Just tell me, is pic related hot or not?
Bumparooni
C'mon, there's gotta be at least one woman on here willing to read this
I thought you all loved erotic literature?
Fuck's sake, I have no one to read this before I send it and let me know if it's any good or not.
pls respond
I'm not going to read erotic fiction based on the fact that it goes against God. Lust is an ugly thing, save it for your future husband imho.
>>28658752
I'm a guy.
Hopefully this is my future wife.
>>28658260
That's some decidedly average erotica. The punctuation's fine, and there's nothing horrifically wrong with the writing. It should do for someone who doesn't read a lot.
Pic related, some 7/10 smut.
>>28659257
Alright, that's good to hear at least. I don't into smut, so this is my first real attempt at it.
I'm banking on it being hotter because she's picturing it and we have an actual relationship already.
