tier; the closet thing to an actual computer I have these days is an iPad 2, so...
Any good apps to make CYOAs for an iPad? Preferably ones I can use images in. Really I only need the minimal abilities to design and write, not wasting time to make the CYOA super visually appealing.
OneNote is surprisingly pretty good but there is no good way to save pages there as .pngs or whatever. If there is a way someone enlighten me pls.
>>46982379
Off the top of my head, Kingdom Crusher and Royal Guardian both got lots of replies. I'm sure something more recent has and this is well-remembered because of how much I liked them.
>>46982255
the basic Golem does not have a mood it is just animated by a Color but it doesn't have a mind and words without a voce let me control it my thoughts hopefully improve my reaction time
>>46982379
Oh, and if it's months old? That's because none of you have bothered to make something else. Things can't get replies if they're not being made, lazy.
>>46982392
Not unless they got Photoshop, Paint.net, or Gimp on ipad. And they might for all I know.
So wait, if Aphrodite is my mom, and she lost me, how'd she lose me in the first place?
>>46981835
>clearly cyoa authors are these infallible ubermensch and philosopher kings that can't get sick, don't need food or sleep and have all the money and time in the world to pursue their one true passion forever more.
Are you implying they are not?
Preposterous - authors are robots created for MY pleasure, who MUST include ALL my suggestions and all my fetishes, and create the perfect world and waifu for me to wank/daydream about
>>46982452
Responds Well (5)
Balance (5)
Great Graphics (5)
Quick (5)
Quality (10)
Lore (5)
Hidden (5)
Is Cute (5)
Roommate (15)
They Shitpost (+5)
Posts WIP's (+5)
They're not perfect, but they're my author.
>>46981663
Times ten, Multiply, Blood Brother.
Glasses and Watch
Age, issues, sexual characteristics
Home.
The watch makes it a lot easier to get blood.
Also, how does age work with blood brother. Can I live forever by forsaking my original form and learning a new young form every ten years?
>>46981663
>>46981693
>>46981715
Excellent errata at the end! LB and x10 are much more balanced now. The physique and world stuff are bob-on, and the only issue with the clothing section is thata bag on a stick is called a bindlestick :¬) aka who cares. You're also a bro for taking on feedback quick and well, so kudos!
My power choices remain Tech Head, The Noble Path and Multiply. I'll take Footwear and Backpack for clothing, which will massively open up walks in the woodland (I can take a computer with me to browse on a hill and a picnic effortlessly, and can walljump up trees to neutralise slopes in bad weather and ascend new heights). The only changes I'd consider bodily is making myself a space marine, but if not reversible then pass. Home Plus for fun, familiar setting. Who's up to play a game?A last thought, ever considered making an artifact that lets you walk briefly on water/makes you waterproof? It's my purely selfish wish to be able to clear rivers and lakes when on a walk is all, could also be cool on a boat.
>>46982335
It is not a skill I feel like learning.
Why do they love dicks so much? I found it odd how there were dicks on everything, but there weren't any gay threads.
Are they that delusional?
>>46982420
Yeah I figured there is no easy way. Thanks anyway.
I'll still hope to get some time on a PC to make this CYOA happen.
>>46982399
Well the base golem does 'show' the human emotion matching the color that went into its creation.
And words without voice just lets your thoughts be heard. They would have to react to hearing your thoughts rather than just do the action instantly when you press the button.
But that's just my interpretation.
>>46982566
There are some gay threads.
I think some of them are delusional over it, but most will shrug and say that they just like futa.
>>46982396
> I'm sure something more recent has
I disagree. The closest I can think of is that Halfdragon one, which didn't get nearly as many replies as those two others.
Like, not even half as many.
>>46982411
>Sums up for feeling of the threads perfectly.
>No point in making anything but waifushit
I have tried to make grand CYOAs. Never worked out.
>>46982162
Aether is a lot broader as a term/class/category than the other entries in this list. It basically means "medium" or "thing which is permeable by other things". So as this anon >>46982328 says, spacial manipulation seems like a good bet, although you could then simply rename it Space, or Arrangement/Order/Kinesis Magic or such.
>>46982603
Well, you can't like the idea of getting dicked by a hermaphrodite without being attracted to the dick part.
That's gay. Sure, it's a "girl" dicking them, but they love the dick part, not the "girl" part.
>>46982514
Yup
>>46982526
Not sure about the artifact as there's a bunch of stuff that would allow that. You could use tech head to make a boat from trees (people can do that right?) but if I have to make another round of edits I'll see if I can add it.
>>46979645
>blood brother, because shapeshifting
>efficiency, becasuse X10
>paperworm, because fake contracts and checks like a son of a bitch
>>46982452
Gross Fetish, Like a Moth to a Flame(70) (Those are actually are benefits, people should learn to get less upset over dumb shit. As it stands you deserve it)
Includes Suggestions, Responds well(60), Balance, Great Graphics(50), Quality,(40) Lore(35), Success(25), Updates(20), Hidden(15)
Lewd CYOAs, NEET.(0)
CYOA maker pls, I just made a perfect author. GG NO RE, what were you thinking?
FemdomCYOA or CYOAwhere you get supernatural powers and a magical bestfried, but you stay on Earth?
>>46977628
More mind break/control and or lewd lolis would be good.
But in terms of not having been done yet, I'd say exhibitionism would be interesting. Or forcing someone else to do exhibitionist stuff.
>>46982686
It's irrelevant if it's gay or not, they just get off to it.
>but they love the dick part, not the "girl" part.
I don't think that's the case. If it was they'd just look at men.
>>46982871
The latter, please.
>>46982452
>Like a moth to flame (60)
>Lazy (70)
>Is a girl(60)
>Is hot (55)
>Is cute (50)
I'll console her when she's bullied for starting a flame war.
>Your Fetish (40)
>Roommate (25)
>Lewdposting (20)
>Lore(15)
>Hidden(10)
>Responds well(5)
This is pretty needed with those drawbacks
>Replayabilty(0)
My favorite trait probably in CYOAs, This generally means there's a bit of options
>>46982639
What CYOA did you make?
>>46982871
I'd probably go with Femdom CYOA even though I know the latter is the best option
>>46982871
As much as I adore Femdom cyoas the right thing to do is the latter. I think a "normal" CYOA is what we need these days to stop the salt levels from reaching critical point.
>>46982957
Oh dear anon, you know for a fact that the people who whine about waifus will whine no matter if they're the minority or majority, they just want to bitch about people liking things they don't like.
>>46979128
>>46979117
>>46979108
>>46979090
What's Rorch's relationship with pic related? Are they business rivals, or is this like the local market to Rorch's megacorp?
>>46982871
There's already a lot of femdom ones, and they're all pretty shit, so you'd be fighting an uphill battle, but I guess it would be cool to see one done well especially if the girls are not mean femdom.
Your other idea sounds pretty cool and somewhat unique. Having a bro-cyoa is a nice concept. I just want a cool male friend to hangout with a play vidya with. All the nerds I know, and thus all the nerds I'm friends with are girls so I just want to have my fantasy bor.
>>46982997
I'd imagine that the market is one of the many places inside Rorch.
>>46979117
Should Kuiper be technology too? They have spaceships and stuff
>>46982933
Why?
What CYOA did you make?
>>46982876
>lewd lolisIf only you knew what I know
>>46982871
>>46983003
Second.
I already have a waifu.
I want a cool magic bro.
>>46983003
>All the nerds I know, and thus all the nerds I'm friends with are girls
t b h fampai, I'd be happy with some friends right about now. Going to a university in a city where I know no one is pretty damn dull.
My stupid brain thinks it's hard to meet people and be friendly to strangers. I just want somebody I can shitpost with in real life.yes, I know this isn't the place to whine but c'mon, it's Friday night. Let me at least have some enjoyment.
>>46982639
I made one somewhat recently that wasn't exactly waifushit and I got a few (yous). The thing is the grander it is the harder it is to make a build.
I spend days on say my stardust build because there was so much information to parse through and so much to balance, while picking X wawifu takes a moment.
Guy who has been working on the energy cyoa for some time now, here is what I have so far.
Chose one source of energy, you will gain all of the powers, strengths, and weaknesses from that source.
You become immune to any negative effects of your source of energy; No sunburns or cancer from solar, for instance.
You can put spare energy in a reserve to use for later, and the reserve will automatically take in excess energy you are not using.
Your reserve is needed to access your powers, and every use of your powers will drain your reserve.
When you are stuck away from your source of energy, you will start using up your reserve. Once it is drained, you will start feeling the weaknesses described in the power descriptions.
Powers can increase in strength with training, though this training tends to take years.
If a source of energy says there is a limit on your reserves, whether it is a set limit or your powers grow volatile once surpassed, that limit can be.
Diligence: Work and activity now empower you. You automatically no longer need to sleep, and are filled with a drive to work and train. All limits to the human body and mind have been removed; with enough training you can lift mountains, perform complex mathematical equations in your head in seconds, and even improve your senses to superhuman levels. These require exercise to maintain, but will only severely degrade should you spend too long without doing anything productive (you can keep up your muscle mass by studying geography). Should you not do enough work in a day, or stay inactive for too long, you will start feeling intense pain until you start working again.
>>46983315
Food: You can now draw energy from the consumption of foodstuffs. Your metabolism skyrockets and any food you eat becomes energy within seconds. Eating 4000 Calories a day will eliminate the need for sleep, eating more will make you feel energetic and could increase your physical prowess to near superhuman levels. In addition, you can burn additional calories to increase your abilities further. At first, it affects your entire body, but eventually you will be able to put calories into specific body parts and even strikes (you can put 1000 cal into 1 punch, for instance). Beware, for putting too many calories into this power at a time will cause some massive damage, though this limit can increase with training and use. You do not need to exercise to maintain these abilities, and any food eaten (whether year old milk or well cooked chicken) will energize you. You still need various nutrients to function though, and dieting would likely get you killed in a couple of days. Your reserves build up more slowly and empty faster than with other powers.
Heat: Sources of heat now energize and empower you. Your body is now extremely resistant to heat (can withstand 100 C’ no problem). This extends to bodily overheating, allowing for longer periods of working. Being near heat sources will now energize you (should you live in an area where the average day temperature is 80 F’ and you don’t turn on the A/C, you would not need to sleep for the night. You also gain limited control over heat, able to melt objects with a touch and turn ice into steam within seconds (though this takes a lot of energy). Should you stay in environments too cold for you to gather energy from, your body will start to freeze solid, stiffening joints after 12 hours and freezing completely solid after 36. This will occur in any temperature below 50 F’, and the process will speed up for every 5’ colder it is (1 hour for joint freezing, 3 hours for death).
>>46983330
Praise: Other people’s appreciation of you strengthens and empowers you, and you feel renewed with it. By getting another person to have positive thoughts about you, you gain a bit of energy. While simply thinking of you positively will grant a small channel of power as long as they still think that way, direct praise is much more potent. Helping an old lady cross the street will only grant enough for you to go another hour without rest, being recognized as an good Samaritan constantly in your community would grant you enough to go weeks without rest, and any direct praise you receive also has a scaling effect. In addition, any energy you have stored will allow you access to several abilities. This includes the generation of illusions, limited transmutation (water to wine, lead to gold, etc), and the ability to heal others through contact (or from a distance with enough power). These powers, however, require an astronomical amount of energy; even healing a single finger would take thousands of thank yous, and would still leave you drained afterwards. Though if you are active in the pursuit of praise and wind up as a celebrity or someone of similar praise, chances are there will be no shortage of energy. Should you go too long without praise, your mind will be clouded with the greatest of doubts and your self worth plummets.
>>46983099
Because I want to know what your grand CYOA was.
>>46983381
Electricity: The force of both the storms and technology now flow through you. Upon touching any source of electricity (outlets, laptops, generators, lightning, etc) you can recharge and invigorate yourself. With some training, you will no longer need to touch the source to drain it. So long as you are draining from a source you do not need to sleep. In fact, an hour of charging on a standard outlet will completely remove the need to sleep. You will have access several powers, such as hurling lightning bolts, a stream of pure electricity, and charging electrical devices. While you may discover further applications of your powers in the future, it might take years of training and even then, there are certain limits on what you can do (nothing near Cole MacGrath levels of power). In addition, your have a limited capacity, though it can be expanded with training. Overcharging will cause the occasional stray bolt to destroy anything nearby, and will slightly magnetize you, causing static on any nearby screens. Higher charges increase the potency and range of these abilities. On the other hand, undercharging is dangerous in its own way. Should you run out of electricity, you will feel drained and become a sort of vacuum for electricity; any devices that run on the stuff will be drained, whether you like it or not, filing your reserves. Should you go a week without any electrical contact, a lightning bolt will strike right on you, recharging you instantly. You won’t be harmed, but that can’t be said about your belongings, house, or anyone within a couple of meters of you.
>>46983381
>Should you go too long without praise, your mind will be clouded with the greatest of doubts and your self worth plummets.
Hahah just like real life
>>46983398
Anger: feelings of rage and violence now fill you with energy. Whenever you feel anger, you gain energy based on the strength of your rage and how long it lasted; minor annoyance at some random person will remove five minutes of sleep, while being in a complete berserk state with little to no control will energize you for months to come. You also gain energy from the anger of others, depending on the intensity of the rage and your distance from them; being directly a part of a riot which lasts for hours will grant you energy for a couple of years without sleep, though simply being a town or two over will grant you a couple of days. Whenever the mood strikes you, you can use several powers; you can alter your body in several ways, such as sharpening and lengthening nails to the strength of blades, toughening skin, and even making you more muscular and fit, peaking at just above peak human. You can also expel flames from your hands or mouth as a flamethrower, though you cannot control the flames, merely expel them.. Beware of the volatile nature of rage though, for too much of it stored up will lead to increased aggression, a lack of control of your powers, and can even all come out at once, destroying all around it.
>>46981141
Ah, a troll than.
>>46983387
Second.
The word grand always pokes me right in the interest gland.
>>46983415
Water: The liquid of life now empowers you. You may now drink any water (muddy, salty, etc.) and drinking water will now give you more energy, to the point where 5 liters a day will remove the need for sleep entirely (this is only in the water itself, you drink something that is only 50% water, it would take 10 liters of that to remove the need for sleep). You may now breathe underwater. Dip yourself into water can also energize you, though at a slower pace (12 hours completely submerged to replace a good night's sleep) though the rushing rapids will empower you faster (9-6 hours depending on the strength). While underwater, you may expend some energy for faster swimming and resistance to the pressures of the deep. Staying away from water for more than an hour will make you feel an incredible thirst, and 24 hours without water will kill you outright.
Thoughts?
>>46978009
I actually liked Harem Creator, sure it was a shitstorm because of emo girl having the worst traits and histories possible, but he fixed that one, and all the other girls were decent. Also Nana was best gril
>>46976059
>I was...
Alexander Fehr! The great soldier, no: Hero.
>My abilities are...
Stregth, durability, determination, combat training, danger sense, fast adaptions.
>My vessel is...
A simple, but old coin.
>My master is...
Anna Beck!
>The world is...
Devastation!
My master is the key to establishing a new world. We can play off each other pretty neatly, because she's the brilliant wondergirl and I'm the simple but fast thinking super soldier.
>>46983387
What CYOA did you make?
>>46983437
Water just turns you into a fish.
I guess that's alright, if you're into swimming.
>>46983528
Different anon, but I really don't see why it matters what the person made, because they're simply asking what CYOA you made because you were talking about how no one made builds for it.If you want I'll tell you mine if that get's you to tell everyone
>>46983635
Thank you for your input, I will be sure to alter Water to include some other powers, perhaps limited hydromancy.
>>46977177
>Body
Unchanging.
(24)
>Downtime body
None option chosen.
(24)
>Powers (options?)
Super Strength.
Clairvoyance.
Memory Wipe.
Hacking.
Integration.
Phase out.
(0)
>Missions
13 = Write a best selling novel... (God damn it. Perhaps integration can help me, here?)
7 = Break into a kid's house. (Easy.)
15 = Punish a child rapist. (Easy.)
Decided I should update the kaifu CYOA while it's still fresh in my mind. Gonna add 6 girls, 4 mutations, and move the 2 tech items, qualifications, and the champion of earth to another page for tech and events.
I'm trying to figure out how to split it up. I was originally thinking 6 items (and I already have 5 if I'm counting the little girl/kaiju and teleporter options) and 4 events, but I could also do 9 items and 3 events, and then let you choose 5 of any items or mutations.
What should some more mutations be? Fetish stuff is welcome, but I would prefer if it can be utilized as an offensive or defensive capabilities. Like enhanced fluids where any sexual fluids can double your strength for a limited time. The government will be making you milk her as a requirement. But what could that do for combat? I already did acid with the tongue mutation. Maybe it acts like normal, but in monster form solidifies in the air and acts like a hardening gel?
Become the little girl/kaiju will be in the tech section, and I'm also thinking of adding a teleporter there so it makes not moving in with her in her country a lot easier. What about the last two items?
And then there's the girls. Gonna have a nerdy girl, probably from South Korea, and there's gonna be a yandere from I don't know where yet.
Any other good archtypes/country stereotypes? I don't have UK, France, or Germany, and I know someone wanted the UK. And I also found art for a giant Biollante themed girl that would fit the bill for the yandere, and I might put in a giant drider. Fuzzy Mothra girl is also on the table.
>>46983670
Yeah, I definitely agree with him, just being able to swim and etc is nice, but you have to understand that most things don't happen underwater. Hardly anything interesting for a sapient, can't take your books or games down there, no internet, no people. It's just fish. That's not to say you shouldn't give it the powers you are, because those are neat and situationally useful, just they should also have stuff that helps anywhere.
>>46983733
>Like enhanced fluids where any sexual fluids can double your strength for a limited time. The government will be making you milk her as a requirement.
I don't like this.
>>46983733
Biollante and Mothra appeal to me.
For powers, why not something enabling flight?
>>46983733
>Items
What about some kaiju armor/weaponry?
>>46983171
What. What do you know. I wish to know what you know.
