>>59618818
Exactly the kind of shit I'd expect forever alone tryhards on this board to write

>>59618818
This is badass

>>59618818
>tremolo grasses

>>59618818
I support this lyricist

>>59618818
you sound so insecure and autistic for trying to embarrass this otherwise good lyricist

I like pussy
You're a twisted lip carrier
Let's fuck!

this is the kind of shit i avoid writing. if it turns out to be some pretentious crap like that it goes right in that trash.

>>59618861
>>59618905
>>59618955
People impressed by uncommon words and who have no analytical ability

>Queen of the dogs. Queen of the lost.

As a poet myself, this line above is certified shit.
but tbh to be good, you need to practice, try to understand your emotion, the concept where the direction that you looking for to write,
but DO NOT showed it off to other people if it's not good enough.

it'll be a fucking cringefest. it'll discourage you to write more.

always checking whatever poems/works that you'd been working on like an hour later, or few hours later. then the next day reviewing it again.
next week, or next month, reviewing it again.

is it good? or just a pure dizzy masturbation garbage?
then re-do a new a one.
or delete it write a new one if you feel inspired.

always criticize yourself REAL HARD before others do so

the best advice is probably to write only for yourself,
not to impress others and shit.
you probably will always fail to impress other, impress yourself.
do not show off, it's pathetic.
value yourself more and stop trying to look for temporary validation, you'll burn yourself out

>>59618818
>I'm lost
>I'm free
>I'm me

Damn...

>they get wet. It begins to drizzle
Kek