Someone wanna critique this poem I wrote? Also general poetry

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Someone wanna critique this poem I wrote? Also general poetry critique thread.

Lyric go -- Lyric be
Blesséd and with me
Lyric stay -- Lyric show,
How things come to be.
If lyric show -- and lyric know
What had befallen thee,
Then lyric stay -- and lyric play
So all may come to see.

Anonymous 2016-02-17 23:56:13 Post No.7709903
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Anonymous 2016-02-17 23:56:13 Post No.7709903 [Report]

Lyric stay--lyric show..shit happens...then lyric stay again? I don't get it.

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