Stealing Flashes waifu edition
The premise of this thread can cover a multitude of issues. Maybe you and your wife are fighting over something insignificant. Maybe the spark just isn't there anymore. Either side is welcome to have issues with the other.
If cuckoldry is your thing, this isn't your thread.
New content is welcome, and discussion encouraged.
Pastebin of previous threads and current stories thus far: http://pastebin.com/ARKY1Kny
Featured Stories:
MnM's A Lust For Revenge - http://pastebin.com/z0zhWzkL
MnM's Twilight's Return (Neglected Anon sequel) - http://pastebin.com/eUXHT07S
Jeff Mango's Mrs Cake - http://pastebin.com/tgJg0HUJ (back from the dead)
Loki's Prince Anon & Young Celestia - http://pastebin.com/ML51EaaS
Without_Aname's Twilight's Secret Pt. 2 - http://pastebin.com/qdN0mAxX
Fife's Two Sides of the Same Coin - http://pastebin.com/1hJfr9Qs
Lefty's Pinkie loves more - https://pastebin.com/NW77DG4A
TLA's Tilelover Anon - http://pastebin.com/czSAW2hM
Free The Soul's I Didn't Marry a Horse
http://pastebin.com/9DATPDXg
RokoPoko's What it means to be Family.
http://pastebin.com/s39jTkWY
Pastebin for aspiring writers (general concepts and techniques):
http://pastebin.com/V1ujiyJt
http://pastebin.com/whCQ2GpX
http://pastebin.com/bnMmZ2T3
>>27178603
last thread >>26918855
Forgot to add AssaultTurtle's Lowly Lyra (no pastebin that i could see)
>>27176310
>a series of unfortunate
yay! i rejoice at your misfortune.
>>27178603
Loki's never going to finish Prince Anon & Celestia is he.
>>27178907
Does AssaultTurtle have a pastebin in general?
>>27179055
http://pastebin.com/u/AssaultTurtle
>>27179055
i didnt think to just look for one on chance, and whadayaknow:
http://pastebin.com/EFTUe6XA
Story is actually called Rare Tea, tho PB isn't up to date.
>>27178603
SAUSE ON BIC
Waiting for Without
>>27179226
>>27179236
Well shit that's a blunder
>>27178934
It hurts, Anon. But we'll all hurt together.
>>27179335
Hey that's my job!
>>27178907
>Forgot to add AssaultTurtle's Lowly Lyra (no pastebin that i could see)
>AssaultTurtle's Lowly Lyra
>Lowly Lyra
I was wondering if aynone even reads my titles.
I guess not. That's uh... okay. You don't have to.I kind of put some thought behind them every time. So maybe you should. I-if that's okay with you I mean.
Holy fucking shit. We made it to the bump limit. I can't believe it, what's next? Loki showing up again?
>>27179315
>>27180718
https://derpibooru.org/945763
>>27180885
Its shit
>>27179854
kek
>>27180482
you mean the title that you never wrote in the thread? or the title in the pastebin that you never linked to?fwiw i spent some time coming up with a title. even used a thesaurus to see if i could find some alliteration for "noble"... but upon coming up snakeyes, decided to go the "she's playing a peasant" anglealso, liking it so far
>>27181959
>>26947570
Rekt status: gotAnd while Lowly Lyra is not a bad title, it does not contain a wording pun, and therefore is inferior.Also might be less accurate in the long run
>>27182066
ah, diff name kinda threw me. hell, i never even noticed that post.
and yeah, puns good. puns always win.
It's hard to write an EQG Marital Problem story considering they can't be married.
>>27183789
You can put it here. The only backlash that you might get is "it's an EqG green"
>>27183789
They don't have to be married per say, you can write about just a relationship.
>>27179335
This, WaN come back
>>27186094
At least he's posting again. These little bits of green he's giving us fills me with hope.
>>27186598
Well, we're still waiting for Loki,r-right?
>>27186722
We always are dubs.
Continuing from pastebin, and I kinda stopped mid-conversation.
>Unsurprisingly, the younger unicorn blushes profoundly having heard that, and barely manages to sputter out her response.
>"M-my prince, why are you...? What do you mean?
>"Why nothing else than just excuses for not knowing there was nobility in the town today. It seems that my sources of information have failed me."
>Your friend says while pulling himself upright.
>A pair of golden eyes is now darting between Shining and you, trying to make sense of the situation.
>There's way more confusion than fear in there, so your worries about revealing some kind of delicate secret are gone by now.
>But before Lyra manages to get a good grasp on just what the hell is going on, Shining speaks up again.
>"And I will have to ask for your forgiveness once more, because I do not believe I had the opportunity of learning your name beforehoof."
>"My name?"
>Asks the mintmare, before locking eyes with the stallion.
>"O-oh, I'm Lyra Hearthstrings, sir."
>"No need to 'sir' me miss Lyra. You must come from outside of Canterlot though, because I did not hear of house Hearthstrings in my years there."
>Her eyes escape to the side again, this time looking away from either of you.
>"That's because there is no house Hearthstrings sir. I am a commoner, not a noblemare of any kind."
>Shining flares a grin and says
>"I find it hard to believe, because you certainly look like one to me."
>Lyra did not turn her head back towards him, but she did blush again and smiled timidly.
>"That's only thanks to Mrs Rarity, her craft can make anypony look like a princess."
>"Oh, I disagree. I've seen enough mares in beautiful outfits, and I can vouch that those can only serve to bring out the inner beauty of one wearing them."
>The pink tide has begun spreading wider than before on the mint cheeks.
>"And clearly Mrs Rarity had an extraordinary material to work with here."
>>27188338
And I'll pause mid-conversation again. Sue me.
Basically I have some questions to my writing style. Writing this paragraph was a bitch for me, as I constantly struggle to come up with new ways to mark who exactly is speaking. This was a dialogue between two non-narrator ponies, and because of that it will not always be obvious who is talking. Therefore, I mark that as best as I can. But there is an issue - and a rather stupid one. All the way back in primary and secondary school when I was forced to write for the grades, one would always get penalised for repeating words. You could not use the character's name twice in a row to mark his lines. And this has stuck with me ever since, to the point when it feels wrong to leave Lyra under Lyra and before another Lyra.
So tl;dr version and questions are
Is it clear who speaks when in this paragraph?
Is it perhaps overly pointed out who speaks when?
Would you rather see somewhat repeating names and words in general over some of the more crazy shit I came up with here, like "mintmare", or the second to last line (that could've been "Lyra blushes even harder")?
Do you even lift?
>>27188461
I mean, technically since there is only two characters talking you don't even need to differentiate between the two past the first lines.
Unless one doubles up and says two things in a row there is no need to continuously denote who is speaking unless it actually brings something to the text. Like their actions or whatnot.
Ex:
>"I just said a thing" said Shining Armor
>"Yes you did," Lyra replied
>"I'll say more things then. Wonderful beautiful things."
>"Wow, those things are amazing."
>*Event happens like a bookshelf falling over or something*
>"Goddamn books. ~Oh my I am talking out of turn, introduce me again!" Lyra demanded.
TL:DR - You are fine, can probably do with less pointing out who is talking because as readers we should be able to recognize a back and forth conversation.
>>27179335
I love this kinda tradition.
If you're the original, thanks for sticking with it.
If you just picked up the torch, thanks for keeping it going.
>>27178907
Thanks bruh.
>>27178934
I guarantee you Loki still lurks. Show yourself damnit!
>>27179335
> Waiting for Anon who posts waiting for Without
>>27179854
A fraud?!
>>27186094
I'm here. Just.. ya know ... not posting anything yet.
>>27189367
This.
Is anyone actually interested in this War Dash thing I've been fagging on about?
> Inb4 finish TS first fgt.
>>27190078
>It's another "WaN shilling his story" post
Maybe I missed something, but you have been sperging on about that story for 2 weeks now, and I still have no idea what kind of story it exactly is
>>27190078
>mfw senpai thinks I'm a fraud
Also would read War Dash
>>27188461
I thought it was perfectly clear.
I'd say the idea method of distinguishing speakers is through keeping in character with their speech. Easier to do when the characters are pretty... charismatic. Obviously AJ and luna being the easiest examples. That's alot of work though, thinking about speech patterns. But makes for better writing regardless of concerns over indicating who's talking.
>>27190078
i have a question. in your story we only know of four times that flash fucks twilight, but how many times did they fuck "off-screen"? her hungry purple cunt must have taken so much abuse from his massive stallion cock
>>27190078
finish TS first fgt
If it's MP or RGRE I'll see it.
If not... probably not, simply because I'm overloaded with both green and good fics already, and while I'm not trying to get off the ride, I simply can't find the time to follow even more threads. More importantly, I can't deal with unfinished stories no more. They crush my soul. So I'm shifting towards only reading finished fics. My heart just can't take it otherwise.
>>27191462
>his massive stallion cock
fuck off Flash Sentry.
>>27188461
>Is it clear who speaks when in this paragraph?
Yes, it is.
>Is it perhaps overly pointed out who speaks when?
No, it's fine. Well. Maybe a bit, but I have no idea how to change that.
>Would you rather see somewhat repeating names and words in general over some of the more crazy shit I came up with here, like "mintmare", or the second to last line (that could've been "Lyra blushes even harder")?
I don't know. Try this and this and find what's easier for you and then we'll talk about it again.
>Do you even lift?
Sure thing.
>>27188338
I really hope this is all building up to something because this is kinda getting repetitive.
>10
>>27194223
>I really hope this is all building up to something
Nope. This is going to be entirely SoL fic with 20k lines describing only 3-way tea party that spans 4 hours of real time. But don't worry I can tl;dr it for you - at the end of it Anon will find out that Rarity cheats on him withOpalwhich will leave him broken and cause him to go back to his old days of serving asticket controller.Meanwhile Flash and Shining will find out that Twilight is in secret relationship withCadence and Celestia, which involves 2 futa cocks, vore andhoofonhoofaction. This will cause them both to commit an honorable sudoku with a paperclip and ascend to Valhalla.
>>27191462
>his massive stallion cock
>>27190078
>That Luna pic
Well,it's hot here, isn't it?
Finish TS first fgt
>>27195967
It sure is
>>27195132
>>27193694
anon says it himself that it's much bigger than his, when he first catches flash rutting her
>"the sight of the stallions member, that clearly put yours to shame, pounding your eager wife's marehood"
>>27196587
In that case Anon must have a baby dick
>>27190078
write what you feel like writing
you shouldn't rush TS because some fags tell you to finish it first
>pic related: my face when you never finish/rush TS
wew
>>27194982I'd read it
>>27196951
well shit, now i can't self insertno pun intendedit would be too unrealistic
>>27178603
What happened to RokoPoko?
I liked where that one was going.
>>27200145
yeah that was good too.
maybe he never saw us resurrect after we died a couple times.
>>27200145
Went the usual route. Slower updates, maybe some lurking, then gone.
Stayin' alive for Loki
>>27203991
He's never coming back.
Heard he went full normal.
>>27205651
Why must the good die young?
>>27206729
>>27208531
Let's cry together, friends
>>27206729
>>27208531
Yep. I'd always see him in /moon/, and then BAM, he takes up a sunbutt story and is kill.
It's fine though, I'm fine, I mean she gets LOTS of stories already.
>>27209544
>LOTS
>>27209599
Yeah, dude, fuck you can't walk 3 feet without running into some tasty celestia greens, right?
>>27209612
I mean seriously, writing Celestia green is like trying to sell ice-cream in Greenland, everyone is so full of that already
>>27211070
There really is only one Celestia green that any of us care about.
reeee
Posting a start to something that I'll pick up after Newlywed
>You are Anon.
>And you feel that today is going to be a great day.
>Rising up into a setting position, you take a moment to stretch.
>When you finished, you look next to you, and see your slumbering wife.
>Iggy, Cosmic Destroyer of Minds!
>Is snoring gently as an adorable blue earth pony.
>Seriously sometimes you have problems remembering that your wife is a horror of unimaginable proportions.
>Not taking too much time admiring her as she sleeps.
>You lean over, and kiss her softly on the neck.
>She stirs slightly as your lips leave her neck.
>Getting up from the bed, you knock out a quick stretch, before making up your side of the bed.
>Moving towards your coat hanger.
>You don your robe, and slippers.
>Heading down stairs, you go into the kitchen, and start making a pot of coffee.
>While the coffee is being made, you leave it to get the morning paper.
>You open the front door the first thing you see is.
>A bunch of weird ass ponies, wearing black robes, and bowing in front of your house.
>The fuck?
>The group of ponies responds to the sudden noise.
>All of them looking up before doing anything.
>”Aw, it’s just the star child’s pet human.” Says the pony in front, with an effeminate voice.
>A resounding aw sweeps through your lawn.
“Pet?!” “Well you all can go suck a dick!”
>Slamming the door behind you, you sigh angrily.
>Guess you better tell Iggy she has a cult now.
I haven't been in this thread since halfway through Loki's Celestia green. Why is it shit now?Shittier, anyway
>>27217277
I came back after leaving for around 8 months, now it seems half the threads are just filled with shitposting. My guess is 3/4 of the good writefags left to infinite-chan, while all the children were left behind since they don't know what the fuck it is.
>>27217277
This is what eventually happens to all splinter threads.
>>27217521
>My guess is 3/4 of the good writefags left to infinite-chan
Where did you get that from?
>>27217859
A long time ago, they said they were probably going to stop writing here and migrate. So if they've randomly stopped, they are probably there.
>>27217971
8gag is a ghost town
>>27217971
No, they're just dead. Barely anyone goes there.
>>27218016
>>27218043
Oh damn, shit really does change fast. Well, guess they somehow got off the ride
Bow down
>>27219266
>>27219966
>>27220839
check em
>>27217521
i won't deny there's alot of shitposting and very little green (tho TLA is really trying... and even WaN is lately) but the unmentionable chan? BAAAAHAHAHAAA!
>>27221844
check em
Old OP here.
I wasn't expecting to see this place alive, really. It's good to see this place again.
I actually let the thread die some months ago because I was pretty tired of bumping this place, I am still not going to do it but I am glad you took it on yourselves to start the thread once again
We need to keep this alive...
New episode bump
>>27229645
y u not writing
>>27229645
why you
>>27231658
Because I'm not near my computer (posting from my phone)
>>27231691
That makes sense.
I head to bed.
Make this thread great again.
>>27231935
asdhashdasjd all the way
>>27231935
Loose..foot loose. Kick off your Sunday shoes.
>>27235298
such power
>>27234745
Thanks!
>>27234937
No, pls, mercy!
>>27235298
Cute!
>10
what are you doing here at the tenth page
p10
>>27235298
>tfw you will never have a glass version of your waifu that can melt your dick on contact.
>>27239788
Man these fetishes are getting really out of hand
>>27235298
Lyra clops to this video erry night.
bump
Update in a bit, also I deleted the ...Shit line from the last post, reworded it, and moved it around.
>>27242981
I should really catch up your story some time, friend
>>27242981
>>27243195
Stop reminding me that I don't have any greens about my waifu.
>>27240543
kek
>>27243881
but you could
>>27246541
I technically do have one, but it's so much of experiment that I can't call it a story (also thought of dumping it here)
Bin and update http://pastebin.com/edit/a72L4NMc
>Didn’t you locked the door before you left?
>Maybe you forgot?
>But Lilac should’ve locked after you left.
>Unless she left it unlocked when she went to eat you.
>That’s probably what happened.
>Still unsettling to find the door unlocked even in magical horse land.
>Putting the thought on the afterburner, you open the door and go inside.
>Closing the door behind you, but instead of hearing utter silence, you can hear the sounds coming from the T.V.
>Really that thing has been left on for weeks.
>Going to the living room, you pick the remote from off the floor, and turn the T.V off.
>Now that the house is completely quite in the house, you realize how empty it is.
>You turn your head, and stare at the sofa.
>Memories of you and Lilac snuggling, kissing, and whispering sweet nothings into each other’s ear flood your mind.
>Fuck, what are you supposed to feel right now?
>Anger over the fact that Lilac tried to eat you?
>That she played you like a fiddle for so long?
>Or Bitter sadness over the fact that all those pleasant memories are shattered and broken by the truth.
>No, no all that’s over and done with.
>The only thing left is to move on.
>Not really thinking about where you were going.
>You let your legs take you wherever they roam.
>Surprisingly they take you upstairs.
>Well since you’re up here might as well go to your room.
>>27248170
story almost done or just beginning?
>>27249120
Almost done. Funny because this sure as hell wasn't the ending I envisioned when I started to write it all though months age.
>>27248170
>Opening the door, you take in the sights before you.
>You’ll need to buy a new lampshade.
>And you’re pretty sure that there is at least one pill bottle missing from the nightstand.
>And then there is the fallen picture frame.
>Containing a picture that makes your whirlwind of emotions even more questionable.
>You choose to ignore it for now, and take a seat on your side of the bed.
>Although in hindsight this made things worse.
>You can’t stop flicking your eyes back and forth from the picture frame.
>Each time the desire to pick it up grows in intensity.
>No, there isn’t any reason to see your wedding picture, to confirm the lie that was so well crafted to keep you in the dark.
>A lie that died on the same night as its seamstress.
>But knowing it was a lie doesn’t make it any less painful to bare.
>Every good moment the two of you shared, every “I love you.” And even your vows.
>All of it was meaningless.
>All of it just to give yourself to a life sucking monster on a silver platter.
>You start to feel hot tears run down your cheeks.
>You clench your hands and teeth.
>You feel your wedding band pressing deep into your hand.
>In your unstable mental state, you unclench your right hand, and pull it off with your left hand.
>You hold it for a moment, your hand trembling, and your vision begins to blur.
“Damn it” You shout, as you fling the ring across the room.
>You bury your head inbetween your hands.
>You wanted to forget everything about Lilac.
>Your love, your hate, the good times, and the bad.
>Your head was too much of a mess.
>And right now, you don’t think you could sort it out before the party.
>But you know of someone who can help you out.
Time for the long-overdue ending
>>27188338
>You decide to chime in before someone gallops himself too far.
>Heh.
"Whoa there Shining, relax. Last time I checked you were now a married stallion."
>You're met with an annoyed eye roll in response.
>"Geez Anon, she didn't have to know that. Thanks a lot."
"Sure Cassanova, the fact that she knows that you are a prince totally doesn't ruin the surprise."
>"Details, details. Celestia damn it, you can be such a joy killer with your logic sometimes."
"Trust me, it's better this way than trying to fix the inevitable damage you might cause. Remember the winter solstice celebration 2 years ago?"
>Shining opens his mouth as if to retort, but apparently finds nothing and just pouts.
>Satisfied with that you turn to Lyra.
"If I had any doubts about commissioner of this dress, it's all gone now. This was made for you, and dare I say made expertly. I'm not sure where you are planning to debut it, but Canterlot doesn’t seem out of question."
>This time you get a smug smile from the smaller pony.
>"Oh, and now you doubt it, huh? I thought all princesses spend spring celebrations in Canterlot."
>You chuckle and raise your hands in a gesture that probably didn't make much sense here.
"Alright, you got me. I may have been only kidding with the whole royalty business. Mostly. I mean, there still was something off."
>"And you decided to bring the Prince of the Crystal Empire to double check me?"
>There is now a very audible amusement in her voice.
"Maaaaaybeeee?"
>You say, looking to the side ostentatiously.
>>27249907
>Lyra just scoffs at your display.
>"At least tell me that you didn't ask him to make his way from all the way to the north."
>Shining raises his hoof and points it at you.
>"He didn't, but it was heavily implied that I should do so as fast as possible. We had to give chariot pegasi a real workout to make it."
"Uh-huh. If you weren't stuffing your face with my cookies for almost an hour now, maybe they would've had an easier job."
>He just shrugs, completely unfazed by being called out again.
>"Stop buying cookies this good and I won't eat them. You have no one to blame but yourself."
"If you say so. But to answer your question for real Lyra, I didn't. Shining Armor was just visiting Canterlot..."
>"That's only slightly better you know. Canterlot is still a good bit away."
"... and used the opportunity to pop by for a tea party. From which I temporarily extracted him to help me check if you are Princess Celestia's distant cousin."
>The explanation seems to have only smugened the smile from earlier.
>Yes, that's a word now.
>"You have a prince just 'pop by' for a tea party while being married to one of the most renowned fashion mares in all of Equestria, and yet you seem to be so shocked when a pony with a bit of class shows up at your doorstep?"
"Hey now, I was not shocked. Merely curious. Not everyday a pony you knew for a while turns out to be a nobility incognito."
>Shining has shifted towards the exit before adding
>"Anonymous is right, with me at least he knows I don't hide anything."
"Whenever you're not smuggling things out of my kitchen that is."
>"I... think I better check up on Flash, we better not leave him alone for too long. Goodbye Miss Lyra, and see you at the Canterlot party."
>"Not in this life I'm afraid."
>She says with a happier grin.
>"Oh you just never know what might happen tomorrow. Never say never!"
>And with that, the white unicorn disappears behind a corner.
>>27250092
>"You know, for a second there you kinda had me scared."
>Says the minty mare after a short bit of silence.
"Really? What gives?"
>"Oh, you mean other than drilling me for a thing that I'm clearly not comfortable with sharing?"
>You scratch the back of your head to help stimulate the thoughtflow.
>Did you take it a bit too far and she was just making a good face to not embarrass herself in front of Shining?
"Y-yeah, other than that."
>"I was afraid that you might actually know something. Or making an educated guess."
"And I wasn't?"
>You ask with a bit of both disappointment and relief in your voice.
>"Nope. Not even close. It turned out that you do know nothing."
"Jon Snow."
>"Excuse me?"
"Never mind. Just a, uh, saying from my word."
>The mare eyes you with a raised eyebrow before returning to her amused self.
>"Anyhow, looks like my grim and evil secret will remain that for a while longer. Also I won't have to kick your knees in for being an ass."
>You what mate?
"Hey now, I was just playing around, no need to be violent over it."
>You wanna have a fucking go there mate?
>"I know, I was kidding. I can appreciate good fun, even at my expense."
>I'll knock ya straight in the kisser.
>"Just..."
>Oh?
>Her smile has withered a bit as she looked to the window.
>"Just leave it be Anon. I'm being serious right now."
>You can tell.
>"There's nothing interesting to be found behind that door. Just disappointment. So don't bother."
>You're not sure how to react at the sudden change of pace, but before you can come up with anything, she is back to her normal self.
>"Now, I think I will change back out of this wonderful outfit. Rarity would kill me if I ruined it by just walking downtown."
>And just like that, the last thing you see behind the closing door is her smile, right above the silver necklace.
>>27250194
>You're quite dumbfounded right now.
>Apparently there was something you didn't know about her.
>Or rather, something that not many ponies knew about her in general.
>And your guess was rather off the mark.
>You hear a raised voice coming from your living room.
>Looks like the two guardsponies were going at it again.
>It also looks like you won't find anything else out from Lyra herself.
>You could perhaps try to persuade Rarity to share something with you.
>But do you want to?
>You stare at the doorknob with a smallest glisten of saliva on it.
>For a unicorn, Lyra didn't use much magic.
>Also, gross.
>She made it clear that there is nothing to be found by searching further.
>So perhaps it is best that you just drop it and go on your life.
>Yeah, you should just leave the mare to her own problems.
>If there was anything worrisome about her, Rarity would let you know anyway.
>Content on that, you take a seat on a simple stool and wait for the unexpected guest to finish her undressing.
>You've still got a tea party to finish after that, and this will take enough of your attention anyway.
>Tea parties are a serious business man, ask Princess Celestia.
The endof this tea party
My earlier green is being split into chapter-like parts, but I will experiment and try to keep this one as a 1, continuous being. So, no 'end of part 1' this time around.
Coming up:
>Less sausage fests
>More mares
>Marshmallow Prime making her appearance
>Some lewd, implied or otherwise
>>27250214
You have my full attention. Keep up the good work.
>>27250214
wow, assaultturtle out of nowherenot reallywith a big update!
I just read "A lust for revenge"
It's terrible. Sorry guys
>>27252089
>implying
>>27252138
I don't think that word you're using means what you think it means
>>27252089
>>27252138
>>27252205
>>27252510
all these sudden activity... then p10
>>27253244
Do you guys need activity? Do you need green?
>>27253310
Considering we routinely hang out on page 10, yes.
>>27253310
nah, we prefer bumps and shitposting, clearly.
>>27250214
>lewd
Aw lawdy think of the childrens!
>>27256071
...that they'll be making?
>>27256530
This guy gets it ^:)
dumb bump
>>27259558
Nice try Berry Punch
>>27260022
Fucking kek
>>27259558
>Gets into a fight, so she goes to a bar and cheat
>Even though I gave consent, I was too drunk
>I can't live unless I get free money
BUILD A WALL
>>27259558
in all seriousness though... this is actually a tricky issue. the law about consent from a severely drunk or otherwise impaired person not counting has a valid point... should be all the same if, say you get someone super drunk then have them sell you their new car for $100. If that were fair play then people would be raked over the coals alla time. But... where to draw the line? Especially when so many people drink for the purpose of lowering their inhibitions, with the full intent of doing something they otherwise wouldn't, but at some level want to.
In this case, at the very least, it seems there should be a different charge, not all out "rape". If you hook up with a flirty, flat out drunk (but still concious) woman at a bar... i dunno what to call it, but rape certainly seems harsh, and frankly is an insult to women who were "properly" raped. Maybe "taking advantage of an inebriated person" or something.not to say it is a serious question in the case above, that seems pretty open n shut to me. doubt she was SO drunk off 2 drinks to be retarded. she was just drunk enough to decide fuck it/he won't find out to something she wanted to do and is now having massive buyer's regret
>>27259558
Wait, what? Unless she was passed out drunk, what she did does not fall under rape. It was just a really stupid decision on her part, and she wants a free pay check, so she can not go to work. And two drinks doesn't make you too drunk, this is coming from a lightweight.
>>27249287
when you do finish, I'd be interested to hear what you had envisioned.
bumpino
>>27262516
>get drunk
>have sex
>sober up
>fuck, now I regret having sex
>I'll just say I was raped!
modern women, folks
>>27265713
That's why you never go full 3DPD, pic related
>>27181103
>expecting an antro pic not to be shit
>>27250214
This story has been unexpectedly great. Since it sounds like there's lots more to come, please continue even once this thread inevitably dies.
>>27264901
Sure I can do that.
>>27217103
>Briskly go up the stairs.
>This annoyance need to be fix now.
>And since it’s just the right time in the morning for ponies to go to work.
>Who know how many have seen those freaks bowing in your front lawn.
>Kinda surprising that none have called the guard yet.
>Opening the door to your bedroom, you can see that Iggy is up, stretching and letting out a yawn.
>”Good morning best human.” she says after she finishes her yawn.
“Good morning.”
>You tried your best to keep the irritation out of your voice.
>But it seems Iggy to pick up on it anyways.
>”Okay Anon, what’s eating you so early in the morning?”
“Hmm well, this might come to a surprise to you, but you have a lot of weird ponies ready to worship the ground you walk on, right outside our door step.”
>She blinks for a bit at this new information.
>”The hell are you talking about?” she says, as she rips a hole through reality, and stares through it.
>You have just gained two points of insight.
>”Umm how long have they been out there?”
“Beats me, all I know is that they want to meet their prophet from the stars.”
>Iggy sighs, before closing the rift.
>”And you didn’t kick them off our property because?”
“I wanted to see you drive them madly insane.”
>>27270820
>Iggy just shakes her head, before getting out of the bed.
>Which then proceeds to fix itself.
>She makes her way to the bathroom, but stop just before the door.
>”Okay one last question.” She says, turning her head towards you.
>”What did they do to you that got you so riled up?”
“They called me your pet.”
>Apparently Iggy found this funny, as she tries to contain a giggle.
“Hey, what’s so funny huh?”
>She manages to get a hold of herself before answering you.
>”Oh it’s nothing Anon.”
>All of a sudden, you feel something caress your check, overloading your senses with an indescribable sensation.
>”Give me a bit, and we’ll go deal with the big bad name callers.”
>Just couldn’t help it could you?
>You hear a nope echo through your mind, as Iggy disappears into the bathroom.
>>27271030
This is totally relevant to my interests and I can't wait to read more!
10
So I was right about the time off part, but wrong about the time to write part. Muh misfortunes. So I'm still here and I'll get on it asap. Stay alive fgts.
>>27278597
Waiting for Without
>>27278597
all glory to wan
>>27283186
>>27283188
Not sure if failed bot or 2 hiveminders being just as creative
>>27283540
Just a hivemind
>>27278597
why u gotta hurt best pone like that?
>>27269367
Don't worry, I am an expert in navigating dying threads. My first longer story evacuated 2 threads now, and I just posted in Succubus thread 2 hours before it died. Go figure.
>>27292614
We are on a Chinese cartoon website, there are better ways to post pics desu
>>27249287
>Wiping the tears from your eyes, you take a quick glance at the clock that hangs over your bed.
>It reads 4:30.
>Perfect, that gives you enough time to go to Twilight’s.
>And with the added benefit that the two of you can go to Sugar Cube after you ironed out the rough patches of your relationship.
>It’s a win/win for everybody.
>Rushing to the bathroom, you check yourself out in the mirror.
>Nothing too bad, just a little redness in your eyes.
>Nothing a Clear Eyes won’t fix.
>Dabbing a few drops in each eye, you wipe them clean with the sleeve of your suit.
>Rushing out of the bathroom, and down the stairs, you only slow down before reaching the door.
>Don’t want to freak out the ponies by running like a mad man towards Twilight’s.
>Opening the door, you walk at a steady pace.
>Once you arrive at Twilight’s castle, you ask a guard if he know where she is.
>He tell you she in the library, and askes if you would like an escort.
>Seeing how you just might get stuck on the roof for an entire day, you tell him to lead the way.
>Now that you’ve gotten this far, how the hell is this conversation going to go down?
>”Hey Twilight, I’m emotionally unstable right now, and I’ve recently found out you have a thing for me for awhile now, wanna hook up?”
>Yeah no, that shit isn’t going to fly.
>But you’re not give much time to think of anything better, as you and the guard reaches the library.
>He opens the door and steps aside.
>Well let’s see how well winging it will do.
>>27296188
Please tell me she's not with a stallion, i'm getting tired of this
>>27296267
Did you even read the story, Anon?
>>27296267
What gave you that idea?
>>27296267
It's Flash.
>My green, not yours.
>>27298489
Nah Flash is small time. Gotta find a stallion that's going to take people by surprise, like Big Mac.
*****
> "There's... something I've been meaning to tell you Spike... Something I've been wanting to say for a very long time now, my dear. And well, I believe it's long over due..." An overly done up Rarity speaks through a sheer white veil, and flowing pearl white dress.
> Her eyes lock to yours, wide, desperate, looking for your comfort as the gentle gusts of a starry night give life to her garments.
"Of course, lady Rarity." Your voice sounds deeper, more 'adult'.
> Or at least how you imagine it should sound.
> Your hulking muscular, square jawed body takes a knee before Rarity, taking a hoof gently into your masculine hand.
> Another gentle breeze adds some flowing life to a red cape you wear that partly covers a shimmering silvery sword.
> Your eyes are relaxed with a gentle smile awaiting words of your love.
> You both close some distance as you listen intently.
> "Spike... I... well..." She seems hesitant.
"Go on lady Rarity. You shouldn't be afraid to tell me anything. If there's anything I can do to help you, you should know I'll do it with a smile for you." Your thumb runs across her hoof admiring the maintenance she puts into it.
> "Oh Spike..." she blushes slightly looking away.
"I hope you know I mean that..." you reassure her leaning closer, your expression showing how true your words are.
> She looks up at you with softened eyes.
> "Of course I do, darling." She whispers leaning her forhead to yours.
> "And I hope you believe me when I say, how much I truly... Appreciate it.. and when i say, that i Love yo~"
> A nauseating burn swirls in your stomach.
> You hiccup pulling away from her.
> No... No! Not now!
> Her saddened expression starts to fade and darken.
> Your entire dream begins to falter as you feel the real world reintroduce its self to your senses.
> Chirps from the early rising birds, orange rays of a rising sun against your forced closed eye lids.
>>27299820
> You try to ignore these stimulants so you could go back to your dream, but it's no use.
> Your eyes lazily open, obviously upset and staring to the celing.
"Uhg..." you flop your arms to the side.
"Whyyyhyyhyy?" You whine.
> The nauseating swirl in your gut rocks you once more.
> You sit up placing both hands over your mouth.
> And with a green firey belch, you find some much needed relief.
> A scroll lands on the foot of Twilight's bed from the emerald flame.
> Why in Equestria is anypony sending these so early...
> Don't they know that some of us are trying to slee..... Wait...
> How are you in Twilight's room?
> You try to blink away your drowsiness while scratching your belly.
> And why is this place such a mess?...
> That's very.. very unlike Twilight..
> You remain puzzled for a moment scanning the room.
> The clothing on the floor.
> The tiny garbage pale overflowing with tissues.
> The papers in total disarray on her desk.
> You guess she wasn't lying...
> She's been here losing her mind the entire time..
> There's not one moment you can recall her letting anything become this disorganized.
> Looking over to her disheveled mane as she sleeps, obviously exhausted, solidifies your theory.
> You fight off a frown along with an empathetic sinking in your chest before you push yourself up to your feet wobbly and get the scroll at the foot of the bed.
> The movement you made causes her to snort at the end of her prolonged snore.
> She pulls the sheets in close to her chest mumbling some nonsense before her eyes open slightly.
>>27299855
> Her eyes shift through her barely open lids coming to the same realization that you did.
> "S...Spike?.." She lurches up in an almost panic hugging the sheets around her.
"Easy Twi, I'm here." You re assure her.
> Her shoulders relax realizing that.
> Laying back staring up to the celing, she seems to be trying to find the courage to ask you her next question
> "Is uh... Did Anonymous?.." she leaves her words hanging probably hoping you get it.
> You do.
"No Twilight.. He's not here.." you say unintentionally withdrawn as you begin to read the scroll for a distraction.
'My Dearest Twilight,
My hardest working, most loyal pupil. Princess of Friendship, and Element of Magic. Over the years I have been full of overwhelming pride, watching you grow and conquer any and every problem that faced you and your friends. Solving issues with patience and compassion for all involved. Teaching the lessons and importance of friendship, and cooperation.~'
> You pause your reading glancing back to her.
> She lies facing away from you still upset.
> You turn your attention back to the letter.
> blah blah blahhh...
'That is why it pains me so much to see the decisions that you have made as of late. Including the measures that you attempted to take to cover them up. Both, being conduct unbecoming of a Princess. Especially the one I expected you to be. Your accusations against Anonymous ontop of your actions, came from an outburst I have never seen from you before. Claiming that you still love him, while shouting a theory that very well may have resulted in his death. It leads me to believe that maybe you were thrust into this position of importance more quickly than you were ready for. But in this position, you are already in. Perhaps I am partly to blame as well.
>>27299889
As difficult as it is for me to do this, until I feel you are of sound mind and prove you are able to handle the responsibility again, the use of your wings will be revoked. Though they remain visible to see to avoid alarm of anypony, you will have no control of them until I see fit. You will write me your lessons, what you have learned from this experience and those going foward, just as you once did. Please know, I do this with a heavy heart Twilight, and hope you grow from it.'
> Oh boy...
> You scan to the end.
'- Princess Celestia.'
"Uhhh....Twilight?..." you peek over the top of the letter wide eyed to a Twilight getting up from her bed.
> "Yes Spike?..." she says with with a complete lack of energy.
"Youuu... may wanna read this.." you hold it toward her.
> "Thanks but, I'm not really in the mood for reading Spike..." her voice is low, drained of emotion.
"But I think it's kinda import~ Wait!" You shout seeing her hop from the side of the bed, knowing one she got used to her wings she would sprawl them for a soft landing.
> That she did not receive.
> With a loud 'oof', she quickly plummeted face first toward the floor.
> Her rear hoofs still poked over the side she jumped.
> "Uhhgg!...." she groans from the floor.
> You wince holding the scroll tighter to you.
> "Wha... My wings... What's going on?! Nnngh!" She scampered to her hooves with facial expressions showing she was trying to open her own wing span, unsuccessful so.
> "Spike?!" She looks to you panicked.
> You decide to stop biting your lip and let her know.
"Uh Twi... You might wanna sit down.." you timidly hand the scroll toward her.
>>27299896
*****
> You are Fluttershy.
> Preparing your weekly picnic breakfast for all your pets, furry and feathered friends.
> Gently placing a large lettuce and carrot bowl down for Angel, you smile contently as he digs in along side Harry and the other many animals.
"I'm sure glad you all could make it today. Isn't it just lovely to be able to enjoy this all together?" You say happily though almost whisper quiet.
> Several of the animals nod towards you with full mouths.
> Except Angel, who continues to dig in.
"Angel, try not to eat too quickly this time. I don't want you to get a tummy ache again!" You try to show concern but he ignores it.
"Oh you. We'll I don't want to hear it later then mister!" You try to act stern, failing miserably as Angel raised his cheek stuffed face from his plate to look at you with an arched brow.
> "WWHHAATT?!" Echos almost violently causing many of your animal friends to instinctively scatter in a panic, knocking over your carefully set up display.
> Harry winces, turning in the direction of the Caste, while Angel does so for only a second before forcing a swallow from his cheek full and raiding the now abandoned plates.
> You 'Eep' yourself as you stand taking a few steps back.
> Harry turns back to you baffled as you begin to scan your ruined breakfast date.
"Oh my...." you say both disappointed and confused.
>>27299918
So there's that. Sorry it's taking forever, but I hope it's still enjoyed. I'm a little drunk af. So sorry for the mistakes. Also Dassit.
>>27299942
a good update.
and FFS twi, being that surprised about the letter? wtf did she think?
>>27296267
not sure why u'd think that. she's had a thing for him and he's only now available (well, soon). why would she choose _now_ to go out with another guy?
I am 100% against the idea that Twilight can have her wings taken away like that, or in any way. Celestia has no right to REVOKE an integral part of her. Twilight is no longer a unicorn, she is an alicorn, that is not something she is rewarded for good behavior, it was a metamorpheses she achieved through her own efforts. Revoke her being a princess, fine there is no reason not to, but to take away her wings? That stinks of Tyrant Celestia. I don't recall Luna having her wings taken away after trying to DESTROY the world.
>>27302205
Celestia is essentially revoking her princess title by making her wings useless. Honestly, I feel that celestia is retarded for not taking away her HORN instead. After all, it's Twilight's magic that caused all this.
Luna had the benefit of being possessed; Twilight has no such thing going for her
I'm trying to read WAN's story from the beginning, but the heavy autist I am, I get triggered by wacky grammar and punctuation. Does it get better?
>>27300544
Thanks friend. It was just a startling discovery to wake to.
>>27302205
As I delete my 'stfu fgt' response, I concede that you have a decent point. But then again Luna was banished for how long vrs, Twilight's 'hey, knock it off stupid'. Also you're talking sister and student. Also, also. I just woke up so... ya know... there's that.
>>27302949
Kind of what I was going for. Punishment without the public shaming because Muh pupil.
>>27303104
Ya the beginning was a little rough admittedly. I want to go clean it all up. It was my first green and I'm sure you will be able to see the progression in it. I couldn't into green properly my first few updates. I'd like to say it cleans up quickly structurally, but I guess I'd be bias. Love to have a new reader though, thanks for giving it a shot!
>>27303163
>By line 400 Twiggles has already cheated on Anon with Flash, stated her regret, and both ran away.
>Again.
At least he killed Flash this time around, but boy am I noticing some schematics here
>>27303212
Original prompt problems.
>>27303302
Fair enough, I didn't think this story was from before MP times. How did the original prompt spawn so many stories anyway?
>>27303366
Have a seat my child, for we shall revisit a time when this thread was lush with green, ripe with conversation. Where the godly writefriends smiled upon us gifting us with feels, some of which we did not ask for but accepted anyway. Where names like Fife and Loki were impossible to miss. When we were an Adulterous Twilight prompt. When I was inspired to give this writefagging a try of my own, inspired by the literary titans.
> pic related.
>>27303661
I know that this was AT before, I just did not think that you started writing all the way back there. Since, you know, you're not dead yet, unlike everyone else
>>27302205
>I don't recall Luna having her wings taken away after trying to DESTROY the world.
I don't think a thousand years of isolation is getting off easy. It's temporary and it's not like she hasn't been an unicorn for most of her life.
>>27303661
A second link in the party section is broken. FYI, if you care about that. First and third are fine.
>>27302205
I don't think there is anything wrong with punishing Twilight. What I don't like is how Anon gets off scot free all the time.
>Wife cheated on me
Get a new waifu
>Nearly kill a captain
No one cares
>Is one of the three eye witnesses to the barn fire.
No questions ask by the guard.
>Publicly slaps Twilight.
Isn't detained for harming royalty.
>Kills a guard on a public transport, and leaves the body.
No questions ask, nor is he detained.
>In his "worst nightmare."
Gets comforted while Twilight fights
>Gets accused of harboring their version of Satan.
Walks off of castle grounds as if nothing happened.
Now I used Without's story as an example, but really I have the same problem with all AT stories. Nothing bad ever happens to Anon. He always wins, he's never in the wrong, and the only person who gets any really punishment is Twilight,even MMM's story fell into this hole.
>>27299942
Nice, more of this
>>27183789
More like this
>>27235298
Fucking erotic
>>27303661
I remember these times. God, I want Loki and Fife back
>>27299918
Ho boy, I like wehre this is going
>>27304226
>Get a new waifu
Waifu gets a New Anon
>Nearly kill a captain, No one cares
Twilight probably claimed he'd fallen down the stairs when she took him to the hospital
>Is one of the three eye witnesses to the barn fire. No questions ask by the guard.
Luna probably answered the guards questions while he was at the hospital
>Publicly slaps Twilight.
I don't think anybody has seen him slapping her
>Kills a guard on a public transport, and leaves the body. No questions ask, nor is he detained.
Maybe the Luna guards cleaned up after him
>In his "worst nightmare."
Gets comforted while Twilight fights
Nigga, he was forced to watch Flash stealing his waifu, I would really appreciate some comfortation after seeing that
>Gets accused of harboring their version of Satan.Walks off of castle grounds as if nothing happened.
Twilight was the only one who claimed that and Celestia didn't believe her sooo
Also there is this applejack and Rarity MP story by ActuallyMarriedPone where Anon is wrong/ not doing too well
>>27306355
Yeah I meant to make a post that said most, but then life happen anywho.
>Twilight probably claimed he'd fallen down the stairs when she took him to the hospital
No one would've have bought that just based off how bad Flash looked
>Luna probably answered the guards questions while he was at the hospital
Why would anyone care what Luna says? Unless she pulls rank they would still want to talk to Anon.
>I don't think anybody has seen him slapping her
They were standing in broad daylight at breakfast hour at a waffle house, and they made a scene before leaving, someone saw that.
>Maybe the Luna guards cleaned up after him
When did she have time to order this? Anon didn't say shit until their date, which was hours after the fact.
>Nigga, he was forced to watch Flash stealing his waifu, I would really appreciate some comfortation after seeing that
But he already saw Flash taking his waifu, and has been comforted by everyone who know for days afterward, this wouldn't even come off as shocking at this point.
>Twilight was the only one who claimed that and Celestia didn't believe her sooo
And yet Celestia didn't ask Cadence, the other eye wittiness that could make or break Anon's she crazy statement, who cares if Luna throw a bitch fit, she has a bias view in the whole thing, so why Celestia relented because Luna said some mean words to her is unbelievable.
>>27303702
Whoops. Ya. I live I die I live again. It's been a long project.
>>27303908
Thanks friend I'll get to it when I can.
>>27304226
>>27307027
TLA doesn't like my story. I get it. Jeebus.
>>27304586
Imposter TLA Likes my story. Wat?
>>27305616
So much this.
>>27306213
Glad you're still enjoying!
>>27307967
But Wan, you are TLA
>>27304226
interesting point. and yeah it's something that bugs me a little too sometimes. but, ya know, muh self insert.
>>27306355
also good points.
>>27307027
yeah they aren't waterproof, but all are reasonably explanations.
>>27307967
Eh don't worry about it, I just like to over analyze everything, and poking plot holes in things.And how do you know if I'm not samefagging from different IPs?
>>27304226
>He always wins
Not sure how any of this is winning.
>>27271030
>You know, for an unidentifiable cosmic being.
>Iggy still takes forever in the bathroom.
>Don’t know why the bathroom hold such power over every single female in existence.
>But it does.
>After some time, Iggy emerges from the bathroom.
>The form she decided on was a Pegasus.
>Her coat, and mane is black, with her underbelly, inner legs, neck, around her mouth, nose and around her eyes is red.
>Her mane is braided, and hangs off her shoulder.
>It’s a wonderful thing that this is a marriage of jokester.
“Woah Iggy calm down there.”
>She stares at you, in hopes that you would explain yourself.
“Just because you have a cult that is willing to sacrifice a baby goat in your name, doesn’t mean you can get all edgy on me.”
>It takes her a second before she gets it.
>And her response is to stomp her hoof, puff out her chest, and pout.
>”Really Anon?!”
“Why yes, just be sure to warn me when I’m about cut myself on an invisible razor blade.”
>Something hits the back of your head.
>You were about to say something, but Iggy cuts you off.
>”You said warn you if you were about to cut yourself, I didn’t cut you, so no warning.”
>Smug Eldritch horror.
>C’mon lets deal with these cultist, before someone calls the guard.” She says, as she stars walking towards the door.
>She thinks she can have the last laugh.
>Ha.
>You pull out your phone, and activate its voice command.
“Play “Waking the Demon.”
>The song starts blaring through your phone’s speakers.
>Iggy stop when she hears the song, but couldn’t help herself from smiling.
>”You know I’m just going to get you back for this.”
"Yeah, but for now I'm up by one."
>>27304226
>Kills a guard on a public transport, and leaves the body.
He didn't kill any guard. He knocked the unicorn out and the pegasus got chucked out of a window. Night Tide cleaned up afterwards.
>>27311187
> You hold the blade that was just inside of your friend staring at it for a moment, examining it.
> The reflective non stained portion of the blade causes you to quickly catch a glimpse of your horrid eyes.
> Emotional torment grips you as you recall Toil showing you in the same manner with his serving tray.
> 'I will be your strength to do what you can not... To do what must be done Anonymous...We will send him a message...'
> The words enter your mind as you stare blankly at your slaughtered new friend while on your knees.
> The mix of emotions, guilt, sorrow and pain, leaves you feeling lost as as you sence your own self control give way to a feeling of submission.
> Your slight nod is the only response you can offer.
Sombra killed that pegasus, and how did Night Tide clean two dead bodies on a moving train?
>>27311312
>Sombra killed that pegasus
Nope
"L-Lightning Streak?.."
> Without an answer he collapsed a short distance away.
> With a small hop and extended wings, you glide down to him.
> Landing with quiet hooves you keep a small distance and wide eyes, spear ready.
> His body seems ragged, dirty and blood stained along his back.
> And his wings...
> What in the name of Celestia happened...
> " Y..you left me.." he let's out a dry throat rasp as he lays on his side struggling for breaths.
> Your heart tenses.
> You thought for sure he was going to die.
"I... .i...." Nothing comes to mind.
> With great effort, grunting and whimpering, he pushes himself to lie on his stomach.
> Your own stomach is in knots at the sight of him..
> His wings, if you can still call them that, hang limp at his side appearing to be covered in black.. crystals?..
> Taking a half circling lap around him, slack jawed, you notice his other.. crystallized.. wing partially shattered.
> A larger crystal jutted from between his wing bases appearing to also be entombing another unknown object.
> With a weak cough he speaks, "He's not going to let you go Flash. He said." He coughs more violently " He said that you'll pay for everything you've done to him and those he cares about.."
"He doesn't frighten me.." you put up your front scanning his body.
> "Then why did you leave me to die.. To let them do this to me and be tossed from a moving train? To be nothing more than a message for you... I wanted to help you Flash. But as it turns out" He coughs even louder, some blood coming from his mouth now. " You're nothing more than an opportunistic coward.."
>how did Night Tide clean two dead bodies on a moving train?
Don't know but he did.
> "Everything has been taken care of Prince Anonymous.." His stoic features return almost immediately.
The unicorn is not mentioned again after his incapacitation so no clue what happened to him.
>>27311468
Hmm alright I'll concede that point.
>>27302205
Celestia's using this marital crisis as an excuse to mess with Twilight, which is one of her favorite hobbies.
>>27307967
>Imposter TLA Likes my story. Wat?
which TLA doesn't know how to bump properly?
>>27308325
I made some writing choices that I now regret. Spagoot incoming soon™
I am not sure if I chose the best perspective for this scene. Oh well
>>27250214
>The slow sliding movement sends you a brink closer to whatever it is that awaits you at the end of this journey.
>Whether it's insanity or paradise, you are not quite certain.
>Right now the only thing that you know for a fact to be real is the overwhelming force pinning you down to the bed.
>Your forehooves are powerless to act, and your involuntary wiggles only serve to tire them down, not achieving anything else.
>Your two remaining limbs are warped around your assailant, and only motion they are capable of is pulling him even closer.
>Which you are also trying to do, this time half consciously.
>Your body does protest against your insides being emptied, but at the same time you can't help but to squirm at the sensation overcoming the very entrance to your nethers.
>Also, you know what is going to come next.
>Because it already came multiple times this evening.
>Just as the very last bit of your lover's member is about to exit you, the movement ceases.
>And just like myriad times before, the sudden slam to your pelvis buries you deeper into the soft, blanket-covered mattress.
>The fuzzy material wrinkles even further, inching closer to your vulnerable frame.
>This ticklish sensation on your sides only helps to enhance your pleasure, turning your brain to mush.
>You have forgotten your trip, you have forgotten your plans.
>You neither know or care what clients are appointed to arrive tomorrow.
>Right now you are trapped laying on your back in the most uncovering and revealing position possible.
>And you only know one thing.
>Your name is Rarity.
>And you are being literally fucked into your bed by your own husband.
>>27315239
The first thing I saw when I read your post was
>Your name is Rarity.
>And you are being literally fucked into your bed by your own husband.
>>27296188
>Walking into the library filled with bookcases, and books as far as the eye can see.
>You can see Twilight sitting at a table.
>And judging by the empty plate, teapot, and tea cup, and a saucer, she just got done eating a snack.
>Twilight was in mid sip when she see you enter.
>She puts her cup on the saucer, before waving you over.
>”Good Evening, how are you feeling today.”
“Oh… um, just dandy Twilight.” You say as you walk over to her.
>In a blink of an eye, Twilight materializes a chair for you to sit in.
>Sitting in the chair, you take a quick glance at Twilight.
>Her scar has healed nicely, even if it has left three streaks of exposed skin.
>”You know I’m surprised that you came to see me before the party.”
>Well that’s one way to start a conversation.
“Um, yeah… I just wanted to talk about what happen recently… you know.”
>It seem your topic of choice has darken her mood somewhat.
>”Okay, what is it you want to talk about?”
>Well for starters you killed my wife.
>No, how about the monster you fought was Lilac, and everything so far has been a massive lie.
>How about a sentence that isn’t so dark.
>Um.
>What the hell, was is it so difficult to talk to Twilight?
>Jesus it feels like when you asked Lilac to marry you.
>Great another wonderful memory tarnished.
>”Anon, are you alright?”
>Twilight’s question brings you out of your trance.
>You didn’t realize this, but now you can feel your body shaking.
>”Huh, um yeah, yeah totally fine.”
>You’ve had an easier time selling that lie to a rock.
>”It doesn’t look you’re okay.”
>”I mean getting attacked in the middle of the night by some weird thing must be a very traumatizing experience.
>And you can’t hold it anymore.
>>27315239
Tfw my heart almost dropped for a split second
Continue, please
>>27315412
Unless you are Chinese, I'd recommend reading from top to bottom ^:)
>>27315425
I am, but this is not my comfort zone. I did not write clop before, and it is rather... different.
>>27315239
>The steady rhythm feels like your own heartbeat, natural and overpowering.
>Your own heart of course was moving on its own, much faster pace.
>But you didn't care about that either.
>Even if you were to die of a cardiac arrest here, you couldn't do anything about it.
>You were not a pony right now, not even a living animal.
>You were an object, only supposed to serve a designated purpose your owner acquired you for.
>After that, you could be thrown away and discarded.
>The only reason for your very existence was to allow this wild beast to indulge itself in its carnal pleasure.
>He didn't care whether or not you were hurt during that.
>Your joints could pop, your pelvis could be shattered, you could pass out from asphyxiation.
>But the only thing he cared for was emptying his balls inside you, to relieve himself of the primal urge that was passed down from times immemorial thanks to evolution.
>You were his catch, like a prehistoric pony to its predator.
>Only instead of becoming his meal, you became his lay.
>He held your hooves down with his superior hands as he continued to violate and ravage you in whatever way he felt like.
>An extra strong thrust that left a ringing pain in your hips causes you to produce a muffled moan-squeak.
>Of course it was barely audible thanks to the ball-gag fastened to your muzzle that was invading your mouth.
>The predator didn't want to hear you, not your pleads, not your cries.
>There was only one part of you that mattered to him right now, and it is located between your hindlegs.
>Everything else was just an obstruction.
>Your voice, your horn, your ambitions, your skills, your ever so carefully maintained pride.
>None of that was any value right now, because you were just a fucktoy.
>And it turned you on to no end.
>>27315944
Calling it for now, waking up early and stuff. More/Mare will come tomorrow
>>27315944
>I am, but this is not my comfort zone. I did not write clop before, and it is rather... different.
Well I can tell you that you are quite effective despite that.
>>27263633
Not true, having a larger blood alcohol level is scientifically proven to impair judgment. You are considered drugged, even if you did it to yourself.
Someone who is being psychologically impaired by a control substance cannot give consent.
>>27178603
>If cuckoldry is your thing, this isn't your thread.
>OP pic is Flash getting cucked
good one, dumbass
>>27319444
Don't be obtuse. You know it means toward Anon in a fetishy way rather than just a plot device.
>>27319444
Check'em faggot
>>27319444
You bring shame to those trips.
The banks are your friends.
>page 9
>>27324562
page 8
>A Lust for Revenge will never update
R.I.P. the only good Starlight Glimmer green.
>>27325283
>>27315944
>>Your voice, your horn, your ambitions, your skills, your ever so carefully maintained pride.
>>None of that was any value right now, because you were just a fucktoy.
>>And it turned you on to no end.
Is this going to turn into some of that Slave Pony faggotry? Because there's already a containment thread for anons with weird domination fetishes.
>>27325283
>>27325973
>>27323556
Fuck off, jew
>>27326143
We don't just have one thread for slave ponies, we have two. Although I don't think he's going that far, just Rara and Anon having kinky sex
>>27326143
>weird domination fetishes
>weird
Are you gay? No, scratch that. Even the gays can get into that.
>>27326621
Having a character tripping over themselves in their haste to throw away their life's ambitions for the PRIVILEGE of becoming a slave for your perfect, superior cock is the sort of frustration-venting that I stopped hearing about after the 10th grade in high school. This shit goes away once girls start talking to you, Anon.
>>27326709
>This shit goes away once girls start talking to you, Anon.
If you're a pleb. There's a reason why BDSM is a popular fetish.
>>27326819
BDSM is fine, it's these fucking autists with fantasies of having absolute control over every aspect of an individual's life that makes me cringe my fucking eyes out. I've read so many stories that range from Anon hiding a pony away in his basement to him forcefully making ponies behave like animals, and they LOVE him for it.
>>27326875
>and they LOVE him for it.
That's what we call being a masochist.
>>27326875
Seeing as you have no problems with BDSM, you should lurk this one>>27304898, as it's more about happy dom/sub relationships without the mind break.
>>27326709
i'm sure we'll hear less of it once some of /mlp/ start passing grade 10 as well.
>>27326143
No slavery.
Fun fact, I wanted to post a happy chart with Rarity, but it turns out that one does not exist. There is only the unhappy one.
Why?
>>27327826
By the way, I am beginning to get triggered by all the people who seem to know full and well what is going to happen in my story after reading 2 posts/1 post/1 line/without reading. Nigger I don't even know what I am going to do next, how could you know how is it going to progress, develop and end with such sample size?
>Anon is going to have sex with the OC pone in every update now, shit story
>Dash is OOC and edgy, even though I only saw 1 line of hers
>Lmao you are adding Flutterdash lewd arc because they are in the same scene (ok I baited that one)
>Kek another Flash cuckoldry story xd btfo to >>>/trash/
>You are turning this into another SiM shit because I say so
Please refer to the attached picture.
>>27328331
Look out it's an angry turtle
Bumpo!
bumpino
>>27328331
Yawohl, Essen Sie ein Penis.
Bumping through the shitpost
>>27315944
>You bite down on the intrusive object in your mouth a bit harder as your mind begins spiraling in an unknown direction.
>You remember the first time you heard about Anon arriving in Equestria.
>It was thanks to Twilight being in one of her rambling fits, in which she ended up spilling a highly classified state secret.
>All because she was overly excited over the possibilities that this strange alien presented.
>She had no idea just how correct she was in that moment.
>You feel a shift of weight around the legs of your bed, as your predator finds a new angle of his attack.
>This time focused even more downwards, pressuring a different area that causes your back to arch upwards.
>Of course she meant opportunities for her scientific research.
>And no doubt he ended up being relevant in that too.
>But you are pretty confident that you are currently experiencing the true potential inside this wild creature.
>Although technically this 'potential' was now inside you.
>You recall hearing different and conflicting stories about 'The Human' once his existence became more clear.
>You were rather familiar with the more renowned gossiping circles in Canterlot, so it was only natural that you would learn those.
>But my word were some of them ridiculous.
>"I heard that he has 3 heads, and each of them breathes fire!"
>"But what a nonsense that is, he only had 1 head, and it was cut off by the brave Royal Guard when he started eating innocent ponies."
>"Well I was informed by a very reliable source that Princess Celestia has taken a deep liking to this creature, and is trying to court him into her bedchamber."
>"Come on now Fleur, you are being ridiculous. Why would Princess even do that."
>"She always had an... extravagant taste. Remember the Griffon Emissary?"
>The gossips were quickly getting out hoof at that point.
>And needlessly to say, left you rather curious as to how this "Human" actually was like.
>>27336083
green!
>>27336083
More pls
