>life is suffering
>vidya is escape
>I think about my sister
>When I masturbate
Poetry thread
r8 my friend's edgy lyrics
>>25277396
they edgy af
>>25277396
what the fuck does half of this shit even mean?
>>25277761
Fuck me if i know tbqh
i see
>i'm so lost
>demon = so unique, different
>fire in my palm keeps beating = i'm so awesum
>some edgy comparisons
I just hope he grows out of this since he wants me in his "band" and make "music"
>>25277396
The syllabic patterns in that made my head literally hurt. Are they deaf?
>>25277941
quit talking shit about your friend's music and tell him yourself, you ratfaced sneak.
>>25278041
Chill out anon, i came here to get some opinions on it and i will pass them on to him.
Also it's not like he's a proffesional in any way, it's his first lyrics that he though are worth even writing down.
And he objectively has shit taste in music, not like i can do anything about it. I went through that phase too.
>>25278004
i see it now too
they need a good fix in that regard
>>25278004
>>25277396
In fact, fuck that, here's a totally nonsensical version that at least just isn't the rhythmic equivalent of a tripping toddler:
A-down I have befallen
From the behallow'd ground
That just is all a many
And is a place no more
An' after time had come of
For whistle in the dark
Silence a-hard to broken
Of throbbing of my heart
It's dark and drink of nothing
Of funny demon since
It's dark but fun is having
The beating in my palm
Converting word to rampage
Destroy the version sole
No embrace mortal ever
To try contain of more
