I was going for a weirdish The Creation of Adam vibe with this pic
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I think you need a longer exposure, the hands feel just a tiny bit too dark. Also, the black background makes the picture feel sterile and off. Would have liked to see something like what school portrait photographers use. Also compositionally, it's the wrong way around: god reaches down from the top right, with adam in the bottom left.
Overall, it's good for a first attempt, even if it does feel like a stock photo. Redo it with a bit more inspiration, maybe as part of a series and I think you'd be on the right track