Let my see some bars /mu/
We relate each other's bars
Hot fire to straight up trash
The beat is a bit soft to test yall skills(anyone can rap to a hard beat look at young thuggee mother fucker)
http://youtu.be/htG-SCcscEA
>>65854053
Me* rate* English is a 3rd language
>>65854053
why does my dick stink why does my dick fly
why does my dick dance with the clouds in the sky
sometimes i ask why sometimes I ask guys
sometimes these guys ask me why I ask why
i don't know is my reply to the guys that ask why
and the guise that I try is my secret disguise
>>65854129
Fucking hot trash
Sentence take 2weekd off and work on your rhymes
yo yo
straight fire as the straight dire
you wouldn't be mad until i spit my fire
i hold the mic like i hold my dick
illest streets of the illests chicks
check 1 2
>>65854456
4.5/10
nice ending rhymes try throwing some internal rhymes to bump your score
>>65854425
confirmed rap plebeian
your "sentence"- having your thread saged to death
>>65854588
>plebeian
drop some heat lets see what you got
>>65854456
Czech 1.. 2..
Who's THAT?
BROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWN
Some day's I say, they call me Charlie
I beg yer pardon, I say yer sorry
MF Doom, bring back the track man
Tribe Called Quest, They got the jazz man....
>>65854053
Folk staff, ash mega track, ask me,
livid, free will-and-free-lyric, rich and alive, noboby above, i spit fire, i can prove it, i don't use no mask,
you can't map me, unmemed it, fuck a masquerede, cartoonish, you wish,
irish freeze, spiral of old flows,
doomsday till the day of your death, today,
MF, FM, he the Museum of the Rap,
new bloog, better than you fake nigga,
fake legend, its your end,
i'm living proof nigga,
new wave of slim shady, shade,
jokes on you, like Kendrick with the cypher
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NCahsU0Yd-k
>>65854053
>>65854728
MFDOOM BTFO !!!
ether
ETHER'ED
T
H
E
R
E
D
Ay...ay...
Ayo i gas Jews
Never mind the few
That escape the chamber
I'll find em later
Put em in train carts
And push em far
Yo home to bel aus
So long to Chaim lodz
Take off the gold n toss
Into the pile because I defile
The Semitic, homo and senile
Fire like the oven
>>65854706
6/10
>op here
This is the rap to beat
>>65854728
8/10 if you reall wrote that you got bars son
Your video isn't available in my country
>>65854891
>[
Thank you
>>65854784
Hot trash nigger fall back
>>65854728
Did you just send for the masked villain MF DOOM?
hello i am rapping
there are no bitches to be tapping
i have clinical depression
save me from this hell
>>65854960
jheez, take ya, wrote that
proof pic related
>>65855080
I can't save you from hell
But I can hand you this L
>take that trash out here 3/10 op here
>>65855092
That's a W bro, why can't I view your video in England?
>op here this cat is now the one to beat
>>65855080
Try again you're diffeney working with something bro
bitch
turn my headphones up
i can't hear out my left headphone
>>65855171
Young thugger mother fucker/10
>stop it. op here
>>65855104
hello i am 4chan
tracking your IP I will ban
get rekt nerd kid I am pro
I have crippling depression and want to cry
yet I'm writing rhymes and don't know why
I hate my life I have no friends
I live at home don't make ends
from this rap you can tell
I want to be released from this hell
hand me some rope already so I can end my miserable life
Fucking whack,
What the facts,
Fuck em I'ma summon sass.
Sucker slap,
Dumber motherfuckers but they comin' back,
Runnin' rash,
Gutter at my arse , so stunner, axe,
Little bitch egos.
Life a preschool become of man.
Understand that nothin' stands the test of time,
So fuck your stats.
You ain't even mutter raps,
You dribble to the carpet,
Blacker stomach from this fucking ash.
I'm eatin' lit cigarettes.
My father was the blackest
Like, fuck, am I even nigger yet?
Bars and the trees sway.
A toast unto the internet.
Cars on the freeway.
The tarmac a spittin' mess.
And why the fuck I'm writin' bars for 4chan.
Prolly take a peek,
See that I'm rancid,
And the door slam,
And how the fuck they catch onto my flow when I'm so awkward,
How I'm buildin' me a fortress of words surrounded by torches
Impenetrable stanzas
If you could hear my voices than you would barely understand it.
Abstract and dancin' this dance in a snapback.
My ratpack enhanced by chantin' as madcap as Dalek or Busdriver.
My next rhyme would've been Budweiser hhaha
>>65855196
A lil bit of effort takes you a long way
You push about pushed a 5/10
Also join a gym get shredded and next summer you'll be fucking bitches
>op here
>>65855202
Going to need some time to let these bars marinate
>op here
>>65855123
i like "Living Proof" too much, its on Spotify
https://play.spotify.com/album/5abCMGtyHwpOr9cEbwfP1P?play=true&utm_source=open.spotify.com&utm_medium=open
>>65855202
6 maybe a 7 out of 10
Trying to spit it with the recommended beat and can't get yet to quite flow
Don't get me wrong these bars are pretty hot.
One of your downsides is that you seem to use 'fuck' as a crutch and it loses pretty much all meaning half way through the rap.
Great effort though the bud line at the end seems like it would have been jokes haha :,)
>op here
>>65854053
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QWveXdj6oZU
this video might help most of you
>>65855360
thanks dude, fuck is super fun to say i have such an adoration for that word.
that lil snippet has weird pauses and an intentionally awkward flow haha, my bad, shoulda wrote it more straightforward
you got some bars for us op?
if a nigga talkin shit ima hit him with the heat
take him out for dinner n suck his dick til he skeet
>>65855440
hahaha :') damn anon you going to put me on the spot like that
my nigger youre cold
>op here
>>65855453
the rap game is hard for people with a flexible lifestyle such as yourself but props for trying
personal i cant cosign it because i aint taking no niggers out to eat, shit i aint even giving niggers £1.50 for the bus haha (no problem with gay people its just not for me, also i know youre tolling :D)
2/10
>op here
>>65854053
F to the double E
Don't for get the D
Mix that Kush with the Sour-D
Twistin up that sweet........
Guidance is what I need
Silence is what I need
Eyelid's begin to closed
Nodd off and fall asleep
>>65855605
basic ending rhymes in the first half but im feeling the motive you set 5/10 i like it
im not sure what went wrong with the last two lines is the second half but its wack man 3/10
going to the gym people back in an our if the thread isnt 404 by then
>>65855767
Ty
It has a melody that ties the end together
>>65855436
nah but it was hella interesting seeing the evolution of the medium. I really only listen to modern hip hop and a few oldies like digable planets and biggie so it was a bit of a wig out.
Gotta appreciate the shout out to Dooms genius. Wish the guy would come out with another gamechanger but I think he's all out of fresh shit :\
Breaks on a bus breaks on a car breaks to make you a superstar
>>65855821
I fucked your moms friend
Can't wait to do it again
Man she bleed like crazy
It amaze me
How she do that
That coochie fat , you see?
Now my dick hurts criminally
Internally ,
Stressed , because my dick might flee
>>65855991
Another one , this is fun
Ain't fun when I pull out my strap
Also known as my gun
Using it to threaten nuns
They give good head
Especially when not breathing
That means dead
I miss my dad
He's in Afghanistan smoking kush
Blowing clouds with his rifle
While I wonder will he die
Turn dem enemies to mush
Shush mom I'm writing rhymes , bye
Too scared to stop
My back is gonna pop
Fuck did i miss a spot
Im sorry sir but im feeling kind of hot
Breaks are held to help you not break
Too scared to start
Wish i could play my part
But wearing suits hurts my heart
Society needs your body, mind, soul
Soon imma start mining coal
Start a great big fire
Burn away the liars
Keep digging get closer to the core
Getting filthier than a whore
But my dignity still intact matter a fact
That aint all
People look down on me even though im tall
Chin held high
Spirit low
Realization slow
Trying not to let it show
Wont stand down
Until im wearing a crown
Not one of gold
Not one that can be sold
One that shows im truly bold
My hand is shit
But i still wont fold
And even though the world might seem a little cold
Dudnt mean we wont grow old
As long as we do what we told
But fuck thats boring as hell
And if you cant tell
I aint good at taking orders
Authorities left and right setting up boarders
Clutching to their precious uniforms like hoarders
Its 2016 i feel like our minds should be broader
But its in reverse order
People follow commands and rules
Before sense of moral, it gives me the blues
We're just doing our job
is the same excuse a nazi use
When they were killing 6 millions jews
>>65856193
hell yeas bruh this is some hot shit i mean its 2016 and I feel like our minds should be broader too
http://vocaroo.com/i/s0Q9dPXDHRDK
LISTEN TO THE VOCAROO
alright listen.
fuck you if you think you'll find me in the kitchen
maybe if i'm sipping vodka, with my fellow tomboy women
i get the whole room gasping cause my bars been so loud
i get the whole thread screaming, tits or get the fuck out
go listen to some death grips or something
if you can't get down to the melody that i'm bumping
and i'm fond of the swans, and neutral milk hotel
popping pills, i fell through the dimensions, straight to hell
cause when i die i'll stare satan in his face, the puppeteer
am i estranged, deranged or insane to feel no fear?
i'm just kidding, don't believe in him, i don't surrender,
sorry beardy man in the sky, you shouldn't have a gender
sorry man who's skin is white, it shouldn't be like that either,
and i don't believe a bethlehem-born man is white, either, jesus
but that's offensive, picking on religion
yeah, but it's fine if i spit it to a rhythm
you could say that im sinning, you could say that i'm dumb,
you could say all of my brains have been displaced to my thumb
you could say anything to get me to fall to crumbs
but i won't crumble, i am humble, and i don't try to be a thug,
its the circle of life, breddas live and they die
and nobody knows why, instinct wills us to survive,
it's the natural order i guess, but i'm bored of this mess,
can we rewrite the rules of this cosmic game of chess with success
rest a minute or an hour or the entire night,
you're still living in a cycle, with no end goal in sight
why? what's the point in it all, for death why do we stall,
why is it tragic when a soul leaves us, goes limp and falls,
>>65856319
>http://vocaroo.com/i/s0Q9dPXDHRDK
Fair point, nice bars. My mic set up sucks for this but here we go
http://vocaroo.com/i/s0nhLpOOKkiT
Fucking whack,
What the facts,
Fuck em I'ma summon sass.
Sucker slap,
Dumber motherfuckers but they comin' back,
Runnin' rash,
Gutter at my arse , so stunner, axe,
Little bitch egos.
Life a preschool become of man.
Understand that nothin' stands the test of time,
So fuck your stats.
You ain't even mutter raps,
You dribble to the carpet,
Blacker stomach from this fucking ash.
I'm eatin' lit cigarettes.
My father was the blackest
Like, fuck, am I even nigger yet?
Bars and the trees sway.
A toast unto the internet.
Cars on the freeway.
The tarmac a spittin' mess.
And why the fuck I'm writin' bars for 4chan.
Prolly take a peek,
See that I'm rancid,
And the door slam,
And how the fuck they catch onto my flow when I'm so awkward,
How I'm buildin' me a fortress of words surrounded by torches
Impenetrable stanzas
If you could hear my voices than you would barely understand it.
Abstract and dancin' this dance in a snapback.
My ratpack enhanced by my chantin' as madcap as Dalek or Busdriver.
Budweiser fresh with my phrases,
And fuck wiser concepts to death,
I'm in debt to my bed sheets
Frayed where my ends meet.
A for this deadbeat.
A+ if you get me.
>>65856564
>My mic set up sucks for this but here we go
and mine doesn't?
>Fair point, nice bars.
yours are good too. i reeeeally like ur style. contact me via twitter or other social media, collab pls
https://twitter.com/catnipmusician
IM A LYRICAL SPIRITUAL MIRACLE INDIVIDUAL
bump??
>>65856319
Are you a girl or underage?
>>65856319
>>65856564
God damn, you two are pretty good.
>>65856935
im a girl haha
>>65856989
<3
>>65856564
Ghost of op coming from the gym
I'm not a fan of the gym
4/10
You tried to go to hard on a mellow beat bro
>>65856319
I will rate when I get back home
>op here
>>65857060
ooft 3 points lower than when you couldn't even grasp the cadence shiitt. fair point, my beats aren't usually so chill
still waiting on those bars bro
>>65856989
thanks mang
>>65856708
holy shit I peeped your stuff on youtube, hell fucking yes let's collab
https://twitter.com/GoSouthBeets
i put my dick
in ab ox
my cock big like ox
my balls bigger
trigger finger slicker than joe biden
i smell like diarrhea
my crew fresh like garbage
I'm poking dead things with sticks
Finished all my dinner but I'm hungrier than shit
Tending towards the sinister
You need to call a minister
Before I get to flopping like a fish that's playing twister.
I wish that Taco Bell delivered.
I'd remain inside consuming Mountain Dew elixir
I maintain my innocence through rap songs on the Internet
So let me plead the fifth sift through soul seek seeding Jenny Death.
I'm drinking henny in a minivan,
Spending all my penny's so this tinder bitch would give a damn
Send a couple flicks her way of me dancing to Marvin Gaye
You could say I'm in it like a senator on C-Span
You can find me in the grease pan
Spitting game to all these dames between the folds of meat and
I've got a sponsorship from wheat thins.
You can call me cracker without seeming that facetious
Sweet Jesus
I see the face of Jesus in this ice tea
Maybe I'm just crazy or there's something in this caffeine
Maybe I've been trained to make these visions in my cranium
To keep myself from waking up in chains like I'm a crazy one
I'm taking tums
Cause my stomach churnin from this Ritalin
Burned a stick of sherm and got a perm for just a couple bucks
Spend a sum of months atop a mountain with a bunch of monks
Debating time and space while sipping on an ayahuasca punch
>>65857136
thank you dear! looking forward to hearing what you have to say
>>65857152
I was using a shitty iPhone speaker I wil give it another play when I get in bro
>>65856319
>op here
damn you killed it
Pretty good internal rhymes
Decent theme not money, bitches or I'm the best rapper blah blah
I'll give it a 8/10
This is the one to beat now guys
Also if anymore people have bars can you record them like she did <3
I'm a boxer, punch you in the face
I got boxers, put them on your face
Swag in my bag, call me a disgrace
Lick the tip bitch, tell me how it taste
>>65856564
peep my music guys!!!
https://twitter.com/catnipmusician
(i have to get 100 subs to get a custom url on youtube... this is awful)
>>65857754
ah goodness, thank you op! you're too kind. if anybody wants their bars rapped for them or idk if you give me another beat I could always do more. whatevers good
>>65857227
heres a vocaroo of this jawn peep it http://vocaroo.com/i/s1DGSUyGdtTz
>>65857878
>https://twitter.com/catnipmusician
checked
your flow on your latest song reminds me of nomane
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3l3ASidbFvk
>op here
>>65854053
>Let my see some bars /mu/
>We relate each other's bars
>Hot fire to straight up trash
>The beat is a bit soft to test yall skills
Could someone just post this again in English please?
>>65856319
middle class english girl/10
>>65858175
I mean I was raised middle class but I now live in a working class home. but continue to be assumptive!
>>65858081
she's cool!
>>65858128
read the first reply English is a 3rd language for me bro and you're going to come at me like that?
>>65857313
>I'm drinking henny in a minivan,
Spending all my penny's so this tinder bitch would give a damn
this was fucking fire dude, no lie, you got a good flow, keep working on what u do and refining your voice. practice incessantly
im dis chick >>65856319
>>65858322
yo imma dm u a song thru that twitter u posted real quick. would love ur thoughts.
>>65854053
just another day, another rat in the crevice
a wolf in sheeps clothing, a robe wearing peasant
Never learned the lesson nor did I ever get the message
Feel the essence of the night as the moon stays crescent
A knight in shining armor ain't shit if your eyes are sensitive to light
I dedicate my life to frying out heroes
Everytime I count my numbers I always start from zero
And to all these guys acting fly on the web, Im a black widow
You couldn't scratch the surface you got candy claws while I'm Deep in Time like Ceres and Calypso
Hearing screams and whispers the broken window
Turned my breathing to an instrumental,and my pulse is the tempo till my blood clots
Face the green staying shellshocked, but I ain't bebop cuz I rock steady
rock the mic till I'm dead and just laugh it off
I'm on a couple packs a' apple sauce
A couple pills a' adderall
I always one for mathematics, translating shapes to the masses
Moving ahead backwards
I ain't jack, no daxter
A lonely bastard everyday of the week
A lord of the rings moving through at sonic speed
As a wise one once said "You're too slow"
I might be a goofy dog, but this knee never took an arrow
"This is a no meme zone" words from an undead pharaoh
>>65858322
just followed u follow back and ill send link
>>65858074
This is pretty good, anon.
>>65858462
thanks boss.
>>65858431
>>65858396
done :) send me that shit dude!!
>>65858415
RAP EM FOR US
>>65858415
>>http://vocaroo.com
>op here
record yourself man I've been reading some of the longer raps then when I hear anons spit them the flow that I gave it was completely off
>>65858559
I don't even have a mic man
bumpin
>>65859948
i thought the thread was dead lol
anyone out there still got bars?
>op here
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e3ilsuBZWxA
>>65858415
>>65858712
no laptop mic?
>>65860008
femrapper from earlier, Ill do something to this a bit later op.
hey hey hey hey what's up /mu/
how do you do
I came to spit doodoo,
DJ's say "shoo shoo"
emcees be like "boo hoo"
it's too true
they wanna wipe it like poo poo
it's scuba steve in the place to be
put it in your face and pee
>>65860328
cool beans, i followed your twitter
keep doing what you doing anon
I’m from East Atlanta where they cutting off fangas
Got a white girlfriend she be acting a anus
She can get you knocked out with a point of a finger
And she don’t talk to strangers, she got red tangas
Got coke in the strainer and a lawyer retainer
So you hard so you soft, she got all kinds of angles
And this California kush it got me talking like I'm Tony
Playing with my money then I’m calling my attorney
And them people can’t believe that gucci mane got jungle fever
And I think I love this girl because her price is hella cheaper
And like lu said it’s better to loose a love than love a leaver
Running around town with them choppers about the same size as Justin Bieber
>>65860734
Hot trash
Rapping about money and bitches like every other nigger out there step up son
>op here
>>65860008
>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e3ilsuBZWxA
>>65858074 here
http://vocaroo.com/i/s1uTjZs6nHrA
Oh great, you're dropping albums that's outrageous
Never thought I'd see you ripping flows from people famous
me I'm browsing YouTube sorting beats by what their date is
On the fader channel comments Senpai my struggle raps the greatest
So who am I to say this
Hating on your waves if
I'm too afraid to drop a tape or spit a couple phrases
Pretending if I stayed away from mics and only waited
I could reach a league where I could hear your shit and relegate it
So yes I'm lazy
I overcomplicate me
But I won't spit about my dick no overcompensating
It's funny, I really find it more than entertaining
These f150 rappers bragging from their mothers basement
Me I study language, my phrases should explain it
And if it isn't clear then maybe I should change my major
Im sick of being hater, these other rappers greater
Because they don't surround themselves with negative behavior
So make assumptions, you'll probably hate my functions
And if that's true then good for you I'm never pulling punches
I'll maybe throw a dap or two to people if they loving
And if you ask I'll pass the gas and keep the people buzzin
End of discussion, ripping mics when I clutch em
Songs well done and fresh out of the oven,
Holdin a luncheon, dishes made for the bunches
And I ain't dropping food but I'm dropping the introduction
wrote this over another beat, but i thought it gelled pretty good with this. vocaroo is above.
>>65861020
fuuuuuuuuck
you bodied that beat son
9/10 !!!!! (all my ratings are for armature rappers)
you've set the bar high
>op her
>>65861020
someone try body this track
>>65860257
no sadly
>>65861797
Spit it on your phone
The good thing about being Anon is that know one will ever know it was you
Come on bro
>>65861574
>http://vocaroo.com/i/s1uTjZs6nHrA
thanks familia. i gotta go to class in a few but if this thread is still alive when im back ill lay down some more bars.
>>65861598
Kinda hard with my set up but here I go.
http://vocaroo.com/i/s1scPBS2lV5N
What a phenomenon
Nominatin' flesh with the breadth of these problems,
Numbing young with a wide shelf,
Gotta lotta choice bub.
Squanderin' these voices.
Till it's cloisters in the void,
Hummin' jingles like they nanako.
Wonder where the wonder go,
Spiritual abyss,
Kiss gutter and the undergrowth.
Isn't it delish
Bitch I'ma take another road,
Spirited in Styx,
And that's how I got this butter flow,
It tinglin' my dick.
Rich butter on this fuckin' toast.
I chuck the most fits,
Chose this approach,
Now I front like I know shit.
Coast on this dope shit.
A stoner.
I fancied bein' stoned in the tenth grade.
Ponderin' my opus.
The only rapper that is clingin' to the mope shit.
Bro,
I'ma own it.
I might just be homeless.
Cos I don't function in the belly of this beast.
Bones pressin' on my throat,
Till I'm gettin' to be broken.
Expelliarmus essence where my soul is.
Offensive how I go,
And I grow to be potent.
Excalibur attached to my vernacular,
I tell em where it's at.
As I'm pointin' to the granular
At best an artist peckin' at his doses.
Checkin' his perspective with the privilege of most kids,
My avatar is fuzzy on the caliber of man I inhabit,
So I'm leveled by a balancer.
I'm so shit.
I woke up, straight jew or a goyim
Voices in my sayin "lean over, destroy him"
Broheim, im dyin like villager pitch fork flyin, denyin'
Trajectory, heart through the chest
Call her chastity, she dont love you
She love the vest
The bulletproof and the toothless
Dragon in the house, call it roofless
Stories come and go and then dont it just depends
On the rythm and when the bars end
I take take it back to the early 2000s
Imagine an instant messenger screenshot. MSN
The psychoactive captive
enacted attractive rhyme flows
expose the non-pros
enclose my old foes
rip off their girls clothes
repose in pantyhose
impose my better prose.
I broke up with my ex girl
here's he number
>>65862901
>http://vocaroo.com/i/s1uTjZs6nHrA
I've got a bit of a cold so my voice might sound a little fucked, but here is my attempt of my micro-verse
Feedback would be much appreciated.
>>65863179
FUCK wrong link, that's some other guy in this thread, here is mine, also I'm so fucking sorry for the shitty audio quality -> http://vocaroo.com/i/s0upQWBxHIMA
As a fledgling rapper I feel the need to contribute something;
Currently strung out on a three day bender
It's fitting that I greet a contender with a temper
I assume, most of these anonymous androgynous
The flow thick enough to knock the niggas unconscious
I'm off out to smoke a doobie now,
Would love to stay and box a round,
But yall know the victor
I ain't finna rap about bitches bleachin' they sphincter
I like my holes pinker, I got a thumb for the stinker
Mr Drinker, over thinker, pop another blista with ya sister
Bye nice to meet ya, /mu/, piss on you with my tinker
>>65863223
Not bad at all
>>65854706
>Czech
kek
>>65863668
Record this
