>A long time ago in a galaxy far, far away...
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Previous Thread: >>25693379
If I may, I would just like to say that it has been a fantastic time with you guys. My Anonymous, Jedi saga has been an incredible experience, both writing it and reading your thoughts and feelings. It was the first story in this thread that started it all and it's grown considerably, both in scale and in fans, alongside the many other stories and works of art contributed by our many wonderful content creators.
As we enter the eve of a new era of Star Wars films, I find myself trembling with excitement. Good or bad, this new film marks the beginning of an entire new part of the fandom. I've been a massive Star Wars fan my entire life, from seeing the films in my basement, to playing Shadows of the Empire, to reading books and comics and now, in adulthood, to endlessly arguing and getting angry about childish space fantasies while writing fanfiction about it. I know it doesn't sound as grand when I put it like that, but it's been a lot of fun.
Anonymous, Dark Jedi has just been updated and the pastebin is up-to-date with the latest installment. I plan on writing one more before the film comes out and I can't wait to see it and share my thoughts about it.
Until then, please be considerate and keep the thread spoiler free.
Hard to believe it's finally here, folks.
May the Force be with you.
>>25792894
Never change.
>>25792894
Thanks for spoiling the new movie!
>>25792879
I feel the same way Sarge. I won't go into a long winded speech about how I've been here since the beginning, but I would like to say it has been a pleasure to be in this thread.
Although not directly mlp related this is by far one of the most respectful and consistent threads on 4chan.
I think we should all agree that we won't spoil anything at least until the next thread, maybe even longer. Depending on how long this one goes.
>>25792894
Also, delete this post plz.
>>25792879
>May the Force be with you.
y-you too
>>25792671
that was a great fight man
>>25792346
Cause reasons
>>25792894
God dammit
>>25792879
>please be considerate
>4chan
You are asking WAY too much here.
>>25793043
Truth be told, I was counting on >>25792894 being the first post. I was totally counting it, for real, honestly, no backsies, definitely not something I'm just saying for the sake of it.
>>25793011
I guess more seriously, I'd just like to say that I really think this place is pretty special. these threads have been a whole lot of fun for me and I'm glad I get to enjoy all of this with you guys.
I think we can all agree that ever since its conception, this "general" has been a cut above the rest.
Black guy becomes jedi the movie
Acting sucks way worse than episode 1
how is it I have been ignoring these threads for so long?
also is there a AT-AT that looks like a pony, or a pony AT-AT
Hey drawfriend you still doing lewds?
Cause i got an idea for you, how about drawing rainbow washing her swoop bike naked
>>25793868
I didn't know i needed this
I would just like to point out that it is five days away from the day that we celebrate this threads first birthday
>>25793794
I don't believe our drawfriend has done that yet but have here, everything else he's done
https://imgur.com/a/UjOcb
>>25792894
Fuck....
>>25793538
>Acting sucks way worse than episode 1
>>25792894
WHY DID I LOOK, WHY THE FUCK DID I LOOK?!
>>25785519
>You heard it crackle and hiss as the dust blew into it
>Soon after you heard it hum as the trooper swung it your way
>Rolling out of the way you reach into your belt and pulled out your own
>Holding it straight in front of you, at eye level, you activate it
>A bright pale blue beam shot out instantly casting a radiating glow around it
>The dust enhanced its glow to an almost blinding degree
>You could just make out the trooper hesitating on the other side
>He lifted his saber high over his head and prepared to arc it down powerfully
>Exactly like Gilda, when you sparred
>You were more than ready for when he brought his blade down
>He missed your saber by a mile and you took advantage to slip past his defenses and strike
>You hit him twice, first his wrist, knocking out the lightsaber, and then behind his knees bringing him to the floor
>Before you could strike a third time however force lightning erupted from his hands
>Jumping back to avoid the hit you still feel your hair stand on end
>Even when you landed aways from him
>Electricity sprang out from his hands in an exaggerated manner
>You didn't expect this trooper to be so powerful
>Thinking of a way to explain this you surprisingly remember your elementary education
>Lightning is formed by charged particles rubbing against each, static electricity was more occurrent during in dry conditions
>All this dust swirling around must be what's charging him
>The trooper squared up against you and held out his hands
>Still holding out your saber at him you ready yourself
>As soon as the lightning whips out of his hands you force it all into your saber
>When he stopped you took the initiative and returned the favor
>You held out your hand and shot out five ribbons of force lightning
>Covering himself the trooper managed to stay on his feet
>Even with the hot winds of the desert blowing your way you felt a cold creep over you
>He was here, you had to finish this now
>>25796241
>You let up on the lightning and run up to the trooper kicking him back
>Landing next to his lost saber the trooper springs right back up and attacks
>The trooper fought back but you dodge and duck his attacks, the force guiding you
>The whole time you were desperately searching for a chink in his armorbut it was made in USA
>Growing more and more desperate at the encroaching darkness you decide to fuck it all
>Feeling the frustration inside you helped to force him into the air
>Taking aim at the jewel embedded in his chest you stick your saber deep into his armor
>It wasn't pleasant, aside from the screaming you could also feel his emotions
>Fear, anxiety, and sadness
>As soon as he stopped you dropped him and ran towards the others
>>25796253
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>Scootaloo nearly suffocated under the wave, thankfully Gilda pulled her out in time to throw her aside
>A wicked smile spread across her face as she was finally allowed to break loose
>She hadn't felt this good since two weeks before when she was cutting through those useless troopers
>No
>She felt better than before
>This time she had someone worthy to play with
>The storm trooper followed her mantra, Might makes right
>All of his strikes were delivered by purpose and power
>He was trying to kill her and she wanted to kill him right back
>"Come on sweetheart! Don't hold back just cause you wanna bag me!"
>The trooper remained silent, his anger growing within him
>Though not the strongest in the ways of the force, he still felt his friend disappear
>Gilda had felt it too, giving her confidence a boost
>She could still hear the ship hovering overhead but didn't want to check to see where it was
>They locked sabers again and she pushed back as hard as she could
>"Hey maybe after this you could buy me some drinks. I could go for something cool after kicking your ass."
>In all her taunting Gilda failed to notice Scootaloo nervously draw her own saber
>"Uh, Jedi Gilda?"
>Lord Sombra approached her from the side weapon drawn and ready
>Scootaloo bravely stood between them but could do little but be knocked aside as soon as he stepped up to her
>The trooper laughed in her face and that was when Gilda knew she was about to bite it
>He pushed back harder to hold her in position as Sombra roared triumphantly and swung hard
>Scootaloo could only look on
>"Noooo!"
>>25796261
>In the few seconds it took the saber to reach to just behind her head you managed to close the distance
>Focusing all your energy into your hand you force push Sombra and send him flying fifty feet in the air
>Moving quickly you sweep the trooper's feet beneath him, sending him down on his knees, and drive your saber through a crook in his armored neck
>A quick death, like so many of the others you were accustomed to
>There wasn't so much of a reaction
>"What the hell, I almost had him!"
>You don't pay any attention to her as you pick up Scootaloo in your arms
>The ship came into view with an exasperated Flash Sentry waving wildly at you
>A final deafening groan from the trash urged you to hurry on board
>As soon as you have a solid footing on the cargo hold Flash radios Moondancer to step on it
>The pull of the ship made you feel slightly heavier as it nearly buckled your knees
>You set Scootaloo on the floor and let her rejoin your friends as you Gilda and Flash take a final look back
>The VCX freighter had seemingly beached itself in the junkyard
>It had lolled itself onto its side, its one good remaining engine sending out dust and bitter black smoke all over Top Kek
>The cloud of dust you were stuck in was still growing as it traveled away from the ship
>The last thing you saw before the ramp closed was the dust settling unnaturally around a peculiar area
I think this is a good place to end chapter 1, next time we'll get to meet moondancer
>>25792894
DELETE THIS
Who stabbed first?
>>25793081
>>25793184
Not gonna lie, I came here because I'm something of a Star Whore. So the forbidden concept of the crossover both sickened and intrigued me. But I gotta say, you two created a pair of stories so fantasmagorical that I simply can't live without them, any more. The last time I loved something this much, I was just learning of the Yuuzan Vhong.
>>25796473
Guess I need to step up my game then.
Maybe get to some exciting parts. Fuck, this story is boring...
>>25792894
REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
Hey guys :^)
>>25796738
what
>>25796746
It's a spoiler anon
>>25796738
Eat a dick.
you couldn't have waited 13 hours?
Less than I day till I get to see my chrome clad waifu on the big screen.
>>25796777
I've been spoilered pretty hard and actually haven't heard anything about her. Thanks for reminding me I have something to look forward to.
>>25796777
Same tbqh familia. My body is ready.
Bump with a question.
Are the books any good?
Han Solo and General Leia die
Alright so it seems I cant post in this thread anymore before I have seen the movie. I have never wanted to harm other people so much in my life.
>>25798415
Just do what I do and deny absolutely everythingeven though you know it's probably true.
>>25798431
Not good enough. The first chance I get I will see the movie.
>>25798275
Chewbacca dies too tho.
And Rey is a lesbian
>>25795060
holy shit... I expected there to be much more pony involved
>>25796453
its to blurry to tell
>>25796777
I want to see my somewhat Bastila Shan-lookalike waifu.
>After getting a report from the others, you move out and focus on finding a way back up.
>Heading down one maintenance tunnel, you find a ladder leading up to the surface, but the top is sealed.
>Hardly a matter of your concern, as you use your lightsaber to cut through.
>After pushing the metal open and crawling through the rapidly-cooling hole, you help Coco up and the two of you find yourselves in some kind of cargo area, likely near the docking bays.
>You see a large crate nearby and use the Force to pull it over and set it on top of the hole you carved.
>Afterwards, the two of you proceed to the nearest door and open it, finding yourselves on the outside of the city at some kind of port.
>Large ships and submarine vessels dock here, and for the first time since your arrival, you glimpse the endless ocean beyond the floating city.
>Even Coco, still pumped full of adrenaline from her battle, is taken aback by the sight of so much water.
>Your communicator beeps a few times and you take it out.
“Report.”
>”We’re on her trail!” Noteworthy says. “Aloe and Lotus found the Jedi and are leading them away on a wild bantha chase.”
“Good. Where is she?”
>”She’s heading for the exterior docks---I think she might have a boat or something!”
“We’re already there. Keep following her, we’ll cut her off!”
>You put away the communicator and nod at Coco as you both take off towards the main city entrance.
>Along the way, you are forced to halt as several selkath guards hold up their hands and take out blaster pistols, apparently alerted to your appearance by the others.
>They gurgle out a warning, you assume, as you cannot understand their language.
>You’ve no time for this.
>Your lightsaber ignites and they fire, but your reflexes are honed by training and act as an extension of the Force, blocking their shots in a swift flurry of orange light.
>>25800322
>Coco drops to one knee and reaches for her belt, taking out an explosive and tossing it at their feet.
>They all scramble for cover as it goes off, and you Force push three of them off the side of the dock into the water.
>As Coco walks by one who was badly injured, she stabs him in the chest with her sword.
>One of them crawling on the ground lifts up his pistol as you walk by and fires, but you bend your arm backwards at the elbow to hold your lightsaber behind you and deflect it back at him, silencing his gurgling.
>Up ahead, the main entrance to the city can be seen and the two of you stride towards it, weapons still drawn, as people scramble to run away.
>But your eyes narrow and hone in on one person moving against the crowd, an exceptionally tall alien with white skin and long, thin limbs.
>She is heading for a docked ship, and not far behind her are Noteworthy and Braeburn.
>When she reaches her vessel, she quickly turns it on and begins pulling away from the dock.
>You break out into a full sprint, as does Coco, and the two of you leap off the edge and soar towards the ship; you with the Force and she with her jetpack.
>The two of you land on the back of the ship and your target turns around, her large black eyes wide with surprise.
“You’re coming with us,” you tell her, holding up your lightsaber.
>She slowly raises two hands as the ship comes to a stop.
You take out your communicator. “Braeburn, head back to the ship. Bring it around for an extraction.”
>He acknowledges as you put your weapon down.
>>25800337
“You’re hard to track down for a quermian,” you tell her.
>”I am no quermian,” she replies distastefully, shaking her head as though gravely offended. “I am kaminoan. Your ignorance disgusts me.”
“What you are doesn’t really matter,” you say, walking towards her. “You know something we want to know. You can make it easy on yourself and tell us everything you know about the Force Hunters.”
>”I will tell you nothing.”
“I can be persuasive, or I could torture it out of you,” you reply, reaching out to grip her neck with the Force. “You’ve got plenty of neck for the latter.”
>You let go after a moment and allow her to fall to her knees.
>As you bask in the feeling of power it grants you, you sense a growing power nearby.
>You turn around and look back towards the dock and see Applejack on its edge.
>Well, no matter, at least she can’t reach you.
>Or so you thought.
>You find yourself amazed at the alarming power growing within her, fueled by her determination to not let you win and escape with the kaminoan.
>She leaps from the dock with a running start, soaring through the air further than you’ve ever leapt in your life.
>The water beneath her forms a wake as she propels herself over its surface, and she ignites her blade as she nears the boat.
>You’re so caught off-guard by her sudden display of control that you just barely manage to bring yours up to block her flying tackle as she makes it to the boat.
>The two of you hit the deck hard and she rolls away, getting back up to her feet.
>Coco helps you up and you look into AJ’s eyes, seeing the fierce look within them.
>She is now positioned between you and the kaminoan.
>>25800351
>”You Sith scum aren’t leaving this planet so long as I draw breath,” she declares, and you know that it is a promise she intends to keep.
>Her words unexpectedly sting you, giving you pause.
>Before it felt like a game, but now you have genuine concern giving you doubt.
>Coco, however, does not. “Then you’ll just have to drown,” she says, stepping forth to attack her.
>The two of them meet with explosive opening blows, smashing their weapons together.
>AJ’s strength and command of Djem So counters the weight of Coco’s songsteel sword, and despite the mandalorian’s training, the other girl is taller and stronger than she is.
>The lack of weight from the lightsaber gives her an advantage of speed as well, much like whenever you fought her in the Sith academy.
>Their blades lock against each other, with AJ’s caught in Coco’s crossguard.
>They begin to push and you see your opening to dart in and strike at your opponent, but you hesitate.
>Because of this, AJ brings up a knee into Coco’s stomach and uses her upper body to push her aside.
>Now she sets her sights on her real foe: you.
>She charges in with a powerful swing at shoulder height, and with both hands on your lightsaber, you block it.
>She swings again and again in wide, sweeping arcs, caring more about power than grace.
>Against a lesser foe, this tactic would wear them down and weaken their defense, but you stand strong and still as you block her strikes, relying on your mechanical arm and your command of the Force to counter her energy.
>You continue to play defensively until Coco can get back up and attack her from behind.
>AJ counters with a rear drop parry before turning to swing at you again, but again you block.
>>25800362
>”Fight back!” she shouts at you as Coco continues to attack her from behind.
“Our fight is over,” you reply, softer than usual.
>Coco shouts and swings with a heavy overhead chop, again locking blades with Applejack.
>This leaves her open to attack from you.
>”Finish her! Take her down!” Coco encourages you as she presses against her.
>You lift up your weapon as if to deal a killing blow, holding it there for a moment.
>It seems as though you are taking your time to revel in the kill, when in actuality you are stalling.
>AJ takes advantage of this, as you hoped she would, and backs straight into Coco to knock her over.
>Before the Padawan can advance back upon you, you reach out with your real hand and use the Force to repel her backwards.
>She slides back and trips over Coco, causing her to lose balance and barrel backwards to the edge of the boat.
>Once there, you apply a bit more pressure and push her off into the water.
>With that problem solved, you look up and see Braeburn’s ship soaring low over the city, curling around in the sky to hover near the boat.
>The exit ramp lowers and Braeburn is there, holding out his hand.
>Coco gets up and prepares to walk towards the water to look for AJ to finish her off, but you stop her.
>”We can finish her!” she says.
“That’s not our mission! Get the target to the ship!”
>”You do that! I’m going to kill that Jedi!”
You grab her shoulder. “No, you aren’t! Now do what I say!”
>She looks up at you before shoving the pommel of her sword into your face.
>At first you worry that it may dislodge your mask, but it stays securely fastened.
>As she stalks towards the water, you grab her with the Force and all but fling her towards the exit ramp of the ship, along with the kaminoan.
>>25800368
>Braeburn grabs them both and manages to pull them onboard, despite protests from Coco.
>As you prepare to leap up to the ramp yourself, you hear Applejack pulling herself back onto the boat.
>Her lightsaber has shorted out due to the water, but you have no intention of killing her.
>You jump up to the ramp and look at Braeburn, who is too busy to help you in because he is distracted by something.
>A horrified look on his face can be seen as he suddenly says, “…Cousin AJ?”
>You look down at Applejack and see her looking straight back at him with an equally confused expression.
>You push him back inside and close the exit ramp yourself, but he’s still in a stunned state.
You make him face you fully and say, “Get to the cockpit and fly us off this planet. Now!”
>He numbly nods and scrambles for the controls.
>You turn around and Coco all but tears off her helmet and looks ready to hit you with it.
>”We had her! Why did you hesitate?!”
“It wasn’t our mission!” you reply. “We have our target now, that was our priority!”
>Nearby, Noteworthy and the twi’leks escort the kaminoan, who has to duck in the low freighter, to an area where she can be guarded.
>Maud watches as Coco shouts back, “You could have killed her, but you didn’t!”
>”Perhaps he’s too weak,” Maud suggests.
“I was savoring the moment,” you insist. “Either way, we foiled the Jedi.”
>”We ran from them,” Coco says as she spits on the floor.
>>25800380
“Perhaps your ideal fight is one where you are outnumbered and outmatched,” you say to her. “Their Jedi Master was coming, and not even you can take one of those on.”
>”Oh, and you can?” she says. “I’d like to see that.”
>”So would I,” Maud adds.
“Shut up,” you throw a sidelong glance at the grey-skinned girl. “You’re lucky I even let you come along on this mission.”
>”As if you had a choice,” Maud replies. “You’re hardly in any position to deny an order from Lord Scorpan. It will be interesting to see what he thinks when he learns that you could have killed a Jedi but didn’t.”
“It wasn’t our mission,” you repeat yourself. “He sent us to capture her and we have captured her. The Jedi interfered but they weren’t able to stop us.”
>”Yes, I’m sure he’ll be very proud of you,” Maud drones out, “proud of the fact that you were too weak to deal a killing blow.”
“Perhaps you’d like to see how strong I am again,” you say to her, but Coco stands between you two.
>It seems she has calmed herself down and stopped letting the adrenaline dictate her actions.
>She faces Maud. “Nito did what he could. You wouldn’t have even gotten as far against those Jedi as he did.”
>Maud’s eyes narrow a bit, suddenly on the receiving end. “So you’re both weak,” she says. “How fitting.”
>She turns to walk away and you look down at her.
“I thought you were angry.”
>”I am.”
>She turns and punches you in the side.
>”But I’ll get over it. There will be more chances at the Jedi, anyway. And besides… I think I would have tried to savor the moment too.”
>>25800390
>She looks at her sword. “Every night I dream about the moment I skewer him with this and avenge my father. It’s a shame he wasn’t here today… but someday he will be.”
>As she puts the weapon back in its sheath, she turns back towards you. “Just tell me this, Nito: are you as dedicated to killing them as I am?”
“No,” you honestly reply. At first she seems dismayed, but then you add, “I can’t be, because they didn’t kill my family.”
You place your hand on her shoulder and continue, “You carry great anger and passion within you. One day I may even be able to match it, but today, I focused on the mission.”
>”I understand,” she says after a moment. “And I admit that our odds were not in favor. Next time we fight the Jedi, I want it to be on a battlefield of our choosing. You and I against them.”
“I wouldn’t have it any other way.”
>Suddenly, the ship rocks a bit as something impacts its shields.
>You press the nearby intercom and ask Braeburn what happened.
>”The Jedi are on our tail in starfighters! I’m about to make the jump to hyperspace!”
>It must be Master Spitfire, Rainbow Dash and Soarin.
“We can’t have them following us. Can you lose them?”
>”I’ll try,” he says, though he sounds uncertain.
>He must be conflicted over learning that his cousin is in the Jedi Order.
>You’ll have to speak with him about this later before you reveal it to Lord Scorpan, should you so choose to.
“I don’t want them following us. Take us to an uninhabited system to lead them astray and then take us back to the academy.”
>>25800397
>He acknowledges as he enters the new coordinates and prepares to make the jump.
>The ship shakes again as another attack from the Jedi weakens its shields.
>Moments later, your ship rockets away into hyperspace, leaving them behind.
>You know that it will take some time for their non-hyperdrive starfighters to rendezvous with their primary ship and follow you, so you should be in the clear.
>Coco looks up at you and asks, “We’ll have some time before we get to Korriban. What now?”
“We should interrogate the kaminoan. Find out what she knows for our report to Lord Scorpan.”
>Her eyes drift to the side; she’s clearly got something else in mind.
“What is it?” you ask.
>She tilts her head towards the empty room nearby.
>”The prisoner isn’t going anywhere. We can take our time with her.”
“Then what do you suggest we do in the meantime?”
>She raises her eyebrows and gently grabs your collar, pulling you towards the room.
>You feel yourself growing a bit nervous as she closes the door behind you both and locks it.
>Immediately she drops her helmet and presses herself against you in a hug.
>”I’ve never felt the things I did today,” she says. “Training is one thing, fighting goons is another, but battling the Jedi…”
>She looks up and kisses your neck as your arms encircle her shoulders.
>”I’ve never been so thrilled,” she admits with a sheepish smile. “So exhilarated…”
“I can feel it,” you say, sensing her emotions.
>She reaches up to your mask and gently touches it.
>”Will you truly die?” she asks, referring to its removal.
“Yes,” you reply without any hesitation.
>>25800407
>She looks concerned but nods, understanding. “Then we keep it on.”
>You swallow a nervous lump in your throat as she resumes kissing your neck.
>She’s warm and eager; a font of positive, excited energy flows from her.
>Slowly, you pull her towards a nearby couch and you both sit.
>She reaches up to your chest and pushes you down onto your back, allowing her to lay atop you as she gently nips at your skin.
>Your hands travel up her back as all doubt and fear wash away from you.
>”Let me get this… armor off,” she says with a heavy breath, sitting up to begin unclasping her jetpack.
>Her small fingers unclasp the straps and she takes it off, setting it aside with a soft thud as it hits the floor.
>Next she removes her chestplate, sliding it up and over her head.
>Her gauntlets come next, leaving her upper body covered only in a dark bodyglove.
>She stares down at you as her cheeks flush red before leaning down to stare into your visor.
>”Lay back,” she encourages with a small smile.
>You relax as she again sits up and rests her palms on your chest.
>The bodyglove is tight against her body; you can see every curve of her toned, athletic form.
>She takes a deep breath, pumping her chest out as she brings her fingers up to the zipper at her collar.
>Slowly, tantalizingly, she pulls it downwards, exposing more creamy skin inch by inch.
>Your breath nearly catches in your throat as she reaches just above her breasts and stops.
>Her cheeks redden even more as she suddenly asks, “This is… alright, yes?”
“Of course,” you reply. “Are you uncomfortable?”
>”No, not around you, it’s just… I’ve never…”
>Her voice trails off and she sounds almost ashamed.
>>25800416
>You reach up and take hold of her hand, giving it an encouraging squeeze.
“I haven’t either.”
>This brings a small smile back to her face and she lets out a sigh of relief and even excitement at the idea of being with you first.
>You sense that she trusts you and feels more connected to you than anyone else in her life.
>Before she resumes undressing, she gets a sudden idea and reaches for her helmet.
>She puts it back on and secures it in place.
>”Why should you be the only one?” she asks with a playful tone.
>You smile beneath your mask and hold up a hand, grabbing the zipper with the Force and slowly pulling it further down.
>She takes your hand and stops you.
>”Ah ah ah,” she chastises you. “I didn’t say you got to see anything more. You’re gonna have to convince me.”
“That’s going to be difficult with your mask on.”
>”Then try harder,” she replies, reaching to your collar and undoing the first clasp on your shirt.
>As you pull her into another hug, feeling her warm and soft body against your own, your worries melt away.
>Your future plans and past pains don’t matter right now.
>Now, it’s just you and her, together.
>You set aside any worries or doubts about what others would think or judge you.
>For all that you’ve been through, you deserve some comfort, and so does she.
>The guilt that comes with being Anon is similarly set aside, because you know that if she knew who you truly were, you doubt she would be as comforting.
>There are also your feelings for Sunset and for others like Fluttershy…
>But these are the concerns of Anon, not Nito, and Nito is the one she wants to be with.
>For her, you’ll be just that.
>Just you and her, together, for as much time in this galaxy you have to share.
>And in this moment… you couldn’t ask for anything more.
>>25800425
That's all for now.
More coming soon.
Off to see the new film in a few hours, I'll update next this weekendwith an extra, optional pastebin containing the lewd for those who want to see it, but not mandatory for those who do not.
>...
>...
>...>Meanwhile...
>>25800473
>Meanwhile...POV from the Jedi side of the conflick?
>>25800724
Only if he ties it in with the story/search of Anon.
Lump
Well I just saw the movie and now I'm hyped for SW again so I decided to visit this thread.
What green do I even start with?
>>25801707
So it was good?
>>25801722
It's shit, anon. Star Wars only lives in the content its fans create.
>>25801738
J.J. Abrams is a fan...
>>25801707
Sergeant Nonymous's green is the king of the thread, being the oldest and longest. The pastebin at the top of the thread >>25792879 has lists of all the stories, including basic descriptions. Some of the authors are MIA, but many are currently works in production.
>>25801707
Sergeant Nonymous was the first; he will not be the last, but when his story ends, I predict the thread will die.I have foreseen it.
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>>25801707
My personal favorite isSepAnon.To bad he died.
I'll have an update for Inquisitor Anon ready later tonight for losers like me who can't go to the movie premiere
>>25800473>... at the Legion of Doom
Nice work m8, loved seeing Applejack actually use the Force. Have fun tonight!
Better than the prequels/10
Off to see Captain Fapmuh
Alright guys. I'm off to see the movie.
I can't believe the day is finally here. I'm seriously shaking with excitement right now.
Saw the movie in IMAX at the first showing.
Bretty gud
>>25801722
It's alright, I liked it well enough.
Qui Gon Jinn dies
>>25801722
It's (spoilers for opinion, not plot spoilers)okay. 8/10.they played it too safe in most instances imo
>>25804410
Spoilers for semi-spoilers
I hated all the horribly done and poorly timed comedy they added in
>>25804468
that andI can't believe they took out all fighters except the X-Wing and vanilla TIEthat's fucking stupid and it pissed me off
More Trenches/10
I haven't felt this way since I first watched the prequelswithout realizing how shit they were.I love the worldbuilding they're doing with this - and I'm so glad that we've only seen new worlds so far - for once it feels like the universe actually is a little bigger in a way that George couldn't seem to pull off in the Prequels.
7/10 Was pretty predictable but I enjoyed the new characters.
>>25804537Agreed. The Resistance needs to diversify its starfighter department. Some B-wings might've been useful.
>>25804619Or maybe some Y-Wings, the ship specifically designed for bombing and was so good it lasted through the clone wars to the end of the galactic civil war? Abrams pls
>>25804764
Be considerate for those who haven't seen the movie, please.
Movie Spoilers:I thought it was slightly strange how quickly Rey seemed to be taking to using the Force, but she's shown as being quick to learn and able to handle herself in a fight, so I guess it's not totally unbelievable that she'd be able to pick up a saber and go with it.
Although I was really hoping there'd be a moment where she'd try to use the Force and totally fuck it up.
It'd be neat if Rey ends up relying on the Force more than a lightsaber...
>>25800473
Well done Sarge. Thank you. I'm sure my boner can last till the next update, but I'll try to keep it at the ready.
>>25801707
Whatever one you feel like. The general pastebin doesn't really tell you a lot about the stories themselves, but currently active writers in this thread include: myself, Sarge, Konseiga, Solaire, Killer /b/, Churro, and Dapper4. Who is currently posting as Anonymous.
>>25802525
You may fire when ready.
>>25801722
Well, let me tell you about that in detail. Without telling you any spoilers.
Story: 8/10- Left some gaps that I would have liked for them to fill in, but I can live with it.
Setting: 8/10- Again, details that I wish they expanded upon. However, what they did give us was great.
Acting: 9.5/10- Nothing seemed forced. Everything flowed smoothly from one scene to the next.
Visual Effects: 10/10- In 2015 on a multi-million dollar project. I didn't expect anything less.
Overall: 9/10 Would watch again and again.
As for some more personal thoughts I thoroughly enjoyed this movie. The pacing was great. There was never a dull moment. Yes, some moments may have been a bit cheesy and predictable, but I never felt that it made light of the story when it did. Nostalgia is a powerful thing, and they made sure to keep it in respectable doses. My biggest complaint is that there are now thousands of minuscule details that I'm going to be forced to memorize in order feel comfortable again with my Star Wars knowledge. Because this movie throws a lot of new stuff at you.
>>25804537
Was kind of disappointed in that aspect too. We'll get them next time.
Well, that's that. Watching this movie has re-sparked my enthusiasm for writing my story, so I'm going to get back to that. Tomorrow. Good night.
>>25804833
Sorry bout that, forgot to spoil
>tfw likely won't see movie until next weekend now
>>25804840
Commencing firing sequence
>>25770628
>A few days pass by slowly and silently in the confines of your TIE before you finally emerge out of Hyperspace over the familiar world of Prakith
>Immediately, you are caught off guard by the immense number of star destroyers hovering over the planet, all but confirming that the High Inquisitors have indeed gathered here
>This also confirms what you had sensed earlier about Midnight being at the Citadel
“I knew it!”
>Your joyful outburst causes your captive to stir, her eyes fluttering open as she groans in pain
>”w-Where am I?”
>Redheart still seems to be in shock after your duel, and the heavy dose of sedatives you gave her appear to be wearing off fast
“Your new home.”
>Flying down through its atmosphere, your TIE swoops over the rocky mountain ranges that dominate the planet
>The speed that the prototype TIE Advanced affords you allows you to clear past these mountains quickly until you spot the black spires of the Citadel Inquisitorius lying ahead atop the snow crested peaks
>”What is this? i-I sense so much pain and—“
“You will get used to that as easily as you will get used to the high altitude. All in good time.”
>Setting down upon a small windswept landing pad, you look out toward the Citadel and see a group of Acolytes in dark red cloaks coming to greet you
“Well, home sweet home I suppose. Here let’s get you—“
>”Don’t touch me!”
>Redheart slaps away your hand as you reach for her, her body shuddering in pain
>She’s still as infuriated with you as she was before, but it’s also clear that she is afraid of what is to come
>You don’t blame her one bit
“Suit yourself Master.”
>Clambering out of your TIE, you hop down upon the landing pad and lazily hail the acolytes
>>25804974
>An Acolyte of higher rank, distinguished by the strands of gold thread that line his cloak, joins you as you walk past the throng of hooded men
>”Welcome home Inquisitor Anonymous, I sense that your hunt was a fruitful one.”
“The Jedi is inside. She suffers from a very badly injured knee, amongst other things. Have her taken to the medical bay and treated thoroughly before detaining her in the cell blocks. I want to begin my interrogation of her tomorrow morning.”
>”As you wish…”
>At that, the Acolyte bows his head and returns to his brethren as they surround your TIE
>You speculate that at least one of them will meet a grisly end in their attempts to detain Redheart
>Entering the dark stone halls of the Citadel, it became immediately apparent how empty the place felt
>While you seldom remember running into many of your peers amongst these shadowy corridors, it still seems odd that this place feels so devoid of life
>No doubt a sign that your order was still struggling to recover from it’s losses
>Quickly passing through these empty passages, you walk into the dormitories and enter your private chamber
>The lodgings are far larger and noticeably better furnished than the cell you lived in during your time as an Apprentice Inquisitor, though you still aren’t overly fond of it
>It is too quiet here for your tastes, and it still feels barren despite being well furnished
>The place reminds you of a tomb
>Taking a seat on a couch near the edge of the room, you stare out through your steel shutters at the mountains beyond as you remove your cloak and armor
>Gently setting down Master Redheart’s saber staff, your gaze drifts off to a glass case lying against your wall
>Behind it lies a battered suit of obsidian armor and an ornate curbed lightsaber, all that remains of Luna
>You briefly consider framing Redheart’s weapon as well, but you put that thought aside for now
>>25804468Y-Wing masterrace reporting in
>>25804665The Y-Wing was incidentally a heavy fighter wasn't it? IIRC it could almost keep up with a TIE/I if it pushed itself. On the other hand that came from some chart from /o/.
>>25804931
That must suck, and makes my predicament of seeing it on Saturday less of a big deal. I wish you luck in avoiding spoilers, I'm one day in and I might have one thing spoiled but I really don't want to confirm it
>>25804992
>For the first time in recent memory, you have no urgent task that requires your attention
>It is part of the reason why you do not enjoy spending time here on Prakith
>With no Jedi to hunt, no meaningful training to be had, and no friend to pass the time with, you are left with very little to do
>In an attempt to stave off your restlessness, you decide that you can at least take advantage of your time here to clean yourself up a bit
>Stepping into your refresher, you allow the warm water to spray against your bare body
>The water stings the wound that Redheart had given you a few days before, but overall it does much to soothe your battered body
>Your usual attire does well to conceal your appearance, but now you can see the full extent of your years of service to the Empire
>Scars of all shapes and sizes, a few of which look quite painful, are scattered all across your body
>Many of them are left over from saber wounds given to you through your battles with the Jedi, although the most clearly visible scars are the lightning patterned ones given to you during your imprisonment in the Imperial Palace
>No doubt the Emperor thought such scars would serve as a constant reminder of your disloyalty to him, an attempt to instill humility
>In truth, they had quite the opposite effect
>These scars, all of them, are like badges of honor to you
>A sign of how far you have come since you first began to walk down the path of the Dark Side, and a portent of what may still come
>Exiting the refresher, you take a few moments to dry yourself before shaving your face and dressing your latest wound
>When you are nearly finished, you hear her call to you
>You almost think that she must be here herself, lurking amongst your chamber hoping to surprise you, but then you realize that she is actively trying to tell you something
>Or more accurately, show you something
>>25804931
My condolences, churroanon. I'm trying not to spoil stuff
>>25805008
I wasn't aware /o/ got into star wars fighters.In old canon, TIEs were developed to be a counter to Y-Wings with maneuverability because y-wings were too good otherwise. They were the main ship before Incom defected and took the X-Wing schematics with them
>>25805010
Yeah, I've already had a little spoiled already. I'm going to try to not let it bother me though
>>25805040
I appreciate it man
>>25805039
>Raising up a hand, you close the shutters and block out all light from outside as you take a seat in an alcove at the edge of your chamber
>Although the Citadel exudes the raw power of the Dark Side, and many of the people here give off a strong aura through the Force, it only takes several seconds for you to find her
“Let’s see what you have in store for me…”
>Although your eyes are closed, you begin to see
>You sit on a large chair, practically a throne, made of black wood in front of a massive circular table
>All around this table sit over a dozen men and women, the Dark Side radiating from each of them like fiery beacons
>You’ve never met, nor even seen, most of these people before although from what Midnight has told you several of these individuals stand out as High Inquisitors, supposedly the most powerful members of your order
>One figure does stand out to you
>Sitting on the largest of the chairs sits the Grand Inquisitor, who leans onto the table with his hands folded together in front of his face
>He coldly scans his peers before adopting a reserved smile and speaking up
>”I have just received word that Master Redheart has become our prisoner. Soon we will be able to pry open the secrets of her research and develop the technology we need to truly begin Operation Harvester in earnest.”
>Several of the High Inquisitors began to mutter amongst themselves until one of them abruptly asked
>”Which of our number was responsible for capturing this Jedi Master alive?”
>To which another one answered
>”It wasn’t one of us, but a younger Inquisitor by the name of Anonymous.”
>A slender human male sitting next to the Grand Inquisitor, distinguished by an intimidating cybernetic eye and arm on the right side of his body, smiled amicably as he spoke toward you
>”It would appear you were right to suggest Anonymous for this hunt Midnight. I did not expect him to get the job done so soon.”
>>25805070
>You heard Midnight chuckle in response as she answered him in a matter of fact tone
>”When I was searching for a candidate for the job, Anonymous stood out. I've seen him perform well in the past, and I am aware that he was somewhat familiar with Redheart as a child. I knew he would not fail.”
>Although you cared little for what most of your superiors thought, it still filled you with a small sense of pride to hear your deeds spoken of like this
>It also made you quite pleased to see the scowl that fell over the Grand Inquisitor’s face when you were brought up so highly
>That same man with the cybernetic implants, who you now recognized as High Inquisitor Tremayne, went on
>”If this Anonymous continues to perform like this, we may consider elevating him to our circle in a few years.”
>”Absolutely not.”
>The circle of High Inquisitors looked to the Grand Inquisitor as he coldly glowered at them all
>”Anonymous may be skilled with the Force, but he has also proven to be disloyal. I can sense the scorn he has for our masters, to make him a High Inquisitor would be to invite disaster. For the foreseeable future, he should remain at his current rank, and he should be monitored closely.”
>If you could only speak now, you would have gladly laughed at his face
>You could sense his fear
>”I agree.”
>Midnight’s voice, dripping with a coolness you were not used to hearing from her, startled you as she spoke out
>”Anonymous is quite exceptional, but rather difficult to control. It is well enough that he continue to serve us, rather than become our equal.”
>You begin to chuckle to yourself as you sit in meditation
>While becoming a High Inquisitor might have afforded you a great deal of prestige, it was very important that no one ever learn of the relationship you shared with Midnight
>This was why the two of you would praise and belittle one another in equal measure when in public
>Keeping up appearances was tiring, but necessary
>>25805040
/o/ has SW threads every now and then. They're much like the /k/ ones but about swapping engines and blaming the rebs for there being no Y-wings with panels still attached left.
>>25805080
>Suddenly, a coarse laugh echoed throughout the chamber and the High Inquisitors turned to stare at one of their band
>You looked upon a human male with a shaved head who wore a black suit of armor with red pauldrons as well as a thin black sash around his eyes
>”You rather enjoy having this Anonymous serve under you, don’t you?”
>Midnight chuckled at him
>”He has proven useful to me many times Jerec. Not particularly trustworthy, but I do take a small bit of pleasure in seeing him perform well… “
>Although you could not see it through her own eyes, you could clearly sense her smirk
>”… under my command, where he belongs.”
>It was somewhat difficult to maintain your mental link with Midnight as you broke out into laughter
“Where I belong? Is that all I am to you? A useful pawn? That’s not what you say to me when we are alone…”
>The High Inquisitors continued to speak amongst themselves, though you could tell that Midnight’s attention was shifting away from them as you spoke to her
“You love to put up a show and order me around, but I can sense your true feelings. You love it just as much when I command you, don’t you?”
>Your smile grew larger as you chuckled at her
>"Do you remember the first time I beat you in battle? How thrilling it was, to finally be defeated?”
>Midnight’s breathing seemed to quicken the further you went on
“Look at these people. There isn’t a single one of them you wouldn’t kill in a heartbeat if you could get away with it. Maybe you’d even find a way to get away with it, if I asked you to do it. If I ORDERED you.”
>She looked away from her peers at her clenched fists and whispered
>”Not. Now.”
“Not now? What’s wrong? You seem to be getting excited? Oh, I know what it is. You’re looking forward to our next duel, the fight that will decide who will be the Master and who will be the Apprentice. Do you still think you can beat me?”
>”Mistress.”
“What?”
>>25805154
>Her voice began to echo into your head as you opened your eyes
>”You will learn to call me Mistress, and you will learn your place… my apprentice.”
>For a split second, a horrendous scream tore through your mind and shocked you out of your meditative stance
>Breathing a sigh of exhaustion, you glanced around your empty room and slowly chuckled back
“We will see.”
+++
>The next morning you don a fresh suit of armor and march straight down to the detention cells to see Redheart
>You admittedly do not possess too much experience at interrogating Jedi, as you have more often than not simply killed them rather than bother with capturing them
>This time was different though, and you were determined to extract as much information from her about her research as possible
>More importantly, you were determined to ease her further down the path to the Dark Side
>After what you had put her through on Outland II, it was clear that she had already taken the first fateful steps down that path
>Then again, you did have to wonder how likely she would be to attempt to kill you if she actually did join the Inquisitorius
>As you considered all of this, a distinct scream echoed down the hallways to you
“What the Hell?”
>Jogging down to the cell where she was to be kept, you quickly unlocked the door to a stunning sight
>Redheart lied strapped to a table at the back of a dark cell, convulsing in pain as hooded figure loomed in front of her with a gripped fist raised high
“What are you doing?!”
>”What does it look like I’m doing?”
>After curtly replying to you, the figure released her grip and twisted about to glare at you
“Fluttershy?”
>>25805120
As a Y-Wing enthusiast, I love you in a completely platonic way
You've got pics of my shipfu I haven't dug up before
>>25805168
>Staring in shock for a moment, your gaze hardened as you looked back and saw Redheart hanging from her chains and breathing in ragged huffs
“Why are you interrogating MY prisoner?”
>She scoffed at you before walking up and shoving her face into yours
>”She’s my prisoner now. Our master chose me to take care of her.”
>You balked at her as she folded her arms over her chest and continued to glower at you
“I was responsible for bringing her in, why am I not in charge questioning her? This is absurd.”
>”Tell someone who cares.”
>The two of you glared intensely at one another
>It was clear that, despite not seeing one another in a long time, that Fluttershy’s animosity for you was as strong as ever
“Fine. If the Grand Inquisitor is behind this then he’s going to have to deal with me now.”
>”Good, now if you’ll excuse me.”
>The two of you turned your back on each other and began to split apart
“Fluttershy.”
>The two of you did not look back at each other as you stood on either side of the interrogation room
“Do not kill her.”
>You heard her scoff as you walked up out of the cell and back into the hallway
>”I’m a professional.”
>The cell door slammed shut, and as you marched down the hallway you heard Redheart’s screams begin to echo down to you once again
“What’s your game this time?”
>Did the Grand Inquisitor simply not believe you were up to the task of interrogating your own prisoner?
>Perhaps he was just being extra protective since his pet project was involved?
>Then again, by not telling you any of this in advance maybe his intention was to spite you, which was something you wouldn’t have put past him
>In any case, you weren’t about to take this supposed slight from him lying down
>>25805181
>Reaching out through the Force, you were able to track him down over by the training fields
>Taking a side passage to the fields, you arrived at the top of the battlements overlooking the area
>Just over a dozen people, mostly a handful of Inquisitors and Apprentice Inquisitors by the looks of it, were crowding around the center of the field
>As you marched along the top of the walls, you eventually found the Grand Inquisitor sitting down on a large chair similar to the one you saw through Midnight’s eyes
>He made no indication that he noticed your presence as you came up behind him, his attention seemingly focused on what was developing below
>”I get the impression you are upset with me.”
>You sneered at him as he continued to stare below
“Why was I not informed that I wouldn’t be in charge of interrogating Master Redheart?”
>The Inquisitor briefly locked eyes with you and smiled before glancing away to the field
>”I suppose I forgot.”
>You stared indignantly at him, only the sound of the brisk wind blowing past you breaking the silent air
>Then, just as you felt your control over your anger begin to slowly slip away, you smiled as well
“It’s been just over two years now since that day we dueled before the Sith. I’m sure you remember?”
>The Inquisitor grimaced as he stared away from you
“Ever since then, I feel as if I have only been growing stronger in the ways of the Force. I wonder… have you improved as much as I have since then? Perhaps you can finally beat me?”
>”Hmph, I have better things to do than indulge in a petty rivalry with you. Speaking of which…”
>The Inquisitor raised his hand and pointed down at a pair of familiar faces who looked as if they were about to square off
>>25805189
>”Anonymous, you recognize those individuals do you not?”
>Stepping away from the Inquisitor, you looked down into the center of the crowds
>You saw an athletically built blue skinned Feeorin with multicolored bands in her head tendrils, staring down a muscular human woman with long blonde hair whose eyes were tinged a reddish yellow by the power of the Dark Side
>Sticking out from the crowd behind this Feeorin stood a young orange Twi’lek girl who wore purple bands in her lekku in a similar style to the Feeorin
>The blonde haired woman was flanked by a very tall muscular man wearing a cracked Mandalorian mask, and standing just behind the two of them was a slightly younger girl with long red hair
“That is… Rainbow Dash. I don’t recognize the Twi’lek girl standing behind her, but across from them is Applejack, Big Macintosh and Applebloom.”
>”That is correct.”
>It was very strange to look upon these people again
>Although you were never very much on speaking terms with any of them with the exception of Applebloom, there was a time when you were at least used to seeing their faces
>They look much the same as how you remember them, with the huge exceptions of Applebloom and Rainbow Dash
>Applebloom looked quite a bit taller than last you remember, perhaps growing 3 or 4 inches in height, with her red hair having grown out a bit as well
>She still had a somewhat demure look about her, at least compared to her siblings, but she didn’t exactly look like the scared little girl you remember either
>Rainbow Dash on the other hand was pretty much her old self, sans her arms
>Soon after becoming an Inquisitor, you had heard that Rainbow Dash was one of the handful of Apprentice Inquisitors who personally fought against the lone Jedi who attacked the Citadel
>She paid for it with both of her arms, having lost both limbs entirely
>In their place, now lied a pair of powerful robotic replacements, graciously built to her specifications
>>25805169
These are just a few off google I got just now.She is best shipfu.
>>25805169
You can have this m8
>>25805198
“What is going on down there?”
>”Perhaps you can tell me. Apparently those two women can’t stand each other and are about to settle their differences the only way they know how.”
>Folding your arms over your chest, you joined the Inquisitor in scowling down at them
“Some things never really change around here…”
>”Care to explain?”
>Glaring back at the Inquisitor, you pointed a finger down at them
“Ever since those two met they’ve been obsessed with trying to prove their superiority over the other. I can hardly believe they’re still fighting like this after all these years."
>The Inquisitor placed a hand over his chin as he looked down at them
>”Such behavior is more becoming of initiates, but they are Inquisitors now. I won’t abide such infighting in my ranks.”
>There was a resolute look in the Inquisitor’s eyes that made you feel somewhat uneasy
>Suddenly, an Acolyte walked up to the Grand Inquisitor and leaned down to hear him whisper something into his ear
>”It will be done my lord.”
>The Acolyte quickly took off down the battlements
“What are you plotting?”
>The Inquisitor brandished a confident smile as he stood out of his seat and walked next to you
>”Anonymous, I assure you that I only put Fluttershy in charge of questioning Redheart because she is an exceptionally accomplished interrogator. I would not waste my power on pursuing a rivalry of sorts with the likes of you. Nevertheless…”
>His eyes looked to you and narrowed
>”I remember fully what happened that day in the Imperial Palace, and I want you to know that if we ever fight again that I will not hesitate to destroy you.”
>Your own gaze darkened as you stared back at him
>>25805211
Shame they get wrecked afterwards.
I wish there was more to it, a spinoff for pilots would be cool.
>>25805232
>Staring down at the field, you saw Rainbow Dash brandish her saber staff, twirling it cockily in her right hand
>”Come on AJ! Let’s go, one on one!”
>Applejack gave her a cruel smile as she put her fists on her hips
>”And why should I bother wastin’ my time like that? I got nothin’ to prove to you. All ah’m interested in is wipin’ that damn smirk off yer face!”
>Rainbow Dash shuddered as Big Mac took a step forward
>She balked at the the three of them before shouting out
>”t-This is exactly how I know you’re all talk! You know I’d kick your ass so you always have your family backing you up!”
>Applejack chuckled at her, clearly unmoved by her display
>”Ah don’t really see the point in playing fair, at least not with trash like yerself.”
>Then, just as it looked like a fight would break out, Big Mac took a step back and leaned down next to Applejack
>The older sibling appeared to be whispering something within her ear
>She scowled for a moment, before breaking out into an intimidating laugh
>”Well Rainbow, looks like today you might finally get yer wish. One on one just like you’ve been begging fer.”
>Applejack laid out a hand and pushed Applebloom aside whilst slapping her brother on the back
>”Big Mac says he’s sick and tired of listening to yer braggin’. He says it’s about time someone shut ya up, and he wants to be the one to do it.”
>Rainbow took a step back as Big Mac stomped closer to her
>Reaching into his belt, he took out his bulky lightsaber and ignited it
>Big Mac’s red saber beam was exceptionally long to accompany his own huge size, giving the warrior an incredible amount of reach
>Dash seemed a little intimidated at first, but after glancing back at the crowd around her she seemed to perk up a bit
>Her eyes locked for a moment with that of the younger Twi’lek behind her before she turned to face Big Mac and nonchalantly spat on the ground
>>25805257
The guy who made that deserves to get a career out of it. A full length movie of his work would be amazing
>>25805262
>”You know what? I’m cool with this. If I can’t smack you around then I guess that freak is the next best thing!”
>She brandished her saber staff and swung it through the air above her head as she strolled around the field
>The two warriors focused intently on each other as the crowd of onlookers backed away, save for Big Mac’s siblings and the Twi'lek
>Applejack looked quite pleased as she watched her brother, while the other two seemed visibly distressed
“What exactly did you have in mind when—“
>”Patience Anonymous. We’re about to see just what these two are capable of.”
>Just before it seemed like Rainbow Dash and Big Mac would charge one another, over a dozen Acolytes ran onto the field
>At their insistence, most of the crowd was pulled away from the fight that was about to unfold as one of them raised their voice and cried out
>”It has been decreed by the powers that be that this duel be fought, to the death.”
“What?!”
>”WHAT!?”
>Applejack’s jaw fell open as she stared in horrid surprise, with her sister looking just as shocked
>Rainbow Dash nearly tripped over herself as she stared about with wide eyes
>Big Mac did not seem to react to the news at all, although it was hard to see any reaction from him with that mask of his
>Many of the crowds were backing away quite a distance now, while Applejack walked up to one of the Acolytes and started a vicious argument with him
>While all this unfolded, Applebloom and the Twi’lek ran up to their respective fights and began to seemingly plead with them
>It was all so very surreal
“Rainbow Dash and Big Macintosh are full fledged Inquisitors. Warriors who have pledged their loyalty to the Empire and who have fought Jedi on its behalf. Are you really about to—?"
>”Yes.”
>The Inquisitor scowled down at the field as you balked at him
>>25805279
>You could hardly believe this
>How could he think it acceptable to make these two fight to the death?
>There had to have been some deeper meaning behind this, or perhaps…
“Are you trying to intimidate me?”
>He scoffed as he sat down and reclined on his throne
>”Please Anonymous, this whole thing is far bigger than just you. This is about instilling order and discipline."
>You were convinced that you had a hand in prompting this, but could you have really gotten under his skin this badly?
>While you mulled over this, the field was slowly cleared away of everyone but the combatants, with most of the spectators moving up to the battlements where you and the Inquisitor stood watch
>A quick scan of this crowd quickly revealed Applejack leaning over the ledge of the wall with a hand grasped onto the railing
>”Big Mac! Don’t play around with her, just get it over with alright!?”
>You noticed that not too far behind Applejack stood her younger sister, who was standing silently next to the orange Twi’lek who seemed to be a fan of Rainbow
>Beside the two of them also stood a young girl about their age with excessively pale skin, colorless eyes, and long whitish hair, likely a member of the Umbaran species
>Suddenly you realized that you had seen these two other girls before, recognizing them as friends of Applebloom’s
“This… will not end well.”
>At that, the Grand Inquisitor stood out of his seat and raised his voice as he beckoned down to Rainbow and Big Mac
>”If you are so keen on fighting one another rather than learning to put aside your differences to serve our lords, then so be it. Fight to your heart’s content.”
>Rainbow Dash and Big Mac glanced up at the balcony before staring one another down
>”Proceed.”
>>25805266
That shit was amazing. I liked one of the early edits that had the score over it instead of the rock tune.It was a bit janky and weird perspective wise in places.
>>25805292
>Staring down at the field, you watched as Big Mac readied his long saber with both hands whilst Rainbow Dash twirled her saber staff
>Rainbow Dash’s saber spun faster and faster as it tore through the ground, her face contorting into a wicked smile as her saber turned into a red blur
>”EAT THIS!”
>Her saber spun through the air as she tossed it at Big Mac at a devastating speed
>Standing still and displaying little emotion at all, Big Mac awaited the flying saber staff as it sped at him
>Raising his saber up, he parried aside the blow and sent the saber staff spinning aside
>As soon as the two sabers struck, Rainbow was on the move
>Blitzing across the grass, she caught her saberstaff as it sailed through the air and immediately hurled it back even faster
>As the saber staff approached Big Mac’s head, he raised his saber once more and knocked it aside with a wide slash
>Just as before, Rainbow sped across the ground and grasped hold of her weapon only to immediately throw it back
>Unless she secretly also had robotic legs, then she had to have been using the Force to enhance her reflexes and her speed
“He’s just… standing there.”
>Big Mac seemed to expertly block Rainbow’s saber staff each time she threw it, despite the fact that she appeared to be gaining speed each time she tossed it at him, to the point where it was becoming difficult to keep track of her
>Suddenly Applejack’s voice rang out through the field
>”LOOK OUT!”
>As soon as Rainbow threw her saber next, instead of speeding around in anticipation of catching it she charged Big Mac
>He raised his own saber and pushed aside the saber staff just as Rainbow fell upon him
>”YAAA!”
>Rainbow cocked back her arm and slammed her metal fist directly into Big Mac’s chest above his heart
>>25805296
Don't remember that one. You have a link? I feel like watching that shit again the more I think about it
>>25805310
>Several people from the crowd cheered while a few others fell deathly silent
>You watched intently as the two fighters seemingly froze in place
>Applejack’s voice rang out above it all
>”KILL HER!”
>Grasping his saber with both hands, Big Mac’s weapon crashed down in an overhead swing
>Scrambling away from him, Rainbow’s immense speed failed her
>Failing to evade his slash, Rainbow once again lost an arm
>”AAAAAAAHHHH!”
>Her left shoulder sputtered sparks of electricity as she grasped her right hand over the slashed open limb
>Big Mac stepped over her torn off limb as he slowly stomped over to her
>Coughing up a small stream of blood underneath his battered mask, Big Mac approached Rainbow Dash like a specter of death
>You could sense her fear as she she sprinted back from him, evading his long saber slashes as he tore up the ground where she once stood
“Incredible…”
>The Grand Inquisitor watched the fight with a bemused grin, his hand clenching his chin as he leaned forward and watched the fight
>Your fists shook as you glanced back and forth between him and the duelists
“What is the point of this?”
>He failed to reply to you as both of your attention was called back to the field
>Rainbow Dash called her saber staff back into her right hand and ignited her weapon
>She only activated one end of its beam, likely to compensate for the loss of her left arm
>Shouting out, Rainbow Dash spun her saber through the air as she charged him
>She continued to move at a Force enhanced speed, whilst Big Mac maintained an impressive defensive wall against her as he methodically blocked each of her blows
>Striking back at his attacker, Big Mac swung his saber at Rainbow with such force that she was knocked back several steps when she blocked the blow
>Instead of blocking the next few devastating strikes, Rainbow quickly sidestepped her adversary and tried to slash him in the back
>>25805333
>Amazingly, Big Mac was able to raise his own weapon over his head and block the strike meant for his back before twisting about and continuing to slash at her
“His grasp over Djem So's defensive stance is unreal.”
>”Indeed. I’m particularly impressed by Rainbow’s unorthodox tactics. I suppose Ataru suits someone with such… creativity.”
>Your conversation with the Inquisitor was interrupted as three figures emerged onto the balcony
>Twisting about, you saw Applebloom joined by her three friends as they kneeled down before the Grand Inquisitor
>”Sir, ah’m begging you. You have to stop the fight!”
>Her Twi’lek friend spoke up next
>”They never meant to take it this far!”
>Followed by the Umbaran girl
>”Please don’t let them die like this!”
>The Inquisitor did not even register them with a glance as he coldly spoke back
>”Anonymous recently informed me that this conflict between Rainbow and your Apple clan has been brewing for years.”
>Your hands clenched into fists as you muttered at him through clenched teeth
“Don’t drag me into this you—“
>”I am cracking down on this immediately. Hopefully the three of you will be able to learn from this experience, lest you end up like those two down there.”
>Applebloom shook as she raised her head to stare at him, tears welling up in her eyes
>Suddenly her gaze drifted toward you and your eyes locked together
>”a-Anon?”
>You silently looked back into her eyes, and were reminded of her
>There were many times you took pity on her, lamenting how hard it was for her to adapt to her training and how she always seemed to languish in her older siblings' shadow
>Her fear reminded you of the boy you once were
>Your body shook as you stared back at her
>It was foolish, insanely so, but…
>>25805367
“Stop the fight.”
>The Inquisitor’s eyes narrowed as he turned his head to face your glare
>”Excuse me?”
>To the immense shock of the three girls in front of you, you placed your hand onto the Inquisitor’s shoulder and gripped it tightly as you loomed over him
>Your other hand slowly gripped the saber on the back of your belt
“Stop the fight, before someone get’s hurt.”
>You and the Inquisitor glowered at one another, the immense hatred you two share radiating so fiercely that the three girls had to have been able to sense it
>”Anonymous…”
>The Inquisitor leaned forward in his chair, his own hand resting upon the saber on his belt
>”… you’re blocking my view.”
>”ARGH!”
>”NO!"
>The Twi’lek girl’s shout shook your attention away from the Inquisitor as the two of you looked back at the field and saw Dash lying on the ground, her lightsaber knocked out of her grasp several yards away
>”YES!”
>Applejack clenched her fist and smiled as she leaned off the ledge of the battlement
“Dammit, is she…?”
>Rainbow’s body shuddered as her mechanical hand gripped the hard dirt on the ground
>As she attempted to crawl to her weapon, Big Mac fell upon her
>His foot crashed into Rainbow’s ribcage as he kicked her onto her back and proceeded to press his boot into her abdomen
>The Twi’lek girl shouted at the top of her lungs as she leaned over the railing
>”RAINBOW! YOU HAVE TO GET UP! RAINBOW DASH!!!”
>The Inquisitor sighed
>”It would seem she has overexerted herself. A pity.”
“You bastard…”
>”Hm?”
>You furrowed your brow as the Twi’lek began to break out into tears
“You’re making them fight… just like he made us fight.”
>The memories of your duel with the Inquisitor at the Imperial Palace burned brightly in your mind
“I should have killed you when I had the chance.”
>>25805320
I'm on my mobile so no. But your best bet is to just look for TIE fighter animation or so on youtube.
>>25805385
>The Twi’lek rushed up to Applebloom and shook her as she froze up in shock
>”He’s your brother! Make him stop! MAKE HIM STOP!”
>Applebloom looked at her friend with a mortified expression, having seemingly lost the strength to speak
>She seemed powerless to stop this madness
>Maybe you could end it all here and now, at the cost of throwing away everything you had worked for
>Your dream of becoming a Sith Lord, of conquering beside Midnight
>No, you wouldn’t lose sight of your vision and you would not make the same mistake you made two years ago
>Whatever would happen now, would have to be avenged later
>You coldly watched as Big Mac slowly raised his lightsaber above Rainbow and prepared to end her life with a downward thrust
>Rainbow coughed up a trail of blood, and was seemingly speaking to him, although you could not hear what she was saying
>As you scrutinized her, you immediately realized that whatever she was saying had caught his attention and caused him to pause
>Dash suddenly smiled up at him
>Applejack was having none of it
>”Finish her off! NOW!”
>As Big Mac raised his saber up high to strike, Rainbow raised up her own hand and…
>Flipped him off
>Her hand immediately became a fist as steam issued through her arm>”ROCKET PUNCH!”
>Rainbow’s fist blasted out of her arm and jettisoned into Big Mac’s face, knocking him off of her as he crashed onto his back, his mask flying through the air
>Your jaw fell wide open as Rainbow slowly scrambled over the ground to her lightsaber
>Raising her metal stump up, her fist returned to its socket and snapped in place as she picked up her lightsaber and stumbled up to her feet
>As Big Mac bolted up, his bloodied and bruised face now all too apparent, Rainbow Dash burst into the air toward him with her saber wielding arm draped across her torso
>The two swung their sabers at each other as Rainbow slid to the ground behind him, their backs turned on one another
>>25805444
>The two Dark Jedi stood in place for several tense moments as everyone watched with bated breath
>A cool wind blew past the field, billowing through the grass
>Big Mac collapsed to the ground
>”NOOOOOOO!!!”
>Applebloom’s scream resounded throughout the training fields, likely echoing down across the mountains
>Following closely behind Applebloom’s tearful cry, came Applejack’s primal roar
>You saw her leap down from the battlements to the ground and rush a mangled Rainbow Dash
>”RAINBOW LOOK OUT!”
>Activating her own saber, the Twi'lek clumsily hopped down onto the field and rushed Applejack as she charged Rainbow Dash
>Just as she was about to intercept Applejack, she raised her hand up and stopped the Twi’lek in her tracks
>Without breaking her stride, Applejack lifted her off her feet by her throat and throttled her across the field
>Barely having the strength to stand, Rainbow raised her arms up as she reluctantly welcomed Applejack
>Their fight was not to be, for as Applejack approached Rainbow several dozen Acolytes stormed the field
>Several of them quickly grappled Rainbow, who appeared to be protesting against being taken away, whilst the rest struggled to hold Applejack back
>She mercilessly struck down three of them almost immediately in her maddened frenzy as they attempted to bring her down with shock staves
>”Enough of this.”
>The Inquisitor rose from his seat and hopped down to the field to assist the acolytes in detaining Applejack
>You looked away from the carnage on the field, utterly disgusted by what you had just seen
>The battle was a terrific sight, but it had no purpose
>Big Mac may have been an insane brute, but the Force was strong with him
>He deserved better than this
>>25805464
>Staring coldly at the mountains in the distance, you slowly began to block out the noise around you
>The violence that was still unfolding below, the cheers and jeers of the crowds of onlookers, the bitter breeze
>However, try as you might, you could not silence the sound of Applebloom’s sobs
>Glancing down at her, you watched as her Umbaran friend comforted her with a hug as the two of them sat down against the railing
“Applebloom…”
>She momentarily ceased crying and looked up to you with tear-stricken eyes
>What could you say to her?
>Sorry?
>There was nothing I could do?
>This was the Will of the Force?
>Your gaze hardened as your anger spilled out and you struggled to express yourself to her
>You will not stand for this injustice
“We will make this right.”
>Applebloom stared at you with a confused frown as you turned your back on her and stomped away, your cloak billowing in the fierce wind
>It was clear to you now
>Everything about today, from your spat with Fluttershy to all that had transpired here on this training field, to every word he shared with you on this balcony was part of a calculated strategy with one goal in mind
>Make you mad
>He wanted you to lose control so you could give him an excuse to have you removed
>It nearly worked too
“You’ll get what’s coming to you… you and your precious masters. I’ll tear this whole Empire to pieces if I have to…”
>Some day you would be Sith, and you would have the power to strike down all your enemies
>Until then, all you could do was look forward to and prepare for that day
“My time will come."
>>25805483
That's all for now! Was hoping to have this finished a bit earlier but eh.
I hope ya'll enjoyed it!
Just one more week
>>25805409
Still looking, I'll find it eventually though
I am returned.I liked it.
More coming soon.
8.7/10
Also, I think I found a new favorite character.
>>25805985
She gives me a young Bastila vibe.
>>25802440
Reading that thing now and enjoying it. How abruptly will it end?
>>25805559
It shows up if you just look for Tie Fighter Animation. Should be one of the first results on youtube with (WIP) in the title.
ok
>>25807968
Abrupt? No. It's right after a great long scene that helps establish the character's power. Then there's the ultimate cliffhanger.
>>25808018
So just after the battle? Shame.
Fuck this thread right now I aint reading anything!
Have a Darth Scorpan though
>>25808938
Sorry, bby. Maybe I can get an update in for you fine gentswhen I get back from TFA.
Have asubjectivelyhumorous video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BrRGTEwNS2M&ab_channel=TheLateShowwithStephenColbert
>>25808993
Colbert fakes it more than a Vegas Hooker, I dont care.
Also, not your fault. Im in a pissy mood rightmiao.
>>25808938
Scorpan's got a sick wizard beard going on
>>25808938
>Good, goyim----I mean, good, Nito
So who here actually got to see The force awakens opening night?
I saw it at 2 AM in a super delux theater after my shift was done
>>25809351
I saw it at 10:45 last night.
>>25809417
nice
It gets a solid 10/10.I'm not back.
>>25809836
nice..
Oh also, before it started, our projector system was screwy, so we had to watch the new star trek trailer three times...
Me and a couple of hundred of fans were booing it the whole time
Hmm. I give it a 7.6/10. More lightsabers.
>>25805444
>Rocket Punch
BOOM!! HEAD SHOT!! SURPRISE MOTHAFUCKA!!poor Big Mac...
>>25805559
Better late than never. Besides, an update this quality takes time. Good show.
Bump
I liked the movie enough, but jesus that script.
>>25811382Too much comedy right?
>>25809351
Got the first showing in imax.
>>25809351
>>25811923
What the hell happened there...?
Anyway, I went to the first showing last night at 7 at a theatre within spitting distance of my house.
Felt kind of bad for all the people at the bigger theatres in town who'd booked their tickets months in advance and waited in line, because I left the house like 20 minutes before showtime, walked up, bought a ticket at the window and went in - hardest part was finding parking.
I guess you could sayI let the Force guide me.
>>25811996
Hey weren't you going to draw Gilda once?
>>25811908
Yes. And some of the regular dialogue made me cringe a bit.
>>25808938
Seriously awesome job.
Have some metal
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gBkRzRupu1Q
Back from the theater.
Overall: 7/10. I liked it, however, the story was weak and a lot of things needed some explaining. Loved Rey and Finn. Daisy Ridley did a great job for her first time on a big movie set. Humor was good for the most part and maybe had too many jokes (I thought Poe and Finn's jokes were bad). Also, BB-8 is great as well. I thought he was funnier than C3PO (Blame the prequels).
Going to see it again tomorrow to see if my feelings are final.They blew it on Han's death.
In 24 hours I'll be sitting in the theater waiting for that epic opening crawl to start
>>25812086
I think yes, I was, although I can't remember what race I was asked to draw her as.Unless you want to see her as a Mandalorian.
>>25811382
>>25811908
>>25812113Compared to the prequels, it's fucking Shakespeare. It's nice hearing dialog written by someone besides George; someone who can make a characters sound approximately like living beings instead of conduits for The Script. You can call the jokes bad if you want, but for me at least, when the joke isn't funny, it feels like the character is the one who can't tell a joke, as opposed to the writer.
>>25810218
I went through a few different ideas; hidden vibroblades, flamethrowers, secretly thermal detonators, but in the end I decided to give her rocket punches. I think Rainbow would approve.
He was aBig Guy
Glad you liked it man
>>25811069
Porkins?
>>25811931
nice
best part is seeing as I work at my theater, i get to see it for free, and Imax and RPX are like $20 bucks a ticket
of course im gonna see it like 5 more times, not including watching the ending over and over again
So, guysDo we all agree that Snoke is Darth Plagueis?
>>25814967
honestly, I dont know what to think of himI think he is either a botched vader or Palpetine clone
>>25814989I would agree, but compare these:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mSQ3BJVMfAI
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nRaiLY23gU8
It's way too similar to be a coincidence.
>>25814989I thought he was a guy who worked for Palpatine and took his chance for power when he died.
>>25814989
>>25815014The palpatine track is from when Sidious is talking to anakin about plagueis, by the way.
>>25815014holy fuck, they sorta do
>>25815019
>>25815037very true... then again guys the movie is only a day old now. And we have to wait till 2017 for more answers, but I dont believe he is palgueiswhat I wanna talk about is how will Kylo change in the next film
who here is from /tv/?
Okay, this has to be real.Either Rey is Luke's daughter, or she's the worst written mary sue in cinema history.
>>25812588
dubs confirm for shit riffsthank you, regardless
>>25809110
God Wizards was a weird movie
>>25793868
>>25793898
Here http://imgur.com/MMnxiFQ
>>25815226
I once saw the first page of /tv/ does that count?
>>25815720
> Hot Waifu pic
> Fucking unf
>>25815967
>having Rainbow Dash as your waifu
total pleb
>>25815967
I'm glad you like, Oni-chan.
>>25816020
At least he has one, I bet you take multiple waifu, you fiend.
Can I get a suggestion for the next group of doodles?
>>25816187
Well I just got my waifu. I'm happy, but if you're looking for suggestions you could try drawing Mon Calamari Applejack from my story.
Maybe, for something lewd we could have Shining Armor and Cadence together. I'll let you decide which story to choose from.
>>25816287
Yeah ok
>>25816187
Sunset is all I need.
>>25815720
Fucking nice
>>25816020
>>25816187
>tfw I still haven't written my own waifu into my green yet
>>25811024I'll do it
Guys, The Force Awakens ends when the credits roll. Ruined the entire movie for you!
>>25811024
I'LL DO IT
>>25815585
Exactly what I was thinking.
>the true hero of the story
;_; never forget
>>25817996
>TRAITOR
>>25817996
So why exactly did they bring a guy with a hammer along?
>>25817996
rip TR-80. You shall not be forgotten
>>25816967
I know that feel...
>>25818660
I think I'm going to say fuck it and catch an early show today.
So who wants to buy Anovos' 8500 dollar First Order stormtrooper statue?
>>25819257
>tfw you're not getting Paid anytime soon and couldn't afford it anyway. But still want it.
Fuck my life why am I poor?
>>25819310
Just wait for the 3000 dollar costume and be the statue yourself.
>>25819310
Is it because you're spending quality talent on us instead of a career? Seriously, make something you could sell. People would dig star wars things now, and you could make a few bucks on something you love. You're definitely good enough to do it.
>>25819310
>>25819421
Just start to write commissions for people on DA or FA some of them will pay stupid amounts for smut and whatnot.Citation Needed
>>25819421
>talent
>good enough
To tell you the truth, I'm a horrible coward... I can't even stand being critzied in my own imagination.
>>25819329
That might work...
>>25819544
Honestly, if you actually want one I know where to get some that are around 1400 dollars and made by fans. Cheaper than anovos, but everyone's still waiting to see some final pictures. Doesn't include the helmet though, but the helmet is made by the same person.
>>25819544
>I'm a horrible coward...
So was I. Then a magical writefag named Onii Chan encouraged me to start writing. People showed appreciation for my story, so I kept writing. I got better. I feel much better about my skill now.
The difference? You can actually make money off yours. Keep drawing for us if you want, we appreciate the art. It's amazing. All I'm saying is, you have what it takes to go a step further than appeasing a few bronies on a Star Wars board.
>>25819655
Glad to hear made a difference writefriend.
>>25819750
Any time man. Pic related.
>>25819544
>I can't even stand being critzied in my own imagination.
I'll be honest I never received much critique on my shit either but how would you even grow if noone gives you some pointers on what to work on?
>>25819561
As cool as that might be, I have more pressing financial matters to attend.
>>25819655
I'll consider it, kirrabee, I don't think it's as easy for me to receive payments over the Internet.
>>25819783
It's not criticisms per se, it's more like a gut feeling that you know your stuff isn't as good as it could be.
>>25819869
>gut feeling
I feel you, I got the same eversince I stopped drawing as regularly as I did a few years back.
Sometimes I feel like I can't reach levels I reached a few months ago. Makes a case for practice I guess.
Either way it doesn't help much to get stuck on those feelings, the only thing you really can do about them is work on the art. But that's just my two cents.
>yfwCoruscant got btfo
>>25817996
>>25818660
That riot trooper did more than Captain Phasma.
God dammit was she wasted potential. Episode 8 better convince me to make her my waifu again.but the riot trooper's still cool
>>25819998It was the Hosnian star system that got btfo.
>>25820022
youre waifu literally belongs in the trash
>>25820384I see what you did there
>>25820384
I'm half-hoping she got out, just so that she can be something more than "Boba Fett V2" in Episode 8. But I'm also half-hoping that she's dead so that Episode 8 could introduce a new high-ranking stormtrooper. Maybe a TIE fighter pilot commander to act as a rival to Poe Dameron in the skies?
At the end of the moviethe screen turns black and credits scroll down the screen.
Finally saw the new movie. Maybe i'm just getting old but I thought the saber fights were kind of dumb.You're telling me a trained sith apprentice sucks that bad at fighting? That chick used the light saber for the first time ever and managed to fight him off. A dude who could stop blaster bolts in mid air for fucks sakes. Also what the fuck she can mind tricks?
Maybe i'm finally realizing that Light Sabers might just be dumb and the Star Wars universe is finally catching up to that concept. In my mind when I read about the fights in stories I always imagine the two fighters being a blur and everyone else on the battlefield kind of fades away and nobody can intercede because the opponents can flick blaster bolts away effortlessly.
In the movie they're clumsy it feels like blasters were the more cool weapon in this movie. I mean fuck why even give a shit about light sabers when riot troopers with their electro police batons can deflect light sabers.
>>25820710
Also I think the story in general is kind of meh. It's a new hope with the roles jumbled up. I think the fact that it has the words Star Wars on it means it will get accolades no matter what. The same way Fallout 4 is kind of shitty but still gets 9.0 on shill review sites. I mean shit the Phantom Menace got several academy awards and that movie is a dog turd.Also why the fuck did they bother showing lady luke and old luke staring at each other for the last 30 seconds of the film? They had a quota to meet and were killing time or what?
>>25820606
>TIE Avenger shows up
>Veteran pilot of Avenger Squadron
>>25820710
>not imagining knight type sword fighting
Come on Anon, the guy even had a guard on his sword this time around.
I still like the slow fighting more.
>>25820738To get Luke in there, movie could've been over when the Falcon flew off for me.
>>25813775
I didn't get that feeling about the characters. It felt like the writer is nudging me with his elbow and going "eh, eh amirite. Old school star wars top top!" and I just leave him hanging because he's a cock sucker.
>>25820710
Bro are you telling me that two young kinds clumsily stumbling through a forest fighting the same way I used to fight my brother with sticks isn't interesting?
>>25817996
You know what I don't get? Why are Light Sabers a threat if you can make weapons that can block them. I doubt that's cortosis or song steel or whateverthefuck.
A light saber is plasma held in place by a magnetic field, right? Why not just generate a magnetic field around your armor and suddenly you're golden. The parts to do so are apparently tiny. Maybe you can even deflect blaster bolts.
>>25820853
Don't think about the saber physics too much, it doesn't lead anywhere.
>>25820853
Light Sabers seriously always felt like a tacked on thing to give the Jedi and Sith that extra bit of mysticism. They're warrior monks with the ability to affect the universe with their mind but that wasn't good enough for Lucas.
Light Sabers have lore armor. They're relevant because they say so but the reasoning is wafer thin at best. Blaster bolts are deflected because *reasons*, slug throwers that sling non-ferris ammo don't go through light sabers and splash their users with molten metal because *reasons*. The reason nobody applies light saber technology to armor or other weapons is *reasons*.
The lore surrounding light sabers is held up by gossamer thin wires that break at the slightest breeze of scrutiny.
>>25820774
>>25820738IMO I am very conflicted with the ending, but hearing the force theme again was great
>>25820710
That dog is like 70% neck.
>>25820710Kylo Ren hasn't face a Jedi in YEARS. It makes sense for him to lose, especially when Chewy shot him with a bowcaster.Also,
>lightsabers
>dumb
Get out of here, Trekkie.
>>25821226
>Kylo Ren hasn't face a Jedi in YEARS
The thing is she's not a Jedi. She's a chick fighting FOR THE FIRST TIME EVER with a light saber that fight was literally the first time she ever turned it on. And yes Light Sabers are dumb. The force is fucking awesome and Jedi warrior monks are just as awesome. What essentially amounts to light sticks that are purposely propped up by the story? No they're super dumb.
>>25821256Rey let The Force into her when she was fighting Kylo. You see this when Kylo tells her she needs a teacher.
Oh fuck it's like i'm back in the early 90s. Arguing with strangers in a message board about light sabers. If I had my old wooden chair to sit on I think I might get misty eyed.
>>25821328
So a dude who has force training + light saber training can be beaten by some untrained chick who lets force jesus inside her? Fuck it man it's just a stupid fight I just didn't like that part of the film. Kylo should have taken that bitch to school easily but for the story Lady Luke gets to fight on even terms. It's mad retarded.
>>25821328
And? How is this supposed to justify how she instantly knows how to use every technique perfectly?
>>25821357Because she had training before she had her memory wiped.
>>25821353Is it really that hard to believe a Dark Jedi (or whatever you want to call him) who got shot by a fucking wookie bowcaster and got injured by Finn got bested by Rey? The dude was bleeding to death.
>>25821617
Not only was he not bleeding to death he was pounding on his would to fuel his pain and anger into more power.
I just think that the fact that she has near insta jedi status is a cheap device. It's just a very weak point in the film.
>>25821763
I'll admit I was questioning Rey's, the best girl,victory over discount Darth Revan too. Inflicting pain to yourself can only grant you power for so long.
>>25820710>implying Kylo Ren is trained sithhe's something, but he's definitely not trained in sith arts
>>25820710
You do realize he had just been shot right? He was seriously fucked up. Not to mention it's implied that the reason she was so strong in the force was because she's the child of someone important.
As for the lightsaber, I got the feeling like it was overcharged. The crossguard was vents letting out extra energy. That was an unstable dangerous lightsaber.
>>25820853
I think for the same reason people don't have personal shields like the rolly droidkas from the prequels. They seriously mess with organics.
>>25821256It was established earlier with her staff she knew how to fight at the very least. Not perfect, but with the force guiding her it's plausible.
>>25819544
I might be a little late for this, but I just wanted to say that I feel like my own writing has improved tremendously thanks to some of the critique you've given me, and I think your art style is pretty cool as well. It may not always be as great as you think it could be but I still think its consistently good and you can always still find ways to improve if you keep working at it.
>>25822195
You would be correct.I want it in TOR so bad now.
>>25822195
>That was an unstable dangerous lightsaber.
Just like the one who wields it.There's a lot of symbolism for Kylo in that lightsaber if you really look at it - the hilt looks cobbled-together and incomplete, the blade is clearly unstable and god knows what the internal works look like.
Kylo's a self-aggrandizing tryhard whose training is clearly incomplete, compensated for with all this posturing and blind emulation of Darth Vader - some grand, romanticized figure he may not actually know much about at all - but who is still very strong, and I think the weapon does a good job of conveying visually what his current state as a character is - for all the intimidation factor it tries to present, the thing looks like it's one jostle away from going nova, just like him.
>>25819544
>To tell you the truth, I'm a horrible coward... I can't even stand being critzied in my own imagination.
There was once a man who was afraid of self-promotion, who held himself back out of fear of never being good enough. Fear of criticism. He could have known fame and riches in his lifetime, but he died with little to his name. Now he is regarded was one of the all-time greats.His name was Howard Phillips Lovecraft.
Don't be afraid of promoting yourself.
so you guys saw this guy before right?
>>25822647
The lightsaber is unstable because he uses a cracked Kyber crystal.
>>25822743
Wasn't lovecraft also a rascist?
so umm guys... was i just me or was the score in TFA wasn't as good around this time?
>>25823736
Wasn't just you.
>>25823745
oh good... glad im not aloneseriously the only parts i like were all the original song parts especially the force theme at the end
>>25823322
>subtext
>your head
>>25815720
Great work as always friend.
How about doing cloudchaser and flitter next? With or without anon
>>25822236
Thanks, Churro, that really bumps up my self esteem.
>>25822743
I checked some info regarding banks that can take internet payments and I might begin to set up a page on FA or DA for them furry bucks.
Wish me luck.
>>25822904
Yis
>>25823727
To be fare most of you are horrible racists and I'm enabling it by drawing for you guys so I'm a racist by proxy.
>>25824358
Yeah okshould one of them be dead?
>>25823727
>>25824517
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tbud8rLejLM
>>25824801
That'd be great.
>>25823727
and?
>>25824801
Sounds hot
>>25815585>implying Luke sold his daughter into slavery on some backwater planet
I bet he thought to himself, 'It builds character.'
>>25825146
>>25825937
The shit I get myself into...
>>25826149
Man that's awesome. If only I could make intricate lightsabers like that in the simulator.
Alas this is the best I can do.
Keep up the great work. Need more suggestions for drawings, or are you good at the moment?
Just curious, does anyone else get an electrostaff vibe from Rey's staff?
>>25826651
I'm good, just need to mentally steel myself for the next two...
So, I had an idea to write green based off of a prompt thread where Sunset Shimmer fell to the Dark Side. But the thread was archived before i could write anything. Should I put it here?
>>25827056
Sure, go right ahead man
>>25827056
This would seem to be the most appropriate place. Please do so.
>You are Anon.
>And fuck is it cold.
>You suppose that's the price you pay for trying to be the good guy.
>Ever since you were suddenly shunted to this universe along with Sunset, Twilight and the gang, you had to choose sides.
>And due to a series of events involving nazis in white armor and their snazzily dressed commanders with fake sounding British accents, you ended up joining a galaxy spanning rebellion.
>A small chunk of snow falls on your head.
>Fucking hell, why couldn't you stay on Ord Mantell?
>Sure, it was a junkyard, but at least it was warm.
>Just because that one fucktard of a bounty hunter had to pop off his message to the Empire before you guys could finish him off, everybody suddenly had to flee to Hoth.
>Talk about spiteful.
>Rubbing your hands together, you move over to a crate filled with trash.
>There was a hole in the roof here, and the area was pretty spacious.
>You were certain no heat would melt the walls of the base.
>You take out your lightsaber, and ignite it.
>The purple beam hums to life, and you stick it into the center of the trash heap in the crate.
>As the fire catches, you put your lightsaber away.
>Why couldn't there be a Force bodily heat power you could learn?
>Fuck Hoth, this place sucks.
Continue? Y/N.
>>25827245
Give us more than we'll tell you whether it's good or not.
>>25827245
no it fucking sucks don't do it
>>25827245
>You take some time warming yourself near the fire.
>Thanks to some ancient holocron the group found, you've been able to learn about the ways of the Force, according to the Jedi.
>Turns out only a few of you were Jedi material, including yourself, Rarity, Sunset, and suprisingly enough, Fluttershy of all people.
>Pinkie and Rainbow seemed to be Force Sensitive as well, but the former didn't like sitting in one place too long, and the latter didn't have the patience to learn anything.
>As a result, neither of them attended any lectures from your holographic Jedi Master.
>As for Twilight and Applejack, neither of them could do it, no matter how much they tried.
>In the end, it seemed like they weren't sensitive to the Force.
>You sighed.
>The catastrophe at Ord Mantell had prompted everyone to separate.
>You were to rendezvous back on Hoth
>And almost everyone showed up.
>It's been a month since you got separated.
>Hopefully, Sunset is alright.
>Great, now you're mopey, as Pinkie would put it.
>Speaking of which, here comes the Pink clad wonder, now.
>You're still not sure how she got her own rebel uniform embroidered with balloons, or to use pink cloth.
>Actually scratch that. You're pretty sure Rarity helped.
>She looks over at you, and smiles, rushing over to hug you.
>"Heya, Mopey Nonny!"
"Uh, hi Panko. You're...rather huggy right now."
>She snuggles close to you.
>"It's because you're warm. And you look like you need a hug."
>She keeps her arms wrapped around you, as you both bask in the warmth of the fire.
>>25827626
>"You're worried about Sunny, aren't you Nonny?"
"Of course I'm worried, Ponk. It's been a month since we saw her."
>"I know. What if she got captured by the Empire?"
"That's exactly-"
>"Or what if she got sucked into a black hole after plotting a hyperspace route through an uncharted nebula?"
>Wait, what?
"Are there even any unchar-"
>"Or what if she ran into a evil space lizard flying in a golden ship that looked like a Boeing 747 that had a big soul catching satellite dish on the bottom, and her soul's been sent to Earth to be confused into believing all sorts of different religions before inhabiting a caveman?!"
"What the fuck are you even on about, Pinkie?"
>She gives you a big smile, and hugs you again.
>"Don't worry about it, Nonny. Sunset can take care of herself. I'm sure she's fine."
>You understand what she's trying to do, now.
>Sunset's a Jedi, now. Not a fully trained one, mind you.
>But she's still a formidable adversary for anyone to handle.
>Even if the Empire came after her, you doubt anyone could be able to capture her.
>It'd take someone on par with, Vader for example, to even hope to catch her.
>And last you checked, tall, dark, and scary was after Skywalker, not her.
>You return her hug.
"Thanks, Pinkie. You're right."
>She breaks the hug, and smiles at you.
>"Actually, I was looking for you for a reason. Dashie was starting up a game of Pazaak, and she was wondering if you wanted to join in."
>Actually, a card game sounds good right now.
>>25821256
I think the movie just made Light Sabers seem less special. Like only Jedi are supposed to use them but the fact that it seems like anybody can pick them up and use them makes them less special.
>>25827885
Well to be fair. They are just really fancy swords. Jedi are shown more proficient with them than others but I see no reason other than mystycism to prevent anyone else from picking one up and swinging it about.
It's not in the movies but KOTOR had almost everyone wield some sort of sword or staff for melee combat. We saw her with that staff too so perhaps she's sort of trained to use melee weapons.I still think a light spear/halberd would be cool.
>>25827929
The reason they're hard to use is they have no weight other than the hilt. It's hard to judge where the length of the blade is when you swing it.
>>25828021
Anyone with even a modicum of proper training, would know where the blade is due to the glow itself. The whole issue with the lightsaber is the lack of momentum, which a lot of fighters rely on, for their swings. Lightsabers wouldn't have that.
>>25827885
Actually, there's been a few instances of non-Force users using lightsabers. Boba Fett, Han Solo, General Greivous, and now Finn, to mention a few.
My issue with TFA was how, after one instance of impulsive mental defense, after just BARELY being exposed to the Force, she's now got a handle on Force Persuasion, something that even the most powerful Jedi needed to practice and hone, before they could use it.
As for her use of Force Pull, it can be argued that, between the attunement of the saber to her, and her nowbullshitForce capabilities, that she could pull it off.
Regarding Kylo, he's... A child playing at Darth Vader. He wants so desperately to be the Big Bad that any concept otherwise hurts his precious psyche.
And that saber fight... Rey's training was predominantly against thugs, occasionally armed with blasters. Finn has... What. About twenty-three years of at least basic training with a melee weapon, if that Stormtrooper is anything to go by? I don't care if the Force literally drips from Rey's holy vagina, there is no reason she should have lasted longer than Finn, especially with Kylo using his bowcaster wound like a power up.
>>25824801
Oh please god no
>>25828115
Fair points. I figure they just wanted to have a fight in at the endand I'm ok with that.
Just watched it,I like it.
>>25828115
Joining the conversation because I just watched me movie!
I think Reyhas bullshit force powers, but she also has actual combat skill. She was raised in a hostile environment where her only weapon was a large metal stick. She put Finn on his ass and kicked the shit out of two people that had jumped her out of nowhere.
As for KyloI thought he was very well represented. He is a Sith wannabee, who we learn has not yet completed training with either the Jedi or Sith, and he is overconfident. He has one fancy force power that must be hard to pull off when he is under stress, because he only uses it when he has no real threat to himself. His only combat experience would be against Resistance soldiers or thugs, as mentioned by someone else, so he has nobody to challenge his skill. the fact that he fucked up several terminals and pieces of machinery is proof enough for me that he is young, unrefined, and definitely NOT superior to Rey, especially if she is gifted and Kylo isn't.
>>25829280
Also, tacking on something I just remembered, Luke was able to pull his lightsaber out of the snow and escape from a Wampa with only very basic training from Obi-wan. Luke was also self taught, as far as the movies are concerned. What's to say Rey couldn't figure out basic things about the Force by herself? And as for the mind trick, she did literally just have her mind invaded minutes before hand. She broke free by attacking back. She already knew how to get into someone's mind, it's just that this time SHE needed to establish the link. That is the easy part.
>>25829280
Agreed.Kylo is too angsty, overconfident, and rather unintimidating, if the officers were anything to go by. He showed no patience ever, which possibly shows a lack of forethought and an ineptness in the force.
bimp
>tfw you want to drawfag something because you can't write
>tfw it all looks like shit
Maybe next week.
>>25830501
Post it now anyways
>>25828143
It's too late
>>25830571
It's like you think I haven't already deleted those sketches. But seriously it was just a terrible Y-Wing.
I need to learn to draw proper perspective without using sketchup mockups again.If anyone has any spaceship requests go right ahead though, it may take a while because of christmas and work.
>>25830763
Grievous' fighter/the droids' bomber from Battlefront 2.
>>25830763
The Torrent is always a fun ship.
>>25830812
Here you go that's as far as I got before I have to leave.
I took some last minute liberties with the armament and I'm pretty sure the perspective is somewhat fucked on the pods on the wings.
Marks are supposed to represent ARC fighters and AT-TEs destroyed.
>>25830828
Sorry maybe another day. That thing still looks like an engineering and piloting nightmare though.
>>25831430
That's actualy really good. There are some wobbly lines, like the ends of the cannons and the edges on the back of the wings but in general it's a very well defined piece
>>25831719
Thanks. I always seem to have trouble with cannons or barrels in general. The ones on the trailing edge I simply forgot by the looks of it.
To me it feels a bit empty as I feel like I have to add panels and bolts or other details. But those are oddly tricky to me.
>>25831859
At this point I'd recommend looking at some planes specifically WW2 planes, since they are the main inspiration for star fighters. Pictures and photos are fine as long as they are high res so you can see the details that you want. Use more then one reference when you're planning the panels. And the most important thing when drawing those details is having them make sense. Also, practice, everything can be improved when you practice. Also! Don't make your lines all the same width. The parts that have less light are wider, the parts with more light are thinner.
Good luck
>>25831997
Oh right line weight is some other thing I should still look into.
>WW2
Helps that I'm a huge buff for that stuff and thst it's the stuff that I usually draw.
I figure I'll just have to get back into digital stuff again.
>>25802168
Even if the thread doesn't die when it ends, it will be dead in his very essence. I've read a few other stories, but I came here for Sargeand will leave when he's gone
>>25831430
>guys I suck
>draws this
are you shitting me anon? I can't do anything as well as you can draw
>>25832209
Sadly, I feel as your right. It is a pity as this has been the only /mlp/ thread I've visited for the past year. Everything dies at some time I guess.
>>25833622
>>25832209
>>25802168
It'll be a bit of a bummer when Sarge's story finally ends, but I don't see that happening anytime soon.
For what it's worth, I still intend on seeing my own story till the end, regardless of when that end comes, and there are a fair amount of other stories here that I also intend on seeing through.Also isn't our one year anniversary in a few days or something? We ought to be celebrating and shit mangExpect a somewhat short update for Inquisitor Anon in a very short while.
>>25805483
>Be Sunset Shimmer
>The thunder of rapid blaster fire shocks you awake as you bolt up in your seat
>Brandishing your Blaster Pistol, you jerk your head up and aim your weapon around the landing pad
>After glancing around a little, you fail to see anything around you save the empty landing pad your ship is sitting on and the numerous black and grey skyscrapers surrounding you
>However, you hear several more blaster rounds fire off in the distance, this time also accompanied by hooting and hollering
>You crack open your cockpit and listen in
>”That’ll teach you bloodsuckers to step on our turf! OH YEAH!”
>”Damn swoopers think they own the place! Well ya ain’t so tough now are ya! HAHAHAHA!”
>Several more blaster shots rang out followed by more raucous laughter as you sighed and leaned back into your seat
“Are you kidding me?”
>You really didn’t like Nar Shadaa
>The place was a lot like Coruscant, a world covered by one massive city with huge skyscrapers all over the place
>Except Coruscant was mostly cleaner and safer, and it wasn’t always so damn dark outside
>Here the Hutts were in control but as long as they got their money they mostly let the people do whatever they wanted, leaving the various gangs and criminal cartels in control
>If you could call it control, cause from what you had seen in the past few nights this whole moon is practically one big war zone
>Unless you had money or a lot of guys with blasters backing you up, you weren’t exactly safe
>Unfortunately, you had neither a lot of credits or any friends with you right now
>What you did have was a fully fueled Z-95 Headhunter starfighter, which you were currently sleeping out of, a DL-44 Heavy Blaster Pistol, your only means of defense, and the Force, which you still didn’t really understand so well
>It was the latter issue that brought you here in the first place
>>25834581
>Hopping out of your ship, you took a few moments to stretch your body
>Your back was a little sore from sleeping in that seat, but otherwise you were in pretty good shape
>A life constantly on the run kept your athletic body in top form, and when you could you would still practice some of those same exercises you were taught in your younger years to keep your body flexible and your muscles maintained
>Despite all that, you were very eager to resume a much more important training
>Throwing on and zipping up your leather jacket, you walked off the landing pad and carefully maneuvered yourself over the various walkways until you reached an elevator system which dropped you down about a few hundred stories
>Stepping out of the elevator shaft, you walked a few more miles until you reached the slum you were looking for
>Nestled between various skyscrapers laid a massive neighborhood composed almost entirely of giant cargo crates stacked on top of one another, linked together by a series of rickety catwalks
>These cargo crates served as the homes for the various urban poor that lived around here, and was a place dominated by poverty and disease
>It wasn’t a welcoming place by any means, and in some ways the area even reminded you of what a prison’s cell block might look like, but you weren’t too afraid
>This hadn’t been the first time you had to find your way through a seedy slum, and you were sure it wasn’t going to be the last time either
>Not long after you began to walk through this neighborhood, someone caught your attention
>”Hey you! The Twi'lek in the black leather.”
>You twisted about, a hand grasping the blaster pistol hanging from your belt, as you faced two men about a dozen yards away
>A tall and broad shouldered Nautolan male with purple skin and a ragged coat beckoned to you as he leaned against a crate while a burly Aqualish stared you down as he sat on a metal barrel
>>25834609
>Narrowing your eyes at them, you slowly approached the pair with a hand idly hovering over your blaster
“What do you want?”
>The Nautolan grinned at you as you approached
>Now that you were a little closer, you could see that both him and the Aqualish had blaster pistols of their own holstered on their belts
>Your eyes darted across the area and quickly scanned the street to make sure that there wasn’t anyone else hiding in the shadows
>”I’ve been watching you girl. This is the fourth time I’ve seen you pass by our street corner.”
>The Nautolan chuckled at you as he stood tall and dropped one hand near his blaster whilst gesturing you with his other hand
>”You don’t look like you’re from around here, but that does look like a very pretty blaster you got there. You aren’t a bounty hunter are you?”
>Standing a good ten steps away from him, you met his slimy smile with a dark scowl
“Sure… you could say that. I’m looking for someone…”
>”Yeah, well we know just about everyone who lives in these parts, maybe for a few credits we could point you in the right direction?”
>Your scowl faltered for a brief moment into a frown
“I… only have a few credits, and they’re Imperial.”
>The Nautolan’s smile faded as he stared you down
>“Then I suppose I can’t help you.”
“Wait! I could really use a hand right now. Have you seen a woman with—“
>”Nope! Can’t say I have.”
>The Nautolan’s smile returned as he turned to his Aqualish friend
>”Have you?”
>You couldn’t understand the Aqualish, but you could tell that he was laughing as he banged his clawed fist against the barrel he was sitting on
>”Well there you have it.”
>Your shoulders sagged as you sighed at the two of them
>>25834631
“Look, I’m desperate. I really need to find this lady. Can we work out a deal?”
>The Nautolan gave you a blank stare as the Aqualish raised a hand over his mouth and barked in his native tongue into his friend’s ear
>”Ohhhhh…”
>His smile unnerved you as his black lidless eyes uncomfortably examined your body
>Your body recoiled in disgust as he strode over up to you
>”Now that I think about it, maybe we can work something out…”
>Looming tall over you, the Nautolan grinned as you glared back at him
“I don’t think so.”
>”I thought you said you were DESPERATE!“
>His hand shot out in an attempt to grapple you by your lekku, a strike that you saw coming
>Sidestepping his clumsy reach, your own hand bolted up and grabbed him by his wrist
>He cried out in pain as you twisted his arm and used his own bodyweight against him, tossing him over you onto the hard metal ground
>”GAH!"
>Whipping out your DL-44, you leveled your blaster on the Aqualish before he had a chance to brandish his own pistol
>Quickly pressing your boot down on the Nautolan’s throat, you muttered down at him through gritted teeth
“I don’t like to be touched.”
>”ACK! Crazy—URK!”
>His mouth hung open as you increased the pressure on his throat and aimed your blaster at his face
>He sputtered in fear as you lowered your blaster at him, only to quickly aim it back up at the Aqualish as he hopped off his crate
>Suddenly, the Aqualish began to yell out at you as he teetered closer
“What’s he saying?”
>”URK! What the Hell are you talking about? Her tattoos? What about her…?”
>Your fierce expression fell as he mentioned your tattoos
>”b-Black Sun!?”
>>25834639
>If the two men weren’t scared of you already, then they became absolutely terrified when they recognized the markings all over your face and body
>Even here on Nar Shadaa, where the Hutts ruled supreme, the galactic criminal cartel known as Black Sun was feared
>Few people who weren’t actually part of the organization realized the true depths of it’s wealth and power, but in places like this where crime was a part of every day life numerous rumors abounded surrounding the crime syndicate
>As the two men led you through the slum, you chose to remain quiet about your relationship with Black Sun
>You tried not to think about that part of your past so much, and it was definitely not something you were fond of talking about
>Besides, they would’ve likely gotten confused if you tried to tell them that you just left Black Sun
>One of the more popular rumors about the organization was more or less true
>Nobody can just ‘leave’ Black Sun
>”Right up there.”
>The Nautolan pointed up to a large cargo crate that sat atop another one, with various metal boxes stacked up on top of one another to provide an uneven staircase to its entrance
“You’re sure she’s there?”
>”It’s the only person we can think of that looks like her.”
>You smiled as you looked up at the crate
>There was this strange feeling you had when you stared up at it, almost like it was the Force trying to tell you something
>It had to be her
>”So yeah…”
>The Nautolan placed his hand over your shoulder and grinned
>”No hard feelings right?”
>You shot him a nasty glare that caused him and his buddy to recoil in fear
>”Sorry! n-No touching, very sorry-er ma’am.”
>The two of them slowly backed away some more as you began to carefully walk up the steps
>>25834668
>When you neared the top of the steps, you noticed that the door to the large crate was left open a crack, and that there appeared to be smoke seeping out from inside
>Standing in front of the door, you started to consider exactly how you should go about introducing yourself
>With a fist raised up, you prepared to knock at the door only for it to suddenly open itself up
>Directly in front of you stood a human, or near-human, woman wearing a black cowl that obscured her face
“uh h-hello?”
>She raised her head and stared at you with pensive silver eyes that were surrounded by a pattern of black tattoos that stretched over her face
>Her long snow white hair complemented her pale white skin, giving her the appearance of a ghost
>Or perhaps a witch would be more accurate, although despite her intimidating appearance she was not necessarily ugly by any means
“My name is Suns—"
>”Come inside little runaway, there is much that we need to discuss today.”
>She stepped aside and raised a hand to welcome you in
>Taking a few steps forward, you took in her home as she closed the door to just a crack once more
>It was rather tight living quarters for more than just one person, though it looked very lived in
>A large brown carpet covered most of the floor, various bones and odd looking feathers adorned the walls
>In the center of the room sat a small cauldron that bubbled above a makeshift flame
“How did you know I was…”
>You stopped yourself and began to chuckle
“Well I guess that’s a stupid question. You people just kind of know these things.”
>She raised an eyebrow at you and failed to return your laughter as she took a seat on a pillow near her cauldron
>Beckoning toward a pillow opposite her, you awkwardly walked forward and sat down
>>25834264
It's the 31. I get to celebrate only missing one day of this thread!
>>25834695
>The two of you remained silent as she picked up a bowl and filled it with the the bubbling liquid in the cauldron before offering it to you
“um, thanks.”
>You grabbed the bowl and stared at the steaming brown liquid
>After you saw her fix herself a bowl and drink out of it, you felt secure enough to taste it yourself
>It was some kind of soup, although what kind you did not know or care to ask
>Drinking a little bit more of it, you soon placed it down on the ground by your feet and spoke up to her
“I’ve been looking for you for a while now Zecora. Master Zecora…”
>Placing her own bowl on the ground as well, she stared at you with a curious expression
“A few years ago, I started to learn the ways of the Force underneath an incredible Jedi Master named Luna. I only knew her for a short time before she…”
>You fumbled with your words, as you were unable to exactly figure out what had happened to her
>She wasn’t really dead, but…
“I’ve been searching since then for someone like her. A Jedi that could help me continue my training. I came here to ask if—“
>”I am so sorry friend, but my time as a Jedi already came to an end.”
>You stared at her confusedly as she sagged her shoulders
“What do you mean? Aren’t you a Jedi?”
>”I was a Jedi in a different time, when being so wasn’t a crime. I turned my back on the Jedi ways, and now I simply seek to live out my last days.”
“But I need your help! The galaxy needs your help! The Jedi are the only ones who can stand up to the Empire right now. If we don’t stop the Emperor then—“
>”I fear it is far too late, the Jedi cannot set the galaxy straight. Far too few Jedi remain, and those who do are no longer the same.”
>You furrowed your brow at her she stared down at her bowl with a frown
“What do you mean?”
>She sighed as she waved a hand over her steaming bowl
>”The Dark Side has become stronger than the Light, far too powerful for us to fight.”
>>25834708
Well shit, we celebrate on New Year's Eve then. Even more reason for me to drink!
>>25834748
Cheers to that!
>>25834732
“I don’t— I CAN’T believe that!”
>You stood up tall and shook your fist as you stared down at her
“I’ve seen what the Light Side of the Force can do. The Dark Side may be strong, but so are we!”
>Zecora absently stroked her white hair as she continued to stare downwards
“There’s so much more I need to learn, and so much that needs to be done. Every day the Empire is making life Hell for countless people. I want to be able to make a difference!"
>She remained silent as you went on
“Please… if we don’t do something, then who—“
>”There are still others who possess the will to fight, warriors who would gladly die for what is right. Many Jedi still resist, perhaps there is another way I can assist.”
>Zecora stood up and walked over to a sack near her bedroll
>You watched her intently as she rummaged through her belongings before taking a small dish out and sitting back down with it
>Placing the metal dish on the ground in between the two of you, it suddenly sprang to life and revealed a blue hologram of a man
>He looked to be a Zabrak, a very tall one who was displayed without a shirt, revealing much of his muscular body
>You had never quite seen a Zabrak like this one before, as this one appeared to have a dark blue skin color with various black tribal markings all over his body
>Additionally, his cranial horns also appeared somewhat sharper than what you imagined was normal
>Overall, he had a pretty fierce appearance, and you noticed finally that he wore a very confident grin
>”A distant kinsman of mine, who the Empire has yet to find. A great teacher he may be, search for him on Dathomir and you will see.”
“This man is a Jedi?”
>Zecora nodded her head
“Who is he, and what’s he like?”
>”The Jedi you seek is named Iron Will, few can deny his martial skill. He is a boisterous man with an arrogant pride, but he is devoted to the Light Side.”
>>25834783
>That struck you as a pretty odd description for a Jedi
>All you really had to go off of for what the Jedi were like, aside from the legends you heard as a child and what you heard about during the Clone Wars, came from Luna
>Nothing Luna had taught you about the Jedi made it seem like they were supposed to be proud, arrogant, or boisterous
>Still, Zecora seems to put a lot of faith in this man, and he certainly looks impressive
“So, he’s on Dathomir? I think I’ve heard of it…”
>”Dathomir lies in a remote part of the Galaxy, the ignorant think it a place of barbarity. The Dark Side of the Force is strong there, and its people have suffered greatly from warfare.”
>While you were desperate to resume your training, the more Zecora went on about this the more daunting it all seemed
>Not only was this Iron Will sound a little off for a Jedi, but he was apparently staying on a pretty hostile world
>Still, you knew better than pretty much anyone else just how deceiving looks could be, and you certainly weren’t about to give up now
>Only one last question remained
“Do you really think he’d teach me?”
>Zecora chuckled as she deactivated the holographic device and handed it to you
>”It may take time for him to come around, but if you are persistent then I am sure you two will find common ground.”
>Glancing over the device, you were able to get it to display the picture of Iron Will again, as well as a picture of what you could only assume was the planet Dathomir
>A quick once over of the planet revealed that it was a vibrant world covered mostly in forests, swamps, and mountains
>Only a few small parts of the planet were marked as being populated, with nearly 90% of the world being left largely unexplored
>You figured that this would either make Iron Will very easy or very hard to find
>Smiling at her, you pocketed the device in your coat as you thanked her
>>25834803
“This means a lot to me. If there’s anything I could do to—“
>A loud blast resounded outside as a familiar cruel laugh echoed up to you
>Standing up, you saddled your body up against the door and stared out through the crack in the doorway
>”Hey Sunny! Guess who’s back!”
>Your eyes widened as you stared outside and saw a crowd of thugs standing in the middle of the street
>In front of the group stood a large red skinned reptilian man with razor sharp needle-like teeth
>He wore a suit of black leathery armor and carried a big sharp dagger as well as a large blaster pistol on his belt
“Garble…"
>Beside him stood what you recognized as an IG 86 Sentinel Droid with the Black Sun symbol emblazoned on its chasis, much like how you had it tattooed on your abdomen
>The droid’s cylindrical head twirled about as two blaster rifles rested in his metallic grip
>Also amongst this crew stood a burly Gamorrean with a large battle axe and a leather helmet who stared up at the crate with a dull expression
>Next to him stood a pair of Rodian twins who carried blaster pistols and wore matching dusters
>Hanging toward the back was a bald human man who wore a black eyepatch and carried what looked like a jury rigged shotgun
>Beside him was a human woman with short blonde hair cut military style whose eyes were covered by a black visored headset
>She hefted a large sniper rifle as she grinned up at you
>Garble took a step forward as he flipped his dagger in the air and chuckled loudly
>”Long time no see!”
>Taking out your blaster pistol, you glower down at the Barabel and snidely yell back
“I told you to never come after me again!”
>He snorted up at you
>”And you know what? After what happened last time, I actually considered calling it quits. Then I heard the bounty on your head was DOUBLED! Our boss misses you that much!"
>Unzipping your coat pocket, you brandished a spherical thermal detonator
>”Dead or alive, you’re coming with me!"
>>25834822
That's all for now! Next time's gonna be pretty balls to the walls.
Hope those of you who were hoping for a little more backstory on Sunset are liking this. Any feedback or criticism ya'll would have for me, I'd be happy to hear it!Holy shit is writing dialogue for Zecora a pain in the ass
>>25834863
I'll read it in a bit!It is a pain in the ass. That'spartiallywhy I killed her off in mine
>>25831430
Neat. I love the perportions, and you did the cockpit really well IMO
>>25832209
I really hope not. It'll be sad to see his story end, but I hope that it will only be as bad as when Sarge had to take a break for a while.
Is it possible for someone here to make pony versions of Finn, Rey, and Poe please
>>25834930I had a feeling that could have been a reason. Poor zebra
>>25835575
Alpha as fuck
It's been a while since I've been to this thread and I'm glad to see most of the cool dudes who I talkedand slightly stalked via lurkingare still here
>>25822743
I felt this way for a while but you actually inspired me to start sarge. I always tried to read your epics of adventures and thought that this was what I wanted to do; so I set out and triedeven though it ended abruptly because of my doubt and irl stuffwish I could've done more but my fear of failure and doubt let me stop tooThis is Max Pain but if you don't remember me that's cool, last I saw you was October in the monster thread
>>25836325
your vamp master anon story was rad and i stopped following the thread when you stopped update
>>25833575
Just feel like I could do better most of the time.
>>25836574
Sorry I couldn't write the rest, I didn't have any experience with interactive stories and I just had too much irl stuff that was going on at the time
>>25834863
It may be a pain in the ass but seeing where you left off, it should soon pass. Anyways I always love to see what people write for Zecora. I'm still reminded of the time when I once spoke in rhyme, then said, "and all of a sudden I'm Zecora" my friends had no clue what I was talking about but I enjoyed it.
Well /tv/ is shit place to discuss the film so I'll try my luck here.
Anyone elsedisappointed over Captain Phasma having a less significant role in the movie?
Also in a less spoilerish question, what was upwith C3P0's red arm? I missed the dialogue in that.
>>25838035I too was disappointed by Captain Phasma. She's basically the Boba Fett of this new trilogy.
>>25838181
Well at least Boba did something.
>>25838776
Stormtroopers in the movie were more...alive than the previous movies.Well, more entertaining than the main antagonists.
>>25838776
His callsign was TR-8R. He was the hero the galaxy deserved.
>>25838913
>mfw I actually took time to make this
>>25839264
I hope this guy gets some deepest lore treatment like the infamous ice cream guy from the old SW film
>>25838035
>Also in a less spoilerish question, what was upwith C3P0's red arm? I missed the dialogue in that.
we don't knowaccording to the visual companion, 3PO keeps quiet about it. Apparently it was from another droid's sacrifice
>>25839354
>ice cream guy
Even I don't know who this is
>>25839354
>Ice cream guy
we must know anon !
>>25839574
>>25839800
If only there was some way to search for information on the Internet...
>>25839574
>>25839800
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3zxesxhCbWA
>>25838818
TR-8R wouldn't work. Stormtrooper numbers start with two letters, then end with numbers. Let like TK-421 or FN-2187.
>>25838776
TRAITOR
>>25838776
>off by one
also TRAITOR
I want a big stormtrooper for Christmas.
>Spike followed the two Jedis out of Canterlot, Starlight and Sunset had promised to help protect the Dragons from the changling armies.
>"Me'sa not sure this is a good idea"
>Spike trips over a crystal set in the road, catching himself and tumbling down the path.
>"Oucha mesa got a bumba bad owie almost" He laughs and jumps back up.
>"Jutsa thank the Jedi mucha for helpsing the dragons.
"Master Sunset do we really have to take him with us"
>Spike shakes his head. "Is big bumbad jedi annoyed at's little mesa""Look it will be ok, besides Spike is our ally to the other dragons, they are not fond of pony folks.
Approaching the princesses Starlight bows in respect.
"My Princesses we need warriors to help us defend the Dragon island. The love organization is cutting off the island from trade and threaten to attack.
>Spike looks away. "Mesa not thinking they is going to help" He waves his hand as he talked. "Mesa need help and the Princess won't help""Spike don't worry, the royalty will always defend equestira, I am sure they will help"
The meeting of the royalty ends quickly with Cadance reading the ruling.
[bold] "We have decided and regret that the equestrian guards can not act against a member of the Equestiran royalty. Chrysilis promises that her children are nearly resting on the boarders and have no plans for war." She looks away. "I do wish I could have been more help, the princesses do not see this as a act of war." [bold/]
>"Mesa am so sorry" Spike snuggles up to Cadance.
>"Isa the weak supreme princess Mesa want to make you, elect you for leader"
>Spike heads to the front of the council. "Mesa no trust the Leader, me nosa have faith. Is'a with to elect Cadence for leader"
The uproar is soon interrupted as a letter pops infront of Spike.
>"Ohsa no, the Changlings attacks. Mesa have to get home."
I plan on having a nice Christmas update ready. I'll try to get as much done as possible.
>>25838776Traitor and a blasphemer
>>25838776
TRAITOR
>>25837031
its cool bro.
I don't know why I keep making these >>25842330
Hey guys. Now that the movie is out, things are getting back to normal, so I'm going to make it a point to update on Christmas Eve.
>>25838776
TRAITOR
>>25838776
TRAITOR
>>25838776
TRAITOR
>>25838776
TRAITOR.
Also, am I wrong in thinking that the whole movie felt way hamhanded?
>>25843068
The whole thing or just parts of it?spoiler spoilers
>>25843416
Most of it.
>>25843068
>Felt way hamhanded?
I thought it felt exactly like any Star Wars movie should. It was simple at a glance, complex at an in depth analysis, and entertaining no matter how I looked at it.
I had no real problems with the movie and I thought it was a very deserving intro into a new trilogy.
God I really want to see this movie
>>25844019
You'll get to it. Do you have plans to see it?
>>25836325
Hey, I'm glad I could inspire you. Is the monster thread still around?
I really need to get to those werewolf epilogues soon.
>>25844548
I promised my mom I would see it with her after Christmas. She's been saying how we don't get to see each other so often lately so we're both looking forward to spending time with each other.
Bump
>>25845403
I actually have no clue, I haven't been back here since October actuallyI don't know how I even stayed away that long in all honesty [\spoiler]
>>25846832
>Mfw I fucked up that spoiler
>>25846346
The Sith fighter still looks like shit. Would not Top Gun with.There is no finished story about fighter pilot Anon is there?
>>25846959
Finished? No, we did have one just start a little while ago about a Jedi pilot in the New Republic that was pretty cool
>>25846959
>Sith fighter still looks like shit
You're shit.
>>25847189
>So fragile it falls apart from just looking at it
>That exposed cockpit
>Less internal space than a TIE
I'm sorry Anon but my autism can't make me like it.
Christ page nine
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A1XG0hdXnRw&feature=youtu.be
GOOOOOOOOOOD
>>25847463
>less internal space than a TIE
That's frightening
>>25838818
Mass Effect had Marauder Shields. Star Wars has TR-8R.
>>25848212
Actually, TIE fighters have quite a bit of internal space. It's just the way the camera is angled in Ep 4 that makes it seem compact. Look at the actual sets for the TIE pilot seats.
>>25848212
GOOOOOOOD
>>25848212
>this video
Okay I've been neglecting you guys for long enough. I'm writing right now, and I promise to have update for you guys later today.
I'll also have a little recap for those who can't remember where we are at.
>>25851279
Sounds good! Looking forward to it
Work, work, work, work, work, work.
>>25852120
http://imgur.com/PMlzn52
have this for your troubles.
>>25852344
Well then....................
Back to writing.
>>25852344
Man he is REALLY into it
>>25853900
>>25852471
zank you
>>25853872
>"How did I end up Cuckolding my Jedi master? I just wanted to have space adventures".
>tfw you dont know if you should draw or go watch the force wakes up by yourself. I'll just do nothing
>>25855097
Well I got something for you to do. Read this update. I'll start off with a bit of a recap.
> When you wake up again you find yourself on a bed situated in the medical bay. How long had you been out?
> Shuffling to the edge of the bed you hop off and stretch a little bit. Amazingly you felt great considering you had a near death experience.
> Looking to the other beds you notice that Snowdrop wasn’t among the patients. If she wasn’t here where was she? You try asking the other patients, but receive no help.
> She had to be here somewhere. There’s no way she could have been released before you. You head to the backroom where they keep the Kolto tanks, and sure enough there she was. Floating in one of the large vats of liquid medicine.
Redheart: “Glad to see you’re up and about.”
> “Thanks, but I’m more concerned about her than myself.”
Redheart: “Well you needn’t worry. She’s suffered some second degree burns, but that’s the worst of it. She’ll be good as new in a few days.”
> “I’m glad. Can you call me if she wakes up?”
Redheart: “Not a problem. However, I want you to take it easy as well. You suffered some minor burns yourself. I don’t want you doing any strenuous work for the next two days. Doctors orders.”
> “Understood. Thanks again.”
> With that out of the way you had a decision to make. Report to the bridge, or try and find your friends.
> As much as you wanted to talk to everyone it would probably be best if you checked in with the masters.
> Before making it to the bridge it quickly became apparent why Master Redheart didn’t want you out and about. You hadn’t walked more than a couple hundred yards, yet it felt like you had just ran a marathon. First thing after this you were going to bed. No shower, no meal, just some good old rest.
> The command deck was surprisingly vacant for the amount of excitement that had gone on today. The only people you knew that were here were: Cadence, Vinyl, and Luna.
>>25855159
Vinyl: “Good to see you on your toes again kid. How you feeling.”
> “Like a Gamorrean forced to go on a diet, but I plan on going to bed right after this. I just wanted to check-in with you guys.”
Luna: “Your devotion to your duty is admirable young one. Regrettably, we don’t have much to bring you up to speed about. The enemy fleet retreated soon after Darth Nihilus escaped.”
> “What about the ship? Did you find anything suspicious?”
Cadence: “No, which is really puzzling. We expected to find something, but everything seems to be in order.”
Vinyl: “I guess she just really wanted to find Twilight.”
> “Did she end up finding out her identity?”
Cadence: “Thankfully no, so she’s safe for now. Still, when they do find out about her she will definitely become a high priority target for the Empire.”
> “I still find it hard to believe she took that huge a risk without having any other ulterior motives.”
Luna: “That is a good attitude to have. We should remain vigilant for the time being; until we can determine with a one hundred percent certainty that nothing has changed.”
> “Great, guess I’m not needed here anymore. If you’ll excuse me.”
> Right before exiting the room a thought comes to mind. Which makes you feel like an idiot for not mentioning earlier.
> “Master Luna I forgot to mention. Snowdrop is in stable condition down in the medbay. She suffered a few burns, but is otherwise in good health. She should be back to her old self in a few days.”
Luna: “Thank you Anonymous. Your concern is greatly appreciated.”
> You bow in respect before departing once more. It certainly was a mystery. Attempting to infiltrate a ship filled with Jedi Masters. Then, to leave without any hints of sabotage. Something was definitely off.
> These thoughts rattled off in your head. Causing you to lose track of where you were. Before you knew it you were halfway across the ship. Way past your room.
>>25855178
> Maybe you should take it easy for a little while, and let the masters handle it for now. If they needed you you’ll be ready.
> Finally arriving at your destination you open the door and immediately flop down onto your bed. What a day.
> The next morning you awake to the feeling of being groggy and stiff. You check your chronometer and see that you gotten about eight hours of sleep. A little longer than you wanted, but you were supposed to be taking it easy.
> You shuffle around in your bed a little bit when you notice Twilight sitting in a chair fast asleep. Wait was she there when you went to bed? Couldn’t be, she would have said something to you if she was.
> She looked awfully uncomfortable the way she was situated in that chair. Gradually picking yourself up out of bed you lift her up and lay her in your bed. Pulling the sheets over her.
> She must have been worried after hearing what happened to you. It wasn’t that serious, but still it warmed your heart to know she was concerned for you.
> Then, a mighty roar coming from your stomach reminded you that it had been forever since the last time you ate.
> You thought about heading straight for the mess hall, but you took one whiff of yourself and decided you should probably bathe first. Once that was done you put on some new robes and leave a note for Twilight. Hopefully she would come around soon enough to get it.
> As you walk the hallways you anticipate running into someone you know, but are disappointed when you don’t. Perhaps this would be a good time for you to mingle among the troops. Most of your friends were Jedi after all. You didn’t exactly have a lot of opportunities to meet the average person.
> After claiming a tray and stuffing it to the gills with everything you can get your hands on you begin to look for an open seat.
> In one of the far corners you recognize the patterns and colors of the troops under Shining Armor’s command and begin to head over.
>>25855191
> “Excuse me gentleman is this seat.- Captain!”
BB: “Anonymous. I mean sir. What are you doing here?”
> “Looking to stuff my face. Do you mind if I sit here?”
BB: “Not at all. Go ahead.”
> You could tell by his demeanor and the expressions of those at the table that it WAS a problem.
> “Feel free to call me Anon. Should I call you Burly or Biceps?”
BB: “The men call me Big B for short.”
> “Well then Big B why don’t you introduce me to your friends.”
BB: “Ah sure. This is Jacks, Diana, Fitch, Kaleb, and Rolf.”
> All of the people at the people were human. Except for Rolf. Who was a Duros.
> “Nice to meet all of you. Please continue as you were. I’d hate to ruin the mood with my presence. Just pretend like I’m not even here.”
> Quickly stuffing your face you let the others go back to their previous conversations. It would be best to ease yourself in and only give your input when the chance arose. However, it’s been several years since you’ve talked to normal people, so your social skills may be a little rusty.
> After a few minutes of listening in to their conversations you were able to determine several things about these people.
> Captain Burly Biceps loved to talk about his tales of combat. Adding a series of interesting dialogues between him and your Master Shining Armor.
> Kaleb and Rolf were close good friends that had been serving together for a long time. Becoming very close and trusting of one another.
> Fitch's mannerisms towards Diana hinted at a romantic interest, and a quick peek with the Force confirmed your theory.
> While Jacks was the clown of the group. Loving to make light of the situation and making others laugh. You'll get along great with him.
> After receiving another large tray of food. You decide it was time to make your move.
Jacks: "Geez Anon didn't you just finish an entire entree?"
> "Yeah, but that was just the appetizer. This is the main course."
>>25855208
Jacks: "Where the heck do you put all that food man?”
> “Is it really that much? This is actually less than I normally get?”
Jacks: “You’re messing with me. Even a Hutt couldn’t eat that much."
> “Really? Care to make a wager on that?”
Jacks: “Okay Jedi you’re on. If you can finish what you have there plus everything else on this table I’ll give you 1,000 credits.”
> That’s a little more than you were bargaining for, but you’ve never been one to back down from a challenge. Especially when food was involved.
> “I’d love to. Sadly, I don’t have 1,000 credits on me. Can I wager something else?”
Jacks: “It have to be something really good if you don’t have any credits on you.”
> Maybe you do. It was a terrible idea, but hey you were the one who wanted to bond with the soldiers.
> “How about this. If I lose I’ll give you my lightsaber.”
> Everybody’s jaws went slack after hearing that. Giving you looks of disbelief.
> “Don’t believe me? Here.”
> Taking the weapon from your belt you set it on the table.
> “I know it’s rude to bring weapons to the dinner table, but I’m hoping you can all make an exception in my case.”
Jacks: "Kid are one gutsy son of a gun. Deal.”
> You shake on it, and begin tackling the massive task in front of you.
> “I forgot to mention that lessons don’t come with it. Neither do Republic benefits for lost limbs.”
Jacks: “That’s fine by me. It’s just a sword I think I can manage.”
> “You think so? If I had a credit for every time I heard that back at the Jedi Temple I would have enough credits to afford this bet.”
Jacks: "Sure you would. Now hurry up so I can start showing off my new toy. And don't try and use any of your Jedi tricks to help you eat all of that food."
> "Trust me it doesn’t work that way. If it did I would never stop eating."
>>25855233
> You finish downing your second tray, and look at Jacks with content.
> "Well how's that for you?"
Jacks: "Not so fast. I said everything on this table. That includes our dishes as well."
> "Wait what? That wasn't part of the deal."
Jacks: "Oh no I said specifically EVERYTHING on the table."
BB: "You don't have to do this Anon. We'll be sure Jacks pays up."
> "No captain. He's right. I can do this"
> You say that, but you know you're reaching your limit. Even though most of their trays were mostly eaten you knew it wouldn't be an easy task.
> All the commotion had attracted a small crowd that started to gather around your table to cheer you on. Never thought this was how your day would turn out to be like.
Twilight: "Anon what are you doing?"
> You turn around to she the purple Twi'lek hovering over you.
> "Participating in an eating contest."
Twilight: "Okay. May I ask why?"
> "These fools doubt my powers, so I'm giving them a demonstration."
> She sighs. Pinching the bridge of her nose contemplating on what to say next.
Twilight: "Anon sometimes I worry about you."
> "I know. I gathered that when you came to my room last night."
> The crowd instantly roars into a flurry of gasps, cheers, and other mixed emotions.
Twilight: "No! It's not what you think."
> "Too late now. The secret's out."
Twilight "Anon stop it! They're going to start spreading rumors."
> "Don't worry. As long as there's no truth behind them there's nothing to worry about."
Twilight: "That's not the point Anon. If my brother finds out."
> "He's my master too Twilight. He trusts my word. If I tell him that there's nothing going on between us he'll believe me, and if he doesn't you can always tell him as well."
>>25855253
> Twilight let's out a sigh of defeat. Letting you return to your mission.
> "Also, Twilight if it's not too much to ask can you meditate for me during this battle?"
Twilight : "You know I'm not going to do that."
> "Yeah, just thought I'd ask."
> After another half hour of forcing down what was left you were finally done. The last few bites were actually painful to stomach, but you did it.
> You lay flat on the floor completely immobile. The crowd explodes with a standing ovation by your triumph.
Rolf: "I've got to hand it to you Anon that was really impressive."
> "Thanks."
> Everyone gives you their congratulations. All except Diana. Who was nowhere in sight. She must have left having better things to do.
Twilight: "Well, I guess this means you're feeling alright after taking those injuries from yesterday."
> "Actually I feel worse."
Twilight: "Well you brought this upon yourself, so you have no one to blame-"
> "But myself yeah I know. Totally worth it though."
Twilight: "Alright mister tough guy let's get you out of here."
> "I don't think that's a good idea. If I move I think I'll throw up."
Twilight: "Then what are you going to do just lay there until you feel better?"
> "That was the plan."
Twilight: "Fine I'll leave you then. You know where to find me."
> "We'll do."
> Maybe it wasn't the smartest thing take on that challenge. Oh well, live and learn you suppose. Best thing you could now was take a nap to help burn off these calories.
> Just as you are about to doze off you hear your comlink buzz with a message. It was from Master Redheart saying that Snowdrop had regained consciousness.
> Perfect. You promised to be there when Snowdrop came to, but now you find yourself in this situation. You had to make it. Even if it killed you, and it very well might.
>>25855266
> After what seemed like an eternity. You finally made it to the medical center, and without heaving once. Thankfully.
> Slowly making your way to the back you see Snowdrop out of the Kolto tank and in a hoverchair. Accompanied by masters Redheart and Luna.
Redheart: “There you are Anon. What’s the matter? Are you feeling alright?”
> “I’m fine. Just ate too much.”
Luna: “Yes well. As you can see my padawan is doing just fine. You’d be wise to get some rest yourself.”
> “Yeah you may be right, but I’ve never claimed to be wise. Plus, they’re is something I wanted to say to her.”
Redheart: “Very well. Go ahead then and say it, but be quick about it. I still have to administer some minor treatments.”
> “Actually I was hoping to say it to her in private.”
> Both masters look at each other perplexed. Before finally deciding to give you two some time alone.
Snowdrop: “What is it Anon? You seem troubled.”
> “I...I just wanted to say that I’m sorry.”
Snowdrop: “Sorry? For what? These injuries aren’t your fault.”
> “I know but, I still feel like I failed you. I was completely fine after what happened with Darth Nihilus, but you. You suffered a lot worse than I did.”
Snowdrop: “Anon you shouldn’t beat yourself up over things you can’t control. You’re too nice a person to be self-loathing like this. Besides, I heard what you did. If it weren’t for you I wouldn’t be here at all.”
> You knew she had a point. In fact, she was exactly right, but it still didn’t make you feel any better.
Snowdrop: “Tell you what. Let’s go for a walk. That should help ease your mind.”
> “You can’t what about your injuries?”
Snowdrop: “Master Redheart exaggerates a little bit. I’m fine.”
> She quickly jumps out of her chair, and back flips right back into it. Well what do you know.
>>25855278
> Master Redheart wasn’t happy about it, but after arguing for a short while she finally gives in. Snowdrop can be very persuasive when she wants to be.
Snowdrop: “Feels good to be back on my feet.”
> “I imagine so.”
Snowdrop: “Say Anon. Did the masters end up finding all the bombs on the ship before they were detonated?”
> “I’m surprised you haven’t heard. There weren’t any bombs to be found.”
Snowdrop: “What! That’s impossible. Was that Sith Lord’s really to just find and kill Twilight?”
> “Apparently so. The masters think it’s possible that Darth Nihilus left us some other type of present, but we have no way of knowing for sure.”
Snowdrop: “I wasn’t aware that a skill like Battle Meditation was so valuable.”
> “Neither did I. Thankfully she didn’t discover Twilight’s identity when she was here. However, it’s only a matter of time before they do.”
Snowdrop: “Do you think she’ll be ready?”
> To be honest you weren’t entirely sure. Then, you thought about what you’ve been through together.
> “I wouldn’t worry about it too much. Twilight isn’t the same bookworm that sleeps in the archives anymore. She’s a full fledged Jedi now. We all are. Whatever the future has planned for us I’m sure we’ll be ready for it.”
Snowdrop: “I hope so. The Dark side grows stronger everyday, and the Republic is crumbling. The more this war drags on the less likely we are to win it.”
> “Yeah. If we can just keep winning battles like this it should be a piece of cake.”
Snowdrop: “You forget that nearly half the Jedi Council was here, and we only just barely won.”
> “Even so. We can’t give up hope. We’re Jedi after all. We’re supposed to be the beacons of hope for all lifeforms that call out for peace.”
> She giggles a little bit. Before responding.
Snowdrop: “You make it sound like we’re living in a fairy tale of good versus evil.”
>>25855309
> “We essentially are. Warriors who wield a mystical power fighting for control of an entire galaxy. If I wasn’t in this position I’d say it sounds a lot like fantasy too.”
Snowdrop: “Then, maybe one day they’ll tell stories of our deeds.”
> “Yeah, long after we’ve become one with the Force.”
Snowdrop: “What does that mean?”
> “Huh?”
Snowdrop: “To become one with the Force?”
> “You honestly think I know?”
Snowdrop: “No. I mean. What do you think happens when we die?”
> “Well, before I was a Jedi I used to think people just came in and out of existence with no real reason or purpose. Now, I know there’s something more to it, but I just don’t know what. The possibilities are endless. What about you?”
Snowdrop: “I’m not sure. I want to believe that we’ll become one with the universe. In a way where we help form new stars, and create life on distant planets.”
> “But you’re not sure if that’s true or not.”
> She didn’t say it, but the uncertainty in her eyes were all the conformation you needed.
Snowdrop: “The masters always tell us that there’s some greater meaning behind everything, but sometimes I think the only reason they say that is because they don’t know for themselves.”
> “They’re old and wise, but they don’t know everything. I believe they simply suspect a greater purpose for everything; because, of their attunement to the Force.”
Snowdrop: “I wish it was a lot clearer. It would make me feel a lot better if I could just-”
> “See the universe as it truly is?”
> You stop for a moment. Completely flabbergasted by the stupidity of what you just said.
> “I’m sorry I didn’t mean anything by that.”
Snowdrop: “No it’s alright. I’ve come to terms with seeing the world like this.”
> “What is it like? If you don’t mind me asking.”
Snowdrop: “Well, it’s a little hard to explain, but I’ll try the best I can.”
>>25855332
Snowdrop: “Imagine everything you see covered by a dark veil. Where nothing stands out. Just simple outlines.”
> “It sounds dreadful.”
Snowdrop: “I thought so too. That is, until I learned to see again. Thanks to the Force everything has more color to it. People, plants, animals. Even nonliving things like this ship. I can’t even remember what the world looked like before I was blind. To me the world has always looked like this.”
> “That’s nice but I’m having a hard time visualizing it. Okay, how about this. What do I look like? Can you describe me to me? If that makes sense.”
Snowdrop: “Sure.”
> She stops and turns to look at you. Her blank pale eyes examining you up and down. Before giving you a small smile.
Snowdrop: “I can see that you have a warm and gentle heart. Who cares deeply for those around you. Even if it’s people you’ve never met before. Who’s constantly trying to get on everyone’s good side. Even if it requires you to be quite silly at times.”
> “If you’re trying to butter me up you’re doing a real great job of it. I meant visually. What can you see? Colors, facial features, that sort of thing.”
Snowdrop: “You glow with an exuberant blue aura. Much brighter than anyone else I’ve ever seen. Your face is slightly elongated with a bit of stubble around your neck and chin. That extends along your jaw line and around your mouth.”
> “Wow that’s amazing. It’s as if you’ve never lost your sight.”
Snowdrop: “Thank you. I’ve had my whole life to learn how to use it. I’m glad that it’s amounted to something.”
> “Do you think you could teach me how to do that.”
Snowdrop: “That I’m not sure. When I first tapped into the Force this sight just came to me. I don’t know anything about how to teach it to other people.”
> “Could you at least try sometime. It sounds like an incredibly useful thing to have. Plus, I enjoy your company.”
>>25855345
Snowdrop: “Thank you. I feel the same way. I suppose it couldn’t hurt to try. Let’s try and get together sometime.”
> “I’d like that.”
> Both you and Snowdrop begin making your way back to medical center. Making small talk all the while.
> “Then I said to her. ‘Trixie you know you can’t use mind tricks on other Jedi right.’ Which she replied with. ‘You dare question our powers. Then, we have no choice but to show you.’”
> “She tried. Needless to say it didn’t work, but I decided to pull a prank on her and pretend that it did.”
Snowdrop: “Oh my gosh did she ever find out?”
> “Hold on I’m getting to that. Her first couple of commands were mostly about singing her praises. Shocker. After that she had me perform a few acrobatic stunts. Nothing to difficult. It wasn’t until she asked me to make her something to eat that I asked her. ‘Would my fair mistress also wish for me to bend over backwards and say uncle.’”
> Both of you burst out laughing.
Snowdrop: “She must have hated you after that.”
> “Yeah. Understandably she didn’t talk to me for the rest of the day, but she got over it. She made me promise not to mention it to anyone else or she’d kill me. Can I trust you to keep a secret?”
Snowdrop: “I think I can...do that.”
> That slight pause was rather suspicious.
> “Is something the matter. Do you feel like you have to tell other people about it. If so, then it has been rather nice knowing you Snowdrop.”
Snowdrop: “No it’s not that. It’s that woman over there. Something’s wrong.”
> You look over the way she is facing and see a tall slender woman with long silvery hair walking away from you down the hallway. She looks familiar, but you couldn’t quite put your finger on it.
> “When you say wrong with her what exactly do you mean?”
Snowdrop: “I mean it’s red. Her aura. It’s filled with the desire to kill.”
>>25855357
> “Are you sure? I mean. I know you’re the expert on the subject, but are you certain that it’s not just residual feelings, and not something here and now?”
Snowdrop: “I’m positive. We have to stop her.”
> Before you could say anything else she takes off after her.
> “Wait we should approach this delicately.”
> Too late. She was going to stop her one way or the other.
> “Come back.”
> As you round the corner you see that she’s stopped her. Glaring at her with extreme prejudice.
Snowdrop: “Where do you think you’re going?”
???: “Is there a problem?”
Snowdrop: “Yeah. You.”
> “Hold on a sec.”
> As you approach. You realize why you recognized her.
> “Diana. Sorry to bother you.”
Snowdrop: “Wait you know her?”
Diana: “Hello Anon. Nice to see you again. Was there something you needed?”
> “Not really. I just wanted to ask why you left before I showed my eating prowess to Jacks.”
Diana: “I had simply finished my meal and had other things to do. Is that so wrong?”
> No, not at all. May I also ask where you’re headed now?”
Diana: “To my room. Did I do something wrong?”
> “No.”
Snowdrop: “Yes.”
> You look at Snowdrop for a second before pulling her off to the side.
> “Listen I know you feel strongly about this, but you can’t just go around accusing people of wrong doing without proof. Even if they aren’t the nicest people in the world.”
Snowdrop: “But she’s dangerous. She could be up to no good if she hasn’t already done something already.”
> “Okay how about this. I’ll ask around and have somebody look over her for the time being. Will that suffice.”
Snowdrop: “I suppose.”
> “Sorry about that Diana. You’re free to go.”
>>25855392
> She leaves like nothing ever happened. Leaving you with a much different Snowdrop than before.
Snowdrop: “You honestly can’t sense anything from her?”
> “Not really. There’s a hint of concern, but that’s about it.”
Snowdrop: “Don’t you think that’s odd for a normal soldier. Not being able to read their inner emotions.”
> “Maybe, perhaps she’s just better at masking her emotions than others. Plus, she’s a woman. I’ve never been really good at reading them.”
Snowdrop: “Anon this is serious!”
> “I know relax. I’ll get somebody to watch over her. Don’t worry.”
Snowdrop: “I hope you’re right about this.”
> So do you. You’ve never seen this side of Snowdrop before. It was disconcerting to say the least.
> When you got back you didn’t mention anything to masters Luna or Redheart. Instead you promptly left looking for a certain soldier’s room.
> When you found it you knock before entering.
> “Hey Fitch got a sec?”
Fitch: “Yeah Anon what’s up?”
> “I have a favor to ask you. You’re not going to like it, but it’s vital that you do it.”
Fitch: “I’m listening.”
> “I need you to ask Diana to be your girlfriend.”
> Fitch physically recoils. Utterly floored by what you’re asking him.
Fitch: “Look Anon I’m not sure how a Jedi thinks a relationship works, but you can’t just ask someone-”
> “I know you have feelings for her, and don’t assume what I know and don’t know. Besides, there’s more to what I’m asking you than simply trying to make your life more pleasant. Consider it an order as your superior.”
>>25855423
> “Can I count on you.”
Fitch: “Sure no problem.”
> “I know this isn’t how you wanted to do this, but I wouldn’t have asked if I thought there was any other choice.”
Fitch: “It’s fine. Nothing like the fate of the universe hanging in the balance to motivate you to ask your dream girl out.”
> “It would be romantic given a different setting.”
Fitch: “Yeah I guess. One question though. When you talked about knowing and not knowing about relationships what did you mean by that?”
> “It’s best if you don’t read to much into it. Now I’m going to give you my personal scramble set for my comlink. You are to contact me if you hear or see anything suspicious got it?”
Fitch: “Roger that.”
> “I wish I could give you some advice, but as you previously stated as a Jedi I have no personal experience in this area. So I’ll let you get to it then.”
> As the door closes behind you it dawns on you that you may have been a little too protective of that subject. Like Twilight mentioned soldiers were quick to start rumors. The best thing you could do now was to put your faith in them.
> “Now I know why you were so paranoid before.”
> Speaking of which you hadn’t really talked to any of your friends today. Guess now was a good a time as any for that.
SA: “Anon. Come in Anon.”
> Or not.
> “Yeah master I read you.”
SA: “Can you meet me in the gymnasium. It’s time for your daily training regiment.”
> “I’m on my way.”
> You were pretty surprised to hear that a military ship even had a gymnasium. It made sense the more you thought about it though. Troops have to stay in shape somehow.
Well there you go. Was hoping to get a little more in before I had to stop, but here's where I decided to cut it off. I'll try to finish off the next sequence in the next day or two before Christmas.
Until then, thoughts on the writing style, speed of the story, grammar, characters in general, and anything are encouraged. Whatever makes a better story to you guys I want to hear about it.
>>25855480
I feel that most of the time the story is just an excuse to have character dialogue about not much in particular making it quite tedious getting through the text, besides some verb tense errors it was alright.
>>25855480
My biggest complaint is your use of script text (having [Name]: when dialogue happens. It just makes it feel like it doesn't flow.
>>25855480
It sucks that you write the most but you suck
>>25856527
Can you at least try to give criticism instead of being a child?
>>25855480
I mostly enjoyed the interaction between Anon and Snowdrop, particularly the part where Snowdrop was describing how she sees, though I kind of agree that it was a little too heavy on dialogue alone. I think your writing would improve if you described more of how Anon feels and how the characters seem to react to one another, rather than just having them say exactly how they feel.
I also agree with>>25856524
When you're trying to write a scene that has multiple characters actively speaking with one another then I can see why you'd put the name of the person speaking but when it's just one character interacting with another I don't think there's much of a reason to write like that. It's not really something that bothers me or makes it difficult for me to read your story, but you may want to consider relying less on it.
>>25856198
Good to know.
>>25856524
I can fix that. It's like >>25857124 said I mostly do that when I have multiple characters talking at the same time, so I'll try to keep that type of text for only those situations.
>>25856527
What >>25856698 said.
>>25857124
I try to give a lot of description when talking about the environment and character interaction. Sometimes that translates to entire posts being 80-90% description. I wanted to see how the story compared when I wrote mostly dialogue, and I agree that more description is required.
With that in mind I will strive to make an adjustment in the next update.
>>25855208
3 top teir qt3.14s in one picture, noice.
Bump
Saw the movie earlier today. I think i'm going to hold the opinion that A New Hope will be remembered as the superior story when it's compared to The Force Awakens years down the line.
Also I think the EU and Bioware's story telling have spoiled me in terms of good star wars stories. I kept thinking the Star Killer is super shitty in comparison to the Death Star Mk 1 & 2. I attributed that to the first ordered being a weaker version of the Empire but since they carved out the equator of a world to build their gun I think that went out the window.
JJ Abram's give the story a shitty gimped Death Star. The death star was self contained, it could enter hyperspace and didn't need to drain stars to blow planets up.
Kylo isC3POs fatherand kills hisdaughter Obi-wan Kanobi
>>25855480
Sorry for the delayed response.
I love it. I completely forgot Snowdrop was blind until this update, but I'm glad that it's an important detail.
>>25856198
I kind of like this component. The small talk about nothing really builds some of the characters, and it makes the story feel more real. As long as it doesn't get TOO much, which i don't think this update was, it's a good addition IMO.
>>25860077
Honestly, I feel that it's too awkward having full fledged Jedi knights being quirky and silly and everyone else just seems to go along with it? It does build character, granted. The sequence with twilight was good, endearing even. But you could do without the eating beat that was just out of place and you could easily introduce those characters with a simple conversation.
>>25859690
>this image
what the fuck
and, strangely, pic related
>>25860417
Technically they're padawans, but I see what you're getting at.
I try to portray the padawans as the light-hearted characters that show compassion to others; while the Jedi Masters are the stiffs that have all the knowledge. Except, for Cadence and Shining Armor obviously.
I know not everyone likes this dynamic, but it's what I'm running with. Conventional Jedi conflicting with those who don't take themselves as seriously.
>>25861060
I think I understand that. It's sort of similar to how I wrote that one scene toward the end of Act I of Inquisitor Anon where my own characters did pretty much nothing else except spend time together having fun on Coruscant.
I don't really think any of my characters are very light-hearted, but a lot of them do secretly harbor a more compassionate side to their personalities, as opposed to characters like the Grand Inquisitor and the Emperor who serve as authority figures they rebel against.
>>25861323
I used this when I was writing the Sith in my story. I think my problem was that I showed that side first, which made them seem soft.
There is too many Jedi and not enough fighter jocks here.
>>25862291
It works for Pandem though, in that we've seen him act like that before while doing more nefarious things that contradict the demeanor he puts on, but in the case of the other Sith Lords I'd agree on that.
We've only seen a little bit of them so far though, so it's not like any of us can really tell what they're going to be like just yet.
episode9 bump
BummpPlease Sarge don't leave us blueballed like this after your last update
>>25865939
Looks like it's up tosome one other than meto keep this thread alive.
>>25838776
TRAITOR
>>25866025
Are you seriously gonna have one of them as dead carcass in the drawing?
I might be able to post an update later tonight during Skeleton hours and follow up with where I left off with Sunset. If not then it will have to wait until after Christmas.
>>25866291
Yes, Why shouldn't I?
>>25866315
Best part of waking up is a nice cup of green in the morning
Well guys im gonna attempt to watch the star wars holiday special
pray that i dont kill myself,
>>25867026
Good luck Anon. I, on the other hand picked up Jedi Outcast and Jedi Academy, this should be funJust after I finish catching up on Onii Chan's story, so far been reading one pastebin per day
>>25838776
TRAITOR
>>25859541
Please use spoiler tags - be considerate for those who haven't seen the movie.
>>25834822
>A cool silence fell over the slum as you looked down at the thugs assembled in the street
>”This Garble is an old friend I presume?”
>Glancing back across the room, you watched as Zecora stood up from the floor and walked to your side
>She pensively gazed outside through the crack in the doorway while awaiting your answer
“We were… comrades. I wouldn’t say we were ever friends…”
>You shuddered as two stray blaster bolts pierced through the wall of the cargo crate, narrowly missing you and Zecora
>”I suggest you leave here very soon.”
>”HOLD YOUR FIRE DAMMIT! I want her ALIVE!”
>Looking back outside, you saw Garble stand in front of the Rodian twins
>”^Cool it red, she’s worth plenty dead.^”
>Garble clenched his claw around the two Rodian’s throats as he raised them off their feet
>”If ANYONE here’s going to kill Sunset, it’s going to be me. Got it?”
>As the two Rodian’s eagerly shook their heads at him, the IG-86 Sentinel Droid’s head twirled about and emitted a series of clicking noises
>”This unit detects that multiple civilians are currently monitoring us from their domiciles.”
>The man with the eye-patch chuckled as he hefted his shotgun up
>”HEY! What are you looking at?!”
>Your heart began to race as he cruelly blasted his shotgun up at several of the cargo crates
“You piece of—!”
>Zecora laid her hand on your DL-44 blaster pistol just as you were about to aim outside and blast them
>”I wish you luck in defeating your foes, but please lead them away from these people’s homes.”
>Realizing that you didn’t necessarily want anyone around here to get hurt in the crossfire, you lowered your blaster and nodded at her
>>25869207
“Zecora, thanks again. If you ever need anything from me then look me up.”
>The strange lady chuckled as she laid a hand over your shoulder
>”I imagine you will be hard to find, but I will keep that in mind.”
>You grinned at her as she stepped away and took a meditative seat on the mat on the floor
>”May the Force be with you.”
>Nodding your head at her, you turned back toward the street as you primed your thermal detonator
“Hey Garble!”
>You saw him drop the two Rodians to the ground as he glared back at you
“Did you tell your new friends about what happened to the last crew you put together to hunt me down?”
>As the group of thugs and bounty hunters turned towards Garble, you rolled the thermal detonator down the steps
>“Hold on, its not like… AW SITHSPIT!”
>The Gammorean squealed as a massive booming explosion rocked the neighborhood, lighting up the inside of the cargo crate as you tore the door open and summersaulted off of the steps
>Without even risking a glance back at them, you sprinted away down a side street
>”GET HER!”
>A hail of deafening blaster fire thundered toward you as you ducked behind a crate, the bolts piercing through the walls as you stumbled along
>All around you, various people busted inside cargo crates or scurried along behind barrels as they sought cover
>You could only hope that you could lead these guys as far away from these people as you could, although you knew trying to find a place to fight where no bystanders would get hurt wouldn’t be easy
>Sliding to a stop, you beheld a large grated tunnel entrance just down an alleyway
>Glancing back the way you came, you now sprinted down the alley as you brandished your blaster
>Blowing as many holes in the grate as you could, you trucked through it and staggered inside the tunnel as you continued to run
>>25869230
>Whether it was the Force, or just that bad feeling you get sometimes, you knew that your pursuers weren’t far behind you
>Sprinting along for another few minutes, you eventually slowed to a walk as you raised a hand up and leaned against the tunnel wall
>As you slowly regained your breath, your eyes fell upon the tribal markings on your hand
>Symbols tattooed to your skin when you were young, which you proudly accepted as a sign of your toughness and your loyalty to Black Sun
>Now they felt more like big targets that screamed ‘Shoot here’
>That bad feeling of yours intensified as you twisted around and saw a glowing light on your chest
“Ah HELL!”
>Bolting to the ground, you narrowly dodged a thin ray of light that burned through the wall beside you
>”I’ve got her! She’s over here!”
>Scurrying into an alcove, you aimed your blaster down the tunnel and returned fire
>She was pretty far away, but you were a good shot
>”ACK”
>Your eyes widened as a blaster bolt pierced through her visor, shooting right between her eyes
>Her body collapsed against the wall as her rifle clattered to the floor
>Jumping up to your feet, you sprinted away as blaster fire flew past you
>You were pretty sure you had to have killed at least one of them back there with that thermal detonator, but it was a little different actually seeing one of them die
>It had been a while since you killed someone, but not nearly long enough for your tastes
>Seeing a light at the end of the tunnel, you ran as hard as you possibly could
>Just when the grate came into view, the man with the eye patch suddenly sprang forward
>”You’re mine!”
“AAAAAAHHH!”
>Throwing your hand forward, the man was tossed away from you by a blast of energy that erupted from the palm of your hand
>His deafening shotgun blast riddled the wall next to you as you tackled him against the grate
>The grate failed to hold, sending the two of you flying through it to the outside
>>25869238
>You almost felt like you were in the middle of a dream as you fell down, but pain quickly snapped you back to reality as you hit the ground
>Or the table to put it more accurately
>Your body unceremoniously smashed against a table, sending broken glass and alcohol all over
“ohhhhh…”
>Your eyes fluttered open and you stared up into several very surprised faces
>As your vision cleared, you stared up and saw the tunnel entrance you had fallen out of just over ten feet up in the air
>Stumbling to your feet, you waved your blaster at the ground while looking about and getting your bearings
>It appeared you had fallen into some kind of open air cantina
>Wherever this place was appeared much brighter and louder than most of what you had seen on Nar Shaddaa
>”Hey! This your friend?”
>Glancing at the floor, you saw the man you fell through the grate with slowly clamber up to his knees and reach for his shotgun
>Gritting your teeth, you rushed up to him
“YAH!”
>Your boot crashed against his face and sent him sprawling on his back
>”Ha! Guess not…”
>Your chest heaved up and down as you stared at the man, his nose clearly broken as blood dripped down his face
>Taking a deep breath, you holster your blaster pistol and reach down for the man’s shotgun
>”Sunset Shimmer has been located!”
>Jerking your head up, you saw the Sentinel Droid standing on the edge of the tunnel
>He raised both of his blaster rifles at you
>”Target Acquired!”
>Leveling the shotgun up high, you blasted the droid back just as several blaster bolts crashed around you
>All Hell broke loose in the cantina, with many of the patrons taking cover or swarming out of the exit
>>25869249
>Shoving through the crowd whilst keeping your head down, you hopped over a waist high fence and ran out into the streets with your shotgun in your grasp
>Stealing a glance back, you saw several figures drop down from the tunnel into the cantina
“Damnit!”
>You looked forward and came to an abrupt halt In front of a lone red swoop bike
>Throwing the shotgun over your shoulder by its sling, you hopped aboard the swoop and busted it open
“Come on come on!”
>Scrambling with the wires, you messed with the bike as much as you could as more blaster fire and screams erupted from behind you at the cantina
>”SUNSEEEEEET!!!”
>With a bright spark amidst the wires, the swoop roared to life and rose several feet up in the air with you on it
>A loud crash resounded behind you as Garble busted through the fence with a blaster riddled IG 86 and the Rodian Twins following closely behind
>Raising your blaster pistol, you got off a few shots which sent them running for cover while you zoomed away down the street
>You hit the gas hard, narrowly missing various pedestrians
>”WATCH WHERE YOU’RE GOING!?”
>”^What the—!?^”
>”Damn Tailhead!”
>It looked like you were in the middle of some kind of red-light district, a somewhat brighter and cheerier place with a bit more credits flying though it
>Flying past several more throngs of people, it eventually hit you that you had no idea where you were going at all, but you did catch sight of a large elevator system looming over the horizon
>The landing pad that held your ship was several hundred stories above you
“Up is good!”
>Confidence slowly seeped back into your body as you zoomed by and approached the elevators
>This good mood of yours soured as a blaster bolt flew past your head and blew out an electric billboard in an explosion of sparks
>>25869257
“No way!”
>Twisitng your head back for a brief moment, you saw Garble’s dagger-like smile from behind the wheel of a land speeder, his damaged droid accomplice sitting beside him with a blaster raised high while the two Rodians crouched behind them
>Several more bolts flashed overhead as you twisted and turned with your speeder in an attempt to shake them off
>They were relentless in their pursuit, and uncaring of who got in their way, as they tore up the city streets with their blasters
>Other land speeders pulled aside off the road as the chase raged on, with the elevators inching closer
“Almost— GAH!”
>You nearly spun out of control as the land speeder rear-ended you
>The mercenaries pulled up by your side as you whipped out your DL-44
>”Prepare for disintegration meatbag!”
>Narrowing your eyes at the droid as he stood up and raised his gun, you slammed your bike against the speeder
>The IG-86 fell back on Garble as he fired his blaster into the air
"Prepare for this Piston-head!”
>A single blast from your DL-44 tears off the top of the droid’s head as he falls limp against Garble
>Taking advantage of their state of confusion, you slam again on the gas and zoom ahead of them
>Your grip on your handlebar and your gun tightened as your swoop bike raced ahead
>At this point you were getting too worked up
>It was a strange feeling, as if you were enraged yet at the same time somewhat enjoying it all
>You hadn’t felt like this in a long time
>Slowing down slightly, you stared back at them down the sights of your DL-44
>A few rapid shots from your blaster successfully crash against the land speeder before it finally erupts into flames
>”DAMNIT!"
>At that, Garble appears to finally lose control of the speeder as it careens off the road into a storefront and disappears in a massive explosion
>>25869268
“Oh no.”
>Slowing down, you twist your bike to face the storefront as you slide to a halt
>The fire from that crash was spreading fast
>Your jaw fell open as you gazed at the destruction that had been wrought
>You could only hope that no one aside from Garble and his crew got hurt in that blast
>Slapping a hand against your face and sighing, you took a few seconds to try to slow your breathing down
>This was a little harder to pull off than you would have liked, as further commotion consumed the streets
>Glancing forward, you watched as several people began to bust through the store windows and take what lied behind them
>Shaking your head at this chaotic scene, you twirled your swoop back around and zoomed toward the elevators, leaving the carnage behind you
“That could have gone better…”
>Your bike swoops onto the large platform as you stagger off of your bike and punch in the code on the terminal
>The elevator mechanism grumbles as various gears begin to move and the platform begins to rise up
>There is a great deal of smoke floating up in the distance as you leave this level behind and venture to the upper stories
>Taking a seat against the wall of the elevator, you stare out at the endless city as you rise upwards
>It’s a great relief that the chase had finally ended, but you still can’t seem to calm down at all as your heart beats against your chest and your hand continues to shakily grip your blaster
>Dropping your gun to the floor, you kneel on the ground and close your eyes
>You try to think back to Alaris Prime, to the short time you spent with your master
>Luna taught you how to clear your mind, how to let go of your doubts and your pain
>She was a good teacher, and an even better friend, but despite all that you didn’t feel like you were going to be able to just shrug this all off this time
“Luna… if you can hear me, I’m sorry…”
>>25869282
>An hour later found you wandering across the upper levels, a noticeably darker and less densely populated area
>Your ship is only about a mile or so away now, and although you want to leave very soon so you can find your new teacher, you don’t really feel up to getting back into your cockpit just yet
>Spying a small hole-in-the-wall cantina on your way to the landing pads, you decide to park your swoop and take a break
>There’s barely anyone inside the place save for the bartender and a few bums lying around
>A hunched back alien with a head shaped like the top of a hammer, you recognize the bartender as an Ithorian
>Stepping up to the bar, you lean forward and ask him
“Can I please get a drink?”
>”^What’ll it be honey?^”
“Just something to steady my nerves a little.”
>Slowly nodding his head, the Ithorian poured you a grayish blue drink in a small glass
>You dropped a few credits on the counter for him, only to immediately scowl as you stared down at them
“Shoot, I’m sorry. I know you probably don’t take Imperial Credits, I’ll just—“
>”^Don’t worry about it.^”
>Your eyes widened as he scooped the credits into his hands
>”^You look like you’ve had a long night, so I’ll let this one slide.^”
>Giving an exasperated sigh, you smiled at the Ithorian as you picked up your glass
“Thank you.”
>You walked to the back of the cantina and plopped down in a booth in the back, in a spot where you could clearly see the entrance in case anyone else came looking for you
>Unzipping your leather jacket, you took a moment to relax as you sipped your drink
>Whatever it was, it tasted a little sweet and it sloshed about in your mouth like soapy water
>It was good though, and you felt like you needed it
>>25869288
>Staring into your drink, you began to think about what might await you on Dathomir
>You had very little idea what this Iron Will was like aside from what Zecora had told you
>Whoever this man was, you could only hope that he would help you finish your training
>Incidents like what just happened only made you more eager than ever to put your past behind you and start a new life as a Jedi
>Your anxiety became greater as you dreamed about it, until you decided that you had to get out of Nar Shaddaa immediately and resume your quest
>Just when you were about to raise up your glass and down the rest of your drink, an odd figure swaggered into the cantina
>She looked to be a human woman around your own age with a crop of bright blue hair with cyan steaks on her head, likely dyed you’d wager
>This girl wore a small white biker jacket with blue outlines around it and had a pair of flashy purple shades that covered her eyes
>You thought the sunglasses she wore were an odd accessory for a planet that was covered in perpetual night, though they were rather stylish and they complemented the rest of her attire well
>As you stared at this woman, you slowly realized that she was looking back to you as well
>Your eyes widened as you saw an almost malicious looking smile pop up on her lips, and it was also around this time that you noticed the chrome Westar-34 Blaster pistol holstered on her belt
>Scowling at her, you brandished your DL-44 underneath the table as she strolled up to you
>With your finger on the trigger, you readied yourself to blow her away
>However, she made no attempt to reach for her gun as she sat down in front of you at your table
>”Hey!”
>You blinked at her in confusion for a moment, and were surprised to see both of her hands folded together on the table where you could see them
“Uhh hey…”
>>25869298
“Do I… know you?”
>The woman chuckled as she leaned back in her seat and put her boots up on the table
>”Nah, but I did recognize that bike of yours outside.”
“My bike?”
>She grinned at she pointed a finger at you
>”You’re the one who took out those thugs earlier. I heard all about it.”
>You stared at her in silence as she turned her gaze toward the bar
>”You drinking Lum ale?”
“I guess I am.”
>”Cool, next round’s on me.”
>Hopping out of her seat, she strolled up to the bar and began to converse with the bartender
“The Hell…?”
>At first you thought she had to have been a bounty hunter, but now you couldn’t decide what was up with her
>After a few minutes, she strolled back to the table with two mugs filled with the grayish blue drink you had before
“Thanks… uh?”
>”Vinyl.”
>Plopping the drinks down on the table, she reached out with her hand to you
>”Vinyl Scratch!”
>Slipping your blaster into your other hand, you leaned up and returned her handshake
“Sunset Sh—“
>You hesitated telling her your full name, out of fear for what she may be
“Sunset.”
>”Nice to meet ya Sunset, and welcome to Nar Shaddaa.”
>Raising your mugs up, the two of you clinked your drinks together and took a long drink
>It didn’t taste like she messed with it in any way, and although your ability to sense others with the Force was pretty weak you felt fairly certain that she didn’t mean you any harm
>So what did she want with you?
>>25869310
>”Ahhh!”
>Her mug hit the table rather loudly, and you looked down to see that she had downed over half of her glass in one gulp
>You were honestly a little impressed, this was heavy stuff
“Welcome huh? Is it pretty obvious I’m not from around here?”
>”Heh, I had a feeling you were new around these parts. I felt like if you weren’t, then I should have heard of you by now. You from a different part of the city?”
“I’m from off world.”
>”Ohhh ok.”
>She continued to give you a somewhat malicious grin that you found yourself awkwardly returning back to her
>”Sweet ink by the way.”
“Huh? Oh thanks.”
>Your eyes glanced away from her down to the Black Sun tattoos all over your body
>”Makes you look real hard.”
>You stared blankly at her as she took another drink from her mug
“Hard?”
>”Yeah, hard n heavy. Real tough look you got going on.”
>She laid her drink back down as she leaned closer to you
>”I was thinking… you got some serious skill with a blaster, and you can handle a swoop bike like a pro.”
“Yeah?…”
>”Yeah! So…”
>Laying her arm on the table, she pointed at you as she nonchalantly asked
>”Wanna join my gang?”
>You balked at her as her purpled shades slid down, revealing her magenta eyes
“Your gang?”
>”Yeah! With smooth moves like yours, I think you’d fit in just fine around me and my crew. I think we could make a lot of money, kick a lot of ass, AND have a lot of fun working together.”
>You scowled at her
“Sorry, not interested.”
>>25869331
>Vinyl’s face fell at your curt response, but she quickly regained a smile as she sat back in her seat
>“You sure? I know you’re not from around here and all, but you should know that us Swoopers are pretty big on Nar Shaddaa. Joining up with a crew like mine could really—“
“I said no.”
>Her face fell again, and this time you even felt a little guilty by how much you were shutting her down
“Look Vinyl, I’m sorry but being part of a gang isn’t really something I’m interested in anymore.”
>”Anymore?”
“y-Yeah…”
>Vinyl scanned you closely, causing you to lean away uncomfortably from her
>”OK I guess. If that’s really not something you’re into then I won’t force ya. Can’t blame me for trying though!"
>For a swoop biker, she had a very good-natured friendliness about her and from what you could tell it was sincere
>”You COULD probably use the help though. I mean, you wrecked up some prime real estate just a little while ago. Those were the kinds of businesses that shell out big bucks in protection money. If you’re not careful you could end up with a bounty on your head.”
>You grimaced down at your drink
“Another one?”
>”What’s that?”
“n-Nothing!"
>Bringing the mug up to your lips, you slowly downed what was left of your drink
>Two cups of this Lum Ale was more than enough for you
>Any more and you wouldn’t be able to trust yourself behind your ship
“Thanks again Vinyl, but I think I’ve had enough of Nar Shaddaa to last me a while.”
>Standing up, you began to walk out of the cantina
>”Don’t mention it. Take it easy out there.”
>Nodding your head at her, you exited the cantina and walked toward your bike as she watched you walk out of there
>The cool night air felt a little more comfortable after those drinks, and you left the cantina in a much better mood than when you entered it
>Unfortunately, that mood of yours didn’t last long
>>25869341
>”Hey Sunny.”
>Your heart stopped as you twisted around and saw a grisly familiar sight
>Garble stood about ten steps behind you, his black leather armor torn partly to shreds as he menacingly gripped his long knife by his side
>”You didn’t think you’d get rid of me just like that did you?”
>You stepped away from him as he slowly approached you with his blade
>Gritting your teeth, you glowered over at him as he approached
“You don’t know when to quit.”
>”I could say the same to you.”
>Garble’s sharp smile devolved into a nasty snarl
>”Why don’t you just give up already?”
>Backing out of the lot, you suddenly stopped yourself before taking a plunge off the side of the platform into the endless abyss below
>You would have felt more than a little intimidated, if Garble hadn’t gotten on your bad side so many times
>The alcohol helped bolster your courage a bit too
“I’m not going back Garble. You can go back and tell the Vigos that I’m not Black Sun anymore.”
>”You can tell them that yourself, after I’ve dragged you back kicking and screaming. Or…”
>His clawed finger traced the edge of his knife as he grinned menacingly at you
>You scoffed at him
“You’d like that wouldn’t you?”
>”I sure would.”
>He took a step closer, to which you responded to by whipping out your blaster
“You’re scum you know that!?”
>”You’re scum too, even if you don’t want to admit it! Worse than me!”
>Garble spoke to you bitterly as he frowned at you
>”You know Sunny, this is about more than just the credits. You turned your back on thousands of years worth of tradition. You’re a DISGRACE to Black Sun, and I’m going to have the honor of correcting your mistake.”
>Before he could close in on you, your blaster burned a hole directly in front of the ground where he stood
”Thousands of years of lying and stealing and killing. That’s not me anymore.”
>>25869350
>A tense silence fell as the two of you stared each other down
>Garble glared at you for a moment before giving you a cocky smile
>”Let’s go. You and me.”
>Stepping back into the lot, Garble raised a clawed finger of his and sliced his belt apart
>His holstered blaster hit the floor as he assumed a combat stance with his knife
>He was a dangerous foe and definitely someone you wouldn’t want to fight in close quarters
>But this time you’d make an exception
>Walking away from the ledge, you holstered your own blaster and dropped the belt to the ground as you reached into your boot and took out a vibroblade
>”Heh, just like old times.”
>The two of you slowly closed in one another with your blades
>Locking eyes with each other, the two of you bolted forward
>A brief clash of sparks rained out as your two blades collided
>With his immense strength, Garble shoved you back and swung his blade at you
>He had a lot of reach with that big knife of his, but you were able to dodge his blows
>His attack came off as a bit sloppy to you, though you were feeling a little sluggish yourself
>If you had to guess, you’d say he was a bit fatigued from his crash earlier and you were a little drunk
>”Stand still you little— GAH!”
>He dropped his knife as you slashed his arm
>The cut looked a little deep, but all it seemed to accomplish was rile him up
>Forgoing his blade, he charged you and slashed away with his own claws
>Unprepared for his advance, you suddenly found your blade clawed out of your own hand as it clattered to the ground
>Fear momentarily gripped you as you gazed into Garble’s predatory eyes
>Before he could slash you with his claws, you tumbled backwards and assumed a readied martial stance
>When he charged you next, you were ready
>>25869357
>As Garble fell upon you, your body twirled about while you raised your leg
>Your boot crashed into the side of his head, causing Garble to sputter in pain as he stumbled away
“HiiYA!”
>A second kick to his side sent him back further, followed by a quick series of punches to his abdomen
>Wrenching back your fist, you threw a haymaker directly at his face
>That’s when your fierce barrage ended, as Garble caught your fist with his hand
>”Is that all you got?”
“AHHHHH!!”
>Your body seized up in pain and confusion as Garble lifted you off the ground by your right lekku and tossed you over him
>You tumbled onto the hard ground in a daze as you desperately tried to force yourself to your feet
>Before you could get up, a searing pain gripped your side as Garble’s boot slammed into your ribs
>Gripping your bruised side, you forced open an eye to glare up at a battered Garble
>”Last chance… to come… quietly.”
>The only answer you gave him was a silent and fierce stare
>”Then I’ll see you in Hell!”
>You tried to slink away too late, as Garble grappled hold of you and lifted you up above his head
>”You’re good at running, but let’s see if you can fly!”
“You wouldn’t?!”
>Stomping away with you in his grasp, you squirmed and kicked as hard as you could as Garble approached the ledge of the platform
>Overcome with fear, you struggled against Garble as hard as you could
>You refused to let it end like this, after everything you’d been through
>As you fought against him, your caught sight of your vibroblade lying on the ground
>>25869367
>You had to get out of here, or else Luna’s sacrifice would have been in vain and all that you two would have worked for would have been for nothing
>Taking a deep breath and closing your eyes, you managed to somehow find the power to block out your fear as you reached for the vibroblade
>”Giving up? Well you had a good run. Nice knowing ya!”
>Luna’s words echoed in your mind
>”Do not let fear make you act. Take action because you must. Do not hesitate, and do not try. Simply act.”
“…”
>”Use the Force Sunset."
>Your eyes fluttered open as the vibroblade flew through the air and slid into your grasp
>In one fluid motion, you swung the knife down and stabbed Garble directly in his eye
>”GYYYAAAAAAAAAHHHH!”
>Leaving the knife there, you slid out of his grasp and touched down upon the ground
“I’m only getting started.”
>Charging at him, your body practically moved of it’s own accord as you unleashed a flurry of punches and kicks at lightning speed
>You never felt so fast or hit as hard as you did then and there
>Garble’s body was continually knocked back with each blow
>It was no longer your anger at being hunted or your hatred of him or the fear of Black Sun that guided your attack, but your willingness to stand up and do what you had to do to survive
>Neither Garble nor Black Sun was going to hold you back ever again
>With a devastating kick to his gut, Garble was sent just onto the edge of the platform
>Bounding forward, you reached up to his face and grasped hold of your knife
>Tearing the knife from his eye, you jabbed your knee into his chin and knocked him backwards
>With that final strike, Garble was sent reeling over the edge
>”AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!”
>Watching his body disappear in the darkness below, you exhaled a final sigh of relief as you fell to your knees
“Goodbye Garble.”
>>25869384
>Did you feel remorse at having taken Garble’s life?
>In a way, yes, but killing him did not disturb you as greatly as it did when you killed those men earlier
>You killed him because you had to, and because you had little choice but to
>Having to take a life to survive didn’t make you the killer you once were, it just meant that you had a right to keep going
>It was for that reason that you walked away from the ledge and toward your bike, intent on reaching your ship and setting a course for Dathomir
>”Aw SICK!”
>Your eyes widened as you stared over by a few of the bikes and saw Vinyl grinning wildly at you
>”Girl you’re insane!”
“d-Did you see me—“
>”I SAW EVERYTHING!”
>Vinyl punched you hard in the arm as your jaw dropped at her
>Chuckling at you, Vinyl gestured to the Westar on her belt
>”So I was about a few seconds away from blasting lizard boy in the back when I saw you grab that knife and pull off those amazing moves. Why didn’t you tell me you could use the Force!”
“DON’T SAY THAT!”
>Your hand fell over her mouth as you nervously glanced all around you
>Vinyl blushed a little as she lowered your hand off of her
>”My bad, I guess that's something you’d want to keep on the downlow. Don’t worry, I can keep a secret… MASTER Sunset.”
>You slapped a hand over your face as you groaned at her
“How do you even know about the Force?”
>”Pshaw, one of my best friends was a Jedi.”
“Wait, really?”
>”Uh huh. She and I went way back, though I haven’t seen her in a LOOOOONG time.”
>You shook your head at her as you rubbed the back of your neck
“So you promise not to tell anyone.”
>”That depends, you still want to join my gang?”
>Vinyl recoiled from your fierce glare as she raised up her hands defensively
>”KIDDING! Just kidding! I promise not to tell anyone.”
>Your glare quickly faded away
“Thank you.”
>”No problem. There is something I’d appreciate though…”
>>25869394
>Vinyl took off her glasses and rubbed her lenses clean with her jacket
>“If you ever meet a Jedi by the name of Octavia, you think you can tell her Vinyl wishes her well and all?”
>For the first time since you met her, Vinyl seemed to look a little less lively as she spoke to you
“Octavia?”
>”Yeah, Octavia Melody.”
“Well, I don’t really know many Jedi…”
>and you weren’t even sure if she could still be alive
“…but if I see her, I’ll let her know.”
>She perked up as she slapped her hand against your shoulder
>”Thanks Sunset.”
>Nodding your head at her, you walked over to your swoop bike and hopped on
>”Yo, may the Force be with you!”
“Ha! May the Force be with you."
>Waving her goodbye, you zoomed off on your swoop bike
>Another ten minutes fly by as you reach the landing pad where your ship lies
>Your rusty old Z95 sits there as if it was waiting for you to come back
>Popping open the cockpit, you recline in your seat as you fire up the engine and lift off the ground
>You’re flying up through the atmosphere before you know it as the stars become visible once again
“Alright Sunset…"
>Reaching into your jacket, you pull out a disc and stare at the hologram of the peculiar looking Zabrak Iron Will
>The image of him appears to be staring intently at you as you toggle past it and bring up the hologram of the planet Dathomir
>Dropping the disc beside your controls, you punch in Dathomir’s coordinates
“Here we go again.”
>A few moments later, everything around you becomes awash in a brilliant blue light as you jump to Hyperspace
>>25869399
That's all for now!
Next time I write I'm going to continue from Anon's perspective and pick off pretty much from last where I left off with him.
Hope you guys enjoyed it! Was kind of fun to write from a different perspective but I'm looking forward to getting back to Anonymous and all the shit going down with him.
>>25869441
I hope sunset kills anon in the end
>>25869524
Why would you want that Anon?
>>25866737
>this comic
every fucking time
>>25870265
I love this fucking thread. Merry giftday Anon.
>>25870714
*christmas
>>25870718
>>25870718
*Family food day
I live in Denmark. God is dead here.
Finally got around to seeing the film.I really tried to like it, but I just can't because it's >>spoilers<<exactly the fucking same story as episode 4
>>25870714
>>25870718
>>25870741
Silly Anon, you still haveHeart's warming eye or whatever the show uses for Christmas, I'm terrible at this
And also, that filename and pic, fucking based
Merry Christmas to all of you faggots, going out to eat with Family in a few hours, I'll see you all after this
>>25867781
i got the whole collection.
not just the jedi games, but as well as the star wars collection... loving Battlefront 2
>>25870714
>Life day
>>25870985
BF2 is still really fun even with the shit AI and all.
I need to find the good mappacks again though.
>>25869441
Neat. I love backstory, thanks for that!
>>25870714
>>25870718
>>25870741
Festivus for the rest of us. Too bad it happened yesterday...
>>25871116
I hear there are some good mods for BF2 if you're on PC. Steam has the game for cheap and mods are easy to find if you look.
>>25871116
>>25871976
oh sweet... problem is how do i install them?
>TFW no multiplayer
>>25872424
nevermind. found a mod installer
>>25872424
Maps you can just draw into the folder I think.
VII was good. I walked in ready to feel hatred and disappontment unrivaled by any emotions Lucas' meddling ever inspired, but it was fantastic, and it feels like they even threw in some homages to the EU I love so much, likethe Sullustan (I think) bartender, and Kylo Ren's mask having a passing resemblance to Revan's while still being modeled more after Vader's helm with a heavy armoured design.Only one thing really bugged me that I couldn't justify; whydid the Resistance need the whole starmap when they already had a destination and enough of its surroundings that they should've been able to pinpoint the system? A chunk that big of the galaxy has some charted systems in it.
But fuck you assholes that spoiled shit. You know who you are.
>>25873168
Are you saying there were no Sullustans in the old movies? Because I'm pretty sure there were Sullustans in episode VI. One of them was also back in VII, iirc.
>>25873168
>Sullustan
There was a Sullustan in the movie, but Maz was not one of them. I believe the Sullustan seens climbing into the X-Wing is supposed to be Nien Numb, just as the Mon Calamari in the briefing is Ackbar.
Bump
>>25873168
>>25873461
>>25874059
you're all wrong! None of that happpens! liers liers!still haven't seen the movie.
Turns out drawing necrophilia while your around family is quite difficult. So I ended up setting up a deviantart account. Tell your friends, your pets, your mom and dad. I'm still not doing commissions because I'm having trouble setting up the service, but soon. Sorry for the blog bump but I got nothing here
Merry Life Day you filthy animals. total thanks.
>>25875326
What could be more Christmas-y than necrophilia-fetish star wars my little pony crossover pornography?>tfw still haven't seen it yet either
Aside from that, I hope you all have a Merry Life Day as well!
>>25875326
Could you maybe draw sunset from churro's story getting gangbanged by black sun members after you finish drawing the....necrophilic porn
>Twas the night before Christmas and all through the town
>Neither Filly nor Colt were wandering around
>The stockings were hung by the chimney with care
>In hopes Stallion Nicholas soon would be there
>The young ones were nestled all snug in their beds
>While visions of Pinkie Pie dance in their heads
>Rarity in her kerchief, Twilight in her cap
>Had just settled their brains for a long winter nap
>When out on the lawn there arose such a clatter
>Twilight sprang from her bed to see what’s the matter
>Away to the window she flew like a flash
>Tore open the shutters and threw up the sash
>The moon on the breast of the new-fallen snow
>Gave a lustre of midday to objects below
>When what appeared before her wandering eye
>But a male alicorn and eight Pegasi
>The alicorn flew so lively and quick
>She knew in a moment he was Stallion Nick
>”But that’s impossible” she said. “He’s just a myth!”
>”Something parents use to control children with!”
>But she could not deny all that which she saw
>So Twilight just sat their, looking on in awe.
>Faster than phoenixes his coursers they came
>And he whistled and shouted and called them by name
>”Now Dasher, now Dancer, now Prancer and Vixen!”
>”On Comet, on Cupid, on Donner and Blitzen!”
>”To the top of the porch, to the top of the wall!”
>”Now dash away, dash away, dash away all!”
>As leaves that before the wild hurricane fly,
>When they meet with an obstacle, mount to the sky;
>So up to the housetop the coursers they flew
>With saddles of toys, and Stallion Nicholas too
>>25877461
>And then, in a twinkling, I heard on the roof
>The prancing and pawing of each little hoof
>As she drew in her head, and was turning around
>From the chimney Stallion Nick came down with a bound
>His hair was all red, his mane striped green and white
>Covered in soot from many fireplaces tonight
>A saddle of toys he had flung on his back
>And he looked like a pedler just opening his pack
>His eyes, how they twinkled, his dimples, how merry!
>His cheeks were like roses, his nose like a cherry!
>His droll little mouth was drawn up like a bow
>And the beard on his chin was as white as the snow!
>The stump of a pipe he held tight in his teeth
>And the smoke, it encircled his head like a wreath
>He had a long face and a round little belly
>It shook when he laughed, like a bowl full of jelly
>He was chubby and plump, a jolly old pony
>She laughed in spite of herself, the sight so funny
>A wink of his eye and a twist of his head
>Soon gave her to know she had nothing to dread
>He spoke not a word, but went straight to his work,
>And filled all the stockings; then turned with a jerk,
>And laying his hoof on the side of his nose,
>And giving a nod, up the chimney he rose;
>He sprang to his herd, to his team gave a whistle,
>And away they all flew like the down of a thistle.
>But I heard him exclaim, ere he flew out of sight—
>“Merry Christmas to all, and to all a good night!”
Unrelated small post. Have a merry Christmas, or a happy holiday!
Just leaving this here, merry Christmas youwonderful people
Merry Christmas you guys. Hope it's a good one.
>>25880927
Solid gif. Too funny.
Merry Christmas y'all. What do guys get for Christmas?
I got the first season of Rebels for DVD; which I am currently binge watching.
>>25881346
I haven't opened any presents yet this morning, but last night, I got some Boba Fett slippers and a crossbow.
>>25881346
Millenium Falcon poster.
I still need to get around watching rebels, /co/ says it's pretty good.
Merry Christmas lads.
>>25881346
Enjoy m8
Sister got me this phone charger
>>25881346
It's the season 2 poster right ? Either way Rebels is pretty good, I watched until season two ep 5 or something
What would you do in the SW universe?I would ignore all conflict in the Galaxy and just partake in air/space racing.
>>25883429
>What would you do in the SW universe?
Find the valley of the Jedi, swim in that good Force shit, become Kyle Katarn.
>>25883494
>become Kyle
That's a pretty good choice.
>>25883429
Depends on where I end up. If I'm stranded on a shithole like Jakku or Nar Shadaa, I'm probably going nowhere fast. Sarge has the right idea though.
The Jedi are irritating and the Sith are dangerous, but the Force is good.
Speaking of which, Merry Christmas, /mlpswg/
>>25883562
The fuck is Yoda standing on?
>>25883581
That's a backpack you can put him in.
>>25883555
Trips confirm it's the only right choice. Grey Jedi/Sith masterrace
>>25873168
>namefagging
>thinking your opinion means anything
Literally cancer
>>25883697
> Not recognizing Croykine from the thread.
> Immediately discards opinion simply because they put on a name on.
Shit poster identified.
Also, new thread coming soon. Going to try and make some Christmas green to celebrate the holidays.
>>25883697
yeah, basically what >>25883735
saidU R A FAGGOT
>>25883562
Merry Christmas Sarge
Merry Christmas mlpswg.
>>25881346
I got a star wars shirt and the second book of Avatar the Last Airbender (I lost that one earlier in the year and was bummed out)
>>25873168
>>25874059
I believe Maz was a Aleena, though I'm not sure. They are short with elongated heads, but her eyes looked too small. That could just be because actors though...
>>25884116
No way, her proportions are way off to be an Aleena, and JayJayBinks wouldn't want any prequel aliens in his movie.
>>25884026
No umerry Christmas anyway, fgt
>>25881346
A fucking laptop! A nice one! Floored me.
>>25884088
Merry Christmas mate.
MERRY CHRISTMAS EVERYONE
>>25884116
>>25874059
Well now I feel like an idiot. This is what I get for drowning my anxiety over the EU becoming noncanon in the grimderp of 40K.
>>25884088
>/mlpswg/
WHY DID IT HAVE TO DIE
>>25883697
>implying I think my opinion matters
Just trying to discuss Star Wars in the Star Wars thread.
>>25884679
>Just trying to discuss Star Wars in the Star Wars thread.
HOW FUCKING DARE YOU
GO BACK TO TALKING ABOUT HOW GOOD SARGE'S STORY IS LIKE THE REST OF US CIRCLEJERKING FAGGOTS
>>25884788
Dubs confirms we need more lube for the circlejerk
>>25838776
TRAITOR
>>25884542you too...
>>25884788
I find it pretty goodi-if that's okay with you Anon...
>>25883429
Depends on what planet I show up on. If it's a shitty planet, pull some sort of mercenary work. If it's a planet like Coruscant, I would bang every somewhat attractive female being I met and then die from space aids shortly afterwards. Hell, I'd probably end up doing that on the shitty planet anyway. Once in a lifetime opportunity, I wouldn't let that go to waste.
New thread everyone!
>>25885986
I'm still in the process of writing, but it's VERY slow going.
Let's hit the limit.
>>25887389
Just for good measure.
