Poem Work
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Hey /lit/ as part of a college project I have to write a poem with melancholic humour, I'm shit at both of these and want to see what you think of it so far.
It's based on Plosives bouncing off of sibilance, by the way
The Time Travellers Parents
Quickly now
I have lost my device
I have lost my timeline
Said the Baby.
I will throw a tantrum
Should you not comply
Said the Baby.
Why on Earth
Is our Baby talking
Talking about a device
Talking about a timeline
Said the Mother.
What kind of device
What other timeline
Why on Earth
Is this happening
Said the Father.
Do not fear
For I have it here
I have found my contraption
Said the Doctor.
Crisis Averted
Timeline Deserted
With all being said and done
The Baby and the Doctor were gone.
>>7849524
can't tell if this is deep or not
>>7849524
>doctor who
Let slip from mine hand
>>7849524
i made a better one
ripping the letters
on einsteins pages
while moving through the same spot
year before year
a highschool dance
a crowd in the crowd
shyly cruising
me
before I ate all that pizza
I walk through them
they bounce off me
like i am a the ball
as well as the obstacles
in a flipper-machine
the mini-me looks
at me
her skeletal face shows disgust
at my pizza themed unitard
i hug her, full of sweat
until she gets slippery
she screams
like a drowning person
trying to get air
vomiting salty liquid
finally releasing my flabby embrace
she collapses in puddles of sweat and yellow urin
I look at myself
and
wisper gently
"pizza"
>>7849562
2/10
dont you have homework to do?