Can we get a poetry thread?
Everyone knows that poetry is a true robot hobby
I just wrote this and I would appreciate any constructive criticism
I wake in the morning to a warm breeze and sunlight filling my dark and dusty room
I manage to drag myself out of bed and out to my backyard where I let the atmosphere wash over me and all my anxieties spill out like a swoon
The air filled with life as all the frog birds and bugs come together to create a harmonious buzz
I lay down amongst all the grass leaves and stones to let it cover me in a blanket of fuzz
do you have any idea?
said the oldfag to the new
what it means to create OC on here
it's not soemthintg that we do
the practice is forgotten
what once was coined, been spent
and not on any worth
but instead to merely vent
the calumnity of children
who demanded crafted toys
exploiting what was art
as a means to give them voice
so i warn ye gentle caller
don't lend them of your ear
take off from this place swiftly
don't let the door hit your rear
>>28027640
No bad m8
I'd love to read more if you have any
>>28027422
I met a traveller from an antique land
Who said: "Two vast and trunkless legs of stone
Stand in the desert. Near them, on the sand,
Half sunk, a shattered visage lies, whose frown,
And wrinkled lip, and sneer of cold command,
Tell that its sculptor well those passions read
Which yet survive, stamped on these lifeless things,
The hand that mocked them and the heart that fed:
And on the pedestal these words appear:
'My name is Ozymandias, king of kings:
Look on my works, ye Mighty, and despair!'
Nothing beside remains. Round the decay
Of that colossal wreck, boundless and bare
The lone and level sands stretch far away
>>28027678
my doggerels a barking mutt
i merely pulled that out muh butt
>>28027706
Nice choice, best poem
