My gift of self is raped
My privacy is raked
And yet I find
And yet I find
Repeating in my head
If I can't be my own
I'd feel better dead
>>27681805
What's with all the sucky poetry lately?
The point is to tell something profound without using too many words. The point is not to tell something that could be said in a sentence in as many words as possible to form a poem.
Say it with me instead of writing this garbage poetry. It's quite simple and you need not extrapolate it unless you are writing a book.
>I want to die
>>27682994
It's a song. From the early 90s.
The picture is related.
>>27682994
1. That's not even what the fucking lyrics mean.
2. As someone who normally hates poetry, I think it's at least decent if not good.
>>27683178
I like it. Which song?
>>27683274
Nutshell by Alice in Chains.
>>27683178
>>27683220
Yeah I had it figured for a song. But it's funny when you judge a song as if it were poetry you would hate most songs. From a literary perspective most songs are garbage. The people writing them are definitely not poets.
>>27681805
Dirt>facelift>jar of flies
Git gud
