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Would you play another PACYOA?
>>46392629
No forced multiplayer.
>>46392610
pastebinin'
http://pastebin.com/MhAQAJiw
Also: does anyone know the CYOA where the Earth is divided into closed hexes by Aliens? Been looking for it.
>>46392629
I dont do roleplaymainly because I'm too autistic to understand basic social interaction
>>46392649
As in?
There'd be game rules tho
>>46392663
aren't we all? roleplaying is a good way to get better at it
>>46392629
sure
I don't have anything left to lose
>>46392629
I've said it before: why not?
>>46392667
As in "don't make it any more complex than a set of images with choices on them". CYOAs don't need to be anything more than fuel for imagination/discussion.
If you want to make a game, then make a game, but don't call it a CYOA (unless it's like one of those adventure book things), or at the very least keep it out of /cyoag/.
>>46392776
I liked Spadesy's(?) treasure hunter CYOA and Bliss' Kingdom Crusher where you could roll results.
>>46392776
What the fuck do you guys even do in here anyway
>>46392776
This is a personal preference on your part. Some of us like stats and numbers to crunch while we imagine things.
>>46392667
As in, each person who does the CYOA gets their own universe rather than everyone getting sucked into the same universe.
If if is going to be a shared universe, please don't include one of those godawful forced PVP options.
>>46392872
Sounds like someone is still bitter they got their butt destroyed in the culling.
>>46392873
>>46392873
>>46392892
>>46392873
>>46392892
>>46392917
>>46392025
>You have shit taste. Dark City is great.
I'm not seeing it. Why do you believe so?
What makes it great?you're gonna claim I'm trolling I guaranfuckingtee it.
Guess I'll finish it just 4u, so you might give me an answer.>He actually believes you'll respond seriously
>>46391992
>Life 3
>Body 3
>Family 3
>Demon heritage 2
Because I don't want to be a midget. 5'3" is still fucking tiny.
>Bodyguard 1
Because he's an actual bodyguard, not a kid. Plus, he doesn't hate his job or only does it to progress in the demon hierarchy.
How many points do I have for the grey ones, or are they all inherently free?
It says "pink labeled options cost a point", but there are only grey and cyan ones.
You should really make it more obvious how many points you have, it took me far too long to realize.
Assuming the author is a weirdass kind of colorblind where grey = pink,
>Mental augment
for mind reading
I'd have picked social augment if it didn't fuck me over when speaking privately.
>focus agument
>demon claws
>demon sight
+2 AGI, +2 LRN (assuming this is learning rate), +3 STR, +2 CON (I'm assuming this is "health" or "durability"), +1 MAG
What now?
>>46392891
You mad nobody wants to play along with your magical realm?
Cyoa soon
>>46392025
hes right its unreadable trash
stats that are never explained
unrealistic city that couldnt exist
no cars because fuck you
forced to be a girl
forced to be underage
forced to stay underage forever
boring anime shit options
you need points to pick options
the image never gives you any points
its just another be the little girl shit fest for pedophiles and perverts
>>46392952
If you don't want to be a loli, go Cambiere or Fianna. Both are capable of developing to sexual maturity.
Also, I think he meant the pale ones to be pink. Pink on green is kind of terrible, though.
>>46393079
>forced to be a girl
>forced to be underage
>forced to stay underage forever
Wanna know how I can tell you haven't even read it and are just aping that other anon?
>>46392610
Job: Moritat
Implement: Scythe
Perks: Souldelver, Ectochill, Ghostflight, Purerites
Contacts: Comte de Saint-Germain, Dire Owl, Mister Vampire
>>46393086
>Cambiere or Fiann
I don't want either. If I have to be a girl, then I at least want to be rich, so any other option isn't appealing.
>I think he meant the pale ones to be pink.
Then he should pick a different color.
>>46393233
Pink on green is still pretty terrible, Jeff.
Continuation of the ongoing request.
Can we adopt My Kingdom template filling into our /cyoa/ society? thus enhancing the autism?
>>46393319
You can be a male Fianna or Cambiere. Seriously, Mario, it's not hard. Be the little rich girl, or be the bearmode guy, but don't bitch that a CYOA won't let you get everything you want.
>>46392629
I love this meme.
>>46393319
>I don't want either.
>How dare the CYOA have options I don't like, all choices must cater to me, and I refuse to take the options that do what I want just because there are options that do what I don't like.
>>46393319
But you don't have to be a girl at all. Majokko is the only one limited to being a girl.
>>46393327
Terrible or not, it is pink according to MS paints color picker.
>>46393376
First you'd have to make an actual CYOA built to fill it in.
>>46393433
Overlord, boom.
>>46393376
How does a PACYOA work anyway?
>>46392629
Are you just trying to see how many threads people will reply to you?
>>46393376
Sure. Why don't you come up with at least two or three options per slot for us to go off of?
>>46393423
We both know it's a little girl CYOA.
I would still love to hear why that-guy, or anyone else for that matter, think it's a good cyoa.
I genuinely don't see it. There's little information about the lore, and what I am told seems to be contradictory.
>>46393376
I don't think people can be arsed to do all that image-editing work.
Also, when it comes to filling in blanks in a template, I think something along the lines of Beri's Artistic Genie stuff works better (not just the usual "people submit images, author describes what they do", but also the reverse, as was done with the Inverse Gallery).
>>46393531
It's a good CYOA because it offers me enough of a look into the world to make it seem like a place I'd like to know better, and offers me interesting choices with a good idea of how they'll form me.
In other words, it's a good imagination starter.
>>46393531
>We both know it's a little girl CYOA.
>There are options to be a little boy or even an adult man or woman.
>GUYS THIS CYOA ONLY LETS YOU BE A LITTLE GIRL I AM ILLITERATE
>>46393376
Gibs the version that is the one bigger, pls. Will have it filled out completely by at the latest the end of the thread.
>>46393587
Funny thing is, the original version was actually little girl only. This version was adapted because people complained.
And it didn't solve a damn thing.
>>46393611
Which is why he's said that the update is going to remove the boy options. After all that bitching people did at him, he capitulated, and yet they still bitched, and ignored what the CYOA said and complained about things that were 'fixed'. Can't blame him personally.
>>46393580
I personally disagree.
Maybe you must read every girl to get a feeling there's enough information?
>>46393598
Shut the fuck up, Omar. I'm tired of your shit.
>>46393598
das?
>>46393742
>>46393770
>>46393726
Pls no bully.
>>46393734
Yes, thank you. Will dump the other two I have.
>>46393804
Angel is Slut Life requested CONFIRMED
>>46393801
I say, forgetting that there is three not two while also not attaching the file. I'm a mess.
>>46393799
>>46393819
>>46379656
Kukla
Female
>>46379762
>cyan
Stat Augment 1 [+2 LRN, +1 MAG, -1 STR]
Life Augment 1
Body Augment 1 [+2 AGI, +1 DEX, +2 RES]
Aura 5: Radiant Lotus
Talent: Scholar [+2 MAG, +2 LRN]
>pink
Etching 3 [+1 MAG, +2 AGI]
Etching 11 [+11 mind RES]
Aura Weapon: Naginata
Aura Form
Aura Awareness
STR 3
CON 4
DEX 9
AGI 10
INT 5
CHA 4
MAG 9
RES 2 (11 MIND)
LRN 10
I'll be around for a long time. My aura abilities are mostly for investigating, so I'll probably grow up to be a PI of some sort. The aura abilities I chose are more for self defense than fighting the evils mentioned in the CYOA. Spirit detective? I'm never going to compete in the Yu Yu Hakusho universe, but I should be able to do actual detective work this way. At least I have my spirit naginata to back up my aura form and cool necromonger rip off aura awareness if I get into trouble.
>>46393834
>>46393827
>>46393633
Wait the new Dark City's going back to being some little girl shit?
Well that's my enthusiasm killed.
>>46393847
My God...
>>46392794
Partner: Soft body Yue Liangmale
Self: Bear mode
Ability VI: Partner gets shapeshifting, take bone manipulation for myself
Item VI: Partner gets Eben, take Mar for myself
Home VI
Frontier
>>46393865
dont kid yourself it was always about becoming the little girlactually it was about becoming specific characters from liminals favorite anime in the first versionthey just all happened to be female
>>46393742
Name: Iteration
Powers: Mechanical Tinker (Improving Other Technology), Timeless, Law Breaker: Causality, Meta Thinker.
Step One: Make a subdermal data storage system that I'll use to store complete data on all of my successful work.
Step One: Think of a Problem.
Step Two: Use Meta Thinker to come up with a device that could solve my problem.
Step Three: Use Timeless to get my drive from a year or two down my timeline.
Step Four: Download that drive onto my computer system.
Step Five: Analyze that data, and use it to repeat from Step Two.
Step Six: Actually build that shit.
Step Seven: Repeat until I don't have any more problems.
>>46392629
What the heck is a PACYOA?
>>46393865
Don't kid yourself you never cared about it.
>>46393903
Forgot to renumber. Well, whatever. You get the point.
>>46393888
Are you partners, pardners or "partners"?
>>46393935
I'm gonna fuck the shit out of the qt asian trap if thats what you're asking.
>>46393847 >>46393874
Oops. Wrong File. Isn't as big as it should be. Here we go.
>>46393895
>it was always about becoming the little girl
>when you Majokko was literally the only option that forced you to be a little girl
>>46393909
I liked the last version and I was interested when I heard there was going to be a new one, but if it's just some 'be a little girl' shit then I've got no interest in it.
>>46393958
What manner of madness have you wrought?!
Seriously how is this supposed to be playable?
>>46393982
>I liked the last version
>>46393909
So I assume that means you liked it, too?
Please, I just want to know why you do, and only one person has told me so far.
>>46393895
But I don't want to be the little girl, anon!I want to be the big girl.
>>46394010
Personally, I just liked all the options. And admittedly the flavor of it might have appealed to my inner weeaboo.
What is the point where a cyoa becomes not a cyoa?
>>46394093
When there's no you.
>>46393990
don't be such an autism-prude, Kate.
Post more cyoas, I need them to sate my unending hunger
>>46394093
No way to influence the situation. No way for the reader to improve it or twist it to their benefit through creative design.
No choice.
>>46393958
So... each of us fills one part or...?
>>46392794
Companion III, Soft
>tech knowledge, since she already has magical knowledge and magic
Youthful
>Ages to 12, pick extended age every time except to get the immunity to poison/disease/radiation
The spectral
>White for us both. Green to myself. Orange for partner.
The Chain
>Claw for myself, Blade for partner.
The Apartment
Fujisawa
Easily a better life for either of us, I'll get the lifespan perks to elongate both our lives and she'll be able to pass as a mother figure. Should work out nicely.
>>46394220
I'd fill your part, Penny Calderon.
>>46394220
I vote SDA as the Elder God.
t. Definitely not SDA
>>46394283
Oh Mathew, you rascal.Shut the fuck up.
And I think each player is supposed to create a whole kingdom?
>>46394220
Dumb muscle is obviously Muscle Wizard cyoa anon.
>tfw want to make CYOAs
>zero motivation
I just know once I get past the intro and the first few choices/first section, I'd grow bored of it.
So we either take the smallest, sanest My Kingdom template and each player fills one.
>>46393376
Or we use the craziest, most gargantuan template and everyone pitches with a few images.
>>46393958
>>46394473
Write it out. Maybe it won't bore you, maybe it'll motivate you! What's your idea?
>>46393958
mother
of
god
>>46394518
It's the redo of "Cursed waifu" (the one where each girl has a curse that's actually amazing).
Something small, something fun.
Or it should be, anyway.
And I can't help but feel it'll be forgotten two threads after it's posted, so what's the point?
I don't know how long I'd make each choice, but I assume I should be using anime pictures?
>>46394595
>(the one where each girl has a curse that's actually amazing)
As long as you don't consider cuckoldry amazing.
>>46394595
That actually sounds fun. I'd play it.
>what's the point?
What's the point of anything, anon? It's all fleeting. You can still make art, have fun, form connections. It still has value in the now, for us.
>I assume I should be using anime pictures?
You can use whatever you want. Not all CYOA have anime aesthetics.
>>46394595
Do it faggot.
>>46394604
The entire point of the original 'cursed waifu' was poking fun at the slew of horrible ones someone put out. So no cuck.
Does any anon have that CYOA where you become a succubus or a incubus? I remember it being some pages long, but only the first one could be published here because blue board
>>46394595
Very much hoping you'll get around to doing it.
>I don't know how long I'd make each choice, but I assume I should be using anime pictures?
Should be fine either way.Also, reminder that if you're hesitant about one of the girls' curses (i.e. think people might complain about it), slap it on a separate curse list and add a line about getting to pick an additional girl for every curse you pick from that list or something (with all the curses affecting all appropriate parties, e.g. something like immortality would probably affect everyone, whereas feminization would probably only affect you).
>>46394658
You mean this?
>>46394639
>That actually sounds fun
Exactly. I'm afraid my lack of motivation might make it less than great.
I could still brainstorm. I should do that, yes.
>>46394760
you're not getting immortality from a pick-one CYOA. That's horrible.
I definitely want to include aharem optionand aNTR/reverse NTR option. I feel they would be fun to write.
>>46394796NTR
Oh boy. Here we go again! (I like it.)
>>46394796
>you're not getting immortality from a pick-one CYOA.
Just used it as an example for how the curses might work with the curse list thing.
Are there any Time Travel CYOAS?
>>46394831
You know, if you don't like an option, you could always just not pick it.
It's not like I plan to keep the curses secret.
>>46395002
No, there can't be anything in a CYOA I don't like!
>>46394796
>Point of the original CYOA is that all the curses aren't actually curses.
>This asshole is making a version where the girls cuck you.
Wow aren't you a piece of shit who missed the point?
>>46395056
Shhh. Embrace it. Let the cuck flow through you.
>>46395002
You could not make a garbage CYOA about your fetish for getting fucked over and treated like shit out of a CYOA where the entire point was mocking CYOAs like that.
>>46395071
No, you're an idiot. You aren't actually mocking shitty waifu CYOAs if you're legitimately making all of them shit you stupid cuck.
>>46393742
Villain, Canon, Pre-worm, Shardless, Endbringer (51points)
>Drawbacks: Marked: ABB, E88, Merchants, Conflict Driven, Outed No rep at all, (58 points)
>Perks: Brain bunker, Manton? Whats a manton? Insane determination ( 52 Points left)
>Powers: Speedster, Flier, Teleporter, Force field, Kinetic field:oxygen, Super strengh, Duper Durability, Radical regeneration, Timeless, Law breaker: Flow of time, Avatar, Blaster IV, Heartbreaker beam, True Multitasking, Meta Thinker, Doctorate, Energy Absorption: Radiation, Cheater Mccheaterson Jr, Silence, Off record, Strangerless, Defocal Point, Mr. Celophane (6 points left)
The avatar will look like the girl in the pic
>avatars powers: Fidelis, Biological Manipulation, Healing circle
I always tried builds with the intention to fix canon and save some characters, this time I will create my own golden morning, a build where I will try to kill everthing in the worm universe.
Thanks to my strange powers everytime I run away with teleport to heal people will forget about me, and there will be no evidence about my existence in any recorded medium, and when I come back they will they believe I am a old friend until the moment I blast them in half, and my defocal point will make most lesser heroes and villains too distracted to fight me.
And of course after I "lose" my first fight I will run away to heal endbringer style, but I will leave behind a "friendly" recently triggered parahuman girl with healing powers, she will "hate" me for what I have done and will be willing to heal any brave hero or villain who had the courage to fight against me.
I will only use heartbreaker beam on scion and endbringers, I wont use that power against normal parahumans.
Since I have no shattered limiter or plot armor, the world still has a good chance of killing me.
Yeah, I am feeling edge today because I have double shift at work.
>>46395100
I'm not the would-be-author, I was just trolling you. Sorry. Don't get angry over NTR, it's fine if you don't like it. Just don't choose it.
>>46395259
This isn't about his fetish. I disagree with you that it's not worth shitting on at every opportunity, bu it's not really the point here. The point is that he's remaking the Cursed Waifu CYOA. A CYOA about mocking other CYOA that came out and had shitty women you wanted to date, and it did so by giving them 'curses' that nobody could actually perceive as curses and were actually huge boons. That means that this retard is missing the entire point. Making it so the girls DO fuck you over and DO have a horrible curse is doing the exact opposite of what was intended. You can't call it a remake of that CYOA and spit entirely on its concept.
can someone post Cursed Waifu pls?
equipment field labourer's pack-up, penknife, cartel briefcase, locale machete, day-hikers pack, police gear and old shotgun
traits blood loyalty and intuative fighter
destination ancient pueblo
>>46395616
post it bro
>>46394760
Yes, that's what I meant, thank you
>>46392776
fuck off, we've had like 4 games of cyoa's that were awesome. The games that come out and multiplayer and RP is fun.
>>46396221
which ones, besides Power Armor?
>>46393905
long ago, CYOA had games, the most recent one was quiet but that didn't last long. PA CYOA is power armor, which was a massive thread all on it's own with multiplayer, rules, roleplaying, backstories and characters but then people killed it and everyone stopped playing it.
of note i can remember magical realm, (which was fun), magical girl, PACYOA and quiet's became games. I'm sure Stardust did too at one point but ehh.
>>46396243
Magical Girl cyoa, Magical Realm cyoa, Domain Master cyoa and very very briefly Battlemage cyoa.
>>46394012
anon, I'd personally like to say that you have conjured forth a picture, completely representing the OC i had in mind for a story.
it's like looking into some sorta mind mirror. I don't know what else to say.
>>46396283
>magical realm rp
>fun
Go away angel no one likes you
>>46396243
read
>>46396282
>>46396283
Their fun and people want to do them but they need the one thing /tg/ hates to do. DM. It requires a dedicated person, just one, to actually keep everything going smoothly, starting the threads, quelling shitstorms, etc etc.
>>46396221
Gem of Imagination is the only real choice here, for the sole reason that all five other items are artifacts I can imagine.
>>46396326
magical realm the cyoa has nothing to do with 'magical realm', the forced sexual world of player's and or dm`s.
>>46396458
Nigger I know what the cyoa is, the fact that I mentioned angel should have made it very obvious
What the fuck happened to 4chan?
>>46396458
>>46396486
April fools!
>>46396486
April 1st. Their is no anonymous today christy conway.
>>46396510
>>46396516
And we'll all be thankful when its over.
>>46394595
>I assume I should be using anime pictures?
You can use real or realistic images if you want. Just don't mix media types unless there's a reason (like using a generic anime girl for the "your waifu becomes real" option).
>What's the point if it's just going to be forgotten about in two threads?
You've just triggered my autism to its very core, but I'm going tone it down since I don't feel like being angry over completely worthless shit today. Just make the CYOA. At the absolutely worst? Your CYOA gets reposted a million times by shitposters because they think it makes people angry when it just annoys them. If you have an idea for a CYOA, don't go "Oh, well I sure don't want to include this if Anon will hate it, I better ask him first". Just fucking make it, you're not pleasing everyone regardless. It's YOUR idea, you are the first and last opinion that holds any sway before people just start disregarding what goes on in the CYOA. So can you just do it instead of whining about it? Really.
Now excuse me I have to get back to learning how to properly align text in GIMP. A simple two-column pick-two CYOA is more work than I thought if I want it to look passable, and I can't stand leaving the text unaligned against other text / the images.
>>46396637
He certainly shouldn't be doing any 'remakes' that shit on the concept of the original, though. If he's going to do that he should make his own original garbage.
>>46396221
Gem of Imagination
Just use it to live out the perfect neet life
>>46396458
Infernal Credit Card
Fortune and Power
Time to make anime real and commit crimes against humanity
>>46396655
You and your other screamers are far more annoying than any cuckyoa could ever be. Could you please just learn to ignore CYOAs you hate?
Do any of you have a build-a-team cyoa? The ones that are kind of like Broquest
>>46397064
I'm giving him shit for fucking up the concept, not because of his fetish. You don't take a CYOA about the curses not actually being bad then remake it so they are bad. That's full retard.
>>46392610
This shit's too Google+ for me.
>>46396681
OC?
Kate, I'll take her intelligence to new heights and do the best i can.
>that feel when you can only save one of them.
>>46397101
So either block the shitty CSS with AdBlock (or similar), or edit the path in the HTML code so it points to one of the other CSS files instead with developer tools (Ctrl+Shift+I on Chrome and Firefox).
>>46396318
Immortality
Magical Realm
Gifted x2
>>46397195
>OC?
Days if not weeks old. Also the filename is a string of numbers.
>>46397064
I suppose I'll do another CYOA I'm looking forward to making while anon throws his child-like hissyfit.The beautiful part is he'll never know.
All that ree'ing, all that pointless hate, for absolutely no reason.
>>46397307
It's not really 'child-like' to point out how you're missing the point of the entire concept, you know.
>>46397231
>immortality
you are now immortal so long as you are in your magical realm for a period of time. You'll understand when we get there.
>magical realm
Time flayed. A world full of different convergent timeline's, you never know exactly what you're going to get. Just that it will be just as one timeline has "hit" another. medieval machine guns, dragons with androids, etc. You'll age backwards here, up to 6 months old, where it will stop. Traveling to one you've been to before is possible but not recommended due to instability.
>gifted
Learning capacity. All the different time bullshit and multiple nexus of world's you'll be traversing can leave most people confused. You'll have an excellent learning rate to make up for it. Their will literally always be something new for you to learn.
>Gifted 2
Dodging. More helpful than you realize.
>>46396681
The genius is tempting, but God what a total cripple otherwise. I'll take Dogg every time.
>>46397407
Enjoy your baby.
>>46396318
Immortality
Magical Realm
Gifted
Wish: "I wish cyoas were erased from existence forever."
When did it become a meme to make april fools just annoying instead of a joke? It's supposed to be funny, not this. When is the last time you've seen a good april fools on the internet?
>>46397461
Matt, c'mon. It's just one day.
>>46397414
I'm sure I will, thank you! I definitely want children myself and it's clear enough Dogg does too, so there shouldn't be personality clash trouble on that score. We'll send you a card with some of our first baby photos :-)
>>46397426
>wish granted
you now are in a world where there are no cyoa's, because the idea of choice and cyoa's were erased long ago.
>magical realm
in your new world, there is literally no one. the theme is robots.
>Immortality
This entire dimension if devoid of choice, including dying. You'll have choice over yourself but no matter what happens, your soul will remain in your body, specifically, your liver. keep that thing intact.
>Gifted
in robotics.
>>46397461
Maybe you're just getting too old for April fools day?
It always has been like this. Hell I think on one April Fools day, 4chan had an fake DDoS attack.
>>46397307
I don't think anyone here honestly cares who made a CYOA as long as they enjoy it, so I don't get the bragging about people not knowing who you are, if that's what you mean to be doing.
>>46397497
you know what jeremiah, i like the enthusiasm. Little cringy but clearly a person with a full imagination, set goals and focused desires.
>>46397567
>Ashley
Slut.
>>46397595
Do it Carl. Do it and show those haters!
>>46397595
Your other CYOA or the crap remake of Cursed Waifu? If it's the first, you haven't even said what it's about so I don't have a reason to know it's you or even care that it is. It could be literally anything. If it's the Cursed Waifu one, I'll make a post pointing out how you missed the point (since the point is that their curses aren't anything bad, making one something bad is doing it wrong. I already explained this simple concept) and that'll be it, unless it possess you or someone else to argue with me like missing the concept of the CYOA wasn't a stupid move on your part.
So yeah, I'm not sure what you think you're winning here. Like you think I'm chomping at the bit to be mad at you? That I'll actually fret about it for no reason? It's like you think you're the king being screamed at by a harmless beggar, instead of a schoolboy getting told off for writing a paper on FDR instead of Teddy Roosevelt.
>>46397702
It's his CYOA, he can make the point be whatever he wants regardless of your opinion.
>>46397729
His CYOA is supposed to be a remake of another one, though. If it was completely his own OC concept then we wouldn't be having this conversation. But if you're saying you want to do a CYOA over, and change the concept entirely? That's not a remake. It's like taking Stardust and including neither Stars nor dust. Rather it's now about a medieval knight and his quest to buy the princess new panties.
>>46397767
>a medieval knight and his quest to buy the princess new panties
Sounds fun.
>>46397795
Hey, maybe so. But you wouldn't call it Stardust or a remake of Stardust. My only point, which he keeps missing.
>>46397767
>His CYOA is supposed to be a remake of another one, though.
A remake is not a carbon copy, Russel. Things change. Especially minor things like the tone or outcome while the majority is kept the same. That's expected and you really shouldn't get autistic over it when you already have a perfectly reasonable complaint on the side. If you don't like it, just say it's shit, don't get into something this contrived and pointless.
>>46397807
Was his cyoa supposed to be about making fun of other cyoas though? Maybe he just wants to make a waifu one with cool stuff and fetishes that some people are into.
>>46397807
The cursed waifu and remake of cursed waifu are more similar to each other than stardust and space refuge for example, and if someone "remade" space refuge into stardust I'd have no problem accepting it.
>>46397831
A remake keeps the core concepts and themes. This aint that. When your entire CYOA is built up around mocking shit waifus making them actually shit is just removing anything unique it had and making it generically bad. Plus part of the point of even bringing it up to him is that as a presumed fan of the original, you'd think he could understand this basic concept.
>>46397841
Then it aint Cursed Waifu.
>>46397868
>A remake keeps the core concepts and themes.
>The term "remake" can refer to everything on the spectrum of reused material: both an allusion or a line-by-line change retake of a film.
Yes, it keeps the core concepts and themes. Except when it doesn't.
The sad thing is that the cursed waifu remake did keep most of the concepts and themes, just no all of them, while not even that much is necessary.
>>46397906
Only has one core concept, chief. It's a one page waifu pick. Changing that up makes it entirely different.
Don't know why you think defending him does any good. I figure you're trolling because you want an argument yeah? None of this is for your sake.
>>46397939
It's a waifu picker with the twist that the waifus are cursed. Cursed Waifu.
And CYOA that does that can legitimately be called a cursed waifu remake, even if the tone, setting, curse potency and result, etc. are completely different.
>Don't know why you think defending him does any good.
I'm not defending him. I don't know who he is, I don't know if the person you were arguing with was the author of that CYOA, and I think both cursed waifu CYOAs were shit.
I just think you're acting like a pompous pedantic ass while also being wrong in your pedantry at the same time.
>>46392891
That dragon was so, so tasty...
>>46397995
The twist is the curses aren't actual curses, it's meant to be mocking all those other waifu CYOAs that were coming out where the girls were legitimately cursed in some way. If you're making them legitimately cursed, then you're more like what it's mocking than the actual Cursed Waifu one.
>Anyone CYOA that's entirely different and misses the point can be called Cursed Waifu.
Yeah, no. Obviously you can re-use a name since nobody can really stop that, but you really have no lineage to the original idea.
>I'm not defending him.
Then what are you doing? Empty shitposting?
>>46397567
I just get mushy about babies. Even more so about toddlers when they're two or three and can actually talk to you. Every day's an adventure for them. So much to discover.
And given her situation - well on for a medical qualification, close supportive family, young, healthy, smart, in a committed long term relationship - the kid's got a great start in life coming. Is there an Icelandic equivalent of Each Peach Pear Plum I can get to read to the little darling?
>>46392891
Because the god of the Hunt somehow wants either world war one in his backyard because some /k/ nutter put the entire culling population into the trenches for half a season.
>>46397066
>Sandra
Sandra pls
>>46398164
I bet the SDA posters are mad right now that nobody can be SDA.
Note to self: If I want people to post and talk about my CYOA, all I have to do is include a waifu who cuckolds you.
So a noob, question what is goin on? why everyting looks weird?
>>46398216
April First, friendo.
>>46398065
>The twist
A remake can completely ignore what you personally think "the twist" is and still be a legitimate remake as long as a unique premise is taken from the original and put into the remade version. Cursed waifus count, assuming the author got the idea from the original cursed waifus.
>Then what are you doing? Empty shitposting?
Same thing you are probably.
One, you've already shown that this isn't a factual discussion for you, it's actually just you attacking someone over your autism. If it weren't the case then a thought like "defending him doesn't do any good" would never have occurred to you.
Two, all of this is about you being autistically and completely unproductively pedantic about your personal definition of a word and me in turn telling you that your personal definition of said word is much narrower than the way it gets used in general. I even quoted a suitable definition at you, which you ignored.
And three, even if you were perfectly right, this would still all be a pointless and disruptive waste of time.
So, Genevieve, I don't think you're in a position to cast stones about shitposting. You've been shitposting the entire time, right from the first post you made on the subject.
>>46398195
Well anon, you have to ask yourself. Do you want people to talk about your CYOA for how much they like it and generally enjoy it, or do you want them to bitch about how much they hate it and shit on you personally as much as possible, and from there after your CYOA only gets posted as a joke because some people think it'll bait a shitstorm and it hardly ever gets legitimate builds?
>>46398266
You're doing the perception bias thing way too much. A lot of people still enjoy the CYOAs a few spergs decide to shit on. Even if someone is baiting by using the CYOA it still gives it exposure to people who aren't retarded enough to get into some general war like most of us here.
>>46398258
>A remake can completely ignore everything about the original.
Then it's not a remake, bro.
>Unique premise.
The curses aren't its premise. I believe I pointed out to you that its entire goal is mocking the CYOAs where that WAS the premise. That sorta precludes it from being unique.
>Same thing as you
You're trying to express an idea to the CYOA maker but keep getting sidetracked by shitposters who defend people just to defend them because any sort of hostile criticism is viewed as unacceptable to them? Poor thing.
>All this ranting about how you can't stand criticism.
>>46398324
I'm kinda going off of experience here. It doesn't end up well. You can say it does all you want to, but I think you're just being contrarian for some reason. I've gone through it myself. It's not a good feeling.
>>46398236
ohh that explains everything.
>>46398329
>Then it's not a remake, bro.
According to your personal definition.
>The curses aren't its premise.
According to your personal opinion.
>express an idea to the CYOA maker
You don't need 50 posts of shitflinging to express "Well, I'd really prefer if the curses weren't actual curses, I liked that."
>criticism
Bring it on. Oh wait, you have no idea what I've made. Too bad.
>>46398266
>Do you want people to talk about your CYOA
I've never tried the former, despite numerous attempts. Maybe it's time to try the latter. It seems easy.
>>46398406
Tell us what CYOAs you've made, maybe there's an actual problem that can be fixed constructively?
>>46398392
>According to all definitions.
Fixed that for you.
>You don't need 50 posts
You're right. So why are you baiting me into posting? That's the only reason this keeps going on, because you responded to me to start your argument with me.
>Bring it on.
Not criticism of you, dingbat.
>>46398384
You're not actually contradicting me here, though. I never said it was supposed to be a good feeling, and you aren't talking about what I said. I just said that you should ignore shitposters because even if a few people get autistic about something that doesn't mean most people aren't enjoying it. In essence, don't let the shitheads bring you down, they're just being shitheads.
>>46398445
Well he's kinda talking about baiting shitposters on purpose. That's different from what you're talking about, where you attract them accidentally.
>>46398441
>According to all definitions.
Nope. I already quoted one that disagrees with you, so your statement is already wrong.
You can try for "most definitions" if you want instead, but you'll actually have to go and post some sources for that. Or at least one. Come on, give me a single source.
>So why are you baiting me into posting?
I already told you. Because I think you're acting like a whiny piece of shit. I can't make this any clearer to you, Brandy.
Yes, you can call me a hypocrite for fighting shitposting with shitposting, but I don't give a fuck, your willful myopia just pisses me off that much.
>>46396681
Shannon. Smart, decent fitness, bit of a high libido but without going into "too honey to think" territory, and she's got a good little life set up for herself. Plus, she has a girlfriend, so I don't have to deal with people reacting to my newfound interest in ladies.
>>46398525
>I already quoted one that disagrees with you.
Don't see how. It does say there needs to be a lineage to it. Something from the original that is unique to it. Not so here.
>Because I think you're acting whiny.
And your 50 posts aren't whiny because you don't like my opinion? Come on. Then you go on to whine some more about how much I'm posting when every single post of mine is entirely your fault.
Acknowledging you're a hypocrite doesn't help any of the hypocritical shit you're flinging at me stick, by the way.
So many pointless arguments. So few CYOAs being posted.
Here, watch me be the change I want to see in the world. Posting a random one.
>>46398416
Sure.
I made"where our Worlds collide", and I was really happy with the result.
If got a few comments saying they liked it, and a few builds. No one commented on the lore (well, not beyond a single question), there were no new builds the second time it was posted.
I don't know what I did wrong.
>>46398574
I fear this will be the state of things for the time being, the current format kind of elevates writ above content.
Kind of makes me happy with the regular format actually, pragmatism in design is always a plus in my books.
>>46398604
Post it, Shelly!
>>46398569
>Don't see how. It does say there needs to be a lineage to it. Something from the original that is unique to it. Not so here.
Cursed waifus. Waifus that are cursed. That is a specific combination that was used as the basis for the remake.
And no, don't go "b-buh but that wasn't the point ;_;" at me again, it was what the author of the remake used. What you think the point is doesn't matter.
>And your 50 posts aren't whiny because you don't like my opinion? Come on.
I told you to call me a hypocrite, I also told you I won't give a fuck. I should have inb4d it.
>every single post of mine is entirely your fault.
Oh god, you're one of those. Trying to score more points on the "piece of shit human being" ladder are you? No anon, just like absolutely every action or inaction you ever commit in your life, every single post of yours is 100% your own fault. You have the power to shut up or shitpost as much as you want. There is literally nothing anyone can do to force you to post, and there is literally nothing anyone can do to stop you from posting except maybe a mod banning you. Which I'm not.I'd ban both of us if I was a mod to be honest.
>>46398604
Kit, people talk about your CYOAs all the time. That one ate up an entire thread and some of another. Most of the CYOA you do make end up with lots of gab, comparatively. You're pretty much a well known name as a CYOAmaker by now. You did a good job, and you shouldn't be compromising your vision to bait hate just to get more replies.
I mean, if you want to talk about the lore then I'll do so with you. I just figured you were doing a Bliss where we aren't meant to get solid answers from you.
>>46398657
Can't, I don't have it on my phone.
>>46398716
>>46398695
For example. Is it possible to grow further from your initial purchases in the CYOA? I had the thought while building that maybe some of the stuff I couldn't afford was more a matter of 'this you just couldn't grasp now because your brain would fry as it says' rather than 'this is the limits of your prime'.
posting this again for feedback.
Spelling errors? Balance issues? Volunteers to make something that doesn't look like ass?
>>46398716
http://imgur.com/OTsjdiU is that the one?
>>46398677
>Cursed waifus. Waifus that are cursed
Wrong. That's not its unique concept. As I said a hundred times, that is something it copied from everything else going on at the time. Its only unique concept was mocking them.
>The author of the remake
Kind've hard to be an author when you haven't actually made shit yet.
>I don't give a fuck
What a brave man!
>Every single post of yours is 100% your own fault.
Nah, I'd rather not talk to you. But you're just too self-righteous. It's all your fault.
>I'd ban both of us.
I'd ban you then go deleted half of /d/ and /aco/
>>46398695
>>46398695
>. I just figured you were doing a Bliss where we aren't meant to get solid answers from you.
No, I just thought it would be boring.
Yesthe Necromancer is your mom. She didn't want you to know that your mom did the things she did. Even if she tried minimizing casualties, she still directly and indirectly killed people. She seemed it better to send you away.
>end up with lots of gab
I don't know what that means
>>46398823Well why was she doing them then? What's her motivation for suddenly going off and raising zombies?
>I don't know what that means
Talk. People talk about your CYOAs. You're not on the level of those poor guys who post once and get ignored.
>>46398796
Like I said mang, why not just increase the width of the columns and include some spacing? I don't know what program you're using but it could technically be done in MSpaint.
>>46398804
>That's not its unique concept.
That's fine, it doesn't need to be a unique concept, it just has to be the concept that was used for the remake by the author of the remake.
>Kind've hard to be an author when you haven't actually made shit yet.
Really? You're going to descend to this level of brainless semantics?
Okay, call him "the person who made the remake" instead then. You fucking idiot.
>Nah, I'd rather not talk to you.
Good work. What the fuck are you waiting for.
>It's all your fault.
I'm not actually mad about this part of your character flaws, anon. The fact that you blame others for your own failings means that you'll never actually step up and improve yourself, which is kind of funny.
>I'd ban you then go deleted half of /d/ and /aco/
I'd delete /aco/ too, and get rid of the retarded "no western" rule on the cartoon porn boards. It just creates a pointless split that doesn't help anyone.
Though the problem here is that just being one of the mods wouldn't give us the power to do that, we'd have to be the admin.
>>46398873
I honestly don't have formulated a canon description. Something about the queen being horrible.
I've been playing with the idea of a "you're an agent of the Necromancer" DLC, but there are other things I'd like to do first.
>Talk
Really? I'm sorry. I guess i don't pay enough attention.
>>46398801
Yep.
>>46398761
The original intro said something along the lines of
>I could get back your memories instantly, but it might fry your brain
Inplying that you would, in time, get all the powers, but it was only possible to get some right now.
The name of your next post under this post will be the name of your waifu.
>>46398913
Sorry anon, even your definition species it has to have something that's obviously from the original. Not so here.
>Person who made the remake
But he hasn't made it yet though.
>What the fuck are you waiting for
For you to shut up.
>>46398928
I don't get the power of friendship thing. What do you buy with it?
>>46398574
The Bulwark. Awesome fitness + no poison or disease makes this a must-buy
The Gunslinger. Good generic defense skill, which synergizes super-well with...
The Greatsmith. Awesome thing-making power with a ton of breadth.
Natural Philosopher: Synergizes extremely well with The Greatsmith, let's me make all kinds of technomagical artifacts.
Scourge of the Cosmic Seas: Because who doesn't want to be a kickass cosmic pirate, plundering the entire universe?
So, who's up for some cosmic pirate adventures?
>>46398967
>Not so here.
Yes there is. Cursed waifus.
Amazing. It's like poetry.
>But he hasn't made it yet though.
Even if it's just potentially, he's still the author of it.
>>What the fuck are you waiting for
>For you to shut up.
I have a few more hours to burn, I guess we can spend that time together, Annette.
>>46398967
>Annette
>>46398928
Point of curiosity, how many fantasy races exist here? I know there's elves.
Man not being able to look at the CYOA makes it hard. I have questions I can't place to names.
>Really? I'm sorry. I guess i don't pay enough attention.
I've never seen one go without replies, even if it amounts to "I want all the cute daughterus' or 'Let me waifu the kitsune you fuck'.
>>46399008
>Cursed waifus.
So you mean the super generic concept it was mocking that you wouldn't be able to identify as a unique feature and is thus meaningless. Neat. That's like a Star Wars reboot where the only point in common was that there was some stars and a war. Oh wait, Star Wars is a Star Trek remake. Totally.
>He's still the author
That's like saying he's the president since he potentially could be.
>I have a few more hours.
And this layout pisses me off enough that I can't browse 4chan so I'm not going anywhere.
>>46399017
Good name, huh?
>>46398796
have more than three words per line.
>>46398604
>>46399026
>>46399026
The CYOA is supposed to exist in the same universe as the Halfdragon one I'll finish eventually.
The Kitsune one, plus (the unmade) Merchant and God of Fate cyoas will exist in the same universe, so all the available races from Halfdragon will be in the world.
Also, anon posted an imgur link to the CYOA.
>>46398969
Stuff on page two.
Canonically, the friends you don't pick don't exist.
Please, don't think too hard about it, it was the best way I could think of to avoid the "I'll not buy them, but befriend them anyway lol" people.
>>46398796
I agree with >>46398893 . It is a bit thin.
Anyhow, I'd go with Kindness. It doesn't have any difficult requirements like always being productive or never owning anything. Also, even if you lose power, it should be pretty easy to gain again since you'll have their contact info. It is a shame that you won't get to use Wish once Charity is dead, though.
>>46399123
>>46399073
>>46399073
>that you wouldn't be able to identify as a unique feature
But I am identifying it as a unique feature. Cursed waifus.
Amazing. It's like even more poetry.
>That's like a Star Wars reboot where the only point in common was that there was some stars and a war. Oh wait, Star Wars is a Star Trek remake. Totally.
Except both the CYOAs are actually highly related except for one specific tone in the theme that you're acting autistic about. Your analogy is worthless.
A better analogy would be making a remake of Star Wars except instead of the force being mysterious it's powered by weird critters called midichlorians.
The funny thing is that people were showing the exact same brand of autism over midichlorians as you are showing here. A tiny, irrelevant point that changes the mood a little bit, and they started whining how it wasn't Star Wars anymore.
>That's like saying he's the president since he potentially could be.
No it's not. It's like calling a presidential candidate the president while discussing potential scenarios set after he wins the election. It makes perfect sense and is done often.
>And this layout pisses me off enough that I can't browse 4chan so I'm not going anywhere.
Wow, you only go to 4chan? This is all you're doing, arguing with me? How sad. And here I'm playing a game and writing notes for a book I'm trying to write all at the same time. I think it actually helps me focus.
>>46399175
>>46399138
>Halfdragon one
Is that the one where you had all those choices for your parents and siblings? That one looked really cute and interesting.
>Kitsune
So the kitsune from this one is the same as the one from the baker CYOA? I didn't like that implication that none of the stuff actually happened to that 'character'. It makes it less fun to do your kitsune/baker CYOA or the three wishes one if I know that it doesn't actually get granted to the character.
>>463992134
>>46399123
Wait I fucked up. Or rather the guy who made the imgur album fucked up and I didn't notice it in time.
I guess pic related is page2.
>>46399138
You say you're making a halfdragon CYOA?
Shit, I've been making the same thing for the last week and it should be done in a day or two. Hopefully it will be different enough.
>>46399281
Try not to use imgur, it wrecks image quality.
>>46399301
Yeah I should've looked through the archives here. Fucking reddit bullshit.
>>46399154
Charity's never really supposed to use Sacrifice. It's a last resort for if one proves nigh impossible, or a freebie on whatever sin ends up being last if you really wanted.
And that was the goal of the Virtues. You can have amazing power (diligence literally goes supersaiyan, charity becomes all but indestructible AND can make OTHERS indestructible too, chastity becomes an angel) but you gotta be somebody worthy of carrying the power.
>>46398893
>>46399105
I'll see about switching up the layout.
>>46399264
>Halfdragon
Yep. Finished page one.
Well, until I make page 3 so I know how much gold the Social classes give
>looked cute
Aw thanks.
I can't understand the second part of your post. There are two ways to interpret Kumin: either you, the player, are not the baker or you are the baker (and she'll be ecstatic once she realizes that her childhood friend is the baker she played with).
>>46399294
I won't be done for months. I've made page one and like, 8/30 companions.
I'm still trying to figure out how to do page two, races and skills etc., in a way where you don't feel like some options are too expensive or something.
>>46399356
>Either you the player are not the baker.
I mean, Kumin's text implies that the baker didn't get to go to a party or have any of his wishes granted. Meaning that the baker character not actually getting anything makes it no longer fun to do those two CYOAs because now I know they're worthless and thing actually happens. He doesn't get his wishes granted or go to the party. It kills the feeling, tone and the actual MOTIVATION to do those CYOA, so I really hate it.
morale boost
>>46399396
You're welcome to ignore it. I see that the description for Kumin implies he didn't go to the party, but so do the Three Wishes.
Anyway, it's time for bed now. Goodnight.
>>46399513
I can't really ignore the lore that's in your actual CYOAs, though. That's canon. What's the point if I'm just going to ignore everything you say? I mean, it's probably too late to get you to change it to something that's less of a huge downer, but still.
Man you live in a weird timezone. Night.
>>46392610
>>46392660
For the record, don't use that pasta. It's old and stale.
New hotness: http://pastebin.com/vrqYhnpu
If you had used that one you might have actually found the CYOA you wanted since it has archives of actual CYOAs listed.
memories dependable
strength of character training, power, shield, agility, intelligence, sustenance, stealth, survival, health, smithing and apothecary
power of friendship money, dating, connections, taming, speaker and inspiration
friends leron, emely, erin and taylor drawbacks coma, stockholm syndrome and blackout
quests philosopher's stone, morale boost and sage
>>46396318
>s
Immortality
Magical realm
Magical Equipment - A simple bracelet that can morph other people's bodies.
Wish - Ability to shapeshift and form multiple bodies with singular consciousness.
>>46396487
for mystery box 1 you could still eventually get off the planet even without combustion
just build a really tall pile of dirt tens of miles high and jump off
>>46399743
Now you're in cold, empty space with no way to move and no chance anyone will find you at all.
>>46399761
Ha! Sounds just like my life.
>>46398796
Content-wise you still have some spelling/lexical poverty (e.g. using the same word thrice in a row), but nothing major. I like the idea, but some Virtues seem more powerful than others.
Style-wise I can give you a few pointers:
+ Use different fonts for highlights (and a styled font for the introduction) but a legible (serif) font for the actual descriptions. Make sure it's a web-font (reads well on screens).
+ Use the font's innate abilities (such as italics for emphasis, or bold for keywords, I've added this as well) to detail.
+ Columns should be wider than they are currently, increase line-width and line-spacing to make it more readable.
+ Use white-space to delineate things, but use actual lines to separate content. Try and maintain balance between all columns/virtues. Or give each a specific flair (color, background, etc.).
>>46399123
Waiting for the revision to build this one.
>>46399951
What revision amon?
Someone post Big world, I know one of you has it
Alternatively just dump all your cyoas
>>46399965
The designer was talking about making some fixes to it - changing the costs of the drawbacks.
>>46399969
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T4r91mc8pbo
Behold the worlds first modified Alice werehorse centauress
rolled a 7 on the age chart and we're both the same age
background 3+2, 2+3
personality 10, 6, 10, 3, 10, 10, 1, 4, 5, 8, 2, 10, 9, 10, 7
knowledge 2
hobby 3+2
height 3
skin 5
eyes 2
hair 9
build 4
breasts 1+weird features 2
Features 7
special features 9
weird features 2
enchanted 3+7
monster girl 5
www.furaffinity.net/view/9393516/
My virtue is temperance
>>46399849
What you got is more or less what I'm wanting, but gimp (the program I'm using) doesn't seem good for it. Text editing on it in general is cancer-inducing (no spell-check, doesn't show you what fonts it has, you have to type in the font you want and hope it has it, etc), and as far as I know, has no line/shape tool. I was trying to make some text boxes for pic related but I can't even.
I don't suppose you'd be willing to do up everything like your pic if I sent you all the raw text, would you?
>>46393734
Now this is autistic. Somebody pls make a CYOA around it.
>>46400478
That's not even the biggest version.
>>46400376
Your build process is wrong: first you create/edit the content, then you stylize/format it. Don't paint with a hammer.
And sure, pastebin the text or something, I'll plug it in.
