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Zootopia Thread: Trying to Fit In Edition
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Fox
Cozy in here
-J
Cheetah bro here, rate my first drawing!
>>2748982
>Poor Olly
>RIP in piece
I have no sympathy for him at all. That was the most cathartic moment of the whole episode for me.
>Poor Shaggydog
>Rip in pieces
Actually the saddest thing ever tho.
Comfy music animals
Obligatory BUNE
xth for licking the sweat off of fitlynx
>>2748979
Ay, new thread, I'm gonna re-shill the thing I wrote earlier for the prompt of Nick taking Flash to a strip joint that happens to be one Judy is undercover at.
It's neat.
http://pastebin.com/VDDHiLw4
-Alabaster
YOU MUST CONSTRUCT ADDITIONAL BUNE
>>2749016
Comfy vibes are best vibes.
>>2749016
Go fuck yourself, alright? Can you please just stop posting?
Does anyone care for these SFM posters at all? If not, I'll stop while I'm ahead and probably try my hand at drawing.
>>2749038
TELEBUNE GOING UP
>>2749047
Slow down there champ, nothing better going on.
>>2749050
I complimented this last night.
>>2748793
Are you telling me that Weaver is...
>available?
Is there any other specialized art styles like pic related of Zootopia?
>>2749018
jelly/10
Might as well shill my fic here.
http://archiveofourown.org/works/6396667/chapters/14646265
>>2749050
Fanmade 3D modeling usually looks pretty bad. The art of drawing lends itself to better-looking material, in my opinion.
>>2748133
Drew myself.
>whoops guess I'm a furfag now sorry ma
Also, sorry it's turned, phone's camera a shit.
>>2749075
LITERALLY MINUTES IN MS PAINT.
LITERALLY MINUTES.
>>2749047
Chill out anon, he's a nice guy. What has j ever done to you?
Hey Metal, if you are around, why is the first chapter of the new story called "Epilogue"?
Shouldn't it be Prologue?
>>2749018
sideways / 10
>>2749047
Someone is cranky. Do you need a nap?
Get comfy in here.
>tfw you are a huge furfag and want a fursona but cannot into drawing :(
Life is sad.
>>2749066
Nah, hes with Bernie
>Nick's been burned badly in a previous relationship
>Starts falling for Judy but doesn't want to
>Nick singing his own version of: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Tl0DMTlwLw4
>>2749087
Looks better than anything I could ever do.
I'm a shit drawer.
>>2749112
Don't even talk to me, anon. That drawing is passable. I can't even finish something before throwing it away.
And thus I'm left to writefagging and RPing.
this has some pretty nice r34 http://corn-hub.blogspot.com/
Well, forgot to update rare zootopias today. Tomorrow should be okay.
>>2749047
I don't want him to stop posting; he's a moderately chill dude
I just want him to stop "instinctively" signing his posts like a holier-than-thou jackanapes
>>2749117
Is this actually true?
>inb4 being this gullible.
>>2749087
Eh, I never claimed to be an artist, and it's not like I charged you money to see it. I thought I did ok though.
>>2749016
It sure is man. I like the night time here. It's pretty chill and I can't get enough of it man.
>>2749128
>>2749087
>>2749075
Oh, sorry, I meant it as "You can flip it in literally minutes"
Didn't mean to insult!
>>2749112
I know that feel, anon.
>>2749089
>>2749108
He's a vehement shitposter who has no proper insight on anything and says the most banal, inconsequential things that it's a fucking insult. He shits up these threads with his nonstop faggotry and other namefagging idiots (or idiots with a recognizable thing, man) suck his dick. At least Weaver deserves all the attention he gets. J is a fucking waste.
>>2749074
It's not so bad (with the appropiated software)...
>>2749127
>Schalke
>>2749129
Sames.
So what are people's bets on how early the Blu-ray will leak? Its not Star Wars so provbably not 3 weeks early like TFA, but I'll bet we see it by the 27th
>>2749018
I'm ready!
>>2749162
Man, your reaction time is down
Step it up >schalke anon
BTW could someone make a zootopia version of this?
So should we just stop calling these zootopia threads and instead just call ourselves "How to draw your fursona general."
No offense but that's what this feels like.
>>2749162
LATE
A
T
E
>>2749149
Who is Bernie?
>>2749155
Eh. I don't mind him. It's a pretty benign habit and he's nice enough. To each their own, though.
>>2749146
Oh, thanks for clearing that up anon, you kinda did hurt my feelings, so I'm glad it was a misunderstanding. As for turning it, I would but
>mobilefag
Magic and fluff!
>>2749160
I was implying that particular Judy model as well with my comment. That's a decent interpretation of Judy but something is slightly off, I think it's the way the eyes look and her chin area. I'm pretty sensitive to uncanny valley so all but the best 3D work makes me uncomfortable.
>Replayed ZoE2 today
>That ending scene where Jehuty Returns perfectly conveys genuine human emotion using music and simple body language
It really goes to show that if you know what you're doing you can surely get the message you want across
>>2749063
I'm glad to see that atleast someone likes it, but I feel I could be doing better is all.
>>2749074
Yeah, the 2D art gains a lot more recognition I noticed, the only models I have to work with are sub-par and that's why it's usually glanced over.
>>2749160
Is this the blender model? It's so detailed... I need to get this ported over to SFM some how.
>>2749042
Love this pic
>>2749047
Lol YOU again :)
>>2749139
Love you bro
-J
>>2749189
I would never intentionally insult somebody putting out content. I can't draw worth shit, so I really wouldn't have the right to shit on somebody else's art.
>>2749155
>Be anon
>Get dubs
>Use dubs to express anger at one person who could be easily ignored
You know, if you're the only one who has a problem with it, maybe you're the problem.
>>2749187
Bernielover
Does new Zootopia comics every day. A lot of gay shit. Her take on Fangmeyer and Wolford is great. Though I'm not too impressed by the OC hyena she seems to be fond of right now.
You can find her on FA
>>2749007
I knew some chill preds in college, it's all the geezers that spread that shit. There was some statistic that prey are like 10 percent more likely to be holding, but half as likely to get searched.
Farming is boring as hell, my mom legit didn't know its illegal in the city. Parents came to visit for mother's day, give her her gift and a hug. She gives me a lithe sandwich bag full, I freak a little bit because my mom just gave me pot. I ask if she knows it's pot.
"That's ridiculous, hunnybunny. It's Mary Jane, it's good for you. You get too stressed out, sweetie."
>mfw I have no face
>>2749011
What? Pot's fine, I'm not like a stoner.
>>2749155
Calm down anon you're acting like a total faggot
Are you mad about being BTFO?
-TGX
I miss how these threads used to be. Maybe I'm just being a faggot, but I really feel as if they've been shit up greatly this past week or so.
>>2749155
Do you dislike namefags?
-ANA
>>2749189
Never let the negative things here get to you man. You're better than that man.
>>2749202
9 minutes to render this frame on Blender, 9 fucking minutes...
you can't have this model on SFM, not in real time.
>>2749225
>TGX
FUCKING HELL NOT HERE TOO YOU ASSHOLE
>>2749215
>Bernielover
>fitlynx on suicide watch
>>2749228
Its all this fursona shit.
It used to be about zootopia but now everyone and their mom is rolling a fursona and making 50 shitty drawings of it.
>>2748563
here /fit/lynx you need these more than me
>>2749212
It's a pretty bold claim to make that I'm the only person who dislikes namefagging on a board of (attempted) complete anonymity.
>>2749228
Welcome to the woes of a maturing fandom, where people start to recognize and hate each other. :)
-f(ag)
>>2749155
*Insert something about you being mad*
-p
>>2749228
You mean, exactly like the /co/ thread, but with porn dumps?
>>2749228
>threads used to be
Honestly I think the stakeout comic was so good that everyone expected all the others to be like it and the threads revolved around the idea of that expectation but
>let down
Well shit I guess I'm a furry. Just kill me now. Fuck you Disney. You did this to me.
>>2749228
It seems to have coincided with the death throes of the /co/ threads.
lol people are so mad.
-J
>>2749254
Well Zootopia is month or so old movie. There is only so much for us to talk about before we make it more about the community and OC.
>>2749267
>all the advertising they did for Zootopia on Easter is move a Easter basket over the basic clipart pose of Judy
got some time for a draw request any one interested ?
I guess I'm going to lunch with a fox tomorrow.
I'm way too nervous. Definitely gonna fuck this up.
>>2749194
>Nick got harassed badly in his first year by other houses for being Slytherin
>Rest of Slytherin doesn't think much of him
>Nick is alone until his fourth or fifth year when Judy joins despite being Gryffindor
Yeah, I spent the morning and afternoon at the Wizarding World so my mind is still buzzed with Harry Potter setting stuff.
>>2749304
Nick dressed like Micheal Jackson from smooth criminal.
>>2749276
I will admit that I have been rather disappointed with Weaver's latest work. He seems to not be too motivated or inspired to work on any comics lately, especially after the negative responses he got from the Neighbors comic. I don't want to tell an artist what he should draw, but I would like to see more Nick/Judy stuff from him, and I think another comic focused around them would be a great boost for morale in these increasingly tense threads. I would be so bold as to claim that The Late Stake was why these threads got so active to begin with.
>>2749314
The way to a man's heart is through his dick. Make of that what you will.
>>2749208
Aww, thanks anon.
>>2749235
Normally I wouldn't, but I spent like an hour and a half straight on it, and it was the first time in years I've been inspired to draw. Hand not to take things to heart when you feel passionate about something.
>>2749248
you need some xanax dude.
>>2749228
It happened when everyone from /co/ moved here.
>>2749228
>wahh the general is dying this ain't the comfy I used to know wahh
Read a cozy fanfic or two anon, and then come back to the thread when you're prepared for people flinging shit at each other.
This always happens to every continuous thread, because it always happens when people interact with each other for more than a fleeting moment.
You learn to deal with shitposting after a while
>>2749304
Gideon looking to the distance forlornly at the farm life that he has chosen, wishing he chose the city life.
>a sleeping teeming abundance of life living in harmony together. Not as a malevolent entity, not as a blight.
Sleeping/teeming are contradictory to each other. The next sentence is a fragment. Also, I'd advise you pick either 'malevolent entity' or 'blight' Should look like. "a teeming abundance of life, living in harmony together, not as a X, but an X
>He had learned to cherish these fleeting moments of peace while on watch.
But I thought that the city was peaceful, living in harmony together?
>all so he could hear the purr of his Cord engine as it pulled him up the road and the rhythm of his city at night as the wind flowed through his antlers
up the road, with the rhythm of his city at night flowing through his antlers
>he didn't use to be able to do the last one
Clunky phrasing here.
>his radio suddenly turned its volume up.
Word of advice: NEVER use the word suddenly in writing. Also, give the radio a bit more life. "crackled to life." "Woke up with the sound of dispatch blaring" etc
>The peaceful rhythm of the night was shattered as the wail of his siren replaced it.
Not shattered as, shattered WITH. The wail of his siren is alive, it OPPOSES the city. Make it so. " The peaceful rhythm of the night was shattered with the wail of his siren." You save wordage and still say the same thing.
Next round of edits coming through
- Clunkbot
>>2748731
As promised. More to come
>>2749314
so you did callhim, Bunny, Good luck on your date
>>2749318
Write a fic!
>>2749258
Thanks, maybe it'll make me a better drawfag. ;_;
that's a really cute picture btw
>>2749299
I think it's funny how little effort was put into that particular advertisement. The best thing that came from it was the "scared" edit, which I thought I saved but I cannot find it.
>>2749326
Already exists, anon!
It's been a goodnight, but i have to wake up early tomorrow, have a comfy thread people.
>>2749352
A fic about Gideon moving to the city for the first time would be pretty choice.
>>2749379
Goodnight, Anon! Sweet dreams!
>>2749342
>Foxhole
Oh jesus.
>>2749333
>dick
Not all of us dude. Foxes take single mates; more comfy, less fucky.
>>2749314
Don't be nervous, foxes are pretty cool. My best friend is a fox and he's probably one of the easiest and nicest person to talk to.
Dox Fick!
>>2749379
Goodnight Anon.
Shilling Short Tails, as it just updated
Hey guys, I'm back. It's been a few days since I've written. So, I got my ass to work today. Here we go
https://archiveofourown.org/works/6682150/chapters/15520003
>Short Tails by Clunk Bot
>Chapter 5: Horses in the sky, part 1
>Chapter summary: "Hey James, what did you do in the war again?"
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6yIxOhL6vBI
As always critiques, edits and comments are all encouraged. This is part one of two.
>>2749411
Was there ever a follow up of this?
>>2749292
All of J's images are "image.whatever" hes a mobilefag. Lol imposter
>>2749372
I'm working on one!
[spoilersdon'twork]it's just not a harry potter or Zootopia one!
This thread is moving insanely fast for 9PM on a Sunday
>>2749362
>But I thought that the city was peaceful, living in harmony together?
This is the moose. He wants to see the city like that, but he hates it pretty much all the time on the job.
>>2749333
>implying I want his dick or his heart
>>2749366
Don't call it a-
Aw crap, it is a date isn't it?
>>2749403
I've just never really talked with a pred face to face, much less sat down at the same table as them to eat.
>>2749434
That's fair. I promised to write a pirate Zootopia fic, but I've been insanely busy with school and graduation coming up. I'd write a Harry Potter/Zootopia one if I had time...
Haven't even updated my current fic.
>>2749431
If only. Plus, even if there was, /trash/'s janitors would remove it immediately, no loli/shota allowed, including /cubcon/
>>2749446
Still editing:
But you can see how those two statements are contradictory, right?
>>2749441
It's 12:00am, here anon!
I got a present for me
Metal llama-sama here to shill again; the short epilogue of my newest chaptered idea; ZT Vice.
http://archiveofourown.org/works/6795109/chapters/15518983
Nick and Judy are going undercover at a bordello, things are going to get pretty rowdy from the outset and the sheer number of places I can take this idea is very exciting to me. Looking forward to doing more after my 3 exams are over tomorrow.
Any feedback is always welcomed and encouraged. Clunky, superb work on the new short tails chapter by the way, I personally got a little lost in the description at times where I had to remind myself of the plot thread, but take that with a grain of salt because I'm exhausted from studying all day while trying to make some kind of presentable start to me new idea.
Greentext image for comfy J, and goodnight thread.
>>2749472
/sigh.
Was kinda, maybe, sorta interested in it...
>>2749441
We have a lot of new drawfags who have seen the sucsses of weaver and co. and now they want to contribute.
Normally this would be accomplished by making art of Zootopia, but ever since the major drawfags adopted fursonas the minor ones have wanted theirs too.
This means we have a lot of low effort posts of random animals that really have nothing to do with Zootopia and are more general culture than anything, and since people would rather spend time drawing an animal they feel "connected" to than actually draw a funny comic or good fanart, we got a lot of those pics.
Comfy!
>>2749337
I can see how taking your time on something then seeing it not getting good comments can be disheartening man. Just keep on trying at it even when it happens man.
>>2749477
Yeah, I do. I should have made the transition clearer for the people who don't know the character.
It's all fair critique; I hadn't written in years before this.
>>2749271
>>2749460
>Aw crap, it is a date isn't it?
don't sweat it, just have a good time
ALL THIS ZISTOPIA
YES
YES
>>2749373
oh hush you're doing great, you've captured the imagination of this thread
also thanks man
>>2749460
Don't stress, preds are no big deal. Also, if you've ever hung out with a hippo (which I'm sure you have, they're fucking everywhere), you've technically hung out with a predator. Not all of us have sharp ears and pointy teeth.
How easy is it to prolapse from anal sex?
I feel like every thread has a theme...
what's this threads theme?
>>2749481
Here's your /you/
Also kek.
>>2749536
Shitty MSpaint art of random animals no one cares about.
>>2749531
Couldn't tell you man. I don't do anything extreme like that man.
>>2749531
Pretty much only if you go in dry and don't lube up beforehand.
You should always be using a lot of lube, so if you stick to that you shouldn't run much risk of prolapse
>>2749033
>you will never
>even if she was real you could never because cats don't sweat
>>2749495
I both agree with you, and disagree. More drawfags is good, and I wouldn't mind the fursona thing if people weren't completely dialed in on certain fursonas like /fit/lynx. I'm just tired of the same fursonas over and over
>>2749515
it's very good
>>2749552
Who is using mspaint?
Has dog-blow-job Anon delivered yet?
>>2749542
Please tell me you're shitposting
-d
>>2749581
Shitty art of random animals no one cares about.
>>2749563
I don't know. Its driving the discussion away from Zootopia, the story, the characters, and more towards the artists, the posters, and their in-group discussions and personalities.
I still like the movie.
>>2749584
Literally no one except people asking if he has delivered has mentioned that in over a week.
Let. It. Go.
>>2749480
its 23:44 in my shithole of country
>yfw Zootopia 2 focuses on Bellwether's story after she gets out of jail
>>2749536
Probably idea sharing. Brainstorming?
>>2749524
>which I'm sure you have, they're fucking everywhere)
Not out here in the triburrows they aren't. It's basically all rabbits out here, and I don't interact much when I'm in the city.
>>2749514
It's just lunch, anyways. Lunch isn't a date, right? It's only a date if it's dinner.
>>2749460
Just take it easy, enjoy yourself, and try not to get caught up in the whole "other species" thing. i know it can be a tough to ignore but just try to look at him for who he is.
>>2749536
Genderbending
>>2749563
I've got no problem with draw fags, but there's almost a RP thread here, but instead of text its with art. We've got drunk goat interacting with weaver. We got some donkey guy interacting with a motorcycle fucker.
Like I get it, you rolled a animal and drew it. But ffs we don't need to see a 20 page story of how they had coffee with random animal #2.
>>2749480
1:46 here, anon...
>>2749593
Wait 'til the Blu-ray comes out then, that will get the treads more 'on topic' for awhile. After that its the slow fall into madness which cannot be stopped.
>>2749591
Then leave the thread if you don't like it anon, no one is forcing you to be here.
>>2749495
last time i tried something with actual effort put into it, no one cared, so might as well just autism it up and get the same results
if you're not a major drawfag no one cares about stuff you make anyway
>>2749563
>>2749495
What about stuff like this?
>>2749603
Ah. In the country clock it would be 0:01 (is that right? I'm from Burgerland.)
It's after midnight.
>>2749507
Did the game ever get patched to not run like shit?
>>2749619
Oh fuck why is it so hot
11:47 PM here, prime comfy hours
Overwatch, GoT, Zistopia, and other distractions. Finally making the Coyote now. If the anon who drew it initially then the guide to help me is here. Thank you! I also hope you like it.
>>2749603
>24 hour clock
Eurotrash Canadian, or Illegal?
>>2749624
How late you going, Anon? I'm aiming for 3-4.
I've got insomnia.
As fun as this is, you guys are right in that it's starting to choke out other content
This should be the doodling in the margins, the side-gags in between comics and stories, not the main attraction
I've got a lot of ideas I got to get back to, so I'll shelve the antelope for now and get back to the bunny and the fox
and the sheep, of course
>>2749645
This is adorable.
Kinda wish there was more genderswap...
Scars are cool
>>2749652
That's also military, anon.
mostly nude Fit Judy to appear in Zootermission soon. Probably not tonight since I'm a little tired
anyone want to take any guesses as to Nick's dialogue at the end?
>>2748589
to be fair I'm actually super cute irl desu, everyone should fuck me all the time forever
god damn I'm so glad timid blue tiger is getting art, he's the god damn cutest
>>2749652
Mexican, I've always used that systems, allows less mistakes and shit
>>2749658
Wow, that's pretty cool of you Weaver
>inb4 it's just an anon I'm actually that gullible
>>2749563
Yeah, it's harder writing about the actual characters while staying IN character and on model though. I already have a hard time being funny and my art isn't that good to compensate, it just seemed like there was a lot of fit discussion and I wanted to reflect that.
>>2749672
I'd forgotten about that little piece of info. I'm so used to just relying on Burgerland time.
I love all the great drawfags that post here, but I'll be damned if it isn't demotivating as all hell to a shitty drawfag like myself
>>2749608
It's only a date if you make it one.
Fine then, a non- traditional pred from farmlands? How about our good friend the mouse? They're technically omnis, but give them anything smaller than them...
>>2749362
>He dropped what he was doing and made it his way over as fast as he could. As he entered the third house, he knew what he was going to see.
This is very much tell instead of show. I would revise this sentence. You could take this chance to characterize him a bit. How hard is he running? Is he shocked? Does he see this all the time? Why is he running if they were just bodies? Maybe he knows them? What is he thinking. Again, this is a GREAT chance for some characterizing.
>“Damn it all,” he said softly, “they hid. When they smelled the smoke, they just hid under their bed...”
Damn, nice. This is good.
>“It's okay. Everyone's first body is rough, and it never gets easier,”
Either it does, or our investigator here was one stone-cold sunnuvabitch from the start (Important for fleshing out a character)
>He need not have worried.
Revise this, it's tell, not show. You can still keep the sentiment though
>“Put him down or I will be forced to put YOU down!”
Dialog is good, but this line is very ugly to read. You have a knack for very punchy dialog, I believe you can fix this one.
>The polar bear roared, but after fighting the fire and crying his soul to the heavens, he was spent.
Good, but could be even punchier. This is cliche as it is.
"He roared in frustration, thrashing in his teammates iron grasp. Too many charred hours spent on the blaze and too many tears spent at the foot of two dead children, and his body went limp." Is how I'd do it.
>>2749658
Whatever floats your boat, man. I'm sure it will be enjoyable regardless
>>2749654
Fuck, i've remembered that i have to answer 30 questions about computers and i don't have any shit...
>>2749658
I'd love to see more Bellwether/Shep stuff. Maybe like stuff before the events of the movie.
>>2749658
Thank you weaver. I don't mind some art from time to time but we're really becoming lost in the OCs here.
I mean I'm fine with anon drawing his fox and anon drawing his bat and anon drawing his fitcat or whatever but ffs its becoming overpowering.
Thank you for stepping up and telling us to shut up.
>>2749658
Are you serious weaver-kun? Are you going to make more Judy/Nick content? It would make me vera happy :)
>>2749658
It has to be said:
I love weav-elope.
...but there has been a massive topic shift. Its not your fault, you didn't ask to make such a big splash, you didn't run for President of the thread, but you have a huge following, and you could lead us over a cliff without knowing it.
A salute to you, dude. You're comfy as fuck.
>>2749658
But...
>>2749706
...They run on some form of electricity?
>>2749608
Like the other anon said. Only if you make it one.
On another note, can you tell us what you think of this foxy guy? Sounds like you two must be friends at the least.
>>2749671
>discussion about the movie in like 90% of posts
Yeah, ok anon. I agree that the RP fags are annoying, but they were here first, it's not like they're invading your personal threads.
>>2749699
>“It was way more than I could afford and I was going into the red on it. I thought that since the new Leopards are known for electrical issues, I could just say it caught fire! I'd get out my lease and get the insurance money too!”
What's the point of him confessing to this guy, and then this guy not getting a statement or something and whisking him on his way to let the courts handle it? This scene feels out of place.
> Autry's house and car linking him to the fire, and the booking team at the precinct got enough residue off of him to make the case ironclad.
And also the literal confession
>silently sobbed
Avoid rhyming in sentences as often as possible.
>in this forsaken city...
He alternates between very proper and very 'gritty' dialogue, if that makes sense. One minute he's swearing a storm, the next he's reading a script. I'd change this to fit his earlier personality.
Overall thoughts: Great writing. I think you nail down the tone and the grit REALLY well. I can absolutely see this coming to life. You've got a great economy of words, really punchy dialogue, and overall I can tell the talent is there.
Some minor edits that need to be made, nothing that you wont be able to handle. Like I said, this story really comes to life, and you've got some very "Noire" sounding prose, if that makes sense. Let me know what you think of my edits.
Also I'd like to shill my fic again for posterity
https://archiveofourown.org/works/6682150/chapters/15520003
>>2749563
>dialed in on certain fursonas like /fit/lynx
but fit girls are cute to and fun to draw
>>2749671
I'm just trying to create as much content as possible to flex my creative muscles...
>Lies. Im still on the 2lbs.
But i'm trying to learn, and trying to create a piece within the time frame of a thread is a challenge that I like to take.
As for my trying to kidnap Weaver..
>Well it doesn't really count if he isn't in on it.
Progress!
>>2749658
Assuming this is the real weav, yeah this is a good step in the right direction.
As much as I'm enjoying drawing my own character and others' (donkanon where you at), it just feels very low effort and not Zootopia enough.
I think OC should still be around, but toned down, and utilizing the world of Zootopia instead of just oneshot funny animals.
>>2749611
Y-yeah. Who he is.
ohh yeah, there's the nerves getting to me.
>>2749698
L-look, it's just different with a fox. We're evolved, but they're still designed from the word go to eat bunnies.
I-it's just something instinctual.
>>2749742
Oh. Well, basically, he called me cute, I yelled at him for calling me cute, and I guess he takes a route by my family's stand in the city every day because I saw him again, apologized, and he gave me his number. So he invited me out to lunch when I'm back in the city tomorrow when I texted him.
>>2749658
Thanks weaver, I think I speak for a lot of us when I sat that I think it's probably for the best. But on the other hand, if you prefer doing stuff like this, no one can stop you, nor should they try.
>>2749672
Shit you're right.
>>2749681
>Mexican
>>2749729
Computer building, from the electronics technician career.
>>2749658
Now I don't know if i should continue the comic or not...
Seems like Weaver is putting his foot down.
>>2749658
I need more kaiju fuckmeat, ASAP
A few weeks ago I noticed a bunch of anons posting things about self-betterment and doing things "for Judy" or whatnot, and I thought it was crazy. Recently, however, I have been inspired to run and practice my instruments more than ever before, and I finally feel like I have a purpose. I always think to myself "do it for Judy." Am I going insane? Why am I inspired by a cartoon rabbit to be a better person?
>>2749828
I want to see what you can do, Anon.
>>2749836
MAKE AMERICA GREAT AGAIN
>>2749860
Strive for your ideals.
Judy is just an idea.
Push forward with what motivates you.
>>2749761
>>2749845
Continue it if you want
It shouldn't matter what others are doing anyway, just have fun with it.
>>2749845
As cool as he is, weaver is not the supreme leader of /zoog/. Do whatever the fuck you want, anon, just looks like you won't get weaver participating.
>>2749811
>>2749796
Don't get me wrong I'm having fun with this
But I also have a lot of fun drawing awkward sexual tension with coworkers, and exploratory romance, and mended marriages sealed with wild, painful, cathartic make-up sex
been a few days since I made comics anyway
>>2749845
Not at all anon
I'm not the boss of you or anyone else and I'm not the arbiter of these threads
I'm just doing for me
>Reading zootopia smut on ffn
>Its not bad
>But keeps throwing in random references during the sex scene
Why
Why would you do this. Thats so unsexy its not funny.
>>2749759
All good, and I needed them. It's been a while since I had written, and I have never written any kind of crime drama before.
I can tell you exactly what my train of thought was on that last part:
>Ooo, this sounds good. "God, please give me strength to survive this God Damn city."
>...wait.
I just wrote myself into a corner. Should have scrapped it and rewrote it.
>>2749873
Don't get me wrong I'll work on it, but it will be on paper and covered with smudges and erase marks.
>>2749803
>it's different with a fox
Ugh. Look, if you're interested in him, be interested. But if you're gonna be prejudiced, call off the lunch, or date, or whatever you want it to be. He obviously thinks you're "cute" (and I'm not using that as a slur, by the by, I'm using it the way every other species uses it, you weirdos), and is able too look across the gap to find that attraction. If you can't do the same, you shouldn't waste his time.
>>2749892
ARE YOU FUCKING BERNIELOVER OR NOT
>>2749875
BUILD
>>2749860
I do the same but for Nick.
I see it as harnessing and redirecting my autism t.b.h.
>>2749927
A
>>2749918
>ARE YOU FUCKING BERNIELOVER OR NOT
I'm not Bernielover, I'm weaver
>Doug didn't care to ask why she had him tweak the nighthowler recipe.
>He just made the stuff.
>Dawn coolly looked at the red fox from her closet, the janitorial pred entering the room cheerily.
>He matched the targets proportions after all; the opportunity was simply too good.
>"Morning Dawn! Say, you look a little perkier around the wool today. Changing up the old routine?"
>"Yeah." She swiveled in her chair and took three strides before firing the shot. "Making some executive decisions."
>The periwinkle splat against his skin melted away in seconds as he felt his body grow intensely hot.
>Quickly the small sheep ran over to him and clicked a collar around his neck.
>Pushing him to the ground, she put a hoof on the leash to hold him against the floor.
>"Sorry, but I've decided I don't want to share an office. It's a shame too, for a filthy snapjaw, I really did kind of like you."
>"So I'm going to give you a little gift before having you sent into early retirement."
>His mind was blank and serene as placid ocean for miles when he scented her
>Still laying on the floor of the closet, he dozily let his tongue roll from his mouth as he felt he pants and shirt pulled from his burning up form
>He felt a pair of hooves gently teasing at his now throbbing cock for just an instant before she stepped away and he moaned in need.
>A snap of the leash brought his snout to her pussy lips, the scent making him drool and earning a harsh bark of laughter from her
>"God you're just a disgusting savage at the core like all those other beasts. Eat up, carnivore."
>>2749939
the...you were looking for the.
>>2749942
HE DOESN'T DENY IT
>>2749892
Does this mean we are going to get some more Shep Dawn smut?
>>2749939
>BRIDGE
Fucking edgelords.
>>2749860
Push to achieve anon, I'm pushing to improve myself as well. By any means necessary, try everything right?
>>2749658
As much as I WANT more fox and bun, you don't owe anyone anything. Do what you want bruh.
>>2749860
We saw Judy struggle with her hardships, and when she went on to conquer them we saw that she was truly happy, I think it's cause we want to follow in her footsteps (or pawsteps if you prefer) to become happy too. Atleast that's how I'm following it...
Goodnight faggots.
Don't try and murder everyone with OCs or something while I'm gone.
>>2749942
Dammit dude.
>>2747456
Okay this time I spent WAY too much time
Also dang man don't be ashamed you're the one working in traditional, I'm taking the easy way out with ctrl+z, copy paste, and layers
(Also don't worry about it, if I'm drawing a character wrong or could draw it better let me know, I'm not really good at drawing zootopia related stuff)
>>2749897
No worries. Critiques are always good.
>I just wrote myself into a corner. Should have scrapped it and rewrote it.
The last part or the whole story?
The appearance of the pig felt kinda thrown in to wrap up the story, same goes for the confession. it's not organic, if you catch my drift. But you can still make this work
>>2749892
I hope focusing more on the canon ZT universe doesn't preclude OC characters like Shep
those two are adorable and make Dawn's personality shine more.
not to mention the pred/prey dynamic
>>2749949
Fuck that's good anon.
>>2749979
You have a point there, anon. I know Judy wouldn't want me making excuses. Her success was bolstered by her lovable and believable personality.
Site usage stats after a Zistopia update are always fun.
Afaik, this is the largest spike ever that the site has seen. feelsgoodman.
>>2749902
You mean like this?
I have an entire sketchbook of pages like this.
I'm completely self taught, all i do is doodle a bunch.
>>2749990
>filename
IT'S A MASTAPIECE
>>2749949
Who is the artist of your image? Does he have a tumblr or public art display?
Look what showed up today!
>inb4 cum on it/hotglue/etc
I rolled a rabbit on the generator a few days ago, didn't save a pic of it but whatever. It doesn't say what kind of rabbit I am, so I get to choose right?
I choose Flemish Giant Rabbit.
>>2749990
I'd say that's time well spent man. It looks good man.
>>2750000
Nice quads anon. You beat the nonexistent giganigga.
>>2750029
Burn it!
>>2749990
>Yes I would like a number one, with extra spaghetti sauce!
>>2749891
Damn... cause that would've been really cool..
Like im pretty sure i would jizz my pants if Weaver drew my hyena!
>>2750006
Thanks, knowing comfy J likes greentexts too made me wanna crank one out before bed.
>>2750027
I wish I knew anon, it's a lovely picture.
>>2750024
Yeah I've been doodling too but your art is better than mine. Smoother lines and less obvious mistakes.
>>2750024
Any chance you can tell me how to draw from the elbow and shoulder while keeping my arm stable?
>>2749991
I meant that last critique over that tone shift in his dialogue. I had always intended for the actual arsonist to show up again so I could have him threatened by the firefighter. Same for the confession; I wanted the story to end with the knowledge that two kids died because some unrelated dipshit tried to pull an insurance scam in his own garage.
>>2750029
Cum on it!
>>2749911
>calls me prejudiced
>calls bunnies weirdos for taking offense at being called cute
While I do see your point, I think you're missing the valuable context that this is not about fucking him, it's about the fact that a few days ago I wouldn't have given him the time of day.
It's called progress, anon.
>>2750029
if dubs shear it
>>2750029
Wow, the Bellwether looks a lot better than the Nick and Judy plushes. That's a bit sad.
>>2750029
>inb4
Better not
>>2750062
>bunny anon has actual character development
I can get behind this OC. Maybe a little.
>>2749641
I think your computer just sucks
>>2750032
>that's a biiig bunny
