Anon's pie adventure.
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The colorfulness of this all is getting out of hand!
There's a week long road trip for me next week, new page after that. A certain monkey project has been keeping me busy along other things so there was a bit of page delay.
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>>27680954
JESUS FUCK
>>27680954
welcome back!
>>27680954
they sure are calm about her drinking that whole vial.
>>27680954
aww yeee
>>27680954
>last panel
>hairless monkey semen is a psychoactive to poners
>>27680954
YESSSSSS, OUR DICK JUICE HEALED HER!
>>27680977
I was thinking the same thing.
What an amazing lack of reaction to her guzzling a vial of jizz.
>>27680954
You're back!!!!!
>>27680954
What
>>27681014
maybo only temporally
>>27681019
its nothing new for Twitwi
>>27680954
Her mane is starting to look kinda flowy, like an alicorn's
>>27680954
>Mascara got turned into a golem and that's why she kept her injuries for so long
I knew it.
>>27680954
Did you get someone to proofread the dialogue?
>>27680954
She drank all of it? Damn.
>>27680954
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8ySEwZN78nc
>>27680954
MEH
1. Mascara suddenly goes nuts, without being depicted so impulsive or obsessed with self-curing previously in the comics, so she realy lacks motivation or logics in this
2. Noone even tries to stop her, as if they are laying on a sofa somewhere, not in the middle of super-dangerous experiment, which may go wrong any moment, and they should be ready to react fast to whatever happens.
This Is bad Pencils, srsly.
>>27680954
>just blowing back a beaker of baby batter
Holy fucking shit.
Anon is going to have a sore dick after these experiments are over.
>>27680954
TIME TO BECOME AN MCFUCKING ALICORN
>>27681058
not yet. if you want to don't hold back.
>>27681031
>temporary curing powers
So we "ponies who can't kick the habit" now?
Are we going to start selling our cum on the streets like drugs in little softgels?
>>27681067
Seconding this.
>>27681031
hope not, dick juice may be love and life, but I would feel bad if we couldn't heal her in one shot. Maybe to be safe we give her one more shot to seal the deal.
>>27680954
>she drank all of it
>>27681088
Only asked cause I couldnt find anything to correct.
>>27680954
>Should we evacuate?
No, the children should, though.
>>27681110
Actually, that's the most convenient drug ever. Since crackwhores, I mean cumwhores, can't pay for the cum with cash, they pay with blowjobs, thus literally earning the drug upon completion, fresh from the source.
>>27681124
You forgot your image, fixed that for you
>>27681067
>that first point
You've been living in constant pain for longer than your adult life, then a miracle cure is literally plopped in your lap.
>>27680954
>inb4 they form a queue to suck Anon off.
>>27681067
>>27681114
Imagine yourself in her situation. If you had the choice between needing to be on pain meds for the rest of your life just to do normal things like walk, or a chance to finally be rid of it and be normal which would you rather have?
Keep in mind, Mascara wasn't always clumsy and awkward; she remembers what her life was like before her accident and just because she doesn't explicitly say she wants to be cured doesn't mean she doesn't want it.
>>27681067
Pencils was never good at story writing...
...but he draws with his anus...
>>27680954
this is it guys
>>27680954
I know the context is way off, but just wanted to say bottom left panel reminded me of pic related
>>27681067
Do you really care at this point about the story?
>>27680954
T-thats my fetish
>>27681142
Its WE who know what will happen, not them.
They are only testing it now. Even if Mascara suspects it will cure her, its no reason for NOW OR NEVER, because once they do figure out that consuming that thing in any way wount, for example, make you blow instantly, she can always ask Anon to make some more. And she knows that he wount refuse, at least for the sake of helping her.
It might look like overthinking, but thats just mine crippled english. Im shure in the reality, anyone already thought of what im saying here.
>>27681110
I miss that thread a lot.
>>27681210
youre forgetting the only "side effect" they thought might happen so far is the pony becomes an alicorn. thats not exactly something i think she would fear.
>>27681204
That has nothing to do with the story, its just sanity of narration. Its what makes you cringe most of the time, not flaws in the general story line.
>>27681245
It still means nothing. The dialogues are just excuse to show the diferent angles of ponies. Just look at last 5 pages
>>27681210
>Its WE who know what will happen, not them
What? Are you an expert cum drinker or something?
>>27681235
Thats was their original theory. Nevertheless, after arrival of royalty, they've been like super cautious (and lewd) last 3 strips.
Something doesn't match, see?
>>27681245
You've obviously never read those incest comics on /aco/
Your brain does a fucking flip as you read dialogue that looks like a perfectly normal conversation happen during a gangbang.
>>27681280
Thats for shure, and the fact that Pencils told us of it personally.
It's happening!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oVIpkXSN_o0
>>27681269
And again, it wasn't as bad last 5 pages, so i'm complaining only now.
>>27681283
Okay, whatever. I just wished it would be better, or more close to my personal very important opinion.
>>27681280
s-shut up Jon
>>2768095
Ebola pone is going to die!.
>>27681331
>the world around Mascara changes
>in the realm of magic she sees another human
>a very pissed off looking /co/nrad in a princess dress
>"You've cum, such a long long way- I can't fucking do this, goddamn ponies."
>>27680954
I just realized this comic is a high dive straight into the deep end of somebody's magical realm.
And I am enjoying swimming in it.
>>27680954
Why didn't you add the little throat gulp like in the cartoons? You know what I'm talking about
>>27681067
Do you read this comic for the plot?
>>27680954
> Anon finally realizes his place in the Universe
> becomes a Hermit and a Miracle Worker
> Female Ponies organize pilgrimages to his hermitage to cure stomach cancer and shit with his semen
> Happy Ending
>>27681411
Dubs confirm.
>>27681444
Aww shit nigga
>>27681401
this
>>27681388
It'swarm and kindasweet, isn't it?
>>27681444
trips confirm confirmation
>>27681411
>Anon accidentally creates colt cuddler cum cults curing cancer
>>27681401
>>27681456
This one?
>>27681067
GET GUD BENCILS, FOR TEH BUCKS FAKE!
>>27681280
Laughed harder than I should have.
>>27681210
>It's WE who know what will happen, not them.
>It's WE who know
>It's WE
>WE
>>>/africa/
>>27681505
No! I only have time to git gud at art, writing I leave for those who dedicate their lifetime for that in particular, I don't intent to be a jack of all trades and master of none!
>>27681539
oh /pol/, never change
>>27681539
>>>>/africa/
>>>/deadsea/
>>27681281
i can see twilight trying to take the vial in panic, but thats about it. either way they wouldnt be able to use their magic on it since that would contaminate the sample.
as far as celestia is concerned, this is probably the best case scenario to quickly find out what magic jizz does.
>>27681554
I bet dat /pol/tard still tries to get it.
Nice one, keked.
>>27681551
>>27681571
>Make a joke about WE
>I'm/pol/ now
Oh /tumblr/, never change. No fuck that change now.
>>27681545
Sounds like legitimate Bencils.
>>27681597
>Oh /tumblr/
Only tumblr? What about reddit? Normies everywhere, remember, tard.
>>27681565
Twilight is calm because she can always tele out of the blast radius.
>>27681227
Merci Twingo
>>27680954
Everyone is missing the most important point:
Mascara's adorable tummy-tums will feel better now.
That's all that really matters.
>>27681644
of course you are right, sometimes we forget why we are here, bro
>>27681597
>make a /pol/ joke about someone with bad grammar
>be worse at joking than someone who cant speak english properly
>cry loud
Summer.
>>27680954
Pencils, what are you doing? Just take a minute to contemplate that.
>>27681665
The god's work I think.
>>27681669
You did it, m8
This story lacks male characters.
But who I am to complain, nobody has, so why I'm going to start.I just want to see Pencils trying to do a horsecock edit to see if he's good at it
>>27681669
But narration was realy good so far... Even in intense moments.
So it isn't or wasn't hard for you, I assume.
>>27681690
>we have the draw me a horsecock guy itt
>we have the your-story-sucks guy itt
where is argentina-guy so we can be complete?
>>27681669
Okay, just wanted to be sure, carry on.
>>27681027
What am I looking at?
>>27681700
Dammit, what are you doing, it's Bencils favorite part of his already god's work, he'll just sit down and masturbate on himself for another week now.
>>27681669
what will happen in the next page?
>>27681732
pony pets looking at the altitude of the sun and waiting for their owner to come back from wörk
>>27681736
Nazis riding on dinosaurs are going to attack the Pie Farm.
>>27681067
>impulsive or obsessed with self-curing
Maybe it was impossible until anon showed up with the magical juice, and she had to settle for the painkillers.
>Noone even tries to stop her
Middle panel
>Act fast
It must have taken her just a couple of seconds to chug the juice, maybe they didn't have time to realize it and react accordingly before it was too late. In fact, Twilight seems a bitpeevedafterwards
>>27681765
Please tone down your swearing, Anon.
>>27681747
kek, so predicting
Bensils should learn to write fresh stories
>>27681765
>Middle panel
Thats even better, Twilight stood right behind all the time.
Anyway, that argument has been closed long ago. Left it just so Pencils may notice, but only if he wants.
>>27680954
Dong of solid gold,
Underneath the pants,
All of my cum will don't tease to toil,
Long, big and undefeatable erection,
As long as my dong takes over my body.
Our giant throbbing erection is breaking our pants,
And our cum is vast and unstoppable.
The dong stretches infinitely,
The semen brims with turbulence.
Mascara confirmed for the story's villain.
>>27681669
Don't worry, you do great.
Keep doing your shit.
>>27680954
>long road trip
where do you go?
>>27682073
The land of benis
>>27680954
Question. Does this count as R34? I mean she is drinking cum.
>>27682130
there is a page between drinking and cumming in bottle, so not really
>>27682130
It's not EXPLICIT, it is IMPLICIT.
>>27680954
If i was anon i anon I would be jumping out of a window some where out of that bulding at about the 6th panel
>>27681661
>Summer
No fucking shit. Too bad you're retarded all year.
>>27682147
But it's not implied that she's drinking cum. She's straight up drinking it. Pretty colors does make it any less of cum than you an extremely attractive anon.
>>27682171
Sorry. Does not make it.
>>27680954
>inb4 she turns into sofa
>>27682163
And here we go, more summer rebels.
Interesting fact, only summerfags or autists get triggered with mentioning summer in summer. Coincidence?
>>27680954
Rainbow colored or not that's fucking disgusting to watch her drink cum. I'm reminded of one of my friends drink ranch through a straw and I just vomited in my mouth.
>>27682200
Kek, I thought I was the only one thinking in that.
>>27682248
thats gay. anon. you are gay, maybe that's the problem
>>27682248
Agreed. It's drawn beautifully, but it's still cum drinking. It'd count as "fluids" if some asshole decided to report it that is.
>>27681067
>paying attention to logic or actual story in an ecchi doujin
You are aware that entire plot is build around it just to give Pencils reasons to have scenes like Mascara drinking cum, right?
>>27680954
Cum drinking or cum splattering is not really my fetish, pencils. It only give me gag reflexes,
>>27682279
That doesn't make sense, because if I saw a gay dude doing it it'd still repulse me. I remember the most disgusting Jackass stunt I ever saw was the one in the movie where the guy drank horse cum. I just couldn't imagine doing that. I'll drink piss straight from the tap before I'd do cum.
>>27682280
It'd be funny to be able to report something not for breaking the rules, but just because it's fucking gross. Not that I would.
>>27682323
I just felt the urge to hawk a huge loogie after reading it.
>>27682147
You may want to read on the differences between those two words anon.
>>27682200
Was that guy kill?
>>27682323
Fucking this. It has to be a fetish for him to draw that, because going through all the editing to get that drawn properly would have me puking everywhere with each edit
>>27682337
Yeah who would report a guy for DRAWING A HORSE DRINKING ACTUAL CUM. That's not reportable in the slightest for "fluids" or the fact that it's technically porn. What type of asshole would seriously report pencils for drawing a pony DRINKING CUM? That'd be a serious dick move.
>all these niggers not into cum
jesus christ it's like you guys don't even like drinking milk because of "m-muh texture"
>>27682423
>milk
The closest thing to cum is alfredo sauce. Not just the thickness, but it fucking smells like it too.
>>27682423
Cum and Milk are two different things. That's like saying you shouldn't like Lemonade if you don't like drinking Piss
>>27682423
That's not true at all, milk isn't some viscous, stick gooey substance that congeals into some sort of glue after a few minutes.
Hell I could probably watch some drink actual glue before i could watch semen.
>>27682446
>alfredo sauce
How the fuck do you know that?
>>27680954
I just noticed the cum turned white after it hit her face an she absorbed the magic, or it just wasn't colored in.
>>27682340
>>27682171
>implicit
Implied that this is cum
>explicit
When It is drawn clearly, that this is semen. When we would saw Anon ejaculating to vial.
We have not seen directly Anon ejaculating to vial.
>>27682446
...you should probably stop jacking off onto your pasta.
>>27682452
It makes me think of Chris-Chan doing that shit with Fanta. I nearly fucking puked my ass off.Who the hell drinks fanta?No seriously. Cum drinking is fucking gross
>>27682471
It's just raw eggs she's drinking.
>>27682379
go for it. the only thing around here that banned is genitals, newfag.
if anything youd just get a warning for false reporting.
>>27682488
That's a lot of protein!
>>27682460
Remember "Butters creamy goo"? It falls into the same category as that.
>>27682488
Nice dubs Pencils baby. I could accept the "implied" or "Raw eggs" thing if you didn't put out this page. You may want to be careful man. It's summer, and gifted people on this board make a ton of enemies for doing good things.
>>27682488
Yeah no it's cum.
>>27682508
I'm not doing anything friend. Calm your hemorrhoids. Why would I report him for something like this? It's just art. Maybe you'd like to take a swig of this thick white liquid I have in this glass flask?
>>27680954
holy shito
>>27682531
It can't be. Cum isn't rainbow colored, it has to be some other bodily fluid. Maybe it's his blood, or his piss.
I think I'll just call it imagination juice.
>>27682569
it's cum. fabulous, fabulous cum.
>>27682569
I'm not sure what other fluid you release from a "climax" anon, but I'm willing to bet it's not blood or urine, especially when it's sticky, and "Thick". You may want to try something else.
>>27682591
sometimes a drool
sometimes I cry
>>27682602
Drool isn't sticky or thick, nor are tears unless you're Issac Polumbo, who happens to naturally sweat syrup from how fat he is.
>>27682618
>syrup
damn it now im thinking about that scene from Varsity Blues where Billy Bob drinks syrup right out of the bottle. That made me wretch even as a kid
>>27682618
my blood groupe is "Nutella", so its not impossible
>>27682591
>I'm not sure what other fluid you release from a "climax"
The climax of a sneeze usually results in snot.
>>27682641
I want to have sex with you.
>>27682679
Fair point.
>>27682638
I tried it once, and I nearly threw up.
I'm Bi, been with dudes, and even I'm feeling a like puking because of that panel.
>>27682777
it's not meant to look good, her grimacing should be a sufficient clue about that. It's meant to be what it looks like, gross. A price she pays to be pain free.
>>27682777
Your trips turn me on. I'd suck you until cum mouthwash
Cum drinking has never really bothered me.
Now Rainbow Filthy Fuck Dash swallowing her loogie? That shit had me gagging repeatedly. I had to pause the episode and took me twice the time it would have to finish it. It brought me very close to puking.
>>27682822
You poor, oversensitive little child. Did you cry yourself to sleep that night?
>>27682822
Girls can be gross sometimes too, oh man who'd'a thought
>>27682971
Nigga das kawaii as fuck. I want to carry a fuckhuge ball of poners
>>27680954
What's with the pipboy?
>>27682971
>>27682984
>You never will
>>27680954
>Anon, the Greek God, literally has Jesus' semen
I fucking love this comic, god damn.
>>27682992
Just a reference, nothing more.
So what did you do in this episode Pencils?
>>27682964
It's okay, anon. I know you try your hardest to love your trailer trash waifu, walking around with a clothespin on your nose like that. You don't need to feel defensive around me, I wouldn't go near her even in a hazmat suit, promise.
>>27683016
>>27682810
She doesn't look like she's that put-off by doing it, as if to say "Oh boy, here we go again. Thankfully grammy taught me how to ignore the smell."
>>27682971
>"One of them is peeing on me. Damn it one of them is peeing on me. I know it. Oh God it's running down my pants. "
>>27682638
>Billy Bob
Annnnnnnd he's dead at 45.
>>27683043
>Just a reference, nothing more.
Like my IDW pony comics
>all those faggots not into girls drinking or swallowing cum
Sure smells like pleb in here.
>>27683309
Because only IDW does references.
>>27682992
>>27683043
Wowee I knew that reference! Pipboy LMAO that was in my fav video game only true nerds will know about this XD TOTALLY EPIC BRO I love references! So witty! So cool! It's like we're in a secret club because we all know the reference!
Would you bump this thread? Or just let it die?
>>27683490
>implying 4chan isn't a secret club
The front door may be open, but we can smell the new on you and you will not have a good time until you've either learned to blend in or fucked off.
Like any social media site, really. Reddit, tumblr, twitter, 9gag; all secret clubs with secret handshakes and secret handjob techniques.
>>27683366
those faggots are the EQD and Derpibooru user that visit this thread
>>27683533
I've been here for three weeks kid I know the ropes by now. Keep trying though, one day you'll achieve oldfag status like me.
>>27683133
>my perfect waifu would never do anything gross ever
It's part of being alive senpai, you'd know that if you bothered to live at all
>>27682822
>Rainbow Filthy Fuck Dash swallowing her loogie?
Which episode was that?
>>27683668
Are you telling me I'm not real?
>>27683544
whats wrong with derpibooru you fagshit? they are the site with porn
>>27683680
Rarity Investigates
>>27683680
>>27683700
>>27683708
ohh right. Now I remember.
>>27683690
please wake up
>>27683750
CAN'T WAKE UP
>>27682446
Wait wait, how do you know that Anon~?
>>27682971
Nigga that's cute
>>27683798
Why wouldn't I know the smell and consistency of my own cum?
>>27683831
damn thats a cute marble
>>27683831
>>27683844
Oh yeah, she is in this story.
I kinda forgot she's the main character since she hasn't shown up for like, months.
>>27683708
>>27683890
She's up in a few pages finally, along with her mommy. Because it is time to get the story rolling again. After my trip.
>>27683930
Can't wait for more Pie Mom.
>>27683890
>Main character
Nugga the main characters are his OC
>>27681331
>>27680954
I fuckin told you!
Man, this comic prompt is so bizarre and unorthodox that it reminds me of HUGE QUEST from /tg/ from how silly this is.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n0wqhdZn4v0
Good comedy and punch line delivery.
>>27683930
>in a few pages
So in about a month or two?
>>27680954
Why cum's color changed?
>all these "complain" about cum drinking
kek
Bensils theads and the shitposters everytime.
>>27686075
Only the cum on her has changed color. The cum still in the bottle probably still has its magic.
>>27681222
Did crossroads ever finish his story?
Pencils, you really need a writer.
>>27680954
and now she must be montiered. or perhaps other ponies will be interested in drinking when they hear of it's effects.
>>27680954
Awww shit nigga.
>disney glitter theme.
Patronizing?
>>27681124
Why shouldn't they join in on the fun?
>>27681067
>>27686242
Can you suggest a better way to make this page?No? well.
>>27681019
Anon can make more.
>>27686242
I'm enjoying the writing.
>>27685178
thank you, it wasn't obvious before
>>27685150
>>27687084
nope
>>27687084
You're so silly. Just imagine what would happen if the plotline turned into anon being able to turn all of the mares into herms.
That would never be canon, right guys?
...Guys?
I remember hearing something about ponies turning into alicorns when they absorb the magic from anon's semen.
So I think it's pretty obvious what is gonna happen next page.
>>27687187
>rape?
>>27687102
well, alicorns do get all the parts...
>>27680954
Welp. I'm having fun.
>>27686242
Writing seems fine, in this page at least. I don't see mistakes desu.. maybe something could be tweaked in the second and third panel, but the rest seems ok. Let's wait for a native speaker willing to make the corrections, if they are necessary.
>>27683890
Discord is the main character. Anon is Discord as human with amnesia. The hints are there.
>>27686242
This
Writing kind of dumbed down more toward fanservice than any plot development. Entire story written just to make fanservice instead it being just an additional moment once in a while.
>>27680954
Is she going to grow a horn? or just a lower horn?
>>27682971
>blushing twilight
Wow reading through the thread theres some hate for cumdrinking. You guys complaining about that got shit taste in fetishes.
How long will it be until Anon will have to save one of the girls from some injury after a monster battle by jizzing directly on them? Or will one of the ponies get poisoned somehow and have to give him a BJ to work as an antidote?
>>27687747
is he still activeand has he moved on from pedoshit
>>27687793
she is blushing because she can feel Celestias teats rubbing against her lower back.
>>27683490
>>27687808
Afaik he is still active, but has moved on from pony?and still doing pedo stuff I believe
>>27686340
This is the most important question.
I'm all for a little critique but when you come off like a pompous windbag and don't offer any corrections yourself, your opinion should be rightfully discarded
>>27681331
[MASCARA HAS REACHED CRITICAL MASS]
>>27687877
Yes, aside from "dis bad" I don't know what they exactly are against with the current turn of events and how much story they expect to happen on a single page.
>>27681707
i'm always here. I don't need to post argenta every time
>>27681481
Unf
>>27680954
Anoncream. Apply directly to the womb.
Anoncream. Apply directly to the womb.
Anoncream. Apply directly to the womb.
>>27687993
its not even her final form
>>27687877
If it were me I'd maybe have mascara drink it off screen and show whomever is watching to have looks of disgust. That's how you imply. Showing her guzzling it down does count as porn to those who know what the hell is going on and what she's drinking. Just how I'd do it
>>27688044
I think you would get a lot more flak if you ironically made the drinking more awkward and have like Twilight grossed out or Celestia getting jealous. To emphasize how weird it would seem for little ponies to gargle anon juice.
It seems a little....clinical almost. When it should orobably be more comedic.
But then again that's how I assume critics view it. Personally I love this because its one step closer to my hope of magic anon eventually giving all the qt ponies face dickings to pump magic seed down all throw throats. Because BJs are awesome.
Although I'm going to guess you probably aren' going to put a big pony mouthfucking orgy in anytime soon.
>>27688660
Lot less flak or crticism* I mean
>>27688660
He literally drew a pony guzzling cum. I wouldn't abandon hope just yet
>>27688665
Don't forget anon face fucked Limestone while unconscious.
So technically anon has dicked one face.
>>27688660
He should've taken a "guy discovers milk for the first time" approach. Instead she just "bottoms up" without any type of real logic, which is where the "you need a writer" thing is probably coming from. It's like eating lotion, but worked out in this case because plot demands it
>>27688677
Marble has too
>>27682295
This tbqh
>>27682618
>Isaac Plumbo
Drunken peasants fan?
>>27688686
When did Marble suck anon's dick
I thought it was the other way around, and he gave her a rug munch.
>>27688679
I thought of that, but I didn't want to go that way. it would have clashed with the next page reaction to follow.
>>27681027
>You will never have pone pets waiting for you at home.
>>27688782
Well in the end it's your comic so you should STAY THE COURSE.
After all we don't know the whole picture.
But I have to ask...will the ending be lewwwwd?
>>27688261
And as always, here is your obligatory:
>white
>>27688777
Marble face fucked limestone stupid. Maud got rug ravaged
>>27688795
If you'll notice, that picture is backwards. Unless that dude works nights
>>27688825
>stupid
Rude. No need to be an uppity negro son.
That's more riding then fucking if you want to get technical.
Sir.
>>27681401
It's implied by the action lines around her throat, but I would have preferred a full gulp too.
>>27687387
Fuck, I remember you from the old old trap threads. Seems like some of the oldfag shitposters are coming out from their caves, wiping the sleep dust from their eyes.
Will bencils create a new mini golden era for /mlp/? Stay tuned to find out.
>>27680954
for people who don't wich comic it is here it is and don t have boner while reading it :http://marble-pie.tumblr.com/tagged/apa/chrono
>>27690522
Now say it in english.
>>27690522
>>>9gag
