Purple Prose

SUNSET

>>7973187
it's not tho

it's fairly spartan in terms of descriptors (nothing esoteric about them), it's just low brow

>my name is darkstar and I am of the night

>>7972610
when you write 5000 pages, you're gonna have a few stinkers

Literally nothing. It's perfect.

>>7972610
Excesive of cliffhangers and "mystery box" bullshit.

He's good at them, I'll give him credit for that, but for fuck's sake at least Rowling learned to evolve when the readers figured out her writing style, at this point everyone pretty much agrees that Jon Snow is actually half Targaryen and is gonna be reborn from the flames and he's freaking out because that was supossed to be a huge reveal and now he has nothing.