What's up /mu/ -- I made an instrumental in the vein of "Polly" or "Dumb" by Nirvana and I need some lyrics for it.
Any half decent song-writers want to collab? Even just a line or two would help, or an idea of what the song should be about.
Here's the instrumental: http://www22.zippyshare.com/v/k5gEBKT3/file.html
0:02 -- Verse 1
0:37 -- Chorus
0:54 -- Verse 2
1:29 -- Chorus
1:47 -- Interlude
2:04 -- Verse 3
2:39 -- Chorus
2:26 -- Interlude/Outro
>0:02 -- Verse 1
mitochondarian pulse
my spawn dreaming and convulse
might i bother you for a light
i could bother for my rights
>0:37 -- Chorus
vapor, trader, extradite
senator, troubadour, cellulite
>0:54 -- Verse 2
>1:29 -- Chorus
>1:47 -- Interlude
>2:04 -- Verse 3
>2:39 -- Chorus
>2:26 -- Interlude/Outro
>>66026080
Just let it be instrumental
>>66026475
verse 1 is only half, but those are enough words for the first chorus
just scream the whole way through
btw you shouldnt write songs like this, you should make sure above all else the vocal phrasing makes sense and you can sing it before you produce it so you dont end up with a turd
apathy dude, some cringe shit like:
the blank sun is reflected inside me
winter spells this newfound apathy
moral contentment; far fetched, uncanny
heart grows cold, may try christianity
i fucking hate myself
Shoot yourself on recording.
>>66026515
>may try christianity
lol, thats pretty apathetic
>>66026556
yeah dude
>>66026080
>and I can feel the fire
>of your desire
