HEY PLEASE RATE THIS THINGY I WHIPPED UP. https://clyp.it/z2wdl0ub
ALSO DROP YOUR OWN SHIT IN THIS THREAD.
>>27269864
Oh come on, this isn't that shitty of a thread.
it's alright
originaux
>>27269864
The soundscape is too barren, too simplistic. It's amateurish. Try adding more complexity and maybe more variety to your samples.
Its obvious that you're trying to imitate the current trend of music. Which is to sound as slow and boring as possible.
You know I don't really understand why the music industry is going this route when most of its consumers are part of the generation that, on average, has the most diagnosis of ADHD than the previous generation. You'd think music these days would be fast and all over the place to please the ADHD consumers. Instead we are met with very slow, unoriginal, and boring soundscapes.
OP to answer your question, its boring. Its slow. Its clear you're trying to imitate the current trend of the music industry.
Try something original.
>>27269864
Too simplistic and repetitive.
It lack composition and chord progression. Plus there's is no drop but a 1/4 beat.
The mastering though is ok but you should add a bit more effect and fx.
9/10
Im a fan i would buy it
>>27271056
Thanks senpai
>>27271489
You're right, I would like to add some chords to it or something.
>>27271562
What would you propose as original in the realm of hip-hop/trap famjam? Nothing in trap is original nowadays.
>>27272768
haha really? Thanks man, it's not really that good though.
>>27271891
You're right, it's not finished and it needs more complexity for sure. I kind of like the simplicity though, but it needs something else.
>>27269864
I don't think certain parts fit together sonically, so it sounds muddled. Other than that, I really like the synth sound in the intro and throughout.
Here's my shit:
https://clyp.it/vtlag4bj
>>27273695
>https://clyp.it/vtlag4bj
Man, this would sound unbelievably good high. The guitar is really nice, how long you been doing this for?
>>27273791
Thanks! About 4 or 5 years now. Can't take credit for the guitar tho, it's a sample from this:
https://nounss.bandcamp.com/track/school-bus
w-e-e-ell, I try to make music. But I literelly can't make "music". Anyone have any tips on where to go from making random shit in Virtual DJ, hmu
https://soundcloud.com/irlit/party-time-is-over-murphy
