Spider-Shim and her Amazing Friends! Issue #24
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Live another day edition
>Previously on the chronicles of narnia
>>27813942
Welcome to the superhero thread, mainly starring Sunset Shimmer as the Amazing Spider-Woman! All mlp/superhero green, art, and discussions are welcome.
Excelsior!
Story list:
Spider-bloke 2099
http://pastebin.com/zANAAGcy
untitled 7 - http://pastebin.com/P4Mawhsw
treppahcs - http://pastebin.com/ps2Ts8J1 (infamous Anon)
http://pastebin.com/xShn5AbX (Anti-Venom Anon)
The Rabble - http://pastebin.com/7awBpgv8
superkeaton - http://pastebin.com/u/superkeaton (official thread cumdumpster)
Klyntar - http://pastebin.com/mk5ymZ7V
Voidborn http://pastebin.com/VRcwJQfG
Beans - http://pastebin.com/yNaJFuz0
P.D.A. - http://pastebin.com/Pt2ZvFjk
Red http://pastebin.com/hTFVft7x
Shocker Anon - http://pastebin.com/CYSHBCi1
3 Suns - http://pastebin.com/u/3Suns
Myth
Shadowanon
FemAnon http://pastebin.com/xkSzdr5V
Spidergrill
>Thread theme
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fFpRHo0FJYA
>>27840970
>Soon after you are in the portal control room.
>Behind reinforced glass you can see the ring shaped portal containment arrays, reminding you of a 90s Science Fiction series.
>It’s not that life imitates art, a circle is simply the most effective two-dimensional shape.
>But that’s probably what they had been going for as well...
>You’re too busy to binge watch, you work close to the 100 hours a week.
>Somewhere in life you have made a wrong turn.
>...
>No.
>It’s worth it.
>You assure the safety or billions.
>Not all the people in the world, but close.
>And if you’d couple Equestria you’re now officially playing in a bigger league.
>International, and interdimensional peacekeeping.
>“The portal is opening.”
>You too see the readings spike up.
>Not even a second later the ring on the other side was filled with a cyan energyfield.
>You smile as you stand up from your seat to head to the glass to observe the portal opening closely.
“Then let us give a warm welcome.”
>A few seconds later the first person materialized.
>BonBon rights herself up from walking on all fours and makes space for anyone that follows before checking her body for everything being back in place.
>The next person to come through the portal walked bipedal already.
>A woman in her mid twenties with light magenta skin and a fitting robe of the same color,
>In her right hand she has her staff.
“Everyone stand down.”
>You order those who’d wanted to storm the portal room with guns.
“Starlight Glimmer. Now that’s interesting.”
>Her hairstyle was different...
>The counterpart of one of the most powerful criminals you had locked away in the fridge smiles to BonBon and makes place for those coming after her.
>Next came through Fleetfoot and the convenient store robber Flash Sentry.
>Followed by the hostage Lyra.
>And lastly Princess Twilight Sparkle, the only other person who manages to come through on her feet.
>>27868749
>She was wearing a crown and had a staff as well, but hers looked more like a scepter.
>The princess tapped her staff down on the floor twice and her body lights up.
>Her eyes glowed shortly and she sprouted wings and pony-like ears.
>With another tab the light show was over, along with the portal behind them.
>You head around the consoles and enter the portal room.
“Your majesty-”
>You bow to the princess shortly.
“Welcome to earth, and the United States of America.”
>“Spitfire, I assume? It’s nice to be here again, although I’d wish the circumstances were different.”
“I agree.”
>You nod to her again before turning to BonBon and Fleetfoot.
“There is a team ready to debrief Ms. Lyra and Mr. Sentry, you can rest for now but I’m expecting a full report by the end of the day.”
>“What’s going to happen to me?”
“That will be quite up to you now, Mr. Sentry.”
>A few people already came after you to collect them while Fleetfoot and BonBon head out.
“It’s good to put a face to the name, but I have already had the pleasure with the Twilight Sparkle of our world.”
>You honestly tell her after everyone else had left.
>“I know the feeling. I’ve met my the counterparts of my friends in this world, and it’s quite...” “Uncanny, isn’t?”
>“Uncanny?”
>Her eyes widen.
>“I wouldn’t use that bad of a word. Just ‘unusual’ maybe?”
“Unusual is my job, princess.”
>You look to Starlight Glimmer.
“I thought you bring a bigger envoy, princess?”
>“Starlight Glimmer.”
>She extents a hand to you which you shake after a moment of hesitation.
>“I’m Twilight’s assistant.”
>“Friend, and partner in our studies.”
>“Yes, Friend...”
>The Princess beams, while Starlight Glimmer only smiles weakly.
>“I didn’t bring guards as a sign of trust, as you have told me in our letters to one another. But I am more than capable of taking care of myself, and I have Starlight to help.”
“Yes...”
>>27868759
>Starlight flinches.
>“I knew I shouldn’t have come.”
>“Don’t say that, I’m glad you’re here.”
>“No I- ahh... ugh...”
>Starlight sighs and looks down.
“What’s going on?”
>“You know me, right? That’s why you’re hesitating. Well... not me, but this.”
>She gestures to her self.
>“I’m a bad guy, am I not?”
>It was your turn to flinch.
“The Starlight Glimmer of this world... yes, she’s locked up.”
>This Starlight closes her eyes.
>“What did I- did she do?”
>You’re not sure if you should tell her.
>She groans.
>“Something bad...”
>“You don’t know that Starlight-”
>The Princess puts a hand on her companions shoulder to make their eyes meet, then gives her a smile.
>“And it wasn’t you. You have done so much better these past two years.”
>Two years?
>As you listen to them talk, it’s quite obvious that this Starlight, the one of their world had been a ‘villain’ too at one point.
“I dislike to interrupt, but it still might pose a problem for Starlight to wander around freely.”
>“The distrust brought towards me is penance for my past...”
>“That doesn’t mean you have to take on the weight for something you didn’t do.”
>“But a version of me did, Twilight. It’s not like you’ve ever gone mad with power, have you?”
>“As a matter of fact I did – or at least the Twilight of this world did. How is she currently?”
>Good job directing the subject.
>She already knows, but you had agreed to act out the play before her.
“I regret to inform you that Miss Sparkle has passed away a few hours ago.”
>Starlight’s eyes widen, and the princess clutches a hand over her heart and looks down.
>“I understand...”
>As the atmosphere wasn’t truly pressed because the both of you knew the truth it was only awkward now.
“We should head out, there are government officials who like to meet you, but-”
>“I might intimidate them, don’t I?”
>>27868774
>Starlight seems genuinely concerned about it, and you can almost feel her wanting to do good.
>But doing good always comes at some sort of price.
“This is always a possibility.”
>“I understand. Is there anyone’s appearance I could take as a cover?”
>She couldn’t mean-
“Take someone’s appearance?”
>“As a disguise. Our universes are alternate versions of one another. Twilight runs around twice... or well... So it’s not far fetched for me to be the alternate version of someone who is trusted.”
>Now isn’t that interesting?
“And you have a spell for the occasion?”
>“We do.”
>The princess nods in agreement.
“Well, may I suggest myself then? You told me the alternate version of myself was leader of the Canterlot Sky guard? A reasonable bodyguard to accompany you.”
>“And you’ll be okay with this?”
>You smile.
“You wouldn’t believe the things I’ve seen. And it’s better me being uncomfortable than ordering someone else to be.”
>The two alter-terrestrials look at one another and then seemed to agree.
>“Very well then.”
>Starlight lifts her staff and – goes up in green flames – something you have only heard being described before by one of your inmates of the fridge...
>You smile wider.
“I’m impressed.”
>You look yourself up and down, as Starlight had taken your form.
>Her hair was down and she was still wearing the magenta robe as she had before her transformation.
>It made for an interesting look.
>She also holds herself in a quite... un-militaristic manner and was more relaxed.
>She looks old.
>But she’s smiling.
>Something you barely do these days.
“Those green flames. Is it usual for these kinds of transformations?”
>“No, only if you use a unity spell, which is intrinsic to changelings, but Starlight here is quite the versatile mage.”
“Changelings?
>“A species of shapeshifters, among other things. But this spell is their trademark.”
“We... are going to have much to discuss.”
transition
>>27868785
>Politics.
>You’d struggle to keep awake if you hadn’t been awake for as long as you have, but now...
>You smile and nod, and are probably much more agreeable than usual.
>Yet you still try to push your agenda through.
>You want to be able to give Twilight and ‘the other Spitfire’ a grand tour of your facility to show off how strong of an ally they would stand to gain.
>While in truth you want them to be able to meet Soarin and check his changeling-ness, as well as allow them to see this world’s Starlight Glimmer.
>Her punishment was quite hard for mind-controlling an entire region.
>It can be argued that she had meant well, after all.
>She did get a one way ticket to the fridge though.
>And maybe the whole solution was talking to her.
>Pretty much any superhero started out doing the wrong things for a reason they thought was okay.
>Heck, all Misty Fly did was for her own amusement.
>And when someone died from a tsunami she created she immediately wanted to redeem herself.
>Starlight Glimmer on the other hand...
>She never caused anyone’s death, but did... there was no proper legal term for mind control.
>Kidnapping or duress, and that on more than two thousand cases.
>Thought reform like a cult leader
>If she were a normally capable human.
>The thought of what she did was quite scary.
>Delete their individualism, making them all the same...
>Harmony through Unity.
“You said earlier something about Unity magic?”
>“Yes?”
“Does it differ from Equestrian magic?”
>“I think there’s a misunderstanding. By equestrian magic you mean the magic naturally occuring in Equestria?”
“Yes?”
>>27868797
>“There are a few schools of magic. Like Harmony, Unity, and Freedom, but others as well.”
“Would chaos be one of them?”
>“Chaos? What I believe you mean as Chaos is extreme Freedom, when anyone does as they please. Any type of magic in it’s extreme can lead to bad things. Harmony for example makes you completely unable to care for yourself... It’s all an balancing act, you see?”
>While you still have no idea what magic is to begin with it does seem quite right what she says.
“I’ll take your word for it.”
>“Does the name Discord ring any bells?”
“I see we are dancing around the issues well. Yes, I know of Discord.”
>Princess Twilight tilts her head.
>“Is he locked up too? In our world he’s just bored, but was ready to comply once we gave him companionship and something to do. While his methods are still unorthodox, he’s one of the most powerful magic casters on our side.”
“Discord...”
>You’ve imagined a few times what it would be like to have powers like his on your side.
“He has made the lives of many people quite miserable.”
>But, just like Starlight, he never caused anyone’s death, or severe harm.
>“Then I’d like to talk to him too.”
>She nods with a smile.
“You know I can’t release half of my menagerie on your word, there is protocol to follow. And many won’t be happy if it’s even considered he could get out.”
>“Yes, I understand, you have a certain way of doing things. And we don’t come to your world to force our way on you. We’d only like to present you with this new option.”
“I can’t quite imagine Discord doing things to help others in need.”
>“He’s a good guy, really... a prankster but never harmful, fun at parties, but gets jealous easily when the mare he wanted to take along has another guest...”
>Discord and... a woman?
>>27868809
>Now that’s a disturbing image.
>“But he’s has a brilliant mind, and I consider him a close friend of mine. I meet him to tea every other week.”
“You meet Discord to tea?”
>She chuckles.
>“Yes, is that so strange?”
“I just... would be concerned about my security. What if he only pretends to be your friend until he can strike.”
>The Princess’ smile fades.
>“He’s my friend, Colonel Spitfire, and a true one at that. Many have asked me how I can trust him. But when I think about the Canterlot aristocracy, there I can’t trust anyone. There, everyone is a pretender only out for his own gain.”
>“We enjoy each others company, can cheer the other up if they are sad and would go through Tartarus to save the other.”
>“Co- Spitfire? Is everything alright?”
>You had looked away.
>The relationship this young /mare/ has with the alternate version of one of the most chaotic beings in existence was better than you had with anyone.
“I envy you then. I, myself, am lacking a couple of friends whom I can trust.”
>You sigh.
“But that’s part of the reason you are here. Because I need people whom I can trust back.”
>She gives you a smile.
>“Forgive me, I have gotten quite defensive.”
“Nono, forgive me. I assume you had to defend that particular friendship a few times already.”
>“No circumstance that would minder my friendship with him.”
>You nod.
“I understand. Again, forgive me.”
dumped from end of last thread.
Comments, questions, concerns?
>>27868854
a few spelling mistakes, but I like that we're getting more insight into Spitfire's character
>>27868854
I like it, it gives an Agents of SHIELD vibe of seriousness without being overly gritty (yet, I don't know).
Also, what I thought watching that series.
"Welcome to SHIELD, the only organization where a Cronic Backstab Disorder is worth a raise."
>>27868942hail hydra
>>27868748
>23:51:36
>I expect 350 replies by the end of the day.
>>27869189
Hey, I'm going off EST!
>>27869234
k
bump!!
d-double bump?
where the hell is everyone!?
>>27870591
I'm finishing up a small update
From the last thread
>Be Starlight Glimmer, director of this facility.
>And you need a drink…...badly.
>It’s been over twelve hours since you saw the news report.
>And in that time frame you were able to sleep and plan.
>But right now you were going over a few detail while thinking of your past and future.
>You thought back on how you got this job and how you were put in charge of this lab.
>Everything was fine when you first started and there were no
>Until one day a few out of towners came by and found the lab.
>Upon finding them, you figured it would be simple to get them to leave, maybe even bribe them.
>But as soon as you saw them, they were gunned down.
>One moment they were in front of you alive but then they were on the ground in a pool of their own blood.
>As you were about to yell at the guards when they told you they were ordered to eliminate any unauthorized personnel on the premise.
>You lost your temper and told….no ordered them to not to kill any outsiders but they refused.
>They told you that those orders can from the owner of this facility and that you couldn’t stop that order.
>You felt cold that day knowing you couldn’t stop the death of a few people.
>But from that day on, you tried to do everything in your power to stop everyone from even entering the lab.
>Barbed wire fences, padlock on the fences and even a few fallen trees on the road.
>You even had a few rumors spread around while have a few guards making some noise those nights.
>It worked for the most part but the few that did see the lab, well it left a bad taste in your mouth.
>And now because of your ideas to keep this place unreachable, two people get in.
>One dead and the other left with one of the symbiotes.
>Because of this, your life is now on the line and you need to get that symbiote back and fast.
>Or else you’ll be the next one to leave this place.
>The phone on the desk beeps as you press a button.
“Yes?”
> “They’re here.”
>>27870943
>You sigh knowing this was the last thing you want to do.
“Send them in.”
>Your door opens and in walks a couple of armed men and women.
>They stop in front of your desk, waiting for the reason why they’re here.
>You type a few things on your computer causing an image to be holographically projected.
“This here is your target.”
>The image is the white and black hero from the news last night.
“You need to find him and retrieve the symbiote he’s wearing.”
>One of the women starts to laugh.
> “THIS is our target?”
>You glare at her and nod.
“Yes but he was able to kill about twelve people the same night he bonded with it.”
>One of the men whistles loudly.
> “That’s some kill count.”
>You groan as they continue to talk.
“Look, I need you all to find him and get that symbiote back. Will that be a problem?”
>They all shake their heads negatively.
“Then go and find him.”
>They leave your office as you slump against your chair.
>You have a bad taste in your mouth but you don’t know if it’s because of the child or the hunters.
Small update on Starlight. So thoughts?
>>27871063
intriguing
I'm down to see where this leads
>>27871063
I like it. I mostly like antagonist with more motivation than Silver age Loki. It's intriguing.
>>27871133
>>27871144
Thanks. I figured I give a little look at Starlight to show it's up in the air what will happen to her.
a reminder that Gwen is a whore
also bump
>>27871834
By that logic so is pure keaton
>>27872236
keaton is always pure!
pls no bully him!
>>27872293
we know its you keaton!
>>27872349
Dammit!
>>27872361
>>27871834
When do we get green of Anon walking in on his dad and Sunset?
>>27872361
>>27872513
I, uh... probably not in this thread? Or, uh, ever?
>>27872519
N-No thank you!
>>27872553
Awww, you think you have a choice, how adorable
>>27872569
Come on Bloke between you and keaton, I think we both know who's pure, and who'said the slut.
>>27872662
*who's
fucking Auto-correct.
>>27872733
Keaton is definitely the slut.
I think the only pure one here is treppahcs
>>27868730
hi hs
~zim zoop
>>27872762
It's been a while since we praosed manos
>>27872513
Fuck off cuck.
>>27874140
Rabble is humansup who wrote manos
>>27874193
oooooooh!
So, I'm thinking of writing a story, but I'm worried about including elements that have already appeared in other stories, like S.H.I.E.L.D. or Hydra or a symbiote or Anon being a bad guy.
Should I go through with it or not bother if it isn't going to be origional?
Hadn't been here in a while. Beans still the big motherfucker of the thread? Femanon, Roommate and Red still dead?
>>27874823
Don't worry about originality, SHIELD and HYDRA are are fucking huge anyway.
>>27874840
Red is alive, just hiding while they write. I believe we've all mostly come back to loving Beansat night.Mostly.
>>27875066
>come back
What happened? Last I checked in everybody was tripping over him.
>>27875606
we were?
I suggest loving trep, as much as I'd like to suggest untitled, but treps story is simpler. let's fawn like retards over him.
>>27875632
Don't do that.
>>27875650
you're reliable
all hail the king
>>27875689
trevor for trepphacs confirmed
>>27875689
I try to be but don't worship me. Look at what happened to Beans
>>27868730
heres that update I promised
>its a three on one fight, like it or not you are going to have to be on the defensive.
>The Captain is the first to make a move, charging right at you at full speed as Spiderwoman and Vinyl split going to each of your flanks
>Captain Armors fist impacts your shield with enough force to put a small explosive to shame staggering you just long enough for him to get in two more hard strikes
>one being with his own shield across your face.
>"You're getting sloppy Taskmaster."
>instead of coming back from the punch you roll with the force or the impact and move into a high kick knocking away his shield
>it clatters to the floor before being caught up in a snare of webbing and thrown back to the Captain by Spiderwoman
>"But the Captain has a team behind him Skeletor."
>something about Spiderwoman's voice sounds familiar but you cant quite place your finger on it.
>although you don't have much time to think about it as you see in the corner of your eye that Vinyl has removed her glasses and her eyes are already aglow
>you dodge out of the way as quickly as you can stealing Spiderwoman's agility and flexibility just as a bright beam of light just barely sears under you as your body twists like someone pole vaulting
>the blast impacts directly into Spiderwoman knocking her to the ground a large scorch mark on her costume
>you stick the landing a few feet away from the Captain letting Vinyl see her handiwork on her "teammate"
"I'd hardly call you a team. More like an unorganized rabble."
>"oh shit! Webs are you okay?!"
>she is given a response in the form of a groan as she forces herself to sit up now with a bit of her skin showing through the costume
>"anyone get the licence plate on that car?"
>>27876138
>"Get a hold of yourselves recruits. We need to stay focused or Taskmaster will take advantage of-"
>your Shield makes contact with Armors face quickly followed by the same two strikes he gave you previously
>the physical onslaught goes on for another second or two before each of your fists are snared by webbing
>THWIP-THWIP!
>your muscles strain as you pull his hands back away from the captain but he is fighting back as best he can.
"you need to learn to play nice with others. Captain, Vinyl, I got his arms wide open!"
>Armor pulls himself together and with all his might punches Taskmaster directly in the gut
>the strain on your webs quickly dissipates as he collapses to the floor.
>wasting no time Vinyl rushes over and holds him down as you web his arms and legs to the floor before he can stand up again
"you guys go on and get the captives out. I can handle this guy."
>"Are you sure Webs? I mean, he did fight off the three of us pretty well."
>you wave the argument away.
"He's tied down out of air, and you will only be one room over. Besides, it wont take all three of us to open a door and loosen some ropes right?"
>"I don't think they would hold Wonderbolt prisoners with just ropes Webs..."
>Armor quickly brings the conversation to an end with orders"
>"We are running out of time, the longer we wait the harder it will be to get out of here. Spiderwoman will watch over Taskmaster while we get the others out of the holding room. Vinyl, lets go."
>"Whatever you say Captain."
>the duo run over to the door leaving you and a tied up Taskmaster in the room as they rush inside the holding area.
>smiling you take a seat next to Taskmaster and look over his uniform
"Nice threads. Where did you pick them up?"
>>27876145
>Taskmaster doesn't say anything, instead he juts looks at the door as Captain Armor and Vinyl Scratch close it shut behind them
"Hey. Don't be like that, sure you lost a fight but thats no reason to give me the cold shoulder."
>you reposition yourself to be in front of him blocking his view and lift his head to face you
>the two of you look to one other in silence for a time before he starts to laugh quietly
"huh, what's so funny?"
>the lenses on the mask covering his eyes slide up revealing them to you.
>"Now its just you and me."
"what is that supposed to mean?"
>his eyes begin to glow like Vinyl's
>"What it means, Spiderwoman. Is That your friends cant help you now."
>Taskmaster raises his voice loud enough to echo in the room
>"Training course setup 2-C."
>the room begins to glow with a bright blue light and the doors in the room are sealed up again before the whole room shifts and changes
>instead of a wide open area with nothing blocking sight or view the room is now a mish-mash of various obstacles scattered around
>just as you look back to Taskmaster his eyes release its blast
>you are thrown back into a large pillar
>all you can do for a short while is groan at the sudden pain, both from the blast and the sudden impact into a VERY hard surface
>with a cough you force out what can barely be called words
"oh, that's what you meant."
>>27876155
sorry about it being a day later than I intended. but I should have more for you later tonight!
feel free to offer constructive criticism
>>27876179
Glad to finally hear from you
You write the fight scenes good, can't wait to read "Taskmaster" and Spidey's confrontation
>>27874840
Death will be too convenient now, wouldn't it?
>>27876525
So... any progress on your green? Just asking out of curiosity.
>>27876552
More or less
I'll be posting soon enough
I just have a lot of things to do these days, but don't worry
I promise that one day I will finish the entire story
>>27876568
It's all good.
>>27876585
>>27876600
All in good time
>>27876568
>>27876807
Glad to know, Red!
>>27877227
Anything for you
>>27877474
Oh god, not you too!
>>27877531
>>27877531
I don't torment
I just playfully hint
>>27877583
And this is why we love you.
So, I'm reviewing my notes for Shimmering...
And I've got a plan...I just don't know how I'm going to give this a happy ending.
>>27878058
skrull/changeling duplicates?
>>27878058
>ending
>happy
>don't know how
You can't just turn dark and edgy like that!
That's not buena!
>>27878072
how is this the first time we've made changelings skrulls? I mean fucks sake there's even a skrull queen.
>>27878072
I... hm, you might have something there....
Ooooh, that's a deliciously cruel thought~
>>27878076
Oh dear, you didn't think it would stay comfy and cozy for long, did you?
You've had eight issues to enjoy that sort of thing, but now it's time to move forwards.
Into the dark.
>>27878132
You won't get away with this
>>27878160
But darling, I already have~
>>27878132
nice chair
>>27878191
You've been hanging out with Red haven't you?!
Next you'll be killing everyone and blasting linkin park in the background!
>>27878212
And you'll read it anyways.
>>27878204
For real, the Carnage covers are fantastic.
>>27878263
>>27878320
I'm feeling it, yeah.
>>27878373
We can't be having that now, can we?
>>27878428
seriously the joke is almost dead knock it off
>>27878428
Take the loss bloke,take it like keaton takes dick.
>>27878506
Rude.
But seriously, I'm very excited to be working on the new issue. Hopefully I'll have it out soonish.
>>27878501
>>27878506
>>27871063
>Be Sunset but you’re wearing a fresh Spider-Woman outfit.
>You’re inside Rarity’s room/workshop, marveling at how she was able to make this suit feel like it’s brand new.
“Thanks again, Rarity. Sorry for coming at this time.”
>Rarity, who was wearing a loose blue bathrobe, waved her hand dismissively.
> “Oh pish posh, darling. I did say come by anytime and it’s a good thing Sweetie and my parents aren’t here at the moment.”
>She grabs your two bracelets and puts them on your wrists.
> “And with that your ensemble is complete.”
>You smile and give her a hug.
“I can’t thank you enough, Rarity. If I had to deal with that smell..”
> “I understand, Sunset, but please be careful this time.”
>Rarity hugs you back as her robe came a it undone.
>She awkwardly releases the hug and fixes her robe.
“Sorry.”
> “It’s alright, darling. Now not to sound rude but I really need to get dressed right now.”
>You nod while putting on your mask.
>Walking over to her window, you open it and step outside of it.
>Looking behind you, you wave at Rarity.
“I’ll see you later, Rarity.”
>You then shot some web and start swinging away from your friend’s house.
>As you were passing a few town blocks, you felt as if you were as free as a bird.
>You almost lost yourself in a nice fantasy if it weren’t for your hands free ringing in your ear.
>Releasing your webs and flipping in the air, you push the button on the side of your head.
“Yeah?”
> “Hey Sunset, where are you?”
“I’m near the shopping district and about to head home. Why?”
>>27878562
I think we should start sexually bullying bloke instead of keaton.
>>27878598
>Rainbow Dash and your friends give you a call if they ever see anything and this must be important.
> “There’s something going on near the bank. Don’t know what’s going on in there but the cops are surrounding the place.”
“I’ll be there in a bit.”
>You end the call and start to swinging towards the church while grumbling.
“They can’t do something themselves for a day.”
>After a few minutes, you land on top of the bank and see a bunch of police cruisers near the front.
“I’m guessing it’s some superpowered villain.”
>Looking around, you see a vent and a door.
“.......Not taking those choices.”
>You walk to the back of the bank and you see an open window.
“Now that’s a good choice.”
>Falling over the edge, you hold out your arms and stick to the wall.
>Slowly making your down the wall, you open the window a bit more and crawl inside the office.
>You land on the ground quietly and walk towards the door.
>Opening the door ajar, you see a bunch of people on the ground as a few guys in suits with masks and assault rifles.
"Guess I was wrong for once."
>You hear them start to talk as their voices
> “You think this’ll work.”
> “It better work. I didn’t plan this for nothing.”
> “And the fall back plan?”
> “With the others in the safe. Can’t show our hand just yet.”
>You close the door and try to think of what to do.
>It sounded like they may have a few people near the safe, so if you tried doing your usual heroic stick.
>But you can’t just sit here doing nothing.
>You have to do something and fast.
>You pull out your phone and dial a number.
“Hey, I’m gonna need your help.”
>>27878619
New part. Some robbers and a mysterious helper to come. So thoughts?
>>27878612
seconded.
>>27878634
I'm down to see this mysterious helper. And just what exactly those thieves are plotting.
>>27878612
>>27878637
It's not rape if I like it
>>27878661
Well I wanted to write were Sunset at least has a partner right now. Now to figure out who.
Also pastebin has been updated
>>27878665
Good, good. Let the dicks flow through you.
>>27879234
Wait a minute
Wait a minute...
You're trying to turn me into a whore like Keaton aren't you?!
Nice try, but it won't happen!
>>27879288
Too late.
>>27879387
>>27879516
>>27879894
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uiCf_Urxggc&autoplay=1
What you just heard...was logic
>>27876155
>this little prison break is just the thing you needed.
>SOMBRA's contract expired a week ago and now your payment has been confirmed which means.
"do tell your superiors that this is nothing personal."
>moaning troopers lay about the room alongside several dead comrades
>you step on a wounded troopers leg where he was shot as you approach a large mainframe
>his screams of pain fall on deaf ears.
>your new employer has paid a great deal for the information stored here.
"Research data, list of active members, funding, high priority locations, passwords."
>a small click is heard as a small panel lifts from the console letting you connect a data storage and begin your transfer
"all of it stored here, and now.."
>ding!
>reaching forward you remove the data storage device and hold it up to your eyes
"here..."
>the door to the room opens suddenly and your previous employer along with a few other troopers rush in
>"we need to secure this room in case the Wonderbolts-"
>she stops mid sentence and witnesses the macabre scene of broken and bloodied soldiers laying about before noticing you at the mainframe
>"TASKMASTER!"
>>27880310
>you draw your sidearm and gun down the guards before they can react in time leaving just you and her left
"like I told the others, this is nothing personal. Your contract expired and another was accepted."
>you slide the data into your pouch and step towards her, weapon still trained on her chest
>"There really is no honor with you Mercs is there? You don't even bother to leave the facility before breaking into it?!"
>shes holding you up buying time for someone to notice you.
>its not going to work.
"If I was sorry for this, id say it now."
>...
>you pull the trigger discharging your weapon the bullet striking true dropping her unceremoniously to the ground with a-
>BANG!
>you reach up to your communicator and remove it from your suit dropping it on top of her limp body as you walk past her
"Hyrda is paying too well for this information. I barely had to do any work on this one."
"Captain, over here!"
>you cant believe it, Captain Armor is here!
>beating your hands against the cells force shielded door you get the Captain Armors attention and he rushes over to you
>"Spitfire? How long have you been here!?"
"I've lost track of time. it could have been weeks or it could have been months. Please you have to get us out of here!"
>Captain Armor looks over to the girl with him as she guesses at the code a few times before she opens one of the other doors
>a worn and weakened Wonderbolt steps out and wraps her in a hug
>she seems surprised at the act but doesn't resist it until it eventually comes to an end.
>"Vinyl. can you open this one?"
>the blue haired girl rushes over to the door and peers over her glasses to the panel of buttons
>"yeah it should be easy. their fingerprints are still clear enough for me to see them. I just need a second or two to get the correct order."
>luckily she gets it on the first try and the shield drops letting you out.
>"there we go. easy."
"We need to get everyone out of here Captain."
>"yes we do. everyone."
>>27880326
>he looks over to Vinyl as she nods before moving to the next door and repeating the process
"who is she Captain? a new recruit?"
>"as far as I know she is. She and another recruit stole Daring's car to try and break in here and I was sent to stop them."
>so, he didn't know about you being here.
>now you feel incredibly luckier than before.
"but you didn't, why?"
>Armor smiles as the next cell opens and Soarin slowly steps out in a similar way as the previous
>"Because they were on a mission of their own. They were the ones who wanted to break in and free prisoners."
>you cant help but stare at the girl as she releases the last door with a somber expression on her face.
>"Vinyl, whats wrong?"
>Vinyl looks over the group again as if looking for someone.
>"he isn't here."
>"He isn't?"
>in a rage she smashes her glasses on the floor revealing her brightly glowing eyes
>"No. Where else could they have kept him though?! This is the prison holding area!"
>the Captain raises his hand in a effort to calm her
>"Calm down. We will find him. I'm not leaving anyone behind."
"who is she looking for?"
>"one of her friends was kidnapped by SOMBRA, his name is Anonymous. Any idea where they might have kept him?"
>as Spiderwoman slowly lifts herself up you take this chance to burn the webbing away from your hands with the powers so graciously given to you by Vinyl.
>or stolen, poh-tato pah-tato.
>your knuckles crack as you tighten your hands then let them loose, now free from any restrictive webbing
"My orders were to delay you and the others as long as I could."
>Spiderwoman is standing though still shaken and slightly wobbly as you step forward
"and with it being three on one, I think I did just fine. But now"
>you roll your sleeves up slightly exposing your wrists to the air
"Its one on one."
>THWIP!
>a rope of webbing shoots out from your wrist into her chest quickly snapping her out of her trance
>"Huh? What the-!"
>>27880335
>gripping the rope of organic web in your hand you pull her into you with all your might
>since she wasn't fully recovered nor expecting it she put up little resistance as her body comes flying towards you
>or rather, into your fist.
>you look onward as her body collides with your strike and her head moves close to yours and slightly over your sholder from the sudden impact
>a wet and uncontrollable cough is all you hear from her as you whisper to her
"And you are outgunned."
>slowly her hand comes up from behind you and it grabs your shoulder weakly before she faces you under her mask
>under your own you smile at her
>"Thats okay..."
>suddenly she seems to have recovered from the strike and raises her own fist and smashes it into your mask while the other hand pulls your head into it.
>with a quick leap backwards she sticks the landing in a classic superhero pose ready to fight
>"I"
>she coughs momentarily
>"I like it when boys play rough."
>god that hurt like hell.
>and you were certainly not expecting him to be able to copy abilities along with moves like Armor warned you about.
>that would have been pretty important to know before hand.
>Taskmaster shakes his head and readies himself
>"Then you're going to love me."
"Whatever you say Batman."
>you swiftly shoot web projectiles as fast and numerous as you can.
>but to your disappointment none of them make contact as he dives behind a large climbing wall out of your sight.
"Oh so now you're going to run?!"
>with a jump and a web swing you chase him around the wall where you lose sight of him
>"not exactly."
>you look to your side to see him sticking to the wall like you would just in time to dodge a jump kick.
>he lands just past you and quickly follows his first attack with a round house which you block with your arm and return with your own
>>27880349
>he also blocks it leaving the two of you kind of awkwardly in the same position as the other with one arm and one leg extended
"so I was outgunned? we seem to be pretty even so far."
>the slides in the mask drop down again as his eyes begin to glow
"shit... I forgot about that."
>"already? That's a shame."
>the blast comes too close for comfort just grazing your mask and giving you a half burn half cut cheek where it is now exposed
>but the wall behind fares much worse with a small smoking crater where it struck
>with all his might he shoves himself forward pushing you against the wall.
"AGAIN WITH THE WALLS!"
>you cant get yourself in a position to fight him effectively.
>that means its time for a move where nobody wins.
>you smash your head forward into his getting both of you to stubble or fall slightly
>"ah, that was cheap."
>you shoot web at his legs and swing him as hard as you can into the same wall as you were just pressed against.
"Now how do you like it?!"
>he groans as he frees himself from the web and stands back up.
>"about as much as you will like this."
>his web strikes your face as he pulls off your mask revealing your face to him.
>you stand there stunned that he would go through the effort to remove it before beating you
>and he stands there motionless as the web covered mask lays on the floor
>"Shes... You?"
>there is a loud blaring of a alarm and the room speaks
>"Room returning to previous layout. Prisoners being moved."
>Taskmaster looks up to the light
>"no!"
>then over to the door where Captain and Vinyl went into
>it opens revealing both of them along with numerous others in Wonderbolt uniforms or SOMBRA prisoner attire.
>Vinyl is first to react.
>"Sunset?! is that you?!"
>she then faces Taskmaster
>"Lookout!"
>her eyes glow brightly as she charges another blast
>Taskmasters eyes do the same just as Vinyl releases her energy
>>27880360
>the two beams of light collide with one another mid air and colorful beams of various different shades come from the midpoint
>Captain Armor raises his shield covering his eyes and those of the prisoners nearest to him
>you raise your own arm to save your eyes from the intense light
>this continues on for a short time before both beams of light dissipate and the room seems three shades too dark from your eyes trying to adjust.
>Taskmaster stands there breathing heavily facing Vinyl who is in the same situation as he.
>Captain Armor steps forward
>"Taskmaster wouldn't be able to mimic that..."
>so whoever this is..
>"you aren't Taskmaster, are you?"
>everyone looks to the one who was assumed to be Taskmaster for an answer
>all besides Vinyl who seems to be near the point of crying.
>"Don't tell me that's you... It isn't you right?"
>isn't you? what is that supposed to-
>Your eyes widen slightly, his actions suddenly making much more sense.
>his knowledge of Vinyl, his anger towards you, and his reaction to removing your mask.
>you stare at the mask of the person in front of you.
"Anonymous?..."
>the masked villain faces you slowly as he speaks.
>"you got my father killed... saved the killer and let the innocent die."
>he then turns to the prisoners
>"and when I was trying to recover those damn Wonderbolts tried to kill me and steal my fathers work!"
>Anonymous' voice is getting louder and angrier by the second as he speaks even jabbing a finger at Vinyl
>"They took what little bits of a life I had left away from me! And now the one person I let myself be revealed to sides with them!"
>in a quick rage filled motion he grabs his mask tearing it off to reveal his face to everyone including you.
>"and to put the nail in the damn coffin the one place I was told I could be safe from you. From the Wonderbolts is broken into by one man and two teenage girls!"
>>27880373
>Anonymous looks at the mask in his hand before placing it back on his face his eyes showing though the unsealed slots
>"you are all nothing but villains out to make the world a worse place than it already is."
>even now when he is hopelessly outnumbered by different heroes he readies himself to fight, though no one else does.
>"I can't let that happen. I won't let it happen."
>a woman in Wonderbolts attire with orange and yellow hair steps forward from the group with Captain Armor.
>"look, kid... I think you have things mixed up-"
>"I won't listen to lies! I've been betrayed enough! Training room, setup course D-1!"
>as soon as the words leave his mouth the room goes black and the hard surfaces are replaced and removed.
>once your eyes adjust the room now looks like a wooded area in the middle of the night with trees and foliage all over.
>but Anonymous is gone.
"Where did he go?"
>Vinyl races off to where Anonymous once stood and looks around at the grassy floor
>"his footprints lead in that-"
>a computerized voice comes back
>"Trainee has left the area, room resetting."
>you couldn't have taken all of them on even if you wanted to.
>rushing through the halls you sound as many alarms as you can trying to get as many troopers to this area as fast as possible.
>some should have already been here in guard.
"where are the-"
>your feet come to a stop as you see a mix of broken and beaten down soldiers laying around the halls.
"oh. that's where they are.."
>you open up your communications
"Taskmaster sir, the prisoners have been released. I cant take them all on, what are my orders?"
>silence
"Taskmaster?"
>again silence.
>you switch the line over to the training signal
"Watcher, its Anonymous, the Wonderbolt Prisoners have been let free. I cant fight them. What are my orders?"
>for a third time your answer is silence.
>what the hell is going on, where is everyone?!
>>27880385
>one of the soldiers reaches up and tugs on your pant leg
>"protect the mainframe... its the heart of the facility."
>you kneel down next to the trooper his face disfigured from a fight
"where is the mainframe?"
>with all the energy her can muster he pulls off his wrist device and gives it to you
>"follow the coordinates, good luck."
>you don't say anything to him.
>at least these are some form of orders to follow.
>following the coordinates on the gps in the device you eventually make it to the area you were instructed to go.
>just to be greeted by numerous more defeated troopers, only now some of them have gunshot wounds and other lethal marks.
>cautiously you step inside the room.
>your heart stops as you see who lay on the floor in a pool of blood.
"mom...?"
>you slowly kneel down beside her
"what were you doing here?"
>"what were you doing here?"
>surprisingly you hear your own voice coming from her pocket.
>reaching inside you pull out a small communicator
"no."
>your voice is heard again from the device
>"no."
>as you hold it in your hand you notice another one that appears to have fallen off of her and into her crimson pool
>fingers trembling you lift it up closer to you.
>your voice didn't come though this one when you talked.
>pausing you look over her body
>there is a clear gunshot wound right through her heart.
>gunshots...
>>27880396
>you switch the communicator over to Taskmasters signal.
"a Wonderbolt didn't do this."
>"a Wonderbolt didn't do this."
>crushing the device in your hand your rage builds up even more than before
>your mother was Watcher!
>she knew who you were and never once told you she was here!
>and she was the only parent you had left.
"and Taskmaster killed her."
>you turn your attention to the large computer system and walk over to it.
"protect the mainframe."
>a small latch is open where various connections could have been made
"I'm too late to even do that..."
>looking around at the bodies your rage reaches it peak.
>you gather all the weapons and ammunition you can scavenge and place them on the system.
>various small explosives that the troopers carried you now arm and place around the room before syncing them to a detonator like you were trained to do
>by Taskmaster and by Watcher, your mother.
>walking out the door you ready the detonator while you step into an elevator and ride it up to the vehicle bay
>the door opens just in time for you to spot the Wonderbolts and Sunset finish loading up into a vehicle and drive off leaving a number of guards incapacitated on the floor and walls
>you press the button and the sound of the explosion echos throughout the garage and the pit loses power as you take keys off a garage worker and unlock a car.
>the door clunks shut and you start the engine as what SOMBRA members are close enough to this garage rush inside desperate to escape the powerless and now unstable location grab whatever vehicles they can
>you drive out of The Pit up a ramp and continue on before wondering where you will go.
"there isn't that many places to go""I guess I'll just go home..."
-----
and that's all I got this time. hopefully its enough for a decent update.
Till next time!
>>27880396
>>27880385
>>27880412
Oh Anon... so unlucky...
>>27880396
>>27880412
Ow, the edge
>>27880434
careful not to cut yourself
When are we gonna see Shim in Civil War?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_iu5TnvEUs8
>>27880396
>>27880412
Just tell me how to get to the MAIN-FRAME
bump
>>27868730do they have to be super tho?
>>27881154
They do.
>>27881154
Or they don't.
We really don't care, if their good.
>>27881174
*so long as their good.
Fuck, can't type for shit tonight
>>27881163
Well, there's Punisher.
>>27881228
I had a long week so my brain is dead.
>>27881247
Didn't mean it in a "you're stupid" kind of way.But how could you forget Batman?
>>27881258
I need to sleep, but my green is calling.
>>27880470
We will
>>27881258
But how could you forget Robin?
>>27881369
Just one example
>>27868816
>As opposed to just now you are now young and have a spectacularly virile body.
>So, be Sunset Shimmer.
>After you had made sure nobody got hurt you chased after this ‘Spider-Man’, but you haven’t had any luck.
>You have a hunch he’s not going to show up again
>You don’t even know why he showed himself in the first place.
>This morning he... he went shopping on the farmers marked in full transformation.
>He’s reckless and needs to be stopped, you know that.
>But this didn’t help you from thinking about his words.
>No matter how often you’d like to dismiss them.
>You need to join the Wonderbolts if you want to continue saving lives like that.
>You-
>Your phone rings and snaps you out of your train of thought.
>Caller ID showed it was Anon so you pick it up quickly.
“Hey, Anon~”
>You’re on a rooftop again, so you doubt anyone would listen in.
>“Hey, Shimmy~”
“Whats up?”
>“Didn’t see you in college today, and internet tells me you had just been in a fight. So... you know... I was worried.”
>You smile.
“Aww, that’s sweet, but I’m okay. Unharmed in fact.”
>The pain in your ankle was proof of your lie, but you don’t want him to worry about you.
>“Nice. Got the bad guy?”
>Bad guy.
>>27881940
“I don’t think he’s a bad guy, just... way reckless, you know. It’s the difference between a vigilante and a super hero.”
>“Ahh. But you’re my super heroine~”
>You flinch a little.
“Not exactly... Listen, that’s a somewhat complicated issue.”
>It’s not, but you don’t know how to properly explain it.
>“With the Wonderbolts?”
“Anon, are you in a save spot to talk about this in the open?”
>“Yeah, I left college to search for you. Was sick of hearing people go on and on about stuff I already know to begin with.”
>Hmm... While Anon is wickedly smart, he usually is more humble.
“You still need to have enough attendance, you know?”
>“But so do you.”
“True that.”
>Being Spider-woman once again interferes with the rest of your live.
>“Can we meet?”
>You look around the empty rooftop.
“I guess so, but if my target shows up again I need to run, you know.”
>“The pain of dating a super hero~ I choose this, remember?”
>You open your mouth to respond but shut it again.
>Yes, he did choose this.
>He knew from the beginning.
>But does that change how things are right now?
>With... Twilight... You almost forgot to be mad at him.
>It’s probably better to be in a relationship with someone who knows than with someone whom you have to lie to all the time.
>You tell him a cafe where you can pick him up.
updated http://pastebin.com/P4Mawhsw
230KB -> 266KB
I should update more often
>>27882009
You can update at the end of every thread if that helps.
>>27882009
eeyup
Surprised nobody else has picked up Punisher Anon desu
>>27882421
Same.
>>27882421
cause punisher and spiderman wouldn't get along
>>27883217
Is that the only thing stopping the story though? Rabble's story involves a protagonist who hates spiderwoman.
>>27883229
should we break down which writefag has done something original in their story?
>>27883248
Sure
>>27883477
Good luck with that
Pre-work bump.
We actually had a punisher anon for one or two of the original threads.
>>27884415
Wish that continued
>>27884910
Same.
beans i miss you
>>27885467
he'll be back
>>27886094
>>27886094
>>27886446
Probably the most clever, and worst decision the show could've made
>>27886579
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q3RP4R_N0iI
>>27886579
B-but... Beans?!
>>27886579
That's why he's never here, innit?
He's always observing and reporting to his Hydra overlords!
>>27886664
No it's because he hates you.
>>27886905
I hate me too, but I still show up
>>27886922
We wish you wouldn't
>>27887006
F-fine then
I'll just go, you'll never see me again.
Tell Keaton...
I always wanted to hold his hand...
>>27887006
rood
>>27887041
Does this mean I have to take over as chief slut-shamer?
>>27887106
Oh hell no
Did you really think this god was leaving?
>>27880412
>Once you get a decent distance away from the now ruined facility you park the car near the top of a hill where you can see the city in the distance.
>The engine hums softly and you get out and stand there gazing upon your old home your mind trying to make sense of everything that has happened to you in this short time.
>How you went from being a normal High-school teenager, to a gifted freak, then made into a soldier for a organization you had no idea existed.
>Leaning inside the window of the car you turn the car off and the sound of the engine dies away leaving you in peace as you look down to the keys in your hand
"What a mess of a life I've been given"
>What do you do now?
>Your old house will soon be taken by the bank since you don't have any income.
"Mom was part of SOMBRA. So its likely that other members of my family might have ties."
>If you were thinking clearly you would have snatched something that might get you some funds for a while
>Alas, you didn't.
>Tossing the keys up and down your attention slowly moves to the trunk of the car.
"I'm going to need to get a source of income somehow."
>with nothing to lose you walk over and unlock the trunk
"A job, a career."
>the trunk lid opens up and a set of dim lights turn on revealing a very small arsenal of small arms.
>you reach down into the selection and examine a set of 9mm Compacts and a SOMBRA standard issue MP5k each weapon having a single spare magazine loaded.
>Taskmasters voice echos in your memory
>"Calm yourself. You are not Anonymous now, now you are Taskmaster. Act like it."
>You will make do with what you have.
>but what you need is...
"a contract."
>>27887165
>the ride out of that prison has a mixed feelings of emotion from each passenger in the armored vehicle.
>the prisoners you have come to learn as Spitfire, Misty fly, Soarin, and others all look to have a great weight lifted off their shoulders
>But Sunset and yourself feel nothing but disappointment, failure, and betrayal.
>not even the sound of your music in your earbuds can alleviate that feeling.
>pulling out your Wonderbolts Identification you look at your image staring back at you.
>Vinyl Scratch, Wonderbolts Recruit.
>"You okay Vinyl?"
>you stare at the photo for a few moments longer before pocketing it.
"No, I'm not okay Sunset..."
>you feel her hand on your shoulder before she speaks again
>"I know it wasn't what we expected, but we did get to help those who needed it."
>you roll your shoulder sliding her hand off leaving a loud silence hang over the two of you for a while as the ride goes on.
>after a few minutes of that you speak to her again
"The only reason I joined the Wonderbolts was to get Anonymous out of there. Not only did that not happen, he thinks I did it to betray him."
>"-but you didn't. You did it to try and save him, that's what matters Vinyl that's what a hero does."
"Im not a hero."
>you snap at her a bit louder than intended
"I was just trying to help someone I had a connection with... Trying to help a friend."
>the vehicle comes to a stop and everyone starts to get out
>you and Sunset are the last to step out as Wonderbolt security surround the vehicle and get aid for the freed captives.
>the voice of Daring Do cuts through the air like a bullet
>"SPIDERWOMAN! VINYL SCRATCH!"
>the two of you turn your attention to the approaching director
>"Do you have any idea how stupid and risky that was?! Not only that! you stole Wonderbolt property!"
>Captain Armor steps between the two of you coming to your defense against Daring Do.
>"In order to save the lives of fellow Wonderbolts and their friend, Daring."
>>27887172
>Daring now turns her anger onto the Captain
>"and you! I gave you an order to return them!"
>Armor waves you away from behind his back
>"I did return them. Along with a team of captives you had full knowledge of."
>the others start to look over to Daring while she starts to take notice of the situation and simmer down.
>"I was working on a plan to get them out with minimal casualties and likelihood of failure, Wonderbolts don't leave each other behind."
>"Indeed they dont."
>the conversation trails off as the two of you get further away from the titans of the Wonderbolts verbal battle
>you end up standing by the large door of the carrier and looking out towards the city
>"what are you thinking Vinyl?"
>you reach into your pocket and pull out the ID again and give it a good long look before tossing it to Sunset.
"I think I'm going to go home. I need time to think."
>"I'll see you at school soon then?"
>your voice is soft and laced with uncertainty as you turn the volume of your music to its maximum
"yeah, I'll see you there Shim."
>with that you walk away burning the Wonderbolts logo off of your uniform.
>you wont be needing it anymore.
>you did what you came to do.
>now you're just Vinyl Scratch.
>and you are heading home.
---- end of Mimic Act I ----
>>27887146
No i lost the capacity to hope in 2013
>>27887146
Did someone say god.
>>27887216
And I shall smite all heretics
>>27887182
Ooof, nobody wins
Shimshams seems unconvinced of her heroism, Anon's pushed into merc work, Vinyl's lost a friend in a fairly permanent manner...
>>27887354
happy endings for all!
>>27868730
Sorry, I haven't been around lately. Had to visit my nephews. Now I gotta go to a three-day con. Be back when I'm able to.
>>27886579
Nope.
>>27886664
>>27886905
>>27886922
I don't show up because I cause too many shit storms and because I'm busy as an actor. I'm still writing the green.It hurts being the Brandon Fraiser of this general.
>>27887980
no no, we totally understand.hail hydra
>>27887980
Aw, I hope your cousins are cuter than mine!
Enjoy your con!
>>27888058
They're cute, but way too wild. It also scares me that they have no idea about "The Grim Adventures of Billy and Mandy" and thought "Tom and Jerry" was boring.
The con's literally starting tomorrow. G-fest, to be specific. Should be pretty lit.
>>27888093
>Thinking Tom and Jerry is boring.
I weep for their lack of quality cartoon violence.
>>27888093
oh snap, G-Fest?
Fucking jelly, love me some giant, radioactive monstars
No green from me tonight but should have something in the morning
>>27888172
Godzilla is literally my life. That mutated radioactive dinosaur's practically my older brother/father figure.Maybe I'll snap a picture with me and Akira Takarada for you.
>>27888310
I would cream my pants so hard my spine would glow blue
>>27888422
You just became my nigga
>>27888428
always glad to find anons of superior, monster-lovin taste
Nein
>>27878263
>carnage
I know what you're planning...
>>27889478
But do you know what I'M planning?
>>27889894
*shrugs*
>Be anonymous hanma fighter extraordinaire
>u recently moved from a small island on to the most powerful country in the world ‘MURICA
>Nothing like home but now that HE’S dead there’s not much biding you to your past life
>why did u came to the states? A new start… a better one
>how did they call this place? The big apple huh guess that most mean u are in New York City
>u reach the apartment complex where u will be staying at u found it was cheap and close to the school u will be attending
>u could honestly afford a better place but u didn’t wanted to sell your house u want to return in due time
>but first we are going to try and leave that life behind and there’s nothing stopping you from doing so
>going to school, having a girlfriend a normal life or as normal as it can get
>sadness take’s over u and u start to remember ever since u were born all u did was learn to fight and nothing else, u remember your mother word’s
>Do as your father say’s! Be strong...
>and boy did u became an expert at it karate, boxing, taekwondo, judo, wrestling
>your favorite? Wrestling and judo u had a nickname back home Grappler
>tomorrow we will start our new life away from the violence and death
First time writing forgive if i do wrong do you want me to continue?
>>27889961
I'M going to rape you. But first I'm going to get the next update hammered out.
>>27890147
Expect it by tomorrow night.
>>27890147
Et tu, 2099?
>>27890277
Sic semper tyrannis.
>>27890351
Not this time!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bUjG1HSSaGI
>>27865945
>still be Sunset Shimmer
>in science class
>you were the only one without a partner so teacher partnered Fem up with you
>that was expected but it doesn't mean you don't feel nervous
>she's going to keep messing with you
> you look at her sitting beside you, going through the text book for some of the stuff she missed on
>she looks pretty into it, maybe she won't bother you
>you had to look at her breasts didn't you, dumbass
>before even meeting her
>she leans away from the book, hiding her breasts behind her upper arm
>wait...
>what the fuck!
>you were staring again!
>thankfully she looks really focused on her reading
>you turn back towards the teacher, he is talking about alchemist's and their ambition to turn different metals into gold
>and how that's not possible
>you smile, if only he knew...
>a light tap on your shoulder makes you turn towards Fem
>"Hey, Shimmy," you cringe internally "you wanna go grab a coffee after school?"
>brain.exe has stopped working
>did she just ask you out?
>you were about to stutter something unintellegent but she cuts you off
>"I'm kinda having a hard time with this electrons and orbitals and stuff, I thought maybe you could help out?"
>you release the breath you've been holding, apperantly
"Yeah, umm... sure. I have history after this so meet me in front of the school?"
>"Okay, I'll be the-"
>Teachers voice interrupts your conversation. "Did I make a mistake by giving you a partner, Shimmer?"
>oh yeah, you were also kinda labeled as the Trouble Maker
>being a bully that turned into a demon does that
>you open your mouth to apologize
>"I'm sorry, sir. I was just asking her about something I didn't understand is all." Fem says before you could say anything
>he stares at her for a moment
>"Well, next time ask me. Now lets continue. Why is gold..." He returns to the subject.
>Fem went back to her book aswell
>this was going better than you've expected
morning bump
>>27890087
Grappler... Anon?
Continue if Doppo is in the story.
>>27890357
looking forward to seeing more!
>>27878619
>Once you explained the situation, you hung up the phone and walked back to the door, opening it slightly.
>Waiting to see what happens while the robbers walk and talk.
> “So, when’s the next part of the plan gonna happen?”
>The other guy, who you think is the leader, groans while his had is over his eyes.
> “All we have to do is wait for those pigs to ask us what we want and we’ll take it from there.”
>You open the door a bit more and start to crawl up the wall without them seeing you.
>Once on the ceiling, you see them stop in front a scared looking old woman.
> “That’s good and all, but how long will that take? We’ve been in here for thirty minutes now.”
>The first guy bends down slightly and grabs the old woman by her hair while pulling it.
> “You know we could get this going a bit faster if we just kill some of our hostages.”
>The woman whimpers as the barrel of his gun barely touches her head.
> “Besides it’ll show them we’re serious.”
>The leader smacks the other guy with the but of his rifle, causing him to let go of the woman and stumble back.
> “We’re not gonna kill anyone, Space. We’re gonna follow the plan to the point and everyone will get what they want.”
>Space growls angrily but stands up straighter.
> “Whatever you say, boss.”
>He walks away muttering to himself.
>The boss stares at the woman for a moment as she looks down.
>The a screeching sound is heard.
> “Boss, we found it.”
>He looks down at his walkie talkie then back at the woman.
> “Stay there and don’t do anything.”
>He then walks away, talking quietly to someone.
>While this was going on, you were wondering when the hell back up will get here.
>You see another guy walk through the door and towards the boss.
>>27891211
> “Here.”
>He hands some kind of case to the boss, who looks at it.
> “Good, now to make our demands.”
>He hands it back to the other guy, who puts it into a duffle bag.
>Space walked up to the boss while gesturing to everyone on the floor.
> “So what about them?”
>The boss just shrugs while taking out a few grenades from the duffle bag.
> “Take one of them hostage.”
>He hands him a belt of grenades.
> “Wrap that around one of them.”
>He turns to a brown haired woman and her son wearing a propeller hat.
> “Looks like we’re going for a ride.”
>The mother starts to cry as Space grabs her arm and pulls her to her feet.
>The child gets up and runs at him, to protect his mom.
> “Leave my mom alone.”
>Seeing him coming Space moves the mother to the side and kicks the kid in the stomach.
> “BUTTON!!”
>The mother tries to grab her child, as he hits the ground, but is pulled back by Space.
> “Sorry lady but he’s not old enough to join us.”
>Before he was able to put the belt on her, the front of the building blows up, destroying the front doors.
>Everyone shields their eyes as someone walks through the wreckage and the dust.
>As the dust settles, you see….
The small update I promised. Need to figure out who it is. Thoughts?
When?
>>27891226
My guess is it's Iron Twilight or something like that.
>>27891768
*Iron Mage
>>27891781
Aw fuck me, that's pretty good
Now I /really/ hope it is
>>27891226
>As the dust settles, you see...
>>27891816
>...the only thing left to report on the battlefield
Ugh, that Black Knight Anon idea keeps growing in my head.
I'm gonna have to jot something down at the apartment before I try to actually produce it for you freaks.
So hows every one doing today?
>>27891768
>>27891781
I guess i inplied that earlier
>>27891781
>>27893052
stealing my original creation, tsk tsk tsk
>>27893075
I show an arm not a whole suit
>>27893092
You'll be hearing from the arm of my lawyer then
>>27893109
Will it be a mean right or left hook?
And Twilight showed an arm when the same arm is in a cast.
>>27893124
right armhe gives good handjobs
>>27893127
Ha. But Twilight won't be a hero in this green. I have a plan for her
Hail Hydra
Are we dead today?
>>27894161
It always seems that way. I'm gonna try and get another post or two tonight.
>>27894161
well i could start the second part a bit early if you like.
>>27894302
yes pls yes pls yes pls
>>27894365
I'm trying sooooo hard not to make a yo mama joke right now.
https://youtu.be/IvNdt7na4eQ
>>27894428
>4428 ▶
>>27894428
Shoot, coward, you're only going to kill a man.
Beginning of Act II
>SMACK!
>a rugged cough escape your lungs just in time to receive another strike to the face
>CRACK!
>that punch would have knocked you to the floor if you weren't tied so tightly to a chair
>just as the man in a nice and well tailored three piece suit winds up for another blow a voice makes him freeze
>"That's enough for now."
>he steps aside letting a much older man come into view
>"Whatever you say boss. I have him all warmed up for you."
>the older man pats his shoulder before dismissing him away
>"I know you do lad, now please leave me with this boy. I have a few questions to ask him."
>without a word the younger man walks out of the room closing the door behind him
>that leaves just you and the older man alone in the room.
>as he kneels down to be face to face with you his eyes look you over with a gaze that is both calming and yet unnerving
>"what are you doing here lad?"
>that is a good question.
>what are you doing here?
>you should be back at Canterlot High finishing up what would be your senior year.
>your biggest concern should be what format your history report needs to be in and how many words are in your English Literature paper
>unfortunately, that's not even on your radar. Nor anywhere else in your mind.
>a small smiles curls over your lips and your raspy voice squeaks out a response despite the soreness in your lungs
"Working."
>The older gentlemen starts to laugh heartily at your answer.
>"HA HA HA, Working is it? What exactly is a young buck like you doing for work?"
>you remain silent taking this time to catch your breath rather than answer his question
>he notices. Grabbing a fistful of your hair and ripping your head back as to prevent you from ignoring him as he glares into your eyes
>"When I ask you a question, I expect and answer. You would be wise to give one."
>his grip loosens and his voice gets softer
>"now, I'll ask again, what work are you doing?"
>>27895145
>the rope that held your wrist in place finally begins to loosen up enough to start to wiggle free
"Freelance work. It's all I can do."
>"So, you're a Merc. A hitman. A common thug. Am I to assume you are here after the owner of this fine establishment then, yes?"
>you have just enough room to slip your hand out of the binds that once held you
>instead of just attacking the man right now you bide your time, gripping the rope and winding it around both of your fists tightly
"You know him then?"
>again the old man laughs
>"Know him?! Boy I am him! This is my hotel and outside is my staff. You, however are a unwelcome guest."
>he reaches into his suit pulling out a pistol
>you look over the mans features.
>Purple eyes.
>Jet black hair.
>A small scar across the brim of his nose.
>He fits the description perfectly.
>The pistol is brought to your face just between your eyes
>"Im afraid I'm going to have to send you on your way. Nothing personal of course."
"I understand, its just business."
>"you have balls kid. I'm glad you accept your end willingly."
>you let go of one side of the rope behind you and shove your hands under the gun while turning your head away
>the weapon discharges like he intended, however all it hit was the wall behind you.
>he pulls the weapon backwards into him trying to get it away from your hands
>you press forward grabbing a hold of the receiver and pushing both your body and the weapon into his gut making him lose his grip on it
>you clear the weapon and take a step away from him taking aim at him
>>27895153
>"E-easy now... We can work this out, right? A business deal? You do want money right?!"
>his hands slowly rise in a surrender pose
"Its not just about the money."
>you gently point the weapon towards the door
"Turn around and call your man in"
>he nods swiftly while turning very carefully around
>"C-Cross Stitch, mind coming in here for a second?"
>the door squeaks open and the man from before steps inside casually
>"whats up boss man? Need a clean up crew already?"
>BANG!
>the man once known as Cross Stitch drops leaving a spray of red on the wall behind him
>"oh god! please!"
>the man falls to his knees panicking and starts to utter a prayer to his deity
>before he can finish you haul him up to his feet and press him forward.
"Relax you're worth more alive, and I don't like to kill my target unless I am required to."
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HCXSq_7VnUE
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that's what I got for now, Ill post more either later tonight or tomorrow. Hope you enjoy this teaser.
>>27895162
Awesome. I wanna see Anon's depressing life as a merc!
>>27895204
I'm glad you enjoy it Keaton.C-can I hold your hand?
>>27895216O-Okay...
>>27895162
Nice, Like the progression
>>27895270
I hope I can keep your intrest
>>27895306
Oh I read all the ones here but sometimes need a reminder who writes what.
I just hope everyone likes the next part I'm writing.
At what point do these greens just completely deviate from all elements of FiM and just turn into Spider-Woman?
>>27895432
the start
>>27895432
Hm... I guess when we don't include anything referring to the ponies/eqg
So, I was working onna thing
Gonna post it in a tick
>This was it
>The moment you'd been raised for
>The chance to make a name for yourself
>You-
>"We ready tah move, boss?"
>-can'tfuckingmonologuewiththeseidiots!
>That's you
>You're the boss
>Not, like, your name is The Boss, but you are one
>Your real, civilian name was Fem a'Non
>That's... wildly unimportant information
>Please forget I said my real name
>Wait, shit, calm down
>Breathe
>Answer the goon
>You adjust the yellow and black stripes of your tabard, smoothing out imaginary wrinkles to calm yourself as you speak through your helmet's headset, a sharp, metallic sound thanks the voice changer near your throat
"You may begin the festivities, and remember-"
>"Yeah yeah, be loud, be flashy, don't hurt nobody we don't gotta. 'S ain't our first smash 'n grab."
>Your eyes narrow as the goons laugh, the sounds of their automatic weapons easily heard, even through the back of the van
>Disrespect
>That's what you get for hiring from the local college
>But you could deal with it for now, you think, mounting your motorcycle and counting down in your head
>5
>4
>3
>2
>1
>Because soon everyone would know the name of-
>You gun the engine, the motorcycle under you carrying you speedily out the double-doors of the van and up the building's steps
>Your blackened armor easily deflects the shards of glass as you smash through the museum doors, coming to a screeching stop past the information desk, your goons taking it as their cue to say-
>"THE BLACK KNIGHT!"
>>27895647
>Damn right you are
>Not the first, certainly
>Nobody knew who the first Black Knight was, the one who had originally wielded the Ebony Blade you carry
>But everyone knew the legend
>Your family certainly did
>Dating back centuries, countless a'Non's before you had wielded the title and the Blade
>It was traditional family supervillainy
>And now it was your turn, after dear old dad lost it, thinking he was an actual knight and tried to slay the "dragon" the Hulk
>From Black Knight to red smear...
>But that wouldn't happen to you!
>You were going to be different!
>You knew you could control the Blade!
>S-So what if literally every Knight before you had been driven totally crazy by it and gotten themselves killed...
>Y-Yeah...
>"Uh, boss?"
>Your head goon's voice snaps you back from the internal history lesson
>Right, middle of your name-making heist
>Keep on task
>Your grip tightens on the hilt of your mystical sword as you stride through the frightened crowd, a comforting reminder of your duty to your family
"Videt praedam..."
>"Huh?"
>You whirl to face him, crimson shoulder-cape flapping through the air-conditioned breeze
"Never you mind. Take from the peasants what you like, but find that crown!"
>The crown...
>The whole reason why you were here
>Sure, you could make more money from robbing a bank, but it was the principal of the thing!
>How many villains made their name by stealing a crown that might have belonged to King Arthur!
>Fucking with that guy was your family's thing!
>Well, maybe not your family specifically, but there was historical president for it!
>And there it is...
>It's...
"Smaller, than I expected..."
>And a lot less gold-and-jewels...
>You raise your sword, still in its scabbard, and smash the case open with the hilt, getting your gauntleted hands on the circlet
>>27895663
>Looking up from your reflection in the dull sheen, you jerk your head to the goons who are busying themselves with smashing artifacts and setting fire to a few information pamphlets
>Nice
"We got what we came for, let's go before any capes show up."
>The fall in soon enough
>It was almost a shame, really
>Any proper supervillain would have run into a hero during their debut
>Some banter, some fighting, maybe they recapture your score and beat up your thugs at the cost of letting you get away...
>Just like those stories dad used to tell you when you were a little girl
>He'd used to tell you about his first fight with-
>'THWIP!'
>Huh?
>Within moments, your hired muscle is pinned to the floor and walls of the museum lobby by...
>Webbing.
>Looks like you were gonna get your wish
>Okay, breathe deep, don't panic
>You were trained to fight supers practically from birth
>Even if it was one of the most famous of them all
>Spider...
"Girl...?"
>Yep, sure enough, clinging to the ceiling in a costume that had no business being that tight without riding up something fierce was the rule 63 version of New Yoke's infamous Spider-Man
>The universe had a weird sense of humor
>Still, make due with what you have
>>27895679
>With one hand resting on the hilt of the Blade hanging at your side, you strike a practiced pose and laugh haughtily
"I was wondering when one of you knaves would show up. Though I was hoping for someone a bit more... known. Ohohohohoho~!"
>"Seriously? I'm at least dressed like someone people know, not a knock-off Kylo Ren."
"Oho? A girl after my own heart. But enough banter!"
>You draw your sword with a flourish, its cursed blade leaving a smoky trail through the air
>She responds by slinging more webbing, though you cut it down easily, striking another pose after the barrage
"You'll have to do better than that to best the Black Knight! Ohohohoh-ack!"
>Her response is... remarkably straight-forward, kicking off the wall to pounce on you
>Your expert flailing only does so much to dissuade the flurry of blow raining down on you, but even she's forced back after a few near-misses with your wildly swinging blade hissing through the air like a viper
>With a metallic roar, you quickly close the distance she continually creates, hacking the air with angry swings
"You BITCH! I just had this armor polished!"
>This suit was expensive!
>Even as she flips and ducks, the irritating arachnid still has time to quip
>"Woah there, Dork Vader, to the Dark Side, hatred leads."
>A snarf tears from your throat and you take another wild swing, intent of removing that clever mouth from her face
>Only to cut your bike in half
"Dammit!"
>That was ALSO expensive!
>Unfortunately, she takes your lapse in focus to deliver an uppercut that separates you from the Ebony Blade
>You also think you hear a faint "Shoryuken!"
>....Bitch....
>>27895689
>You look up in time to see the tit-less wonder web down your weapon and then you, placing a quick call to the guard-er, police about the situation with the information desk phone
>Her mistake
>Closing your eyes, you focus on the Blade, the cold surety of its weight in you hand, and by the time you open them it's returned to you
>Without a glance to your similarly trapped cronies, you cut yourself free and run for the van out front, Spider-girl none the wiser
>Best to cut your insignificant losses
>Starting up the van, you take off down the street, back to your temporary base of operations
>Along the way you carefully take off your helmet, freeing your sweaty face and pony-tailed hair
>You toy with the crown in your lap, absently smiling as the sun glints off its aged finish
>Your first score
>Your first hero battle
>Your first escape
>Fist pump!
>Yeah, you're going to be the best Black Knight ever!
"Ohohohohoho!"
http://pastebin.com/PvW1jNLa
Finally pounded it out of my skull
Thoughts?
>>27895716
it seems pretty interesting. However I know nothing about "The Black Night"
>>27895741
Gonna extrapolate on that later
The nature of the a'Non dynasty, the Ebony Blade, etc.
Not really requiring much beforehand knowledge of the comic, seeing as I'll keep, leave, and change the "canon" as I like and suits the story
>>27891226
>A blue haired woman wearing a black leather top, shorts, leggings and gloves.
>But the most eye catching features were the horns on the side on her head the large broadsword she was carrying.
>The mother was able to get away from them and back to her son.
>The robbers stare at her stupidly as Space voices everyone's thoughts.
> “Who the fuck is this girl?”
>The mysterious woman raised her free as a fire was being created.
> “Oh shit.”
>The robbers dive in opposite directions to avoid a torrent of flames coming at them.
>They're able to hide behind a desk as Space jumps over a bench while losing the grenades in the process.
>From what you can see, the boss and the other guy look like they're arguing over something as Space is looking around frantically.
>He stops moving once he sees a lone grenade near his foot and tries to grab it but you shoot some web at it.
>He pulls his hand back as if he was burned and looks up at you.
>He just stares at you as you wave your hand at if half heartedly.
“Hey what’s up?”
>That seemed to snap him out of it as he grabbed his gun and aimed at you.
>The moment he starts to let loose a barrage of bullets, you jump at him and began to flip.
>All the bullets miss you as you flip and spin in the air.
>Landing in front of Space, you kick the gun out of his hands and punch him in the face.
>He staggers a bit before pulling out a simple combat knife.
> “Oh that’s it, come here bitch.”
>He lunges forward while swinging his knife wildly like a madman.
>After he swings for a few times, you lazily dodge to the left while grabbing his hand.
>You then twist his arm and throw him over your shoulder, onto the ground.
>He groans a bit as you look at your back up.
>>27896157
>She’s still block their shoots when their guns stop firing.
>They were out of bullets and even the woman knew it.
>She smirks as she rests her sword on her shoulder and calmly walks towards them.
>They see her walking towards them while trying to reload their guns.
>With a wave of her hand, the guns fly out of their hands and to the opposite wall.
>Seeing no other option, they pull out knives and slowly walk around her.
>She shakes her head in amusement as she snaps her fingers.
>The two were pushed away from her and hit the walls, knocking them out.
>She dusts herself off and turns to you.
> “Shouldn’t you stop him as well?”
>You look down in confusion and see Space trying to crawl away from you.
>You bend down, grab the back of his head and slam it into the floor.
>He instantly slumps to the ground, not moving.
>Letting go of him, you turn back to your partner who was clapping.
“Thanks for the help Magik.”
>The woman, Magik, just smiles at you.
> “I did say to call me if you needed help. But this seemed a bit easy.”
>You look away in embarrassment.
“I heard them talking, alright. Besides I didn’t want to take the chance.”
>Magik sighs as the ground below her and you start to glow in a blinding light.
>The next moment you and Magik are one the roof of an apartment building a few blocks from the bank.
>You always feel weird whenever you teleport with someone.
“Warn me next time, will you.”
>Magik grins cheekily as she puts her sword on her back.
> “No promises, though do you a ride to your place?”
>You quickly shake your head.
>You hate teleporting.
>>27896173
“No thanks, I’ll web swing my way home.”
>Magik just shrugs uncaringly while creating another glowing circle on the ground.
> “Your choice but please remember to finish your homework when you get home. Don’t want your grades to suffer to much.”
“Yes Luna. I’ll take care of it.”
>You wave goodbye to your partner/mentor and vice principal as she disappears.
“Sometimes I hate that she’s my principal.”
>You get a running start and began to web swing your way home.
That's it for today. Yes Luna is Magik and I like the idea. So Thoughts?
Continuing from the pastebin.
>You are Twilight Sparkle.
>You are trying to ignore the fact that Flash Sentry, Canterlot high’s local Casanova, once again tried to get into your pants.
>You wish that he would just leave you alone, after all the girl that he’s really pining for is the princess of a magical kingdom in some other universe.
>And you just so happen to look like her.
>Why is your life so weird?
>At least you aren't going to have to deal with him today.
>No, today is going to be all about history.
>Today you are going with the rest of Mrs. Harshwhinny’s class to the Manehattan Museum of History.
>With the Museum displaying several Mesoamerican artifacts on loan from the Sociedad Histórica de Méxicolt, Mrs. Harshwhinny decided it was high time to get her class out of the classroom and into a more interesting environment.
>Well as interesting as an inner-city museum could be.
>You are Sunset Shimmer.
>You are anxious about this field trip, after all, the last time you were with a class on a field trip you were bitten by a radioactive spider.
>Maybe you are being paranoid.
>After all, how often do super powered people pop up?
>Okay, wrong question.
>Still, when has anyone gained superpowers from a museum?
>You are Anon.
>After a 45 minute power nap, you feel a little better, but not by much.
>As the bus nears the museum Mrs. Harshwhinny stands up.
>”Just because we are not in class does not mean that you have the day off. I expect you to have at least one and a half pages of notes each on at least three different exhibits by the end of the day.”
>Well at least you don’t have to worry about setting another table on fire.
>Right?
Where all the spider pussy at?
>>27896692
at risk of shilling, my pastebin has some
>>27896692
>>27896725
And I'm still slogging through the exposition.
>>27895647
It's a fun read, would like to see more.
I also have a softspot for Femanon so...
>>27897058
he character really wasn't coming together until I changed them from male to female, and then everything clicked
the ambitious, daddy's little villainess, haughty with a sense of superiority, quick to lose her temper...
She's just too much fun not to run with!
Now to sort out her's and Sunny's interactions in New Yoke....
Ah, but should I put her aside and focus on at least reaching the next major milestone of Shimmering?
Early morning bump
So how is everyone?o
Things you're excited for in green? Changes you didn't like that a writerfag made?
>>27898883
I'm good. Just wondering what everyone thinks of the couple of posts I made yesterday
>>27898889
>raep
>>27898883
>>27898889
>>27898905
(This was meant for Keaton)
>>27898889
I'm liking it thus far, but when are you gonna release more Infamous anon?
>>27898908
Sure it was.
>>27898909
I'm working on it but every idea I have doesn't fit in it.
I have a general idea on what I want to do but the execution isn't right.
So the green's on hold for now.
>>27898916
Trepp is too pure to bully
>>27898920
Christ I know that feel.
>>27898921
Mind if I ask why I'm pure? Just curious
>>27898921
Sure he is.
>>27898940
I dunno, you just seem so...innocent
While Keaton is a hoe thats afraid to admit that he wants it
>>27898944
Ok
>>27898936
Yeah, but Infamous Anon will get an ending and I refuse to give a half and/or no assed ending
>>27898952
And that's what I like about ya'.
>>27898978
Thanks and I might not have a writing style like Bean, Untiled, Keaton or anyone else on this thread, but I'm gonna finish it.
It may take awhile but it will get done. That much I promise.
>>27898991
Who could ask for more?
>>27898998
It just who I am. When I stat something, I finish it. How'd you like the new character reveal?
>>27899004
How did I feel?
>pic related.
>>27899009
So good? If so wait till you see who Celestia is.
>>27899016
>If so wait till you see who Celestia is.
>>27899033
I'm still waiting for someone to make a Bruce Campbell symbiote
>>27899033
You think I would make Luna a hero and Celestia normal? The two are a set
>>27899039
Just need to get some more setup done.
the absolute state of the new kamen rider holy shit
>>27899223
wait, Ghost is the new one, right?
I've been meaning to watch it...
Is that a good "Holy Shit" or a bad "Holy Shit"?
>>27899243
Ghost is over in a few months, the new season's catalog has leaked.
It's abad kind of holy shit.
>>27899266
WHY DO THEY HAVE ANIME EYES WHAT THE FUCK!?
>>27899266
What the hell? I've seen strange Kamen Riders but this is BAD
>>27899292
When somebody posted the first image I didn't believe it one bit. Unfortunately it was real, and it's every bit as ugly as I expected. It's a video game themed series with the worst kamen rider suit ever, and that's a hotly contested crown to hold.
At least I can get my daily dose while watching it, t-thanks doc.
>>27899309
I thought it was JoJo themed until I looked closer...
And even now, there's some elements in the suit that seem JoJo-esque, like the eyes remind me of Silver Chariot, the green one has Joseph's scarf, etc.
>>27899033
Celestia is BRUCE!?
>>27900045
Celestia Smash
>>27900045
>Kind person who loses a loved one to a force of darkness
>Combats chaos
>Leads some primative screwheads
>Advocates being s-mart
Yeah, I can see it
>>27900234
I'd read it
>>27900234
Then there's Ash vs Evil Dead, where he's a grumpy old man who'd rather watch the world burn than save it
>>27900045
Bruce Campbell only plays himself no matter the role
>>27900465
>Ash vs Evil Dead
>>27900045
Actually I have something far worse in mind for her personally.
>>27900737
What, her being the Hulk, Venom and Ghost Rider combined?
>>27900737
Celestia isHindsight!
Greatest super hero of them all
>>27901431
that comic was dope
it also had a hot lady Ghost Rider
>>27901459
meant to post picture with it
>>27901472
What did this lady Ghost Rider look like?
>>27901505
Ghost Rider with tits, metal shoulder pads, and a combat scythe-cutlass thing
>>27901546
Cool.
>>27901431
>>27901459
Think less Hulk more Bradly.
>>27901682
an aging sin personified...
with the body they usually give her humanized...
>>27901988
I meant, personality wise. The calm and collected exterior, with a boiling, all-consuming rage just beneath the surface.
>>27902055
Why does the description fill me with fear but the picture aroused? If that’s the idea then i want to see it happen
>>27901988
>>27902055
U-Unf...
>>27902055
but still hot, right?
like you can feel the rage through her chest when you'd kneed her...
nevermind
>>27902071
>>27902099
The "Crimson Sun" will happen, but first I need to finish the current story arc.
>>27902110
>>27902055
Celestia Bleez when?
>>27902110
If you can get past her more, shall we say violent tendencies?
>>27902139
Well someone's perceptive.
>>27902139
Muh diq
So just out of curiosity. Are the writefags actually going to do a combined green with different characters from their respective universe?
I'd really like to see that
>>27902392
I'm just gonna go out on a limb here and say that it would be a logistics nightmare. What with the shier number of Greens and writefags we have. Might be able to do something between two or three though,depending on who would be working together.
Sorry guys, was gonna write a part but our government nearly got couped tonight.
I'll go on a holiday for a few days tomorrow but maybe I can write a part before that.
>>27903041
Shit man. You okay?
>>27902392
I'd truly have nothing to offer in such a collaboration
>>27903041
Well fuck.
Take care of yourself, SG, okay?
>>27903066
Yeah, I live away from the major conflict. Everyone was on the streets here protesting military though.
>>27903076
Thx man, I'll try
>>27903095
>>27903108
Forgot name
>>27903041
Hope you're alright and stay safe
>>27903041
>>27903095
Fuck the police anarchy is the only true form of freedom -edgy teen
But seriously hope everything is alright
>>27903261
Thank you.
It seems like most of the conflict died down, but apperantly ones who tried the coup still have some aircrafts and they are bombing government buildings.
Civilians stopped the land forces, even took over some tanks I heard.
>>27903341
Woah. I only know what I saw from twitter, but very little of it was coherent.
>>27903321
Thanks.
Things are calm in my town, besides the protests.
>>27903341
Not a problem it would just suck if we lost a friend and a writer here
>>27903363
It was some crazy shit man. Thousands of people surrounded the tanks and soldiers. Turret guy in one of the tanks fired some shots in the air, people climbed on the tank and beat him up.
>>27903410
So the moral of the story is, don't bring a tank to a mob fight?
>>27903383
I'll be ok I think.For now.
>>27903438
Heheh, yeah.
>>27903468
hey, don't tempt fate, okay?!
>>27903468
Just try and stay safe ok.
>>27903489
>>27903509
Alright guys, I'll not leave the basement.
Seriously though, thanks everyone for caring.
Love you!
>>27903619
I'm tempted to make some dumb, tsundere joke, but I just want you to stay safeb-baka
>>27903619
We're like a family or at least a bunch of friends, so it would be devastating if we lost anyone. At least to me
>>27903645
>>27903680
I'll atleast let you guys know if I'm ok tomorrow. Everything should go back to normal until morning I think, but for now I'm really sleepy so Good Night guys.
>>27903786
Sleep well, don't let nightmares stage a coup in your deams
>>27903786
Have a good night sleep
>>27903850
I suppose that it's just you, the anons and I now, treps.
>>27904264
That it is. I have nothing tonight but I'll answer a question or two about my green if anyone's interested
>>27904309
Much the same here.
Though I'm going to ignore sleep in favor of DS3
What made you want to start writing long term green, trep?
>>27904325
To take my mind off the bimbo and hypnosis stories I'm writing. I find this to be a bit relaxing to write and have fun with
>>27904345
Next question if anyone wants to ask?
>>27904533
I overworked last night and now my brain feels like jelly so,
Whats the worst state to write in?
Same to Mr. keaton.
>>27904571
For me it's in a state of DESPAIR.
Sorry, too much Danganronpa. But I can't write when I'm tired of bored
>>27904597
Need sleep. so I'll work on some green tomorrow.
>>27904571
Non-aroused.
Seriously, being horny helps me write some of my best work, no matter the subject matter.
>>27904571Michigan
>>27905014
Ohiofag plz go.
>>27905014
I'm so fucking tired that I had to read that three times before getting it.Also, agreed.
bumping so Glimmer fags dont kill this thread
>>27905319
Thanks, defender anon.
I blame glimglam
>>27905845
Knows or knew?
Honestly I don't mind glimglam, just like I don't mind shimmer or candyass.
Its the faggots that spam the images just to annoy other anons that upset me.
>>27906101
Fair. I don't dislike her either.
>>27906101
I want toboopthosenoses
>>27906107
Do you even sleep?...DS3
>>27904909
Good thing I'm here.
I took a nap, and I woke up to see that we've been invaded by Starlight Glimmer posts
>>27906807
We are holding the line, but just barely.
And I'm running on fumes, good night bloke, keep us afloat.
>>27906878
And now they're sending in applejack
>>27906878
Finally get the internet back up, and what happens? AJ and glimglam takeover. What is the board coming to?
>>27906899
why do they keep spamming background pones?
>>27906918
This is your emergency broadcast system announcing the commencement of the annual Purge
All shitposting, including Nyx, will be legal for twelve hours
Your janitors thank you for your participation
>>27906928
We may never know.
>>27906940
>>27906944
Pic related.
>>27906918
Terrible taste, that's what.
>>27906956
And this time, Frank Grillo can't save us
>>27906986
Well guys, good news, I'm okay and the coup failed. Thanks again for your support.
I'll try and write something before going on vacation.
>>27907604
Glad to hear that your still kickin' m8.
Turkish President: I'm in charge here
Turkey: Do you feel in charge?
>>27907604
That's good, happy to know nothing bad happened
coup affected me as well, shouldn't have failed though, goddamnit
I was on the phone and sending emails around for a while now
I don't think the dust is settling just yet and neither does my family
uhh... have more intrigues then
what makes me happy right now is pokemon go, but the servers are down...
>>27881944
>Be Anon.
>Sunset didn’t react in a way which would indicate much that she knows it had been you.
>But she also might just lure you there to be picked up by the Wonderbolts.
>She had been decisively cryptic about her relationship to them.
>Yet, were she a full member, she would have simply told you so, right?
>And would it be a ruse, she could have denied it.
>If it’s a more elaborate ruse she does something which you can’t get a proper read on.
>...
>At least now you know you can break through her webbing, even though the tensile strength was amazing.
>With what Dr. Octavia told you to do with your suit and the symbiotes additional power you were able to bring forth quite the force.
>Walking in place is not going to help you.
>For now you need to be Anon, Sunset’s boyfriend whom she and the wonderbolts don’t know was their hacker.
>Only this one Hydra woman does.
>Ahh... you wish you could have gotten further in your research.
>All you know is that apparently “Hydra” was a Nazi’s research division and ended with the third reich.
>All the other organizations calling themselves Hydra after that were pretty much only neo-nazis, trying to bask in the glory of a scary name.
>Whereas pop culture places Hydra as the Illuminati, controlling everything from the shadows.
>You think the Hydra which your aunt made you worry about is not one of the impostors, but the one that /this woman/ is part of, the one within the Wonderbolts.
>The other Hydras... the stuff you read about a bit seem quite disorganized and don’t live up to the hype.
>But going back before the world wars.
>This Hydra society about 150 years back, now that seemed to have been the real deal.
>Believing norse mythology was real, and looking to open a portal to Asgard on the island of Thule.
>Although Thule is not even a real island...
>Well, on this planet it isn’t.
>Is that possible?
>Weird things have happened.
>>27908574
>A shapeshifting hottie gave you a slimy symbiote and now you’re a supercharged version of yourself.
>Smarter, faster, stronger.
>But still you were unable to think of where you have heard the voice of that woman before.
>You know you did.
>Maybe when you had been really small...
>If she’s your aunts contact, it’s likely the case.
>Then it’s surprising that you even remembered in the first place.
>No. You were certain you heard it recently.
>Who is it?
>Someone associated with the wonderbolts?
>You need to watch some youtube videos about their recent statements, and look for her voice.
>There are enough women in the Wonderbolts.
>But you don’t remember anyone of them having a fitting accent.
>You simply don’t have enough information to continue.
>Argh, but you need to move.
>In any direction.
>But preferably the one away from Hydra and towards freedom.
>Sunset...
>Her secret identity is probably known by them so she can’t run far.
>If you were to take her with you she’d constantly have to look behind her back and you need to be on the run.
>That’s not really the life you imagine for the two of you.
>...
>You’re not sure how much of a life you even expect to have with her.
>Is she just a thing?
>She has all the attributes to attract you to her, but there are still complications.
>You really want to make it work.
>But having her in the Wonderbolts is an impediment.
>You’re lying to her.
>You just need to catch her at a time and place where nobody is listening.
>Which means no electronic devices around.
>It’s 2016, how hard can that be?
>You’re going to tell her as soon as you have the chance.
>>27908582
>Your phone rings again.
>It’s your aunt.
>Again.
>She’s probably been trying since you hung up on her.
“Hey Auntie.”
>“Anon.”
>She sighed out in relieve.
>“Oh thank god, you’re okay.”
“Sorry.”
>“Sorry doesn’t even begin to describe what you’re about to be, Anon!”
>She states this quite calmly.
>“Anon, I’m on my way to New Yoke right now, the three of us are going to meet. And I’ll pick you up in your dorm at midnight.”
“I-”
>You’d be working at that time.
“You’re not driving with the car, right? You know you’re not in condition to-”
>“I know my limits, Anon.”
>She sounds very serious.
“Yes, Auntie...”
>“... Anon, I love you, you know that, right?”
>Why does it take you a moment to respond?
“I love you, too.”
>“See you at midnight.”
“Until then...”
>She hangs up and you stare at your phone.
>Your aunts picture still illuminated after the call ended soon goes dark, but you tap your phone again to look a it some more.
>Do you have responsibility to her?
>She raised you.
>But doing something someone else wants you to feels very wrong.
>She has knowledge you seek though.
>And she said that the ‘three of us’ would meet, which probably includes the Hydra contact.
“Tsk...”
>But for now you have a date.
>>27908559
>shouldn't have failed though
that's just the 'wanting him gone' speaking
whether the coup was real or not is for /pol/ to discuss.
I'm just tired and want to catch some pokemons, but can't because the servers... and i can't sleep either
There's obviously a lot of emotions going on, but you're not my hugbox
The world just sucks a little bit more than usual at the moment
>>27908615
We ARE your hugbox.
Remember when an anon searched and found less Anonymous than namefags?
But yeah, ashes to ashes, /pol/ to >>>/pol/
>>27908615
It's alright, untitled
Get some rest when you can
>>27908615
Take a rest
>>27909317
>>27909342
>>27909335
I have loads on my mind, I can't sleep even though I almost pulled an all nighter
I don't want to sleep
I want to play pokemon
I want erdogan dead or established, not that bullshit that has been going on
I want to finally grasp how to properly play flame in the flood without looking it up online
I'm on vacation, my writing schedule won't be what it is for a while anyway, and with the dark cloud looming over me I'd like to take a break as writing feels like a chore at the moment, but I know when I take a break I probably won't continue.
I just want to be the very best, like noone ever was
>>27909385
But to catch them is the real test
>>27909396
not if the servers are down
>>27909407
That wouldn't stop a true master
>>27909385
just take a day off. that's what I do and it works
>>27909444
You think i go outsite to stay healthy?
First one to talk, gets to stay in my country!
I'll post some green after work if any one is interested.
>>27910269
Always
>>27910269
people interested in green
where do you think you are?
>>27910651
>>27910679
See you guys at 11, Arizona time.
Could someone give me kind of Advise how to get into this series? I'm kind of confused
>>27910952
you mean what story to read first?
>>27910970
Yeah, it sounds interesting.
>>27910984
Start off easy with shocker, then make your way to beans, then Keaton
Then, when you're done with the cute and comfy, move on to the edgier and more plot fueled ones like red, trepp, and untitled
And so on
>>27910984
Beans would be acomfort pick. Nothing outstanding about the story but still well written.
biggest story at the moment is untitled, but it gets kind of complicated with intrigues, it's definitely good, yet maybe not to get into it
Treppahcs did a few things and rewrites, both thats well worth reading, but if you want an order then take his infamous first because the anti-venom is still too short to binge in.
next on my list I'd place the Rabble, then superkeaton, klyntar, treppahcs anti-venom, ...
first: treppahcs infamous
it has all the traits one could desire as your first story.
>>27911008
>Start off easy with shocker
you mean the pastebin that was posted by a guest and only has like a single post inside of it?
great place to start
>>27911008
>>27911019
Thanks for your help, anons. I appreciate it.
Would be cool for other Newcomers to have a Starter-Guide. Just sayin
>>27911026
pls no bully shocker
>>27911164
>bully
what are you talking about?
this is a bully free thread
>>27911191
Except Keaton
>>27911270
He's a bully.
>>27911278
W-What!?
>>27911270
you can't bully the willing
>>27896190
>Still Sunset.
>You just finished another day of school and you’re just at your locker getting your stuff.
>Grabbing your backpack and some stuff, you close your locker and see Applejack leaning against the wall there.
“Hey AJ.”
>Applejack nods while pushing herself off the wall.
>She then slings her arm around your shoulder, bringing you in close to her.
> “Hey Sug, you mind helping me out with something?”
>You struggle to break free from her, but Applejack just tightens her grip on you.
“....You’re not gonna let go until I agree, aren’t you?”
>She just laughs and let’s you go.
> “Sorry Sug, but I just wanted to know if you could help me. I made a bet with Rainbow and I need your help.”
>You roll your eyes but smirk.
“What’re the stakes?”
>Applejack waves you off as a blush was forming on her face.
> “That doesn’t matter. Will you help me?”
>You were about to say no when a thought occurred to you.
“You know I still need to get back at Dash for that web cum joke.”
>Applejack gets a huge smile on her face.
> “I knew I could count on you.”
>Applejack slaps you on the back causing you to stumble a bit.
>You stop yourself from falling as you take step towards Applejack and playfully punch her.
>She then pushes you away causing you to bump into something.
>You feel something soft and squishy on the back and side of your head.
> “I hope I’m not interrupting anything.”
>You look up to see Vice Principal Luna’s smiling face.
>You step away from her as fast as you can while you stutter out apologies while looking away.
“I-I’m so so-orry. W-we didn’t m-mean to d-do that.”
>>27911731
>You hear your vice principal giggle at your stuttering.
>You look at her and see her wearing a tight black skirt and a white button up shirt with a few buttons undo.
> “It’s alright Sunset, I was hoping to run into you but not like that.”
>You look away as Applejack snickers at you.
“Sorry about that.”
>Luna waved you off, nonchalantly
> “It’s fine but do you have a few moments to talk, Sunset?”
>That meant she wanted you to talk to her and the principal for a while.
“Sure, I didn’t have any plans anyways.”
>You turn back to your friend and tell her that you’ll see her later which she in turn says to you.
>With Applejack gone, you follow Luna down the hall and towards the principal’s office.
>Opening the door and walking inside, you see Principal Celestia wearing her usual white button up shirt and tight purple pants.
>She was looking over some paperwork when Luna cleared her throat loudly.
>Looking up from her paperwork, Celestia smiles once she sees you and Luna.
> “Good afternoon Luna. And Sunset, it’s been awhile hasn’t it?”
“Yeah. Fighting crime and trying to make time for friends and homework is a challenge.”
>Celestia and Luna both sport knowing grins.
> “Yes, it’s always hard to juggle everything.”
>She points to a chair near her desk, indicating you to sit down.
>Taking a seat, you begin to wonder what Celestia wants to talk about.
>Most likely about the robbery Luna helped you with.
“Was there something you wanted to know?”
> “Not in particular. I just wanted to know how you were doing. Is everything okay?”
>Sighing, you slump in the chair slightly.
“Are you asking as my principal or as Aunt Celestia?”
>She laughs while shaking her head.
> “I’ve been a friend of your mother and you called Luna and I your aunts ever since you meet us.”
>>27911291
Dirty hoe
>>27912143
B-But how am I a bully!?
>>27912154
You know what you did
Trying to shove people and aggressively hold their hands
>>27912092
“The two of you have been their for me when mom couldn’t. But to answer your question, I’m trying to figure out who this Tonic person is?”
>The two looked confused before Luna snaps her fingers.
> “You mean the one who saved Miss Finish a few days ago?”
>You nod tiredly.
“Yeah, him. From what the video showed and my own encounter with him, he has a symbiote.”
> “So that means he’ll want to kill you like before?”
>Groaning, you put your head in your hands.
“I just don’t know. His actions show he’s not a monster like the others but I’m worried about what could happen if I’m wrong.”
>Celestia looks concerned by your rant.
> “Have you tried finding him and seeing what his intentions are?”
“No but it wouldn’t matter. He captured two criminals and I practically helped them get away.”
>You stay like that for a few moments when you feel something touch your shoulder.
>Looking up, you see Luna squeezing your shoulder in a comforting manner.
> “You shouldn’t worry about that kind of stuff, Sunset.”
>You feel yourself begin to smile a bit.
>They were their for you to teach and train you at the beginning of your superhero career.
>Out of the corner of your eye, you see Celestia rise from her chair and walk towards you, smiling like Pinkie.
> “Luna’s right. You shouldn’t worry about what ifs or anything like that. Just do whatever you can and save the day.”
>You start to giggle at her silly answer which turns into full blown laughter.
>After a while, you begin to calm down and address them.
“Thanks I needed that.”
> “Anytime, just remember you can talk to us for anything or just call us if you need help.”
>You smile as you hug your surrogate aunt which she returned.
“Even if I need Captain Marvel to help with a robbery?”
>Celestia hugs you a bit tighter as Luna joins the hug as well.
>>27912207
>>27912246
I-I was being gentle!
>>27912245
> “Even if you need Captain Marvel’s help.”
> “And Magik’s help as well.”
>You stayed like that for a little while, just enjoying the warmth, until you notice the time.
“Hey, I need to get going. Mom wants me home tonight.”
>The two look at the wall clock and let you go.
> “Do you want a ride? It’s on the way to our apartment.”
>You shake your head.
“I’m just gonna walk home.”
>You walk to the door and open it.
“And thanks for the talk.”
>You walk outside and close the door, making your way to the exit.
Well here's the next part and a little prep talk for Sunset. It must be weird to have family friends you see as aunts be both your principal and somewhat retired heroes.
So thoughts?
>>27912266
It's good, fleshing out characters and giving some depth. Hope you have more soon.
>>27912432
That's all for tonight. And I'm trying to figure out which outfit Celestia will have.
There is a new Pastebin for the second act that I forgot to post previously.
http://pastebin.com/MWFjuLWz
>>27895162
>Man, Senior year is the easiest year hands down.
>Not only do you only have to worry about four classes rather than your usual seven your identity as Spiderwoman has become easier to hide
>Whenever you leave home or class early or happen to be later than normal to a planned event people just pass it off as the dreaded "senioritis"
>Rainbow Dash rushes over to your side starting a new conversation
>"So what are you doing this weekend Shimmer?"
"Well I didn't have any real plans this weekend besides having to stop by the bank and grabbing a few things from the general store. Why?"
>Dash smiles and wraps her arm around you as the two of you stop at your locker
>"Well the girls and I were going to head to the club this weekend and we figured you'd like to come along."
>the club?
"I didn't take you for a party girl Rainbow."
>Rainbow laughs and leans against a nearby locker as you put away your unneeded class materials
>"It wasn't really my idea, but I had a free weekend since my usual games ended last week. So you coming along or what?"
>It does sound like fun.
"What time are you going?"
>"Not sure yet, Pinkie says she had a few things she needed to do first and since it was her idea to go we are waiting for her."
>you close your locker and pull out your phone to check for any messages you might have missed
>1 Unheard Voice message
>Unknown Caller
>Unknown Number
>looking up from your phone you notice Rainbow Dash starting to walk off slowly but keeping her attention on you
>"Alright, I still have to convince Fluttershy to come with us. I'll give you a call when I learn the time alright?"
"Sure thing Rainbow, I'll talk to you then."
>"Sweet, talk to you then Shimmer."
>>27912624
>you wave your friend off as you head for the door
>on the way out you end up seeing Vinyl Scratch in the hall
>you give her a small wave and a smile to her hoping she notices
>she doesn't smile back but she does give a half wave back.
>Neither of you talk much since she decided to leave the Wonderbolts after learning about Anon.
>a small hole in your gut forms and you push the memories of that away.
>No one, not even his closest friend Norman have heard anything from him.
>there is also a rumor that his house was taken by the bank a few weeks ago and that his mother has gone missing along with him.
>but you haven't been down that street to check to see if its true.
>looking back to your phones screen you listen to the voicemail from the unknown number
>though you have a pretty good idea who it is
>there is a long silence to start the message, like usual.
>long enough to make most people delete it but not too long as to take up too much time
>finally you hear a very robotic voice
>"Director Do would like to speak with you."
>and with that the message ends
>cant wait to find out what you did this time.
>you arrive at the drop off point out in the country side and wait for your employer to show up
>the target from what you know is a leader of a local crime family who has been dipping his hands into another families business.
>needless to say, he probably shouldn't have.
>you can hear him worming around in the back of the car, his hands tied with the same binds that once held you at his mercy.
>"W-we we can still work something out, yeah? please? I-I have a daughter and grandchildren."
>the mans suit is now stained with an occasional splash of blood from a mix of the official and unofficial hotel security who tried to stop you.
>If you let him go, then those lives would have been lost for nothing.
>the least you can do for those men whose lives you ended is finish the contract.
>"You don't want to take their Papa Smooth Melody away from them right?"
>>27912634
>you remain silent and check your watch.
>finally you can start to see headlights appearing in the distance
>"Come on lad! Okay, I admit I might have done a few things I shouldn't have, but I only did them to give my little girls a better life. I pay for their schooling, their clothes, and every hearth's warming eve I bring them gifts they can only imagine."
>you open the glove box of your car and inside your mask is waiting
>as you put it on your turn to look in the back of the car
>Smooth Melody's eyes peer into your modified Taskmaster Mask
"I'm sure that you will be sorely missed."
>you know that your father is...
>opening the door of the car you step out into the dark
>Melody begins to shake in his seat as you walk over to his door and pull him out of the car onto his feet again
>he stands slightly taller than you do but from the way he is acting you appear to be the most mature of the two
>"Who's that?! Who's coming?"
>the other cars brights shine on the two of you making it hard for you to see who steps out of the other vehicle
>you close the lenses of your mask to help combat the brightness
>placing your hand on his shoulder you say one word.
"Knees."
>with a shove he complies, a little quicker and harder then you intentionally wanted.
>the brights dim down and two men in equally fancy suits walk over to the two of you, one holding a suitcase in his hand
>"I was unaware that you were Taskmaster when I hired you. If I had known I would have been considerably less worried about the outcome of this contract."
"I'm not. But I was trained by him personally, and as I told you before, the name is Mimic."
>"Ah I see, then if you are anything like him you will be wanting this now."
>the silhouetted man motions to the other with the suitcase who walks over to you and places the payment down next to Melody
>"M-m Mr. Copper Coin! I- This is a misunderstanding."
>your employer steps forward into the lights revealing himself
>>27912647
>his copper color hair and lightly tanned skin in a way does remind you of a coin.
>though not in a strange way.
>"Oh I highly doubt that Melody. I've been keeping an eye on you ever since you started that little hotel safe house of yours."
>ignoring the two go through the usual offer you cant refuse routine you take the suit case and open it up
>inside is your payment.
>35,000 Equestrian dollars and five small Copper tokens.
>you reach inside and pick one up and hold it to the men
"what is this?"
>Copper Coin looks up from Melody and over to you with a small smile
>"those, my dear Mimic, are 'Copper Coins' once we take control of that little hotel they will be a kind of currency that only our business partners will have. I assure you, they will be invaluable"
>you toss the coin back inside and close the suitcase preparing to leave but Copper stops you
>"Oh, one second more of your time please."
>you look back to see the other man putting a bag of Melody's head slowly suffocating him as Copper walks over to you
>you decide its best to keep your eyes on Copper instead of the other sight.
"what is it?"
>"would you mind taking on another contract?"
>already?
>you haven't even left this one yet.
>you will need more contracts in the future and so far Copper has been the best source.
>but still, he could give you a little time to recuperate
>>27912657
>Melody
I hate you
>>27912657
"Perhaps another time, I need rest."
>you set the suitcase inside the car and are about to get in when Copper sits on the hood casually
>"It wont be anything like this one, I assure you. A simple meetup in neutral territory."
>despite your better judgement you listen on.
>"Its a nightclub downtown. Each local family sends one representative from their current pool of professionals to meet and exchange employer information. A underground advertisement if you will. Everything at the club is on the house for the representatives and the employers like myself get our names out to a larger pool of talented individuals."
"seems simple."
>Copper grins and gets off the car smiling
>"Indeed! so, would you be so kinds as to represent my little organization this Saturday?"
>he reaches into his suit pocket and pulls out a card with the address and name of the club on it.
>you reach forward and take it
"I suppose I do need to get out more."
>His grin turns into a full blown smile and he steps back outstretching his arms
>"Don't we all, my dear Mimic. Don't we all."
>as he turns around and walks to his car you see the last few seconds of Melody's life slip away under the bag before the man pulls out a suppressed pistol and makes sure he is finished
>you get back in the car and close the door watching the other man clean up what mess remains
>you start your engine and drive off, your knuckles gripping the wheel tighter each second.
>there was no need to suffocate him like that, it was simply unnecessary suffering.
>If Copper's head is ever in a contract.
>you will take that one in a heartbeat.
>>27912669
annnnd that's what I have for today. Constructive criticism, thoughts, and tips are always welcome.
>>27912666
I'm sorry Satan.
>>27912669
This anon has my permission to die. Seriously.
Kill him.
Don't be a faggot.
>>27912680
Awesome. Looking forward to what comes next, particularly if we ever get to see Mimic face off against Tasky again
>>27912690
We hurt the ones we love most anon.
>>27912728
"YOU WOT"
"YOU OFFED ME FAKKIN DAD YA DAFT CUNT"
>>27912728
I hope you're proud
http://youtu.be/VHkT9NUatHY
>>27912795
Relax, every comic character needs a dead family member
>>27912739
>>27912751
>>27912764
>>27912690
>>27912795
the best part is the Octavia fags seemed to have missed the "grandchildren" part.
Your waifu has kids in Rabbles story :^)
>>27912810
It's more likely that he is her grandfather.
>>27912818
ah, well that could also be the case.
>>27912800
What about
Batgirl
Most of the X-men
Most of the teen titans
>>27912840
Batgirl's family is all sorts of goofy, due to living in Gotham
Most mutants are now either sterile, dead, or Right
Depends on the group composition. I mean, Raven's dad is the fucking Devil.
>>27912857
>implying her dad isn't Tirek
>When you see the SW Rebels season 3 trailer
>>27912857
Raven and Trigon really need to work out heir issues
http://youtu.be/DRN1XAbmfzs
What was his problem?
>>27912961
He likes it up the ass
>>27912996
Why does he wear the mask
TELL ME ABOUT SLADE
WHY DOES HE WEAR THE MASK
>>27913063
You would too if your exwife stabbed you in the face.
>>27913052
>Jason Todd
>>27912875
Just watched it
Jesus Fucking Christ.
>>27913935
That good?
>>27913959
I screamed and woke up an apartment mate.
I rarely scream for anything.
No, that's not right, It wasn't a scream.
I /squeed/.
I got fucking hyped.
>>27914027
theneverything changed when the fire nation attacked
>>27914047
Haha.
But seriously, I was shocked.
>>27914090
>>27914090
False.
If I'm screaming still, it's either fucking far away from the end, or you have a fucking pharmacy-stock of stimulants. In which case I would be breaking my own bones to get me free.
And in either case you would get bored rather quickly. Hacksaws suck for anything larger than a small dog.
Plus, I has to be capitalized.
Good luck with the plane tickets anyway.
Thanks for the namefagging though, makes tracking you easy.
>>27914124
Ah, saw this post in the Sunset thread, guess some poor, bored cuck shut-in is making the rounds, trolling for replies.
>>27914162
I just wonder if he has anything to do with the background pony invasion of last night.
>>27914185
Unlikely, but I haven't checked the other threads.
Best to forget about it already, like most annoying things. We can waste our time much more pleasantly.
Getting stressed out over something on the internet is stupid.
>>27914090
there is no way in hell you are the Hacksaw Mcgraw of old. he left the ride.
>>27914090
This is a pretender, leave.
Late by 40 minutes.
>You are Norman.
>Anons friend and the best bassist this side of Manehatten if you do say so yourself.
>Though you feel more like a babysitter than a friend right now, what with trying to keep Anon from looking like he just smoked Snoop Dogg’s lifetime supply of weed in one sitting.
>Still, you find it somewhat endearing that even in a state that should be causing severe paranoia Anon trusts you explicitly.
>Reaching into your bag you remove an energy drink.
“Anon I think it would be good for you to drink this.”
>You say as you hand him the drink.
>Anon takes it and slams it back, finishing the contents in one go.
>At least Mrs. Harshwhinny hasn’t noticed, yet.
>You are Anon.
>And right now you are trying to focus on the displays long enough to write a coherent sentence.
>You honestly could not care less about the old stone tablets, or any of the religious artifacts on display.
>No all you want to do right now is sleep.
>But alas you have to take notes on what some archaeologist thought might have been used as a part of some ritual, or what might have been some ceremonial garb.
>The jade rings that they have on display is cool though.
>Could you really bullshit your way through a page and a half on any of these things though?
>You think not, but fuck it may as well try.
>>27914079
>Just watched it.
>I freaked.
>roommate came over.
>roommate freaked.
>>27913959
To defeat an enemy you must know them
Not just their battle tactics, but their history
Philosophy
Art
>>27913446
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JVSoCsSh214
Bumps
>>27915258
Did they ever unmask him?
>>27915895
it'snever solved
So, I looked over the views for the various issues of Shimmering, and I just don't know what makes something peak and what keeps something in the 50~'s.
So, I was wondering if I could get some input on what brings you guys to issues and what you just read once and then move onto the next one?
Help me iron out my "style", as it were
>>27916612
>read once
when you publish it
>move on to the next
when you publish it
sorry to hear half of your readers are bots
we still love you
>>27916638
Ah, I suppose I'm more asking what brings in repeat views to a paste, which is where I'm assuming the majority of my views come from, as opposed to reading something once and then not revisiting it?
I think that's what I'm asking?
I'm probably just rambling and need some coffee to wake up.
>>27916664
your issues are easy to read through in one sitting each wheras I have to revisit others stories multiple times.
>>27916664
>>27916676
Pretty much this.
>>27916676
>>27916683
Thanks, good to know!
>>27916612
Your style is fine and better than mine. so don't worry about that.
I want to cum inside Spider-Shim.
>>27916795
We have green for that.
>>27916795
>>27916795
get out of hereFlash
>>27916795
I want to get caught in her web
>>27916805
Trying to be funny huh?
*shove*
>>27916891
keaton is for sexual bully only.
>>27916904
It was an erotic shove
>>27916795
what happened to her?
>>27916907
Sure it was.
>>27916918
maybe full
pretty dead today, huh?
>>27917738
Fear not! for I come bearing green.
>>27912669
>the sound of your tunes block out the world around you as you get into your car.
>once inside you remove your headphones and instead plug your music into the cars speakers
>you sit there for a moment waiting for traffic in the parking lot of the school to clear out a bit when you spot Norman standing by the door
>after a short conversation with bulk he starts to slowly walk away from the school alone.
>Anonymous used to walk with him if you recall correctly.
>you tap your finger on the steering wheel in thought before eventually rolling down your window and turning down your music
>once there is enough space for you to get out of the parking lot you drive up along side him
>he doesn't seem to notice.
>with a grin you lay on the horn causing him to jump back in surprise
>"GAH! what?"
>you take off your shades and smile
"you're Norman right? You uh..."
>you're starting to have second thoughts about bringing up Anonymous
>but you are already committed
"You knew Anon, right?"
>Normans eyes lose a bit of their color and without any outward change he somehow seems to look depressed
>"yeah... Knew..."
>you open the passenger side door
"Would you like a ride?"
>Why is Vinyl Scratch offering you a ride out of nowhere?
>you give a quick look down the road
>there is still a long ways to go, and the company would be nice.
"sure, thanks."
>you step inside the car and close the door behind you as Vinyl turns the music up
>"where you headed?"
>you tell her the name of your street and that you can make it from there.
>"Ha, afraid to tell someone where you live or something?"
"well I mean, its not like we have really spoke much before this."
>speaking of.
"why did you want to offer me a ride anyways?"
>Vinyl flinches for a second but hides it pretty well.
>you still noticed it though.
>"I was wondering if you heard anything about... him."
>>27917738
I'm working on something else for now but may have a small update later. Plus we only have less than 20 posts left.
>>27917779
>Anonymous?
>leaning back in the seat you take a deep breath and look out the window as she drives
"No... I haven't, its like he just vanished off the face of the earth."
>you pull out your phone and hold it up for Vinyl to see
"not a single text, call, or message of any kind since the day he disappeared..."
>you drop it on your lap unenthusiastically
>"I heard the house was still paid for, for a good while."
>you nod your head confirming that rumor
"yeah, it only went to the bank about a month ago. So someone was still making payments, meaning he or his mother were at least around."
>and yet nobody thought to tell you, Anonymous' best friend, what was going on.
"so much for friendship..."
>the car pulls over to the side of the road quickly and Vinyl looks over at you
>"He was put in a difficult situation, it isn't entirely his fault!"
>you recoil at her sudden change in tone, and it shows.
>Vinyl seems surprised at her own words and lets out a sigh before turning to face the road again and placing her hand over her face
>"I mean... ugh. Never mind. Forget I said anything, I'm sorry for shouting."
>does she know something about Anonymous?
>you remember the news report about some terrorists kidnapping Anon a while back, but they were all arrested and that seemed to be the end of it.
>although Anonymous was never found at the residence his family members said that he and his mother were unharmed.
>and heck on the few days you tried to see him in person by heading over to his house the bills were still being paid by his mother
>not that, you were reading the billing information or anything!
"What do you mean a difficult situation and it not being ENTIRELY his fault?"
>>27917801
>2493x3292
oops
>>27917801
>Vinyl rolls her head to look back at you
>with a sigh she opens the door and steps out of the car
>"come on, I know this is a stupid idea, but you wont believe me unless I give you some sort of proof."
>what is she talking about?
>unlocking the door you follow her out of the car and into a small clearing where she stands waiting for you.
"so whats going on? What happened to Anonymous that I don't know about?"
>Vinyl removes her glasses again and pockets them in her jacket
>"Norman, you know about Spiderwoman right?"
>of course you do, everyone in Canterlot does.
"yeah? Anon didn't really like her all that much though."
>"Well, that day when Anon was kidnapped... She and I joined a goverment funded group called the Wonderbolts to try and save him from those terrorists."
>you hold up your hands and stop her story right there
"wait wait wait, hold on a second here. So, you're telling me you know Spiderwoman? and that the two of you."
>you place your hands together
"Together. joined some sort of counter terrorist group named Wonderbolts?"
>Vinyl looks unamused but nods before continuing
>"pretty much."
"Why would they want you? I mean, I can see Spiderwoman, But no offense you're just a normal girl."
>not a second after those words leave your mouth Vinyls eyes glow briefly
>"I like to think so."
>her eyes do it again but now a patch of grass and flowers between the two of you shrivel up and catch fire before eventually burning out.
>you can hardly believe your eyes
>and your heart is pounding in your chest as adrenaline flows through you
>there really are more heroes out there!
>you were right all along!
>Vinyl notices your excitement and grabs your attention
>>27917820
>"Mind if I continue then?"
>you cant bring yourself to speak, so instead you nod with a smile on your face
>She tells you vague details about the Wonderbolts.
>How she trained with them and Spiderwoman
>How the two of them stole a car and broke into some place called "the pit"
>and how she helped rescue a team of superheroes held captive there.
"But.. what does this have to do with Anonymous?"
>she takes a seat on the grass and pulls out a small burnt patch
>"Anonymous..."
>she tosses the patch to you
>catching it you look it over seeing the clearly damaged design of the wonderbolts
>"Anonymous was in "The Pit," but... not the way we expected."
>>27917830
>you turn the car into its parking place and turn the engine off before removing your mask.
>despite having enough cash to continually pay for your old house it was best that you left it behind.
>removing your uniform you place everything inside a duffel bag and zip it closed, making sure nothing is exposed.
>you then unlock the door and step out of the car taking both the suitcase and bag with you
>the 'Never-Change Appartments' sign welcomes you inside and you walk up to the desk where a dark skinned woman with dark aqua hair grins back at you.
>"well well, you finally came back home. What name are you going to be under this time?"
>you place the suitcase on the desk facing away from the owner and open it
"Very funny Chrysalis."
>you reach inside and take out the usual amount for her 'special' registry
>namely the one that leaves you anonymous.
>...
>the humor in this is not lost on you.
>"Come now 'Nonny, surely you find it entertaining that you are paying me to be yourself."
>she chuckles slightly still finding enjoyment in her continuing joke.
>she takes the money and places it under the counter and hands you the key to the same apartment you always have.
>"I'll be having breakfast around 10:30 or so. You're welcome to join me."
"since when has this place ever had free continental breakfasts?"
>She gives you a sly smile and flicks her hair out of her eyes
>"since you became my favorite attendant."
>you smile at her and walk off
"I'll think about it"
>as you walk away you cant help but wonder.
>were her eyes always that color?
----
and thats all I got.
see you guys around next thread!
12 posts to go
>>27918778
>>27918333
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=acV0UwxXOEA&autoplay=1
8
>>27917850
Took me a second to realize the change in POV
>>27919155
Yeah sorry there should have been a new paragraph but I pasted it incorrectly/awkwardly
>>27919172
shun
thread needs another sexy symbiote version
>>27919295
I second this proposal.
>>27919295
What symbiote and host? That's my question
>>27919406ponks, because misunderstandings
>>27919295
>>27919423
Major props to whomever puts Mania in a green...mai waifu needs more love...
>>27919423superkeaton needs more lovin
>>27919510
I Might do thatt
We need a new thread
>>27919423
Would have freaky symbiote sex with.
>>27920157
NEW THREAD
