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Previous thread >>25610218
Pones that like Anon. Not, LIKE like! Why would you think that?! B-Baka!
Current Writefags' Pastebins:
http://pastebin.com/u/RiggyRag
http://pastebin.com/u/Fruitanon
AnalplugAnon
Green and pictures welcome! Come join the fun! N-Not that we want you to or anything...
>>25690690
Here's my pastebin, friend.
B-but don't think I want to SHARE any of my stories with you!
http://pastebin.com/u/AnalPlugAnon
Woot New threads
TOUCHDOWN!
...I'm, uh...Here.
>>25690717
I'll make sure to include it in the actual thread description next time.
Welcome aboard! I really liked your story from before. I can't wait to see more from you!
I am currently in class, as a college student often is. I'll be writing when I return, though!
Man, I wish I had some ideas for stories.
I can write, yeah, but I haven't really found any inspiration lately.
I'll be sure to let you know if I come up with anything though.
In the meantime, have a picture of pouty RD.
RIGGYYYYYYY
>>25690790Write about a Rainbow Dash that really wants to be treated like a lady and wear dresses and shit, but she always tries to act macho around Anon because that's how they became friends in the first place. And whenever she tries to let her girly side out, she always aborts at the last second for catastrophic results.
You can use that idea if you'd like. That's first thing II got from your picture.
>>25690834
...Yeah, alright.
I'm not particularly experienced in Tsundere itself, but...I'll certainly give it a shot. Thanks!
tfw Riggy didn'tk-kiss you
Why even live?
>>25690866
So we can read his wonderful greens, while he dotes on us.
>>25690834
I'm on a roll with the story right now.
I'll upload the first part of it when it's done.
>>25691175
There ya go! I eagerly await it.
>>25690866Who could say know to dubs like those? Pic related.
>>25690723
>that pic
>>25690834
Based Riggy giving other writefriends ideas to try.
>>25691175
>>25691233
Aww, that's adorable~
>>25691233
U-um... i hope y-you liked that...yousmellkindanice
>>25691291
... O__O tf
How do I become a famous writefriend like RiggyRag and Fapman?
>>25691407
Hardwork my friend, when you put out greens, you shall be accepted as one, from there you must prosper and grow like nature around us. Grow my friend, and become famous.
>>25691407
>famousI don't think I count as famous. Fapman is a living meme. I just write junk.
>>25691464
>tfw he says his work is junk
If junk is what it is, consider me an avid lover of junk.
>>25691464
I'm addicted to this junk
>>25691494
This.
>>25691509
This.
>>25691464
>Fapman is a living meme.
H-hey! I am here, you k-know!
>>25691407
Nay, bro. I don't write, I justhorseshita lot.>mfw people think I write
>mfw people twink I write GOOD
>mfw I want to write but I'm too afraid of writing my shit because my grip on the english is minimal
I'm just hungry for... green?
>>25691464
And once again, you. You write good stuff and you do it well.Praise you.
>>25691494
>>25691509
>>25691610
I might have phrased that poorly. What I meant was I just write stuff. I don't want to make it seem like I was fishing for compliments haha.
But, I don't think I'm famous yet.
One day, though...I might be. If I just keep working hard.
>>25691660
One day you and I will be the most popular lepers in the leper colony.
>>25691660
Riggy, you are one of the saints of /mlp/ don't knock yourself down.
>>25691233
This is the most homoerotic thread on 4chan.
>>25692159
I-it's not like we're gay for you or anything, RiggyB-baka
>>25692188
Y-yeah! Actually w-we d-don't really like you that much anyway, you s-stupid sexy writefag!
btw how old are you, Riggy? it's not like i-i want to form a mental image of you ooor something that stupid...n-no homo
>>25691769
What a day that will be!
>>25692101
Thanks Banny. It means a lot. I've said it before, but i save a lot of these kinds of comments for when I need pick me ups.
>>25692159
We're very loving and our passion boils close to the surface.I know mine does.Too much /fit/ does that to ya.
>>25692672
Turned 20 this past October!
I'll be in class for just a little while longer. Finals prep classes are super important.
Almost done with the first part of my story.
So close. Just a few more checks through.
>>25692748
You're /fit/ Rigster? T-teach me senpai.
>>25692940
What would you like to know? How to get started?
>>25692988
I want to r-run with you in the morning, and then... we'll t-take a shower... you know like t-togetherno homo
Finished. It's not my best work, but...I hope you like it.
>"C'mon, Anon, just a few more rounds!"
"Urgh. Fine. One more, OK?"
>It IS pretty sunny out.
>Then again, when isn't it?
>Considering Ponyvile has a team of pegasi from Cloudsdale dedicated to making the skies clear for ponies to enjoy.
>It's only your typical utopian society.
>They have everything, weather control, easy to live in conditions, pretty much no conflicts whatsoever...
>Everyone is friends with everyone, it seems.
>I guess the secret to making world peace a reality is simply; "Be a pony."
>You don't know why you're so bitter about this. It's paradise.
>Maybe too much of a good thing?
>Eh, whatever.
>Speaking of too much of a good thing, you're hanging out with Rainbow Dash while you're on your break.
>She's a close friend. Seems you hit it off from the moment she hit you.
>Full force.
>Crash landing.
>Ouch.
>You honestly couldn't think of a better first impression for what hanging out with Rainbow Dash would be like.
>But considering you're on your break right now, it's not as welcome a pleasure as it usualy is. You're already exhausted.
>It doesn't help that you're losing 3 - 0 to her at horseshoe toss.
>That's rounds won, not points.
>You check your watch.
>You've still got a decent chunk of time before your break is over.
>You don't understand how you've played this many rounds and still have time to spare.
>This is not the sort of activity you should be participating in, considering you work for Applejack.
>Well, you're not a whiner. You're a winner.
>You're definitely not going to back down from a challenge, expecialy if it's against Rainbow.
>You never considered yourself a particularly competitive person before meeting her.
>But her brash attitude and cocky swagger ignited something within you.
>You've been trying to get the better of her ever since.
>That's not going to happen though, unless someone retrieves those horseshoes.
>Or somePONY.
>You take a glance at your rival in question.
>She looks back at you, cocky smile slowly fading into an expectant look.
>She can't expect you to pick them up again.
>A whiner you may not be, but you're certainly not a slave.
"Go on."
>"What? Why should I do it? You're the one who lost."
"Well, what are you going to be doing after this?"
>"Heh! Well, I was getting pretty tired, so I was thinking maybe I'd take a nap."
"Take...A nap?"
>"You heard me."
"Dash, I WISH I could take a nap. Some of us, however have got jobs to get back to. Hot, sweaty and physicaly challenging jobs. Like my job, Rainbow. JOB. Ring a bell?"
>She looks away from you, head raised proudly.
>"I'm sure you can handle it."
>Damnit, Dash.
>"Besides, you shouldn't be making me do the work. It's not polite."
>You cast a bemused glance at her.
"Excuse me?"
>"I said, "It's not polite", stupid! Do I have to repeat everything?"
"I heard you just fine. But seriously, what? Since when have you ever cared about being polite?"
>She snorts, and suddenly shoots off into the air.
>She does an impressive - albeit unnecessary - shuttle loop, and hovers at your side, now at eye level with you.
>Guess she wants to make a point.
>"W-well, what do YOU know?"
"I know YOU, for a start. You're far from a "Prim and proper lady", Dash."
>"Can we just play the game already?"
>Well, that was an unexpected change of subject.
>Rainbow Dash is far from one to give up an argument easily, especially one as short as that.
>You hate to say it, but you're disappointed.
>There's only one thing for it.
>Time to tease.
"Sure thing, Rainbow."
>You smile a smug smile, and proceed to pick up the horseshoes, loading your metaphorical word pistol with newfound ammunition.
>Once all of the horseshoes are collected, you waltz back to her side, still smiling.
>She's pouting at you.
>Pouting? Her? Really?
>Wow. You feel like you've beaten her already.
>Mainly because that's her losing face.
>Her head follows you all the way back to the line.
"Well, then, let's go. Ladies first."
>She scrunches up her face a little more, a blush becoming apparent on her cheeks.
>You love it when she gets like this. It's one of your prime motivations for trying to win against her.
>"N-no, I won the last one, so you get the first throw."
"Thank you, Lady Dash. How FAIR."
>"Sh-shut up."
>The blush on her cheeks becomes progressively more fiery.
>All this exhaustion is starting to feel worth it.
>All the teasing in the world isn't going to win you the game, however.
>You begin to aim your horseshoe.
>You take a quick glance in rainbow's direction.
>She's looking at the sky, a red glow noticeable through her fur coat.
>You grin, and put your head back in the game.
>Swinging the horseshoe back and forth, you begin to generate momentum.
>Sticking your tounge out the side of your mouth, you concentrate on the game.
>Steady
>S t e a d y
>S T E A D Y
>"HEY!"
>CURSE YOU, RAINBOW DASH
>Fortunately, you were anticipating such sabotage, and the shot doesn't go far off course.
>And it still lands respectably close to the pole.
>Not too close, but a good starting shot.
>You glance at her, and your smug smile returns.
>She has a smile on her face too, despite her failed attempt to impede your success.
"Need something?"
>"Nah, slipped my mind."
"Huh."
>She begins to reach down for a horseshoe, but you pick one up before she gets there.
>You present the horseshoe to her, inches away from her mouth.
>She glares at you, and continues to as she slowly flutters down, grabs a different horseshoe and ascends once again, without losing face.
>This is fun.
>She then faces the pole, preparing to throw.
>Then, you notice something.
"Hey."
>She stops and looks at you.
>"Yeah?"
"Let's make it fair this time."
>She raises an eyebrow at you.
"You've got an altitude advantage. How about you stand on the ground?"
>"What?! But you're...You're tall!"
"Fine. Move down to my arm. That way we'll throw from the same point, more or less."
>"B-but..."
"You telling me you won't be able to win from there?"
>The classic bait. Foolproof.
"I...I'm telling you t-that I'm...I'm...Grr..."
>She grumbles, and descends a few feet, blushing again.
>She's not resisting as much as you expected her to.
>Guess you've really gotten to her.
>She doesn't say anything to you, and gazes back at the target.
>You're not done with her yet, though.
>She swings back and forth, and then, just when it looks like she's about to throw it...
"Good luck, my lady"
>She just about stops herself from letting go of the horseshoe.
>"HrrrrrrrrrmmmmmMMMMM!"
>You laugh, loudly.
>"I-I-IDIOT!"
"What's wrong?"
>"...Don't you ever call me that again!"
"OK, OK. I'll stop now."
>You feel that she's had enough for now. You need to finish the game before you're late, anyway.
>"Good!"
>She starts building up momentum again.
>You just stand and watch. You don't care weither you win or lose now.
>As far as you're concerned, you're satisfied.
>She stops and starts a few times, obviously flustered.
>Each time she does, you can see her getting progressively more and more frustrated.
>You can't tell if her cheeks are heating up from anger, or from embarrassment.
>"RrrrrrAGH!"
>She just throws it.
>No build up this time.
>It goes far, and lands far away from the pole.
>She's going to explode, you can feel it.
>"...T-THAT DIDN'T COUNT!"
>Called it.
>Not high enough altitude, nor of enough patience to dive and get it, she simply drops to the floor and gallops full speed towards the horseshoe.
>However, doesn't take into account the terrain below her hooves.
>You hadn't been playing far from Apple Jack's farm, as she practically met you at the gate with the horseshoes and pole.
>You found some broad, flat area nearby to play on.
>Well, as flat as you could find it. It was still pretty bumpy.
>Her hoof catches on a dent in the ground, hidden by some grass.
>"W-Whooaaa-oof!"
>It was quite a spectacular fall.
>You'd laugh, but you've laughed enough already.
>Besides, that looked pretty painful.
>Without thinking, you run to her side.
"Are you OK?"
>Hmmmnn...It's nothing..."
>You can't lie, you would've let her get herself back up.
>She's recovered from worse, MUCH worse than what she just took.
>But for some reason, after all the talk about politeness, you just couldn't resist.
>You reach out with your right hand, and firmly grasp her right hoof, but not roughly.
>She reacts in surprise, and darts her head up to look at you.
>You find yourself staring into her eyes.
>She stares back.
>You're so used to having those eyes sneer at you, that you never really got a chance to...appreciate them.
>They're a sweet pink, although you only ever thought of them as red.
>She appears to be looking into your eyes too.
>You wonder what she's thinking...
>Your heart begins to race.
>Wait, What? Why are you so excited?
>She's done nothing but treat you like dirt since you got here, and you the same way, ever since you met her.
>You...Don't...LIKE her, do you?
>She has the brightest blush on her cheeks. Much brighter than before.
>"A-Anon...Thanks."
>Her voice seems...Tight.
>You start to worry about her being in pain again.
>You put your hand under the frog of her hoof and lift her up.
>Your sudden movement seems to snap her out of her trance.
>"Uh...H-HEY!"
>She quickly regains her footing and moves away from you, avoiding eye contact.
>She looks angry.
>You both sit in silence for a second.
>A mere moment however, and she quickly bounces back.
>"...Thanks for nothing! I got back up by myself!"
>Still blushing, still angry.
"Good."
>It's all you can manage to say.
>You're still trying to recover, yourself.
>You feel like someone is punching your ribcage from the inside.
>You try to look into her eyes again, but she avoids your gaze.
>"U-uh...W-we'll finish this later. You...YOU DON'T WANNA BE LATE!"
>She propels herself off the ground, and her blue colour is soon lost against the clear sky.
>What's her problem?
>...What's YOUR problem?
>What happened just now?...anon...
>You've been friends with her for years, and something like that...Never happened before.
>You suppose you've been busy lately, and haven't been able to compete with her as often as you used to, but...
>She couldn't have changed too much, right?...ey...anon...!
>You have time to work that out later, though. Right now, you should probably get to wo"ANON FOR PETES' SAKE!"
>Oh.
>"Come ON, ANON! If ah have to carry ya over here, you'll be doin' more work ta make up fer it!"
"I'LL BE RIGHT THERE!"
>...
>Well, it looks like your break just ended.
>Damn. Your back hurts.
That's about it, for now.Oh, god, I could've put this at the end of the last messageDamnitMy life is over
>>25693178
That was sweet af. I loved it! Thanks for writing Hellmiester!
You should make a pastebin.
>>25693346
Ah...!
...T-thanks.
I'll...I'll think about it...
>>25690690
No
is yandere
>>25692988
yah basically. your wisdom would be much appreciated
>>25693707
Well, okay. I just got out of class.
The first thing you have to know is, no matter what you do, as long as you work hard, you will become fit. That sounds weird, but it's very true.
The second thing you have to come to terms with is the fact that, in your current state, you're a lot weaker physically than the fit people that will be around you in the gym and stuff. They can lift way more, run way further, and look really good.
You have to just own up to that, embrace it, don't feel ashamed for being a beginner. I say this because a lot of people get demotivated by the incredible effort everyone around them puts forth for huge lifts, and then you're squatting with an empty bar.
Anytime you start to think to yourself, "What's the point? There's no way I'll ever get to that level." stop yourself and say, "As long as I do my work out every day, I'll get to that level in no time." and be proud of that!
Third, the technical stuff.
Figure out what you're going for: Weight loss, mass gain, or just getting fit.
The thing is, no matter what you're going for, lifting will always make you healthier, more fit, and get bigger.
Running and cardio are important to keep your heart strong and efficient.
So here is my recommendation for someone just starting out. This is what I did when I started about a year ago:
Do the 5x5 Stronglifts routine (http://stronglifts.com/5x5/), sticking to the weights very closely. Just because you feel like you can lift more does not mean you're actually ready for it.
Run once a day. I usually hit the treadmill before I lift in the morning, or I jog in the morning before my classes. Starting off with just a mile run is perfectly fine, just try to go a little further every day. Running hurts, but the calories it burns makes you look great.
When you can't get to a gym, or just don't have one nearby, do tons of bodyweight exercises! Pushups, situps, pullups, chinups, planking, scissor kicks, squats, crunches, bicycle kicks, etc.
>>25693907
That should be a good starter pack, I think. Go to /fit/ and check their sticky for grand advice: http://liamrosen.com/fitness.html
Also, that's a pretty old drawing from the first thread I ever wrote in. Enjoy it's terribleness. I hadn't gotten anatomy for pones down yet.
>>25693090
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>>25693227
Nice work so far, matey. But was your name maybe intended to be "Hellmeister"?
>>25694209
Uh...Yeah. It was.
I'll just keep it as it is. Instead of My-ster it's going to be me-ester.I can do that, right?
>>25694294
You can but it sounds kinda stupid. At least for me since I'm german.
>>25693925
was that theponies aroused by anons physiquethread? i never read it butit put the idea in my head to get /fit/
most important thing is never stop. as soon as you stop its the hardest thing to start again.STAY DETERMINED
>>25694311
Eh. I might as well keep it.
Thanks for the praise, by the way! I don't write often.
>>25693907
Saitama, what are doing on /mlp/? The city needs you!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FmHJCVExXG0
>>25690690
bump
>>25694553
I love me some One Punch Man, but Saitama is just my strength goal.My physique goal is this glorious man right here.
Just got back from dinner, cookin' up some green now.
>>25694321
Also yes, that the first thread I ever wrote for.
>>25694808
Good writes to you, Riggy
Best song to listen to while getting fit.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=POkU70cjYI8
Motivates you and fills you with energy like no other.
>"Just sign here, please!"
>You've never gotten any mail during your time in Ponyville.
>It hasn't exactly been LONG since you've found yourself in the pony town, for sure.
>But you were surprised to find the grey pegasus mare outside the door to the little side shed on the Apple's farm that you called home.
"For me? I've never gotten any mail before."
>She rolls her lopsided eyes, a surprisingly cute feat.
>"Well, then I guess there's a first time for everything! But, if you could hurry- I've got a lot more stuff on my route..."
>She hefts the large saddles bags, stuffed with letters.
>Good lord, does she lift or what?
>You quickly sign the delivery slip, taking the brown box in hand.
>"Thank you!" she says, and begins to trot off.
>You shake the box a little as she goes, wondering what's inside.
>Not a single sound to give it away. Damn.
>You manage to tear at the tape a little bit, and unfold the top.
>CONFETTI EVERYWHERE
>In your hair, on your clothes, even a small puff of it comes out as you cough.
>A couple balloons and some streamers even fall out of the box, and there's a single letter inside.
>"Anon- happy monthiversary of you living in Ponyville! Thought I'd celebrate with a super-duper special letter, just for you! Lot's of Fun- Pinkie Pie!"
>Adorable. And also a very Pinkie thing to do.
>You pocket the letter, and notice a faint whistling sound.
>A sound that gets louder every moment.
>A sound definitely coming from above you.
>You hesitate to look up, and notice the same mailmare plummeting right towards the ground.
>"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!"
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!"
>The crash is loud, and you swear you see little muffins floating around your head for a moment before you shake yourself out of your stupor.
>The grey mare is lying on top of you, her eyes covered by an errantly launched streamer.
Still writing, and here is a Drawfag Funtime Winner's drawing: Twilight starts a fire while cooking for Anon.
I colored this one.
It took longer than expected.Sorry
>>25695197
>Tsunderpy
>>25694808
>mfw
>>25695197
moar plz
>>25695211
Ooh, toasty!We can just blame Spike, who cares if it's a different colored flame?
>>25695197
>"Help! I can't see! How am I ever going to see the addresses for deliveries now!?"
>You calmly pluck the offending piece of paper off the pegasus' face.
>She blinks, realizing the ridiculousness of her outburst.
>She blushes a little, turning away from you.
>"I-I didn't need any help!"
>You cough a little, nodding.
"Of course- just trying to be neighborly."
>She scrunches her face, and quickly hops off of you.
>"I just was- uh- just needed to- I mean..."
>She shifts on her hooves uncomfortably
>"I can take care of myself just fine!"
>You nod again, never having disagreed with that statement.
>She puffs up her cheeks.
>"A-anyways um... thank you for, uh, helping... Even though I totally had everything under control!"
"It's no problem- helping around is what I do."
>She reddens quite a bit more, lightly shoving you.
>"Well I dont- I don't need it! So there!"
>Before you can respond she's already gone- taken off into the sky almost as fast as Rainbow Dash.
>Who'd have thought such a cute mare could be so damned tsun-tsun
Is there a story where anon thinks a pony is being tsundere, but it turns out that they actually do hate him?
>>25695699
Just the idea's giving me feels.
>>25695699
>>25696293
There'd better be some kinda crazy happy end is all I can say. Like Anon gets bummed out because of tsunpone but ends up happy with overlooked best friend pone who was there all along.
>>25696360
Or-or, Anon gets bummed out, kills himself, and just ends up being reborn, so to speak, having all the mares flock to him and treat him like the best nigger ever.Or in another Equestria.
Because the ride never ends.
Sorry for the delay everyone. I've been working on the update while working on a final due on Wednesday. It's hard to budget my time, but I'm still getting a little out.
>>25690690
>Your new shoes clack against the stone stairs of the castle.
>Even though you live in the back yard of the castle, you almost never go into the main cooridoors.
>Of course you know your way around, you have to bring certain iron creations to different areas of the fortress.
>But you usually stick to the less public areas of the castle.
>Hiddin halls and secret chambers that you use as short cuts.
>Seems like only guards and staff use them.
>They're more efficient for getting around, but there's only one way into Twilight's study.
>Straight through the giant main halls, up the stairs on the left, last door at the end of the hall.
>You remember well. This isn't your first trip up there.
>Though it is the first time you've been called up there for something so severe.
>Any other time was either to talk or because you had forgotten to do something. Nothing like deliberately breaking the rules.
>At least you were breaking the rules for your friends. That'll make whatever punishment you recieve feel a little better.
>You pause as you reach the top of the stone stairs leading away from the main hall.
>The shining magnificence of the castle's interior is not lost on you.
>Sometimes you have to remind yourself just how beautiful this building is. You see it so often that you've become accustomed to it.
>But here in the main halls that you tread so rarely, you can find a bit of the awe you once had for its crystal architecture.
>>25696744
>You start to wander down a long, darkened, purple cooridor.
>The floors are polished so much that you see your reflection staring down at you.
>What an odd angle to see yourself from.
>You continue walking through the still hall, lit by purple crystals that stick out from the walls.
>You have an odd flashback to elementary school when you were sent to the princpal's office.
>The halls are big and scary, you're all alone as you walk so you can reflect on your stupidity.
>But you're pretty sure your principal didn't have an overwhelming crush on you.
>And if they did... well that's another problem all together.
>You finally make it to the large wooden door at the end of the all.
>Well, large is a relative term. Compared to ponies it is rather large.
>For you it's just like the doors in the human world. The door to your shack might be larger actually.
>You raise your curled fingers facing towards you, protruding your knuckle towards the door.
>You certainly have a new perspective to the upcoming conversation.
>And you can't seem find a strategy to use.
>What are you supposed to do?
>What CAN you do?
>It's better just to get in there and get it all out of the way.
>Let whatever happens, happen.
>And under no circumstance will you let her know that you know.
>You don't want to break her heart if she thinks you're not interested, and you don't want her to think you're interested when you're unsure..
>It's going to take a little while to figure this all out, so to minimize hurt feelings you'll just pretend to be oblivious and unassuming.
>Which, admittedly, you would probably be naturally had Rainbow Dash and AJ not pointed out.
>You take a deep breath
>Your knuckle clacks against the wooden door.
>There is a moment of shuffling behind the door before you recieve a response.
>"Come in!" Twilight shouts in a muffled voice.
>You sigh.
>Here we go.
>>25696751
It's happening yo!
>>25696751
IT'S HAPPENING.
>>25696751
Riggy delivers haremanon for our pleasures.
>>25690349
These were rad
>>25693178
I'm digging this
>>25696751
AM I READY?
>>25695323
Getting more of this?
>>25696751
>here we go
Riggy is gone.
Why live?
>>25697331
I'm here, I'm here. Nearly done with the next update. Switching between 3D modelling and writing is hard.
>>25690690
bump
>>25697362
speaking of art, do you have the one thanksgiving pic. I missed the thread that was in. It was the marble or limestone serving turkey.Not that I want it or anything...B...Baka.
>>25697526
It's next on my list. Between homework, writing, and studying for finals, I draw when I can. That twilight drawing took me awhile because I was getting used to my new painting software.
>>25697541
That's fine man. I just panicked for a little, you know? I realized I hadn't been on the thread in two (or so) days.I wasn't panicking about you or anything.
>>25695247
more like yanderpy
>>25697596
>Derpdere
ftfy
>>25696751
>You push the wooden door in slowly, letting you ease yourself into the situation.
>You take a good look around the room.
>There are book shelves upon book shelves in this large, and well lit room.
>There are couple of half-levels where you have to go up a small set of stairs to reach the next level up.
>The stairs go directly down the middle of the room, with shelves on each level pertaining to different subjects.
>The ceiling is littered with skylights of varying colors, giving the entire room a pastel glow to it.
>And at the end of the stairs, surrounded by the mirrors casting the morning light in, is a small wooden desk.
>It has some paper work spread across it, and a plentiful supply of quills which are replenished often.
>And sitting behind the desk is a pretty little purple pony who stares down at the paper she is writing intensely on.
>She glances up at you in a very deliberate way.
>"Come up here, Anonymous." she says properly, still writing on the paper.
>You start to climb the stairs, feeling dwarfed by the immense book cases and high ceilings. It isn't often that the pony world makes you feel so small.
>Twilight doesn't look at you directly, still focusing on the document she has been scribbling on.
>On occasion, however, she does steal a quick look out of the corner of her eyes.
>You noticed these glances before, but now they are charged with much more meaning.
>You catch yourself staring, and you face feels a little warmer.
>Such raw emotion.
>It's humbling to say the least.
>Even with the flustered feeling you have right now, you could never imagine what she has been going through.
>To say you were oblivous is an understatement, you were actively dissmissive of the notion of ponies taking a romantic interest in you.
>You're surprised she's still interested in you after such a long time.
>>25697923
>You find your way over to her desk in the silent study.
>She looks up at you standing in front of her desk, almost at attention.
>A beat of red rolls across her face as you look into her eyes.
>"S-sit down, Anon." she says as assertively as she can muster.
>You nod and take a seat in the comfy chair she has by her desk.
>It's a little small, but at this point you've gotten used to scaled down furniture.
>That's just a part of life for you.
>She looks back up at you.
>"So what happened down there was... a little hectic, w-wouldn't you say?" she says, trying to keep this strictly professional.
>She must be trying to do the same thing as you; just get through this.
>It puts your mind at ease.
>Suddenly you realize something.
>The best way to hide your knowledge is just to ignore her emotions entirely again.
>It might be a bit cold, but she isn't aware that you are aware, so it won't hurt her feelings.
>And judging by the way she's treating this conversation, there won't be any funny business.
>It won't be difficult to keep your wits about you, thank goodness.
"Yes it certainly was. I was hoping you wouldn't mind my guests, but I was being dishonest so..." you say, emphasizing the fact you had RD and AJ with you.
>You don't want to focus on the underwear thing.
>That's probably what she was most embarrassed about.
>So you'll just pretend you forgot it.
>She nods.
>"Y-yes. I was quite surprised by the p-presence of other ponies with us," She begins before taking a deep breath, "I hope you realize that you were in direct violation of your contract, Anonymous." she states plainly.
>You nod back at her.
"Yes ma'am. At the time, however, they needed a place to stay. I was just trying to be a good friend. Surely you understand that?" you say, explaining your logic.
>>25697937
>She is the princess of friendship, so this should all hit home for her.
>And the way she feels about you probably doesn't hurt your chances of getting a less severe punishment.
>"Y-Yes, of course I understand. Breaking the rules to help a friend is often the responsible thing to do..." she says with a slight blush, looking away from you.
>Well this is going well.
>Twilight was always reasonable, so she'll probably let you off with a war-
>"But still, breaking the rules warrants reprimanding!" She suddenly shouts in a very official sounding tone.
>Your heart sinks, and you grip the arms of your chair.
>This can't end well.
>You scratch the back of your head nervously.
"Oh... of course. I suppose I DID break a rule, and your policy must be very strict-"
>Your words are interrupted by a rolled up paper slapping down on the desk in front of you.
>"Yes, v-very strict Anonymous. And you broke one of the few stipulations I made upon your living quarters."
>You take a deep breath.
"Yes, well, I figured that the rule had been put in place for other reasons, and-"
>She slaps you in the face with the paper as she walks around her desk.
>Her face becomes more read each time she does it.
>"I-I don't want to hear your excuses Anon! N-Now listen up!" she stutters a little unconvincingly.
>>25697949
>You sit up straighter reflexively.
>The way she's talking to you right now is triggering some habits that Rarity smacked into you while making clothing for you.
>A slap with cloth on the face or the ass to tell you to straighten up. Originally you thought it was because she was impatient, but the blush on Twilight's face makes you think it was for a more... carnal satisfaction.
>She smiles at your sudden obedience reflexively.
>You can tell she was taken a little off guard by how quickly you shut up.
>She's not used to being stern.
>At least, not in such a demeaning way.
>"G-Good." she stutters with a little sigh.
>She walks around back to her chair, satisfied with your behavior.
>"I don't want you breaking anymore rules, Anon." she says plainly.
"I won't. This was a one time thing." you say quickly.
>She makes eye contact and blushes.
>But she doesn't look away.
>This time she keeps staring.
>Her purple eyes shining with a new confidence.
>The same confidence has when a cat corners a mouse.
>You're starting to get a little nervous as to why.
>"Oh, I'm sure you won't... but..." she begins.
>You can feel your hands clench.
>She's making a move here.
>You can taste it.
>"... I need to make sure. And protocal dictates that I would put you on probation, letting my officers keep an eye on you and accompany you while you work."
>Probation? You can deal with probation.
>But... what's the catch?
>You know there is going to be a catch.
>>25697967
>There is no way she would put on this big show without-
>"BUT, because you are a unique species and such a dear friend, I will take it upon myself to..." she says, fading near the end.
>She stares into space for a moment, coming to terms with the words about leave her mouth.
>Her confidence has spilled away, and her anxeity has come back full force.
>It seems like coming to a decision has shaken off her facade.
>"I-I'll take it upon myself t-to..." she stutters before looking at you, her royal eyes large and filled with a kind of nervous wonder, "Spend the day w-watching you... Watching OVER you, rather..." she corrects herself.
>You sigh.
>This makes things a lot more complicated.
>And you should have realized she would spin this to her advantage.
>You can't give in, however.
>You need to remain neutral.
"Oh! Well that isn't so bad. I like spending time with you, anyway." you say politely without thinking.
>Her face lights up and turns so red she might pass out.
>SHIT.
>That came off as flirty didn't it?
>Or at the very least, abnormally nice.
>You are still being punished afterall, and you just disregarded everything and went right for the compliment.
>>25697980
>She opens a large book to cover her face, but she does a poor job of covering her excitement.
>"Great! I'll m-meet you down at your forge as s-soon as I finish reading this b-book." she says without looking up.
>It's at this point you notice the book is upside down.
>Rainbow Dash is right, she is terrible at hiding her feelings.
>You feel pretty silly now, to say the least.
"A-Alright. I'll just get my work clothes from my shack and meet you down there then..." you say, seeking an exit strategy.
>She nods quickly behind her book.
>You stand up and thump down the stairs to the door.
>After all that, you're starting to believe remaining neutral isn't a possibility anymore.
>As you walk through the doorway another thought related to Twilight's obvious hints wanders in.
>That 'friend' you're supposed to be getting dinner with on Wednesday...
>They're just Twilight... right?
>You sigh, a little bummed.
>Not because it was Twilight after all, but rather because the surprise had been spoiled for you.
>You wonder if she even remembers, heck you barely did.
>Oh well.
>You don't have time to dwell on that stuff. You need to focus on this perfect trap Twilight has snared you in.
>You'll just have to do your best to seem normal. That's all you can do for now.
>>25697995
I gotta tap out for the night. Early class tomorrow, and I'm meeting with my professor in the morning. I'll catch up with you fellas tomorrow afternoon!
What a wonderfully productive day today was for the O'hana. So many names, so many stories, plenty of content flowing through. And that was all just today!
I think this'll be a lively little chunk of /mlp/ that will give us some warm feelings during these colder seasons.
So, with that, I say goodnight to my lovely O'hana. We're getting bigger every day.
>>25698407
Nighty Night Rigsters
>>25698407
Riggy, i hope you live a long and prosperous life for this wonderful stuff you bless us mortals with. Praise riggy.
>>25698679
bump
>>25697995
Actually rooting for book horse, notting against fashion horse, but Twilight is my fav.
>>25698679
Riggy is a god confirmed.
>>25694321
Huh. Funny thing, I'm going to revive that thread tomorrow or in this week...maybe is going to die but I want to give it a shot because I'mDETERMINED
I have some pastebins of the thread tBh
>>25698679
Witnessed
>pic not related
>>25698407
Keep it up riggers
>>25699510
>riggers
My brain read niggers. Kek.
>>25690690
bump
>>25690690
bump
Moar green from the green god
>>25693121
>She glares at you, and continues to as she slowly flutters down, grabs a different horseshoe and ascends once again, without losing face.
AHAHAHAHA
>>25693161
Dude, that's cute.Far too cute.
>>25693178
More?
>>25693907
Nice how to get /fit/ instruction.
>>25698407
More.Call me a fag, but a small speed up for pace would be appriciated.
>>25690690
bump
I'm awake! I'll be going to college in a little while, so I don't have enough time to write.It's British college, so times are different
>>25700743
E-eh...Well I guess I could write more if you really want it.
I'll start on the next part once I have time.
I'll also post this adorable cat gif in hopes that it gives someone diabetes
>>25700932
Take it easy and come back soon. we'll keep the thread warm.
I'll, uh...Give this thread a bump before I set out.
Just to be sure.
>>25701230
I'll keep it here, I have a vested interest in this thread a well as a few others, for reading material. bump
>>25690690
bump
>>25700932
Boop
>>25690690
bump
>>25700743
There's actually going to be a pace increase soon.This is the slow buildup part.
I'm in class, have work after class, and have a lot of homework. I probably won't be writing until later, but when I get to writing it'll be some solid development.
>>25702140
Good luck there riggersyou don't even need it
>>25702140
Then it sounds like another exciting installation of everyone's favorite CYOA: RIGGYQUEST!
The CYOA where we will get senpai to notice us. We will. For
>YOU ARE ANON
>The best shitposter
>That's what your mug says
>And Riggy was being a butt and trying to save you, but not notice you while saving you
>You could tell because there were no sparkly bubbles behind him when he addressed you
>That's how you know if you're being noticed!
>But that was then and this is now
>After saving you he gave you an ice cream and was scooped up into the sky by some birdpones
>So you've lost the trail
>But you are filled withDETERMINATION
>So you will pick a Riggyspot to spot riggy at
>But you only have time for one
>Do you stalk-
>eer. STRATEGICALLY BUMP INTO Riggy at:
(1) Riggy's Class
(2) Riggy's Work
(3) Riggy's Home
(4) Goatmom's Home
(5) The Internet
>>25702396
(5) Internet, I-it's not like w-we were waiting for you to get back s-senpai.
>>257023961. Class
Must assert dominance, especially around his peers.
>>25702473
1Must keep rivals from catching senpai's attention
>>25702396
>>25702473
>>25702884
>Class is the only reasonable option
>Obviously you need to make sure no other dirty anons take the gaze of your perfect riggy away from you
>You also have to make sure to establish dominance over his teacher, to ensure he has good grades!
>It's important he gets high marks in...uh...
>Dangit
>You don't know which class he's in
>Sneaking from bush to bush, you follow the object of your desire to a large, imposing brown building
>There are a bunch of letters infront of it, but eh
>reading's for chumps
>And you're not a chump you're an autist!
>And glass doors will not stop you! Even if they have a mirror finish and some other stupid idiot on them looking at you and making mouthwords at you an-
>So you quietly and gently open the door like they do in superior nippon
>Gripping the handle you pull hard to the right
>This, of course, being in inferior America, causes the door jam to shake, the door itself shattering as you rip off the handle
>Door = Opened
>Now there are three possible rooms to pick:
(1) Industrial Fightonomics
(2) Transcendant Aquaculture
(3) Homeopathological Mechanics
>>25702946
3. Homeopathological Mechanics
Because Riggy saves the world one anon at a time
Alrighty, one and all, I have returned.
Sorry for the wait. I'll start writing the next part of my story posthaste.
>>25702946
This >>25702965 is the only correct choice.Unless we have secret option (4) Men's Room. Even based Riggy would need to use the bathroom eventually, right?
>>25702986
Huzzah, the Poutmiester has returned!
>>25703270
...T-that's...H-Hellmiester...B-baka...
>>25702946
>>25702965
>>25703270
>You gently caress the door handle
>Up and down, up and down... squeezing it's hard sh-
>"Would whoever is outside PLEASE stop rattling the handle?"
>You whisper "No homo" as you spread open the door, pushing yourself deep into the warm class
>Mmmm. Higher education...
>"Excuse me? Sir? You need to take a seat - or, wait..."
>The anon at the podium knits his eyebrows as he scrutinizes you
>"I don't... think this is your class?"
>You're not paying attention, though - you gotta find Riggy
>"Hey. If this isn't your class you need to leave - now!"
>Uh oh. Podiumaster is getting jiffy
>And you don't mean like the smooth peanutbutter you cover yourself in at night
>You mean the chunky angry spread that destroys the bread of justice
>You gotta see if Riggy is here - and quick! Do you:
(1) Sing out Riggy's name and break into interpretive dance. You know he can't resist the air guitar
(2) Pocket Sand! Although you're in Homeopathological Mechanics, you definitely know Industrial AND Agricultural Fightonomics. Time to school the professor - nothing personnel, kid.
(3) Deploy the senpai bubble screen - you can't find him, but maybe he can notice you!
(4) Renegade option: revoke tenure and state funding!
>>25703554
4. Obvious choice.
>>25703554
2) just because of Coldsteel
>>25703554
2-pocket sand is preferred by 4 out of 5 dentists in situations like these
Page 9 bump
Next part of the story is coming along nicely. It's going to be a RD POV.That was so abbreviated I almost said overover
Well, I'm done. Hope you like it.
Meanwhile...
>...
>Hmm.
>Is it something she'd like?
>Well, you'll find out soon enough. She should be arriving any minute.
>Well, SHOULD.
>For one as quick as her, she almost always turns up late.
>We'll work on that, though. She's still learning.
>...Hrm.
>...
>Oh! Tea's done.
>Now, how did she like it...?
>She didn't particularly like earl grey last time she was here.
>Maybe cinnamon?
>...She doesn't seem like someone who would go for cinnamon.
>Ah! She's here!
Rainbow Dash's POV
>Stupid, stupid, stupid, stupidstupidSTUPID!
>What was that?!
>...Why do you feel guilty about it?
>Argh...
>Whatever. As long as Applejack didn't see him holding your...
>Y-your...Hoof.
>Every day, it'd be; "How's yer prince doin'?" and "Where's lover boy?"
>You'd gladly nose dive right now, if she knew.
>...
>...Nah, she probably didn't see it.
>You swear, if she so much as mentions him, you'll...
>Forget it.
>You bonk yourself on the head a few time with your hooves.
>...You can still feel where he touched it.
>It's still tingling, and thinkin' about it...
>...No, you're not thinking about it.
>You've got to meet up with a friend, anyway.
>At your speed, you make it there in around 2 minutes.
>Not bad, but not a record.
>You'll cut more corners next time.
>Alright, there's her house.
>Time to...
"Wait, what the hay?"
>There's a door on her roof.
>Why is there a door on her roof?
>There wasn't one there before.
>Why?
>...You bet you know.
>You check the plaque screwed on the wood.
>"Built to honor the endeavors of Rainbow dash, a noble pony who made this exact hole her common entrance to the abode of Rarity, owner of this establishment. Please knock."
>...Wow. You didn't think she cared about you busting through her roof all those times.
>Feeling somewhat stupid, you reluctantly knock the door.
>How is she even going to open the-
>A magical aura materializes around the frame of the door, and it opens by itself.
>Oh, yeah. Right.
>"Welcome, Rainbow Dash! Please, make yourself at home."
>Grr.
>You fly through.
>The door shuts behind you.
>"Do you like the door?"
>You entered the stupid door, and you won't give her any further satisfaction.
"Where's, uh, the dress?"
>She blinks with a pensive look on her face.
>"Rainbow Dash, please. It's polite to answer a question when it's addressed to you."
"Y-yeah. Exactly. S-so...Where is it?"
>She doesn't look particularly pleased.
>She stares at you in silence, still not leading you to the dress.
>Why does she have to make this so difficult?
>You sigh.
"...It was...Thoughtful of you to put a door up there for me."
>She smiles.
>"Good. Now, I'll answer your question."
>She walks in the direction of her studio, and you follow.
>Rarity...Is cool.
>Well, for the most part, anyway.
>You'dve thought since she disliked Applejack at first that she wouldn't like you, either.
>But she's always been so...Encouraging.
>She came up with the idea for your friends to see your performance, that one time when you were nervous.
>Admittedly, she also stole the show for a while with her stupid butterfly wings...
>But you ended up saving her butt when things went wrong, so it worked out in the end.
>Besides, she only did it 'cos the success went to her head.
>You...Can understand that.
>Guess it's one of the few things you have in common.
>She's not usually one for competition, though, so you never really...Hung out.
>But then...He happened.
>You've really had much interest in romance before. You thought it was gross.
>Many guys hit on you in the past.
>And you gave them all the same answer.
>"Sorry, I fly solo."
>Thinking back on it, that sounded kind of...Dirty.
>Whatever.
>...You never even had a crush on anypony before.
>Emphasis on "before".
>He just...Staggered into town one day.
>No pack of supplies, just the clothes on his back and a watch.
>He didn't have any idea how he got here. He was kinda scared of us at first.
>But after a while, he opened up a little.
>Of course, you only met him after he had gone through all of that.
>But that wasn't your fault.
>...To think, if that trick worked, you may have never even met him.
>...Eh, he got around. Pretty sure you'd get caught in the loop eventually.
>But...The way you met him was so...So...
>Perfect.
>Couldn't ask for a better introduction.
>That wasn't what won you over, though.
>He...Just worked for you.
>The way he tried to win with everything he had,
>The way he'd let you win sometimes,
>That tell-tale smile he gave when he had a plan,
>He was stupid, and goofy...But now...
>Well, he's still stupid and goofy.
>Nothing changed with him, but...You guess...YOU did.
>All of the stuff that was irritating before became...Charming.
>When you trash talked him, you almost wanted him to give one of his retorts.
>Sometimes you wanted him to win, just so you could make him happy.
>Suddenly, he stopped being just a friend you hung out with.
>He become the only friend you hung out with.
>Every last one of his personality traits gradually became more and more desirable...
>Eventually, just standing near him was enough to make you flare up.
>You flat out avoided him for a while. You needed to get yourself straight.
>You'd spend some nights without any sleep, thinking about him.
>It wasn't anything about him in particular, it was just...Words.
>Things he said to you, things you said to him, things you used to describe him...Either in your head or to his face...
>They became some kind of chant inside your head. Not making any sense at all.
>Fortunately, cider season came round.
>A lot of it was blurry, so you probably drank too much.
>You remember waking up at Rarity's house, though.
>She scolded you for what you did, and asked why you did it.
>Without any hesitation, you caved in and told her everything.
>Every last detail.
>You'd normally hate expressing yourself like this, but it...really hit home this time.
>After you had finished, she nodded, and said that she would do anything she could to help.
>That was it. You were friends before, but this...You couldn't thank her enough.
>You had no idea what to do. No experience, no preparation.
>It came completely out of nowhere.
>You set your pride aside, and accepted that you needed her help.
>Before she even began helping you, letting her know about how you felt really helped.
>You could hang out with others as normal. Even Anon.
>...Well, maybe not "as normal" in Anon's case, but you tried to act the same way you did before.
>A part of you was really mad at him though. Still is.
>He made you go through all of that, and he just smiles and acts how he usually does.
>Taunting you.
>...You can't even tell him about it.
>"Well, here it is, darling."
>You snap out of it and look at the dress.
>Wow.
>It looks similar to the one she made for you for the gala, but it had a shorter skirt. Looked more like a striped bowl this time round.
>...Not really the sort of thing you'd EVER wear, but it's a pretty good effort.
>"Do you like it?"
>Is this a test?
>She's testing you, isn't she.
>Alright, I guess...Be polite.
"It's...I...Thanks. Rarity."
>Geez. You DO need practice.
>She giggles.
>"Well, I suppose it's a start."
>She walks over to it, and stands proudly in front of her creation.
>...
>She can't expect you to put that on, right?
>"...Right then, let's see what it looks like on you."
>Damnit.
"Uh...No offence, Rarity, but..."
>"Oh, come on, don't be like that."
>...OH, CRAP NOT AGAI-
>She uses her magic to hoist you out of the air and over to the dress.
>All you can do is vainly struggle as you attempt to free yourself from her grasp.
>"Come on, Rainbow. Are you going to do this every time you put on a dress?"
"NO, I'm gonna do this every time you MAKE me put on a dress!"
>...
>"Please don't slouch, Rainbow. You'll wrinkle the dress."
>You can't help it.
>You couldn't care less if you wrinkle the stupid dress.
>You sit up, though.
>Rarity is sitting across the table from you.
>Today, she's going to help you work on your table manners.
>As much as you don't want to do this, a part of you wants to be more like her.
>You can't tell if it's respect, or because you think it'll make Anon like you.
>You're doing it, anyway. Doesn't mean you'll have to like it.
>You stare at the table.
>Silverware is lined up on her side, as due to being a unicorn, she can actually use knives and forks.
>You have a plate, and a teacup, and so does she.
>There is a teapot on the table, handle facing away from both your and Rarity's side.
>You're having a tea party.
>You, Rainbow Dash, are having a tea party with somepony.
>Never,
>EVER,
>Have you thought this would be something you'd do.
>E V E R.
>You take a deep breath, close your eyes, Exhale slowly and open them again.
>Yep, still at the table.
>Still with Rarity.
>Dress has not disappeared.
>Teacups still on table.
>Guess what?
>STILL AT A TEA PARTY.
>What did you ever do to deserve this?!
>Rarity clears her throat.
>You learned from the last time, when she whipped you on the back of the head with a magically suspended tape measure, that you should pay attention.
>You keep your eyes peeled for any objects in the corner of your eye that shouldn't be floating.
>"Now then, what's the first thing we do when seated at the table?"
>Um.
>Damnit, what was the answer.
>You really don't want to get whipped again.
"Uh...Greet...The other guests at the table?"
>Rarity pauses for a moment.
>...
>WAS I RIGHT OR NOT?! GIVE ME A SIGN!
>"Not bad. That would be acceptable."
>Phew.
>It seems she's giving you some credit.
>"Alright, now at this point, one should try to make polite conversation with the other guests. What would be an appropriate topic, Rainbow Dash?"
>She half closes her eyes, raises her head slightly and looks at you from behind her nuzzle.
>OK, that's not too bad.
"Uh...How has your day been?"
>I dare her to tell me that's wrong.
>"Good example. Well done."
>As if you ever doubted yourself.
>You can't help but smile a little.
>"Ah, good. A smile is very important. Not too forced, just wide enough to be friendly."
>Not even trying.
>You rock at tea parties.
>...
>OK, maybe...Not "rock", specifically...
>...Yeah, that's lame.
>"Alright, now we move on to the manners themselves."
>Crap, you suck at this part.
>She lifts the teapot with her magic and pours tea into both of your cups.
>Yours first, then hers.
>...Damn, she's good.
>"Alright, now I'll demonstrate how to drink tea without using magic."
>She casts a knowing glance at you.
>Gulp.
>"First, clasp the cup between both your forlegs. Like so."
>She skillfuly picks up and holds the teacup using her front knees.
>Again, she's good.
>You're not going to screw up this time though.
>Showing your inexperience, but with determination, you mimic her actions as best as you can.
>This time, you didn't knock the teacup over, staining the teacloth.
>Nor did it slip out of your grasp and break on the floor.
>You're actually holding it.
>The liquid inside is rippling menacingly.
>Please stop.
>"Nice work, Rainbow Dash. Now, bring it to your mouth, like so, but don't tip it."
>She brings the cup to her mouth while keeping it level, takes a sip, and returns to the previous position.
>She makes it look so easy.
>"Alright, Rainbow Dash, don't be nervous, otherwise it'll shake."
>Don't be nervous.
>Yeah, you're not the mare who's about to get her head smacked again.
>You look at the cup, and as steadily as you can, move it to your mouth.
>A drop falls from the cup and lands on the dress.
>You wince.
>Rarity looks ever so slightly annoyed.
>This is going to be a long day.
That's all for now. Thank you for your patience.
>>25705123
Thank you for this glorious green gift.
>>25705022
>The door
Kek
>>25705042
I like your Rainbow Dash.
>>25705053
I really like your RD.
>>25705070
I read her thoughts with her voice, good job.
>>25705102
>You can't tell if it's respect, or because you think it'll make Anon like you.
>... Not knowing that Anon likes her true self.
Typical; go on.
>>25705123
>She lifts the teapot with her magic and pours tea into both of your cups.
>Yours first, then hers.
>...Damn, she's good.
Kek.
>You're actually holding it.
>The liquid inside is rippling menacingly.
>Please stop.
Kek.
MOAR.
>>25705140
This.
>>25705123
Before you wrote this, you said you weren't very good at writing.
I expect you to apologize for lying to me. This story is extremely well written and I loved every second of it.
I'm still at work, but with green like this being written while I'm gone, I'm not too nervous about the thread. This is some quality shit.
>>25705123
Reading this I can't get Rainbow from pic related out of my mind.
>>25705419
>>25705346
>>25705226
>>25705140
...Wow. Really wasn't expecting all of this praise.
Thanks, guys. I'm not sure if I can keep this quality up, but...I'll try.
>>25705507
You're great; just keep being yourself.
>>25690690
bump
>>25705507
You are good.
Do your best, glorious writefriend.
>>25690690
bump
>>25690690
bump
I have to go to college first thing I wake up tomorrow, so don't be surprised if you don't hear from me in a while.I've really got the story in my head now. I hope I can juggle work and ideas at the same timeI'll also try to get a pastebin
>>25706137
We await eagerly again Miester
>>25706137
Should probably let you know that its spelled meister.
>>25699236
JUST.
DO.
IT.
Do you have the prompt? I think I have it but my stuff is disorganized. Maybe some generous Anon have the entire prompt!Also: bump!
>>25691769
>Anal
Are you going to write a Pinke tsundere story?
>>25705011
bump
>>25690690
bump
>>25707797
>>25707940
>>25708052
Stop bumping every 10-20 min you idiot. Theres no point.
>>25708178
Do you know you basically made a bump... do yuo?
>>25708252
You just did too good sir.
man this thread is really starting to get "bumpy"
![0b361ebc5cebccb842ddd116fef4ec9ff4f2d56d[1].png](https://i.imgur.com/9vmHZxq.png "0b361ebc5cebccb842ddd116fef4ec9ff4f2d56d[1]")
>>25708533
woah you're giving me "goosebumps"
>>25706860
Sorry I can't find the prompt
Need help Anons! Someone have it?
explain to me what a prompt is
>>25709245
A writing prompt is simply a topic around which you start jotting down ideas. The prompt could be a single word, a short phrase, a complete paragraph or even a picture, with the idea being to give you something to focus upon as you write.
>>25709091
/r/ this! I want that thread back...
>>25698880
Niet, Fashion horse is best.
Based Riggy,
I await your return with bated breath. No green has ever satisfied me the way yours does. How I long for the words, excellently crafted by your magnificent hands. How I ache for the story, brilliantly dreamed up by your wonderful mind. How I lust for your responses, ever so kind and pleasant to others. Riggy, oh based Riggy! I think it obvious that I speak for everyone in the thread when I say that we love and miss you.
Yours always,
~Anon
>Day Canada in Equestria
>You are Anon, and you hail from the frozen wastes of Canada.
>Specifically, the city of Winnipeg.
>The same city that got a small plot of land on fucking MARS named after it because it was so goddamn cold.
>It's ponychristmas time, and you were happy to be back in your natural habitat.
>However, ponies ain't SHIT since they control the weather.
>Seriously, the coldest you've seen is -30*C with the wind-chill.
>Needless to say, you're sweating up a storm right now.
>You've got your sweater on and a thin pair of gloves, and that's all you need.
>Fucking ponies, you swear to god.
>It isn't natural that you can walk around with exposed skin and NOT get frostbite in under ten minutes.
>These snow drifts barely reach your waist. If you can see over the snow drift, then it ain't winter.
>Just sayin'.
>You have half a mind to walk right into the Everfree forest just to get some proper cold weather.
>You're jarred out of your thoughts by a shrill scream by your least favourite marshmallow pony.
>"Anonymous! You get your tall, monkey flank over here RIGHT. NOW."
>>25711030
>Oh.
>Good.
>HER.
>You don't know why, but Rarity despises you.
>She was pretty chill back when you first arrived in Equestria, but the more you talked, the more she disliked you.
>Oooohh, she has it out for you.
>There was that one time she yelled at you to stay away from her sister and to not "seduce her with your rugged charm".
>Problem is, that outburst was at a dinner at the Apples'. The CMC were there as well as their siblings/mentors, and you.
>You're pretty sure that Big Mac still thinks you're a filly fooler or something.
>"Anonymous, I won't repeat myself again."
>You sigh and turn around, waiting to see what fresh hell Rarity has in store for you.
>...and you are promptly weighed down by several articles of clothing magically appearing on your body.
>On top of your regular clothes, you're now also wearing a heavy, fluffy jacket; a winter scar; a thick hat (with ear-warmers); and what feels like fake leather gloves.
>Rarity glares at you as she magically adjusts your hat so that it's extra-snug.
>"I can't believe you're stupid enough to just go out into the cold without wearing any proper clothing. I've spoken to Twilight about your biology, and it's obvious that you'll freeze without a fur coat."
>She stands back and admires her work.
>"Not to mention, you're setting a poor example for Sweetie Belle."
>She stomps up to you and pokes you in the groin with a hoof.
>"And don't think I didn't catch that veiled insult of yours. That you would rather freeze to death than go to moi to get some proper winter-wear."
>She spins on her heel (hoof?) and walks away without sparing a glance in your direction.
>"I had better see you later this week for a proper jacket measurement, Anonymous. Thursday, Five PM sharp. Do NOT be late."
>You utter one word as you watch Rarity walk back to her boutique.
"B-Baka..."
>>25690690
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>>25690690
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>>25690690
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>>25690690
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>>25711041
Tsunderity
I must have more
>>25711030
Canadanon's attitude toward cold and winter makes me hate him with every fiber of my being.
>>25711030
>when motherfuckers think shit's cold when it hits 20*C
>>25711041
>when motherfuckers think you need to wear a mammoth to not die
Hasn't even gotten that tsundere yet and I still want more.
>>25712320
I honestly like the guy, though neighbor bias probably has something to do with it.
Allrighty, I, am, BACK.
...I'll start writing now.I also corrected my nameDon't know if you noticedb-baka
>>25710645
Yeah, sorry about going AWOL yesterday. That final project got out of hand. I passed out as soon as I was given the opportunity to.
Fortunately, my work load is a lot less tonight, and after my meeting I should be able to provide all of you with some writing. Sorry that I couldn't do it yesterday.
>>25709938
>>25709091
Yeah that thread was a load of fun. That's where I got my start! I tried looking for the prompt in the screen cap of my first story on that thread, but i couldn't find it. Sorry guys.
>>25690690
Our based writefags have returned, and the lord said let there be green. bump
>>25690690
bump
>>25712320
>>25712328
>>25712331
>>25712337
>>25712357
All these posts in the 18 minutes.
>>25712712
Oh, hi.
>>25712742
Just trying to read myself to sleep, got 6-7 other threads open right now
>>25712755
Y-you too?
Well, that's not that weird. Having many tabs opened and lurking more than one, two, three threads is a common thing, as I heard.
>>25712779
More like lurking 8 threads for the last 3 days
>>25712793
Have you found something good enough to share with me?
>>25712755
>>25712779
Wow. It's bed time over there?
It's still afternoon over here in Britain.
...Which is great, 'cos I can give you some green to wake up to.
I'm not too sure about the part I'm working on now, but it's getting there. Should be up in the next couple of hours.
>>25712800
Well everything quiet at the moment am just going through the Slave pony thread. A writefag made a chris redfield that rescues/adopts the main 7. id post link but am a newfag and haven't figured it out yet.
>>25712863
nope its like 10:34 here. my sleep schedule is nonexistent. am the one that's been bumping the threads posting all the green religiously all weekend.
>>25712800
Tell me how to post the thread links and ill provide the posts
>>25712863
17:40
>>25712924
O-oh.
You can post the digits to the post you want to show, like:
>>25712923
One before you.
>>25712946
25650336
>>25712946
>>No.25650336
>>25712946
not quiet getting it but does this work
>>25713008
I shouldn't be laughing, sorry.
You just put double ">" in front of the post's number. Just the number, nothing else.
>>25712991
>>25713005
>>25713008
Kek.
Put two > before it, and just after the double > put numbers.
The format should be exactly like when you just connected your posts to mine.
>>25713025
>I shouldn't be laughing, sorry.
This.
Why aren't you writing?: 3
>>25713027
...I-I am.
I just have this thread going on in the background.
...H-here, have a tsundere Luna.
>>25713027
I have no writing talent or drive for it, I have a rather extreme reading problem if im interested or very board. Waited for the harry potter series to finish the books the read them all in a week. I just figured out how to post sue me
>>25713043
Good... GOOD... BUWAhaha!
>>25713071
>I have no writing talent or drive for it
Then we are two.
>Waited for the harry potter series to finish the books the read them all in a week.
I couldn't just wait, it would kill me.
>I just figured out how to post sue me
Everyday we learn, today how to >>, to-morrow how to sue someone via internet : ^)
>>25713103
I also went through a small library and broke their computer from how many books I've checked out and returned.
>>25713116
What, how, why?!Twilight, stamph!
>>25713103
>25684528
>>25713126
I was bored and they rebuilt the place, I read very quickly when I want to
>>25713126
also the other thread is doing pretty well at the moment
>>25690690
bump
And I'm done. YES.
Alright, here we go.
Rarity's POV
>Why, oh WHY did you put her in that dress.
>In hindsight, it was an terrible idea.
>You knew were going to try and teach her how to drink tea properly.
>You knew what happened the last few times.
>Of course it was going to get stained.
>...
>Be calm, Rarity.
>You can't get angry at her about it.
>You suppose you may have thought it would've given her some incentive to succeed.
>To not spill the drink.
>Prehaps it's your fault.
>...Poor thing.
>You know that she doesn't like sitting still,
>That she's not a big fan of tea,
>And that she's probably quite uncomfortable, all things considered.
>...But she's trying ever so hard.
>She really wants to impress Anonymous, but she has no idea how to do it herself.
>You won't be able to teach her EVERYTHING, but...
>...It's the least you can do.
>You take a sip of your tea.
>It's not bad. A little on the dry side, but still, rather nice.
>...
>You look at her again.
>You force a smile in an attempt to reasure her.
>...Good. She seems a bit calmer now.
>You'll watch over her progress and see if you can provide a few tips for her technique.
>Admittedly, however, she still needs a LOT of help.
>...No, NOT ON THE DRESS-
Anon's POV
>...That's all the tools you'll need.
>Phew.
>When you first applied to work at the farm, you were feeling confident.
>You've got a fairly decent physique, and it seemed like the sort of job you could get behind.
>Of course you didn't know at the time that the ponies KICKED the apples out of the trees,
>But regardless, you think that you've still been a pretty good farmhand.
>Mainly due to all the other farmhands not actually having hands.
>It seemed like a family business at first, but they were welcome to volunteers.
>Befriending your soon-to-be-boss didn't hurt either.
>Soon after meeting Rainbow for the first time, meeting Applejack was all but assured.
>They're really close friends, and you seemed to have a lot in common.
>You even got to have a few 3-way competitions.
>Between Rainbow's speed, and Applejack's strength, it wasn't easy at first.
>But eventually, your "fairly decent physique" had developed into something more...Herculean.
>You lost one of her little bets, though.
>That's how you came to work here full time.
>You didn't even make the bet. Rainbow just used you as a chip.
>You've continued to work past the time that you were originally supposed to do it for, but she didn't mind.
>It just became a thing.
>Speaking of your boss...
>The orange bundle of horsepower is heading your way.
>She has a bunch of apples in buckets attached to her saddles.
>You can hear the sound of trees being pounded in the distance.
>They've started already?
>Guess they can't wait for you all the time.
>Oh. Right. You've just been leaning against the barn.
>That's probably why she's heading your way.
>"RISE AND SHINE, SLEEPYHEAD!"
>Pft. Same old Applejack.
>She always gets so bossy when you're and work.
>...Probably because she's your BOSS, jackass.
>Still though, she's a joy to hang out with.
>You haven't really been able to, lately. You've been busy with the harvest.
>Well, THEY have. there's not much you can do when you've got a bunch of self-aware horses with superhuman strength as your co-workers.
>Or should that be superequine? You're not sure if what they're capable of is "super" in comparison to what other equines are normally capable of,
>But they're still physically superior to humans in almost every way.
>Almost. They're still tiny.
>Sometimes you find it difficult to take them seriously.
>This time is no exception.
"Hey, Applejack. How's the harvest going?"
>"If ya came over here an' helped us, yew'd find out. Git!"
>She spanks you on the rear.
>The force of it pushes you off of the barn, but it still makes you laugh.
"Alright, alright. Geez."
>You grab the wheelbarrow filled with tools, and follow Applejack to the orchard.
>It looks like quite a walk, so you decide to start up a conversation.
"So, how are you doing?"
>She shrugs.
>"Fine, ah guess. How're you?"
"Pretty good. My ass hurts."
>She chuckles.
>"Well, maybe you won' be just sittin' on it next tahm."
>You sigh a sigh of mirth.
>A moment of silence passes.
>"...How's Rainbow?"
"What? You mean you don't know?"
>She stops walking for a second so she can scratch her ribs.
>"Eh, well..."
>She sighs.
>"She uh...Hasn't really been hangin' out with me as often as she did."
"...Really?"
>"Nope."
>She looks away wistfully.
>You scratch your head.
"Well, I don't know why that would be."
>"...Ah might have n' idea..."
>Huh?
>She spoke a lot more softly than she usually does.
>Wait. She's been with Rainbow Dash a lot longer than you have.
>...Maybe she knows why she's been acting...differently.
"Applejack, has anything about Rainbow Dash that seemed...Odd, lately?"
>She raises an eyebrow at you.
>"Like wut?"
"Like...I don't know, different. Less like...Her. You know?"
>She pauses for a moment, still looking a little...down.
>"...Well, she ain't tellin' me nuthin', that's fer sure."
>So she has noticed something different.
>But...Why wouldn't Dash tell her anything?
>Did they have an argument or something?
>Whatever it is, she isn't happy about it.
"Do you...Have any idea what it could be?"
>She seems to think carefully about what to say next.
>"Well...No offence, Anon, but...I think it has sumthin' to do with...Yew."
>What, you?
>Why you?
>Does she have a problem with you, or something? Did you go too far with the trash talk or something?
"What do you mean?"
>She sighs again.
>"Well, Anon, she...Seems to be talkin' about you a lot. Whenever I get t' see her, that is..."
>...Is that what she's so down about?
>So, let's get this straight.
>Dash is acting...Differently around you...
>She's talking about you a lot behind your back...
>And to top it all off, she's preferring your company over AJ's?
>If it was just the first two, it could've been that she some kind of issue with you...
>...No, she could still have an issue.
>She must be focusing on you because she's trying to work it out without hurting your feelings.
>She never was good with words.
>...
>Well, however it is, you hope she's OK...
>"...Tell 'er I said hi, next tahm y' see her, y'hear?"
>Damnit.
>Now you feel guilty.
"...Sure. Applejack. I...I'll talk to Rainbow dash. See if we can all hang out together again."
>She perks up a little at that.
>"Y' sure?"
"Well, yeah. What are friends for?"
Time passes...
Rarity's POV
>You've finished with tutoring Rainbow Dash for today.
>You're walking with her as she exits the boutique.
>...Through the front door, this time.
"That wasn't too bad, Rainbow Dash. You're definitely getting better."
>She's scowling.
>"Yeah, yeah."
>She doesn't seem convinced.
>Darn.
"I really mean it, you know. You'll be a true lady before you know it."
>You hope you don't sound too pretentious.
>...You swear you could hear the sound of a trombone playing a short, tragic tune, far in the distance.
>It's probably Pinkie Pie.
>You've learned to accept that she simply just works that way.
>...Wait, is she implying-
>"...I guess I'll just keep practicing."
>Ah, Wonderful. You can work with that.
"Trust me, Rainbow, you'll be fit to dine with royalty once I'm done teaching you."
>She smiles, but she still looks a little sad.
>...If only there was anything more you could do to cheer her up...
>Oh! Right!
>"Well, I'll catch you later, Rarity. I've gotta meet up with Anon."
"Wait!"
>...She stops, mid-take off.
>Her legs are splayed out in odd positions, bringing to mind a dog wanting to play with it's owner.
>You stifle a giggle at the likeness.
>"Yeah?"
"...Do you have a brand of tea you like? I never asked."
>She pauses for a moment. Still in the position.
>It's impressive that she's able to hold all of that potential energy.
>"...Do you have cinnamon?"
>Oh. Who knew.
"Yes. Uh...Thank you, Rainbow Dash."
>And...she's off.
RD POVABC, 123
>That could've gone better.
>She's right though.
>If there's anything you've learnt from your time flying, it's that practice makes perfect.
>Yeah, it's just like flying.
>...Well, you were good from the second you got in the air.
>Maybe it's a little different. Like actually learning to fly, instead of being awesome right off the bat.
>None of that matters now, anyway. You're meeting up with Anon.
>You can't wait.
>Whatever he's doing, he's going to drop it.
>You want to be with him, and you want him now.
>...Y-you'd better not say that to his face.
>You're gonna give him a crash landing better than the first.
>...All feelings aside, you were crushing him at horseshoe toss before you bailed.
>Because you were late. Not anything else.
>...You're not lying to yourself.
>OK, that was a lie.
>You sigh through your nose, not opening your mouth so you don't get a bug in there.
>Nopony likes bug breath.
>...Why don't you just tell him?
>I mean, he knows who you are.
>If he says no, well...That'd be stupid.
>...OK, maybe you want to wait.
>You can't just tell him that...ANYWHERE.
>...
>You're pretty sure he's interested though.
>The way he looked into your eyes back then,
>The way h-he...held your hoof...
>T-the skilful w-way he put his hand u-u-under, and-
>OK, FOCUSING ON FLYING
>Shoot. You almost crashed, there.
>You sometimes forget that wings are particularly expressive when it comes to pegasi body language.
>You're lucky that never happened when Anon was watching.
>...While you were near him, sure, but...
>He didn't see it...
>...Right?
>...Whatever. He's gonna get it.
>You have your stallion in your sights.
>And you're not going to let him escape.
>You brace for impact.
And, I'm done.
>>25713724
Woooooooo waitin for more
Just made a Pastebin.
Here it is, all current parts of the story are on it already.
http://pastebin.com/u/Hellmeister
>>25712328
I am straight-up from Canada, friends, and it isn't winter if I'm not walking home from work in -40*C weather.
What's up, my ice-brother?
>>25712320
Y'all just salty you can't handle the cold. I'll bet your schools actually shut down sometimes when you get some heavy snowfall or a cold snap.
>>25714069
Wish I could live in -40*C weather.
But no, I get the fucking desert.Though, wearing scrubs in the winter is hell. It's like covering yourself in 1 ply tissue paper.
>>25714069
icebretheren unite!
or some autistic shit like that
>>25714160
National pride is the only thing I am willing to tard-out over.
>>25714138
You'll have to be more specific, friend. Anything south of my city is what I consider a desert.
>>25714308
Rio Grande.
>>25714346
Ouch. My sympathies, friend. Lord knows I would have sweated myself to death if I were in your place.
>>25713702
>>...You swear you could hear the sound of a trombone playing a short, tragic tune, far in the distance.
>>It's probably Pinkie Pie.
>>You've learned to accept that she simply just works that way.
>
>>25713709
>you want him now.
Eau mai...
>>25714069
Mainefag actuallytechnically Floridafag but that was born, not raised, though for most intents and purposes it's fucking close enough. Pissed as hell we haven't gotten any snowfall yet even though last year shit started back in October.
>>25714346
>Rio Grande
You poor, poor bastard. I can only imagine the sheer pain of slowly evaporating just by existing.
Lonely bump
So was it just me, or did 4chan nose dive for a little while there?
I just got back from work and have to do homework for a couple hours. Afterwards, however, I'm totally free to write!
>>25716357
T'was offline for a while.
>>25716357
It was down down down.
>>25716357
asleep
Not quite done with homework, about a half hour left, but I just remembered something.
>>25697526
Here's your Drawfag Funtime reward you lucky duck, you! Limestone Pie with BONUS Marble serving the viewer anon some delish rock soup.
Alright, I'll be back in like 30 - 45 min for the writings.
>>25717272
Bump
>>25717272
...I now require green of this. The Pies all fighting for Anon's attention would be absolutely wonderful.
Especially Maud's.
"..."
>"..."
"W-why are you staring at me?"
>"I'm staring into your eyes. They look like sedimentary rocks."
"Oh, uh, I-"
>"-I like sedimentary rocks."
>>25717348
"You like... sedimentary rocks? So you like my eyes?"
>"No."
".... okay, I gue-"
>"Yes I do." she says, a minor blush showing on her stony visage.
"... c-cool."
>"I don't like you as much as sedimentary rocks."
>You nod slowly.
"That's... okay?"
>"I lied, I like you more than sedimentary rocks."
"..."
>You've never been so confused, intimidated, and flattered at the same time.
>>25717272
I love you.N-not like that B-baka!
>>25717444Perfection
>>25717444
>you have never been more scared in your life for the dangers of sexual abouse.
>you are pretty sure you read in some book that thing like this are sings of potential emotional abousers.
>you are okey with that.
>>25717659
>abouse
This sounds adorable.
Nearly done with my homework! One more paragraph!
>>25717705
And done! Writing some fresh green now!
>>25717875
WOOOOOOOOOOOO
>>25717875
IT BEGINS
>>25717875
ITS HAPPENING
>>25718252
Fuck yeah
>>25716357
>>25716434
In a burning ring of fire~
>>25717272
This is delicious.
>>25717348
>>25717444
Also delicious, especially those trips.
>>25690690
bump
>>25697995
>He closes the door behind him, halting it just before it slams and tenderly shutting it.
>He's always so considerate, even in leaving.
>Your heart pounds into your ears with intense strength.
>His words replay in your head.
>"I like spending time with you anyway." You imagine him saying with a shining back drop.
>You were punishing him, and he seemed... happy about it.
>And before that, when you were interrupting him and barking orders...
>You were just trying to be more intimidating at first, but after he started acting so obedient and so nervous it... it felt...
>It felt... delightful~
>He was actually nervous, but obviously not uncomfortable, or at least not in a bad way. He wouldn't have been so cheerful to spend more time with you if that were the case.
>Usually you can't get much more than a smile out of Anon, but you just made him anxious...
>So for the first time, you were actually getting to him.
>Needless to say it went to your head, and you went a little overboard near the end.
>And if you're totally honest, there was a lascivious motivation behind it as well.
>You're just a little pent up, in that regard.
>It's not a problem, you can control it.
>But... if you had been wearing his boxers...
>You sigh at the mere musing of it.
>This was a huge step forward in your relationship.
>And as long as you stick to your plan, it should be-
>"What the HECK was THAT?!" a shrill voice echoes through the empty library.
>You jump three feet in the air at the unexpected question.
>You nearly snap your neck when you turn to see a blue pegasus swooping down from the open skylight above you.
>Oh no.
>She's the last pony you wanted to see here and now.
>>25718732
>You brace yourself for the incoming onslaught of jokes and prods.
>Look into her eyes as she lands, expecting her normal jabbing smirk.
>But instead, you're addressed by a stern stare.
>Rainbow gets extremely close to your face, until your noses touch.
>"You think you're gonna win that idiot's heart like THAT?!" she yells into your face.
>Her outburst is hard to register at first, but you force your brain to react.
"What are you- WHAT ARE YOU SAYING?!" you say, adjusting your emphasis to reflect your emotions better.
>Rainbow Dash puts her hooves on your cheeks, shaking you a little.
>"Ya can't get a guy like Anon to notice you unless you really go for it! You've gotta give you're 110% percent!" she yells.
>You shake your head, trying to grasp the situation better.
"What!?"
>Rainbow Dash starts to pace around you.
>"He's gotta notice you for the awesome, nerdy pony that we all know and love." she says, as she steps back in front of you.
>She puts her hoof against your muzzle again.
>"But you need to really gotta push that princess stupendousness you've got! You need to learn how to flaunt that AWESOME." she says
>She's going too fast for you to collect your thoughts properly.
"I don't understa-"
>"Fortunately for you, my book-reading friend of mine," she begins, wraping a hoof around you and pulling you close, "I'm the best tutor for awesomness this side of Equestria."
"I never asked for-"
>"Geez, Twi. You don't have to beg me, I mean what are friends for?" she says with a kind of cockiness that only Rainbow Dash can have.
>You groan loudly.
"You can't just butt in on this stuff!" you yell finally.
>She looks at you with a deadpan expression, followed by a simple smirk.
>"Fine, if that's what you want. I guess Anon is just too much to ask for a dork like you to handle." she says, nonchalantly inspecting her hoof.
>You feel your face burn with overflowing passion.
>>25718741
"I just- How do you know I want to go after Anon?!" You ask, having a hard time disguising your flustered state.
>Rainbow Dash raises an eyebrow.
>"Twi, after what I saw in Anon's shack, it was OBVIOUS." she says with a laugh or two.
>Your face turns crimson.
>There are few other times in your life where you've felt this embarrassed.
>Rainbow once again wraps her arm around you, pulling you against her.
>"That was ROUGH. But hey, it landed you a love coach like me, so it's not a total loss!" she says, walking over to your desk and sitting in your chair.
>She lifts her hind legs onto the desk, sitting back and relaxing as she does.
>"Unless, of course, you don't need me."
>Almost every fiber of your being is telling you to kick her out of your office and deal with her at another time.
>But something about her offer seems... beneficial.
>She does spend a lot of time with Anon away from work.
>Maybe she knows something you don't.
>You fight your automatic reaction, and attempt to swallow your pride.
"W-What sort of coaching d-did you have in mind?" you ask through grit teeth.
>Sometimes your passion bubbles a little too close to the surface, and it's hard to reign in.
>She smirks, satisfied with the reaction she has gotten out of you.
>"Let me tell you something, Sparkle," she says, soaring back over to you from your chair, "A guy like Anon, he isn't gonna fall for just ANYpony. He's one in a million!"
>For a second her eyes shift away from you, and she seems momentarily distracted.
>"One in a..." she whispers.
>She looks back into your eyes, quickly snapping out of her trance.
>"ONE IN A MILLION!" she repeats.
>>25718748
>You nod at her, still puzzled about how you feel about this.
>"So you need to really hit him with some good ol' fashioned confidence." she finally says.
>You tilt your head.
"I just did! Didn't you see the way that he listened to me when I gave orders? What else is there to confidence?"
>She shakes her head.
>"Not that princess kind of confidence! You're too modest, egghead! Would it kill you to show off every once and awhile?!"
>You start to feel nervous.
>Does Anonymous really want somepony who is confident? Somepony who brags about themself?
>You've never held your crown as a sort of trophy, after all you never asked for it.
>Maybe showing it off a little wouldn't hurt...
>It certainly would give you a leg up on Rarity.
"Do you really think Anon will respond to something like that?" you ask slowly.
>Rainbow Dash nods immediately.
>"Heck yeah he would! Trust me Twi, I'm one of Anon's closest friends. He's the kind of guy that likes a gal with some CONFIDENCE!" she says, flexing while hovering in the air.
>You roll your eyes.
>She is a close friend...
>You nod.
"Okay. I'll let you coach me." you say finally.
>She smiles and drops down, pulling your face to hers.
>"GREAT! With your princessness, and my awesome coaching skills, we'll win Anon's love for ourselves!" she says, extending her hoof out in front of the two of you.
>You turn your head a little, but your cheeks are still smushed against eachother.
"You mean, for me... right?" you ask slowly.
>Her face turns a little pink, but her cocky smile never leaves her.
>"Yeah! That's what I said, Egghead!" she yells, not looking in your direction.
>You could've sworn...
>Then again... maybe not.
>You'll just let it slide for now.
>There are more important matters to deal with.
>>25718732
Yes
>>25718756
Thank you based Riggy. I have classes earlier than normal tomorrow so I need to get some actual sleep.I hope you h-have a good night too!
>>25718756
Moar?
>>25719106
Yep, just writing it still.
>>25719126
Yay
>>25718756
The only correct ansewer is to marry them all
>>25719149
This guy gets it
>>25719126
yiss
>>25718756
>The jingle of the boutique's bell as you slam the door open is especially violent sounding.
>The sudden thump of the door accompanied by the distressed bell makes Rarity wince in her chair.
>You adjust your hat as you thump towards Rarity's work bench with immense drive.
>The clunk of your front hooves slamming onto the table as you lean towards Rarity with a tough expression.
"RARITY, I'm gonna be completely honest witcha." you say outright.
>Rarity rubs her temples.
>"I wouldn't expect anything less from you, darling. However, if you wouldn't mind being a little less boisterous..." she says weakly.
>It's only at this point that you get a good look at the white unicorn sitting across from you.
>She's still wearing her pink bathrobe, and her mane is a terrible mess.
>Her eyes have bags under them, and it's obvious she isn't wearing any make up.
>You know it's early, but it isn't THAT early.
>Come to think of it, the boutique should be open by now.
"What in the world happened to YOU?" you ask bluntly.
>She sighs.
>"I just had a hard time getting to sleep last night. My mind was a little occupied with something."
>You lean down.
"Or somepony?"
>She looks up at you unamused, raising an eyebrow as she levitates a cup of tea to her lips.
>"No, not somepony." she says deadpan.
>You shake your head.
>You always forget that word isn't very applicable on Anon.
"SomeBODY then."
>She looks into your eyes, with a tired sort of fear.
>The kind of fear where you've already submitted to whatever ends up happening.
>"I... I don't know what you are talking about." she says, impressively maintaining her composure almost perfectly.
>You shake your head.
>>25719773
"Ah told ya Ah'd be honest with ya, and that's what Ah'm gonna do!" you say, preparing yourself mentally.
>You lower you head a bit, avoiding her eyecontact.
"Rainbow Dash and I know all about yer little dispute with Twilight over Anon." you admit.
>Rarity's tired eyes suddenly widen, like a jolt of lightning struck her and jumpstarted her nervous system.
>"Y-y-y-you-you whAAAaat?" she enunciates.
>You take a deep breath.
"An' Ah'll be honest witcha, Rainbow Dash and me stayed overnight with Anon..."
>She looks at you with desperate disbelief, but you promised to be honest.
"... and we slept in his bed..." you say slowly.
>She gasps sharply.
"... with him in it." you finally finish, scratch the back of your head as you do.
>She staggers backwards on her hind legs, her chair being knocked aside.
>You know what's about to happen.
>You can see the pillows floating in from the couches behind her.
>Suddenly she lets out a large moan and kicks off her back hooves.
>She falls backwards into the pillows that were recently placed there.
>That's to be expected.
>The sound of sobbing floats your way from the floor where Rarity lays.
>That, also, is to be expected.
>You take your hat off as a sign of apology as you walk over to her.
>She continues to sob loudly.
>"Apple jAAAACK. How could you sleep with Nonny!" she cries loudly, sniffing inbetween, "Yuh-Yuh-You even knuh-knew that I had ffffffffeelings for hiiiiiiiiiIIIIm"
>She cries for a few minutes, and she doesn't seem like she's going to come out of it anytime soon.
>How can a mare so tired be able to cry with such energy!
>You roll your eyes. You don't have time for this.
>At this point, Rainbow Dash has definitely gotten to Twilight.
>You need to get this show on the road!
>Desperate times call for desperate measures.
>>25719779
>You lift Rarity's head with one hoof.
>She looks at you through puffy eyes.
>For a moment she looks puzzled.
>The next moment, she has your other hoof smashing across the side of her face with incredible force and precision.
>It's the kind of slap that reverberates through your entire being.
>Ever so satisfying. So satisfying that you feel guilty about it.
>But it does the trick, and Rarity looks into your eyes completely awake.
>She isn't sobbing anymore, but soon she'll be yelling if you don't get out with it.
"We didn't do nothin' with him! We just shared the bed is all! Calm down." You shout at her.
>You take a deep breath.
"Ah am sorry about it though. We didn't know at the time..." you say, helping her to her hooves.
>She sniffs a few times, silently rubbing her cheek.
>You sigh.
"But, Ah'll make it up to ya." you say reassuringly.
>Rarity shakes her head.
>"I don't mean to sound rude, Applejack... but how in Equestria do you intend on making up nearly breaking my heart and SLAPPING MY FACE." she says with a little venom.
>You raise your eyebrows.
"How bad do you want to sleep with Anon yerself?" you say deadpan.
>The blood rushes to her face in the blink of an eye.
>"W-Well- I don't know if th-that's proper for a lady of my stature to-"
"So yer tellin' me you don't wanna..." you begin as you walk closer to Rarity, "... get real close to his big, warm, body under the covers?"
>Rarity hides her face in her hooves, trying not to show the growing red on her face.
>You need to drive this point harder.
"Ya don't wanna put yer head on his strong, toned, chest an' hear his heart beat? Let him wrap his hand around ya body and pull ya close?" you say as you circle her.
>A pillow flies against her face.
>She buries herself in it, kicking her hooves as she does.
>You continue.
"Wakin' up to him strokin' ya behind the ear, lettin' him put ya back to sleep as you bury yer nose into him and take a good whiff..." you say a little more excitedly.
>>25719773
Wooo lurking for the win
>>25719794
>Rarity is audibly screaming through the pillow, trying to drown you out.
>Time to go in for the kill.
>You lift one of her ears, making her freeze.
"He smells better than you could ever imagine, and you're surrounded by him under those covers ya know..."
>Suddenly she smashes the pillow on the ground in front of her.
>"OKAY! FINE! WHATEVER YOU WANT!" she yells before tackling you to the ground.
>You land on your back, and she pins you to the ground, her eyes wide open.
>You didn't expect such a violent outburst.
>She looks you directly in the eyes.
"JUST TELL ME HOW TO GET THERE." she yells.
>You let the silence fall back down.
>She's out of breath from all the excitement.
>But she's not alone.
>You admit you're pretty hot and bothered by the things coming out of your own mouth.
>As if somehow retelling it made you realize how much you were... thinking about it.
>Anon's a good friend, and that's all he is... but shoot even you can admit sleepin' with him was nice.
>And he slept with the two of you after saving you from yourselves at the bar.
>He's just a good guy.
>A good guy and a good friend. That's all.
>A friend.
>>25719809
>But you fight off your passionate emotions and get back to the situation unravelling.
>Rarity looks down at you with her frizzed mane and baggy eyes, breathing heavily as sweat drips off her onto the floor around your head.
>You smirk up at her.
"Well Rarity, Ah'm the one that'll get you there."
>She raises her eyebrows.
>You slide yourself out from under her and sit down.
>She doesn't move much, her head follows you as you move.
"Ya just gotta promise to listen ta what I say, and next time you'll be the one spendin' a romantic evenin' with Anon." you declare.
>She nods her head.
"Ya promise?"
>She nods it again rapidly.
>"I promise. I promise!" she says.
>You sigh in relief.
"Alright! With mah guidance, he'll be yers in no time!" you shout.
>Rarity slams her chest against yours and holds you in a hug.
>"OHHHHH. Thank you Applejack! Thank you~!" she shouts.
>You chuckle.
"Guess this means I'm forgiven?"
>Suddenly Rarity's hug tightens to be a little uncomfortable.
>"No. I'm still very sore with you, but it is a good start." she says sweetly, masking her actual frustrations with you.
>You laugh again nervously.
>You'll take that for now.
>>25719817
Okidoki. That's it for tonight. I'm so glad I found some damn time to write today!
Now I must head to bed my lovely O'hana. This thread is filled to the dang brim with top notch content by other writefriends now as well!
I'll be back tomorrow to produce more content and write if I can! See you all then!
>>25719837
gnight,harem harem haremriggity
>>25719837
>you will never get to enjoy a summer of bonding with Celestia
>>25719773
Lurking in joy
>>25719817
This whole fuckin story.
Is the first time in years since I have been really interested in a harem (Monster Mosume don't count) Fuck you riggyI love you riggy
>>25716357
Yeah like 1 hour i think
>>25716434
And the flames went higher,
And it burns, burns, burns,
The ring of fire, the ring of fire~Damn I love that song
>>25718732
>>It felt... delightful~
nope
>>25719794
>>25719809
You made Rarara way too cute.I'm rooting for her.
>>25721065
Go to bed Seth.
>>25712337
How many push-ups can you do, Riggy?
>>25690690
bump
>>25718756
Why can't we have a plygynus relationship?
I'm up and heading to class in a little bit.
>>25720391I love you too.
>>25720139
Yay!
>>25721065
Sorry if that rubbed you the wrong way.
>>25721116
Fashion pone is fun to write for.
>>25721631
I dunno. If you mean straight in a row without stopping, I've never tested it. I usually just do 4 sets of 25 push ups in the morning in between chores after lifting at the gym.Yes I do Saitama's work out.
I bet it wouldn't be a very unimpressive number if I did them in a row.
>>25722017
Polygyny is tricky because everyone has to be on board with it.But we'll see how the story goes.
I'll be lurking for now, but I'll give you guys more stuff to read later.
>>25722038
>wouldn't be a very unimpressive number if I did them in a row.
Gross, double negatives.
I meant to write it wouldn't be a very impressive number.
>>25719837
What the fuck even is O'hana
Allrighty, I'm back!
I'll give writing a story a shot, but I don't have as much time as I did before, so I might not get it done in time.
Did anyone else see the last part of my story, by the way? Seems like not many people noticed it.Maybe it was because I posted it so late in the day
>>25722099
O'hana means family.
>>25722115
I'm still in the process of reading through everything.
>>25722099
"Part of Hawaiian culture, ʻohana means family (in an extended sense of the term, including blood-related, adoptive or intentional). The concept emphasizes that families are bound together and members must cooperate and remember one another."O'hana means family.
Family means nobody gets behind.
Or Forgotten.
And that's what we are, a big family filled with unique, talented, and incredible people.
>>25722115
I read it! Keep it up buddy!
>>25722132
I love Lilo and Stitch, so I understood what it meant.And got the reference
And thanks! Hope I didn't sound like I was whining or anything.
I'll see if I can come up with some ideas before starting the next part. 'Cos...I haven't got much yet.
>>25713696
>"Well...No offence, Anon, but...I think it has sumthin' to do with...Yew."
I like this accent. Good job!
>"...Tell 'er I said hi, next tahm y' see her, y'hear?"
Ouch, that hurts.
>>25713702
>...You swear you could hear the sound of a trombone playing a short, tragic tune, far in the distance.
>It's probably Pinkie Pie.
Kek.
>Her legs are splayed out in odd positions, bringing to mind a dog wanting to play with it's owner.
Hue.
>It's impressive that she's able to hold all of that potential energy.
I admire this part of storytelling. I don't know how is it called, but I love it.
>>25713709
>You want to be with him, and you want him now.
>...Y-you'd better not say that to his face.
Cute, like, really cute.
>>25713724
>If he says no, well...That'd be stupid.
Dude, it's my head canon RD.
>You have your stallion in your sights.
>And you're not going to let him escape.
>You brace for impact.
It's cutier and cutier, and kinda scary since she maybe isn't joking about the iimpact.
>>25717272
Nice pic!
>>25717348
>>25717444
Hue.
>>25718741
>Her outburst is hard to register at first, but you force your brain to react.
I don't know why, but it's funny.
>This RD
She is so mocky she is cute!
>"Geez, Twi. You don't have to beg me, I mean what are friends for?" she says with a kind of cockiness that only Rainbow Dash can have.
Head canon.
>>25718748
>"Unless, of course, you don't need me."
Classic.<3
>You fight your automatic reaction, and attempt to swallow your pride.
Best twilot!
>For a second her eyes shift away from you, and she seems momentarily distracted.
A new player sat next to the table.
>>25718756
>You could've sworn...
>Then again... maybe not.
>You'll just let it slide for now.
WUBAhaha!
>>25719773
>RD 'helps' Twi
>AJ 'helps' Rarity
It's what I wanted to see.Anon failing for Fluttershy, because he want a cute quiet girl... I mean, pony.
>"No, not somepony." she says deadpan.
Hue.
>>25719773
>She looks into your eyes, with a tired sort of fear.
I'm glad you know that look.I'm sorry you know that look.
>"Y-y-y-you-you whAAAaat?" she enunciates.
Canon.
>That's to be expected.
And it's so rare seen in >greens. Thank you.
>How can a mare so tired be able to cry with such energy!
And, this is an example what I love in story telling.
>You roll your eyes. You don't have time for this.
And that's true AJ!
>>25719794
>The next moment, she has your other hoof smashing across the side of her face with incredible force and precision.Bump?
>"I don't mean to sound rude, Applejack... but how in Equestria do you intend on making up nearly breaking my heart and SLAPPING MY FACE." she says with a little venom.
>little venom
It's either toxic like shit, or 'little' is a lie.Anyway: Kek.
>"So yer tellin' me you don't wanna..." you begin as you walk closer to Rarity, "... get real close to his big, warm, body under the covers?"
>Rarity hides her face in her hooves, trying not to show the growing red on her face.
It's erotic. Good job.
>>25719809
>"OKAY! FINE! WHATEVER YOU WANT!" she yells before tackling you to the ground.
For the Emperor!Canon Rarity.
How is it possible for y'all to hit the nail and show my head canon so well?
>As if somehow retelling it made you realize how much you were... thinking about it.
Another player has sat next to the table?
>>25719951
What live?
Why I love this thread and these people so much. When it happened. Why my life is a mess.
>>25722408
>"It's erotic. Good job."
For some reason I just imagined you saying that to me with a deadpan expression and a thumbs up.
Made me kek.
>>25722132
Stop being so fuckin nice Riggy please it hurts
>>25690690
bump
>A friend.
>But you fight off your passionate emotions
>Her face turns a little pink, but her cocky smile never leaves her.
>"Yeah! That's what I said, Egghead!" she yells, not looking in your direction.
>You could've sworn...
Oh, i see what's coming next, and i love it. A lot.
Stay based, Riggy.
>>25690690
bump
Inspiration has hit me again.
Writing a storm with the next part. Might get it finished today, after all.
>>25723207
WOOOOOOO
>>25690690
bump
Really liking the look of the part I'm working on. I think you guys will enjoy it.
It'll be an Anon POV only chapter.
>>25723663
Posting from class.
Looking forward to it Hellmeister.
>>25723692
Do it
Ding.
Story's done.
Anon's POV
>You sigh.
>Well, that's annother day of work out of the way.
>...You have to admit, though, it went a lot slower than the others.
>I guess you were too focused on getting it done.
>You need to find Rainbow Dash.
>...
>You chuckle to yourself.
>You don't find Rainbow, she finds YOU.
>That's how you've met up with her every day you've known her.
>Even when you arranged to meet up with her someplace, she'd show up out of nowhere somewhere along the road.
>She'd then complain about you taking too long, and simply walk there with you.
>You remember comparing her to an eagle, once or twice.
>They both fly, they're awesome and they always swoop down when they want to catch something.
>Every time you did, she'd get flustered and turn it back around on you.
>Like; "...S-so you think I'm bald?!", or; "W-well, if I'm an eagle, you're a mouse."
>She bit you after that last response.
>Not too hard, though.
>Like how someone would bite a coin to make sure it was genuine.
>She's a great friend.
>...Even if she apparently has something against you.
>Wonder what it was you said.
>Eh, you'll find out.
>You'll go back home, you'll find an anonymous letter telling you to go someplace, and she'll meet you somewhere in between.
>You play along though. Don't think she knows you know it's her.
>...You've still yet to figure out if the letters she sends you are simply addressing you by your name, or if she's referring to how she doesn't leave her name...In...Her...
>DAMN, YOU JUST GOT IT.
>You crack up in the middle of the street, and you don't care.
>Well played, Rainbow.
>You look around to check for any ponies that might've seen you laugh.
>...Nope. Fairly late in the day now. The sun is setting.
>Wouldn't want any of them to think you're craz-
>OOF
>>25723949
>Something impacts your chest, HARD, pinning you to the ground.
>Damnit Rainbow.
>Your body was already killing you from the hard work.
>Now you're worried you might actually die.
>...
>Still conscious, good.
>If she broke anything, she's paying for it.
>You open your eyes.
>Yep. That's Rainbow dash, alright.
>...You'd recognise those eyes anywhere...
>She looks angry for a second, slowly shifts into a pensive, blank state, then shakes her head, angry again.
>She pokes a hoof at your chest, accusingly.
>"W-watch where you're going!"
"...Nice to see you too, Rainbow..."
>You cough, still a little winded.
>She suddenly looks concerned, and quickly moves off your chest.
>...Only to decide on sitting on your stomach, instead.
>She seems comfy.
>After wiggling around a bit, she sharply stops, and starts talking again.
>"...Well, aren't you going to say you're sorry?"
"Hold on, I'm doing something important."
>You take a deep breath.
>...
"Ahh, much better."
>You lift yourself onto your arms to get a good look at the tiny juggernaut.
>She's still staring at you, scowling.
>...She's probably waiting for you to apologize.
"...Yes, Rainbow Dash, I'm sorry you crashed into me."
>She stares for a few seconds, looks around to see if there are any eavesdroppers, and then looks back at you.
>"...G-good enough."
>Again with the holding back.
>"...L-listen, I...Was hoping...Was gonna...I-I'm gonna ask you something."
"Go on."
>"Sh-Shh-shut up."
>>25723959
>It's hard to tell, because of the sunset, but you're pretty sure she's blushing.
>...Fine. You'll be a good airbag and listen to what she has to say.
>She waits for any further interruption, and when she doesn't get any, she continues.
>"O-OK. L-listen, champ, uh, Anon, you...You...D-do you wanna, uh...A-as a way of appolising to me..."
>Yeah, there's the excuse.
>Her eyes shut tightly with concentration.
>"D...Do you...I'd like it if y-you...B-b-bbb...
>She's stuck on the letter b.
"...Bought me a drink!"
>You don't know why she took so long to ask you that. She's asked you to buy a mug of apple cider for her a bunch of times in the past.
>She opens one eye, and looks at you expectantly.
>She then seems to remember that she's enforcing this on you.
>"...G-GOT IT?!"
"Yeah, yeah, sure. Come on, Dash, what are you so nervous about?"
>"N-nervous?! I'm never nervous! Shut up!"
>...She pauses a moment, looking away from you.
>"...That's what you'll have to do. Got it? OK?"
"Well, yeah."
>She looks straight at you again, cheeks flaring.
>"A-and right now, too!"
"...Sure, let's go."
>"...S-s-see? That wasn't so hard, was it?"
"Yeah. Why'd you have so much trouble with it?"
>You expect her to explode, and explode she does.
>"...I...I'M...COLD!"
"You're...Cold?"
>"Y-yeah, wind chill!"
"I don't know, you feel pretty hot to me."
>You shift under her buttocks.
>"...I-I-IDIOT!"
>Your shifting causes her to topple, and she flumps face forward into your chest.
>...She just stays there.
"...Well, we're not going to get anywhere if you're still on top of me."
>"...Mffmffmmffm! Mfffmmmmffm...ffm...mmmm...mm."
>She exhales heavily through her nose, escaping as a whinny.
>Ouch, that's hot.
>The area on your chest heats up rapidly from her breath.
>It cools just as quickly though.
>>25723970
>You sigh.
"Come on, if I have to carry you, I will."
>She twitches.
>...
>She doesn't budge.
>...I guess she...Wants you to carry her?
>Part of the "punishment", not doubt.
>Well, it's rude to keep a lady waiting.
>...You still haven't gotten over that, huh?
>You start to sit up.
>She evidently doesn't want to move, but she's not very heavy, and she soon lands on your lap.
>You put your left arm behind her head, shift your legs slightly, forcing her hind legs to fall to the right side.
>Using your left arm to support her, you use your right arm to scoop her up from under her hind legs.
>You quickly maneuver your left arm to rest her back on, and your left hand supporting her rump.
>...Not thinking too hard about where your left hand is right now, you snake your right arm under her legs and link it to your left arm.
>You're now cradling her.
>Congratulations. It's a girl.
>She's wide eyed at this sudden turn of events.
>...You wait for her to leap from your arms and wrestle you to the ground.
>She doesn't, and just...Makes herself comfortable.
>She slumps against your arms, suddenly quite tired.
>She still looks grumpy, but content.
>She's also blushing heavily.
"...W-well, off we go then."
>You take her into town.
>>25723977
>You'dve thought that she'd react to being brought in front of all the residents like this.
>Quite a few have turned their heads to look at the little athlete. Muttering things like; "Is she OK?" and "What's she doing?"
>You look at her too.
>She hasn't shifted a bit.
>You could feel her tense up a little at the comments of the passerby, but she's still by no means uncomfortable.
>...Man, what is wrong with her?
>She's really not acting like herself at all.
>She holds her opinion as a "Local Heroine" around these parts quite highly.
>Seeing her like this isn't going to help that opinion much.
>You kinda want to get out of sight.
>If she's not going to defend her title, you will.
>...But...You don't want to disturb her.
>Like that time you held her hoof, this isn't a side of Dash you see too often.
>You want to savour it.
>...Now where's the bar?
>You decide to take this opportunity to appreciate the town around you.
>The sun is still setting, so most of the tents in the marketplace are packing up, and there's not too many ponies walking around.
>It's somewhat tranquil.
>You usually walk home from work at this hour, so you get to see it like this often.
>But it never gets old.
>You pass through the marketplace and into the town square.
>There's the statue of Celestia.
>It's casting an ominous shadow against a nearby building.
>You look up at the reddening sky.
>You do admire her work.
>You hear the sound of a page turning.
>Oh. It's Twilight.
>The princess is just sitting next to the statue, reading a book from the glow of her horn.
>You consider going over and saying hi.
>...Nah. She's probably here because of the peace and quiet.
>Besides.
>You look down at the somewhat senseless pony in your arms.
>There's a stupid grin plastered on her face.
>You wouldn't want her to see Rainbow Dash like this. She might become concerned.
>...Or suspicious.
>Her curiosity does sometimes get the better of her.
>>25723990
>Someday, she'll probably learn something she wish she hadn'tve learnt.
>You linger no longer, and proceed to the next street.
>There it is.
>The warm glow of the bar beckons you forth.
>You feel there should be a few artists down here, painting a picture of the scene.
>Honestly, every time you see it, you feel that the sight belongs in an art gallery.
>You unconsciously scratch Dash's ear.
>She doesn't seem to mind. In fact, you think she likes it.
>...You resist the temptation to pet the pony silly.
>You came here for a drink, and a drink you'll get.
>The gossip from inside the bar gets louder as you approach it, and as soon as you open the door, you're greeted with the white noise of colliding conversation.
>You smile, and begin to walk towards the bar.
>You then remember the pony in your arms.
>You gently shake her out of her subconscious.
>She wasn't quite asleep, but she was close to it.
>If she was asleep, she'd snore.
>She jolts awake.
>"Who, what...Huh...? Oh."
>Her eyes meet yours again.
>This time, you try to resist the hypnotic stare.
>You gesture your head towards the counter.
>She suddenly freezes with realisation of what just happened.
>She pushes out of your arms, and suspends herself off the ground.
>She looks grumpy again.
>"...T-thanks."
>After a long pause, she heads towards the counter. You follow.
>She parks her rump on a stool, and gestures for the bartender.
>"Oh! It's you two again."
>He gives a friendly smile.
>"So", he bends over to you secretively, but speaks loudly enough for RD to hear him. "Have you made the move yet?"
>You laugh. You love this guy.
>Rainbow Dash coughs to draw his attention, evidently flustered.
>He grins.
>"The usual?"
>"...Y-yeah."
>He nods, and goes over to the selection of drinks he has behind the desk.
>You look over at Rainbow Dash.
>She's leaning on the counter, hoof under her chin. Thinking about something.
>She notices you looking at her, and changes posture to something more defensive.
>>25724002
>"Here ya go."
>The bartender puts two mugs of apple cider in front of you and Rainbow Dash.
>He winks at you, and goes to serve the next customer at the bar.
>You take a sip.
>...
>The sip turned into a gulp, but you couldn't help it.
>It's so damn good.
>You look over to see if Rainbow's done anything.
>She's certainly looking at the drink, but she hasn't touched it yet.
>She'd usually had downed it in one gulp by now.
>You're more one to savour your drink, but you'll do the same if competition calls for it.
>She puts her hoof through the hole and takes a sip.
>...Just a sip, though.
>Hmm.
>She has that far away look in her eyes again.
>You have a strange feeling this might be the only drink she'll have.
>She's not usually this quiet either.
>...Maybe it's time you asked her about it.
"Say, Rainbow."
>It takes her a second, but she turns to look at you.
"Is there...Anything wrong?"
>Her eyebrows drop to stern level, but she thinks about the question.
>She looks back at her mug again.
>"...Nah."
"Dash, come on, I know you. You've been acting weird for quite a while now. What is it?"
>"I'm FINE, Anon.
>That doesn't sound particularly convincing.
>She takes a bigger sip of her drink. Still not as big as you're used to, though.
>An awkward moment of silence passes between you.
>"...H-how was your day?"
>What? Did she just ask how your day went?
>She never gives a damn about how your day went.
>...Fine, you'll play along.
"It was...A lot of hard work. Had me ploughing fields, planting seeds, carrying a barrow full of tools around...It was exhausting."
>"...Kay."
>...
>It appears she's done with that question.
>You'll try buttering her up a bit.
"It's been a fun day, though. Got to hang out with you."
>You nudge her with your shoulder.
>You're actually standing up, and she's sitting on a stool, so you're more or less level.
>She actually smiles a bit.
>That's the first genuine smile you've seen from her that isn't on the receiving end of a finish line.
>>25724021
>The rest of the night goes on without much of an interesting moment.
>You asked her how her day was, but she didn't elaborate.
>Eventually when she finished her drink, as you expected...
>"...Come on, Anon."
>She begins to walk out.
>You quickly finish your drink and head out.
>You renember to leave some money on the bar though.
>It's dark out now.
>She waits for you to get outside.
>"That...I, uh...Liked that. Thanks, Anon."
>She's pretty chill, now.
>An insult or angry accusation was what you've come to expect from her at this point, but this is a nice change of pace.
"It was pretty fun. I should get in your way more often."
>She snorts.
>"...Yeah...M-maybe you should."
>She turns a full 180, and prepares to take off.
>"...Smell ya later."
>And with that, off she goes.
>>25724029
>You stretch your back.
>You didn't learn anything new, but...You could get used to this.
>You've never actually had a quiet moment with her before.
>...It felt...Different.
>Good different.
>You should probably get home though.
>You yawn.
>You're not really expecting any pony street thugs to be hanging around.
>...Man, your world sucked.
>Eh, you won't have to worry about that now.
>As fate would have it, you're in a much better place.
>You've got no qualms with being here instead of over there.
>You just about had it up to here with all of the politics and wars...
>Everyone seemed to be complaining about it, but it never got better.
>This world, no one complains about anything they can't fix.
>Probably because they've got magic, and super strength and...Heroes.
>You look at the moonlit sky.
>You admire Luna's work too. Maybe even more than Celestia's.
>Mostly because it's really hard to admire the sun.
>But also because she gives you this to look forward to every time you finish drinking.
>Even the nights you can't remember, you're glad that you were under this same sky.
>...You breathe in the bracing chill of night's air.
>The stuff midnight oil burns on.
>You're really looking forward to tomorrow.
>You'll get bossed about again, sure.
>But you're starting to like it.
That's it for now.
>>25724034
I have a feeling, it is a good one.
>>25723949
>You'll go back home, you'll find an anonymous letter telling you to go someplace, and she'll meet you somewhere in between.
For some reason this makes me think of an Anon, but with an alphabet letter on his face instead of a question mark.They both call each other namefag.
Oh, and I liked the updateb-but not because YOU wrote it! It was just well-written...
>>25690690
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>>25723949
>You don't find Rainbow, she finds YOU.
My headcanon is here!
>Like; "...S-so you think I'm bald?!", or; "W-well, if I'm an eagle, you're a mouse."
>She bit you after that last response.
You're killing me with this high doze of sweeteness. Don't stop.
>You'll go back home, you'll find an anonymous letter telling you to go someplace, and she'll meet you somewhere in between.
AAAA! You keep doing it! AAAAA!
>...You've still yet to figure out if the letters she sends you are simply addressing you by your name, or if she's referring to how she doesn't leave her name...In...Her...
Aaa!
>>25723959
>She looks angry for a second, slowly shifts into a pensive, blank state, then shakes her head, angry again.
Beautiful!
>...Only to decide on sitting on your stomach, instead.
Too. Cute.
>"...Well, aren't you going to say you're sorry?"
What? Kek!
>"...L-listen, I...Was hoping...Was gonna...I-I'm gonna ask you something."
>"Go on."
>"Sh-Shh-shut up."
It's good.
>>25723970
Your RD is magnificent. Good job.
>"...That's what you'll have to do. Got it? OK?"
I magine her trying to sounds tough with cracking voice and frowning at him.
>"I don't know, you feel pretty hot to me."
Ahahaha...
>>25723977
>You're now cradling her.
>Congratulations. It's a girl.
Kek.
>>25723990
>You could feel her tense up a little at the comments of the passerby, but she's still by no means uncomfortable.
I love your world building.
>...Man, what is wrong with her?Love, of course.
>The princess is just sitting next to the statue, reading a book from the glow of her horn.
As I said, I love your world building.
>>25724034
>You'll get bossed about again, sure.
>But you're starting to like it.
It makes me happy.
>That's it for now.
You really lied with you being not good with writing. I wish I could tell a story like you do.
Moar!
>>25724160
> but with an alphabet letter on his face instead of a question mark
That... sounds cool!
And good night, everybody!
baka
>>25724273
Are you actually just a living breathing meme?
All this green for my birthday?I-its not like I WANTED your green, B-BAKA!
>>25724273
Now I have the idea for a third anon with an ! on his face, he's the Tripfag. Then we can have ?Anon, AAnon, and !Anon arguing who's the biggest faggot.
>>25724939
Is it your birthday today Anon? If so, Happy Birthday!If not, Happy Birthday! because I missed your last one.
>>25724963It is, and thanks Doc
At work currently. Just stopping by.
>>25724034
Thas some good writing. Made me feel all warm inside. Bravo!
>>25725014
Happy Birthday!Who's your favorite pony?
>>25725066Luna
>>25725126
Hey me too! Moonbutt is best.
>>25725066
>>25724273
>>25724160
>>25724047
Thanks for the praise again.
Don't think I could come out with stories as half as good as I do without you guys enjoying them.
I'll keep them coming.
>>25690690
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>>25690690
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>>25725066
Okay, I'm writing now!
>>25727325
WOOO
>>25690690
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>>25690690
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>>25719817
>Twilight cracks her neck in preparation.
>"Are you ready Rainbow Dash?"
>You stare at her with disinterest.
"I've been ready for the past half hour, Twi. Are you ever going to tell me what the heck you're doing?" you say without much patience remaining.
>She sighs as she cracks her back by shoving her rear in the air.
>"I told you, I have a spell that will help you in your coaching efforts. But trying to perform advanced magic this early in the morning requires a bit of-"
>...
>...
>"-Stretching darling!" Rarity clarifies as she shoves her nose in the air, extending her back legs as much as possible.
>You tap at a spool of thread on her work desk.
"Whatever ya say Rarity. Ah gotta say I don't quite understand what bein' loose has ta do with anythin' but..." you mumble
>You were hoping to be back at the castle by now, but Rarity is wasting your time with this communication spell.
>Rarity huffs air out of her nose.
>"Yes, well, I suppose it's a unicorn thing. Magic can take a lot of energy, and some spells need us to be limber." she says twisting her head slowly.
"An' what exactly does this spell do?"
>...
>>25728442
>...
>"Let us communicate while I'm with Anon, that's what it will do! Now stop asking so many questions so I can focus!" Twilight states in an annoyed tone.
"Hey, I just want to know what I'm getting into. I don't want to get hurt from this."
>Twilight stops stretching for a moment.
>"And yet you never consider getting hurt as a possible risk while you're doing death-defying stunts in the air at ridiculous speeds?" she asks bluntly.
>You shake your head.
"That's DIFFERENT. I'm in control when I'm in the air. I've seen you do some pretty crazy stuff with that horn, Twi. Sorry for not wanting to turn into a pile of ash, or worse, lose my wings!" you say with a shudder, thinking back to Discord's maze.
>Having your wings removed made you feel naked.
>More naked than you usually are.
>Double Naked.
>Twilight stands up straight.
>She hovers a smooth gem over to you.
>It plops into your hoof.
>It's a small, semi-transparent blue gem that's very smooth.
>"All this spell does is make me hear whatever you say to the chatter stone." she says pointing to the blue rock lying in your hoof.
>You raise an eyebrow.
"Can you hear me?" you say to the stone.
>Twilight rolls her eyes.
>"Not only am I standing directly in front of you, but I haven't cast the spell yet!" she shouts.
>You blush.
"R-Riiight. Just do your egghead magic on it already! I'd rather have you cast this spell than have to wait any long-"
>>25728453
>You're unterrupted by a sudden flash and a bolt of pain shoot up your spine for a second.
"GAHH!" you blurt as your body tingles to the sudden surge of energy.
>Twilight's horn stops glowing.
>"There, all done."
>You feel your face burn.
"You stretched for half an hour just to zap me?!" you yell, your body still tingling from the shock.
>As you yell, Twilight's eyes get wide before closing in pain.
>She reaches for her ears and pushes them against her head.
>You look at her with confusion.
>She points at your hoof.
>"The stone, Rainbow! You're yelling right into the stone!"
>You sudden realize how close you had the stone to your mouth.
"Oh... you could hear that in your head?" you ask slowly.
>You don't apologize, you just sort of say things in an apologetic way.
>She shakes her head, still spinning from your outburst.
>She sighs.
>"Yes, I heard that. From now on, anything that you say to that stone-"
>...
>>25728466
>....
>"Will be written on my arm, see?" Rarity says as she shows you the inside of her foreleg.
>You pull the rose stone up to your mouth again.
"H-Howdy?" you say unsure.
>After a second, a very faint grey line starts to form on Rarity's arm.
>In a moment, it spells the word 'Howdy' with a cursive font.
>You can't believe what you're seeing.
"Wow! It really does work! An' it's so light an' out of the way that yer the only one that could read it!" you say excitedly.
>Rarity stares at her arm as the words you say appear and disappear almost invisibley.
>Unless you're really looking for it, you'd never see the words on her arms.
>"I had been using this to remind Sweetie what to purchase from the market after she left the boutique, but it appears to be a fabulous way of communicating discretely as well!" she says happily.
>Suddenly she raises an eyebrow.
>"Although, I didn't expect it to write it all out in your accent..."
>Now you raise your eyebrows.
"What do ya mean?"
>She snickers.
>"Erm... say the word 'Apple'" Rarity says with a smirk.
"Apple."
>She shows you her arm.
>The word comes out spelled, "Ahppul"
>Rarity quietly snickers to herself while you feel the blood rush to your face.
>After a good chuckle Rarity calms down and heads for the stairs.
>"I'm going to quickly get changed. I couldn't bear to be seen in public like this! When I come back down, we'll head over to the castle and surprise Anonymous at work!" she says cheerfully.
>You shake your head as she gets to her room upstairs.
>>25728480
"Honestly, that pony and her clothes..." you sigh to yourself.
>You really wanted to be with Anon right now...
>Or, rather, be at the castle, to see Anon.
>You don't want to be WITH Anon. You just want to SEE him.
>For Rarity's sake.
>"At least I try to wear something decent every once and awhile!" Rarity yells, muffled by her door.
>You feel confused by her sudden outburst.
>What is she talking abo-
>You realize the stone is still in your hoof.
>Oh.
>That's why.
"Sorry.." you quietly mumble into the stone.
>There's a few seconds of silence.
>"Yes, you better be sorry!" she responds with delay.
>You chuckle.
>You lean in close to the chatter stone.
"Apples, Apples, Apples, Apples, Apples..." you repeat over and over again.
>You continue to repeat it until
>"WOULD YOU STOP THAT?!" Rarity yells impatiently from her room.
>There's a small crash, and you hear her cat meow as it runs out of her room and down the stairs.
>"S-Sorry Opalescence!" she yells.
>You can't contain your laughter.
>This stone is a pretty interesting bit of magic. You just hope it'll actually help the two of you.
>Or, rather, help you help her...
>Regardless of semantics.
>You just hope that your coaching-
>...
>...
> - will be enough to win Anon's heart.... for Twilight, of course!
>You're a little nervous, Twilight is kind of a dweeb after all.
>But you're sure that you can out-romance Applejack.
>AJ? Being romantic? FEH.
>You can be romantic, if you try.
>But...
>You don't have to worry about being romantic because Twilight is the one...
>...that needs to be....
>....
>Whatever.
>This will be interesting to say the least.
>>25728442
Shit riggy you post fast
>>25728498
This update is brought to you by: Sleep!
I fell asleep at my computer twice while writing it!
I dunno if I'm gonna make it for another update!
>>25728520
Fight on brother
>>25728580
I just realized I have a class in 7 hours.
I forgot what day it was, shit. I really do have to go to bed right now. That was a light update, sorry about that. I've been doing finals work for the majority of the night.
Just a few more days of it though, then I'm off for a month. Goodnight for now, I guess. Sorry for being a normie college fgt.
>>25728638
Doing more than I am
A nice nighty-night-time bump.
>>25728498
>"Apples, Apples, Apples, Apples, Apples..." you repeat over and over again.
>>You continue to repeat it until
>>"WOULD YOU STOP THAT?!" Rarity yells impatiently from her room.
>>There's a small crash, and you hear her cat meow as it runs out of her room and down the stairs.
>>"S-Sorry Opalescence!" she yells.
>>You can't contain your laughter.
Neither could I, keep up the good work Riggy.
>>25690690
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>>25728498
>"Apples, Apples, Apples, Apples, Apples..." you repeat over and over again.
>>You continue to repeat it until
>>"WOULD YOU STOP THAT?!" Rarity yells impatiently from her room.
The interaction between your characters is spot on, I love it.
>>25729343
I too enjoyed this part
>>25728498
Riggy, Hellmeister I just want to let you two know that I went from almost not clicking on this thread to checking it daily. I-It's not like I like this thread or anything though!
>>25690690
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>>25728498
I feel a great disturbance in the Tsun.I want a Herd ending.
>>25690690
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TREMBLE, MORTALS!
...I'm back.
I'll see if I can start writing the next part.
>>25730855
YISSS THIS PLEASES THE LURKER!
>>25690690
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>>25724926
I've heard so. I don't know, maybe.Why my life hurts me?
>>25724963
>!
!
>>25725975
You deserve praising.
>>25728442
Oh, shit.
>>25728453
D-do they have the same idea?
>Double Naked.
Double pleasure.
>"Not only am I standing directly in front of you, but I haven't cast the spell yet!" she shouts.
Head canon.
>>25728480
>In a moment, it spells the word 'Howdy' with a cursive font.
>cursive font
Hmm...
>The word comes out spelled, "Ahppul"
Fuck, shit, kek.
>>25728498
>"Apples, Apples, Apples, Apples, Apples..." you repeat over and over again.
Ahahaha...
Good jokes.
>>25730855
Waiting for it.
>>25731533
Half-way through it now, more or less!
I'll be done in a while.
Almost done...Just a paragraph left...
>>25731623
>>25732172
Keep it up Hypemeister, we're rootin' for ya!
Shazam! Done.
RD POV
>You're flying home.
>...
>That was...Nice.
>Not, like, awesome, but...You liked it.
>Guess you were right, then, huh?
>Yep, totally has a thing for you.
>Knew it!
>...I guess you feel...A little relieved to know that it's true though.
>...
>Maybe Rarity's training isn't a complete waste of time after all.
>You drank slowly...Asked about his day...
>And he totaly hit on you back there.
>...What did he like about it, though?
>Damn. You don't know.
>Like...Where do you go from here?
>Do you turn it up? Down?
>Just leave it alone?
>'Cos you definitely want more moments like the one you just had.
>...And you want it to even better next time.
>You're sure as heck not settling for just that.
>The quiet was nice, sure, but it was...TOO quiet.
>You're used to a lot of noise. Sure.
>But, you like...Talking, too.
>...What does HE like though?
>...
>WHO CARES ABOUT WHAT HE LIKES?!
>You want to him to be AMAZED. You want ACTION, you...
>...You w-want...
>...You want him to...be happy.
>ARGH!
>Stupid Anon, making you do stuff you don't wanna do.
>...
>...What...Do you want to do, anymore?
>>25732311
>...There's cloudsdale.
>You're almost there.
>You can go in, shut the door, go to your room, and...
>...And...C-cry yourself to sleep...
>..DAMNIT!
>Y-y...You DON'T cry!
>...
>...Y-you...
>Y-you like him...So much...
>...WHAT ELSE CAN YOU DO?!
>You...
>...
>T-today...Was a good day, OK?
>You can't end it off like that.
>It's progress.
>He's...He's a sucker for you, OK?
>He won't care about what you do as long as you do it...Your way.
>He'll like that. He's always liked that.
>...You...D-don't want him to like it...
>You want him TO LOVE IT!
>...B-but...How...Ugh...
>You sniff.
>...Y-you're actually crying...
>...Noooo-ohhh...
>...N-not again...
>S-stop.
"S T O P!"
>...
>...Look at you.
>Y...y-yyou told yourself that you wouldn't do this today.
>It only h-happens because, y-you think about stuff too hard.
>...Y-you're going into cloudsdale now...
>Stop crying before somepony sees you.
>>25732320
>You're fumbling with the key to your house.
>...S-stop...shaking...
>You manage to get it in the lock.
>You open the door.
>Your breathing is ragged.
>Closing the door behind you, you collapse on the couch.
>You're not gonna to start crying again.
>You're gonna ride it out before heading upstairs.
>...
>Come on, you're better than this.
>It doesn't matter if you don't know what he likes.
>...You'll figure it out.
>And even if you don't, it's not like you won't be able to hang out with him any more.
>...You're starting to feel better.
>...Y-yeah. That's more like it.
>Take deep breaths.
>...
>Damn, this couch is comfy.
>W-well, of course, genius. It's made out of clouds.
>...Heh.
>See? You're laughin'.
>...Y-you can go to bed now.
>You sigh.
>Not gonna let this beat you.
>...For once, though, you're not angry at him about it.
>That...Was your fault.
>This time, anyway.
>You get off the couch and start to accend the stairs.
>...W-why do you have to go to bed, anyway?
>You could just go down to Twilight and bug her till she moves the sun up into the air.
>You're not tired.
>You yawn.
>...Damnit.
>Well, whatever. You'll sleep. Fine.
>You flump onto your bed.
>Auugh, it's so soooft.
>The pegasi that make these houses are geniuses.
>Not only do they sculpt all of the furniture from the same cloud,
>But they change the texture of some of the clouds. Like the couch, or the bed.
>Expecialy the bed.
>You look around your room.
>There's not much to look at, honestly.
>There's a few wonderbolts posters, your bed, a side lamp and dresser, closet...
>It's your room though. And it's awesome.
>...Too bad Anon's too much of a scaredy-human to come up here.
>He's been up here before, but he ended up staying in the balloon.
>Guess he didn't trust the clouds to be a particularly sturdy surface, even with Twilight's cloud walking spell.
>You also renember him worrying about the spell wearing off without him knowing about it.
>...He wouldn't be able to spend too much time up here, but you really hope he'll come round.
>You want him to see your room, where you live, show him around town...
>...Mainly see your room.
>M-maybe sleep on your bed.
>You sigh.
>Guess you'll have to settle for sleeping on HIS bed.
>...Y-you've got your own bed! You don't need to sleep on his.
>...
>You bet it smells sweaty.
>...You're counting on it, in fact.
>...Not like you'd ever know...
>You sulk.
>Patience, Rainbow, Patience.
>You can't renember the last time you waited for something as long as you've waited for...A-Anon.
>...A-and you'll keep waiting. Long as it takes.
>Element of Loyalty, Rainbow Dash. Element. Of. Loyalty.
>...
>You need something to hug.
>Where's Tank?
>You look over the side of your bed for the elusive turtle.
>...You check under your bed.
>Yep. There he is.
>You'll just drag him out...And...
>Yep. Time to cuddle a turtle.
>...He's firm, allright.
>Cold, but firm.
>Not quite a substitute for Anon.
>...Maybe you should get annother pillow.
>...A big one.
>>25732336
The next morning...
Anon's POV
>You wake up.
>...
>You sigh, not quite opening your eyes yet.
>Milk it. You need to make it last.
>...
>...
>...
>...You still have to go to work, you know.
>Yeah, yeah. Whatever.
>...
>...
>Get out of bed.
>No.
>...
>...
>...Seriously man, you've got to get to your job.
>I'll get to it.
>...You'll get to it now.
>No.
>Get UP.
>NO.
>Come on, man.
>You groan.
>Stupid concience.
>...Give me one good reason to get out of bed.
>Your brain replays footage of yesterday's happenings.
>...ALRIGHT, I'm up!
>You get out of bed, ready to start the day.
>Time for breakfast.
>>25732343
RD's POV
"Urrmm...Uuuunff...Aaahhhnooon..."
>You're all alone with him on a cloud, floating over an ocean.
>He's holding you tightly.
>He nibbles your ear affectionately.
"Gahh...Haah...Aaah...Mmm."
>You're so glad he got over his fear of heights for you.
>Twilight was kind enough to find a permenant version of the cloud walking spell and use it on him too.
>It's just you and him, nopony else to disturb you.
>He rests his hand on the side of your head and looks deep into your eyes.
>You love him so much.
>He pulls you in for a kiss...
>...
"Wh-whhw...WHAT THE HAY?"
>You're kissing Tank on the back of his head.
>He seems confused, but he still apriciates the attention.
>...Even in your dreams, he finds a way to tick you off.
>Damnit.
>...You want to go back to sleep.
>...
>...Wait, why settle for dream Anon when you can have REAL Anon?
>You suddenly renember your destiny.
>"YES!"
>You speed downstars, and quickly assemble pancake ingredients.
>You'll make them fast, eat them fast and you'll stop him before he gets to work!
>That'll make him late. YES!
>That'll teach dream Anon to be so stupid.
>...You have no regrets for what you're about to do. He deserves it.
>Your logic is infal...Infaleabb...
>Doesn't fail.
>>25732353
Anon's POV
>You haven't seen Rainbow Dash yet.
>Did she sleep in, or something?
>...It's not like she's doing anything anyway.
>She's said in the past that she gets up at this hour just so she could mess with you.
>You'dve never thought a lazy bum like could've been such a fun friend to have.
>'Course, that was old, human world, Anon.
>Now you're in Equestria! It's much better over here than there.
"SUCK IT, OTHER HUMANS!"
>...You're uh...In a pretty good mood, apparently.
>Why wouldn't you be? You get to go over to the farm, do some hard work, and hang out with the best friend you've ever had.
>...That's assuming that she doesn't meet you somewhere in between.
>Most likely. She can break the sound barrier, while you break a sweat.
>...Damnit, you can't wait to get work out of the way.
>You'll work so hard that Applejack won't have a reason to boss you around.
>You're pretty early though, and you can afford to be a little late.
>...Maybe you sorta...WANT Rainbow to come crashing in.
>You'll have to wait and see, I guess.
>Wonder which angle she'll attack you from this time?
>Will she blame you again, so you can have a drink with her again?
>YOU'RE SO FREAKING EXCITED.
>...Can't belive you actually want her to cause you physical pain by ramming into you.
>It's what comes after that makes it all worth it though.
>All the angry faces, the insults, the pain, everything.
>You're willing to go through that again if it means you get to hang out with her.
>ACTUALLY hang out, too! Not just, challenge you to a competition or something.
>You like that, sure, but...Actually talking to her was so...Real.
>...Maybe you're asking a little too much.
>Whatever. You still can't wait.
>>25732363
RD's POV
>No time to savour the pancakes.
>They're a little undercooked, anyway.
>Guess no matter how fast you get the ingredients together and turn the heat up as high as it would go, it doesn't cook it faster.
>...You don't know why it doesn't work that way.
>You open the door and shoot out, the gust closing the door behind you.
>You need to find your stallion.
>Where is he...?
>He should be moving along the normal route around about now...
>...Ahah!
>There he is.
>...You sure you want to jump him again, though?
>After last night...You're not sure it'd...Feel right.
>You really want to get him back for what dream him did.
>...L-later.
>...You'll just...Fly alongside him for now.
>You'll feel happy knowing that you needed to slow down so he could keep up with you.
>HAH!
>...Y-yeah.
>...
>You start to decend.
>>25732372
Anon's POV
>You hear the sound of wind being stired up behind you.
>Here she comes...!
>...
>Oh. She's just, sorta flying next to you.
>Maybe she wants to race.
"Hey, RD! Sleep well?"
>You flushes red.
>"...Grr...Ngnuh. Uh...Y-yeah."
>Sounded like she had an insult on the tip of her tounge, but just...Let it go.
"Oh...OK."
>...
>"Did uh...You sleep well?"
>...Still a little talkative from last night, huh?
>You grin.
"Like a rock."
>She laughs.
>Not in a cruel way, though.
>"Well, when you've got a rock for a head, that's just how you sleep!"
>You laugh too.
>You suddenly renember something you forgot to tell her yesterday.
"Hey, uh...After I'm done with work, do you...Wanna hang out with Applejack for a while?
>She looks puzzled.
>"Uh...Why?"
"I...Uh...We, haven't hung out with her for a while now, is all. I was wondering if you'd mind if she came along."
>She looks away for a few seconds.
>Her face seems to dim.
>"Uh...Yeah. Sure."
>That sounded...Bitter.
>Doesn't she like hanging out with Applejack?
>...You're worried about her again.
"...You sure you're OK?"
>Her brow thickens.
>"Yeah. I'm OK. Anon."
>Yup, she doesn't like that idea at all.
>She literally just said that through gritted teeth.
>>25732379
>You decide not to press it.
>Don't want to ruin a good day.
>Besides, you practicaly promised AJ that you'd talk to RD about meeting up with her again.
>You...Have done that, but you have a feeling that from her choice of tone that it'd not be the best of reunions.
>Wait...
>You don't usually pick up on things like this.
>But Rainbow Dash has dedicated a lot of time to being your friend.
>A LOT of time.
>You two are really close.
>You spend practicaly all your time together, except for when you go to the farm.
>But a while ago, she started acting...Differently towards you...
>So that means that she...
>That she's Jealous!
>Damn. Can't belive you didn't see that before.
>She started acting this way not long after harvest season started.
>Since then, you've been spending a lot more time with Applejack.
>THAT'S why she was acting so weird.
>Well, there's one way this could work out, I suppose. But you'll need to tell her a lot about why you're asking her to do it.
"Hey...Rainbow?"
>She still looks mad.
>"Yeah?"
>You plan the words out in your head, carefuly.
"...What I meant by you hanging out with me and Applejack was that you've...Been avoiding her, lately."
>She raises an eyebrow, and some tension lifts from her face.
"You've been trying to hang out with me a lot, and I've enjoyed it, but...Applejack's feeling a little...Neglected."
>She suddenly looks a little sad.
>Well, she hasn't exploded at you yet, so...That's a good sign, I suppose.
>"...Oh."
"It doesn't have to be with me, but...Could you...Consider it?"
>She looks like she's deep in thought.
>A blush steadly rises in her cheeks.
>...Damnit, you're looking into her eyes again.
>You look away.
"So...What do you say?"
>You look back at her briefly.
>Her eyebrows have lowered again, but she's still thinking.
>...Still blushing, too.
>>25732387
>Eventually, she says.
>"...Y-yeah. OK. Thanks Anon."
>Now that, sounds like a certain answer.
"YES! Thanks Rainbow. She'll be happy to hear that."
>She smiles a little, but her eyebrows are tilted up.
>Along with the blush, she looks pretty cute.
>...Well, for her, at least.
"So, uh...Are we gonna do anything, or should I meet ya during my break?"
>She stares for a few more seconds, but answers the question.
>"E...Eh, I've uh...Got somewhere to be."
>Huh.
"OK. See ya then!"
>She loops around and heads in the direction of Ponyvile.
>...You can't wait to tell Applejack the good news.
>You sprint towards the farm with redoubled effort.
>Soon, it's in sight. Doesn't look like they've started yet, so that works out.
>You check your watch just to be sure.
>10 minutes early. Awesome.
>Should give you some time to catch your breath.
>You think you can see Applejack from here, actually.
>You wave to her.
>She doesn't seem to see you from here.
>Damn.
>Eh, you'll be up in her face in no time.
>You haven't even gotten to work yet, and you're already exhausted.
>She'll be so happy, though, that she might even let you off some work.
>...Or, maybe not.
I was a little tired, so...I hope it came out alright.
>>25732395
Gutt gemacht, weiter so
>>25732311
>ALL THIS TANGLED INNER BULLSHIT OF RAINBOW DASH
I love it.
>...You want him to...be happy.
I'm dying here! Mercy!No mercy!: 3
>>25732320
And it all went down so fast.
Fuck me. No, don't do that, don't fuck me now, it's too interesting to fuck me now.
>>25732327
It's more and more cute!
>But they change the texture of some of the clouds. Like the couch, or the bed.
I love worldbuilding.
>>25732336
>M-maybe sleep on your bed.
Jesus christ, how erotic. How purely and innocently erotic.
>Element of Loyalty, Rainbow Dash. Element. Of. Loyalty.
I don't know why exactly, but my heart want to be free out of my ribcage.
>You need something to hug.
>Where's Tank?
AAA! TOO CUTE!
>>25732343
Kek!
>>25732353
MISS DASH, BEHAVE! IT'S UNPROFESSIONAL TO HAVE CLOUDY DREAMS ABOUT ANON LIKE THAT!
>He seems confused, but he still apriciates the attention.
Lessed Dog, pls. Kek!
>You'll make them fast, eat them fast and you'll stop him before he gets to work!
>That'll make him late. YES!
>That'll teach dream Anon to be so stupid.
What kind of anime character is she?!I love it!
>Your logic is infal...Infaleabb...
>Doesn't fail.
Hue.
>>25732363
This post is golden.
>>25732372
Wow, that's a change.
>>25732379
>"Hey, uh...After I'm done with work, do you...Wanna hang out with Applejack for a while?
Oh, boy.
>>25732387
Oh, my gods, stop writing so COZY!Never stop, please.
>>25732395
>I was a little tired, so...I hope it came out alright.
I love it, like, I love it a lot.
>>25690690
bump
RiggyRiggyRiggyRiggyRiggyRiggyRiggyRiggyRiggyRiggyRiggyRiggyRiggyRiggyRiggyRiggyRiggyRiggyRiggyRiggyRiggy come back to usssssssss...
>>25690690
bump
>Ah! It looks like we're in for a treat today, dear viewer.
>We've stumbled upon a thread in the midst of what is known by experts as a "dry spell" of posting.
>Fearing for the survival of their thread, the Anonymous drones nervously launch the thread to the front page in the hopes of attracting the attention of one of the much sought-after "writefags".
>This is known as "bumping".
>While this display alone is unimpressive, the replies number and header image will be used as a type of plumage to attract a mate.
>However, writefags don't typically come out during the day, as they are mostly nocturnal. Unless the drones are lucky, their thread may not last until the writefags decide to feed.
>However, there is limited space that all threads must compete for, and many threads unsuited for survival simply do not make it.
>Some threads do not garner enough interest for their drones to initiate a "bump".
>Others are simply neglected.
>It is a harsh competition, and tragically, only the best threads survive more than a day.
>>25733567
Guess we're one of the best then.
I've been buying and giving Christmas gifts. I'm currently busy, but I think I'll be around to write a little later.
>>25733808
Fine!Yes, I am grumpy.
Good night.
>>25733567
Bitch I preen this shit like a mother fucker.
>>25733567
I don't know what, but there's something about a good Irwinposting that I just love.
>>25733808
>I've been buying and giving Christmas gifts
>giving Christmas gifts
Not sure if you're really early about it or just punctual. Either way, one more thing to add to the list of things I like about you Riggy.Platonically of course!
>>25690690
bump
>>25690690
bump
>>25732395
Great story so far. I only have one gripe with your writing style, which is that you use too many ellipses (...). In fact, you used about 188 of them in the 11 posts that you made. Other than that I can't wait to see how this plays out with RD.
>>25690690
bump
The tsun must flow.
>>25732336
>Tank
>Turtle
TOOOOOORTOISE
>>25733808
Alright. I'm walking back to my dorm. Hopefully I'll be writing in like 30 min
>>25737684
Here and writing.
>You are Anon.
>Today, Twilight's been helping you out a lot.
>Through all these months of living in Equestria, Twilight's always been there to make sure you fit in.
>Or, more likely, have some kind of mental breakdown and hurt anypony.
>Right now you're enjoying some coffee at your favourite coffee house, the Rise and Grind.
"Thanks again, Twilight. I don't know what I would have done without you."
>Twilight blushes and looks away.
>"I was just doing my duty as the Princess of Friendship, Anon. Don't let it go to your head."
>With a chuckle, you give her a good-natured slap on the back.
"Shut up."
>You hear a gasp, and look around.
>Ponies are staring.
"Uhm."
>Twilight magics your hand away from her back and roughly tugs you to your feet.
>The two of you take off at a brisk trot back to Twilight's castle in silence.
>Not a word is spoken until you reach Twilight's study.
>Not that you didn't try to get an answer out of her, but you gave up after five minutes of nothing from her.
>"Anon, do you know what you just did?"
>You have no idea.
"Not at all."
>She won't meet your eye, and her face is bright red.
>"You just publicly told everypony that you wanted to mount me."
>>25738040
>Oh.
>OH.
"W-well, then."
>"D-do you have any idea what k-kind of message you can send out with j-just one misunderstood gesture?"
>She faces you, and she looks pissed.
>"As Princess of Friendship, I'll take it upon myself to teach you all about inappropriate touching."
>Oh jesus.
"....Okay. Sure thing. So... should I come back tomorrow? Or..."
>"No!"
>You jump; even Twilight seems surprised at the volume of her voice.
>"No. I'll teach you now."
>She walks over to a couch and lays down on her back.
>Her crown and booties disappear in a flash of light, and you're blushing at what one could consider her "naked" form.
>Speaking of blushing, Twilight is bright red.
>"N-now, Anon, I w-want you to put your hands on m-my t-t-teats.">You need an adult
"Twilight? Is that... I know that teat-twisting is a no-no. Do you really think I nee-"
>"I-I have no way of knowing what you know! Our cultures are very, very different."
>"Now..."
>You feel a tug on your shirt.
>"Get OVER here, Anon!"
>You find yourself being pulled towards Twilight with her magic.
>"Now, put your hands on my teats. I'm going to teach you exactly how you should NEVER caress a mare's nipples in public."
>You learned a lot today.
>>25738040
That picture is absolutely horrifying. Why does such a thing exist?
>>25738034
>The forge doesn't feel right.
>By now, you would have warmed the fires and prepared for your daily projects.
>Instead, you lie on your back and stare at the dirty ceiling, stained by the smoke that gets trapped.
>Twilight should be down soon to watch over you, probably with some task that will help her win you over.
>It's a lovely gesture, the likes of which you have never expereinced before.
>Which makes this very difficult to swallow.
>It doesn't feel right...
>Or rather, you don't feel right.
>You lack the ability to comprehend the immense emotional load you've been given to deal with.
>Yesterday you didn't even think you COULD have feelings for a pony, today you have to start making decisions.
>Your pondering comes to an end as the door to the forge opens.
>Twilight steps down the stairs with grace.
>She doesn't look at you, she doesn't say anything.
>She simply wanders to the base of the stairs and sits.
>You sit up from the bench you were lying on and look her way.
>The tension builds as she remains quiet.
>You open your mouth to speak.
>"Today you'll be making horseshoes." she says suddenly.
>Her eyes oepn and meet your gaze.
>"You do your job, and I shall supervise." says in an authoritative tone, "B-But of course we can talk while you work... no rules against that!"
>Her anxiety in this situation still pierces her princess facade.
>You simply nod and stand.
>>25738728
>You grab your tools, you grab some iron, and light the fire of the forge.
>You place your tools down on the bench next to you and stare into the fire as you wait for the coals to reheat.
>The forge never goes totally cold, it always has a little heat deep in the coals. It's what keeps the forge as hot as possible when you're using it.
>Twilight comes up from behind you as you stare into the fire.
>At first she doesn't say anything.
>"So, um, about before..." she finally begins, "I wanted to apologize."
>You raise an eyebrow and look down at her.
"Apologize? For what?"
>She looks into the crackling flames.
>"I shouldn't have had an inspection so early, and I shouldn't force you to hide your guests. Especially when they are my friends..." she says slowly, "Being a princess is a lot of work, and sometimes I can get carried away with my duties.
>You look down at here then back to the fire.
>You smile.
>An apology for her actions was the last thing you were expecting, but it felt good to know even she realizes how silly she has been acting lately.
>She takes a deep breath.
>"B-But- Can you really blame me? I mean, m-my job is a pretty big deal!" she sudddenly declares loudly.
>Her shift in tone comes seemingly out of nowhere.
>Suddenly that previous statement doesn't feel quite as satisfying.
>>25738740
>Anon looks down at you with a troubled glance.
>He appears confused.
>"It... sure is. Being a princess must be a lot of work." he finally responds in monotone.
>A voice rings through your head, like it was whispered right next to your ear.
>"Don't be modest, pile it on! Brag about what it's like having so much magic or something. Anything!" the shrill voice shouts.
>You imagine Rainbow Dash sitting in the tree across the way, loudly whispering into the chatter stone.
"Y-yeah. It's a huge thing, being an Alicorn and all. The amount of magic I can perfom i-is incredible! I-I've been able to go back in time, enchant things, transform things..." you drift off near the end of the list.
>Anon doesn't seem to be paying much attention to you. He continues to stare at the slowly warming coals.
>"Sounds specatacular Twi," he says without looking at you, "You'll have to show me some of your tricks some time."
>The heat increases in your cheeks.
>Are you losing his attention?
>He doesn't seem to care for your gloating very much.
>You don't really care for your gloating very much either.
>Rainbow is convinced it will work.
>"Don't let him get away with that!" she shouts.
>You take another gasp of air.
"They aren't just 'tricks' Anonymous. My magic has saved all of Equestria many times before." you say as royally as possible.
>He turns back to you.
>Yes.
>>25738755
>"Yeah, I've heard about that before. Nobody has ever really told me what happened." he says looking down to you.
>Rainbow Dash chimes in
>"That! Talk about that!" she yells excitedly.
>You smile up at him.
>Though your heart smashes against your ribs, you continue to speak as calmly as possible.
"Oh w-well, there were plenty of times! I fought against Nightmare Moon before Luna was released from her, I had to use my wit to save my everypony from the wrath of Discord, I exposed the changling queen at my brother's wedding, fought the crystal king, traded blows with Tirek, and even traveled through time with an old nemesis!" you say, your excitement building with each example.
>Staying calm went right out the window.
>Anon appears interested again.
>"Geez! That's a lot of fighting out of you! I had no idea you were so dangerous."
>Rainbow barks again.
>"Yeah! You're super dangerous!"
>You dismissively wave at Anon.
"Of course I'm dangerous. How else would I have defeated them?"
>Anon shakes his head chuckling.
>"I knew you had some powerful magic, but I never knew you used them so often! I suppose you have to be pretty repsonsible with power like that."
>You nod with a cocky smile, much like Rainbow Dash usually sports.
"Yes, very responsible. B-but the incredible magic I p-possess is the thing that wins even the harshest of conflicts!
>You hear a scoff from behind.
>"That and a little help from your friends!" says an annoyed posh voice.
>Uh oh.
>What is SHE doing here?
>>25728480
omg, ahppul.
fuckin great
riggy
riggy is you ded
>>25738771
oh boy. keep up the awesome writing riggy
>>25738056
moar ?
>>25738771
It's like rainbow wants rarity to win.Ahppul is gonna fuck it up for Rarity too isn't she?
>>25739790
I think it's just shit advice.harem is the only option
>>25690690
bump
>>25732446
I'm glad you wrote that in german.
It made the compliment feel more genuine.
>>25732521
I love reading these.
>>25735747
Noted. I'll try and fix that next time.
>>25737369
Hey, Blame them, not me.
They just call him a turtle, so I thought it'd add to the story a little.Mostly because it sounds cuter
I've noticed some kind of pattern in my work.
Part 1: OK
Part 2: High quality
Part 3: Kinda meh again
Part 4: High quality
Part 5: Pretty good
If things continue in this manner, it's only safe to assume the next post will be a good one.
Not writing yet, by the way. Waiting for the ideas.
>>25690690
bump
>>25690690
bump
>>25738040
>With a chuckle, you give her a good-natured slap on the back.
Oh, fuck.
>"You just publicly told everypony that you wanted to mount me."All of my 'what now?'
>>25738056
>"As Princess of Friendship, I'll take it upon myself to teach you all about inappropriate touching."
>Oh jesus.
Oh, jesus.
>"I-I have no way of knowing what you know! Our cultures are very, very different."
This is her explanation? Kek.
>>25738728
>"You do your job, and I shall supervise." says in an authoritative tone, "B-But of course we can talk while you work... no rules against that!"
Cute.
>>25738740
>"B-But- Can you really blame me? I mean, m-my job is a pretty big deal!" she sudddenly declares loudly.
Rainbow, please.
>>25738771
>"That and a little help from your friends!" says an annoyed posh voice.
Hmm... I am anxious about the future.
I know I have no right to ask but, continue?
>>25740410
>I love reading these.
I love reading your story.
I hope you found your ideas.
>>25738771
Oh man. I passed out last night right after finishing that update. I just got up from that coma.
Finals have been wearing me out and making it hard to write, so I'll be taking today off from writing. I'm going to be busy all day, and I'd rather get to be early than try to squeeze out an update in my ridiculously tired state.
So, no updates today.
Tomorrow, maybe. After that, definitely.
>>25741606
It will continue. I hadn't realized by I have actually already written almost 34000 words for this story. I had no idea I had been writing so much in such a small time frame.
Anyway, I'll be around on the thread, but I really need to focus on my finals today. I can't put it off any longer.
>>25742073
Take your time based riggy
>>25742073
oh shit finals
i should probably get on that too
i didnt need those credit hours anyway
Luckily, I don't have finals.
I'm writing again now.
The story will be a little late, so you may have to check back through the thread after it's done.
>>25742636
Bugger. That's me, there.
...I only use my username if I need to so, other threads I'm simply another anon.
>>25742665
Welcome back and glad you've found yourself some inspiration.
>>25742073
You do you Riggles, get yerself a good edjacashun.
>>25742636
>>25742665
Yeah same, I only put on a name if it's half-relevant to the threador if RiggyRag-senpai is writing for it.
>>25742073
>34k
...Nice...
Take your time.We have a pretty comfy thread here.
>>25730855]
>That gif name
Oh SHIT NUGGA!!! I knew you speak spanish! I knew it!
>>25743373Only because it's awesome
DAMNIT, I HAVE TO EAT PIZZA
I don't want to miss out on a single second of writing this story.
Grr.
Fine. I'll eat. Stupid craving.I-It's not like I want to eat pizza or anything, it's just good!
>>25743683
"Here's your tip, pizza delivery man. B-but don't think I'm satisfied with your service! I just don't want you to spit in my food next time."is literally the only reason i tip.
>>25743700
>"W-well it's not like I WANTED a tip from you!"
>>25743700
This.
>>25743727
Kek.
>>25743683
Write, nigguh. You're too good to be free from us.Sorry, but that's true. You're a writefag now. Our writefag. : 3
>>25743817
Later, friend. I have work pretty soon.
>>25743989
(best hostage situation ever)
>>25743817
>>25743989
>>25744015
>tfw I've fallen into such an elaborate trap
Guess I'll just keep writing
Almost done now.
Proving true to the pattern, this one's pretty good.
STORY COMPLETE
TARGET CONFIRMED
LAUNCHING TACTICAL UPDATE
RD POV
>You're flying back to town.
>Well, you have been spending a lot of time with Anon, you guess.
>I mean, of course you have! He's a great friend to hang out with, n-not to mention, t-that...
>That other thing.
>You haven't really been doing anything in your free time other than dreaming about him, and, well...W-waiting for him.
>Hanging out with your other friends might be an, uh, healthier alternative.
>After all, you saved the world with them, like, at least 3 times.
>That's a pretty big number. For saving the world, anyway.
>Maybe it had something to do with all the bad guys showing up around your area.
>Surpisingly nice of 'em to all decide on being evil where you and your friends could reach 'em.
>Hah!
>You make yourself laugh.
>Maybe it's about time you paid a few of 'em a visit.
>Applejack's out, for now.
>She's busy.
>Yeah...You'd be able to hang out with her anyway.
>But it'd involve you getting dragged into work.
>Rarities out too.
>You're gonna meet up with her when Anon's break ends, anyway.
>So that leaves Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie, and Twilight.
>Hmm...
>Egghead.
>Twilight's calm, and probably would, uh, Keep it together.
>The other two, eh, one would explode, and the other would be awkward.
>You have to admit it, though, you're kinda nervous.
>A part of you kinda wants them to throw a party over your return,
>But annother part doesn't want to make too much of a scene.
>Well, time to head over to the...What?
>Oh, right, she lives in the castle now.
>Forgot about that.
>>25745147
>Still hasn't sunk in, has it?
>She's a princess now.
>She's been one for a while, but it's never really been a thing that got in the way much.
>Sure, there's the occasional royal visit she has to do, but not much has changed.
>Apart from where she lives. I mean, damn.
>LOOK at the place.
>...OK, from the outside, it's not much to look at.
>It's pretty spikey.
>But still, a whole castle. That's awesome!
>You remember helping to haul her old tree house to put inside the castle to help her feel better about the place.
>What you did with it was nice, sure, but you could've like, built a book fort instead.
>Pretty sure she'd be just as happy with that.
>You look around at Ponyvile.
>You don't actually live here, but you've honestly never felt more at home anywhere else.
>"H-hey! Hey! Rainbow Dash!"
>Uh?
>You look down.
>Hey! It's Scootaloo!
>She's looking up at you with a big smile on her face.
>Guess your old world-saving-buddies aren't the only ones you've been missing out on, huh?
>Looks like she's tailing you on her scooter.
>You'd love to stop and say hi, but, y'know.
>That's not the COOL option.
>You give her a salute, and speed off towards the castle.
>Pretty easy to see it from there.
>You mean, it'd be pretty hard to miss it.
>>25745164
>Why'd it have to be made out of crystal, anyway?
>Sure, it looks pretty and everything, but you can't crash through it.
>What kind of tool uses a door?
>Yup. You're either gonna have to find an open window, or you'll actually have to skip visiting twilight.
>No way are you gonna open a door to get in. You wanna MAKE an entrance, not use one.
>There you go. Nice open window.
>She's probably in that room.
>You fly straight for it.
>Peaceful reading session? Organising documents?
>TOO BAD!
>YOU'RE GETTING A VISIT FROM RAINBOW DASH!
>You fly full speed through the window, stop, and strike a pose.
>You hear the sound of papers scattering in your presence.
>Man, you missed that noise.
>There she is.
>She's sitting at a desk, making a quill float.
>Pretty sure she wasn't doing anything with that.
>She hasn't looked at you yet, but that's because some papers have landed on her head.
>You keep the pose, and wait for her to shake 'em off.
>"Rainbow Dash? Is that you?"
"YOU BET IT IS!"
>You fly over to her, and give her a noogie.
"How ya doing?"
>She looks around at her scattered papers.
>"...Oh, pretty good."
>She slowly lowers her quill, and gently places it on the desk.
>>25745178
Twilight Sparkle's POV
>Well, it's Rainbow Dash alright.
>Can't say you were expecting HER today.
>Oh, well. You suppose you never have.
>It's hard to stay mad at a pony with the same cocky attitude that Rainbow has.
>Makes you feel like you can shake off whatever she does to you just because it's Rainbow Dash.
>Come to think of it, it's been quite a while since she burst into the room with complete disregard for what you were doing.
>Maybe you'll finish that essay later.
>"So, uh, what's happening?"
"Oh, um...Nothing, really."
>You pause for a split second, but then remember that it's Rainbow Dash, and try to get your point out before she interrupts you.
"So, Rainbow, uh, why did you burst through my window?"
>"Well, it's been a while since I last saw ya, so I decided to pay you a visit!"
"How, ah, thoughtful of you."
>You smile.
>As much as a pain it is to get your work back together after she, well, makes herself at home, there's something about her brash entrances that you've come to like.
>The shenanigans that often follow after her appearance are often fun, too.
>It's a welcome disruption, if not an inconvenient one.
>You decide it'd be a good idea to pick up the papers while you wait for her to come up with something else to say.
>An easy task, with your magic, but you're still going to need to re-write the page you were on.
>You quickly re-assemble the scattered pages, and stuff most of the ink back into the inkwell.
>You're lucky you don't have to do this with HANDS or anything like that, as the latter may have proven almost impossible.
>Rainbow's just hovering in the air, watching what you're doing.
>You manage to get everything back in order, right down to the page you were last writing on.
>Ah, that's satisfying.
"So, did you need anything?"
>"Uh...Well, um...How've you been? Anything fun happen?"
>You think back to the last time you saw Rainbow Dash.
>Did anything interesting happen since then?
>Hmm.
>>25745191
>Well, you have discovered an interesting new theory concerning the interactions between physical, and magically enchanted matter.
>But you get the feeling she wouldn't be interested in something like that.
>You've been organising a few things for some of your friends.
>Rarity often calls on you to help arrange her fabrics by colour, so you've been doing that.
>Had an interesting experiment involving a potted plant, some magic and some rather...F-furtive vines...
>...No, she doesn't need to know about that one.
>Pretty sure she'd WANT to know, but that's a whole different story.
>Had an awkward conversation with Spike involving who his maternal parents were?
>...Nope, absolutely nothing she'd be interested in.
"Nothing really happened, but, it's been pretty good."
>"Heh! Hope it hasn't been too boring without me."
"Well, I suppose I missed it when you barged into my office all the time, yes."
>You both laugh.
>You suppose there are other perks to her than her strange charisma. She's witty, too.
>Knowing her, she probably came in here purely for the sake of it, so you'll give her something to do.
"Say, Rainbow, could you fetch a book for me?"
>"A book? Uh, sure. Like, what book?"
"It's, uh, on that pile over there."
>You indicate to the pile of books you've set up.
>"...That's too easy."
>You grin.
"Well, if you insist."
>You teleport the books somewhere else.
"They'll be somewhere in the castle. Remember, it's the one at the top."
>NOW she looks up to the "challenge".
>"That's more like it. I'll be back before you know it!"
>She zooms off.
>You hold your paper and inkwell with your magic to make sure they don't fall over again.
>This might not be a particularly productive way to get your work done, but it's fun getting her to do things for you.
>Somewhat nostalgic of the first time you met.
>It sure is great to have her back.
>>25745210
Anon's POV
>Today's going great so far.
>When you told Applejack the news, she was ecstatic.
>She was all like; "YEEEEE-HAW!", which you assume is a good thing, from what you know about the south.
>In fact, since you're making such good progress on the harvest, she straight up threw a party.
>She calls it a break, but it's definitely a celebration.
>You never had any idea that they were so close.
>She invited all the Apple family members over to the house where she's serving various apple themed goodies.
>It took her a while to cook them, so we all decided to get some work in for the sake of progress.
>Afterwards we all went over to the table and heartily chowed down. Yourself included.
>Apple pies, Apple fritters, Apple dumplings, Apples, apples, apples, APPLES EVERYTHING.
>You would've gotten sick of apples after this if they didn't taste so good.
>Considering your company, you eat with comfortable disregard for table manners.
>You take a look at the gathered "guests".
>You're sandwiched between Big mac and Applebloom.
>You've got muscles, sure, but big mac has almost TOO much muscle.
>Dude's built like a mountain.
>A CHISELED mountain.
>Well built, strong but silent type.
>He'd probably be the sort of guy you'd go for if you leant that way.
>...
>That's not a straight thought.
>Opting for a less homoerotic train of thought, you turn to Applebloom.
>The small but hearty little pony is digging nuzzle first into a pie.
>She's adorable, you have to admit.
>She pulls out of the pie to burp, then digs back in again.
>...Maybe not TOO cute, but she's definitely got charm to her.
>Damn, these fritters are awesome.
>They're like sweet little pastry bombs of sugary apple flavoured goodness.
>They're so small, you can fit quite a few in your mouth at once.
>Rarity would've had a heart attack by now if she was here.
>You'd laugh, but you don't want to choke.
>>25745227
>After the impromptu feast, you're more than ready to get back to work.
>You assemble the tools and toss them into the wheelbarrow with almost inhuman precision.
>You pilot the barrow out of the shed, turn a perfect 90 degree turn toward the orchard and set in stride towards your calling.
>Man, you're on a ROLL.
>"Hey, Anonemus!"
"Hey, sport."
>None of the other members of the Apple family pronounce your name that way. It's weird.
>Guess it's just a characteristic of Applebloom.
>"Yeh do know that yer on yer break, right?"
>You halt your charge towards the trees.
>You turn your head to face the little firebrand.
"What? It's not my break."
>She gives a cheeky little smile.
>"Y'sure? 'Cos ah'm pretteh sure ah heard frum Applejack that you were!"
>Applejack approaches the filly and gives her a noogie.
>"It's true, Anon. Yer free ta go. Fer the day, in fact."
>A spark of excitement runs it's course through your body.
"R-really?"
>"Yup! We'll take cayur of things back heyur."
>Applebloom gives a cute little salute with her tounge sticking out the side of her mouth. She then leans against her sister, both of them laughing.
"You sure? I-I don't mind. I can keep working, you know."
>WHY ARE YOU MAKING SURE, YOU WANT THIS.
>"Go on, git!"
>Close one.
>Shut up, she was going to let you go, anyway.
"T-thanks bo...I mean, Applejack!"
>You leave the barrow where it is and sprint off in the direction of the main gate.
>>25745240
RD's POV
>You're starting to think Twilight is using you.
>I mean, there WAS that time that she tested your mettle by clearing the sky.
>And that time when she made you fetch tons of paper from the store.
>She was definitely timing you then. Inside her head.
>But this seems a little bit on the suspicious side.
>She waits for a bit, then asks you to get more books.
>Almost seems like she's too lazy to get them herself!
>Unless...
>YEAH, THAT'S IT!
>This is a relay match between you and Twilight!
>Like, she times you when you get those books, and then she looks in the books and writes stuff down.
>Then she times HER!
>You knew she was good at math, but this is phenomenal.
>You're impressed, but you're not gonna lose to her!
>You bring the next book to her and put it to the side.
>"Thank you, Rainbow Dash."
"Don't spend time thanking me, you gotta get on with the work!"
>She looks puzzled for a second.
>Yeah, Like she doesn't KNOW.
>She's just trying to psyche you out!
>She then shrugs and starts writing.
>She's quickly scribbling words onto the paper, then checking inside the book.
>I guess she has to be accurate with the work, or it's a time penalty or something?
>...And YOUR penalty is if you bring her the wrong book!
>GOT IT!
>Man, this is, like, THE most intense way she's ever tested you!
>You're glad you decided to meet her first.
>>25745249
Anon's POV
>You quickly arrive outside the gate.
>Wait until you see the look on Rainbow's face when you tell her you have the day off.
>'Course, she'll still have to meet up with Applejack later, but you'll be able to spend more time with Rainbow on the whole.
>Wait...
>Ah. She's not expecting you to be this early.
>Right...You guess you'll just have to wait for her.
>You lean against a tree.
>You've already got an idea of what you're going to say to her once she shows up.
>Man, this is turning out to be one of the best days of your life.
>You look back at the farm.
>True to their word, the other members of the family are working hard to get the apples harvested.
>A part of you feels pretty guilty about letting them do the work instead.
>It's a day off, though. That's how days off work.
>You don't have too many breaks, you have to say. It's a nice change.
>You look at the sky, still bright and blue.
>Kinda reminds you of a certain best friend of yours.
>You chuckle to yourself.
>Man, A lot of things have been coming up roses lately.
>There's last night, there's telling Applejack about her seeing Rainbow again, that feast...
>Now you've got the whole day to yourself.
>Well, you say to yourself, but honestly, the only way you're thinking of spending it is with her.
>What would you do without her?
>...
>This good mood isn't going to stop any time soon, is it?
>Eh, you're not complaining.
>Everything is going right, sun is shining, the wind's blowing in your face...
>And you thought it was a paradise before?
TARGET HIT
AWAITING FURTHER IMPUT
>>25738771
...I just read this.
Oh my god.
I...I need to break this down in my head.
>Rainbow Dash is trying to convince Twilight to be more extravagant, in contrast to her humble nature.
>Applejack undoubtedly going to try and convince Rarity to be more Humble, in contrast to her Extravagant nature.
>And there he is, the trigger, Anon. He sits there, aware of both of their desires, his fate to experience the monumental screw up that is about to take place.
Shit has gone down before.
There have been shits bigger, maybe more momentous shits that have hit the fan at some point.
But this.
This kind of shit is only conceived...Once in a lifetime.
bump
page 8 save, lets get some writing
>>25745147
That show was great
>>25690690
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>>25746094
Isn't it wondrous?
Riggy, bby, pls.
>>25690690
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>>25690690
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>>25690690
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>>25699236
DO ITfriend...
>>25690690
bump
beesAm I doing it right?
>>25751747
Yes, very right.
>>25690690
bump
I don't think I'll be writing today.
Got some work I need to catch up on.
Nevertheless, I'll keep an eye on this thread. It's too good to miss.
Ich hoffe du kommst bald zuruck weilwir dich lieben
>>25752703D-danke
>>25752703
>tfw your high school german class has actually come in handy for once.
Thanks for giving me a day off fellas. I got a lot of studying done.
I'm still studying today, but I'll make an update or two by the end of tonight, probably sooner than that.
Thanks again for the patience, I always appreciate when my O'hana understands my situation.
>>25753274
good luck riggy, were all waiting patienly for you
>>25708751
Shut Up
>>25690690
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>>25690690
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>>25690690
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>>25753274
Still studying atm.
There's no writefriends on the thread today to produce content, and the thread is 37 posts away from bump limit, so now is the perfect time for another episode of...
RIGGY RAG'S DRAWFAG FUNTIME!https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9uwEAugeH8w
Have you ever looked over the vast ocean horizon as the sun drooped lazily below the wavy surface and wondered, "Will I ever get a free sorta-lousy drawing made just for me?" Well that answer can be yes if the dubs are in your favor!
Today's theme is: The Christmas season!
Dubs will get you a sketch of up to 2 characters! (Any pony! Any Anon! Doing anything you'd like!)
Trips will get you a completed line art of up to 3 characters! (That's higher quality, and higher quantity! What a steal!)
Quads will get you full line art and full-shaded color for up to 3 characters! (Color AND Shading? Fukken 'ell m8)
Quints will get you the choice of quads treatment +1 character, or a CUSTOM comic in full color, written by you! (MY OWN COMIC? HOT DAMN!)
Yessir, all this can be yours if you roll it right! I will be accepting a whopping 3 (That's right, 3!) winners today.
Remember: You need to reply to this post with a picture of at least one of the ponies you want drawn to be eligible!All drawings will be delivered within a week, after my finals are done.
This will not interfere with my writing, so don't worry about that!
Good luck!
>>25754609
Princess Mom-lestia with little 'Nonny sharing some family Christmas cocoa under a blanket by the fire- 'tis the season for family love, right?
>>25754609
Eh, I'll give it a shot.
I'll roll with...Trixie.
If thread is still there when I get back I'll try, now I need rest from gym.
>>25754738
Awh. No dice, huh?
...So, is that it? Can I roll again?
>>25754862
You can roll as much as you want.
>>25754609
heroine filly Scootaloo!
>>25754609
Rolling for Ponk and spitfire sitting around a Christmas tree opening presents
>>25754928
Rolling thisCh-check em
>>25754906
>>25754925
just draw this then.
>>25754947
rolling is harder than i imagined
>>25754714
Rolling for this
Don't forget pictures!
>>25754609
Uh...
Pinkie Pie and Anon cooking time
>>25754609
this is one way to reach the bump limit
im in
discord delivering delicious diabetes
>>25754609
Rolling for Anon in a santa outfit fucking Scootaloo in the ass.
>>25754609
wait shit forgot the pic.
Anon, santa outfit, scootaloo, ass-fucking.
>>25754609
One more roll. If I don't make it, then I won't be a sore loser about it.
Anon, santa, scoots, pooper.
>>25754609
I'll roll again for this >>25755002
Since it was so close the last time.
>>25754609
SantAnon and reindeer luna
>>25743989
>>25744015
Kek.
>>25744074
>this gif
jesus christ
>>25745147
>You haven't really been doing anything in your free time other than dreaming about him, and, well...W-waiting for him.
It's like me and the /mlp/.
>That's a pretty big number. For saving the world, anyway.You make her POV so good it fills me with skittles.
>>25745164
>Hey! It's Scootaloo!
Oh, yes, yes yes, YUS!
>You'd love to stop and say hi, but, y'know.
>That's not the COOL option.
How cold!Just like my dick as you are successfully trying to stab me when I am brutally raping you.
>>25745178
>No way are you gonna open a door to get in. You wanna MAKE an entrance, not use one.
Kek.
>>25745191
>Come to think of it, it's been quite a while since she burst into the room with complete disregard for what you were doing.
>Maybe you'll finish that essay later.
God dammit, with these lines you make her more a person.
>>25745210
>Had an interesting experiment involving a potted plant, some magic and some rather...F-furtive vines...
L-lewd.
>>25745210
>"That's more like it. I'll be back before you know it!"
How could she took it. Jesus. Rainbooowww!
>>25745227
>Opting for a less homoerotic train of thought, you turn to Applebloom.
Ha. From homo to loli.
>>25745249
>This inner RD's bullshit is glorious.
>>25749355
Nice.
>>25752703
Go home, merchant!
>>25754609
I'm here since this post and how many replies it already got?
Jesus christ, how fast.
Do Trixie.
>>25754609
Argh, Needed a picture.
Again, It's uh...Anon and Pinkie Pie cooking something. Probably cupcakes.
>>25754942
Riggy placed a curse on the dubs. Doing it for her
>>25754609
Trixie.
>>25754609
Gilda.
>>25755213
re-rollin
>>25755245
Welcome back. Everyone is having an off day apparently, so little writefaging to be had till latter apparently.
>>25754609
>>25755229
>>25755002
...D-do I get a prize for getting dub-dub-single digit pattern?
...Wh-whatever.
Pinkie Pie and Anon baking cupcakes, come ooonnn.
>>25755288
Winrar
>>25755234
Now for me...
>>25755273
Hello! I've been busy all long day. I missed you, faggots.
>>25755288
Ok, I was about to ask about Sassy Saddles but it's ok.
>>25755288
Winrar!
>>25755377
Oooooh, what a waste.
>>25755377Also welcome back fappy~
>>25754609
Discord with a decorated, upside-down Christmas tree filled with ice cream like a giant ice cream cone.Anon is like "shit nigga, solve world hunger or something"
>>25755288
>>25755377
Checking 'em!
>>25755377
>mfw you got double digits
>>25755494
>>25755494
>>25755494
New thread for when this one croaks! Keep rollin'
>>25755377
>77
WHAT THE FUCK IS THIS BULLSHIT?!
>>25755421
>Oooooh, what a waste.
Just. Fucking kill me.
>>25755564
Well, if it was excepted, you would've got a sketch of Diamond Tiara.No offence to any fans of DT that may exist, but I think it's for the best
Hey guys, it's a Sunday afternoon and I have not much to do except playASSFAGGOTS. Gimme some draw requests that I can deliver in the next thread, preferably keeping them to the theme (Tsundere).
>>25755510
Rig I've been loving your work man, been following this thread since the first Pinkie story.
>>25755213
rollin
>>25755377
>>25754609
Rolling for DT.
>>25755618
You monster. Cannot you focus at writing or something?Don't go, stay, you dick : 3
>>25755664
FUUUUUCK.
>>25754609
Maybe Luna?
>>25755555
Guys I may have accidentally stolen the quints.
>>25755737
Then...Do a comic that you want to do, or something?
That'd be pretty awesome.
>>25755664
Love ya man.<3
>>25755737
Consarn it Riggy.Fuckin' checked bro.
>>25755664
>That picture.
Top kek.
What, we out of rollers and ideas just because there's a new thread? Bullpuckey, settling for one winning pair of dubs...
>>25754609
Surprise and Ponk horses with a santa hats and various cookies.
>>25755621
Oh yeah, thanks man! Always good to meet one of the lurking O'hana!
>>25755759
Guess I'll make a comic then, haha
>>25755737
Holy shit I've never even SEEN quints before
>>25754714
Re-rolling one more time for this because I need to project my issues on Celestia
Fuck you, page nine. I need to catch up on the stories.Not that I want to read them or a-anything
>page 10
Welp, was a great thread. See you all in the next one.
>>25756048
Can't wait to see what you come up with Riggy!
>>25756110
I'll give ya a roll, even though I don't have any Sunhorse pics.
>>25756509
Don't worry, you've got all of the archival period to read 'em.
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