>"Oh! Anon! Hehe, what are you doing...uhm, good evening!"
>"Where am I going? No where!"
>"I know it's the middle of the night, bu-"
>"I need my back pack for..."
>"Uhm...listen, Anon, I'm just...going home. Okay?"
>"I'm finally going home."
>"Yeah..."
>"I'll, uh...I'll see you tomorrow."
>"Good night..."
>"And thanks."
>"For everything."
>>25767711
>"Wait! Take me with you! I want to have sexual intercourse with talking horses!"
>>25767711
Such a sad story.At least here you had friends.
>>25767711
PLEASE! TAKE ME WITH YOU
>>25767711
So, you wan buy sum drugs o wut?
>>25767711
>You walk away, you don't hear me say
>"Please, oh baby, don't go"
>>25767844
Simple and clean is the way that you're making me feel tonight
>>25767947
It's hard to let it go
>>25767711
>>25767781
Now that's a story I would enjoy. Sunset and pony Anon having adventures in Equestria. Anon feeling lost and confused at first but ultimately happy because he's with Sunny and this new world is amazing...
Kinda interesting nobody has ever done this before. Plot writes itslef.
>>25768037
Not enough heart break in it for me.
>>25767970
They may call us heartless! Hallowed vessels of what we use to be!
>>25767711
>>25767711
Gonna start something, you anon's can take over if you like.
>Sunset turns around and starts to walk away.
>She looked so sad when she said it.
>There has to be more to this than she's letting on...
>Anon steps out and grabs her hand.
"Wait."
>She looks back.
>Fresh tears are running down her cheek.
>Anon stops for a second and looks at her.
>Anon's surprised.
"There's something you're not telling me is there?"Someone decide a writefag name for me
>>25770581
I shall call you... Mr. Single.
On account of your lack of dubs.
>>25770581
Writeman F. Aggotry
>>25770581
Lord-TidBit
>>25770642
>>25770630
>>25770928
1st, 2nd, and 3rd, respectively. Whoever gets dibs will decide my name, or, by the time I check in the morning, 1st will be my name.
>>25770581
Juicy Kisses
>>25770966
This is it, I'll be posting in the morning.
Feel free to tell me what you think.
>>25770965
Chumbucket?
>>25770975
>>25767711
But you haven't even touched your eggs.
>>25767970
Hold me
Kinda looking forward to it. We have a lot of EqG greens but not too many Sunny Pony greens, not to mention Sunny Pony x Anon Pony.
>>25771399
There are sunny pony greens?
>>25771033
>>25767711
>Sunset is already outside the house
>You quickly run to her
"S-sunny!"
>She turn to you,tears running, then tried to run away from you....until her knees wobble and she fall.
>Your lungs burns but you dont care...all that is in your head is 'Why?'
>You approached the crying girl with her bag beside her. After all this years of living with her...
"Why...?"
>not even a tear in your face...just confusion..
>"A-anon...please..."
>No...you wont have it...you need to know..
"S-sunny...please tell me why..."
>You take a deep breath and tried to calm yourself
>"I-I...dont want to hurt you..."
>She avoid your gaze...she avoid your question...The girl you ever love tried to avoid you...
>You hug her and pet her red and yellow hair as she reluctantly hug you back
"Sunset.."
>You whispers
"why....is your bag full of whipped cream?"
>>25772031
>Equestria has whipped cream that is complete shit compared to what eqg world makes
>Sunset stars drug running trade to bring high quality whip cream to ponies
>Lives a doube life, honest High School student by day, but by night a brutal equestrian black market Tsar
>>25767711First time with shit poetry. Oh well.
>You were alone in this hell hole called high school.
>Never smiling yet never sad.
>Never angry yet never mad.
>The time spent there was cruel.
>Friendless and alone
>You had nowhere to call your home
>Times were cold
>That was when a student did something bold.
>Out of nowhere, a random girl passes by.
>A popular student that had friends by her side.
>She notices you, sitting all alone.
>A random nobody with a face colder than stone.
>She talked to you, someone, at the time, who didn't care.
>Yet she took you in as one of her friends.
>You, a burden to bear.
>But she cared for you in the end.
>After that, you, for once in your life, felt something.
>Over time, you just thought it was nothing.
>But having 'friends' made you really think.
>It took time though, for your thoughts to sink.
>Finally, on a cold night, you wanted to find her.
>To hug her, thank her for being there.
>You looked everywhere.
>Than you found her where her meeting first occurred.
>With a sad look in her eye, you decided to ask here why.
>She explains to you that she has to say goodbye this time.
>No, you thought as tears formed in your eyes.
>You grab her hand and pulled her in, like if it were a final time.
>You hug her, telling her how you felt.
>Telling her that she made your heart so warm, that it finally had melt.
>She takes in the words you say one by one.
>But, once you let go, her eyes said that her choice couldn't be undone.
>She gives you one last smile but with eyes you are too familiar with.
>She goes through the portal as she said her final goodbyes.
>Over time, she made your heart feel like a smith
>Heated by her words and her presence.
>Hammered by her lectures and her friendship.
>Until it was forged into anew, taking away your hardships and tension.
>She was gone...
>Like her fiery spirit, your hearts set into flames.
>Only to be quickly put out, hardening what was tamed.
>Anonymous.
>Friendless.
>>25773133
No story yet?
hmm...
>>25773741
I wish I could write.
>>25773882
got your back brah
>>25773741
>Be Anonymous.
>Your everyday normal guy...but not like Norman.
>Anyway, you are currently living with your girlfriend in a small but cozy apartment. Your life and finance is not that great but being with her, it's nothing.
>Everyday, you went to college or part time but every night, you stay with her.She is a blessing...your blessing.
>Sunset Shimmer's her name and being cute's her game. Her trademark is her hair, a mixture of yellow and red color which reminds you of bacon. Smile that illuminate your world and laugh that will make the sirens jealous.
>She did enslave the school before...you dont know what happened but you are the first that forgave her. Things lead to another and before you know it, you and Sunset are bounded to each other.
>You loved her and she loved you. With enough money, you secretly bough an engagement ring with a brilliant orange gem like a sunset sky.
>Hope nothing goes wrong...
>Back to the present.
>You are cooking a salad and stir-fry noodles for dinner, its one of your specialty from working in Chinese fast food. Humming some Queens tunes as you pour the noodles into a white plastic plate, you heard the door opens.
"Sunbun, is that you?"
>"Yeah..."
>Hm...you feel a bit strange...nahh, must be your imagination.
"Can you prepare the table? I got your favorite noodles and salad!"
>"Sure..."
>Still humming 'under pressure', you expertly lift the plate and the bowl then march toward the plastic table where Sunset is sitting.
>You smile at her and she smile at you...sadly?
"Something wrong babe?"
>"Hm...? Oh...no...j-just thinking. Lots of...thing in my mind right now..."
>You shake your head and grin as you put the plate and bowl on the table.
"Well, no worries babe. Lets eat first before it gets cold"
>>25773906
It's good start, but I'm guessing English isn't your first language?
>>25773922
yeah...a lot of people says that...
Its the grammar isnt it?
>>25773934
Yes. Your use of tenses and nouns are wonky. For example:
>You are cooking a salad and stir-fry noodles for dinner, its one of your specialty from working in Chinese fast food. Humming some Queens tunes as you pour the noodles into a white plastic plate, you heard the door opens.
should read more like this:
>You are [] cooking salad and stir-fry noodles for dinner, it[']s one of your specialties from working in Chinese fast food. Humming some Queens tunes as you pour the noodles [on]to a white plastic plate, you hear[] the door open[].
>>25773974
Sorry...one of my weakness when writing. Tend to write what's on my mind.
If it bothers you, i'll stop
>>25773906
>Usually Sunset ask you about your day and you answer with a smooth flirty line then you ask her back and she will respond the same. But today, the dinner table is dead silent. Sunset just stare down on her food, note even looking at you.
"So how was your day?"
>You ask, hoping to break the ice.
>"...its fine"
>She look at you with a smile then return stare at the food, with the occasion of slowly chewing it.
>You began to feel uneasy.
>Sunset have never been like this before....and the worries began to weight on your mind.
>The dinner felt like an eternity of silence. Even after she finished her food, she still stare at nothing.
>But you still have another weapon. Preparing a glass of warm milk, you are ready to comfort your girl. This is what both of you will do if one of you have a bad day.
"Sunny...a milk for your thought?"
>"Hm...? Oh! Thank you Anon."
>She took the glass from your hand and slowly sip the warm milk, calming her down. You sit beside her and gently hug her. She smile at you, sincere this time, and put her head on your shoulder. You can still feel her love and warmth.
>"Thanks Anon..."
>She whispers...but there are still sadness in her voice
"Want to share what's on your mind now?"
>She stay silent for a while, sipping the warm milk while you kiss her hair.
>"Say Anon...do you miss your home?"
>Oh...is she homesick?
"Yeah...sometimes.I miss Ma's cooking and Pa's rambling..
>You pause and kiss her again
"But I have you here...so its fine"
>You grin and kiss her hair again.
>"Oh Anon, stop it"
>She giggle. A hint of blush of her face and light returning to her eyes...then, it went dark again.
>"Anon..."
"Hm?"
>"I... miss home..."
>You shake your head and embrace this silly girl.
"You know Sunny. How about we visit your home ? Just need to finish the final and we will have our winter break, yeah?"
>"Sure...that will be fun!"
>Smile slowly return to her face and it warm your heart.
"You know...I have a special surprise for you tomorrow"
>>25774239
>"Really? What is it?"
>She wiggle happily and poke your cheek.
"You'll have to find out tomorrow or it wont be a surprise"
>"Boo...fine. It better be a great surprise"
"It is. I can bet that you will knock your socks off when you see it"
>"Cant wait"
>She is returning to her old self as she quickly finished her milk. Before you stand, she quickly kissed you. It taste like a sweet and warm milk. After 15 minutes of making out, you finally stand and place the galss on the dish.
"Sunny,I think I'll go to bed"
>"This early?"
"Yeah...sorry. It's just...I suddenly feel sleepy right now. You coming?"
>"Nah. Want to stay here for a bit."
"Alright. Oh! Dont forget to switch the light after you're done. Dont want the bill to rise."
>"Okay mooom"
>She groan mockingly
>"Just go to bed !"
"Ahahha...and Sunbun..."
>"Hm?"
"I love you"
>"I love you too nonny"
>She smile as you shoot her a kiss. you quickly brush your teeth and prepare the engagement ring before going to bed. You cant wait for tomorrow...
>Unknown to you, Sunset just stand there with her smile. Slowly a drop of blood fell from her bitten lips...
>"i love you too Anon"
>And tears slowly rain down...
>"A-and I am sorry...A-anon.."
>Muffling her sobs with her hand, she dropped on the floor. If her heart cant take it, what will happen to her beloved if he knows?
>But she have a chance to go back..one chance...
>"I-I am sure you will understand...Anon..."
>She stand...her decision already made...
>"I always...always love you.."
>Her hushed words echoes in the silent room as she put her farewell letter on the table.
>"My beloved Anonymous"
Ill stop her for a bit. The thread seems quiet. Did my writing scare you guys?
>>25774487
>>25774487
go on.
>>25772262
Shit that was pretty deep
>>25774487
>...
>Hmm...?
>Your consciousness is returning but you still feel tired and heavy. Your throat is dry and you body is warning you to release the dam.
>Screw that...you dont want to get out of bed just to piss. You are the master of your body and you WILL control it....
>Doesnt work...Nigga, you aint Sheldon Cooper.
>You forced yourself to get up while complaining about how cold the bed is...
>Wait...why is it cold? Where's Sunset?
>Your eyes slowly adapt to the darkness and you saw that the sheet beside you lay undisturbed.
>Where is Sunset?!
>You take a deep breath and tried to calm yourself
>Must be sleeping for few minute or an hour right...right?
>You snickers a bit at your silly worries and look at the clock at the nightstand
>2:45 AM....6 hours of sleep
>Something is tugging your mind...something you dont want it to exist. Fear.
>You shake yourself awake and stand.
>She must be sleeping in the living room...yeah, she does that sometimes.
>Trying to brush away your worries, you went to the toilet to release the dam and wash your face. All the worries and tiredness vanished as you pour cold water on your face.
>Optimism and calmness fills your mind now. It will just be like yesterday and before yesterday: You wake up, wake Sunnybunny, made breakfast, college, home, dinner with sunny, sleep with sunny.
But this noon, you will propose to her. It will be a perfect day.
>A smile form on your face, time to princess-carry that sleepy girl to bed.
>Slowly, you tip-toed to the living room. You dont want to wake her up after all. And search for her in this darkness....and search....and search.
>No Sunset Shimmer was found. Just a dark empty room.
>Now the thing inside your mind comes back in full force. Whispering scenarios that could happen and visions of slowly dissipated.
>That fear grows as you find a letter...in Sunset's handwriting.
>'For my dearest Anonymous'
>Your hands began to shake violently and you felt the urge to emptied your stomach.
>>25774825
>A joke...
>The denial echoes in your shaken mind.
>Ajokeajokeajokeajoke
>It hurts your head and your chest. You throw away the letter and grip your head hard, tears slowly forming on your eyes.
>Definitely a prank
>You nod, releasing your grip.
>Sunset would never leave you...not now,not every...no
>Then you remember...her face when she went home,her face when she tried to look at you,her face whe-
>STOP!
>...
>Please stop....please...God please...dont...no more.
>You slump down on the cold,hard floor. No energy,no optimism,just...void. You want to cry out, to shout her name but nothing came out.
>Silently praying that this is a dream, you tried to hold your tears and sobs...but its too cold, too empty.
>Until you heard a click...something enter your home.
>Instinct began to control you as you quickly search for the light. The shadowy figure silently approach and luckily, you found the switch. With a quick press, the light illuminate the room...and there is Sunset, her face look like a deer caught on sudden car light.
"S-sunny"
>Your voice is hoarse.
>"H-hey Anon."
>She forced a quick grin, trying to hide something behind her.
>"W-why are you up so late?"
"W-why aren't you in bed? Are you going somewhere?"
>"N-nah,no way....not going anywhere!"
>She quickly shake her head with a smile still plastered on her face
>You point at the thing behind her
>"T-this...this is uhh my backpack for uhh..."
>And her facade began to crack. Smile slowly turn into a frown and eyes looking at you with sadness and pity. With a deep breath, she stare at your soul
>"Home,Anon....I am going home...."
>>25774919
>That word shakes your soul
"B-but I thought...this is yo-
>"Home is here the heart is"
>She interrupt you, a cold stare that slowly burn you inside
>"And my home...this is the only time I can go"
"a-b-but Su-"
>"Anonymous...I've already made my decision."
>yes she has...determination still burns in her eyes...but you cant see that...you can only see a cold and harsh stare.
>"I-I wish i could explain this to you...but it's too complicated. I...I am fine if you hated me for this..."
>She close her eyes and turn back to the entrance.
>"Perhaps...it is better this way..."
>She whispers to herself
>"This is a goodbye Anonymous."
>And walk out the door.
>You just stand there...Soul almost crushed and broken, Sanity starting to crack and shaken, and body beginning to shut down.
>You let her get away....you let her leave....
>What should you do?
This is where the path diverge. My dear reader, choose what Anon should do?
Path 1:' Dont stop me now'Chase her! Chase her now ! You WILL tell her how you feel
Path 2:' Love of my life'Letting her go...Maximum feels
Now, my dear reader. Choose his fate.
I'll be back in 7 hour
>>25767769
What made you such a bitch Starlight?
>>25774990
Path 1. Go with her too, make sure to kick flash in the dick.
>>25774990
Path 1.
>>25774990
Is she cheating on you or actually going back to equestria?
Path 1 tbqh f.a.m.
>>25770581
Have work today and a final this week.
>You stood there in the hall of your apartment building, waiting for an answer.
>Sunset didn't say anything. Opting to look away from you.
"Sunset, please tell me what's going on."
>New series of tears begin to roll down her soft cheeks.
>The only thing you can hear at this time of night is your breathing and her nearly inaudible sobs.
>"I-I have to go...I'm sorry."
>She tries to pry her hand from yours.
>"I can't stay here. Please let me go."
> The tears are moving more freely now.
>You hate seeing her like this.
>You have hated it since the fall formal.
>You let go of her hand and move your arms around her.what do you guys think so far?
>>25775465
Not enough green to judge.
Please dispense more green
>>25775465
Moar
>>25768037
>there lis literly a General right now with the same story
>>25775807
What? Where? It's hiatus, all I see are Generals of some kind.
>>25767711
Fuck, I was actually expecting her to off herself.
>>25774990
Part 1 please.
>>25775846
>>25775807
Is AiE actually producing something interesting again?
>>25774990
Option 1
Momanon didn't raise no beta faggot
>>25775465
>You're arms are around her shoulders.
>You pull her close and hug her.
>She tenses at contact, but begins to relax.
>She feels soft.
>It's seems strange how fragile someone feels up close.
>It's become apparent how small her frame really is.
>Sunset wraps her arms around your waist and begins to cry into your shoulder.
"I'm sorry."I'm a newbie at writefagging.
>>25778425
Just keep going and don't stop
>>25771365
Whatever lies beyond this morning
>>25778425
I could tell considering it took 7 hours to write 8 lines that took me 5 seconds to read
>>25778425
>You are arms
>It is seems
>>25774990
Damn, overslept
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HgzGwKwLmgM
>You grit your teeth in anger
>Ma and Pa doesn't raised you to be a wuss
>You rise with revived resolves and determination. Your feet quickly takes your bedroom and your hand swiftly grab the ring box before running back to entrance
>Slamming the door, you quickly rush downstairs and hope that you can still caught her. As your blitz to the entrance of the apartment, you caught a glimpse of her entering a familiar car and you quickly pushed yourself more.
>That car...you know who owns it...Flash Sentry.
>Not this time Flash
>blood began to boil and rage follow..
>Not HER!
>You quickly search for anything...anything to catch up to that damned car.
>There! Vinly's bicycle.
>She's your bro and you know where she hide her key...under the seat...bingo!
"Sorry bro...I hope you understand."
>And quickly unlock the bike. The car is almost out of your sight, almost becoming a dot of color.
>You step on the pedal, flesh violently digging on your bare foot, and pour all your energy on your leg.
>The car...your eyes lock on it like a hungry cheetah and began to gradually catch up. The dot of color gradually became a shape of the damn car.
>You dont remember how long or how far you pedal...just focus on the car like Gatsby on the green light.
>Adrenaline course through your body, bloody seeping out of your foot, sweat almost drenched your shirt, mind turning to void, throat dry and lungs burn...but you grin, a childish and enjoyable...as if you are high.
>You're literally chasing a dream... a great irony and a difficult challenge.
>Rewarded with ecstasy as you come closer to the car...inch by inch. Life cant stop you now and you wont back down without fighting!
>>25779403
>oh shit
>>25779575
>Then the car stop and your mind came back like a crushing meteor. You are still far but you can see Flash and Sunset came out of the car..with that dickbag around her shoulder.
>Few more...
>And you have reached the goal...the car...empty car...
>Adrenaline slowly fade and your body can feel the great gravitational pull of the earth...it's fucking heavy....But you must move...and the only thing that gave you strength is anger...the picture of that smug asshole laying his hand on your Sunset.
>Ignoring the pain and warning from your body, you ditch the bike and run to where they went. Each step is like walking in a damn lava, excruciating and heavy.
>As you jog, the surroundings seems familiar to you...a memory from your younger day...
>CSH...Canterlot High School...the first time you met Sunset...and the place where you bond with her.
>The memory resurfaced...and every moment you remember being with her here gives you strength and every strength increase your pace...until you reached your destination...where a group gather in front of that strange horse statue.
>You can see her there...approaching the group...
>Just one more push...
>And you can clearly see her bacon hair...
>one...
>her voice...soft...
>push...
"S-sun..."
>You croak...anymore pressure on your dry throat will likely to damaged it...but you dont care.
"Sun..se.."
>Suddenly, your body shuts down...and your face scrape the hard, cold stonewalk...
"...t.."
>So close...yet so far...
>And darkness slowly invade the corners of your eyes...breathing became difficult...
>Only your tears and blood warms you...
>and you...
>For the first time in your life...you feel alone...dying...
>And it is better to die than to be alone...right?
>>25779982
>Life flashes...the day when you're born...childhood...first crush...
>Just like an old film roll...no voices,no noise...just images...black and white
>The smile on Pa's face and tears on Ma's cheek as you went to your first school...the middle school...and high school
>Good friends you have...good friends you've lost...
>And her...
>It start to focus on her...
>Her tearful smile when you forgive her...
>Her laugh as you joked with her...
>Her surprised face as you confessed
>her rosy blush as you kissed her...
>Her...your...Sunset Shimmers.
>You're lucky to meet her...the love of your life
>the sun of your life...
>Sunset Shimmer.
>...
>And soon, darkness enveloped you...
>End?
There...its done.Taking a break
>>25780278
So..uhh.
you guys enjoy the story?
>>25780374
Yes
More
Maybe refer to her past as a bully, nowadays people forget that
>>25780374
Please dont give up, Anon musn't quit
>>25777687
Aren't you posting on /mlp/?
Doesn't that kind of automatically makes you a beta faggot? You wouldn't be here if you weren't.
>>25780410
Shit...i forgot. That should rise when...wait a minute...
I got it. Thanks mate.
>>25780417
Anon is not giving up mate.
But his body...it's burnt out. He could die if he pushed himself anymore.
So its not his choice...
>>25780374
Keep Going
>>25780471
"In order for the wolf to survive, it's gotta chew off its own leg"
Or something
>>25780278
Moar pls
>>25767711
Ok.
>>25772262
Wow. Just wow. A lot of feels.
God damnit
Fall asleep again
>>25780278
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oP84AsBX2yA
>Then in the darkness, something called you...
>Someone...her voice is soft and gentle...
>And you use that voice as an anchor to fight back/ To fight the darkness. to fight the tiredness, to fight...
>"an....o...n"
>Soon, everything return but still dull. You gasp like Frankenstein monster first breath, breathing still hurt..
>"Anon...."
>And that voice is beside you, shaking you awake. Her scent hint of sweet lemon. Then your sense return back like a flaming truck,ready to crash you.
>"ANON!.."
>You croak and the girl gave you her water, which you greedily emptied. Throat sill burn but you can now speak
"...ank you...Flutte- *cough* *cough*"
>The dry cough is really painful and as you spit liquid lodging on your throat,a few red crimson liquid came with it.
>"Gosh Darn it Anon! what didja do to yerself?"
>AJ lift you up and use her shoulder to support you. Dash help you out with the other side
>"Yeah bro! Look at you! Even recklessness have limit"
>And they brought you to the group...with Fluttershy behind you.
>Most of the group have shocked face as you are brought before them...except Sunset. She just turn her back on you.
>"Anonymous?! What are you doing here?"
>Twilight Sparkle questioned you, Flash by her side.
>You just stay silent and stare at Sunset.
>Sparkle just sake her head and signal Sunset to deal with this. Sunset nod slowly and turn to you, anger on her face.
>"WHAT ARE YOU THINKING ANONYMOUS!"
>The girls gasp a bit at the sudden shout of Sunset...Flash just hide behind the calm Twilight.
>She approached you,each step is an angry titan stomps.
>"Look at you! you almost die! I told you we are over!"
>And violently prod you for every word but the pain and threats didn't faze you .You just stare at her eyes.
>"Look...I know we have something but it's over! I dont need you anymore! You are useless now. I dont need to use you for food or shelter! YOU.ARE.USELESS.TO.ME!"
>This Sunset...the bully
>>25784153
My biggest fears in my current relationship confirmed.
No not her being a pony, but up and leaving with no explanation.
>>25784288
Dont we all?
>>25784153
>you remember...the queen who ruled CHS. Her terror and sadistic manipulation know throughout the entire school.
>Using goons to make sure everyone is in line, manipulating friends into foe, and torturing the helpless.
>But as a queen...you saw a glimpse in her...loneliness and anger.Your effort to befriend her put you on her target list where everyday is bully day.
>"Hey dumb dumb, are you listening?!"
>She knock your head like an empty pot.
>"Look...just give it up ok? Go home...and forget everything that have ever happened here."
>Anger...not yours. It emanates from your side...from the angry glare of AJ and the teeth gritting Dash. Sunset ignored it, still belittling and scolding you. Others are just shocked at Sunset.
>Finally, AJ snapped
>"Listen here ya worthl-"
>But you gently pat her back and stopped her, signaling that you are fine. With a nod at AJ's confused look, they back down.
>"Look Anonymous...if you want gratitude..fine. Thank you...there. Now go home."
>Sunset motion a 'shoo' gesture but you just smile. Slowly regaining your leg back, you tried to stand. Although it feels wobbly, you now stand unsupported with Dash and AJ rejoining the scared flutters.
"Sunset"
>Your voice finally return,strong and full of determination.
"Sunset Shimmer"
>"What?"
>You quickly take the box from your pocket and gave it to her. She quickly open and her angry face became a shocked one
"Sunset Shimmer, will you marry me?"
>Everything became dead silent as you deliver the line smoothly. Not even a breath of wind.
>Sunset's face start to look at you then back to the box, still shock...Then it became confusion...and from confusion, it became anger...the most furious anger you have ever feel.
>Hell hath no fury on this woman's wrath.
>>25784673
i'm feeling it. all the feel.
>>25784673
Please don't stop writing,not with this cliffhanger!
>>25784673
>"Are you FRIGGIN SERIOUS?"
>Her scream echoes throughout the empty school beaking the fragile silence.
>"Did your fall make yo stupid? Wait,,i guess it did because YOU DIDNT EVEN LISTEN TO WHAT I AM SAYING!"
>She threw the box at you, which bounce harmlessly and land beside you.
>"You deaf dumb stupid moron!"
>And start to punch in your chest
>"stupid,stupid monkey idiot"
>but each hit have no power, just her fist bouncing your chest.
>"idiot,double idiot,baka, worthless...fucking faggot...a-and..."
>Her mask cracked into thousand pieces...and fall like the tears in her eyes. Your arms reflexively drag her onto your chest and you tightly embrace her as she weakly struggles.
>"Stop...i am s-suppose t-to be...dont...dont touch me..please...I-I am suppose...to be hated...I-I-I...evil.."
> You kiss her forehead and pat her hair as she stop her struggle, sobbing on your chest.
>"Please...stop...please.."
>She beg...like when she ask you for forgiveness but her body betray her by hugging you back
"Shh.."
>You stroke her hair as her tears soaked your shirt.
"I am here...with you...it's alright"
>"N-no..its not...this is not suppose to happen...y-you are suppose to h-hate me.."
>You chuckle at the silly girl.
"Why? I would never do that...not on my sunnybunny"
>And Sunset join your giggle as her breath stabilizes.
"That the Sunset I know.."
>You kiss her tears goodbye as she stare at you lovingly.
"I love you Sunset"
>"I..I love you too Anon,"
>You kiss her delicate rosy lips and she accept it with warm affection.
>"oh!"
>She slowly stop the kiss
>"And the answer is...yes"
>You grin and both of you went back to show how much you love each other.
>With a kiss...a deep and warm kiss...ignoring everything and every moment...
>a pure, love kiss
>>25784976
I feel better now.
>>25784976
>"ehem"
>You can feel Sunset's hands on your face as her tongue explores your teeth and lips.
>"EHEM!"
>Caressing her back while your tongue explore hers...
>"guys...? Oh Celestia help me..."
>Both of you are beginning to get hot as you slip your hand on Sunset's pan-
>"GUYS!"
"huh?!"
>"What!?"
>Twilight is beside you, looking annoyed. The rest of the girls...and Flash, cheers at you and Sunset.
>"Look...we dont really have much time now. You know what to do,Sunset."
>Sunset nod as Twilight sigh and return to Flash.
>"Anon..."
>She meekly glance at you.
>"I have to tell you the truth now..."
>This is it...
>"I am actually not from this world...I am actually a unicorn...from the land called Equestria"
>She hold your hand tightly
>"And I was banished here for a terrible deed...so...now you know why I am desperate to go home"
>She stare at you, eyes with conviction but also...fear. The fear of rejection.
>"I...now you know I am some kind of alien..."
>Tears gather on her faltering eyes and lips tremble
>"A...are you still...going to love a monster?"
>Are you? She is telling the truth...the real harsh truth.
>"Hehehe"
>She tried to laugh it out and release any physical contact with you...
>"I understand if you dont...It's your decision after all..."
>Sunset close her eyes
>"I..understand if you leave right now...so closing my eyes will be simple for bot of us...and dont worry...I do not hate you...never"
>A few seconds of silence as you gather your thought.
>Is she for real? An alien..? That explain some of her behavior...but a monster? you are a human...and human stay with each other..
>The girl in front of you...is she really a girl? She's closing her eyes and trying to smile, her body shakes in fear but ready for any of your answer...
>Should you leave...for it is better to mingle with the known...or still love an unknown monster?
>You smile sadly...as your mind reach the conclusion...
>Sorry..
>>25767844
>>25767947
>>25767970
>>25771365
>>25778682
This: http://picosong.com/nKYw/
For when you don't want to let her go.Not before you dunk her heart with your b-ball of love.
>>25785191
Sorry but taking a break for a while.
Will be writing the conclusion after few hour.
So how do you like the story so far?
>>25785200
Fucking Kingdom Hearts man. Love that song
>>25767711
>It seems odd that she would do something like this.
>She's either going on one hell of a hike, or...
"Sunset?"
>She forces a fake smile.
>"Yeah?"
>You sigh and slowly walk towards her, hands in your pockets.
"I'm not going to ask what you're doing or why. After all you've been through after...you know...you've had enough people depriving you of any privacy."
>Her smile fades and she looks down.
"Usually I'd step in and whiteknight the hell out of everything. Put up a valiant effort to save the girl. Earn a friend or two in the process, and maybe conclude this so-called 'story' with some sort of climactic face-off with the antagonist that ends in me being victorious and getting laid. That is, if an ending is ever reached. But not this time. I'm tired of it all. Besides, from the looks of things, you've already made up your mind."
>"Anon..."
>You cut her off by holding up a hand.
"Let me just say my piece and I'll let you be on your merry way," you say, pausing to scratch the back of your head. "What you're about to do cannot be undone. There'll be no magic to save you. Not this time. But you already know that, don't you?"
>No response.
"As cheesy as it sounds, it's going to hurt when you're gone. It'll hurt me. It'll hurt your friends who've basically become your family. And believe it or not, it'll hurt everyone else, too. But with time we'll grow to forgive you again, Sunset, because that's what friends do. But the question you need to ask yourself is, can you forgive yourself?"
>Sunset rubs an arm, opening her mouth every now and then as though to reply, but no words come out.
"Anyways, that's all I needed to say. See ya."
>You turn around and walk the opposite way, leaving Sunset to her thoughts as she keeps looking at the ground, eyes not focused on anything in particular as the crickets chirp in the distance.
>>25785207
is good do more am like
>>25785191
"sorry..."
>You whispers to yourself and Sunset nod quickly.
>"I understand...thank you Anonymous. Thank you for loving me...goodbye..."
>Another forced smile but her eyes still closed.
>What is this girl thinking?
>You kneel down and take the ring box and...Sunset start to cry again. This time she still close her eyes yet her body shivers and lips still forced to smile.
>"Thank...you..."
>She repeated that sentence, each slowly becoming a whispers. You shake your head as you take out the engagement ring and gently hold her right hand.
>"A-Anon?!"
"You know....you are a silly girl..."
>And slide the ring on her ring finger.
"I was just saying sorry to Ma and Pa. No grandkids anytime soon...hahah-URK!"
>Sunset suddenly hug you while kissing your forehead.
>"You idiot...dont do that again...I thought...you will reject me..."
"Pfft..reject you? Sunny...I almost died chasing you. Why do you think ill reject you?"
>B-because i am not from this world..?"
"Meh...not a strong argument"
>"and I am a unicorn?"
"The horned white horses?"
>"No...more of a...an orange furred pony unicorn..."
"Ponies....? The miniature horses?"
>She nod
>"Ponies...."
>And the image of her being a pony made you laugh.
>"S-stop it...it's not funny"
>She pout but you laugh harder. After few minute of her pouting at you and you collect your side, sunset went to show off her engagement ring while you rest for a bit. Dash and Flash sit beside you.
>"That was ballsy Anon. I almost punched her ya know"
"Yeah..AJ have the same thing in mind, Dash."
>"Well..looks like we have something in common,Anon. Both our lover are from different dimensions.."
"Yeah...and I almost kill you Flash.
>"What?! Why?"
"Touching my girl"
>"Oh right...sorry"
>And time slowly pass as the girls congratulate both of you and Sunset before Twilight calls the group to gather.
>>25785191
Don't stop
>>25785680
>"Thank you all for coming...and congratulation for Anon and Sunset's engagement"
>The girls applause as bot you and Sunset nod in embarrassment. Twilight join in for a bit before continuing
>"The portal is almost open...its time to say our goodbyes"
>Sunset nod and began to personally her farewell to her friends as the hug her. Twilight does the same.
>Then she finally stand in front of you...with a refreshing smile.
>"This is it huh?"
"I guess.."
>"promise me that you wont be sad..."
"Me?Sad? How bout you Sugarbun?"
>Sunset raised her eyebrow
>"Anon...dont evade the question..."
"Fine...I'll try...It's going to be a difficult without you...so...I promised."
>Her smile widened and she quickly kiss you.
"So...when will you be back"
>"...I dont know...A year maybe"
"Damn...this is going to be a tough year."
>"But I know you can do it...."
>She hug you and you hug back...tighter that it became difficult to breath but both of you dont care.
"Sunny...just dont cry"
>"W-what?! you are insensitive sometimes Anon.
"But you love it"
>Both of you chuckle before a strange swirly portal appeared in front of the statue.
>Sunset look at Twilight and Twilight nod. One last kiss before she left.
>"I am going to miss you Anon love"
"Me too sunny bunny"
>And she quickly rush into the portal, trying not to break down again. Without a sound, she vanished from this world.
>Twilight is still saying her goodbyes to Flash...and something light up on your mind.
>What you will do might have large consequences but it's better to try than do nothing.
>The price will be your family and friends...your home...earth...
>Should you risk it or better be safe than sorry?
I know you guys would prefer anon to enter the portal so no need to ask for decision here
>>25785810
Do it, go after her! Hut hut hut!
>>25785810
>Take a deep breath and let it out. Crack and limber your body.
>"Uhh..bro, what are you doing?"
>Dash approached you
"Nothing..."
>You grin and she start to be a bit uncomfortable but you see opportunity when Flash kiss Twilight
>"I dont like that face..."
"I know"
>"Hey what do you-"
>And you dash away from her and focus on the glowing portal...
>Everything began to slow down...The girls look at you, surprised painted on their faces. Twilight slowly turn at you, eyes widened.
>You quickly apologize to them..to Pa and Ma...to the girls...to Sunset.
>And time slowly returns as you jumped into the portal.
"TO INFINITY AND BEYOOOOOOO-"
>And it feels like your body being torn to pieces and formed again and again like a clay...as you began to lose consciousness.
>A dreamless sleep...
>until something kick you and you quickly open your eyes. An emerald eyes stare at you...a bacon maned pony with a horn?
>She hit you again in the face with her hoof
>"YOU CELESTIA DAMNED IDIOT!"
"S-sunn-"
>"DONT YOU SUNNY BUNNY ME THIS TIME!"
>And slap(?) you again.
>"WHAT DO YOU THINK YOU"RE DOING HUH? JUMPING TO AN UNKNOWN PORTAL...YOU THINK THIS IS A GAME?"
"Sunny please calm do-"
>"DONT YOU DARE TELL ME TO CALM DOWN! W-WHAT IF YOU DIED YOU IDIOT!"
>She take a deep,deep breath
>"What if you died?"
>and hug you...her fur feels warm...
>"Please Anon...dont be this dumb..ever..again"
"I..promised...beside, we already plan to go together yeah?"
>Sunset snort as she shake her head.
>"What did I ever do to deserve this"
"Maybe when you bully m-"
>"Dont use that...you cheating bastard"
>You laugh as you try to stroke her mane with your...
Alright,last finishing touch.
>Hand
>Hoof
Ill be back in hours
>>25785945
Hand, keep us the manliest human to jump through portals like love sick idiots.
>>25785945
Anon was human from the very beginning, therefore he should be immune to silly pony magick
>>25785991
Damn right.
>>25785945
I can't wait for more.
>>25785991
All those humans where affected in the Equestria Girls movies, so I doubt Anon would be immune to magic. If anything he should be more vulnerable to magic, at least until his body adapts.
>>25786056
Still stays a human, lost a kidney
>>25786056
Psychic manipulation =/= magick (I don't know if any other shit happens in other EqG movies other than 1st)
>>25785945
>Hoof
Follow the rules.
>>25785972
>>25785991
>>25786581
The winner is human
Sorry hoof guy
Resume writing
>>25786056
>>25786581
Anon is immune to magic and to psychic manipulation (not that they're necessarily mutually exclusive). This green is pretty noice.
>>25785945
>Fingers. Hmm...Still human...interesting.
>Your fingers dive deep into her fur as you scratch her back.
>"A-anon...stop it.."
>She shivers in delight and letting out a strange noise.
"Wow...you're really soft..ya know that..."
>And then you look at her horn and stop petting her
"Is this...your horn...?"
>"Y-yeah...pretty coo-MPH!"
>She froze as soon as you touch the tip. Its not sharp but pretty soft and kinda like a bone.
>"A-ano-EEEK!"
>You ignore her as your curiosity tempt you to explore more about this horn...by rubbing and prodding.
Her voice is getting hot and bothered.
"Say Sunny, what does the....Sunbun?"
>She look at you...with a red face,tears and saliva dropping. Anger and lust mixed in her eyes.
"Uh...you ok?"
>"A-anon...y-you better k-know that...horns are s-sensitive"
>She tried to lecture you but it comes out like a teacher seducing a teen and you began to sweat like a fat kid on a treadmill.
>"A-and that's why you should never...never touch it"
>She take a deep breath...although,her face is still red.
>"But it is strange to see you still a human..."
"I know but I am thankful"
>"Oh, why's that?"
"Because this.."
>Boop!
>And her face scrunches...its cute.
>"Stop that!"
"And...bellyruub!"
>With human agility, you grab her and began to rub her soft belly as she yell at you to stop. Soon enough, her hind leg twitches as she tried to scold you again
>This is fun...until
>"Ahem!"
>Both of you stop and look at the voice. It's a purple pony with wing and horn.
>"Anonymous...why did you JUMP.INTO.THE.PORTAL!"
>And it sounds like Twilight...
>Twilight cock-blocked you again...wait a minute!
"Gee Twi..how come you get a wing and a horn?"
>"Oh Anon, it was the result of my hard wo...are you trying to avoid the question?"
>You look at the giggling Sunset and look back at Twilight innocently
"Uh..no?"
>Sunset went full blown laughter and soon you joined too...at the expense of an angry twilight.
>>25787150
>20 minutes of lecturing later..
>"We should get moving...the princess need to know about this."
>Twilight began to walk into the forest.
>"then we will run some test on why are you still human"
>You shrug
"Sure...as long as I get to see my Sunnybunny"
>Sunset blush a bit as both of you walk side by side, following the still-talking purple horse.
>"Do you...regret your decision?"
>Sunset whispers
"nope!"
>"Even if you never seen your family again?"
>You sigh a bit...but..
"Nah...I want to experience what you experience Sunset..."
>she nod sadly but quickly cheered up as you ruffle her bacon mane.
"And you know the best thing is?"
>What?"
>You kiss her and she quickly step back, crimson face and cute gasp.
"I get to be with my fiancee"
>She stop...look at you then the ring,which is now a necklace with a sunset sky colored gem and look back at you with the happiest and dearest smiles you've ever seen.
>She captured your heart...again.
THE END.
So...Enjoyed the story?I apologize for the wonky grammar tho.
Oh! If you guys want to edit and save them, You are doin me a favor. I already have my pastebin full
>>25787230
Now after having read all of this I got an idea: what if Anon sneaks after Twilight and/or whoever frequents the portal at "unusual times" just to follow to the other side?
Still, would've been nice to see some more.
BUT!
*somethingaboutlivelongenoughtobecomethevillain*
>>25787265
True
I cant do a long story.
Best to end it while it's still interesting
>>25767711
bump
I haven't had pressure from a green like this on my feels gland that caused a roller coaster of feels since ...well...I don't remember
Bumpkin
Hopefully the newbie writefag continue
>>25767711
>>"I'll uh... I'll see you tomorrow."
>>"Good night..."
>>"And thanks."
>>"For everything."
>The sky pours like a punctured bucket, casting a misty haze in the air around you.
>The drum-roll of thick droplets rattle the tented fabric overhead. An umbrella-shaped area around you wavers lightly with the wind, glassy with moisture.
>Elsewhere, the droplets mercilessly bombard the waterlogged concrete, erupting into misty splashes shaped like midsummer weeds.
>Amidst the rapidly dying water-weeds, an unapologetically striking damsel stares back at you with saddened eyes.
>Sunset stands in front of the infamous horse statue, utterly unperturbed by the rain.
>Her crimson-gold hair clings to her face like wet strands of torn love letters.
>You do the incredibly ungentlemanly thing and entirely fail to offer her your umbrella.
>Sunset doesn't seem to mind.
>Strangely enough, she seems happy to see you despite your shocked stupor.
>Sunset tilts her head slightly, her smile crumpled with sadness.
>You both know she won't be back tomorrow.
>She lies, but she means well.
>The opalescent globes of her eyes glitter with what you hope are raindrops.
>>25796317
>You take a very slow step forward, almost as to not shatter the barely held-up facade before you.
>Sunset tries her damnedest to keep up that radiant smile you've come to adore over the years.
>But you know better. She's hurting mightily on the inside, trying to stay strong for you.
>You glimpse the corners of her mouth wavering, her radiant smile about to fall apart.
>She persists valiantly.
>Fighting for courage. For herself, and for you.
>You feel scalding hot droplets making jagged cuts down your cheeks, one after another.
>A tearful lump chokes your throat, refusing to be swallowed.
>The closer you get to her, the blurrier she gets.
>You don't dare blink your eyes, lest you shed more tears.
>Her silhouette almost fades into the rain, foreshadowing the unthinkable.
>You don't dare try to wipe the tears from your face — because you aren't crying, dammit.
>Sunset wouldn't want to see you cry. Not like this. Not right now.
>You continue to stride forward slowly. The soft sloshing of wet soles accented by clik-clok of heels on wet concrete.
>Sunset meets you at the halfway mark, like she had done with you so many moons ago.
>Friendship is a two-way street, she had said quite often.
>Her hands are resting lightly on your chest, feeling the broken rhythm of your breaths. You're sobbing quietly.
>>25796364
>Sunset leans in, resting her head against your neck.
>>"Anon, please. You know I can't stay here. I-I don't belong here."
>Tears begin flowing from your eyes, hot against the cold winds like streams of lava.
>For a moment, you lose yourself in tears. And you hate yourself for being selfish.
>Sunset is fighting to keep her calm, and you aren't even trying.
>But you love her so much.
>Sunset's voice cracks tearfully, climbing up an octave.
>>"P-please don't cry, love. Please don't make me leave thinking you won't be alright."
>Sunset pecks a gentle kiss on your neck, leaving scalding hot tear marks under your jaw.
>You grab her hand and rub it against your face.
>She responds, grabbing onto your cheek and wiping at your tears with her thumb.
>Her hands are unforgettably soft and lovely.
>You'd give anything to make this moment last, even for a second.
>>25796411
>>"We promised we'd be strong for each other—"
>The beleaguered damsel lets wracking sobs seep into her voice, her facade shattering painfully before you.
>>"—so please. Oh god I beg you please. Please don't make my cry, my love..."
>Sunset hangs onto your neck, burying her face in your chest.
>>"I am so so so sorry, baby... I don't wanna leave you like this—"
>You toss the umbrella aside, and wrap your darling Sunny in a tight embrace.
>Rain be damned. Portal be damned. Equestria be damned.
>You quietly curse this wretched day.
>You take her left hand, idly rubbing a small piece of metal adorning one of her fingers.
>A mood ring you had gotten her on a road trip together. A cheap gift shop knick-knack.
>It means a world to her.
>You fight back the tears, stroking her ember-gold hair.
>Her shoulders are shaking, wringing tears and muffled pleas with each sob.
>You clench her tightly in your arms, gazing upward at nothing in particular.
>The rain keeps pouring unapologetically, and you close your eyes.
>Some tears aren't washed easily.
>>25796464
>Sunset spends a few minutes in your arms, collecting herself.
>She looks up at you, pulling your chin down.
>Your lips meet hers, deliberately and slowly.
>She strokes your hair, savoring every second of the unforgettable moment.
>And just like that, she breaks off the kiss. Almost too soon.
>She backs into the portal, not breaking eye contact with you for a second.
>Her hands slowly part yours, and you reluctantly let go.
>You reach feebly toward her, grasping at thin air.
>As Sunset begins to cross the divide, she whispers.
>>"I love you."
>You muster up the brightest smile you can manage.
"I love you too."
-- fin --
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>>25796548
not bad, but too short.
>>25796548
A quick question: how long is the period for the portal reopening again?
>>25796548
Sequel
Anon becomes the new villain of Equestria and EQG.
>>25796986
about 2 years or so
>>25796986
neversorry
Should we expand this idea of someone you love leaving or just focus on Sunnybunny but in other setting?
The thread will be dead and barren if y'all keep bumping.
>>25797998
Waifu leaving general when
>>25797279
I thought it was every full moon ir something?
>>25798328
every 30 moons
>>25773882
Just do it
>>25798478
Then how long is it between RR and Eqg?
>>25773991
Don't be disheartened. Honest constructive criticism is a boon. Use it and keep going.
>>25778425
The more you do the better it gets. Don't stumble over insecurities. You're doing fine
>>25798478
Is that human or equestria moons? Or bith since day at canterlot high is night in equestria
>>25798495
Dude...
Story already done but yeah, experience and critism help too
>>25798530
No story is every truly finished
>>25796548
what the hell man
>>25798557
When a story ends, another journey begins...
or something like that
>>25796548
>>25796464
>>25796411
>>25796364
>>25796317
I got what I wanted...but I wish I hadn't.
>the portal is closed for good
>she misses you terribly
>>25800665
>She comes to regret her decision to go home
>She realizes she could never love a stallion as much as she grew to love you
>Celestia refuses to allow her to return
>She lives the rest of her life depressed and miserable, accepting no other suitors
>She goes to bed every night thinking you'll be beside her in bed
>In a way you are
>As a photo on her nightstand.
>>25767711
"Sunset! before you leave...there's something I want to give you"
>You pass Sunset the bowl of eggs from the first night you met.
"You still didn't eat them all"
>A single tear rolls down her face.
>>25801339
>>25798518
Full moons on the equestrian side I think.
>>25798478
Twilight makes a portal in RR, the moons rule doesn't apply.
>>25767711
bump
