Wir sind seine treuen Händen!
Previous thread: >>26913860http://desustorage.org/mlp/thread/26913860/
Human Superiority's Pastebin and Manos green part I, II and III:
http://pastebin.com/u/HumanSuperiority
http://pastebin.com/QBMRbrPv (embed) (Part I)
http://pastebin.com/C3cq16me (embed) (Part II)
http://pastebin.com/kGsD5Hwz (embed) (Part III)
A character sheet for Manos (Constant WIP):
http://pastebin.com/2iFWvgSe (embed)
Backgrounds of Fate (Manos Side Stories)
MedicalKrabbyPatty's (aka: A Black Hand) Pastebin:
http://pastebin.com/u/AMedicalKrabbyPatty
A Royalist's Pastebin:
http://pastebin.com/u/ARoyalist
EM1's (aka: ZimZam's) Pastebin:
http://pastebin.com/u/EM1
Heil the Reich!
Heil Manos!
I hope anon is cool with me using his edit in the header, it's a great piece.
I hereby declare this thread fit for sailing.
>>27082306
Fucked up the embeds, heh
Alright boys, it's December 18th 1940.
I just hit the Port of Bridgetown, in the Barbados.
I'm on my way to hit the Port of Spain, in Trinidad and Tobago.
I sank a Tribal - Class Destroyer and an ASW Trawler at Bridgetown. Hopefully, I'll have better luck at the Port of Spain.
>Patrol 19
>December 6, 1940, 05:35
>>Small Merchant, 2396 tons, sunk.
>December 18, 1940, 07:53
>>ASW Trawler, 1100 tons, sunk.
>December 18, 1940, 07:56
>>Tribal Class Destroyer, 1850 tons, sunk.
>December 18, 1940, 21:53
>>Small Tanker, 2051 tons, sunk.
>December 19, 1940, 11:03
>>Small Tanker, 1984 tons, sunk.
>December 19, 1940, 16:03
>>Medium Cargo, 5016 tons, sunk.
>Patrol Results:
>>Crew Losses: 0
>>Ships Sunk: 6
>>Aircraft Destroyed: 0
>>Patrol Tonnage: 14397 tons.
>>27083330
This was a disappointing patrol, as I went to THREE different ports. Each had only one or two Allied ships, and a shit ton of Columbian or American ships, which a can not sink without repercussions. After everything there, I still had SIX torpedoes, but little fuel, so I had to call it a day.
giving bump
>>27083516
>>27083330
>>27082722
>>27082693
>>27082358
>>27082321
>>27082306
>>27084402
>Patrol 21
>February 3, 1941, 03:52
>>Tramp Steamer, 1967 tons, sunk.
>February 3, 1941, 20:03
>>Liberty Cargo, 8476 tons, sunk.
> February 4, 1941, 07:24
>>HMS NELSON, 36000 tons, SUNK.
>February 4, 1941, 07:58
>>Tribal Class Destroyer, 1850 tons, sunk.
>February 4, 1941, 09:22
>>Southampton Class Light Cruiser, 10725 tons, sunk.
>Patrol Results:
>>Crew Losses: 0
>>Ships Sunk: 5
>>Aircraft Destroyed: 0
>>Patrol Tonnage: 59118 tons.
I also managed to put two torpedoes into a London-Class Battlecruiser (?), and a single torpedo into another Southampton Class.
This is my second best patrol ever, gentlemen.
>You have been awarded:
>>Knights Cross With Oak Leaves And Swords
>Your Crew Earned:
>>Medals
>>Promotions
WOOT!
>>27084583
Ah, the London-Class is a Heavy Cruiser. The Southampton and it didn't sink because that water was too shallow, and they touched bottom before enough water could fill them.
So, Manos has established the Iron Cross essentially, yes? How about the Knight's Cross? It's saddening that a sea dog like me has one, whilst pones get a measly Iron Cross.
(you)s for all bump
>>27084498
>>27084632
>>27084605
>>27084583
you will take these damn yous
>>27085243
Are you trying to sound smart? I'm a namefag, of course those are all me.
>>27085623
i know i see the name this is just a colorful way of bumping
>>27085645
Oh ok. Bump.
>proceeds to ignore the sinking of the HMS Nelson
>>27082358
>>27082722
>>27083330
>>27083516
>>27084498
>>27084583
>>27084605
>>27084632
>>27085623
wtf is this crap
is that you unprofessional?!
>>27085884
He's the U-Boat anon. He gives us stuff to read while HS is away.
"Not even a submarine net can stop me."
-Wilhelm Hinterburg, January 1940
>>27085893
I guess...
>>27087050
It's better than simple bumps.
I enjoy having SOMETHING to read, considering that I am lurking 24/7.
>>27087050
Are my reports not interesting? I can stop, of you guys want.
fallow your heart bump
>>27087213
>>27087694
follow
>>27087694
What a joke politician...
It's game time. Dubs decide which major port I visit next (No Asia).
>>27088947
Pearl harbor
>>27089997
That's not modeled in the game.
Atlantic and Indian Oceans are modeled, along with the Black Sea.
>>27090466
Well, I got dubs. So, I choose Jew York City.
>>27091250
>Patrol Jew York City
>early 1941, so no attacking.
>get back to base
>get this
why.jpg
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>>27093355
Ayy. You got dubs; pick a port city.
I'm willing to bet this ship is full of 'refugees'.
Fuck you Scruffy, try to ban me!
Pro-tip: You can't.
>>27096400
Ayy, you got dubs. Pick a port.
>>27097203
Scapa Flow
>>27097553
Firstly, I just got my Knight's Cross with Oak Leaves, Swords and Diamonds (only 27 were awarded historically).
Secondly, Scapa Flow will be tricky, given the new hydrophones on British destroyers, but I'll try my best.
>>27097950
What makes Scapa Flow so tricky is that it has a bottleneck entrance, much like Portsmouth (though Portsmouth is far worse).
>>27098025
I'm going to attempt to enter though the Western entrance, which is narrower and less patrolled. Since there are probably sub nets in the area, I'll wait until night, and then surface to pass over them quickly before diving once more.
>>27097553
My first attempt failed. I wasted too many torpedoes on an ocean liner I came across. I'll try again once I have some tea ready.
For now, just remember that the Bismarck sank the Hood during my first attempt.
>>27097553
Alright, I am about to enter Scapa Flow. My crew is about to feast upon our supply of Bratwursts before we engage the enemy (I have a bratwurst next to me, it is my lunch).
>>27099076
The entrance to the Flow. I'll be taking staying to the right of that island, as there are two wrecks to the left, indicating shallow waters. There is a small Elco Torpedo Boat patrolling around the island, but he lacks a hydrophone.
>>27099216
Alright, here's the first ship I've spotted in the Flow. It's an anchored Destroyer. I'll take this out first.
>>27099325
Here's the second 'ship' I spotted. A Floating Dock. These things are about 26,000 tons if I remember correctly.
>>27099376
Ok, so both ships were sunk. Then, some shit head British Destroyer came over to investigate and beached himself! I'll be launching a stern torpedo at him as I pass.
>>27097553
Anon. I have just expended the last of my torpedoes. All torpedoes fired were hits. I haven't done the math yet, but I think this may have been the most successful patrol of ANY U-Boat captain during the war. I am now attempting to navigate my way through the Eastern passage of Scapa Flow, which is even narrower than where I came in.
hey guys. im sorry ive been gone. like i said a few days ago something important came up. but ill buckle down and get you guys some green either tonight or Sunday.
just wanted to say i haven't abandoned the green
>>27099965
Oh hello there HS! You don't mind that I'm trying to entertain the crew while you're gone, do you?
>>27099965
Youre my hero already
>>27097553
>Patrol 26
>June 3, 1941
>>09:32
>>>Floating Dock, 33200 tons, sunk.
>>09:35
>>>A/B Class Destroyer, 1350 tons, sunk.
>>11:24
>>>V/W Class Destroyer, 1188 tons, sunk. .
>>16:20
>>>V/W Class Destroyer, 1188 tons, sunk.
>>16:25
>>>C/D Class Destroyer, 1375 tons, sunk.
>>18:38
>>>Fiji Class Light Cruiser, 10725 tons, sunk.
>>19:58
>>>Fiji Class Light Cruiser, 10725 tons, sunk.
>>20:06
>>>Isles Class Mine Layer, 540 tons, sunk.
>Patrol Results:
>>Crew Losses: 0
>>Ships Sunk: 8
>>Aircraft Destroyed: 0
>>Patrol Tonnage: 60,291 tons.
I'm pretty sure no U-Boat captain ever broke the 60,000 ton mark on any given patrol.
Thank you for suggesting Scapa Flow, Anon. Now, I have a metric ton of medals to give to my crew (1 German Cross in Gold was awarded among other things).
>>27100146
Correction: No U-Boat captain has ever broken the 60,000 ton mark without resupplying historically.
>>27101909
>Bumping
>not making a U-Boat Anon related bump.
Alright I'll do it. That was quite a patrol you had there Hinterburg.
>>27102004
Thank you, anon. That patrol in Scapa Flow was probably the 2nd most nerve-wracking patrol of my career (the worst being an attempted infiltration at Portsmouth, something I learned is literally impossible).
>>27102004
Sorry anon. I was unaware of the new rules.
>>27102331
Fate guide you kreigsmarine!
>>27102930
I decided to take a break from all the high tonnage missions.
Right now it's August 1941, and I'm sailing to patrol around Freetown.
Thread Theme.
https://youtu.be/kat9WQhibwE
>>27099965
Hope you return soon HS. Nothing against U-boat anon, but I'm always checking for updates to the green.
bump for the people
Im just curious on how many anons are lurking here, all i see is one namefag posting his U boat runs over and over. while its nice for bumping it would be better if we had some sort of Manos related content or discussion. even Aryanne or related ponies would be acceptable.
example:
>pic related
how do you anons see Princess Luna in this? at first i saw her as more of a counter to Celestias passive nature, doing what she believes would be the best course of action to save Equestria and her citizens from Manos, but now with the steps she is taking (which to me seem far more radical than Manos' own) she seems more of a threat to Equestria than Manos does. at least in terms of long term leadership.
quick bump before answering
>>27104985
wot face.jpg
>>27104856
no (you)s for the guy you wants to actually talk about the story
>>27104856
>>27104985
>>27105529
this is what it has become..
Alright, I've decided to do something similar to other writers on this general.
>you are Silent Hunter
>you are a member of the Reich Research and Development branch.
>for months now, you've heard of plans to build armed surface vessels designed to operate in the open seas.
>You feel that these resources could be devoted to the same basic idea, but better.
>you have a vision of an unseen vessel attacking enemy ships.
>a submersible vessel, if you will.
>just a few weeks ago, you had a brief meeting with Lord Manos to propose your idea.
>he stated that such a vessel exists in his world.
>an Unterseeboot, or submarine, as he calls it.
>as a result of your meeting, Manos has granted you permission to begin development of this 'Unterseeboot'.
>>27104856
It okay anon. I'll talk to you.
Here's a prediction given a couple of things foreshadowed earlier in the story.
NMM is going to take full control over Luna, followed shortly by Equestria. Elements of harmony can't stop her now that there's a firm rift between the group.
She'll try to get revenge over her banishment, by banishing Celestia to the sun,The worse place to spend a thousand years, or Celestia would get away.
Since keeping the sun, and moon stationary would cause a world wide cataclysmic event, Celestia would be desperate enough to attempt a deal with Manos.
>>27106249
good for you
>>27106274
cool story m8
>>27106318
fear the might of god bump
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>>27106249
>of course, you were assigned a team to assist you in your endeavors.
>Strong Bow (as in bow and stern) is a male unicorn scientist from Canterlot, who specializes in shipbuilding materials.
>Quiet Runner (Silent Runner sounds too close to Silent Hunter), is a female Earth Pony from Vanhoover (ironic), who was working on a non horsepower means of propulsion for ships (came buckets when he found out about the combustion engine made by the Reich) before moving to the Reich for the better work opportunities.
>National Pride, a female Earth Pony, was a former higher up in the Royal Guards who specializes in weapon development.
>Finally there's you, Silent Hunter. You are a male Pegasus from Cloudsdale who was considered the town retard for being obsessed with the sea. In your youth, you would watch the goings on at the Port of Vanhoover from the clouds above. You always noted the near constant flow of traffic entering and leaving the port. This led to your theory of cutting off Equestria's naval supply line in order to end this war sooner.
>>27108528
Fucking kek.
>>27109279
This is the basic look that I'm thinking of for Silent Hunter.
>Hurr Durr another Aryanne look alike?
Yes.
>>27109367
Minus the horn, ofc.
bumpuu
>>27109279
>after weeks of work and dozens of propositions, you think you've found a decent design to serve as the basis for all 'U-Boot' designs. An all metal hull with a conning tower, rear propulsion, and a decent diving time.
>seeing as this is a prototype, you dub this new design the 'PT-I', or 'Prototype-I'
>now, all that's left to do is to get the go ahead from Lord Manos to begin construction (permission from HS to continue this side story).
>Knights Cross With Oak Leaves, Swords and Diamonds in GOLD.
>mfw only six were ever made, and it was planned that only 12 would ever be awarded at most.
>mfw only one was ever delivered and the other five were captured by the Allies
>mfw I am the only recipient of this award.
>mfw I got this for patrolling around the Land of the Chimps (Africa).
>>27110597
I'm doing some math for this thing. Just the gold on this thing is worth ~$698-$700 today; that's not including the diamonds or sapphires. I imagine this thing would be worth approximately $1000 in just raw resources.
It would probably be worth more than $10,000 today overall.
>>27110597
Correction. That Ernst Rudel faget also got one.
All of U-Boat Anon's medals
>top left: U-Boat War Badge
>Center: U-Boat Front Clasp
>Bottom Left: Iron Cross Second Class
>Bottom Center: Iron Cross First Class
>Bottom Right: Knight's Cross with Oak Leaves, Swords and Diamonds in Gold.
I wouldn't mind seeing Manos awarding a few of these.
Goddamn it.
Ever since HS went on that 'short' hiatus, everyone fucking left. HS, don't you know that once you get off of the ride, there's no getting back on?
tl;dr: WRITE MORE FUCKING GREEN. please.
>>27112547
kill yourself
>>27112779
Hey, I'm just being honest.
>>27112547
i understand anon. but because of some recent events ive had far less time than previously
>>27099965
>you are Roselight
>the cold north has taken its toll on your now returning Black Hands
>they have been reduced to a fraction of what they once were, and most of the losses have been from weather and supply
>despite this, your mission was the will of Manos himself, and that alone makes the costs excusable.
>down the snow covered road you can see the light of the Reich in the distance
"only a couple hours of travel left."
>you wear your ornate armor with pride refusing to cover it from view
>a gift from Manos should be seen and respected.
>"Commander... its been so long since we were sent out here, but now that we are returning home i wonder.. was what we accomplished worth it?"
>you turn your head to the stallion walking beside you a disapproving glare in your eye
"any task the Hands of Fate gives us is a task worth our lives."
>the Hand doesnt argue, though if its because he agrees or simply is too cold to respond you are unsure.
>it doesn't matter.
>your mission was a success, even here on the roads you have learned of the Yaks and their declaration of war on Equestria
>it will be only a matter of time before the sisters will see the power of the Reich and her allies
"dump the armor and weapons... the weight will only slow us down."
>the sound of ponies disarming themselves behind you begins instantly after your words leave your lips
>no doubt they are eager to shed the chilled armor keeping them frozen
"we will be home soon enough."
>you are Celestia
>you have left Luna an her Knight to go and clear your head
>Equestria used to be a peaceful place, there was no war, no fractured loyalties, Just everyone living together in harmony.
>but now not even the elements of harmony themselves can seem to agree with each other...
"if this isnt Chaos, then i dont know what is.."
>you haven't slept in days..
>perhaps that is what you need to clear your mind?
>>27113257
>just as you think that rest would be the best course of action you are met by a royal guard.
>"princess! i have and urgent message for you!"
>there seems to have been no other kind recently
"yes my little pony?"
>the guard quickly opens his bag and pulls out an opened letter giving it to you
>you take it with your magic
>"sorry for having the letter already opened princess.. but princess luna gave us orders to check all mail leaving and entering the city."
"my sister has ordered that?"
>the guard nods
>it really shouldn't surprise you.. steps must be taken to ensure the safety of Equestria..
>even if you dont approve of having everyponys mail being read and privacy taken away
>you look to the letter, it has no real address besides the words 'to Canterlot'
>opening it you see a two words written on the page with excellent calligraphy
>your eyes widen and quickly and you rush off to inform Luna letting the letter drop to the floor behind you
>it hits the floor face up exposing what it said
>Manos, Vanhoover
>you are Marble Sunset
>ahead of you roll two large tanks their guns ablaze spraying down the streets ahead of you
>royal guards take cover and hide from the onslaught
>bursts of magic strike the machines of war from windows and alleyways to little effect.
>at least, from what you can tell...
>Hands that get hit from the splash or direct contact however are another story.
>even now you hear the screams of those who have been hit
>next to you a Black Hand takes some magic splash to one of his legs as he walks behind the tank
>the fur begins to smoke and burn, the sound similar to that of frying an egg.
>you can only imagine how it feels
>he is quickly pulled back to a safe distance by a fellow Hand who begins to shout for help
>"medic! oh Manos, we need a medic over here!"
>you move back to the ponies gathering around the wounded pony and shove them forward
"keep moving forward! we cant let our armor get too far ahead!"
Unprofessional Bump.
Also, fuck that u boat faggot for giving you assholes shit to read. Why do you guys hate me but not mind him?
>>27114644
My repeating digits demand an answer!
>>27114740
Answer me before I start flooding this thread with confession of my love for the nigger dick that's fucking my xirfriend as I sit here watching and typing
>>27114811
Oh ha ha. Nice try niggerlord.
>>27114854
You better stop false flagging as me before I get my wife's son to fuck you up
>>27114888
Fuck. I can't argue with trips....
Then again, I bet you love trips AND traps.
>>27114888
My trips are the trips of truth
>>27114902
Not as much as I love watching other men fuck my wife
>>27114928
>Implying that we are married
Nigga please.
>>27114935
>Falseflagging my own marriage
Fuck off, impostor, before I show you the power of the black shirts
>>27114956
Who's the imposter?
>>27115017
Do I smell an edit being made?
>>27114644
>>27114740
>>27114811
>>27114854
>>27114888
>>27114902
>>27114907
>>27114928
>>27114935
>>27114956
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>>27115192
Mods this is what you should be deleting instead of everything else.
>>27115313
Fuck off faglord.
>>27115313
agreed^2
WTF is happening?
>>27115545
This is all your fault. You know that right?
>>27115964
Wait. What?
>>27113257
>>27113578
Thanks for the delicious fresh green and welcome back HS.
>>27115313
This.
>>27116502
Just ignore him Wilhelm.
I wish you: Sieg und Heil und fette Beute!
>>27113578
HIGH TREASON!
>>27118334
That bastard has been riding my ass for the #1 position in the tonnage war since September of '39.
>>27118334
Plus, he only has oak leaves for his knights cross, something I earned back in '40.
>>27118353
This dude is the new Boba Fett.
>>27118944
He must have something to prove anon
>>27119694
Pardon? Could you elaborate?
Page ten save.
Also excited for new green whenever it shows up.
>>27110055
>Success! You now have permission to move your project into the prototype phase.
>It will take about a month for your PT-I to be built, considering that many currently uncommon materials are required.
>until then, you decide to visit the occupied zones of Vanhoover to find a port that will work well for your experiments.
will there be green tonight feel free to say no
>>27122884
Yes. I will post more green.
>May 1942
>the tide is starting to turn
>mfw the Brits have shitloads of destroyers guarding EVERY port, making port strikes nearly impossible
>mfw the Russians are starting to get stronger
>mfw the burgers are in the war now
>mfw I am now assigned to go into burger/tea-sipper territory (Gulf of Mexico).
>>27082306
bump
>>27124018
You dirty nigger. Make a relevant comment! Don't just waste thread space!
>>27124511
bump
>>27124761
Ooooh, you little bitch.
>>27124802
Bump :^)
Ayy, I just got promoted to Kapitänleutnant (Lieutenant Commander).
>>27124866
>10
Plz no die.
>>27128297
john cena bump
bump
>>27126639
>non relevant bump
Kill yourself.
>>27129707
???
>>27129711
Don't waste thread space with bumps. Start a discussion, or something.
>>27129134
I do know that feeling.
so any manos head cannons
>>27131914
manos was actually a pony all along
>>27131916
kek
>>27131914
He is reincarnation on our best bud.
>>27131914
That's what happens when you don't spend enough time on your main character; the reader has to start filling in the blanks on their own.
tl;dr: HS, spend some more time on telling this war from the perspective of Manos.
>>27132899
i always thought that we where supposed to project ourselves on to him
>>27133058
Yes, but we're not seeing the result of that projection, as we're only hearing about all these random commanders at the front.
>>27133238
yes because this is a war bit senpai
tbqh, I miss the writing style from the beginning of this general.
>>27082306
when you steal the dark brotherhood logo for your stupid picture
>>27133959
why may may
>>27132899
>>27133406
i rather like the way it shows different views on whats happening, before it seemed to centralized on manos
>>27134403
I personally liked the writing best around the time that Manos had that party at his castle in Poneville.
>"DIE QUEEN KILLER!'
Loved that bit.
>>27132899
>telling this war from the perspective of Manos.
yes anon, because hearing about a battle from the perspective of someone in a room is as interesting as seeing the actual battle.
while i agree id like a bit more of Manos in the story when its a battle or advances the story in a way that makes sense i have no personal problems with it
of course this is just one anons opinion
>>27135401
Perhaps I should elaborate.
This fleshed out writing style would work IF HS posted a decent amount per night, thus keeping the story moving at a good pace. Instead, we're probably going to be reading about Vanhoover for multiple weeks, as opposed to the one or two days dedicated to the Battle of Canterlot (changeling invasion). A utilitarian style works best with the rate at which HS is posting. The more complex style he is using doesn't work well with his schedule.
Just had my first successful port strike in over a year.
>St. Helena
>>A/B Class Destroyer, 1350 tons.
>>ASW Trawler, 1100 tons.
>>Southampton Class Light Cruiser, 10725 tons.
>>Small Freighter, 2176 tons.
>>Large Tanker, 9676 tons, Fiji Class Light Cruiser, 10725 tons.
>Total: 35,752 tons.
nien
>10
Early morning bump
>>27138606
fun fact trump is having a rally in Berlin MD today
>>27139084
i have proof https://www.donaldjtrump.com/schedule/
this man is a meme god
bump
Happy Birthday Adolf!
HS, can you write something today about it being Manos' birthday?
>>27140065
seconded, this would be pretty nice
>>27140408
>HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
"AAHHH!"
>Holy shit! The fuck are these horses on anout?
"Nigga, Fate has no date of birth or death."
>"Wooooooaaaah."
>Wut?
>Turn around
>"Dude, that was, like, really deep, man."
>Fuck, it's that stoner that buttershy hangs out with.
>You can smell her 'essence' from where you are.
"Uh. Sure...."
>"Dude, we should, like, have a little 'get together', know what o mean?"
>ohfuckno.jpg
"GUARDS!"
sshsshhsshBUMPshshsshsshsss
>>27140685
Bretty gud / 10
>>27140065
indeed a birthday episode would be nice
war comes first though
partying is for more peaceful times
>>27142318
Yeah, but it's H Dawg's birthday. This would support the theory that Manos is a reincarnation of Adolf Hitler.
>>27142485
>This would support the theory that Manos is a reincarnation of Adolf Hitler.
>Reincarnation of Adolf Hitler
new head canon.. thanks anon
>>27142593
Imagine Manos back on Earth.
I imagine him being like Mr. Hilter from Monty Python.
>>27142593
You're welcome.
I feel like I just spoiled the ending.
>After the Great Equestrian War had finally concluded, Manos retired to his chambers.
>sitting himself behind a mirror, he looks up.
>first, he fixes his brown hair, which is styled in a bowl cut.
>next he notices the bags under his brown eyes.
>finally, he trims his iconic mustache, a small square patch of hair upon his upper lip.
Boop.
>>27145643
NO! Reply to one of the 6 gorillion posts made!
>>27145763
This also, >10
>>27147336
>10
>10
>10
we are officially a general now.. we have a shit poster, a want to be relevant anon, namefags that show up and have small conversations, and anons who constantly bump. oh an the occasional green-less thread.
yup thats everything. all we need now are numbers saying what thread we are
>tfw no word from HS on the Führer's birthday.
life of the party bump
>>27147360
It only NOW became a general?!
>>27147917
This feel is a sad feel.
I've always taken time out of every April 20th to celebrate in some way.
bomp
>>27147917;_;
>>27149736
FUCK YOU GODDAMN KIKE NIGGER!
>>27150190
Something is clearly wrong with you mister.
>>27144371
The End.
>>27152298
I'm sorry guys, but this Anon might be right about it being 'The End'. Things in my life have just been going to shit. I don't know when I'll post again, but it will be several weeks at least.
I'm sorry to let you guys down.
>>27153019
rip thread
>>27153029
HAHA! This nigger actually fell for it!
>>27153019
>>27153378
I hope you die a slow painful death.
This bullshit is why I always tripcode in this thread
>>27153436
I'll have some time tomorrow to write for you guys. I have been short on free time but I am trying my best to work this green into my schedule.
![79054643-e1456166059359[1].jpg](https://i.imgur.com/VFameIp.jpg "79054643-e1456166059359[1].jpg")
>>27153468
Glad to see you back, sir. Please, take your time, I wouldn't want this to come before your real life.
>>27153436
I'm surprised that I haven't been incorporated into the story as Manos' personal torture slave or something similar.
>>27153585
This. Life comes first. But dont forget about us either! I payed good money for this free entertainment!
>>27153378
I think I'm starting to understand why everyone seems to hate you.
>>27153744
You'd like that wouldn't you?
>>27153468
Welcome back, sir!
>>27155760
Oh, most certainly. However, I'm sure it would also please you all as well.
Bump
>>27156952
Not really.
HS, just don't. Not now. Not in the future.
So, how long do you guys give this general before it dies completely?
>>27150785
gotta love the congo mueller would drink with him anytime
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NB9gyyVrbxk
>>27155340
Hello fellow Manosfags. I'm currently innawoods. Any suggestions on what to do?
>>27162113
S.T.A.L.K.E.R ChallengeAlso what state
mate with the local wildlife.pics or it didnt happen
>>27163004
Bump
>>27164241
bump
Havent read Manos since months ago.
Has Cadence died already in a herd of changelings? What's new? Im a lazy anon
>>27165854
Manos made himself an hero.
I ended up writing a good amount of green last night then promptly fell asleep. When I get home from work I'll post it.
>>27166782
Daddy
>>27166782
aww yiss
>>27166782
Excellent Sir, can't wait!
>>27168364
That's a cute image
>>27168364
Someone PLEASE edit this so that Aryanne has a Manos flash SOMEWHERE.
>>27168364
is she in a box? or is that an open book?
>>27113578
>the hands stumble forward from your shove before regrouping with the others
>for moment you look back at the wounded pony who once was screaming in agony, now lay silent.
>you close your eyes for a brief moment and force your eyes away before rushing up with the others
>as you reach them taking cover and firing from behind the tank its large weapon blares a mighty "boom"
>the building ahead is struck by its projectile and shakes from the impact, dust and glass spraying from its openings
>its devastating, to say the least.
>the machine fires at the building for a second time a large chunk falling out, causing the area above to bend and eventually fall onto the next building
>you push yourself as close to the tank and the Hands behind it as close as you can as a wave of rubble and dust washes over a good portion of the street
>just as it settles you poke out and fire your weapon into a group of dazed, and now dirty, royalists.
>one drops but you are unsure if it was you who hit the target.
>one of the Hands climbs onto the rear of the tank and uses the turret to stabilize his machine gun
>his weapon adds to the constant chorus of gunfire in short controlled bursts
>what royalists that remained either fall back or charge forward in a last attempt to halt your advance.
>the ones who retreated were wiser.
>the sound of gunfire slowly comes to an end, only a few occasional gunshots remaining.
>it wasnt until now you notice your leg has a searing pain and the feeling of water on it.
>you lift your leg slightly to keep pressure off of it
>even without looking at it you know you have a gash of some sort.
>you take a moment to look at your back leg and your suspicions are confirmed
"I wonder when that happened.."
>>27170030
>hobbling over to the side of the street you take a seat and pull a small kit out of your bag
>it takes a bit of effort, but eventually you get a decent bandage wrapped tightly around your leg
"a block or two for a wounded leg, id say that's a good deal"
>the tanks slow their advance and eventually come to a stop further down the road, Hands start to spread out and create a secure perimeter for the wounded to be seen to.
>you pull out our map again, now with a few blood stains added to it thanks to your hurried bandaging.
>a quick look over and you find your position.
"not far from the port.. if we keep moving it should only take us a few-"
>the sound of magic fills the air and quickly you look around for its source
>a large dome begins to appear from the direction you had been advancing
>as it begins to close at the top it seems to solidify and the sun gleams off of its top
>you place your hoof over your eyes and sigh in a mix of anger and annoyance
"why cant they just give up and surrender the damn port? it would save us all a great deal of time.."
>reaching into your pocket you pull out your crystal and speak into it.
"this is Marble Sunset.. our advance has been halted.."
>you are no longer Marble Sunset
>but what you are, is running
>your legs feel like they are about to collapse from under you and your heart seems fit to explode
>a mix of sweat and blood flows down your mane and the salty liquids burn your eyes and wounds as they enter
>just a few yards away a fellow guardspony waves you over hurriedly
>"you need to get past here! quickly! the spell is almost cast!"
>between huffs and exhausted breaths you manage to squeak out personal motivation
"just.... a bit... further... just a few more steps... and im safe."
>your vision is cloudy, and your helmet isn't doing much help
>it seems to get heavier, as does the rest of your armor
>you throw it to the ground and push on
>>27170053
>behind you the sound of explosions and what many have started calling "gunfire" echo behind you
>"you're going to make it! come on!"
>with your last bit of energy you force yourself into a short sprint and collapse just feet past the pony waiting for you
>you lay there eyes closed and lungs on fire for a second or two before looking back
>the guard smiles back at you and walks to your side helping you up
>"you made it buddy."
>the guard hoists you onto his back and starts to slowly carry you on
>even without air in your lungs you manage to laugh.
>just in front of where the pony originally stood there is a large magical barrier.
>exactly like the one used in Canterlot before the changeling invasion.
>your laugh slowly turns into a cry and you shut your eyes tightly
>your body hurts more than it ever has before, and you have wounds like you never imagined
>but what hurts more than all that combined, is the thought of all the friends and comrades you have lost.
>all because some creature fancies himself as a leader, and a God...
>you are Manos.
>the Lord of Fate.
>you stand on a balcony looking over the Reich and its many faithful citizens below
>VanHoover will soon be in your hands.
>and with it the fate of Equestria and her allies, and eventually the world.
>this is troubling...
>you tap your fingers on the balconies railing in thought.
"My entire government, my Religion, and even my friends are driven by two things.."
>Extermination of the changelings and the chance to earn their place in Valhalla
"which would require conflict, constant conflict.."
>you raise your fist and smash it into the railing in frustration
>as you do a strange familiar feeling comes over you.
>even without seeing it you know the Amulet is glowing is bright red locked away in your chest.
>your bit of frustration slowly seems to grow inside you
>thankfully you notice it and focus on relaxing yourself.
>>27170073
>your fist uncurls and you relax your muscles.
>turning around you look back to the door that leads to the hall
"one problem at a time."
>right now, you have enemies a plenty, and you have numerous forces eager to combat them.
>so for now, the stability of the Reich is secure.
>but those Elements of Chaos, they most certainly are not.
>while three are safely locked away and in your possession, half of them are still out there somewhere.
>And to make matters worse, you are not sure what they could even be!
>Fear, Lust, and Hate were all obvious, much like the emotions they represent.
>but Sorrow, Deceit, and Knowledge? those are all much easier to hide.
>your hands make fists again as the sound of gloves struggling under your grip becomes more prevalent
"and where are my damn reports from Blackout and that parasite!?"
>you walk forward at a frustrated pace and shove the doors open
>the sound of their quick closing behind you reminds you that your emotions are not under control
>as you continue on you make sure to relax yourself again and try to get distance between you and the Amulet as you pass your room
>The Shines better have a report from Blackout...
>if not, then odds are likely that either the Royals have someone on the inside, or Blackout has gone AWOL.
>neither of which are preferable.
>you are Emerald Shine
>Sapphire and yourself sit in your offices reading your reports from various regions under your eyes and ears.
>pushing one of the recently read reports into its folder you look over to your sister
"what are we going to do with those griffons?"
>Sapphire continues reading her own reports for a moment before responding
>"well considering they had very little information to give, even those who we thought would have more, i say we have one of two options."
"which are?"
>>27170080
>"well one"
>Sapphire puts away her pile of folders and begins to clean her desk
>"we could simply let them go and become a part of the Reich..."
>you scoff and roll your eyes at the thought
"no, those beasts are not ponies, and they have actively been fighting against Manos and his hands"
>"not to mention our own agents. No, i dont much care for that idea either."
"This Reich under lord Manos is a place for loyal and devoted PONIES. if we start letting beasts of their nature in what would be the cut off? would we start accepting Zebras? Minotaurs? oh perhaps even dragons to be citizens?!"
>the two of you start to giggle at the idea of citizen dragons
>Manos has even said, with his Reich we shall not fear the timber wolf, the dragon, or Griffons.
>"which brings me to our second option. we designate them as a threat to the security of the Reich and remove the threat."
>you have never been prouder of your sister.
>it seems she can be just as bad as you at times.
"you know Sapphire, you must be my sister. even if you act shy or reserved in public you think just like i do."
>"well then, we have no more need to worry about those inferior beasts anymore. now do we?"
"i suppose we dont."
>your smile stays on your face as you look back down at your last report.
>a town now under the control of the Reich has recently been secured.
>Black Hands have rounded up both guards and trouble makers and removed any changelings that have gone unnoticed by the locals.
>the list of names is rather long for a town of its size which my be a concern.
>at the bottom a side note reads: 'previous occupiers have been neutralized and executed, the Reich now has full control of the town with little to no loss of Reich troops'
>with that you sign the report and place it in its folder.
"its the job of the gestapo to remove anything that might cause issue for the Reich."
>besides, nothing of any real value was lost.
>>27168364
i like that picture.
Aryanne a qt3.14
>>27170094
Holy shit those twins.
>>27170080
>>27170094
I think im in love with those twins.
Sup guys?
>>27175468
hope your CPAP breaks and you die in your sleep, faggot
>>27176254
This.
Also, I am now using a Type XXI U-Boat as of April 1944.
page 9 bump
>>27170094
>>27170135
Thank you very much for the fresh green HS!
As good as urban warfare in Vanhoover is, our lovely Gestapo twins were my personal highlight this time.
>"This Reich under lord Manos is a place for loyal and devoted PONIES. if we start letting beasts of their nature in what would be the cut off? would we start accepting Zebras? Minotaurs? oh perhaps even dragons to be citizens?!"
Very touching.
I'm also eager to know how Blackout, Queenie and that certain helpful contact agent are doing!
And, of course, what is behind that whistle-blower in Canterlot.
>>27168801
>>27169237
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>>27170135
That's a game guys, you can talk to her and buy her book...http://tiarawhy.com/animations/pony/ponk-quest-alpha-1-0/
>>27153436
>>27175468
>I hope you die a slow painful death.
HS's curses are deadly.
>>27176312
>Type XXI
Nice Wilhelm. I visited U 2540 with my parents in Bremerhaven once when I was a kid.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/German_submarine_Wilhelm_Bauer
>>27177361
Are you the 'Admiral Anon' that the prophecy spoke of?
>>27177613
Also, on my last patrol before upgrading to the Type XXI, I sank this 40,000 ton beauty.
https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/RMS_Aquitania
>>27177613
If Admiral Anon watches over the sea, and ArmAnon watch over the land, who watches the skies?
>>27177657
I, LuftAnon, shall watch over the skies of the Reich.
>>27177613
Kek, this thread might know me under that name, yes. I don't namefag though.
I'm usually the guy that reminds everyone of our upcoming naval endeavour, I was also in the initial thread that discussed the possibility of a Reichsmarine andlaying siege to Manehattan from the seafor the first time.
See:
https://desustorage.org/mlp/thread/26039363/#26066807
https://desustorage.org/mlp/thread/26039363/#26073111
https://desustorage.org/mlp/thread/26039363/#26073516
https://desustorage.org/mlp/thread/26039363/#26073968 (me)
https://desustorage.org/mlp/thread/26039363/#26074284
Good times.I'm still eager to see the city of Manehattan levelled and the pone of friendship crumbling under our heavy ship artillery fire!
>>27177898
We know it's you because you have a fetish for dreadnoughts.
>>27177998
You got me there.
>>27178145
I, on the other hand, have a fetish for sinking shit like pic related.
>>27177648
Look at that thing, it's massive! For a reference point, the HMS Nelson is 36,000 tons, compared to this 40,000 ton behemoth!
Holy Shit guys! Check out my science project; it turned out better than expected!
Bum p
>>27179301
No bumps, brah.
Well gentlemen, the war is nearly over. It is late October of 1944, and I'm still in 1st place in the tonnage war. This Kretschmer nigga has only about 1/3 of my tonnage (he has around 270,000).
>>27180819
any green tonight
>>27181337
No, you dipshit.
>>27181707
o-okay
>>27181801
>Vanhoover is lost..
>you know this, its only a matter of time before its official.
>Manos has come to take this city from the Princesses, and his forces have a excellent battle record.
>leaning against the wall of a building you look around the corner
>a force of Black Hands are moving by with support from their mobile death factories
>the blood in your veins turns to ice as a chill runs down your spine
>just before a Hand turns to look towards your hiding place you pull yourself back behind the corner
"there's.. there's hundreds of them.."
>a hoof pats you on the shoulder followed by the calm voice of your Captain
>"easy now, take a few deep breaths and think of something else."
"sir, they have those machines with them. more than I have ever seen or heard of!"
>"we already knew that from the sound..."
>Captain Soul Flare hangs his head for a moment before a look of determination forms
>you've seen that face many times before, whenever he decides its his job to give the hard orders.
>to be quite honest, you've always respected and admired him for being the one to take charge when it was most difficult
>this time however, it just worries you.
>his horn glows a dimly and his sword comes from its sheath confirming your fears of his next orders
>there is a calm silence, excluding the noise of the Hands marching on your city, as Soul Flare looks deeply into his own reflection in his blade
>everyone else who hadn't readied themselves for a fight now does so.
>"spread up and down the side streets, no more than two or three to a group. we will need to strike fast before they are ready."
>"sir, are you sure about this?"
>your eyes slowly move to the corner of the building again
>panic slowly builds inside you
>will you possibly see a pony you know?
>could it be a family member?
>would you kill them if you had to?
>and more importantly... are you going to die this time?
>>27183069
>"Blazing... Blue Blazing!"
>Captain Soul Flare finally gets your attention
"yes sir?"
>it takes a moment to notice that its just the Captain and you here now
>"I said you're with me, come on. I already have a place in mind."
>why cant you be as brave as him?
>pulling yourself to your hooves you follow closely behind the Captain doing your best to keep quiet and hidden from the horde of Black Hands just yards away
>just think of something else, thats what Soul Flare said.
>the sound of those machines gets louder and louder the further you and the Captain move
>they must be getting closer... or worse, the two of you might be getting closer to them.
>a small shop has been destroyed and the Captain enters through a large opening in the back
>quickly you follow suit and inside you see the Captain waiting for you by the door on a still standing wall
>he waves you over to his side and you take your place there.
>its comforting being this close to him
>maybe some of his bravery will inspire your own.
>"alright, now once we give the signal the others will strike, you ready Blue?"
>the signal?! YOURE THE FIRST ATTACK!?
>your legs feel weak and start to shake again
>Soul Flare puts his hoof on your again and your legs slowly begin to stop shaking
>"Blaze, it will be okay. I promise."
"Im scared Captain. I dont think ill make it this time."
>Soul Flare smiles warmly back at you and even gives you a small one legged hug
>"Im scared too Blaze, and so is everyone else, but we are Royal Guards. we have a duty to give everything we can to protect Equestria and her ponies."
>as quietly as you can you take out your spear and give a small nod of understanding
>"alright.. so are you ready now?"
>no, not quite yet..
"uhm Captain."
>"yeah?"
"I uh, if we both make it that is... would you like to maybe get a hayburger or something sometime?"
>already you feel the blood running through your cheeks
>did you really just ask out the Captain before a fight?!
>you're such an idiot!
>>27183082
>"Uh, wow, you know I really wasnt expecting that."
>suddenly those Hands dont look as scary...
>"well, Im not really into stallions Blaze. But.."
>the Captains eyes look into your own and he slowly smiles again
>"but if you were brave enough to ask me that now, I dont see why I can't be brave enough to try"
>did he just say yes?
"o-okay!"
>"alright Blaze, lets go."
>Soul Flare readies a spell, his horn glows brightly and one of the Machines come to a stop.
>no, it doesnt stop, it starts to lift from the ground.
>the Captain begins to strain from the weight of the machine before he tries to push it with all his might
>it falls to its side as it hits the ground, though only barely
>but its enough to take it out for now
>"Royalists in the buildings!"
>the sound of magic and 'gunfire' quickly breaks out in the streets
>"come on Blaze! for Equestria! and for the Princesses!"
>busting down the door you charge the line of Black Hands your spear ready in hoof
>the Hands quickly load one of their larger weapons with a belt of projectiles as you get closer
>before they can fire you have closed the distance
"For Equestria!"
>>27153378
I had a roast written, but you would've shrugged it off and been all "Plus one for me b0yz, i russled the "literally who" wrytfag :^]]]". But good job, you tr0ll3d a bunch of bronies on an imageboard. Congrats, feel good about yourself.
Cut your losses UF and fuck off, you had a good run. I helped HS do the curse, you owe us a few goats and a grieving mother her child's casket. Just write it into your will when god graces us with your slow and painful death.
Heres an ode. Fuckin enjoy
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cKW1BHYlj9c
>>27183429
>Implying that I'll leave
Wew, that's a good one! I'd actually consider it if Harshwhinny felt the same way.
>>27183069
>>27183082
>>27183089
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jFi7bWkyRpA
forgot this part. i guess it could go wherever. see you all again some other time!
>>27183660
>Implying she doesn't already feel the same way.
That's some potent denial you got there. Please just stop posting. Literally nobody likes you. Not me, not HS, and definately not Harshwhinney. Lurk and read but otherwise fuck off into the sunset.
>>27183069
>>27183082
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>>27183832
Awesome! Welcome back Royalist, it's good to see you again.
>>27183429
You too Zim!
>>27185112
>Implying that Harshwhinny didn't track me down after the coup, as my unprofessionalism excited her loins.
Kek. Whatever you say, man.
>>27183660
1v1 me faggot
Bump from 10
>>27183429
>>27183832
I see these guys in the header but I've not seen them post here before. Who are they?
Also I should say I'm a newer thread lurker
