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Are you posting multiple threads with your shots or something?
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>>2824209
I have a lot more than the 4 that I posted in the other so I decided to switch to my own thread. It's looking like it will be maybe 10 or more.
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>>2824203
Would be better if your camera was level.
>>2824203
What's fascinating about this post is how unrepresentative that first image is of the set. It would be a much stronger set without this one.
I also find it interesting that all of the rest of the shots have to do with geometry and forced perspective and this first one just seems like lighting. Truly baffling.
>>2824992
Try harder, why don't you, professor?
>>2824992
nice job demonstrating the denotative meaning of overanalyzation
>>2824257
You coulda framed something really cool with that ceiling thing.
Bumping to see if anyone wants to actually provide critique.
not very good, however, I feel like you don't need critique to know that
Well, your composition of buildings is okay but nothing extraordinary, and even if it was, there's nothing interesting about these pictures. They feel pointless. Just regular buildings and sky in angles. If I asked you what you were trying to convey, you'd have nothing to say to me.
I really dig this one though. Looks like some sci-fi dystopia shit.
>>2824217
>>2824203
this is bad. it could be good if there were a subject.
>>2824207
This is interesting but I think you need to line up the slats on that building with the frame for maximum impact. This is a cool idea but execution could definitely be better.
>>2824208
Kind of weird. I'm going to tilt it sideways and see if it looks better. I'll post it here for people to decide.
>>2824215
Obviously overexposed and a little bland. Aesthetic enough though. It would probably get some instagram likes if you posted it there.
>>2824216
I like this better than the others but It's still not great.
>>2824217
Very Cool, well executed.
>>2824221
Interesting how all the lines go in different ways but it doesn't draw you in because all of the lines conflict.
>>2824226
Very Cool, My favorite in the thread honestly.
>>2824230
Meh, I get the whole forced perspective thing but I just find it kind of lame.
>>2824253
Another pretty cool one. Not too sure what this is though.
>>2824257
I like the idea here but you need to get both circles completely in frame to make it work and I feel if you had moved further toward the center we would be able to see more of the building which would create more visual interest.
Overall, These are your best.
>>2824257
>>2824253
>>2824226
>>2824217
Some cool ideas in the others but execution needs refined. I'll give the set a 7/10 though.
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one last bump for more honest critique
>>2824203
trash, very boring
>>2824207
I see what you're doing hear, but it's not executed right
>>2824208
Badly composed/boring
>>2824215
boring
>>2824216
still badly composed, but better than some
>>2824217
actually decent
>>2824221
cool lines
>>2824226
exposure wise it's one of your best, it's perfectly exposed I'd say. Composition wise it's shit
>>2824230
cheesy
>>2824253
very cool, I would use less of a shallow depth of field tho
>>2824257
Lots of potential fucked with bad composition
lots of these suffer from bad post processing & bad composition. Work on that.
>>2827537
>I feel if you had moved further toward the center we would be able to see more of the building which would create more visual interest.
Yeah, unfortunately there was a fountain in the middle of the atrium and that was as close to the middle as I could get.
>>2828793
>exposure wise it's one of your best, it's perfectly exposed I'd say. Composition wise it's shit
I'm sorry. I know as OP I'm not allowed to disagree with critiques because I risk being labelled ungrateful but I definitely don't think the composition is bad in the one you're commenting on. I think it is definitely strong for composition. Not sure why you dislike it so much.
