The web never ends Edition
>Previously on Hips
>>27584387
>Thread Theme
http://youtu.be/aJ-oawfyvn4
Who are we? We're the superhero thread. Mainly starring Sunset Shimmer as the Sensational Spider-Woman. Please, dump all of your mlp/superhero greens, art, and discussions here
As a wise man once said: Excelsior!
>Pastebin list
Voidborn - http://pastebin.com/VRcwJQfG
untitled 7 - http://pastebin.com/P4Mawhsw
treppahcs - http://pastebin.com/ps2Ts8J1
superkeaton - http://pastebin.com/u/superkeaton
Beans - http://pastebin.com/yNaJFuz0
Red - http://pastebin.com/hTFVft7x (currently in a coma)
Shocker Anon - http://pastebin.com/CYSHBCi1
Roommate Anon (literally dead, but I can't be bothered to remove his name)
FemAnon - http://pastebin.com/xkSzdr5V (literally dead as well)
3 Suns - http://pastebin.com/u/3Suns
The Rabble - http://pastebin.com/7awBpgv8
Super Power Chart:
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1VzzWeFvQ_ebwLH4d93ZnJclRreaTLaXEAQTzWSRI0Ao/edit
>>27639535
I'm not comatose! I'm here!
Sniff...
>>27639576
There there, Klyntar, I really like your story
>>27639573
Shhhh, it's ok, just let go, head towards the light
>>27639611
>Dubs confirm I should leave this thread
Well...it's been a nice run
I guess I will see you on the other side
>>27639624
Shh... Have some art and get to writing.
Klyntar
http://pastebin.com/mk5ymZ7V
>>27639624
Nice try, but not even the dead can leave the ride
>>27639631
I don't know what life is any more.
>>27639624
>>27639535
>mfw No Klyntar
Kek, poor guy.
>>27639663
>>27639638
Fixed
So long as we are here
Let's have a writefag discussion
Who's your favorite writefag?
Why?
Who should work on what aspect of their writing?
That sort of thing
I will start
I like Beans
He should probably rethink his harem ideas
>>27639686
I love you all equally
>>27639701
~I don't~
>>27639710
If I take those numbers, will you die?
>>27639686
Can't say.
I love Beans, untitled 7, treppahcs and superkeaton. And I like both The Rabble and 3 Suns.
>>27639686
I love Voidborn (even though he seems ded)
But he needs to work on his pacing, just, so much, we went from 0 to 60 with the killing so fast.
>>27639718
in strange aeons even death may die
>>27639849
But are you Providence?
>>27639863
Aren't we all a little bit of Providence
>>27639624
Red, I'm so salty over your clever use of the symbiote dialogue indicators
that's fucking smart and I wish I'd thought of it first because now I can't poach it from you
>>27640114
Sure you can
I believe we are a well functioning marxist commune and we can borrow from each other to improve ourselves.Also imitation is the sincerest form of flattery
>>27640166
consider yourself fully flattered
love your story
>>27639731
can I ask what you like about mine?
I'm always looking for ways to improve my writing
>>27639631
>Implying anyone would miss me.
Kek.
>>27640188
Dubs confirm you are me and should be dead
>>27640206
>Who knows not me we never lost control.
>>27640206
probably time to start tripping
>>27640211
>>27640183
I think is the narrative flux.
Your narrator feels like what the tiny yellow boxes would say on the hipothetical SpiderShim comic.
>>27640266
And the weakest parts?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jt52nJWik4A
we need more variety in thread themes
>>27640288
What are you talking about?
>>27640328
I mean, like, what are the weaker parts of my writing?
I need criticism, dammit! It can't all be good!
>>27640340
Stop beating yourself up, or I'll go there and beat you up myself!I really can't find any 'fault'.
>>27640340
I want to web inside Superkeaton
>>27640378
L-Lewd!
>>27640375
Dammit!
>>27640378
>>27640537
Is it that point in the thread already?
>>27631549
>however, Rainbow Dash seemed to have not heard him as she has already turned to you
>“ Oh and before I forget, Miss Harshwhinny said we are gonna play Basketball again today. So get ready to have your ass kicked again!“ is what she said with a smile
„Well, to get our asses kicked by you again we would have to get our asses kicked once before.“
>you were waiting for Rainbow Dash to respond, but instead the one who responds
>“Really? You had this conversation on the last three fridays and its always exactly the same.“
„Dont be stupid Smile. I think we would realize having the same conversation several times.“
>there was a moment of silence before the conversation was picked up by Rainbow Dash again
>“Anyway, as I said, you are gonna eat dust today“/ “Anyway, as I said, you are gonna eat dust today“
> you and RD both look simultaneously
> „Ok, that was weird...“ is all that a highly irritated RD got out before saying „See ya!“
>you just turn to Smile
„We are so NOT gonna go easy on her.“/„We are so NOT gonna go easy on her.“
>now its your turn to be irritated
„Dude stop that, thats just creepy.“
>>27640817
Since nothing else is going on, we might as well use Keaton for his body
>>27640837
>The rest of the school nothing special happened till PE
>as you enter the gym you see Fluttershy and Smile both sitting far away from the others like always, however you also see Sunset Shimmer sitting a bit away from the others aswell
>grabbed by curiosity you cant help but go ask her why
„Hey Sunset, why are you sitting here all alone?“
>as she hears your voice Sunset turns to you with that beautiful, heartwarming smile of hers
>“Oh, hi anon, well i wont be participating today. I fell yesterday and hurt my angle, so i cant run now.“
>you look at her right foot to see that it was indeed bandaged
„Man, too bad. Rainbow could have used your help.“
>this causes Sunset to wear a more judgemental expression on her face
>“Are you gonna mock her again today?“
>you just huff. „Well, she kinda begs for it.“
>“ Then atleast promise me to not over do it, ok?“ is what she says, with puppy eyes as enforcement
>“Ok, i promise to try to not be too harsh.“
>it looked like she wanted to say more, but Miss Harshwhinny came in
>„Ok, lets not waste any time, anon and Rainbow Dash, you two are the teamcaptains.“
>The teampicking happens rather quick, on your team are Smile, Treehugger, Norman, Sweet Leaf and Moon Dancer, on Rainbow Dash's team are Flash Sentry, Fluttershy, Bulk Biceps, Iron Will and Soarin.
>you look at Smile
„Dude, you take care of the initiation and dont be gentle.“
>Smile just shruggs. „I know you would say that.“
>Miss Harshwhinny is ready to throw the ball in the air
>the two competants for the ball are Smile and Rainbow Dash
>as Miss Harshwhinny throws the ball into the air, RD jumps up trying to catch it, Smile however, just slaps the ball with his flat hand sending it flying into the direction of the enemy's basket
>the ball bouncesonce on the ring before going in perfectly
> for a few seconds there is no sound except a „AW, COME ON!“ from a slightly pissed off RD
>oh, this is gonna be good
Trapped at work, gonna try to write Issue 8 on my phone.
>>27640841
Writefriend is not for sexual!
>>27640841
Fair enough.
>>27640846
Quiet, writeslut
So
When are we gonna do the crossover?
>>27640844
shit, forgot to post big related as well
>>27640854
Pls no sexual bully
>>27640929
But some sexual bullying is precisely what we need
>>27640958
I wrote a whe story about black-suit Sunset kinda-raping Anon, read that instead of taking your erections out on me!
Updated the pastebin. http://pastebin.com/ps2Ts8J1
Gonna try and figure out what happens now that Twilight knows somethings up
>>27641075
>>27641140
I never understand why some people just use images
So are you guys open to new green
>>27641265
Ye.
As long as there is spandex and/or capes somewhere.
>>27641265
Always.
>>27641265
why would we ever want green?sarcasm
>>27641363
good work
you scared him off
>>27641300
>>27641302
>>27641363
Alright then
I don't have it ready
So I'll see you in roughly 17993950 seconds
>>27641646
thats more than 2 days
eyyy I havent been around in a while and I notice a distinct lack of drawfags
have some flat colour shims
>>27641678
I know, and I'm sorry, but my hands are tied up with work and other green writing projects.
But it'll be worth it.
Just wait.
>>27641696
by the by i'm doing some relatively cheap commissions if anyone is interested I can provide prices and stuff
I do pone too ;)
>>27641711
I'm somewhat interested
>>27641711
Tumblr? DeviantArt?
>>27641985
>>27642012
http://clockdeer.tumblr.com/
http://n33nja02.deviantart.com/gallery/
http://www.furaffinity.net/user/sentel
>>27642134
Haven't posted pone on any of those but I can give you an example here if needed
>>27642170
Like the art and may have to commission you on a piece.
When i see your prices of course.
>>27642524
Thanks
Really sick of my entire area getting banned.
Work got busy, progress on Issue 8 is, like, 7 sentences.
Here's what I got so far
"Sunny."
>You are Anon
>"...."
"Suuuunnyyyyyy."
>"........."
>And you have a very mopey girlfriend
>It's been a week or two since your impromptu hospital stay
>Ever since, your girlfriend's been in a funk, even after helping you get back on your feet and even staying at your place a few nights to make sure you weren't struggling with the backload of homework or any lingering effects from being blasted in the chest with lightning
"SUNSET!"
>"WHAT!?"
>You sigh and apply palm to face as her wild looks for danger and improptu fighting pose slowly come back to reality with the rest of the world, a sheepish look on her face as her body relaxes
>"Um, I mean, yes?"
>Cute, but futile
"Seriously? I've been trying to talk to you this whole time, but you've been sandbagging me all through lunch."
>You jab a spaggheti-wrapped for in her direction, elbows resting on the lunch table
"And you haven't touched your food. So spill, what's eating you?
>>27642744
"And you haven't touched your food. So spill, what's eating you?"
>"Not you."
I'm not sorry.
>>27642932
Heh.
>>27642744
Not a bad start
>>27642932
>Work on touching character moment
>"Hurr hurr, sex joke"
I love you freaks
>>27643244
And you dare saying that writefriend is not for sexual.
Yu-Gi-Oh! crossover here
>"Checkmate. That's the third game today, Fluttershy."
>You are Fluttershy
>Student of St. Lauren's school for girls
>Right now you are having a game of chess as part of your extra curricular activities
>And you are being viciously defeated by Twilight Sparkle
>"I don't understand, Fluttershy. Why did you choose to join the chess club if you can't play?"
"Well...the thing is...I couldn't get in line to sign up for the nature walk club...and I they put me here"
>"Right. Well, don't worry, we'll make a grand master out of you in no time"
>Although it was meant to be a joke, there was a note of sincerity in her voice
>"Oh, before you go, I've been meaning to ask you about that pendant of you are wearing"
>She points to the amulet around your neck
>A golden triangle, encompassed by a wooden ring, with an eye carved in the middle and 5 small pendulums hanging from the sides
>You lift it up
"This? My father brought it from Egypt as a present. I don't think it's anything special really..."
>Twilight seems enamored by it
>She takes out a pen and paper
>"Just let me make a quick sketch of it. I think I can find something about it. It's something like a hobby. Amulets, pendants. You know."
>It didn't take her long to scribble down the basics of your medallion
>>27643369
I-I'm not, shut up, baka!
>>27643391
wait wut?
k
>>27643391
>You are in the mess hall
>Sitting alone at a table
>Jabbing your food with fork
>Waiting for your only friend
>Well you consider her your friend
>Other may consider her a nuisence at best
>But Rainbow Dash is the only girl here that talks to you on a regular basis
>And sure she does eat your food
>And coppy your homework
>And steal your socks
>But at least she's willing to talk to you
>And there she is
>Coming in right after football practice
>She takes her lunch and sit opposite of you
>Sweaty and smelly
>"So...Flutters...how was chess?"
>Beans fly out of her mouth as she asks
"Umm...good..."
>"That's cool...I had to substitute for the goalkeeper...she got sick or something..."
>She swallows and drinks her juice in one go
>"Man, I can't be chained down to be a goalkeeper. I got to be on the offensive! You know what I mean?"
"I...I guess..."
>Rainbow stares at your lunch
>You slowlly push it towards her
>She doesn't waste any time and digs right in
>"Exactly!...I mean...I can't help it if I'm that good, right?"
"...no"
>Rainbow Dash finishes your lunch as well
>She lets out a small burp and relaxes
>"You know, you should stop being so timid all the time."
"...I know"
>"I mean, I get that that is who you are and all, but people change. Like, you gotta let yourself blossom"
>Those words caught you a bit off guard
>They seemed a bit too poetic for her
>"I'll catch you later, ok?"
"Alright"
>She gets up and gives you a light bump on your shoulder
>It's her way of saying goodbye
>Sadly, she's been saying goodbye to you so often, that your shoulder has turned purple
>You can't help but clench it
>>27642744
Good so far continue please.
>>27643407
>You are still in the dinning hall
>You are about to get ready to leave, when a girl from an upper class approaches you
>Lightning Dust
>Hall monitor
>She sits across the table from you
>"I've been watching you and Rainbow Dash this entire time."
"Oh?"
>"I've also been hearing some rumours around the school. About how she treats you."
"...sh-she doesn't treat..."
>Lightning raises her hand, cutting your sentence short
>"No need to say anything. I'll take care of everything."
>She get's up and leaves
>You have no idea what she was talking about
>>27643419
>It's late
>Almost night time
>You are walking to your dorm when suddenly you hear you name
>You turn around and see Twilight Sparkle
>Apparently she was running to catch up with you
>When she reaches you, she hunches over, trying to catch her breath
>"Remember when I asked you about your pendant today?"
"...umm...ye..."
>"Well, I did some research. First I couldn't find anything on it and for a while thought it was just a necklace, but I couldn't stop there. I dug through all the books in the library and found something."
>She hands you an old book
>It's cover is falling apart
>And it's pages have turned yellow
>You can't believe that she spent her entire afternoon trying to find something about your medallion
>You take the book and read from the marked page
>There is a picture of an Egyptian tomb's wall
>On it there are a lot of hieroglyph and, without mistake, the necklace you are carrying
>Benath the picture there is a small paragraph
"The millennium ring is said to posses the great power. Only at times of turmoil will it's strenngth be revealed"
>You look at Twilight
>She nudges you to keep reading
"When the Sun sets for the final time
And the body is left to be claimed
The shimmering from the other side
Will bring forth the return of the shadow game"
>You look at Twilight again
>She has a grinning from ear to ear
>"Can't you see? You have the millennium ring!"
"...I...I guess..."
>"Don't you know what that means?"
"N-not real..."
>"It means that you have a magical artifact around your neck"
>OK
>This is getting weird
"Listen Twilight...I gotta go...I...have some homework to finish..."
>"Um, sure! Come by tomorrow for chess! We need to talk about the ring!"
>You've already bolted to your dorm
>This day just keeps getting weirder
>>27643431
>You are in fornt of the building
>When yet again you hear your name
>You turn and see Lighting Dust leaning on the the wall
>"Come over here, I've got something for you"
>You know this will end badly
>But you feel compelled to go
>You turn around the corner and
>"One punching bag, just for you"
>Oh no
>It's Rainbow Dash
>She looks badly beaten
>You run towards her
"Rainbow, are you alright?"
>"Flutters...wha-what did you do?"
>She's barely conscious
>"You see Fluttershy, I solved your bully problem. There's no need to thank me. Throw in a kick or two. Now's your chance!"
>You turn towards Lighting Dust
"I-i-i...I didn't want any of this."
>You turn towards your friend
"Rainbow, I'd never want you to get hurt. I didn't tell her to do any of this"
>She's barely conscious
>"Sure you didn't. A girl like you wouldn't say anything. I just read between the lines and figured it all out. Aren't you gonna hit her? Final chance"
"Sh--she is my friend! "
>"Friend? You are a weird girl, you know that Flutters. By the way, these services aren't for free. This will cost you 200 dollars"
"Wh-what?"
>"Have them next time we meet, ok?"
>>27643439
>You are in your dormroom
>And you are cleaning Rainbow's wounds
>She got beaten pretty badly
>You've both been standing in silence this whole time
>You decide it's time to speak
"...Rainbow...I didn't ask her to do this...she just sat down at my table today and told me she'd take care of everything..."
>Rainbow Dash is silent
>Your eyes are slowlly waterring up
"P-please, Rainbow...I-I-I'm sorry this happened..."
>"Don't be Flutters. I'm the one that should be sorry. They way I've been treating you, people are thinking that I'm actively tormenting you. You know...you are my only friend here...and I wouldn't want to lose you"
>You can see a twinkle in her bruised eye
>You hug her tightly
>She can't help but to hug you too
>You can feel her warm tears streaming on your neck
>You pull away from the hug
"I-I should get some more ointment...I'll be right back"
>>27643448
>Good thing the nurse's office works through the night
>You got the ointment and you are walking back to your room
>When somebody grabs your hand
>"Hey Fluttershy. You got the money?"
>It's Lightning Dust
>Your knees start to shake
"I...uh...th-the thing is...I don't have..."
>She shakes her head
>"Oh, Flutters. You know that stealing is bad"
"I-I haven't stollen anything..."
>"We had a deal. You'd give me the money next time we meet"
"...I didn't"
>"And refusing to pay for my services is stealing"
"...B-but..."
>"And now I have to educate on what happens to thieves"
>She punches you in the stomach
>For a few seconds you cant breath
>She then punches you in the face
>You fall on the ground
>"Have the money next time, otherwise it will get worse and worse"
>You begin to black out
>>27643457
When the Sun sets for the final time
And the body is left to be claimed
The shimmering from the other side
Will bring forth the return of the shadow game
>>27643468
>You are
>Well
>Fluttershy
>To keep it simple
>We'll elaborate on the details later
>Now you have work
>You stand up
"Oh, Lightning Dust"
>Game time
>She turns around
>For a moment she loses sight of the world around her
>Next thing she knows, you are both standing on the opposite sides of a ledge
>On the middle of the ledge theres a plinth with a box on it
>The ledge is wide enough to walk freely on it, but it's located on the top of castle, connecting two towers
>Beneath it is a moat
>You must be at least 50 meters in the air
>The both of you have nooses tied around your necks
>The nooses are actually two parts of the same rope
>It goes through two reals suitiated right above the both of you
>"Huh...What is this?"
>Lighting Dust looks around when she finally lays eyes on you
"Yo"
>"Flutters? Is that you?
"Sure, let's go with that"
>"What's all this then?"
"You see, Lightning, I have what you seek. It actually in that box in the middle over there."
>"You have the money? Why didn't you say so earlier? You wouldn't have had to go through that. Give it here and all'll be well"
"Yeah, about that. I want us to play a little game. Otherwise just handing it over to you would be too boring, you see.
>"Game? What game"
"It's quite simple really. We each throw two dice. We take that many steps towards the plinth. Of course, with each step the noose will get tighter for the both of us. You can take how many steps we want backwards, if we need a little break. Are you up for it?"
>She's trying to put on a tough front
>She's failling
>"Sure! I'm up for a little game."
"I thought so. Just so you know, cheating is forbidden, so be sure to behave"
>You throw her a pair of dice and she catches them
>>27643474
"Game start. You can go first"
>She throws the dice
>4 and 2
>"6! Good start"
>She takes six steps forward
"My turn"
>You throw the dice
>4 and 5
"9. I'll just take 8 steps"
>"Heh, you should seize fortune by the throat! My turn again"
>3 and 1
>"4 steps closer"
>You throw the dice
>5 and 5
"10. I take them"
>The nooses start to tigthen
>Lighting throws her dice
>6 and 6
>"12! I'm almost halfway there Flutters!"
"We can't have that now, can we?"
>You throw the dice
>5 and 6
"11. 10 steps again"
>Lighting is starting to lose her breath
"You know, if you pass out, you' fall of the edge and break your neck. You should take a few steps back."
>She's infuriated by your words
>But after thinking for a moment, she decides to step back 4 steps
>>27643474
>After catching her breath, she throws the dice
>1 and 2
>She bites her lip
>"I...I'll move one step"
>You smerk
>You throw
>6 and 6
"12. I take them"
>Lighting throws
>4 and 1
>"I take 5"
>You throw them
>2 and 4
"6 steps."
>You arms length to the box
"I need three steps more to reach the prize, Lightning."
>She's obviously angry
>You decide to put some salt in her wounds
"You know, you'd have to throw a pretty big number to make me fall back, right"
>"Shut up! It's my turn."
>1 and 1
"Oh, snake eyes. Better luck next time we play."
>You throw your dice
>1 and 5
"6. I win"
>"Fuck this!"
>She takes her noose off and runs towards the center
"Dear, Lightning, you know that,s not how the game is played"
>When she reaches the center she pushes you off the ledge
>You just grab your rope tight and lift yourself so your neck won't snap
>"The money is mine now!"
>She opens the box
>"W-what?"
>Inside there is a piece of meat
>"What is this?"
"The gate of darkness opens for all who do not follow the rules of the game, Lighting"
>There is cawing sound
>"What's that"
>A murder of crows fills the sky and shoots down towards Lighting Dust
"Penalty Game! Flesh From Bone!"
>The crows start pecking her
>Screams and caws fill the night
"Greed can consume even the strongest hearts. Yours was wretched from the very start"
>>27643495
>You are Fluttershy
>And you are sitting in the mess hall alone
>Rainbow is late for breakfast again
>You poke your cereal with your spoon a bit
>"Hey Flutters! What's up?"
>Rainbow jumps out of nowhere, scaring you so bad, that you throw your spoon
>"Chill, girl. Don't be so on edge. What happened last night? You went out for ointment and you never came back?"
"...I...uh...don't really remember..."
>"Anyway. You know what happened today? They found Lighting Dust in a bush, mumbling to herself something about crows. They say there was a rope burn around her neck. The head mistress thinks she tire to kill herself and sent her to the mental hospital! Crazy right?"
"...yeah...I guess..."
>You continue to poke around in your breakfast
>"Listen Flutters. You shouldn't feel bad about what happened to her. If you ask me, she's better off in the nuthouse, because otherwise she would have had to answer to me today!"
>You stare at Rainbow Dash
>And you can't seem to hold back your laughter
>You just burst out
>"What? What did I say?"
"Oh, nothing, Dash. I gotta go to class. I'll see you later ok?"
>"..ok"
>You stand up
>Walk past her
>And hit her gently on the shoulder
So should I keep this up or hide my head in shame?
>>27643419
Please,
Continue...
>>27643516
Where do you think you are?
>>27643516
Keep it up, yo.
Interesting in that Flutters has the ring and not the Puzzle, but am I not far off in thinking that either Anon or Shimmer has or will have the Puzzle?
>>27643556
H-home?
>>27643639
... yeah.
We'll keep you.
>>27643582
Still working on the whole thing, but basically sunset is inside the ring. Her name was in the incantation. I havent yet decided how the other items will be worked in, but the good thing about fanfics is that anything is possible
>>27642744
This is comfy.
>>27643675
That tends to be the feel of my work, I've noticed.
>>27643714
Yup. Any negative thing that may pop on your work passes as part of your style. Which is comfy and I wouldn't want it to change.
>>27643733
Well, that's good to know.
The comfiness may not last however.
We'll see how I do when it comes to pass.
oh hey! there was a new thread. thanks for letting me know guys.i was lonely
>>27643840
who are you again?
>>27643928
Party foul, man. Party foul.
>>27643951
I kid, I kid, love Rabble's writes
>>27643928
>>27643951
>>27643988
>>27644154
So anyways, how's your sex life?
>>27644330
Just like my waifu
Not real.
>>27644384
I want to argue this, but I cant
>>27644330
handy
>>27642524
>>27641711
>prices
You know advertisement is against the rules, and people here are usually very cheap?
2 AM bump
>>27643674
Sumset as yami!bakura? Nice
(I feel smart for remembering that name)
>>27645193
9am reply
>>27645570
1am reply reply.
when you discover yoursel reading up on millenium items you realize that you are actually just here for sunset in spandex
How do I get of this ride?
It's so stupid that a yugioh-fic hypes me the most
probably because the thought is so absurd
keep it up shadowanon
>>27646105
didn't mean to namefag that, oh well
make that a compliment from another writefag then
>>27646105
>>27646114
....
It seems we have a Traitor in our midst
I do not like the white spider emblem
(Also, new Spidey game)
http://youtu.be/aDPWDkdNLEc
>>27646133
almost as bad as forgetting someone in the op again?
We trust you to do your one job, bloke.
>>27646139
And he's gonna get an attitude about it too?
Tsk tsk
>>27646150
You're supposed to be our leader and not forget about anyone in the flock!
>>27646151
Oh yeah? Well...
I actually can't come up with a good argument
>>27646162
want me to give you some lewd to make the hurt go away?
>>27646167
Nothing can make this (phantom) pain go away
>>27637195
>Be a man, alone with his hot girlfriend in a private room you know nobody would interrupt you because usually at this point in time lectures are still held.
>You lock the door anyway, just in case.
>So, be Anon.
>You turn around and lean against the door.
>Sunset was looking around your room with a kind of wonder.
>It’s messy, but had a sense of order to it.
>Your collection of lab equipment was now quite awkward.
>But so far, being a geek had managed to woo her.
>She drops her bag off on the trunk before your bed and turns around to you.
>“Nice place~”
>While you were sure the compliment was genuine, there was something else in her voice.
>She opened her arms up to you just as you had began to approach her again.
>It almost feels like she’s way too much into kissing, and by now you’re sure you have had more than 90% of your kisses ever by her.
>Bad Anon, don’t think back to that.
>Before you knew it you were in her embrace again, her face by yours, here forehead touching yours.
“Why did you want to be all private?”
>She can’t possibly...
>She spins you both around onto the bed, with her now above you.
>Your feet were awkwardly angled and you had your movement robbed from you.
>Doesn’t matter if it’s an angle above you.
>That was kinda outside your comfort zone.
“Oh, I think you’ll get the idea.”
>Just as you look off to reposition your feet to be in a more comfortable she-
>...
>Did she just take off her top?
>...
>Her lack of top certainly indicates so, but...
>Why?
>Your mind was racing, but the only tune it played was static as you start in childlike wonder at Sunsets tone body.
>It took you a while to make your way up to her quite red face.
>She was biting her lip and looks at you in anticipation for...?
>For an reaction, of course.
>Quick, tell her how outrageously beautiful she is and you can’t fathom how you’d ever deserve her.“Wow.”_________________
>You dun goofed.
>>27646181
I'll try anyway, okay?
also: 4011 characters, you've got to be fucking kidding me with this shit again
but hey, pastebin updated
http://pastebin.com/P4Mawhsw
>>27646185
>She giggles.
>“So, ‘Wow’, huh?”
>She then proceeds to lean down on you to give you another small peck on the lips.
>You could feel the warmth of her body, more intense than before
>And, yeah, you could also feel her breasts mush against your chest more than before.
>Almost automatically your hand makes it’s way up her back to feel her silky skin.
>As you reach her bra strap she gives you a small nod.
>You could almost feel her face burning from the inch it was away from you as you attempt to fulfill her wish and unclasp the bra with only one hand.
>The one and only time you had ever done something like that, you have had both your hands, and /her/ back had been to you so you could see what you were doing.
>Nonono, don’t think about that.
>This is Sunset.
>This is your girlfriend.
>Someone whom you actually...
>“I- I didn’t think, I- S-should I?”
>You give her a pained grin and she leans up again.
>As she put both her hands around her back your mind went to bad places again.
“No.”
>>27646195
>“Huh?”
“N-No, Sunset... I don’t think we should...”
>Nevermind the fact that it is day two of this relationship,
>You don’t think you’re capable of getting it on with her right now.
>You’re still completely flaccid, even though... everything.
>“Oh...”
>Sunset drops her arms and looks down at you almost disappointed
“It’s too soon, you know? Let’s just... cuddle, okay?”
>She looks off.
>You can’t quite place her expression but it wasn’t a happy one, so you pull her down on you again.
>“Ah-”
“I’m sorry, okay?”
>“Yeah... okay.”
>She says quietly, before continuing.
>“I mean, I do understand, it’s just that...”
>She sighs, and you embrace her more.
>She wanted this.
>Or at least she thought she wanted this right now.
>Which is pretty much the same thing, but even if you wouldn’t have performance issues right now, you’d still think it’s too soon.
>You let go of her again, if you do plan on cuddles, this was an awkward position.
>“No. I- It’s way too soon for...”
>She sighs again, but then proceeds to nuzzles into you.
>“Cuddles sound nice.”
“But we should maybe really get in... another position.”
>She looks back to both your legs tangling from the bed still.
>“Oh, yeah... of course.”
And, as always, i'd like your thoughts and for you to point iut my mistakes
shoild i put erectile dysfunction to anons list of powers on the chart?
>>27646232
You should give him rainbow powers, cause he's totally gaaayyyy
>>27646135
0:40
is that shrek?
This new emblem is killing me
>>27646252
So... transform, flight and enhanced speed
>>27646462
And his hair gets really long and poofy
>>27646452
it kinda clashes with the rest of the colours
if his suit had other colours, it could work
>>27646452
Step up senpai.
>>27646512
Why change the spider to white?
It's always been black for good reason
>>27646469
Not until later
>>27646512
>>27646452
>>27646232
Red white and blue
Looks like freedom
>>27646167
But we would appreciate it nontheless
>>27646512
Looks like what a surferdude might think after hearing the words "body armor".
>>27646512
What if they made the eyes and webs white
Maybe that could have worked better with the whole thing. Give him a more spacey element
>>27646835
Not right now
>>27647539
so many writefags, so much to discuss, yet we still have to bump
>>27646200
Aw, cute!
>>27646512
looks... not great
>>27647571
Well what do you want to discuss? Besides the new Spideran design
>>27647922
Don’t have one. Next question
>>27647944
What is your name?
>>27647999
Cecil Baldwin
>>27647999
Can’t you see it amove my responses?
That's my real name
>>27647999
upside down Satan demands it. YOU MUST OBEY
>>27648011
What is your quest?
>>27648012
Above
>>27647944
Who paid you to grab Dr Pavel?!
>>27647944
Where's Francis?
>>27648045
Wouldn’t you like to know.
>>27648057
In Florida
>>27648083
WHYDOYOUWANTTOKILLME!?!?!
>>27648094
Cause you have a bad case of explosions and it's contagious
>>27648172
What about my uncle?
Did you give him a chance?!
>>27648209
That was the other guy that killed him. Man get your facts straight
>>27648217
Have you ever danced with the devil in the pale moon light?
>>27648235
Yes and we had a wonderful time
>>27643505
this is relevant: http://imgur.com/gallery/6zmqd
ok i gotta ask thi9s brcause i couldnt find anything on the internet and im not that much of a comic reader myself. Is there a marvel character/villain with glass related powers?
>>27648622
http://lmgtfy.com/?q=list+of+super+power+glass
>>27648622
Just Flint (Sandman) after Wizard training.
(The character Wizard, not an actual wizard).
>>27648694
>implying Wizard is no real wizard
>>27648622
I guess technically anyone with earth related abilities could have glass powers. Even more so if they have a mix of fire and earth
But as for a character I can't think of one
>>27648709
Look, until he starts every attack with an inchatation involving either Agamotto, Dormammu, Cyttorak or another dude with repeating consonants he is no wizard.
>>27648694
wait so ive reaed his wiki but id never mentioned anything about him having permanent glass powers. but he DOES have them permanently?
>>27648729
>Glass Generation: More recently, the Sandman learned some new tricks from the Wizard, including altering the formation of his sand particles and reshaping them into glass. This grants him the ability to reflect light and energy off of him.
But is timeline-dependant, so it's your call.
>>27648768
seriously, its the only option i have to have Smile get into a fight were he atleast gets injured so i guess ill have to take it
>>27648792
Try a power suppresor. There is a startling number of those things going around earth 616.
>>27648812
thanks i guess i found a good opponent
>>27648812
but its kinda weird that the fan wiki lists a lot of power negators and doesnt mention how they negate it like emplate
>>27649109
Comic book logic.
There you go
>>27649109
Generally speaking, you either null the specific radiation, or suppress the MGH. Or both.
Rather new to this thread, I want to write something but it wouldn't exactly be Spider-shim but rather some other capey story Would that be okay? If not I'll just read some of this green here and snap it shut.
>>27649192
>>27649239
well i have finally actually found a suitable opponent for Smile. Shes not gonna injure him, but she might bring him at the bring of death or even further
>>27649395
dude as far as i know basicly all superhero green is ok
>>27649395
At this point? You could have a MLP EG Magic the Gathering green and we wouldb't stop you.
Capes are most welcome.They make the hero-killer's job so much easier
>>27649434
did you want to remind me of her? cause you did
>>27649395
more people!
It's getting crowded in here and I feel like we need to start making short descriptions of our stories
untitled 7 - http://pastebin.com/P4Mawhsw
anon's dad struck a deal with hydra to save him now anon has a healing factor
yadda yadda, he builts a superior spider-man like techwear to court Spider-Woman, things go bad, romance is awkward but more realistic than what you'd expect. Meanwhile Sunset needs to sign a kind of sokovia accord to continue being Spider-woman or quit doing it.
It's complicated
Beans - http://pastebin.com/yNaJFuz0
kinda started this all, now he goes in and out of a coma
Anon has Ryan Reynolds genes (his father is pre-cancer Dadpool) and gets in trouble with all the supervillainesses.
treppahcs - http://pastebin.com/ps2Ts8J1
Anon has inherited powers from his parents (Infamous) and begins dating Sunset simultaneously.
Sunset and the Mane 6, as Spider-woman and the Power Ponies, meanwhile try to catch him for being an vigilante.
The Rabble - http://pastebin.com/7awBpgv8
Anon gets Mimic powers after popping a phial after the death of his sciency father. Evil secret organization had wanted that phial, looks promising
Voidborn - http://pastebin.com/VRcwJQfG
Anon has to kill and take people to the void so it doesn't happen to him (League inspired)
not much content yet, and hasn't posted in a week, presumed dead
Most other stuff I have to catch up on
>>27649622
you seem to have forgotten Shocker, he was the first writefag in this thing after all.
>>27649643
>no superkeaton
>no Red
>no 3 Suns
>no Klyntar
>no shadowanon
>complains about lack of guy who never made a paste
>>27649667
I'm mostly butthurt over the lack of acknowledgement for the first writefag on this thread. His story might have gone to shit, he might not have a paste, but he was still the first.
>>27649729
I wish he was here more often
>>27649667
>never made a paste
You can clearly see it on the list
>>27649622
not dead, prewriting!
>>27649807
sweet! when post?
>>27649817
when I think it's good enoughso, soon™
>>27649830
the hype is real!
>>27649830
>>27650028
>when the Oscar is just right
>>27650040
Kek
>>27650040
Extremely short update, just to remind people I'm not dead. I'll write again soon
>You are Sunset Shimmer
>Also known...
>JESUS CHRIST
>You break your alarm clock into pieces!
>You swear it's gotten louder
>Anyway
>You are Sunset Shimmer
>Also known as The Spider
>And you've just been rudely awaken by your alarm clock
>You get out of bed
>Your naked body sticky from sweat
>Last night was so hot, you could barely sleep
>You changed a couple of shirt when finally you decided to sleep in the nude
>You walk to the bathroom and take a nice cold shower
>After you are done, you start rummaging for a some clean clothes
>Turns out you used up most of your shirts last night
>Great
>Although, your new found friend did manage to wip you up a costume
>Maybe it could fashion you up some clothes to wear
>You concentrate for a bit
>Goo slithers over your body
>Now you've got a nice black t-shirt and a pair of pants
>You can say goodbye to the washing machine
>You fix yourself a quick snack and head to school
>>27650138
>I'm not dead
>>27650138
>>27650182
seriously though. always glad to get a update from you Red
>>27650138
>>27650182
You were just sleeping?
Nice to read you anyways.
>>27650138
>Symbiote is the only thing covering her body
>>27649395
>>27649407
>>27649434
>>27649622
Okay, finished writing it out. There's quite a bit incoming.
> You are….bored.
> Kicking your feet up and loosening your tie you couldn't help but let out an annoyed sigh.
> One of the many people around you let out a quick, snappy hush.
> You blew a raspberry as Celestia's voice slowly crept back into your ears.
> “We thank you all for devoting your time to help us with this journey. As you all know my sister and I have been maintaining this school for about fifteen years, between that and saving the world many times you can tell that we're more than grateful to have some extra hands around here.”
> A collective laugh was shared among the flood of bodies in the auditorium.
> What!?
> It wasn't even that funny.
> You should rewind a little bit….
> For what reason you ask?
> No idea, you felt like it had to do with something called a 'plotline'.
> “Stay away!”
> A body frantically scrambled away from you in the darkness.
> All around you lay bullet shells, groaning bodies, and scraps of metal that were once vehicles.
> You have been hunting this group of thugs for…
> You didn't even know how long, nor did you care.
> All you knew was that you managed to catch them in some backwater neighborhood.
> Right now you had the boss of the whole operation in front of you.
> “W-What the hell are you!?”
> You shrugged.
> “Don't shrug you jackass! You ate my bullets!”
“Eh… and you ate my time man, it seems like a fair trade-off.”
> “Ate your ti- Look, it doesn't matter.”
> He gestured to the destruction around him. “Look at all this maaan, I'll tell you what if you let me go I can get you anything you want!”
“Anything…?”
> “A-Anything….” He cleared his throat and flicked his eyes down. “Anything, if you're into that kind of thing.”
> Man he was desperate.
“Send me a picture of you behind bars, how about that?”
> You knew a lonely prisoner who would be happy to see him.
>>27650509
> He gritted his teeth and began to reach into his sports jacket.
> “You piece of-”
> Before he could finish that sentence he whipped out a pistol.
> Without hesitation he unloaded straight into your chest, each bullet felt like a punch as it slammed into your chest, a thud residing with each impact.
> Bang! Bang! Bang! Click….
> He repeatedly squeezed the trigger, hoping for another bullet to come out and finish the job.
> You simply looked down at your chest.
“Too slow on that one.”
> The crumpled husks of the bullets slowly fell from your chest, the little craters formed from impact slowly pushing back upwards.
> The boss was shaking with fear.
> “Y-you're some kinda freak man.”
> You simply shrugged.
> With that you threw your fist forwards, your muscles stretching at the fore-arm and rocketing it towards his face.
> What was once ten feet of space between the two of you was no problem as your arm extended straight into the fool's face.
> With one last yelp he was out like a light, the gun flying out of his hand in the process.
> With a grunt you let your arm retract backwards, snapping back into place.
> You flexed your fingers and smacked your lips out of disappointment.
> You still had to do it…
“Patcha~!”
> Your catchphrase, you were told it made women into waterfalls.
> ….By yourself.
“Thought you guys would be worse than that.”
> You really did, this gang had been on the radar for quite a few heroes for the last year or so.
> They even managed to hold off entire waves of heroes with their heavy weaponry, military-like tactics, and yadda-yadda whatever most of them weren't gonna be walking straight for you don't even care.
> Truth be told this business was getting kinda boring, you only started it because it seemed like you could've made a change in the world.
> You did, just not in the way you thought.
>>27650518
> When you were younger you had been playing on the playground with a couple other kids when suddenly you found the monkeybars bending whenever you tried to jump on them.
> After that in your preteens you threw a shit-fit playing runescape and obliterated every glass object in your house when your voice reached one-hundred and ninety two decibels.
> Thank goodness nobody had been home at the time.
> A lot of weird things had happened after that, you once glided, you've always landed on your feet, you bent a knife when someone tried to stab you.
> Turns out you had the power to manipulate your body, you figured that out after some research.
> Comics and hero porn.
> So you decided to vigilantly do something about the cr-
> Someone was chuckling kind of evilly somewhere.
> You snapped out of your powerful and awe-inspiring story and whirled around, catching a hooded figure sitting on top of a flipped truck.
> It clapped with amusement and laughed.
> Whoever it was had a feminine voice and a rather...shapely figure under that black robe.
“What's up?”
> This chick looked kinda evil, maybe she would make this night worth your while.
> Suddenly she reached up and threw the hood back, the wall of darkness disappearing instantly and showing none other than Luna…. Last name.
> You were sure she had one, you never cared to look into any other details other than that she was kind of pretty and her powers.
> As well as some of her and her sisters feats.
> Luna from what you had always seen was an attractive girl, she was sleek, smooth-skinned and probably smelled nice.
> A little adjustment to your biology and you could confirm from here that she smelled nice.
> She had pale blue skin, followed up by a midnight blue hairstyle that just kind of splayed over her shoulders.
> Two amused, cat-like eyes stared into your own, her amused smile and the moonlight only highlighting her blue orbs, almost making them seemingly glow.
>>27650526
> The woman gave you a cocky smirk and nodded towards the destruction you caused.
> “Never seen someone wipe out a gang so fast, let alone the Screaming Eagles.”
> It was a badass name...a steal, but a badass name nonetheless.
“Well… yeah I guess.”
> Had this been a couple more years ago you would be gloating but truth be told you hated the fact that you took this job up.
> So stressful.
> Luna gave you an amused smile.
> “My sister and I have had an eye on you for awhile… we have an offer.”
> And that's how you ended up here.
> Luna offered you a job teaching at their school, Canterlot High!
> She made it so...pretty.
> Oh no wait you were just looking at her again, get a grip of yourself.
> Anyway, Canterlot High from what you remembered after frantically googling it all night was a school for heroes, run by Luna and her sister Celestia.
> As it turns out it was one of many schools for heroes that popped up after powers began to overtake the human population.
> The two principles of the school were known and loved all throughout the world for saving this big, blue orb many, many times.
> A short rundown is that they decided to step out of the game for a while and rather than play heroes, train heroes.
> At first you thought the whole idea was too campy for your tastes but when you reached the (rather massive, holy shit this place is like a castle and a castle had sex and made an even bigger castle) estate you had been pleasantly surprised to see that this place was more like a military base than anything else.
> The kids studied hard, they had a workout regiment eachone HAD to stick to on top of the option to take even more physical fitness classes.
> There were classes for super-powered warfare, villain psychology, battle tactics, magic, advanced science, history of powers, yadda-yadda.
> On top of that they also had… well, regular school stuff, math, history, science, you know.
> It was kind of...neat.
>>27650537
> So here you were, attending a seminar that had all of the new teachers, and the old ones gathered in the massive shell of an auditorium.
> While the two went on and on about how grateful they were for every-bodies help you couldn't help but wonder why they bought you in.
> You were a free-lancer, you never worked with anybody, in fact most of the other heroes were scared of you.
> Yeah an eccentric personality and a vivid imagination mixed with the ability to manipulate your body was actually considered extreme risk apparently.
> You just twiddled your thumbs as the girls went on, waiting for them to finish.
> There were some hot teachers here, you wouldn't be surprised if half of these guys weren't fresh outta school themselves.
> “Thank you for listening, for the new teachers, thank you for coming, your tasks and jobs as new teachers will be pinned right outside the door. I'm afraid my sister and I are rather busy, but we spent a whole week putting everybody in jobs that suited their talents. If you feel like you should be swapped out for another subject you can set up an appointment with the schools attendant. Thank you very much.”
> The two walked off of the stage as everybody began to get out of their seats, heading towards the exits of the auditorium.
> You got a quick stretch in before hopping out of your own seat.
> Unfortunately you did this a little to eagerly, bumping into some short, soft blob.
> Oh no wait it was some really cute chick.
> She let out a yelp as she nearly jumped out of her skin.
> She caught herself, composing herself and awkwardly coughing.
> You quirked a brow as she cleaned off her plain outfit, a yellow blouse and a beige skirt.
> She was really small, in fact you were sure she was even short for a girls standards.
> All you could see was the top of her green hair… err….aqua blue-greenish really.
> She suddenly snapped her face up to yours, giving you a look like a deer caught in headlights.
>>27650551
> She had some really -Aesthetic- doe-like eyes that matched the color of her hair.
> “Um-Uhm-Uhhh...”
“Uh...it's cool. I was my bad mam.”
> You awkwardly reached up and patted her head.
> What the fuck, why did you just pat her headthisgirlswasgonnaalreadybetheendofyoutimetowalkaway.avi
> You spun on your heel and began to march away, whistling to yourself.
> “Wait!”
“F-”
> “You're Anonymous right!? The Apex!”
> You cringed internally.
> You hated that 'hero' name, some crappy local newpaper deemed you the Apex because well, your power made it easy to take just about anything that came your way.
> You would have named yourself Captain Molecule.
> …
> Okay, maybe the Apex was better than that as… out there as the name was.
> Oh shit you were stuck in thought again.
“Y-Yeah.”
> You turned around and fixed your collar, ignoring the fact that this three piece suit was cheap as all hell.
“T-That's me...”
> The girl gasped and suddenly pulled out a large notebook.
> “M-May I get your autograph!”
“Uhhh...”
> She held the notebook out there, eagerly eying you.
> What happened to the cute, shy personality awhile ago?
“Sure...”
> You once again, with awkwardness, signed your name among some others plastered throughout the pages.
> “Thank you so much! I'm trying to get all the good heroes autographs...”
> She seemed to revert to shyness again, refusing to meet your gaze once more. “I'm such a huge fan.”
> Really!?
“Really!?”
> “Oh yes! I heard about your fight with the Titan! I had to watch it myself after that.” She suddenly leaned forward and examined you, once again dropping the shy act.
> “What happened to your two other arms? The horns? Can you still lift a whole gas truck? It was soooo cool seeing you pick it up and slam it into that meanie. You were all like 'Boom!' and then you pointed your finger at him and went 'Patcha~!' It was so awesome!”
>>27650556
> Holy shit she even mimed your action.
> You couldn't help but laugh nervously and rub the back of your head.
> She spoke with such excitement about your actions that the stares she was starting to get went unnoticed.
> Before she could go on any longer (As much as you enjoyed it) you reached down and stopped her.
“Look, it's cool and all you're into what I do. But uh… keep it on the downlow, I am still kind of...not all that welcome getwhatIamsaying?”
> “Oohhh...” She blushed and snapped her mouth shut. “I'm sorry...I do get a little carried away sometimes.”
“It's fine, just uh…. I'm sorry what was your name again?”
> “Coco Pommel. Nice to meet you.”
> You patted her shoulder and gave her a thumbs up.
“Okaaay...so, do you know where the jobs are at?”
> “Oh yes. Right this way!”
> The two of you talked even more on your way to the pinned sheets.
> The more you learned of this girl the more you kind of liked her, but in a big brother way if it made any sense…
> Your dick did not think it made any sense.
> She had applied because her powers were not strong enough to put her in the field, nor did she posses the desire to fight others, in fact she had already been training to be a teacher and this seemed like the perfect job for her.
> You could respect that, she had a neat power that you took note of too.
> Whatever she touched seemed to be reinvigorated almost instantly.
> In fact while the two of you talked and headed towards the jobs she even demonstrated and touched a couple of dying plants on the way here, each and every one instantly sprouting up and looking like new.
> It wasn't long before you made your way to the crowd of teachers which were held in order by a pair of burly droids, a chorus of murmurs arose among the crowd.
> You and Coco talked much more, waiting to step forward throughout the line.
> After a couple of minutes of waiting you finally got to see what the deal was.
>>27650562
> Coco was pleased right off the bat, talking about how she had gotten medicine.
> You simply chuckled and scanned the list silently.
> There you were.
> …
“Power Disciplinary Actions?”
> Coco gasped and put a hand over her mouth.
> “Oh dear.”
> All the other teachers in the area seemed to stop, everybody slowly turning to stare at you.
> Whispers rose among the crowd.
> “He's dead meat.”
> “Not even the Apex can deal with those kids.”
> “Oh no, there goes another poor soul.”
> As everybody talked all you could see them as was a bunch of shadowy gremlins, laughing mischievously as they whispered and talked about you.
> Malicious smiles even began to form on their faces as your mind worked to fill them into that role.
> “Oh… Anon are you sure you can take it?”
“I don't even know what 'it' is.”
> “Oh you poor fool.” A foppish, balding man stepped forward, huffing as he wiped sweat from his fore-head and adjusted his glasses. “The Power Disciplinary Action is a class for those who cannot control their powers or their selves, all the notorious kids are sent to this class in order to get themselves back on track.”
> “I heard they killed the last teacher.” Someone muttered from the crowd.
> “Worse than that mang.” Some flashy looking guy said pushing forward. “I heard they ATE the last guy.”
> Okay, obviously these guys were blowing things way out of proportion.
> You waved everybody off and shook your head.
“Shame on ya'll. These are your students you're talking about, you don't do that. I'm not even a real teach and I know that.”
> This seemed to quiet the others down, everybody watching as you stepped forward and tapped your name twice.
> As much as you hated this business, and you would have a serious talk with Luna later… you knew from all your years of experience that no-one was above a little redemption.
> You were sure you could handle whatever was thrown your way.
>>27650575
> You lowered the paper and scratched your head.
> Coco had been worried about you to no end, even profusely asking if you were sure you wanted to take this job.
> You also had to tell her many times that you could handle it.
> But uh…
> You weren't expecting this.
> First of all, you were just fresh off of a path that twisted and crawled out from a thick forest which effectively separated the castle of the school away from this shabby little building.
> A sandy clearing that lead into a plain was off behind the rundown building, which seemed to be no bigger than a small house.
> You could already hear a ruckus going on inside.
> Eh…
> You stepped forward and opened the door.
“Hello, I'll be your new teach-”
> A beam of blue light whizzed past your head, your instincts prompting you to dodge it just in time.
> “What did you just say about Trixie you two-bit sleaze!?”
> “You heard me! Clean your ears once in awhile you slut!”
> …
> Oh boy, here we go.
That's all at the moment. Tell me what you guys think, I'll make a paste if it's well-received.
>>27650597
im getting some real Deadpool vibes from this green.i like it
>>27650597
I NEED MOAR!
>>27650597
good stuff anon. please do more!
>>27650597
Awesome.
Snag a name and throw up a paste if you like, I'll be keeping track of this.
>>27639535
(from pastebin)
>the school day has ended, you encounter with Vinyl easily being the most memorable moment of it
>she was a reminder that you need to keep yourself in check, and confirmed that you and Spiderwoman are not the only ones out there with
>as she put it, 'special talents'
>and there is no one who would want to know more than the guy walking down the street with you
>Norman.
>"and after that my day is pretty much clear. A few of the guys wanted to head over to Flash's and hang out if you're interested."
>for once you are excited to say these words, and not because you are blowing off Norman.
>that would be a dick move.
"I have a lot of homework to do. I still have to make up that stuff from before."
>"you sure man?
>you nod
>"well, alright. You'll know where I'll be if you want to meet up later. Or just give me a shout and we'll hang!"
>you wave as Norman heads down the street as you turn down your own
>your house is a welcome sight and you casually walk inside dropping your bag to the floor and taking a seat on the couch
>reaching down into your backpack you pull out your notebook with a few simple doodles inside with names and words spread out over the page
>words and names like "Copycat" "Ditto" "Reflection" "Duplicate" "Mockery"
>the last one just ended up reminding you of a rather funny Canadian
>you drop the notebook on the table to your side
>why are you even bothering with all that nonsense?
>you stare at the page for a moment in silence
>If you do what you were just imagining on that page then you would be no better than Spiderwoman
>you reach for the page to rip it from your notebook as someone knocks on the door getting your attention
"someones here?"
>the first thought that comes to mind is the possibility of news reporters or some journalist who wants to get more information on your recent history
>both with the fire downtown and with your father.
>you get up from the couch and close the notebook before answering the door
"hello?"
>>27651011
>you are taken aback by the sight of several uniformed personnel standing on or near your yard
>the man at the front smiles and extends his hand to shake your hand
>but to his unnoticeable disappointment you don't shake it
>"Hello my name is Agent Orange, my colleagues and I would like to talk to you about recent events."
>Uniformed men outnumber you at home
>one is Agent Orange
>and you could swear you hear "It Ain't Me" start to play in the background
>Orange smiles nicely and keeps his hand extended now motioning to the house
>"may we come in?"
>you take a second to look over all the individuals in the group before deciding you don't really have a choice
>if they really wanted in they would already be there
>At least this why you are avoiding any conflict
"sure."
>Agent Orange lightly speaks the words "thank you" as you let him and the others inside
>In all five enter your house and one waits outside by the door closing it for you
>the ones who do enter, excluding Agent Orange, stand in the four corners of the room while Orange casually walks into the living room
>"this is a really nice house."
>slowly you follow him inside the living room as he looks around admiring the place
>or at least acting like he is.
>he motions to the chair next to the couch
>"may I?"
>it takes you a second to realize he is asking to sit down
"sure, make yourself at home."
>again he smiles at you and takes a seat with an exaggerated "Ahhhh"
>you take a seat on the couch furthest away from where he is sitting and look around at the others in the room
>they all have black shades covering their eyes and you spot a gun under one of the men's uniform
>it gets you a little on edge
>Agent Orange sees this and sits up properly and takes on a business tone
>"So, Anonymous."
>your attention goes back to being on him
>"We understand that your father has recently passed."
>>27651024
>you remain silent, but nod.
>"Well, he was working on something really... really... dangerous. Both to himself and everyone else."
>he leans in a bit staring you down slightly
>"Do you know anything about it?"
"No. My father kept his experiments to himself, the only time I ever got a chance to see anything was the night he died..."
>Agent Orange nods
>"I understand. I know this must be difficult for you, but Im going to need you to tell me the truth Anonymous."
>one of the people in uniform, the closest one, a woman, takes a step forward putting her right next to you
>"Its very important we know the truth here. And we will get it, by whatever means nessisary..."
>you feel a cold sweat come over you and your heart starts to race nearly bursting from your chest
"I- I dont-"
>the woman places her hand on your shoulder causing you to flinch slightly
>"Anonymous, Where is your dads lab? Maybe that can help us."
>your eyes glance over to the door to the basement as you rack your brain trying to remember if you cleaned up the glass on the floor or if you put the tile back
>for the life of you, you cant remember.
>Agent Orange looks to where your eyes pointed and he points to the door
>"there?"
>your voice is too shaky to speak so you nod your head
>with hand motion two of the four uniformed personnel go over to the door and go down to the basement
>"while my friends check the lab, perhaps I should tell you about why Im here."
>Agent Orange takes a pistol out from under his uniform and places it on the table
>"I represent a special division of government dedicated to protecting the citizens of the world from that which they cannot understand and in most cases, even know about."
>your force yourself to laugh and wipe your forehead of any sweat
"What? like the Men in Black or something?"
>Agent Orange chuckles a bit
>"something like that."
>one of the agents comes back from the basement
>>27651030
>there is a wave of relief that washes over you at those words
>you must have cleaned up the mess
>after a brief acknowledgement Orange turns back to you
>"well thats that."
>Orange stands up grabbing his pistol as he does so and takes a few steps towards the door before turning around waving his finger
>"Ah, there's just one thing though..."
>Orange flips the safety on his sidearm off
>"see, this information needs to stay hidden."
>that relief you had seems to have vanished again
>the sound of Agent Orange voice echos in your radio
>"this information needs to stay hidden."
>that's the signal the commander informed you about
"Let go! we have a few seconds to secure the package and the asset!"
>the sound of your team readying their weapons in the armored van is all the acknowledgement you need
>you grab your MP5k quickly loading a mag and chamber a round
>the voice of your operations leader comes over your personal comms
>"the Agents in Wonderbolts standard personnel uniform are to be treated as hostiles. Their sacrifice is nessisary for the greater good"
"Understood."
>the Van comes to a quick stop and the back door is quickly opened as your team rushes out of the Van weapons ready
>the Agent at the door doesn't react to your advance and nods at your arrival just to be shot by suppressed weaponry tearing a hole in the door behind him
>their is the sound of something smacking against wood as Agent Orange points his sidearm at you
>the both of you look to the door and see several holes letting light shine through before its quickly kicked in and men in black and white uniforms rush inside weapons drawn
>one of the agents draws their own weapon and takes aim
>"what is thi-"
>the coordinated team fires taking him down cutting his sentence short
>Orange is distracted and the other Agents are reacting to the sudden assault by taking cover in your house
>>27651040
>you feel your body reacting out of reflex as you kick Orange in the stomach causing him to drop his weapon
>you stand up as fast as you can and throw a punch which he easily blocks before his own punch impacts with your gut
>he's clearly been trained for this
>so that means you have too.
>you feel your body again go into a strange auto-pilot state
>Orange goes to punch you again, but this time your body reacts for your mind
>as the punch comes at you, instead of blocking it you pull your arm up and deflect it leaving him open
>with your other arm you strike swiftly with your arm like a snake
>your fist forms mid punch and impacts his trachea crushing it
>he grabs his neck desperate for air and you unleash a quick barrage of strikes putting him on the ground
"I suppose I knew a few more things about it."
>the whole scene is playing out in front of you from your monitor
>as the fight goes on and the lambs are sacrificed before your eyes all you care about is what just played out in the corner of the screen
>you reach for your communicator and speak to the operations leader in charge of this whole facade
"Package is no longer required, the asset is your only priority."
>You know what you saw
>Anonymous has found what his father was working on
>not only did he find it, but he tested it.
>you smile and put down the communicator
>over the fight you barely make out his words
>"I suppose I knew a few more things about it."
"That you do Anonymous. That you do."
>he clearly takes after his Mother.
>>27651052
>before you can celebrate your awesome victory the men in black and white uniforms rush over to you while continuing to fire at the Agents
>one of them pushes you down slightly making you duck
>you would resist but he seems to be doing it more for your safety than for any harm.
>"Package and asset are secure!"
>some of the armed men start to pull you away from the fight covering you with their own weapons and even their bodies
>quickly you are rushed outside your house and to the Van where a few more men are standing guard
>the man ushers you inside the van and closes the door as the men outside pile in leaving the group inside the house behind with another van waiting for them
>before you can get you bearings in the armored transport the men inside are already checking you for wounds
>"Are you alright? Do you feel any pain or bleeding?"
"Im fine, Im fine."
>the van bumps every few seconds causing you to lose balance now and then
>one of the men removes his white mask and goggles and smiles at you
>"good."
>he reaches up grabbing one of the radios
>"Asset is secure and unharmed. How's clean up?"
>there is a bit of static before he gets a response
>"House is clear of hostiles, all targets accounted for."
>ok you have to ask
"What the hell is going on?"
>the Man smiles again and relaxes as best he can in the roughly bouncing vehicle
>"You're real lucky kiddo. You were almost 'protected' by the Wonderbolts."
>Wonderbolts?
"who are the Wonderbolts?! And for that matter who are you guys?"
>the man reaches forward and pats you on the shoulder
>"dont worry kid, we are the good guys."
>one of the other men by the door speak up followed by the other
>"Freedom Fighters."
>"Fighting for the freedom of all men and women who want peace from captivity."
>the man in front of you speaks again
>"we are S.O.M.B.R.A."
>>27651059
end post.
hope you enjoy!
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>>27651024
I have no clue what just happened
>>27651073
I continued a post from my pastebin.
>>27651101
I read it all, I'm just having a bit of trouble figuring out who's the good guys and who's the bad guys
>>27651123
thats kind of the idea. but if you need an explanationin my previous update i wrote that uniforms were "borrowed" from captive Wonderbolts. held by S.O.M.B.R.A, those Agents in the uniforms are not actually Wonderbolts but S.O.M.B.R.A operatives who were killed to make the rescue seem authentic
TL;DRFalse flag operation
>>27651123
Nobody is good, everyone is working for their own ends, I'm guessing. Wonderbolts, Sombra, only individual like Sunset or Anon are "good"
>>27651152
This is getting into Winter Soldier levels of confusing spy stuff
>>27651168
no war is ever black and white.
those waged in the shadows are no exception
>>27651316
Oh, how poetic of you.
>>27646200
Did i just wittness anon not wanting to at least play with sunsets boobs when cuddling?!?!? She practicaly threw herself onto him, sounding like there would be a waterfall in her panties and he didnt even get hard?!? Shouldnt he at least be somewhat turned on? Its fucking sunset shimmer wanting to show you her boobs and he just kills the vibe, like: nope, not even gonna bother to at least look at them. Either we have the gayest or the most autistic anon ever written, but most certainly the biggest joykill. Just think how sunset would feel. She wants to make it up to him for running away and he isnt into you kissing him and afterwards when you want to show him your goods he is just like: "For the love of god keep that clothes on, and btw my feet are uncomfortable." That is just mean to her implying that her body isnt hot enough for him to want her enough to even just score second base when she offers him. Even as i understand that you want him to be a more caring and concerned partner for her, this just sounds like he is a legit dick and/or not even interessted in her. Usually love your green untitled but i just cant shake the feeling that this scene would just make sunny feel unappreciated and undesirable.
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>>27650628
Thanks guys. I'll make the paste shortly. I was gonna write some more out tonight cause I really don't have much going on. So expect some more posts tonight.
>>27651945
???
Who are you?
Why would I wait almost a year for you?
>>27651794
I think you might be reading too far into it.
He's just uncomfortable and feels that they're moving too quickly.
At least, that's how I read it.
>>27650597
> The scene before you wasn't exactly all you had expected.
> You counted nine kids in total, and boy oh boy, they had some impersonations for you right off the bat.
> The first two you had noticed were two girls all up in each others faces.
> Both of the girls were so close to eachother they could practically kiss, one of them had a red and yellow hairstyle that reminded you of… pizza… you had a strong urge to say bacon but it was definitely pizza. Her outfit was simple and flashy in its own way, a jacket over a purple shirt and a decorated skirt.
> The other girl though…. Oh lord she was so flashy.
> She bore a purple jumpsuit that should've been covered by her cloak. The same stars and moon spotted cloak that was currently billowing in the wind as she gave the pizza-hair a look of utter frustration. She used one hand to grip her hat and the other to point what looked to be a wand down at the pizza-hair.
> Just beyond those two girls was an incredibly tall girl who leaned against the wall and lazily watched the two of them, cheering for them both to attack eachother. She had snow white hair which was cut into what you referred to as a 'dyke-cut', which was essentially a combed-over mohawk. Her golden eyes watched with anticipation as the two girls looked ready to tear eachothers throats out.
> “Do it come on!”
> Before you studied the others you should seriously break up this little feud.
> These kids were your responsibility now afterall.
“Hey, Hey, break it up.”
> You moved in between the two of them, earning a surprised once-over from both parties.
> The wizard looking girl twisted her face up into a rather unsightly sneer.
> “Trixie has not seen you around here before. Who are you!? Trixie demands to know!”
> “You idiot.” The Pizza-head started. “He's a new lacky. Sent by the principles to keep us in check.”
> Before you could interject the one known as Trixie let out a huff of air.
>>27652452
> “I knew we wouldn't be free forever.”
“Look. I'm uh, here to help. So if you two could calm down, tell me your names, and help me sort everything out I'm sure-”
> CRACK!
> The world spun as you tumbled over yourself.
> It didn't take long for you to recover, your body instantly adjusting itself for balance.
> As you landed in a rather fashionable way you could feel something trickling down your nose.
> Been a looong time since someone got a shot in on you.
> You bought your hand up, feeling the warm liquid slide down your face.
“What the hell!?”
> That one with the white hair reeled back from her punch, an amused look on her stupid face.
> She simply shrugged.
> “Sorry man, that's how I say high.”
> You picked yourself up and glared at the girls, all three of them shooting you an amused look.
> “We're not here for your amusement dork.” The white-haired one said.
> “And whatever those two mary sues told you Trixie is not looking for reformation.”
> As the girls shot you cocky smiles all you could think of was one thing.
> Terrifying the living piss out of them.
> Sharp teeth, tentacles, horns, crazy speed.
> As you began to focus on these heavy footsteps moved towards you.
> What now.
“What is it-”
> You stopped as a mountain of a man loomed over you.
> He didn't say anything and simply turned from you and towards the girls.
> He stood with a stoic silence in front of you, his muscles practically bulging against jeans and t-shirt.
> “….”
“Uhhh...”
> Suddenly with a grunt he turned to the girls.
> They instantly backed down, each one cowering away save for the white-haired one.
> She continued to glare at the mountain before skulking off into the corner.
> You straightened upwards, your body taking away the minor changes that had started.
“What.”
> You reached up and prodded your nose.
> Gah, she got you good.
> This would be an easy fix for someone like you but it would be painful as all hell.
>>27652465
“Thank you...uh”
> You waited as he slowly turned around to greet you.
“...”
> “...”
“...”
> “...”
> “!” He suddenly seemed to realize you were hurt. “?”
> You felt like he was trying to see if you were okay.
“I'm fine…”
> You waved him away, heading to the desk at the front of the classroom.
> Not even five minutes in and one of the students is already punching a new teacher.
> You could see why the others were scared of this place.
> That bull-dyke packed a punch anyway, what did SHE have? Super-strength, you wouldn't be surprised.
> You plopped down at your desk and studied the kids in the room.
> The mountain was back at his desk, calmly reading a book.
> Okay, first thing was first, forgive and forget.
> If you let the fact that she hit you get to you then you could kiss any chance of helping these kids goodbye.
> Let's have a look at the files shall we.
> You searched the desk not for a minute before you found a folder containing information on each and every kid in this class.
> The first was Sunset Shimmer, she had been the one feuding with Trixie.
> She was in here because she got a little too power hungry one day during the Canterlot Ball.
> Man...she had some bad stuff in here. Brainwashing, property damage, assault.
> The only reason she wasn't in jail was per request of Luna and Celestia, those two were way more forgiving than you thought.
> Oddly enough her powers and ability weren't on file.
> You moved on to Trixie herself, otherwise known as Trixie Lulamoon.
> She was an egotistical, hedonistic, borderline sociopath who was thrown in here because she...turned a guy who rejected her into a frog and kept him as a pet for five days.
> ...Yeesh.
> She had some cool tricks up her sleeve...literally. She was one of those super-powered magicians you had heard about.
> Wew lad, right direction that magic could make her a fucking powerhouse.
> Next up were two girls of Asian descent.
>>27652478
> Aloe and Lotus.
> They had complete control of their powers...just not of themselves.
> Turns out the two would never leave each-others side, always in class together, at lunch together, or fighting together.
> Aloe controlled water while Lotus controlled wind.
> They were in here because one of the dude-bros tried to hit on one of them.
> Loe and behold, Aloe and behold…
> You chuckled to yourself.
> They didn't take his advances too well.
> Also you were sure they knew martial arts, but you would keep that to yourself.
>….
> Moving on.
> The man mountain who scared off the girls from earlier was a student Big Macintosh.
> He was well-reserved, respectful, well-mannered.
> You flipped through his files trying to figure out why the hell he was here then.
> Oh.
> You stopped on a picture clipped onto the folder, it was Big Mac standing over a couple of kids writhing in pain.
> He ended up breaking all of the strongest kids arms in an arm-wrestling competition.
> No control of his power...got it and moving on.
> You came to two… special looking boys.
> Snips was the first one, the pudgy little bugger had matter consumption apparently...bad thing? He was apparently super socially awkward and had quite an appetite.
> Snails was the opposite, he was successful in the social setting but only when he talked from afar.
> The poor kid had...well acid breath, all he had to do was breath and shit would erode faster than you could say 'Patcha~!'.
> Sucked because he was a mouth-breathing idiot.
> ...Put in a nice way of course.
> The next one you moved onto was some kid called Flash Sentry. He seemed off quite well, super-speed, popular jockish type.
> Turns out though he was kind of a dickhead and constantly bully others, playing incredibly mean tricks and what not.
> Must be fun with that super-speed.
>>27652499
> The last student was the one who socked you in the face, Gilda as the file called her.
> She had enhanced...well everything.
> Should've been able to tell by those sick abs she had.
> Enhanced strength, enhanced senses, enhanced stamina, enhanced endurance.
> She was just made to be the perfect huntress.
> You see.
> You put the file down and examined the room.
> Trixie and Sunset were back to arguing, just less boisterous this time.
> Gilda was glaring daggers at you.
> Big Mac simply read his book silently.
> Snips and Snails were off in the corner, both of them playing some kind of game on their phones. They chatted amongst themselves, oblivious to everything that went down.
> You flicked your gaze to Aloe and Lotus who stared at you silently, seemingly waiting for you to do something other than sit here and take a punch.
> Finally you stopped.
> Where was that flash character?
> A dash of wind zipped past you, halting to a stop across the room.
> Flash was suddenly at one of the desks, whistling to himself while twiddling his thumbs.
> …
> Whatever, whatever cruel prank he played you didn't care.
> You stood up and turned to the chalk board.
“Hello class.”
> You wiped the old teachers name off of the board.
“I'll be your teacher from now on.”
> “Trixie does not think you know what you're talking about.”
> “Kick her ass!”
> “Well maybe if SOMEONE would take my advice maybe you would actually hear what I am-”
> “Trixie has wonderful ears! Do not suggest otherwise!”
> “Yeah! Come on you two!”
> …
> You turned back to the girls who ignored you and continued on with their banter.
> Nobody else seemed to care either, Flash yawned and fanned his hand in front of his face while Snips and Snails continued gaming.
> Aloe and Lotus continued to give you that silent borderline glare as they waited patiently for you to continue.
> Fuck this shit.
> Your hand extended into a pair of nasty looking claws.
>>27651982
>Why would I wait almost a year for you?
>Almost a year for you
>Almost
>Year
Do you even math Anon?
>>27652511
> You bought one of the 12-inch nails up and scrapped it across the board.
> Everybody at once stopped what they were doing and covered there ears as you began to draw a smiley face on the board
“Pay attention.”
> You turned back around, your hand snapping back to normal.
“Because you're all in here because of something stupid YOU did doesn't mean you have to always act stupid. I get it. You're delinquents, nobody wants to hang around you anymore or whatever. Boo-fucking-hoo. Don't turn away someone who's here to help you guys.”
> There was a silence among the room as everybody stared at you quietly.
> “Booooring!” Gilda yawned and waved a hand in the air. “I don't think anybody cares about what you have to say you dirty old man.”
> Old man?
> Your eye twitched.
> “Hah! Look at him, he's all flustered!”
“Gilda.”
> You said this as calmly as you could.
“I know you have what is most likely, edgy teenage angst, but if you could refrain from being a thundercunt for more than one second it would be very much appreciated.”
> “What!?”
> She scooted out of her chair.
> “What did you just say you jackass!?”
> She got up and began to head towards you, her fist tightly balled.
“Sit down.”
> “Wha-”
“You know the funny thing is that I'm being real patient with your attitude.”
> Gilda snapped back up and grimaced.
> “I'll show you ass-”
“Tell me before you kick my ass dude.”
> You reached down and pulled out the file.
“Why are you doing this? Do you really want to be here any longer? Do you really want to be treated like trash any longer.”
> You poked the file.
“Do you want to be here forever or something!?”
> “Of course I don't you idiot!”
“Then why are you being an idiot dork!”
> “Because you're a dweeb asshole!”
“No you're the dweeb dumbass!”
> Suddenly she puffed out her chest, her face growing an intense red.
>>27652528
> “Everybody treats us all like shit! They either hide behind fake faces or just outright call us disgusting! I'm tired of it, I'm tired of being lied too!”
> You backed up a little, not out of fear but finally glad you made a breakthrough.
> Good, you thought that was just about to be a shouting match that went absolutely nowhere.
> Oh wait she was still going.
> “I'm done with it! Everytime I tried to do something nice, Everytime I tried to change all I got were a bunch of assholes marking down everything I did or making fun of me! It pisses me off and I hate it!”
> She began to stomp her feet on the ground like a child throwing a tantrum.
> “I hate it, I hate it, I hate!”
“Uh...okay...calm down Gilda.”
> She stopped suddenly, still huffing and puffing.
> With her face still an incredible shade of red she reached up and wiped away her tears.
> All the others were watching in silence.
“I'm going to be honest. I'm not here because I requested this or anything, nor did I originally come here with the intent to be any of your friends.”
> You sighed and sat back down.
“I'm here because I can help, and because a bunch of teachers...teachers...TEACHERS, were making fun of you lot.”
> You simply shrugged.
> Plus these kids…
> They were powerhouses, each and every one of them.
> You could see why they were trying to reform them, if one of these kids decided to go down the wrong path the consequences could be dire.
“Now… Gilda, I'm not going to judge you for that little outburst you had.”
> You coughed to your side.
“Yes I am.”
> You turned back to her and gave her a small smile.
> It was not returned.
“And I'll forget everything you did- yes even the punch, if you just sit down and listen to me.”
> She surprisingly complied, taking a seat at the front row.
“Let me tell you all a story.”
To be continued later, I will post the paste soon but I'm too tired to write out the rest I had planned.
>>27650597
I'm liking where this is going.
>>27652540
For how long have you been writting this?
This is a freaky amount of content.
>>27652540
Rockin'
Looking forward to more
>>27652566
Started an hour and a half ago.
Pastebin here
http://pastebin.com/u/CaptainMolecule
>>27651982
>Who are you?
Whatever life holds in store for me, I will never forget these words: "With great power comes great responsibility." This is my gift, my curse. Who am I?I'm Spider-man.
>>27652654
Holy fucking shit son. That's a superpower on it's own!
Have a visual representation of my awe.
>>27652669
Guys! Guys, look! It'sa huge faggot!
>>27652938
Don't bully Tobey
>>27651982
>Who are you?
You know who I am.YOUR FRIENDLY NEIGHBORHOOD SPIDER-MAN!
