No /moon/ yet? Let's fix it.
It's always time to praise our Princess
Previous thread: >>27578854
Story archive: http://pastebin.com/He5X50m6
I want Luna to be my mum and be a little colt.
>>27749866
I am so, so sorry this is the first post.
>>27750393
Cute pone is cute
>>27749866
Any luck getting green from /mom/?
>>27751710/mom/ here
No one's stopping you if you want to try your hand at it, though they'd probably prefer it if Anon remained human.
>>27752037
This
>>27749860
I want to snuggle her.
>>27752223
>"Luna."
>"Luuuuna. Wake up."
>'Hmm? Huhwha?'
>"Can uh, me & Anonymous stay here for the night-, couple days, weeks, months?"
>'Oh yeah sure, w-whatever..zzzz'
>"Thanks, Squidward."
>>27752037
>>27752051
Honestly I'd perfer it if Anon was a pone, or if you could perhaps avoid stating what the "son" is in the story.
I want to be a member of some Moon sect.
I would gladly waive my current beliefs to praise the mother Moon every night.
Sleep outside on every Full Moon and fast on every New Moon.
>>27749866
There's a story in Dadonequus that covers that
>>27753485
how nice
>>27755112
yes
>>27755122
Sorry, I posted in the wrong thread. I didn't check what tab I clicked and I just posted.
Have a nice pic of Luna as a token of apology
>>27755174
you're good. you should write one about Luna and Sweetie Belle sometime though
>>27752469
I think it's missing 'years'
Not like we like you fags or anything.
>>27752223
We all do.
>>27752223
where's the anon with the life-sized plushie?
>>27756534
Probably fucking its bad dragon mare hole.
>>27756559
livin' the dream
>>27755174
All good friendo
Good evenin', lads.
>>27749866
From /mom/.
Please for the love of faust write us some green. We have one full story green writer.
I want a Luna who's deprved of sleep to fall on top of me and to use me as her teddy bear.
Wake up, faggots.
>>27758575
Good morning, Anon.
>>27757463
>Coming to /moon/ asking for green
>As though we're swimming in it.
>>27752953
Well, that dude surely could work in either /mom/ or /moon/ since his story has Luna and Celestia adopting the little colt. Of all things it surprises me that is on dadonequus since Discord is a minor character in that story
Just spent the entire night staying high and watching cartoons. Just checking in before I go to sleep, since the sun is coming up. To the guy who wanted Lunamom content, I'll have a try at it when I get up hours from now. Night /Moon/.
>>27757463
If anyone fancies fulfilling this guys request please do it over in their thread not everyone is interesting in niche content like this.
>>27759983
This desu. Never been a fan of /mom/ stuff.
>>27753485
wut?
Where did last week's writefags go?
I want this fridge.
Would /moon/ be interested in some green that I saved from a prompt from last November?it's pretty fucking hot
>>27763574
Why do people ask this. Moon is always interested, for god's sake feed us.
>>27763587
Alright then.
Original prompt with pic related to it:
>"Anon, I know you are going through puberty and your hormones are raging. It's OK to masturbate, but can you please stop doing it in my bed?"
Someone replied to it with:
>You will never hop on celestia's bed and masturbate.
>You will never grab her bed sheets and sniff them while you fap.
>Your nose will never pick up her scent in them.
>Luna will never catch you pleasuring yourself on her Sister's bed.
>She will never blush and criss-cross her hindlegs to prevent any marejuices from leaking out.
Now here's the juicy green:
>You continue to watch the double doors that lead into Celestia's quarters.
>"Is there something wrong Anon?"
>Turn around and see a guard with his head tilted.
No sir, I was just... Thinking.
>"About what if I may ask?" He says.
>You look over to the left and notice Celestia coming out.
>You point a finger, alerting the guard.
I think your majesty needs something bruh.
>"Hmm? Your highness!" He gasps.
>Begin to slowly walk away from the scene as the guard was distracted.
>Enter Celestia's bedroom, quietly.
>Close the door behind you.
>Take a minute to notice her room.
>Everything organized. Sunbutt keeps her shit clean.
>Walk over to a balcony that had a glorified view of Canterlot.
>Look down and notice many ponies walking by at the courtyards of the castle.
>Look up at one of the high towers.
>You knew that tower is where Luna's bedchambers reside.
>Walk back in.
>Check out a few scrolls lying on the floor near a fireplace.
>You notice an open bottle of Applejack Daniel's sitting next to a couple shot glasses.
>Pick up a scroll and read it's contents.
>"No pesticides were used HARDER in the YES production of this FUCK ME produce."
>Scratch your head in confusion, read another.
>"No. 19444444: Toddlershy is now my fetish... god damn you anon..."
>Head over to Celestia's bed.
>>27763750
>Since you've been stalking the princess ever since you moved into the castle, you know she won't be back for a while.
>Your chest begins to pound.
>Disrobe.
>Hop on the bed.
>Feel your balls rub up against a few sheets.
>Lie down flat on your stomach.
>The bed felt cool to the touch.
>She's been up all day.
>Grab a large bed sheet and stuff your face in.
>Inhale deeply.
>Shudder in ecstasy.
>Grab ahold of her pillows and sniff them.
>Feel your dong expand as your nose picks up the scent of lilac shampoo.
>Roll her sheets into a body pillow and get on top.
>Bury your face in and sniff.
>Begin grinding your errect cock on the soft sheet.
>Moan and whisper.
..... Oh Celestia....
>Listen to the mattress squeak with joy as you hump.
>You begin to growl like an alpha would to his mate.
>You feel your body going into a trance as you were closing to cumming buckets.
>Click!
>FUCK!
>That was the door.
>Flip over to the side of the bed and get underneath.
>Taking her sheets with you.
>Your chest kept beating hard as you scanned all three sides of the bed for a set of gold horseshoes.
>You wrapped yourself with those sheets in fear as a shadow emerged from the right side.
>You heard a pair of wings flapping as it was about to land.
>You soon watch four hooves land just a few feet away. They were blue.
.... Luna?
>You whispered.
>The blue hooves suddenly reacted as they heard it's name.
>"Who's there?" Luna cried out. "Is that you Anonymous?" She said.
>You slowly scoot back against wall, quivering in fear.
>"SHOW THYSELF!!!" She said angrily stomping her forelegs.
>You whimper, covering your head with the bedsheet.
>You remained still. Hoping it would all be over soon.
>Time to plan out your escape.
>The moment Luna would storm out, you'd quickly get out and bail, promising yourself you'd never do this shit again.
>Keep waiting, holding still.
>And waiting...
>It's quiet. Too quiet.
>>27763760
>You tune your ears to Luna. Trying to listen for any sudden moves.
>Nothing.
>Is she gone? Did she flew out the balcony or something?
>Slowly lift your sheet up.
>A blue mare's face was inches away from you.
>"Get. Out."
>Scream in fear as you stare into the eyes of death.
>You obliged and crawled out of the bed, Luna immediately came towards you in fury.
>"What are you doing here Anonymous? Were you planning on enjoying yourself here on the bed of my sibling?" She snorts.
I-I um....
>Your brain couldn't construct any sentences to reply back. You stuttered.
>At first, you thought it was kinda cute to see Luna trot up towards you in an mad fashion.
>You were clearly taller than Celestia's little sister.
>"Well? I'm waiting!" She said.
>It looks like she's abandoned ye olde English entirely, trading in for the modern Engrish.
>You knew you will never get out of this, alive.
>Looking down at the ground, you nod in shame.
>"I KNEW IT!" She said.
>"I've been watching you from that balcony, pleasuring yourself with my sister's belongings. I know what Celestia told you pig, spare us the details. For a human being, you're transitioning into adulthood. Your body, enraged with horomones; Your genitals, groaning with.... Male seed..."
>She slowly gets closer.
>"Yes, I've been watching you for so long since we found you in the depths of the Everfree Forest. You were just a small colt, and now you're growing up. I never knew how puberty would change your appearance."
>You take a step back to measure yourself away from her.
>Her truculent look faded into a look of concern.
>"Your structure, that voice... That stiff rod you rub my sister's sheets with. I never knew humans could get so big." She blushed.
>She gets up on her hindlegs and plants two hooves on your chest.
>Luna's snout scrunched up as she was still in disgust, ready to slap you right in the kisser.
>Flinching, you raise an arm in defense as your body was shoved back, landing you on the plush mattress.
>>27763777
Checked.
>You swore you could hear Nightmare Moon coming out of from Luna.
>She snarls, losing her temper as she jumped on the bed.
No! Luna! Please! I swear I'll never do this again!
>You scooted back as the Princess of the Night was about to leash the wrath of Nightmare Moon.
>You were on your back, holding a pillow in front of your face as Luna was on her fours, her horn glowed bright blue magic.
>Closing your eyes, you felt the pillow tug away from your grasp as a thin body lands on top of you.
>Followed by a pair of moist lips locking in with yours.
MMMPH!
>You felt seven pounds of tongue slither it's way meeting your throat.
>The alicorn mare moaned with bliss, holding onto your head as you watch her wings sprout upward.
>Her face was red hot, you felt your arms wrap around her waist. One hand going for her royal plot, desperately grabbing it.
>This made her break the kiss and replaced it with one across the face.
>Followed by a sloppy second smooch.
>"Listen to me pig. I've got a few royal duties to attend before it's my turn to raise the moon tonight." She pants.
>You rubbed your hand at the red mark on your face.
>"You know where I'll be tonight....." She said, getting up.
>She couldn't keep herself as she had to give you one more kiss before flying off.
>Getting up out of the bed, you quickly dressed up and ran outside Celestia's room.
>Outside, there were a few maids coming your way as you stopped them in their track.
This room needs some tidying. Could you please?
>"Right away sir. Of course! ¡Apurale Maria ay viene la princessa!
>You say thanks and headed out. You knew these ponies would take orders from Celestia's....
>Why do they take orders from you anyway?
>You don't recall Tia appointing you as her royal advisor.
>Do the maids and guards just obey commands from a green human?
>You shrug and headed out to go get peetzer.
>>27763788
Checked again.
>She giggled.
>"It's not what I'm craving for Anon. You and I both know what you're here for."
>You were silent.
>She sighed.
>"1000 years. A millennium of being isolated and imprisoned. Have you ever heard of that tale Anon?"
>You slowly shook your head. Shrug.
>"Oh, how I longed for a companion to keep me sane. Not to keep me so.... Pent up."
>You hear her wings flap as you look up.
>Notice she's not wearing her crown or her shoes, completely naked for once. Must've left them somewhere.
>Unf.
>She takes one small step towards the man.
>And one giant leap towards him, getting on her hindlegs once more.
>Luna felt warm to the touch, despite her dark appearance.
>Using one hoof, she caressed your chin, turning your head left and right to get a good look at you.
>"You do clean up quite good for a human." She said.
>You gaze deep into her blue eyes.
D-damn...
>Luna slowly closes her eyes as she tilts her head.
>You unconsciously did the same.
>Your lips were met again as the two of you were wrapped in a tight embrace.
>Picking her up off the ground with little force, she's incredibly light.
>You felt her hindlegs curl around your gluts, pressing her belly up against yours.
>Her tongue wrestled against yours as they met.
>You felt your hands run down her hips, grabbing that plot for support as you walk over to her bed.
>Her scent drives you crazy for more as you began to bury those nostrils into her fur inhaling deeply. Planting serveral kisses.
>You quickly disrobe yourself in mere seconds as you hopped back on.
>"Rut me. I'm all yours." Luna said, as she laid flat out her back.
>Hover above Luna, plant two fists on each side.
>Look straight into her eyes as you feel her hooves clinging around your neck.
>She brings you closer.
>Your dong, fully expanded with the dlc, slid through Luna's clit. She groaned out loud as a result.
>Her vag felt warm, tight, and you felt marecum leaking out as your dick boldy goes where no dick has gone before.
>>27763802
>With each thrust, Luna's body fur tickled your stomach and chest. Fuzzy.
>"Let out your frustration! Grind me like one of my sister's blankets!" She whined.
>And you obliged, your heart was pounding as your eyes couldn't believe you've struck gold.
>"Ohh~! Harder!" She moaned.
>The bed began to groan and creak with each thrust you applied.
>You exchange breaths with Luna as you two pant.
>Her body squirmed with ecstasy while you two were in an embrace.
>For some reason, you find it hawt.
>Could it be due to the fact that you're not making love to an inanimate object for once?
>As you continue to fuck, unknown that you were being watched by a shadow that hovered outside a window.
>It was Celestia.
>Be Celestia, a few moments after what Anon said.
>You ears couldn't deceive you. Anon is going out to see Luna.
>At first, you had no expressions as you were still thinking about what just happened.
>Coming back after a long day of being useless as always, you plopped on your bed.
>Taking a deep sigh, you undressed yourself from your gold trinkets and wrapped yourself in a sheet you found laying on the floor.
>You knew Anon was here in the morning.
>You could smell him from these soiled comforters.
>Take another sigh.
>Grab one of your pillows and spoon it.
>Think about Nonny.
>Feel your face blush red as you snout detects his teenage musk.
>He's growing up. And all those horomones are driving him crazy.
>Begin to dry hump the pillow.
>Feel ashamed.
>You've been avoiding his mating calls and his deep interest in you.
>And you blew it.
>>27763816
>Bury your face into the pillow, take a deep whiff.
>His scent has been changing alot in such little time.
>He smells like a man.
>Close your eyes and shudder.
>Plant a kiss into the pillow.
>Move another pillow out of the way and discover a pair of boxer shorts.
>Sniff it sniff it sniff it sniff it sniff it... Your mind said.
>Shaking your head, you knew estrus season was nearing. And these perverted thoughts storming your head will only get worse.
>Soon you're gonna want to storm into Anon's basement and furiously grind on his bits.
>You knew this was wrong of you, but you took the pair of boxers and stuffed your face in them.
>You unconsciously rubbed your clit as you took in his dirty musk.
>Nicker in arousal.
>You suddenly wanted a child from him.
>Smack yourself.
What are you doing to yourself? This is ridiculous!
>You said, throwing away the boxer shorts.
>Lower you head. Your dirty mind tells you to go after him.
>Stop him before it's too late! Go!
>To Tartarus with this. Get off the bed and fly out the balcony.
>Soar up high to the west tower were Luna resides.
>Land on the balcony. Lower your head as you heard moaning and a bed squeaking.
>It's too late.
>Walk over to a window.
>Take a peek inside.
>Feel a tear roll down your cheek as you watch Anon furiously plow your sister.
>He looked desperate and happy at the same time.
>"Let out your frustration!" Luna groaned out.
That whore...
>Slightly gasp as you couldn't bieleve what you said.
>Walk away and fly off.
>Open a bottle of that hard liquor you left near the fireplace.
>Call one of the maids, tell them you wanted a cake from Pony Joe.
>One of the maids ask you why you were crying.
>Don't respond.
>Be anon.
>You were close to achievement.
>You felt sweat rolling down your head as you grunt, Luna replying back with moans.
>She clenched her vag tightly causing you to twitch.
>Your dong felt 2 tons. It was glorious, yet so sensitive.
>Double the fun by french kissing Luna, she obliged.
>>27763822
>Pick up the pace a bit.
>"You humans definitely last longer than stallions! Ah~!" She whines.
>Luna covers your face with her left hindhoof, smothering your nose.
>Your face was red as you sniff, noticing the tender part had a little gray tint to it.
>She must've been walking around without those black shoes for a bit.
>Unnnf.
>"F-faster..." Luna moaned.
>And you obeyed.
Like this?
>You grabbed the alicorn mare by the hips, and rammed her vag as fast as you can.
>Her moans stutter as she was nearly vibrating.
>Her wings spread out as she neared an orgasm.
>She retracts her forelegs, folding them near her chest.
>Her eyes looked upward as her opened, tongue rolling out.
>"Yes... Oh yes~! More!" She cries out.
>The bed squeaked so fast.
>Luna whined. Her vag glowed red.
>Her horn glowed blue magic. Odd.
>Your body tensed up, shudders as your cock began to throb hard, injecting tons of semen into Luna's tight pussy.
>You groaned, feeling weak as fuck.
>Your cock slides out, globs of semen and marejuices gushing out from Luna.
>You fell backward, your head nearly hitting the footboard.
>Luna panted as she crawled her way on top of you.
>She looks you with those blue eyes once more with relief, puckering up to kiss you.
>"That felt amazing." She gasped.
>You stroked her luscious mane which was all messy.
>She cuddled up with you, wrapping yourselves up with a sheet.
>She nuzzled underneath your chin as you wrap your arms around.
>She closes her eyes, slowly drifting off to sleep with her mate.
>You smiled and did the same.
>You wake up groggy to the sound of birds tweeting happily and to a pair of cold legs.
>Looking up to your chest, you notice Luna was still alseep.
>Her mouth was open and it drooled a bit. She made the cutest little snores.
>You could feel her legs were still coiled around you.
>It was difficult to get her off without waking her, but you managed.
>>27763836
>Rolling her over and bundling her up with a few blankets and pillows, she slept like a little foal.
>A 1000+ year old foal to be precise.
>Getting up off the bed, you walked over to the balcony to take a leak.
Ahh, brisk.
>"Ahh! What in the name of? PISS!"
>You hear a random pony scream in fear and disgust and he trots away from below.
>With a smugt grin, you whipped your dick a bit to shake off the last few drops.
>And you noticed Celestia was walking out from her room.
>Wave like an idiot.
>She noticed and formed a pink sphere around her, teleporting herself to who knows where.
>Your smile fades, you had a feeling she didn't wannt see you on her sister's balcony, wearing your birthday suit.
>Oh well. Walk over to where you left your peetzers.
>Grab a few slices and walk back outside.
>Enjoy the view of Canterlot with a peetz, high up.
>Even though the peetzer was cold, damn thing was delish.
>For some reason you were so hungry, you could eat out a horse.
>[insert le lenny face here]
>Suddenly, you hear a burst of magic coming from behind.
>You feel a slight breeze between your legs, made you flinch.
>Turn around.
>It was Celestia.
>Pause, take another bite of of some cold-ass peetz.
>Scream.
>"Good morning Anonymous! I suppose you had quite some fun last night?" She smiled.
>Cock an eyebrow towards the princess.
>You were about to ask her the obvious.
What are you doing here?!?
>You covered your naughty bits with the second slice.
>Celestia giggled once more, covering her laugh with a hoof.
>"I thought I'd drop by to visit my Nonny and see how he was doing! Oh, and Luna of course." She said in a cheerful voice
>>27763848
>Nonny? She never called you that.
>You notice Celestia was breathing heavily as she was inches away from you.
>You felt warm air coming out of her muzzle.
>She kept staring at you with those huge lavender eyes.
>"Well, I guess I better leave. I've got a room to tidy up and some lingere to order-I mean um, good day!" She stutters.
>And with that she teleported herself back.
>You decided it was best to grab your things and head out, but then you hear Luna waking up to ash and dust.
>You wiped your brow.
Morning, heh.
>"Morning!" Luna yawned.
>Walk over to the bed and slipped on your boxers.
>"You weren't planning on leaving me alone, were you?" She said, lying down next to you with a pout.
Well, I figured you must have a busy day ahead of you or something... You are a 'pwinshesh' after all.
>You shrug.
>"Well to be honest, I'm not that busy compared to my sibling. She's been running the show by herself for quite some time.
>Luna sits up and leans her body weight against your shoulder. She rubs her head against it, looking for affection.
>"Come back to bed...." She cooed.
>You turned your head.
Really? Cause I don't wanna feel like I'm in-Mmmmh.
>And your lips had been claimed by the princess.
>Using her horn to cast a spell on your head, you suddenly feel really tired.
>The bed never felt so good.
Well, I guess I could go back and sleep.
>You yawn deeply. Luna tugged you back and cuddled up against your chest, making you her big spoon.
>You held Luna in your arms, squeezing her tightly as you pecked her head many times.
>You gave her blueberry mane a sniff.
>"Nighty night, Nonny." She whispers.
Nighty night Lulu.
>Replying back.
>Three fluffy blankets covered the two of you.
The writefag never continued beyond this point but most anons considered it a good ending.
>>27763865
>tfw your green had been reposted
Feels fucking amazing.
>>27764419
I really wish you had continued it but oh well. Do have other stories that made or perhaps a pastebin?
>>27764524
that you made*
>tfw no Luna to keep me company tonight and tell me It'll be okay
I. want. to. die.
>>27765322
We all share this pain, anon.You'll be with her one day. You just have to be patient. She'll come to you.
>>27759983
So don't read it. Not everyone's going to like the multiple "anon fucks Luna just because" or the tryhard lel so random greentexts either but we have to scroll past them. Fuck you for telling people what to do.
>>27762563
That's prettycool
>>27762104
Hello, I'm alive.
I'll add more to this later, I'm just working slowly.
>You can't help but notice Luna has got a smile on her face as Pip fades out of view.
"I hope you know what you're doing with him Luna."
>It's rather concerning bringing a kid on a dangerous voyage.
>Luna however, seems mostly unfazed as she gestures you to follow.
>"I understand you have your reservations Anonymous, but I remain confident in my decision. If you are concerned for his safety then allow me to remind you that I am more than capable of watching over him."
>Opening your mouth to say something you find there's nothing.
>It's quite charming that tenacious attitude of hers, it reminds you of yourself.
>"But Anonymous, I am certain that you have deduced that I wouldn't be awake at this hour without good reason."
"Well, why else would you be awake in a afternoon? Nothing comes to mind."
>She raises a eyebrow before she speaks up.
>"If you seem to think so, then I take it you don't wish to see the vessels we shall be commandeering?"
>That's a good point actually.
>Luna simply leaves you to contemplate as she begins walking back to the chariot.
>You break into a light jog to catch back up to the Princess.
"So uh, is there anything you can tell me about them now?"
>Luna deadpans as she looks at you.
>"If I knew Anonymous, we wouldn't need to do this. 'Equestria's finest' may not be what they seem."
>There's no real need to argue, since you were curious to what you was working with as well.
>Stepping aboard the chariot you take to the skies again.
>>27765390
Yes, one day we will all go to equestria. But until then the ride never ends... The ride never ends....
>>27759983
I'm not a fan of princess porn but you don't hear me complaining about it.
>>27759983
>You're not allowed to post content of a certain type that I don't like in my thread
Who the fuck do you think you are?
Did I miss the message that said /moon/ is now mommy issues the thread or is it just a couple of people samefagging? I know we used to have the guy who was always posting stuff along the lines of I want to snuggle in Luna's chest fluff but he stopped that when people weren't interested.
>>27765408
Yes but there is a difference between the generic "Anon is a sex god and fucks everything" stories and the niche sort that is being brought up here; the latter has a much smaller audience hence the specific threads where as the other (even though it is overdone in my opinion) has a much wider audience. You wouldn't come into this thread and ask for a story about Luna being tied down, cut up and gang raped you'd go to somewhere like slave pone where someone is more likely to cater to and enjoy that sort of thing.
>>27765841
So how'd you get to that conclusion princess? The dude simple stated that he and others are most likely not a fan of something and that it'd be better to post in a thread that was specifically created for it.
I'd take a guess that English isn't your first language as it seems you're unable to differentiate between a request and a demand; if it was a demand, like your post insinuates, it would have been along the lines of "do not post here" rather than "posting there would be more suitable".
>>27765931
>tied down, cut up and gang raped you'd go to somewhere like slave pone where someone is more likely to cater to and enjoy that sort of thing.
Actually, you are thinking of Submission is Mandatory. We at Slave Pone are strongly against that stuff (most of the time)
>>27765970
>>27765931
>not even the anon that made the original post
Autism.
>>27766048
Fair enough, never been to either to be honest I just saw the name and used it as an example. I'd personally be tempted to change the name as it strikes me as being a little misleading, when I see slave pone I think of a pone serving a master and they may or may not have been captured beforehand.
>>27766138
>People don't share my views and agree with someone I don't like, I bet they're autistic.
Kettle calling the pot black don't you think
>>27766209
Keep proving me right, please.
Nightmare Moon is displeased with the petty bickering within /moon/ right now.
>>27766223
Good. Nightmare Moon is displeased with everything we do.
>>27765529
Carluna, I ain't even mad. I kek'd
I should be either working on the next chapter of Changing Lanes or working on rewriting it for posting on FiMFiction, but I'll be lazy and post a couple chapters here instead.
>"Do you have any horror movies that aren't lame?"
>Rainbow Dash yawns loudly as the credits roll on the TV, casting a dim light into your otherwise pitch-black living room.
"What? The Shining is a classic!"
>Dash blows a raspberry in response.
"Right, I forgot. You don't like anything."
>Suddenly the TV blanks and the hum of your DVD player stops, leaving the two of you blind on the couch.
>"Did you do that?"
>You sigh.
>"No, but I know who did."
>You focus in the silence, quickly reaching out and grasping at the darkness.
>"Ah, not the tail, do not pull my tail!"
>The lamp beside you lights up, revealing Luna in front of the two of you, her aforementioned tail in your grip.
"Luna, I understand this is your favorite time of the year, but could you tone it down just a bit on the scare tactics?"
>Nightmare Night is tomorrow, and Luna has become more animated with each passing day.
>You free her tail, which rests beside her as she takes a seat on the floor in front of you.
>"Wait, how did you know she was right there?"
>Really, Rainbow?
>As if she heard your thoughts, Rainbow corrects herself.
>"Right, mental link thingy. Forgot."
>"I apologize, it is just so exciting! Our big day is only twenty hours away!"
>You take a chance to lean forward and run your fingers through her silky mane.
"I know, and that's great. Just maybe, less trying to scare the shit out of me and everyone else every moment of the night?"
>She cracks a smile.
>"Well, it would seem sneaking up upon you is a tall order lately. Perhaps we can consider these exercises for your mind?"
>The blue alicorn is right about your mental abilities.
>While physical magic still seems to be beyond your grasp, you've developed some sort of ability to see or feel certain things beyond your normal senses.
>>27766233
I have no idea what's going on in this picture yet I like it so much I just set it as my desktop wallpaper.
>>27766254
>Most notably Luna, which is becoming easier with every attempt at a quick scare.
"Whatever you say, Luna."
>She giggles, while Rainbow Dash gags.
>"You two are embarrassing to be around when you're like this. Twilight doesn't believe me when I tell her this stuff."
>Ah Twilight, still keeping mum about her relationship with you.
>Though unfortunately, she has been rather busy with her new duties, you haven't seen her in almost a week.
>You reach over and ruffle Dash's mane, as she struggles.
>"Don't get me involved in this crap! What time is it, anyway?"
>She jumps down off the couch, slicking her mane back.
"Ten. You calling it a night already?"
>The cyan pegasus nod.
>"Yeah, I still have to get my costume ready for tomorrow. This is gonna be awesome!"
>She streaks out of the room, a quick goodby to you and Luna.
"Wow, everyone is pumped for tomorrow."
>Luna tilts her head.
>"And you are not?"
>You shrug.
"To be honest, it's not a big deal to me. We had something like this back in my world, it was mainly for little kids. The only kick I get out of it is horror movies and folklore."
>"Folklore?"
>Nodding, you continue.
"Yeah, you know. Ghosts, monsters, shit like that. None of it's real, just interesting."
>She smirks at you, leaving you to wonder what is brewing in her head.
>"I must go home and myself prepare for tomorrow. Perhaps none of these creatures are real where you are from, but the late hours of Nightmare Night are not called 'the witching hour' for nothing, Anonymous."
>She lets out a low cackle as she exits the room in a flash of light.
"You get into this way too much, oh Keeper of the Night."
>You get up and grab another movie from your DVD case as you plug the player and TV back in.
>As the sun begins to set, you wait for the inevitable.
>"Anonymous!"
>There it is.
"Yes, hello to you too, Luna."
>The princess strides in, looking rather stern.
>"What exactly are you doing?"
>You look around the room.
>"Um. Sitting in my house?"
>>27766261
>You feel yourself lifted off the couch by her magic.
>"Tonight is a very special night! Why must you be so anti-social?"
"I'm not anti-social. I just really don't like being around lots of other people. Or ponies."
>She shakes her head as you are set down on your feet and released.
>Meanwhile, her expression turns from irritation to pleading.
>"Could you at least come for me? I will not require you to wear a costume. Though everypony else will be wearing one."
"Fine. Just for you. But if everyone is wearing a costume, where's yours?"
>A wicked grin greets your question.
>"In time, Anonymous. In time."
>Your home disappears before your eyes in a flash, as Luna teleports you to who knows where.
>As your vision returns, the heart of Ponyville greets you, with a massive thrum of ponies gathered around city hall.
>On a makeshift stage is the mayor, talking to everyone enthusiastically through a microphone.
>Before you can tune in to what she is saying, a voice from behind interrupts.
>"Anon!"
>As you turn, you are greeted by a flash of lavender leaping into your chest.
"Hey Twilight, good to see you!"
>You hug her as the mayor's voice stops.
>"You too. And it looks like I got here just in time to see Luna!"
>You turn back to the stage to see the aforementioned alicorn stride onto the stage.
>She doesn't bother with the microphone, instead using her royal voice.
>"Greetings, citizens of Ponyville! I see everypony is in quite the festive mood!"
>A cheer erupts to answer her as she continues.
>"It was many years ago when this night first became known as Nightmare Night. And who better to signify the start than ME!"
>As she finishes, the moon begins its ascent into the sky, as she begins to glow in an eerie blue haze.
>In an instant, the glow is blinding, making her no longer visible.
>Some ponies in the crowd gasp, while others scream, as a cackle erupts from on stage.
"Twilight, what's going on?! Is she.."
>You feel as if your heart has leapt into your throat.
>>27766267
>And yet, at the same time, something else strikes you equally as hard.
>But you can't put your finger on it
>A wing brushes your back, pulling you closer.
>"Relax Anon, it's part of the show."
"What?"
>The glow fades, and on stage is a familiar black alicorn in place of Luna.
>Her cackle stops, as her feral turquiose eyes scan the crowd.
>Massive black wings unfurl as she finally speaks again.
>"Tonight my ponies, the night is ours! Nightmare Night has officially begun!"
>The crowd cheers wildly as she takes flight, slowly dispersing into various directions where games and food are set up.
"So that was just a show?"
>"Luna didn't tell you?"
>"Didn't tell Anon what?"
>You jump as a voice directly behind you interrupts you and Twilight.
>Turning, a pair of turquoise eyes greets you.
>Once again, you jump a bit as Nightmare Moon looks over at Twilight.
>"I'm so glad to see you could make it Twilight. What did you think?"
>Even as she looks at Twilight, listening to her response, you feel drawn in to those eyes.
>You don't hear Twilight, you don't see anything.
>Just those eyes.
>"Anon, are you alright?"
>Finally, you are broken out of your trance as the black alicorn speaks to you.
"What?"
>Twilight speaks up.
>"Luna, did you already forget about what happened a few months ago to him?"
>Luna, or Nightmare Mo- whoever's jaw drops as a flash quickly envelops her.
>Luna stands before you once again as she squeezes you in a hug.
>"My goodness, I'm so sorry, Anon!"
>Something in you finally snaps, allowing you to speak.
"It's... fine, I'm fine. I guess it just startled me. Wasn't expecting that."
>Luna looks at you, worry in her eyes.
>Twilight steps away from you and turns, duplicating Luna's expression.
"I'm fine, I'm fine. It's all good now.
>The two exchange glances, then seem to settle down.
>"Now, with opening festivities out of the way, what shall we do?"
>You look around, glancing at the various booths and games set up around Ponyville.
>>27766270
>Unfortunately, they all seem catered to little kids more or less.
"Uhh, not to be rude, but is there anything more adult-oriented to do?"
>"Well, there is a corn maze just a trot east of town."
>Better than this stuff, you suppose.
"That sounds interesting, Luna. Lead the way."
>She beams a wide smile as she takes off in a fast trot.
"I didn't think you mean trot as in actual pace!"
>"Catch me if you can, you two!"
>You and Twilight run after her to catch up.
>As you make tracks, you flash back in your mind to what you felt when Luna 'transformed' on stage.
>Deja vu maybe?
>all you know is it was fucking weird.
>Not paying attention to where you're going, you suddenly stumble over something, landing hard on the ground face-first.
"Goddammit, that was intelligent."
>Twilight stops, coming back over to you.
>"Are you okay?"
"Yeah, I think so. Wasn't watching where I was going."
>You rub your head, feeling a bit of warmth as you pull your hand back to see a bit of blood.
>Not enough to be alarming, but you're curious to see what you managed to do.
>You look around to see one of those cheesy funhouse mirror booths conveniently nearby.
"Give me a sec before we take off after Luna again, make sure I didn't do anything too stupid."
>Twilight nods as you gingerly get up and walk over to one of the mirrors.
>As you step in front of it, you freeze.
>It's a stupid picture of Nightmare Moon
>You turn and look at the booth attendant.
"I thought this was a funhouse mirror booth, not a picture gallery."
>"What's wrong, afraid of your own reflection?"
>You turn back to see it - or her - step out of the mirror.
>Quickly, you take several steps back.
"What the fu-"
>The black mare holds a hoof up to interrupt.
>"First off, daydreaming and running at the same time isn't a good idea. I was going to wait until you went to sleep to talk, but since you decided to knock yourself out, here we are."
>So you're dreaming.
>But how did she get in your head?
"What do you want?"
>>27766215
I'm genuinely interested, when you see people who share opinion/views supporting each other do you call them autistic as well or are you just trying to stir shit up here? All I'm seeing here is a few posters sharing the same view then you lashing out at them.
>>27766280
>"Relax sweetheart. I don't want anything from you. On the contrary, you've got questions, I've got answers."
>You glare at Nightmare Moon as she takes a step closer to you.
"So you're a RadioShack commercial now? Cute."
>She seems to be getting a little irritated now.
"Look, I don't have to help you. I can just go back into my own corner in your head and leave you in the dark."
>Wait, what?!
>She seems to know what you're thinking as she continues.
>"There we go, got your attention for at least a moment. You see, that feeling you got when you saw Luna, not deja vu, it was like.."
>She points a hoof towards a mirror.
>Like a bombshell, shock overtakes you.
>"And the last horse crosses the finish line. Yes, you and me are one..."
>The alicorn quickly grabs you with a wing, standing you shoulder to shoulder with her.
>"...and the same."
>You feel sick to your stomach as your knees buckle.
>A few moments pass as it sinks in.
"But how? And why am I still in control? Last I dealt with you, I was hanging on by a thread to my sanity."
>Nightmare's nostrils flare as she huffs.
>"Well, it certainly is not one of my crowning achievements to be stuck with you. Yes, I did have you almost broken before Luna cast the reversal spell. Unfortunately, I put all my chips in on you."
>You stare at her blankly as she rolls her eyes.
>"The castle, when you let that beautiful dark wave of power flow, that wasn't you using my abilities. That was US using OUR abilities."
"So you're saying that bound us together. And when everything got swapped back..."
>"I was along for the ride. Yes, and unlike Luna's mind, where I have the master key to everything, yours, well... it's quite a mess in here. So no, unfortunately for me, I can't do anything."
>You stare at her, more questions brewing by the second.
>"Anon!"
>A voice seems to echo throughout the whole town. Or dream of a town.
>"Time for you to wake up, kiddo. Hit me up later, you know where to find me."
>>27766288
Autism speaks and apparently it can't stop posting lol
>>27766290
>You snap your eyes open, jolted awake by shaking.
>Luna and Twilight are both standing above you, amongst a small crowd of other ponies.
>You sit up slowly, as everyone seems to breath a sigh of relief.
>But your gaze is locked on Luna.
>She seems to sense something is amiss.
>"Anon, are you okay? You're scaring me."
"We need to talk."
>Upon your insistence, the three of you quickly return back to your home.
>You mind is spinning, anger muddling your thoughts.
>Luna lied to you.
>She had to have known Nightmare Moon jumped ship with you.
>"Anonymous, maybe we should get you to a hospital, a hit that knocks you out like that could be a con-"
"No, Luna, for the last time, I am fine. Are you alright?"
>She seems utterly confused at this point, but says nothing.
"I'm tired of finding out nasty little surprises for myself, Luna. But this time, you've outright lied to me."
>"What in Equestria are you talking about?"
>You stop pacing your living room, staring the blue alicorn in the eye.
"I know, Luna."
>It takes a moment before confusion turns to a mix of horror and shame.
>She quickly averts your gaze, while Twilight is staring at the both of you as if you are crazy.
>"Will anypony clue me in here, or do I have to stay in the dark?"
>You keep your eyes on Luna, your blood reaching a boiling point.
"It seems a certain black alicorn didn't stay with Luna as she had claimed, Twilight."
>She gasps, while Luna directs her gaze to the floor in front of her.
>"Are you seeing her now? Is she talking to you?!"
"No, when I was knocked out cold she talked to me. I didn't realized I had lost consciousness until she told me."
>The room falls under an unsettling silence.
"Luna, I was you to tell me one thing."
>She looks up at you, her eyes misty at this point.
"When did you know?"
>She looks back down, silent.
>"I knew she was not there when the spell was completed, but I didn't know where at that point."
>She looks back up at you, tears streaming down her cheeks.
>>27766299
>"But then I saw her. In your eyes."
>You bite your lip and turn around, trying to contain your temper.
>"You must understand, my intentions were good!"
"Yeah, the road to evil is paved with good intentions, too!"
>"Anon!"
>You turn around as you realize the stupid thing you've said, helped by Twilight's shout.
>Luna's jaw drops, the dams about to burst.
"I didn't mean it that way, I-"
>Too late, as she teleports away in a flash.
"Son of a bitch."
>"What were you thinking?!"
"I wasn't Twilight, okay?! I was pissed, I'm still pissed. At her and myself."
>Twilight sits back down on the floor, as you stare at the ceiling trying to collect your thoughts.
"I think it's best if I have some time alone, Twilight."
>"Are you sure? Maybe you just need to ta-"
"I'm sure Twilight."
>You turn to look at her as he ears droop.
>"Goodnight, Anon."
>She quietly saunters out of the room, apparently in no hurry to return home.
>You hear your door close, just as the clock strikes ten.
>The foreboding chime echoes throughout your otherwise silent home.
>You naturally do what you always do when you need to clear your mind - cruise.
>Slowly, you make your way out into the dark countryside at a leisurely pace.
>The rhythmic rumble of the engine is all you focus on for a while.
>Inevitably, your thoughts return to tonight's events.
>Now what do you do?
>"For one thing, why not try using your brain next time before you speak?"
>You turn to see yourself riding shotgun.
"What the fuck?!"
>"Relax."
>His, or its eyes flash a turquoise hue.
>Nightmare Moon.
"Okay, seriously, creepy as fuck."
>Your doppelganger sighs, shimmering in a dark haze before reappearing as the black alicorn.
>"Better?"
"No, not really. You said I had control, how are you here?"
>"Well, stress helps prop open the door for me, I suppose. Appearing as you put me through until you would talk to me."
>Your eyes go back to the road.
>"Really? The silent treatment? All I wanted to do was help."
>>27766310
"Help. Ha. Shouldn't you be gloating how you made Luna and I miserable?"
>You turn back to look at her.
>"I didn't make anyone miserable. I gave you answers to the questions you had, what you did with that information was up to you."
"Bullshit."
>"Do you really thing I want to be stuck listening to you mope in that head of yours? Or see you take your own frustration out on Luna?"
>You do a quick double take at her last words.
"Luna? Why would you give a fuck? You possessed her, tried to kill her sister, then a thousand years later escaping and trying again. Not to mention trying to push me past the brink after our mix-up."
>A hearty laugh erupts from Nightmare Moon.
>"Possessed, oh what will the next tall tale be?"
>You jam the brakes, quickly coming to a standstill.
"Alright, what the fuck are you?"
>"Oh, just call me your free-spirited conscience."
"No, cut the shit. What are you?"
>You cut the engine, as Nightmare exhales, not answering.
"Answer the question, or piss off."
>Averting your gaze, she finally speaks.
>"Luna was miserable when she was basically forced to give up her passion to help rule Equestria. But she couldn't tell anypony that, how would that look to the new kingdom? How could she say no to her own sister? So, no other alternatives, she talked to the only pony she could. Herself."
>You stare at her, unsure where this is going, if anywhere.
>"After a while, talking to herself turned into talking to another part of herself, into somepony else completely. Somepony that could actually respond back. That somepony else, imbued with the same power and magic our little Luna had, offered to make things better."
>You scoff.
"You're telling me you're a rebel tulpa? Come on."
>"Ooh, and to think, momma told you shows like Supernatural couldn't teach you anything."
>Glaring at her, she shrugs in response.
>>27766318
>"I don't have the master key to your mind, but your library is open to the public. Anyway, tulpa, no, not quite. Think of me as Luna's rebellious side. So really, Luna shared a part of her with you. Is that so bad?"
>You say nothing as you turn the key, causing the engine to come to life again, and taking off.
>It is quiet for a few miles aside from the rumble of the engine.
"Why tell me this? Why are you suddenly being, well, not a complete bitch?"
>"I'm not exactly going to be given attention if I'm nasty in the home of a guest, am I?"
"So you're an attention whore?"
>"No, I just like attention."
"So if all of this is true, why are there so many other theories of why Luna turned into you? Why didn't she tell me that?"
>"You tell me. You're the one talking to an empty passenger seat."
>You whip your head around.
>Sure enough, the black alicorn is gone.
>Sensing you're alone again, you continue on in silence.
>As much as you hate to admit it, maybe you have over-reacted a bit.
>Really, has anything bad happened as a result of not being told Nightmare got stuck with you?
>You still would have like to been informed, but at the end of the day, nothing has really changed.
>Other than knowing about it.
>You have to find Luna.
>It takes almost two hours to get to Canterlot's castle.
>Normally, it would have taken longer, but you had already been cruising in that general direction for a while.
>The guards let you in without trouble, knowing you are Luna's special someone.
>Or at least were.
>It is quiet in the castle as, aside from posted guards burning the midnight oil, everyone else has retired for the night.
>The echo of your footsteps is the only sound as you make your way to Luna's room.
>You only hope you guessed right, as Luna has blocked herself off from you, so you cannot sense her presence.
>Slowly, you open her door, darkness greeting you.
"Luna?"
>You hear the bedsheets rustle in response.
>"Who is there?"
>>27766320
>The bedside lamp suddenly flickers to life, illuminating the night princess and her room.
>She is, quite frankly, a mess.
>Mane disheveled, eyes red.
>Her aforementioned eyes lock on you, then drop.
"Luna, I'm not here to argue."
>You slowly walk in, sitting on the side of her bed.
>She still says nothing to you.
"I'm here to say I'm sorry."
>"What?"
"I'm sorry. Sorry for getting mad, and certainly sorry for not thinking when I was angry, and saying something stupid."
>She seems confused as her eyes dart up and across your face, as if reading you.
>"But why? Why have you suddenly become apologetic?"
"Well, I would have liked to have been informed that she was connected to some of her powers I'm suddenly imbued with, but what negative things have occurred by not knowing?"
>Her eyes meet yours again, lightening up even more as you reach out and brush her mane.
>"Nothing."
"Exactly."
>"I was not trying to hide information from you Anonymous, I just did not know how to tell you such a sensitive item."
"I guess you just have to trust I'll understand."
>Her eyes continue to study you.
>"You've been talking to her, haven't you?"
"Who?"
>She gives you a look of suspicion.
>No sense in lying.
"Yes. Believe it or not, that's what got me to come to my senses."
>You keep mum on what else you know, since Luna seems to want no one to know.
>"Okay, but I would suggest not speaking to her. I am confident Nightmare Moon can do nothing in your mind, but until we know for certain, better safe than sorry."
"Alright."
>The two of you sit in an awkward silence for a while.
"Well, I guess your big night of the year turned out rather shitty."
>"Not necessarily. Nightmare Night doesn't technically end until dawn."
"So what should we do? Most people have gone to sleep for the night."
>"Including my sister, who missed out on the festivities and is sleeping now."
>The two of you look at each other, smiling.
"Let's go scare the crap out of her."
>>27766325
>It is the next morning.
>You and Luna are having a small breakfast in the castle, waiting.
>Finally, Celestia joins you, looking the worse for wear.
>She looks like she didn't get a wink of sleep.
>"Rough night sleeping, sister?"
>The white alicorn takes a seat across from the two of you.
>"If I did not know any better, I would say my room was spontaneously haunted last night. You two wouldn't know anything about the bangs from in the walls or some of the weird visions I saw, would you?"
>She stares down at the two of you, accusingly.
>You and Luna look at each other, shaking your heads.
>"No."
"Nope."
>Silence, as the three of you hold an impromptu staring contest.
>"You must remember sister, the veil is at its thinnest on Nightmare Night."
>Celestia turns her focus on Luna.
>Luna grins, her smile showing a pair of fangs.
>"Mwahaha."
And that's a wrap. You can continue your pointless arguing now, if you must.
>>27766223
It's summer, shitflinging always increases around this time. I think in this case we have someone underage who's migrated from /b/.
>>27766332
Always good to see Changing Lanes, are you changing anything for FIMfiction or is it green to prose and error correction?
As for the squabbling it's basically par for the course for mlp along with what >>27766337 is saying about it being summer.
>>27766337
>it's summer, shitflinging always increases around this time
>everyone who says something I don't like must be from /b/ and underage
lol
>>27766364
For the most part, it's green to prose. I wouldn't say there's any major changes as far as plot.
Biggest difference is the first 10-15 chapters of the original have been cleaned up, got rid of all the edgy crap and the excessive colorful language.
A lot of combining chapters as well, last update on FiMFiction is Chapter 12, which is 22 in my pastebin.
>>27766444
I love your story man.
Also, checking your digits.
>"that's one small hug for a man..."
>>27770046
Nah I work a job where I can shitpost uninterrupted all night. Why are you so angry about me using the word lol? lol
>>27770168
Keep going, this is great.
>>27770196
Hahahahahahahahahahha
>>27769815
"..one greatFOOTBALLfor mankind"
>>27766332
sweet an update
Late night moon posting.
Is Nyx a Luna?
>>27774485
No.
>>27768049
That's a niceponut
>8
>>27776469
>Low detailed mare vag
Fucking cuck you are.
>>27776919
That ain't vag, it's ponut.
>>27749860
Do you guys, as well as Celestiafags really have to limit yourself with starting threads on specific days of the week? I mean usually these threads last longer than said week, so why even bother with starting them on specific days?
>>27779393
It never used to be like this, people just got autistic and started imposing rules on other anons and anyone who had a problem with it was shitposted out of the thread. Have you ever seen a Celestia or Luna thread on the wrong day of the week? People will shit themselves and throw a tantrum and ruin your thread, it's pathetic.
>>27779437
>It never used to be like this
It's been like this for two years now, friendo. But no, most Luna threads outside /moon/day tend to just be short lived image dumps.
>>27779726
>it never used to be like this
>it's been like this for two years now
Why are you even replying to me? Fuck off.
>>27775800
I'll be a shameless whore and repost my one-off green from last month, Through Dark of Night.
>"Time to wake up."
>Your eyes snap open at the melodic call of a familiar voice, jumping to your hooves in an instant.
>You may be queen of Tartarus, but it still is vital to stay on guard, as adversaries are only wiling to try things now while you rest.
>But as you scan the area, it is clear this is not Tartarus.
>Daylight shines through the stained glass windows to your right, illuminating the spacious room in a dazzling rainbow of colors.
>The years you've spent in your own kingdom have been in eternal darkness, even before you took control.
>At least, you believe it has been years.
>Time is hard to tell without any sort of cycle in the sky.
>It seems you are in some sort of castle, but where?
>And that voice.... who was that?
>"Welcome back to Equestria, sister."
>As the cheerful voice echos around you, you spin around, finding a towering set of oak doors slowly opening, letting out a reluctant groan.
>Even before they fully open, a glimpse of a pastel-colored, waving mane jogs your memory.
"Celestia," you hiss, lowering your head.
>You try to charge up a spell, but to your surprise, nothing happens.
>While you try to make sense of this, Celestia calmly struts into the room, stopping just in front of where you stand.
>"It has been a while since we last met," she says with a warm smile.
"Not long enough," you grumble under your breath.
>"Pardon?"
"I said your mane looks nice," you retort in a sarcastic tone.
>Even so, her radiant smile only seems to get brighter.
>"Thank you, I am trying a new conditioner right now," Celestia says, tossing her brightly colored mane from side to side. "But I assume you are wondering why you are here."
"I assume you would be right. And I assume you are the reason my magic is not working," you reply.
>Raising a hoof, Celestia points towards your neck, and you follow her direction.
>>27780160
>There, just visible to your eyes, lies some sort of collar, etched with various archaic runes.
"So you're keeping me for a pet? That's really cute," you snap, receiving a light chuckle from the white alicorn.
>"No, that is merely for precaution. I do not wish to fight you, Luna, be it verbal or physical," she says, her demeanor switching from light-hearted to serious. "I have brought you here from Tartarus because I want to give you a second chance."
"There is no Luna anymore," you growl. "And I am not your sister."
>Celestia winces a bit at your response, but remains cool and collected.
>"I understand, Nightmare Moon," Celestia corrects herself with a frown. "But I am still willing to give you an opportunity for life in Equestria, if you so desire."
>You hate this pastel pain in the ass with a passion, but you would be a fool not to accept this offer.
"Sure, yeah, great," you say, rolling your eyes. "I'll be a good little angel. I suppose I'll be following you around so you can teach me the wonders of friendship?"
>Celestia's smile seems to brighten the whole room, while she shakes her head at your question. "No, Nightmare Moon, I have somepony else that is willing to help you."
>Try as you might, you cannot even begin to fathom who she has brought in.
>"You may come in," Celestia calls behind her.
>The pair of doors open once again, as some.... thing walks in.
>Attired in plain dress clothes from head to toe, it walks only on its hind legs.
"You sent a monkey to help me adjust. Har har," you groan.
>The creature stops next to Celestia, just staring at you in silence. Celestia turns to the being, offering a reassuring pat on the back with a wing.
>"This is Anonymous. He is a human not from our world, and he has offered to help you along your journey," Celestia says, turning her focus back to you.
>Anonymous? What a stupid name.
>He continues to just stare at you silently, his arms crossed in front of him as his eyes study you.
>>27780171
"Taking a picture would last a lot longer," you snap.
>"It would, but I'm not sure if the camera would hold up," Anonymous says, breaking his silence.
>Does he not know who he is talking to?
>Meanwhile, with a glow of her horn, Celestia's magic weaves its way towards you, before focusing on the runic collar around your neck.
>"I am allowing you some basic magic for now," she says as her horn stops its golden glow. "As I feel you have made progress, I will allow more leeway. Now, I will let you two get acquainted, as I have matters to attend to. Anonymous, let me know if you need anything."
>He nods as Celestia turns, walking out of the room.
>"So, what's your name?" Anonymous says as the oak doors creak closed. "I can't say I was listening that closely when I was waiting outside."
"You do not know who I am?" you say, your voice bristling with irritation. How is that even possible?
>"Look, I'm sure in your mind, you're super important. Here, not so much," he says dismissively, unfolding his arms.
>Struggling, you keep your temper under control for now.
"I am Nightmare Moon, Queen of Tartarus."
>He doesn't seem impressed in the slightest as he begins to slowly circle you.
>"I figured you would have some sort of dark and edgy name. You certainly didn't disappoint," he says.
"Oh, and what kind of name is 'Anonymous'?" you retort.
>"First off, we'll just shorten it to Anon," he says as he continues to study you. "And Nightmare Moon, Queen of Tartar Sauce is way too long."
"Tartarus, you imbecile."
>"Same thing, right?" he says, blowing you off with a wave of his hand.
>This has to be a joke, right? There is no way Celestia would let such a clueless being watch over you.
"It is just Nightmare Moon," you grumble, your patience already beginning to run out.
>"Mmm, I don't like that, either," Anon says. "How about 'Moon'?"
"You don't have to like it, it is my name," you hiss through clenched teeth. "It is NIGHTMARE Moon."
>>27780181
>"I heard you the first time, edgelord." Suddenly, his eyes light up as he snaps his fingers. "Darkie."
"What? No!"
>"You don't get a say in this, Darkie," he scolds.
"I am not your pet to command, mortal," you growl, baring your sharp teeth to him.
>However, he seems unaffected by your aggressive display, instead turning and walking away.
>"Come on Darkie, we'll head up to my room," Anon says.
>Facing no other option, you reluctantly stand and follow him.
>Is this really what you've fallen to? Pathetic.
>You catch up with him as he weaves his way through various corridors, an awkward silence hanging in the air.
"So, I assume you are not of this world. How did you get here?" you ask, curious.
>"Why do you care?" he says nonchalantly.
>You find yourself thrown off by his blunt response, and quite frankly, a bit offended.
"I don't care. I was merely trying to make small talk," you reply sharply.
>"Oh," he says, stopping at a door in the hall.
"Oh? That's it?" you say, confused.
>"You said you didn't care, so I figured it would be a waste of time to answer," he says with a smirk, opening the door and walking into the room.
"Just answer the damned question," you growl, following him into the room.
>Anon's room is quite sparse, with very little decorum along the stark white walls.
>The high ceiling doesn't help the feeling of how empty it is, with a simple bed, a desk, and a few other items of furniture.
>You stop in front of him as he turns, falling backwards onto the bed.
>"Well, I don't remember anything until I woke up in Princess Celestia's chambers in the middle of the night, butt naked. That was a fun one to explain," he says, rising himself upright on his elbows. "But this isn't about me, Darkie. Why did you get sent to Toys 'R Us?"
"Tartarus!" you snap, struggling to remain calm.
>"Right, that thing," he says, pointing at you.
>You take a few seconds to regain your composure, as well as to think of how to explain your history.
>>27780192
"Celestia and I.... have never quite seen eye to eye on things," you say.
>"That's what you call trying to bring about eternal night and murder your own sibling? That's.... interesting."
>You grind your teeth in frustration.
"If you knew what I had done, why did you ask such a stupid question?!"
>Anon looks up at the ceiling, averting your eyes for now.
>"I wanted to see if you would tell me what you did, or if you would embellish the truth," he says.
>You feel your face grow warm in embarrassment.
>Is this all you are to him? A pawn in a mind game?
>"Enough questions for now though, we need to start getting you on the road to recovery," he proclaims, standing with an enthusiastic hop to his step.
>Cringing at this odd fellow, you can only begin to imagine what he has in store.
>You don't have to wait long, as he walks up to you wordlessly, putting his hands out to either side of your head.
"What do you think you're doing?" you demand.
>"First off, this helmet doesn't exactly scream, 'I'm ready to change to a good pony.' So let's get rid of it for now."
"How about you take your hands away before I bite them off," you threaten, flashing your sharp canines.
>"That's not nice, Darkie."
"Stop calling me that!"
>Distracted by his pet name for you, you aren't fast enough to react as Anon moves quickly, his hands deftly removing your headpiece in one movement.
>You scrunch your face as your temper builds up, while he stares blankly.
>After almost a minute, he holds the helmet out to you silently.
"What?"
>"Put it back on," he says. "I didn't realize how horrifying you look without it."
"This coming from a hairless ape?" you retort, using what little magic you have to grab your helmet back and place it over your head. >You can't help but smirk a bit at your own jab, while he remains cool and collected.
>"That may be, but at least I don't look like the result of a sloppy drunken one night stand between a horse and a dragon," Anon says with a straight face.
>>27780203
>Your composure instantly vanishes.
"I'm sorry, for a moment there I thought you called me a HORSE!" you shout in a fit of restrained rage.
>He only shakes his head, not rattled at all by your outburst.
>"No, I was referring to your mother as a horse," he says, pausing. "Actually, probably your father, considering the size difference, otherwise you dad would probably have split your mom in half."
"Enough," you blurt, rising from your haunches.
>You take a few steps toward Anon, until your nose is mere inches away from his, your nostrils flared in irritation.
"Listen here, human. I tire of your games, I am not a little toy for you to play with," you hiss, pinning your ears back. "Maybe you think you are funny, but I assure you, they do not call me Nightmare Moon for nothing."
>"Who's they?" he says with a smirk.
"Do you ever get tired of being a smartass?"
>"No, but that's besides the point. Outside of this wonderful little meeting, I have never heard of you, be it from another pony or book."
>You can't help but laugh at the absurdity he spouts.
"They may not have loved me, but I guarantee after my rebellion, they respected me out of FEAR."
>Without a word or warning, Anon walks towards the open doorway, causing you to quiet.
"Where are you going?" you inquire with suspicion.
>"Follow me if you don't believe me. I'm heading to the library right now," he says, before disappearing around the corner.
>With a huff, you once again trail behind him.
>Why did you agree to this shit?
>Frustration only mounts as hour by hour, book by book you sift through the expansive archive amassed through the years, searching for mentions of you throughout history.
>On the verge of losing your cool, you snatch the last book off the shelf of history,flipping through it at a feverish pace.
>Nothing, once again.
>"Well?"
>You glare at Anonymous, heaving the book to the floor in rage as he displays a very smug grin for you.
>>27780217
"You are pulling something here," you bark angrily. "Clearly you or that neapolitan horse are hiding books that DO reference me. I refuse to be pulled in by your ruse."
>His cocky demeanor doesn't dim in the slightest, holding a single book out for you to see.
>"There was this one. Remember?"
"A fairy tale book, you dolt!" With your magic, you swipe the leather-bound book from his grasp, before opening it and ripping it in half at the binding.
>As you let it drop to the floor, he only stares down.
>"NOW there's no books about you in the archives."
>His remark only makes you angrier, and more determined than ever as you seize him by the wrist.
"Hey, be nice now," Anon says, worry creeping into his voice.
>Grimacing, you find it difficult to pull him along with what little magic you are allowed.
>"I'll follow you, you don't have to drag me," you hear Anon say behind you.
>You are relieved to hear him offer to follow.
"Fine. But you will not be looking so smug once we get out in the streets."
>Behind you, Anon sighs.
>"Whatever you say, Darkie."
>Surely the ponies of Equestria will recognize your form, and you intend to prove it.
>Through the twists and turns of the castle, silence remains between the two of you.
>Finally, after almost twenty minutes of walking, you find yourself on the streets of Canterlot, amidst the thinning evening crowd.
>You puff your chest out in pride and stand up straight, waiting to hear or see a response.
>To your dismay, nopony seems to bat an eye, let alone notice you.
>"So, you're quite a renowned pony, huh?" comes Anon's voice behind you, dripping with sarcasm.
>This can't be right, you should be striking fear into this crowd.
>"Nice costume, but Nightmare Night is a few months away."
>A voice causes you to look down, finding a young colt before you.
"I beg your pardon?"
>>27780225
>The colt rolls his eyes. "You know, Nightmare Night? When all the spooky stuff comes out? I mean, that's a decent Nightmare Moon costume, but it's only July."
>You lower your head to his eye level, frustrated by his tone.
"Little foal, I AM Nightmare Moon."
>"Sure, whatever you say. Except for the fact she isn't real."
>With that, the youngster abruptly wanders off.
>You shake with anger, with hatred of this place as you feel Anonymous's gaze upon you.
>"So, do you believe me now?" he says.
>Whirling around to face him, he backs up a few steps, startled.
"NO, I do NOT believe you!" you shout, causing a few passing ponies to stop and stare. "I don't know how you did it, I don't know what spell Celestia cast, but I refuse to believe I have been forgotten to time!"
>To your surprise, Anonymous doesn't back off, instead taking a step toward you.
>"You never will get it, will you? You are NOTHING to this world, you have NO reputation. All you have is an over-inflated ego and sense of self-importance," he angrily replies.
>Your breaking point reached, you throw a hoof at him in a blind fury, catching him across the face hard enough to put him to the ground.
>Gasps erupt from the gathered crowd, as you struggle to keep yourself from completely losing it.
>Gritting your teeth, you open your wings and throw yourself into the air.
>With your magic drained away by the arcane collar around your neck, you have no choice but to reluctantly return to the castle after a bit of flying to relax yourself, landing on the balcony connected to Anon's room.
>At this point, night has completely taken over, the moon hanging low amidst the stars in the clear sky.
>Anonymous is not in his room when you return, so you take the chance to throw yourself onto the bed, exhausted both physically and emotionally.
>Taking this offer to return was a mistake, as it has jogged your memory.
>Nopony cares about you.
>They never did a thousand years ago, and nothing has changed since.
>>27780232
>No matter, as your blowup in the streets all but guarantees your return to Tartarus.
>You look forward to leaving Equestria behind this time.
>"Are you alright?"
>Anon's voice quietly interrupts your thoughts as you gaze out at the dark skies.
"Leave me alone," you mutter without looking.
>Rather than listen, you feel the bed sink as he sits next to you.
"I said go away!" you bark, your voice trembling as you turn to look at him.
>Even in the dark, you can see the ugly bruise your hoof left just below his left eye, as well as a bit of dried blood just under his nose.
>And yet he sits next to you, after that?
>"No," he simply states, his hands folded in his lap.
>You just shake your head, turning away from him as you try to keep your composure, your lower lip trembling at this point.
"Why? Why do you belittle me all day today, show me the ugliness in this world I had forgotten, and yet sit beside me now? To gloat?"
>"Because you're not alright," he says in a soft tone, as you feel him brush your ethereal mane. "I didn't mean what I said earlier."
"It doesn't matter, you are right," you say as the dam inside you breaks. You can't stop yourself as tears begin to cloud your vision.
"Nopony cared about me, respected me or my nights in the past like they did my sister and her daylight, so I changed to make them at least respect me out of fear. Yet they still do not care. They do not even remember me, not even who I once was."
>"I care."
>You turn back again to look at him as you sniffle, his expression one of sympathy as he continues to stroke your mane.
"Yeah, right. Even if you did at one point, I ruined that," you say, pointing to the bruise upon his face.
>"Well, I kinda deserved it, to be quite honest," Anonymous says, cracking a smile. "But I somehow had to get through to you."
"It still does not matter. You are but one pony," you mutter as tears stream down your cheeks.
>>27780272
>"You don't think your sister cares? I think she cares a lot, considering she's giving you another chance."
>You start to argue, but stop.
>Even after rebelling against her, attacking her, Celestia has allowed you back.
>You put her through so much, and yet she still is trying to forgive you.
>Before you can say anything, Anonymous speaks up once again, rising off the bed.
>"And I don't think you realize how much you WERE respected, and are to this day," he says, pulling a small calendar off his desk before sitting down again.
>He points to various dates, each with a small circle on them.
>"Do you know what those are?" he asks.
>Using a hoof to rub your eyes, you strain through your clouded sight to read the small symbols.
>Each one of them refers to a phase of the moon, from a new moon to the full moon.
"Ponies.... keep track of the moon?" you stutter.
>"Yes, they have for a long time. Hell, in my world we do as well. They keep track of the stars, too," he says. "Not only for navigation, but to marvel at the beauty of the night sky."
>Once again, he rises off the bed, beckoning you to follow him as he heads for the balcony.
>Slowly, you rise off the bed and join him, as he points down below to the houses of the city.
>Few lights remain on in Canterlot, but as you scan the city, you see ponies gathered on the rooftops, their eyes pointed skyward.
"What is going on?" you ask, perplexed by the sight as you turn your focus on Anonymous.
>He only smiles as he pints upward towards the sky.
>As you follow his direction, your eyes are met by the cascading lights of a breathtaking meteor shower.
>How had you not noticed this before?
>Anonymous seems to read your mind as you continue to watch the lightshow in awe, tears streaming down your face again.
>>27780283
>"We're all guilty of losing sight of the little things, Darkie," he says. "And yet, it's the little things that mean so much. True, ponies aren't normally up and about at night like they are during the day, but it is your night that allows them to rest, to relax after a long day. You and your night are just as important as Celestia and the daytime."
"I.... I never knew," you stutter, looking into his eyes as he resumes stroking your mane in comfort. "This whole time, I was so jealous of my sister, that I made myself blind to the truth."
>"It happens to the best of us," he replies with a smile. "Even to a princess of Equestria."
>Your ears droop at the phrase, realizing you abandoned those you had sworn to protect so many years ago.
"Not anymore," you sullenly say, dropping your gaze to the floor in front of you, turning to head back into Anon's room. "I have ruined what prestige I once had."
>"It's not too late to change," he calls after you, making you pause. "What I said earlier was partially true, no one remembers you. But that also means you have the opportunity for a fresh start."
>Your breath caught by his statement, you turn back around as Anonymous steps towards you, holding out his hand.
>"All you have to do is let go of the past. What do you say?"
>Even after everything you've done to him, Anonymous smiles, his eyes begging you to accept his offer.
>A new start.
>Leaving the past mistakes behind.
>Choking back a sob, you place your hoof in his hand, as you let yourself go.
>Instantly, it feels as if every fiber in your body takes a deep breath, rejuvenated as you close your eyes.
>You let the sensation wash over you as the strife and pain of the past harbored within seem to melt away.
>It is unclear how long you relish the feeling, as when you open your eyes again, you find yourself laying on the floor.
>Anonymous is crouched in front of you, looking nervous and a bit shocked.
"What happened?"
>>27780301
>You put a hoof up to your mouth in surprise, as your voice comes out more higher pitched than normal.
>"I don't know, but that's not all that changed," Anon replies, helping you to your hooves.
>Rather than standing at eye level with him, you only come up to Anon's chest now.
>Desperately, you scan the room for a mirror, finding one laying on his desk as you pick it up with your magic.
>As you look, you find not the black foreboding alicorn you are used to, but of a shorter pony with a deep blue coat.
"I'm me again..."
>"That's what you're supposed to look like?"
>You turn back to Anonymous, giggling as you throw yourself at him.
"Thank you, thank you."
>You feel his arms wrap around your form as the two of you stand there.
>Never did you imagine you could get a second chance after everything you have done.
>And now, you intend to make the most of it, as you feel you are seeing the world for the first time.
>"What do you say we show your sister the new you, Darkie?" Anonymous says as he lets you go.
>You can't help but smile at him.
"Please, call me Luna."
A prompt put up in RGRE that might work well here:
>AU of the first episode, where NMN returns.
>Celestia is worried: everything she expected of her corrupted sister hasn't happened.
>She raises the sun as planned in Ponyville.
>Just as the sun's rays hit a hilltop, Luna, fully-grown (not as NMN but what she would've looked like had she spent a thousand years growing, looking a bit like Celestia in size), is revealed on the grass, having nookie with Anonymous.
>Turns out a day after being banished a thousand years ago, Nightmare Luna hooked up with Anon and he fucked the anger out of her.
>They've been on a millennium-long honeymoon of sorts.
>After a reunion and an awkward explanation of sorts, discussions happen.
>Celestia asks Luna to retake her crown and role.
>Luna pfts and says no: she's not angry anymore, but like fuck she's going to serve ungrateful ponies.
>Luna, as just Luna, moves into a house somewhere in Canterlot with Anon, and not into the room Celestia prepared for her.
>Slice of life episodic hijinks as Luna and Anon adapt to life as 'normal ponies' in society, getting jobs etcetera.
>Celestia benevolently schemes to get her sister back 'where she belongs', as her co-ruler.
>>27781207
leaving celestia in anguish for a thousand years is kind of a dickmove
>>27779437
You must be new, friendo. Non-Monday /moon/ threads have happened before, usually as a midweek thread when the Monday ones autosaged within 48 hours and a writefag or two was giving daily content.This does not include the more common case that >>27779726 talks about, but most ignore them since they never have fresh OC or discussion.
