Hey fuckers I drew a final boss and I made a battle theme for it
https://soundcloud.com/iwilldevouryourkittens/the-kings-liberty-march-1
Thoughts? Also I can take requests for monsters if anyone wants
>>333132152
It looks like the sword/shield pokemon from the X/Y games.
>>333132152
>That
>A final boss
It looks as wimpy as Mack the Knife. and that was a FIRST boss. Step the fuck up OP
Neat, is the second form a giant god that wields it?
Keep practicing your linework and get a digital pen , because you're going to have to brace for a wave of people being critical as hell.
Why is your paper so filthy?
>>333132152
how old are you?
so is it a sord or a bird or a king whats up with that
this is a shitty aegislash
>>333132285
The drawing in the OPIS the second phase.
Here's the first phase
Battle theme for first phase is https://soundcloud.com/iwilldevouryourkittens/the-great-king-solomin
>>333132406
>sord
how old are you? You have to be 18 to post here.
>>333132693
I can dig it
>>333132152
>>333132693
doesn't a final fantasy 13 boss do this shtick
Concept is very standard. Can't say much about that.
HOWEVER, if regality was meant to be a theme, you fucking nailed that with the song. That song was pretty fucking dope and if a game had a soundtrack that consistent, it would be reason enough to play it.
>>333132821
Thanks anon!He's a good gut for most of the game and so when he shows up at the end and turns into a giant sword it should be real surprising
By that point in the game he's basically just really pissed that you and your band of necromancers have been fucking with his kingdom for so long
Mega Aegislash for Sun/Moon
>>333132931
Oh shit man, thanks. That's really good praise.
Most of the game's soundtrack is also on my soundcloud desu, you can just look around there
>>333132916
I wouldn't know, I only played 5 and 6
Good music bad art.
Stick to what you're good at, hire an artist or get hired for someone elses shit.
>>333133068
Game looks good. Gotta increase the walk speed a bit, unless there's a run button. You said action RPG. so no turns, right?
>>333133162
this guy
>>333132958
>party full of necromancers
>that music
Make this a reality.
The drums in the song are the only thing bringing it down. Too bog-standard. I love the intro and the development of the theme, the pianos and the guitar being intertwined is fucking awesome.
>>333133068
Listening to Seasong right now.
It seems drums are your weakest link. Too by-the-book. they don't add much to the composition.
Additionally, you might want to use a different guitar tone. I'm assuming you're using a MIDI program of sort?I want to start making the SRPG I've written pages and pages of concepts over a reality, and could start with music, I suppose, but I'm not familiar with DAWs or anything
Oh, Dreadnaut just started, and the weakest link becomes a strength. Nicely done. Also holy shit this song is really, really nice. Like I don't mean to suck your dick, I normally don't like complimenting people online, but this is really fucking good.
>>333133362
You sure this isn't a Bayo/SMT angel?
Also scrolling down and noticing you've done work for Pokemon Sage is the only thing that's made me be interested in it.
>>333133362
Oh yeah, that fucker
>>333133542
God, it's great to get good feedback.
Dreadnaught is actually the main character's leitmotif. It's also a remix of an earlier song I did, called Dread. https://soundcloud.com/iwilldevouryourkittens/dread
>I can take requests for monsters if anyone wants
I have a specific design in mind but I don't have any drawings of it on me to refer you to
Try to make something up, if you can. Just think "muscular robot" and go from there.
>>333134419
Assuming you're OP:
DARKNESS based Mantis Shrimp
>>333134419
phalanx-turtle tank
Don't you make music for /vp/'s game?
>>333135404
yeah
>>333134759
>>333134524
I'm not op, just trying to give him a request, but I did draw them
Where's your game, OP?
>>333134419
Op where are you?
OP where you at?
>>333141013
What is wrong with that butterfly
