/lit/ criticism thread. there wasn't one up, and i feel
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/lit/ criticism thread.
there wasn't one up, and i feel like there should be a constant general for this board.
recently i noticed i'd slacked in my writing habits, so i forced myself to start writing at least one thing a day, be it a stone in the pond short story, a small poem, anything. to try and branch out, i've started forcing myself to write in different niches and styles and here's something i would appreciate honest criticism of.
not reflective of my genuine work, rather a stylized piece of how i imagine this pseudonym would write.
why are you autists posting jaypegs of text now instead of using pastebin? how am i supposed to greentext the shittier passages?
>>8225123
i genuinely don't know, i only recently started frequenting the board and the last criticism thread i saw had adopted this styleand i wanted to fit in
r8
Yikes. Seems like there's no reason at all for you to have written this. Hamfisted attempt to be unique. Also learn how to capitalize.
>there wasn't one up, and i feel like there should be a constant general for this board.
pls no
>>8225121
>there wasn't one up, and i feel like there should be a constant general for this board.
/lit/ is a lot like /g/
95% consumers 5% actual programmers/engineers/etc
in /lit/'s case, it's 99% readers 1% writers