Juvenile
"i would prefer not to"
not even a single meme. What am I supposed to do with this shit?
>>8077178
Repetitive and pretentious. 8/10 You'll go far
my purr-posed identities :3
our-posed stood for purpose and proposed at once... hopefully that made sense
>>8077207
as the man who posted
>>8077199
I will say that this post
>>8077207
inspired me to actually read the poem.
Please hold for feedback.
ok I made it through the first stanza before I had to stop.
"words of meaning" is so fucking horrible dude why did you write that shit, i'm going to go out on a limb here and help you because I'm drunk and feeling charitable.
Read this:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kenning
>>8077237
>inspired me to actually read the poem
wait, it was a poem?
yeah a poem
>Christ, Marx, Wood, and Wei
>Led us to this perfect day.
>Marx, Wood, Wei, and Christ;
>All but Wei were sacrificed.
>Wood, Wei, Christ, and Marx
>Gave us lovely schools and parks.
>Wei, Christ, Marx, and Wood
>Made us humble, made us good.
this children's rhyme from a sf book is better than your poem, op
i mean it deals better with reciting a list of something
good or bad, all criticisms are appreciated :P
-op