Anyone else here enjoy writing haiku or other forms of poetry? Here are a couple of mine:
>Enter a new world
>Put me on, surround your ears
>Remain in this world
>The sweet melody
>Passing through my ears at night
>Take me to the skies
I like those OP very cool. I wrote something the other day for shits and gigs. Tell me what you think
Cicadas' swelling sound
Serrated, serene surrounds
>Put me on
I really dislike this
>>29994131
yeah, i wrote a haiku about a tenga egg once
> Enigma unfolds,
> A plastic egg bursts open;
> The spider wants dick.
made my dick feel so good, highly recommended
>>29994188
It's supposed to imply wearing headphones
>Normies are in here
>A gun is strapped to my rear
>Shooting instills fear
>>29994169
You should add more.
>serrated serene surrounds
Something seems a little off imo
>>29994208
Kek
>>29994131
>The anti-proton bomb,
>Is a really big bomb.
>A super bomb.
>The stars and the universe,
>It'll blow them all away.
>That's what I believe.
Let's give it the old college try
>/r9k/ is dead
>That which we once loved is gone
>Only normies now
>I cannot endure
>The chasm opens wider
>It whispers to me
>Exit bag and pills
>To ensure my destruction
>This pain feels too real
>I sat at my desk
>My dick and balls fell asleep
>Odd sensation, man
>>29994211
ah, still doesn't make those words more aesthetically pleasing though.
>>29994131
I sit but I move
Some wish for entertainment
But stillness is best
>>29994729
Reminds de me of how fucking bored I am
>>29994131
>The sweet melody
Not Haiku related, but this isn't a Rilke reference by any chance?
>Doch alles, was uns anruehrt, dich und mich,
>nimmt uns zusammen wie ein Bogenstrich,
>der aus zwei Saiten eine Stimme zieht.
>Auf welches Instrument sind wir gespannt?
>Und welcher Geiger hat uns in der Hand?
>O suesses Lied.
(Rilke, 1907, probably doesn't translate well).
>>29994131
All poetry is indeed enjoyable, yes.
>I bathe in thy blood
>Hell darenot saith mine name
>Terror yet remains
Heres a poem I wrote using song titles
Kill Me
Please, Please Me
I'm Ready to Die
The Hell that is My Life
Consumed
My Willing Heart
I Can No Longer Endure
This Pain
This Pain Feels Real
I Cannot Go On
>enter poetry contest in school
>only one vote
>it's your own