A sequel for Crystal Warlock; Quest set in Sombraverse.
Anonpone link: https://www.anonpone.com/virginharder/
Crystal Warlock summary: http://pastebin.com/raw/GBPa5pgR
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>You are Aurora Flare, a pony turned into a Crystal Golem.
>You are currently in the middle of saving Golden Shield, your friend.
>You are also in the middle of fighting Spitfire and her loyal soldiers.
>But then, a pair of brass, demonic birds attack both sides of the conflict with their magicl, soul-wretching caw.
>And now…
With no Gliding Wind to keep up her Pegasus magic, and with the sudden interference by the strange, eldritch birds, the tornado quickly dies down. You and the other two crystal golems are completely unaffected by the croak of the mythological machines. Everyone else, on other hoof, is. They shrivel up in pain and cover their ears as if the noise is a cacophony of misery and divine punishment. The other Pegasus ponies are so weak they lifelessly fall onto the cloud with no care for their safety or your presence. They do not react to you; they are barely able to groan in pain.
You follow the movement of one of the birds who decided to charge beneath the cloud. You spot Gliding Wind curling up in pain. Her helmet is off as she attempts to keep her hooves pushed as hard as possible against her small ears. A few meters away, buried heads down into the ground, are unconscious Meridian and Golden Shield. They show no reaction towards the loud yell of the demonic creatures, seemingly ignorant. They crashed and they crashed hard. The bird pierces the sharp talons and drags the Pegasus officer against the ground; it lands few feet away from Meridian.
You cannot judge the damage from here but, there are no visible sights of blood. Hopefully, the landing was not serious. You raise your head towards Spitfire and, with a mental sigh; you close your eyes to gather the dark magic. Once the green symbols are inscribed within your mentality, the magic of Sombra bursts through your eye sockets. You quickly envelope the telekinetic force of your essence around Spitfire and then you drag her towards yourself.
“Hey, what’s going on?” you ask her with concern in your hollow voice; she doesn’t not answer.
The one who answers is one of the brass birds that immediately locks it’s blazing, red eyes with the crystalline of yours. It either wants you, or Spitfire. You have less than a few seconds to react before the bird charges.
>You also have to stop the bird from attacking Golden Shield and Meridian, somehow… What now?
>Body Changes:
03% [-1] Alicorn ‘Dark’ Magic [Magic]
03% [+1] Volatile Arcane [Magic]
>>27787479
Hate to waste a TK spell but get the fuck away from Spitfire. Since we're stuck on this cloud I see no way of helping our friends. Also, if Gliding Wind is close enough we should take her Element.
>>27787542
This, with only five elements they were worse for wear, but with only 4 and one in the possession of the enemy they'll be hopeless
After that, let's see if we can spot a good place to land with telekinesis if we can't find our own way down
>>27787542
>>27787559Sorry for not making it clear. The pegasus officer in this is Gliding Wind:
>The bird pierces the sharp talons and drags the Pegasus officer against the ground; it lands few feet away from Meridian.
>>27787472
Why did we waste magic on such a pointless action! We could've shouted at her rather than wasting one of our few spells! Use the TK spell against the bird so it won't be a waste. We need those wings if we want to reach land without shattering our legs.
>>27787559
Physics doesn't work like that. Jump in the air and grab your ankles to see what would happen.
>>27787586
>Jump in the air and grab your ankles to see what would happen.
Wait-what?
>>27787568
Ok, then let's find a way down first, THEN take her element as long as she's down, then attend to golden shield and meridian.
>>27787586
>>27787609
We could always try a different kind of spell, as trying to use tk on the bird creature may have a similar unwanted effect (we would have to move with it, which may compromise our ability to keep it stable mid-air), such as creating temporary dark magic wings strong enough to get us down safely with our weight just once.
If anyone else would like to weigh in on alternate ways to get down safely, this is the time.
>>27787636
But we don't know any such spells.
>>27787609
If we were to grab ourself with TK to slow down our fall it'd be the same as jumping in the air and grabbing your ankles. Where does the force of our motion go? What's supporting our weight?
>>27787636
creating wings is a completely different spell from TK. I was suggesting to grab the bird so we can force it to give us a ride down. It'd be a gentler landing than using our own legs.
>>27787669
Trying to control the bird's movement with tk to ride it down may yield the same result.
With that said, we may be arguing in circles. Vincent, since magic can be a bit weird when trying to figure out the physics of it, what exactly will happen if we use TK on ourselves to get down vs using tk on an object/creature to ride down?
>>27787817
We wouldn't be controlling it's flight, it's a better flier than us after all, we'd be forcing it to crash while we're riding it. It would be fighting against us and thus soften the landing.
>>27787817
The TK only allows the levitation of medium-sized objects, you will have to use double the magic to lift yourself but if the case above is applied, it will be possible to lift yourself down.
You won't be able to levitate a stone if you are on top of it, or a massive piece shard as it adds weight and size. Unknown towards the bird creature and how it is able to fly or reacts to magic.
>>27787858
>>27787868
Let's go for self tk then, I'd rather not take a risk with the bird
>>27787889Your magic or the amulents?
>>27787889
>use double the magic to lift yourself
Due to the reckless use of magic thus far we'd be leaving ourself with very little and it's possible that we made ourself a target by using TK.
>>27787916
Also it'd possibly be 2 against 1 with some rather dangerous creatures since I doubt we'd be able to take the golems with us.
>>27787916
I'd rather not use magic either if we had an alternate way down; that's why I wanted to look down for a place to land BEFORE we do anything, maybe we'll get lucky and have something to climb down with, and get the others down that route too. Trying to tk the demon bird would be even worse.
If you have any other ideas, please do share
>>27787945
Didn't the tower collapse? We're on a cloud after all, not many things that go up this high.
>>27787945
It's coming up here no matter what. Either we face it on the cloud with two golems backing us up or we face it all alone suspended and defenseless in midair.
In a slight arrogance, which you cannot be blamed for, you fling Spitfire, who is still in your telekinetic hold, away from yourself. The mythological contraption turns in the middle of its charge with a single, powerful smack of its wing. The cracking beak breaks though your magical hold like through butter and closes on empty body of Spitfire. In a strange dark weave the creature begins to consume the very essence of the Cloudsdale Overlord. Soon, she no longer has the energy to struggle. Her face is bleak and empty. With Spitfire in its hold, the bird attempts to leave you alone.
Your body reacts immediately. You jump on back of the creature and, with all your might; you hold your hooves around its massive neck trying your hardest not to fall down. You feel drained as soon as your crystal skin scraps across its brass feathers, as if the creature is somehow able to oppose the dark magic inside of you. Despite the sheer power and predatory imagine of the creature, you are still able to force it to fall down with your weight.
The bird creature attempts to grab and toss you aside with its claws but, in the end, fails. The claw leaves a massive, open crack across your entire back. If you were a living creature, that would be it. Thankfully, you aren’t. In the strangest, and deadly of all hugs the three of you roll and somersault on your plummeting way towards the ground. In the end, the creature is able to make you slip and, with another shattering echo, crash upon the heavy ground.
>Body Changes:
42% [-10] Crystallized Flesh [Crystal]
03% [-02] Guanine Fluorite [Crystal]
16% [+12] Crystalline Debris [Crystal]
Despite your best wishes, the reality of the realization betrays you. The entire part of your right leg is destroyed and shattered. While not the most serious of all possible damages, it is still something you will have to live with. The bird creature does not pursue you, with another, horrible yell it flies back into the air and follows the light of the sunrise.
You are currently lying near the pony who calls herself Gliding Wind, and several of her soldiers. All of them are clinging to stay awake despite the horrible stretch of the demonic birds. She doesn’t react towards you in any way, shape or form. The second demonic bird is still here, standing above both Meridian; it has Golden Shield trapped beneath the hold of its beak. The massive, brass wings are openly raised above the ground; it’s ready to fly away.
>What now?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-CZhmJWXsr0
>>27788183
Oh, that's where the bird is from. Which direction did the other bird fly?
>>27788183
Damn. We were right-hooved too.
>>27788183
Well, shit, we can't let him fly away with shield, given we don't have any idea what it'll do to him or what force it may deliver him to.
Maybe rip of the beak with more tk, I dunno, let's try to think of what we can do
>>27788183
Yet another in the procession of "fuck my life" moments that is Aurora's existence. Try to run after them before they take off.
>>27788183
Try and grab the bird talon it's not leaving with Shield on your watch
Despite the unsupportive nature of one of your legs, you immediately stand up and strife towards the bird who is trying to steal Golden Shield, your friend. Who cares about Spitfire? Who cares about your damaged body? It doesn’t matter now; none of it matters. As long as you are able to save him, nothing else matters. You draw the symbols of the powerful, dark magic upon the black, void-less canvas. The neon-green text flashes inside your mind as the “alicorn” magic erupts from within your body. Like a phantom in an aura of sunless, burning fire you attempt to snap its beak.
Sadly, despite the pressure and power you put behind your telekinetic hold, the brass beak is not destroyed. Somehow, the surface and the very essence of the creature are able to reflect your dark magic. Those demonic creatures are immune to the magic of warlocks and tyrants! Still, this leaves it dazzled and confused. Aggravated. It gives you enough time to smash your body against its own. The strange bird stumbles several feet from your impact.
The bird reacts with a swing of its head but, this time, despite the slowly creeping lag of your body, you are in control. You dodge the swing of the bird and toss a punch of your own. With a mild success, the brass bird is forced back again. In the discord of the battle you grab the talon within your hooves. You attempt to rip it off, completely.
It is not as easy as you have hoped for; in fact, it’s impossible. While Golden Shield is still inside the beak, the bird raises it and you with it, above the ground and prepares to smash you against the ground once again. But, it doesn’t. All of a sudden, there’s a massive, boiling explosion of a purple-flame right on top of its head. It’s so strong, that the bird is forced to drop not only you, but Golden Shield on top of you too. The bird slowly turns towards the culprit.
Ginger Spice is barely standing before you and the deadly beast. His empty, crystallized eyes are set on the brass, mythological creature. Somehow, he’s still able to keep his straight composure. In his hoof, he has a set of crystals.
>Body Changes:
02% [-1] Alicorn ‘Dark’ Magic[Magic]
04% [+1] Volatile Arcane [Magic]
>What now?
>>27788530
If it's like the bird from Bioshock, we should aim for the eyes.
>>27788530
Ginger!
Let's get Shield and try to escape.
>>27788530
Ginger what the hell are those birds, my magic can't do anything to it.
>>27788595
this, there's not much more we can do in our state
>>27788637
Should we grab Ginger and others?
>>27788658
Should we also grab the element holder and use her as a trade bait?
>>27788658
>>27788691
Grab element crystal, grab shield, see if we can wake meridian, and see if we can have ginger follow us without the bird thing following, because with our leg in this condition, carrying more than one pony on our back is going to be hard
The moment the bird turns towards Ginger Spice you decide to run. You attempt to wake Meridian up the short time given but, this time, she’s completely out in her dream world. You place Golden Shield upon your shoulders and back and, despite the weight of a full-grown stallion, you swiftly take a few, confident steps to escape.
As you feared, and expected, in the end, the brass bird is after Golden Shield alone. It simply sends Ginger Spice flying with a single swing of its metallic wing and then, it comes chasing you. You grunt at the display of brutality but, you cannot stop and turn now; not now. Once Golden Shield is away from troubles you will return; that, you promise.
“Ginger Spice,” you voice echoes across the catastrophic battlefield, “Run, escape, hide or follow me! Do something!”
You can only pray that he manages to hear you. Sadly, you know that a blind and old pony will be unable to drag away either Meridian or Mudbrick, or anyone else for that matter. You will have to leave them behind. You stop before Gliding Wind; she’s fighting her own mind but just barely, she’s about to lose her senses. She’s on the “Initiates of Harmony” and, as well, you remember now, she’s a pony who shared the prison cell with Standing Ground years ago.
Your attempt to nick the element of harmony off her neck is successful. The golden necklace is glowing as bright as the sun once it touches your hoof. With a shatter of the ground beneath it, the brass bird lands before you. Without a second though you force the element of harmony towards its open beacon; to your surprise, the element reacts. The creature spits out both you, and the element, out of its maw. The brass bird stumbles and falls with a strange pain.
Within a blink of a moment the brass creature looks at Golden Shield, at the strange, red crystal and… flies away. You quickly escape further into the forest that lies in the shadow of Cloudsdale; you escape as far as you are able to see. You will walk until you, and Golden Shield, are safe. Not a single pony follows you; every single pony on that battlefield is in some way injured. Soon, the Pegasus ponies who couldn’t make it in time will be investigating the area.
Soon, almost everyone will be captured. This is a battle lost, no matter how you look at it. But, despite all of that, Golden Shield is safe. Despite the depressing reality, you can almost feel the warm happiness returning back to you.
> This concludes the [Cloudsdale Arc] and will be the final post for today. Thank you for playing!
>Inventory:
[Element of Loyalty] x1
[Crystal Necklace (Alicorn ‘Dark’ Magic %3/7)]
>Body Composition:
[Crystal] 42% Crystallized Flesh
[Crystal] 35% Dragon’s Blood
[Crystal] 03% Guanine Fluorite [4 Hours Remaining]
[Magic] 02% Alicorn ‘Dark’ Magic
[Magic] 04% Volatile Arcane
[Damage] 16% Crystalline Debris
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZyUQGXyjwoc
>>27789140
That could have gone better, but at least we have what we came for and an element, see you tomorrow Vincent
>>27789140
We really need to figure out a way to repair ourself without having to find somebody that can put crystals in us.
I think we did fine all things considering.
>>27789140
The Imperial army is in tatters and many have died. Yet Aurora limps away with the single pony she came after and feels happy.
She pretty fucking selfish like that, isn't she? I love it because it's still a flaw for her.
I'm not as mad as I supposed I will be. We need to try and reach the camp to see if something useful for us remained there. I also assume all the crystal survivors would think of retreating there, so we could see if Ginger and Meridian are safe. I have no idea if the enemy is in good enough shape to pursue them. I'm treating the last part of most recent Vincent's post as Aurora's assumptions, that's why I suggest checking the camp. Correct me if I'm wrong.
The further you leave the sight of the battlefield behind you, the more your sense of time starts to betray you. You keep a ready, open mind to the possibility of an ambush from either the pegasi reinforcements or the return of the twin, metallic creatures. One of them is after Golden Shield, after all, and it’s a possibility it will attempt to finish the job started. So far, you have no other plan but to return to the “Ebon Point” and wait for those of the Mudbrick’s forces who will manage to return back, Meridian and Ginger Spice especially.
Currently, you are in a barren location with only a few trees present, an empty meadow. Only now you notice that your sharpened leg left an obvious, easy to follow trail behind you. A groan makes you come to a complete stop. Golden Shield is slowly coming to his senses, you wager. You lower the chained stallion against one of lonely, pine trees around you. The golden stallion follows with a muttered grunt. Once you are sure he’s comfortably in place, you make an attempt to break the chain off his body. The strange, magical metal resists the pure strength of a golem.
Golden Shield slowly opens his bright, gray eyes. The first thing he sees is you; immediately, he tries to free himself.
“Hello.” you greet him with a tired, mental smile.
Golden Shield blinks at you but remains silent. He doesn’t recognize you…
>What now?
>>27793929
Try to look for other way of freeing him. Perhaps the metal reacts to our dark magic, we could use other means to break the chains and see if it will work. It may be important, carrying him on our damaged back prolly exposes him to our poisonous innards.
>>27793929
Shield, it's me, Aurora. Are you ok?
>>27793929
tell him to stay still and try to break his chain with his spear.
>>27794063
I don't think we have any weapons. Also, Vince, are we leaking something and how exactly is our arm broken like where and how much is left?
You make an attempt to grapple the strange chain with your hooves and then break it into pieces. Sadly, the chain is incredibly resilient. It clatters and rattles in response to your efforts but, not a single crack breaks through it. The “Royal Legate” smashes his back, and the chain around it, against the massive, rotten tree-trunk. It does not work.
“Golden Shield,” you try to calm him down, “Deep breaths. You are safe.”
The stallion raises his head at you with pithy expression.
“Golden Shield,” you raise your barely functioning leg towards your chest, “I am Aurora. Aurora Flare.”
Thankfully, this makes him stop. With a tremble in his voice, the stallion speaks, “Aurora? I thought you were…”
“Dead,” you finish the sentence for him, “I might as well be.”
“But they told me... How,” he pauses, “Where are we? What did I miss?”
>What now?
>>27794100Nothing is leaking. Fast doodle to explain.
>>27794230
Holy shit that's a lot of damage. Finding Ginger should be our second objective now, I don't know anyone else out there who could fix us. I don't really know what to say to Shield now, we got our consciousness not too long ago, when we were about to fuck up a nice colt. We could calm him down a bit thou. And try some more options. Maybe find a central point of the chain net and try to smash it with a stone?
>>27794230
Ginger made the crystle spire to allow the army to go on the cloud which we used to try and stop your execution, everything was going poorly because the Initiates of harmony was there and made you fall to your death sooner then later then two brass birds appear messing with the pegasi and capture spitefire, then try to capture you after meridian caught you with the Initiates of harmony hot on her tail.
>>27794345
He may be a bit overwhelmed by all this info at once.
>>27794230
The Vizier killed me but somehow I woke up again. I-I'm so glad to see you again Shield. I really worried about you when Sombra sent you off you know.
Aurora feels intense joy and relief.
>>27794378
>Aurora feels intense joy and relief
I fucking hope to see this.
“First things first, Shield,” your cold voice follows as you slowly let go of his chain. With a grind, you raise your head to look into his gray, trembling eyes; you can see a reflection of a scarlet, ruined statue inside of them: your reflection.
Inside your mind, you can feel the little, sweet-corn mare crying. You nudge your head against his; a ridiculous gesture. Despite the weakness present inside your voice, you still attempt to make it sound real, pony-like. You say, “I’m so glad to see you again, Shield! It’s been so long… Amore’s grace, too long. I was really, really worried when Sombra send you away to Manehattan to fight his wars. I… I mean…”
“You look horrible and messy,” he says seriously in a return and nudges his head closer. You almost jump as he puts his head on your shoulder. You cannot blame him; his legs are tied in order to do a proper, -friendly- hug. “They said you followed a rebel into catacombs. When I returned, His Majesty showed me what was left of you…”
You shake your head vividly, “It’s true that I followed a rebel into the catacombs but she’s somepony you know. She got a hold of my “Crystal Note” and ended up becoming the “Vizier” you know and follow the commands of.”
“I did not want to follow her,” he gives an excuse as you rub your head further into his shoulder, “I had to lead the Crystal Ponies despite His Majesty’s disappearance, Aurora. If I knew she was the one responsible…”
“I don’t blame you,” you whisper and allow the surprisingly warm moment to settle, “It doesn’t matter now-“
“-But,” he gently pushes his head back to the tree to settle his eyes on you; “I need to know what happened, Aurora.”
Does he not care at all for this moment? You mentally sigh and shake your head, “What do you remember?”
“I remember a bat pony approaching me during the preparations. I knew of her existence, of course. She’s the “Royal Agent” of King Sombra’s forces. We worked closely together and she supported a lot of information about Manehattan, Cloudsdale and overall movement of the troops. She almost managed to free me but all of a sudden, she ended up with a painful, asthma-like cough. This blew her invisible cover and got her captured… That’s all.”
“Mudbrick refused to lay his troops and he decided to push a rescue operation for you.”
Golden Shield turns his head, “I… I did not expect such. I warned them, they had at least two ‘Harmony Initiates’!”
“They didn’t wait for your execution; it was going very poorly for us. I managed to finally reach you in time because of Ginger Spice’s “Crown Pillar”. But then… weird, bird-like constructions appeared messing with everypony there. One of them managed to capture and steal Spitfire while the other one tried to take you. I couldn’t allow it.”
“Bird-like constructions?” he repeats after you.
“Yes, do you know anything about them?”
“No, I do not,” he pauses, “What about others?”
“I couldn’t do anything, the cry of the birds made everyone cover their ears and struggle in pain.”
“They are still there?” he asks, there’s a spark of life inside his eyes.
“Y-yes,” you answer with uncertainty, “But-“
“We have to return there,” boldly, he answers, “We can’t let our soldier be captured.”
>What now?
>>27794661
He is still chained, weakened and perhaps traumatized. We're basically a walking ruin now. No way we're going back there. Shield and us need some rest. And he still has to get out of his chains.
This cough of Meridian sounds a bit unnerving.
>>27794661
Well let me try and get these chain off then.
>>27794661
But what can we do? Escpecially if there are pegasi?
Aww, she accepted his affection and returned it.
“You are still chained,” you attempt to stop him.
“Yes,” he grunts as he, once again, attempts to struggle the chain off, “Not for long.”
With a defeated, mental sigh you grab the chain into your hooves once again. If even Lunar Meridian managed to take it off without being noticed until her unnerving coughing, then so can you: a deadly golem. You strike your left hoof against every single chain until you are able to find one that responds with a shattering crack: the weakest link. You pick the chain link into your hoof, slightly raising Golden Shield above the ground in the process. Then, you smash it against your knee with all your inanimate might. The crack follows across the entire chain and crushes it into pieces.
Golden Shield takes a deep, powerful breath and smiles. It seems the chain was causing him pain after all.
“You are weakened,” you continue, throwing the pieces of the chain aside.
“I’ve rested enough in my captivity.”
“You are traumatized,” you blurt out in hollow anger.
“Aurora,” he says with a cold stare, “You and those ponies put their lives on the line to save me and me alone. They do not deserve to be punished for what I did or the fact that I managed to escape. I can’t leave them alone; I am in charge of them. They are in my care.”
“Do… do you even have a plan? They are going to be reinforcements. They already outnumber us now.”
Golden Shield strides his hoof against his dirt-full mane in an attempt to clean and return it to its lion-like glory.
“You said they were dazzled. If we hurry up, I might just have enough time to save as many as I can.”
>What now?
>>27794931
I feel like risking it for a change. Get back there carefully and see if there is anyone to save. Keep Shield from madly charging the enemy in case of brutal executions or such things.
>>27794931
Then I'll be coming along and help you out then.
>>27794931
If you are certain then I will follow you Shield.
I'll be stopping here for now. Thanks for playing.
Suuuure, let's go back.
>>27794931
Let's inform him we're in possession of the element of loyalty, hey may not want that to be brought back to enemy territory
I'm a bit worried about going back in our current condition, let's make plans to hide in the plantlife around the battlefield to scout before we rush in head on
That face when we poisoned Meridian.
>>27796238
It wouldn't have happened that quickly to affect her, we've only been around her for a day or so, as opposed to the children we've been around longer whom didn't have any symptoms, this may have been a health issue from pushing herself too much for too long
>>27796437
Doesn't the dragon blood stuff affect non-crystal ponies differently?
>>27796463
I... completely forgot about that, fuck
Other than finding ginger or another pony capable of repairing us, finding a normal doctor should also be a priority, for both her and shield
It could have been worse
>>27797388
I'm not even surprised it's in Australia.
bump
>>27803464
What cozy poners. I hope they have nice dreams.
>>27804074
One of them gets kidnapped.
“Before we do, I have something to show you,” your voice silently grinds against your throat. You take the gilded necklace of ancient power into your crystal hooves and then you gently nudge it in Golden Shield’s direction.
“That is,” he begins with his eyebrow raised, “The Element of Loyalty. How did you-?”
“It’s an Element of Harmony,” you nod at him proudly, “Now I know which, at least. I took it off Gliding Wind’s neck.”
“When did you even get the time to?” with a painful shudder he picks himself up, “She’s quite strong…”
“Have you fought her before?” you ask with a dubious note.
“Aurora,” he shakes his head in a brief chuckle, “Almost everypony on the Equestria side wants me out of the picture. I’ve met all of them at least once on the battlefield, even the “War Rainbow” and Celestia.”
“That is even more reasons for you not to return back,” You insist, “They will want to get their ‘Element’ back!”
“That’s true. Without the ‘Element of Harmony’ they will be far less powerful. We might even be able to haggle with them over it about some things. I think it would be the best to hide it somewhere here, private non-disclosure of ours?”
If your hearth was not crystallized it would skip a beat or two at such a though. Little secret.
>What do you say?
>>27809065
Alright, worst case scenario we can trade it for anybody they take prisoner.
You and Golden Shield eventually agree to hide the jewel that is the “Elemental Crystal” under a tree; it is your secret.
It takes you two a lot longer to return to location of the passionate battlefield than it did to escape it. You are tired and weak, barely able to control your own body with the remains of the dark magic inside of you. Golden Shield appears to keep a straight and calm expression but… nopony was yet able to conquer Mountain Everhoof on the very next day of being releases from gruesome, hungering years of imprisonment; what he wishes to do now is not far from it. Despite having a mindful about Shield’s decision, it was not hard for you to see his reasons. He is always like that, an insane beast for the ponies of Equestria and a hopeful, sacrificing warrior for the ponies of the Crystal Empire. It was thanks to him and him alone that many of the citizens of the Empire were spared the suicidal membership in his army.
You are a walking, living embodiment of evil, an enormous crystal golem. Your skin is a massive reflective mirror of the bright, morning sun. It’s annoying but you are forced to keep as low to the ground and as close to the shadows as possible but you cannot help but try as you see Golden Shield do so masterfully. His previous “Centurion” and now “Legate” positions are not for show; you know that. It’s very hard to appease the Shadow King with your skills alone. Once you spot the survived ruins of the “crown pillar” you duck behind the nearest, thick boulder. Shield follows you.
In less than half-an-hour the Cloudsdale reinforcements have returned to join the fray. The unscratched pegasi field- doctors are helping their fallen and ill brothers and sisters with a ludicrous attention. The “Wonderbolts” and the military personal that were too late to arrive to the battle are now surrounding and apprehending the surviving soldiers of Mudbrick’s army. To your surprise, you can no longer spot any of the golems around the territory. You can only assume that after the battle was lost, the voice inside their head commanded them to leave. Amongst the ruins you can see two ponies having a heated, loud debate. One of them is a pegasi officer. The other is a “Harmony Initiate”.
“Birds of bronze or not, you must immediately send a flock of your best scouts to search for Spitfire, Soarin!” the unicorn raises her voice towards at the Pegasus. She has a mad, almost burning gaze inside her scarlet-red eyes.
“I’m worried for Spitfire as much as you but we can’t act reckless, first we must take-“
“Listen here,” she smashes her face against his, “It will be too late. Do it now! We have already lost a lot today!”
“Verity,” the Pegasus she called Soarin stumbles, “I cannot, I am sorry. As an acting officer … Wait-watch out!”
A black, badly damaged silhouette of a “Crystal Golem” appears, as if recently materialized, behind them. The powerful creature raises his massive hoof and, with a wind-breaking howl, swings it towards the unicorn mare. You mentally close your eyes preparing for the bloodiest of displays imaginable. Yet, that are no screams of pain or discomfort.
Within a blink the horn of the unicorn mare flashes and raises the golem in a powerful, stronger version of yours, telekinesis. Verity does not even turn her head in order to acknowledge the powerful golem. The horn of the unicorn mare flashes once again; this causes the ground around the captured golem to rise in a form of a crumbling, pillar at both of his sides. With a magical aurora of transmutation, the pillars take the quality into a strange, steel-like material.
Then, within a loud, echoing second, they collide. What is left of the “Crystal Golem” is but a pile of crystal ash.
Golden Shield curses under his tongue. He says, “Verity…”
“Let me guess, you know this mare too?”
“Yes,” Shield pauses, “I was hoping she was amongst those who lost their conscious.”
>What now?
>>27809853
Let's announce our presence. We can't trade for prisoners by sneaking around after all. Also surprising Varity (stupid name) seems like a very bad idea.
>>27809853
>>27810139
Oh hell no. We're staying hidden, at least for the time being. Besides, if I understood correctly, we left the Element under a tree. If she's so powerful to fucking crush a crystal machine of death, she may as well be able to fuck us over, get the Element location from our very mind and whatnot.
Vince, I think your drawing may be getting slightly better.
>>27810486
And than sprout wings and fly over to the crystal empire to successfully kill Sombra. Hiding would only mean that we give them time to finish rounding up/executing prisoners.
>>27810514
We have a Legate standing nearby, not to mention that we are in no position to negotiate even with the EoH. At least wait for the magician to go somewhere else.
>>27810537
We have the other element to negotiate with.
>>27809853
Fuck that, we are staying hidden.
>>27810665
Yes, under a tree, if I'm not wrong. I know too little about Varity to say she couldn't for example, torture Shield into revealing it's position and then sending us straight to Amora.
>>27810674
Then why even come back? It isn't like she's going to leave before everybody is dealt with.
>>27810683
The mind reading crap was a more likely option. Also, since when was Shield so easy to deal with? It would appear that he's fought against every powerful pony thus far and lived to tell about it.
>>27810715
Fighting is one thing and being tortured is another. But I guess you're right that mindrape would be more likely. Which doesn't make it any less dangerous. I'm not happy about returning here just to see the remnants of our army being captured, but I see nothing we could do. If you do, if you have a nice plan that doesn't get us killed, go on. I have none for now, that's why I wanted us to stay hidden and observe.
>>27810715
>Then why even come back?
Because our husbando wanted to. Surely he now sees that his soldiers are lost.
>>27810746
Well maybe shield has a plan. Also, we should crush a crystal to at least have some energy back so we are less sluggish
>>27810939
I fairly confident that we have used them all.
>>27810976
We has 3 charges left on them I think
>>27810939
The energy only refreshes after sleep and we'd take a little bit more damage.
>>27810976
We still have a few left, despite people trying to waste them all.
>>27810747
Only if we don't act.
>>27811069
And acting now might hurt us badly.
>>27811077
And it might not. We might be able to avoid combat entirely.
>>27811102
Knowing how things tend to go, we'll probably be fucked over if we try anything.
>>27811139
>Bad things happen, so what's the point in trying?
With that in mind, we should've stayed dead.
>>27811323
Nigga, after what we just pulled off and with how fucked we are already I don't want to push our luck.
>>27811478
We never had luck to push. We've only had leverage and power. Now we have more of the former rather than the latter and there is an important pony that doesn't want to waste time on cleanup.
B up
Verity, the mad but powerful unicorn, throws an annoyed glance across the battlefield. She keeps a straight, focused glare upon the exact boulder the two of you decided to use as a hiding spot. With a twitch, she turns away. Phew.
“Fine with me, Soarin. If you don’t care about your acting commander then so be it... but (!) I have reports that ‘Shield was captured and taken away by those contraptions as well. And I’m not letting him escape, again! I need scouts!”
The Cloudsdale Officer presses his hoof against his template with a tired sigh, “I’ll send scouts, Verity.”
“Then hurry up,” she raises her voice with a present, boiling anger, “The sooner they leave, the sooner they’ll be able to catch up! Get to it, officer Soarin of the ‘Elite ‘Wonderbolts’ Squadron’!”
After a passing and weak eye roll, the blue stallion offers the “Harmony Initiate” a respectful and dutiful salute. She answers him back with a sharp salute of her own. The officer pushes himself off the ground with a simple, even weak, motion of his wings. Soarin gives Verity one last nod and disappears into one of the more chaotic gatherings nearby.
In that moment, the horn of the unicorn mare ignites. The vivid, red energy forcefully pushes the two silhouettes, ones you did not even notice, before her. With a powerful, telekinetic push she makes the two ponies fall on their knees. With a maniacal chuckle, the “Initiate of Harmony” removes the bags over the ponies head and fangs her teeth. One of her prisoners is the “Royal Centurion”, Mudbrick; the second pony is Lunar Meridian, the only bat pony around here.
“Mudbrick, Mudbrick, Mudbrick...” she says with a calm endeavour. She uses her magic to drag the stallion closer. “Was losing your eye not enough for you? Admit it; let the ghosts of your victims celebrate! Be honest, you lost!”
Then, “Centurion” covers her face with a spew of cheap alcohol he was holding in his mouth. While Verity is taken aback, he forms a cold, calm response and says, “Lost, you say? As far as I can see, the “Legate” has been rescued.”
“You,” she snarls back in response. Her magic swiftly forms a mould of the earth before their eyes. Then, it grants the soaking “earth mallet” the qualities of hard, painfully solid steel. Mercilessly, she takes the steel hammer into her hooves and strikes it across “Mudbrick” face with the physical power of a stallion. “Centurion” loudly gasps in pain; he bites his lower lips to avoid showing his weakness. The mare, on other hoof, does not stop; she strikes again and again until his face is a complete, bloodied pulp. With a relieved sigh, Verity raises the stallion on his two legs.
“Mudbrick,” she says again with a relaxed, smiling expression, “Was his “escape” worth it? All of you got captured, it was a trap. I knew you, the slaving soldiers of Sombra, would never surrender. You fell right towards it. While he might no longer be in our chains, instead, we have his entire army. Pretty please, just admit the honest, obvious truth.”
Mudbrick raises his red, narrowed eyes at her. The “Centurion” spits blood onto the ground beneath him. He mutters with a painful yet serious, soldier-like attitude, “It is not the fact that hundred soldiers got captured, not counting the ones who died. It is not the fact that you will now be able to destroy our powerful golems...”
“It is not?” she fakes a curiosity, “Are you lying to yourself now, Mudbrick. Very well, amuse me: what is it?”
The stallion grins, “He is the only other pony that you, and Equestria, are afraid of; as long as you are afraid, it will be worth it.”
The calm, enjoyable smirk of Verity’s face twitches. She grinds her teeth and then smashes the stallion into the ground with the strong hold of her arcane magic. With a gentle breath she removes a long gilded strand over her face and then whistles a note. She pushes Mudbrick aside with her unicorn magic and places the bag back on his head.
“If you do not want to be honest so be it. You will be; together with every single one of your soldiers, Mudbrick. I will put all of you under the martial tribunal. All of you will rot on the “Cloud Nine” for the atrocities you committed!”
The mad mare turns towards Lunar Meridian and by now you realize she’s either bipolar or... something worse.
“Let me go, bitch!” Meridian shouts into her face despite what she just saw Mudbrick go through.
“Neutrality!” she shouts into her face, “Hah, what happened to your precious “Neutrality” in this conflict, bat pony?! I knew it, I knew it, and I knew it. You are all a bunch of traitors and liars. Just wait until Canterlot hears about this.”
“I did this out of my own will,” Meridian panics, “The others have nothing to do with this-!”
“Shut up! We’ll hear all of your pathetic excuses on the tribunal. And then you will confess the real truth!”
You finally lower your head to look at Golden Shield. The lemon-skinned “Legate” is barely able to hold down his emotions. He’s shuddering; his eyes are hollow. You can see your friend struggling with the reality of the situation. He realizes that acting now will be futile and suicidal but at the same time, he’s struggling with his inner morals.
>What now?
>>27817743
Put a hoof on his shoulder and tell him we all knew the risk of the rescue; we can't come out of every engagement with minimum casualties, but future fights may still see victory now that he's free
>>27810139
>Varity (stupid name)I-it's Verity guys.
>>27810486
>Vince, I think your drawing may be getting slightly better.Thank you. This is the last drawing I did so I imagine my skills deteriorated again thou'.
>>27817743
They know that they are hurting with Spitfire gone, an Element missing, and you free. There's nothing we can fo here Shield. Let's get going.
>>27817743
God damn you cowards! We came here for a reason and it wasn't to watch everybody get hauled away, never to be seen again! Thell Shield to find another hiding place and when he's safe we should step out into the open and announce our presence, making sure to get Verity's attention. We have the leverage to negotiate with.
>>27817978
I already told you that "leverage" might as well be endgame for us, dingus.
>>27817978
I think we'll get crushed or tortured.
Aren't ponies supposed to be the good side in Sombraverse?
>>27818705
Aren't they?
>>27818670
Explain it again, because I don't think hundreds of lives is worth a rock we have no way of using. Unless you want us to give it to Sombra.
>>27818679
She has a functioning brain, she'll be able to realize that regaining an element of harmony is worth a lot more than keeping a bunch of cannon fodder out of spite.
>>27818978
I am afraid her "functioning" brain might tell her to try and get everything at once. I already explained why.
>>27818994
Then we just have to stop being a coward and stand our ground. We're the only connection to the element and if we put the pressure on she will have to admit defeat.
>>27819031
You know what prematurely ended our previous adventure? Recklessly following a kid who happened to be connected with a thief we chased before. That thief is now a Vizier and we were dead for quite a time.
>>27819031
Sorry dude, but that bitch be cray. We're leaving.
>>27819052
And she was hiding behind enough traps to defeat every army in the world. What does she have beyond a serious temper and earth magic?
>>27819058
Not so crazy that she isn't trusted with a position of authority. The harmony initiates were depicted as being replaceable, if there wasn't able to function properly than some other qualified pony would've been given the element instead.
>>27819085
>What does she have beyond a serious temper and earth magic?
We don't know. This is the thing right here, you see. We have no idea what else she can do, besides crushing crystal golems to dust and being a maniac. There will be other occasion to play a hero for you, I'm sure.
>>27819099
She's an earth mage. We've seen enough of her magic to come to the conclusion that she isn't a wingless alicorn capable of fighting Sombra head-on. She's just a pony with seriously enhanced magic, like how the pegasus used enhanced weather magic against us. The elements are being used to boost what the wearer naturally has. Not turn them into an invincible demi-god. Shield has been able to survive fighting against all of them so they aren't unbeatable.
I'm not going to convince you, and I don't feel convinced either. I want to stay hidden and observe or get the fuck out right away, and you prefer to negotiate and face the crazy fuck. Maybe we should let other players have their voice now?
>>27819201
I have been voicing. Voicing to get the fuck outta here.
>>27819201
I've been debating against every player that's trying to run away. It's not the unwinnable scenario people keep making it out to be.
>>27819212
And help Sombra crush Equestria!
>>27819262
Maybe it's another thing. We aren't a regular pony anymore, we can't simply lie down in some forest after that and regenerate. Our crystals aren't growing back. We're already heavily damaged and as far as I know, there's no way of helping it. We don't even know if Ginger is among the prisoners, although I admit it's likely.
Seriously, as I've said previously, if you have a plan, I will just agree to go with it. Negotiating with a mad mare who holds all the cards but one doesn't sound like a plan.
>>27819285
Reminder that we're not on a quest to help Equestria, but to free the Crystal Empire. For now Equestria doesn't look like a potential ally for our cause.
>>27819291
She doesn't hold any cards. We have the element that Equestria NEEDS, we have Shield, we've one a major battle against Equestria, and all she has is a bunch of slaves which are treated as little more than cannon fodder. Her magic won't even be a part of the equation if we keep it from turning into a fight. Seriously, only she only has three ponies that are of any value and all of them are worth less than the irreplaceable Element of Harmony.
>>27819328
If Equestria falls than all of the resources committed to fighting would than be redirected to securing Sombra's holdings and removing any possible threat. Essentially making it impossible to fight him.
>>27819356
Remember that Sombra is gone atm and we're planning to end him via super McGuffins.
>>27819356
It shouldn't fall, but I'm not sure it should win. I need to see how do they treat Fidelity guys. And by far ponies shown little to no understanding of our plans. Even if we tried to explain them to Spitfire, more or less.
>>27819380
Like the elements we have absolutely no way of using and Equestria hasn't been able to successfully use despite having them the entire time?
>>27819387
It's possible that fidelity helmets can't be removed, if they could than a unicorn would just need to slip it off their heads to disable them and free them up to switch sides. Considering Sombra, it's most likely that they have some kind of magical kill switch. As for the last negotiation, that was ruined by a retarded attempt to forge an alliance despite having nothing to offer and no way of gaining the enemy's trust. Also Equestria is losing slowly so losing an element would only accelerate their defeat.
>>27819449
Well, if the kill switch or other magical whatever preventing Fidelity Helmets from being removed is the case, we still don't have too much interest in letting Equestria win. That would cost CE way more lives than simply focusing on gathering McGuffins and letting the war rage in the distance.
>>27819482
Who said anything about letting them win? Trading the element for the soldiers would just maintain the status-quo. Buying us more time to do whatever we can.
>>27819524
How about a compromise? Stay here, see what happens for a brief while, and then follow your suggestion of relocating Shield and revealing ourselves? If nothing bad happens in the meantime, that is. Random rage bursts count as bad things.
>>27819544
I think we should get going since they're going to be looking for us.
It seems it is settled then. But please Vince, let us observe first.I hope Ginger got away somehow, even if it's basically impossible. He could fix us.
>>27819544
We already did that. They lost the battle, they lost Spitfire, they lost Shield, they lost their fortifications, they lost an element (even though they don't seem to realize it yet), and all the have to show for it is a few hundred slaves. The rage ain't going anywhere. The only thing that could logically change is they'll find out about the element and they'll have more control over the area. Now is the opportune moment.
>>27819613
They have no reason to look for anybody and, when we start negotiating, they won't have a reason to.
>>27819658
Who says they just won't lock us up with the others? Not to mention threaten to kill Shield unless we fess up?
>>27819728
Shield wouldn't be there for them to capture since we'll be going alone. Also we'd make them believe it's en route to the empire thus creating a time limit to agree to our ultimatum. Also they wanted to kill Shield from the get-go so it isn't that much of a threat.
>>27819760
That last sentence is true, he was supposed to be executed. It wouldn't be a threat, more like stating a fact.
>>27819809
Did you agree with that post or just agree with one part of it?
>>27820078
One part of it.
I still don't get what you guys want to ask from her. If it's to free all the prisoners, I'm certain that it is not going to work. She doesn't look like sort of mare that will agree for such half-assed trade, let's be very careful here. Also, they think that Shield got taken with Spitfire by the birds.
>>27821834
Yeah. We should just skedaddle while we have the chance.
>>27822572
This, she was able to take out a mostly intact golem, I'd rather not take a chance with a one-hit game over right now
If the chains are not like the ones that was holding Golden, then I think we should use a crystal and break the chains thats holding mudbrick while she yelling at meri
That is a lot of suggestions guys, it's awesome but I'm a bit at loss here. Please do not blame me if you are unhappy with those I selected.
>>27824959
It's a discussion around two suggestions. Beginning negotiations or heading home with our tail between our legs. Negotiating was winning.
“Now that you have broken the Princess’ trust, there’s no place but the tight prison cell for you, ‘Nightmare Traitors’.”
The moment she tosses Meridian aside with a push of her scarlet magic, she immediately enchants her voice with another flicker above the tip of her unicorn horn. You can feel a slight sense of envy towards Vizier and now, Verity. Those wizards do not appear to struggle with a set limit of spells or mana, be it the ordinary or dark magic they use.
“Officer Soarin,” her shout rings across the ruins of the battlefield, “Where’s Gliding Wing anyway?!”
It takes a brief moment for the officer to leave his previous spot and fly back to the “Initiate of Harmony”. It appears that he’s not the type to raise his voice; a far parallel from the mare who is supposed to representing the best vows in ponies. With a gliding hover he lands before the unicorn mare and says with the most official of tones:
“She’s injured and has been hospitalized, Verity. Just like every single other pony present during the fight.”
You silently break the crystal of the necklace in your hoof. The dark energy of Vizier’s inner magic transforms into a telekinetic force. You quietly surround the metal chain surrounding Mudbrick’s body. With a slight pressure the chain breaks. Mudbrick acknowledges the lose chain with a shake of his head.
Now, all he has to do is straighten his legs.
He decides to not do it just yet, a wise decision. He’ll be able to escape later when there are fewer ponies around.
Verity whistles in annoyed return, “How is she going to defend her “Element” in her condition?”
Soarin’s face pales. The Pegasus awkwardly twiddles his wings and then, with a loud sigh, adds, “There’s something else we recently discovered. It seems that the “Element of Loyalty” has been stolen off her neck during the battle.”
The mare blinks, she blinks several times in fact. Her, somehow calm, features twitch. She looks around the field and with the angriest of shouts, smashes her hooves against the ground. Her blazing eyes burn through the raised clouds of dust and crystallized ash, “Are you joking with me here, Soarin?! The element is lost, stolen even?! I swear by the spirits of your ancestors, Pegasus!” The mare grabs the officer by the neck of his white shirt and obnoxiously roars, “Do you realize what this means?! One or more of them escaped, and with an “Element of Harmony! Catch them!”
Soarin visibly gulps down his own saliva, “I understand your frustration and situation but we are in no condition-“
“You have dozen of perfectly fine fliers, Officer Soarin,” she responds to him with a roar. Then, she calms down and explain her thoughts further with a reasonable tone, “The ‘Pie Sisters’ will be arriving here shortly. They will help and guard against the possible return of those birds. I’m going to pursue those ponies to the Empire itself if I have to!”
“Fine,” Soarin acknowledges her reaction, “You can take a few “Military” personal with you but I do not allow you to cross the border that is the “Neighara Falls. Is that understood, Verity?”
“The less we speak, the faster we run,” she says with a patient smile, “They got five minutes to join me.”
You are ready to act; despite your sluggish movements, unclear mind and crushed body you are willing to risk it.
“Golden Shield,” you mutter as quietly as possible to your companion, “I’ll go alone and talk with her, you best hide.”
Golden Shield faintly shakes his head in a negative. The stallion looks at the bright sky with a passable regret, “It’ll be idiotic to try to do anything now, and it will disrespectful to their sacrifice. Without this army the Crystal Empire is barely safe. We need to return back and recall the forces from Manehattan, Fillydelphia and Vanhoover, Aurora. They will want to have another meeting again, they always do. They might look so, but they are tired of this war.”
>What is your decision?
>>27825232
YOU DON"T MERGE EVERY OPTION! We wasted a spell for absolutely no reason what so ever! Now we lost the element of surprise in regards to the element because you also decided to use a compromise that was SHOT DOWN! And now your going with the running home option!
>>27825156
>Negotiating was winning.
No it fucking wasn't!
>>27825221
>>27825225
>>27825232
I agree with Shield, LET'S LEAVE.
>>27825330
The only argument against negotiating was people crying, I don't wanna. There was no logical complaint against it other than being a completely cowardly bitch. You guys are just making the situation worse with your short-sightedness.
>>27825232
We're negotiating before it gets any worse! And we're leaving our necklace with Shield so no more idiots can waste our spells.
>>27825357
Shield waid there will be more, better opportunities to negotiate. He can pull other armies. We need to leave!
>>27825380
Those would be worse opportunities since it'd be an official negotiation. It'd be solely to benefit the empire rather to maintain the status quo. It'd bring Sombra that much closer to winning and make it that much harder for us to do anything.
>>27825290
>>27825357
>>27825368
>>27825397
OH GOD this is the sewers all over again, we did something to help free mudbrick and got confirmation that the element was a true loss for them, and the pie sisters are coming within a limited amount of time, we already have the angry unicorn to deal with, and we are already in very poor condition to even run, let alone fight
LIVE TO FIGHT ANOTHER DAY
>>27825397
Dude, Sombra is gone still. The point is to defeat him once he returns. It's benefiting the Crystal Empire, not Sombra. The most we have to worry about right now is the Vizier.
>>27825415
THIS ISN'T THE FUCKING SEWERS. The QM even agreed that she was OP. We didn't hel Mud brick at all, he's still behind enemy lines, he's still surrounded, he's still badly injured, he's still blinded by the bag, and the reinforcements are still coming. If he tries to run he'll be noticed and beaten into submission, if he tries to take off the bag he'll be noticed and beaten into submission, if he does nothing the broken chains will be noticed and he'd be beaten into submission. Only a retard wouldn't be able to realize that the Elements of Harmony are important and irreplaceable! Wasting time until the Pie sisters arrived wouldn't have happened if we just negotiated from the get go. Negotiating isn't fighting! Our condition is irrelevant as long as we keep it to words!
>>27825425
He'll be back and supporting the Vizier doesn't help free the empire, it just helps her enslave and harm more of Equestria! We have absolutely nothing we can do against Sombra at the moment so tipping the scales in his favor is idiotic!
>>27825477
It's two against one. Majority rules. Accept it.
>>27825232
Let leave and hope we don't get spotted.
Alright, guys. I'll spoil it a bit but:
Trying to negotiate has a high risk of a bad end, but there's chance of huge reward as well.
Leaving with Golden Shield is the safest choice and since you already have the element, they'll be forced to negotiate regardless in the future.
>>27825522
Fuck that. Majority =/= a good idea. we have everything to gain and nothing to loose. You guys saw this:
>We need to return back and recall the forces from Manehattan, Fillydelphia and Vanhoover, Aurora. They will want to have another meeting again, they always do. They might look so, but they are tired of this war.
And read this:
>We need to return back and recall the forces from Manehattan, Fillydelphia and Vanhoover, Aurora.
Rather than this:
>They will want to have another meeting again, they always do. They might look so, but they are tired of this war.
They want to negotiate and we can do that. If we wait and let somebody else do it, not only would they not negotiate in the Vizier's interest and indirectly Sombra's, they'd be given time to get all of their cards together and actually be able to negotiate rather than be ambushed while unprepared and be forced to take a raw deal.
>>27825583
*not only would they negotiate in the Vizier's interest and indirectly Sombra's
>>27825583
No, fuck you. Running away is much safer.
>>27825559
Given how our prior attempts at negotiation have gone, I'm rather uncertain that we'd be able to avoid a bad end if we don't leave. But, as I'm going to work in a moment, I won't be here to be the one making the argument.
I'll let the other anons decide whenever or not they got the diplomancy to pull it off
To everyone else, IF YOU DON'T HAVE THE SKILLS, RUN TO THE HILLS
>>27825595
Safer = stupid
>>27825606
Our prior attempt to negotiate was sabotaged by idiots tying to convince enemies to ally with us when we had nothing to offer, no credibility, and no way of gaining their trust. They were also about to score a major victory by killing Shield so victory was in sight.
>>27825617
Holy fuck, if that's how you argue there's no way I want you to decide how we negotiate, I've begun to change my mind about staying
>>27825625
I have a very bad feeling some those same idiots may be the ones wanting to stay, and negotiate in their own way, and if we screw up this time we're dead
>>27825641
You can't achieve anything good if you aren't willing to take risks. If you want anything more than a mediocre ending or even a bad ending, playing it safe is a bad idea.
>>27825641
I was one of the people that pushed for that original negotiation, but I was unable to participate. If I was I would've shot down any attempt to talk about peace since, despite being what we wanted, it would've been impossible to achieve or enforce. I also would've acted to prevent Spitfire from taking control of the negotiation and shoving that ultimatum down our throat. I was able to get back in time to complete our secondary objective of getting those foals a home in Equestria though. In this negotiation, we have all of the cards. All we need to do is maintain control and we can do to them what Spitfire did to us.
>>27825716
If that's so, then by all means, let's do it. My main concern was that we'd be left with the anons that can't negotiate well for this event.
>>27825738
I still say we leave.
Alright. You will appear and negotiate then.
Tell me how you want to appear, with what words?
>>27825777
Aw fuck. We're dead. Can we not?
My rough idea was to step out to where we're visable and than announce our presence to Soaring and Verity. Than we'd approach them asking to trade the element, that's enroute the the capital, for the soldiers that were captured in this engagement, that includes the ones that were attacking other clouds. Impress upon them that we know the element is more valuable than a bunch of slaves and that we only want the soldiers back while they NEED the element back and if they wait for the official negotiation they'll be asked for a lot more if we're even willing to trade the element any more. A very strong option in negotiating is the ability to walk away. So if they don't accept or attempt to use force than the offer is off the table.
>>27825847
If they don't like the deal they're just gonns smash us to bits and send ponies after Shield. Let's leave.
>>27825922
We are going alone, so if they distorey us they lose the only information they can get in where the element is.
>>27825956
We say it's going towards the Empire. They send ponies towards the Empire. Vince said they're going to have to negotiate later. We literally have nothing to loose right now.
“Trust me on this one,” you nod towards Golden Shield with a mental smile, “Just, trust me Shield.”
Golden Shield looks at you with a raised, uncertain eyebrow. He agrees, “You managed to rescue me, Aurora. If something bad happens then I swear an oath that I will do everything in my power to rescue you.”
“Nothing bad will happen,” you push him gently, awkwardly, “Just hide and wait.” He doesn’t need to know you are unsure if, and how, the whole situation is going to end up like. You just have to keep a stoic pose and harsh voice...
You concentrate; you allow the veil of your remaining dark magic to cover you like a blanket. You have to keep your body under total, direct control. You need to keep your mind fresh and at the same time, vivid. You are going to negotiate on the enemy ground, with an enemy maniac, about the stolen artefact of Harmony. It’s dangerous.
“Let’s do it,” your voice echoes in your mind.
You strike your hooves against the steep side of the boulder as you begin climbing it. The cracking echo of the stone swiftly grabs their attention. The shadow of your crystal figure quickly slides across, and soon covers, both Verity and Soarin. Once the powerful, morning sun is able to properly reflect off your crystal skin, your entire crystallized body practically ignites.
“You do not have to be in such a hurry,” your crystal voice echoes, “I am Aurora Flare.”
Verity’s horn explodes within a bright, scarlet flash. Soarin and the soldiers nearby quickly wing up into the air. The powerful magic of the “Initiate of Harmony” quickly covers and nudges your body towards her. You stand straight.
“And I am in a possession of the “Element of Harmony”,” you finish coldly. This makes the mare flinch.
“A talking crystal golem?!” she yells, as if insulted by the very notion of such act, “Sombra is out of his freaking mind!” Despite standing still and straight, like a statue, the magic is able to drag you with little effort to meet her face to face.
With a snarl, she whispers, “It seems the guilt is dragging your soul down, where is it?”
“It’s currently on its way to the Crystal Empire,” you tell her, “And only I know how to get it back. I know it’s valuable for you, the most valuable relic in all of Equestria existence. I’m willing to negotiate with you; I have what you want. ”
There’s a literal fire inside her eyes. “And what makes you think we won’t be fast enough to get it back now?!”
>What will you do now?
>>27826140
Large numbers of prisoners and wounded that need taking care of, a commanding officer that needs to be rescued, those that are carrying it are fully aware of a potential attack, and would you even be able to get enough forces to both find them and fight to retrieve it before they cross into our territory, which we heard you aren't allowed to go into.
>that fuck actually pushed the negotiation option
As a person who was against it the whole time, I'll give you your time to shine, brave boy.
Just a note, this was the last post for today.
>>27826560
I swear to God, if a single loud faggot gets us killed...
>>27826580
Sleep tight.If you can, draw some more things sometimes. But don't force yourself.
Ventilate the Vizier's head bump.
Bump to remember.
We are going to fuck the Vizier nonsexually bump.
Was it really just one person? Whew.
>>27826140
>>27826260
Plus she assumed too quickly we didn't anticipate an attempt to steal it back; her haste and anger will be her undoing
>>27830340He did okay so far, but I swear, if that guy doesn't get back before Vincent begins to post again...
>>27830340
>>27831761
I swear to not post until that ONE guy does if you do.
>>27831761
Peridotposter is a qtpie.
>>27832682
I'm awake and I'll post if I'm not going to be here for some reason
We fucked up bat poniez.
You knock your head in her direction; you make sure to avoid a straight collision. Your personal space is important.
“I know for a fact that after this battle, you have a large number of wounded and prisoners you have to take care of,” your magical life-force brightly scintillates from within your crystal eyes, “You have a commanding officer to catch and rescue now. The ponies that left and are now carrying the “Harmony Element” are fully aware there are still pegasi left who will, more than likely, pursue them. But face it; they’ll be long gone into the territory you are not allowed to step into.”
Verity offers you a casual whistle. With a stubborn attitude she raises her chin and says, “Well, well and well, are you not well informed and talkative for a big lump of crystals? First of all, now that we heard all of this... Officer Soarin?”
The aquamarine Pegasus clears his throat and, with a hasty retreat, nods, “You can pursue them further, Verity.”
The wicked smile on the pony before you grows, “Then, I also know the rough sizes of your army. And I know that the majority have fallen in this battle: about hundred crystal ponies are captured. So, how many are on their way to the Crystal Empire now? Is it ten weak and injured ponies? Oh, maybe it’s even less? Five? They are too slow for us.”
“What makes you think all of them participated in the battle?”
Her head quickly flinches into your direction. Her eyes narrows and tremble in obvious, boiling aggravation, “That’s a lie... It is what I would say... I can usually say when a pony is lying; it is rather obvious with their weakening, forced voice and the exaggerated expression over their faces. But you, you are not a pony. It is as if you don’t give a flying arcane particle! But you do, I know you obviously do else you wouldn’t be here, talking.”
“If you decide to not accept my proposal, or if you send your forces now, it’s off the table. Then-”
The unicorn mare coughs at you. Her anger twists into amusement then, it turns into a maniacal laughter. She raises her hoof and, after Soarin’s approving nod, all of them open their wings wide with an echoing flutter. Then, she points her hoof into your direction. In a single blink and blur the four pegasi blast out of a growing, thunderous cloud.
“So what is it now? Is the offer off the table now, golem?” her lips twitch, “Don’t make me laugh!”
You do not move your body, “Is this the risk you are willing to take? I am your only hope to get it safe and sound.”
Her voice comes to a grind, “I do not negotiate with traitors and terrorists, or their willing servants. ... Amuse me,” she gently pushes her hoof to face you from your right side, “What are your conditions? I’m genuinely curious, really.”
>What now?
>>27833817
You release all of the prisoners gained through this battle and than the element will be returned. I assure you that's a better deal than you'll get through official negotiations.
>>27833891
This, she'd have to give far more to get it back if she turns us down now, if the empire gives a chance to get it back at all once there at all if we aren't there
>>27832767I could have sworn I've only posted two SU gifs in this entire quest, but eh a theme is a theme, it's not like the image limit is getting taken up by anything else
You remain stoic.
“You will release all the prisoners gained during this battle and then the element is going to be returned.”
“Oh,” she raises her chin again, “I’m more than certain that once you return with your army you’ll keep your word.”
You grunt, “It is still a better deal that one you will get if you try to officially negotiate with the Crystal Empire.”
She pushes her head towards you, “I do not negotiate with the tyrant’s servants,” she practically hisses through her teeth. “I do not know if you are reckless, stupid, arrogant or all three but I’m not betraying the ghosts of the death and deceased to release the prisoners of war. They have committed heinous crimes and they will pay for the things they have done!”
“I know the “Element of Harmony” is important to you or for the success of the Equestria.”
‘Then there’s even less of a reason for me to trust or believe you,” the fire inside her eyes rises, “You have lost the battle, your pathetic remains are retreating. We are moving the border now, we are moving forward now! And you know what? We will take ours by force. We will take Manehattan back. And, listen, we are going to siege Empire too.”
“It took you more than three years, you are still losing.”
“You are a persistent brat,” she shouts at you with anger. It takes her a second to calm down, “Let me make it clear,” her horn flashes; you can feel your heavy body forced to slowly spin in circles, “You will beg me for my conditions.”
>What now?
>>27834399
Is she the Element of Honesty?
>>27834549
She certainly isn't Kindness or Laughter.
>>27834635
Generosity would probably be better at negotiating as well.
Reminder to also ask to send rain the the forest. Or we could keep ignoring the fact that the bears ever existed.
Also I still feel that we've REALLY fucked up. No, not we. Just that one guy and Vince since Vince would rather listen to the single anon who bitched the best than the majority.
>>27834399
I'm betting your the Element oh Honesty, because you absolutely suck at lying. Do you honestly believe you'll be able to take this almost complete defeat and use it to reclaim all of the territory between you and the capital as well as capture it before the front line is reinforced? Celestia and Luna united weren't able to prevent Sombra from taking power, all they succeed was banishing him for a millennium and getting the Crystal Empire erased from existence. Even when it returned your princess was powerless to prevent Sombra from reclaiming it. And you expect us to believe that you'll be able to do what your princesses couldn't without being able to wield the full potential of uniting all 6 elements? As far as not negotiating with us, we have it on good authority that Equestria does come to the table often. We believe it when you say that you'd never negotiate with us, they'd never allow you near the table.
>>27834717
Now's not the time to get sidetracked.
>>27834549
Could be magic?
>>27835020
Isn't magic supposed to unite the other elements?
Now I have a theory. The bird ran away from Aurora when she had the Element. So either just the aura of the Element was enough to send it off or maybe the Element of Loyalty resonated with Aurora. I think we can attest to the fact that Aurora has been damn loyal to her friend, Shield. Just a thought.
“I bet you are an Element of Honesty,” you reply to her dryly.
She smirks at that, “This is the element I wear proudly and I see you ogling, crystal. But you’ll find it harder to steal.”
“No,” you shake your head in a negative, “It’s the fact that you are a horrible liar.”
You can see her eye twitching, “What is that supposed to mean!?”
“Do you honestly think that this is a victory? Of course you do not; else you are lying to yourself. Do you honestly think this is the only army the Crystal Empire has? That you’ll be able to reclaim all the territory until the reinforcements are aware of what happened here? Cloudsdale barely managed to survive this attack, and that’s the truth.”
“You cheeky brat,” she grinds through her teeth, “We fought this war without the elements until this point.”
“And that is why you are losing. Even Princess Celestia and Luna were unable to do what you are trying to, together. I know for a fact that Equestria is tired of this war, and so am I. I am well aware that Equestria representatives come to the negotiation table often, but the negotiation that will come later will be an absolutely loss to you. Use this chance.”
Her horn flashes again. You can feel yourself quickly rising above the ground. Then, the scarlet, boiling telekinetic feel tightens are your entire figure; your crystal skin slowly starts to crumble up and crack. She’s mad, absolutely vivid.
“Who do you think you are?!”
“I am Aurora Flare. I want to help us both here.”
“Then you should know that I never lie, and seek the absolute truth from others. No, I believe that we have the right moment to attack and take back territory. No, I believe that we’ll eventually push you back! And I believe that we’ll be able to stop your current leader, be it Sombra or not, regardless of the elements. The artefact is powerful but not as powerful as the message we send today. They are not as strong as justice; they are not as strong truth and righteous creed. They are stronger than what you fight for. And every single one of those soldiers, and the Empire, now know it. Sombra is not returning to guide you; he’s not going to save you now. Your days are finished. Give up and surrender.”
Your body begins to crack. If you do not react, it’s going to cause some enormous damage to your present injuries.
“You made me angry, Aurora Flare; very angry. You picked the wrong mare to speak your gabble. But... I’m not horrible; I am not unlike your false “King”.” You can feel the hold of her magic disappearing. She takes a few steps back, “If you return with the “Element of Loyalty” I will consider giving you back a single prisoner, whoever it be.” There’s a fire inside her eyes, “Or, as the spirits will it, we can let the truth speak for itself, physically. I am no liar.”
>What now?
>>27835393
You are right. You are no liar. Just a deluded fool that believes lies to be truths. Today was a victory for the empire. You lost the fortifications around Cloudsdale, you lost numerous soldiers, you lost your commanding officer, you lost an irreplaceable element of harmony, and you lost Shield.
so anyone else seeing a bad ending happening
>>27835640
She is going to fucking kill us.
>>27835640
I do not know what you are trying to achieve with this.
>>27835652Yes I do. I just pray the Vince realizes that bad end lies squarely on the shoulders of a single anon and goes back to give us a chance by following the popular decision of running away.
>>27835653
>>27835658
One can't control a situation if they can't control themself. Also she isn't the only pony here with authority and the other one has a much more level head and has heard the entire exchange.
>>27835699
You're depending on someone else to step in to save us?? That's a shit plan!
>>27835699
Soarin is a cuck he won't save us.
>>27835741
>>27835753
I'm not depending on him, I'm just acknowledging an option. I'm actually surprised she hasn't thrown a tantrum yet, just a lot of attempts at intimidation.
I just post to let you know that I fucking hate you shitty negotiator with passion, every single particle of my miserable being burns with rage and craves your blood. And you're also a faggot.
>>27835793
Her tantrum would be her crushing us. She can one-hit us dude. She's the worst pony to anger.
>>27835866
Angering her is the only option. We come to the table with all of the cards and, even though she has one card at most, she believes she has all of the cards. That's why she's trying to take control and force an ultimatum down our throat. Right now we have to focus on breaking her fantasy, which is going to cause resistance. After we finally break the shell, than we'll be able to talk to a pony rather than a holier-than-thou paladin.This is a battle and no battle was ever one without taking a few hits in return.
“You are right,” your voice grinds as you stand up from the ground with a struggle, “You are not a liar, just a deluded fool. You lost your “Rainbow Network”, you lost Golden Shield, you lost Spitfire and you even lost the “Element of Harmony! You are also losing your temper now. How can one pony be so stubborn and stupid?”
She turns at you with a flame inside her amber eyes, “I even tried to be nice, crystal lump, and I even offered a prisoner for this ‘exchange’. Alright, so be it.”
“Verity,” Soarin clears his throat in awkward gesture, “Perhaps her conditions are not fair but-“
“Officer Soarin,” she glares at him like a predator would look at his prey, “Do not demean your dead comrades.”
“...Of course. I leave this and the matters of “Element of Harmony” to you, as per Spitfire’s wishes.” He stands aside.
“Then I’ll show you that my words hold strength and power,” her voice echoes through your head. In a blink of a notice you are lifted off the ground and tossed several meters away, “And that you are the one who is delusional here. I believe that we will conquer through even if we can’t find other elements. There are no tricks here, crystal servant.”
You can see the scarlet magic enveloping the ground around you. You can hear a faith, quiet underground tremble.
“You fighting me will prove nothing but the fact that you are refusing to think.”
“I have the power to prove to you, to the Cloudsdale soldiers, and the spirits of the death as well, that we’ll be able to achieve what I said. Maybe one day, when Sombra was in full power and in rule, you could speak high and mighty. But you are weakening; you are stumbling down and becoming desperate. You are refusing to face the consequences of your actions and admit the truth, that you are, in fact, leeches! The end of the shadow reign is at hoof, Aurora.”
“Beneath that holier-than-thou shell of yours you know I am right,” you stand up, ready to act.
“I promise before the ponies around me, dead and alive, that if you can convince me of my weakness and prowess, I will release every single prisoner captured during this battle. But, if you fail, I’m not going to simply crush you like the rest of the mindless golem puppets. I will make you tell me everything and more, no matter what method it takes.”
The ground around you rises up; like a circular wall it begins to slowly entrap you behind it.
>What will you do now?
>>27836277
Are you serious? First intimidation and now combat? And you call yourself a hero of Equestria? Proving your worth by killing an obviously crippled mare that only came to negotiate? What's next, a foal? Guess the elements aren't very picky, it'd explain how I was able to use loyalty against the birds.
What a wonderful job you've done anon. What's the next step in your master plan to get us killed?
I hope anon is willing to take the blame if we die
Can we, um, jump away from the obvious death trap set under us?
>>27836557
It's an arena.
>>27836557
Mr. Negotiator has made his bed, now let him die in it.
>but being hero while almost ded works guise, i swear!
>We can cast 3 spells max
>We are going to fight
>>27836661
Fighting is exactly what she want and something we most likely aren't capable of even in our best condition. So we aren't going to do it.
>>27836695
Okay, what are we doing then?
>>27836705
She started this fight since she's been cornered and she declared she'll prove to everybody just what kind of leader she is. That if we can convince her of her weakness she'll yield. Her weakness is most certainly not combat and there are ways of winning that don't require lifting a finger. Let's prove to everybody that she's the kind of individual that, if followed, will lead them to their graves.
>>27836695
>>27836759
Fuck, we're either social-tanking our way out of this or not at all
Forgive me some of you if you feel as if I’m negligent. From what it looked like, there were two opposing, equal’ sides so I knew that, whichever option I would go with, some would be unhappy. During the last decision a few people decided to go with the latter option and so did I. I cherish every single one of my players, truly.
>>27840217
I just don't want to bury Aurora.Again.
>>27840217
To be honest, it's two anons freaking out about how close we are from getting destroy and losing their trust on the one anon.
>>27840855
Seemed to me like 3 against 1.
>>27840974
It's hard to tell numbers some times.
Why is it that all the shit and problems happen when you are supposed to be having a day off?
I'm back, let me write a post down.
“Are you serious?” you struggle with your voice, “First intimidation and now combat? Is this how the “Elements” act?”
“Shut up already,” you feel a massive, metal pillar bursting through the ground beneath your hooves. The titanium steel smashes with a powerful impact across your chin and jaws. There’s a powerful crack and a ringing sensation send across your entire body. With a tremble, you stumble back and barely hold yourself from collapsing.
“What will it prove when you kill me? You will not get the “Element” back this way.”
“I’m proving a fact here! We are strong, is what I’m saying. We do not need pathetic examples of charity!” her enchanted shout breaks through the air. You are sent rolling across the damp, dry ground as another magical pillar transfigures right into your side. There’s another, catastrophic crack. You can feel several of your crystallized body parts falling off your body. You glare into her burning, blood-thirsty eyes. You stand up and wobble.
“The negotiation is your only choice to get the “Element” back safely. Is this all you want, to put more of your troops onto the deathbed? What will you do next, confront a foal of the Crystal Empire and torture him for answer?”
Buh. A massively tall pillar smashes straight into your stomach. The edged, metal object raises you above the ground.
“A foal? Are you out of your bloody mind?! Now you are portraying me as the monster? Fight back already!”
You are barely able to slide off the pillar with a painful pfuh. You can feel your body dissolving under her attacks.
“Well,” she casually knocks her head and approaches you, “It only proves how delusional and apathetic the denizens of the Crystal Empire are now, and you are proving that with an example here, crystal clump. Well, it doesn’t matter.”
The earth crumbles beneath your legs. Within a second, you find yourself inside a tall hole; only your head is visible.
“It seems you do not feel or care for pain. Let’s see how many of the body parts you’ll need before you confes-“
There’s a throw of a spear. It’s powerful, it’s fast and it’s straight. The “Cloudsdale” spear slides across Verity’s face. The figure of a “Legate” stands upon the boulder you appeared upon previously. The stallion picks up another spear.
“Shield,” your empty voice breaks.
“It’s the Shield...” Soarin echoes your phrase. Within a moment, his wings raise him into the air.
Verity forgets you completely; her eyes are set upon the “Legate” alone:
“But, what... you are supposed to be captured with Spitfire!” It seems she’s insulted by the very notion.
“Verity,” Golden Shield knocks his head back, “Pick a pony who participated in the battle as little as you.”
“Shows how little you know... bastard. First she and now you... are you making a jest of our death ones?”
Shield’s voice echoes, “I accept your conditions. A ‘Harmony Initiate’ will not lie, correct?”
Verity whistles a soft, melodic tune. With a murderous grin, she cackles, “You are might overconfident, and stupid.”
“Are you backing down on your exclamation?” he asks her with the authority of the strongest warrior, “Are you?”
Verity throws Soarin a suggestive, and ordering, glare and then transforms the properties of the boulder into titanium.
She says, “Oh, you don’t have to ask, ‘Golden Shield’. I’m more than happy you came to your ruthful justice tribunal.”
>Do you do anything?
>Body Changes:
34% [-8] Crystallized Flesh [Crystal]
24% [+8] Crystalline Debris [Crystal]
>>27841916
Thank you for sabotaging the negotiation and forcing us into an unwinnable combat situation.
She was about to kill you.
>>27842149
She has stated on multiple occasions that she would torture the information out of us. She admitted that she needs us alive. With Shield maki8ng his dramatic entrance, that's not the case anymore.
>>27842202
Would you want to continue playing a head?
I know everybody lost faith in me, but I had plenty of ammunition in the barrel and the arena is proof that we HAD her against the wall, metaphorically. Now a weakened Shield and a practically incapacitated Aurora have to fight against an element bearer, her army, the Pie sisters when they get here, and their army just to survive. Shield just did what we did at the end of the last quest.
>>27842206
I had a way of preventing that.
>>27841916
We should keep an eye on Soarin incase he try and fly away to get more ponies or sabotage the fight.
>>27842262
More ponies are already coming.
>>27842243
You fucktard. You personally have ruined everything. Now Shield and Aurora are going to be captured and killed. ALL THE EFFORT WE WENT THROUGH TO SAVE HIM YOU HAVE SINGLE HANDEDLY SHIT DOWN THE DRAIN AND VINCENT HAS ALLOWED YOU TO.
Are you fucking happy? After you have your bad end you want so much I hope Vince gives us a redo from the point where he chose to follow your dumbass decisions.
>>27842326
I take no responsibility for what happens since the negotiations were ruined by the interference of an outside party.
>>27842353
Don't sit and act like this isn't your fault.
>>27842367
It isn't. Everything was going according to plan and I still had some trump cards left. More than I expected I would at this point.
>>27842385
We were fucking dying. You may enjoy Aurora abuse but I certainly do not.
>>27842418
This entire negotiation was started fully expecting her to violently retaliate. I planned for the eventuality that we'd take a few knock and I had prepared a way to prevent them from killing or torturing us without needing to surrender any ground to them. We were at the fortresses gates and the siege was progressing. Now an outside party has told us to make a full scale retreat and the obvious outcome is that the gates will open and the enraged defenders will descend upon us.
You keep an ever-watchful gaze upon “Officer Soarin”. You have barely any magic left but if rushes to get more ponies or attempts to sabotage the fight; you’ll have enough to hold him down. That’s all you can do now.
Cursed Tartarus, Golden Shield. I told you to remain hidden and trust me.
“Then we will do everything according to your words,” the stupid stallion voices with pride as he slides down the boulder with grace, “All I have to do is convince you of your weakness and prowess. Only you, is that correct?”
Verity literally growls, “I know what I said, ‘Legate”. That lucky hit of your against Celestia made you overconfident.”
“That doesn’t matter,” he says with a calm expression, “Are you going to fight me by yourself or you need the help of others? I do not mind either way,” with a swing of his lion mane, his gray eyes ignite. With echo, his spear smashes against the ground with a powerful impact. The metal weapon shudders and waves as he raises it to points towards Verity. There’s a murmur and trouble in the nearby gatherings of ponies some of whom are inclined to join Soarin.
“No,” she grunts through her clenched teeth, “I do not need help to remind you of your place, Sombra’s traitor.”
“Then repeat it,” the beat up stallion says with upfront authority, “Promise to release all prisoners if I win.”
“If you win? That won’t happen,” the horn of Verity flashes as she creates a spear of her own from the earth around.
“Repeat it,” his commanding voice repeats.
“As an ‘Element of Honesty’, ‘Legate’, I swear that I will release all the prisoners if you can keep that head of yours.”
“Then,” he bows with a warrior’s grace, “I promise to return the ‘Element of Harmony’ and surrender before Celestia.”
Verity is more than happy with this outcome, in fact, she’s blissful. You can swear there’s a sparkle in her smirk.
“Aurora Flare,” Golden Shield finally turns towards you.
“I had it under control,” you say with a grump, “I had backup, I had ideas ‘Shield. I had plans and ideas.”
“You did enough,” he shakes his head caringly; “I shouldn’t have let it come down to this at all.”
>What now?
>>27842458
But you got us here. It's your fault. Everybody else said to leave but no, you had to have it your way. Now we're here. It's your fault.
Before I leave to let you suffer the results of your own cowardice, I'll leave my trump cards behind. Some of them might still have some use. Us saving Shield was a huge bomb shell that would've knocked her off balance, since it was improperly used it was wasted. I'm also a little annoyed that Vincent kept dodging my attempts to move the conversation towards him, but I was able to make gains regardless. We had the details of what happened to Spitfire allowing us To paint a much more dire picture about the situation she was in and thus significantly raising the priority of saving her and the amount of resources that would be needed. We had the fact that Mudbrick's chains had been broken to make it look like that they're unable to control the current situation despite all of their resources being committed here, He would've been protected by the no violence clause that we only haven't used out of pity. We could've spun a tale about Shield being the one transporting the element and sited his intelligence, experience, and knowledge of the terrain to prove that it'd take a significant effort to track him and even more to confront him. We could've even sited his courage to convince them that he'd be willing to cross the mountains thus significantly increasing the search area. With so little chance of preventing him from returning too the empire, He would've rallied troupes immediately to rebuke her delusional crusade and made them suffer for all of the loses in this engagement. We could've painted that picture to be similar to how we died by blindly charging at a grossly underestimated-foe how it wouldn't have been her writhing in agony as life slowly drained from her, but the soldiers foolish enough to believe in her delusions.
Cont.
>>27842523
I'm so pissed. All we can do is watch Shield loose. God damnit. We won, we did it. We had him back and one guy went and blew it all. All we had to do was not be retarded and leave.
>>27842721
When she returned defeated the empire would negotiate the trade of the element and the Vizier, being the sadistic bitch that she is, would demand all the territory her crusaders sacrificed their lives to claim, all of the soldiers they captured, and quite possiblythe surrender of Cloudsdale. Thus making all of the sacrifices made sinse the crack of dawn utterly pointless and all of the blame would rest at the hooves of the deluded fool who refused our deal. As for preventing our torture or death, we'd simply walk away from the table. To walk away from the table is to immediatey end all hopes of negotiations on our command. Since we couldn't physically walk away we'd just have to cast two spells. I sincerely doubt it'd kill us, since we containe all of the energy we use, I believe it would just be akin to passing out from severe exhaustion. Can't negotiate with or torture a statue. Since we impressed upon them that there is a time limit on this deal, they'd be forced to panic and desperately attempt to find Shield, however they'd think he has an hour lead on them so the net would be cast to far and Shield could just sneak up behind them and pass through once the net becomes to wide and fullfil every promise we made. We'd have failed the negotiation and Equestria would suffer the consequences.
>>27842523
This is our first time seeing Shield in battle with an enemy, I Want to cheer for him to win.
>>27842731
>>27842721
I don't think your plan is bad, it's actually sounds fine and it appears you did put effort into thinking it over, but you should have had said what you wanted sooner.
Also you couldn't predict how the Shield would act but he did say he would interfere if he would see you get hurt.
>>27842731
YOUR PLAN WAS SUICIDE!?!
>>27842721
>Before I leave
>>27842834
I would've explained it if people had asked. I didn't want to just throw it out there since I didn't want to influence Vincent with the meta knowledge.
>>27842841
Suicide implies we'd have actually died. There was a possibility of that, but the more likely outcome would've either been a comatose state or returning to being a normal golem for a while.
>>27842847
Vince, fuck that guy. Retcon back to where you should have followed the majority.
>>27842847
I'll only leave for the duration of this event. I'm still invested in the outcome, but I'd rather clear my head for a while and not interfere with others actions.
>>27842721
>Before I leave to let you suffer the results of your own cowardice
You motherfucker. You're a real piece of shit, you know that? It's not our cowardice but YOUR foolish decisions to came back that got us here!
>>27842721
>Before I leave to let you suffer the results of your own cowardice
>So I'm leaving you guys to suicide just like my plan hinged on, but it's all your fault and not mine that we're probably going to die.
>>27842834
I did overlook that promise by Shield. There's still a remote chance that we can use the Spitfire and Mudbrick trump cards if Shield backs us up with making a story about using the troops, that we convinced them were still at camp, to transport the element and that he gave them orders or guidance to make it harder for them to be tracked. The deal is pretty much officially off the table, but it could be used for a little bit of psychological warfare.
>>27842943
Reading comprehension. The suicide bit was listed as a last resort. A demonstration of resolve and a means of taking the offer off the table, removing the option of torture, and forcing them to go with Verity's doomed crusade as punishment. Also read >>27842860
>>27842721
So you have basically forced us into a foolish negotiations then fight, and now you are just going to leave? Who the fuck is the coward here, you fucking little piece of shit?
>>27843019
I forced the negotiation, but the foolish thing was in overestimating my fellow players. That and not being more open about my plan are my only regrets. I now understand why we died and so effortlessly lost the first negotiation.
>>27843059
So you forced a negotiation nobody wanted and was surprised when nobody supported you?
>>27843106
Way to go, isn't it?
>>27843106
It's almost like players get pissy when the obvious majority is ignored for horrendously stupid actions.
As much as I hate retcons and think that they cheapen the story, the actions of the players and make it too easy without having to progress through the hardships, mistakes and failures... I don't want so many opposing players to live with the consequences of the actions they were so vividly against. You can try to survive through this situation, work with that one anon and trust on Shield or we can do a retcon.
>>27843106
My failure was that I ignored the negotiation with my peers in favor of the negotiation between the characters. I assumed people were able to read between the lines and see that, despite her power, bravado, and stubbornness, we were forcing her back. That the arena is akin to a spoiled brat throwing a tantrum when she doesn't get her way. That she was attempting to switch from a battle that she was losing to a battle that she knew she could win. I assumed that people would acknowledge the potential for victory that I was fighting for, rather than sit eagerly and watch for a chance to say "I told you so".
>>27843191
I trust Shield in beating that brain dead mare.
>gave debate anon the okay to go forward before heading off to work shit
>come back to all this
Well, it seems I've made a critical error in judgement, I feel I should have some of the blame for this too, I accept that this wasn't a risk worth taking in our condition and leaving it to one anon to do all the arguments wasn't well thought out on my part.
But as terrible as this wound up, whining won't do shit, it's time to come up with a game plan.
Shield and Verity are going to fight in ehat we can assume is going to be a one-on-one gladiator match, Soarin will be to the side, and we're stuck in a pit unable to move and damaged.
I assume that if we're caught using magic during the fight Verity will try to use it as an excuse to not honor the deal. I believe shield CAN win even in his condition, but we must use PRECISE TIMING in our spells if we give him an advantage, like using tk to fip Verity when she's already in a grapple or being tossed.
>>27843191
I very much dislike retcons too, and we already used one during this arc. As much as this sucks, it's not a locked-in bad end quite yet. There is another way for you to consider... if a bad end is reached, you can choose to use time-fuckery to take us back to a point in time in return for some nasty disadvantages (Example, Sanity rolls due to remembering what it's like to fail and die that way)
Either way, I vote to see this through.
>>27843191
I don't want one Anon to fuck up efforts of us all. Be it retcon, a successful fight, our intervention with last bits of our magic, whatever. I just wish for Aurora to see another day.
>>27843191
I understand how you feel but you said it best.
>I don't want so many opposing players to live with the consequences of the actions they were so vividly against.
It's for the best. I'm glad you understand our side aswell.
>>27843199
>I fucked up and now I'm mad people are telling me "I told you so" when they did.
>>27843199
>>27843259
We all make mistakes, this one was unfortunately more critical than others. Let's move on and focus on what we can do instead of what's already been done.
>>27843243
I Don't think we should intervene. If Shield can hurt Celestia then he can beat Verity.
>>27843191
Let's do a retcon.
>>27843353
Except he was fully operative when he was fighting Celly, plus he attacked by surprise iirc. Now he's in the open and pretty beaten.
>>27843355
I'm not sure if retcon is better than trying to solve this, since both ways may make us regret everything.
>>27843256
>>27843243
>>27843355
I will do a retcon if there's a bad end.
Just this once. Is that fine with everyone?
>>27843363
Just this once, okay.I don't like retcons too.
>>27843363
Alright I guess. I do not want a bad end because of a decision I was so aggressively against.
>>27843363
Wait... bad end includes Shield losing, right?
This is my last piece of input before I call it a day. It's not a suggestion, just an extremely rough idea to utilize the left over trump cards from the negotiation. Take what you want, leave what you want, throw it all away if you want. We demand to be freed from the pit and allowed to exit the arena, sine a one-on-one gladiatorial arena shouldn't have tree ponies it, it would be a sign of respecting the rules as well as a removal of a potential distraction. We should be classified as one of the prisoners Shield is fighting for at this point. When we're out of the pit we then confront Shield, we have every right to be livid towards him since this is a major sign of no faith, and attempt to work our remaining points into the argument so the rest of the ponies might hear them and tangentially be effected by them. Talk about how we came here fully aware that we might die so we could give them this offer meant to protect lives on both sides. without anybody really losing that much. Talk about how we're wasting their time while Spitfire sits in the birds stomach while being transported to this new mysterious enemy. Talk about how they're already having so many problems that they're not even able to keep the prisoners under control. Demand that he didn't tell the forces who were transporting the element to stop before he ran back here to be a knight in shining armor. Comment on our absolute trust in him to win and how it'd both loose them the prisoners they captured, but the element and whatever the Vizier will demand for it. Comment on how we became willing to die to prevent Verity from making the same mistakes we made.
>>27843470
After this leave the arena and go sit next to Soarin who heard everything and spoke in support of our deal. He'll most likely be curious about some of the things we said and we can continue allowing others to overhear or arguments, possibly distracting Verity and turning the peanut gallery against her. It could also negatively effect Shield, but that's why I called this a extremely rough idea. Good luck.
>>27843470
So aside from everything else, learn to use line breaks. I mean really now. There's a reason text is almost always put into paragraphs.
>>27843490
Yeah, writing was always my worst subject.
>>27843470
Is your enter button broken because that is really hard to read
>>27843470
I want to treat Shield a bit more friendly that that. He is the only pony that has the potential to take our virginity in the future.
>>27843522
No, my mind just doesn't work in a way that works well structure.
>>27843363
Ok, thanks for giving us such a nice chanceI should make some new art for this quest
“Then let’s begin,” he says to you more than to Verity with a smile. He puts his spear in a spin.
“You really are a bastard,” she clenches her teeth and throws an angry glare towards Soarin, “‘Officer Soarin’, make sure nopony interferes. Not even a single soul is unneeded; the spirits are ever-watchful of me.” She cracks her neck.
“...I take this one order without consent, Verity,” the blue stallion gently glides above the area, “We barely have time...”
“It won’t take long,” she says with a calm, relaxed smile. Then, she manically grins and lowers her horn towards Shield’s direction. From within the ground forms a massive, straight earth pillar. Within a snap of her magic, it turns into pure, hardcore metal weapon which can possible crush through buildings. Golden Shield spins out of the way.
“Stand still,” she commands him with aggravation, “Is that the only thing the fabled ‘Legate’ is capable of?!”
“Not getting injured is a victory in itself,” he says with a teaching attitude. He then turns around his own body and avoids yet another launched pillar. In time, he avoids another. Even when there’s a massive stone ball falling on his head, he simply rolls of the way and spins his spear in an annoying, insulting gesture. The “Royal Legate” shrugs his shoulders.
“I see, I see and I see,” the “Initiate of Harmony” chuckles under her breath, “This is how you managed to live through all those encounters and battles. You simply dodged and ran like the pathetic fly you are!”
“You are a strong wizard, Verity,” he ignores her anger the same way you did, “But even you have a limit.”
“Oh yeah?! A limit is something you are not allowed to have when you are facing Sombra, Shield!” the entire arena begins to tremble. The tall, metallic wall crumbles under her magic into dozens of massive, titanium chunks.
Then, one after another they launch into Golden Shield. They are enormous, they are heavy; they are wrecking balls of death!
But, Golden Shield is amazing. You truly admit that he is. Stupid, reckless, authoritative and non-trusting as well.
The stallion rushed towards Verity. There’s barely an inch between him and the steel wall pieces when he’s dodging those massive chunks but he’s still, mathematically, manages to avoid every single one of them. On his way towards the “Initiate of Harmony” he rolls on his four, he jumps and he even stops dead on his track and takes a step back to allow one of the chunks to pass before his face. Like a calculative monsters, a spirit of war, he just does not get hit.
When he finally able to approach Verity on his trot, he throws a look behind himself; he spots a massive titanium rock flying into his direction. With a smile towards the infuriated unicorn, he finally grips his spear and smashes it against her head as soon as they enclose. Then, he rolls out of the way and the massive boulder meets with Verity instead.
The mare manages to put a field of arcane magic, barely in time to protect herself. With a huff she looks at Shield.
Shield stops and gives her a casual, calm nod. He moves his hoof against a dirt line over his mane and cleans it.
“I have you know that Aurora Flare is, in fact, truthful. The “Element of Harmony” is in the Empire by now.”
“I will make you bring it back if it’s the last thing you do with your dying breath then,” she exaggerates.
“Soarin,” you shout in the middle of this huge battlefield, “Soarin, that’s your name, right?! You must understand that there’s no point in all of this, as much as I! There’s a Spitfire to rescue, right? You need the element, right?!”
The Pegasus throws you a sad, slightly understanding glance but then immediately looks way.
>What now?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a6EIv9GULJU
>>27843645
Good to know shield can hold his own, but we should continue to try to reach out to Soarin. He may be our foe, but even he and the other forces in the area should not have to suffer under a temporarily incompetent command. While spitfire not returning would benefit the empire on top of all else that's happening, to let this continue would be simply cruel. Harmony initiate or not, Soarin KNOWS her command has been compromised by her emotion and stubbornness, and if he does not take charge, this will end badly for everyone.
Also she doesn't see us as a pony, or something with a soul, so if the opportunity presents itself, trip her up with TK while nobody's looking IF shield starts to have trouble
>>27843836
Hey it suppose to be a fair fight we can interfere with it and save the spell if she planing on using us as "last resort".
>>27843836
That's much too risky. Let's not intervene unless he's in mortal peril. It's at that point Aurora simply could not stand it and charge in, throwing everything she has only to be easily destroyed.
>>27843884
>>27843902
Ok, it's probably better to save it for that instead of the first sign Shield having issues keeping up the fight
I think I'll take a break here, sorry.
Thank you ALL for playing.
>>27844005
Thank you Vince. Sorry this happened and I appreciate the other chance.
In my personal opinion there should be no permanent bad end. Bad ends exist but the cyoa should not end there. It should continue from a previous point, with or without some sort of setback or form of punishment to go with it. Other people are invested in this story and it's characters, you shouldn't shut the book on them.
That's just my two cents.
beb
>>27844091
>no permament bad end
Heresy.
>>27849662
Thera re quests that use this as a gimmick and I think that should stay that way. Because if there's no fear of lingering permanent end, all the actions and decisions have less impact. Why not jump into this obvious trap if we can still continue later? Why not say this rude thing to Celestia if we can just retcon back?
I am here but I'm having trouble writing an update...
>>27851050
What's the problem?
>>27851377
Sorry, it's nothing serious. I was just unnable to write down a proper update that I would be satisfied with. I keep deleting and rewriting things since I wasn't happy with it.
“Listen to me, Soarin,” you yell into the air above you, “You know that what she’s doing is wrong!”
The Pegasus above you flinches. He narrows his eyes and lowers his hoof to make the other pegasi near him stay away from the raging battle; it is probably for their own good. Those huge chunks of metal are simply too deadly.
You attempt to shrivel up and push your body out of the earth you find yourself imprisoned in. If the chunks are going to fly into your direction or if Verity is going to try to use you in her plan you’ll be able to foil it. Then again, she is supposed to be the “Element of Honesty” if she didn’t lie about that as well. She can’t back up on her word.
Golden Shield approaches her with a simple, easygoing step. The mare massages her injured forehead and jumps back; great. She’s afraid, even if she’s not showing it. For a moment you consider, how would you fare instead? Then, the earth beneath Golden Shield resumes its crumble. The powerful, unicorn magic is sent surging through the entirety of the area. You can feel the cold grasp of the metal replacing the crumbling dirt as your imprisonment.
No matter where Golden Shield jumps or retreats, the surge follows and the ground turns into the metal under Verity’s control. Her unicorn her flashes with a vivid, scarlet energy you can only compare to a flame of a torch; it doesn’t seem that she’s going to dry out of magic energy any time soon. What monster is the “Element of Magic”, then? You grunt as your shoulder grinds against the metal surface as you barely manage to raise yourself slightly.
Golden Shield is trying his best in avoiding the obvious death traps that are the “metal” spots inside this arena. Grudgingly, every moment he attempts to slip away the spots multiply and grow. Soon, the entire area will be her domain to control. Another massive metal pillar escapes from within the ground and reaches for Shield. The stallion manages to somehow dodge of its way and step on top of it, rising with it high into the sky. Your mentally gasp.
“Your magic is turning slow,” Golden Shield comments, “If you want to finish me, now will be the time.”
“Soarin, they are going to kill each other and for nothing! The more time we waste, the less time Spitfire has!” you say.
The pegasi looks back at you, again. With a sad expression, he shakes his head, “We can’t accept your proposal. We lost too much during this war to return all those soldiers and prisoners to you. Perhaps, yes, the loss of the “Element of Harmony” is a massive blow to the United Equestria but so is the loss of your ‘Officers’ and ‘Army.”
He’s just repeating her words; does he have a brain of his own? At least he’s struggling with the idea!
Maybe you can sell it better? Maybe he’ll agree to some other terms? Maybe he’ll stand up to Verity then?
Verity escalates and raises about a dozen of small, earth crumbles into the air. In a blink of her magic, the levitating shapeless dirt take on the form of a garland of sharp, titanium swords. She sends them at Shield all at once. The stallion jumps high into the air. With a flexible, swinging motion of his spear your friend manages to crush and toss away every single “sword” aimed towards his body. Like a lion, the king of the jungle, he glares at Verity and then…
His spear is tossed. The speed is incredible; it breaks through the air with a whirl. Anything more and you swear it probably could reach the speed of the sound. Verity doesn’t have enough time to react, she attempts to slides away but the throw is precise. The spear forces itself into her shoulders making the mare yell in echoing anguish.
“How do you such strength fighting for Sombra?!” she roars.
“It’s simple,” Golden Shield lands with a hollow impact. The stallion shake off dirt off his body, “While your talent might be transformation magic, mine is protecting things dear to me, like Aurora Flare and the Crystal Empire. Glory to the Crystal Empire.”
"I freaking hate you more than anypony..."
>What now?
>>27851717
We could increase the pressure by talking about how Spitfire was eaten and how bad just coming in contact with the bird's outside was. Also we should try to convince him to get us out of the arena. It'd prevent Verity from doing something desperate and be a small defiance for Soarin. If she notices, it might distract and piss her off more. It'd also allow us to effect the peanut gallery more directly.
>>27851717
>Shield puts us over the Crystal Empire
If we weren't a golem we would be blushing right now.
>>27851789
Spitfire was not eaten, she was carried away.
>>27851717
Thank God he won. Amore be praised!
>>27851898
In it's stomach.
>>27851898
Also he hasn't won yet.
>>27851921
>The cracking beak breaks though your magical hold like through butter and closes on empty body of Spitfire.
Looks like I misread it and thought it swallowed her rather than hold her in it's beak.
>In a strange dark weave the creature begins to consume the very essence of the Cloudsdale Overlord. Soon, she no longer has the energy to struggle. Her face is bleak and empty.
Still doesn't change How bad it is for her though.
Can we ask for half an army or something?
>>27851930
She has a spear in her shoulder, I can't imagine victory being too far away.
>>27852009
We are getting all of our military back if shield win.
>>27852027
How much has she relied on physical ability?
>>27852031
>We are getting all of our military back when shield wins.
>>27851969
How did the bird hold on to Spitfire when we rammed it into the ground?
>>27852059
We didn't, it tossed us away.
>>27852070
>In the end, the creature is able to make you slip and, with another shattering echo, crash upon the heavy ground.
Not exactly, but alright. I'm surprised it would be able to recover from that quickly enough to stay in the air though.
>>27852043
Having a spear in your shoulder still has to fuck with you.
>>27852194
But it won't end the fight immediately and, as long as the fight continues, she might get a lucky hit in.
>>27852232
I know, I'm just sayin' brah.
Hey guys, just so you wouldn't wait I'll post another update a bit later down the line and then go to sleep. Sorry for such short sessions.
Maybe it’s the earthquake caused by Verity or, maybe, it’s the fact that you are a lonely head amongst the tremor that is currently passing through the makeshift area… maybe, but you still mentally blush at Golden Shield and the things he said. Perhaps it’s your ego speaking, perhaps, but you assume that he put you before the Crystal Empire consciously, and, even though your heart is a venomous lump of crystals, you are more than happy about this.
But, you have no time to be a damsel in distress or a blushing goof. Golden Shield’s victory is far from over.
“I know what you are probably thinking, Soarin,” you tell him as you raise your head with a sigh, “But I was there.”
This causes the head of the Pegasus Officer to jolt into your direction; it seems that has caught his curiosity. You continue, “Spitfire fought hard but those birds were demonic in nature. They drain your life force, their cry makes those who are not crystal golems like me suffer through immense pain and eventually, lose conscious. I do not know what they plan to do with her or what they wished to do with Shield, Soarin, but… You do not have time.”
The “Officer” looks at you with a bit lip, there’s a tremble in his eyes; that Spitfire is someone well respected or dear to him. You can see the pegasi around him exchanging uncertain glances and whispers. They look at Soarin expecting a reaction. The stallion turns his head with a delay. He looks towards the current battle and how it progresses.
Verity rips the spear out of her shoulder with her telekinetic magic. She smashes the spear into hundreds of small chunks and, with a furious roar, sends the edged chunks towards Golden Shield. While Golden Shield is agile and fast, the chunks are too small for him to avoid efficiently, not to mention how many there are of them. Maybe if he had a spear to block them with his technique… sadly, he is at disadvantage here and his body is soon rained through with the chunks. There’s blood, and there’s a painful grunt and stumble.
The “Legate” takes a hit and backs down.
Verity immediately closes the distance between him and her. She leaves a trail of dirt that soon transfigures into a line of titanium spears, which are immediately thrown towards the direction of his body. Golden Shield evades them with a roll and skip but the moment he attempts to grasp any of them for his advantage, they crumble back into the dirt pile.
“If your plan was to let me waste all of my magical energy, Golden Shield, then that isn’t going to happen for quite a long while!”
You notice a spear accidently tossed towards you instead. You are unable to use your hooves to catch it.
Damn it all to Tartarus, it seems you will have to use your magic here. You close your eyes and allow the dark energy to…
The spear is captured. With a painful groan Soarin spits the titanium steel from his teeth and gently lands before you. You are surprised, pleasantly, yet surprised. Verity throws him a confused and aggravated glance but her eyes are still set on Golden Shield and Golden Shield alone. He’s the target of her life, it seems, or at least of this battle.
>>27853688
The reasons we're trying to help them is because we hate Sombra and we respect life more than nationality. Also, Verity's plan is a lot like the way we died and nobody should be allowed to suffer like that.
“As I said before, I cannot exchange you the prisoners. I do not have the authority nor do I disagree with Verity,” he lowers his voice to a hush, “I do not even understand why you are attempting to bring our powerful artifact back to us, seems something Sombra would be against.” He sighs and rubs his neck; then, he’s forced to raise himself as another spear passes an inch away from his leg. The Pegasus stallion grumbles, “Of course, if Verity is going to lose she will insist that we do as she wanted. And if ‘Shield loses? I trust the ‘Celestial Rend’ to do the same.”
“You sound tired,” you comment with a mental smile.
“I’m worried,” he tells you as he throws his comrades a nod, “If you two… help us find Spitfire as well, then I’ll find a way to make our negotiation happen. But that’s the bare maximum of my abilities.” He raises his head towards the fight.
Another metal chunk of the spear passes above your head.
>What now?
>>27853778
Given we're almost broken and shield is in a state of exhaustion on top of being a target of the birds, helping directly may not be the best option; the best thing we can do is to help send their forces in search as soon as possible instead of wasting time and resources holding prisoners and territory. But, if he's being insistent on our direct involvement, then he'll have to be the one to get Verity to stand down for a moment to discuss this plan and agree to not get a cheap shot in when our backs are turned, we can't just drag her along kicking and screaming and angry-unicorn-ing
>>27853778
Did you see >>27853775 ?
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“Listen,” you raise your head towards Soarin as he carries on with his evasion of the sharp, metallic objects in mid-air. What a perfect place to have a reasonable conversation, you think. The Pegasus lands his hoof on one of the spears, which almost hits you between your eyes; just in time to strike it against the ground and save you. “I’m not on Sombra’s side and I respect life more than nationality. But even so, I respect the lives of the Crystal Ponies too.”
He begrudgingly nods at you. You both toss another, carious glance towards the battle around you. Verity is able to push Golden Shield down with the constant barrage of titanium weaponry and dangerous, sharp sharps. The burning flame above her horn is burning with unstoppable rage. Her scarlet magic surges through the entire area. There’s no way she’ll be able to keep this up for much long, right? But the question is: can Golden Shield survive long enough?
“That’s why I cannot return the prisoners. Then the battle that was the ‘Siege of Cloudsdale’ is going to simply repeat itself, again. Do you want that? I know that, maybe not you, but the other forces will attempt to try again and again.”
“The war is going to continue until the fear of Sombra’s lingering is long gone and until the ponies of the Crystal Empire will not be treated as criminal for having no choice. They are wearing mind-controlling helmets for Amore’s sake!” you yell at him with a grunt as you, once again, attempt to push yourself out of your imprisonment. “She’s overconfident and blind. She’s reckless. If she attempts what she wants she will die. Our army is big, Soarin.”
“Then that is even more reason not to exchange prisoners. We are not going to execute them.”
“I’ve heard that this ‘Cloud Nine’ is a horrible place, Soarin,” you comment as the ground trembles.
“It’s as bad as any prison,” he sighs as he glides away from the earth tremble.
“The birds were after Golden Shield too, and I’m in no condition to fight as you can see. The best thing you can do is stop your strand on resources and forces of keeping and transporting prisoners and go after Spitfire. But I can see you do not wish to do it. Soarin… You will have to stop Verity if you want us to agree to this plan of yours.”
The Pegasus shakes his head, “Then, this. I will allow your army a parole if they help my forces bring back Spitfire. You won’t have to go yourself, but one of your commanders will, and willingly; be it Shield’ or Mudbrick.”
>What do you say?
>>27854647Yep, you just posted it right before I deleted and posted a fixed 3/3 part of the update.
>>27857680
That's actually not so bad condition to be honest. Only thing that bugs me is that the Element will be used against the Empire again. But we basically get a third neutral side in this war, one caring about all participants, at least it seems so. Good thing for our cause of overthrowing Vizier with Sombra, then ending this war.
>>27857680
That's... not bad. It would get both sides to work together. Tack on one final and surely inconsequential condition that they send some rain to the forest for our Oaken bros. I don't think that will fix it but it would be appreciated.
>>27857680
You would've needed our help either way. Only the golems weren't incapacitated by the birds and they attacked the Empire as well, unsuccessfully but that's irrelevant.
>>27857680
The Siege of Cloudsdale would continue regardless. Even if Verity finds some way to win, new forces with new officers would be sent. The Empire's military is to large and to driven to just roll over and die from just one loss.
It's going to be a real bitch getting back to the Empire and getting repaired. So yeah, thanks for that asshole.
>>27861197
Who is to be blamed?
>>27861249
You know who.
“I can agree to this deal, Soarin,” you tell him straight as he finally smiles at you. There’s a click, a connection. You two are finally able to agree on something. “It would make both sides work together; working together will surely make you see that the crystal ponies are just the accidental victims of all of this… manure. But, I wish to ask something else of you Soarin. Could you possible send a couple of rains clouds to the Oaken Bear territory?”
The blue Pegasus lands besides you and nods his head closer, “It’s a strange request, honestly, but once Spitfire is safe, Cloudsdale is secure and everything is calmed down, I promise to see what I can do. But…”
Of course, there’s always that “but”…
“I have to inform you that the bat pony is excluded from our potential negotiation and deal. No, we are not going to send her to the ‘Cloud Nine’ but once we have the time and energy, will we approach the ‘Hollow Shades’ with a tribunal. You must agree with me that they are not allowed to keep a neutral position of they are going to be helping our enemies, that being the Crystal Empire right now. With the bat pony with us, we will ask for their allegiance.”
>What do you say?
>>27861556
I know nothing of the batponies. What bad encounter I did have they were aggressive and secretive. Do what you may to them, they are out of my hooves.
I also have a question for y'all: is there anything you would like to see being improved upon in this particular Quest and my QMing and if so, how?
>>27861556
How about we come up with a cover story for her to make her reason for being here personal. I'd rather not send everybody in Hallow Shades to jail for high treason.
>>27861674
To be totally honest I just want to get past this terrible terrible situation that we shouldn't be in. We've saved Shield, now it feels like we have to do it again.
I just wanna go home, recharge, get fixed, and hug Shield...
>>27861619
That's quite heartless. It's our fault that she's here in the first place.
>>27861895
Yeah, and I never liked her either. If if that's what it takes to seal the deal and put this behind us so be it.
>>27861955
>I never liked her either.
What about her mother and father? Brother's and sisters? Friends and neighbors? She might also have a husband and kids, although I sincerely doubt it. You do realize that we're dooming all of them by agreeing to that part, right? Not just her.
>>27861556
Alright, but I would say see if she did went to help the crystal empire by herself or there more to the story.
>>27862064
Can yo try again? I'm not sure what you said.
>>27862335
Try to find out if the bat ponies are working for the crystal empire from her, then go to them to see if her story checks out.
>>27862453
That's what they're trying to do, by imprisoning and interrogating them.
>>27862508
Deal with Sombra, they said.
>>27862648
What are you even trying to say? Soarin is telling us to give her up so they can use her to prove that the entire town that she came from is lying about their neutrality, so they can punish the whole lot of them.
Shattered crystal bump.
It is possible that I'll be taking a break for a couple of days. As an apology, I made a drawing of our all-times favorite pony.None of my pictures so far did justice to her.
>>27865812
It's like you're trying to make me miserable. Rest up Vincey.
>>27865812
That's a cute pon.
>>27867309
>Vizier
>cute
You might want to see a doctor, Anon.
>>27867805
Well, she might be ugly inside.
Bump for killing the Vizier in some horrible way.
Bump for trying to not feel empty inside.
We might be able to help her by just telling Soarin what happened. When we entered their territory they attacked us without provocation and after we beat them into submission she decided to come with us. By attacking a crystal golem, who obviously is from the empire, they'd be breaching their neutrality in the other direction. If something like that isn't handled immediately there would be some serious repercussions, so she could've come with us to make amends for the mistake. The original plan was to handle everything peacefully so she wouldn't have done anything against Equestria if that had worked.
>>27872439
Might as well try. But before everything, we should look for a way to fix ourselves. I'm pretty sure we are leaking deadly poison.
>>27873100
Right. That's... probably critical information to give
Should we tell them that our very presence is deadly to any non-crystal ponies around us? If so, it might be a bad idea to have them travel with us.
>>27873100
I know we are leaking a small amount of poison, but isn't a large majority of it still encase in our crystal body?
>>27873994
They are our important internal organs so yes.
>>27873994
Dragon Blood was supposed to be extremely deadly to non-crystal ponies and regular deadly to denizens of Crystal Empire. Better safe than sorry.
Hey guys, it's me. The Symhpony is still on hold because of the late job as well as me needing some rest. While that is the case, I have two questions:
>Is there anything you would like to see being improved upon in this particular Quest and my QMing and if so, how?
>Would it be alright for me to try another CYOA down the line while Symphony is still unfinished? I noticed several of the QMs doing just that and I think it would help against feeling tired and monotone. Of course, Symphony would still be the main thing until there's a happy ending or you end up killing Aurora.
>>27876810
>Of course, Symphony would still be the main thing until there's a happy ending
That is the only part of the sentence I acknowledge.
Other than hoping you learned from the last major mistake there's nothing I haven't said before. Surrounding descriptions, distance between characters can be important occasionally. Also I feel that you can make Aurora's character feel more concrete but I can't put my finger on it, just a thought.
But yes, I don't mind if you try another CYOA, as long as you don't make every single character an unlikable shit, of course.
>>27876810
Don't run two quests at once unless you are 100% sure you an pull this off.
Bumping with fresh Aurora.
I hope the Vizier steps on a LEGO bump.
>>27880442
Wow Anon, I see we're getting real cruel here.
>>27876948
I though more akin to having a second quest when I'd like to take a break from Symphony from time to time. It's either that or nothing, really.
>>27881793
Go for it then.
>>27881793
Agreed. If it's just to unwind, do it.
Proper session tomorrow, promise.
>>27886016
OkayAnd a starvalley-ish farming CYOA would make for a comfy breakaway between these sessions, yeah