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Spider-Shim and her Amazing Friends! Issue #18
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Blackest Night edition
>Previously on Buzz Lightyear
>>27536440
>Thread theme music
http://youtu.be/HG7Y33-526Q

Come one, come all, to the superhero thread, mainly starring Sunset Shimmer as the hiptacular Spider-Woman. Please, dump any and mlp superhero green, art, and discussions here.
As a wise man once said: Excelsior!
>Pastebin list
Voidborn - http://pastebin.com/VRcwJQfG
untitled 7 - http://pastebin.com/P4Mawhsw
treppahcs - http://pastebin.com/ps2Ts8J1
superkeaton - http://pastebin.com/u/superkeaton
Beans - http://pastebin.com/yNaJFuz0
Red - http://pastebin.com/hTFVft7x (currently in a coma)
Shocker Anon - http://pastebin.com/CYSHBCi1
Roommate Anon (literally dead, but I can't be bothered to remove his name)
FemAnon - http://pastebin.com/xkSzdr5V (literally dead as well)
3 Suns - http://pastebin.com/u/3Suns
The Rabble - http://pastebin.com/7awBpgv8
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Gotta love that new thread smell.
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>>27584387
>You will never hold her hand
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Is anybody even reading Bean's story anymore? No offense.
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>>27584438
When he can be bothered to update, yes
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>>27584438
I am. I read all the green.
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>>27584434
>you will never hold her metal tentacles
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>>27584438
I think it's only Spider-Bloke at this point, and maybe a few others. Beans is kind of our Brendan Fraser.
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>>27584434
>She will never be surprised and shoot her web causing your hands to stick to each other.
What happens next?
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>>27584453
Same.
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>>27584457
I prefer to think of him as our Nicolas Cage
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>>27584457
The only greens I'm not reading are the newest ones, but that's because I've been gone for the past week.
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>>27584488
Dubs confirm, Uncle Beans is now Nicolas Beans.
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>>27584438
No, not really. Why, did people read it at one time?
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All right everyone, before we get started...
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>>27584504
I remember way back when we found out Bean's real name was Nick because of that picture of the autographed poster he took of the green ranger.

POTTERY
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>>27584438
....is it bad if I say no?
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>>27584438
>>27584448
>>27584453
>>27584457
>>27584484
>>27584488
>>27584493
>>27584504
>>27584511
>>27584525
>>27584536
I think we should settle this before Beans gets here...

http://www.strawpoll.me/10419432
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>>27584573
what is this? survivor?
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>>27584587
No, but this is: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=btPJPFnesV4
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>>27584587
Apparently.
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>>27584573
...Really, guys?
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>>27584686
...Its no what it looks like?
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>>27584686
If it's any consolation, ~80% of those that have taken the poll think you are relevant still.
If not I give you hips as tribute for our transgression.
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>>27584686
This surs business.
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>>27584387
>TFW you will never cuddlefuck qt superhero spider gf.
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>>27584686
Dude it's a prank, it's a prank!
There's a camera right there!
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>>27584785
>you will never cuddle Spiderwoman after a long night on patrol
>you will never help her wash her hair and back
>you will never hold hands
feels bad man.
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>>27584824
>You will never help Sunset take off her suit and see it peel off her sweaty skin sheen to the moonlight.
>She will never softy push you towards the couch and crawl on top of you.
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>>27584686
I didn't vote.

Was busy playing Hearthstone.
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>>27584438
I actually read his and all greens. Granted his was also what got me involved to begin with. I like each of them for different reasons.
That aside, i have an art. I actually thought Mania's look would be harder. Hope you enjoy you old so-and-sos
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>>27585085
I-I want to touch it...

dem hips and dat slight camel toe
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>>27585085
saving that.
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>>27585085
More fapworthy than your naked superhero pictures.
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>>27585179
>>27585221
Thanks. I'm unsure if she would bite given the chance.
>>27585773
Ouch. Makes sense though... Granted the Sinister six were started and finished in one day. Maybe I will finally get it down right when i go for sunnybunny lewd
Anywho, got another request so far, then i think i will try for the spider hips proper
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>>27585179
>wanting to touch something with no hooves in a sexual manner.
KYS
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>>27584387
>woke up
>didn't realize it was time for a new thread
>tried to bump the old thread
fucking kill me
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>>27586139
Fluttershy with messy hair got me diamond
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>>27586321
Wow you dumbass.
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>>27585085
Thanks!
>>27586139
Dude, we spent 1/8 of the last thread discussing how do symbiotes feel like. Even if there is no handholding we should touch her. For science.
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>>27585085
YES
YEEEEEEEEES
YES YES YES YES YES!
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>>27586762
Yup, now we have Indigo Zap as Mania. Gotta say, i like the goggles hanging around her neck
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>>27577120
>Be Anon.
>You’re standing alone in a drug store in the hair-care aisle.
>You feign interest in the instructions on the back of Sunsets shampoo.
>Lather, rinse, repeat.
>Forever.
>Just lather, rinse, repeat, until the end of time.
>You contemplate dropping them and hope they burst open, making a mess.
>You’d easily get away with it too, considering your cast.
>But you don’t want to make the life of someone else miserable.
>You end up buying them as time got too scarce as to make it back to the campus in time for class.
>Needless to say, your healing factor can’t mend the pain you feel right now.
>Sunset hasn’t come back.
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YES, I was the first to defile the thread with my green

>>27585085
too much mania, too little... wait who is it again?

>>27584573
have been meaning to catch up again, but he did manage to land the lowest on my priority list
What i take away from that poll is how many people actually read stuff here, not just the greens but the meta as well
more importantly to me: Am I still relevant after my week long absence?
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>>27587310
I feel legit pity for anon. Noone should have their first kiss end like that. None the less keep up the good work untitled 7
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>>27587328
Indigo Zap is Mania in that pic Untitled
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>>27587342
that was the joke, she's kinda unrecognizable
which is probably the purpose of having a symbiote, but... ya know
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>>27587382
True, still like the pic though
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>>27587332
>Lather, rinse, repeat
wash awaythe pain
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>>27587523
CRAWLING
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>>27587310
Poor guy...
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>>27587538
THROUGH THE NIGHT, FACING EVIL IN HIS MIGHT
HE'S A HERO IN OUR EYES, SEE THE HEADLIGHTS EVERY TIME
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>>27587382
Yeah sorry. Figured people wanted higher emphasis on mania vice indigo. Also she doesn't have many noteworthy features aside from hair.
Anyways gonna try to catch up on my remaining art. I got about a week till i fly out to persian gulf for a few months. So my updates will trickle down after that until i get back.
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>>27588252
it's not like anything was wrong with the picture
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>>27587310
>Be Sunset Shimmer.
>You walk back into college.
>And while you already having missed half the session you enter anyway.
>You barely recognize the professors voice telling you that you wouldn’t come far in life without some punctuality.
>No, your eyes were fixed on Anon.
>He’s sitting further in the back and had three bottles of shampoo standing on the place besides him.
>He doesn’t even look up as you silently sit yourself next to him and unpack your things.
>You had ditched him.
>Ditched him for absolutely no reason.
>If anything, you had made every problem in your life worse.
>Your relationship with Anon, with the Wonderbolts, and your educational career.
>You need to talk to someone, but now even Twilight falls away because she’s a fucking Wonderbolt herself!
*sob*
>You feel like crying but manage to hold yourself back.
>“Sunset?”
>He looks at you somewhat surprised.
>“W-What’s the matter?”
>Just all of it.
“N-Nothing, I-I’m fine.”
>He frowns.
>“Now if that wasn’t the least convincing ‘nothing’ I’ve ever heard.”
“I know... I know.”
>He doesn’t say anything to that, but his expression softens.
>It still doesn’t banish the afterimage of his profile twisted in a stern expression.
>You had hurt him.
>You hadn’t come back after you ran away from him
>Why do you keep ruining the things you have?
>Can you not, for once, make a decision you won’t regret?
>“Hey...”
>Anon scoots closer and puts his arms around you.
>You cower down and rest your forehead on his shoulder, your arms clutched together before your chest to make yourself as small as possible.
>“Shh...”
>Why does he have to be so understanding and act so good to you?
“I’m so sorry...”
>You retain control over your tear ducts.
>“You still hurt me.”
>That makes you flinch.
“I know... and I’m so sorry, I-”
>“There’s something else you’re going through. I understand.”
“T-thank you.”
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>>27588338
>“Doesn’t mean you didn’t hurt me.”
>You flinch again.
“I know, I know...”
>You retreat a bit and look up to him.
“And I’m sorry.”
>You look him in the eyes and right yourself up to match his level again.
>And before you knew it you leaned in and placed your lips on him.
>For a moment nothing happened, and this moment almost shattered your heart, were it not for the next as he begins to move his head a little and began to kiss you.
>You immediately returned the kiss you had initiated yourself.
>While feeling his soft lips on yours and his warm hand on your back you felt light again.
>As had a weight been lifted from your chest.
>You move your hands around him as well and-
>“Wooho!”
>You hear a cheer from behind you and someone else whistling a catcall to the both of you.
>Anon breaks the kiss and glares back, as do you.
>Realization set in again that you acted so shamelessly in front of others. People whom you know.
>“Miss Shimmer, you interrupted my class once already, and now you do it again. I have already marked you as absent when class started, so if you’d kindly behave like that.”
>The professor points at the door again.
>You gulp, but as you see Anon too beginning to pack his things you smile.
>As you two leave the class the professor spoke at you again.
>“That wasn’t meant for you, Mr. West.”
>“I know.”
>Anon tells the Professor, then takes you by your hand and pulls you out the lecture room.
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>>27588345
>>Anon tells the Professor, then takes you by your hand and pulls you out the lecture room.
I think you can get arrested for such a lewd public display of affection.
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>>27588345
Man, fuck whatever I write, you do romance the best, 7.
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>>27588447
something about taking someone by their hand and pulling them along, for them to cutely follow you makes me grow a big rubbery one.

>>27588454
thanks, that means a lot to me
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>>27588512
Most writefriends here do rom-com or cute or lewd romace. Yours is pure. Its what you would expect of a romance novel.
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>>27588571
Yeah, a romance novel, but with more hydra.
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>>27588571
He’s got a point. Hell I'm making up shit in mine
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for all writefags:
I'm making a reference sheet https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1VzzWeFvQ_ebwLH4d93ZnJclRreaTLaXEAQTzWSRI0Ao/edit#gid=0
editable by anyone for now, later writefriends get permission only

Useful? Yes? No? I'm bored, I don't care.


>>27588571
>>27588632
I kinda want to tell a story, but get sidetracked wanting to do their relationship justice

>>27588582
hail hydra
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>>27588673
It seems useful but I'll put my stuff in later
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>>27588673
I'm a fucking spastic who can't into Google Sheets
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>>27588715
you typo has been seen

>>27588795
it be k
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>>27588856
I know. Typing on a phone is a pain sometimes
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>>27588915
I typo'd pointing out you typo'd
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so, have the scales of anons to blankfags tipped?
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>>27589135
8 active writers, 18 people in last vote ( >>27584573 )
ehhh...
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So, you fuckers never gave me an answer to my question
Rate the writers?
Likes, dislikes of each?
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>>27584387
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>>27589557
Not that i'm asshurt over this but..how the fuck did this ship even started?
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>>27589636
Fanfiction were Twilight summoned Peter to equestria to fight Discord who tried to team up with the Green Goblin i believe.
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>>27589636
A bad crossover fanfiction and one extremely dedicated sperg with too much money to spend.
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>>27589472
most of them good
some of them not as good but still good
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>>27589748
I only liked one or two pics that came from it, but they're the symbiote Luna pics
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>>27578345
>the files are spread out across the table as you wake up the next day
>all the previous day and night you were reading everything you could
>every file, every page, every side note and scribble.
>most of it you couldn't understand, and what bits you could just seemed to be out of place or mixed up.
"Item DDC95..."
>picking up the cap from on the desk you look at the numbers and digits. As if they would just suddenly make sense
>but of course the don't.
"what time is it anyway?"
>you pull your phone out of your pocket and see you have a few missed calls
>most of them from your mother and various family members who you don't really know and only met after your father died.
>they can wait.
>but there is a missed call on your phone from a number you don't recognize
>you open the message and listen in
>"before you get any ideas, this phone has been made nearly untraceable, and will be destroyed immediately after this call has been made."
>great way to start a conversation
>"Your father has been working for us for a while now, and his project is long over due."
>your eyes glance over to the broken vial on the floor
>"what it does shouldn't concern you, but its very valuable to us. If you don't want another 'Drug Deal' to occur, you WILL find what he has completed and bring it to us."
>well that is more or less-
>"or alternatively..."

>you are Sunset Shimmer
>and as the name Sunset would imply, you hate mornings.
>as the combined assault of the rays of sunshine and the sound of your alarm clock beckon you awake from your slumber
>grudgingly you remove the blankets from your body and make your way to the bathroom and peer into the mirror
>your hair is scraggly and unkempt from a restless sleep and your eyes are slightly bloodshot
"I am still a hero... right?"
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>>27590099
>you failed to save two people in a row now, possibly even more that you just didn't know about.
>you force a smile just to see one in your reflection
"Yeah, of course I am. I cant save everyone, but I'm doing my best. That's what matters."
>removing your shirt and underwear in the laziest way possible you reach over and turn on the shower and set a reasonable temperature
>even though mornings suck, this is always your favorite part of the day.
>the nice, calm, relaxing feel of warm water running down your hair and skin is simply bliss
>stepping inside you are greeted by that exact feeling
>for a minute you stand there letting the water run down your body to the bottom of the shower before you reach for the shampoo
>stepping out of the shower you feel rejuvenated and ready for the day
>taking a towel you give your legs a quick wipe down
>then the same for the rest of your body before drying your hair and getting dressed
>you take your spider-suit and neatly fold it up to hide it easily in the bottom of your bag and set off to school
"Hope Anon is doing a bit better..."

>the bell rings at the start of first period and you take your seat at the desk next to Sunset
>you have a lot to think about.
>Harshwhinny begins class with attendance then without missing a beat starts to write notes on the chalkboard on today's topic
>nobody wastes time and notes are being copied as quickly as they can be without taking the time to really understand them
>Harshwhinny is known for being very efficient with class time and slowing down when its available on the board is a waste of time to her
>the only one who ever seems to be happy about the pacing of the class is Twilight since she can 'learn more and faster'
>you look over to her and see a smile on her face as she easily keeps pace while processing everything on the board
>it must be nice to be that smart-
>you look back to the chalkboard and somehow the notes start to make sense
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>>27590114
>the words leaving Ms Harshwhinnys lips only aid in your understanding
>why the sudden change?
>wait-
"Ms Hrashwhinny!"
>"If you have questions you can ask after the notes are finished. Please follow along until then"
"Its not that, you have made a mistake on the notes."
>the chalk in her hands stop and the classes eyes are all on you now.
>"I'm Sorry? Where do you believe I made the mistake Anonymous?"
"it just, yesterday we learned that output, or national income, can be described by the equation Y = C + I + G + NX where Y is output, C is consumption spending, I is investment spending, G is government spending, and NX is net exports."
>of course the only people who actually understand you are Twilight and Harshwhinny but you continue on anyway
"and on the notes here you say that the equation to represent taxes is Y equals C(Y - I) plus T plus G plus NX..."
>Harshwhinny turns to look at he board
"and, well.. it should be Y equals C multiplied by the product of Y minus T then adding I plus G plus NX."
>"ah, I see, thank you for bringing that to my attention Anonymous."
>she picks up an eraser and starts to correct the mistake and those who made it that far in the notes do the same

>you are Twilight Sparkle
>He... He was right.
>you were about to say the same thing but the fact that anonymous knew AND figured it out just as you did is crazy.
>its not that Anonymous isn't smart or anything like that, but you never thought he was as smart as you are.
>and from the look on his face right now, he didn't think he was either
>in fact, he has the same expression on his face as everyone else in the class.
>Confusion
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>>27590126
>Ho-Lee Shit
>what just came out of your mouth?
>you look down at your notes then back at the board
>you don't understand any of this! How did you manage to notice AND correct a incorrect equation?
>It doesn't make any sense, the only thing you thought of before somehow correcting a mistake was how smart Twilight was.
>looking over your shoulder you catch a glimpse of Twilight smiling and giving you a thumbs up
>she had to have noticed it if you did
>alright, time for a little experiment then.
>you repeat what you did before, and suddenly the board couldn't be simpler
>well, it could, but you understand it all the same
>quickly you scramble to take notes and catch up with Harshwhinny, making sure to put the notes in the simplest terms possible that you might understand them later
>time flies by and eventually the bell rings just as Harshwhinny sets down the chalk
>a few students take a few extra seconds to finish the notes while Twilight smiles and heads off to her next class with a few of her friends
>but you just stand there as the knowledge you possessed while taking the notes slip away leaving you with just what you wrote down on the page
>You are starting to get and idea about Item DDC95 and what it does.
>or rather... what YOU can do.

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end post.

How am I doin so far? anything I could improve on?
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>>27590132
As fair as I can tell you are doing good, but is strange to see you go so fast.

It's not too fast, but your previous pacing was relatively slow.
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>>27590212
yeah, I am going a bit faster than my usual speed but im trying to go at a nice middle ground since ive had people get turned off at it going too slow in previous works.

Not that I mind going slow, I just wanted things to pick up a bit so readers don't get bored
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>>27590212
but if people prefer the pace I had before I can always go back to that.
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>You are Sunset Shimmer
>Also known as the Spider
>And you've just woken up in your bed
>You feel great
>Refreshed
>Invigorated
>It's like you've been sleeping for 2 month
>It's strange how you can feel this good after a yesterday's rhinoceros incident
>You have to track him down
>You also have to check in with the commissioner
>What was stollen and what were the damages
>You jump out of bed and step in you costume
>Or at least a few red and black rags
>You pick it up
>It's beyond repair
>You should make yourself a new one
>Buy new yoga pants and a red sweater
>Or maybe you should try something else
>You remember you had a strange dream
>You were wearing a black jacket with a white spider on it
>A change of wardrobe might not be a bad idea
>You sit on your desk and take out some paper and a pen
>You make a quick scetch of a spider
>More angular than your normal one
>This will be your new symbol
>Black and white
>Stealthier
>A bit more menacing
>To scare the criminals
>Your alarm rings
>Good God!
>Has it always been this loud?
>You turn it off
>You take a quick shower, get dressed and leave for school
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>>27584415
a bullshit.
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>>27590427
>As you walk towards the school entrance, you see a familiar face
>It's that guy
>The one that gave his ticket
>...that he was going to scalp
>Norman
>When he sees you, he runs towards you
>"Good morning!"
"Morning"
>You walk past him, but he starts following you
>"Did you see what happened at the expo yesterday? I heard a rhino guy destroyed the whole place"
"Yeah, that's pretty much it"
>"I heard he was 20 feet tall and went trhough the walls like it was nothing"
"Well, he was shorter than 20 feet..."
>"And the Spider was there, and just ran over her"
"It wasn't like that..."
>"Like it was nothing!"
>You are going to slug him
>"Hey guys! Come to my concert tomorrow!"
>A young girl hands you and Norman flyers
>You take a flyer
>"Best beats you'll hear in this god forsaken town!"
>She walks away, promoting herself to the other students
>You look at the flyer
>DJ PoN3
>Is the 3 pronounced as an E or as three?
>You never could get the hang of those creative nick names
>You look at Norman
>He seems fixated on the girl
"Why don't you ask her out?"
>"Huh? Whats?!"
>He was completly lost in his day dream
"Why don't you ask her out? You like her, don't you?"
>"I...um...it's not like that"
>You really hit him bellow the belt this time
>"I can't just ask her out. It's not that simple..."
"Yeah, sure."
>You walk off
>Norman is hesitant for a second, but decides to follow you
>Again
>"How should I ask her?"
"Find common subjects to talk about. Find out what kind of music she plays and listens to. Read up on it. Go to her concert to show interest. After she's done congratulate her, make comparisons between her and some big names from the genre. Ask her what inspires her. Show her that she can rely on you and there you go."
>"I...what? H-how can you be so sure?"
"I read a lot of psychology books."
>"Part of your curriculum?"
"No, just for practical use."
>"Will you be going into business?"
"No. Criminology."
>"I...what?"
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>>27590439
>You just can't seem to shake Norman off
>Maybe you shouldn't have given him ideas on how to woo girls
>Or mention your interests in criminal anthropology
>You should slug him
>SWEET HOLLY JESUS!
>Your spider-sense is tingling
>But why?
You look through the window on the second floor
>You see police cars
>You have to do something
>You look around
>There's a fire alarm right next to you
"Norman! What's that?"
>You point to something imaginary behind him
>As he turns away from you, you pull the fire alarm
>Oh GOD! It's so loud!
>A panic envelopes every student in the building and they run off screaming
>You run in the opposite direction and get to the stairs that go directly to the roof top
>But on the roof, you are hit with a bit of a problem
>You don't have a costume
>You don't even have a mask
>You should have gone shopping today
>You rummage in your bag and try to find something
>Anything could work
>Nothing
>Great
>It would have been nice to have that suit from earlier
>You imagine it for a brief moment
>And
>You feel something
>Something crawling on you
>You look at your hands
>They are being covered in a black goo
>Oh shit!
>You try to pull it off, but with no avail
>You can feel it covering your entire body
>You feel restricted
>You can't breathe
>You try to rip it apart from your chest
>It you manage to do it
>But another layer covers the one you broke
>A big white spider appears on your chest
>The two pieces in your hands settle down
>You realize what this is
>It's the costume from your dream
>Or maybe it wasn't a dream
>Where did this thing come from?
>At this point you don't have much time
>You jump off from the building and web yourself in the direction of the sirens
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Hey guys
It's been a while, hasn't it?
Free time is scarce these days
Finally managed to sit down and write something
Alas, it isn't much, but I'll be trying to keep it up
I hope I'm not an old hat by now

Anyway, how's the drama coming along here? Anything new?
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>>27590481
Well you're a sight for sore eyes. Made me doublecheck your trip.

No drama, we're all pretty happy to see fresh new stories from new writefags.

And, of course, mamo's art helps.
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>>27590494
Glad to hear I'm still welcome here
Recommend me a reading order for the newer fellows. I need to catch up on everything here
Also
Dramaless Spider-shim is a madman's wonderland
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>>27590481
Glad to see you back and writing again
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>>27590557
I can't really give you a list of best to worst, that feels like doing a disservice to our numerous contributors

Also, editing while sleepy? Fucking sucks.
Hopefully I'll have Issue #8 out the door tomorrow.
But I promise nothing and may deliver less.
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>>27590829
Not from best to worst. Just a quick stylistic orientation. Comedy, drama, adventure, romance, dry wit, slapstick. That kind of thing
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>>27590884
Oh, okay, that I can do.
Beans is Action/Comedy/Smut
Treps is Action/Romance/Drama
Same for untitled 7, with a bit of Mystery
Rabble is Drama/Mystery
Void is Action/Lewds
3 Suns is Action/Drama? It's short so it's hard to tell
And last and least, mine is Romance/Comedy/Drama to come.
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>>27590983
drama to come, fear not!... when I actually build up the energy to write
>when you're feeling kinda burnt out in terms of writing, but really really want to keep going
it's a strange war inside my mind.
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>>27590983
That is surprisingly accurate on my green
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>>27591004
I know that feeling very well... it gets weird when the story keeps going in your mind but you just don't want to type it out.
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>>27591021
That's pretty much exactly it, I can picture everything clearly, but sitting my ass down and writing it is hard somehow.
I dun get it, why is my brain confusing itself.
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You're all a bunch of sluts and I love you
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>>27572720
>Be Anon.
>You just revealed who you were and it's taking all of your willpower not to burst out laughing.
>The looks on all their faces are priceless.
>You wish you could take a picture.
>You walk over to Sunset and wave your hand in front of her face.
“Hello. Earth to Sunny, can you hear me?”
>She comes to as she bats your hand away and looks at you.
> “How… What...You…..Fight... Glowing?”
>You chuckle at her cute yet confused look.
“Take a deep breathe, Sunny. Then ask a question.”
>Sunny and the rest of the girls follow your suggestion as they take a deep breathe and then release it.
> “Why’re you the Angel and how did you get these powers?”
“You just had to ask that first huh. Ok long story short i was born with these powers and I saved that one girl and then everyone was calling me The Angel.”
>You sigh and run your hand through your hair as you tell them a half truth.
>There’s no way you'll tell them you're Spectrum at the moment.
“Now it’s my turn. Were you even gonna tell me about this?”
>The girls look away as some either scratch their heads or try to look innocent.
> “Well i was gonna say something sooner or later…..Maybe. But I didn’t want to keep this a secret, it’s just...hard to...”
>Sunset looks a bit guilty as she said that.
“Whatever, I guess you had a good reason to keep it a secret.”
>They look surprised at your answer.
> “Y-You’re ok with that?”
>Applejack steps forward and beside Sunset.
> “Wait yer just gonna accept it? Just like that?”
“Don’t get me wrong, I’m a bit angry that you kept this secret from me, your boyfriend and friend.”
>Sunset looks down a bit.
“But I didn’t say anything about mine so I can’t say anything without sounding like a hypocrite.”
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>>27591601
>You begin to walk towards the edge of the building.
“Anyways I’m gonna get going, so see ya at school.”
> “But darling, we have so many questions.”
> “Yeah, like where you learned to kick ass?”
> “How do your powers work?”
> “Should we have a party for our new hero buddy?”
>You lightly laugh while shaking your head at their antics.
“I'll answer the questions later. Right now I'm tired and want to sleep.”
>You see the girls look at each other and then nod as Twilight looked at you.
> “Fine, but do you mind waiting for us after school tomorrow?”
“Sure, I'll answer your questions tomorrow.”
>The girls all say their goodbyes as they all leave using their powers.
>You were about to leave when you felt a hand on your shoulder, as you turn to see Sunset next to you.
“You need something Sunny?”
>She doesn’t say anything as she looks at the ground.
>You grew a bit concerned when you saw her eyes grew a bit moist.
> “Do you mind if I stay with you tonight?”
>You were about to say tomorrow but your girlfriend’s sad eyes pleaded with you to say yes.
“Sure, your place or mine?”
> “Let’s go to your place.”
>She smiles a little more as she puts her mask back on.
> “So I'll meet you there.”
>You wrap your arm around her shoulder as you put your other arm under her knees and pick her up.
> “Eehh.”
“I've got a better idea, Sunny.”
>You focused on creating your angel armor as jumped into the sky as Sunset puts her arms around your shoulders.
> “What’re you doing?”
“Giving you a break for one thing and letting you fly in style.”
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>>27591622
>Something flies over your head and into your arms.
>Looking at it closely, you could faintly tell it was a bodysuit, or more precisely Sunset’s spider suit.
>Turning around you see Sunset in a sports bra and panties as she stretched while looking at you slyly.
> “What? You saw that picture I sent you, this shouldn’t be any different.”
>You look away as you toss a shirt at her which she throws back at you.
“What the hell, Sunny? I don’t want my parents to see you like this. They’ll joke about this forever.
> “Don’t care. I’m to tired to change and I want to sleep.”
“Fine, I’ll be in the living room, sleeping if you need me.”
>You begin to walk towards your door when something grabs your arm and pulls you away from the door.
>You land on your bed as Sunset wraps her arms around you.
>You could feel her toned legs gently wrap around your as her breasts were pressed against your chest.
“What the hell Sunny? I was gonna-”
>She puts a finger to your lips, signaling you to be quiet.
> “This is your room and you’re gonna sleep in here.”
“Then where will you sleep.”
> “Here with you. Goodnight Anon.”
>She gently kisses your lips before letting her head hit your pillow and closed her eyes.
>You just give up at this point and pull her closer to you as you give her a small kiss to her forehead.
“Goodnight Sunny and sweet dreams.”
>You soon join her in dream land.
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>>27591649
Well here's my update. Not the best but all I got for now.
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>>27591590
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>>27591668
I like it, but the break between posts made me think of the angel carring an almost naked Sunset soaring over the city with the spidey suit falling behind them. Romantic but strange for the witnesses.
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>>27591711
Yeah, gonna go through them later and maybe add or edit a bit of this.
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>>27591590
I'm not a slut I just write smut!
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>>27591747
I love rhymes!
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>>27584387
I wasn't here when this became a thing, so I have one question: why?
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>>27591895
It's ShockerAnon's fault.
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>>27591895
For fun.
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>>27591895
Because it was interesting?

Also did we lose a lot of threads?
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>>27591895
It's an easy place for aspiring writefags to enter and begin their quest to become legendary greenwriters.
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>>27593021
Now if only we could wrangle in some more drawfags. Maybe take some pressure off Mamoru.
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Page 8? nah. heres a short green.

>"give us the purse lady!"
>"yeah we promise we wont hurt you too much"
>you turn to look down a dimly lit alleyway as a group of thugs are mugging a woman and her husband
>"here take it! just let us go!"
>the thug takes the purse and counts the money inside
>"what the hell? only fifty bucks? what kind of woman only has fifty bucks in her purse?"
>one of the other thugs punch the man in the stomach making him kneel over out of breath
>"that's not going to pay the toll for OUR streets!"
>"looks like we are going to have to take payment another way..."
>a wave of anger surges up inside you as you set down your athletics bag and take out a damaged hockey mask
"These creeps picked the wrong town to do this shit."
>you put on the mask your magenta eyes peering through the openings towards the alleyway
>before you walk down you pick the bag back up and sling it over your shoulder
>your footsteps are drowned out by some of the thugs beating the kneeling man down while another struggles to pin the woman to the wall
"Hey assholes..."
>the two guys beating the man stop and look over to you while the one with the woman finally pins her before looking over to you
>reaching behind your back you pull a bat out of your bag
"Why don't you pick on someone your own size?"
>...
>"who the hell is this idiot?"
>"it isn't Halloween girly, take off the mask and go home, this doesn't concern you"
>your mask stares on at the goons while underneath you smile as two of them approach you
>one pulls a knife from his pocket while the other picks up a metal pipe next to a trash can
>"this is your last chance girly, get lost!"
"that's not going to happen"
>you reach to the bag again and pull out a baseball
>the two men give you a confused look as you toss it up and down twice before one takes another step
>he's the target
"Batter up."
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>>27593434
>you toss the ball and swing the bat striking the ball sending it flying at the goon
>it collides with his forehead and knocks him to the ground with a grunt
"strike one"
>the other charges at you and the one holding the woman drops her to join his friends
>"Now you're in for it!"
>he raises the pipe and swings it hard and fast at your skull
>you block it with the bat like some street version of a sword fight
>as the mugger starts to put too much force on his side you step back causing him to fall
>you raise your bat to bludgeon him but the bat is taken from you by his friend
>"Baseball seasons over kid!"
"if you say so"
>you pull the oldest move in the book
>you kick him square in his crotch making him keel over in pain as you pull out one of your hockey sticks along with a puck
>taking a few steps back you set the puck on the ground and watch as his eyes look up at you
>"don't you fuckin-"
>you raise the stick for the shot
"Three seconds left on the clock. Dash is alone at the net!"
>with all the force you can muster you shoot the puck right at his face
>it hits right in his teeth shattering almost all of them and knocking him out
"strike two!"
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>>27593439
>you now turn back to the mugger who is starting to get back up
>with the hockey stick you grab his leg and pull him back down to the ground
>"p-please! we'll give back the money! just stop!"
>you flip him over so he can face you as you stare at him through your mask
"should have thought of that before you threatened and beat those people back there..."
>you raise the stick and smash it into the mans face over and over until its broken and bleeding
>once you notice all three criminals are down for the count you smile
"and the games over folks, that's three outs!"
>you reach down and pick up your bat from the ground and put both it and the stick back into your bag after a quick wipe down with a sports towel
>as you walk off you hear the man and woman behind you speak
>"thank you, thank you so much."
>"who are you?"
>you look back at the two your hockey mask covered in splatters of blood
>reaching up you grab the mask and reveal your face with a smile
"the names Rainbow Dash."
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>>27584387
>TFW no QT 3.14 spider hero gf to cuddle at 1:30 am.
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>>27593492
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>>27593492
I am ashamed to admit it took me a long time to realise that qt3.14 is cutie pie.
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>>27593492
Don't let your dreams be dreams.
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>>27593497
>You will never wake up in a web cocoon directly above the bed with Sunset snuggling you.
>She will never say "Man I didn't know I could those positions even with my abilities."
>She will never make her signature Eggs and bacon.
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>>27593566
All the eggs?
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>>27593578
Yes all the eggs. The tables have turned.
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>>27591895
Because it needed to be done
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>>27590427
>it's like you've been sleeping for 2 months
(You)
http://youtu.be/MFYHMfF4oIY
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Guys I know that this is not Sunset related but I'm doing a essay about Roman society and I found this.
These are real.
>TFW when 4chan as existed for over two millennia.
http://www.pompeiana.org/Resources/Ancient/Graffiti%20from%20Pompeii.htm
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I love this thread!
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>>27593746
>mfw not even Rome's emperor could stop people from liking stuff he didn't
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>>27593746
>Epaphra, you are bald!
>Phileros is a eunuch!
I can't help but think that these two from the basilica are part of an argument.

4chan through the ages.

"You're bald!"
"At least I have a dick!"
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>>27588673
should I include Human Twilight being able to rip through the fabric of spacetime and create portals into other dimensions?
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>>27588345
>Be Twilight Sparkle of Earth dimension 812.
>You’ve come to enjoy flying.
>You get to see all the things out of a vastly new perspective.
>In training you have had your freedom, sure, but it had usually been over some grasslands.
>And while they were beautiful, you lacked the sense of proportion.
>But here, through the skyscrapers of New Yoke, you certainly have that.
>Misty Fly gave you a bit of a free pass to goof around with your techwear.
>She’s under the impression that all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.
>Especially with something akin to super powers.
>While they should come with the sense not to abuse them and use them only for good, you are allowed to use them for your own good too, if nobody else pays the price.
>She herself would love to ride some monster waves, but they would disrupt wildlife.
>Not to mention what they do if they reach the coast.
>Downside to your ‘powers’ is that you run on a battery.
>“Broad daylight robbery going on. Ready to make your first official appearance?”
“A robbery?”
>“I sounded to happy about that, didn’t I? Fly over to-”
>She gives you the address and the helmet opens you a navigational system.
“I’ll be right over.”
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>>27594472
>You enter the small convenient store.
>“-in the fucking bag or she gets it!”
>You just hear someone say before he suddenly shuts up because the door had a small bell behind it.
>The robber immediately spins around to take a look at you.
>He was holding a woman onto him and had a gun at her head.
>He himself was wearing a skimask.
>“What the-?”
>As he sees you he immediately pulled the gun to you.
>You take a more secure stance and try to speak with all the confidence you can muster.
“Release the hostage and put your gun on the floor. Surrender peacefully and a judge will let you get away with a small sentence. I’m Iron Mage of the Wonderbolts, and you’re under arrest.”
>You hear Misty over the earpiece.
>“Tell me you didn’t go in there alone.”
>It makes you flinch but you keep your attention on the gun.
>You’re crapping your pants right now.
>“What the fuck are you?”
>You are at gunpoint, that’s what you are.
>Maybe if you...
>... just pull the safety of his gun.
>“Wha-?”
>He’s not very articulate, and almost drops the gun as it lights up in the purple glow of the exit-point of the magical manipulation of the gun.
>A shot resounds through the store, and all you could think of was that gun.
>You need to... You need to disarm him.
>Your magic lashes out, not from the gauntlet through which the magic is supposed to be channeled, but from the pendant itself.
>A wide arc flew and spews unfocused magic around the store, trying to find the former exit-point of your magic.
>At the location in question the magic fulfills your wish of disarming the shooter in a way you’ve done before.
>Not your proudest moment...
>A tear is ripped into this universe and swallows the gun, the shooter, and his hostage before disappearing again.
>This all happened, before the the pain began to set in, before you go deaf from the ringing in your ears, and before your knees hit the floor.
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>>27594476
>Your shaking hand tries to reach out to the spot where the tear had been for the blink of an eye.
>But soon you topple over and had to support yourself on that outstretched arm.
>You cough blood as you look down to inspect your wound.
>You know you’re going into shock and probably not have many seconds of consciousness left.
>Feel... feel...
>Yes, you can’t feel blood spreading on your back as you do on your chest.
>The bullets still inside then.
>And figuring from the blood you coughed it penetrated your lung.
>What about your heart...?
>No...
>Wrong side.
>Good...
>Now as to decide. Fall down with the hole down or up.
>Bleed out, or have your lung filled with blood?
>You still have another lung.
>Let gravity help you.
>You let yourself fall on your shoulder, face-planting while you were at it.
>Then manage to roll around to lay on your back.
>You’re not gonna die here!
>You’re not gonna die.
>...
>Your vision goes black but you were still awake.
>Robbed of your hearing and sight, all you have left to focus on was the pain.
>Rest now.
>Please let me pass out...
>An eternity later your prayer was answered just as you felt someone press down on your bullet wound.
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considering how anon is green i have one question. How come there isnt a green about anon being the mask?
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>>27594503
You haven't written it yet
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>>27594525
but i dont think im good at writting i always get ideas that lead into nowhere and end up coming up with new once and the circle continues
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>>27594549
Well it's my first time really trying romance
You can do it, if all else fails, change your name and lather rinse repeat, wash off the shame
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Bumping the good bump

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GFzA_JNzXUQ
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>>27594876
Still a better fight than Batman vs Superman
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>>27594893
good thing we deal in spiders and not in bats
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>>27594478
Nice, cant imagine the confusion the robber is in when he arrives in equestria and suddenly is seized by magic ponies bringing him before their princess
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>>27593746
>VIII.2 (in the basilica); 1826: Phileros is a eunuch!
>VIII.2 (in the basilica); 1820: Chie, I hope your hemorrhoids rub together so much that they hurt worse than when they every have before!
>I.2.20 (Bar/Brothel of Innulus and Papilio); 3932: Weep, you girls. My penis has given you up. Now it penetrates men’s behinds. Goodbye, wondrous femininity!

It's like I'm really on 4chanus.organius
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>>27584387
>#18
>this pastebin list
I remember this starting as one of those dumbass shimmer shitpost threads.

I still miss femanon. Stone Free is an awesome stand.
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>>27595196
I took a gamble, and it paid off
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how would you guys feel if someone started some DC universe green?
the annoying shits (at least one) in the Shimmer thread are starving for content but don't want superhero greens there
frankly, I feel like if I did do a green here, it would get drowned out from all the established writefags that are already here
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>>27595290
I feel like marvel is just the easier starting point, but it shouldn't matter if you want to try DC stuff. Hell there's already bits and pieces sprinkled around.

I would kill for some hellboy or doctor strange, desu though
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>>27595290
Can I haz Celestia as Supergirl?
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>>27595312
>You will never see a heroic Tirek as Hellboy
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>>27595345
is that Hellboy fighting a Titan with derpy as his agro?
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>>27595290
If you've got something to write that fits then go ahead and write, you're concerns about being ignored over other writes has no real ground seeing as we've been getting a whole bunch of new writers recently.

Also for future reference it probably isn't a good idea to insult a thread that you're wanting to join/write for >>27593209
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>>27595622
>>27595290
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>>27593746
The mediums may of changed but shitposting has not.
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i really am thinking about trying to wirte a green about anon with the powers of a german (http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/German_Physiology ) with a oc who is a fext (http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Fext_Physiology) but i have no idea where to go with that
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>>27593746
>IX.8.3 (House of the Centenary; in the atrium); 5213: My lusty son, with how many women have you had sexual relations?
Hey kid you want to /ss/
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>>27595910
Shitposting. Shitposting never changes.
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"Sunset?"
"Who the hell is Sunset?"
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>>27596161
the person who, when is randomly said "sunset" to, doesn't think of a sunset but thinks it's somebodies name
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>>27596166
Well it's a world that consists of names like Twilight Sparkle and Starlight Glimmer, so it's not out of the question for someone to assume that the person is saying a name
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>>27596161
That watermark pains me.
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>>27596179
Longing
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So, I'm probably going to throw you guys some lewd in a bit
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>>27596220
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>>27596220
I'll show you lewd
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>>27596258
DELETE THIS!
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>>27596278
Never
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>>27596258
Blue board you sicko!
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>>27596299
You all made me do this!
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>>27596258
2lewd4school
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>>27596220
Do it.
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>>27596340
Muffin first. Then costumed ShimSham lewds.
Man's gotta have priorities, y'know?
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>>27596389
Muffins are definitely a big priority
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"Babe, are you gonna get undressed?"
>Be Anon
>"Actually..."
>Be the very, very lucky boyfriend of one Sunset Shimmer, the Spider-Woman
>She stands at the foot of your bed, still in costume, her hands resting on her generous hips as you lay on the sheets, wearing only your Spidey-themed boxers
>She'd thought they were funny when you'd bought them
>"I was thinking we could try something else tonight~"
>That velvety voice never fails to send a shiver down your spine as the whites of her costume's eyes locked with yours while she slinks onto the bed with unnatural grace
>The silky material of her outfit outlines every curve on her body, leaving her practically naked but still tantalizingly covered
>Something told you that Rarity had a hand in making this particular outfit
>You owed that girl something fierce
>Sunset's body stretches over yours as she straddles your waist, her delicate movements belying muscles that could lift cars and batter baddies
"And, ah, what did you have in mind...?"
>You can just barely make out the shadow of a smile on her lips as you feel her fingertips brush over your clothed length
>"You'll see~"
>That hidden smile becomes a smirk as her quick fingers fish you from your boxers, letting your length angle back towards you before she makes herself comfortable once more
>Then, she starts to rock back and forth, slowly, your cock trapped between your own body and her already wet lips
>The sensation of her warm body and the soft cloth drags a gasp and a low groan from your tongue and your hands latch onto her hips in an effort to ground yourself
>Noting your approval, she picks up the pace, grinding against your hardness in earnest
>You can feel her hot breath on your face, the eager panting from behind her mask
>"Having fun~?"
>Instead of talking, you give her ass a squeeze
>Sunset might not be the bustiest, but her rear was godlike
>You get a breathy giggle and she begins to ease off the pressure on your dick

>cont
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>>27596419
>Fucking tease, she knew you were close too
>"Well, since you like my butt so much, why don't we switch things up, hm~?"
>You lift your eyebrow as Sunset lifts her hips, turning away from you so that her perfect cheeks now frame your cock
>Your groan of frustration becomes a moan of pleasure as Sunset rolls her hips, picking up where she left off
>Fuck, you loved this girl
>You can't even bring yourself to raise your arms and touch her, trapped in a warm, pillowy hell you never want to leave
>Each stroke brings you closer and closer and your eyes crack open to see her looking back at you over her shoulder, watching and enjoying just how much power over you she has
"F-Fuck, Sunny"
>That giggle again
>Teasing you
>"Already~? We've barely started~..."
>You feel her start to lift her hips again, ready to torture you with pure heaven until you beg her for release
>A fire lights in you, spurring your body to action
>Before she can get away from you, your hands latch onto her hips and pull her back down, your hips thrusting angrily to achieve your nirvana
>"H-Hey!"
>Not this time!
>You know she could get out of your grip if she really wanted to
>You don't care
>Finally, after a few, desperate thrusts, you tilt your head back and let out a low, wordless groan, shot after shot covering her clothed rump and your bare stomach
>Slowly, you come down from your high, flopping back bonelessly onto the bed
>With the little strength you have, you look up to see Sunset pouting at you, her gorgeous ass painted with strands of cum, her brow furrowed
>"Anon...."
>Totally worth it
>"Do you even know what it's gonna take to clean this? Rarity's going to kill us..."
>"Anon?"
>"Hello?"
"Zzzzzzzzzzz..."
>Definitely worth it
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So there's my short little lewd thing
Wanted to put a little spin on the hotdogging request
Also to make up for not having Issue 8 of Shimmering Spider-Woman out the door yet
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>>27596004
ok im gonna try to give a test to writing some green but be warned its most likely gonna be shitty

>be the ghost or how you actually are named: anon, preventing a bank robbery
>be doing what gave you your name as a hero. Fucking up the shit off criminals.
>nothing out of the ordinary really just tying their shoelaces together and turning on the safety switch of their guns etc
> its kinda funny how they just dont realize you doing all that shit
> once you are done with your work you go to you leave the bank unnoticed and and go to your partner in the next alley
> there you see your partner who does the more violent part of your work , brawl or smile how he is actually named
whos also the reason why you arent flying naked through the city anymore
"Well everything is done brawl. just go in and knock them out."
>the 2 meter giant with the stone mask and the coat just looks at you before he gets in motion
>"Lets hope they can take some rough petting"

so how is it so far? garbage or Auschwitz level of terrible?
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>>27596680
I'm going to say slow it down, add details, check your grammar, and be sure not to repeat yourself.
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>>27596630
Yiss.
Can we get a epilogue with Rarity's reaction to it?
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>>27596644
that image is quite bad
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>>27596979
>You are Rarity
>And you must remind yourself that a lady does not contemplate murdering one of her best friends and said best friend's boyfriend
>Your gaze sweeps from their sheepish, apologetic faces to the.... unsavory stains that mar your most recent creation
>That particular outfit had been a labor of love, a marriage of risque and heroic
>A masterpiece, birthed from your mind like the goddess Athena
>And there were... stains on it
>It was less than a day old
>No, you won't kill them
>Their punishment must be more severe
>Anon opens his mouth
>You look him in the eyes
>The mouth shuts
>Good dog
>"We're... really, really sorry, Rarity..."
>Sunset, it seems, is not nearly as well trained as her mail companion
>No, no she's not
>Not yet
>You give her a soft, friendly smile, a smile of forgiveness
>It is a lie
>She knows it's a lie
"It's quite alright, darling. I'll simply have to make another. Of course, I'll need the materials, expensive as they are, time to fit you, needles, lots of needles. And, because I am so, so generous, I'll devise something for your charming beau. This too, of course, will take time, materials, and a reasonable amount of needles. All I need is for you to get them for me and arrive, on time, for you... fittings."
>The shameful duo blanches
>You won't kill them
>That would be unladylike
>No, their punishment must be more severe
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>>27597138
holy fuck, these grammatical errors
fuck me to death

>>27596981
Yeah, doesn't help that it's the Spider-Woman costume, which I've never really cared for
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>>27597155
http://pastebin.com/8NHeZVMG

fixed the mistakes that were most obvious
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>>27597202
and you say you don't write good romance
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>>27596680
so i went ahead and wrote a bit more to show a bit of Brawl's personality but it might be the last for a while but feel free to tell me what you think so far.

>still be anon
>be following Brawl since you want to see the dumb looks on the faces of the robbers
> as Brawl enters the bank, he immediatly catches the attention causing the criminels to point their guns at the hostages.
>“Listen up pal, if you don't get lost theres gonna be a bloodba-“
> He's cut off by the punch of a forward leaping Brawl who aimed for the bank robber's jawbone
> You crinch as you hear the sound of bone being utterly cruhsed.
> While Brawl now focuses his attention on the second robber who's desperately trying to fire his gun, you see that the third and last robber has lifted is gun, aiming at Brawl's head, the safety already turned off and pulling the trigger finally getting the attention of your partner....

>The worst thing possible happened as you see the red dots appearing on the clothes and spreading, as the robber falls over already being dead.
> Shooting at Brawl with normal bullets is more than just dangerous, its lethal. The bullets will be reflected by his skin in such a way that they will kill the attacker instantly...
> After you recovered from the shock caused by the death of the criminel you realize that the remaining robber at thrown away his gun and was now punching your partner
>“Oh, that was a mistake. Now I feel challenged.“
> The very next second you feel the ground shaking after Brawl tossed the criminal to the groundand started punching him mercylessly over and over again, his right fist already soaked in blood.
> You didn't think it would end but then you heared a sound coming from the corner of the room right to you

>*thwip*
> be Brawl punching an un conscious bank robber
> but you were interrupted by something connection to you right hand which feels like...
> silk?
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>>27597214
> „Don't you think you are overdoing it, Mister Steroids?“
> a female voice, judging by you the sound of it, its at the other end of the string
> you pull at the string to get the woman in your reach and try to land a hit with the hback of your hand
>however you you feel her hand touhing your underarm as she pushes herself off in the direction of the ceiling
> as you look hope you see something that fills you with hope
> Spiderwoman, a capable fighter who might be able to bring you some joy and if she fails, well theres a good chance that her friends the Power Ponies will come after you including someone you've been burning to fight, Saddle Ranger. , if she isn't able to puit up an entertaining fight than who is?
> a wide grin finds its way on your face under the mask as you realize that you can only profit from fighting Spiderwoman
„I'm gonna enjoy this!“
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that's all for now folks!
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>>27597212
Nope, only half-decent smut
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>>27596161
glad the artist knew enough about safety and trigger discipline. to have both the safety set and her finger off the trigger. only thing is the safety is on the wrong side of the weapon
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>tfw no one has written Rainbow as Falcon yet
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>>27597715
because shes better as Casey Jones. :^)
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>>27597727
>not Storm
>not Jesse Quick
>not Angel
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>>27597754
honestly i was expecting the "different universe" argument.
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>>27597781
If the ninja turtles can crossover with the power rangers, I don't see why it's not possible here
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>>27593746
>VIII.2 (in the basilica); 1904:
>"O walls, you have held up so much tedious graffiti that I am amazed that you have not already collapsed in ruin."
There is so much shitposting that I'm surprised you are still standing.
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>>27593746
VII.9 (Eumachia Building, via della Abbondanza); 2048: Secundus likes to screw boys.
>VIII.2 (in the basilica); 1816: Epaphra, you are bald!
>VIII.2 (in the basilica); 1826: Phileros is a eunuch!

fucking SAVAGE!
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buncha lazy nerds 'round here, can't even be bothered to bump?
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>>27598514
I'm trying to write two stories right now. So i can't watch the thread all the time
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>>27598514
I look like a nerd to you?
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>>27598539
No, you look like a bloke
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>>27598555
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"People are gonna die, Sunny"
"Please don't make me do this"
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>>27598870
The watermark!
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>>27598870
>that watermark
maximum wew
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>>27598870
that drawing a shit
A SHIT!
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>>27598870
Watermarks ruin pics
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>>27591649
>It's the end of the school day and you’re waiting for your boyfriend, so you must be Sunset Shimmer.
>After sleeping with Anon, you woke up early to return home to change into some regular clothes.
>You were able to get into your house and put on a teal sleeveless dress before your mom knocked on your door.
>You told your mom that you stayed at a friend's house because you were having too much fun with them.
>She believed you and let you get ready for school.
>The school day went by as it normally does but you made sure Anon wouldn’t forget to meet the girls after school.
>So now you’re waiting for him to show up at the school's entrance.
>You saw him walking towards you while wearing a grey hoodie and blue jeans.
>You should take him clothes shopping later.
>Maybe get the girls and the Dazzlings to help you with that.
> “Hey Sunny.”
> You stand up and walk towards him.
“Anon, just follow me. The girls are waiting in a classroom.”
> “Is it too late to run away?”
>You giggle as you wrap your arms around his arm and kiss his cheek.
“Sorry but the girls asked me to make sure you get there by any means necessary.”
>He just sighs and let's you drag him to the principal’s office.
> “Um Sunny, not saying anything but why’re we at the principal’s office?”
>You don’t answer him as you open the door and walked inside to see the girls and the principals sitting down.
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>>27600292
>The principals look at you smiling and giggling at you dragging Anon.
> “Hello Sunset, Anon. Why don't you have a seat?”
>You and Anon take a seat in front of Celestia’s desk while Anon looks confused.
> “Sunny, I thought we were going to talk about my …..late night activities with just the girls.”
>You open your mouth to speak but Celestia beats you to the punch by gasping with a hand over her mouth.
> “Anon! You're a bit too young to be going that.”
>It takes him a moment to figure out what she meant and was blushing.
> “Wait, I didn’t mean that Principal Celestia. I meant something else.”
>The principal waves her hand at Anon while giggling lightly.
> “I know Anon, I'm just having a little fun.”
>He looks confused as the others smile at Celestia’s joking nature.
> “Ok, can someone tell me why the principals are here? I thought I was just gonna talk to the girls.”
>She clears her throat.
> “Allow me to explain, You know me as Principal Celestia of Canterlot High School, but I'm also Director Celestia of S.H.I.E.L.D.”
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>>27600302
>He's quiet with a stony expression.
> “Ok. So Sunny and the girls work for you? Also how can you be a principal and director at the same time?”
>Celestia gives him a gentle yet teasing smile as she crossed her fingers together.
> “They don't work for me, it's more of a partnership. And how I can do both is a secret.”
> “Alright, so I'm gonna take a guess and say that you know what happened last night?”
>Celestia just nods.
> “Fine let's get the obvious over with. My powers involve making hardlight constructs.”
>Anon raises his hand towards the computer monitor.
>You couldn’t see what was happening from the other side of the monitor but you could see a bunch of large pixelated shapes and colors flew towards Anon’s arm.
>The shapes are then absorbed into his arm making it glow for a moment.
>Celestia looks back at the screen and opens her mouth slightly before Anon cuts her off.
> “The computer isn’t broken, don’t worry.”
>Celestia looks at him, studying his every move while Luna moves her hand behind her.
> “With this I can make nearly anything I want.”
>He holds out one hands and a small bird appears in it.
>The bird is then replaced with a sword and then with a small angel.
> “So what’s next?”
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>>27600310
The next update and meeting Celestia. I'll update the pastebin once I fix the sleep scene
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>>27600361
nice update. I was reading along as you were posting.


about to post mine in a second. Just contemplating the last bit.
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>>27600375
Thanks, had to redo a few lines to get them how I liked them
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>>27600391
>"Anonymous."
>Sunset stands next to you with her books in hand and her bag
>"you feeling any better today?"
>you stand up from your seat and get your own stuff ready to go
"Yeah, I'm feeling great."
>the two of you kinda stand there awkwardly the little event from last night still fresh in your minds
"again, I'm sorry about that-"
>Sunset gives you a slight shove with a smile on her face
>"I already said its okay Anon, don't worry about it. You were under a lot of stress and that's how you dealt with it at the time"
>the two of you share a smile before Twilight calls to Sunset from the hall
>"Sunset you coming?"
>she signals 'just a sec' to Twilight before turning back to you
>"and like I said Anon, I'm here if you need to chat."
>she reaches into her pocket and pulls out a piece of paper with her number on it and hands it to you
>"Seriously, let me know if you need me."
>and with that she walks off to join Twilight
>does sunset have a thing for you? or does she honestly feel bad about what you are going through?
>you look down at the paper and put the number in your pocket just as Norman makes his way over to you with a grin on his face
>"Well well Anon, are you getting close with Shimmer?"
>you smile back at your friend and laugh a bit
"Yeah, I guess you could say that."
>"what was that paper she gave you? It was her number wasn't it?"
>the two of you are now walking out of the classroom and into the hall leading to the locker room
"Wouldn't you like to know."
>"Uh, Yeah! What kind of friend wouldn't want to know if his best buddy was making it with one of the most popular girls in school?!"
"its not like that, I dont think anyway. See last night she-"
>Norman smiles back at you
>"Oh I was there, I remember what happened."
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>>27600391
oops, that wasnt to you. Kek

>>27590132
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>>27600506
>>27600511
>Norman does his best to mimic Sunsets voice
>"Anon, you're looking so upset. please let me take you home and 'take care' of you. We can have our own party just the two of us~"
>you give him a push and he accidentally bumps into another student who he quickly apologizes too
"Yup, that's EXACTLY what happened."
>"I bet, now seriously, whats going on with you two?"
>the two of you enter the locker room where Bulk is waiting for you already changed
"She is just offering to be there if I need someone to talk to."
>"that's pretty cool of her. I still think shes got a thing for you though."
>you start to change into your workout clothes
"really? Whys that?"
>Norman finishes changing about the same time you do and turns back to you
>"Its not like she offers to be there for everyone in school, right?"
"Maybe you have a point."
>"Of course I do."
>the three of you, now including Bulk, head into the weight room where the rest of the class has started to do their routines
>in the corner you see two squat racks facing the same direction
>you did it once, why wouldn't it work again?
"Hey Bulk."
>Bulk looks over to you as a grin forms on your face
"How about leg day?"
>He grins back understanding your challenge
>Norman looks back and forth between the two of you and takes a step back with his hands up to get out of your way
>"uhh... you guys go ahead, I think ill just take a few dumbbells over there."
>Bulk and yourself take positions at the squat racks add apply the same amount of weight as the other
>Bulk smiles and pops his neck as he gets ready staring you down
"Three... two... one..."
>Lift
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>>27600518
>"So what did you Anon talk about?"
"Huh?"
>Twilight smiles at you as Rainbow and Fluttershy join you on the way to class
>Rainbow is quick to join in the conversation
>"Oooh, talking with Anonymous huh? Did you ask him why he ditched Pinkies party that we worked hard on?"
>Twilight gives Rainbow a disapproving look that you share
>"What? We did!"
>"Anon had a perfectly understandable reason to not want to go Rainbow."
>"I know, I'm just annoyed that we put all that effort into it and he didn't want to go"
>your voice is almost as quiet as Fluttershys
"He's going through a lot right now. I just offered to be there if he wanted to talk about it."
>you barely hear Fluttershy over the other noise in the halls
>"that was really nice. I'm sure Anon really appreciates it."
>Honestly just hearing that from someone else makes you feel glad about your choice
>You hope he does decide to talk to you
>It might help you make up for your mistake, even if its just a little bit.

>When did Anon start to get so damn strong?
>you sit next to Norman and grab a set of dumbbells to join him
>the two of you don't really say anything to each other besides "hello" before you are both watching Bulk and Anonymous going at it
"When did Anon suddenly get so competitive?"
>Norman looks around to see who you might be talking to before he realizes its him
>"Oh, you're talking to me?"
"Yeah. Who else would I be talking to?"
>he stops his reps to talk to you
>"I just wasn't expecting it, sorry Flash"
"No problem, but seriously, Anon."
>you motion over to him and Bulk
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>>27600527
>"Not sure, he's been getting like that since he came back."
>you nod understanding
>He's probably just using his anger and emotions as motivation.
>Still, being able to match Bulk suddenly is strange.
>"Did he ever talk about doing any training or workouts or anything like that before coming back?"
>Norman shakes his head
>"Nah, but he really didn't talk about anything, He might have started to work out to help cope?"
>you smile, set down the dumbbells and pat Norman on the back before standing up
"Yeah that's what I was thinking too"
>...
"Think he's any good at football?"

>looking ahead at Bulk you see he is straining just as hard as you are right now
>you both have reached your limit and are doing everything you can to do just one more squat than the other
>you've never felt your legs burn this much before
>and the sheer amounts of sweat pouring down your face makes you feel like you have been standing in the rain
>the two of you go down once more and you can feel the weight getting to you
>this is it
>whoever finishes this one wins
>you hear the clank of the bar lock into place along with the one at Bulks machine
>falling to your knees you look over to Bulk to see his bar all the way up as he smiles back at you
>you turn to look at your own
>its also at the top, but yours locked into place first
>you laugh despite the protest in your lungs
>each laugh escaping you burns like fire but you don't care
"I-I cant believe it."
>from your place on the floor you smile back at Bulk
"I cant believe I won!"
>in the mirror behind Bulk you can see your eyes slowly change back to their original color and the strength you had possessed leaves you
>Bulk raises his hand and gives you a weak thumbs up in response
>"Y-Yeah!"
>you hear the bell ring for the end of class as Bulk and yourself take a few extra seconds to breathe
>everyone else files out and the teacher waits by the door
>"Come on boys."
>the two of you respond with the same amount of enthusiasm
"yeah.."
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>>27600537
>Meanwhile somewhere outside of the city...
>"He's listened to the message Ma'am."
"When?"
>"This morning. It was the only message on the phone he listened to."
>you lean over the uniformed man at the computer to see the details
>the glow of the screen illuminates your face and that of the man in the dim room
"He knows the offer now. The only thing we are authorized to do until a response is given is wait"
>"and what if he doesn't give us one within the allotted time limit?"
>you smile like that of a predator eyeing a meal
"Then we will have to get in contact with him without making our presence known."

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end post.


Man, had a rough start with those links huh? must be getting tired.

anyway, there's my update. enjoy!
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>>27600548
wooo, mystery~!
It'll be interesting to see Anon ever clash with Sunset, given that he not only copies powers but can even exceed the user's abilities, if even only a tiny bit.
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>>27600756
I hope he doesn't get to full of himself like pic related.

Although it would still be interesting to read
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>>27600783
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>>27600548
I'm confused. Is this Anon have Infamous powers or is he like Taskmaster?
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>>27600814
He is based off the Marvel character "Mimic" as seen in >>27600783 and >>27600806

basically he can adsorb the power and skills of those around him if they are within a certain distance, or if he has had extended periods of time with the person.
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>>27600830
Ah gotcha. Thanks for the clarification m8.
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>>27600852
no problem.
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>>27600830
Is supersmarts a super power one can absorb?

>>27600814
Thats what I made the sheet for
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>>27584387
I still find it a funny concept to think that Sunset sometimes shoots webs when she gets really excited or nervous.
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>>27600527
didn't that party explode?
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>>27601375
the comic Mimic can. So I don't see why Anon/Mimic cant. I'm pretty much doing a copy and paste of his abilities and weaknesses then just making a story around it.

>>27601488
No the party didn't. Just a building downtown.
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>>27601504
or was it?!
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>>27597225
so does anyone want me to continue the story?
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>>27599232
>>27599425
>>27599824
If you can find a way to remove it, go ahead
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>>27602492
Sure.
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>You will never wake up in the morning to see this
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>>27602492
I say go for it.
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>>27602547
You fucking monster.

Burn in hell.
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>>27602547
W-why live.
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>>27602547
>you will never wake up
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>>27602504
Never said the pic was bad
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>>27597225
>be Sunset Shimmer also known as Spiderwoman
>and right now you are looking at one creepy looking guy
>extremly tall, a black coat, a freaky stone mask and worst of all those red eyes
>they are just staring at you with this intent to harm you for the sake of harming you like none of your previous enemies did
>it doenst take long for him to try to start an attack by jumping towards you with a raised wfist but you simply shot some webs in his face to blind him and simply jump behind him
> it doesnt take him long to come to a haltand rip the web of his face
>“Where are you? Stop hiding!“ is what he screams as he looks at you, how uncreative can someone be?
>however, his uncreativity put aside you still havea strong feeling you should take him out quick
>right now his back is turned to you so a kick against the back of his head should be enough to take him out
>but as you jump up and try to kick him with your right leg, the brute just turns around grabbing your leg with his right hand and gives your foot and twists your foot with the loeft in a painful manner.
>“Did you think i wasnt expecting that? You gotta be real stupid.“ is what comes from him as he lets you fall to the ground like a hot potato
>you try to stand up only to see that he had raised his fist preemptive and going right for your head
>you manage to dodge the attack by throwing yourself to the right however you still hear is fist connect with something
>you look in the giant direction to see what he had hit
______________________
ok small update and i gotta say, for the fight being nothing special or maybe even pretty lame it was hard to wrote for me
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>>27603315
You need to take your time, double-check your grammar, capitalize, and use punctuation

work smarter, not harder
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>>27602547
>Still no comfy green about waking up with Sunset.
>She will never open the fridge using her webbing and grab something she wants while still sitting on the couch.
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>>27603798
Uuuuuuuugh
I'll add it to the list...
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>>27603798
how would she close the fridge?
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>>27603815
Maybe shoot a large thing of web to hit the door?
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>>27603815
by making Anon go do it
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>>27603798
>You will never go to Pinkie's house with Sunset for a sleepover.
>You will never be the only person to know about Sunset's abilities.
>Pinkie Pie will never give you a spare sleeping bag to share.
>You will never be woken up with a soft tap from Sunset.
>She will never say "I accidentally webbed all over the sleeping bag. You gotta cover me on this one. I'll owe you one.
What do?
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>>27604068
Gotta take the blame, she'll give you sexy time later
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>>27604068
I just wonder how the girls will react.
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>>27603845
creative problem solving
I like

first after sitebreak hail hydra
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>>27602691
I prefer this to not being with sunset
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>>27604473
Never!
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>>27604531
>Who are you?

>Sunset?

>Is not you...

>Is it?
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>>27604531
Which of the main six would be in the cobra unit
I vote for Rarity to be The End
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