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Camera-Specific Properties: Equipment Make Apple Camera Model iPhone 5c Camera Software 9.2 Sensing Method One-Chip Color Area Focal Length (35mm Equiv) 33 mm Image-Specific Properties: Image Orientation Bottom, Right-Hand Horizontal Resolution 72 dpi Vertical Resolution 72 dpi Image Created 2015:12:13 16:39:00 Exposure Time 1/20 sec F-Number f/2.4 Exposure Program Normal Program ISO Speed Rating 125 Lens Aperture f/2.4 Brightness 1.4 EV Exposure Bias 0 EV Metering Mode Pattern Flash No Flash, Compulsory Focal Length 4.12 mm Color Space Information sRGB Image Width 3264 Image Height 2448 Rendering Unknown Exposure Mode Auto White Balance Auto Scene Capture Type Standard
Taken with phone because I forgot my camera :/
A subject
>>2721306
i'm guessing you took this because you like the way the light bounces off the wall, and the light shows that it's raining. but it's a boring photo - there's nothing to draw one's eye around the photo or to the subject, and once one looks at the lamp in the center, that's pretty much all there is to it.
to contrast, check out this photo. red ceiling by eggleston. it's also just a light, but one's eyes are led to it by the wires (leading lines), and the unusually strong color makes it pop. this is minimalism done correctly.
keep trying. also, remember to resize, and if you are only going to post one photo, put it up in the 'recent photo' thread and ask for CC (constructive criticism). someone will get to it.
>>2721306
The glare is bad. I see nothing particularly wrong with it otherwise.
