Sup guys, this is the continuation of our story centered around Thr'ull and his tribe of bullywugs.
Rules: Ties are determined by first post
No rerolls
Remember to vote for anons suggestions
Have fun!
Next post is a screencap of last choice
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Part 2/2
I'm here
>welcome back
>>46983859
Glad to see you again! Good to know the story is enticing enough !
>>46984115
You're a very good writer
>>46983722
Fudge. I'm about to leave. Glad it's back.
>>46984150
Thanks man!
Anyways we still need votes on what course of action Thr'ull should take, I don't mind bumping the thread until more people come if you guys want
>>46984195
>C)See what they do
The last one blew up, right?
>>46984270
We don't wanna lose our source of knowledge, although if they could disable it reverse engineering could be sweet
Let's see what they do
>>46984270
The last one did indeed explode
>>46984351
There was also different types
>this could be something we haven't encountered
Thr'ull held up a webbed hand to halt his guards, they could catch the small ones if they tried to flee through he swamps, but the strange contraption concerned him, he had seen the damage it inflicted, the smoldering hole in the road quite vivid in his mind. The diminutive prisoners approached the contraption and spoke to it quickly, their voices higher than normal. As they approached the chittering grew louder and a pulsing blue core appeared in the center. Thr'ull readied himself to flea and instructed his tribe to do he same win a worried croak. "It's us, it's us!" The gnomes shouted at the machine , "Deactivate! Deactivate!"
A roll of 45 or greater results in the machine disarming
A roll of 44 or less results catastrophically
Rolled 16 (1d100)
>>46984586
I'll try rolling
>it usually doesn't work for me
>>46984624
Danm
>the one time it works
I'd like to bump and wait for the other guys before making anymore descions
The gnomes cautiously stepped closer to the contraption and the chittering seemed to soften. Relieved one of them reached to touch the smooth surface, as his fingers brushed the cold metal the chattering rose to an almost deafening volume and before anyone could react the small prisoners were engulfed in blue light. Thr'ull and the other bullywugs were thrown back by the blast , one rolled almost into the pond. As Thr'ull stood up, his head groggy, he saw the devastation left by the mysterious blue light. Where the gnomes had stood but moments ago was a smoldering hole and nearby tree and bushes had been blasted into tooth picks. He looked around him and saw that bone of his tribe seemed seriously hurt and silently thanked Malu for her protection.
A) investigate crater
B) Ensure tribe is OK
C) Other
Sorry I'm on my phone right now, so I'm slow to type
>>46985083
B then A
>>46985122
Let's wait for the others though
We could play untap while we wait?
>>46985286
Give me a few minutes, but I don't mind playing game or two. I'll have to leave at about 1230 to go get /fit/ but I'll be back
>>46985378
ready when you are
>>46985449
I made a game called "saurn118 join"
>>46985661
That's cool
>>46985897
Fuck off cyoa's are allowed here
>>46985897
sick spelling senpai
Will return in about an hour, hopefully the thread picks up. Thanks for being in my story!
Have a bump
>>46985897
Fuck you
€£¥₩
I've got some pretty cool wallpapers if anyone wants
>>46983722
Oh shit I was here for the very start of this. Last I was here we'd finished killing our first troll, anyone want to give me a synopsis of what's happened since then?
>>46985913
This is a quest under disguise of a CYOA.
>>46987087
Umm
>I'm not sure if it was archived
>>46987087
A ton of shit has happened
Will be ready to QM again in about 15 minutes. If someone could please fill in this anon>>46987087
Itd be much appreciated
>>46987502
I can't type fast at all+I'm on my phone
>did you archive the other threads?
>>46987527
I did not, I actually don't know bow to do that
altight im back, Did we settle on an option?
>>46987883
Forgot to add my name
>>46985122
This is my vote
>>46987895
I'll go with yours.
>>46987087
You still here?
>>46987944
Yes, I'm here
>>46987965
Ok, have you voted?
Thr'ull turned to look at the tribesmen who had been caught in the blast with him, most of them were already standing if a little unsteady, The crippled sentry lay a few feet from the pond, the elder female at his side. Thr'ull hopped over and the elder female informed him that the sentry was alright, he was merely unconscious from the blast. Thr'ull breathed a sigh of relief, thankful that none of his own were hurt. He looked back at the crater and saw most of his tribe gathered around it, they picked through the muck and debris silently but found no sign of the small prisoners or the shiny contraption. As Thr'ull picked through the area he managed to recover the sword and metal piece the intelligent hunter had used to communicate, but the spear and dart were nowhere to be found.
A) Check on the horse
B) Check on the remaining prisoner
C) Other
Resources
Food" 350 Units
Time: Dusk
Population: 7+8 Juveniles (Sexually mature in 3 turns)+ Thr'ull+ 1 Wounded Human prisoner+ 1 stallion
Materials: 10 units of Troll bone, 1 units of Troll hide, 4 units of stone, small bundle of vines, 10 dead turtles, 100 units of metal parts, 44 units of shiny coins
Tools: 6 Troll bone spears. 1 Crude Dart Flinger, 9 Bone darts, 4 swords, 2 small crossbows, 1 Long bow, 10 arrows, 23 bolts, 1 Master-crafted Forge
Religion: Covenant of The Forge, Covenant of Water
Boons: Ember of the Forge, Blessing of Fertility (+5 fertility in water, +10 if its pure), Blessing of Rejuvenation (+1 regeneration in water, +5 healing in water)
Why are you guys not on /qst/ ?
>>46988175
>A) Check on the horse
>>46988209
Why aren't you there, Goober?
>>46988260
>>46988318
tie breaker in 2 minutes
Thr'ull heard croaking in the distance and turned to face the sound, two of his hunters were arguing among themselves how to best move the great beast. The stallion had become frigthened by the sound of the explosion and bolted from its stick bed, thankfully the yoke that tied it to the carriage had broken and neither of the two had suffered any injury. As Thr'ull neared the horse and hunters he saw that the beast was taking long draughts from a nearby pond. Croaking to his hunters Thr'ull demonstrated how to lead the beast by its reins and explained its affinity for swamp reeds. Once the animal finished it's drink Thr'ull led it back to its bed and sent the hunters to examine the broken yoke. The horses harness was torn and the metal binding had been torn from the damp wood of the carriage, Thr'ull was at a loss as to how to fix the yoke and even the intelligent hunter offered no ideas, upset Thr'ull resigned himself to the fact that the carriage would not be moving for some time.
A) Investigate Treasure chest
B) Check on Human prisoner
C) Forge something
D) Other
Resources
Food" 350 Units
Time: Dusk
Population: 7+8 Juveniles (Sexually mature in 3 turns)+ Thr'ull+ 1 Wounded Human prisoner+ 1 stallion
Materials: 10 units of Troll bone, 1 units of Troll hide, 4 units of stone, small bundle of vines, 10 dead turtles, 100 units of metal parts, 44 units of shiny coins
Tools: 6 Troll bone spears. 1 Crude Dart Flinger, 9 Bone darts, 4 swords, 2 small crossbows, 1 Long bow, 10 arrows, 23 bolts, 1 Master-crafted Forge
Religion: Covenant of The Forge, Covenant of Water
Boons: Ember of the Forge, Blessing of Fertility (+5 fertility in water, +10 if its pure), Blessing of Rejuvenation (+1 regeneration in water, +5 healing in water)
>>46988574
>B) Check on Human prisoner
Thr'ull thought it would be best to abandon the broken carriage for now and begin to deal with the problems he could solve. With the tiny prisoners gone the only hope he had of learning the secrets of the shiny pieces was the large wounded brute. He fetched his ancient staff and hopped over to the pond where the elder was tending to the large humanoid, as Thr'ull approached the elder met his eyes with a forlorn gaze. She informed him that the prisoner was not in the best condition, she had been able to dull the pain but could not remove the spearhead without risking killing him. If the weapon was not removed soon, even if the waters healed him, the prisoner would be paralyzed and useless.
A) Attempt to remove the spearhead
B) Kill the prisoner
C) Leave him be
D) Other
Resources
Food" 350 Units
Time: Dusk
Population: 7+8 Juveniles (Sexually mature in 3 turns)+ Thr'ull+ 1 Wounded Human prisoner+ 1 stallion
Materials: 10 units of Troll bone, 1 units of Troll hide, 4 units of stone, small bundle of vines, 10 dead turtles, 100 units of metal parts, 44 units of shiny coins
Tools: 6 Troll bone spears. 1 Crude Dart Flinger, 9 Bone darts, 4 swords, 2 small crossbows, 1 Long bow, 10 arrows, 23 bolts, 1 Master-crafted Forge
Religion: Covenant of The Forge, Covenant of Water
Boons: Ember of the Forge, Blessing of Fertility (+5 fertility in water, +10 if its pure), Blessing of Rejuvenation (+1 regeneration in water, +5 healing in water)
>>46988870
I would like to try A, do we have to roll?
>>46988870
>A) Attempt to remove the spearhead
What do we have to lose?
Thr'ull gave the elder permission to remove the spearhead, the man was dead regardless and the chance that he might be useful was enticing to Thr'ull. The elder nodded and sent her juvenile assistant to fetch some materials. Shortly after the young female reappeared cradling a turtle shell, a stone, and a few swamp plants. The elder made a paste of the plants and forced the prisoner to eat it, soon he lay limp in the pond and they were ready to be gin the procedure.
A roll of 70 or greater will result in success
A roll of 69>50 will result in paralysis
A roll of 49> will result in immediate death
use 1 100 sided dice
Rolled 19 (1d100)
>>46989024
Rolled 60 (1d100)
>>46989024
:b
Rolled 25 (1d100)
>>46989024
Here goes nothing.
Geez, the dice do like us.
>>46989095
*not
The elder reopened the humans back and dug her hand into the wound, after a few moments she found purchase with the base of the spear. Slowly she pulled, doing her best to cause no more damage than was needed. After a few seconds the spear caught on something and her tugging caused it to shift inside the body, she lost grip and fell back into the pond, her hand soaked with blood. Rancid, murky water flooded into the gaping hole and the human began to gasp and sputter despite the anesthetic . Frantically Thr'ull and the two females tried to pull him from the water but it was too late, as the prisoner writhed and flailed the spear dug itself deeper into his flesh, eventually working its way between his vertebrae. With a last wet gasp the humanoid slumped, limp, back into the pond.
A) Butcher the corpse
B) Bury it
C) Burn it
D) Other
Resources
Food" 350 Units
Time: Dusk
Population: 7+8 Juveniles (Sexually mature in 2 turns)+ Thr'ull+ 1 stallion
Materials: 10 units of Troll bone, 1 units of Troll hide, 4 units of stone, small bundle of vines, 10 dead turtles, 100 units of metal parts, 44 units of shiny coins
Tools: 6 Troll bone spears. 1 Crude Dart Flinger, 9 Bone darts, 4 swords, 2 small crossbows, 1 Long bow, 10 arrows, 23 bolts, 1 Master-crafted Forge
Religion: Covenant of The Forge, Covenant of Water
Boons: Ember of the Forge, Blessing of Fertility (+5 fertility in water, +10 if its pure), Blessing of Rejuvenation (+1 regeneration in water, +5 healing in water)
>>46989265
>C) Burn it
Put him in the forge.
The elder let out a sad croak as the humanoid fell back into the murky water, it might have been a prisoner but the female detested bloodshed and death nontheless. Thr'ull was angry for much different reasons, once again the secrets of the humanoids technology remained elusive as ever and now he was forced to deal with a rather large corpse. He ordered a nearby hunter to pull the man from the pond as he contemplated his options. There wasn't enough meat to justify butchering him and a grave would be far too much work. He considered using the body as bait for an ambush along the road but decided they were not well enough equipped to take on a moving caravan. Finally he decided that the quickest method of ridding himself of this corpse would be to burn it, and what better place than in the forge? Thr'ull called over the rest of the hunters and instructed they carry the corpse to the forge. Soon they stood before the great stone structure but before Thr'ull could give the command a croak broke the silence. It was the intelligent hunter, he reasoned that they shoudl search the prisoner and take anything of value, lest it be lost in the fire.
A) Burn the corpse
B) Reprimand the hunter for speaking out of turn
C) Listen to the hunter
D) Other
Resources
Food" 350 Units
Time: Dusk
Population: 7+8 Juveniles (Sexually mature in 3 turns)+ Thr'ull+ 1 Wounded Human prisoner+ 1 stallion
Materials: 10 units of Troll bone, 1 units of Troll hide, 4 units of stone, small bundle of vines, 10 dead turtles, 100 units of metal parts, 44 units of shiny coins
Tools: 6 Troll bone spears. 1 Crude Dart Flinger, 9 Bone darts, 4 swords, 2 small crossbows, 1 Long bow, 10 arrows, 23 bolts, 1 Master-crafted Forge
Religion: Covenant of The Forge, Covenant of Water
Boons: Ember of the Forge, Blessing of Fertility (+5 fertility in water, +10 if its pure), Blessing of Rejuvenation (+1 regeneration in water, +5 healing in water)
>>46989705
>C) Listen to the hunter
Thr'ull listened to the hunters idea and and agreed to its validity, this hunter was proving to be far more useful than Thr'ull had ever imagined and he made a mental note of this. Thr'ull instructed the hunters to search the body and set everything they found aside. This search proved fruitful and the bullywugs were soon the proud owners of 2 new daggers, a small pouch of tiny coins and a suit of damaged leather armor. Feeling the search was complete Thr'ull ordered that the body be burned in the forge as a sacrifice to Tode. The hunters hoisted the body and tossed it into the roaring flame. In seconds the corpse began to burn and turn to ash, such was the intensity of the heat, and before long there was noting left but the acrid smoke pouring from the forge. As Thr'ull turned to return to the pond he heard the great voice of Tode roar all around him. "YOU DEFILE MY GIFTS FROGMAN?" the god roared angrily, " WHAT SAY YOU TO YOUR GOD? THAT I SHOULD NOT STRIKE YOU DOWN WHERE YOU SQUAT?"
A) Beg for mercy
B) Explain the situation
C) Defend your actions
D) Other
Resources
Food" 350 Units
Time: Dusk
Population: 7+8 Juveniles (Sexually mature in 2 turns)+ Thr'ull+ 1 stallion
Materials: 10 units of Troll bone, 1 units of Troll hide, 4 units of stone, small bundle of vines, 10 dead turtles, 100 units of metal parts, 44 units of shiny coins
Tools: 6 Troll bone spears. 1 Crude Dart Flinger, 9 Bone darts, 4 swords, 2 small crossbows, 1 Long bow, 10 arrows, 23 bolts, 1 Master-crafted Forge
Religion: Covenant of The Forge, Covenant of Water
Boons: Ember of the Forge, Blessing of Fertility (+5 fertility in water, +10 if its pure), Blessing of Rejuvenation (+1 regeneration in water, +5 healing in water)
>>46990165
B
>he seemed reasonable before, hopefully he Is now
>>46990165
>B) Explain the situation
Thr'ull cowered and bowed his head to the ground, from the corner of his alrge eyes he saw the other members of the tribe do the same. He croaked nervously and explained the situation, claiming that the humanoid was a spoil of war and was being sacrificed to him. Thr'ull also explained that they were trying to uncover the secrets of the shiny pieces the humanoids carried in an effort to forge the masterworks he demanded of them.
A roll of 50 or greater is required to convince the angry god
A roll of 49>30 results in an irritated Tode
A roll of 29< results catastrophically
Resources
Food" 350 Units
Time: Night
Population: 7+8 Juveniles (Sexually mature in 2 turns)+ Thr'ull+ 1 stallion
Materials: 10 units of Troll bone, 1 units of Troll hide, 4 units of stone, small bundle of vines, 10 dead turtles, 100 units of metal parts, 44 units of shiny coins
Tools: 6 Troll bone spears. 1 Crude Dart Flinger, 9 Bone darts, 4 swords, 2 small crossbows, 1 Long bow, 10 arrows, 23 bolts, 1 Master-crafted Forge
Religion: Covenant of The Forge, Covenant of Water
Boons: Ember of the Forge, Blessing of Fertility (+5 fertility in water, +10 if its pure), Blessing of Rejuvenation (+1 regeneration in water, +5 healing in water)
Rolled 14 (1d100)
>>46990359
Roll
Rolled 15 (1d100)
>>46990359
Talking
>>46990433
Danm
luck is not with our bullywugs today
Tode roared and a gout of flame shot out from the forge and set a nearby tree ablaze. Thr'ull narrowly dodged another blast of fire that slammed into the ground behind him, leaving an impact crater of dried clay in its wake. Thr'ull remembered his first encounter with Tode and how he seemed to respect Malu, desperately Thr'ull Thought of a way to save his people from the enraged god.
A) Bow and Pray to Malu
B) Order a mass retreat
C) Stand up to Tode
D) Pray to Malu at the edge of the pond
E) Other
Resources
Food" 350 Units
Time: Night
Population: 7+8 Juveniles (Sexually mature in 1 turns)+ Thr'ull+ 1 stallion
Materials: 10 units of Troll bone, 1 units of Troll hide, 4 units of stone, small bundle of vines, 10 dead turtles, 100 units of metal parts, 44 units of shiny coins
Tools: 6 Troll bone spears. 1 Crude Dart Flinger, 9 Bone darts, 4 swords, 2 small crossbows, 1 Long bow, 10 arrows, 23 bolts, 1 Master-crafted Forge
Religion: Covenant of The Forge, Covenant of Water
Boons: Ember of the Forge, Blessing of Fertility (+5 fertility in water, +10 if its pure), Blessing of Rejuvenation (+1 regeneration in water, +5 healing in water)
>>46990816
D
>has anyone been injured?
>>46990936
As far as Thr'ull knows not yet
Thr'ull thouht it would be best to summon Malu by a water source and so hopped as fast as he could to the pond, narrowly dodging a fire ball as he did so. More trees around him erupted into flame and a rogue fire ball hit a geyser of swamp gas, creating a jet of flame that flew high into the sky. The light from Tode's wrath could easily be seen for miles. Thr'ull dropped to his knees beside the pond and desperately began pleading for Malu to show her mercy, seeing his actions the elder female dropped to her knees and followed suit. Soon the waters began to ripple and Malu's face appeared on the surface.
A) Ask her to calm Tode
B) Beg her for mercy
C) Demand that she calm her husband
D) Other
Resources
Food" 350 Units
Time: Night
Population: 7+8 Juveniles (Sexually mature in 1 turns)+ Thr'ull+ 1 stallion
Materials: 10 units of Troll bone, 1 units of Troll hide, 4 units of stone, small bundle of vines, 10 dead turtles, 100 units of metal parts, 44 units of shiny coins
Tools: 6 Troll bone spears. 1 Crude Dart Flinger, 9 Bone darts, 4 swords, 2 small crossbows, 1 Long bow, 10 arrows, 23 bolts, 1 Master-crafted Forge
Religion: Covenant of The Forge, Covenant of Water
Boons: Ember of the Forge, Blessing of Fertility (+5 fertility in water, +10 if its pure), Blessing of Rejuvenation (+1 regeneration in water, +5 healing in water)
>>46991345
Let's go with B
Alright guys Ive got to go for a bit, real life is calling for me unfortuantely. Ill be back on later tonight no later than 9 if youd like to keep bumping the thread other wise ill post a new thread both here and on the twitter at
https://twitter.com/QMSaurn
Bumperoo
I think, if you've got resource management, decision trees and rolling, you're probably running a quest.
TL;DR?
Alright guys I'm back, sorry for having o vanish, real life can be a bitch at times
>>46993937
Ayy
>>46993838
TL;DR: Thr'ull leads a tribe of bullywugs in a desolate swamp. They fought and killed a juvenile troll after osg one of their own. They entered into a covenant with the god of the forge and goddess of water. After raiding a nearby humanoid camp and taking prisoners the bulywugs attempted to put their new forge to good use. The three prisoner have met grisly ends and the bullywugs have incurred the wrath of the forge god.
Should i continue with the story or wait for more activity int he thread?
>>46994208
Continue
>>46994208
Mmm if you continue the thread will probably pick up
Thr'ull pressed his face into the mud and croaked out his pleas to the goddess. As he prayed the goddess gradually began to take form, as her bosom rose from the water Thr'ul felt a few drops of rain on his moist skin. Before long the drizzle became a heay rain and the deafening roars of Tode began to fade. "These creatures are not so deserving of your ire yet my husband." The goddess cooed, "They have not wronged you out of spite or malice, there is time for punishment and time for forgiveness." The flames in the forge died down and Tode's voice could be heard faintly over the staccato of the rain. "Perhaps you are right my goddess," he said solemnly, "But I will not tolerate disrespect from my subjects, you have felt my wrath, ensure you do not incur it again." With that the fires died down to a smoldering ember and Tode was gone.
A) Thank Malu
B) Ask her why Tode was so angry
C) Demand that she act sooner next time
D) Other
Resources
Food" 350 Units
Time: Night
Population: 7+8 Juveniles (Sexually mature in 1 turns)+ Thr'ull+ 1 stallion
Materials: 10 units of Troll bone, 1 units of Troll hide, 4 units of stone, small bundle of vines, 10 dead turtles, 100 units of metal parts, 44 units of shiny coins
Tools: 6 Troll bone spears. 1 Crude Dart Flinger, 9 Bone darts, 4 swords, 2 small crossbows, 1 Long bow, 10 arrows, 23 bolts, 1 Master-crafted Forge
Religion: Covenant of The Forge, Covenant of Water
Boons: Ember of the Forge, Blessing of Fertility (+5 fertility in water, +10 if its pure), Blessing of Rejuvenation (+1 regeneration in water, +5 healing in water)
>>46994651
D)
>thank them both
Sorry for being late with the responses i needed to get my story notes in order
Thr'ull kept his face pressed into the mud and thanked Malu for her mercy generously, soon the other members of the tribe followed him and a chorus of grateful croaking echoed through the swamo. Thr'ull also extended his thanks to Tode for giving them a second chance, understanding just how close they had come to being wiped out, and understanding just how small they really were to the likes of a god. " A lord who is not merciful is as unfit to rule as a lord who is not stern." Malu said soothingly, "I understood your intentions and so no malice behind them, but..." Her voice grew stern, "I will not save you should you cross him again any more than he will save you from me." She began to sink back into the water before adding, "We are merciful and just, fealty and respect garner rewards, heresy and neglect garner punishment." The rain stopped as she vanished, the pool returning to its original murky complexion. Thr'ull pulled himself from the mud once he was sure she had departed and surveyed the devastation Tode had wrought. Most of the surrounding trees burned like magnificent torches and many areas of the ground had been blasted into dusty clay, the dampness from the surrounding earth slowly seeping back into them. None of the tribe appeared injured although Thr'ull was distraught to see that Tode's wrath had reached their stockpile of sticks and troll hide, as well as the armor Thr'ull had created earlier. Thr'ull also noted that the fires from the trees and the sound of Tode's rage was sure to have carried for many miles, alerting who knows what tot he location of their encampment.
A) Move camp
B) Put out the fires
C) Rest for the night
D) Other
>>46995168
A, Lets just leave
>lets go across the road to the north into the unknown swamp
Answer locked in 2 minutes
>>46995236
actually lets rest first then do this
>>46995168
join my edh dog
>>46995336
Thats my wife playing not me, but shell join once shes done haha
>>46995366
ok lol
>your name changed back
Thr'ull understood that it would be wise to move their camp to a new pond, perhaps somewhere farther to the north, although he shuddered at the thought. None of his tribe had ever moved from this pond, not even as far back as the elder female could remember, he would be doing a first in all his tribe's history. But Thr'ull also understood the importance of rest and he could not make his tribe march through such an ordeal after suffering as they had. He croaked a speech to his followers informing them of his decision before dispatching some members to perform a few key tasks.
A) Gather vines and sticks make baskets
B) Gather vines to yoke the horse to the carriage
C) Set up a guard shift
Resources
Food" 350 Units
Time: Night
Population: 15+ Thr'ull+ 1 stallion
Materials: 10 units of Troll bone,, 4 units of stone, small bundle of vines, 10 dead turtles, 100 units of metal parts, 44 units of shiny coins
Tools: 6 Troll bone spears. 1 Crude Dart Flinger, 9 Bone darts, 4 swords, 2 small crossbows, 1 Long bow, 10 arrows, 23 bolts, 1 Master-crafted Forge
Religion: Covenant of The Forge, Covenant of Water
Boons: Ember of the Forge, Blessing of Fertility (+5 fertility in water, +10 if its pure), Blessing of Rejuvenation (+1 regeneration in water, +5 healing in water)
>>46995486
B
>i think im the only one left :(
>>46995529
it says there are 14 posters but the thread isnt very active, if anyone is here just make a quick post otherwise ill hold off on continuing
>>46995589
do you want to start a totally new civ thread?
>hopefully with more people
>>46995803
i dont mind, i was enjoying the bullywugs but the story is more dependent on you guys than me
>>46995813
agreed
>btw you are an amazing writer, is it a hobby of your?
>>46995836
yea i write alot in my spare time, first time someone who wasn't my wife told me i was any good though so thanks for that, this was my first civ/cyoa/rp whatever story too.
>>46995869
dude the spearhead scene was gruesome (in a good way) you can really paint a picture man
>link the new thread if you make one
>>46995896
will do and thanks again!
link to new civ thread
>>46995998
>>46996007
cool
>cya there
>>46987108
A CYOA is very similar to a /qst/...
