Hey cunts My girl friend wrote this poem and doesn't Believe

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Anonymous
2016-06-26 13:55:03 Post No. 8209496
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Anonymous 2016-06-26 13:55:03 Post No. 8209496 [Report]

Hey cunts My girl friend wrote this poem and doesn't Believe me when I sag its good, pic related

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Anonymous 2016-06-26 13:56:30 Post No.8209498
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Anonymous 2016-06-26 13:56:30 Post No.8209498 [Report]

>>8209496
why is it at a 90° angle and gilded

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Anonymous 2016-06-26 13:57:55 Post No.8209505
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Anonymous 2016-06-26 13:57:55 Post No.8209505 [Report]

Sorry, bad photo

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Anonymous 2016-06-26 13:58:56 Post No.8209508
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Anonymous 2016-06-26 13:58:56 Post No.8209508 [Report]

It's okay. Not too cringeworthy but it doesn't scan and totally falls apart towards the end.

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Anonymous 2016-06-26 14:02:08 Post No.8209514
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Anonymous 2016-06-26 14:02:08 Post No.8209514 [Report]

>>8209496
[x] rhyme
[x] alliteration
[ ] attention to meter
[ ] interesting vocabulary
[ ] interesting topic
[x] color in the hollows of letters with another color

Vader Sultanfuss/10

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xo9KuT8vtSU

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Anonymous 2016-06-26 14:23:15 Post No.8209556
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Anonymous 2016-06-26 14:23:15 Post No.8209556 [Report]

Fuck off pedo.

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Anonymous 2016-06-26 14:28:17 Post No.8209564
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Anonymous 2016-06-26 14:28:17 Post No.8209564 [Report]

>>8209496
It isn't good, sorry

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Anonymous 2016-06-26 14:29:26 Post No.8209566
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Anonymous 2016-06-26 14:29:26 Post No.8209566 [Report]

>>8209496
juvenile and generic
not cringe, but also not anything