We post our fakemon and rate it.constructive criticism is also welcome
>>27152594
10/10 would train
i'm not very good at drawing fakemon but i have fun. i like naked mole rats a lot.
>>27152594
>>27154102
Oh oh how about create a mop counterpart anon?
>>27154011
do you want some constructive criticism?
>>27154156
sure, but i'm probably never gonna actually get good at drawing animes
Add on more parts/details to this guy.
>>27154187
it fucking sucks
>>27154204
done. pay me.
>>27154187
>>27154242
just kidding its actually decent
>>27154242
Wow, rude
>>27154265
Wow, somewhat confusing
>Coclawnut
His evolution with have cannon claws that scoop up Coclaws and fire them. It'll have a pirate theme.
>>27154283
not bad/10
Ghost/Fighting seems to always just be a ghost/skeleton with Boxing gloves, so I thought, "Why not just make the thing possessed gloves?" Not sure about the ability though, just seems to make sense since it's just hands.
>>27154283
damn. I really like that aesthetic. As much as I like Dwebble, this is what it should have looked like. 10/10
>>27154283
Clawconut rolls off the tongue better
>>27152594
8/10 would use to beat e4 and breed a shiny if it looked cool
>>27154011
>>27154102
Not my cup of tea but decent ideas
>>27154283
Needs color to judge imo
>>27156524
Wot
>>27154011
I like what you did with the mouth shape, the abilities are pretty clever, and using the "naked leaf" idea is pretty cool with this one.
>>27154283
>>27156570
This.
Also, fund that evo now!
I have much better ideas, but I gotta get around to drawing them
>>27156629
And here's my mega Vikavolt
>>27156570
I actually said it this way like 'instinctively' when I read it.
>>27154283
I like it a lot though!
>>27154102
I love the nonsense pipe moustache.
>>27156524
The names are amazing, the concept's amazing, and I like the Gen IV evolution methods.
>>27156629
Here's my spreadsheet, btw.
The ones marked with a dark blue square reading 'AA' are mine.
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1TJtND3XJv6hi72M3xm0mM9RDHkQnm2ut2zgnHB1jGMo/edit#gid=263862427
>>27156629
Sawktopus god tier mon
>>27156629
Love the idea of a punching bag tail. I could imagine that having advantages in battle or something. And I love any kind of octopus, especially a fighting one. The simplest designs are often the best.
>>27156654
That looks badass. I love the anime shades and how you adjusted the body shape.
>>27156865
>>27156858
Thank you! I was worried the octopus would be too bland
>>27156629
>Literally an octopus with a seaweed headband
I don't know why but this is among the best ideas I have ever seen
Does this look good?
>>27158257
Is it wearing a skull or is the skull just the shape of its head?
>>27158465
Its wearing a skull, it also wearing some bones on the tip of its tail
Hey guys, I made a Mega, please give me tips on how to improve it!
>>27154283
COLOR?
>>27158540
Start over from scratch.
>>27158579
That's goofy and creepy at the same time...
This was a 3 starter I designed right before Litten and the gang showed up.Then I lost the will to continue it.
Rate it! Both constructive criticism and "hurr-durr criticism" are welcome.
>>27158579
it just gets bigger
also skuntank
I made this thing the other day. It's suppose to be sort of like a dolphin/Dino mashup. I was thinking it could be water/poison or something. Thoughts?
>>27158645
>also skuntank
fuck i was trying to go for a raccoon
>>27158605
Compliment?
>>27158579
Looks like something from a Dr. Seuss book,love it
>>27158639
they kinda look like digimon
>>27158666
It's the guy that says a fakemon is literally a Pokemon because of its typing. He's in every fakemon thread, just don't reply to his posts.
>>27158659
I think it look more water/dark or Water/Ghost.
Maybe if you make the fin rough looking or more damaged it'll look cooler. Then again, I'm a big fan of Mega Sharpedo.
>>27158591
Okay then, thank you for the tip, anon!
It becomes Electric/Fire and gets an ability that turns all Normal moves into Fire. What do you think?
>>27158639
Rhino is cool in a goofy way.
Love the peacock, but it's too bland for a last evo starter, try making a fire rooster comb or a fire turkey wattle.
I like the idea of a literal tiger shark.
>>27158659
>>27158710
Make it a Water/dragon and go for the rugged fins
and jaw
>>27158764
Thanks. I agree tho, the peacock final has the least personality for me too. It's just really hard to make a newer fire bird, without being influenced by Talonflame, Ho-oh, and Moltres.
>>27158681
Wait for it to warp digivolve, it'll get more badass.
>>27158639
I love the rhino, not only is it a cool design, it's also, well, a fucking rhino. I also love the tigersharl, though it took a while to get.
>>27152594
8.5/10 Nice work there,OP. Got any more?
>>27158719
I'm actually okay with this.
>>27152594
That's a really nice design OP. Although, I'm unsure about the small fingers on its wing. But I like that kind of raptors too.
>>27158768
I'm no expert at making things look "rougher/tougher" but I tried. Is this any better?
ghost/water type based off of a suckermouth fish i did like a few weeks ago
>>27159363
I love the basic phase, it looks like fish egg/roe. This line is very Reuniclus-ee. Nice taste.
>>27159087
Yes, now I can see it being poisonous.
>>27158692
Oh , here's come the neckbeard who hates /vp/, run away.
So if every Fossil pokemon is Rock type. Did Fighting types cause them all to go extinct? What pokemons caused the Poke-dino mass extinction event
>>27152594
Came from the catalog just to say that that fakemon is fucking great and would train.
I love the idea behind this one
>>27159363
That last form is the stuff of nightmares.
8/10
First time i'm posting one of my fakemon on a website.
It's a Flamenco/Flamingo family.
Basic Fire mon. I made this guy way before litwick.
>>27156573
Well I have a bunch of different shiny variants and I'm not completely sure which I like bestthough I kinda like that the purple one gives me a witch doctor's vibe
>>27162808
Mega Flygon
I miss Scribblemons.
>>27162762
Thats actually really cool that you implemented two different things at once! What type is it?
>>27162812
I really like the turquoise one
>>27162818
More like Yanmega Flygon.
>>27162943
I noticed many megas connect all features of preevolutions - so here is a land flygon that losses levitate but gets Sandstream.
>>27162910
Thank you !
It's actually Fairy/Flying
>>27158923
Well, a few, since I just started getting a bit in designing.
Pic related is my finalized idea for a fighting type eeveelution.
>>27163354
Another pic of the fighting eevee, but more of a concept on how it moves and such.
>>27154242
>>27163354
>>27163371
I really like it, but it looks nothing like an eeveelution imo.
>>27163371
>>27163354
this is a great concept i love it
>>27163354
>>27163371
I have to agree with >>27163415
The concept as a pokemon is pretty good, I'd train one for sure.
But I can't get the eeveelution vibe to it.
I think it's because it's not quadrupedal.
>>27159363
Whoa ok this is cool as hell, love the design.
Do you have like a DeviantART or Tumblr?
>>27156629
dude, these are awesome!
>>27162859
Same. I have so many saved. I might start a thread later tonight...
>>27159363
would've been so much better than the royal jellyfish
>>27163506
>>27163415
Yeah, I get what you're saying about the quadrupedal part of it, as all of eevee and its evos stand on four legs.
Problem is, I wouldn't know how a quadrupedal fighting type would work, since all fighting type pokemon are bipedal and utilize their arms and feet, so I thought taking traits of kangaroo and jack rabbits would balance bipedal and quadrupedal.
But I appreciate the comment!
Grass/Bug coconut crab hermit crab thing
First draft really, it's simple and reads well imo but there's no sort of clever inspiration past Parasect 3.0 to make it stand out
>>27163636
>I wouldn't know how a quadrupedal fighting type would work, since all fighting type pokemon are bipedal and utilize their arms and feet
Musketeers, tho
Maybe have its default pose be quadrupedal like the other Eevees, then it springs back on its tail for attack animations
>>27156524
One should be white to be the white hand from Lavender Town.
Working on a fangame.
I made a bunch quite a while ago, dumping a few of them.
>>27165019
I made most of these before gen 6 and Fairy-type was even a thing.
>>27165033
People quite liked lil 'coon.
>>27165044
>>27165058
>>27165070
Again, before Fairy-type was a thing. This one would probably be Ghost/Fairy if I had made it nowadays.
Gilabaran (water/poison)
>>27156524
I love this idea.
>>27164360
Oh I see! So something like this perhaps?
Hyenaetna (fire/dark)
>>27165476
Would train 10/10
Hardestegg (grass/rock)
>>27165019
>mfw this is not real eeveelution
Made a fake evolution for Gardbodor once upon a time.
Hazmodor, evolves by leveling up Garbodor while holding Leftovers or manmade shit like Potions maybe.
>>27165461
It's better, but try to take the classic body shapes of Eeveelutions.
>>27154255
Holy shit, I love the design, the red panda look really makes it shine even though red pandas aren't bears, 9/10.
>>27154283
I'd absolutely adore this, as long as its faint animation has it curl back up into a shell and roll around clumsily.
>>27159363
Feels a bit too noisy for me-- lots of needlessly complex shapes and transitions from sharpness to soft, round forms. Really cool colors and idea though, probably one of the most thought-out Fakemon I come across actively.
>>27158639
Fucking love the rhino. I'd venture to say this would be one of the best Grass types visually for me.
>>27152594
bad ass design, but i would change the wing colour to the blue instead of red personally
Its shiny would be bad ass i bet
>>27154283
i fucking love it, perfect.
>>27156629
i feel like the octopus is just an octopus
Dunno what their types would be.
>>27154204
>>27154255
I don't know if I should laugh or feel sad
>>27166017
IJGB tier
>>27156524
>Hauntlets sounds cool
>>27166017
It looks like its secondary could be steel.
10/10 design btw
Okay /vp/ I need ideas. This line feels incomplete, but I don't know what to evolve lurchin into except for an even bigger urchin.
>>27166071
Maybe like a sea hedgehog?
>>27166071
Hey, sorry I'm a bit late with this. I loved your idea so much I wanted to take my own spin on it (I hope that's ok). Maybe with colors more true to your design, it could be the final evo you were talking about.
>>27152594
It has a shit aftertaste of tumblr
0/10
>>27166952
Describing something as tumblr is not constructive criticism.
Try again :^)
>>27166748
I like it! Its really cute!
>27166168
This would be clever, as the word urchin was an archaic name for the hedgehog.
>>27163354
>>27165461
I really like this design and I think it works well as a stand-alone Pokemon, but it doesn't work as an eeveelution. As much as I think the arced back, thin neck, and large eyes look good with the other shapes you're using, if you want it to look more like an eeveelution, the back should be straighter, neck thicker, and the eyes smaller. Larger eyes made sense for Sylveon since it was a Fairy type, but they don't really make sense for a Fighting type (imagine if it was cage fighting and got easily socked in the eye by a Hitmonchan). A thin neck doesn't really make sense for a Fighting type either because it implies frailty. Study other Fighting types; the only one I can think of with a super thin neck is Medicham, but that's because it has gigantic legs already for the sake of making them stand out. Look at Mienshao; it achieved the slender body look while still maintaining stockiness that gave it strength.
I do like the bipedal idea but again its anatomy needs to be altered if you want it to look more like an eeveelution. If you study the eeveelutions' back legs, their feet are really quite small compared to what you have (study artwork of them sitting and on their backs). I understand you wanted to make it kangaroo-like but when you take too much kangaroo anatomy it just ends up looking like a completely different animal (way too marsupial like to fit in with the other eeveelutions, which are more canine/feline-like). The bipedal one you have currently almost looks like a mouse because of the super long lower legs/feet, shortened/nonexistent shin joint, lack of/streamlining of shoulders, minimalization of front legs compared to back legs, size of the head compared to the body, forward ear placement, and vertical minimalization of snout. Again I'm not trying to say these are bad things, as they could be considered smart design choices otherwise and look quite appealing, but for an eeveelution they just don't make sense.
>>27167523
Whoa, I didn't expect to receive such a long and passionate criticism here but, this was really well thought out!
I didn't really know where I was going with design itself, and honestly you were absolutely right about noting the fragility of the design itself and using too many kangaroo/rabbit traits instead of studying actual fighting type pokemon, so I'll be sure to keep that in mind in the future.
No need to be sorry for the criticism, this was actually really helpful, again, I really appreciate it!!
>>27156629
Give the octopus hands.
>>27166071
>>27166168
>>27167224
Ok I took in your fakemon and used the sea hedgehog idea and ended up drawing its evo, but honestly I feel like it doesn't seem to fit with the rest....oh well I tried
>>27169048
Hey, no problem! Glad to help and would love to see if you give the design another go. Do you have an art blog?
>>27169375
I have a tumblr blog that has an art tag, but not a blog that purely consists of my art ;_;its literally tumblr hell
>>27169542
If you don't want to post it here that's okay, but I'd love to follow you!
>>27169614
Oh no, its absolutely fine! Your art is nice as well, so I'd love to follow you as well!
My url is joyouscatus :P
>>27169677
Thanks, followed you! o/
>>27156524
make three different types, rock, paper, scissors
and each one is weak and strong against one
>>27165721
Stay mad, faggot.
>>27160142
It's special ability allows it to make a substitute without using any health and cannot be by moves like hyper voice
2nd ability is large substitute which allow it to make a substitute that can withstand 2 attacks
>>27169219
Although it would probably work better as a stand alone pokemon, I must say that the urchinhog is beautifully drawn.
>>27169219
The key to a good game on is the idea(Hedgehog+sea urchin)A good name,a sensible typing()and the design should have a lot of disproportions and patterns/objects that pertain to the idea.Say you are making a Fakemon based on a Tapir.You should keep in mind that mythology says that tapirs eat dreams so psychic would be a good type and maybe even dark if they cause nightmares.Then for design it should have clouds to represent it's dream-eating personality since dreams are represented as thoughts in clouds.That just my opinion anyways
I always wanted some sort of platypus mon,aside from psyduckbut I can't draw in pokemon-esque very well.
This is my try. Still no name, typing could range from the obvious water>water/poison to normal/poison.
>>27170366
It looks adorable!! Love the use of the blubber head.
>>27170399
Thanks! I'm trying to figure out how to improve on it.
