Marital Problems #39
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Stealing Flashes waifu edition
The premise of this thread can cover a multitude of issues. Maybe you and your wife are fighting over something insignificant. Maybe the spark just isn't there anymore. Either side is welcome to have issues with the other.
If cuckoldry is your thing, this isn't your thread.
New content is welcome, and discussion encouraged.
Pastebin of previous threads and current stories thus far: http://pastebin.com/ARKY1Kny
Featured Stories:
MnM's A Lust For Revenge - http://pastebin.com/z0zhWzkL
MnM's Twilight's Return (Neglected Anon sequel) - http://pastebin.com/eUXHT07S
Jeff Mango's Mrs Cake - http://pastebin.com/tgJg0HUJ (back from the dead)
Loki's Prince Anon & Young Celestia - http://pastebin.com/ML51EaaS
Without_Aname's Twilight's Secret Pt. 2 - http://pastebin.com/qdN0mAxX
Fife's Two Sides of the Same Coin - http://pastebin.com/1hJfr9Qs
Lefty's Pinkie loves more - https://pastebin.com/NW77DG4A
TLA's Tilelover Anon - http://pastebin.com/czSAW2hM
Free The Soul's I Didn't Marry a Horse
http://pastebin.com/9DATPDXg
RokoPoko's What it means to be Family.
http://pastebin.com/s39jTkWY
Pastebin for aspiring writers (general concepts and techniques):
http://pastebin.com/V1ujiyJt
http://pastebin.com/whCQ2GpX
http://pastebin.com/bnMmZ2T3
>>27178603
last thread >>26918855
Forgot to add AssaultTurtle's Lowly Lyra (no pastebin that i could see)
>>27176310
>a series of unfortunate
yay! i rejoice at your misfortune.
>>27178603
Loki's never going to finish Prince Anon & Celestia is he.
>>27178907
Does AssaultTurtle have a pastebin in general?
>>27179055
http://pastebin.com/u/AssaultTurtle
>>27179055
i didnt think to just look for one on chance, and whadayaknow:
http://pastebin.com/EFTUe6XA
Story is actually called Rare Tea, tho PB isn't up to date.
>>27178603
SAUSE ON BIC
Waiting for Without
>>27179226
>>27179236
Well shit that's a blunder
>>27178934
It hurts, Anon. But we'll all hurt together.
>>27179335
Hey that's my job!
>>27178907
>Forgot to add AssaultTurtle's Lowly Lyra (no pastebin that i could see)
>AssaultTurtle's Lowly Lyra
>Lowly Lyra
I was wondering if aynone even reads my titles.
I guess not. That's uh... okay. You don't have to.I kind of put some thought behind them every time. So maybe you should. I-if that's okay with you I mean.
Holy fucking shit. We made it to the bump limit. I can't believe it, what's next? Loki showing up again?
>>27179315
>>27180718
https://derpibooru.org/945763
>>27180885
Its shit
>>27179854
kek
>>27180482
you mean the title that you never wrote in the thread? or the title in the pastebin that you never linked to?fwiw i spent some time coming up with a title. even used a thesaurus to see if i could find some alliteration for "noble"... but upon coming up snakeyes, decided to go the "she's playing a peasant" anglealso, liking it so far
>>27181959
>>26947570
Rekt status: gotAnd while Lowly Lyra is not a bad title, it does not contain a wording pun, and therefore is inferior.Also might be less accurate in the long run
>>27182066
ah, diff name kinda threw me. hell, i never even noticed that post.
and yeah, puns good. puns always win.
It's hard to write an EQG Marital Problem story considering they can't be married.
>>27183789
You can put it here. The only backlash that you might get is "it's an EqG green"
>>27183789
They don't have to be married per say, you can write about just a relationship.
>>27179335
This, WaN come back
>>27186094
At least he's posting again. These little bits of green he's giving us fills me with hope.
>>27186598
Well, we're still waiting for Loki,r-right?
>>27186722
We always are dubs.
Continuing from pastebin, and I kinda stopped mid-conversation.
>Unsurprisingly, the younger unicorn blushes profoundly having heard that, and barely manages to sputter out her response.
>"M-my prince, why are you...? What do you mean?
>"Why nothing else than just excuses for not knowing there was nobility in the town today. It seems that my sources of information have failed me."
>Your friend says while pulling himself upright.
>A pair of golden eyes is now darting between Shining and you, trying to make sense of the situation.
>There's way more confusion than fear in there, so your worries about revealing some kind of delicate secret are gone by now.
>But before Lyra manages to get a good grasp on just what the hell is going on, Shining speaks up again.
>"And I will have to ask for your forgiveness once more, because I do not believe I had the opportunity of learning your name beforehoof."
>"My name?"
>Asks the mintmare, before locking eyes with the stallion.
>"O-oh, I'm Lyra Hearthstrings, sir."
>"No need to 'sir' me miss Lyra. You must come from outside of Canterlot though, because I did not hear of house Hearthstrings in my years there."
>Her eyes escape to the side again, this time looking away from either of you.
>"That's because there is no house Hearthstrings sir. I am a commoner, not a noblemare of any kind."
>Shining flares a grin and says
>"I find it hard to believe, because you certainly look like one to me."
>Lyra did not turn her head back towards him, but she did blush again and smiled timidly.
>"That's only thanks to Mrs Rarity, her craft can make anypony look like a princess."
>"Oh, I disagree. I've seen enough mares in beautiful outfits, and I can vouch that those can only serve to bring out the inner beauty of one wearing them."
>The pink tide has begun spreading wider than before on the mint cheeks.
>"And clearly Mrs Rarity had an extraordinary material to work with here."
>>27188338
And I'll pause mid-conversation again. Sue me.
Basically I have some questions to my writing style. Writing this paragraph was a bitch for me, as I constantly struggle to come up with new ways to mark who exactly is speaking. This was a dialogue between two non-narrator ponies, and because of that it will not always be obvious who is talking. Therefore, I mark that as best as I can. But there is an issue - and a rather stupid one. All the way back in primary and secondary school when I was forced to write for the grades, one would always get penalised for repeating words. You could not use the character's name twice in a row to mark his lines. And this has stuck with me ever since, to the point when it feels wrong to leave Lyra under Lyra and before another Lyra.
So tl;dr version and questions are
Is it clear who speaks when in this paragraph?
Is it perhaps overly pointed out who speaks when?
Would you rather see somewhat repeating names and words in general over some of the more crazy shit I came up with here, like "mintmare", or the second to last line (that could've been "Lyra blushes even harder")?
Do you even lift?
>>27188461
I mean, technically since there is only two characters talking you don't even need to differentiate between the two past the first lines.
Unless one doubles up and says two things in a row there is no need to continuously denote who is speaking unless it actually brings something to the text. Like their actions or whatnot.
Ex:
>"I just said a thing" said Shining Armor
>"Yes you did," Lyra replied
>"I'll say more things then. Wonderful beautiful things."
>"Wow, those things are amazing."
>*Event happens like a bookshelf falling over or something*
>"Goddamn books. ~Oh my I am talking out of turn, introduce me again!" Lyra demanded.
TL:DR - You are fine, can probably do with less pointing out who is talking because as readers we should be able to recognize a back and forth conversation.
>>27179335
I love this kinda tradition.
If you're the original, thanks for sticking with it.
If you just picked up the torch, thanks for keeping it going.
>>27178907
Thanks bruh.
>>27178934
I guarantee you Loki still lurks. Show yourself damnit!
>>27179335
> Waiting for Anon who posts waiting for Without
>>27179854
A fraud?!
>>27186094
I'm here. Just.. ya know ... not posting anything yet.
>>27189367
This.
Is anyone actually interested in this War Dash thing I've been fagging on about?
> Inb4 finish TS first fgt.
>>27190078
>It's another "WaN shilling his story" post
Maybe I missed something, but you have been sperging on about that story for 2 weeks now, and I still have no idea what kind of story it exactly is
>>27190078
>mfw senpai thinks I'm a fraud
Also would read War Dash
>>27188461
I thought it was perfectly clear.
I'd say the idea method of distinguishing speakers is through keeping in character with their speech. Easier to do when the characters are pretty... charismatic. Obviously AJ and luna being the easiest examples. That's alot of work though, thinking about speech patterns. But makes for better writing regardless of concerns over indicating who's talking.
>>27190078
i have a question. in your story we only know of four times that flash fucks twilight, but how many times did they fuck "off-screen"? her hungry purple cunt must have taken so much abuse from his massive stallion cock
>>27190078
finish TS first fgt
If it's MP or RGRE I'll see it.
If not... probably not, simply because I'm overloaded with both green and good fics already, and while I'm not trying to get off the ride, I simply can't find the time to follow even more threads. More importantly, I can't deal with unfinished stories no more. They crush my soul. So I'm shifting towards only reading finished fics. My heart just can't take it otherwise.
>>27191462
>his massive stallion cock
fuck off Flash Sentry.
>>27188461
>Is it clear who speaks when in this paragraph?
Yes, it is.
>Is it perhaps overly pointed out who speaks when?
No, it's fine. Well. Maybe a bit, but I have no idea how to change that.
>Would you rather see somewhat repeating names and words in general over some of the more crazy shit I came up with here, like "mintmare", or the second to last line (that could've been "Lyra blushes even harder")?
I don't know. Try this and this and find what's easier for you and then we'll talk about it again.
>Do you even lift?
Sure thing.
>>27188338
I really hope this is all building up to something because this is kinda getting repetitive.
>10
>>27194223
>I really hope this is all building up to something
Nope. This is going to be entirely SoL fic with 20k lines describing only 3-way tea party that spans 4 hours of real time. But don't worry I can tl;dr it for you - at the end of it Anon will find out that Rarity cheats on him withOpalwhich will leave him broken and cause him to go back to his old days of serving asticket controller.Meanwhile Flash and Shining will find out that Twilight is in secret relationship withCadence and Celestia, which involves 2 futa cocks, vore andhoofonhoofaction. This will cause them both to commit an honorable sudoku with a paperclip and ascend to Valhalla.
>>27191462
>his massive stallion cock
>>27190078
>That Luna pic
Well,it's hot here, isn't it?
Finish TS first fgt
>>27195967
It sure is
>>27195132
>>27193694
anon says it himself that it's much bigger than his, when he first catches flash rutting her
>"the sight of the stallions member, that clearly put yours to shame, pounding your eager wife's marehood"
>>27196587
In that case Anon must have a baby dick
>>27190078
write what you feel like writing
you shouldn't rush TS because some fags tell you to finish it first
>pic related: my face when you never finish/rush TS
wew
>>27194982I'd read it
>>27196951
well shit, now i can't self insertno pun intendedit would be too unrealistic
>>27178603
What happened to RokoPoko?
I liked where that one was going.
>>27200145
yeah that was good too.
maybe he never saw us resurrect after we died a couple times.
>>27200145
Went the usual route. Slower updates, maybe some lurking, then gone.
Stayin' alive for Loki
>>27203991
He's never coming back.
Heard he went full normal.
>>27205651
Why must the good die young?
>>27206729
>>27208531
Let's cry together, friends
>>27206729
>>27208531
Yep. I'd always see him in /moon/, and then BAM, he takes up a sunbutt story and is kill.
It's fine though, I'm fine, I mean she gets LOTS of stories already.
>>27209599
Yeah, dude, fuck you can't walk 3 feet without running into some tasty celestia greens, right?
>>27209612
I mean seriously, writing Celestia green is like trying to sell ice-cream in Greenland, everyone is so full of that already
>>27211070
There really is only one Celestia green that any of us care about.
reeee
Posting a start to something that I'll pick up after Newlywed
>You are Anon.
>And you feel that today is going to be a great day.
>Rising up into a setting position, you take a moment to stretch.
>When you finished, you look next to you, and see your slumbering wife.
>Iggy, Cosmic Destroyer of Minds!
>Is snoring gently as an adorable blue earth pony.
>Seriously sometimes you have problems remembering that your wife is a horror of unimaginable proportions.
>Not taking too much time admiring her as she sleeps.
>You lean over, and kiss her softly on the neck.
>She stirs slightly as your lips leave her neck.
>Getting up from the bed, you knock out a quick stretch, before making up your side of the bed.
>Moving towards your coat hanger.
>You don your robe, and slippers.
>Heading down stairs, you go into the kitchen, and start making a pot of coffee.
>While the coffee is being made, you leave it to get the morning paper.
>You open the front door the first thing you see is.
>A bunch of weird ass ponies, wearing black robes, and bowing in front of your house.
>The fuck?
>The group of ponies responds to the sudden noise.
>All of them looking up before doing anything.
>”Aw, it’s just the star child’s pet human.” Says the pony in front, with an effeminate voice.
>A resounding aw sweeps through your lawn.
“Pet?!” “Well you all can go suck a dick!”
>Slamming the door behind you, you sigh angrily.
>Guess you better tell Iggy she has a cult now.
I haven't been in this thread since halfway through Loki's Celestia green. Why is it shit now?Shittier, anyway
>>27217277
I came back after leaving for around 8 months, now it seems half the threads are just filled with shitposting. My guess is 3/4 of the good writefags left to infinite-chan, while all the children were left behind since they don't know what the fuck it is.
>>27217277
This is what eventually happens to all splinter threads.
>>27217521
>My guess is 3/4 of the good writefags left to infinite-chan
Where did you get that from?
>>27217859
A long time ago, they said they were probably going to stop writing here and migrate. So if they've randomly stopped, they are probably there.
>>27217971
8gag is a ghost town
>>27217971
No, they're just dead. Barely anyone goes there.
>>27218016
>>27218043
Oh damn, shit really does change fast. Well, guess they somehow got off the ride
Bow down
>>27220839
check em
>>27217521
i won't deny there's alot of shitposting and very little green (tho TLA is really trying... and even WaN is lately) but the unmentionable chan? BAAAAHAHAHAAA!
>>27221844
check em
Old OP here.
I wasn't expecting to see this place alive, really. It's good to see this place again.
I actually let the thread die some months ago because I was pretty tired of bumping this place, I am still not going to do it but I am glad you took it on yourselves to start the thread once again
We need to keep this alive...
New episode bump
>>27229645
y u not writing
>>27229645
why you
>>27231658
Because I'm not near my computer (posting from my phone)
>>27231691
That makes sense.
I head to bed.
Make this thread great again.
>>27231935
asdhashdasjd all the way
>>27231935
Loose..foot loose. Kick off your Sunday shoes.
>>27235298
such power
>>27234745
Thanks!
>>27234937
No, pls, mercy!
>>27235298
Cute!
>10
what are you doing here at the tenth page
p10
>>27235298
>tfw you will never have a glass version of your waifu that can melt your dick on contact.
>>27239788
Man these fetishes are getting really out of hand
>>27235298
Lyra clops to this video erry night.
bump
Update in a bit, also I deleted the ...Shit line from the last post, reworded it, and moved it around.
>>27242981
I should really catch up your story some time, friend
>>27242981
>>27243195
Stop reminding me that I don't have any greens about my waifu.
>>27240543
kek
>>27243881
but you could
>>27246541
I technically do have one, but it's so much of experiment that I can't call it a story (also thought of dumping it here)
Bin and update http://pastebin.com/edit/a72L4NMc
>Didn’t you locked the door before you left?
>Maybe you forgot?
>But Lilac should’ve locked after you left.
>Unless she left it unlocked when she went to eat you.
>That’s probably what happened.
>Still unsettling to find the door unlocked even in magical horse land.
>Putting the thought on the afterburner, you open the door and go inside.
>Closing the door behind you, but instead of hearing utter silence, you can hear the sounds coming from the T.V.
>Really that thing has been left on for weeks.
>Going to the living room, you pick the remote from off the floor, and turn the T.V off.
>Now that the house is completely quite in the house, you realize how empty it is.
>You turn your head, and stare at the sofa.
>Memories of you and Lilac snuggling, kissing, and whispering sweet nothings into each other’s ear flood your mind.
>Fuck, what are you supposed to feel right now?
>Anger over the fact that Lilac tried to eat you?
>That she played you like a fiddle for so long?
>Or Bitter sadness over the fact that all those pleasant memories are shattered and broken by the truth.
>No, no all that’s over and done with.
>The only thing left is to move on.
>Not really thinking about where you were going.
>You let your legs take you wherever they roam.
>Surprisingly they take you upstairs.
>Well since you’re up here might as well go to your room.
>>27248170
story almost done or just beginning?
>>27249120
Almost done. Funny because this sure as hell wasn't the ending I envisioned when I started to write it all though months age.
>>27248170
>Opening the door, you take in the sights before you.
>You’ll need to buy a new lampshade.
>And you’re pretty sure that there is at least one pill bottle missing from the nightstand.
>And then there is the fallen picture frame.
>Containing a picture that makes your whirlwind of emotions even more questionable.
>You choose to ignore it for now, and take a seat on your side of the bed.
>Although in hindsight this made things worse.
>You can’t stop flicking your eyes back and forth from the picture frame.
>Each time the desire to pick it up grows in intensity.
>No, there isn’t any reason to see your wedding picture, to confirm the lie that was so well crafted to keep you in the dark.
>A lie that died on the same night as its seamstress.
>But knowing it was a lie doesn’t make it any less painful to bare.
>Every good moment the two of you shared, every “I love you.” And even your vows.
>All of it was meaningless.
>All of it just to give yourself to a life sucking monster on a silver platter.
>You start to feel hot tears run down your cheeks.
>You clench your hands and teeth.
>You feel your wedding band pressing deep into your hand.
>In your unstable mental state, you unclench your right hand, and pull it off with your left hand.
>You hold it for a moment, your hand trembling, and your vision begins to blur.
“Damn it” You shout, as you fling the ring across the room.
>You bury your head inbetween your hands.
>You wanted to forget everything about Lilac.
>Your love, your hate, the good times, and the bad.
>Your head was too much of a mess.
>And right now, you don’t think you could sort it out before the party.
>But you know of someone who can help you out.
Time for the long-overdue ending
>>27188338
>You decide to chime in before someone gallops himself too far.
>Heh.
"Whoa there Shining, relax. Last time I checked you were now a married stallion."
>You're met with an annoyed eye roll in response.
>"Geez Anon, she didn't have to know that. Thanks a lot."
"Sure Cassanova, the fact that she knows that you are a prince totally doesn't ruin the surprise."
>"Details, details. Celestia damn it, you can be such a joy killer with your logic sometimes."
"Trust me, it's better this way than trying to fix the inevitable damage you might cause. Remember the winter solstice celebration 2 years ago?"
>Shining opens his mouth as if to retort, but apparently finds nothing and just pouts.
>Satisfied with that you turn to Lyra.
"If I had any doubts about commissioner of this dress, it's all gone now. This was made for you, and dare I say made expertly. I'm not sure where you are planning to debut it, but Canterlot doesn’t seem out of question."
>This time you get a smug smile from the smaller pony.
>"Oh, and now you doubt it, huh? I thought all princesses spend spring celebrations in Canterlot."
>You chuckle and raise your hands in a gesture that probably didn't make much sense here.
"Alright, you got me. I may have been only kidding with the whole royalty business. Mostly. I mean, there still was something off."
>"And you decided to bring the Prince of the Crystal Empire to double check me?"
>There is now a very audible amusement in her voice.
"Maaaaaybeeee?"
>You say, looking to the side ostentatiously.
>>27249907
>Lyra just scoffs at your display.
>"At least tell me that you didn't ask him to make his way from all the way to the north."
>Shining raises his hoof and points it at you.
>"He didn't, but it was heavily implied that I should do so as fast as possible. We had to give chariot pegasi a real workout to make it."
"Uh-huh. If you weren't stuffing your face with my cookies for almost an hour now, maybe they would've had an easier job."
>He just shrugs, completely unfazed by being called out again.
>"Stop buying cookies this good and I won't eat them. You have no one to blame but yourself."
"If you say so. But to answer your question for real Lyra, I didn't. Shining Armor was just visiting Canterlot..."
>"That's only slightly better you know. Canterlot is still a good bit away."
"... and used the opportunity to pop by for a tea party. From which I temporarily extracted him to help me check if you are Princess Celestia's distant cousin."
>The explanation seems to have only smugened the smile from earlier.
>Yes, that's a word now.
>"You have a prince just 'pop by' for a tea party while being married to one of the most renowned fashion mares in all of Equestria, and yet you seem to be so shocked when a pony with a bit of class shows up at your doorstep?"
"Hey now, I was not shocked. Merely curious. Not everyday a pony you knew for a while turns out to be a nobility incognito."
>Shining has shifted towards the exit before adding
>"Anonymous is right, with me at least he knows I don't hide anything."
"Whenever you're not smuggling things out of my kitchen that is."
>"I... think I better check up on Flash, we better not leave him alone for too long. Goodbye Miss Lyra, and see you at the Canterlot party."
>"Not in this life I'm afraid."
>She says with a happier grin.
>"Oh you just never know what might happen tomorrow. Never say never!"
>And with that, the white unicorn disappears behind a corner.
>>27250092
>"You know, for a second there you kinda had me scared."
>Says the minty mare after a short bit of silence.
"Really? What gives?"
>"Oh, you mean other than drilling me for a thing that I'm clearly not comfortable with sharing?"
>You scratch the back of your head to help stimulate the thoughtflow.
>Did you take it a bit too far and she was just making a good face to not embarrass herself in front of Shining?
"Y-yeah, other than that."
>"I was afraid that you might actually know something. Or making an educated guess."
"And I wasn't?"
>You ask with a bit of both disappointment and relief in your voice.
>"Nope. Not even close. It turned out that you do know nothing."
"Jon Snow."
>"Excuse me?"
"Never mind. Just a, uh, saying from my word."
>The mare eyes you with a raised eyebrow before returning to her amused self.
>"Anyhow, looks like my grim and evil secret will remain that for a while longer. Also I won't have to kick your knees in for being an ass."
>You what mate?
"Hey now, I was just playing around, no need to be violent over it."
>You wanna have a fucking go there mate?
>"I know, I was kidding. I can appreciate good fun, even at my expense."
>I'll knock ya straight in the kisser.
>"Just..."
>Oh?
>Her smile has withered a bit as she looked to the window.
>"Just leave it be Anon. I'm being serious right now."
>You can tell.
>"There's nothing interesting to be found behind that door. Just disappointment. So don't bother."
>You're not sure how to react at the sudden change of pace, but before you can come up with anything, she is back to her normal self.
>"Now, I think I will change back out of this wonderful outfit. Rarity would kill me if I ruined it by just walking downtown."
>And just like that, the last thing you see behind the closing door is her smile, right above the silver necklace.
>>27250194
>You're quite dumbfounded right now.
>Apparently there was something you didn't know about her.
>Or rather, something that not many ponies knew about her in general.
>And your guess was rather off the mark.
>You hear a raised voice coming from your living room.
>Looks like the two guardsponies were going at it again.
>It also looks like you won't find anything else out from Lyra herself.
>You could perhaps try to persuade Rarity to share something with you.
>But do you want to?
>You stare at the doorknob with a smallest glisten of saliva on it.
>For a unicorn, Lyra didn't use much magic.
>Also, gross.
>She made it clear that there is nothing to be found by searching further.
>So perhaps it is best that you just drop it and go on your life.
>Yeah, you should just leave the mare to her own problems.
>If there was anything worrisome about her, Rarity would let you know anyway.
>Content on that, you take a seat on a simple stool and wait for the unexpected guest to finish her undressing.
>You've still got a tea party to finish after that, and this will take enough of your attention anyway.
>Tea parties are a serious business man, ask Princess Celestia.
The endof this tea party
My earlier green is being split into chapter-like parts, but I will experiment and try to keep this one as a 1, continuous being. So, no 'end of part 1' this time around.
Coming up:
>Less sausage fests
>More mares
>Marshmallow Prime making her appearance
>Some lewd, implied or otherwise
>>27250214
You have my full attention. Keep up the good work.
>>27250214
wow, assaultturtle out of nowherenot reallywith a big update!
I just read "A lust for revenge"
It's terrible. Sorry guys
>>27252089
>implying
>>27252138
I don't think that word you're using means what you think it means
>>27252089
>>27252138
>>27252205
>>27252510
all these sudden activity... then p10
>>27253244
Do you guys need activity? Do you need green?
>>27253310
Considering we routinely hang out on page 10, yes.
>>27253310
nah, we prefer bumps and shitposting, clearly.
>>27250214
>lewd
Aw lawdy think of the childrens!
>>27256071
...that they'll be making?
>>27256530
This guy gets it ^:)
dumb bump
>>27259558
Nice try Berry Punch
>>27260022
Fucking kek
>>27259558
>Gets into a fight, so she goes to a bar and cheat
>Even though I gave consent, I was too drunk
>I can't live unless I get free money
BUILD A WALL
>>27259558
in all seriousness though... this is actually a tricky issue. the law about consent from a severely drunk or otherwise impaired person not counting has a valid point... should be all the same if, say you get someone super drunk then have them sell you their new car for $100. If that were fair play then people would be raked over the coals alla time. But... where to draw the line? Especially when so many people drink for the purpose of lowering their inhibitions, with the full intent of doing something they otherwise wouldn't, but at some level want to.
In this case, at the very least, it seems there should be a different charge, not all out "rape". If you hook up with a flirty, flat out drunk (but still concious) woman at a bar... i dunno what to call it, but rape certainly seems harsh, and frankly is an insult to women who were "properly" raped. Maybe "taking advantage of an inebriated person" or something.not to say it is a serious question in the case above, that seems pretty open n shut to me. doubt she was SO drunk off 2 drinks to be retarded. she was just drunk enough to decide fuck it/he won't find out to something she wanted to do and is now having massive buyer's regret
>>27259558
Wait, what? Unless she was passed out drunk, what she did does not fall under rape. It was just a really stupid decision on her part, and she wants a free pay check, so she can not go to work. And two drinks doesn't make you too drunk, this is coming from a lightweight.
>>27249287
when you do finish, I'd be interested to hear what you had envisioned.
bumpino
>>27262516
>get drunk
>have sex
>sober up
>fuck, now I regret having sex
>I'll just say I was raped!
modern women, folks
>>27265713
That's why you never go full 3DPD, pic related
>>27181103
>expecting an antro pic not to be shit
>>27250214
This story has been unexpectedly great. Since it sounds like there's lots more to come, please continue even once this thread inevitably dies.
>>27264901
Sure I can do that.
>>27217103
>Briskly go up the stairs.
>This annoyance need to be fix now.
>And since it’s just the right time in the morning for ponies to go to work.
>Who know how many have seen those freaks bowing in your front lawn.
>Kinda surprising that none have called the guard yet.
>Opening the door to your bedroom, you can see that Iggy is up, stretching and letting out a yawn.
>”Good morning best human.” she says after she finishes her yawn.
“Good morning.”
>You tried your best to keep the irritation out of your voice.
>But it seems Iggy to pick up on it anyways.
>”Okay Anon, what’s eating you so early in the morning?”
“Hmm well, this might come to a surprise to you, but you have a lot of weird ponies ready to worship the ground you walk on, right outside our door step.”
>She blinks for a bit at this new information.
>”The hell are you talking about?” she says, as she rips a hole through reality, and stares through it.
>You have just gained two points of insight.
>”Umm how long have they been out there?”
“Beats me, all I know is that they want to meet their prophet from the stars.”
>Iggy sighs, before closing the rift.
>”And you didn’t kick them off our property because?”
“I wanted to see you drive them madly insane.”
>>27270820
>Iggy just shakes her head, before getting out of the bed.
>Which then proceeds to fix itself.
>She makes her way to the bathroom, but stop just before the door.
>”Okay one last question.” She says, turning her head towards you.
>”What did they do to you that got you so riled up?”
“They called me your pet.”
>Apparently Iggy found this funny, as she tries to contain a giggle.
“Hey, what’s so funny huh?”
>She manages to get a hold of herself before answering you.
>”Oh it’s nothing Anon.”
>All of a sudden, you feel something caress your check, overloading your senses with an indescribable sensation.
>”Give me a bit, and we’ll go deal with the big bad name callers.”
>Just couldn’t help it could you?
>You hear a nope echo through your mind, as Iggy disappears into the bathroom.
>>27271030
This is totally relevant to my interests and I can't wait to read more!
10
So I was right about the time off part, but wrong about the time to write part. Muh misfortunes. So I'm still here and I'll get on it asap. Stay alive fgts.
>>27278597
Waiting for Without
>>27278597
all glory to wan
>>27283186
>>27283188
Not sure if failed bot or 2 hiveminders being just as creative
>>27283540
Just a hivemind
>>27278597
why u gotta hurt best pone like that?
>>27269367
Don't worry, I am an expert in navigating dying threads. My first longer story evacuated 2 threads now, and I just posted in Succubus thread 2 hours before it died. Go figure.
>>27292614
We are on a Chinese cartoon website, there are better ways to post pics desu
>>27249287
>Wiping the tears from your eyes, you take a quick glance at the clock that hangs over your bed.
>It reads 4:30.
>Perfect, that gives you enough time to go to Twilight’s.
>And with the added benefit that the two of you can go to Sugar Cube after you ironed out the rough patches of your relationship.
>It’s a win/win for everybody.
>Rushing to the bathroom, you check yourself out in the mirror.
>Nothing too bad, just a little redness in your eyes.
>Nothing a Clear Eyes won’t fix.
>Dabbing a few drops in each eye, you wipe them clean with the sleeve of your suit.
>Rushing out of the bathroom, and down the stairs, you only slow down before reaching the door.
>Don’t want to freak out the ponies by running like a mad man towards Twilight’s.
>Opening the door, you walk at a steady pace.
>Once you arrive at Twilight’s castle, you ask a guard if he know where she is.
>He tell you she in the library, and askes if you would like an escort.
>Seeing how you just might get stuck on the roof for an entire day, you tell him to lead the way.
>Now that you’ve gotten this far, how the hell is this conversation going to go down?
>”Hey Twilight, I’m emotionally unstable right now, and I’ve recently found out you have a thing for me for awhile now, wanna hook up?”
>Yeah no, that shit isn’t going to fly.
>But you’re not give much time to think of anything better, as you and the guard reaches the library.
>He opens the door and steps aside.
>Well let’s see how well winging it will do.
>>27296188
Please tell me she's not with a stallion, i'm getting tired of this
>>27296267
Did you even read the story, Anon?
>>27296267
What gave you that idea?
>>27296267
It's Flash.
>My green, not yours.
>>27298489
Nah Flash is small time. Gotta find a stallion that's going to take people by surprise, like Big Mac.
*****
> "There's... something I've been meaning to tell you Spike... Something I've been wanting to say for a very long time now, my dear. And well, I believe it's long over due..." An overly done up Rarity speaks through a sheer white veil, and flowing pearl white dress.
> Her eyes lock to yours, wide, desperate, looking for your comfort as the gentle gusts of a starry night give life to her garments.
"Of course, lady Rarity." Your voice sounds deeper, more 'adult'.
> Or at least how you imagine it should sound.
> Your hulking muscular, square jawed body takes a knee before Rarity, taking a hoof gently into your masculine hand.
> Another gentle breeze adds some flowing life to a red cape you wear that partly covers a shimmering silvery sword.
> Your eyes are relaxed with a gentle smile awaiting words of your love.
> You both close some distance as you listen intently.
> "Spike... I... well..." She seems hesitant.
"Go on lady Rarity. You shouldn't be afraid to tell me anything. If there's anything I can do to help you, you should know I'll do it with a smile for you." Your thumb runs across her hoof admiring the maintenance she puts into it.
> "Oh Spike..." she blushes slightly looking away.
"I hope you know I mean that..." you reassure her leaning closer, your expression showing how true your words are.
> She looks up at you with softened eyes.
> "Of course I do, darling." She whispers leaning her forhead to yours.
> "And I hope you believe me when I say, how much I truly... Appreciate it.. and when i say, that i Love yo~"
> A nauseating burn swirls in your stomach.
> You hiccup pulling away from her.
> No... No! Not now!
> Her saddened expression starts to fade and darken.
> Your entire dream begins to falter as you feel the real world reintroduce its self to your senses.
> Chirps from the early rising birds, orange rays of a rising sun against your forced closed eye lids.
>>27299820
> You try to ignore these stimulants so you could go back to your dream, but it's no use.
> Your eyes lazily open, obviously upset and staring to the celing.
"Uhg..." you flop your arms to the side.
"Whyyyhyyhyy?" You whine.
> The nauseating swirl in your gut rocks you once more.
> You sit up placing both hands over your mouth.
> And with a green firey belch, you find some much needed relief.
> A scroll lands on the foot of Twilight's bed from the emerald flame.
> Why in Equestria is anypony sending these so early...
> Don't they know that some of us are trying to slee..... Wait...
> How are you in Twilight's room?
> You try to blink away your drowsiness while scratching your belly.
> And why is this place such a mess?...
> That's very.. very unlike Twilight..
> You remain puzzled for a moment scanning the room.
> The clothing on the floor.
> The tiny garbage pale overflowing with tissues.
> The papers in total disarray on her desk.
> You guess she wasn't lying...
> She's been here losing her mind the entire time..
> There's not one moment you can recall her letting anything become this disorganized.
> Looking over to her disheveled mane as she sleeps, obviously exhausted, solidifies your theory.
> You fight off a frown along with an empathetic sinking in your chest before you push yourself up to your feet wobbly and get the scroll at the foot of the bed.
> The movement you made causes her to snort at the end of her prolonged snore.
> She pulls the sheets in close to her chest mumbling some nonsense before her eyes open slightly.
>>27299855
> Her eyes shift through her barely open lids coming to the same realization that you did.
> "S...Spike?.." She lurches up in an almost panic hugging the sheets around her.
"Easy Twi, I'm here." You re assure her.
> Her shoulders relax realizing that.
> Laying back staring up to the celing, she seems to be trying to find the courage to ask you her next question
> "Is uh... Did Anonymous?.." she leaves her words hanging probably hoping you get it.
> You do.
"No Twilight.. He's not here.." you say unintentionally withdrawn as you begin to read the scroll for a distraction.
'My Dearest Twilight,
My hardest working, most loyal pupil. Princess of Friendship, and Element of Magic. Over the years I have been full of overwhelming pride, watching you grow and conquer any and every problem that faced you and your friends. Solving issues with patience and compassion for all involved. Teaching the lessons and importance of friendship, and cooperation.~'
> You pause your reading glancing back to her.
> She lies facing away from you still upset.
> You turn your attention back to the letter.
> blah blah blahhh...
'That is why it pains me so much to see the decisions that you have made as of late. Including the measures that you attempted to take to cover them up. Both, being conduct unbecoming of a Princess. Especially the one I expected you to be. Your accusations against Anonymous ontop of your actions, came from an outburst I have never seen from you before. Claiming that you still love him, while shouting a theory that very well may have resulted in his death. It leads me to believe that maybe you were thrust into this position of importance more quickly than you were ready for. But in this position, you are already in. Perhaps I am partly to blame as well.
>>27299889
As difficult as it is for me to do this, until I feel you are of sound mind and prove you are able to handle the responsibility again, the use of your wings will be revoked. Though they remain visible to see to avoid alarm of anypony, you will have no control of them until I see fit. You will write me your lessons, what you have learned from this experience and those going foward, just as you once did. Please know, I do this with a heavy heart Twilight, and hope you grow from it.'
> Oh boy...
> You scan to the end.
'- Princess Celestia.'
"Uhhh....Twilight?..." you peek over the top of the letter wide eyed to a Twilight getting up from her bed.
> "Yes Spike?..." she says with with a complete lack of energy.
"Youuu... may wanna read this.." you hold it toward her.
> "Thanks but, I'm not really in the mood for reading Spike..." her voice is low, drained of emotion.
"But I think it's kinda import~ Wait!" You shout seeing her hop from the side of the bed, knowing one she got used to her wings she would sprawl them for a soft landing.
> That she did not receive.
> With a loud 'oof', she quickly plummeted face first toward the floor.
> Her rear hoofs still poked over the side she jumped.
> "Uhhgg!...." she groans from the floor.
> You wince holding the scroll tighter to you.
> "Wha... My wings... What's going on?! Nnngh!" She scampered to her hooves with facial expressions showing she was trying to open her own wing span, unsuccessful so.
> "Spike?!" She looks to you panicked.
> You decide to stop biting your lip and let her know.
"Uh Twi... You might wanna sit down.." you timidly hand the scroll toward her.
>>27299896
*****
> You are Fluttershy.
> Preparing your weekly picnic breakfast for all your pets, furry and feathered friends.
> Gently placing a large lettuce and carrot bowl down for Angel, you smile contently as he digs in along side Harry and the other many animals.
"I'm sure glad you all could make it today. Isn't it just lovely to be able to enjoy this all together?" You say happily though almost whisper quiet.
> Several of the animals nod towards you with full mouths.
> Except Angel, who continues to dig in.
"Angel, try not to eat too quickly this time. I don't want you to get a tummy ache again!" You try to show concern but he ignores it.
"Oh you. We'll I don't want to hear it later then mister!" You try to act stern, failing miserably as Angel raised his cheek stuffed face from his plate to look at you with an arched brow.
> "WWHHAATT?!" Echos almost violently causing many of your animal friends to instinctively scatter in a panic, knocking over your carefully set up display.
> Harry winces, turning in the direction of the Caste, while Angel does so for only a second before forcing a swallow from his cheek full and raiding the now abandoned plates.
> You 'Eep' yourself as you stand taking a few steps back.
> Harry turns back to you baffled as you begin to scan your ruined breakfast date.
"Oh my...." you say both disappointed and confused.
>>27299918
So there's that. Sorry it's taking forever, but I hope it's still enjoyed. I'm a little drunk af. So sorry for the mistakes. Also Dassit.
>>27299942
a good update.
and FFS twi, being that surprised about the letter? wtf did she think?
>>27296267
not sure why u'd think that. she's had a thing for him and he's only now available (well, soon). why would she choose _now_ to go out with another guy?
I am 100% against the idea that Twilight can have her wings taken away like that, or in any way. Celestia has no right to REVOKE an integral part of her. Twilight is no longer a unicorn, she is an alicorn, that is not something she is rewarded for good behavior, it was a metamorpheses she achieved through her own efforts. Revoke her being a princess, fine there is no reason not to, but to take away her wings? That stinks of Tyrant Celestia. I don't recall Luna having her wings taken away after trying to DESTROY the world.
>>27302205
Celestia is essentially revoking her princess title by making her wings useless. Honestly, I feel that celestia is retarded for not taking away her HORN instead. After all, it's Twilight's magic that caused all this.
Luna had the benefit of being possessed; Twilight has no such thing going for her
I'm trying to read WAN's story from the beginning, but the heavy autist I am, I get triggered by wacky grammar and punctuation. Does it get better?
>>27300544
Thanks friend. It was just a startling discovery to wake to.
>>27302205
As I delete my 'stfu fgt' response, I concede that you have a decent point. But then again Luna was banished for how long vrs, Twilight's 'hey, knock it off stupid'. Also you're talking sister and student. Also, also. I just woke up so... ya know... there's that.
>>27302949
Kind of what I was going for. Punishment without the public shaming because Muh pupil.
>>27303104
Ya the beginning was a little rough admittedly. I want to go clean it all up. It was my first green and I'm sure you will be able to see the progression in it. I couldn't into green properly my first few updates. I'd like to say it cleans up quickly structurally, but I guess I'd be bias. Love to have a new reader though, thanks for giving it a shot!
>>27303163
>By line 400 Twiggles has already cheated on Anon with Flash, stated her regret, and both ran away.
>Again.
At least he killed Flash this time around, but boy am I noticing some schematics here
>>27303212
Original prompt problems.
>>27303302
Fair enough, I didn't think this story was from before MP times. How did the original prompt spawn so many stories anyway?
>>27303366
Have a seat my child, for we shall revisit a time when this thread was lush with green, ripe with conversation. Where the godly writefriends smiled upon us gifting us with feels, some of which we did not ask for but accepted anyway. Where names like Fife and Loki were impossible to miss. When we were an Adulterous Twilight prompt. When I was inspired to give this writefagging a try of my own, inspired by the literary titans.
> pic related.
>>27303661
I know that this was AT before, I just did not think that you started writing all the way back there. Since, you know, you're not dead yet, unlike everyone else
>>27302205
>I don't recall Luna having her wings taken away after trying to DESTROY the world.
I don't think a thousand years of isolation is getting off easy. It's temporary and it's not like she hasn't been an unicorn for most of her life.
>>27303661
A second link in the party section is broken. FYI, if you care about that. First and third are fine.
>>27302205
I don't think there is anything wrong with punishing Twilight. What I don't like is how Anon gets off scot free all the time.
>Wife cheated on me
Get a new waifu
>Nearly kill a captain
No one cares
>Is one of the three eye witnesses to the barn fire.
No questions ask by the guard.
>Publicly slaps Twilight.
Isn't detained for harming royalty.
>Kills a guard on a public transport, and leaves the body.
No questions ask, nor is he detained.
>In his "worst nightmare."
Gets comforted while Twilight fights
>Gets accused of harboring their version of Satan.
Walks off of castle grounds as if nothing happened.
Now I used Without's story as an example, but really I have the same problem with all AT stories. Nothing bad ever happens to Anon. He always wins, he's never in the wrong, and the only person who gets any really punishment is Twilight,even MMM's story fell into this hole.
>>27299942
Nice, more of this
>>27183789
More like this
>>27235298
Fucking erotic
>>27303661
I remember these times. God, I want Loki and Fife back
>>27299918
Ho boy, I like wehre this is going
>>27304226
>Get a new waifu
Waifu gets a New Anon
>Nearly kill a captain, No one cares
Twilight probably claimed he'd fallen down the stairs when she took him to the hospital
>Is one of the three eye witnesses to the barn fire. No questions ask by the guard.
Luna probably answered the guards questions while he was at the hospital
>Publicly slaps Twilight.
I don't think anybody has seen him slapping her
>Kills a guard on a public transport, and leaves the body. No questions ask, nor is he detained.
Maybe the Luna guards cleaned up after him
>In his "worst nightmare."
Gets comforted while Twilight fights
Nigga, he was forced to watch Flash stealing his waifu, I would really appreciate some comfortation after seeing that
>Gets accused of harboring their version of Satan.Walks off of castle grounds as if nothing happened.
Twilight was the only one who claimed that and Celestia didn't believe her sooo
Also there is this applejack and Rarity MP story by ActuallyMarriedPone where Anon is wrong/ not doing too well
>>27306355
Yeah I meant to make a post that said most, but then life happen anywho.
>Twilight probably claimed he'd fallen down the stairs when she took him to the hospital
No one would've have bought that just based off how bad Flash looked
>Luna probably answered the guards questions while he was at the hospital
Why would anyone care what Luna says? Unless she pulls rank they would still want to talk to Anon.
>I don't think anybody has seen him slapping her
They were standing in broad daylight at breakfast hour at a waffle house, and they made a scene before leaving, someone saw that.
>Maybe the Luna guards cleaned up after him
When did she have time to order this? Anon didn't say shit until their date, which was hours after the fact.
>Nigga, he was forced to watch Flash stealing his waifu, I would really appreciate some comfortation after seeing that
But he already saw Flash taking his waifu, and has been comforted by everyone who know for days afterward, this wouldn't even come off as shocking at this point.
>Twilight was the only one who claimed that and Celestia didn't believe her sooo
And yet Celestia didn't ask Cadence, the other eye wittiness that could make or break Anon's she crazy statement, who cares if Luna throw a bitch fit, she has a bias view in the whole thing, so why Celestia relented because Luna said some mean words to her is unbelievable.
>>27303702
Whoops. Ya. I live I die I live again. It's been a long project.
>>27303908
Thanks friend I'll get to it when I can.
>>27304226
>>27307027
TLA doesn't like my story. I get it. Jeebus.
>>27304586
Imposter TLA Likes my story. Wat?
>>27305616
So much this.
>>27306213
Glad you're still enjoying!
>>27307967
But Wan, you are TLA
>>27304226
interesting point. and yeah it's something that bugs me a little too sometimes. but, ya know, muh self insert.
>>27306355
also good points.
>>27307027
yeah they aren't waterproof, but all are reasonably explanations.
>>27307967
Eh don't worry about it, I just like to over analyze everything, and poking plot holes in things.And how do you know if I'm not samefagging from different IPs?
>>27304226
>He always wins
Not sure how any of this is winning.
>>27271030
>You know, for an unidentifiable cosmic being.
>Iggy still takes forever in the bathroom.
>Don’t know why the bathroom hold such power over every single female in existence.
>But it does.
>After some time, Iggy emerges from the bathroom.
>The form she decided on was a Pegasus.
>Her coat, and mane is black, with her underbelly, inner legs, neck, around her mouth, nose and around her eyes is red.
>Her mane is braided, and hangs off her shoulder.
>It’s a wonderful thing that this is a marriage of jokester.
“Woah Iggy calm down there.”
>She stares at you, in hopes that you would explain yourself.
“Just because you have a cult that is willing to sacrifice a baby goat in your name, doesn’t mean you can get all edgy on me.”
>It takes her a second before she gets it.
>And her response is to stomp her hoof, puff out her chest, and pout.
>”Really Anon?!”
“Why yes, just be sure to warn me when I’m about cut myself on an invisible razor blade.”
>Something hits the back of your head.
>You were about to say something, but Iggy cuts you off.
>”You said warn you if you were about to cut yourself, I didn’t cut you, so no warning.”
>Smug Eldritch horror.
>C’mon lets deal with these cultist, before someone calls the guard.” She says, as she stars walking towards the door.
>She thinks she can have the last laugh.
>Ha.
>You pull out your phone, and activate its voice command.
“Play “Waking the Demon.”
>The song starts blaring through your phone’s speakers.
>Iggy stop when she hears the song, but couldn’t help herself from smiling.
>”You know I’m just going to get you back for this.”
"Yeah, but for now I'm up by one."
>>27304226
>Kills a guard on a public transport, and leaves the body.
He didn't kill any guard. He knocked the unicorn out and the pegasus got chucked out of a window. Night Tide cleaned up afterwards.
>>27311187
> You hold the blade that was just inside of your friend staring at it for a moment, examining it.
> The reflective non stained portion of the blade causes you to quickly catch a glimpse of your horrid eyes.
> Emotional torment grips you as you recall Toil showing you in the same manner with his serving tray.
> 'I will be your strength to do what you can not... To do what must be done Anonymous...We will send him a message...'
> The words enter your mind as you stare blankly at your slaughtered new friend while on your knees.
> The mix of emotions, guilt, sorrow and pain, leaves you feeling lost as as you sence your own self control give way to a feeling of submission.
> Your slight nod is the only response you can offer.
Sombra killed that pegasus, and how did Night Tide clean two dead bodies on a moving train?
>>27311312
>Sombra killed that pegasus
Nope
"L-Lightning Streak?.."
> Without an answer he collapsed a short distance away.
> With a small hop and extended wings, you glide down to him.
> Landing with quiet hooves you keep a small distance and wide eyes, spear ready.
> His body seems ragged, dirty and blood stained along his back.
> And his wings...
> What in the name of Celestia happened...
> " Y..you left me.." he let's out a dry throat rasp as he lays on his side struggling for breaths.
> Your heart tenses.
> You thought for sure he was going to die.
"I... .i...." Nothing comes to mind.
> With great effort, grunting and whimpering, he pushes himself to lie on his stomach.
> Your own stomach is in knots at the sight of him..
> His wings, if you can still call them that, hang limp at his side appearing to be covered in black.. crystals?..
> Taking a half circling lap around him, slack jawed, you notice his other.. crystallized.. wing partially shattered.
> A larger crystal jutted from between his wing bases appearing to also be entombing another unknown object.
> With a weak cough he speaks, "He's not going to let you go Flash. He said." He coughs more violently " He said that you'll pay for everything you've done to him and those he cares about.."
"He doesn't frighten me.." you put up your front scanning his body.
> "Then why did you leave me to die.. To let them do this to me and be tossed from a moving train? To be nothing more than a message for you... I wanted to help you Flash. But as it turns out" He coughs even louder, some blood coming from his mouth now. " You're nothing more than an opportunistic coward.."
>how did Night Tide clean two dead bodies on a moving train?
Don't know but he did.
> "Everything has been taken care of Prince Anonymous.." His stoic features return almost immediately.
The unicorn is not mentioned again after his incapacitation so no clue what happened to him.
>>27311468
Hmm alright I'll concede that point.
>>27302205
Celestia's using this marital crisis as an excuse to mess with Twilight, which is one of her favorite hobbies.
>>27307967
>Imposter TLA Likes my story. Wat?
which TLA doesn't know how to bump properly?
>>27308325
I made some writing choices that I now regret. Spagoot incoming soon™
I am not sure if I chose the best perspective for this scene. Oh well
>>27250214
>The slow sliding movement sends you a brink closer to whatever it is that awaits you at the end of this journey.
>Whether it's insanity or paradise, you are not quite certain.
>Right now the only thing that you know for a fact to be real is the overwhelming force pinning you down to the bed.
>Your forehooves are powerless to act, and your involuntary wiggles only serve to tire them down, not achieving anything else.
>Your two remaining limbs are warped around your assailant, and only motion they are capable of is pulling him even closer.
>Which you are also trying to do, this time half consciously.
>Your body does protest against your insides being emptied, but at the same time you can't help but to squirm at the sensation overcoming the very entrance to your nethers.
>Also, you know what is going to come next.
>Because it already came multiple times this evening.
>Just as the very last bit of your lover's member is about to exit you, the movement ceases.
>And just like myriad times before, the sudden slam to your pelvis buries you deeper into the soft, blanket-covered mattress.
>The fuzzy material wrinkles even further, inching closer to your vulnerable frame.
>This ticklish sensation on your sides only helps to enhance your pleasure, turning your brain to mush.
>You have forgotten your trip, you have forgotten your plans.
>You neither know or care what clients are appointed to arrive tomorrow.
>Right now you are trapped laying on your back in the most uncovering and revealing position possible.
>And you only know one thing.
>Your name is Rarity.
>And you are being literally fucked into your bed by your own husband.
>>27315239
The first thing I saw when I read your post was
>Your name is Rarity.
>And you are being literally fucked into your bed by your own husband.
>>27296188
>Walking into the library filled with bookcases, and books as far as the eye can see.
>You can see Twilight sitting at a table.
>And judging by the empty plate, teapot, and tea cup, and a saucer, she just got done eating a snack.
>Twilight was in mid sip when she see you enter.
>She puts her cup on the saucer, before waving you over.
>”Good Evening, how are you feeling today.”
“Oh… um, just dandy Twilight.” You say as you walk over to her.
>In a blink of an eye, Twilight materializes a chair for you to sit in.
>Sitting in the chair, you take a quick glance at Twilight.
>Her scar has healed nicely, even if it has left three streaks of exposed skin.
>”You know I’m surprised that you came to see me before the party.”
>Well that’s one way to start a conversation.
“Um, yeah… I just wanted to talk about what happen recently… you know.”
>It seem your topic of choice has darken her mood somewhat.
>”Okay, what is it you want to talk about?”
>Well for starters you killed my wife.
>No, how about the monster you fought was Lilac, and everything so far has been a massive lie.
>How about a sentence that isn’t so dark.
>Um.
>What the hell, was is it so difficult to talk to Twilight?
>Jesus it feels like when you asked Lilac to marry you.
>Great another wonderful memory tarnished.
>”Anon, are you alright?”
>Twilight’s question brings you out of your trance.
>You didn’t realize this, but now you can feel your body shaking.
>”Huh, um yeah, yeah totally fine.”
>You’ve had an easier time selling that lie to a rock.
>”It doesn’t look you’re okay.”
>”I mean getting attacked in the middle of the night by some weird thing must be a very traumatizing experience.
>And you can’t hold it anymore.
>>27315239
Tfw my heart almost dropped for a split second
Continue, please
>>27315412
Unless you are Chinese, I'd recommend reading from top to bottom ^:)
>>27315425
I am, but this is not my comfort zone. I did not write clop before, and it is rather... different.
>>27315239
>The steady rhythm feels like your own heartbeat, natural and overpowering.
>Your own heart of course was moving on its own, much faster pace.
>But you didn't care about that either.
>Even if you were to die of a cardiac arrest here, you couldn't do anything about it.
>You were not a pony right now, not even a living animal.
>You were an object, only supposed to serve a designated purpose your owner acquired you for.
>After that, you could be thrown away and discarded.
>The only reason for your very existence was to allow this wild beast to indulge itself in its carnal pleasure.
>He didn't care whether or not you were hurt during that.
>Your joints could pop, your pelvis could be shattered, you could pass out from asphyxiation.
>But the only thing he cared for was emptying his balls inside you, to relieve himself of the primal urge that was passed down from times immemorial thanks to evolution.
>You were his catch, like a prehistoric pony to its predator.
>Only instead of becoming his meal, you became his lay.
>He held your hooves down with his superior hands as he continued to violate and ravage you in whatever way he felt like.
>An extra strong thrust that left a ringing pain in your hips causes you to produce a muffled moan-squeak.
>Of course it was barely audible thanks to the ball-gag fastened to your muzzle that was invading your mouth.
>The predator didn't want to hear you, not your pleads, not your cries.
>There was only one part of you that mattered to him right now, and it is located between your hindlegs.
>Everything else was just an obstruction.
>Your voice, your horn, your ambitions, your skills, your ever so carefully maintained pride.
>None of that was any value right now, because you were just a fucktoy.
>And it turned you on to no end.
>>27315944
Calling it for now, waking up early and stuff. More/Mare will come tomorrow
>>27315944
>I am, but this is not my comfort zone. I did not write clop before, and it is rather... different.
Well I can tell you that you are quite effective despite that.
>>27263633
Not true, having a larger blood alcohol level is scientifically proven to impair judgment. You are considered drugged, even if you did it to yourself.
Someone who is being psychologically impaired by a control substance cannot give consent.
>>27178603
>If cuckoldry is your thing, this isn't your thread.
>OP pic is Flash getting cucked
good one, dumbass
>>27319444
Don't be obtuse. You know it means toward Anon in a fetishy way rather than just a plot device.
>>27319444
Check'em faggot
>>27319444
You bring shame to those trips.
The banks are your friends.
>page 9
>>27324562
page 8
>A Lust for Revenge will never update
R.I.P. the only good Starlight Glimmer green.
>>27325283
>>27315944
>>Your voice, your horn, your ambitions, your skills, your ever so carefully maintained pride.
>>None of that was any value right now, because you were just a fucktoy.
>>And it turned you on to no end.
Is this going to turn into some of that Slave Pony faggotry? Because there's already a containment thread for anons with weird domination fetishes.
>>27323556
Fuck off, jew
>>27326143
We don't just have one thread for slave ponies, we have two. Although I don't think he's going that far, just Rara and Anon having kinky sex
>>27326143
>weird domination fetishes
>weird
Are you gay? No, scratch that. Even the gays can get into that.
>>27326621
Having a character tripping over themselves in their haste to throw away their life's ambitions for the PRIVILEGE of becoming a slave for your perfect, superior cock is the sort of frustration-venting that I stopped hearing about after the 10th grade in high school. This shit goes away once girls start talking to you, Anon.
>>27326709
>This shit goes away once girls start talking to you, Anon.
If you're a pleb. There's a reason why BDSM is a popular fetish.
>>27326819
BDSM is fine, it's these fucking autists with fantasies of having absolute control over every aspect of an individual's life that makes me cringe my fucking eyes out. I've read so many stories that range from Anon hiding a pony away in his basement to him forcefully making ponies behave like animals, and they LOVE him for it.
>>27326875
>and they LOVE him for it.
That's what we call being a masochist.
>>27326875
Seeing as you have no problems with BDSM, you should lurk this one>>27304898, as it's more about happy dom/sub relationships without the mind break.
>>27326709
i'm sure we'll hear less of it once some of /mlp/ start passing grade 10 as well.
>>27326143
No slavery.
Fun fact, I wanted to post a happy chart with Rarity, but it turns out that one does not exist. There is only the unhappy one.
Why?
>>27327826
By the way, I am beginning to get triggered by all the people who seem to know full and well what is going to happen in my story after reading 2 posts/1 post/1 line/without reading. Nigger I don't even know what I am going to do next, how could you know how is it going to progress, develop and end with such sample size?
>Anon is going to have sex with the OC pone in every update now, shit story
>Dash is OOC and edgy, even though I only saw 1 line of hers
>Lmao you are adding Flutterdash lewd arc because they are in the same scene (ok I baited that one)
>Kek another Flash cuckoldry story xd btfo to >>>/trash/
>You are turning this into another SiM shit because I say so
Please refer to the attached picture.
>>27328331
Look out it's an angry turtle
Bumpo!
bumpino
>>27328331
Yawohl, Essen Sie ein Penis.
Bumping through the shitpost
>>27315944
>You bite down on the intrusive object in your mouth a bit harder as your mind begins spiraling in an unknown direction.
>You remember the first time you heard about Anon arriving in Equestria.
>It was thanks to Twilight being in one of her rambling fits, in which she ended up spilling a highly classified state secret.
>All because she was overly excited over the possibilities that this strange alien presented.
>She had no idea just how correct she was in that moment.
>You feel a shift of weight around the legs of your bed, as your predator finds a new angle of his attack.
>This time focused even more downwards, pressuring a different area that causes your back to arch upwards.
>Of course she meant opportunities for her scientific research.
>And no doubt he ended up being relevant in that too.
>But you are pretty confident that you are currently experiencing the true potential inside this wild creature.
>Although technically this 'potential' was now inside you.
>You recall hearing different and conflicting stories about 'The Human' once his existence became more clear.
>You were rather familiar with the more renowned gossiping circles in Canterlot, so it was only natural that you would learn those.
>But my word were some of them ridiculous.
>"I heard that he has 3 heads, and each of them breathes fire!"
>"But what a nonsense that is, he only had 1 head, and it was cut off by the brave Royal Guard when he started eating innocent ponies."
>"Well I was informed by a very reliable source that Princess Celestia has taken a deep liking to this creature, and is trying to court him into her bedchamber."
>"Come on now Fleur, you are being ridiculous. Why would Princess even do that."
>"She always had an... extravagant taste. Remember the Griffon Emissary?"
>The gossips were quickly getting out hoof at that point.
>And needlessly to say, left you rather curious as to how this "Human" actually was like.
>>27336083
green!
>>27336083
More pls
>>27336083
>An opportunity to find out has presented itself rather quickly.
>Apparently the alien had a habit of wearing clothes, and as luck might have it, you were the only tailor who was friends with one of the Princesses.
>Even if you like to think that it was purely because of your growing brand in Canterlot, knowing right ponies had had an influence.
>Frankly the task you were given was borderline impossible, even if Twilight failed to see the problem.
>"He has a body resembling that of a minotaur, so you will just have to make something for one!"
>Why did it not occur to her that minotaurs do not, in fact wear clothes was beyond you.
>But regardless, you decided to take up this challenge.
>After all, it wasn't a common achievement to create clothing for such an exotic creature, who would no doubt bring a lot of attention to itself.
>And it would look lovely in your resume, should you ever write one.
>Little did you know at the time where exactly that meeting of opportunity would end up taking you.
>Although you can't exactly tell that you did not have a hunch from the very beginning.
>There was simply something captivating about him.
>Perhaps it was his form, truly like a minotaur and yet much smaller and more delicate.
>It was not covered by coat nor fur, leaving the play of his muscles clearly visible when he was moving.
>He only wore a small piece of material around his waist that day, not reaching further than to his knees, allowing you to take a good look at his features.
>His weirdly short mane that did not extend to his neck for some reason clashed heavily with his bare skin.
>A pair of small, green eyes reflected the sunlight, glistening like a pair of emeralds in a truly breathtaking way.
>And the way he would just look at you.
>That curious stare, with a smile dancing in it.
>It made you feel rather fuzzy inside.
,,,,
>>27339410
>Of course there was more to it than just the initial charm.
>You were after all an expert in charming, so being charmed was not exactly something you would instantly act upon.
>...most of the time.
>But you quickly got a lot of time to spend with Anon as a result of your assignment.
>Since he was not allowed to leave the castle at that point, you could not make adjustments on the fly by having him in your Canterlot workshop.
>And you could not just stop by a castle for a 2 minutes of exchange.
>At first you used excuses like trying to understand his idea of the clothes he wanted.
>Then somewhere along the line you've both stopped caring about that, and just enjoyed a good conversation over a cup of tea.
>And he did have a very refined taste in that drink, which you can only imagine elated Princess Celestia.
>Finally somepony... err, someone who understood her in that regard.
>You frankly never got all the miniscule differences, but enjoyed his choices nonetheless.
>At some point you had to admit to yourself that you were delaying your project on purpose, just to steal some extra time with him.
>You thought you were being subtle about it, until Princess Luna asked you if you "are aware that Anonymous will not disappear once you finish your work."
>Even though it was said with a playful tone and a smile, it froze the blood in your veins.
>Not only were you scalded by a princess, but also called out on spending too much time with Equestria newest oddity.
>It got you to complete your order in a day, collect your payment from the royal steward and leave.
>You were simply scared of acting like a filly having her first crush, that would just ruin your meticulously crafted image.
>...and more than likely scare Anonymous away.
>Both of those things, as you came to realise, being important for you.
Hope you don't mind a bit of backstory, I am pretty much done with it
>inb4 interrupting clopfic with story
>>27339946
>You came to regret your hasty departure rather quickly.
>At one point you were even sure that a better option would've been to just propose to Anon on the last day, even if you were completely unsure about your feelings yourself.
>But either way you were certain that you will now either be forgotten, or that he will hold it to him how abruptly you have left.
>That was until you got an invitation to the next Wonderbolts show.
>Those acrobatics were never your forte, but they have been rather important social events and you attended them every now and again.
>This time however, you had an admission to the royal section of the arena.
>As the name might suggest, only one of the Princesses could bestow such honor, so at first you were unsure what to make of it.
>But the attached letter explained that this was a personal request of Anonymous the Human, for you to be his accompanying pony during what was to be his first public appearance.
>You remember having to re-read that paragraph a couple of times for the meaning of it to sink in.
>You were invited to some of the more prestigious events before.
>But this right then felt to you like being nominated a princess from the absolute most common pony.
>The preparation frenzy you then dove into had the intensity and force of a strong hurricane.
>You wanted to look just perfect.
>After all, this was your first date, even if nobody called it that.
>You simply knew that this could end up being a life changing moment.
>And so it was.
>>27340434
i like story even more than clopwell, not always, but most of the time
thx AT!
Waiting for WaN
If a thread has exactly one writer (and more importantly makes it to page 10), that means something about how interested people are in the content/topic of the thread.
>>27345836
If a thread has exactly one shitposter (and more importantly gets shitposted in before page 10), that means something about how interested people are about shitposting around the content/topic of the thread.
>>27346116
what
>>27345836
This thread has more than one writer, it just all of us have infrequent as hell updates
>>27315412
>That thing was your wife.
>That thing was the love of your life
>That thing has been apart of the best memories you’ve ever had.
>That thing wanted you dead.
>That thing saw you as nothing more than cattle.
>That thing probably didn’t even cherish those memories.
>How could everything so right be so wrong?
>Why did everything so right have to be so wrong?
>Your tears didn’t even have time to collect in the corner of your eyes, before they started to fall.
>Twilight is surprised by the sudden development.
>In an attempt to calm you down, she teleports into your lap.
>No the smartest thing to do.
>You wrap your arms around her, pulling her close to your body.
>She is startled by your actions, opening her mouth to gasp.
>Continuing to make a bad situation worse.
>You take Twilight’s open mouth as an invitation, and kiss her.
>You manage to draw out the kiss for a minute, before Twilight pulls back as far as she can.
>The look on her face is one of pure bewilderment.
>You try to apologizes, but all that came out is incoherent babbling.
>It doesn’t take long, before you give up, and rest your head on her chest.
>Matting her fur with tears.
>Twilight wraps her forelegs around your head, as you feel hear wings wrap around your shoulders.
>”There, there Anon, everything is going to be alright.”
>Her gentle voice is a stark contrast to your raspy sobs.
I need to go to sleep.
>>27347140
Oh god
sauce?
>>27347140
The kiss is a bit confusing. Seems a touch out of place to me.
>>27347140
>kissing Twilight
I mean, why not just fuck already?
>>27351763
It is out of touch, that's why I wrote it.
>>27352027
But I already have two Anon fucks Twilight greens. Luckily for you this isn't one of them.
So no one want to write a new adulterous Twi story? It's not like a don't like WaN, but his story has lot of superfluous stuff like Sombra, guards' shenanigans, batpones, Luna's madness and etc.
I want something with more concentration on relationships, feels and Twalot's suffering and regret.
>>27352837
>Another AT story
Doesn't it get tiring after a while anon?
>>27352837
>I want something with more concentration on relationships, feels and Twalot's suffering and regret.
None of that requires an adulterous Twilight.
>>27212185
what one? (newfag)
>>27353017
We still didn't get a decent finished story though.
>>27353626
I can't imagine any other situation that can instantly destroy happy marriage.
>>27353694
>finished story
>mfw
>>27352837
So you want Without's story without the fluff. Why? That's is the only thing keeping it apart from other AT stories. Also unless you have a reason to make Twilight cheat (which she never does other than plot) You just have a really long insert waifu here, with the fakest feel a story could have because it force drama bullshit.
>Wah Twilight cheated on a person that I barely know.
>She worse than Satan.
>>27347140
>The two of you sit from some time.
>The only sounds that could be heard are your sobs.
>Eventually you calm down, and properly apologize.
>Moving your head from Twilight’s chest.
>You look her in the eye, before telling her everything you know.
>Her face changes through your story.
>From worry, to sadness, to blushing as you tell you know about her feeling for you.
>Once you’re finished, you give Twilight some time to go over the details.
>”Anon I… I’m so sorry, I didn’t know.”
>You gently shake your head, as you raise your right hand, and caress her face.
“You shouldn’t be, you did save my life after all.”
“It’s just I have to cope with all the broken things she left behind.”
>Twilight hold your hand with her left hoof, and lightly squeezes it.
>She looks down at your chest, before taking a deep breath, and sighing.
>It takes a few second before she looks back up at your face.
>”Anon, you know I’ll do everything in my power to help get through this, but.”
>She pauses, as if trying to get herself under control.
>”As much as I would love for us to get together eventually, I can’t do that right now.”
>”Not when you’re grieving.”
>”Not when Lilac still holds your heart.”
>”I don’t want you to use my love to fill in holes left behind.”
>”To see Lilac instead of seeing me.”
>”I’ve already been through that, and I don’t want to go through it again.”
>>27262516
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>>27361484
>/mlp/ - Pony
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>>27361699
I'm not giving 4chan my shekels
>>27352837
At this point I could really give a shit what the story is about. I just want something that will eventually be finished. I'm tired of getting attached to these stories that don't have an ending.
>>27352837
there were a few of them. and I'd say WaN also pays alot of attention to exactly that.
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>>27178603
pic of Twi is hot
>>27362938
There are a good few that are finished and damn satisfying reads already. I especially liked neglected anon and lokilorien's stories for feels.
>>27366441
Did he ever finish Prince Anon & Young Celestia
4 Months later And I'm finally done.Also roll credits
>>27358773
>You shouldn’t be surprised by her answer.
>But a rejection is still a rejection, even if it’s done as nicely as possible.
>But she does make a good point.
>You have friends that help you through this.
>Speaking of friends, isn’t Dash’s birthday next week?
>You’ll need to get her something.
>You can’t help but smile, as things finally stop looking so bleak.
“Thank you, Twilight, I guess I just need someone to talk to.”
“And once again sorry about the kiss.”
>A broad smile appears on her face.
>”You’re welcome Anon.”
>Suddenly a blush creeps across her face.
>”And if you want to make your special mare, then I’ll do everything I can to make you the happiest man in Equestria.”
>Smooth Twilight.
“Alright then, when the time comes I’ll take you up on that offer.”
>Twilight’s smile, and blush grows wider.
>She rubs her face against your hand, before she removes herself from your lap.
>”Okay then with that settled, we better get a move on, or we’ll be late, and you know how mad Pinkie gets when anyone is late to her parties.”
>Nodding in agreement, you rise out of your chair.
>The two of you start walking towards the door.
>”Oh, and one more thing.”
>You look down at Twilight, as you walk.
>”Never kiss me again without my consent, or I’ll seal your mouth shut for a week.”
“Fair enough.”
>You open the door, and like a gentleman, you let Twilight go first.
>Following after her, closing the door behind you.
>Finally waking up from your Newlywed Nightmare.
>>27369075
>4 Months later And I'm finally done. Also roll credits
What, is it the end? the Happy End? What?! I'm not used to happy endings! AAA!
And for those who might give a damn. When I first started writing Newlywed, it was supposed to be a short, and unpleasant green to tide me over until I figured out what to do with Tile Lover Anon pt 2. The original idea look a little like this.
>Same beginning
>Anon walk painfully slow through Ponyville, until he reaches Twilight's castle.
>Has a meeting with Twilight, where she send a letter to Luna, and Anon goes back home.
>Later that night Luna visits Twilight, tell her that she can't see into Anon's nightmares.
>They both decide to go see what wrong with Anon.
>But before they get there, Anon has one more nightmare, but this time wakes up.
>Cue monster Lilac feeding off of a dying Anon.
>When Luna and Twilight enters Anon's house.
>They eventually find corpse with Lilac no where to be found.
>>27369824
But the more I kept writing the more thought went behind it
>Cut Anon's walk through Ponyville as it was redundant.
>Made a swap to Twilight POV to fill in the gap.
>The newspaper she read wasn't supposed to happen until the end.
>Was going to have a OC guard help with dealing with Lilac and chilling with Spike
>Didn't like it, so I cut them both.
>As I was thinking more about what to do with Luna, I couldn't find a reason to keep her around, so I cut her and put Spike back in.
>Twilight wasn't originally suppose to like Anon.
>Even thought about writing a line that explained that Anon wasn't her type.
>You can blame this shift on all the Twilight greens I've written since then.
>I started to drop more hints that Lilac wasn't all she appeared to be.
>Anon passing out, and being taken to the hospital.
>When I was going to do the watch over the hospital part, the plan was to have the Mane6 do it together.
>Cut that idea when I couldn't make it work, as I kept knocking AJ out, rendering the EoH useless.
>And finally the main struggle I had left was, do I still kill Anon?
>And while at some point I might have done it.
>I couldn't do it anymore, so I said fuck it, go for a happy ending.
And that is how much has changed in the 4 months of this stories life span
>>27178603
bump
>>27362938
>I'm tired of getting attached to these stories that don't have an ending.
this so fucking hard.
unfortunately that disease is not new nor restricted to this thread, or even /mlp/. all pone fics seem to be susceptible.
>>27369075
but TLA is here to save us from... well, to not add to that disease.
Thanks not-anon!
>>27369824
i woulda tweaked your original idea by letting luna/twi find out/see what happened, but be too late to do anything about it.
gotta say tho, the way you changed it fits better with the MP theme.
>>27369075
A completed green... how rare! thx TLA
>>27369703
Oh, ok.
That's cool.
Plenty of other good sunhorse stories out there.
Yep, whole lot of it out there.
>>27374924
There's a story archive in /sun/ Don't know how many is in it though
Hey AssaultTurtle and WaN (and... dare I suggest, Loki?) how about a birthday present for a pathetic single 40yo /mlp/fagwho doesn't even own a waifu pillowin the form of an update? Or, put another way, accept my gift of motivation to write... which is kinda like the ol' giving a bowling ball to the wife trope.
>>27378363
Ah, guilt tripping, my only weakness. You will have to excuse me today though, last month of an academic year is traditionally a bitch. I can promise some free time (and thus an update) tomorrow however, if I don'tkill myself by then
>>27310964
>The two of you head downstairs, but before you exit the front door, you stop.
>”Alright, so how wild, and crazy is this going to get?”
>Iggy stops, before she turn towards you.
>”I’m not driving them all insane Anon.”
“Huh, why not?”
>”Well first off driving them insane in the front lawn would cause one hell of a scene.
>”One that would require the involvement of this town’s local heroes and the guard, because ponies are screaming about madness incarnate.”
>”And second, all they did was call you my pet, and that smaller than anything I’ve done to you as a joke.”
>”So suck it up, and try not to pout too much okay.”
>She turns around and resumes heading to the door.
>Reluctantly you follow behind.
>Iggy opens the front door, and steps outside.
>It take a few second before the crowd has any sort of reaction.
>But when they get one.
>”Praise be, it’s her!”
>”Our prophet has come to deliver onto a higher plane!”
>”Oh blessed star child, could you please kiss my soon to be born baby?!”
>Iggy recoils from their sudden outburst.
‘What have you never had a cult before?’ you raise the question in your mind, so she can read it.
>’No, there was only two people who even know I existed on Earth.’
‘And what happened to the second person?’
>’He’s still in Ohio, quarantine with the rest of them.’
‘The hell did you do to Ohio?’
>’Something that you’ll never find out about.’
>>27379941
I fucking KNEW I was trapped in this State.
>>27379597
try my approach to uni: never do homework or study (ok, study for like 30 minutes the night before the final and 10 minutes in the hallway just before) and just get by on sheer luckor by giving the D to all the lonely profsno wait, that doesn't actually work
>>27378363
>>27379597
That. Sans academics, plus the impending/actual irl marital problems.
Sorry. Life happened [ick] and I got unmotivated. Ended up hating everything I tried.
i want a story about twilight cucking flash with anon
>You idly twirl your ring around your finger.
>Anxiety is one thing, but at this rate you’re due for an embolism.
>Hundreds, if not thousands of different things are racing across your mind simultaneously.
>As you continue to pace around the large, crystal table, you keep track mentality of how many times you’ve paced around it recently.
>This makes fifty-seven.
>The soreness of your calf muscles is becoming harder and harder to ignore.
>You slow your pacing down to a slow walk, then stop altogether.
>In the last hour, you have aged six years, lost twelve pounds, probably most of your hair, and, you’re fairly certain, have now developed PTSD.
>Slumping yourself against the back of one of the girl’s chairs, you decide to give your shaking legs a minute to rest up.
>Bringing your knees close to your chest, you rest your elbows on them as you clutch your head.
>You begin hyperventilating again as your anxiety hits you full force.
>How the hell could you let this happen?
>All your clever scheming, all the sneaking around, distracting, plotting, and secrecy…
>None of it matters anymore.
>The jig was up.
>You played with fire, and were not about to be burned.
>You swallow hard as you try to come to your senses.
>In a few minutes, you will be confronted by your wife.
>She will be furious.
>She will be hostile.
>She will be beside herself with unyielding rage.
>And she will be justified in doing whatever she wants to you.
>God help you for what you’ve done to this poor, sweet little mare.
>A mare who showed you nothing but love, gave you nothing but her utmost trust.
>And you threw it all away.
>You let out a quiet chuckle.
>Hey, if you’re lucky, maybe she’ll just vaporize you on the spot?
>You suck in a deep breath of air, then release it slowly.
>You can’t help but think back to when this first began.
>When you decided to ruin your marriage.
>>27384064
>It was a only few months ago when you first met.
>This was a little while after your honeymoon, and your wife was doing diplomatic work in the Crystal Empire.
>Such a beautiful country, a bit cold, but gorgeous nonetheless.
>Twilight was actually the one who introduced you two at one of the parties Cadence was hosting.
>You noticed it immediately.
>The sweating, the shortness of breath, the pounding in your chest.
>As cliched as it was, you knew it was love.
>Mostly because you’ve already experienced similar feelings with your wife.
>…Soon to be ex-wife.
>While Twilight was talking with dignitaries and diplomats at separate events, you two were off getting to know each other a bit better.
>Inside and out.
>You were more worn out than Twilight was at the end of the summit.
>Of course you knew how wrong you were.
>But in your heart, you knew you couldn’t resist.
>The two of you kept in touch, privately, of course.
>You had assumed that Twilight’s schedule would allow you a some liberty, but after the events of the Crystal Empire, she had more free-time than she knew what to do with.
>So, you toughed it out.
>While you spent most of the day with Twilight, pretending to care about whatever dorky nonsense she droned on about, your mind always drifted.
>You were like a schoolgirl with a crush, despite all the warnings.
>Things started to pick up for your wife and she would occasionally be called away.
>You genuinely felt guilty when she kissed you goodbye, but feelings of lust quickly boxed it out.
>That weekend was the most magical time of your life, and the happiest you’ve ever been.
>You saw each other sporadically after that, as much as Twilight’s schedule permitted.
>You were never happier.
>Now, all the joy you felt then was being horribly overshadowed by the terrible, immense amount of dread twisting its way into your gut.
>It wasn’t worth it.
>None of it.
>>27384071
>You feel like vomiting.
>The room is spinning.
>If you die right now, you wouldn’t mind.
>You seize up immediately as you hear the doors of the room open.
>Falling over yourself for a moment, you manage to get to your feet as your wife silently trots into the room.
>You grip the chair you were leaning on for support.
>Your legs seem to have failed you.
>As she approaches, all the countless thoughts you had swirling around your head have vanished except for one.
>’What have you done to this poor mare?’
>”Anon.”
>She’s breathing heavy, and the matted and damp hair on her cheeks tells all.
>You don’t know how she found out, but you know what her reaction was.
“Twilight…”
>It’s strange. You’ve rehearsed this conversation a dozen times in your head before.
>Yet, nothing is coming to you.
“I’m…I’m sorry it had to—“
>”Are you?!”
>She cuts you off.
>”Are you truly sorry, Anon?!”
>She’s breathing heavily now.
>”Don’t you DARE lie to me!”
>Your apology dies in your throat.
>Naturally, your wife knew you better than you know yourself.
>Which made this all the more difficult.
>Struggling to think of something to say, you scramble internally for something that would work.
>In reality, you know nothing could ever make this right.
>You brought this upon yourself, and for selfish, stupid reasons.
>”I didn’t want to believe. I honestly didn’t.”
>Staying silent seems like a good plan here.
>She shakes her head.
>”This isn’t right. None of it! I WAS THE PERFECT—“
>Her breathing becomes unstable and her mane is all over the place.
>In the back of your mind, you know the next thing she’s likely to do it rip your head off.
>Twilight was always one to go overboard when things got out of hand for her.
>But what terrifies you the most is when she calms down.
>She inhales, then exhales slowly.
>”Okay. Fine then.”
>And just like that, she turns back and trots to the door.
>>27384087
“Uh…”
>Swallowing, you take a moment to process what just happened.
“Okay what?”
>She opens the door and steps to the side.
>A neutral, unreadable expression leads you to further confusion.
>”Go. Now.”
“What?”
>”Leave.”
“…What?”
>”I said leave Anon! Leave this castle, leave this town, LEAVE ME RIGHT NOW!”
>Her wings flare up and her horn glows bright purple.
>Your grip on the chair almost slips from her outburst.
>Staring at your wife, you aren’t sure what to make of it.
>”It’s…It’s clear that—That you’ve made your choice. I’m not it. So just go.”
>Her conviction was absolute, and it was obvious that she didn’t want you in her life anymore.
>Knowing there was nothing you could do about this, you resign to your fate.
>Summoning all your willpower, you walk carefully to the door.
>This is the most agonizing thing you’ve ever done.
>As you slowly walk out of the main hall, you hear the young princess sniffle quietly to herself.
>Physical pain shoots through your chest as you trudge your way out of the castle.
>You were lost.
>Everything was in a haze as you mindlessly navigate through Ponyville.
>Tears won’t come to you, shock must be kicking in.
>Nothing makes sense anymore as numbness takes hold of your senses.
>Were you walking? Are your legs moving?
>Where are you going? How long have you been walking?
>Briefly, you take a look at your surroundings.
>It’s getting dark, and it looks like there’s a potential for rain.
>With nothing better to do, you put your back against a tree and sit down.
>You stare blankly at the world around you, not sure how to make sense of any of it.
>In your depleted state, you don’t even hear the hoofsteps walking towards you.
>You’re too busy with nothing to notice them.
>You do, however, feel the same hooves wrap themselves around you in a tender embrace.
>Slowly, your shaky hands reach up and return the gesture.
>>27384098
>The hug calms you down a bit, at least giving you a small portion of your sanity back.
>”It’s going to be alright. I promise.”
>A gently kiss on your cheek is all the reassurance you needed.
>The world returns to you as your lover nuzzles you under your chin.
“She…She knows about it. About us.”
>A brief pause followed by a low hum is your response.
>You wouldn’t know what to say either.
>The two of you sit there, under the apple tree, in each other’s embrace for a few minutes longer.
>”Are you upset?”
>Upset doesn’t begin to describe what you’re feeling
“I feel awful. For her sake, you know? She doesn’t deserve to have this put on her. I care about her more than I should, but I…You…”
>As you trail off, a hoof brings you face to face.
>You close your eyes as you’re brought into a kiss.
>Deep and passionate, it reinvigorates your soul.
>Today may have been the worse day of your life, but it’s getting better, slowly but surely.
>You snuggle up cozily under the tree, gently stroking your not-so-secret lover’s back as they lay on your chest.
“I love you,Flash”
>”I love you too,brah”
>>27384106
>>27383053
Oh shit wait did you say Twilight cucking Flash or getting cucked BY Flash? My bad
>>27384106
good kek
>>27384106
My sides
>>27383004
you know damn well whatever you tried was pretty decent and would have been welcomed. keep trying nigger, you'll get it!
>>27383004
is ok
>>27385858
no it aint
>>27386680
Let him take his time, he could be like the other old writefags, and be ded.
bumipo
>>27383004
Still the best picture of Lulu that has Anon in it
Always 9 or 10.
>>27387711
only problem is, the longer you hiatus the less likely you are to get back to it.
>>27391862
Eh, it depends on what's causing the hiatus in the first place.
Useless mods are useless bump
>pg10
>>27393588
no u
>>27388626
that pic strikes me as so very, very representative of green threads
Things is about to get weird.
>>27379941
>”Please my kindred, can’t you see that you startled her?”
>The cult leader manages to calm the crowd down.
>”Um, well yes this is kinda new to me.”
>Wow never saw Iggy this nervous before.
>Iggy clears her throat, before she continues.
>”Yes, I guess proper introductions are in order.”
>The leader rises from her kneeling position.
>”There is no need Ignal’oth, for we already know yours, and our names is insignificant compared to you.
>There is a shocked expression on Iggy’s face.
“Hold on a sec, how you even know that.”
>The leader turns her head towards you.
>”I know it because it is ingrained into my very mind.”
>She turns back towards Iggy.
>”Strange that your pet doesn’t know your name, Great One.”
>Oh this bitch is looking for an ass kicking.
>”I’m going to correct you on that, Anon is my husband, not my pet.”
>The leader is silent for a moment.
>”I see.”
>Excuse me? Is that all this fucker has to say?
>”Calm down Anon.” Iggy’s voice pierce your thoughts.
>”Now that that has been settled, would you kindly show us our face?”
>”It would be nice to see who we’re talking to.”
>The hooded figure nods.
>”Ah, yes forgive me.”
>Can’t forgive you for being such a bitch.
>The leader removes the hood from he-.
>Now hold up.
>That’s a very manly looking stallion.
>…What?
>>27396333
>The leader coat is a bright yellow, with a streak of white running from his nose to presumable down his back.
>Emerald eyes stare intently forward.
>He either shaved his head bald, or he is bald, one of the two
>And there is a weird black squiggly line on his cheek.
>But all that is not important.
“So how did the voice happen, are you FtM, or something?”
>”Anon, that isn’t a question you ask to someone you just met!”
>”No, its fine, I’m used to the confusion by now.”
>”And no, it’s much more complex matter than just changing my hormones.”
“Oh please do tell this riveting tale of yours.”
>”I have a better idea.” Iggy rudely interjects.
>”How about we all have this nice conversation indoors, because we’re starting make a crowd.”
>All eyes turn towards the street, and she’s right.
>A growing crowd of ponies was starting to amass in the street, with whispers, and hybrid looks of concern and interest.
>”Hmm I suppose you’re right, the outcry from non-believers would be problematic.”
>”Alright then it’s settled, everyone follow me.”
>Iggy turns around, and steps into the house.
>You were about to follow, when you noticed the ponies in the street acting odd.
>Some of them found themselves off balance, struggling desperately to stand up.
>Others are clenching their heads between their hooves.
>One unlucky sod didn’t take to kindly to Iggy’s mind intrusion, and passed out.
Ded bump
>>27399747
Page 10 bump
>>27399747
that's low quality bro
>>27401433
Eh posted what was on my phone.
>>27401433
Dascute
>>27401433
>I always pone on my laptop because I'm rarely home
>It has all my pics and shit, but it has very cold colours on its display
>I only recently started using my desktop for that purpose
>Mfw this Twiggles is pure purple/lavender and not pink-ish
Have my entire life been a lie?
>>27403867
>twilight is purple
WHAT?!
>>27403905
Yes Twilight is purple, I'm an expert on the subject
>>27404905
fag
>>27405726
no u
>>27405726
It's okay, I'm also an apple expert.
>>27408906
cute!
Bump?
>>27397848
>Turning away from the scene of confusion.
>You noticed that you’re the last one left outside your house.
>You walk into your house, and the first thing you notice is that living room is bigger.
>Like physically impossible to fit in your house bigger.
>The all the cultist sat around Iggy, who is sitting in front of the fire place, and next to her is an empty chair.
>”Geez Anon, didn’t anyone tell you it’s impolite to stare.”
>She had this shit eating grin on her face.
“Yeah well, seeing a group of ponies having a mental breakdown in the middle of the street is such an attention grabber.”
>Iggy just waves her hoof at your statement.
>”Oh please, this isn’t the first time I’ve messed with mortal minds, how else do you think I kept myself entertained back in Ohio.”
>”Besides some of them were whispering about telling the guard after our friendly cult’s outburst, and it’s not like they’re just going to all day.”
>”I’ve already got them moving to where they’re supposed to be, and they won’t be none the wiser when they get there.”
>Shrugging in defeat, you make your way pass all the cultist, and take a seat next to your wife.
>”So, um, you know what I’m just going to call you CL, since you won’t give us a name okay?”
>He nods his head in agreement.
>”Alright then CL, do you mind telling us how you started this cult?”
“Nah that can, you should start by telling us how you became a cuntboy.”
>CL stares at you puzzling.
>”A cuntboy?”
>”Ignore him, he’s just looking for attention.”
“No I’m not, hearing how he got this way is very important.”
>”If I may interject, then I can appease both of your curiosity, because how I got this way is the reason why I started this flock in the first place.”
>Score one for Anon!
>Iggy sighs
>”Alright then, how did this all start?”
Being a slow writing writefag is suffering.
>>27411779
>”It started three months ago.”
>”I was once a mare, and was diagnosed with cancer.”
>”The cell contaminated every part of my body, the doctors only gave me three months to live.”
>”I spent weeks wallowing in depression, dreams of a pure, clean body, I didn’t care what it was, but such was wishful thinking of a dying mare.”
>”Then one night, I fell asleep, and awoke in a world so unknown to me.”
>”All around me wear shape indescribable to me.”
>”Sensations that overload my sense that can never be emulated again.”
>”And in my delirium is when I saw it.”
>”The great chasm that held my salvation.”
>”Ignal’oth’s mighty tentacle stood out among the noise, casting itself into a faraway land.”
>”The sight completely mesmerized me.”
>”Ignal’oth’s great appendage moved towards me, and knock me aside, like an insignificant insect.”
>”And then it happened.”
>”I could feel my body changing.”
>”It felt as if my skin was on fire, as bones started to rearrange.”
>”It was a horrendous agony, but in the end it was worth it.”
>”For when I awoke from my slumber, I felt different.”
>”And when I conformed it by looking at my reflection.”
>”I was beyond joyous of my transformation.”
>”But it isn’t complete, as I still have my old voice, and genital, but such impurities pale in comparison if it allows me to devote myself to you for saving my life.”
>”And then I thought, I couldn’t be the only one affected by your presence, so in the past months, I was looking others, who’s lives was forever changed by you.”
>>27417689
Good guy Trump
>>27417689
I don't get it
I believe in WaN
