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Discussion about the making or playing of English Language Visual Novels, save for the ones from /ksg/, or games released originally in Japanese.

Do you have a question about a Japanese visual novel or a translation of it?
/vn/ is ready to answer it.

>Getting Started:
http://pastebin.com/7LsCvtq3

>Recommended Reading:
https://vndb.org/v/all?q=;fil=olang-en.tagspoil-0;o=d;s=rating

For Developers. Huge collection of guides on everything:
http://meganelover.com/post/122965940223/visual-novel-creation-masterlist

Ren'Py Download:
http://www.renpy.org/

Previous Thread >>134797964
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can we keep shitposting about raithfyre
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>>135240482
Nah.
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>thread title in the name field
Way to go, champ!
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>>135240482
I like him.
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>>135240482
is he cute?
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>>135240482

>Don't want to release a demo for HB because of the pacing
>Going to demo it at GDC anyway

Do they just think the game is bad and don't want the general public to see it?
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>>135240590
i'm sleepy so i messed up, gomen sempai!
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>>135240649
Yes.
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>>135240649

Pic related.
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>>135240862
moe~
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>>135240652
HB dev here. Not releasing a demo was my call, not his. He's actually under the impression we should release an HB demo, for what it's worth, so no bully pls.

We're considering releasing the GDC demo. I'm interested in seeing the reception first, though.
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>>135240862
He looks like a man child.
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>>135240862
Now it makes sense.
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>>135240862
Sort of lovable, in a better shirt.
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>>135240862
He makes me want to touch myself.
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>>135240652
Are they demoing it for ordinary attendees or just trying to find some press to butter up?
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which evn dev wud u fug
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>>135241446
Myself.

Mmm..
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>>135241340
It's being shown with a few other Sekai Project games. Not sure if it's public or private but it's not like they need to beg the press to cover them.
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>>135241340
It's for anyone who RSVPs, as far as I know.
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>>135241446
you :3
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>>135240862

He looks like a weeb version of Hurley
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>>135240993
Stop acting like you deserve success for your game based off your name alone. Because your name doesn't mean shit. Are you just "waiting for reception" so you can jack off to popularity if people like it and pretend it doesn't exist if it's garbage?

Have some fucking confidence in your project. If you don't, you shouldn't expect other people to and buy it.
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>>135241731
It really has nothing to do with whether I have confidence in my game or not. HB is a short game. I just want to see if a demo is worth it. I don't think it's garbage and I believe it's going to do well for us, but I also know my opinion is tremendously skewed, so if it turns out it is garbage, then I want to be able to release something that addresses those problems and put out something that we know is good.

We have lots of faith in Highway Blossoms, but you're correct--our name doesn't mean anything. It's our first release outside of the HRP demo, which is why I'm being cautious. Perhaps overly so.

The GDC demo is two scenes from the middle of the game. So it's not too long. We could release that to the public or we could release the first few scenes of the game instead. Again, I don't want to mess this up, so I'm being careful with how we go about things.

Sorry if it comes off as arrogance or us being cowardly. That's not the intention.
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>>135240862
He looks like the autist who used to get his head dunked in the toilet and trashcanned on a daily basis at my high school.
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>>135241731
Hi JP?
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>>135242964
Tell shitposters to fuck off with your name attached and I'll believe you aren't a coward.
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>>135243037
Hi Chris
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>>135240862
pattable head/10
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>>135242964
>I just want to see if a demo is worth it
So let me ask you this: what made you decide to do a demo for GDC? Was it your idea, or your publisher's, or what? If it didn't exist, then how would you have decided? Gut feeling?
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>>135243227
People are entitled to their opinions, shitposting or not. It doesn't particularly bother me.
>>135243589
Sekai asked us if we wanted to participate. I've been trying to warm up to the idea of a demo for a while now and we had a few scenes we felt would work for a short one, so we agreed.
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>>135243589
The magic 8 ball has spoken.
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>>135243742
>we had a few scenes we felt would work for a short one
Showing people a highlight reel of interesting scenes might not be the best thing if the game actually starts off slow.
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>>135240862
who are these two qts raith is banging
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>>135243887
It wasn't really s highlight reel. They were scenes 18 and 19 (of a game with about 40 scenes)
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>>135243742
Who wrote what's in the demo? You, Raith, or both?
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The release date for Starlight Vega will likely be announced tomorrow.

Inb4 thank you twitter.
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>>135244659
hi razz
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>>135244756
Wrong, I'm yurifanboy 5000xReApEr
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>>135244623
It was me. Raith and I split our writing work into "arcs" of sorts. So I wrote most of the stuff that takes place in, say, New Mexico, while he wrote the Arizona portion. It's a little more complicated than that, but that's the gist of it.
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>>135244923

What do you think of Raithfyre saying things like "Highway Blossoms will most likely be the best yuri EVN of the year" when in here you're trying to say you aren't trying to come off as arrogant? Even if it's a joke it's definitely in a holier than thou tone and could even be interpreted as spiteful given Raithfyre's prior affiliation with Starlight Vega. He isn't you, but he still represents you and your game to an extent.
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>>135244923
Did you each write half? And who decided who gets to write what? I've only ever worked alone so I'm curious about how others do it.
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>>135244923
Is the the girl with the bikini top paired with anyone?
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>>135245187
It doesn't really bother me. I think the quality of HB is pretty solid though, so I do think the release is gonna go well for us. And the thing is, the only places it really causes any issues is on /evn/ or maybe an comment on /u/. I'd also be lying if I didn't say we really hope HB is the best yuri EVN release this year.
>>135245232
I decided on who wrote what. I'm more or less project lead, so these decision usually come down to me for HB (HRP is different). Overall, I think I ended up writing a little more than half, but both our scene counts were pretty close.
>>135245276
She isn't a love interest, if gnats what you're asking. It's a KN, so only one heroine. She's the leader of a group of significant dude characters, though.
They're my favorite characters.
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>>135245964
>dude characters
Er, side characters.
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>>135245964

So you don't want to come off as arrogant but you're fine with people who is constantly in the limelight for your game sounding arrogant, but it's not a big deal because you agree with him? Isn't that just...being arrogant?
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>>135246290
just fucking shoot that fat fuck and be done with it
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>>135246534
rude
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>>135246290
Maybe?
The tweet wasn't really mean-spirited or deflamatory. None of us really think it's that big of a deal, even if it was competitive sounding.
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>>135246803

Well of course you didn't, no one tries to be an asshole on purpose. It doesn't change the fact that someone representing your VN comes off as sounding arrogant or rude to people outside of your circle however.
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>>135245187
>What do you think of Raithfyre saying things like "Highway Blossoms will most likely be the best yuri EVN of the year"
That literally isn't what he said. He only said it COULD POTENTIALLY be.
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>>135247073
>He

Raithfyre pls.
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>>135247115
I don't think he'd care enough to argue about it. I'm much more of a pedant.
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>>135246938
Fair enough. I could see how someone might have a problem with it. But it's really not that big of an issue, and might have been blown out of proportion, I think.
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>>135247265
It's just because it came from the same guy who said that shit in the HRP kickstarter, otherwise nobody would give a fuck
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>>135247250
Well he made a mad tweet about this exact subject before immediately deleting it, so excuse my hastiness.
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>>135247486
Ah. Understandable then.
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>bitching about a no-name dev

Can people post progress instead?
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>>135248638
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>>135248780
>>>/rpgmg/
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>>135248865
But it's for a dating-sim lol. ;_;
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Anyway, I'm planning to release a test version for you guys to test out (for improvements and all)
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>>135240862
the caveman from the Geico commercials likes Nekopara?
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>>135240862
WHO ARE THE BABES
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>another thread about boring ass alienworks drama

god damnit.
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>>135249023
I read it as "dancing sim" somehow and got both excited and confused
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>>135251663
Welcome to /evn/ where the arguments are made up and the topic doesn't matter.
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>>135252375
welcome to good burger home of the good burger can i take your order
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>>135252708
yo can I have some churros please
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What if JP likes your game?
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>>135254149
who?
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JP-5 can melt steel beams.
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>>135246938
>no one tries to be an asshole on purpose
I'm pretty sure that's not true.
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>>135249023
I've seen you post a few images, but what exactly is your game?
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>>135254414
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fuck's sake
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Are we dead yet ?
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>>135259372
embarrassing
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>The art looks great, but holy shit everything in this picture screams "REN'PY!!!"
~Facebook Visual Novel Pirate on "Fault: Milestone 2."
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>>135261986

Shill post by a TyrannoBuilder lobbyist trying to malign small businessman PyTom.
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>>135261986
Dafuq, no, I actually can't comprehend that, what exactly did he mean by this? I'm lost.
Wait, maybe it's a lack of vertical menu to the right like what most JVNs have or something?
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>>135263480
no clue. i guess its "in" to hate on renpy engine by no-devs.
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>>135248638
You want to read my shitty writing?
Bump
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>>135264693
post it
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>>135248638
I'm a total beginner at making VNs, but I'm interested in learning so I'm going to participate in that NaNoReNo thing. I composed around 5 songs, did some incomplete art, wrote like 1k words in RenPy.

Anyone know what's a good amount of words for a VN? It takes so long to write a story myself but making a visual novel is pretty fun so far.
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>>135265621
50k-200k ?
Dunno brah, 1k is like 5 min of reading.
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For a VN that will be 4 hours in length total, what length should the demo be? I was originally thinking 20 minutes of each heroines route, so if someone were to play them all the demos total length would be 1 hour, but then someone said that was too long.
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>>135267349
>individual route in demo

No common, early introduction route for the girls?
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>>135267407
My VN has no common route.
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>>135241446
Jouya girl
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fuck you
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/evn/ is kill
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Why would anyone join Nano, when you can just release successful, commercial VN?
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>>135274885
why do people think they can become rich by making Chinese cartoon electronic flip books? Because everyone is stupid and terrified of death.
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>>135275165
If this book will be good, you still won't become rich ?
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>>135275669
quality != sales

Sakura games are huge successes and they can't even get the boob blush right.
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>>135275739
They get everything else right though.

Come on people, it's 2016, why in the world does your anime picture book not have a bunnysuit in it?
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>>135275913

> those legs

gross.
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>>135274885
Trying to sell the first vn you've ever created is hard. You don't have a following and people will really question your ability to deliver. Most people who release commercial games have released at least one free game.
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>>135275913
that's a shit bunnysuit tbqh fampai
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Rising Angels: Hope will now be a commercial release.

http://www.idhasstudios.com/?p=761

>Ugly news: I didn’t open with the fact that the amount of work I have dropping to radically low levels for the usual banter reasons. It has put both my and Fuzzy’s food situations into what I would refer to ask drastically dangerous levels of starvation. Without seeing a decent paycheck for at least 3 months, I am being forced into a situation where I need to find a way to keep the kibble in his bowl before he eats me. The way we have decided to do that is by selling Rising Angels: Hope. Now, before you all call for my head, I didn’t come to this decision lightly. Making it so everyone can always enjoy my games is the dream, but dreams don’t keep the power on to make those games. I simply can only bow my head and ask for your support for this painful decision. We are looking at somewhere between $10-15 with heavy discounts while the episodes drop to encourage early support. With all six episodes, the game is roughly 7-9 hours. All backers of RA: Fates and studio donators (prior to this post) will get access to the game for free. That has not changed.

Rising Angels: Hope episode 1 will release this Friday.

Episode 2 will release on April 1st.

Episode 3 will release on April 15th.
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>>135277762
>Episodic release
DROPPED
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>>135278505
But you need to support a poorfag dev. Do want that starving dog on your hands?

And at least his releases are close together.
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>>135278690
Why can't he just eat the dog?
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>>135277762
>Episode 2 will release on April 1st.
Is this a joke?!
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>>135278828
He doesn't live in China.
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>>135278908
It's not like it's illegal.
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>>135278873
No, it's 2 week intervals.
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>>135279003
Dogs are for companionship and tender loving in the states, sir or madame. They are not food.
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>>135279145
When the going gets tough, it's him or you.
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I just had this wild idea of gender-bending prominent right-wing conservative/nationalist politicians from Europe into girls and mix them in a university setting.
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>>135279257
He just as easily kill and eat a hobo. That way he won't have to kill something he loves. Or he could go grocery shopping at the local animal shelter.
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>>135279474
can I date Poland's meme minister of defense?
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>>135279815
Now that you mentioned it... There's going to be a lot of Poles in it if that's the case.
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>>135279474
>gender-bending
> into girls
Yuckkk
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Say goodbye to the the shitty ending of Red Rose.
>Episode 3's end is the first major deviation of the original pathing.

https://twitter.com/Katajion/status/708856118651412481
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>>135279474
>turning x into girls
>wild idea
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>>135280226
He should've said guns.

>Do you know your way around a pistol? You look like you have experience.
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>>135279018
I don't blame a guy for selling games, but what's the point of making it an episodic release?
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It might be a better project compared to "Human Exploitation Project."

But then girls probably want the migrant D.
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>>135280359
Like I said
>turning x into girls
>wild idea
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>>135280373
He's using it as a test, to see if making the still-in-production Rising Angels: Fates episodic would be a good idea. That way, people can play the arcs faster.

One of my objections was that it was a bad comparison since Hope was free, while the version of Fates with different romance options will be commercial. That's been solved, but Fates will likely have longer gaps than 2 weeks.
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>>135280861
I'm just saying that there are better things that you can turn into girls.
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>>135281102
Like Python statements?
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>>135281171
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Toko VA preview part 2.

Ezekiel, Sweet Tooth Benny, Pellatrix, and Aces High.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DqZYSj6cQdw
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>>135281648
Those voices are not great, but wew lad, Benny's enough to mute all of them if there aren't character specific options.
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>>135281648
No one gives a shit, Tao
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>>135282050
I'm not Tao, I just like posting twitter news. Have you seen my Rising Angels and Starlight Vega posts?
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>>135281978
But then you'll lose Devon's and she sounded really hot.
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>>135281648
>vocal fry
>nasal
TURN IT OFF
TURN IT OFF
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>>135278690
He has a cat, the game is done and he was testing short-term episodic releases which is why the whole game is out in a month, and the story has been enjoyable so far.
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Can I get away with this, or is it an obnoxious reference?
>hand holding
is one of my favourite memes.
"I think back to our earlier conversation to take my mind off of the sweat slowly building between our interlocked fingers. I don’t know why, but it feels as if we’re doing something really dirty."
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>>135286867
That's fine
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>>135288072
Sweet.
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>>135288072
If it fits the character saying it, of course.
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>>135281648
I like the music, the music is hot.

It makes the voices sound even more shit by comparison, though. Stupid musician, what were you thinking!
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>>135279018
The actual date.
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>>135289249
>Stupid musician, what were you thinking!
Both tracks are me, my bad!
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>>135291440
Equalise your music to the rest of the VN!
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enough devving, time for vidya
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Well, after seeing two different sites call Sebastian a mummy I realize that the press kit really needs to include a character section.
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>wrote 1500 words today
feels good to surpass my daily quota of 500.
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catch canvas demo is out

https://twitter.com/UnwontedStudios/status/709765166410256384

It sucks
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>>135297407
What does "Unwonted" even mean?
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>>135297407
Is it worse than No one but you? Because that game was terrible, so they'd have to try hard to beat it.
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>>135298097
My initial thoughts were that
-the backgrounds were nice
-the music was good but way overused and the looping was shitty
-the sprites were okay but each girl only had one, and the green girl's sprite looked better than the others
-Writing was overall painfully generic (and they got their own character's names wrong a lot) but the worst part was the implementation of the ecchi stuff. Holy shit. It was so fucking bad. And it just used black screens for most of it, while for example describing the shy girl masturbating to you pretending to masturbate to her
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>>135298472
Sounds painful.
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Deus Vult!
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>>135307327
Cute crusaders doing cute things (like liberating the Holy Land)!
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>>135307414
Do it !
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>>135307414
Bumping in the name of VN Jesus!
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Hi /evn/. How does it feel that even if you release something, even if you work your ass to the bone on it, even if it'll be really good, it'll still be considered shit, because it wasn't made in Nippon?
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>>135311345
I have to tell you, anon, it sucks a lot.
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>>135311345
Go away with your inferiority complex.
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>>135311542
How about you go away with your pathetic attempts to imitate Japan? You'll never be nearly as good.
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>>135311791
I know you're trolling, but it still makes me laugh that weeabs really believe this.
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>>135311345
It doesn't feel like that at all because I know my market and don't try redoing what Japan did 20 years ago.
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>>135311791
What a nerd.
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>>135311980
WW is that you?
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>>135311345
I'm sorry, but this isn't an autist friendly space - please speak to your guardian before posting here.
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>>135312378
If I was, I sure wouldn't be feeling like I know my market at all right now.
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>>135311345
So long as I'm proud in the product I'm putting out and the people who actually buy it are satisfied, then no one else's opinion matters.
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>>135315003
Hello WW
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>>135301258
I just tried it, it's awful.

>Japanese setting for no reason
>Backgrounds don't match the setting
>Despite the Japanese setting two of the girls have western names as if they changed them last minute
>Which is confirmed when a girl who introduces herself as Estelle is referred to as Nana less than a minute later
>Game is obviously written with a male protag in mind, so the female option is moot
>Things in CGs being described but not shown (Which was a problem in NOBY)
>Pink haired hyper girl is exactly the same as the pink haired hyper girl from NOBY
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>>135316979
Good god, it's even worse than I imagined.
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One minute into catch canvas demo and MC is a shit.
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>when porn blogs keep following your dev blog
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>>135316979
Estelle referred to as Nana and also Nacchan was referred to as Nao in one scene
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>>135321276
nao is the latters real name.
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>>135321141
It's a sign. Add porn.
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>>135321640
But I already have porn.
Maybe that's why I'm attracting them.
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>>135321540
That makes sense. They don't ever actually say that though do they?
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>>135315185
Grammar's not bad enough.
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>playing catch canvas demo
>don't see what everyone is complaining about, its not so bad
>"That's dawn. She's really shy".
SHOW, DON'T TELL DAMMIT
>*sigh*
This was the final nail in the coffin. Stopped playing and uninstalled.
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>>135322967
>She's really shy".
she's not she faps to you later.
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>>135322967
>*sigh*
What's wrong with that?
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>/evn/ all playing one game

this almost never happens. its kind of nice.
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>>135323105
*ironic sigh*
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>>135323267
2 or 3 people played a demo of a game that was previously talked about. This happens often.
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>>135323075
Please don't make me pick this shit back up.
>>135323105
The same reason posting text emoticons on an image board is bad. How hard would it be to write something like
"An involuntary sigh escapes my lips."? But nope, better just put *sigh* just like in my shitty internet roleplays.
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>>135323313
anon is right though theres nothing wrong with that.

>>135323519
>often
not really.
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>>135323313
I'm supposed to write "haah" or "huf" or something?

>>135323568
Well, that works when you are narrating, but what about a dialogue?
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>>135323658
>I'm supposed to write "haah" or "huf" or something?
In a dialogue, yes.
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>>135323591
Yes really. It happened with Seiyuu Danshi and Monstrous Lovers recently as well.
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>>135323568
>Please don't make me pick this shit back up.
shes a shy pervert and watches girls while they bath.
>"An involuntary sigh escapes my lips."
or use *sigh*.
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>>135323896
Don't use *sigh*, the fact anyone needs to explain this to anyone is going to melt my brain
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>>135323896
Death to those who advocate *action* writing.
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>>135323896
>shy pervert
Well there's an oxymoron if I ever saw one. Repressed pervert? Sure. Shy pervert? Shitty writing. Although that much was already present from the their use of *sigh*.
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>>135324292
How is shy pervert an oxymoron? Plenty of people are filthy perverts who are too embarrassed to come clean to their partners.
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>"Awawawawa".
Dialogue of the year contendor right here, guys!
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>>135324292
I agree with the *action* shit, but shy pervert types are not that bad.
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>>135324051
>>135324101
>>135324292
you can complain all you want, but it's still legitimate.
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>*shudder*
Oh come on, you've got to be kidding me. Then the MC even comments on how he made her shudder. There is no excuse for that one, action fags.
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>>135324484
maybe if you want to be a bad writer and laughed at by your peers for writing like a 12 year old
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>*nod*
Catch canvas is truly the gift that keeps on giving.
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i want the starlight vega writer back

release the game you purveyor of fap material
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>>135324863
what's wrong anon? too much *action* for you?
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>>135324918
Starlight Vega was written by Razz and Raithfyre, but Razz only did the art for Catch Canvas I think. Come to think of it, who is the writer?
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>>135325063
Not at all. After all, we've only just gotten starting using another tool of the shitty roleplay trade, ~ signs at the end of a dialogue!
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>>135325092
>and Raithfyre
barely.
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Oh, the "seen text" option under display is actually fullscreen.
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>>135325232
He wrote one of the routes and some of the demo stuff, didn't he? Not saying he did more than Razz.
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*gulp*
Oh for the love of god.
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>>135325180
i am surprised you can stand reading VN period, but press on.
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>>135325403
I don't know, that
>*gulp*
is really testing my willpower. I'll do so or the sake of protecting someone else from this shit.
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>MC comments on Estelle's disgusting make up and describes her a gyaru
>absolutely none of this present in her artwork
YOU HAD ONE JOB
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>>135325634
You are my hero, anon!
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>>135325634
>protecting someone else from this shit.
youll protect no one but its funny at least.
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>>135325791
They did that shit in NOBY too, but it's bad in Estelle's case because she doesn't look like gyaru character at all and the game keeps insisting she is. It really feels like they threw the Japanese setting on it at the last second.
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>>135325794
I can see light at the end of the tunnel. I've just read through two whole sighs that weren't in *actions*, but in italics instead. I would shit on the fact this MC feels the need to sigh at the start of every sentence, but I'll take what I can get for now.
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>>135326245
I take it all back, I just got treated to another
>*gulp*
>>135326141
Maybe the dev will see this and reconsider? Giving /evn/ a few chuckles is fine too.
>>135326232
She isn't even tan. She's just kind of olive. Even if they were going for subtle gyaru, bleached hair and heavy make up is a must. I don't know why I expect a dev to research a foreign fashion before labelling their character as one.
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>>135326141
He saved me from buying it, that's for sure.

Take note, devs: if I wanted to read *actions* I'd just go to fucking Gaia.
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>>135323841
>Seiyuu Danshi

I think both that and Catch Canvas were a case of "people keep giving it a lot of money so it must be good, right?"
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Just met with another
>Ehh~
I can't wait to get off this ride.
>>135326721
I feel rewarded by knowing I saved at least one soul.
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>>135326853
No one has ever thought lots of money = must be good.
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>>135327032
Great, now we get
>*pant*...*pant*...
Where are you now, actionfag defenders?
Also the build up to window tits being a pervert was really shitty.
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>>135327314
Also what the fuck is up with MC being a-okay with some random stranger they just met knowingly masurbating to them in the bath?
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>>135327468
She's a hot stranger that will probably easily let them touch her special zone.
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>>135327468
>*spurt*
Okay thats it im fucking done everybody go home
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>>135327468
>Also what the fuck is up with MC being a-okay with some random stranger they just met knowingly masurbating to them in the bath?
See, that I'm okay with. Flattered, even.

If any of you want to masturbate to this post, go right ahead. I've done stuff like this in the past few years.
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I can't wait for Highway Blossoms to release their demo.
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>>135327729
Anon, you're a freak.
How the hell can anyone get off to a random post on an anonymous image board? Unless I know the post is directly referring to me, it doesn't do anything for me. I confessed to a vocaroo anon that I shlicked to their voice and they replied calling me out for being a filthy, degenerate pervert. To this day its still one of the best masturbation sessions of my life.
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>>135327729
How long has it been since you showered? Just curious haha
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>>135327729
Are you even cute?
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Well I fucking finished it.
>that shameless plug at the end with a link to their kikestarter embdedded into the dialogue
I'd say shameful dispray but they obviously only care about shekels. Overall playing this demo has inspired me by knowing that no matter what I write, it will never be as shitty as this.
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>>135328401
>matter what I write, it will never be as shitty as this.
Dunning-Kruger is strong with this one.
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>>135328512
Are you challenging me to write something shittier? I'll join NaNareno and I'll do it.
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>>135328093
You're nasty too. Think of me, I'll think of you.

>>135328154
About 10 minutes.

>>135328295
I might rank at least 2nd place here. Not being conceited, I rejected modelling offers.
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>>135328295
>cute
>game dev
>specifically, OELVN dev

whew
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>>135328821
>About 10 minutes.
Oh
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>>135328821
It's been years since I last did that with a stranger on the internet. The first time I did it with some anon on omegle and we ended up finishing around the same time. They said it was nice to have someone to do it with. Overall it was a pleasant experience. In terms of cuteness, I'm afraid my only charm lies in being a wallflower. I sit around and wait for someone to notice and bother to talk to my averagely attractive self, but no one ever does, since there are so many other obviously attractive women who aren't afraid to flaunt themselves. Whereas I have to stick to masturbating to, and with strangers on the internet.
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>>135328956
Another girl said that I'm "so cute when I get angry" the other day if that counts?
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>>135329305
My last girlfriend was like that to a T, and very insecure over her looks. Don't sell yourself short, you're someone's type. Probably mine.
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/evn/ - masturbation & degeneracy general
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>>135328821
Well I've accepted modelling offers. Checkmate
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>>135329798
See, that's why I said second. It's safe to assume there's always at least one person to one-up you in any given environment regardless of how much success you've had.
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>>135329305
>>135329702
Just find each other and fuck already.
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>>135329702
It's hard not to be when in the only 2 instances of ever being hit on/flirted with by anyone in my life both happened to be big scary black guys who I genuinely thought were going to rape me when I turned them down.
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>>135330015
black guys hit on everyone

including me

and im a white man
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>>135330007
As if someone would want to fuck an awkward 21 year old virgin.
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What's your project's resolution, /evn/? I'm considering 1920x1080, but maybe that will be too annoying to draw.
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>>135330015
Sorry you went through that, but I can't help but wonder. Big black guys, wallflower, self-esteem issues. Are you by any chance chubby? That's actually be a jackpot for me.
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>>135330101
That fact they'd flirt with anything just makes me feel even worse. The only positive I took from those occasions was 'At least they thought I was worth the effort to try and sleep with' and now even that's gone.
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>>135330250
I weigh 8 stone and am 5'4, so no, not chubby at all. Which just pisses me off even more when I see landwhales getting dicked and brought out on paid for dates every other weekend. I have small tits which I'm actually pretty proud of because DFC is love, DFC is life.
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>>135330182
1600x900
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>CatchCanvas

Is the guy making it from Australia where every cup size below C counts as child pornography?
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>>135330546
[email protected]

Make a 10 minute mail or something, let's talk and see where this goes. I'll be waiting.
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>>135330918
More tits more money.
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Grisaia finally got interesting after all the stupid bullshit.
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>>135330935
Email sent.
Expecting this to absolutely nowhere like it normally does.
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>>135330182
1280*720
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>>135331228
/vn/ is the other way buddy.
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>>135330546
>>135331362
You could probably get a date if you weren't so nauseatingly self-depreciating.
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>>135331587
I am a very hard person to like.
Funnily enough I got more interest than ever when I pretended like I was god's gift by people who are into that kind of thing, but the act got boring after a while.
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