Post your lyrics ITT so they may be criticised.
My body is a game that plays against itself
Strategically organizing organisms animorphing in orderly fashions
To challenge...
that's all I got of that
i cannot quite recall the way your hands would brace the corners of the bed
and touch the edges of my mind
or the way our ankles touched
like we were trying to make a fire with our bones
and if we left the window open for the breeze
or so everyone could see us
but i remember it was
hot outside
it was hot outside
precipice of piss
crowning my shit
beckon the sploosh
solid drop
feel my push
my dick
is hard
they call me
the bard
You pass thru me
like a void in my chest
take over
encompass
Remember
everything you said
you meant it
A conviction
You saw it all
the rise and fall
the despair
& who am I
to pretend
I don't care
I'm crazy
your voice stuck in my head
Nostalgic
& truant
I remember
everything I said
It's worthless
A conviction
Lines rehearsed
The best & worst
the show
& who are you
who are you
I don't know
You're still haunting my dreams
against good good intentions
(stay out)
stay away
you are not welcome
link to the song:https://soundcloud.com/adventforever
>>61046071
>animorphing
Please don't use that word.
>>61046210
10/10
Get in the car
Lets go for a ride
We'll drive to the ocean
and play in the tides
We'll drive to the mountains
To get some fresh air
and when you fall asleep
I will cum in your hair.
>>61046172
>touching ankles
u fuking sicko
>>61046071
>animorphing
like this anon?
also
are you trying to say your body is filled with organisms that "animorph in orderly fashions"?
because that's what it seems like. Or that your body is the one who is "strategically organizing"?
if the subject is still your body, change "organizing" to "organized", it'll flow better too.
and work around "orderly fashions" there aren't really multiple orderly fashions having organisms strategically organized and animorphed into are there?
>>61046240
I was pretty drunk when that came to ind, and honestly typing it out here felt weird, so I'm probably gonna change it lol
>>61046275
>if the subject is still your body, change "organizing" to "organized", it'll flow better too.
That wasn't the original intent, but you're right in that it flows better. Probably gonna change that as well. Thanks guy
my vestigial limb
flailing
useless
at my side
the runt arm
like a chickens wing
a reminder
meant to be a grindcore microsong
>>61046172
>i cannot quite recall
are you writing a fucking letter to your congressman or a song?
>or the way our ankles touched like we were trying to make a fire with our bones
i get what you're going for here, but "touched" feels delicate and when you're starting a fire, bones or otherwise, you're rubbing that shit together hard n fast. just saying.
>and if we left the window open for the breeze
or so everyone could see us
>or so everyone could see us
isn't this a continuation of the last line? why is there an "or" there?
>>61046395
not ihm but
>for the breeze
>or so everyone could see us
is not hard to understand
you're brain felt dry
when your body felt wet
when you realized that fog
is just rain that hasn't given up yet
My own
testicular smell
keeps me motivated
on my lonly nights
doing research
essays
needed
for
uni
>>61046228
>You pass thru me
>like a void in my chest
>take over
>encompass
we're already fuckin up here.
If they "pass through you" then they wouldn't be the void would they? they'd be passing through the void, or they'd be the embodiment of the void that they left.
>take over, encompass
I just find this imagery contradictory to the previous lines, maybe it's just me. but if this person is "taking over" and "encompassing"
why'd they pass through? wouldn't they be overwhelming? I suppose this is a minor issue.
>truant
did you just use a thesaurus to find a synonym for "wandering"? it really feels like you did here. don't use this word here, it doesn't fit at all.
>Lines rehearsed
>The best & worst
>the show
I guess this is supposed to go along with some sort of metaphor for playing a gig? But in the context of the rest of the song it feels out of place, if the whole song had similar lyrics that related to this then it would be okay but like this it's just confusing.
>>61046470
after re-reading, I see that and admit my mistake. although I do think it would be clearer if the rest of the lines had the same theme of uncertainty.
glilt my snope around heck
no one feels into objection
calpoot or worse
bansprocket atop your heart
:'(
>>61046620
Are you drunk or is this deliberately nonsensical? I think it's actually not bad if it's the latter.
My name is Stirner
And my impotence is a fucking spook
Shut the fuck up with your "pure ideology", Zizek
Maybe try reading a real book
I'm more of a meme than Pynchon or Wallace
And got more brains than all of them combined
Even beat out that nigga Hegel
Maybe we shouldn't say that if we got idealism on the mind
I KUCK DICKS I TRAP DICKS
I PISS CHUNKS IN YOUR SHEEP DIP
U A SLACK NAYGA U CANT HANG
I DICKSUCK YOUR WHOLE GANG
I MADE A BABY AND I FUCKED THAT BABY
THEN MY BABY TEARS MAKE BABY GRAVY
I GRAVE THAT BABY LIKE WAVY GRAVY
I GRAYED YO BITCH LIKE LIAM NAYGA
IM YO MAYOR NAYGA IM MAYOR NAGIN
MY CITY HALL IS YO AIDS BANQUET
>>61046482
>you're
come on son
i think this is almost good. but i'd say it's more clouds that are "rain that hasn't given up yet" you feel?
I've grown tired of moving on
And moving away
When it's not right
Or justified
But concealed in mirage
An impossible lock
Drowning in fog
And distracting me
I wear the flag
of what I fear
And outside this gate
I have dissolved
Though I'm on
your growing trail
Of grey fume clouds
That you left
Across the sky
pls be gentle
>>61046795
i actually quite like this, the only thing i have to say is
>And distracting me
i would rewrite this line, and maybe
>grey fume clouds
as well
>>61046795
First part is super cliche
The first half of the second part is great
And the second half is not bad, it just doesn't really give off the same feel
I'm looking for someone to like
Who's just like you
I looking for someone who could hate you
The way I hate you
>>61046937
my advice? throw this one into the trash, back to the writing board.
>>61046248
lmao
>>61046917
>>61046879
Thank you for the critiques bros
rear projectors
eyes of nectar
never the first way read
always a little more
thrown away stories
of premonition
intervention
water and sand
I love you don’t let me go
the big man at his desk
the mother of two way radios
venn diagrams with endless circles
of everything broke
and I just don't care
my god,
who drew you so sharply?
a trip to the beach
false memories
another and me
the waves come rushing
I felt something
like something someone once said:
it's like taking scissors to a ziptie...
(all in all)
time and space yields
spacetime
When I woke up this morning, I smelled you in the air
It made it hard to process that you weren't sleeping there
Sometimes I think you linger, drifting in my head
To try and make it easier waking alone in bed
The bottle has me feeling good
Say the things I wish I wouldn't
A sober mind eludes me in the light
Wipe myself off of this floor
Or else I'd lie here evermore
Jesus does she love me or is it a lie
I can't deny
>>61046023
In a sense it's simple
A love for you
Especially when you consider
All the things you do
Everytime I think about it
I tighten up
Despite my feeling
Despite my heart
I can't feel that way
Because he's yours
Every time I feel that way
I kinda feel ashamed
In a sense it's crazy
To feel my way
My love for you
Takes up my day
But no matter ill intentions
I wanna see your smile
Does he notice you?
The things you say?
The way you do your eyes
When you're thinking away?
Every time I think about it
I feel tightened up
In a sense it's simple
A love for you
But it's not so simple
When I think of you
And I think of all the reasons
I don't speak my mind
I want to hold you
Not let you go
I want to see you
Want me for yours
Just to see you smiling with him
Will it be enough?
Coming up
On the kitchen floor
Vision blurred
And I'm gone
Trying to talk
But it's no good
Or any use
Because I'm lost
Inside myself
Stumbling up the stairs
And hiding under sheets
Until I come out of this state
And the lights come back on
>>61047151
first half of the first part is weird but gets better
>I love you don't let me go
Eh
>the big man at his desk
I'd rewrite this one
I like it tho
meme
meme
my memes are sillyyyyyyyyyy ( you have to let that be longer)
like here is one of my memes
"spingo blink :^)"
1099 (shoot thats the captcha typed it here lol)
>>61046795
>I wear the flag
>of what I fear
i definitely dig it
>>61047295
i disagree with the vulnerability of declaring love to be distasteful but yeah idk i wasn't going to change any of it anyways
your song is too simple dude
I love you so much but I'd hurt if I showed you
Whispering out keeps the wires tight
you left your inside out
can't remember where it broke away
from my eyes gazing
awe and unimpressive
>>61047151
i think this is my favorite in the thread so far. not 100% perfect but i really, really like it. has that clever post-punk bite, whether or not it's meant as post-punk or not
>>61047330
Uh...ok. It just seems a bit out of place with your other less explicit lyrics. Why did you post in this thread if you're just going to lash out at criticism? I said I liked it either way
sometimes when ideas come to me I write them down in notepad. how are these? what can I do to improve?
>>61047402
i'm not mad
my computer words did not lash out i do not think
>>61047293
>a love for you
>all the things you do
blah
>feel that way
>feel that way
you can do better. i hope
>my way
>my day
ughhhh
>when you're thinking away?
please find something other than this
>i feel tightened up
again?
>i want to hold you, not let you go
so redundant
>>61047295
>but it's no good
>or any use
redundant
also, "lost inside myself" generally cliche
>>61047408
I used to do this shit a couple years back
keep it up if you feel like writing but i recommend you read more and find out how others articulate their ideas
>>61047418
my bad then, you just gave off a slightly annoyed vibe. Anyway, carry on
>>61047425
lol thanks for the criticism. i guess you're recommending being more straight to the point? please, i'd really like to know your thoughts.
No good
Cause I let you down
No good
Im gonna leave town
I know
I need you so bad
So
Im fuckin so sad
Party
Zero
Tell me
Why
A king?
Nothing
You can die,
fuck it
No god
No shame
No god
No good
I think these are some of the best lyrics I've written.'recording this song with my band in January- it's fun as hell to play.
I never said "never"
But maybe I should a little easier next time
'Cause when it all came crashing down
I wished I'd seen it coming
'Cause now the signs all seem so clear
I feel stupid not for seeing them
I guess that's where we are
Where do we want to be?
I know the last place I want to be is here
But I suppose for now I'll stay
If it helps you along
And I wouldn't regret a single minute
If you felt the same way
So do you feel the same way?
I never said "stop"
'Cause I never knew we were moving in the first place
That you had talked me down so far I couldn't see you
No matter how much I wanted to
The divided lights that guide my way home
Whisper that I should just give up
Disconnected images dance in my brain
And they align a story that I hate to bear
But I will if I have to
I sat around for years hoping for you to change
And now I'm not sure if anybody ever really changes
But I will if I have to
And as the planets fade I
Can't help but wonder
Which one you're on
And which one I should be on
Right now
And where I go from here
But that's the least of my concerns
Because
You never said "never"
But now you do and you say it all the time
I guess I'll just have to get used to it
("I'm sorry that I can't feel the way that you do.
If there was a way that I could change I swear I'd make it so. But for now I think it's best for me to leave.")
>>61046645
I think hes too sad to type straight, but still feels his expressive mood is powerful enough to be shared and understood
>>61047408
>i'm so consumed
cliche
>will i really do shit?
is this necessary?
>at war with my mind
cliche
>what do i need, to proceed
get rid of this
i don't know man. i could go on, this is a first draft so whatever but if it's in your heart then i'd honestly say outline the general idea you have for this and rewrite the whole thing. it just puts me to sleep
>>61047461
i'm not sure which lyric is yours
>>61046713
>wont even type nigga in a rap song he wrote for the internet
#StayGuilty
>>61047507
oh my bad. mine is this one: >>61047293
I think i have been a slave
For longer than i wish to realize
But it's not to be wild that i crave
servitude is for me normalized
I have kept some thoughts hidden from you
These urges that's ravaged my mind
But now i have no moral guidance to look to
No convention to render me blind
But in stagnant moments of inaction
With oiled up yet uneasy nerves
A single spark could ignite me
And i would spread my fire through this world
But now i see
If i was a soldier
You would be my wounds
inflicted by an enemy
Whom i do not know
So if i burn down the heavens
if i burn down myself
Will the flames sooth and warm me
Will i in scorching heat be free
And yet i see
I i was a prisoner
Then you would be a guard
Who stares on with contempt
who leads me to be hanged
So i pull and tug
at ropes that aren't there
binds that do not hold me
Chains that do not ensnare
>>61047495
sounds like lackluster emo or pop-punk
glad you're having fun and all but it is poetically unimpressive
>>61046917
Id say the second half entirely is beautiful. He wears his dispare as a symvol for what he fights for as he follows the trails of this girl, whether she burned a forest and thats why the hero wants to find her, shes lit one too many cigs and the hero can only trace her before they go out and she lights another,
or maybe shes fallen from the sky (its not implied at all though) and shes burning through the atmosphere. While the hero sees her, he cant stop such a burning force for he would die. Hes dissolved and has no such will, so he watches her burning brighter until shes burned out and crashed, and hes not able to do a thing about it
<lyrics>
fæddur til að deyja
hægt að falla à burtu frá mér
What does it feel like to be a human
Orificia
I will bleed one day
</lyrics>
this is over a 10 minutes or so song, with each lyric being repeated though as spoken word after its sung
>>61047495
>I feel stupid not for seeing them
grammar? Also, could be written better, in general, and feels like it should be written in past-tense.
overall i don't have much to say but i agree with >>61047553
>>61046713
>I GRAYED YO BITCH LIKE LIAM NAYGA
You married my bitch who is dying of a terminal illness, proceeded to get stranded in the wilderness, hunted by a pack of wolves and fight to the death with the alpha of said pack?
Odd choice of metaphor for what I guess is slang for interracial fucking in Bix Nood but it has a certain Hemingwayan mystique about it
Something from my catalogue.
Attempting to rip off the flesh from robots.
Not knowing it's the skeleton mesh of a crow's mask.
Old farce of an ancient whiskey glass.
Shattered and glued to make a monthly fast.
Slow down with grown nails to better carve initials into melting hails.
The weather has outworn it's welcome with the rip of ship sails.
The moon arrived after the sun struggled to climb down.
>>61047524
scansion's better
>>61047619
Should i read it like that Niki song?
>i never fuxked wayne
>i never fucked drake
>on my life man
>for fucks sake
fentalic
phantoms
urugalic
jobims
take my body and cast it in the sea. (x2)
Boy i'm getting older
Didn't do the things I dreamed of (x4)
work in progress :):):)
>>61047641
>underground white rappers
Do you also speedrap?
>>61047653
it ain't rap
I haven't written in awhile but these were some of my favorites
1. Curled up under a skeleton with them stars just a melting, or the ones that can be seen at least. As an old ghost casts me deep into a kaleidoscope cage, to be twisted by a translucent corpse, im made to play its games. Meanwhile my eyes are sinking beneath sheets of melted sand. Ensnared by sirens who sing to me till the whole world blurs black
>about hanging out with my brother at night, smoking a little grass and watching tv with sunglasses on
2. About a year has passed
A year i didn't wear any black
The seconds dragged by but the days didnt last
Ignoring the corpse i couldn't bring back
Leaving behind the sea and pretending it was dead to me
Headed to the shore abandoning the warmth of memories
Its been at least two years by now
That we've been living under that house
The walls squeezing in and my head's spread out
Its been two years i havent made a sound
Leaving behind the sea, i know its not dead to me
Collapsing on the floor frozen in your cemetery
About two weeks have passed
Since ive seen you last
About two weeks have passed
Since i woke up to break like glass
>happened about 3 years ago when my family and i got our house repossessed and the day we moved into our new house we had to put my dog of thirteen years down, i didnt even go to the vet to see her off and i hate myself for it
>also we took her camping at a beach every year so sea metaphors
3. Lets see how many issues can swim through cherry flavored static, warm vodka, and rose colored glasses. Its the only thing i can do to get a chance, with a girl like you. Its the only thing that i can do to get a shot, with a bit of you. To my heart it sounds pretty fun, up every night looking for a toxic touch, bad ideas and easy love. Its the only thing i can do to get away, away from you. Its the only thing that i can do, to escape from every bit of you
>just good old hot fun
>>61047533
more straight to the point, and more interesting. is this about something that happened to you? it sounds like it, but i don't feel it. not at all. i feel like a business man could have written this and sold it to me to make me think i'm feeling things when i'm not, it's generic. sure it's relatable but it's so vague, of course it is. it doesn't mean "bigger words", just drive your point, your feelings. on one of Bob Dylans most simple and heartbreaking songs, he says
"I like your smile
And your fingertips
Like the way that you move your lips
I like the cool way you look at me
Everything about you is bringing me misery"
incredibly simple, yet INCREDIBLY effective.
Baked beans
Bleached pools
Stand in the highway
Record passenger screams
Frigid
Treads vivid
Alone tomorrow
Seems scripted
Privately not funny
Egg yolks
Sorry folks
When dad's home we'll relax
i never wrote my name in the pavement
how will the suburbs remember me
wet cement as building blocks
for a forgotten legacy
>>61047614
I think I was referring to more of the subjective experience of Neeson's character in the grey, like I plunged her into an existential man v nature tundra where my dicksucking capabilities are the wolf
>>61047574
your analysis is basically what i was trying to capture anon :')
but would you agree with that other anon about the other parts? let me know - i'm always looking to improve!
>>61047495
It sounds like someone taking bita and pieces of imagery that they think is flowery and poetic on its own but mashed all together it's just needlessly muddled. In the "I never said stop" bit you have six lines and manage to throw 3 almost completely non interrelated metaphors in there and it just goes downhill from there. "Divided lights... whisper" (why?) and "disconnected images ... align a story" actually made me cringe.
Look if you don't have a full thing that's cohesive and connected to itself in any other way than in your own head, or if you're just putting this stuff in as filler, don't. Especially if it's just to sound poetic by taking some grade-school English metaphor tricks you heard about but never learned to use. Write in your own voice first.
I have no idea how to meaningfully coordinate words with melody.
>>61047705
thanks, that's really good advice i feel. i appreciate it, and bob dylan. ill try to learn from him more.
>>61047543
anyone got some critique for me?
>>61047795
write melodie, add words.
washing machines
powder bleach
poured on me
i'm corduroy and palm trees
bag of chips
quartercade
centipede
golf
dispense more change
goonies 2
goonies 2
goonies 2, waa
the laundromat is my favorite place to be
throw away your washing machine and go here to do your laundry
bury me in dryer sheets
>>61047863
i think ive been a slave fits better for a bar, assuming its 4/4. and i have sounds wacky bad
>>61047764
Ah, brilliant. Liam is my bitch, and you suxked his dick as a force of nature, it all makes sense now. But how could someone as dedicated to peace as Wavy Gravy be connected to infanticide, or even murder or death if the man is still alive? I'm just thinking these questions might help you clarify your narrative
>>61047863
Counting syllables on each line and arranging patterns out of them will help make it less choppy, kinda like a haiku but based on whatever syllable structure you choose
at gooseberry park
i stay after dark
i visit as much i can
we eat dinner in your tree hole home out back
our beautiful family
squirrels, blood related
sleeping in autumn leaves
bat, you goof
slathered in duck sauce
chocolate lab with a scientist dad
hermit crab
they're so fine to me
but you guys make me
feel divine to me
i feel divine to me
we're warm
even though it's cold i feel warm
even in the cold i feel warm
on the coldest day we feel warm
>>61047543
>servitude is for me normalized
this is a clunky line
>no convention to render me blind
feels a little contradictory to the previous line
>stagnant moments of inaction
redundant
>with oiled up yet uneasy nerves
another structurally yucky line
>chains that do not ensnare
please do something different with this. it's shoehorning at its finest
>>61047717
10/10
>>61047936
>chocolate lab with a scientist dad
Fucking love it, the beginning reminds me of American football alot for some reason
>>61047699
Someone please destroy me analytically, i wanna see how to get better
>>61047771
Thw first half of thw first part should be stereotipical emo teen english writing poetry. Basically, its cheese. The second half feels less cheese and more genuine. Feels as if youre not able to overcome a certain personal issue, and you cant even get over thinking about it. Even worse you cant fix since its a mirage in the fog, you can barely even tell what it is
The second half is still better though, but mostly because writting vaguely of love is interpretable to great extents depending on the reader
>>61047871
I think if that line (in the chorus?) would flow better as
Throw away your machine,
Go here for your laundry
but then again I can't hear the rhythm you have in mind for this
>>61046240
>Some people never change. Some do...
damn..
>>61047999
i see what you mean, family. i really appreciate the input
>>61048043
Senpai, just call me cuhz
>>61047968
wow thank you so much !!
song's here if you want to hear it
hope you don't think i'm insane: https://chocofriendz.bandcamp.com/track/gooseberry-park
>>61047916
What I'm trying to say is that the children born at woodstock, or generation x, are spiritually dead. and that's me, the implacable force of history pressing the american empire to its demise
>>61047699
>1.
the writing is far too purple for the subject matter i feel, edit a bit. theres that word "ensnared", it's so awkward and hard to make work, same with translucent, though to a lesser extent.
>2.
>since i woke up to break like glass
this feels like a line that wasn't very well thought out compared to the rest.
>Collapsing on the floor frozen in your cemetary
this doesn't sit quite right with me, maybe edit this a bit
>3.
I like this, but i feel i would like it better if more was left to the imagination. like taking out the ends that say "with a bit of you, with a girl like you" etc., and "To my heart"
I'm not the guy but I like this. Might download this soon.
>>61048128
much love!!
>>61047883
The song is 6/8 but i sing it with "i've" just being clear in the lines
>>61047926
Been working with that recently, thanks for the thoughts, i sing it in a way which fits in the words, kinda slurring them which i know isn't recommendable
>>61047945
Good points all of them, what did you think of it except for those lines? I was kind of trying to go for a barrage of words on this since the song is kinda wild and stormy.
I agree especially with your last 2 points, kind of ashamed of those lines right now
The night was warm yet gave me chills
I ate my words, you ate those pills
Partied for the masses to gain acceptance
I was the only one that knew you felt neglected
Got too drunk and went home alone
"Fuck this world" saved to notes on her phone
>>61048090
Well for the first one i kinda was ensared im always obligated to hang out with my brother and look out for him since he has schizophrenia and hes finds solace in talking with me, i was kinda hoping to just go to bed so i did feel traped and otherwise ensared
As for the second one yeah i didn't really think that line through too much i added it after a dream i had that i woke up crying from and i didn't really want to keep working on the song.
And yeah im glad you like the third one i was kinda trying for a cheesy summer thing working up the courage to get a girl and then cheating on her almost immediately
Thanks so much for this though! I really want to get more into writing again
>>61048064
I honestly love this whole album, keep it up g!
Lights line the sky
And shine from houses
In the back yard
Sitting sedated,
Wondering what
Has become of
Two friends now
Mistaken for strangers.
Your words still
Haunt me to death
And leave me aching,
drowning in my thoughts.
Was I wrong?
Was it my mistake?
Or was it yours?
And will you change your mind
Before I change my own?
my lyrics are usually kinda sparse - i usually deliver them really slowly so written out it's pretty short. am i too cliche here? really trying to figure out where to draw the line with being emotionally explicit. to be fair, i do take away a lot of influence from emo music, but let me know what you think regardless
>>61048260
wasn't sure it was possible for others to get the vibe!! infinite thanks for listening, means so so much!!!
>>61048064
is this a joke?
>>61048403
i am more than happy that you listened and took the time to reply!! not intended to be a joke, but it is pretty silly
I've only got a couple lines so far
>I've got a matchbook, but no kindle for fire
>I already believe, I just need a messiah
10 MINUTES TO DOWNTOWN
IS 10 MINUTES TOO FAR
Going steady
Just keeping pace
A pretty smile
Just means a pretty face
I couldn't sing your tune
But I could hold you in a cold embrace
I couldn't love you
I didn't need to
To make it past second base
And she said,
"I'm gonna make you care"
She said
"I'm not going anywhere"
>that's all
Just making this up right now I think I really like the first 6 lines. What do you guys think?
>>61048672
terrible
>>61048291
Maybe give some descriptive details that aren't emotional, it will make it seem less corny. One thing that makes things seem corny is when they are too universal.
Anodyne ice burns exactly like flames,
Erupting that night at the hall in St. James,
But we don't talk about that.
Broken listless and confined in our cells,
It could all be over once we've done in ourselves,
But I don't like to think about that.
ITT: 99% of lyrics are shit. too literal, too personal, too obvious.
in all honesty, guy with "my dick is hard, they call me the bard" wrote the best lines in here.
I know I'm the right one;
I'm right, she's wrong.
Left a message on her phone;
It won't be long, I will belong,
'Cause after dark a rush of air
Flies swiftly through the night,
Coming from her house here to mine
Showing that maybe there's a chance
Showing that maybe the twain shall meet
Showing that maybe I should go
And I should hide away
So that no one laughs at you
And no one laughs at me
I'm not meant for you;
You are meant for me
>>61048789
avoid saying ice burns like flames, it was even lampooned in family guy
SUCKING BIG DICK EVERYDAY
JACKING OFF MEN LIKE THERE NO OTHER WAY
GOING ON 4CHAN POSTING ANIME
GIRLS
LIKE THE WHOLE WORLD
GONNA MAKE NO SENSE GIRL
And that's all I got. r8 and h8 m8
>Artery succubus
>Drench with grease
>Slaughtered sow
>Living sin
>Repulsive seductress
>Consuming
>Temptation
>Giving in
for a synth djent/grind project im working on
https://clyp.it/wnxti5fp
used the same vocal synth as Oneohtrix in g.o.d. lol
You all like ha ha
Me?
I'm like nah nah
Got my heart inside my pocket
with a chain tied to me sleeve
Better there than in the open
where the world can watch it bleed
I'm running out of ways
to let you know that I'm okay
As the red seeps through my pant leg
I can see your smile fade
brb, highschool me escaped again. gotta put him back in the box
>>61046395
Are you mentally challenged?
